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Story recap! We got a greentext
"Keep it a secret" >>61123023

i want to breed anya and her hairy cunt

>>61266159

as I think I remember saying I would a while ago, Wellness Check has been reformated and partly rewritten to improve story quality, same link as in the archive.

>>61268110
Never read this before but I'll give it a shot and share my thoughts.
I know this used to be greentext but man you really should have cleaned it up into fuller paragraphs. Though looking at it as a whole I'm pretty sure that would basically necessitate a complete rewrite, so i can see why you just went with cleaning this up.
Weird that you didn't adapt Miko's accent. I know that's kind of an ask but it's weird imagining her with regular speech.
Strange that you didn't use those 15 flights of stairs as a set piece for the chase. Feels like a missed opportunity.
Overall, it's a nice chase scene that could make a good base for a bigger story. It's still rough around the edges but I liked reading through this.

>>61268110
As the other Anon said I can tell this was adapted from a greentext, especially because I noticed a stray > somewhere in there. I’d recommend splitting it up with double line breaks for ease of reading, instead of always using a single line break and a tab press.
The concept of the story is interesting and your style of action isn’t too bad. While I don’t mind stories featuring no (You), I think this would have been such a cool prologue chapter to a larger story, where it ends with:
>”We’re out of options. We have to call *him*.
Which leads to a brief teaser for (You)r introduction into the story.

>>61266290
Consoling Anya after you use her to take a life for the first time and it got to her more than you both expected

Where are some good places to read fics besides here and AO3? I need more vtuber pornography fics of moderate quality.

>>61273642
Either Wattpad or Deviantart but I dunno about quality

>>61267797
>Kronii praying everyone dies and goes to hell forever no exceptions

>>61276468
i doubt she's that spiteful

>>61276560
>get to meet Towa
doesn't sound so bad

>>61274107
Wattpad seems dead, deviantart searching is so useless that I can't even begin to parse through stories and not inflation porn drawn in MS paint by a clinically diagnosed autist

>>61279907
Well I dunno then

>>61281491
whore

I've been playing around with the cut-up technique, and this schizo babble of a poem came out.

nothing about sora's personality is faking
rests deep inside the deepest darkness waiting
one who is not even aware of
the duality and who only sees Him

within the apple the peach that lies
out dragged out but never staying she
within the darkness there is no way
waking reality

she is but a sora mama
because of her motherly attitude
she is the perfect Manchurian candidate
dualism here is much deeper
the other is gone

nothing is new everything is old
and dust and beyond
what many in hololive respect
is often toothless and harmless if
in spite of the other idols grinding

instances such as losing her temper
sora
is the bone waiting under the flesh
in many ways resembles that of a well

does she have a face no maybe
it is gone
the other becomes present
led many fans to call her
suffix like -sama befitting of her?

knows that she is present
she is a happy and comforting person
whose personality was
born in tokyo
screaming echoing inside the seeds
the stereotypical image of an idol
beneath that not even the surface itself

purity in fact even in rare less-than-pure
she is but an astral projection taken
her fans to call her sora-chan or
image of a proper idol since most

directly according to her she would love
behaved innocent child simply sora with
no honorifics as she is withered but warm
and familiar yet foreboding does not think

>>61273642
There's technically fanfiction dot net for another place that has a vtuber fanfic category but that place is simultaneously collapsing and also doesn't really have much smut. Allegedly there are fanfiction discords vtuber fics but I have no fucking clue where they are.
Outside of those places the only other place for chuuba smut I can think of is trash and it's caption thread since I remember one of their authors did chuuba smut commisions for their captions.

>>61286899
>Anya watching helplessly as you use her to open up the fifth fleshlight this month

Think this illustrator captured the perfect reaction from Botan in this situation.

Now I want Botan sex.

>>61289575
Me too, and I'm going to get it.

Get a random fic from the archive and share your thoughts
>A Certain Stalking Soda-chan
It's a cute and short fic, though the weird way it's written kinda fucked with me. I know we have a couple fics using this 'far off' 2nd person style that deliberately dodges the specifics of what (You) are saying but it always feels weird to read every time they crop up. I think some fics manage to make it work, specifically a fic like girl of emptiness where the impersonal disconnect with the narration added to the atmosphere but in this case specifically where the scene is basically a love confession it feels like it's the wrong tool.
>Winner, Winner
Oh god is this what I think it is
>SFW, Subaru, Haachama, chess
Oh. Thought I rolled the fucking Kiara scat one.
It's a cute chammers fic, It's kind of weirdly saner and crazier than what I think is the usual accepted character for haachama but going by order in the archive I think this predated the schizo arc so I can kind of see why haachama is less deranged.
Wish the ending line had something more to it though.
>It was 12am. She stood outside his house. The information was easy to get and she saw that he lived alone.
It implies it well enough but I feel like it's missing something to really make it land.

>>61291317
>Winner, Winner
>Oh god is this what I think it is
Cop out. Give a real review. Tell us what you liked and disliked, and name 1 thing you think the author could have done better.

>>61291465
Anon. There are two fics with that start with "Winner Winner" I rolled the one that didn't have the kiara scat.
But sure
>Liked
Despite it being different I did like the crazy haachama scenario even if it's a bit off from how haachama is by present day characterization.
>Disliked
Ending fell a bit flat since it's literally a scene break to an ominous line.
>1 thing the author could have done better
As said before, I think they could have written out the ending a bit more to flesh it out from just being an ominous line.

>>61291317
>Red in the Abattoir
The prose is good, way too short and the content is...well.
I dont wanna be mean but it reads like a "im 15 and im so twisted" gorefic. There's no real rhyme or reason to it aside from wanting to write cliche gore, and the fic just ends after one scene.
>A friend
Its weird and barely makes sense, but its not terrible, just amateurish and way too short for me to properly care or even review it
>Idol Steps
I liked this one. It has good prose, nice pacing and provides a great humilliation angle. Kinda wish it did more tho, maybe some sex or more sekuhara. As it is, its kind of like a fun fic that gets you bothered, but doesnt scratch the itch to either get horny or to get interested

1/3 aint that bad really

CLEAR!

>>61266429
Balsa Chapter Twenty Nine: The Man From Hijau >>60660368
I won't review this one, until the last chapter to be written is finished and I have read the previous chapters (currently on Chapter 15).

>>61266290
You gain the power of astral projection and promptly fly over to your oshi's bedroom.

>>61266429
The Oni's Rebellion >>60631942
I think I read the first part to this one when it came out but it's been a long time so I read it again. This is a bit of a weird followup because the first part was about spanking and punishing Ayame the disrespectful horndog, but this second one is really about how much you love her and how great she is. But I guess it makes sense in universe and it is fleshing out Ayame. I liked the focus on Ayame's demon side, like her superhuman mouth and tongue and her magic swords. The detailed kissing and the long blowjob scene with brutality but also wholesomeness and love were very hot, but I'm not a SM kind of guy so the whole playfighting, roleplaying that Ayame is your slave and torturting/testing her was a bit much. That and the shift to romance probably only work 100% for people that love torturing the love of their life who wants it.

Hey, kyodai! Tell me how your WIPS are coming along!

>>61298862
I decided to do something short and sweet as my debut/warm-up before starting the grand project I've been planning. The one I'm gonna do first is about meeting a rabbit who works in a cafe and dreams of becoming an idol.

>>61299375
Sounds cute! Do your best writebro.

>>61300422
Thanks, I'm gonna ganbarimasu until all that remains is pure white ash.

>>61266290
Your chuuba senpai whom you had a crush on gets pregnant during her last year of school. Drops out to marry the man that gave her a baby.
10 or so years later, you're working as a middleschool teacher. Your chuuba crush's daughter is in your class. At the same time, you have a crush on a coworker.

Love triangle ensues.

>>61298862
pic related

>>61301685
Who is the love triangle between though? The daughter? Did the original crush divorce her husband or something?

>>61301685
>>61302671
Now that's what I call a Bizarre Love Triangle
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcJM0bM3D0Q

>>61302671
Make it a square then.
MC-Coworker-Crush-Daughter

>>61266290
You and your girlfriend Suisei are on a vacation in the countryside when your car breaks down in the middle of the road. Luckily there is a village nearby that the both of you can take refuge in while the both of you figure out a way to go home. However, the village harbors a dark secret in which the women there are forced to participate in a mating ritual with the whole village. Will you be able to escape the village with Suisei while protecting her and ensuring she doesn't get captured or will you fail and lose her.

Generic hentai plot but the idea of Suisei being used as an onahole for a village full of horny men is pretty hot./spoiler]

All of all Hololive (JP), Yagoo and staff included, go on a company vacation to an isolated where one by one everyone's getting killed off. Which holo is the culprit and what's her motivation?

>>61304654
isolated island*

>>61291317
>>61291465
>>61291818
We need more of these, cool to see anons actually reading and sharing thoughts. Thanks as always reader-kuns.

>>61304805
NTA, but I'm now posting a review for every 5 other posts I make in the thread.
You could do that, with the same or a different number, or something similar if you like.

>>61291818
Good on you for giving feedback.

>>61266290
When (You) thought you were just petting a shrine pet but accidentally made her in heat and as the Miko she forced you to mate with her or faced 10 years of bad luck in the end you two are blessed with two kids but just five years after the first meeting (You) died. Mio investigating your unusual death realizes it was god that messed your fate because (You) mate with the mystic. Mio angered by the fact will take revenge on God and the world, or she just fell into depression and committing suicide because she thinks it all her fault you died.

The artist: https://x.com/ikayaki_4/status/1714835006126768445?s=20

>>61266290
When (You) thought you were just petting a shrine pet but accidentally made her in heat and as the Miko she forced you to mate with her or faced 10 years of bad luck in the end you two are blessed with two kids but just five years after the first meeting (You) died. Mio investigating your unusual death realizes it was god that messed your fate because (You) mate with the mystic. Mio angered by the fact will take revenge on God and the world, or she just fell into depression and committing suicide because she thinks it all her fault you died.

The artist: https://x.com/ikayaki_4/status/1714835006126768445?s=20

>>61291317
>Brown, Black, and Blue Because I Love You
it read well and it's not just senseless torture, even tho I'm not rlly sure what Noel's motivation is, and some decisions Lamy makes are questionable and kind of led to everything becoming worse. i imagine Flare isn't so totally dumb she thought just requesting nicely to break-up would work.
i also liked (dislike?) the implication where Noel likely followed thru with her promise, and with Lamy at the minimum dropping out even if it's a little generic for a downer ending

>Watson's Tests
it's formatted very well, short but sweet, and i like the concept and setting in general
i think in terms of writing it's the best one i've seen in a while, following anon's perspective and mental shift and everything, ame seems deranged but still loving i know many people who'd love that

>>61298036
>probably only work 100% for people that love torturing the love of their life
This sentence actually got me really interested
>who wants it.
until this part hit. Hype bus had a flying start but drove straight into a river filled with spiders and cum.

>>61305455
Weird river. But yeah I wouldn't recommend it to people who dislike consent and having fun together.

>>61266221

Hotter in the Shade

https://rentry.org/uywuz

Suisei walks across a crowded beach to order some lemonade. Her bathing suit for the day is a pair of male swimming trunks, leaving her flat chest completely exposed.

I've seen variations on the "topless Suisei at the beach" prompt thrown around before and wanted to write something with it.

Tags: Suisei, exhibitionism, humiliation

>>61291317
>Holofanta/ss/y
both it and the sequel are dead thank god cause those tags ahd me not looking forward to reading that

>Miss Sakura
I don't hate it, but I think I said back when it first came out it kinda misses the mark for what I'd want out of a Miko romance fic and HCAnon's aversion to using Japanese suffixes really makes the protagonist's dialogue sound worse than it is

>Mumei at the Windowsill
The sort of clinical way the narration goes kinda messes with the drama and heart-string tugging I think the fic is going for, though the ideas of it work overtime for that. The idea of an invalid mother watching her son fall down the stairs and maybe get seriously hurt deserves a bit more than single paragraph, similar thing to the ending.

>Moving on.
Not too much to talk about, though it is interesting in that I don't think there's another chuuba whose leaving would spawn as much stuff around her leaving like Coco did, though maybe that's cause she was able to have a much more graceful exit than most and the circumstances around it gave her a lot of goodwill afterwards.

My reviews sound a lot more negative than I feel, I don't think any of these fic are bad by any means

>>61289575
don't we all

>>61305697
Hot.
I have mixed feelings on the twist ending. It has sexy implications, of course, but it did also cause me to read the whole thing thinking Suisei was a retard. The absurdity was distracting.

Are there any other good ways to refer to the tongue
I'm using the word every other sentence and it feels bad

>>61308807
Maybe try something based on the action that the tongue is performing at that moment like ass cleaner or boot scrubber?

>>61309004
That'll do it
Thanks anon

>>61308807
Mouth pickle. It sounds weird, but trust me, after you've finished and released it, mouth pickle won't sound weird at all.

>>61305697
>Why was it so much hotter in the shade?
Smooth as FUCK title drop. Exquisitely written and very interesting. In particular, I love the bartender scene where you've successfully anthropomorphized his gaze into a molester without sounding strange at all. Well done.

>>61305697
H-hot...
That was a really nice one. Congrats anon,

>>61306116
>The idea of an invalid mother watching her son fall down the stairs
I don't even remember writing that. Is it over for me?

>>61305697
>she was just imagining the vibrator
That was funny. The writing itself was very descriptive and hot, while still remaining simple to read. Can't help but feel a twinge of envy at how great it flows. Nice job, anon!

>>61308807
If the context is obvious you could leave out the tongue and just refer to its owner. So instead of "you felt her tongue entering your mouth" you could write "you felt her entering your mouth".

Bump

>>61308807
I think if you're referring to it every other sentence you need to vary up the subject and shift focus to something else (i.e the pleasure, the smell, etc assuming this is an oral sex thing).
Either that or you're just over focusing on that aspect. In which case you should focus on finishing that scene then email someone on the rolodex to see if they're willing to beta read your fic.

>>61291317
I always try to do these but end up rolling really shit fics that I don’t want to review.

>>61316720
You're free to review fics you liked or just recent ones, too! It's still a good deed regardless of randomization.

>>61305697
The way you write is quite good, though I found this funny rather than hot. It did stretch my suspension of disbelief pretty far when Marine had somehow snuck a vibrator into Suisei without her noticing the entire time. Like, she wouldn’t feel it or notice anything when going for a piss in the morning? Suisei’s reaction to Marine doing that also felt incredibly mild, like she wasn’t that mad about it.
Anyway, the descriptions you write paint a really good picture so it was really easy to imagine this whole scenario playing out in my head. Good job!

>>61312285
Yeah this was my main problem, I realized I was being a bit over descriptive and referring explicitly to the tongue when it wasn't necessary to do so
Thanks anon

>>61305697
>>61317923
Wait, I just realised what the ending implied. My point still partially stands though, I don’t know what would lead Suisei to that conclusion, and if she did find the situation hot I doubt the sudden waves of pleasure would be so sudden as to force her speech to be cut off.

>>61298036
Thank you for the review! I had a lot of fun imagining and then writing what a BDSM-filled evening with your oni girlfrield might look like, and what demonic features can serve the story better than those of humans could (including Ayame's short-lived "rebellion").
I will add a summary of A Hedonist's Reckoning before The Oni's Rebellion, so that the latter can stand on its own; posting it as a sequel seems to have turned some people away from the story, which is regrettable - because thinking about it after the fact, AHR isn't really that important to know when reading TOR. And in terms of reception, even the guy who promised that he would tell me what's wrong with it hasn't delivered...
Though I can totally see that the shift in direction compared to the first part isn't ideal for people who are more into abuse than wholesome BDSM, and that I spent a lot of time writing about Ayame kneeling and you playing with her - compared to the classic, more broadly appealing exchanges of fluids. I hope at least some people enjoy the romance aspect a lot too, because that his own I feel. Dominating someone you love, with their consent and participation, is just the best.

>>61318921 (me)
*because that is how I feel
I also didn't want to imply that the blowjob scene is short - Ayame was working her mouth magic for quite a few paragraphs. There's just a lot of other fun before it.

Hello, how would you approach an outfit swap story? Been slow catching up on my Shiori stories but outfit swap is kind of a foreign topic to me.

>>61319441
You have two options
>Shiori and (Insert chuuba here) decided to switch clothes for the funsies.
>Shiori and (Insert chuuba here) have literally body swapped and the outfit swap is how they distinguish each other while they're still swapped.

>>61319441
If you want to kinda cheat, it could be shiori wearing your clothes, otherwise its >>61319715 one these two paths

BUT, if you want to take the Shiori Must Cum route have her dress you in her clothes and play with both parties getting hyper bothered

>>61319715
>>61319920
Do I have to know how the other chuuba behaves for it to be accurate? Or can I write entirely in Shiori's perspective?
I'm leaning towards cheating a bit right now.

>>61319441
I have my own outfit swap scene planned for later, actually a few, I think it's hot. My one approach is basically going to be Anon is waiting for a planned night of clowning around with Polka, who he thinks is doing a little sexy reveal for him behind the frame of the door, or tent flap, wherever it is this ends up. He just gets shown little bits here and there, the gloves, clown shoes and thigh highs, etc. Then when he's practically impatient enough to just get up and pull Polka into the room with him, Flare jumps into view, practically busting out of Polka's outfit. Not sure where I might go from there, it might be fun to have Flare try to imitate some of the clown's mannerisms during intimacy. Another swap I wanna write is Watame and Botan, that might be a cool time for some predator/prey kinkplay.

>>61320186
not really. you could do, for example
>"golly gee anon.. it seems Marine-sempai misslabeled one of her costumes and ended in MY house, why oh why this situations is catastrophic!"

>>61323190
>Alright Anon, imagine this clay pigeon is your ballsack!
>PULL!
>*BANG*

>>61320186
I mean the scenario of this prompt from holoctober is an outfit swap involving a Holomem, it's up to you whether you want it to be just for funsies, or for something more. Just picks a concept running off that idea and write it, not everything's gonna be a winner when you make one of these prompt list fics.

>>61266290
Can we get a short about eating Botan out as she aggressively forces your head into her cooch with her hand and coos encouragement?

>>61305697
The other comments had already spoiled the twist for me but damn. This was really hot, the description and tension in the narration really tied it all together into that perfect storm of humiliating exhibitionism.
Also I'm just taking a guess here from the format and title drop but AuntieAnon?
UnreIated but I wish the other anon that was teasing their topless suisei beach fic would come back

>>61329347
Got some good news and bad news for you.
Good news:
I just returned to working on a WIP of mine that has a part that's like what you're looking for.
Bad news:
>it's third person /ss/
>It's less her forcing the head into the cooch and more gently guiding it
>the vag licking only lasts a couple paragraphs before it moves onto a face-sit, rimjob power struggle

>>61329347
It won't be a short, but I plan to have Botan get a little carried away when you decide to service her a little. Eating out is kinda a major fetish of mine so I'm doing it when I can.

>>61330013
To be honest, the only part I dislike about that is the /ss/ factor... but it's a big dislike from me.
I might read it anyway in the hopes it scratches an itch.

>>61330201
Massive yes from me.
>it won't be short
Even better.

>>61330013
Is this the Botan/shota wolf boy one?

>>61331172
Yep. Been out of the zone for a while but randomly found a bit of drive again today and decided to ride it out. and also Nene too

>>61330617
Sex with Botan is gonna have me walking a fine line the entire time between slightly submissive powerbottom to eager sex lioness. I figure I might end up working in some power swapping between her and Anon. What's gonna be most important to me is keeping it wild though. Sporadic changes in position, pacing, biting, clawing, pulling, but still tender in some moments. It's gonna be a fun one.

>>61331391
Oh if you're the author I'm thinking of then why'd you unpublish Holofanta/ss/y? asking entirely because of this this anon's post >>61306116 .

>>61331725
I just want to avoid thinking about that "character" as much as possible. That's all I'm gonna say on the matter.

>>61331476
This is sounding exponentially better with every post you make. You're matching my fetishes 1:1.

>>61266290
You go to Sister Marine's personal confessional to absolve yourself of sin. When you step inside you see a gloryhole surrounded by dozens of tally marks.

>>61336542
>make several visits over a few months
>eventually, notice that she occasionally repeats things from older visits in suspiciously similar ways
>also, the noises she makes during the “absolution time” sound a bit different than her voice
>one time, you sneak in and manage to enter the booth on the Nuns’ side
>it’s Sister Fubuki with a speaker, which she uses to play a multitude of sound clips of Sister Marine from a soundboard

>>61339653
>me on my way to go after double-menhera pussy

>>61272690
This but it's not because she's traumatized but because Anya was really into it and wants to feel you taking another life with her.

>>61337030
Isn't Fubuki the priest in their confession streams?

>>61342276
Oh yeah.
Forgot because female priests aren't a thing in Christianity.

>>61342452
They are in some parts; but Christians that have female priests mostly don't need some other fallen human to confess to, they can just talk to Jesus without having a money-sucking bureaucracy inbetween.
The two just feel pretty Catholic on those streams so it's confusing. Maybe it's backwards logic where she is a priest so she has to be considered male officially.

>>61266290
A fight fic where holos battle for the title of Queen of the Menheras.

>>61341536
>Don't pull out!
~Anya, stuck in a heart

>>61339653
I like to believe that despite being outwardly creepy and having weird habits, shiori would be an actual sweet heart. Like a girl who got adopted into the Adams family and managed to maintain some thread of humanity

>>61345992
Could you deal with this during sex?
>Oh good golly that's a lot of white stuff.

>>61346796
unironically yes. I'd just get hard again and pound her harder while hearing her scream moan shit like that. then follow up with gentle cuddles and kiss her to sleep

Seriesanons doko?

>>61349030
We're workin' on it.

>>61349030
Still cooking. It's incomprehensible garbage, but it's cooking.

>>61349030
Doing my best. Got a gaggle of other things to take care of before I can really buckle down and make some real headway in my current chapter. Hopefully after this weekend things slow down a bit everywhere else so I can find time to write a little more.

>>61343642
Did you misuse the semicolon on purpose.

>>61350937
It's acceptable where it is. You should worry about your period, and the full stop at the end of your sentence.

>>61353394
good one

>>61353394
I'd be more worried about that comma splice.

>>61354865
nta but it's kinda important to making the joke work. though a hyphen or three dots might've been better to mark the pause that you'd do there irl.

>it's another "interesting preview blurb is actually just window dressing for the most bland 4/10 smut possible"
it's all so tiresome

>>61356241
What fic?
Guessing this is about an ao3 fic?

>>61356565
I think he's passive aggressively talking about the story posted in this thread.

>>61357201
The fic posted in this thread isn't even a smut fic. It's nsfw but it doesn't feature a full on smut scene.
This may just be me but the wording of the post is making me think they're talking about ao3 due to the words "preview blurb".

>>61357556
I love the word blurb.

>>61349030
Buckling in for the long haul...

>>61349030
Not a seriesanon (yet), but I'm finishing up the prepwork for a series. I thought I would use nanowrimo as an excuse to try and build a habbit of consistently writing something. It also helps that I give myself prep time before November begins, because despite being an outliner, I tend to go into things without planning anything which leads to a lot of dropped wips.

I also may or may not touch up a short horror fic that I wrote around the time of the contest and post that for halloween.

>>61360374
More Ayame fics? Yes please

>>61362124
it feels like there's a influx of Ayame fics/ planned Ayame fics as of late

>>61266290
Good News when she was in heat you got Mio pregnant.
Bad(?) news it's triplets because she was extra fertile then
Strange news Mio just is now really self conscious about taking off her top. It's even staying on during sex. Turns out because she got pregnant with that many her wolf nature are ensuring she's starting to develop another pair of tits under her main pair. If they're properly stimulated they might even get close to as large as her original pair
Mio, Pregnancy, MultiBreast Potential BE and Lactation.

>>61349030
Still hard at work when I'm not coughing my lungs out.

>>61366444
H-hot

>>61364454
The Rebellion one is the only one in the last 5 months right? It has a nice bj scene but I hope for multiple upcoming ones if you say it like that

>>61349030
eternal torment and ceaseless suffering taskute

>>61367468
Personally I'm interested to see if there really is an Ayame NTR fic coming.

>>61366999
>>61367801
>>61359075
Sending you bros my energy. Do what you need to for yourselves to get rested and refreshed, and don't ever give up. You all got this!

Lets play Prompt Builder Alright?
You have to pick 3 options, you can swap from the same row but cannot repeat
>Robot/Taxi driver/Knight
>Action/Comedy/Drama
>Sadness/Happiness/Anger
Once you have your three options, see which chuuba you can fit in there and build a prompt.

>You are a lone taxi driver. One night, as you take a puff in the bridge, a horned girl comes running and begs you to not jump. Once you clear the misunderstanding, you hear her problems out

>>61367235
Imagine it DOUBLE DECKER PAIZURI

>>61370158
That sounds hot, but I wonder how it would actually work...

>>61370294
You come in at an angle from above so you touch all 4

>>61346801
Ayame's cute little giggles while you eat her ass...

>>61370633
>she farts
>you vomit

>>61370633
I wish the author of Assurance Correction had written prequels detailing how Aqua and Ayame had their asses eaten so well that they just lie on the bed afterwards. I wouldn't write ass eating myself, but that fic makes it very hot.

>>61370546
What about going right into the middle?

>>61372369
Might not be deep enough unless her tits are really big, or your dick is really small/curved.

>>61372474
I mean, they are going to be filled with milk due to pregnancy

>>61375457
Poyoyo is the cutest mascot (not fanbase representation)

>>61375595
Also the smuggest what's up with that

>>61376235
I'm so jealous of that fat fuck

>>61376235
It's cheeky like Ayame and also needs a spanking

>>61266290
Fubuki abusing (you)

>>61370071
(You) are a lonely robot. One night while secretly browsing your hidden folder of lewd images, a comet girl crashes through your roof. She just discovered you've been having lewd thoughts about her, and she is pissed. What do?

>>61384390
Scream loudly in Binary and start to run.

>>61266290
You abusing (Fubuki)

>>61266290
>>61388098
No fuck off, You loving (Fubuki)

>>61390469
I'll love Fubuki platonically out of respect for Mio.

>>61266290
>>61390469
No, YOU fuck off! You loving to abuse (Fubuki)!

>>61391302
centrist

I, for one, want consensual abuse with Foobs.

fubuki abuse Indifference

>>61266290
What about a fic about Fubuki abusing herself?
And by abusing herself I mean masturbating.

>>61291317
>Funny uncle - 2 months before
Oh shit, wasn't this the fic done by a Korean dude who translated it into English? He must have really liked the original. The idea of Matsuri raping you in your sleep is quite hot, but machine translation obviously didn't do this story any favours. I respect the effort nonetheless, as I would love to see the original continued too.
>A Good Onion is a Clean Onion
There's something about this story that I've always really liked but could never put my finger on. Maybe it's my bias towards Baqua and doting on helpless retards. It's unique and it's written well, and I even referenced it in one of my fics.

Orthopedic inserts are incredible. If you use shoes, get one today. Even premium shoes come with shit inserts.

>>61400574
I'd start smoking if Fubuki asked me to put out cigarettes on her skin. She said she likes that, after all

>>61407279
Tell me about Ririka. What makes her a kawaii positive genius?

>>61407279
Being Ririka's manager and getting swept of your feet by her antics sounds like a fun fic

>>61407279
So ficwise, do any of the regloss girls have any potential? (Outside of the obvious low hanging fruit of smut based of of design/lore.)
I know there's that Suisei doppelganger one for Ao but that's basically shooting Ao's existing character in the head and transplanting a Suisei variant as a character design joke. (Even if I do like the idea as a Suisei drama fic).

>>61409921
Ririka and Kanade fit the "funnny gal" archetype, with Kanade being far more retarded and funny
Raden could make for a story about meeting her in a bar and lighting her cigarette with yours? she has a mature charm
no idea about the other two, i didnt get to watch them as much

>>61409921
Hajime can play a similar role to Luna. Baby that is in a position of authority while being immature and not speaking well.
But a gang leader is also different from a princess, of course.

>>61410282
Curating a museum with Raden and being responsible of her self destructing habits!

>>61409921
I think Ririka has the most potential. There's enough there with her design, personality, and lore that you could probably make a decent fluff fic since she's the "okatu gyaru" trope come to life. I actually kind of see her being a good rival in a love triangle fic. Like when we talked about someone out Stacying Suisei, for some reason I can see Ririkia being a good fit for that. I can see her being a good rival to Marine too, for some reason.
Kanade is basically Aqua at home, so the same stipulations
Raden strikes me more as a secondary or one-off support character. Although you could probably make a mature fluff fic about going to a jazz club with your arthoe gf or something.
Can't really say much about the other two.

>>61410929
Glancing at the thumbnail, I first thought this was some kind of Shiori-themed Dalek.

So what I'm getting is:
Ririka: If you want to have a gal for the cast but don't want to cross the streams and bring in Hoshikawa Sara.
Kanade: Korean Aqua at home.
Hajime: Luna/Miko if you need their archetype but need it in a more grounded setting.
Raden: Fuck, I need a supporting character that smokes/drinks
Ao: Something something Suisei/Gap moe lady-killer

>>61409921
Kanade is Korean Aqua but actually smarter. She's just goofy and still learning japanese which is why her speech is so slow sometimes.

Okay, but why not have three Stacys (Suisei, Hoshikawa's, Ririka) be interested in you and competing for your attention.

Hey, newfag here.
I've been thinking of writing a fic about a head cannon ship of mine (Ironmouse x Gura)
And I would like to get the people's thoughts on it.

>>61412366
Well no one is going to say no, so thats that.
Do you wsnt some pointers? Do you have problems with the setting?

>>61409921
I mean, imagine serious business Ririka, secretly in a relationship with their secretary. At work, she's all business and dresses attractively but conservatively, with the only tell being her hair color, and treats everyone cooly. But once off work she dumps the suit, gets redressed, and comes out of her shell into her bubbly otaku gal self.

Tons of ways you can take that premise, if you want go smut her secretary has remotes for her toys and teases her throughout the day until they get back home and fuck like rabbits.

If you want drama, her and her secreatry go out on a date, run across other management, get dragged along to drink, and all the while they try and conceal who Ririka actually is, even while her coworkers make rude/lewd/whatever comments about her until her secretary has had enough and leaves. (And then probably their protectiveness and possessiveness gets Ririka in the mood and they fuck like rabbits in this one too, because it is Ririka after all, girl is horny.)

Basically, take the lore of her being a company president and her partner being her secretary in training seriously, and that can add a lot of spice to the typical gal equation, and in a lot of different directions.

>>61412482
Yeah, pointers sounds good.

I've been feeling like my stories don't have much continuity to them so they just end up as loosely tied events, kinda like a weird dream is what I'm saying.

I kinda have a basic rundown of what I want this story to be, a romantic comedy sort of thing, but so far I've only written like weird fanfictiony type smut. I want to write something more emotional.

Like, how would a relationship between Ironmouse and Gura work out? That sort of thing.

>>61413088
Well give a scenario.
Cross company ships anywhere outside of Japan kind of need something to spark it off since you can't exactly handwaved the distance outside of using an alternate setting from the 'default' of 20 minutes into the future.

>>61413088
You want to write an emotional romantic comedy about a shark and a gremlin? Yeah, that doesn't sound easy.

>>61412119
Ririka also wants to be tied up really badly. And she is kawaii, positive and a genius - but that's obvious.

>>61413088
They meet at an awards show, both so nervous that they end up holding hands and encouraging each other before having to go on stage.

Hey /wg/. Reminding you guys that you haven't submitted your rep for Lord of the aboard 2 yet >>61346984
I think the consensus was that you're going to send The Fly Jr. (The Fly but with FBK's features) with a flippy moveset for this one and then Archiver Anon (no relation) looking like uncle Ruckus in a bad Shiori cosplay for LotB3. You just need to fill the form at this point.

>>61418010
>and then Archiver Anon (no relation) looking like uncle Ruckus in a bad Shiori cosplay for LotB3.
We should just keep making mutations of the Fly until it becomes some absolutely unholy abomination.

>>61418170
We can come up with new ideas later. Right now we need to send in one of the ones we already have before we miss the deadline.

Hope that if you're sending Fly Jr. he's still going to have Pretty Fly For a White Guy as his theme music

>>61418414
And if he loses, there's a fitting Offspring song for that too: "Why Don't You Get A Job?"

I see a lot of people comparing Kanade to Aqua, but Kanade seems way more outgoing.

>>61418849
I'd add to that Aqua is mainly on the receiving end when it comes to banter while Kanade is the one who is on the offensive.

>>61418849
It's mostly because they seem retarded and slurp.

>>61409921
Ao is perfect for gap moe. She can act like a cool and like an ikemen but she can never hide her other side for too long. Cute, clumsy and a nerd. Also pretty mellow too.

>>61418849
>>61419290
>>61420320
These all seem like pretty good reasons for having Kanade be Aqua's love rival in a romance fic.

>>61421804
You really think this flatty will be able to rival Aqua's pure sex in a romance fic?

>>61422794
In a romance fic that involves actual romance and not just judging with male gaze she would totally be able to. She's a very sweet and witty girl.

Aqua would be the classic shy and innocent heroine route
Kanade would be the tomboy route

>>61422973
this weirdly makes me wonder which romance fics were written by a femanon.

>>61421603
perfect summation. She gets cuter every stream

>>61423512
My headcanon is that every fic tagged with romance is probably written by a woman.
Especially those that feature a man who acts like a yume's dream husbando. A male second person POV is a disguise as well as a way to get into the guy's head and flesh out how great he is for his woman who is the secret true self-insert.

He's onto us

>>61424935
Nobody move. I don't wanna go back to AO3...[/spoiler

>>61266290
Having to dick your wife Fubuki down on a daily basis because she's hungry for your blood and she would like nothing more than to suck you bone dry.

>>61368107
I believe in CC. He'll get it done.

>>61424622
My headcanon is that the fluffiest romance fics in the archive are written by men and that the most hardcore smut fics are written by women

>>61425819
What about the ones with both?

>>61425924
Men.
The more psychologically complex the romance, the more likely it is that it's written by woman.

She could be in this very thread...

I wonder if anyone in Japan writes fanfiction (in purely written form) or do all hobbyist writers in Japan just focus on original content since there's always a chance that you can make it big through syosetu.com

>>61427511
I mean you can check pixiv's novel section to find tagged fanfic from JP. We just have even less overlap with them than we do with the Koreans outside of that one anon who MTLed that Mio NTR fic.

>>61427659
Oh, didn't know they had a novel section in pixiv. Haven't used that site in ages.

>>61427511
>>61427659
There are quite a lot of Holo fics on Pixiv. I only browse for specifically NTR and there are several dozen just in that niche. Not the one who tried to archive an MTL by the way, I thought that was dumb

>>61418010
Son of The Fly submitted

>>61427869
I stopped using pixiv ever since Aitrash and Koikatsu utterly cluttered everything.
Its better to follow the artists in twitter

>>61428410
Son of the Fly is in!
>>61430511

>>61425127
Hopefully he doesn't figure out how that logic applies to yuri fics.

>>61425924
I mean, admittedly I write pretty fluffy kink, but in a certain sense the gap between doms and subs is actually more important to kink stuff than the gap between genders. Generally sub writers write more hardcore stuff, in my experience, whlie doms are often more concerned with things like responsibility in kink.

>>61430960
I hope we can last as long as we did last time. I wasn't expecting much, so seeing him make it so far was a pleasant surprise.

>>61266290
PekoMari yuri in a Catholic Girls High School!
They're caught in action by Father Fubuki
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9dXx6gr9tQ

>>61431978
Makes sense that both want what they can't easily have irl - subs would like to be able to take more without the risk of injury, and doms would like to know the perfect balance between responsibility and just going hard.

>>61424622
I don't think so, since I'm a man and I included romance as an important element; kink and sex is much better with love.

>>61432338 (me)
Also, Father Fubuki in this universe is a super buff dude like Sister from Arakawa Under the Bridge

>>61432764
A lot of us like to include romance as a headliner, but the main part of the anon's headcanon is the tag itself. I think I'll start using that tag in the date chapters of my series and smut ones if there was actual romance involved and not just a need to breed.

>>61432338
>>61432830
What would Father Fubuki do to them?

>>61433022
Make them repent like a good Christian

Anons of /wg/, From the bottom of my heart, I wish you all the best.

>>61435072
You too. No matter what happens always remember, we're all gonna make it.

>>61432428
Yeah, one of the many things that tempted me into writing AC6 smut is the idea of dominant Ayre being able to feel exactly how into it or not a sub Raven is via Contact.

Vanilla people think dominants would wish for slave magic or things like that, most real dominants I know would actively turn that down because it's already tricky enough figuring out the exact right lines to stay inside even with enthusiastic consent. On the other hand they'd almost all jump straight for thought or emotion reading or kink detection or things like that, because that's the actual hard part, huge QoL improvement.

>>61266290
Fucking Kronii’s sweaty tits while she complains about how gross and messy it is

>>61433018
I was hesistant to use "Romance" as a tag before, but decided to put it front and centre for The Oni's Rebellion to make the shift in direction clear.

>>61440653
I think we should let ourselves branch out a little and feel more comfortable with using some other tags. Fluff covers a wide range, and while romance can be fluffy, if you're writing something that is meant to be magically romantic, or showcase a very radiant love, you should let your story wear that badge proudly.

>>61440934
>>61440653
You can use the tags for multiple purposes in addition to just being descriptive after all. As something to decorate your story with, as a way to get attention and as a storytelling tool to set up and maybe subvert certain expectations.

newfag here, do you guys have any tips on how to improve this certain sentence? The context is (You) lying down on her lap, and as you fall asleep, you feel her start patting your head and playing around with your hair.
>Before you went under, you felt her hand on top of your head, ruffling your hair.
I'm not very sure if "going under" is the right term for falling asleep in this context.

>>61443723
well "going under" would fit in a context where you are extremely exhausted or almost forced by your body to go to sleep. You can also lose things like "drift off" "fell into slumber" "became unconscious to the world around you" There's a lot of pretty ways to describe conking out.

>>61413088
Write an outline or a first draft and post it, then it'll be possible to give detailed advice

>>61443932
>"going under" would fit in a context where you are extremely exhausted or almost forced by your body to go to sleep
then perfect, that was the flow I was going with here. Thanks.

>>61443723
Going under is wrong. The best context for it is going undeneath blankets in bed. Why not
>before you lay your head to rest on her cushiony thighs, you felt her nails softly scrape your head, entangling themselves your hair strands etc.

>>61308700
>>61310524
>>61310587
>>61311533
>>61317923
Thanks for the feedback, anons. This was a fun one to write

>>61329939
I haven't written anything with aunts so that's probably not me

>>61435072
Please don’t die Anon.

>>61435072
Hey, after you kill yourself, can I have you stuff?

>>61443723
just say blacked out instead of went under

>>61451065
No, I hate niggers.

>>61452347
blacked out has nothing to do with that, it means your mind blacked out

>>61453158
I don't like the word 'blacked', so no.

>>61454407
then use "whited out"

>>61456925
Is that even a real term?

>>61457246
It's what you do before waking up at the nearest Pokecenter.

thanks for the feedback, I'm glad that anons had fun reading it!

>>61270832
yes, cleaning it up more was going to require a complete rewrite so I shied away from doing that since it was just a for fun thing. the follow-up story will be a proper conversion when I get around to it. as for Miko's accent, it was something I considered putting in but disregarded as I felt I couldn't capture it effectively without also making things more cumbersome to read than they should be, so I went with trying to capture some of her mannerisms instead. as for the stairs, I initially considered it, but I liked the idea of Fubuki deciding to sidestep that kind of expected chase scene by just vaulting out of the building, so I opted for that route instead, since I felt it escalated the amount of danger the scene presented.

>>61271611
I'm not sure how I missed those. the double line breaks was something I just honestly hadn't thought about at the time, since I'm a bit out of practice. both corrections, as well as some missing punctuation, have been put into the text for future readers. as for stories with (you), I don't really like doing self-inserts, but I certainly wouldn't complain if someone else ran with that idea.

Does anyone here like pedo teasing lolicon smut?

>>61467878
No

>>61467878
Yes

>>61467878
Not if the author's being an attention whore about it.

So im constanly workshopping my abandoned wip of Horsegirl Fauna. I feel like Horsepussy is a must, but im gonna ask what other traits aside from the tails and the ears should fauna "inherit" from her ancestry?
currently the excuse is that her dad's genes, being a unicorn-like qilin, have finally kicked in. Maybe a reference to that "fauna's family is a horse, a druid and a tree" prompt idea

>>61452347
Spend more time outside and not on /v/

>>61305697
Excellent job, I've been waiting for this for a long time and it didn't disappoint
Your descriptions of what Suisei felt were wonderful and I loved the reveal at the end

>>61266221
There hasn't been a monster girl fic yet (at least to my knowledge) so I decided to write this. Let me know if it's any good.

Tags: NSFW, Matara, Monster Girl

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS9SvgRjqbLpEdXqpbmzbU9JxZyYIqov6DufPJxdfS-lKzjEEuMNJg_KZILbQTSr8lyqDFUyLzwa0cS/pub

>>61474811
This is Weirdanonv2, innit.

>>61475028
Yeah, her new design... speaks to me.

>>61471483
making her have to wear blinders in public so she doesn't get startled
her feet turn into hooves if she gets distracted or startled

>>61474811
That was pretty good, Matara reawakened my fetish for insectgirls so I've been hoping we'd get a fic with her
The length of time from introduction to grabbing boobs felt a little rushed, and some of the dialogue and descriptions felt a little stilted? There was a specific description I wanted to point out that felt weird to me, but I couldn't find it again so I guess it was fine if it didn't stick out to me on another re-read.

>>61474811
It would have been nice if you had have taken some time to show off roach mom's personality a bit more rather than just referencing wine and stuff. Also the antenna play was the best part, so I wish you had have made that more the focus rather than the more generic sex stuff.

>>61471483
maybe she gets taller and thicker?

>>61471483
Has to walk on her toes, which means she can't wear flats and has to either go barefoot or wear very high heels.

>>61477859
There was another part planned involving some of her insect stuff, but I've already written enough fics involving lactation and nursing handjobs so I decided to scrap it. Probably shouldn't've in retrospect.

>>61475974
>>61478368
>>61478690
well i dont plan on going full transformation, but i like the idea of her being bigger and her tiptoeing around. I think blinkers is a bit too much, specially since im researching a bit and they are mostly used to keep the horses focused.
Maybe having her aware of her new size makes her tiptoe a bit, plus her new dumpy knocking stuff around.
Do you guys think 2 meters its too tall or should i scale it down to 1.80 cm?

>>61482623 (Me)
also i was planning on making it so she feels concious of scarfing carrots and apples, since horses love them to death.
Maybe you offer her one and she's clearly salivating but pretendig she doesnt care

>>61266290
A story about fucking this rrat.

>>61483154
>bae turning into a ware rrat and can only change back if she gets mating pressed

>>61484094
>"So...if I DON'T mating press you...you'll stay this way?"
>"W-well yeah, but-"
>brings out the Kama Sutra

>>61483154
furries are so cringe but furry porn makes me cum so hard it makes my pee hole feel weird

>>61484094
>her rrat-like speed keeps evading your grasp
>set up a crazy contraption to trap her in your bedroom

>>61484341
>rrat bae becomes more of a rascal and despite her human form asking you to do this for her so she can change back, her ware rat form is having too much fun getting into trouble
>have a Rube Goldberg machine of shit to trap her with (most of it going wrong)
>finally get her in that one trap that puts her in bondage and she is forced to lay on the ground spread eagle while looking at you nervously
>"ch...cheesed to meet you!"

>>61483154
is this furry
i don't want to be a furry

>>61483154
>Fucking Bae in her human form
>She orgasms so hard it turns on her Rat Mode
>"U-Uh... I can explain," Bae says.
>To the surprise of both of you, her Rat Mode actually makes you even harder.
>"U-Uh... I can explain!" you say.

>>61484324
>>61484767
>getting caught up in connotations associated with labels instead of just fapping to what's hot and not giving a fuck

>>61484767
It's "mofumofu." Learn the difference.

>>61266290
>living with Promise monstergirls
>Bae in her were-rrat form is extra cheeky and mischievous
>have to chase her around every morning and plow her into the mattress until she calms down
>cowgirl Fauna is more relaxed but still hard to handle with her increased height and larger assets
>most afternoons are spent milking her enormous swollen jugs, sometimes she rides you reverse cowgirl until exhaustion
>lamia Kronii can be pretty intimidating depending on her mood
>if you're lucky, she'll relent to giving you a nursing tailjob
>harpy Mumei is quite dangerous
>you often find yourself smothered under her massive owl ass while she preens
>have to keep her well fed at all times so she doesn't rip into you with her talons
>IRyS uhhhhh turns into her giantess nephilim form and uses you as a human dildo

>>61485998
Eh with those horns Irys might be a goat/ deer.
So, of course, centaurys or satyrys

survive

>>61485998
>takes Sana's place in EN2
>is a nephilim
>has sex with a rat

irys is brimming with giantess subtext

>>61485998
IRyS can take on the traits of nearby monstergirls for a limited time
If you want to keep the giantess thing as well, just have Sana the giantess taking a really long sleep close by or something

>>61485071
I am repulsed.

>>61495237
Those paw things always feel like they'd be perfect for like a kemonomimi girl petplay thing.

>>61495237
god damn, look at those saucer areola, they're fucking huge, you could eat dinner off of one of them

>>61495476
A punishment, like not being allowed to grip things like a human could?

>>61495476
It's weird because they're well suited for it in theory, but I like tail plugs and they already have a tail...

>>61495813
...how do you know those tails aren't plugs?

>>61495876
They start above the butt, right? Is there a case where one doesn't?

>>61495737
I'm thinking of it coming from the idea of it making them seem more animal/feral.
>>61495813
I mean for Fubuki it could also be an ageplay thing given the whole foxes gain more tails as they get older thing.

>>61495983
Nah, I reckon they rise out of the pants. They're pulling the wool over our eyes, mate. They're all serial anal masturbators.

>>61471483
I feel like you either lean into the horse part and just steal notes from Uma Musume, or you make it a joke about horsegirls and have her tastes suddenly line up with what mumei likes.

>>61499823
>after 5 years in charge of the girl's choir, Father Fubuki is suddenly transferred to another church far away

>>61500940
Here's the full version.
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/112947775

>>61499823
>Father Ted, but it's Fubuki and she does the China yab
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6zkL91LzCMc
I have no idea who could play as Dougal and Father Jack, though

Who is baking?

>>61502353
Me. I'll bake in a bit.

Three posts early; forgive me. But here's a Senchou thread:
>>61502531
>>61502531
>>61502531

bump

>>61505470