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There were 2 stories posted last thread.

Hotter in the Shade >>61305697
Tags: Suisei, exhibitionism, humiliation

Hentai (Metamorphosis) >>61474811
Tags: NSFW, Matara, Monster Girl

>Marine thread
turbobased

Marine will never score.

>>61504349
Anon will continue to end zone Marine's insanely tight pirate pussy forever and no amount of seething will ever change this fact Polka

If Marine is Aqua's Mom, and Pekora is Marine's Mom; how did a rabbit give birth to a bear that gave birth to an onion?

>>61504802

>>61504802
these pics are kinda making me crave a fic where you're the husband of pakora with your adorable kuma daughter marine.

What are you working on, Anon?

>>61507974
Ever working towards getting to write about tenderly rubbing Polka's ears until she creams herself involuntarily.
And probably Marine scoring at some point.

>>61502592
Noel and Flare roleplaying a defeated female knight and elf scenario

>>61509721
Okay I know you probably mean this in a "Flare has beaten Noel" scenario but for some reason this just makes me imagine them taking turns narrating how they get defeated and raped by (Insert threat they build up here).

>>61510359
I'm taking it as "you have defeated both of them and get to use them as you wish"
Might make Noel get real freaky with it and asked to be tied up while Flare gets her turn.

>>61510521
Going by just the one liner of the prompt just makes me imagine it's just Noel and Flare, with the 'interesting' part of them tagging in narration being the disconnect between them as they try to make a cohesive narrative out of their differing rape fantasies.

>>61510359
I did mean both Noel and Flare were defeated by (insert enemy of choice), but that's a twist you can take too

>>61509721
>"you knave! do you not know shame? forcing me, a knight and her squire to such depravacy?"
>"hear hear sir, for this abominable barbarian' knows no shame!"
>you, dressed in bear pelts and holding an axe sigh
>"next time can we do something normal?"

>>61507974
Elira's latest design activated my neurons enough to start something about her being a Cyberpunk CEO and you being her Hackerman/sugar baby that she secretly pampers whenever (You) go a little too hard and nearly fry your brain

>>61508406
Funny fennec, I love you!

>>61508406
Don't forget to insert your fingers into her headholes to massage her brain (safely).

>>61511423
I love her too.
>>61511574
I guess the brain needs to be loosened up like any other muscle. Though I might just play with her ear fluff for now.

>>61512631
I'm going to lick that sweat.

>>61502592
Hololive is doing a massive concert and Suisei is at the center of it: when she enters, all the other girls kneel to make way for her. Suisei feels like the entire world is hers. But when she exits the stage, she's greeted by a grim reminder in human form that the world very much isn't hers, she's just borrowing it. And that her work for the day isn't quite over yet. "Subhuman scum" she mutters under her breath as the greying old man in a business suit slowly claps while smirking quite jewishly. "Magnificent performance, Suisei-kun." Suisei could read from his eyes the expectation that the job she would be performing later tonight should be just as magnificent. That man's money, power and influence are the reasons why she's on top of the world and the moment she refuses to suck his cock, this beautiful but bittersweet idol dream will be over. Her status won't just drop few steps down, she's going to be dragged all the way to hell. So she will keep sucking that old man's dick, that's the deal she made.

>>61510754
>>61510802
>And then, he shoves his knot in me-
>Wait wait wait, knot? Where'd that come from?
>Weren't we doing Werewolves?
>Noel, we were doing Orcs!
>...can he be a Werewolf Orc?

>>61514164
>"I think Noel has a point"
>"MUMEI? WHAT ARE YOU DOING UNDER THE BED?!"
>"Watching. Now take the knot, fucking coward"

>>61512631
Look at how deep and inflamed that belly button is. That's so hot.

I summon fans of plump girls. Anyone cooking?

>>61516731
Not at the moment unfortunately

>>61502592
Koyori walks in on Anon having sex with Chloe. The loud squeak of the door makes Anon rip out anal beads from Chloe's anus with full force. Chloe screams in pain while Anon says to Koyori: "This is not what it looks like!" with anal beads in his hand and both of them undressed. I'm not sure why he says that but it's an amusing scene to imagine.

>>61517388
It's because they're Koyori's anal beads.

>>61517388
The anal beads are Suika game fruits

>>61517388
I don't know about anal beads, but I'll definitely be cooking a scene where Koyori either walks in on, or is forced to watch anon plow Chloe.

>>61511014
>"how cruel, to seed our wombs with such abandon"
>"imagine if we were to become swollen with child"

>>61514164
>>61510754
Noel and Flare's transforming slime/mimic lover trying to match the description both of their fantasies and making some weird amalgamation of werewolf/orc/minotaur

>>61516731
I am cooking in theory but the simmer is so slow it may as well be not heating at all

>>61518275
>Marine joins in
>"oh fuck this is so hot
>"ahem"
>"oh...huuh..yaarr...breed mee matey?"

i heard marine is doing another showa? when?

>>61518661
Oh no you misheard, she's doing another 'shoah'. And soon.

Question for my writing reps.
How incompetent are magical girls and adventurers typically? How incompetent are their mascots?

>>61520599
Mascots are NEVER incompetent. They may appear as such, but they are actively SCHEMING to cause their magical girls and adventurers HARM and SUFFERING

>>61520787
they are also supreme beings stronger than Eldritch Gods

>>61520861
They are all DEVIOUS and NEFARIOUS and EVIL

>>61520787
So you're saying that if a magical girl or adventurer were to find themselves in a situation that could lead to their defeat (and possibly rape), that it was all by the mascots design?
I see I see, my only other question is, for what purpose? Are they not nurturing said magical girl / adventurer? Or is it trial by fire type?

>>61520599
it depends. Magical girls are defined by their everyday life slowly crumbling as they get more into the job. Sakura card captor is the most "sucessful" of the serious ones and her life was a constany balacing act of triying not to look like a weirdo.
If you have red comics, its more or less like spider-man, where they should fail in one aspect or the other, and that failure makes them better
Adventurers are more or less defined by the setting. Unless its the chosen one party, they are expected to fail and either pay with their lives or become laughing stocks. If they pull through, it was a close fight or they got the drop. Mascots are rarely incompetent unless its played for laughs.

Also depending on your setting, the mascots have their own hidden agenda

>>61520599
1. Magical girls get shit on for most of the fight
2. Tuxedo Anon comes in, tells some silly one-liner and fucks off
3. Magical girls get their shit together and the villain gets rekt and the day is saved

>>61521216
Ojisan...tuxedo mask lookalikes haven been a thing since the 2000...

>>61520599
Magical girls are competent unless their charm point is something like being clumsy

>>61520599
Mascots should be as competent as their design, name and behaviour suggests. You shouldn't just follow a generic formula, you have to adapt to what you're working with.
Look at Poyoyo, for example. You just know that this fat fuck is either useless or secretly crucial.

>>61521519
kawaii

I always wanted a magical girls series that fucks off with the kiddies and the highschoolers and introduces struggling uni students, moms or dropouts/dead end job workers.
There were some shows that started that fad but they kept hiding behind irony and comedy and never adressed how cool it would be to have adult girls in frilly dresses

>magical girl story where the mascot's this fucker

>>61521264
It's fine since we're all ojisans here

>>61521575
I was about to say Symphogear but its school aged girls. I want to think about more mecha or military type magical girls but I cant remember right now

>>61521575
>Magical girl team of alcoholic college student, suicidal dropout, single OL Hag, and a widow with three kids

>>61521799
I want to see Magical girl(male) Miyabi get raped

>>61521575
i , once again, will bring spidey because he's what i love in those kind of "hometown heroes".
Magical girls should blast a tentacle monster in one scene and spend the rest of the chapter doing taxes or talking to their friend while they bargain hunt, or solving problems by being down to earth

>>61521575
I've always wanted to do a Sailor Moon parody where the Sailor Senshi are men drawn in Tom of Finland style and Luna is a panther instead of a cat.

>>61521949
Strike Witches has an old hag that's twenty years old, but the rest are all school age. That's the best example off the top of my head.

>>61522139

>>61522070
>Alcoholic College student
Raden sleeping on a trashcan, until its magical girl time, then she becomes hyper competent and saves everyone..only to puke in the sidewalk and then stumble back home to try and finish her essay
>Suicidal Drop out
Polka talking people down from bridges but also having moments where she wants to undo the transformation mid air and hit the pavement
>Single OL Hag
Marine being by far the most popular and beloved by her looks. At the same time, she's terrified of diying alone because she feels like her looks is all she has
>Widow with TWO kids
Mio just wants to help people and feel useful because her daughters have their own lives now and they dont have time for momma

>>61522070
Magical girl team of Marine, Noel, Flare
Flare is overly enthusiastic, calling out her attack names and doing the cute poses totally unironically
Noel's outfit is too small for her, but she's almost as enthusiastic as Flare, even if the damage to her outfit during fights is starting to qualify for public indecency
Marine gets her ass kicked in fights because she's too self-concious about the poses and cringes while she tries to say her attack names

>>61522762
add peko and she would be the one embarassed also the one most exposed to battle damage
Marine would be quite energic and cutesy, until she gets ticked off and switches to mano a mano violence

>>61522569
That sounds like an interesting cast. I can only imagine what kind of dynamic they could have.

>>61524009
i guess that as a group they would be fairly awkward around each other. Something like Mio is the team mombecause she doesnt want to come back to her depressing normal life with marine being her second in command due to being less of a wreck. Maybe some "hahah nothing matters" funny moments alongside raden as they get shitfaced. Raden could also be a good anchor for Pol, since she knows what's to be in the dumps.

My two cents however, is that they could be one group among a "magical girl organization", with other talents being either "plucky young girl". "burned out veteran" and more tropes to add

>>61521575
This is something similar, though not exactly that premise

>>61502531
I would like some advice about improving this.
>>61511617
I enjoyed writing it but no one seems to like it that much.
I asked Claude for a review and he called me deranged.

>>61525266
>>61521575
Forgot image, someone can use it as inspiration maybe if they were intersted in the idea.

>>61525330
Claude sounds like a rude guy. Don't listen to him

>>61525330
Could you summarize the plot and themes? It'd help with understanding what could be changed.

>>61525679
I tried to make it like one of those H.P. Lovecraft stories where the author is recounting an expedition/adventure. Like "Mountains of Madness".
Plot: An experiment to create an AI-waifu for humanity + the motivations of a cult trying to prevent that from happening leads to first contact with an alien star parasite.

>>61525858
Well, it's formatted more like a script which makes it difficult to parse, especially because the stories still do tend to have a narrator of some kind. Framed the way it is now, it reads like a transcription of something a person wrote on their walls in their own shit rather than a recounting

>>61510359
>"Flare has beaten Noel"
>Flare parading the former human knight titcow around the elven capital for all to see her shame

>>61525330
>I asked Claude for a review and he called me deranged
Duh.
When even council's paragraph of lore and video was considered too fucking much of course your /asp/ie ai vtuber lore is going to be too fucking weird to work as a base concept.
If you're actually thinking of making a neuro-sama type ai vtuber, try breaking out of 1, 2 and 3 view hell before making up lore.

>>61528387
Well, since you read it, could you spare me tree fiddy?

>>61522569
>>61524638
I think this what this depressed group of magical girls need to tie them together conceptually is either being saddled with a young plucky girl that helps respark their passions and or some kind of villain group that's weirdly hyperspecialized against dealing with normal magical girls but by some weird quirk of their depression/circumstances give them the edge needed to beat them where regular magical girls fail.

>>61530945
>weirdly hyperspecialized against dealing with normal magical girls but by some weird quirk of their depression/circumstances give them the edge needed to beat them where regular magical girls fail.

>"Ladies we've figured it out! Their magic only works on virgins!"
>All the girls nod in understanding, except for Raden who can't for life of her remember which bender she must have lost it on

>>61530945
>>61531476
It is well-known that wizards can only be defeated by sex havers.

>>61531476
> "ITS OVER PURI-WARRIORS. I, THE QUIZZLER, HAVE TRAPPED YOU IN A PAINTING, AND UNLESS YOU C-
>Raden instantly figures the trick, she's utterly pissed
>"Hey dumbass..THE COMPOSITION IS ALL WRONG!! WHAT KIND OF PSYCHO USES WATERCOLOR IN PAPER N4? AND THE COLORS DONT EVEN MATCH"
>Beats the shit out of the guy for not knowing about art

>>61531476
>impliying Marine doesnt get instantly defeated by the magic

>>61533025
>Marine wakes up and sees everyone giving her pitying looks
>They won't tell her why only she was affected by the magic

>>61502563
I don't know about this one. Hopefully that one guy likes this.

Tags: NSFW, Fauna, Smell

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSIaBUSrbQPOYAiIaVzYEw4km1edMW7SDqjWEc_ND5EGlzkEPMgV6PhvI95ne2WRNFNVj45rRy8Y19l/pub

>>61537984
HOLY SHIT IT WAS ACTUALLY MADE
FAUNA FARTFAG, COME AND GET IT
As for the fic itself, it was short and sweet. The prose was nice to read, and I laughed my fucking ass off. Good job, anon.

>>61537984
Weirdanonv2 strikes again!

>>61537984
hey christmas came early! of course it isnt enough to fap but just that i was made makes me happy, and hell it got a chuckle out of me
Thanks a lot buddy, i liked it a lot

>>61538532
>>61539628
I'm glad you both liked it.

>>61537984
This made me really hard

>>61533025
>>61534757
>Team gets saddled with a seiso rookie
>Goes up against monster with Virgin Controlling magic.
>Marine is the only one vulnerable.
This sounds like the wacky set up for their monsters of the week where they all represent some lust/desire/addiction and the member you least expect is the only on vulnerable.

I think I ruined my fic. But regardless - charge, baby, charge! Charge to high heaven!

>>61550022
What did you do anon?

>>61550022
you forgot to add the fart scene?

>>61550022
You forgot to add the oviposition scene, didn't you?

>>61550327
It's a long story, but it involves peaches.
>>61550381
>>61553384
I won't be adding any of these, but I'll keep them in my back pocket. I love me farting chuubas.

>>61554044
>Peaches
>Vagina
>Queefs
Did you add a queefing scene to your fic?

>>61554571
Something a bit more complex than that. It shall all come out in due time, anon.

With all of the emphasis on stat screen shit, wouldn't ero trap dungeons be good in written format? I have an idea™

>>61556310
Yeah, it could be like those old text adventure games.

>>61556310
Maybe? I feel like you'd have to do a lot of work with the format for it to hit right and really be worthwhile. Cause to me paragraphs of normal prose that are occasionally broken up by

>The slime drains Shirakami Fubuki's XP!
>The slime drains Shirakami Fubuki's XP!
>The slime drains Shirakami Fubuki's XP!
>The slime drains Shirakami Fubuki's XP!
>The slime drains Shirakami Fubuki's XP!

Doesn't seem to work all that much for me. Also the last ero trap dungeon fic wasn't all that good, but I don't like that shit anyways so it'd have to work overtime for me to enjoy it

>>61556310
Bunny Trap was created with the concept of ero trap dungeon in mind. I think it's a setting with a lot of available mileage in it.

The new precure has middle-aged magical girls.

>>61556310
Honestly surprised we don't have more litrpg style stuff, closest thing is holofantasy, and the game and narrative are very clearly 'separate' even if the results of the ttrpg rolls are what inform the narrative.
I think an ero trap dungeon style smut fic would be fun, but I think it should absolutely be done with a system like AA's or some other simplified zero player ttrpg system so there's that uncertainty to keep it entertaining if chuuba X gets raped by Orcs or by Troll in the next room.

>>61566947
>Joushuu-kun, it's November 1st! You know what that means
>Time for your yearly "make your cum taste like wintergreen" injection

>>61568140
Right into the dick

I think anyone that wants to write a ero trap dungeon style fic should use one of those rpg systems that has uses a fucking Jenga tower to represent how close you are to losing. Then shape the ensuing corruption arc of the chuuba running through the dungeon around how close the tower is to falling at the point you were making the outline
Since the intent of those kind of stories is in a doomed adventure that ends in mind break/corruption anyway, using a system where the deck is stacked (metaphorically) against actually winning is pretty much perfect.

>>61577137
How far would she make it in the ero trap dungeon?

>>61577361
With how well trained her arsehole is, probably to the end and back

>>61577447
How corrupted will she be by the time she clears it?

>>61577683
Given she already walks around with a buttplug constantly, I'm not sure how much further she could fall.

>>61577361
The moment she enters the dungeon, all the monsters run out in a panic, causing a stampede that actually kills a good number of them. One of the elderly monsters even offers himself as a tribute so that his sons would remain unmolested.

>>61504802
New Kumarine comic for the Ahoy Edition

>>61579406
Where did Kumarine even come from?

>>61558515
What is an ero trap dungeon?

>>61579934
A dungeon with lots of ero traps in it.

>>61579951
Both kinds of traps?

>>61579972
Oh, you're one of THOSE people...

>>61580042
Imagine a cute girl who invites the chuuba to spend the night at her house instead of staying out in the dangerous tunnels, but it turns out that it's a cute guy who tries to seduce the chuuba once they're in the shared bed. It'd fit with the theme.

>>61579934
It's a subgenre that's like coalesced on these key points of
>Girl enter fantasy dungeon with an erotic twist.
>Initially they seem to have big gains but then they fall prey to random dungeon denizen
>This starts them falling down the slippery slope as they slowly lose shit like stats and start gaining corrupting fetishes.
>Usually they have this stat screen that makes them seem like a big deal, but quickly just becomes their corruption list as they keep losing.
>Eventually the story ends on a mind break as they lose their minds to a horrible (sexual) fate.
Which is why I think a smut fic based off this concept would work well with a variant of the Wretched and Alone rules since the slim chances of actually winning and the doomed situation kind of directly parallel each other.

>>61514461
God that'd be hilarious and weirdly in character for Moomer especially if we get an Autistic rambling about wolf cocks from her...

>>61577137
>>61577361
>>61577683
I think Coco is Crass but not downright corrupted.
what im saying is that she's entering a virgin and freaking out when actual sex occurs

>>61582837
So she'll undergo the standard ero trap dungeon arc? By which I mean she going to cut her way through the first dozen floors then get traumatized when she first gets raped, which leads to further stat degradation and rapes down the line, until ... Let's just say she gets fingerblasted by some low level mob orc who tames her as a mount/wife and they team up to "induct" errant adventurers into his harem and become the new lords of the ero trap dungeon.

>>61583765
eh i was thinking a version with more aphrodisiacs.
Something like she wreaks havoc easily, since dragon, until she gets hit with the doujin pink mist and that's the start of the slippery slope, triying to escape while being a twitching mess

>>61584161
Although I see her becoming the deranged corrupted queen of the dungeon

>>61584231
oh yeah that's a given, but i do think she should rampage and cum by herself a few times before any real action goes on
maybe something like "Coco came! Mental fortitude reduced by 3!"

>>61584363
Def could see that but when the monsters think they've broken her. Well they realize "Oh yea she's an ACTUAL Dragon" well after the first bunch of guys get eaten/burninated. And it may become a horror story from their POV. Who will survive to become her minions/living dildos?
Then comes the ASACOCO production... and the dungeon monsters becoming junkies

>>61585331
you dont get, you are still thinking, you have to FEEL
what im saying is that Coco gets her eggs impregnated, lays those and as she gets corrupted she ends up breeding with her offspring of half dragons

>>61585331
For some reason this just makes me think this is how Black Dragon Coco came to be in Holofantasy Pure Black.

>>61585331
I could see a POV change in the middle, where Kanata is sent from the heavens to cleanse Coco with her "holy sword", or some random orc/goblin/creature becomes the chosen one who has the sexual potential to match Coco

CLEAR

>>61579495
Marine herself

https://twitter.com/houshoumarine/status/1694240741810376911?t=e2vTOAaPxu3V5va1gEuGHg&s=19

>>61585606
Which kid would Coco love the most?

>>61588275
What a cute little dork

>>61588275
That Marine?
My wife.

>>61589619
NTA but the one with the biggest cock. After all her children exist to satisfy her.

>>61586406
Kanata's sword is almost as long as her arm. Able to slay Coco even in her dragon form And give her a huge belly bulge if Kanata goes after her in human form. Possibly belly bulging cumshots?

>>61589860
So, would Kanata's corruption grow her 'sword of holy light' and make her even more boyish or would it make her "sword" shrink and bury itself as the rest of her body grows more feminine?

>>61590267
I would say it starts out average, and to keep her pure it converts her corruption into more length and girth, at the cost of increased sensitivity. And when it reaches its max length and size, it starts putting it into her hips, thighs and ass. Coco intercepts her at the beginning of the dungeon, sees her average size and smirks as Kanata makes a speech about how she's going to purify and save Coco, Coco casually blows Kanata's world and leaves her there in a puddle of her juices. Then after Kanata has reached her final form, she challenges her again.

>number goes down
>penis? penis! where is the penis?!
It's sort of surprising but also not really surprising that this this kind of discussion would summon /#/

>>61592545
Titplapping this dragon (I'm a shota)

>>61588275
Blessed Marine

>>61502563
haven't uploaded in a while. Abusing Foobs.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQJV5cimvOWUTLKmxAi-N4CzW7TzAzigQLUBMXZsuZXy96aK_nxNAxkcqQ73a5I8KsdmAUWD8hhnlIg/pub

Tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, Rape, Mindbreak(?)

As always, let me know what you think

>>61589619
Actually i think she would love them all equally. In a way, her twisted love would be mating with them but also caring and making sure the dungeon runs smoothly.
This got weirdly in depth when all i wanted was for Coco to lay eggs

>>61558515
I don't really get why you'd need an rpg system to create uncertainty about what happens next. It's never certain what'll happen next unless it's a really bad, formulaic story.

>>61600974
>>61600974
>horny, hormonal, mostly naked Coco with milk-filled breasts stalking around the dungeon to make sure there's nothing that can hurt her eggs and brood

>>61600889
Rape is always a welcome surprise

>>61601646
ackshually it would be hotter if she was feral during mating but otherwise in control
Imagine Coco loving her offspring/hating the fact a monster impregnated her, how better the corruption would be if she had to truly accept all of her bastards into the world instead of killing them

>>61502592
Immortal chuubas realizing that (You)r life is fragile and limited it could be. Ayame in her frenzied oni mode came to conclusions by eating you she could be with you forever, Mori frantically searching her house the useless "Youthfull Potion", Kiara feeding you her body bit by bit hoping that you became part phoenix, or Ame seemingly unable to change your doom. So something like a fic called bad dream bad time

>>61594977
Imagine Coco hunting around for a dragon-shota in his mating season

really need more /become/ material

>>61608125
Nah we don't

>>61602145
Despair would be the absolute best, specially if Coco is able to perceive her stats and can do nothing but watch
>She's getting knotted by a demon dog or whatever after she fell in a trap
>[Forced Estrus] skill (6% Chance to activate) SUCESSFUL
>"W-WHAT?! NO! SHIT"
>Fertility stat 5%--20%
>She tries to shake him off
>Fertility 20%--45%
>"GET OFF! FUCKING GET OFF!"
>Fertility 45%-60%. Number of ovums available for fertilization 1-2
>She starts trashing and triying to break the restraints
>Fertility 60%-80%. Number of Ovums Available for Fertilization 2-3
>She breaks free
>Fertility 80%-MAX Number of Ovums Available for Fertilization 3-5
>She manages to crush its throat
>[Last Hurrah] When demon wolf is nearing its nearing its death, increase Virility by 200%
>She shakes in pleasure and despair as the thing, with its last breath, dumps its balls in her
>She just lays in the floor
>Ovum Fertliized!
>Ovum Fertilized!
>Ovum Fertliized!
>Ovum Fertilized!
>Ovum Fertilized!
>NEW [Pack Mother]: Increases max amount of posible simultaneous offspring by 1 (Current 6)

>>61608576
This constant focus on stats changing as part of the narrative is THE WORST PART of ero trap dungeons BY FAR.
Describe what happens, have a small stat dump at the end of the scene to show what effects the event had on her, and then move on to the next. Screaming "Ovum fertilized!" 5 times in a scene isn't hot, it's repetitive and boring.

>>61608830
hey different strokes for different people. Some people clearly enjoy it. I find it really hot
i do agree that some people over-use it though

>>61607677
Holy hell

>>61608576
>>61608830
The whole RPG aspect feels like a mechanical version of an omniscient narrator, or something similar at least.
I guess it shows that we're more used to having stories told to us by RPGs rather than by people.

>>61600889
I'll be honest I'm not biggest fan of plain rape, so the first half was just serviceable to me, but when it turns into super toxic violent hatesex on both sides I was super into it, I love THAT shit. Though the ending kinda reverts back to the first half and was thus kinda disappointing.

Still pretty good though, MWAnon. At least I think that's you.

>>61590267
Why is this an OR?

>>61608830
Yea the entire LitRPG (apparently what this MUH STAT BOX shit is called) obsession with Numbers is just an autism that is just distracting as fuck.

>>61608576
>Coco has to be reminded of her sordid adventures every time she looks at her damn menu
>[War Party] - Broken in by the Goblin tribes, you served as their war-mount and breeding sow
>[Quitter] - Instead of navigating the labyrinth by yourself, you agreed to give the minotaur a blowjob to lead you out
>[Kennel Bitch] - You sucked and fucked your way through the demon hound kennels
>[Cockwarmer] - You served as the yeti's onahole through three long cold nights
>[Oh Glory] - You serviced 73 customers during your tenure as a glory hole slut at the demon city brothel

>>61611910
You don't like it when it says "Strength reduced by 1" instead of describing that a character felt weakened by what they went through?

>>61608830
>>61611910
I like both classic ero-dungeon with just story, and litrpg ero-dungeon
I am getting tired of litrpg in regular literature though, got saturated way too fast, "oh I got reincarnated and I got a system" it's not lazy per say, but it's definitely the easier, trend chasing way

>>61612084
God, that's horrible. But you know how it could be even better?
>The slime pumps into Choco's body!
>Strength reduced by 1!
>The slime pumps into Choco's body!
>Strength reduced by 1!
>The slime pumps into Choco's body!
>Strength reduced by 1!
>The slime pumps into Choco's body!
>Strength reduced by 1!

Anybody who thinks this is a good idea needs urgent medication, of the .44 magnum variety.

>>61612244
Oh it's lazy as fuck because you don't need to show growth. It's just NUMBERWANG has occurred and you win!

>>61612284
Describing everything that happens in these kinds of mechanical announcement messages could make for a dumb sex comedy fic.

>(Start of Round 6. Arousal: 70/100)
>Using skill [Power Pistoning Level 7].
>Incurred 2 additional Arousal (72/100).
>Thrusting Speed increased by 3!
>Thrusting Depth increased by 5!
>It was super effective! Opponent's Arousal per round +30%!

>>61612940
I've seen it used as comedic censors at times for those R-17.999 works.

>>61612940
Sounds like a tragicomedy. Do we have to break everything beautiful down into machinery-numbers?

While i dont like numbers per say, i prefer them to porcentages that just dont make sense
>sensibility increased to 200%
200% of what? like if it was 5 out of 20 its bad but there's a cap and there's something to kind of guess, but just flat % annoy me to no end, specially when they go over 150% or something like that because if your dick sensibility goes over that treshhold then what, does putting on pants make you cum?

>>61613154
Come on, no need to go all THIS IS THE DOWNFALL OF CIVILIZATION over a silly sex joke, Anon.

>>61613154
We live in a society that worships the concept of NUMBER GOES UP. Anything must be sacrificed in order for NUMBER TO GO UP. To the point the concept of NUMBER GOES UP is perverting our sexuality.

>>61613370
Those numbers just seem like flavourless substitutes for words, really. You might as well say "grew greatly", "rose to new heights", "increased to an extreme level" etc

>>61613513
>>61613637
The Duality of Man.

>>61613678
yeah but then again the entire point of ero trap dungeon is to "build" the character as you go, and giving non-number answer is pretty hard to make the scene system work.
Of course, if you write your own story, then sure id rather read descriptions, but that one only has one direction.
Ultimately, all i want to say is that i dont like most of Ero trap spinoffs/ripoffs because they go hyper hard into tentacles (which i dont like) and dont offer enough masturbation/succubus content

>>61614124
"Litrpg" ero trap dungeons work better as games, I think

>>61614124
This.
Fucking hate tentacles, one of the most, if not THE most laziest and hackiest things the jps could have come up with
>"tanaka san, we spent too much time taking pictures of trains and forgot to write 50 scenes!"
>"Its okay! just make the heroine fall into a pit of tentacles that cum on her"
>"are they alive? like, are they part of anything? how do they cum? why do they rape her"
>"Shut up"

>>61614124
>>61614259
Games? Like this adventure from /log/ that started at >>/vt/thread/60628807#p60634841 ?

>>61614482
I meant games as in video games, but quests are a good way to do a litrpg system, /tg/ had some good quests with mechanics like rolling and stats back in the day, /qst/ just wasn't the same

>>61614124
>>61614408
There are only two kinds of ero trap dungeon fans and they're either tentaclechads or transformationsissys.

>>61601371
I mean for this concept specifically, it's always going to be formulaic. The story arc is going to be, girl goes into dungeon, girl gets progressively more corrupted as she descends, actual victory chances are slim to none.
It's going to be assumed that the next monster or trap fucking violates them, the rpg system will only be there to tell whether this doomed adventure continues or if this will be one that finally breaks them.
>>61608830
I feel like this is going to be one of those things where it depends on the flavor you want the story to have.
If you actually want it to be a bit more serious, the 'character sheet' would just be a reflection and summary of how fucked and corrupted chuuba X is, meanwhile leaning into the number autism could keep it lighter by way of providing distance from the rape and corruption.

>>61615698
Bitch ass ain't a Monster Fucking GOD
Tentacle fags are just a joke. And with how many "TENTACLE INJECTS THING TO DO TRANSFORMATION" you're pretty much one of those "transformationsissys"

>>61615959
>the rpg system will only be there to tell whether this doomed adventure continues or if this will be one that finally breaks them.
I feel like whether the character breaks or not should be decided by the storyteller because he knows pacing, how to do proper plot progression and things like that better than some dice and rules do. But maybe I'm too out of touch to get it.

ok i got it
>Holo-trap dungeon
>Anon (now Anonnete) gets sent to the favelas by Dark Lord yagoo, in his new moto that "boys make the best girls"
>can he escape the traps before he becomes the worst thing in the world: A female Gachi
basically, a joke/parody version of ETD where you have to avoid
>getting groomed by kiara
>avoid the gas that makes you think towa is cool
>get merch from your oshi instead of Marine's
>avoid becoming an artist, and if you do become one, try to not become a shipping artist

>>61617008
But Towa is cool!

>>61617174
I see anon has already failed to avoid the gas

>>61617174
>As you finish the sentence, a cold shiver runs down your back
>When..when did you put on these boots? why is your getup so...black and purple?
>you run to the mirror and scream, as a perfect eyeliner job rests in your eyes
>Dear god, you are off the deep end
>You tear off the frilly blouse and try to look for a plain tshirt, something that might help you regain your sense of self
>Its not under your bibi hat, neither under your sanrio stockings
>you freeze, and hold back a whimper
>oh god, you have sanrio stuff
>as tears run down your face, you slowly look around you
>used tissues, a hair curler, two fashion magazines, a dildo, yesteday's clothes and dozens of shoes
>Its over. You are already one of them
>the stream starts and your heart skips a bit
>you sit in front of the screen with your dinner: three strawberries ,one scoop of icecream and a bag of shredded cheese
>Towasama...she's so cool

[BAD END-KENZIE]

Alright fellas, time to start the Building Block Doll-like story that I promised. But I would like some opinions. It'll be with Fuwa/Moco as the parental figures but I'm struggling to pick who should be on the receiving side.

I can do Kiara but I'll be upfront and say I probably won't keep her in character very well. I've tried watching her streams and clips but I just really don't like her lol.

I can do (you)

or I can do another chuuba of your choosing. What do you prefer?

>>61617891
How about getting us started with some ReGLOSS representation?

>>61618338
I have not watch much ReGLOSS but I'll look at some clips and see if any of them are a good fit for what I have in mind. Any you think might be good for a story like this?

>>61617891
If you're going for FuwaMoco I'd prefer it to be reader insert.
Closest thing I can think of to them being motherly would be to bijou and that's not really a mother's/daughter relationship and more like a normal friendship.

>>61618458
Hajime is a baby, but Raden is very unique in her interests and attitude.

>>61619284
tits too big

>>61618653
Raden is an art hoe, Not that I'm complaining,

>>61617008
>Encounter Towa after breathing in the pink mist.
>Hear her talk
>Ovum Fertliized!
>Ovum Fertilized!
>Ovum Fertliized!
>Holy shit! Towa-sama kakkoi!

live

>>61621815
actually the pink mist makes you think Mori is cool

>>61614482
Man, this just reminded me of that one time an anon tried running a quest in the thread around the time of a yab. Thread unfortunately got pruned, and it was forced to be moved to /qst/ where it didn't really go anywhere.
I wonder if a quest would work here?
Maybe with like the reduced choices and options that's used in more traditional forums and the voting done via some polling website so we don't clutter the thread.

>>61626306
>Run into Mori at a blind corner and drop your merch.
>She helps pick up your dropped Towa merchandise.
>She lends a hand to getting you up.
>[Estrus] activates
>Fertility raises to 1000%
>Uwa! Kari-chan kakkoi!

>>61627514
>Kari-chan...mecha..kakkoi
>that's the last thought you can gather as you faint in prescence of your new oshi
>two months have passed, your alarm rings
>you jump out of the bed, sniff yourself and realize you can still go one more day without bathing
>as the pc starts up, you snack on american bacon, just like kariope-nee
>after shaking your futon a bit, your crusty underwear finally appears
>you went wild with the ASMR last night
>your snapback and hip-hop styled clothes finally touch your body, as stream starts
>"yo what up dead beats, its ya boy. Big ups!"
>your womb goes kyun.
>Your dad opens the door, telling you that your american movies came on the mail
>sasuga sanders-dono, always on time
>Dad asks when will you get married, you hiss at him and he leaves

[BAD END-FEMBEAT]

>>61618653
I just watched some clips of Hajime and holy shit you were right. She's absolutely perfect for this story. Thanks for the recommendation.

She's like a three way cross between Miko, Iroha and Luna. I love her.

>>61628401
Is there even any chance of a good end inside of the Holo-trap dungeon?

How would rapusama get corrupted?

>>61632254
corrupted into being a polite, well mannered child

>>61629270
you escape and become a guy again or you keep being a girl but you become a holo

>>61632254
There would be something so satisfying and erotic about putting Lapu-chan over my knee, yanking her pants down and giving her a bare butt spanking. Not only would it be hot for obvious reasons but my god does that little brat deserve it

>>61632512
>Escape but implied you eventually become Laplus
Is there a worse fate?

>>61502563
oh I'm horny now

>>61635852
awful fic. No build up at all, just straight conflict with zero resolution.

>>61629270
You could become part of a good fanbase

>>61632254

Tow pegs her.

>>61636954
>Fall into a dirt patch.
>Look up and see her.
>Layers of corruption wash off you as you witness true beauty.
>Watamelon kakkoi!

>>61639801
Watamelon is The Monolith at the centre of the Holo-dungeon. She'll grant you a wish.

>>61642150
>"Hey Fauna, how close am I to losing my fucking mind trying to finish all my fucking WIPs?"

>>61640278
>All wishes turn you into Watamelon

Happy Halloween /wg/
The archive has a new song for your browsing pleasure while I update the fucking thing. Enjoy your candy!

>>61645444
Kill yourself, AA.

>>61645444
I was expecting Mint Fantome's cover of Bustin' but I shouldn't have been surprised

>>61645444
Thanks, AA. Have a happy Halloween.

>>61645444
Thank you for the good work!

>>61645444
happy weenie-hollow you little scamp

Shiori cares about us so much

>>61502531
Hello, I'm retarded. Is there a way to sort by recently added stories when searching the story directory?

>>61647696
Default sorting when you load it up has the oldest on the top and the newest on the bottom.

>>61645444
What a fucking beautiful song. Up there with Gangster's Paradise sung by Frank Sinatra and Straight Outta Compton sung by Hank Williams

>>61647735
Ah, thanks! I see there are new Ina stories, nice!

>>61647696
It's always been sorted by age (with the exception of AA's initial fics pre rentry move and miniseries/sequels). On the script archive if you use the search function you'll get the newest fics from the tag you search for at the bottom.

>>61647955
One of them is even award-winning, you know

>>61648213
You're probably joking, but which one?

>>61648392
The Perfect Day won the Inagural /wg/ writing contest in the SFW category

>>61648611
That should be tagged as the winner...

>>61648392
"The Perfect Day" won first place in our first writing contest https://rentry.org/WGWC with >>57833352 40 votes.

>>61648659
it might be a good idea to tag the top 3 for both categories, come to think of it

>>61648611
>>61648692
Oh, that's pretty cool!
>Ina, SFW, Depression, Occult
No spoilers, but how depression is that depression tag? I don't want to feel sad and empty by the end of it...

>>61648792
It's a love story

>>61648711
Yeah. I'll do that in a few minutes.

>>61648792
It's a very melancholic fic, but I wouldn't say it goes so far as to be miserable.

>>61645444
ハブアベリハッピーハロウィン!

What kind of handgun would Botan use?

>>61650490
I'd like to say revolver but she doesn't seem particularly classy or choosy in her guns
Probably a 92fs

or a 500 magnum

>>61650490

>>61650490
Glock 19

>>61650490
I feel like she'd be the type to have a handgun that's objectively a bad firearm, but she keeps it anyway because she finds it very funny. Like either some really ghetto makeshift black powder pistol or just a gun with a really bad track record.

>>61652505
>I have armed myself poorly, as a joke

>>61617653
Wait does this mean I've become La+ who seems to be the biggest Towa Simp in Holo

>>61632859
I'd like to read that, if you get around to writing it

>>61654051
Yes, Laplus used to be a well adjusted Zoomer before she was thrown into the Holo Trap Dungeon and started finding Towa-sama kakkoi.

>>61654404
She also likes DO U and danced to it.

>>61654508
The Holo Trap Dungeon is a cruel place for kids like her.

>>61654508
DO U is a good song...

>>61654689
I see anon has already failed to avoid being groomed by Kiara.

>>61652505
I can see the silly Lion doing that.

>>61654404
But what happens if you are La+ I mean what kind of madness is inside her mind?

>Mel has gained the powers of Fubuki, Matsuri, Aki, Sora, Miko, Shuba, and Mori.
The Vampire is getting too powerful.

>>61656677
I'd like Mel to gain the powers of my dick up her ass

>>61656677
She's getting ultra-pregnant

>>61656599
It is the madness of a Zoomer that is and isn't at the same time. It can only be contained by the chains on her body that hypnotherapy has convinced are mecha kakkoi.

>>61657125
What's a kakkoi?

>>61645444
Happy spooky scary day to you too AA.

>>61654757
>The door swings open as you run, out of breath
>You snapped out of it, and now she's hot on your heels
>You run through the KFP halls, throwing boxes and other bimbos behind you as she chases you.
>You turn the corner and wait, only for her to completely miss you as she runs through the hallway
>Sigh. It was close. That raven enforcer sure is tenacious
>You sneak in one of the rooms, which just happens to be a dressing room
>The mirror mocks you,as it shows your voluptuous body encased in a slutty waitress skirt and shirt.
>The water,the food, all of the things in this place must be laced with strogen and other chemicals to turn you into a flaming lesbian
>You reach for a pair of pants, before stopping short
>"That blue doesnt go with your earrings girl"
>Oh god
>Your head slowly turns, as she emerges from the shadows
>"Oh baby... Your makeup is all wrong... Luckily momy wawa is here to fix it"
>...
>...
>You snap out of it. Damn what a weird nightmare
>Anyway, its your day off, and you streams to watch.
>While wawa's streams loads, you fight her antis in Twitter.
>Just like she likes it

[BAD END-KFPWaitresss]

>>61617008
>avoid becoming an artist, and if you do become one, try to not become a shipping artist
What's the bad end associated with becoming a shipping artist? Do you become an obsessed schizo micomet shipper?

>>61659673
I think artist is a salvageable situation,since you could become a meme fanartist or a cool one
A Shipper artist is a gachi of both the girls and the ship so they are noticeably hornier and more deranged

>>61502592
>Shigure Ui and Anon are married
>Ui drinks a mysterious potion that turns her into a loli
>Ui begs Anon to help turn her back into her usual self
>Anon promises to help her, he knows people that know their magic potion shit
Anon: But before we go into that... wouldn't you... wanna... you know...?
Ui: What?
Anon (blushing): Well, you know...
Ui: You've got to be kidding me you fucking lolicon bastard I swear I'm gon-

>>61660179
Yeah but you become a fanartist by way of the Holo Trap Dungeon. What accursed corruption crawls into the mind of someone that becomes a fanartist that way?

>>61661053
A halfway-decent income flow selling R-18 Doujinshi?

>>61661053
You become an artist by exposing yourself constantly to a doujin to relieve your lust.
If you keep working on your art and your corruption is high enough, you start shipping

>>61660771
Ui: Oi, you have to be gentle okay?

>>61663050
Anon: Fucking hell, it's tight mate. Alright, let's do this.
Ui: Wait, Anon, remember what I said An-
Anon (absolutely fucking jams it in): LEEEEROOOOYYYYY JEEEEEENKIIIIIIIIINSSSS
Ui: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YOU FUCKING IDIOOOOOOOOOT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCKKKKK ANON YOU PIECE OF SHIT

>>61502592
IRyS making you her sissy

>>61502592
Kiara 'unintentionally' getting your girlfriend jealous of her and trying to convince you to dump your gf because of it

>>61668946

>>61669036

>>61669731

>>61673465
Who's she trying to fool

Marine deserves love in a yuri relationship with Pekora.

>>61675438
Nooo Pekora, don't fall for a horny red woman again

>>61502592
Buff Lamy terrorizes the office with her newfound strength

>>61678414
Kaela and lamy here both look like Baki characters some nerd will try to hype up as cool

>>61678414
juicy

CLEAR

What's something you'd like to see in an upcoming fic or are glad about seeing realized in one that was already written?

>>61689280
I want to see sexy retards unintentionally stealing the guy from stacies. Whether it's the classic unfulfilled prompt about your noblewoman sister Suisei trying to seduce you to prevent you from ruining your dignity by going for peasant Aqua's fat dumpy or something different.
I'm glad about the fics that portray Ayame in a positive light.

>>61617653
>>61628401
>>61659341
>femanon goes through the Holo-trap dungeon
>gets groomed by one of the girls into her fanbase
>[bad end]
>eventually somehow manages to muster up enough willpower to try to escape
>gets groomed by a different holo, it's even worse
>[bad end]
>everytime she thinks she's finally hit rock bottom she gets groomed into another, worse, fanbase

>>61692441
The true ending is reaching the bottom of the dungeon and being signed on to become a part of the next gen.

>>61696317
gura coming back from her hiatus (she went to wallgreens)

>>61696317
Gura getting a tall model with big booba would be hilarious (and give her a chance at appearing in HJ)

>>61689280
I don't know, but I sure do love that cute fennec

>>61689280
not even fartfag but i want an honest to god humilliation fic, be it a girl letting a fart or burp go, piss, squirt, whatever.
They just have to be mortified and bullied by it, with the slammer being that it happens again

>>61700207
Why does she need to be tall and have big tits in order to have a chance?

>>61689280
The ero trap discussion makes me wish we get fics with bad endesque stuff.
Also
>Cunning Plan Concoction Unit
Is cunny always on her mind?

>>61689280
Went archive-diving for this one, but something like this into a full story >>57725069

>>61706733
Moco-chan feels too abusive here. It feels like it would be more appropriate if (You) started to be more like Fuwawa rather than Mococo becoming abusive.

>>61707206
nah, for me the cool thing would be that its kind of an SCP thing, where the mococo that breaks off turns into a new breed of Fuwawa, while the Mococos are always submissive retards that go "un un"

>>61706733
I like the idea that the twins just do a complete personality flip to something they feel they can never be like around the other. I could see Mococo getting more violent, not having her sister looking over her shoulder and just able to act on impulse and not have anyone question her decisions.
>>61702839
And who wouldn't!

>>61707466
Then shouldn't the pair name be called Mocoano?

>>61707615
Maybe something like Mococo's trauma of constantly being watched over by her sister manifests into violent bouts of rage, where she screams what's on her mind as she trashes something or beats someone up
>SHUT UP SHUT UP, I CANT HEAR MYSELF THINKING, STOP FUCKING TALKING
>STOP TALKING TO ME LIKE IM RETARDED, I GET IT, I GET IT
>I CAN DO THINGS MYSELF, FUCK YOU FUCK YOU RAAAAAAAAAAARGH

Ogey time to bake

>>61708038
I think this is a good way to make the fluffy demon dogs actually threatening and have some real bite to their barks. Since they're both such huge goofballs, I haven't been sure how I can make them get aggressive and want to really tear through Anon's intestines, but through a psychological quirk like this, it can really be go time. Thanks anons.

>>61708320
I dont know if you are familiar with DMC but there's a pair of bosses Called Agni and Rudra that share a gimmick.
If you defeat one of them first, the other will pick up the other's sword and suddenly become way stronger, making it so you have to juggle the bosses health so they die at roughly similar times.
maybe that gimmick can be applied here? anon is stomping them until he takes fuwawa first and then he gets rolled by pure rage mococo

>>61708142 (me)
Okay I made a sp00ky thread
>>61708442
>>61708442
>>61708442

>>61708721
I think a better gimmick would be that one boss fight concept from around their debut of them fusing together to become one demon dog. >>56773370