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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>6103473

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Mori Prompt: she's friends-with-benefits with Anon, keeps telling him 'it's only weird if you make it weird' and 'not to get it twisted' only to immediately make it weird and twisted herself when he gets a girlfriend and tries to break it off.

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>>6157100
There is literally no end to the number of ways this white-haired semen demon can be sexually exploited

>> No.6157309
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.6157329

>>6157309
Requesting prompts about an autistic misogynistic Anon. Happy to write about any vtuber character, I just want to vent about how much I hate women. Abuse or not, I don't mind.

>> No.6157330

Fuck off with the Nijinigger threads already. Nobody fucking watches them.

>> No.6157331

>>6157287
Then make a vanilla non-sexual story about friend

>> No.6157352

>>6157329
Why do you watch vtubers if you hate women?

>> No.6157366

>>6157331
What would be the point of that?

>> No.6157394

>>6157366
To challenge your writing skill by doing something that is not easy
>>6157352
He probably watch Males exclusively

>> No.6157422

>>6157394
Nah, that's no fun to write about.

>> No.6158211

>>6157352
Why do you watch vtubers if you can just talk to real women instead?
It's because they act completely differently.

>> No.6158268

>>6157309
cucking Flare by fucking Noel

>> No.6158288

>>6157243
You know, Mori prompt spammer, I'll say this. You're fucking resilient, like a cockroach. Granted no one has tried to whack you with a shoe, but yeah. That being said, this prompt has always greatly interested me; I do hope someone would take it up. I'm unfamiliar with how to write Mori well, else I would.

>> No.6158517

>>6157309
Towa wakes up to find out that she developed a futanari dick and suddenly feels the need to release her libido and decides to use bibi as an onahole

>> No.6158535

>>6157287
What would her cunny taste like?

>> No.6158547

>>6158211
But I do talk to women. That's like saying there's no reason to watch streamers in general if you interact with actual humans. Fun things are fun.

>> No.6158620

>>6158517
And here I thought you'd go with Towa goes on the attack on Kanata only for tables turned and Angel domming the Devil

>> No.6158683

>>6158535
Slightly salty and acidic, with a faint aftertaste of sweat and chock full of her aroma. In my headcanon, she's shaved bare, with a slightly puffed up vulva that almost completely conceals her entrance save for the tips of her labial folds. Her clitoris is perky and taut.

Fuck I want to eat her out so bad

>> No.6159070

>>6158517
I can't believe I'm gonna write this one. Don't get your hopes up tho I don't write smut so this is more for practice.

>> No.6159349

Hey I haven't caught up with this thread in like a month. What happened to the old pastebin archived ? Is it broken ?

>> No.6159389

>>6159349
It's still there, I just moved everything to Rentry instead, as it allows for better formatting and proper, clickable links - no more need to copy and paste everything. The original Pastebin is still being updated if you truly prefer to use it, but I'm keeping that as a legacy/back up in case anything happens to the Rentry. The link is in the OP should you need it.

>> No.6159892
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To both write and read fags, isn't it much weirder for you considering these are real people?
For regular fake characters, you can easily apply your own opinion of their personality, background or hidden secrets and no one can really argue with you as they don't really have a "true" personality.
For real people however there is a true reality and almost no writer is going to be able to capture that reality, the product is going to always seem like a copy from a mirror world where everything isn't just quite right.

>> No.6160014

>>6159892
I see them as just their characters, not their real selves. Besides, some of them do have actual lore behind their characters and its fun to write something based on that lore..

>> No.6160068

>>6159892

Well thankfully we aren't writing to win a Pulitzer Prize, we are writing garbage-tier fanfics for unhinged outcasts. Concerns about capturing personality perfectly don't really apply when you're writing an onara themed hag-fest orgy or whatever. But I take your point.

>> No.6160090

>>6159892
I write based on who they portray themselves as/their lore rather than the person behind the screen. It's strange, yes, but at the end of the day, it's just whatever. You raise a good point but it's generally never something that's stopped me from writing fucked up shit for the sake of my dick.

>> No.6160091

Screw the person who implemented the new captcha instead of the ol' reliable Google reCAPTCHA. It's gonna take a month for my imageboards app to update properly for it.

Why is Mio associated with motherly and wifely traits way more, than other Holos?

>> No.6160522

>>6160091
Because she acts quite motherly, a bunch of holos have mentioned how motherly she is. She's also old enough to actually be their mother, so there's that too

>> No.6160988

>>6159892
first off, there is a huge amount of RPF on the internet, vtubers are nothing in comparison (for example, ABO is considered to have originated from Supernatural, but it was explicitly from a fanfic about the actors, not the characters).

second, they're all still fictional characters, even if they have some moments from the roommate's personal life incorporated into them.

and third, I basically always incorporate their stated lore into my works

>> No.6161077

>>6159892
It's why I'm trying to dig for the character to try and get things working off on the character for stuff like the LTF thread and such.

>> No.6161093

>>6157287
here's one other way: a sequel to "Nothing but candy". Fubuki's nice husband still doesn't want to hurt her at all, but he knows she wants to be punished, so one day one of her kohais comes over to help with discipline.

>> No.6161351

>>6157309
>>6157287
After (You) married Mio, Fubuki has become increasingly jealous. Hoping to fix the relationship between the three, Mio decides to share her husband with her best childhood friend in a steamy threesome where Fubuki who once hated your guts learns to love you almost as much as Mio does.

>> No.6161632

>>6161093
>>6161351
you can combine the two, Mio bullies and scolds Fubuki, then punishes her, then they have a threesome

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>>6158517
https://gdoc.pub/doc/e/2PACX-1vRjWdJtIIYCkr0GQu65zZfNUa8K5rBd-2tgv6BQ4bwYYBed5zOVXeoknAXC76c_gUaRQnUSOH4T3dkB

Futowa uses Bibi as an onahole leading to a strange situation

>> No.6162222

>>6160091
I mean the meme mirrors reality, I think. The girls always talk about Mio is always looking out for them, going shopping with/for them, giving advice and in general caring for them. I mean with the way she spoils Ayame, she could well be Mio's child.

Plus her voice and demeanor is very big-sis like.

>>6161351
I'd like to see this, very much so.

>>6160068
Hey I'll have you know I binged some Aki and Flare to try and capture their personalities better for this story since they're the ones I'm least familiar with.

>> No.6162362

>>6159892
>For real people however there is a true reality and almost no writer is going to be able to capture that reality, the product is going to always seem like a copy from a mirror world where everything isn't just quite right.
That sounds like a (You) problem. I see little if any distinction between capturing their personalities and that of totally manufactured characters

>> No.6162603

>>6162045
Very based anon, liked the ending a lot.

>> No.6164845

>"write at least one page today. keep up your reps."
>end up writing three instead
M O T I V A T E D

>> No.6164976

>>6157100
Honma is a fat fuck

>> No.6165360

>>6159892
Eh, never really bothered me. Most of my stories don't contain any lore and are mostly about roommate personalities and experiences but I couldn't give less of a shit.

>> No.6166008

>>6159892
Eh not really. Basically we're not even fans of the real people (mostly) but the kayfabe persona that's a combination of the lore and the actor.
Personally it gets kind of weird when it goes to like actual RL they're totally banging irl like with NoeFure but the image of the characters we have is the image we love and thus make/read stuff of.

>> No.6166327

>>6159892
I tend to write them as a weird hybrid of their online personas and their real selves. The former tends to be dominant, but bits of roommate stuff are sprinkled in.

>> No.6166364

>>6159892
I'm writing about an Indian prince marrying every Chuuba and dropping nukes on the Chinks, I don't care about 'true reality'. And I doubt the guys writing about fucking fubuki in the ass care much about fubukis actual stance on getting fucked in the ass

>> No.6166426

>>6157100
I wished someone made some more Honma stories. I liked the greentext abuse story she had a while back, and I really wished someone expanded that story.

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>Wants to get back to writing after finally getting over Coco's graduation
>Starts writing a Shion reverse rape fic for some ungodly reason
>Can't seem to write as much as I want to anymore
>Barely finished a singular page after 2 days.

mfw writer's block after depression is a real thing.

>> No.6168358

Currently writing a fic about how Suisei became a shotacon because she was rejected by her older crush back in her indie days. Any suggestions for scenarios/etc would be welcome because I'm a little bit stuck in trying to visualize them. Want to make it very painful for Suisei

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Remember when I said I'd write something based on this, I'm working on it. Sorry for being late with it, just wanted you to know I haven't forgotten.

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>>6168358
>>6168419
ganbatte authanons!

>> No.6168939

>>6166904
>for some ungodly reason

Honestly anon, I find that if I'm just writing something to write something, the inspiration and motivation simply doesn't come. Do you have strong feelings towards getting reverse Gaki'd, or just feel meh about it?

Maybe writing something you feel real passionate about will help shake things up.

>> No.6169097

Taking a crack at that "you are married with kids to a vtuber and they become abusive to you and the children" prompt. Hopefully will have something for you all to read soon.

>> No.6169137

>>6169097
Which chubba are you doing it with? Sounds mighty interesting

>> No.6169206

>>6169097
Can't wait for Omelas alternative

>> No.6169266

>>6168939
I made up a prompt for myself to explore on how Shion would react to her best friend Aqua getting a boyfriend before her. And said boyfriend was someone she had a massive crush on.

Also I just really want to fuck the gaki.

>> No.6169444

>>6169137
Went with Lamy. Using some of my own life experiences of my dad's alcoholism for inspiration.

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>>6157309
First time posting this request :

Mori Calliope and Kiara are living the perfect yuri relationship together. It seems to be smooth sailing until Kiara walks into the bedroom only to see Calli is c(l)ucking her with one of the other HoloEN girls. They see her but don't stop fucking, leading to potential mindbreak territory for Kiara or other disastrous consequences.

(the motive for the affair could be that Kiara wasn't good enough in bed or Mori was simply seduced)

>> No.6169728

>>6169654
>clucking her
hah

>> No.6169786

>>6169654
>"WHAT DOES SHE HAVE THAT I DON'T CALLI!?"
>"...Like a dozen tentacles?"

>> No.6169907

Has anyone used Amelia's time travel to make her do fucked up shit and then take it all back?
That or anon steals her watch and does the same

>> No.6170227

>>6169907
There's one where she's been fucking with time to essentially make you suffer from dementia.

https://pastebin.com/D6FmwUcV

>> No.6170767

>>6168419
It's only been a day, take your time Anon

>> No.6170913

>>6168358
Maybe her crush rejects her because he wants to be with a girl in a popular idol group. Suisei would be doubly angry and hurt because the other girl beat her at becoming a "real" idol and in love. It would fit with her personality, because Suisei has said multiple times that her desire as a vtuber is to succeed to spite everyone who rejected her before.

>> No.6170986

>>6170913
>Suisei has said multiple times that her desire as a vtuber is to succeed to spite everyone who rejected her
Just when I thought she couldn't get any sexier.

>> No.6172266

>>6157309
Requested last thread.

Flare really likes (You) but you are racist against knife ears because autism or something. Will Flare cure you of your autism-induced-racism and finally get your sweet sweet BHC (Big Human Cock)? Or will autism and racism prevail?

>> No.6172371

>>6157309
Couple from last thread

Mating season for Pekora so she wants to have seggs like 40 times a day but being a rabbit she only lasts like 10 seconds. (You) want to breed an absurdly huge litter into her.

Forcing the Holobirds (Subaru, Kiara, Reine) to produce eggs for (You), then eating said eggs for breakfast while forcing them to watch. Imagining either a horror angle or an ecchi angle.

Reine attempts to buy your love, and goes crazy when you still turn her down.

>> No.6172491

>>6157329
>>6172266
Not really misogyny but still autistic hatred for no reason

>> No.6172560
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kinda got an idea for a roommate gets fucked by her character smutfic but that wouldn't be a nice thing to write down, right?

>> No.6172639

>>6172560
I do think writing fanfiction about real people is maybe a step too far. With the chuubas the weird mix of real personality/lore/character put on for entertainment makes for a person that feels both real and not, so it's not so much of a problem. Roommate is just the person. It's weird.

>> No.6172968

>>6172639
not even going to namedrop or dox or anything like that, just some random girl that likes to stream keeps getting horny while looking at her avatars tentacles and some day, the girl is standing in her room. But still, this might be in poor taste so I'd rather not do that.

>> No.6173676

>>6172968
I mean, if this is an Ina story, why not simply write it as if she's basically herself, but only "plays" her character in front of the cameras but the reality is that the fact she doesn't know she really is the priestess of the ancient ones - something they use their powers to fuck with her own memories/perception to begin with?

Selfcest ensues.

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>>6172371
I like that Pekora idea

>> No.6174177

Requesting a fic based off this steamy moment where Suzuki Masaru nibbles/bites your ear(s)

https://youtu.be/mrIupPoF_dc

>> No.6174205

>>6157287
You see, Fubuki is really versatile. First, you can have a fluffy story subverting the "no wife, friend!" schitck she does, or play it straight for abuse, or do both and have a subversion of whichever you want, so you can go "Gotcha!" That's just way too cute! Also, just full-on AUs! I really like when she is different enough to throw the reader off while still being herself, and it's amazing how it can end up being cool or just be a joke. I really like how she can fulfill all those abstract needs. Being able to switch up what kind of story about her based on your mood is a lot of fun too! It's actually so much fun! You have those fluffy stories, or comedies, everything! It's like you're enjoying all these kinds of fics at a buffet. Don't. You. Think. We. Really. Need. More. Fubuki. Fics?

>> No.6174266

>>6172491
>for no reason
I disagree, but racism is definitely something I can do.

>> No.6174990

>>6174266
Bless you writeanon

>> No.6176287

>>6174990
Happy to watch loads of Flare if I have to, but do you have any recommendations on what I should check out to get a better overview on Flare's character?

>> No.6176436

>>6176287
Here's the pastebin from the Flare thread, has stuff like general autistic noises, songs/covers, and other stuff.

https://pastebin.com/8huxrZ6D

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/ag/ has been dying the past few weeks, so heres the literature written from the threads
https://imgur.com/a/X5G9Syj

>> No.6179791

Fellow writefags, do any of you ever feel like you get too impatient and end the story too early? Whenever I write a story I'm torn between wanting to write more and wanting to end it already, and I often feel like the story ends up being unfleshed out or half-baked as a result.

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Attempting >>6141750 , i have no idea if the eating alive part is supposed to be sexual or gore, so i went with the latter. Seems like a pretty niche request.

https://docs.google.com/document/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vSR16J5d21WGBZr0ngVpvrhQucT1sogqwjH2OQlyceNTtu_k9C5oyKTueEzDmYbKAXeJOnO77_moJ_Q/pub

>> No.6180331

>>6157309
Ina has been neglecting her duties as a priestess lately. As a punishment Ao-chan takes control of Ina's tentacles and uses them to rape her

>> No.6180477

As promised, here's that Lamy domestic abuse story I said I was working on. Hope you anons enjoy it.
https://pastebin.com/K1RpqgFJ

>> No.6180785

>>6179791
Sometimes but when that happens I find it helps me just to split the story into parts. Gives me some sort pseudo satisfaction that I at least finished part of the story.

>> No.6180855

>>6180477
Shit, man. That's a rough life you've written there. Poor children having to see their parents become shells of their former selves.

>> No.6180906

>>6179791
Yeah, I've done it a few times. I usually end the story as the first part to what I intend to write later, but most of the time, I just never finish the second part and end up leaving most of my stories incomplete.

>> No.6181013

>>6180906
Based and same, except I don't finish the first part most of the time.

>> No.6181141

>>6180477
Damn this is some pretty heart-wrenching shit.

>> No.6182573

>>6180855
>>6181141
Thanks, fellas. I'm thinking I might write a sequel from the kids' point of view this time, or maybe just a time skip type of deal.

>> No.6183148

>>6180030
I'm certainly not one for canibalism with my oshi, but it was still well done.

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>>6182573
>>6181141
>>6180855
>>6180477

>> No.6183350

>>6157309
A Marine prompt: You have been married to her for 15 years and these past few years she's been developing Alzheimer's. Yeah it's basically a tragedy. Here to set the mood for the story https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xADSDapqn9o

>> No.6183594

>>6183350
Boy do I ever not need this one

>> No.6183647

>>6182573
Might I be selfish enough to request both?

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>>6183350
As someone living with a grandmother who is quickly deteriorating more and more into full blown dementia, memory loss and generally the despair of advanced old age, pls don't do this to Senchou.

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>>6183350
but why?

>> No.6185489

>>6183350
I'd rather not watch a vtuber die a slow and deteriorating way.

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>>6183350

>> No.6187317

>>6174177
>Nijinigger
Pass

>> No.6187448

>>6166364
>And I doubt the guys writing about fucking fubuki in the ass care much about fubukis actual stance on getting fucked in the ass

She spoke about R18 stuff of herself in a membership stream awhile ago; basically doesn't enjoy it but understands and is okay with her audience 'using' it

>> No.6187511

>>6187317
Why has the tribalism in these threads been so bad lately? I know nobody really cares about anything outside of Hololive here but there's no need to be rude.

>> No.6187603

>>6179791
Whenever I write I usually always finish it in one sitting simply because if I put it down, the mood will pass and I'll probably never pick it back up again.

This generally means a short story of a few thousand words takes around 6-7 hours (including distractions) and often as the end approaches writing quality slips as inevitably I end up trying to speed along the conclusion

>> No.6187819

>>6173676
there's actually a holoen arg like this, look up emico otero, mans been kind of imactive now but it was a really good arg ngl

>> No.6187881

>>6187511
Go back Nijinigger

>> No.6187930

>>6187511
The thread has become bigger and has attracted some shitposters. Don't pay it any attention, just like the site at large.

Long-term exposure will start to erode your mental defenses. Don't let it.

>> No.6188649

>>6187448
Let’s make sure we hide the archive from her than, there’s a lot of fubuki nsfw in there (though still not enough in my opinion)

>> No.6188726

>>6187511
It's one person samefagging repeatedly. Hell, you could even be him, given your phrasing of 'nobody cares about anything outside of Hololive' - in which case, fuck you, slit your wrists and die alone you piece of shit. If you AREN'T him and are genuinely asking, just ignore him. It's literally one fucking retard.

>> No.6188965

>>6188726
>fuck you, slit your wrists and die alone you piece of shit
this is exactly the kind of reaction that shitposters are looking for

>> No.6189197

>>6188726
Geez, sorry, no need to get touchy. It's just that all that ever gets discussed here is Hololive, I thought that was common knowledge.

>> No.6189271

>>6189197
you're the same guy as yesterday that pretended his oshi was pina penguin, aren't you?

>> No.6189342

>>6187511
>enter content creation thread
>wait for someone to make a request that isn't Hololive
>reply with "NIjiniggers get out" , "Indiegroomers fuck off" etc.
>start a new thread along the lines of "This board only cares about Hololive!!!1!1"
>repeat one week later
it's all falseflagging, people look at popular thing and try to stir shit up for some easy (you)s

>> No.6189351

>>6189271
I don't even know who that is.

>> No.6189396

>>6189351
yeah you made that abundantly clear lol

>> No.6189457

>>6189396
?????????????

>> No.6189647

>>6188649
she just doesn't go looking for it like some other holos

>> No.6189743

>>6188649
En and ID I could see coming here but I find it hard to believe anyone from JP would find this place.

>> No.6189794

>>6189743
It's already confirmed ID come here, with Moona indirectly responding to a couple posts on twitter and Risu outright mentioning /vt/ on a member's stream

>> No.6189803

>>6189743
>Implying any requests for Risu or Reine aren't made by the girls themselves

>> No.6189837

I do feel weird requesting stories. I'm sure she wouldn't appreciate the things I ask for, but at the same time it is a nice escape, and is comforting.

>> No.6189862

>>6189342
Okay but what's wrong with hating Nijiniggers again? They're directly responsible for Aloe, permissions arc etc

>> No.6189913

>>6189837
What kind of stories do you request?

>> No.6189929

>>6189837
She doesn't even know who you are. Why worry about what she would appreciate you doing? It doesn't come back to affect her at all and frankly, with all due respect to my oshi Fubuki, if she thinks because I greatly respect her that I'm going to stop jerkin' it to her fictional avatar, she can go fuck herself.

>> No.6189937

>>6189837
>I'm sure she wouldn't appreciate the things I ask for
You might be surprised.

>> No.6189954

>>6189913
Only one so far. I have another one I'd like in mind but I haven't found the courage to post it.

>> No.6189960

>>6189862
meds

>> No.6189978

>>6189794
also Twitter
https://web.archive.org/web/20210130053546/https://twitter.com/ayunda_risu/status/1355387468917293063

>> No.6189982

>>6189862
ogey rrat

>> No.6189989
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>>6188649
More Fubuki fluff is also necessary.
NSFW fluff.
SFW fluff.
Fluff in general.
Please.

>> No.6190001

>>6189954
Ok but was it fluff or abuse?

>> No.6190024

>>6189978
oh go figure, i always thought that was done with the inspect element. so it was a real tweet?

>> No.6190039

>>6190001
Lewd fluff.

>> No.6190064

>>6189960
>>6189982
You guys can't really be this new, right

>> No.6190086

>>6190039
She’d probably be fine with it as long as you weren’t requesting five about her being raped and murdered

>> No.6190108

>>6189989
I've had a Fubuki rapefic cooking for a while. Wanna read that when it's done?

>>6190064
antipsychotics

>> No.6190138

>>6190086
>her being raped and murdered
あーーあーー

>> No.6190141

>>6190086
*fics

>> No.6190151

>>6190086
No, that isn't my cup of tea.

>> No.6190169

>>6190086
Five rapey snuff fics, onegai.

>> No.6190317

>>6190108
>Wanna read that when it's done?
As much as I want to say "no", that'd be a lie and I'll most likely read it regardless and then feel terrible about it.
IF it ends up as an Anon in one of the previous threads suggested and she turns the whole situation around and ends up Reverse Raping (You) then that'd make things better, probably.
In either case, I'd have to read fluff afterwards. Probably even write something, myself. If I feel like it.

TL;DR - Yes, I'd read it, even though I'm not into rape. I'm into Fubuki though.

God am I into Fubuki...

>> No.6190401

>>6190317
Sorry. You're going to feel terrible afterwards.

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(you) take Akira Mazono out on a date and treat her as nicely and polite as possible and she absolutely hates it

>> No.6190496

>>6190401
Just fucking kill me.

But yeah, I already expect that. Hopefully some other writeanon on here writes a fluffy one at some point. Y'know, to balance things out.
Besides, can't have enough Fubuki fluff fics.

>> No.6190549

>>6190401
>No reverse rape
god damn

>> No.6190557

>>6190108
>Fubuki rapefic

Yes please

>> No.6190783

>>6187317
Kys

>> No.6190972

>>6189978
HOLY SHIT RISU NO

>> No.6191025

>>6189457
There was an anon that had an indie oshi who argued that debut stream/kayfabe wasn't good enough writefag material, and refused to watch her debut despite having her as his oshi. Kept shitposting til thread death.

>> No.6191294

>>6191025
y u continuing to respond to him

>> No.6191351

>>6191294
I'm a dif anon giving him the benefit of the doubt, in case he wasn't here for it. If he isn't the same dude, okay; if it is, oh well it's just one post.

>> No.6191412

>>6190972
i'm not quite sure how to feel that there is a genuine possibility she might be or have been here

and how she may or may not have done the deed to Late Night Nut Delivery

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>>6157100
Light filters passed her curtains, beaming down onto her sleeping face. She slowly begins to stir, rubbing the last remaining vestiges of sleep from her eyes as she let's out a large yawn.
It's been 9 hours since her last stream, even in her sleep the images of her fellow livers playing apex together leaves a satisfying feeling in her chest, the feeling of fulfillment she had never known she was lacking.
She stumbles around for a few second restlessly as her mind begins to fully awaken, listlessly she goes through her clothes looking for something comfortable to wear. As she throws on an old loose t-shirt and squeezes her thighs into shorts that are beginning to feel a little too tight for comfort, a motherly voice calls from below "hii-chan~ breakfast is ready~"
The smell of freshly cooked pancakes drifts from the hallway bringing a smile go her face. She goes over to her window sliding the curtains aside basking in the full light of the rising sun knowing that everything in life would go well today.

Himawari? More like hima wa really cute.

>> No.6191743

>>6191504
I want to kiss her belly

>> No.6191928

>>6191743
There's plenty of that to kiss

>> No.6192451

>>6177345
>The fuck is /ag/?
>Reads the fics
Oh

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>>6189794
Risu is defiantly around here

>> No.6192647

>>6192502
Risu is one of the girls I never got around to watching. There's too many and too little time.

>> No.6192774

>>6191412
The slim chance that a chuuba might get off to one of my fics about them is a large part of why I write them.

>> No.6192777

>>6190108
>Wanna read that when it's done?
yes

>> No.6192819

>>6192647
her thick accent and lack of english fluency filter me hard

>> No.6192991

>>6192451
architecture general, honestly they where pretty fun threads to read, kinda sad to see them dying off

>> No.6193127

>>6192991
extremely niche, and even those interested in the topic won't necessarily remain so enough to talk about it forever

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The Calli Emeto (vomit) fic is finished. Never wrote (or read) anything to do with that fetish before so if you are a emeto-connoisseur, you'll have to lower your expectations. I tried to channel my inner DFW as best I could. Anyway for whoever decides to read this I hope you find something you like about it.


https://justpaste.me/0vnL (NSFW)

If Calli ever somehow ends up reading this: my deepest and most sincere apologies.

>> No.6193992

>>6193291
well I finally found out what happens to the vomit

>> No.6194704

>>6193291
By the time I had finished reading this, I noticed my face had actually frozen into an expression of disgust without me even noticing. It even took a little effort to move the muscles.

10/10 fic, dude. Was thoroughly grossed out.

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>>6157309
Choco crying because for the first time a younger boy referred to her as "Ma'am" or "Mrs. Yuzuki".
(Basically indirectly calling her a hag)

I don't know if japan has an equivalent term beyond "christmas cake" but that's a bit too direct.

>> No.6195125

>>6193992
And how do you feel after finally finding out?

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>>6195069
oh and I meant to type
>for the first time (in her life) a younger boy referred to her as "Ma'am" or "Mrs. Yuzuki".

>> No.6196054

>>6191504
Ah, its shit.

>> No.6196221

>>6193291
Jesus fuck that was nasty. Good job but also fuck that.

>> No.6196759

>>6195125
I honestly don’t know

>> No.6196922

Why hasn’t anyone written any Irys fics yet? We should just rename this thread to writing general minus Irys

>> No.6196993

EN vsinger debuted: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=242NgSGBo54

>> No.6197038

>>6196993
set to debut* i should correct myself

>> No.6197085

>>6196922
>>6196993
I don't like her nose

>> No.6197164

>>6196993
>>6196922
>>6197085
This really might as well be the Hololive thread if you guys are going to circlejerk about Hololive debuts here.

>> No.6197278

>>6197085
EXACTLY what i thought on seeing her.

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>>6157309
Kanata and Towa are in a secret relationship behind Coco's back, (may or may not have Kanata be dating Coco), Towa is a futa that fucks Kanata very often, without condoms, she tries to be dominant in bed but fails most of the time; Towa is horny very often tho, and starts groping and grinding against Kanata even on public spaces or behind Coco, often fucking on the spot and filling Kanata's womb full of her demon semen many times in a row. May or may not want to have this result in the new Vsinger being born, not really into pregnancy but that was the main motivation for this prompt. Up to author.

>> No.6197345

>>6197164
you sure don't miss an opportunity, do ya?

>> No.6197387

>>6194704
>>6196221

Thanks anons, if I see anymore weird/gross promt requests in the archive I might give them a go in the future. especially if they involve holoEN

>> No.6197473

>>6193291
I was able to smell this story, good job

>> No.6197586

>>6197335
I can do this but only of they're both futa and it involves urethra fucking.

>> No.6197631

>>6189794
>Risu outright mentioning /vt/ on a member's stream
Elaborate on this rrat, I thought she never talked about this place on streams besides the odd supa but only repeating its message word for word

>> No.6197905

>>6197345
Give me one good reason why people should circlejerk about Hololive announcements in the writing thread.

>> No.6197948

>>6196922
Project Hope, A singer set to debut
Another Artist Yagoo was able to accrue
Eight now anons say they don't like the design
But I want our bodies to entwine

Half-Angel, Half-Demon, a perfect being
Anons sonn will be agreeing
Till then I'll fuck her hard and fast
She will be pregnant soon at last

>> No.6197984

>>6197631
4chan became the topic of discussion and the comments mentioned /vt/, to which she replied "Yeah I like /vt/, /vt/ is based."

Putting aside her questionable taste, you probably won't be able to find a clip of it even in the risu thread because she's very protective of her member's content and when this was leaked onto youtube, she posted about it on twitter, onto the video comments and I suspect one of the comments in the Risu thread at the time was her.

>> No.6198105

>>6197586
That's fine. Do what you wish. Just want to make sure the feel of the story is right. Example scene: /230048/3/ except Towa (Astolfo) would be more shy and embarrassed about it.

>> No.6198137

>>6195269
I feel bad. Due to my military background and living in the south, I call every woman "ma'am".
Fuck 3DPD though

>> No.6198147

>>6197948
Post it on the video. Reply to her comment directly. She HAS to know people are already making smut of her.

>> No.6198181

>>6198137
i can hear your accent through this post.

>> No.6198305

>>6198181
It's fun, I can still go Texan with just a cough even though I've been out for 10+ years

>> No.6199707

Request ironmouse sex fanfiction

>> No.6199728

>>6199707
that's indirectly asking for snuff

>> No.6199978

>>6199707
>Ironmouse swearing in her native tongue as her pussy is forcibly stretched open by thick Anon cock
I am seconding this. You could be funny and have like...a full body Hazmat condom.

>> No.6200237

>>6192502
I remember someone posing as Risu asking for R18 Risu fanficts. I'm 90% certain that was someone trying to scare us, but that shitpost still keeps me up at night.

>> No.6200279

>>6200237
>Up at night
Awake or erect? For me it's definitely the latter.

>> No.6200914

had another holodream last night, anons. This time I was a menial working in the company, but somehow the hololive girls and holostars boys kept suggesting me to be more involved in their streams. I kept rejecting them but they insisted and would appear in their streams as a disembodied voice(aka no avatar), even appearing in off collabs. I can't remember how the public/audience reacted, unfortunately.

Other bonus stuff in my dream that didn't make sense: we all lived in a big house together and for some reason my dream ended when we were playing football(the soccer kind).

Thinking on how to convert this weird dream into a story, perhaps could have some raunchy moments "discreetly" happen on stream or something.

>> No.6201218

>>6200914
It's not unreasonable. Youtubers usually encourage their friends to start making videos or appear in theirs, so why not chuubas.

>> No.6201666

>>6201218
Because a woman having a male on stream is already a fucking death sentence; more so if it can't be swept under the rug as 'they're coworkers'. This board alone would fucking have a critical meltdown if their oshi had some strange, unknown man's voice talking with them in their streams. It'd be a Gosling nightmare.

>> No.6202072

>>6157309
One-word prompt:

PekOyakodon

>> No.6202233

>>6199978
>Fucking ironmouse in her little bubble while using one of the rubber glove attachments as a condom
>Cumming in her feeding tube
>Lowering the amount of oxygen pumped in to medically induce erotic asphyxia

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>>6198137
then its your responsibility to make her feeling young

>> No.6202353

>>6201666
Very true, I don't think Holostar's fans would care, but I only watch Aruran so I can't really speak for the Holostar's fanbase. Maybe you could write yourself meeting one of the girls at Roberu's bar; I think some of the stories have done that before.

>> No.6202437

>>6202342
Making Choco feel old by outpacing and tiring her out with love filled baby making sex!

>> No.6202669

>>6202437
>outpacing Choco

kid, you're a hundred years too early to outpace this semen demon.

>> No.6202739

>>6199707
>>6199978
>>6202233
Allowing Vslutjotards in these threads was a mistake.

>> No.6202798

>>6202669
If anything, the closest thing to that happening would be her allowing you to take control during sex

>> No.6202979

>>6202437
>>6202669
Endurance battle with Choco for possession of your soul

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>>6202437
>>6202669
>the reaon she's so tired and sleepy all the time is that she isn't having sex to sustain her succubus body

>> No.6203008

>>6202233
Ngl don't care if you're shitposting that sounds hot as fuck.

>> No.6203116

>>6202997
Have you not noticed all her APEX streams?

>> No.6203131

>>6199707
>>6199728
speaking of this, doesn't anyone remember that one little greentext, where Ironmouse decides that she finally wants to make love even though it will kill her?

>> No.6203153

>>6203131
nope

>> No.6203414

>>6203116
well yeah, but she seemed to be having sleep issues before that
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Q0FAbLS1k4

>> No.6204394

>>6203116
What do you think her and I do right before said streams anon?

>> No.6204505

>>6204394
You simp and she ignores?

>> No.6204611

>>6202342
>shota reader goes to see nurse Choco for his yearly physical exam
>she decides to fix her tiredness by draining his youth

>> No.6204742

>>6204611
>Steals his youth
>He immediately grows into a man capable of not just matching but exceeding her abilities in bed

>> No.6204784

>>6200914
I had a holodream involving Ollie. The only part I remember is that we kissed just before I woke up.
I don't even watch Ollie.

>> No.6204948

>>6204742
>>6204611
here's one
>nurse choco drains young shota boy
>young boy leaves town, has psychosexual problems the rest of his boyhood
>becomes a man and sleeps around, finally deciding one night to find his old nurse for payback
>sex battle

>> No.6205288

>>6204948
>Unstoppable sexual force vs Unstoppable sexual force

>> No.6205379

>>6158517
I felt like I had to write this prompt even though I have never written futa before. Only been writing science papers recently, so sorry if the wording is weird.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSQkKE5olYG_Z5KK_U2Qkqlovn1s9R26U_YnQWJRv5DISkz8RjyPgPVEAfPkXSWvV9nAWIvUeFiabbd/pub

Feedback is welcome and appreciated.

>> No.6205521

>all this talk about Choco and her unquenchable libido

I jacked off last night to Choco's blowjob ASMR and god damn I am REALLY in the mood to write something about her.

>> No.6205611

>>6205521
>Choco's blowjob ASMR
sorry I am rather unfamiliar with Choco, uhh....

WHAT? WHERE?

>> No.6205708

>>6205521
>Choco's blowjob ASMR
Is this member's only or is it a roommate thing?

>> No.6205912

>>6205611
>>6205708

unsure if it's a roommate thing because I picked it up from another thread, but damn this has really changed my view on how lewd ASMRs can be because I used to think they were gimmicky, but GOD DAMN Choco's voice is pure SEEEEEEEEEXXXXXX

https://vocaroo.com/1kkTHWwNQ76Q

>> No.6206094

>>6205912
yeah that's definitely from her roommate ci-en. i only skipped through but i didn't hear her refer to herself as choco once (she refers to herself in third person) and she specifically mentioned bareback sex towards the end.

iirc the ci-en donation tier which she posts these in is like 10k yen so i'm surprised audio's floating around from it at all

ASSUMING it's from her ci-en and not just a tidbit she did outside it

>> No.6206165

>>6206094
I see, good to know about it, but frankly all I care about is how that voice turns me into a raving animal.

>> No.6206207

>>6183350
Am honestly not too familiar with this topic but still gave it a shot.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR-S8aMfWLDB40NXHIQJ2giGXfOL_cOtzVtqBv5PUyYANo_6KBpq9tV1xHm9mSY-0v3IgatDTBKgy3j/pub

Feedback would be appreciated.

>> No.6206274

>>6205288
>they fuck into the sky
also checked

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>>6206207
As soon as my already poor memory begins to show any signs of slipping and faltering, I'm blowing my fucking brains out.

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>>6206207
...fuck

>> No.6206882

>>6206377
>>6206207

I worked at a factory producing solvent-based floor varnishes in my youth. Extremely lax safety standards. Affectation of the mind was one of the scariest health concerns there, and about 4 years in I started notice symptoms of mental deterioration - poor memory, inability to concentrate, and eventually difficulty maintaining long, coherent sentences. I quit on my fifth year.

Luckily most of these symptoms subsided after about 6 months - 1 year, but it's absolutely terrifying how your mind can lose certain functions that you take for granted. Alzheimer's and any other disease that causes intellectual degradation have gotta be the scariest symptoms of old age out there.

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>>6157309
I want fluff. And I mean that as literally as possible. I want a story which has as much snuggling with animal Holos as can be achieved, preferably multiple at once. I have no lust other than for fluff. Sustain my mofu starved soul.

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>>6206207

>> No.6207079

>>6206921
Following the Marine story I hope someone picks it up. Reading that actually killed the sex drive I was riding to write smut. Fuck.

>> No.6207082

>>6206207
Too scared to read this, can I get a qrd from any souls braver than I?

>> No.6207112

>>6207082
Life after Cover takes a tragic turn for Marine and her husband that only gets worse and worse.

>> No.6207126

>>6206921
Harem Anon sleeps without any blankets or pillows. The soft ears and fluffy tails of his multiple loving wives keep him warm

>> No.6207135

>>6206207
this is good. the pain is good. it fuels me to write even more painful stuff. thank you, anon. your works will spark a freezing blizzard within me to create more pain.

>> No.6207169

>>6207112
Absolutely agonizing, thank you anon.

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>>6183350
https://youtu.be/MrjpEHE4fHw
Someone beat me to posting a story, but painful stuff seems to call out to me.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTfUyzl6XsHQGTp6keVqte5RYMcV4yaGWZeCCAntlGBJjyW7yTAu1JaObc8rjAUJS_aALJr5LedcqkM/pub

And if anyone wants to feel more: https://youtu.be/JXcV6dOMUZs

>> No.6207795

>>6207531
more pain? amazing. I will provide my own contributions of pain soon enough.

>> No.6207800

Now I need to shift gears to try and write happy coco smut

>> No.6207940

>>6207531
This one is actually pretty cute. The idea that the protagonist can speedrun Marine's route and get his proposal accepted because he has 4 years of experience knowing her preferences is really sweet.

>> No.6208035

>>6207800
Do you, though? Tragic Coco smut sounds equally as attractive... although I don't think it'll stand the test of time.

>> No.6208249
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>>6157309
Your beloved captain Marine claims to have found record of an incredible treasure beyond imagination buried somewhere in the depths of the ocean. Spending the last of the ship's funds on undersea dredging equipment, she heads out to sea, only to drag up some kind of monstrous squid girl who controls a mess of tentacles. The crew is terrified, but apparently this is exactly what Marine was looking for. She desperately tries to convince the disgusted girl to attack her with tentacles.

>> No.6208469

>>6207940
Wasn't there an Adam Sandler movie like that?

>> No.6208588

>>6208249
>Ina however is extremely straight and wants to use her gifted tentacles to give as many tentaclejobs as possible
Cucking Marine is always funny

>> No.6208678

>>6208469
50 first dates. Similar concept, but it was just short term memory loss, nothing long term. Pretty cute, from back when Sandler actually put at least some effort in his movies.

>> No.6208703

>>6208035
I was going to say "I can't think of how to make smut tragic", but then it came to me. Still, I'd prefer not to write that.

>> No.6208775

>>6208703
>Anon tragically dies from unloading an absolutely massive, I mean just astonishingly huge, load directly into Coco's ass
Songs will be sung to commemorate Sir Anon of the heartstopping nut, first of his name, breeder of dragons, lover of redheads.

>> No.6208839

>>6208703
>>6208775
I was actually just thinking of writing it as a confession and a fuck before Coco's graduation and she disappears, not snuff or rape.

>> No.6208915

>>6157309
Tokyo Ghoul esque story of Anon implanted with Lamy flesh causing him to gain the powers of Lamy (Immunity to alcohol poisoning, etc.) without turning into her. Formerly sober, he now must deal with extreme cravings for booze as he now needs it to survive.

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>>6204611
>>6204948
might as well make it sad too, since that's always in vogue

>Choco has a lover that she'd love nothing more than to drain, in more ways than one
>but for their sake, she has to learn to resist the urge
>succubuses are incapable of seperating seperating physical intimacy from the draining of lifeforce, for her they are one and the same
>small doses of it aren't enough to drain years out of someone's life, but even so much as holding hands for too long can make them tired, while full-on sex will leave them bed-ridden and in need her nursing them back to health
>the lack of touch is equally taxing for Choco
>though in her opinion, the worst part is feeling like she isn't capable of expressing the full depth of her love without being able to kiss and hold them whenever she wants

>> No.6208973

>>6164976
This is the only prompt someone needs. Write about how chubby she is and how anon fucks her silly anyway.

>> No.6208994

Are there any resources online for writing better? I wanna make a story but cant understand how to continue writing. I put something than its like putting the whole story in a paragraph only. How to put more?

>> No.6209045

>>6208994
Take creative writing class lol

>> No.6209081

>>6208970
>Anon has to have a stellar diet and train daily so he has enough stamina to have loving missionary sex once (1) a month with his loving gf Choco

>> No.6209106

>>6208994
read a book

>> No.6209141

>>6208970
Oh, that's cute as fuck.

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>>6208973
>Honma embarrassed as you fondle her soft tummy while kissing at her neck and cheeks
>Reassuring her that you love all of her
>Pushing her on to her back and showing her the proof of your love by pumping her full of cum
>"Now, both my heart and tummy are full"

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>>6209141
the happy ending of course is realizing that she can bring joy to people without touching them
even sexual joy
just look at >>6205912

>> No.6209502

>>6209394
>Such a good Succubus she doesn't even need to get men's sexual energy out herself
>Just the sounds she makes makes hordes of men willingly give her their lust

>> No.6209826

>>6209502
I was also thinking of that one scene in Her, where the guy basically has phone-sex with his AI gf.

>Choco is actually just doing asmr as training
>is now fully capable of making a man cum with just her voice, without him even having to touch his own dick

>> No.6209939

>>6209826
>Power word: Cum

>> No.6210010

>>6208994
Just dig deep into yourself and think about what works for writing.

>> No.6210154

>>6208994
Well I ain't no pro or even a studied writer, but I think it helps to think about what exactly you're trying to communicate to a reader.
I guess the goal of writing anything really is to try to communicate a certain feeling or idea.
Even making up story prompts require a level of writing ability just to make it clear what you'd like to see from the actual story.

>> No.6210390

>>6210154
Also understanding phonics, where adjectives and nouns go, how to properly let those ideas out can help a ton. There’s a good reason why people do composition classes, and why college professors stress that you review your work. Writing isn’t a skill you pick up in a few seconds, it takes time to understand how to construct and direct your thoughts onto the page.

>> No.6211151

I just wanna thank all the writers out there, I read everything and it's usually good.

Even the vomit story was funny.

>> No.6211335

>>6211151
>read everything

did you really have that much time and attention for it all?

thanks for reading my works though, hope you liked em

>> No.6211356

>>6211151
Thank you for the compliment my friend.

>> No.6211440
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>be me
>write about how I am racist against Flare
>it's too difficult. I actually like flare.
>idea.jpg
>write story about generic nigger-jew female
>Ctrl-f, replace jew=elf, kike=knife-ear
>profit
It's just too easy, bros.

>> No.6211465

>>6211450
wrong thread my dude

>> No.6211532

>>6211151
No prob.

>> No.6211629

>>6211440
write about how much you hate dykes instead

>> No.6211785

>>6205912
On balance, I think I prefer Mel's.

>> No.6212039

>>6211785
Mel's roommate """asmr" is fucking amazing. Trade-off is I don't think I've ever heard her explicitly mention sexual acts she's performing like Choco did in that clip. Of course, in exchange you get to see Mel's arse. Lots of it.

>> No.6212085

>>6212039
>I don't think I've ever heard her explicitly mention sexual acts she's performing
I'm an EOP so that's not such a huge factor for me, kek

>> No.6212108

>>6212085
I'm toddler-level Japanese myself so if there's anyone who could correct me on this, I'd sure love to hear it.

>> No.6212379

>>6208994
Touch books Anon. The lowest hanging fruit is googling "Top 10 tips to improve your writing skills", which will tell you all of the most common and easy to avoid mistakes new writers make. Second level is learning perfect grammar (Which can be compensated for by spell check anyways). Third level is knowing the different ways you can reword the same sentence. Fourth is knowing enough vocabulary to not have to constantly keep a dictionary/Thesaurus open. And there is no fifth level.

If your native language is English you probably already have the four levels covered. Beyond this you just keep reading other books to get better. If you like the way a story is written, read it again while paying attention to exactly how it's written. Repeat with more stories until you realize just how shit your writing is compared to everyone else, set unrealistic standards for yourself, and lose all motivation

>> No.6212431

>>6212379
>Second level is learning perfect grammar
Hang on. I get what you mean, but in case this guy's an ESL: he doesn't mean PERFECT grammar, he just means a high standard of grammar.

Grammatical rules change frequently over the years in English and actual perfect grammar is very difficult to achieve; you won't find perfect grammar users in a large number even among native speakers.

But yeah, spot-on advice; just wanted to clarify that one thing

>> No.6212673

>>6212039
i only have a voice clip and no visuals but damn that sounds hot

>> No.6212905

Having to look up in English dictionary the words you don't even know in your native language is kind of frustrating
Luckily, if it comes to costumes or clothes or any sort of body feature, you can read the tags on Sankaku or Danbooru.

>> No.6213653

What's everyone working on? Thread's almost over.
I can't tell if I want to stop the story here at a blowjob or continue to write another sex scene.

>> No.6213685

>>6213653
Have you asked your penis his opinion?

>> No.6213851

>>6213653
Struggling to write a scene involving all the members of gen 3.

>> No.6213895

>>6213851
sex scene?

>> No.6213905

>>6213895
There really is nothing but horndogs in this general, huh?

>> No.6213922

>>6213895
No.

>> No.6213980

>>6213922
turn it into a sex scene?

>> No.6213986

>>6213851
I ended up learning the hard way to not include more than 4 characters in one scene

>> No.6214041

>>6213986
It’s actually really easy if they’re all fucking the protagonist

>> No.6214053

>>6213980
Also no.

>> No.6214071

>>6214053
They start having sex after the scene right?

>> No.6214115

>>6214071
One more reply and I'll turn you into a sex scene

>> No.6214118

>>6213653
Have been putting off a Fubuki rapefic I mentioned >>6190108 because I can't figure out a way to produce emotionally impactful writing. Everything I come up with feels token or shallow, and it's actually somewhat difficult to write erotica that sounds both titillating yet intentionally unpleasant. The goal is the 'shameful wank,' but it's not going too well.

>> No.6214127

>>6214115
Don't threaten me with a good time, sugar

>> No.6214130

>>6214115
Do it faggot

>> No.6214139

>>6214071
Anon...

>> No.6214166

>>6213685
I asked him. He says watching a smug, in-charge Ina immediately begin to panic when the Ancient Ones grasp her with their tentacles and turn her into an onahole they use on (You) is a really fucking hot idea. Maybe tomorrow.

>> No.6214172

>>6214115
ok but there is sex at some point right?

>> No.6214193

>>6214118
When in doubt, use self-doubt. The MC hesitating or reconsidering what he is about to do/doing usually helps with the shameful wank aspect

>> No.6214260

>>6214118
is the mc doing the raping or is he going to help and comfort Fbk at the end?

>> No.6214289

>>6214193
It's a psychopath; it would be out of character. I'm actually writing him in third person to dehumanise him as much as possible, then writing bits outside of sex in Fubuki's perspective.

>>6214260
Helping and comforting FBK. With his dick.

Against her will.

>> No.6214358

>>6213653
I was writing the Ayame prompt, but after setting up the lore part, something clicked inside my head and now I'm somehow knee-deep in Fubuki smut.
This is the first time this happened. How did I sink so low?

>> No.6214403
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>>6214289
I shouldn't like this but I am very much interested in this fic now. I'll be looking forward to it.

>> No.6214405

>>6214358
The allure of the snow-crested fox is irresistible.

I'm extremely pleased to hear more FBK smut along the way, though.

>> No.6214440

>>6214403
Yeah, don't get too excited yet. If I can't produce something up to my own standards, I might scrap it and start again. Dunno how long it'll take.

>> No.6214522

>>6212039
Link?

>> No.6214558

>>6214522
No spoonfeeding. It's super easy to find and she makes no attempt to hide it.

>> No.6214680

>>6214558
>No spoonfeeding. It's super easy to find
How? How the fuck do you all just implicitly know this information? No-one ever posts it. The archives would take days to go through, since there's hundreds of thousands of posts. Youtube gives no hints. How the hell do you all just know? I don't understand. Why do I have to be the only retard on the entire board?

>> No.6214717

>>6214680
It take one google search to find everything anon, you just need to know what to search for

>> No.6214751

>>6214680
Understanding enough Japanese to be able to search for it. They've figured out just about every chuuba.

Unironically just google it though

>> No.6214772

>>6214680
>How the hell do you all just know? I don't understand.
Lurk more.

>> No.6214871

>>6214772
I've been lurking since this boards creation, and months prior in /jp/. No-one ever posts the information in any thread I follow. If asked, everyone supposedly knows but won't say anything.
Should I just set up a keyword alert to trawl every single post made on the entire board and alert me when someone posts roommate information? Is that what I have to do? Spend time setting up a bot, plus wasting compute power and network bandwidth just pointlessly reading messages just so I can find that one in a million message with the information I want? Fuck you.

>> No.6214899

>>6214871
At this point all I can say is get filtered, EOP.

>> No.6214952

>>6214871
Anon, a bit of Google Fu got me what I was looking for in like 5 minutes. Just do a bit of digging. Try phrasing the search several different ways. If archived threads start to show up in the search results, you'll know you're on the right track.

>> No.6214990

>>6214871
There's literally an easy way to find out their previous identities on youtube. Just search Hololive real faces.

I hope I don't get in trouble for this shit. lmao

>> No.6214995

>>6214871
ogey

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