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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>62199278 (where some anons talked about the lack of smell kink stories, an anon dropped by to say how much he wants to pump La+ with his seed, and a few other anons want elves to chug copious amounts of seed - maybe theirs)
/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.62350755
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Story anchor.
Surrender them, in the name of the Emperor.

>> No.62350803
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap!
There were 7 stories posted last thread.

Ero Trap Dungeon derived Greentext and DIscussion >>62234681
Tags: Coco, various Hololive members ,NSFW, Greentext Compilation

Holoshorts (updated) >>62240727
Tags: Hololive, wedgie, variety, compendium

A-chan Wedgie Help >>62262733
Tags: A-chan, wedgie, office lady

First Train and Kafka Stop Twenty Four: P.E.T. >>62271855
Tags: (you), Iofi, molestation

Hypothermia >>62278085
Tags: SFW, poetry, implied suicidal ideation, parasocial

Fauna Fart Fic (FFF) >>62296282
Tags: NSFW, Fauna, Fart, Smell

Last Stardust Chapter One: Preemptive Strike >>62338804
Tags: (you), Botan. Risu, AZKi, military

>> No.62351129

>7
jesus christ

>> No.62351365

It's been too long since the last Ayame story

>> No.62351509

>>62351129
/wg/ incline!

>> No.62352363

>>62351129
It's so over

>> No.62353045
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>no amelove pt. 2
>ameranthine broke my spirit
>borderline was too short

its truly over for teamates...

>> No.62353367

>>62353045
Ame is shit though

>> No.62353583

>>62353367
I agree with you completely, anon. But I love her regardless.
>>62353045
Not yet. I think.

>> No.62354801
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So Wedgie Anon has died. Who is the next schizo fetish guy to take up the mantle of discussion?

Feet? Futa? Smell? Guro? Brap?

>> No.62354924

>>62354801
hey stay off fauna fart guy, he is very polite

>> No.62355196

>>62354924
he might be but who might his fics be bringing in, hmmmmmmmmm?

>> No.62356497

>>62351365
Not long enough if you ask me

>> No.62358797

>>62353045
>Both Ame Series have been dead for a year.
I do wonder what ever happened to the anon writing "Girl-boss Watson And Her Paramilitary Death Squad" allegedly he always wrote an arc ahead he must have at least had that Atlantis arc outlines. Also reasonably certain he was also the writer for Your Time Is Gonna "Come" which also ended on a cliffhanger on rescuing Kronii from Mumei.

>> No.62359710

>>62354801
Shut up I was busy at work today ):<

>> No.62360435

>>62354801
What about incest? we have an anon who has that as their main thing and an anon working on suicest.

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>> No.62363408

>>62354801
now that you bring up futa i wanna confess that i love NNN in futa,despite thinking that the original idea is really cringe and a dumb bygone joke.
however, Futa going through NNN is great, specially if they either fail at the last few days by some minuscule stimulation or if they cant hold it and just jerk off

>> No.62365173

>>62360435
The world needs more suicest

>> No.62365228
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>>62350803
Anon. Years without a girlfriend=Years alive. You have given up in romance (and having sex) and you spend your days hanging with other bottom feeder losers that talk about masturbation techniques, anime characters and other autitstic things you find fun.
However, while you are Triying to set up your femcel friend Nerissa with your other femcel friend,you come to the horrifiying realization that you are caught in the middle of a very pathetic and hormone filled love triangle.
And no one involved in it has any fucking idea of what they are doing

>> No.62365537

>>62365173
And it shall get it.

>> No.62365749

>>62354801
I have many /d/ fetishes but I'm not motivated enough to do anything with them more than once in a blue moon, nor do I think they'd garner much engagement here beyond me

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>>62365173
As an associate chairman in the Federal Bureau of Suicest I have several projects awaiting funding.

>> No.62365937

>>62365228
>finally get the two of them in bed
>no one is moving
>No one knows what the fuck to do
>Shiori tries to rattle some sex ED but she folds like a chair the second some tiddies and man tiddies appear
>Nerissa tries to get a mood going but she's so nervous her mouth keeps spouting random bullshit that kills the mood
>you try to salvage what works but its moot
>your "first time" is just a really awkward grupal masturbation session because everyone is afraid of blowing early+way too stimulated

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>>62350755
Anchoring Holoshorts again with a very relevant picrel!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTHQNoyNK1_zHfuT4kP0bJdxTCWMilPc6L1eNFwJYbZVcyspsJFyIkCMQfXT58CGVuoA0oixd_PtCoh/pub

>> No.62367137

>>62354801
Me. It's gonna be me.

>> No.62367226

>>62354801
Guro hopefully. Some of that depraved goodness.

>> No.62367795

>>62354801
Corruption please

>> No.62367857

>>62365228
>>62365937
What would it take break the awkwardness between the love triangle? Making it a love square via adding in some else? Mind-control?

>> No.62368537

>>62367857
Imo it could be a really hot wholesome story. After the failure of the first time the three of you research and prepare, only to realize that you all have the same material. After a good laugh, the mood is just right
>Shiori blows her fuse a bit too early bur both you and nerissa give her enough aftercare to perk her back up
>Nerissa flexing her womanly charms but also being really sensitive
>Lots of kissing and exploring

>> No.62369205

>>62367795
Do you mean corruption like in those ero/Holo trap dungeon greentexts from last thread, or like in a moral degeneration sense?

>> No.62369304
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>>62353367
Die
>>62353583
It's so fucking over...
>>62358797
PDS was a cool series but too autistic for my tastes. I'm a fluff fag, need my escapist stories abt my oshi

>> No.62369454

>>62367795
>Sora and A-chan begin cooking the books at Hololive, and you, the company accountant, are the only witness.
>"Anon... " Sora whispers as she strokes your thighs. "if you don't tell anyone about this..."
>Before you can react, she unzips your pants and gives you a blowjob worth all the money in Cover Corp.
You mean that kind of corruption, right?

>> No.62369460

>>62369205
Moral degeneration and I don't really see any corruption fics in the archive

>> No.62369644

>>62369304
I've never read it but "A Spiral Through Time" is a decently large Ame/Myth fic by weirdanonv2. That could be something you could spend time reading for a while.

>> No.62370379

>>62369460
For that kind of corruption fic there's literally one greentext fic called "Towa!" that's basically like a greentext summary of a non-existent Towa Moral Degen doujin.
>>62369454
NTA but that sounds like that basis for a hilarious smut fic that's half commiting financial crimes (with the joke being that the cooked up fake financial report links to an actual cover financial report), and half moral degeneration (I.e you're covering up drugs and embarassing payments.

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>>62350755
Chapter 3 of Fujo Fantasies - Bloom and Doom

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ00MhfvVELmXCB6w66KLynsXzERhV1cx9wW1w_byXjZnvP47VZYoSmhaz4Hk4MBL_RV3rQYpC2fZfb/pub

Tags: SFW-ish, High School AU, Bae, IRyS, Mori, Fujoshis, Fauna

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>>62371387
I've been waiting for this.
>Nerd Fauna + Lisp and Bitchiness
Not what I expected honestly, and also feels weirdly incongruous, like, it feels like two aspects that aren't really in sync since you're giving her a comedic lisp while also having her be 'villanous' as a bitchy antagonist. It's like Miko becoming an alpha bitch type school bully where the two aspects mostly cancel each other out.
Still, it's an interesting set-up you're doing with having Fauna lead a 'rival club'.
Any plans for integrating Shiori into this concept?

>> No.62375784

>>62367095
>>62367095
>smelly
>canine wedgie
>marine giver
Love the incorporating of all the thread suggestions into one prompt. Would you consider getting Shion next?

>> No.62375864

>>62375784
What's your concept for it?

>> No.62376129
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>>62350755
Pale Blue Pt. II - SIDE A
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRucM4T4nNwdzhnMXehLKO1teUdbuZIgGS-PAHP8Bv5RNG9dT2A0ZbtVP7fuUzzO37ZERo5aomCeXRh/pub
SFW
Genres: Drama, Incest, Romance, Identity
Characters: Hoshimachi Suisei, Anon, A-chan, Tokino Sora, other Hololive talents
After thrusting his hands through the glass, He finds that they had been bloodied by the shards. But She wanted to hold them regardless.

Two parts left, maybe three. Thanks to the anon who wrote 'Aqua stars in an AV!' for the help with beta reading and general advice.
I also made an omake of sorts that I would like to share. Couldn't use it in Pale Blue proper since I felt that the tone didn't match the rest of the fic. So I dub it 'Light Blue - Omake 1': https://imgur.com/a/2Mxcghc
For Nimrod readers, I may have something by the end of the month. Thank you for your continued support.

>> No.62376755

>>62354801
God I hope it’s guro

>> No.62376988

>>62375864
>Shion makes her underwear transparent with magic
>safe from a wedgie without having to go really go commando
>Noel gives her a shoulder wedgie for stupid magic shenanigans
>is in the most-revealing wedgie ever since her underwear is see-through

>> No.62377070

>>62376988
Fucking kek
How does Noel know that? Did she see her do it? Does she have the “inner eye?”

>> No.62377127

>>62376988
This just makes me think about nopan Shion
God I want something with nopan Shion now

>> No.62377286

>>62377070
>sees her casting it
>thinks it's the usual Shion spells
>preemptive wedgie before things get out of hand

>> No.62377779

>>62351365
Oni's Rebellion and Oni Delivery were great though. Of course more is always better

>> No.62378186

>>62377127
>Shion spreading her legs across the table from you with a hand between her thighs to hide her pride
>Shion bending over in front of you, the bottom of her plush, tight ass cheeks flashing you
>Shion's miniskirt fluttering up from the wind, revealing a nude, pale hip to you
Can't have shit in Detroit

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>>62378186
God fucking damn it, brat erotic

>> No.62378529

>>62376988
>>62378186
>>62377127
Making her panties invisible so that you can never see a panty shot sounds like the kind of wacky logic you'd get from Shion after she gets hypnotized/bimbofied.

>> No.62378574

>>62378529
I think you underestimate how stupid she is as is!

>> No.62378770

>>62376988
>>62377127
>>62378186
>>62378410
shion is an underage girl. She's a child.

>> No.62378866

>>62378770
And I want to pull her panties!
Over! Her! Face!

>> No.62379307
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>>62371387
I see what you're going for with Fauna, but I think her dialogue skews a bit too far towards being almost like a stacy rather than a smarmy hall monitor-type. I like her inclusion and place as a rival fujo nevertheless and the girls all deserve a hug after that browbeating

>> No.62379863

Shion flying on her broom but it's rebellious, digging into her and moving back and forth

>> No.62380038

>>62379863
>you wonder what warm liquid just pattered on your face
>it's not supposed to rain tonight
>look up
>oh

>> No.62380330

>>62380038
It wouldn't be warm; it'd transfer all its heat energy into the atmosphere as it falls to the ground really quickly. It'd be cold.

>> No.62380470

>>62380330
I don't think witches fly in the stratosphere

>> No.62380538

>>62380470
It wouldn't have to be in the stratosphere? It could be a few meters above you; heat dissipates from a few drops of water very quickly when travelling through the atmosphere. Ever seen that video of boiling water freeze and vaporize instantly after being tossed out of a pot in Russia?

>> No.62380590

>>62380538
Bro I know I've been in the rain before and it's been warm rain
Not every rainshower is going to be frigid

>> No.62380626

>>62380590
k

>> No.62381043

>>62353045
I’m writing Amelia right now, but I’ll need some time.

>> No.62382282

>>62377779
>>62351365
How about an Ayame story that isn't about rrat Ayame and that doesn't have oni in the title.

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>>62382282
I've got one on my WIP pile. But it's probably gonna take awhile

>> No.62382810

>>62382282
Rrat Ayame is much more interesting though.

>> No.62385206
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>> No.62385781

Post-graduation Our Cures slice of life when?

>> No.62386327
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>>62350803
humilliation fic where you/other chuubas walk in another chuuba masturbating.
and i dont mean "oh whoops", i mean walking in as they are literal seconds away from blasting the floor with squirt, meaning that they have enough time to process they got discovered but also cant do anything to contain their orgasm

>> No.62386753

>>62385781
Never

>> No.62386922

>>62385781
When the author finally picks between the fork of making the sequel a drama fic about Anon cheating on Ayame with a blonde girl or a comedy fic about bringing in Ayame's yakuza parents.

>> No.62387044

>>62386922
Hopefully it's the former; that sounds like an extremely enticing piece of drama.

>> No.62387166

>>62386327
Shion walking on on Aqua sounds like a good pair for this kind of thing

>> No.62387603

>>62371387
Evil Fauna is so cursed wtf. Poor fat, stinky Mori...

>> No.62387771

>>62382810
I guess but I prefer a nicer/more in-character Ayame. I know the Rebellion story abandoned it but it started out with a naughty Ayame

>> No.62388081

>>62386327
is this a normal prompt or a futa prompt? because i had a siimlar idea to that sockpuppet fic in where Mori is jerking it to Kiara's spats until she gets walked on

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>>62350803
Nene enticing you to sneak off at the beach and creampie her

>> No.62389817

>>62271855
>>62350942
Iofi does not sound like she's 11 like she's said to be here.
Other than that, if it wasn't for the mild creepy feeling the molestation scene has this wouldn't fit with the general vibe of the FTaK anthology with how it almost feels cute.

>> No.62389949

Any fics with drug use? i know covercorp has the character take his meds and there's that sora wants cocaine stuff, but im kinda in the mood to read people doing stupid shit to their body
what chuuba could you fuck while you are drugged out of your mind tho

>> No.62390144

>>62389949
Nene would stab you with a combat stim so you can keep up with her insane high energy fucking

>> No.62390565

>>62389949
This made me vaguely remember an outline from like years back. I think the concept was (you) get dragged to a party with all of holoJP someone (I think it was Matsuri) brings drugs, and the party goes to hellas time passes by with you witnessing the party slowly degenerating hour by hour until it's straight up slaaneshi by the end of it.

>> No.62390999

>>62390144
my nene reps are outdated, she isnt a zoomer right? anyway i could see her teaming up with the zoomers and giving you a coctel to keep up
>>62390565
rather than sex, i think this one could work with extremely degenerate humor. something like you catch Miko shitting in a pool or Sankisei doing coke out of Marine's asshole

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>>62388944
It may not be Nene's turn to get stuffed yet when there's beachside fun, but I can definitely consider that as a fun scenario for a few other girls.

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>>62350755
Ages ago I got the strangest plot bunny: AZKi and Projekt Melody get isekai'd to the Island of Sodor. Yes, the one with the talking trains. Only write a few paragraphs then. But in the spirit of NaNoWriMo, I returned to complete the opening scene at least. Here it is:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTzkKVDCgpaTCxCAaSGf96VO7-q8o3U0d_a1asMWxwgSoy7yYLOVg0p-t8WbT8phDDZ_VJLZbiLHFvB/pub
Tags(I am bad at tagging): AZKi, Projekt Melody, Thomas The Tank Engine, Crack, isekai?, very mild ecchi humor.

I doubt I'll write more for this, the opening with them waking up to Trevor was the only scene I truly thought out and my outline of the wider plot was never coherent.

My mind went to AZKi and Melody because their lore had them explicitly be in the "virtual world" and I thought stranding them on the island full of steam tech would be funny, but I later realized they had potential as a Straight Man and Ditz duo.

>> No.62391768

>>62390565
>>62390999
>you finally comeback to your senses, as a very sweaty flare stands up, cum dripping from her snatch
>That was a fantastic half an hour
>"Thanks for the drink" she says, her constant blinking and layer of sweat tells you she's as high as you are
>You try to respond but there's something in your mouth, you spit it only to reveal its flare's panties
>"keep those. No one will believe you anyway" she says, as she walks without noticing she left her skirt in the couch
>after a good sniff, you stand up and go get some more beer
>You pass Pekora doing coke out of a very delighted marine's asshole, then Bae, irys and mumei laughing, while Fauna apologizes and Kronii looks like a test subject for Homer's make up shotgun
>you jump over Lamy's unconcious body, as Aki and Reine exchange the empty vodka bottle in her asshole for a full one
>you dodge Mococo's bottle ( as she yells something about her owning chains and losing it), which smashes against Luna's face
>"hey bigboy"
>you look down and see Ollie's head in the floor
>"Can you punt me to the alcohol table? my body is being raped over there"
>sure, why not
>You kick her, and as she flies she yells "MESSIIIIIIII"
>Then you turn around and jump back, as a black face greets you
>"Justin? werent you in the ONU?"
>"Nyee, whaat?"
>"oh its you Miko. Nice costume"
>"Thanks. Shiori told me white blondes love black men"
>You nod, SigmaCouch23 said the same thing
>You are not ready to face such harsh truths
>you fish in your pocket and pull two pills, handing one to miko
>"some solid courage?"
>"Miko is like calliope, no need for it. but i do want one!"
>Both of you gulp the drugs, the effect slowly rising
>"why are you like Mori? are you pink?
>"Nyee, im a profesional rapper. Ask pekora"

>> No.62392948

>>62391299
Write a part 2 where they fuck the trains, please.

>> No.62393004

>>62382282
Instinct of tamed beasts?

>> No.62393456

>>62371387
You got me curious about what's in that locker, I'm already wanting the next chapter. I'm also somewhat partial to nerd Fauna because she reminds me of someone I know. Good job anon.

>> No.62393656

>>62392948
Well.... My rough outline DID include a bit about AZKi trying to stop Melody from flirting with Diesel 10. I could take that a bit further with lots more innuendo about his claw, but I don't know how I'd make actual sex work.

>> No.62394092

>>62393656
Give Gordon a dick and have him fuck them while Thomas and Sir Topham Hatt are forced to watch.

>> No.62394351

>>62387166
It should be Aqua walking in on Shion watching brat correction porn.

>> No.62394396

>>62394092
Nah just giving the trains human-compatible dicks feels like cheating.

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>>62371387
im both echoing the sentiment of why is a bucktheeth nerd acting so strongly and loving this weird direction with her. The mori bullying was strongi would sniff her to tell her its ok and i really liked both setting up the closet and the book scene.
Excited for the next chapter

>> No.62394643

>>62394396
They have human faces.

>> No.62394715

>>62394396
>human-compatible dicks
Melody will be broken by the steam powered train dick

>> No.62396545

Working on a Kiara femdom angle but I'm not sure how she would reasonably overpower you. A sneak attack? Using a weapon? A swift kikkerikick to the balls?

>> No.62396652

>>62396545
Kiara is absurdly weak, even for a female shut in. I would go with ball kick.

>> No.62396698

The biggest difference between here and the porn boards' writing I notice is the treatment of fetishes as foreplay or a side attraction here, often as a prelude to sex or fluff. Over there, the fetish will be the primary focus through and through, even at the cost of some writing quality.
It's kinda fascinating to see the ways authors battle the desire to create literature against the desire to make fetish/porn works.
I don't have any point with this post, I just thought the trend I see was neat.

>> No.62396840

>>62396545
Taser, pepper spray, a kick to the eggs can work too.
however, my two cents, its that she exerts influence over you

>>62396698
well to be fair, while we have some hard smut, i think its because we have shifted away from needing it.
i dont mean we dont like it, smut makes the world a better place after all, but more like we have gotten our fill of it and now crave a more nuanced exploration of the hot thing.
Porn threads are for jerking off, while this thread is also interested in what's going on with the story. Also to jerk off, but not as hard

>> No.62397075

>>62394643
Oh right. Not a cunnilingus fan myself but that COULD work...

>> No.62397104

>>62396545
I'm a personal fan of the fake-handjob into ball-squeeze if you need something to take a guy down; sneak a hand in the front of his pants like you're about to give him a a handy and then dig your thumb into a testicle and watch him kneel. The pain and nausea will sap his strength before he can push you away, and it's stealthy enough to be done in a crowded place with no witnesses.

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>>62397104
>>62396840
>Kiara sexually harassing like Picrel, triying to give you a footjob in a meeting, feeling you when no one is looking, kissing you in the elevator
>You cant do anything because she, as a talent, can end your carreer in a second

>> No.62397870

>>62397511
If I were ever in such a scenario but my sexual harasser was Marine I could gladly let my career end.

>> No.62398018

>>62397870
>"hey anon! I wanted to talk about how the new proje-"
>"HELP, HELP, RAPIST! RAPE! IM BEING RAPED! FIRE"
>anon picks ups his purse and takes out his pepper spray, firing on Marine, as she screams in pain
>"HELP! POLICE! RAPE! FIRE! RAPE!"
>He pulls out an alarm, yanks the cord and then produces a baton, wacking marine on her crotch

>> No.62398238

>>62398018
Okay now I actually feel kind of bad because I actually wasn't expecting that kind of response and was expecting something like "faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaag" or "why are you such a faggot, Marineschizo?"

Or something along that lines. I honestly have no clue what I'd be called for disliking Marine but I genuinely know she's well liked here and can "never" score barring that one fanwork I pretend does not exist because it has a character I genuinely do not like but won't say who incase I'm called Zhang

>> No.62398416

>>62398238
i mean, you are welcome to dislike anyone you like, just dont make it a point to bring it up just to annoy the thread.
Me personally cant stand Shion's shtick(Shion the person, is fine) but when the thread starts working on ideas around her i just shrug it off.

If life taught me something ,is that indifference is a powerful tool

>> No.62399268

>>62393456
>the hypnorape closet is waiting

>> No.62399286

>>62398238
Trust me it would be extremely obvious if you were Marineschizo

>> No.62399512

>>62389817
I'm legit surprised people feel that way. Another guy said it came off cute as well which wasn't the angle I was getting at. Not saying either of you are wrong, just surprised that's how it came across.

>> No.62399814

>>62399512
I think you'd have to make Iofi older or a lot more rough/dominant to match the rest of the series and break out of that 'cute' theme. Make her more creepy and obsessed or maybe just have more aggressively molesty: this works better if she's older too though.

>> No.62400238

>>62399512
Make it so that she almost discovers that you're a prolific AI art creator, that way she comes across as more dangerous.

>> No.62400278

>>62376129
Am I supposed to read the omake now, or after the rest of the fic comes out?

>> No.62400312

>>62376129
Lynchian kino in my suicest? Don't mind if I do!

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>>62400238
I will never get tired of this joke

>> No.62400982

>>62400589
Maybe because there is some truth to it. She does despise AI art.

>> No.62401161

>>62396545
Does it have to be a physical overpowering? It would make her more impressive if she overpowered you psychologically, if she made you willing to submit.

>> No.62401601

>>62396698
Part of it is the environment you marinate in as a reader and write in as an author - if you're in a thread about a singular hardcore fetish, that's what you're used to and what the ones who'll read your fic want. I could have excluded sex from my fetish fic, and it would've been very hot to me anyway; but it just "felt right" to include some kind of sex, and I thought that the average reader would get more out of it too.

>> No.62402453

>>62369644
It's not a gosling fantasy so most teamates wouldn't read it.

>> No.62404937

CLEAR!

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>>62350803
(You) are a man in your late thirties with greying hair who's the owner and the bartender of a small jazz bar. You're not exactly a silver fox but in your own way a charming man nonetheless. Hoshimachi Suisei enters the bar and you talk with her until closing time, helping her to get over the stuff that's troubling her. Right when you are about to tell her that it's time to close, Suisei tilts her head slightly and with a mischievous tone asks:
>"Ojisan, wanna have sex?"

>> No.62405345

>>62405238
But are you her secret brother?

>> No.62405453

>>62405238
what if she had sex with a shota instead

>> No.62405467

>>62405238
You'll get your fic one day anon

>> No.62405477

>>62405345
Not this time, surely.
>>62405453
I would hate it.

>> No.62405649

>>62405467
Suisei x Ojisan will prevail one day. I still believe!

>> No.62407699
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I CAN'T FIND A SPOT TO USE MY TITLE DROP

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>>62350755
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRs_F0PiVWhlYSfdTX75FO0k3jrSRkwho2gdC4Uxh5c9LeShrKJGvMAU77wNII-rPlmE14XusMP6x07/pub

Holologs: Comedy, compilation

hey i finished it! i didnt wanna include the Regloss girls because if im being sincere, they would get flanderized beyond measure even in this context where its all snap jokes.
Still, have it

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>want to search a thread for a prompt
>archive is still down after like a month

>> No.62408468

>>62407755
That was fantastic anon. I had some mighty keks all the way.

>> No.62408497

>>62408424
Palanq is still fine but yeah warosu's fucked

>> No.62408520

>>62408424
Use palanq

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>>62408497
>>62408520
okay this changes stuffs. thanks

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>>62407755
>the reine section
>that muslim kobo

>> No.62410006
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>>62407755
I like the throughline of Kiara being a groomer, though I assume Towa was on that forum thinking it was real kitten grooming

>> No.62411040

>>62410006
Towa is a groomer of the other variety as well.

>> No.62411201

>>62407699
Just use a reverse title drop method and change your title to something cool the characters have already said. No one will be able to tell the difference.

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>>62411040
Anon please, chicks dig Tonga completely on their lonesome and through no effort on her part

>> No.62411613

>>62411345
That's the bait and the grooming is the sinker.

>> No.62412012

>>62400278
Oh yeah, it doesn't really matter when you read it; consider it 'non-canon' or something that happened in an alternate continuity
>>62400312
I really want to write a David Lynch-style fic so bad...

>> No.62412109

>>62407755
I'm pretty sure if you had made this in time for the contest this would have gotten a solid 3rd. This was a solid collection of gags.
Honestly, the only thing it's missing is some kind of framing device to connect the jokes for a comedic payoff.

>> No.62412281

>>62412012
>spoiler
Man i've been itching to do something with that sort of surrealism too, especially as I've been playing through Remedy's catalogue to get to Alan Wake 2

>> No.62412551

>>62411345
You're not going to fool me purple gas that makes you think Towa is Kakkoi.

>> No.62412598

>>62350803
Mio breaking into your house to breastfeed you.

>> No.62412698

>>62350803
You breaking into Mio's house to make her breastfeed you.

>> No.62412974

>>62407755
Nice, this was pretty funny.

>> No.62413069

>>62350803
Mio's breast breaking into you to feed in a horrific lovecraftian horror way.

>> No.62413485

>>62412281
I have AW2 but I haven't gotten around to finishing it. It's pretty good so far, though. It takes 2-3 hours to finally play as Wake, so you'll have to be a bit patient.
Just to share, the literary equivalent I can cite that's closest to Lynch's style is Murakami. It's kind of weird how their works happened to intersect like that, but he's a good reference if you want to try your hand at writing surreal stuff.

>> No.62414320

>>62412281
>>62413485
Alan Wake is nothing like Lynch's movies. For a "video game" (read: movie) it's a pale imitation.

>> No.62414607

I feel like I can't describe a woman's body well. In a sexual sense. Any tips?

>> No.62414625

>>62414320
Part of the reason why I haven't finished AW2 lmao
I can't deny that I still like the overall vibe of both games, though.

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>>62414607
yeah, the tip of my penis

>> No.62415394

>>62414607
any usage of the word plump, meaty, or description of how easily parts of her jiggle is a win in my book

>> No.62416244

>>62407755
I don't know why but I lost it at Nene's section.

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>>62407755
>crabcoco

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>>62412109
Believe it or not, i did had an idea, but i oposed to it at the last second. It was supposed to have a vague intro about (you) being a tech guy and coming to fix the issues in the company. the ending bit was
>"So? anything?"
>You take a last look at the logs, shivering at the amount of mental illness and then look at the man with the square jaw
>"Well it isnt a software problem.. whatever latency you have in your system isnt caused by traffic or a-"
>"explain less"
>"its not the Wifi, its the router"
>he "oohs", seems like that did the trick. However, you are not out of solutions.
>"can you show me your server room?"
>Down the stairs, into an elevator, down the hall and boom, its the server room
>"Arent you guys like...super millionare? Why is there only three servers and a bunch of potatoes covered in foil?"
>"I dont pay you to ask questions"
>you roll your eyes and check the first two servers,no issues there. The potatoes seem fine, except for the last one that smells a bit like butter and has a very evideny chunk missing
>still that should only give problems if it was dressed with olive oil, Nvida components are weird like that
>Which means the last server is the problem. As you go near it, you see a hole in the chasis, alongside some wires poking out of it
>You step back a bit and use your strongest weapon in the IT arsenal
>You kick it
>CLUNK! , the server shakes a bit as something stirrs
>"Oh yeah, that's a raccoon alright" you mention, as the man in the suit hands you a broom that the story didnt bother in setting up
>"out! out! git git! sh!" You introduce the hairy end and shake,until you feel resistance
>Bingo, its biting it
>You pull out, and rather than a raccoon, you pull a girl looking like a raccoon and another girl that looks normal and is wearing glasses
>The real life version of minecraft steve takes the broom out of your hands
>"SNUFFY GET OUT OF HERE! SHOO SHOO! YOU ARE VSHOJO NOW"
>The raccoon girl, who in a blink of an eye looks different, makes her exit, with the man now turning to the other
>"And you! what the hell are you doing here?
>The girl, upon closer inspection, has pupils a bit too dilated to be normal. is she on crack?
>"Hey man...i jhust...i just need a pc! ill suck your dick for a pc!"
>"i already gave you one! and you sold it for crack! now get out of here chris!"
>the man chases of the crack addict with the broom, who in one last of defiance grabs one of the potatoes and bolts.
>"Shit! that was AI'Gura's processor, now who will tweet her brand deals?"
>He turns around
>"Still, thanks for the service. Go upstairs and collect your check"
>"right...hey...are you ok? is this your life everyday?
>The man turns and faces the camera
>"Yes, Its my Holo-Life"
>The crowd erupts in cheers, as the message "Quentinen and Tarantined by Writtin Directino" appears on the screen

>> No.62417130

>>62417034
Why are you do this?

>> No.62417181

>>62417130
isnt this the question we ask ourselves everyday?

>> No.62417238

>>62417034
This is beautiful, anon. I think I can go to heaven now after reading this.

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>>62407755
>Usada Pekora
>Posted “People keep trying to fuck my mom, how do i prevent it” in “Help me!” Forum
That got me good. It's only gonna get worse for her from here.
The Nene and Lamy sections also split my sides a bit. Nene deserves her mod status for sure.
These were all great. Amazing work anon.
>mfw the log of Polka's favorited work. You straight caught me off guard with that one dude. Thanks.

>> No.62418754

>>62417241
I feel like theres a bunch of references and shoutouts in there. I want to say I spotted 3 or maybe 4

>> No.62419287

>>62418754
im curious, which one did you spot? i only got hold the journeys

>> No.62419893

>>62419287
Theres the HJ one, that's for sure. The rest might be literary pareidolia but:
>Sad Genuine Smile
>Ectogasm
>Postive ID
>Definitive Proof of Sakura Miko's Heterosexuality

>> No.62421253

>>62419893
Ectogasm reference looks incidental but honestly I just think it’s neat that anyone remembers that fic(I still love the name)

>> No.62421629

>>62419893
I think the Towa asking to watch one is in reference to Startend and is about Suisei fucking Aqua. Also I don't think Reine's PMC is in reference to Positive ID either because I distinctly remember giving Anon's a different name when I wrote that.

>> No.62422577

>>62350803
Ok, I’m horny and going to ask for something stupid: a short story of Snuffy (stupid sexy raccoon…) masturbation with a wedgie

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>>62417238
Glad you liked it.
>>62417241
>>62418754
>>62419287
>>62419893
Sorry to burst the bubble but no, the only reference is HJ and thats mostly for me thinking in HJ everytime the "funky fennec" pic gets posted
>Sad genuine small.
as >>62421629 said, the joke is that Towa is always left "cucked" in startend-. I do like SGS though, so that can be settled as i actually did mean to
>Ectogasm
maybe if you squint your eyes, but if im being honest i was running out of ideas with stinko orca. I would still suck the farts out of her ass though. Nice fic
>Positive id
Im sorry i didnt read this one, but i did reference it because im super cool
>Definitive proof
i,huh, i dont even know which part of this aligns with that but sure ,i planned for that. Also among my favorite fics until the end that doesnt pay of the joke as i wanted to

overall, im the best and thank you for the kudos

>> No.62422937

>>62407755
>no Gura

My fucking sides

>> No.62423095

>>62422708
Fuck, I knew I was seeing things. Oh well.
>i,huh, i dont even know which part of this aligns with that but sure
Lamy's part.
>Messaged Momosuzu Nene: “Im gonna beat the shit out of you”

>> No.62423343

>>62423095
ah yes, i guess i worded it that way unconciously. It was a dig at how Lamy punches the shit out of Nene in minecra or any game that allows her to as a part of their tsukkomi routine, which also feed on their weird sexual tension.

What im saying is that Lamy would 100% smash clams with her, but then nene says some stupid shit and the next thing she sees is the ER lights

>> No.62423530

>>62422577
I can't do this one since I'm not familiar with Snuffy in the slightest but would she just pull on the front until she goes?

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>>62422937
oh it's there, the entry is just so sparse you probably missed it

>> No.62425241

>>62423530
Basically yeah. Wedgie in the front to get things going, wedge it up between her lips, then fool around on the outside and tug until she finishes. It’s a real thing, believe it or not

>> No.62425312

>>62425079
Oh lol, I did. I usually order things by height in EN in my head so I thought once it hit Ame she was just being left out

>> No.62425424

its driving me crazy how no one pointed out the Anya section because i lost it at ONE MILLION DOLLARS and then i saw the ascii art

>> No.62425498

>>62425424
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>> No.62426449

>>62425424
See I would of gotten the ONE MILLION joke if it was an Ace Combat 7 reference. The ASCII art didnt really turn out well for me.

>> No.62426722

>>62426449
>ace combat over austin powers
im so mad at you, but i cant put a pin on what to call you so fuck you

>> No.62427001

>>62371387
The dialogue in the entire series is sometimes a little hit or miss for my tastes, but overall I'm liking it, even though I feel like Mori wouldn't have crumpled as fast as she did.
Mori better get her pussy destroyed.

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>>62426722

>> No.62427386

>>62427001
i was thinking the same until i gave it a second thought, remembered how Mori was such an autistic mess that she gave food to a girl because she thought that made them friends, didnt knew she was being bullied and ignored and spent most of her time in a bench, and i fully believe someone talking like that would make her crumble before she grew thicker skin

I do agree that she should get plapped into the ground tho

>> No.62427525

>>62426722
someone stepped on this dude's crisp white sheets

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>>62427386
Y'know, that's fair. This isn't rapper Mori yet, this is autistic nerd Mori. I rescind that criticism.

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>>62427541
That chadcast story about how she got a frank ocean album for her crush (and only friend in highschool), who told her it was the best gift ever...which ended with Mori watching as that person kissed another person in a New year countdown

Moririn....

>> No.62429697

>>62350803
You spend most of your days in the office bickering with a chuuba. One day, fed up with your bullshit, Shion casts a spell that makes it so you and this chuuba share sensations and thoughts for an entire week.
Doing work? She can read your thoughts.
Taking a piss? The other person feels it
Jerking off? Out of the question unless you want them to know what gets your rocks off.
Worst part? All senses are additive, so if both of you want to pee, you better have a bathroom close or its a double accident

>> No.62433122

Questions for writers: what is the most bizarre response / piece of criticism you've gotten to one of your fics?

>> No.62433465
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>>62350803
Futa Bae goes on a campaign to fill all of Promise's holes

>> No.62433485

>>62433122
Anything written by obvious ESLs.

>> No.62433748

>>62433122
Probably the guy who told me my parents were disappointed in me I guess

>> No.62433936

>>62433122
I had someone accuse me of being weirdanonv2 based on what I assume was the story synopsis only.

>> No.62434981

>>62433465
and once she's successfully raped all or promise her futa cock vanishes and all the other girls grow cocks to gangbang Bae

>> No.62435285

>>62433936
What story did you write?

>> No.62435572

I still have the concept of Mori and IRyS getting fucked by a shotafied Bae with huge nuts stuck inside my head after it was shortly fielded in the thread one time

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>>62373537
yeah, i understand it's a very weird combination, unfortunately, these people do exist (fauna literally saying "lol" outloud is not fiction, i've heard it)
>Shiori
>to be honest, i'm doing my best to stick to the original prompt, however she seems interesting enough but i have no idea how to implement her with my current ideas
>>62379307
Yeah, Fauna did go hard on them, I'll definitely try to rein the dialogue a bit for sure, thanks
>>62387603
mori's not that fat...
>>62393456
I'm glad to hear you're curious and yeah, I sorta based off of certain people i've met that were like her
>>62394424
I enjoyed writing Licht too, I'm glad you're looking forward to it
>>62427001
Yeah, I know some dialogue can be a bit much, but I do try and base it off of chadcast talks
dont worry, there's pussy crushing for everyone anon may not survive though

>> No.62435696

>>62350803
Gura is the last of her kind. Her foster parents are nice and are kind enough to let her call them mama and papa shark, but they don’t fill the void left by the loss of her people. That gets to her, sometimes. While she’s 900ish in human years, that’s still barely more than a teenager in Atlantean years. She’s just a kid, a kid who lost her friends, family, and home to calamity before she could even grow up with them. It’s the kind of thing that causes her to turn inward with depression over what she never had the chance to have, something she hides with humor as best she can.

One day, a sound comes from the deep ocean. It’s something that humans don’t recognize, but to Gura, whose first language is Atlantean, who recognizes the clicks and groans, it’s a message, and it’s one that makes her sit up straight, jaw slack. Coming from uncharted depths is an SOS message, one coming from one of her people.

She’s not alone.

Instantly she puts aside her whole life to go find the last remnant of her history, diving deep into the ocean to find what she thought was lost forever. She dives down into the darkness, only illuminated by the little light she could bring with her.

But when she finds the source of the message, she realizes what sent it, and that coming here was a very, very big mistake…

>> No.62436671

>>62429697
There is like two stories you can tell with this concept. The first would be a romcom where the two of you try and work together to get by and survive wjile under the sensory curse. The second would be a spite off where it becomes an arms race of sensations as the two of you slowly escalate feeling embarrassing shit entirely to fuck with the other (i.e by the end of it you're deliberately having CBT done on you while she's bringing out the dragon dildo.)

>> No.62436789

>>62436671
You forgot the third one where you have insane, double-sensation sex with each other

>> No.62437060

if anyone predicts my twist ending, I'm going to change the ending so that it's completely awkward and abrupt, possibly making zero sense.

>> No.62437463

>>62435285
A (Shrine) Maiden's Burden

>> No.62437574

>>62437463
Strange.

>> No.62437789

>>62437060
Cool, I didn't know we had the writers of Westworld in /wg/

>> No.62438914

>>62437789
Michael Crichton changed his movie at the last minute?

>> No.62439623

>>62435572
Imagine the smeared lipstick marks all over the nutsack

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>> No.62442070

>>62435685
>Anon may not survive
He will. He needs to plap correct everyone. I'm looking forward to it.

>> No.62443746

>>62385206
Ayame in winter clothing is even cuter.

>> No.62446837

>>62416516
I need that in my life

>> No.62446839

Clear part 2 electric boogaloo

>> No.62447326

>>62417034
Reasonable certain I'd have voted for this to be second place had this been written out with this framing device. This is the kind of pure quality shitpost energy we've been missing for a while.

>> No.62448524

The story anchor image makes me want to be dominated by Ayame through her swords and strength.

>> No.62449467

>>62437060
>Anons guess the story's twist ending and turn it from a shock NTR ending to a fluffy one.
Kino.

>> No.62453002
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And I'm back to Marine gosling. Great.

>> No.62453120

>>62453002
falling in love with Ex-singer Marine! taking care of her special daughter with her! all iwth the support of your friend Abe-san

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>>62453120
>Marine "falls from grace" in the eyes of the japanese public as she reveals her daughter and gets blacklisted
>opens a small bar, where Aqua helps out while also receiving couching from her mother
>You learn that Marine adopted Aqua from a diying Fan with no friends or family
>the three of you form your little family
there's a really good gosling story here

>> No.62454028

>>62453657
>Aqua helps out while also receiving couching from her mother
>couching
That sounds wrong.

>> No.62454120

>>62453657
>Marine dissapears from the public eye. Media blacklists her
>Middle of bumfuck nowhere, you are just a lowly carpenteer in small town
>turns out she has opened an orphanage and adopted a lot of girls
>teaching all of them how to sing
>you are just helping with the buildings and stuff, but that's where romance blooms
Marine will adopt aqua, kobo, gura, baelz, shion and any other chuuba in her height range

>> No.62454630

>>62454120
What is her height range? Kobo is the same height as Marine

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>>62454630
139 cm to 151 seems to be the cuttoff. Kobo is one cm taller than marine

>> No.62455658

>>62455023
Chloe looks so wrong at her true height. She should be ~10cm taller

>> No.62455804

>>62454120
You know I get that the implication is that they're orphan children but for some reason I find the idea of Marine having n 'orphanage' that's lived in by adult women pretending to be poor orphan girls funny.

>> No.62456016

>>62455658
Nah, her being a shortstack is much hotter

>> No.62456077

>>62455023
Huh, I never realized Sakamata was a womanlet...

>> No.62456163

>>62455804
>"Gura arent you like...in your twenties?"
>"Dude i get fed three times a day and older women i dont know brush my head, it doesnt get better than this"
>"Do you even speak japanese?"
>"Hell no i dont"

>> No.62456263

>>62456016
I can see that, I just prefer my shortstacks a bit broader and with big heads. Like Anya or Aqua in their big-titted forms.

>> No.62456652

>>62417034
>tags: comedy gold
Please add this to your Holologs

>> No.62457678

>>62456163
>"does she even know you're not a kid"
>"don't ask, don't tell, baybeee"

>> No.62457776

Anyone cooking some futa?

>> No.62458134

>>62457776
I've been kicking around the ChaDcast drains Bae's fat rat balls idea I saw in the thread in my head, and also considering combining it with the Bae anally fucks IRyS into submission idea I think I saw here as well

>> No.62458314

>>62458134
if i may intrude, is that chadcast idea a "one futa" thing or "everyone is a futa" thing?
Also, is Bae the bottom of the top? she could easily be bullied
Also my suggestion is that if Irys is a futa, have her piledrived until she cums on her own face

>> No.62458599

>>62458314
The rough outline in my head is that Bae is the only futa at the start, and maybe IRyS grows one partway through by way of nephilim biology by ingesting too much of Bae's spunk. Mori would probably remain dickless.
Bae is the bottom until IRyS irritates her enough into correcting her.

>> No.62459876

>>62458599
Will there be cbt?

>> No.62460684
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62460684

So, how are your wips coming along anon?
Bonus Question: What's a fic you liked in the archive that isn't talked about much? Share your thoughts on it, maybe the author's still here to hear them.

>> No.62461129

>>62459876
maybe some orgasm denial

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>>62460684
We're getting closer. Brick by brick.
>bonus
I really loved The Fletcher's Princess. Luna and MC-kun's interactions were endlessly endearing, and the hand-drawn art that the author included along with the story was the very definition of SOUL. If I could pick any abandoned story in the archive to be picked back up, it would definitely be that one. Sorry FSM, you're in close second.

>> No.62462111

>>62460684
Regular pace which means kind of slow. I liked the Lion Taming story because Towa is such a tsundere dork in it and it's a big focus because of the pov. Please make a sequel with Towa getting a collar too!

>> No.62462316

>>62460684
Slow but steady. I am debating on whether I wanna make this just one big fic or split it into 3 chapters.

>Bonus
Feeding Strays. I don't particularly care for Gura but there's a certain warmth found in that fic and I love it. Also Ice Cream and Parched at Night but they're both sickeningly sweet and it encompasses one of my dreams.

>> No.62462824

>>62462316
>one big fic or split it into 3 chapters
How big is the word count already? If it's already too big splitting it off for the sake of readability might be better even if you still view it as on big one-shot.

>> No.62463848

>>62462824
I'm at 7k right now, probably 1k more and I'd finish this first part.

>> No.62465055

>>62460684
At last, I'm on the final stretch. Just have to write the conclusion, and I'll be home free.

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So is Gura and Marine having sex canon now?

>> No.62466163

>>62465956
Yes, most definitely.

>> No.62466272

>>62465956
Marine just masturbated to Gura while Gura was sleeping.

>> No.62466488

>>62457776
Thinking about a Nerissa and Kiara thing but not sure who would be the futa. Also there's an ancient draft of big dick futa Gura plapping Mori's fat ass in a love hotel.

>> No.62466864

>>62466488
If you're going for a straightforward fic Kiara has to be the futa. Everything else would be a twist.

>> No.62467524

>>62466488
It would make way more sense for Nerissa to be the futa. She's bigger and the kfp self insert. Kiara being the futa could be interesting in its own way though. Either way the futa should have a tiny, cute quick shooter.

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>>62467524
I wanna cuck dicklet futa Nerissa

>> No.62469785

>>62466864
>>62467524
The duality of...what is the ship name again?

>> No.62469818

>>62469001
I want dicklet futa Nerissa to take Kiara out on a date. I want her to treat her to the time of her life and pay for all her expenses. Then I want her to take Kiara back to my home at a reasonable time. I want her to have to sit outside the bedroom door while I loudly plow Kiara from behind so hard she screams. And once Kiara is satisfied and asleep I want to go out the door and have futarissa suck the Kiara juices off of my cock while she frantically masturbates with two fingers and cries.

>> No.62470037

>>62469818
t. futa Reine

>> No.62471229

>>62469001
We know, Kiara

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>>62460684
Fair enough. I'm starting to put some plan for a plot together. I've got some vague ideas but i'm not entirely sure how I want to put them together in a cohesive narrative yet. I'm taking some influences from FMA brotherhood, Nier Automata, and other like stories. Might watch a few 50s military stories as well.

>> No.62473076

>>62461885
>31k words
Damn, must be some project you’ve got cooking.

>> No.62473480

>>62350803
That mori shota grooming prompt, but again, and with teen-college aged slampig antics.

>> No.62473863

Liking guro and scat is less weird than liking mori.

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>>62473863

>> No.62476798

Not yet

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>>62460684
Finally broke through a bit of a block I had thanks to a week-long vacation. I've had a complicated relationship with this WIP but I can finally see the light at the end.

>Bonus
I have a fondness for Polka and Rain. It's short but I think it delivers its gut punch really well. There a real sense of blurriness in the way the prose delivers the grief that I enjoyed
Moonshine Blues is another, I think it is really funny and it doesn't get mentioned enough when it comes to comedy fics.
Shoutouts to Cold Air, Hot Blood and its sequel Warm Air, Warm Feelings. Unfairly overshadowed by Our Cures I feel. I like the setup with their relationship being a bit dubious and Ayame's reasons and interests not being explicitly spelled out. I'd love a sequel or two to tie it up honestly.

>> No.62477878
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I like mori, she's flexible for about any fic i can think of, need an antagonist for your chuuni story? mori's lore is perfect. need a antagonist turned protagonist, her personality is fileable enough to where her turning good is believable. Need a possible love interests? focus on her dorky parts.

>> No.62478212

Holy shit wg, I’ve been going SPEED with this one. This is the quickest I think I’ve ever typed. I think Shion does things to me.

>> No.62479176

>>62478212
Does she squeeze your sack while asking you questions about your relationship with your mother?

>> No.62479259

>>62363046
This looks like how I imagine fightsexual Ayame.

>> No.62479297

>>62478212
Shion makes even the strongest of men act a fool

>> No.62479318

>>62477878
So what you're saying is (fanfic wise), Mori is the Fubuki of Hololive EN.

>> No.62479800

>>62479318
tbf most of en has this type of flexibility between kayfabe and personality.

all of council/promise, advent, mori, gura, ina...not so much Ame or kiara.

>> No.62480053

>>62479800
Kiara's flexibility is a triangle of three traits called sex, abusive boss, and menhera.
Ame is.... Yeah there's two characterizations for her little gremlin and "The Time Traveller".

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>>62479176
No, I don’t think so
>>62479297
I like small and cute so definitely me

>> No.62480425

>>62480143
I WANT TO GRIP AND SQUEEZE AND SHOVE MY FACE IN BETWEEN THOSE PLUSH ASS CHEEKS GOD DAMN IIIIIIIT

>> No.62480490

>>62480425
that's a child, anon

>> No.62480691

>>62480490
She just wears child size underwear anon, she’s a grown woman!

>> No.62480902

>>62480143
No CBT? Aw shucks

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>>62453002
I never stopped.
I should push By That Sea Chapter 2 up the WIP list

>> No.62484704

>>62479800
Gura is by far the most static character in all of holoen.
Your choices are...haha funny shark... and that's it

>> No.62484842

>>62484704
savage monster girl, rude red gura, Atlantean princess, gremlin there's some flexibility there if you're creative enough

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>>62484842
>>62484704
I won't lie bros. I am simply not interested in the shart shark in any capacity to want to do anything cool with her. What's funny is that I am going to 100% include an underwater city at some point, but still don't know if I will even want to include gura.

>> No.62485116

>>62484842
but that's every single chuuba in existance if you take 1 of concepts and stuff.
the first two are not gura, she never leaned into the "red" angle and her banter is already part of her normal personality.
Atlantean princess is a frame device that leads to nowhere since its still her personality with no changes (because she doesnt have royal traits).
Gura's lore is inexistant and her normal personality is the only thing she has going, which is even less interesting that ame having her personality and time traveler or Kronii being a doomer and a narcissist

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not sure if the holoshorts writer is around, leaving this here if he wants to try it and get amelia/gura
>ame sneaks out of a meeting to masturbate in the ladies room
>giving herself frontal wedgie to do it
>almost done with her session
>gura walks in on her
>offers to cover for her if she can pull off a frontal atomic before orgasming
>"that's... kinda gross" ame says
>"says the one doing it in a public bathroom" gura replies
>cumbrain wins for ame
>she gets to jill off, gura covers for her and all it cost was pussy juice smeared on her face and some extra-ruined undergarments
pic related?

>> No.62486338

>>62485629
hot

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>>62367095
New entry up with picrel.

Not exactly my most stellar piece of writing, but I've been losing some steam lately. The fact I got this done is a win in my book.

On the bright side, this has now broken 50K

>> No.62487366

>>62484704
Last of her kind, heiress to the sea, water powers, tragic backstory, hiding hurt behind humor, savage animalistic nature kept repressed for others' safety

Sure, nothing to be done there.

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>>62487259
>Not exactly my most stellar piece of writing, but I've been losing some steam lately
no particular issues i see relative to the rest besides a meaningless uncapitalized instance of Flare's name, what is making you think that?

>> No.62487608

>>62487487
Ah good catch with Flare, my bad.
Idk, it feels like I kinda lost momentum at the end. Like the conclusion feels wimpy compared to how I wanted to hit it, but I guess that’s subjective.

>> No.62487792

>>62487608
If it had ended at the shoulder wedgie I would have perhaps agreed, but the ripping wedgie was enough of a second bump on the roller coaster than a quiet nothingburger ending
I'd say something like the Nene flagpole one is a bigger "wimpy" one than this

>> No.62488142

>>62487366
buddy gura isnt the last of her kind lmao. she just came to the surface.
>water powers
>tragic backstory
>hiding hurt behind humor
>animalistic nature
water powers is as fucking generic as it gets, what the hell do you write with that aside from "gura throws water", Kobo does the same and so does any "magical" chuuba
the rest is a bunch of generics tropes that can easily be applied to any chuuba and you would get the same result.
"Oh the tragic backstory of Kanata"
"Woah Polka is hiding hurt behind humor"
"damn, that's Fuwamoco's hidden animal nature"
the only thing here remotely useful for writing gura is "heiress to the sea" and that's just making a bunch of leaps in logic...and could even be applied to Sakatama if you really want to be pedantic. Hell in chloe it could make a more interesting piece as she chose to run away and join an evil organization as an assasin.
Gura's lore is two lines, she has never done anything with it and that's fine for her streams, but for writing she's at best a side character. Shark in the screen was the last serious fic featuring her and that didnt do anthing that wasnt done before

>> No.62488471

>>62488142
Great argument
Unfortunately,
>Sakatama

>> No.62488504

>>62485629
>>62487259

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>>62488142
>water powers is as fucking generic as it gets, what the hell do you write with that aside from "gura throws water"
If you're not trying to get creative, sure that might be as far as you can get. Could never be me though.

>> No.62488616

>>62485629
Uh… I’m not saying “no,” but probably not.

>>62487792
I suppose that’s true. I focus on little stuff probably more than I ought to.

>> No.62488621

>>62488515
not him but for me water powers are so lame.
They have to be underpowered as hell or it just makes the character boil your body water alive and kill you instantly, or freeze and kill you, or pretty much anything because water its so versatile.
hell even the weakest water user can put a water bubble in your head and suffocate you without a counter

>> No.62488749

>>62488471
curses, foiled again
>>62488515
Elemental powers need a system to support it, otherwise you run in the TLA conundrum of "yeah every element can instakill you, but we wont because huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh"

>> No.62488967

>>62488616
I don't know exactly what the scale of some of the longer documents in the Archive are but 50,000 should be getting up there. I hope you'll continue to do this just to see how far you can go before real-life or fatigue gets you.

>> No.62490347

>>62484704
Does she really needs to be more?
The funny shark just needs to be a funny shark, if you're want to get more out of her you can staple on a depressed alcoholic for depth and texture without much problems.

>> No.62491989

Gura gets hella drunk and trauma dumps on you

>> No.62492004

>>62487487
that's an image of a child without any pants on

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>>62490347
the only thing she needs to be active in more of is streaming

>> No.62492689

>>62491989
She starts apologizing for literally everything and beating herself up over nothing

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>>62485054
Will the horny fish be there?

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>>62462111
Really neat that a devil has a cute little butt that can be spanked into submission.

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>>62493292
I've thought about it to be honest. Nothing more than an initial thought at the moment. I don't really have any good ideas for her at the moment. I'm not super sure what she might be good for other than a couple jokes about how thirsty she is.

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>>62493567
debiru genetics

>> No.62495341
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How about an Ina x Ayame SM fanfic?

>> No.62496943

if someone's gonna bake later please do so; im currently away from my computer and phoneposting like a fag
i think an anon requested Lamy for the next thread

>> No.62496960

>>62494970
that's a boy

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>>62477808
>I'd love a sequel or two to tie it up honestly.
It'll happen eventually, I have an outline for at the very least another part. No real timeframe though, I've only just recently gotten over a pretty bad bout of writer's block and still have a bunch of other things to attend to both in terms of fic writing and other wise so I've put a ton of shit on the back burner

>> No.62498135

>>62497577
Is that outline the Mio comes over and Ayame forces Anon to act like her boyfriend one?

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>>62498135
that's the one, though I haven't quite given up on the 'Halloween Party where Ayame gets jealous over you flirting with Mel' idea. Kinda treads the same ground and I do like the Mio one more so I might just hold on to it for it's own thing later.

>> No.62498547

>>62496960
is that supposed to stop me?

>> No.62499288

>>62497577
All are fair and understandable. As long as you are still kicking here and willing to get to it eventually that's more than I can ask.

>> No.62499973

>>62498492
>Halloween Party where Ayame gets jealous over you flirting with Mel
Don't remember the discussion for that, but I'm guessing the general outline is something like
>Ayame forces your ass to come to the hololive Halloween party
>Shenanigans ensue as Ayame implies you're her boyfriend to everyone else, presumably while you do that blade runner thing of looking sad while looking at a giant projected hologram of one of the talents.
>By coincidence you run into Mel and your autism lines up perfectly for an energetic talk with her.
>This gets Ayame jealous, cue the rest of the fic being about trying to pry the two of you apart.

>> No.62500918

>>62499973
honestly I don't remember talking all that much about either beyond that I was floating both of them but yeah, though for some reason I didn't think about the continued 'literally me' bit and was gonna have you dressed as a vampire from a cult classic movie that Mel would somehow recognize.

>> No.62501640

>>62500918
>you dressed as a vampire from a cult classic movie
For some reason this makes me think Ayame's drops the news about the party like 4 hours before it actually happens and she gets you dressed up for the Halloween party with whatever clothes she can wrangle up and it just ends with you looking like Edward Cullen from twilight.

>> No.62502096

>>62501640
Kek kinda, though the joke would be that you would have an actual costume ready and when she ask why you'd say that you were totally gonna go to another party, which she obviously doesn't believe and calls you out saying you were just gonna sit in your apartment and watch a fucking movie dressed like that

Also is anybody baking?

>> No.62502334

>>62502096
Oh yeah, page 10.
I'm at work or I would.

>> No.62502363

>>62502334
Alright, some Elf Bread is on it's way

>> No.62502665

>>62435696
Time to grab my Gas Cannon, Thermal Tazer and Dive suit! Put me in Commander. Time to die for Earth!

>> No.62503013

>>62502363
gross

>> No.62503076

>>62502577
>>62502577
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