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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. We’re currently hosting the /vt/ Writing Rumble - Winter Writing War, a friendly competition for the holiday season! The info page & contest archive can be found here: https://rentry.org/VTWRWWW

Check the main archive below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>65465680 (Where we talked about high school Biboo romance, Please don't bully me Koyori, the status of our WIPs, and gangbangs)

/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

Happy New Years everyone, heres to a productive 2024. Dont drink too much.

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Story anchor. Start 2024 with a bang!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story Recap. There were 4 stories posted last thread.

Little Red Riding Nene: Chapter 1 >>65471908
Tags: NSFW, Botan, /ss/, Anal, Furry(?), Parody

The right one >>65501097
Tags: Calliope Mori, SFW, Fluff, Romance

The Laws >>65592658
Tags: Myth, Amelia Watson, sci-fi, character death

Cooking and a Comet Epilogue - Azuki Beans in Rice. >>65637922
Tags: Suisei Hoshimachi, fluff, SFW, married life.

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CONTEST STORY ANCHOR
Contest ends today at 23:59 UTC-12 time. For any stories you want to enter into the contest, reply to this post!

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Happy new year to all writebros and readbros!
May 2024 be the year of great stories!

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>Someone got my ip banned for racism in /v/ of all places so i have to phonepost
Also happy new year!

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>>65707817
Holding both at gunpoint, you must find a way to tell who the real Shiori is between her and her evil clone Shoyuri Novella.

>> No.65710747

>>65710022
>Ask both about moss facts
>One of them gets right to the point
>The other yaps on about moss for 10+ minutes.
>Yup, that's Shiori.

>> No.65711150

The month of Aqua as your aunt vs Aqua as your uncle has begun.

>> No.65711272

>>65707665
I liked the Coco yuri, but I want a piece of her too. She's got plenty to go around after all.

>> No.65712270

I finally finished Auntie's Secret.
Hana did nothing wrong.
Kenji did nothing wrong.
Miyuki did nothing wrong.

>> No.65713222

>>65710022
>Ask them to introduce themselves
>Shoyuri says her name like LowTierGod

>> No.65713611

>>65710022
Just ask Shiori Newsvella, she's always helpful.

>> No.65714502

>>65710022
>*Open a dog kennel*
>Nerissa crawls out of it
>The real Shiori starts running as Nerissa chases

>> No.65717208

Rise.

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I just wanna say, this year has had it's ups and downs, but I'm glad I found this place, my love of writing, and a lot of good people who make fantastic stories. You're all pretty cool, and I hope next year is even better for all of us.

>> No.65718754

>>65714502
>Checkmate.jpg
>You got her
>Raising the gun you aim, but then she smirks
>The lights go off, a struggle is heard.
>When they come back on there's suddenly two Shioris and two Nerissas
>Now you also need to find out who's the real Nerissa Ravencroft and who's the evil twin her family locked in the attic, Nerissa Crowcraft

>> No.65720707

Happy 2014!!!!!

>> No.65721956

>>65712270
I would beg to differ in the case of Hana but yeah, Kenji and Miyuki did nothing wrong

>> No.65722081

>>65721956
>Hana
>tough love but provided for her only son
>wanted him away from his pornstar aunt
>helped him through his depression

>Fubuki
>Ruined Anon's life

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>>65722081
I see the value of your argument, but it is invalidated by Hana's single-defining trait: being alcoholic

>> No.65722399

>>65722218
>Hana was Lamy all along
Deepest lore.........

>> No.65722785

>>65722399
YukiHANA Lamy…

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>>65627899
>>65635301
>>65635629
>>65641561
https://files.catbox.moe/0iutn2.png
We are so back.
Happy new year also, writers! Definitely hope to see more work from you guys in 2024. Maybe then I can actually contribute something other than horny scribbles to you guys...

>> No.65724329

>>65718754
I mean the real nerissa would still try to rape the other shiori or both....or herself

>> No.65724368

>>65712270
Hana(and Yuuto) did everything wrong. They're basically the conflict starter.

Foob got what she wanted and more in the end, and so did Anon.

>> No.65724497

>>65724293
god damn that anyer deserves to be slammed for an entire day
never stop with your horny scribbles, anon

>> No.65727401

>>65717758
Y-you too

>> No.65727601
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with every nut one of my stories wrings out of someone, I grow more powerful

>> No.65728118

>>65724293
I love your art so much man.
Anal Slamchaama doko?

>> No.65733660

up

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Are you ready for His return?

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Happy new years bros, drink responsibly, and don't forget to get some water

>> No.65735402

Happy New Year fellas. Glad this place reinvigorated my love of writing. You guys are pretty cool.

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Happy New Year. Here's to another full of stories.

>> No.65736279

>>65734987
I don't drink, but thanks for the concern. I appreciate it. Happy New Year.

>> No.65738524
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get up there you little scamp

>> No.65740823

>>65738524
Orca, my beloved...

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Happy new year, /wg/.

>> No.65745264

>>65738524
whens sakamata gonna get her long slow burn romance fic?

>> No.65745384

>>65745264
she already is, though writing it would be writing my own autobiography

>> No.65745641

>>65745264
once she'd done cucking her boyfriend

>> No.65747929

I'm curious as to who everyone's oshis are, especially some of the established writers. I know AA's is Polka, same as CHAnon iirc. HCAnon is a kenzoku and I'm assuming AuntieAnon is a sukonbu. Who else is there?

>> No.65748421

>>65747929
Mine is completely indecipherable from my fics because I only write smut and I mostly try to keep things that make me horny away from my normal, regular entertainment.
Like, if I actually tried to watch the chuubas I write about, what would happen is 10 minutes in I'd get distracted thinking about some porn of them, then close the stream, find said porn, and jerk off to it.

>> No.65748631

>>65734987
Thanks CC, same to you and all the other congratulators

>> No.65749411

>>65747929
My oshi is Ayame, that's why I couldn't leave it at Ayame being punished for her forgetfulness and wrote a romantic sequel with The Oni's Rebellion.

>> No.65749883

>>65745641
I want to cuck CC before having a drink with him and his orca gf

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>>65707817
You thought Taiga was your only enemy. The only thing standing between you and brutal, sweaty sex with Mio. Beaten, bloodied yet still breathing, you limp past the defeated cat and up towards the front porch. With the last of your strength you ring the doorbell, convinced that one look at Mio will reinvigorate you. However, the one who answers the door is not Mio. It's Hatotaurus... three of them. Your trials have only just begun.

>> No.65752671

>>65742344
Thanks ojou

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>>65749883
based, I'd let you bro, better show my girl a good time

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up you go

>> No.65755279

I am once again laying in bed, listening to anime openings and imagining my story with it

>> No.65755938

>>65753471
Maybe I'll write about it sometime.

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>>65755279
Preach, though I'm more of an ED guy. A lot of Hololive songs would make for great OPs/EDs too, which is great.

>> No.65756576

>>65747929
Koyori

>> No.65756944 [DELETED] 

>>65722081
Are you being ironic, anon?

>> No.65756981

>>65747929
Flare and Sora are tied for my oshi. I'm the person behind Apple of Her Eye and other similar works.

The two are very comforting to me.

>> No.65757114

>>65747929
>AuntieAnon is a sukonbu
Actually, I'm a Miofa. She's the sole reason I write.

>> No.65757435

>>65757114
So you write about your wife's wife a lot.

>> No.65757902

>>65757435
Just to make my wife smile.

>> No.65758357

>>65747929
Mine would be Calli, Kiara, Kronii, Marine, Polka, Chloe, and Ollie.
For Stars: Robe, Ouga, Regis, Axel

>> No.65758392

>>65758357
Anon… you have to pick one.

>> No.65758535

>>65724329
>Now neither of us will be virgins!

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>>65757114
Incredible taste, Anon.

>> No.65759042

>>65756944
At least Hana didn't rape her son.

>> No.65760147

>>65758392
That's the kamioshi.

>> No.65761075

>>65759042
Maybe if she did they'd have been closer. A dicking might have been good for her, but nooooo.

>> No.65761083

>>65758392
>>65760147
If it came down to that, reaper is my answer.

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>>65707975
Oh yeah, writing rumble submission period ended like two hours ago going by anywhere on earth time.
Congratulations to everyone that managed to submit, and condolences to anyone that still has an unfinished wip.

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>>65747929
Mine are Watame, Polka, Flare, and Mio. Miosha was the initial reason I wanted to write again which is funny since her introduction into HJ won't be for at least a few more arcs.

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>>65761075

>> No.65762390
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happy new years fellas. how has everyone's writing projects been going. i've been pretty hard at work on actually getting tower of tattle part vi out, because it's way longer than... it's probably as long as parts 1-5 combined honestly. been trying to get it done in the free time between other stuff like setting up a web novel. haven't posted much knowing that it was a long way away from finishing, though, but i figured new years was a good time to check-in.

cool that you guys did another contest. have you managed to get more new blood in with it? iirc that was the intent of these.

>> No.65762688

>>65762390
The December contest was more meant as a fun holiday thing. Pretty sure whoever runs the main contest will keep it as way to get more new blood.
>Tower of tattle
Oh that's a fic I've been waiting for, thought it was dead but it's nice to know it's coming back... And unintentionally invoking the same curse as holofantasy of each new chapter getting exponentially larger.
I take it the alt!Suisei VN thing is still on the back burner?

>> No.65762859

>>65762390
ShiorAI...

>> No.65763095

>>65762859
Oops. I just google searched and picked the first cute image... My poor six fingered daughter wife...

>> No.65763411

>>65762688

Yeah lol. Tower of Tattle has definitely had some scope creep. Basically, I designed it a certain way for the contest, but I didn't actually hit the deadline. Once I realized I could spend as much time on it as I wanted, though, I figured I'd just take the nascent plots that were present and expand them to their most actualized form.

As for the alt!Suisei vn, yeah I'd say so. I have the bad habit of always having lots of projects lined up. But, as much as it drives me nuts, I've learned over the decades to stop doubling down on my bad habit by splitting attention between everything. I'm amazed people still remember that I was the same one working on that one, honestly.

For what it's worth, Stilted Stellar is actually one of the projects I've got that excites me the most, so I doubt I just abandon it. It's just that I can't remotely promise any timeframe for it. The thing is, if I do get a web novel actually going, things actually change a lot when I'm actually making money off writing. As contradictory as it sounds, and I know my habits, even if I have the added burden of managing a web novel with a regular release schedule, knowing that my writing career has a financial future makes it a lot easier to focus my efforts on each personal project. But yeah I mean, not to blog too much about it, but Stilted Stellar is definitely high on my passion list.

>> No.65764826

>>65762390
Goldfeather is stalled for tonight at least. Seeing this post may want to do a bit on it.

>> No.65766022

Damn, the archive hasn't been updated since
PFFT
LAST YEAR

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>>65766022
It's so fucking over bros why the fuck are we even still here

>> No.65766453

>>65766130
To inspire auntiefuckers lol

I wonder, how'd an incest Aunt Calli fic work?

...here I go again wondering about future projects when I already have my hands full with Goldfeather

>> No.65767035

https://youtu.be/44cieH5u3xA
Polka lusts after Abyssgard twins and wants to write herself into their family...
Can anyone here write a foursome? Just asking

>> No.65767115

>>65767035
Four? I assume the fourth is (You)?

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Dropping another preview.

>> No.65768441

>>65767115
Yeah, FuwaMoco's little brother.

>> No.65768644

>>65766453
i'm not sure if this project was around last i checked these threads, but i actually am not aware of goldfeather. i'll go check the archive out, but on gut i wanna guess it's... a Kiara fiction where she's a secret agent?

>> No.65768958

>>65768644
That's because it was made just days ago and I'm still cooking Ch1.

Its basically Auntie's Little Secret, but Reine. Trading one white-haired hag for another. Of course, I added, twisted and subtracted some parts to not look like a copypasta.

I was inspired after some shitposting under hot Reine pics and then an anon saying I should write it.

>> No.65769869

>>65761861
i knew it, you're Welsh
you sheep shagger

>> No.65770004

>>65766453
It doesn't hurt to get future ideas outlined or even just a few bullet points while you're working on other stuff. For Cali I have no idea how you could really go about it. Maybe frame it from a view of idol worship or something? Like anon thinks she's the hottest shit because of her music, and cali kinda abuses that admiration, asking for back rubs from her nephew because she's so stressed, having a drink with her, etc.
>>65767945
The descriptors in the last 2 paragraphs feel particularly stiff. Like older woman and younger boy doesn't really need to be told at this point, and at this early exposure in Basuki's and Reine's relationship to the reader, it might be better to write a few exchanges of that small talk. Give the reader and (You) a real feel for how Reine conducts herself after first getting to spend time together again.

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>>65769869
I'm a proud sheep fucker, but I don't know where you got that first part from.

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>>65766022
I'll be back tonight and do it then.

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>>65747929
Kamioshi is bae. And honestly i pretty much watch everyone sans gura and some jps that speak too fast

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>>65707817
your otherwise shy and reserved classmate Mio going onto a seductive offensive after catching you staring at Fubu's Fuboobs for a second too long

>> No.65771277

So, what's cooking for this year, lads?

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>>65771277
Some buns in this fennec's oven.

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>>65771277
My /wg/ 2024 resolutions are

-Write more incest(Guaranteed)
-finally try my hand at an actual Miko fic(likely)
-finish my series(probably gonna be difficult)
-stop making new WIPs at the drop of a hat(impossible)

>> No.65772718

>>65771277
Finishing one of my series.
Write a FuwaMoco twincest wincest oneshot with lots of clam slammin'
Hopefully finish the outline for slampig Okayu NTR.
Write some of the shota scenarios I've played with.

>> No.65775010

>>65768441
> Poruru's genius plan is to conquer the sisters through (your) manly charms (w) and then get closer to them herself
> Jokes on her, the sisters have already been conquered and she is just a cute little fennec walking into a trap

>> No.65777240

up

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>>65767035
>Impregnating Mococo and Polka flying intoo a rage at you ruining her tummy

>> No.65777719

>>65772465
> Miko with a cold and a stuffy nose and elite speech
She might as well be non-verbal at this point

>> No.65779208

>>65747929
My kamioshi is Sana, other oshis are IRyS and Ollie, I've only ever written a greentext and it wasn't about them though

>> No.65779614

>>65724293
I love the idea of shortstack office lady Anya, great art

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ALS anon, you are a beautiful bastard and an even better writer. I can't thank you enough for writing ALS but the least I can do is give you a cute Miosha. Thanks.
I know the ending was meant to be happy in some way but it's really got my stomach tied in a knot.

>> No.65779998

>>65779650
It's incredible to me that he originally wasn't sure of the fic and almost dropped it before it began. If he hadn't posted the preview to the thread yonks ago, we may well never have gotten ALS.

>> No.65780226

>blackbean already dropped
Kek, that didn't last long.

>> No.65781909

>>65771277
Still thinking about what fic I want to do next. Either something shorter with Miko or something longer with Shion. Have an idea for another Suisei series and a HoloX series but those will require a decent amount of outlining. At which point, think I'd rather work on By That Sea.

>> No.65784709

>>65762390
Happy new years mate. Unfortunately not well. On all my WiPs I just cannot seem to get the creativity going no matter how hard I try. Seems I'm just going to have to sit tight till my inspiration comes back. Sucks.

>> No.65784997

>>65780226
It isn't dropped, just was spending my time on Christmas and new years with friends and family.

>> No.65785062

>>65784997
You have neither of those.

>> No.65785786

>>65784997
It's still absurd to me that you've somehow managed to get the first dedicated anti in this fanfic thread. Like yeah we've had anons that hated a specific writer or fic before but this is a step beyond that.

>> No.65786075

>>65785786
I mean, it's pretty obvious it's just the same one threadshitter who just obnoxiously insults everyone

>> No.65786085

>>65781909
>something shorter with Miko
kek

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>> No.65788708

2024 is the year for hag impregnation
And sex with Aqua

>> No.65788747

>>65788602
2024 is the year I turn this fox into an onahole

>> No.65788757

>>65788708
Anal sex with Aqua?

>> No.65788946

I wish my fics would make someone seethe enough to anti me....

>> No.65788985

>>65788946
Which fics have you written?

>> No.65789141

>>65788946
You want an anti? Alright then, hack. Unoriginal hack. Fatty-fatty no (You)'s.

>> No.65789177

>>65788946
Give it time. Some antis just froth at the mouth when someone continues to enjoy their hobby and writes for the sheer joy of it. You'll get yours someday anon, we're all gonna make it.

>> No.65789514

>>65788985
(You)r favorite fic

>> No.65789530

>>65788757
Hm, maybe once as an experiment? She won't have the training for it to work well.

>> No.65790035

>>65789514
I HATE that fic

>> No.65790802

>>65790035
But it's your favorite.

>> No.65791406

>>65789514
So nothing, then? Maybe try contributing for once in your life if you want people to take any notice of you.

>> No.65792633

>>65785786
>>65786075
i mean, really, having an anti is probably the highest form of compliment

>> No.65793092
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>>65786085
I dont get it.

>> No.65793820

>>65792633
That sounds like cope to me.

>> No.65796483

live

>> No.65798095

>>65771277
As I said in post above, auntie incest starring Reine set in Indoland.

>> No.65798632

>>65770004
>first reply
I also still have that fic where (me) and Calli have been in a relationship 5 years since and now she's on the cusp of taking the UMJ deal.

>second reply
Yeah, that's where I'm going next, I just stopped for the night. Maybe the babu in Reine comes out when it's just them alone?
I mainly try to center Reine's characterization around two songs of hers: Ano Aozora No Sei Da and its dirty twin, Love Me Love Me.

>> No.65799355

>>65798095
Why you think anyone would want to read such trash is beyond me.

>> No.65799635

>>65798632
That could be an interesting concept that can explore if what you've built so far can endure such a life changing career choice.
I think it would make sense if Reine lets certain aspects of herself be exposed around her nephew if she feels safe with him in that regard. I would be weary of basing your characterization around just a few songs though. There's a lot more to the peafowl you can take full advantage of and make shine through your writing.

>> No.65802032

Someone should write a story where Ina learns how to not being a frigid no-fun bitch

>> No.65802065

>>65793092
Her tongue is shorter than normal

>> No.65804147

>>65799635
The Calli one is based off a shared verse me and a few friends crafted. I share that verse with a Kenzoku, a Koronesuki, a 'Crat, a Joshu, a Nakirigumi, a Miofa, and a Hooman.

I asked /hag/ about peafowl auntie. As for my story, they're the only two into anime and the rest of the clan kinda underestimates them for it especially Reine. Compounded with the fact that her egss are dying, she realizes that yuri aint all thats its cracked up to be.
For Basuki, all his teenage troubles, Reine carried that for her.

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>>65799355
I want to read it

>> No.65806745

>>65804592
Hore turkey breasts...

>> No.65810258

No die

>> No.65813048
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Remember to give the contest entries their due diligence this week and read them.

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>>65771277
1. Release chapters 1-5 of the Holocalypse remake before Christmas (impossible)
2. Finish writing at least one series before beginning a new WIP (impossible)
3. Write at the speed I want to (impossible)

>> No.65814032

>>65771277
>Finish Blackbean by June or so.

>Get a good start on Memoir.

>Improve my adventure writing skills.

Those are the three that come to mind. then just take whatever else comes.

>> No.65815425

>>65804592
Same anon, bumping.
Hope I deliver.

>> No.65815782

>>65813048
Which is your favourite entry so far?

>> No.65816160

>>65761861
But well get Flare and Polka sex soon, right? Who knows how many good eggs they have left!

>> No.65817181

If you had to give your latest fic/current WIP a soundtrack, what songs would you put on it?

>> No.65817345

>>65817181
SFW: Ano Aozora No Sei Da
NSFW: Love Me Love Me.

>> No.65817352

>>65759042
She still left him alone in a house with no adult supervision that allowed anon to still visit Fubuki.

>> No.65817860

>>65817352
And above all, they were both shit to Anon.

>> No.65817871

>>65817181
I'd do a very similar soundtrack for Blackbean that Frieren has. I really like how the music is very gentle until it comes into these large swells that you never really anticipate.

>> No.65818251

>>65817860
Hana takes it more because she is anon's mother and it is her main job to keep her safe, loved and protected. She only started taking her role more seriously when anon was a teenager (thus the bond is not there) and to save her own ass from going to jail.

Fubuki (minus the rape) gets the hate because of her paranoia that was indirectly caused by Miyuki. For it not her Fubuki would still be on cloud nine and mindbreaking anon with her "love".

>> No.65818280

>>65818251
*her main job to keep him

>> No.65818319

>>65771277
Your sister Lady Suisei VS the sweet maid's big dumpy

>> No.65818426

>>65817181
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lyBYFuMs5fE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=333OVHhpK5c
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETQmQ1Ixv5Y
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRGgl9KT9rE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XD1t7JHbge0

>> No.65819228

>>65818251
Correction, she started to seemingly take it more seriously when she felt Anon was slipping from her grasp. But as we all saw from the report card incident, it wasnt out of care, its all about control.

For Anon, it was either someone who hurts him or someone who "hurts" him.

>> No.65819480

>>65819228
My bad. I honestly thought it was because she was trying to save her own ass.
Regardless she still did wrong. Its probably just me (and not shared by others on here) but I think she genuinely got off easy.

>> No.65820286
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>>65817181
Specifically, these.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3pcfCWi3T7o
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bObagFEzR_4

>> No.65820875

Fubuki isn't that sexy.

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>>65820875
Are you fucking kidding me? Is this some kind of challenge?

>> No.65821061

>>65819480
I'd agree with that.

>> No.65821119

>>65820875
Dont let Anon hear that

>> No.65821157

>>65820875
you need to leave the thread before you get punched in the jaw

>> No.65821243

>>65712270
>>65779650
Thanks for the read! I'm glad you liked the story.
>>65779998
It's funny to think about. That little snippet started my love-hate relationship with this fic.

>> No.65821284

>>65820875
Her nephew thinks otherwise....

>> No.65821358

>>65820875
If she wasn't sexy then why do I want her to suck me bone dry every hour during the day?

>> No.65821363

>>65707817
a story that doesn't feature Fubuki in any way.

>> No.65821439

>>65819480
>>65821061
Sequel where Hana gets raped by 20 mean negros when?

>> No.65821469

>>65821363
Granted. Its now a "Fubuki and Kuro are the same person" and she spends the majority of the fic as Kuro.

>> No.65821483

>>65707817
a story that features fubuki in every way

>> No.65821524

>>65821469
the monkey's paw has curled yet again...

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>> No.65821984

I'm really happy with the under 5k category for the contest. Long series and big oneshots are fine and all, but it's nice to have something that gets to the point quickly.

>> No.65821992
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I need more twins content.

>> No.65822018

>>65821992
Thanks for your input Lui.

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>>65816160
We will get lots of Flare sex soon. Don't you worry about that.

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>>65817181
For the fights I'm just linking a bunch of yakuza battle themes. If I had to put OPs and EDs in though, I'd take the Monogatari approach and pick a different OP and ED each chapter based on the characters that appear. It might not fit as well thematically (by that I mean the lyrics and whatnot), but most Holos have made at least one decent orisong or cover.
Shout out to Watame on this, she's made some bangers. Her "Ode to an Eternal Future" would make an excellent ED: https://youtu.be/ndNWnIAdhZo?si=GBdYJOm7v_y5WdIr
As for other songs I might use that aren't related to the characters in the fic, there's been a few running through my head.
Mid season OP: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s5VOyk41AMY
Mid season ED: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KchdqvaH6l0
Final song that plays over the end credits: https://youtu.be/fiddR-oZta4?si=9djns9RLRMv49Mru

Also when I someday write Mio fluff sex this will be playing the entire time:
https://youtu.be/n2GeiTHofak?si=ECbSxaQJQyMDizgL

>> No.65823121

>>65821243
>my love-hate relationship with this fic.
Has the response it got made it any less painful?>>65821157

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>>65817181
>Intro
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZz0P3BJwOg
>Outro
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=em0MknB6wFo
>what's gonna blast for the first action scene
https://youtu.be/dcbTC-qa65Q

>> No.65823165

>>65823121
Second quote was a phone-posting mistake

>> No.65823229

>>65821439
She'd probably be into it lol.

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>>65707817
Deadpool kills the marvel universe parody (of a parody??) called "Kiara rapes the Hololive Universe"

>> No.65823589

>>65821992
Oh hey poruka

>> No.65823691

>>65823334
Including Stars?

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>>65823691
yes but they all get offscreened like X-23 i fucking hate that comic

>> No.65823958

>>65823121
The process remained ever painful. I'm just glad I got it off my shoulders. I can finally rest in peace...

>> No.65824160

>>65707817
To prove she isn't a shotacon, Suisei fucks her little brother, an act during which she will not cum even once because she doesn't like little boys.

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>>65824160
>Suisei and Mori having a fight after a collab because they accuse each other of being a shotacon
i just want a deathstar oneeshota fic...

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>>65817181
I got some things picked out for the next arc.
Undecided on the OP for it but this is a strong contender so far - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHjjtFlgQH4
For the general theme of the country in general - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yGixsA-AiRo
For the Outro of the arc / opportune moments - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MHE9gICdcEg
For an ED it's not really super related to the content itself, but like how some ED videos are just something completely unrelated, I think it's fun to think about that with this one - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zELnyn_SdZQ
It's just a fun mashup and I can think about anon tearing up the dance floor with each of his special girls at this point. It's always fun to point some special music to your writings.

>> No.65825715

>>65824248
That's just making me imagine Deathstar playing ugly bastard chicken where they egg each other on to getting actually getting fucked by an old guy. Then they make up half way through and both of them get involved in driving a white van to steal a 1X kid from the local playground.

>> No.65825801

>>65825715
I like your funny words man who wants Suisei to pleasure old men for money.
I say we join forces and destroy the status quo

>> No.65827058

>>65707817
(You) a hololive manager have to evade all kind of affection from your talents, day by day it starting to get out of hand but thankfully just before you done the deed by just mentioning you would kill yourself they usually back away they are going to be sad and depressed but its a necessary evil to keep the company standing until one day somehow they managed to rope in Rushia/Kiara to keep you from killing yourself by giving your curse of immortality/kiara feathers

>> No.65828362

>>65822700
I would like to see Watame and Flare talking about that. They're among the most interesting characters, even more interesting than me.

>> No.65829022

>>65823958
Rest well, hero.

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>>65707817
(You) being A-chan's personal assistant, aka her sexual relief assistant, who helps her manage her stress levels. She loans you out to Sora sometimes.

>> No.65829404

>>65829130
Are (You) reluctant to be whored out to anyone besides A-chan? Is it all just a job?

>> No.65829479

>>65829130
That's just Nodoka.

>> No.65829794

>>65829404
It's just a job and A-chan can loan you to whoever she wants, but you are especially fond of A-chan and Sora
>>65829479
Also a good take, A-chan using Nodoka's chest as stress balls

>> No.65830112

>>65829794
Do they treat you better than the other girls? Are they both just your type?
>Over time A-chan starts prefacing your stress relief sessions with compliments, dinner, asking about your day
>Sora in the afterglow feels comfortable with sperging about everything miku, and since you politely listen she gives you little vocaloid gifts

>> No.65830636

>>65823760
Aw, my het dreams are foiled yet again...

Is it too much to ask for HeteroLive?

>> No.65830684

>>65830112
None of the girls treat you badly, but you spend the most time with those two.

>> No.65830896

>>65829404
I'm something of a manwhore myself, I develop crushes quick in school...

>> No.65830945

>>65830636
i mean you could always write them. Despite what the catalog may tell you, people dont really dislike maletubers.

>> No.65831459

>>65830896
I was the same way in high school. I was passed around a small friend group once. I always tried to date them proper too since I was kinda a romantic sap back then.

>> No.65831798

>>65830945
That one where Noel and Temma allegedly have an enemies-to-lovers kinda thing intrigues me. Its essentially a mix of rrat and projection. Is that anywhere in the archive and was it ever finished?

>>65831459
I never felt asking anybody for date money, so I never dated. I did once gave Valentine's choco to someone I liked in college. I even lied about having classes so I actually can go. (There was class but not for our particular one)

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>>65831459
>>65831798
There's that doujin that later inspired a manga, where the world's moral get reversed and a guy uses the chance to whore himself to his female classmates.
That could be a fun fic, specially if you pick an unconventional cast of girls that could be passed as femcels, the popular ones (virgins), the cool ones (virgins) and the aloof (just wants to fuck)

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>>65820875
I agree.
She's transcended way beyond sexy.

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>>65747929
I've only ever written one story here a while back and it was about Fubuki. It pains me that I'll never reach a level in prose and/or art that would allow me to properly and fully convey my love for this adorable foxgirl the way she absolutely deserves. Fubuki is my love and my life and I love her so much it's unreal.

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>>65830112
>they start asking you do relief sessions away from work, they invite you to love hotels, to go the the beach with both of them

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>>65833692
> I'll never reach a level in prose and/or art that would allow me to properly and fully convey my love for this adorable foxgirl the way she absolutely deserves
Sounds like some quitter shit before you ever truly started. You need correcting. You CAN reach that level if you keep trying. Let your love for that white fox fuel every attempt you make. Envision her smile when she sees every little step you make towards your own goals. Don't give up. Make that bottled up passion you have into a ticking time bomb of motivation. DO. IT. FOR. HER.

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>>65834092
Thank you HJAnon (at least I assume that's you, correct me if I'm wrong), means a lot.
I have the reason to believe I write decent stuff at least given that I've managed to amass some following in the past, so I'd say I'm not terrible, but I'm definitely not where I want to be.
That said, I've decided to write again and have, like, 3 ideas I want to work on, so I hope I manage to contribute to the archive through the year.
Also, fox. I love her so much it's actually unreal (and painful at times).

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>>65835048
That's the spirit. We're all striving to improve, we all have places as an author we continuously work towards reaching. Glad to hear you got some ideas you want to give life. Take it at your own comfortable pace, ask for help if you need it, and most importantly, have fun.

>> No.65836449

>>65833692
What fic was it?

>> No.65836676

>>65835524
Already assaulting friend's DMs enough as is, but I think I have it figured out... for one story, at least. The rest will have to wait a bit.
Still, thank you for the encouragement.

>>65836449
Cuddly Fox. Far from my best work, but it's the only one I've posted here so it's technically my best? I think?

>> No.65837159

>>65791406
Oh fuck insult me harder, just a little more and I'll cum.

>> No.65839640

>>65815782
The one I wrote of course.
I haven't read them yet, I was waiting for the entry period to be over.

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>>65813048
I'll likely give them another once over when the time comes to vote.

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>>65707817
Learning from Sensei Lui the mighty Rising Dragon Kick to match your rival

>> No.65843143

>>65841919
And then you show her the perfect counter: Ballerina pose sex + impregnation.

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>>65707741
Uh hi, I'm back. New holoshorts entry with robot

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTHQNoyNK1_zHfuT4kP0bJdxTCWMilPc6L1eNFwJYbZVcyspsJFyIkCMQfXT58CGVuoA0oixd_PtCoh/pub

>> No.65845434

>>65820875
Whom do you find sexy, anon?

Vesper and Magni?

>> No.65846583

>>65829130
>>65829794
Kinda split on whether I should go for hetero or not for this, both are equally good. Though I haven't actually drawn yuri in a minute so that might be fun to try

>> No.65848656

>>65845434
They're ok I guess

>> No.65850958

>>65848656
Do you want either of them to touch your private parts?

>> No.65851608

>>65846583
Nodoka would be cute

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>>65817181
Spring
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JVTS3fyoAEQ

Summer
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nROvY9uiYYk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UV8OZj2olg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWir8bPu7kI

Fall
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tTu-Uhlu4RU
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xwtdhWltSIg

Winter
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pKHZHHOlJao

Timeskip
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gmbS9i_7usM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tF9xovpVA04

Epilogue
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utr-3Vwmhug

ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ScTHsLH_0js

>> No.65854950

>>65854223
I'm still in the middle of reading, but shouldn't Palette explicitly be in your list, too? The lyrics Towa were writing are from Palette, as far as I can tell.

>> No.65856449

>>65833335
This is just making me think of that premise but using the standard "new hire at cover" plot. Though I'm not really sure what kind of plot you can squeeze out of it other than nymphomaniac (by that world's standards) anon fucks his way through a hololive that was as desperate as he was pre-isekai. Which to be fair, is probably all you need if you're making a smut series ala pd;pt.

>> No.65856459

>>65854950
Never mind, I see there's all sorts of her songs included.

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Don'ta smok

>> No.65861157

>>65854950
Well Palette was a WIP in the story, so it wouldn't be in the OST I guess.

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>>65861157
>Our WIPs have WIPs within them done by the characters
That's a deep one man.

>> No.65862798

>>65858120
No Subaru, Mio, Okayu and Korone?

>> No.65864007

Has Amelia ever talked about what her kind of guy is?

>> No.65864040

>>65864007
Afaik no

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>>65864007
I mean, if you know her oshi...

>> No.65866970

>>65864453
Bahahahaha
That’s so funny

>> No.65867018

>>65864453
AmeShi? Hmm...

>> No.65868376

>>65822938
>Also when I someday write Mio fluff sex this will be playing the entire time:
https://youtu.be/n2GeiTHofak?si=ECbSxaQJQyMDizgL
I have watched this video an unhealthy number of times.

>> No.65868771

What's with the sudden popularity of Towa in this thread? Feels like Tokyo Tower has really hit it big here out of no where

>> No.65869060

>>65868771
Sometimes all it takes is one good fic to get the ball rolling on discussion.

>> No.65869155

>>65868771
I want her to burn her discarded cigarettes on my bare skin then kiss me and tell me she loves me

>> No.65869549

>>65868771
Cucks are inherently sympathetic and cute

>> No.65869861

>>65868771
It's like how the thread went through an Ayame fever after Our Cures dropped. The better the fic, the more people will remember the characters.

>> No.65870023

>>65869861
I still have Ayame fever and it burns in my loins like fire. Only she can douse it.

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>>65868771
We love Towa here

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65872004

Enough fucking around and second-guessing. I'm getting back to work on my WIP. I'd rather end up with a mess than be so obsessed with perfection that I make nothing at all.

>> No.65873708

>>65872004
There's only one perfection I'll obsess over.

>> No.65873757

>>65872004
Freedom at last.

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>>65871922
Towa's eigo is actually kind of sexy

>> No.65875030

>>65873767
That image reminds me of the "Towa wants your dick in her mouth 24/7" prompt.

>> No.65877736

Towa is a boy

>> No.65877751
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>> No.65878864

>>65877751
POV: You're not Chloe's bf

>> No.65879122

>>65878864
Yeah, me

>> No.65879958

>>65869861
Rrat Ayame also became a vehicle for new smut ideas like her being a maso slut, or fightsexual.

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>> No.65881982

Speaking of rrats and Chloe...

What if I try my hand at making an Oga x Chloe fic? I dunno why, but him warning his guy viewers specifically about how she works is telling me he fell victim once to her.

The coomer in me meanwhile just wanna smash oshis together...

>> No.65882368

>>65881982
That's a good premise. And the size difference would be fun

>> No.65882870

>>65881982
Only if you make him cuck CC

>> No.65884301

>>65882870
I wonder who posted this.

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>> No.65885476

>>65881982
Sounds funny.

>> No.65885499

>>65885476
You know what else sounds funny?


Whoopee cushions. Take that, dickhead.

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>>65885499
my guy I think you need to chill

>> No.65885713

>>65885666
That's rich coming from Satan.

>> No.65885844

>>65858120
I think she'd want to go back to smoking if she suddenly had my dick in her mouth and she accidentally got me turned on and then somehow made me have the best orgasm of my entire life in her mouth.
"POLatio" but with Towa would be amazing yet scary at the same time.

>> No.65885864

>>65885713
that wasn't even me
like for real you need to reevaluate your perception of others' statements and how intense your reactions should be
you should not be flipping your shit from actually mundane statements

>> No.65885891

>>65885864
I hope you die of pancreatic cancer in real life.

>> No.65885928

>>65885844
No, your dick would be her cigarette substitute. She'd just pull down your pants and suckle on it whenever she felt the urge.

>> No.65885977

>>65885891
wait, is this the threadshitter randomly inserting himself into conversations again
you bamboozled me, didn't you, threadshitter

>> No.65886001

>>65885977
Are you psychotic? What are you even going on about?

>> No.65886194

>>65885928
And I assume she'll just bite your dick clean off if you were to say, suddenly force her head down because you want her to get you off?

>> No.65886287

>>65886194
No, she doesn't bite. She just barks

>> No.65886496

>>65886287
Oh thank the heavens for that.
Still, going back to what you said at >>65885928
that would be extremely evil / devilish of Towa and it would probably drive one to insanity getting blue balled like that. I mean, sure, you helped her stop smoking completely, but what's the purpose of her sucking your dick like a lollipop only to expertly pull back and deny the need for you to cum your brains out?

I think I'd want her to start smoking again. No male deserves to be denied to right to cum no? Unless they are a masochist and Towa (though I doubt it) is secretly only denying you the right to cum because she wants you to blow your soul (literally) out of your dick and then drag you off to hell?

>> No.65887051

>>65886496
Towa is kind, so I'm sure you could make a deal where she gets you off if her mouth made you hard.

>> No.65887369

>>65887051
Someone as kind as Towa would genuinely (I kid you not) make me feel bad (which I'm sure sounds hard to believe giving my last reply) wanting to cum in her mouth. And I'm sure if I DID somehow cum in her mouth, that my cum would taste really, really vile and the last thing I'd want to see is a sweet angel like Towa vomitting because of how bad my precious baby batter tastes.

The "Towa wants your dick in her mouth 24/7" was just suppose to be a harmless prompt (even if it didn't sound interesting) where you would help Towa stop her smoking addiction by offering up your dick to her. But when you posted >>65885928 it now made me think of the prompt again and if it were to ever get written, then that idea would need to be shoehorned in because it would be VERY interesting to see how you in the story would get blue balled by Towa of all people and she's only sucking your dick to stop her smoking addiction.

Like seriously, why didn't I think of that when I made that prompt?! I swear my mind goes absolute blank when I'm making a request and ideas then flood into my head when someone offers up another idea and I kick myself for not thinking of it earlier.

If I sounded harsh then it wasn't my intention and I apologise for it. I just hate how my brain works sometimes and I think it did the same with the "Ayame wiggles your dick left and right playfully" prompt as well.

>> No.65887761

>>65887369
Just cum somewhere else then. Or eat more sweet fruits.

>> No.65889142

>>65887761
Allegedly, pineapple works best for that

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I'm going to bed. Goodnight, fwends!

>> No.65892165

>>65889142
Yeah, it does. A, uh, a friend told me.

>> No.65892454

>>65892165
Fubuki sucked you off? How lucky.

>> No.65892650

>>65892454
Word.
Probably my favorite sex act.

>> No.65893608

>>65887369
I don't know, I also liked the original concept of you making Towa happy by letting her have your dick in her mouth all the time. It's cute and simple.

>> No.65895235

>>65893608
Am I wrong to say that it genuinely baffles (if that's the right word to use here) / surprised that there's some anons out there that like the prompt?

>> No.65896141

>>65895235
It's relatively simple, a bit comedic while also being cute, and sexual. What's not to like?

>> No.65896183

>>65895235
Anon it's a fucking smut/fetish prompt. What's so confusing about some people having liking the idea of weird shit?

>> No.65896593

>>65896141
>>65896183
The fact that its silly is why I am confused in the first place. Again, I'm not trying to sound insulting, harsh, it just feels extremely weird because silly prompts usually don't get remembered as much.

I know I know. I'm making a big silly stink over nothing and I should just keep my mouth shut. I am surprised / happy that people still think of the silly prompt, but I'm also just confused and I'd be even doubly confused (and end up getting a boner) if someone wrote it in a way that makes it comedic AND smutty.

>> No.65897017

>>65890592
Goodnight you fat wrinkly grandma!

>> No.65897315

God I wanna suck up IRyS's farts

>> No.65897985

>>65896593
It being blowie-related gets my attention.

>> No.65898126

>>65896593
Just worry less about what you should be doing and share/discuss your ideas more confidently. That's what the thread needs most, besides talking about stories already written.

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>>65707894
>There are Days That Last Forever
Perhaps it's just me but, this felt strangely melancholic. Like there's a thread of sadness running through it despite how fluffy everything is supposed to be looking from the outside. I guess it's a side effect of how the narration is initially presented coloring the rest of the work... and honestly I think it works. Towa is a splash of color lighting what would otherwise be an introspective depression. If there was anything I'd say wasn't working it would be that the contest limit of 25k made this entire piece feel like it's stretched thin, especially since it covers multiple months and an epilogue. Everything to do with the cat and splitting apart felt well executed but, by nature this felt like a slow burn concept condensed into the word count.
Nitpicks
The bandaid scene feels weirdly orphaned with where the need for it came from. I can assume it comes from the guitar p;aying in the previous scene but it feels a bit weird that the only mention of his fingertips getting hurt from playing too much is in that one instance.
>Drunk of Christmas Spirit and love.
This was a cute one. A bit bare bones and could honestly be longer but it's cute for what it is.
BTW if the author is here, given that I'm not sure who you are I'm taking the liberty of tagging you in for the under 5k category unless you want to opt out.
>The right one
Already read it on release >>65534790, but to sum up my thoughts. The entire thing had a lot of heart but not a lot of polish with lots of things being half baked (iroha plot, the narration getting dropped half way through, etc). Still it manages to deliver some pretty good scenes, the foreplay to their first time being a highlight of the fic. Even so, it feels like something more suited to a multi-chapter romance fic than a one-shot. I liked it, but the flaws do kind of stick out.

>> No.65898581

Are there more of Iroha being a professional HoloAV reviewer? Read it and had fun.

Currently reading Knightly Collaboration, is there more or Ch2 is it?

>> No.65900331

Hey AA are you sure about archiving ALS redux as just one link to the landing page?That's pretty much guaranteed to cause some fuckery when the time comes for the guy making the automatic hard archive.
>>65898581
Respectively, the Iroha AV enthusiast was a greentext/discussion so there's not more unless you want to spin around the concept and start a discussion around it to try and spawn some greentexts.
And I'm pretty sure the anon that wrote Knightly collaborations only wrote those two chapters.

>> No.65900590

>>65900331
Alright.
The fight scene in Ch1 would be of big help to how I distribute their stats in my HoloPro Emblem mod project. It pretty much cements my decision to make Temma the balanced fighter while Noel is more unga-bunga. Both are knights in my project, Temma being a cavalier while Noel being an axe armor.

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So what kinda devil/magical powers does Towa have? Asking for future me.

>> No.65905466

>>65903973
Boob growth

>> No.65906050

>>65903973
Being very cute!!

>> No.65906834

>>65903973
She can make her horns and wings (dis)appear, and she has a variable chest size.

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>>65905466
More interesting than it is useful or practical, unless I plan to get right in those funbags.
>>65906050
Good. Useful. Enjoyable.
>>65906834
Good to know for that, can she do the same with her tail? Or is that always out no matter what? Do you think her wings are good enough to help her fly?

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>>65903973
Making every woman around her into a domme no matter how pathetic they used to be
>captcha

>> No.65909751

>>65903973
Getting cucked.

>> No.65909916

>>65908539
She always has her tail, but sometimes it's white and covered in a mysterious, sticky substance.

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>>65909246
Well that could come in handy I guess.
>>65909751
This seems like a curse unless it works in my favor and I try to steal her girl or something.
>>65909916
Thanks for the clarification. I'll just ignore and not bring up the part of the white sticky stuff if it's a normal thing for her. If she knows, she knows.

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>>65910762
>Thanks for the clarification. I'll just ignore and not bring up the part of the white sticky stuff if it's a normal thing for her. If she knows, she knows.
I guess it's just how she rolls.

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>>65910877
>itisreal
Well shit. I guess it can be demon sweat goop or something. Or maybe a coating to protect her sensitive tail.

>> No.65911312

>>65911151
Or Towa uses her tail to eat glue

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>>65903973
Shes got a devil trigger.

>> No.65914640

>>65911312
That sounds more like her style.

>> No.65917840

Not yet

>> No.65919734

>>65911312
>Come back home
>Towa is thrown in the middle of a trashed apartment
>A white liquid runs down her mouth
>Oh, no, oh no oh no oh no
>Prompt her up, shake her awake
>She slowly comes back to her senses, sneezes more of that white liquid from her nose
>"Towa, who did this to you?"
>Faintly, she points at a bottle of school grade glue and a can of epoxy.

>> No.65919787

>>65919734
Then you get so furious you rape her until bedtime.

>> No.65919996

>>65903973
has bibi

>> No.65920040

>>65919996
what does bibi do?

>> No.65920228

>>65919787
You'd rape a bottle of glue? Shit anon, that's one way to seal your pecker shut.

>> No.65920653

>>65920040
He Bibis

>> No.65921037

>>65920228
I said her, not it. Either you have reading comprehension issues or you talk to glue.

>> No.65921216

Alright, time to bake.

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>>65921248
Baked. Migrate when ready

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