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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>59971674 (Cross-thread) Where we discussed bass players, adopting Aqua, and how to out Stacy Suisei
/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.60331630
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Story Anchor, you know the deal

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! No stories on these shores

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>>60331530
>>60331484
>literally hag vs zoomer
fucking kek

>> No.60331955

>>60331864
Tensions break out once again...

>> No.60331965

>>60331864
Oh shit I hope no one thinks we're having some legitimate thread war and causes trouble

>> No.60332128

>>60331965
The moral of the story, always announce when you are about to start baking

>> No.60332347

>>60332128
True, and since we're all here we might as well stick to this one even though the last thread link is wrong

>> No.60332429

>>60332347
We should use the properly baked one imo.

>> No.60332515

>>60332429
I agree with this, the other one was made earlier and is more correctly made. Moving to that one now myself

>> No.60332690

Sticking with this one. Hags>zoomers

>> No.60332765
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>>60332690
Put aside your petty ideals and use the thread that was made correctly, you cretin.

>> No.60332865

>>60332765
Nah, I'd rather set sail for hag booty any day of the week.

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I'm going to post on both threads

>> No.60333992

>>60333664
I'm going to post on NEITHER thread.

Oh, wait just a second...

>> No.60335196

There's a whiff of earlyfag about the insistence on a format.

>> No.60335254

Also, here's a confidence boost for my boys here in the thread.
https://youtube.com/shorts/AMPmNDw-7FA?si=rWe9Z-fRI9Mo-KcY

>> No.60335480

>>60331530
I want to defeat Marine in a naval battle. And then take her captive (consensually)

>> No.60335572

>>60335480
I'd like to non-consensually take her captive and non-consensually invade her lips with my pink cigar.

>> No.60335812

>>60335572
Would you still do it if she liked it?

>> No.60335852

>>60335812
Ehhh, that takes a lot of the fun out of it... Well, if someone put a gun to my head, I would.

>> No.60335905

>>60335852
>want to rape a girl
>she's into it so you lose interest
>she then rapes you
>somehow it gets you in the mood

>> No.60335952

>>60335905
I didn't ask to be this way! But I enjoy it all the same, as long as there's rape involved. I definitely don't hope she does all sorts of kinky shit with my butthole.

>> No.60335954

I would watch football and tell Marine to get me a fucking beer while Aqua is in her room playing video games with headphones on, trying to escape the grim reality in her home.

>> No.60336015

>>60335954
That thought makes me so wet, Anon. And I don't even have a vagina.

>> No.60336245

>>60335196
Nigga, the op links to the wrong thread.

>> No.60336277

>>60336245
Oh no, a mistake! How very, shall we say, HUMAN.

>> No.60336306

>>60336277
Are you ogey anon?

>> No.60336336

>>60335196
>>60336277
You're fighting ghosts. The Bae thread is obviously made by a human as well, have you even checked to see the posts made by the OP? I personally don't care for the thread edition but you must be completely fucking braindead to start screaming earlyfag whenever someone does something you don't like.

>> No.60336472

>>60335196
>>60336277
what the fuck is your problem

>> No.60336747

>>60336306
>>60336336
>>60336472
Lady, please. You turned tail and ran once already. At least have the decency to stay gone.

>> No.60336981

>>60331530
Actual previous thread: >>60171799

>> No.60337114

>>60335905
>want to rape a girl
>she's into it so you lose interest
>she then rapes you
>somehow it gets you in the mood
>you're into it so she loses interest
>you then rape her
>somehow it gets her in the mood
>she's into it so you lose interest
>she then rapes you
>somehow it gets you in the mood
and so on, and so on

>> No.60337182

>>60336336
NTA but while both are clearly human-made threads, someone who isn't the OP can insist on using one of them still.

>> No.60337417

>>60337182
That's fine, but the person I was replying to was implying that the other thread was made by a bot/the long gone earlyfag.

>> No.60337507

>>60337417
I think >>60335196 is just suspecting the posts complaining about the incorrect previous thread, not either the OP of thread.

>> No.60337510

>>60337114
Wait, isn't that... a timeloop?

>> No.60337532

>>60337507 (me)
*not either thread's OP
Posted too early

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>> No.60337876

>>60337510
Kronii will interrupt it by jerking you off at super speed.

>> No.60338018
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>>60337876
>remember that time Fubuki touched your leg and you creamed yourself?
>that was me anon!
>I jerked you off at super speed so you'd think you nutted to a woman's touch!

>> No.60338379

>>60338018
Kronii acting like reverse flash and stealing all of anon's first experiences

>> No.60338613

>>60338018
>"Bullshit."
>"Are you doubting me?! You think I can't do it?! Here, watch this!"
>"Watch wh-"
>dopamine instantly floods your brain
>in the blink of an eye, Kronii's mouth is full, her cheeks noticeably bulging as she glares at you
>also your dick is sopping wet

>> No.60338889

>>60338018
>"Bullshit."
>"Are you doubting me?! You think I can't do it?! Here, wat-"
>"No you watch this!" Anon shouts while running out of the room.
>after 15 minutes or so passed, he comes back, his pants clearly stained in cum
>"W-what did you do..?"
>"I just had Fubuki touch my leg again. Don't you ever underestimate my love for that cute fox hag, bitch!"

>> No.60339337

>>60338613
>>60338889
How nice of Kronii to let anon cum twice in separate timelines.

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Need more Fubuki fluff fr fr

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>>60331668
That "slut Nene" prompt continues to live rent-free inside my head, and I feel compelled to share my dumb idea.
>Nene is the school bicycle, has banged almost all of the male student body and a good chunk of the girls too
>rather than being averse to her, you're one of the many boys who freely and frequently "make use" of her when it pleases you
>you also frequently remind yourself that you're definitely NOT emotionally invested in her. that would make you a cuck, and you are NOT a cuck. she's just some air-headed slut who happens to be a fun lay, end of story
>but the more you learn about her goofy yet endearing life outside of her sexual escapades, the harder it gets to believe your own bullshit
>finally you realize to your horror that you're starting to fall for her as a person, and thus turning into the NTR protagonist you were so afraid of becoming

>> No.60341159

>>60340610
>Nene, I love you
>Yayy! Nene loves Anon too!
>No I mean... I love you and want to be your boyfriend.
>Really? You should be my husband then!
>Wh... you want to get married?
>Of course, Nene is already married with the other boys, so you can join the husband collection!

>> No.60341273

>>60340610
>NTR protagonist
So would you be a gyaru-oh delinquent, a high schooler that's somehow still a shota, or a faceless muscle man?
This idea sounds like it would have a "time limit" coming from you trying to get Nene to really fall for you before she finally crosses off the list with the last guy she hasn't fucked yet, your nerdy best friend.

>> No.60341609

>>60340555
We've got plenty already. I think we need more Fubuki ryona

>> No.60343641

>>60341159
Then it's not NTR anymore, just polyandry.

>> No.60343740

>>60343641
It doesn't have to actually be NTR. The "afraid of being a cuck" thing was intended to be played for humor.

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>fucked up the OP
My bad.

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>>60344098
You think an apology is enough to settle this? You're gonna put some make-up and holo cosplay on and all of /wg/ will take turns ravaging your ass.

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>>60344532
Im not an Aqua crew

>> No.60344808

>>60344532
You're giving me pekofag flashbacks.

>> No.60345136

>>60344808
Boner flashbacks for me. I jerked it to that fix.

>> No.60345194

>>60340610
>>60341159
>Nene's school is found to be the one with the happiest students nationwide
>hundreds of schools copy her school's policies and pecularities in vain

>> No.60345603

>You've always been a decent looking normal guy
>Not a super model, but not ugly
>Kinda small due to malnourishment while growing up, you look like a child despite being in your early 20s
>One day when playing Counter Strike with the boys one of them suggests you stream it
>You plug in your camera and do a small Counter Strike stream
>You build up a small community
>One day while scrolling twitter you see that Holostars applications are open
>"Eh, why not, they're not gonna pick me anyway"
>You're not even a vtuber, you do a live action audition
>A few days pass
>You get an email
>It says that while you haven't been accepted into Holostars, there's a staff position available that Cover is interested in interviewing you for
>You're hesitant at first, but send an email asking about the position
>"Well anon, some of the girls have been extremely stressed lately, due to your build, we feel that you could be useful as a sort of "relief" for them, if you're interested, call the number down below, we'll arrange a flight to Japan and you can get started"
Part 1, idk if I'll do a part 2

>> No.60345889

>>60345194
Kek, this reminds me of the case of Finnish education system. People from all over the world come to marvel at the Finnish education system even now that Finland has dropped significantly in the rankings and they're always amazed at how laidback and easygoing everything is, but I was still school age when Finland dominated those PISA tests and it was completely different then. They always go "omg, Finnish kids don't do tests all the time and have no homework" but back in my day that's exactly what we did - and we had some old school strict disciplinarian teachers still around.

>> No.60345950

>>60345889
>he didn't know about his local "Nene"

>> No.60346419

>>60336747
It's sad to see a schizophrenic believe their own delusions.

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>>60345950
There's only one Nene as perfect as Nene.
And that's Nene.

>> No.60348553

>>60340610
>go to the same school as nene
>to you she's the school angel
>you're surprised that she doesn't have a boy friend.
>you see her be friendly with a lot of students, but no one specifically lovey dovey towards
>you work up the strength to confess to her.
>she gets genuinely happy but tells you to meet her on the roof after school.
>school ends and you walk up
>you see Nene getting railed by serval different guys and some girls
>"AH~ my new boyfriend, anon showed up!" she cheers
>you're horrified to see the school angel being used in such a way
>all the guys are super supportive and pat you on the back
>"way to go anon! You finally confessed to nene!"
>"wow anon confessed to nene?"
>you're genuinely confused. but the crowd basically lifts you and leads you Infront of nene while some of the others spread nene's legs open for you.
>"since you're new we'll let you have her to yourself, is just courtesy!"

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Mio!

>> No.60350212

>>60348553
>"we'll leave you alone with her for your first times - but do try to give Nene a good time, will you? not everyone deserves her."
>they leave you alone with Nene, she giggles happily
>"so, what do you want to do with Nene? we'll take turns picking what to do, but you can go first. I'm sure you thought a lot about doing it with me, so go and make your dreams come true!"
>you hesistate, still a bit overwhelmed and unsure what to go for
>Nene hands you a long list of sex positions and associated activities
>"here, this will help! the green ones are easiest, and the one with a star are the most popular!"

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>>60331668
You and Shiori are sent to Holo Reformatory Boarding School after she convinces you to beat the P.E teacher into a coma with a bat because she told you he perved on her, and it's a bit of an inmates running the asylum situation there so the two of you have to stick together to survive.

>AKA Bully with more schizophrenia and chuubas

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>> No.60355497

>>60350212
>confused, you look at the selection of poses
>literally an expanded kamasutra in alphabetic order
>"Nene... what the actual fuck is this?"
>"What?"
>"This!" You say while pointing at a random pose with your finger
>"Ah! The amazon press? You got it Anon!"

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>> No.60356819

>>60355497
>after thoroughly pressing you like an amazon queen, Nene looks at the list to take her pick and laughs
>"you know what Anon? I liked that a lot and you came so much after your eyes rolled back...let's go for another round!"

>> No.60357134

>>60356819
>everyone else comes back in
>anon is a dried out husk
>some guys go back to fucking nene
>the most muscular guy comes to help you out and gives you water
>"yeah, this is what happened my first time too"

>> No.60358516

>>60357134
This and the whole chain are a really wholesome story. I like it.

>> No.60359589

>>60357134
>By the end of the year, Anon goes from twink nerdy guy to an absolutely ripped chad
>Denies women left and right, because there's only one girl for him (and everybody else)
>Nenechi's husband army grows stronger.

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>> No.60360747

One day I will write a story about Fubuki and use the word shirocummies.

>> No.60362394

>>60360747
Fubuki age play with diapers and a pacifier. Then you finger her until your hand's covered in her love honey and say "Oh, look at yourself, you made a shirocummie!" In a baby voice.

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>> No.60362945

>>60360747
I was greatly amused at this prospect...

>>60362394
...until, just as quickly as it appeared, my amusement turned to horror.

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>>60362394
I don't think 40IQ!Fubuki has been done yet so you could probably use it for that

>> No.60365005

Shiracummie Fuckbuki?

>> No.60365309

>>60365005
That's what she calls herself during mating season.

>> No.60365545
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Council is going to war SMT style, who among the other holo members, will join who's army?

>> No.60367355

>>60365545
Are we talking the classic Chaos/Neutral/Law split?

>> No.60367558

>>60367355
i had the idea that the 5 members of council would be the split.

but you could split it up as say...Bae, and Sana repping chaos, kronii and mumei repping law, and fauna being neutral

>> No.60368869

>>60367558
>Anon, trust me killing the rest of council is the only way we can fix this.

>> No.60369317

>>60367558
>Mumei
>Law
Mumei and Irys are neutral, Sana and Fauna are Law and Bae/Kronii for Chaos

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>>60367558
Played this fast and loose, and I dont know every holo 100% but my thoughts:
>Bae: High Chaos. Those who value freedom above all else, or those who cannot help their nature
>Sana: Low Chaos. Value freedom, but acknowledge that some systems must be observed. "Rules are merely suggestions"
>Mumei: Low Law. Rules are best for governing the rule, however, rules must be flexible, as true governance is a two-way street.
>Kronii: High Law. Order at all costs. Stability is only achieved through strict adherence to rules.
>Fauna: Neutral. Those who either seek a balance between the extremes or have no real stake in the conflict.

>> No.60369652

>>60369317
Split it further have them ostensibly be in these three factions but by the end everyone's just split off into their own subfaction. Something like Mumei going full "kill everyone else" neutral, while IRyS is still at "we can unite together to fix this" neutral.

>> No.60372421

>>60369317
alrigjt, i'll bite. why would kronii be law when time is a concrete construct and everyone is forced to follow its extremely strict pattern

>> No.60372857

>>60372421
Because Kronii isn't *record scratch* and as such her domination over time is chaotic.
With her route being to kill the law faction in order to seize Fauna's apple so she can go back to the beggining and replant the Tree of Time with seeds tainted by Chaos.

>> No.60373383

>>60372421
Because time is uncaring, unfeeling and unrelenting, and given enough time, everything will change and nothing survives the passage of time.
The idea i have is that order is not natural, and given enough time, structures will crumble and will give to chaos eventually

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Kronii!

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>> No.60376057

>>60373383
that's not a totally bad explanation. making kronoo's path more akin to the white ending in smt4, which would fit her doomer side.

fauna, I imagine, would reduce the world to nothing but plants, leaving nature being the one true ruler.

mumei would have you and her be the universes, one true monarch, and all of society will be formed in your image

bae would have a world completely devoid of rules, including those caused by natural forces, turning the universe into a shapeless mass

and im kinda blanking on what type of universe sana would make

perhaps leaving IrYS as the true neutral path to try to restore the universe back to its original state and restore hope to humanity.

>> No.60376912

>>60376004
The kind of ass to cheat behind your back

>> No.60377030

>>60376057
I think Sana and Kronii would share a path. Like you said, they'd get the SMT4 white ending. Let time pass, uncaring, as everything falls to chaos and eventually entropy, leading to an empty void. Infinite space filled with nothing but time, forever.
Now, if you followed Bae's path, would that end in a mutual pseudo-suicide as you both become part of the new, distorted universe, or would it end similar to Mumei's but without the ruling part, just both of you watching uncaring?

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>>60376057
i never played a smt game but i was thinking that you could synthetize everything to a single ideal. If Kronii's is "Unrelenting" (as in, Chaos eventually crumbles everything, Sana is "Entrophy", a mirror of Kronii's vision
Even in the cold vaccuum of the uncaring space, law eventually settles in and stablishes order.
On the other hand, Fauna is "Symbiosis". Every single lifeform fusing into a single entity, like a tree. Absolute order through understanding and empathizing with every single member of the organism.
Bae would be "Freedom". By tearing down even the natural laws of the universe, lifeforms would truly be free to become gods or to cease existing. A truly chaotic ending of absolute anarchy

Then "hope", the hope of a better tomorrow, and "defiance" for its humans who create laws and punishments, defiying a god's judgement

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>>60376005
I want to fuck this big titted doomer

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>>60331668
talking about weird esoteric shit with shiori until the topic becomes lewd and suddenly she's completely embarassed

>> No.60382704

>>60377988
for never playing a game, you nailed it pretty well.
but like >>60377030 suggested, i think bae's route
would lead to everyone becoming gods or deciding to join the formless chaos, making the strongest the rulers of the universe.

>> No.60383317

All of this discussion is just making me imagine the "true ending" being a new universe being created, with 6 ordinary girls waking up to form a group called promise.

>> No.60383659

>>60383317
A true ending would be, ironically, the creation of Council.
No one holds power over the others, law and chaos coexist and humans are free to pursue their own destiny

>> No.60385857

>>60383659
>>60377988
>>60383317
with all that discussed, what's your rpg party to fight the gods looking like

1 girl to rep the route you chose, and 3 you think would fit your team.

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>>60385857
>Chaos
>Bae, Shiori, Mori and Chloe
ONE MORE GOD REJECTED

>> No.60386138

>>60385857
Assuming we're not limiting ourselves to just EN, I like to think Polka would be the "Pixie" equivalent who joins you at the start of the game, and her alignment shifts depending on which route you go down. Her high-energy "circus" personality becomes more prevalent in the Chaos route, while her low-energy "bookworm" side comes out more in the Law route.

>> No.60386558

>>60376004
I want to put my penis between those cheeks...

>> No.60386669

>>60385857
>true neutral because I hate myself
IRyS, Iroha, Anya, and Sora
gotta work hard for the good ending

>> No.60389536

Wake up, anon. It's time to move your current WIP to the backlog and start another WIP.

>> No.60393847

I want to fuck Fubuki...

>> No.60395605
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>>60389536
Not again...

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>>60389536
I will resist

>> No.60400116

>>60389536
I'll just work on all of them at the same time. That always works, right?

>> No.60400144

>>60389536
Bold of you to assume there's anything going on inside my head

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>>60389536

>> No.60401470

>>60393847
Only if you make yourself look like Mads Mikkelsen.

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>been trying to write the Ciyana V. Goddesses fight for nearly five days now
>It's be a slow painful endeavor
>Realize it's because I'm bored of the fight because it's not actually a fight between gods, it's just a regular fight with some magic elements
>I'm going to have to basically re-work the entirety of the 11 page first half of the conflict

So how are your WIPs coming fellas?

>> No.60403513

>>60402356
On the one hand, I made negative progress because I went back to writing more rather than doing final editing. On the other hand, the story is longer and more fun now.

>> No.60405366

>>60386558
Are you talking about fucking her cheeks

>> No.60407664

>>60405366
No, they want to fuck Ayame's ass but their cock isn't big enough to get past her cheeks.

>> No.60408353

>>60407664
Reminds me of the "you get to fuck your oshi but your cock shrinks because of it" thought experiments.

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>>60408353
I'd take that for sure - I'd just never stick in. Spend the rest of my life eating her out, keeping her in a state of constant orgasm.

>> No.60408576

>>60408527
I don't think you're supposed to be able to avoid it, but I don't want to inhibit your fantasy.

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>>60331668
Fubuki needs your help. Kurokami's going through "that time of year" again, and she gets a bit ornery when her needs go unmet. Your friend figures you can help her sister "chill out," so to speak.

>> No.60409781

>>60408576
That's the point, son, you never know until you try - and since we'll never be able to try, we'll never know for sure it won't work... meaning it's just as valid as any other fantasy. I beat the system.

My next trick: wishing for infinite wishes.

>>60409508
I'll do it. Please, God! PLEASE!

>> No.60410296

>>60408353
I know that my dick would turn into a glorified clitoris in just a few days, but I'd still say "worth it".

>> No.60410490

>>60409508
I want Kuro to unleash her anger on my balls.

>> No.60410648

>>60410296
Good idea, yours can hardly get any smaller than it already is

>> No.60410803

>>60410648
Shut up Shion.

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>>60409508
>Kurokami sprawled out on the couch, squirming and sweating up a storm while a fan blows directly at her in a vain effort to alleviate the discomfort
>"Kuro-chan, Kuro-chan!"
>"Fuck off, Fubuki, I am REALLY not in the mood for your bullshit right now."
>"But I brought help!"
>"The fuck do you mean you brought-"
>her nose twitches as she catches a whiff of that smell
>that boy smell
>she instantly bolts upright and locks on to you with an intensity in her eyes that sets off your fight-or-flight instinct
>from your perspective she looks like she's about to vault over the couch and sink her fangs into your jugular

>this may have been a bad idea

>> No.60411377

>>60410985
>a minute earlier
>Fubuki opens the door
>"this might be a bit inappropriate, but please make sure you're...physically ready when I introduce you to Kuro-chan, okay? My sister can be very...hm...impatient, and I know it's hard for guys to get going under pressure."

>> No.60411659

>>60410985
>>60411377
>Kuro half-tackles you while pulling your pants and underwear down
>she takes a moment to sniff your boner
>"ah...good enough!"
>she grabs you and tosses you onto the couch
>you lie there overwhelmed while she undresses in a flash and starts riding you
>she pins your hands down with her own and starts sniffing and licking your face before growling in your ear
>"cum when you want, I don't give a fuck. But you better stay hard until I'm done, boy."

>> No.60412357

>>60409508
I ask fubuki why me? Im being exploited 24/7… this fucking company does not respect my time nor pays me enough.
I call fubuki a goddamn slave driver and a capitalist pig,as i rally my anon coworkers for a union.
We later seize the means of reproduction

>> No.60412787

>>60412357
Good idea, just make sure the authoritarian socialists don't seize power and arrest everyone who disagrees with them as counterrevolutionary.

>> No.60412851

>>60412787
>The fic turns into Animal Farm, where only a certain group of Anons get to fuck Fubuki
>"Some anons are more equal than others."

>> No.60413097

>>60407664
This is something I've seen in a lot of one-off artworks but never in a properly written scene. That's a really hot femdom concept to me, denial literally built into your respective anatomies

>> No.60413501

Kurokami should team up with Gawr and Yoruno Sora to form an anti-hero team.

>> No.60413596

>>60413097
Probably because at its core, it is just a one-off 'gag' preceding something like humiliation/femdom... Also because in order to work the prose needs to be as quick shot as the sex so it would mostly be a humiliation thing.

>> No.60413844

>>60413596
It doesn't have to be a surprise to both involved parties, it could be like, the girl is well aware that Anon's shrimpdick can't penetrate her and smugly grinds him to completion to see him squirm. It could even be the finisher to a bunch of previous verbal foreplay or foreplay itself to something more intense, like BDSM or NTR

>> No.60416132

>>60413844
Ayame NTR...

>> No.60416628

>>60416132
Now that you mention it I've always thought rrat!Ayame would be a great fit for an NTS scenario, sort of like the basic shell for Our Cures where Anon becomes her special exception, but instead of monopolizing her he gets turned on by her slut activities and she just keeps fucking around as usual so she can report about it to him

>> No.60417267

>>60416132
>Unfortunately for you Ayame, my dick is so microscopic there's no way you can rape me with your ass. The minute stimulation of your ass cheeks has already emptied out my balls for the week. My virginity is secured!

>> No.60419841

>>60417267
Sounds like a guy Marine would end up with.

>> No.60420364

>>60419841
speaking of marine not scoring, im surprised that tale about her highschool crush now working with her didnt spawn any fics

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>>60331668
I would use Ayatsuji's route in Amagami (the visual novel is better than the anime) as an inspiration for rrat!Ayame.
In front of other people, Ayame is a lovable goof that is adored by everyone as the cutest girl in the school. But in reality it's all an act that she is doing because she is addicted to all the attention and love she is showered with, and because she can live her life on easy mode thanks to essentially having an army of slaves (male classmates) willing to do anything to please her.
Then you catch her exposing her true self and from then on she drops the act when it's just the two of you: she is openly lazy, talks shit about you and everyone else, blackmails you into not revealing her true self (without you even contemplating the option of revealing it to others) etc.
Personally though, I would also prefer that deep inside Ayame has a good heart and not make a malicious Ayame hate fic. She could go through a redemption arc (thanks to your influence) where she drops the good girl act but turns over a new leaf and stops taking advantage of others. The boys would feel betrayed and the girls would see this as a chance to bully her.

>> No.60420966

>>60419841
That's just making me imagine Ayame scrapping her fingers on top of her ass to catch the droplets of cum on her back and drinks from her fingers as she makes another plot to steal Anon's virginity as he goes off to his date with Marine.

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