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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>59281675 (where we had a bit of a history lesson on /wg/ lore, a lot of discussion about Shiori, and the beginnings of a grammar war)
/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.59423165
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.59423199
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap!
There were 3 stories posted last thread.

Anon's Shiori GT Dump >>59296648
Tags: Tragedy, Drama, Imouto, Fluff, Teasing, other stuff

Hololive x Filthy Frank Universe Greentext??? >>59353415
Tags: Hololive, Cancer, Filthy Frank

Alternate Ending to Shiori GT Dump Anon's Timeloop Curse Story >>59411724
Tags: Shiori, greentext, trauma, timeloop, doujin

>> No.59423563
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I love my friend, and my enemy!

>> No.59424256
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Another one for this cute fox.

>> No.59424270
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I like this thread. This is a good thread.

>> No.59425147

>>59423199
A dining one-shot about inviting Fubuki to dinner and feeding her dishes prepared with the body parts of Mio. After she's sampled a little of everything and finished half her plate, you tell her it's her best friend Mio and reveal her severed head on a silver platter. Then as Fubuki screams and throws up, you force her to eat the rest under threat of death. Ending is up to choice but I suggest butchering and eating Fubuki as she is now a delicacy - fox stuffed with wolf.

>> No.59426087

FUCK this fox

>> No.59426585

>>59426087
*SIGH* Well, I guess I just gotta take one for the team this time. *unzips dick*

>> No.59426654

>>59425147
This, but the protagonist is Ayame, the hungry hungry oni, instead of you.

>> No.59427498
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>>59426087
I concur, anon.
>>59426585
No, anon, don't worry; I'll handle it for you.

>> No.59427669
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>>59427498
Please, I insist. How would I live with myself if I let someone else sacrifice themselves for my sake.

>> No.59427932
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>>59423199
Word of the Thread
Use them to inspire whatever you want as long as it's chuuba related
>Riches
>Liberty
>Fears
For extra context the table these come from is called Visions & Dreams

>> No.59427961

>>59425147
And you do this because the two of them have being going on dates in total secrecy from you.

>> No.59428966

>>59427498
>>59426585
>>59427669
>it's been 15 minutes of Anons volunteering over each other to fuck Fubuki
>she's had enough so she closes her legs, gets dressed and leaves
>they don't notice until half an hour later

>> No.59429072

>>59428966
>"Well, how about this: I take the back and you'll handle the front... wait, where's Fubuki?"

>> No.59429123

>>59423199
Autism sex with kaela where kaela is to autistic to even understand what's happening when she orgasams

>> No.59430248
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>energy and writing juices are at an all time low
>listen to Mio's angelic singing voice
>fueled with intense desire to continue my story so that I can one day write about sweeping that wonderful wolf off her feet
We're back.

>> No.59430694
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>Finally began writing
We're so back.

>> No.59430730

>>59424270
That is an exquisite Fubukus.

>> No.59430852

>>59428966
That's what they get for not writing proper stories involving her.

>> No.59430876

>>59430248
I'll give you some of my juices of you're picking up what I'm layin down

>> No.59430973
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>>59430876
What kind you got and what's your rate per box?

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>>59430876
Minor spelling mistake! That's a paddlin'.

>> No.59431095

>>59430973
Is this what happens when Lui becomes aroused?

>> No.59431633
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>>59431095
That's what I imagine her doing at least. Although, the Lui I've formed so far is so collected and professional, I'm not sure if she would let a tell like that slip. On the other hand, I could see her purposely flaunting her headwing boner in a seductive way.

>> No.59432604

>>59431095
>>59431633
>Lui sees your bare back for the first time
>Her wings flap and she has to hold them in place like a man hiding a boner

>> No.59433020
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>>59430973
>>59431095
>>59431633
>>59432604
As the resident profesional in Kemonos, one cornerstone often forgotten by hacks and lazy dumbasses is the fact that animal anatomy should work and be there.
Girls showing emotions through tails, Polka rotating her ears a bit to hear you better, bird girls being a bit lighter, Nene having a long tongue, etc.

I've come to hate nekomimi because its a lazy "add a headband with cat ears and call it a day"

>> No.59433862
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>>59433020
>Okayu's tail thrashing back and forth when she sees you talking to another girl

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>>59433020
>long tongue Nene
Please tell me more.

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>>59434421
While not all bears have really long tongues, they have a longer tongue than average, this is how they scope up a lot of stuff they find tasty.
Notoriously, Sunbears (the ones that look like retards but are fairly innofensive) are the ones with long tongues.
Also, depending on the place, ant eaters are also known as "anteater bear"

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>>59434668
While Nene is actually human in my story, but has a bear god's blessing, she wouldn't necessarily have this trait.I might just give her a surprisingly long tongue that can wrap around Anon's knob though. Thanks for the tip bro.

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>>59434790
hey happy to help. I love silly animals. Have a gigant ant eater.
Fun fact: in southamerican folklore, specially guarani, the gigant ant eater is depicted as the strongest animal under the heavens, as he's "compassionate with humans, gentle with the forest, unyielding against the great jungle cat (the jaguar) and holds no territory for himself"

>> No.59435238

>>59435027
Fun Fact: anteaters mostly eat termites.

>> No.59435358
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>>59435238
Fun fact: they are also really cute and silly

>> No.59435595

>>59434790
>>59433020
So Nene can trigger your gag reflex while French kissing?

>> No.59435769

>>59435595
So, deepthroating you with her tongue? hot

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>>59435595
>>59435769
Literally the first thing I thought of to introduce that trait.

>> No.59436064
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>>59435595
>>59435769
>"Husbands and wives are supposed to kiss, right? So Super Hyper Ultra Ultimate Deluxe Perfect Amazing Shining God 東方不敗 Master Ginga Victory Strong Cute Beautiful Galaxy Baby 無限 無敵 無双 Nenechi will give her husband the longest deepest bestest kiss ever!"

>> No.59436090
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59436090

Even after all these years, anteaters still instantly make me think of Neon Genesis Evanjellydonut

>> No.59436238

Anteaters make me think of /hfz/ (they're villains who stop the small wrestling feds from streaming)

>> No.59436356

>>59436090
>>59436238
but they are friend-shaped....

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>>59436356
>he fell for the deception

>> No.59438852

>>59435595
>>59435769
>>59435881
>>59436064
Imagine having fun with grabbing Nene by the tongue when she gets too cheeky with it (she likes you playing with her that way).

>> No.59439292

>>59438852
Imagine her fucking making a cock wrap with her tongue during a bj

>> No.59440964

>>59439292
I call it the Dicka constrictor.

>> No.59443328

>>59386003
She'll fare better in this part, don't worry. A Hedonist's Reckoning was about Ayame suffering the consequences of an actual transgression, and thus didn't leave her much room to do things because she spent most of the story on your lap and in your grip. But she'll get more affection and opportunities to show her quality in the sequel.
>>59433020
I had a similar thought a month or so, except with demons and similar supernatural beings rather than animals. I'd like to read more about kemonomimi-specific things too, though - like the anatomy you mentioned, or some take on the "human rights" angle that gets brought up sometimes.

>> No.59444902

>>59423151
Too many ideas, too little time

>> No.59445128

>>59444902
Too little willpower, too little motivation, my penis is too little for a pocket pussy... wait, what?

>> No.59445252

>>59445128
everything okay bro...do you need to share something with the class?

>> No.59448334

>>59445252
N-no. I've shared too much already and must away.

>> No.59448724

>>59448334
nothing to be ashamed of. you know they say it's not your size, it's how you use it.

>> No.59450934
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>>59448724
B-bruh...!

>> No.59451635

>>59448334
This anon >>59448724 is wrong, it's all about your size, and you will be laughed at and stepped on by your oshi

>> No.59451741

>>59451635
hi Risu

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>>59451741
I forgot Risu was a total sizequeen. The sheer powerrush youd get if she looked down and went "that'll do."

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>>59452181
Let's see if she thinks it's "too small" when it's pushed into her anus with no lube.

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>>59448724
>>59451635
>getting laughed at for your size
>pushing your oshi down onto the bed
>blowing your oshi's mind with the best oral she's ever received

listen bros we're gonna make it you just gotta get in there

>> No.59453647

>>59453331
Small dick humiliation to instant loss is an interesting idea...

>> No.59453842
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>just want my useless pencildick to be made fun of and denied womanly nirvana
>oshi immediately orgasms and collapses into dogeza after my tongue grazes her clit
help... it wasn't supposed to be like this...

>> No.59457405
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Persevere!

>> No.59461557

>>59457405
built for deepthroating

>> No.59463744

>>59457405
Imagine that Shiori was the nerdy girl in high school you bullied, only for her to grow up as this big-titted goth goddess

>> No.59463952
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>>59463744
I don't know about you, but bullying a lady was something I'd never do. Sure it probably didn't land me some of the girls who put out more, I caught plenty of nerdy/scene/emo girls by being a listening ear who also had a lot of body hair. The places we would get up to for some dry humping. What simple times those were.

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>>59457405
>Ywn have Nerd Fauna and Nerd Shiori do all your school work in exchange for fucking them every day even though you'd dick them for free

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>>59464085
>Nerd Irys rings your doorbell one night and offers to tutor you for your SATs in exchange for giving you a blowjob

>> No.59464714

>>59464085
>>59464191
fujocast extended universe WHEN

>> No.59466921
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>Make your fic happen parallel to actual Hololive events
>Need to rewrite a whole section because you fucked up the timeline
I'm gonna kill myself

>> No.59467008

>>59464714
When the anon writing fujo fantasies comes back.

>> No.59468466

>>59466921
What did you do, anon?

>> No.59469451

>>59468466
Nothing too devastating, at least. I'll just have to jam one more scene in the middle of the scene I'm currently writing, and do a bit more archive digging to get everything right.
Let's just say it has something to do with Mario Kart and leave it at that

>> No.59474434
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>> No.59474659

>>59467008
BUT I WANT FAUNA'S GREEN BUSH NOW!

>> No.59475657

>>59474434

Why is she blushing, Anon?

>> No.59475969

>>59475657
She really, REALLY wants her eggs fertilized before it's too late.

>> No.59476271

>>59475657
Choco accidentally said her wish out loud(She really wants a husband)

>> No.59476497

>>59475969
>"Oh anon, my eggs are about to expire! you have to breed me like the savage you are"
>"W-What? that machine can do what?"
>"H-hey lets not dwaddle in that...my eggs could be driying as we speak...the last one might croak you know?"
>"N-no..that machine must...that machine bust be liying right? there's no way i have that must time and eggs in there hahahaah"
>"The number is abnormaly high? T-that must be the last hurrah! you have to breed me, i promise! if you hurry you might get a kid in me!

>> No.59478921

>>59464714
Is Shiori a fujo? I thought she ships the fictional men with herself.

>> No.59479189

>>59453331
Turns out you were the one with the long tongue.

>> No.59479513

>>59423199
Anon is dead. Someone in Cover Corp killed him. For what reason, he does not know.
Yet, that is.
That's because, despite his death, his soul still clings to the mortal plane. In this spirit form, he has gained the power to possess various animals and even humans. Each person he possesses can bring him closer to the mystery of his death...
Though it wouldn't hurt to possess some of the beauties in Hololive and fool around for a bit, right?

>> No.59479812

>>59479513
Oh hey, I played that game!

>> No.59479967

>>59479812
This scenario popped up in my head the instant I got into it
I wish they don't screw up the full version

>> No.59480097

>>59479812
Sounds like a worse Ghost Trick.

>> No.59480294

>>59479513
Okay I know this isn't what the prompt is about but this made me think of that doppelganger suisei idea from like two threads back and Ghost Trick. Which makes me think of this being like a mystery fic where (You) initially think you're suisei due to possessing her old body/model and thinking you must have been betrayed go on an adventure that inadvertently solves your own murder before revealing you aren't suisei.
...
Though I'm pretty sure you'd have to do a lot to hide where this premise came from (perhaps by stealing ideas from the actual doppleganger suisei idea) in order to hide this twist.

>> No.59480968

>>59480294
If it's gonna be a Tomato Surprise, it should be easy enough. It's all in the execution and minor details anyway. Though I still want Anon to possess someone from Hololive and realize the pleasures of the other flesh...

>> No.59481520

>>59480968
I mean if you're running with the old!Suisei possession angle that would be one those things you can use to hide to foreshadowing by making it horny since it disguises the possession powers and the fact that the pleasure is unfamiliar. So when "Suisei" has to possess someone to solve a puzzle else it just gets treated as a horny aside rather than foreshadowing that old!Suisei isn't actually the one with powers.

>> No.59481841

>>59479513
Turns out it wasn't Migo's fault that she raped Pecola.

>> No.59482477

>>59481520
So using >>59481841's situation, for example, it can go like this:
>Only Pekora was around to witness the murder. That means she must know something
>But the only person she really gets close to is Miko
>Time for a little body surfing
>"Oh Miko, what do you need peko?"
>Unfortunately, the possession isn't perfect; Miko ends up raping Pekora
>Well, at least you got what you needed.
>"I-I didn't know what came over me, nye..."

>> No.59485076

Scooby snacks.

>> No.59486371

Has there been any word from the guy who was writing the story about you and Mumei killing the rest on holoEN since he dropped chapter 1? Or what about the guy who was writing the one about Sora having a schizo bodyguard?

>> No.59486634

>>59486371
Respectively those are being made the anons writing Heartbreak Tokyo, and Cover High. I'm pretty sure Talent Security Division is going to be on the backburner until Cover High is finished. Meanwhile, I have no clue what the plans are for Praise for Whatever.

>> No.59487085

>>59486634
Thank you, Shiori.

>> No.59487625

>>59482477
Wouldn't possessing Pekora be better to learn her memories?

>> No.59488062

>>59487625
So you propose that Pekora rapes Miko instead? Because that would be hotter ngl

>> No.59488145

>>59487625
I mean if you're running with the Suisei possession plotline/twist you could probably reason it in-universe as your possession power not really being strong enough to run through long term memories... with the reason you can pilot old!Suisei so well is because you're possessing an empty shell so there's no one to interfere.

>> No.59489350

>>59488145
Even if you can't access the memories directly it might be easier to get Pekora to write them down or to tell someone about them by possessing her, at least partly.
You could possess her and then call her mother, telling her that you need to share something traumatic with her. Then you possess her mother and insist that she should tell you what she wanted to tell.

>> No.59489664

>>59489350
I mean I think at this point you kind of need to make hard rules on the limits for the possession power and how long you plan to have the story take place since the limits are where you write your story. Because the plan in question here kind of reliant on like a dozen questions like "how long does the possession last? How affected is it by the host? How much influence do you have and how much does the host have? Are you mentally/physically limited by distance from the Suisei body?" And a bunch of other questions like that which need to get hammered out in the outline.

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>>59489664
Not him, but I can make a few suggestions:
>You need to "stun" the person you want to possess. In this dazed state, they're ripe for the taking.
>When they're possessed, all their abilities are at your disposal. However, you can only stay in their bodies for a limited time until the original soul takes back control.
>Some people are easier to 'stun' than others, depending on either mental or physical toughness. That's why an *ahem* "dimmer" Miko might be easier to get into than a sharp Pekkers. This also affects how long you can stay in their bodies.
>You might even have to physically brawl with some of the people you want to possess. But once you've entered them, they should be easier to control the next time you need them
>The longer you stay in the body, the more unstable your control over it becomes. You need to return to your 'home' body before that happens, or else u ded
>The person who's been possessed retains no memories of being possessed.
That's what I can think of so far

>> No.59490158

>>59490131 (me)
Oh yeah, something something you gotta do mouth to mouth with the person you're possessing to make it hot, yeah.

>> No.59491626

>>59489664
You're right, but I don't think tying this to the Suisei thing from the start is a good idea. The "pervy ghost investigating his murder" concept has enough meat to flourish on its own first.

>> No.59491881

>>59491626
While I do think the Suisei thing isn't necessarily the best 'fake body' I think having a "main host body" you're chained to helps keep the entire thing grounded (and also further justifies it being a chuuba fic since it adds a layer of keeping the host body functional and seen as sane so it has that social layer of the other chuubas she's friends with.)
Since without the theoretical "main host" it kind of fully becomes a body swapping ghost revenge story with expendableish bodies. Which admittedly sounds cool if pulled off well but also doesn't sound like it has a need for the chuuba fic aspect.

>> No.59492066

>>59491881
You could be a dead Cover employee if you want to have a connection to the chuubas.
But to me it has to be a chuuba fic anyway, because this thread is where I go for all things fanfiction and this thread is only about chuuba fics. So doing the "body swapping ghost revenge story" without the chuuba fic aspect isn't even an option.

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>>59492066
>be a dead Cover Corp employee
>"holy fuck who killed me"
>find out you can possess Marine and touch her fat ass with her own hands

>> No.59492247

>>59492066
My point was more that, having the host body connects it better to chuuba fic and that without it the concept would be so tenuously connected to chuubas that you might as well be writing original fiction.
Though honestly if you want to run with the dead Cover employee angle that might be enough to justify the chuuba aspect. My point prior to this was that whatever concept you go with you need hard rules in order for the drama/mystery aspect to work so that the audience doesn't wonder why he's not doing x or y.

>> No.59492426

>>59492240
>"Hey Flare, have I been doing anything weird for the past few hours? I've been having these strange episodes of lost time lately."
>"I'm pretty sure you spent the whole time camped out in the changing room feeling yourself up in front of the mirrors."
>"That DOES sound like me..."

>> No.59492514

>>59492247
>My point was more that, having the host body connects it better to chuuba fic and that without it the concept would be so tenuously connected to chuubas that you might as well be writing original fiction.
But I'm not interested in writing original fiction so "Is it best to write this fic with chuubas?" isn't even a question. I only consider ideas within the realm of chuuba fanfiction.
It's like telling a person in a wheelchair that it'd be easier to climb down the stairs if they walked. Technically true, but not very helpful.

>> No.59492639

>>59492426
>a few days later, more and more chuubas have been reporting weird instances of lost time and finding themselves in strange places
>Towa said she found herself slumped over a dumpster with her panties missing
>Suisei says she's been feeling "sore" and "sensitive" in "spots"
>Pekora swears Miko was looking at her in the shower that one time
>Miko swears Pekora was looking at her in the shower that one time
>Botan says she found herself with a strap-on
>"What could be causing these cases...?" Doctor Choco mutters to herself as you creep up behind her in Luna's body

>> No.59493961

>>59423165
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ8j3cYOL77mCjXV05ZD0Ix8LxGB7crXrr8B5HGOdU3nFISj8zJtPgAXJJdMqC9NY3K-wIFTO8dRUVe/pub
Suisei's doppelganger greentext and discussion
Tags: Suisei, Ao, Drama, Mystery, SFW, compilation
Compiled that Suisei discussion from a couple of threads back since it got stuck in my head.

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>> No.59495387

>>59492066
I had a WIP about dying a virgin, and escaping heaven to possess Flare and fuck Noel with your ghost futa cock.

>> No.59495560
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I've hit the part of the WIP where it's getting long and I'm deciding if I should trim down the Fubuki sex and save it for another chapter...

>> No.59495605
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>>59495560
>I'm deciding if I should trim down the Fubuki sex
Don't you dare.

>> No.59495615

>>59495560
Don't trim her bush or her sex.

>> No.59495667

>>59495560
Trim her bush but not her sex.

>> No.59496049

>>59495560
trim her bush and her sex.

>> No.59496079

>>59495560
How many words deep are you in anon? While chapters can be pretty long I'd need a word count to know if I should tell you if you should keep going or should start planning to split it up.

>> No.59496181

>>59496079
Word count? It's more of a word duke at this point.

>> No.59496209

>>59496079
I'm 8k words in, of which 3.3k is domination loss cunnilingus with Fubuki and the aftermath, and I want to write a nursing handjob as well.

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>>59496209
>domination loss cunnilingus with Fubuki and the aftermath, and I want to write a nursing handjob as well.
SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX

>> No.59496484

>>59496209
Who is losing the domination?

>> No.59496960

>>59496484
Fubuki is trying to act all dominant and seductive with you between her legs, but you know how to push her buttons and have her wailing in pleasure and embarrassment.

>> No.59497318

>>59496960
>Fufufu, I'm not sure you can make me cum like this...it's okay if you use toys to help with that, you know.
>30 minutes later
>PLEASE, ANYTHING ELSE! I CAN'T TAKE MORE OF THIS...THIS TONGUE!

>> No.59498165

>>59497318
Something like that, yeah.

>> No.59499996

https://litter.catbox.moe/8f2nwf.webm

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>>59499996
Lappy has the best instant kill.

>> No.59501507

>>59499996
Is this the prophesied uoh vs hag war?

>> No.59502166

>>59423199
Lui gets a promotion at her workplace but she's unsure she'll be able to handle it.
So naturally, she turns to you to try out bondage dommy mommy talk to try and metamorphosis from goofball to dominatrix

>> No.59502218

>>59501507
It was the trigger. The brattiest of cunnii against the haggiest of hags.

>> No.59502355

>>59499996
The only way this could get any chunnier, would be by putting fucking linkin park in the background.

>> No.59502389

>>59502355
What song do you have in mind? They're certainly chuuni, but I'm not sure about fighting game cutscene bgm.

>> No.59502500

>>59502389
The chorus of Given up.

>> No.59502502

>>59502355
>GG sountrack
>not chuuni enough
allow me to correct that
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FUlN4PkxqsM

>> No.59502662

>>59502500
I can see it, if you remove Laplus' dialogue or mix it right.

>> No.59502791

>>59502166
>Lui is insecure and flustered so you encourage her
>she suddenly finds her groove
>your balls come to regret your decision rather quickly

>> No.59507206

>>59502791
>your balls come to regret your decision rather quickly
Alright, boys, fess up: which one of you fuckers stole my balls and replaced them with a pair of your own?

>> No.59507363

>>59507206
>a pair of your own
The way you worded that makes it sound like one of us has a set of spares just lying around.

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>>59423199
A situation where Fauna rips a huge fart and is mortified.
It doesnt need to be sexual, but sexual content is appreciated

>> No.59509842

>>59502791
Weak
I want Lui to go hard on the CBT. Crushing, stomping, slapping and all

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>> No.59512663

>>59512136
Built for rape (by me)

>> No.59512781

>>59512136
Built for ninjin (mine)

>> No.59512928

>>59512136
That's my shoulder she's sleeping on

>> No.59513117

>>59509662
jesus christ those tits

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>>59512136
Built for respectful treatment by a sensible gentleman such as myself
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3CmFhneifgg

>> No.59513455

>>59512663
>>59512781
>>59513403
You're not fooling me again, Miko.

>> No.59513760

>>59512136
>transfer student wears flannel
cringe

>> No.59513910
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Outrageous(ly dumb) fic idea: Pekora in a women's shelter

>> No.59514073

>>59513760
We're you bullied by hipsters or something?

>> No.59514556

>>59513910
And Miko ends up going there to try and lesbianize the women who were abused by men.

>> No.59515807

>>59513910
>>59514556
And then, in the Year of the Rabbit, their love finally blooms like a Sakura tree.

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>>59515807
>reminder that it's the year of the rabbit
>will definitely not get my installment introducing the rabbit done by the end of year
Guess we'll just have to strive for just making it to that arc.

>> No.59516184

>>59516056
You could stall until 2035 if you don't make it in time.

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>>59516184
I'd rather end myself.

>> No.59517270

>>59516056
What's next on our journeys?

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>>59517270
Rabbit is the next arc, but life is moving fast and writing has been slow. Still gotta get through the meat of Pirate and Lion hags before we set sail.

>> No.59518020

>>59517806
You might slow down for a bit, but it's still very valuable that the thread can rely on you long-term.

>> No.59519286

>>59517806
I can't wait for the Rabbits in Heat arc. Both Pekomama's guidance and seduction and Pekora's embarrassment and first loving.

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>>59518020
I just like to write and want to get the ideas I have in my head onto paper. The one upside to my slower pace at the moment is that I'm still coming up with future arc ideas and plotlines meanwhile.
I made some notes regarding a segment involving a smaller corpo chuuba and possibly her gen which I've been enjoying watching recently. They lend themselves well to fantasy so it should be fun.

>> No.59519375

>>59519312
Are you watching VSPO?

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>>59519375
Nope. Haven't dipped my toes into that corp yet. Do you have any recommendations?
Pic related is who I've been watching more of lately.

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>>59519634
nta but Qpi seggs

>> No.59519742

>>59519634
To be honest, I've only really watched Nose after learning about her through Towa. But when someone says smaller corpo I think of VSPO

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>>59519698
tanned thick legs under booty jorts!? Good lord. I'll put this on the list of groups to look into when I get some time. It's always fun to branch out and see what kinda content other orgs try to showcase and offer.

>> No.59520050

>>59519890
Don't call them jorts, Bilbo.

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>>59520050
They're jean shorts. That's what they are. I ain't calling them daisy dukes either since I hate that hick name for them.

>> No.59520362

>>59520251
Haha, I'm not an Anglo so I didn't know the term. You just sounded like Bijou for a second

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>>59520362

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>>59486371
Praise for Whatever is gonna be on the backburner while I work on the 3 concurrent HBT chapters(IV, the NSFW sidechapter, and the X-Over) which I plan to definitely finish before the end of the year. I've been waylaid by GAMING so I haven't been writing as much as I probably should be.

I just finished Phantom Liberty holy fuck was it amazing

>> No.59522008

>>59521489
>spoiler
That new ending got me thinking about a fic where a chuuba has to come to terms with becoming 'another face in the crowd'.

>> No.59523359

>>59522008
>A hard-working dedicated chuuba(Suisei, Kiara) gets into an accident on the eve of the biggest concert of their career
>comatose for 2 years
>Finally wake up, only to find that having tubes down their throat(or a Tracheotomy) has permanently ruined their ability to sing and chronic problems from their injuries leaves them unable to dance
>Even worse, Hololive is dead, bought out by investors who crashed it into irrelevance and the entire idol business plummeted alongside it
>All their friends have scattered to the wind


Damn, I might just hold onto something like that

>> No.59523741

>>59523359
>spoiler
Wouldn't it be even worse if Hololive was still going strong but the chuuba had been graduated in absentia? Maybe even with rrats or something else ruining her reputation and without a way back.

>> No.59524757

>>59523741
Could, but I feel like that would take away from the "her star's faded and never can shine again" part and I can't imagine her not getting helped by her friends of they're all still around. Thiugh, you could probably do something like she's offered a pity job as a faceless staff-san that really only serves to make her more miserable seeing how everybody's moved on

>> No.59526360

Teach me how to write Botan properly as a character. I'm not content with my attempts so far and she ends up sounding too similar to Okayu.

>> No.59526810

>>59526360
well aside from watching streams you need to understand that while she's aloof and relaxed, she's 100% not a mature person.
A lot of people forget that she's one of the, if not THE biggest nene enabler because as soon as a bit starts ,she rolls with it. Of course she's smart enough to jump before it blows on her face, but she's always down for a fun good time.
So dont forget the sillynes in the lion, because she loves goofy stuff

>> No.59527213

>>59526360
Writing Botan requires fewer words while writing Okayu requires more tildes, if you get what I mean.

>> No.59528031

>>59523359
Alternatively this feels like it could be the ending to a Haato fic where she gets surgery/treatment to get rid of Haachama... with the joke being it just leads to present day

>> No.59528950

>>59524757
>>59523741
The worst possibility to me would be that everyone supports her comeback but she feels like she's just weighing her friends down and everyone is just praising her to be nice, because she's doing the best given her circumstances but is objectively awful (can't sing, raspy voice, lots of coughing, can't really move around or game, slow to think and without wit, streams little...). She is now unavoidably pitybaiting and her actual content becomes less and less popular, her image defined by the accident and its consequences.
Eventually she starts hating herself and either commits suicide or shifts the blame to everyone else as a coping mechanism, being ostracized as an ungrateful cunt.

>> No.59529573

Imagine getting a smoky blow job from Raden in the cover HQ smoking room while the rest of regloss are oblivious on the other side of the door.

>> No.59529958

>>59529573
Having warm smoke engulf my dick inside her mouth sounds hot.

>> No.59530369

>>59529573
>you will never talk to Raden about art
Why even live?

>> No.59531144

>>59492240
>possess Marine
>go on a depraved sexual exploration of her body that lasts several hours
>try to possess other chuubas
>can't get in
>after doing some research on the paranormal it turns out that it's practically impossible to possess an unwilling body
>Marine actually wanted it
>it also turns out that the host's soul has a lot of influence on the possesor's soul
>the lust that overcame you when you entered Marine's body was her own

>> No.59534091

>>59529573
Talk about smoked meat heh

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Well, I haven't stopped by in nearly six months now. I think I'm close to getting past this period of life and want to start writing again.

Got a notification that I haven't logged into Mega for a while and figured I'd check in. How we doing? Should I fire off an update to the hard archive? Looks like another 200 stories, but lots of chapters updated since I last looked.

>> No.59535064

>>59534882
Nah, just fuck off again.

>> No.59535424

>>59534882
Yes, thank you mega hard anon

>> No.59535654

>>59534882
Thank you for your service

>> No.59537606

>No fic about daily life with futa Botan
Why live?

>> No.59539453

>>59517806
I'd like to get through Botan's meat if you're picking up what I'm layin down

>> No.59540044

>>59534882
To catch you up, pekofag had a meltdown and unlisted all of his fics, we had a contest, and also the thread has retaken control of the OP from the earlyfag.

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>>59539453
Oh I just might be. I'm gonna get all in those meat folds.

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>>59521489
>X-Over
What fic are you crossing over with?

>> No.59545478
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>>59544232
The other two Cover Security fics, Talent Security Division and Cover Job

>> No.59546489

>>59540570
Dude if Botan looked at me like this I would absolutely ravage her. She wouldn't be able to walk properly for a week.

>> No.59547030

>>59545478
good lord look at the size of those things

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>>59546489
That's the idea. The la lion's smolder is not to be underestimated. Things you might have told yourself you weren't going to do tonight are suddenly your utmost desire.

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>>59546489
>>59547605
>"Button, why are you looking at me like you want to eat me?"
>"I'd rather you eat ME."

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>>59547030
Imagine how much nutrient-rich dragon milk are in those things

>> No.59549178

>>59537606
Perhaps this is a shitpost, but genuine question here. How would Botan's futa cock impact the standard slice of life tropes? Would Anon accidentally trip and fall into her but instead of groping her chest end up with his hands around her rod?

>> No.59550268

>>59547030
imagine them around your dick while you sand off the edges of a table

>> No.59550321

>>59549178
Anon, it's Futa not Femboy. You'd still get knocked into her chest but you'd also (accidentally) feel up her cock... unless the Futa aspect is reserved for a surprise.

>> No.59551010

>>59550321
But how does her futa cock play into your everyday life? Like if you write a chapter about cleaning the house, how is the cock integrated into the plot? The only angle I can come up with is you being her personal manager whose sole job it is is to ensure her cock is kept hidden from her fans and for some reason she's very clumsy and prone to having her skirt flipped.

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>>59534882
>>59423151
https://mega.nz/folder/RYFSUKia#hHHdgObkkCbyNIeLpw-R4w

Hard archive has been updated. As usual the list of 404 and files the script can't reliably process is included. Because V2 will not check stories it has already archived, it's not a reliable way to find what has been lost since 1/15, the last time it ran.

>>59540044
>also the thread has retaken control of the OP from the earlyfag
Sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeit finally

>> No.59554735

>>59550321
>fall on her, with your face somehow landing right where her breasts are
>"oh shit, I'm so sorry!"
>she doesn't say anything
>but you suddenly feel something poking at your stomach

>> No.59555215

>>59551010
Her genitals don't need to take centre stage in the plot regardless of what they are, I imagine. They're only relevant sometimes.

>> No.59555492

>>59550268
>Coco is always dominant in bed, never letting the initiative slip from her
>as soon as you do significant repairs she drops to her knees and is willing to service you in any way you want

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>> No.59558101

>>59557260
That's a very sexy shirt.

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>> No.59559942

>>59559781
Bun bun cha

>> No.59559960

>>59559781
I liked that picture a lot more before I noticed how much thicker one thigh is than the other. Even taking perspective into account that shit don't look right

>> No.59560127

>>59559960
Why point it out? :(

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>>59560127
Because you deserve better than an inferior product

>> No.59560545

>>59560344
not him but that's based
Also, Pekora is very sex

>> No.59560643

>>59549178
>How would Botan's futa cock impact the standard slice of life tropes?
It wouldn't really, I just imagined comfy slice of life with some sex scenes

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>>59560545
Prime breeding material. The archive could use more bunny smut

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>>59559960
It's rough being a lover of noodle girls and small tight butts such as myself in a world obsessed with thiccness

>> No.59561383

>>59560979
I guess the pendulum has swung away from you in the last decade or so, back to more fertile-looking women. But I'm sure it'll reverse again in the future.

>> No.59562373

>>59560643
I see. But Botan wouldn't make for a very good futa wife imo. Lamy is a much better choice.

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>>59560344
>>59560787
based

>> No.59563081

>>59562464
Now this is what I like to see.

>> No.59564245
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New fox outfit!

>> No.59564304

>>59564245
>burger slippers
I love it

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If I were a cute Japanese girl, my vtuber greeting would be こんFUCKYOU

>> No.59565201

>>59564786
What is your current vtuber greeting?

>> No.59565227

>>59564245
As a burger, this is the closest to Friend feet I'll ever get and I'm happy.

>> No.59565298

>>59565201
Silence. I don't vtube.

>> No.59565541

>>59562464
>When you're so close to Pekora that you're literally the only person she's comfortable enough to be sexual with.
Ohhh yeah.

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>>59565541 (me)
To add, it's this frame that really gets me. Hooo, mama...

>> No.59565659

>>59562464
>>59423165
Breed the bunny in the bed
Breed the bunny by the sea
At the end the Anon said
See those posts? Yeah, all me.

>> No.59565843

>>59565541
>>59565633
Stop dreaming, Miko. It's over.

>> No.59565877

>>59551010
Why would it need to come up at all? If you're writing slice of life you're clearly not writing it for eroticism so you're basically in the same boat as modern shows where the right level of representation isn't to have your pet issue be pushed to the forefront or be lionizedheh but to just have it portrayed as a normal everyday part of their life that occasionally gets used as a gag.
>>59553772
You probably want to update that for double checking fics that get updated or reworked, the holocalypse anon is making their update/remake of their fic in the same files which originally hosted them, (not sure why he doesn't just leave them alone and make new documents) so, file gets major reworks, might be something that should get checked for archiving/preservation purposes.

>> No.59565971

>>59565843
いや。
I mean, no.

>> No.59566223

>>59562373
I like girl that feel dominant to me for futas, so I like Botan or Coco. I don't really get the appeal of Lamy futa but to each their own

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>>59562464
The more people expose me to Peko being confident with her womanhood and charms, the better it starts to sound. It's all coming together in my head.

>> No.59567074

That new outfit/haircut plus that impression really got me thinking about shota fubuki

>> No.59567098

>>59565298
Sure thing, Shiori

>> No.59567382

>>59567074
What would it be about? Going to your friend's house and seducing her mom in order to become Fubuki's new dad?

>> No.59567960

>>59567382
Well I was thinking more of something to do with Fubuki instead.

>> No.59569408

Bumping privates with Fubuki.

>> No.59569836
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I know I'm late but DID SOMEBODY SAY VSPO!?

I FUCKING LOVE VSPO!

>> No.59570288
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Seriesanons doko?

>> No.59570558

>>59569836
You should channel that love into a story about your favourite VSPO girl :) Writing is fun, and good advertisement for more writers to take a look at your chuuba.

>> No.59570691

>>59566493
She'd be amazingly satisfying to rescue from the Tower of Loneliness, and the dragon called Insecurity.

>> No.59571242

>>59570288
Koko >>59566493

>> No.59571652
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>>59570558
Oh I've been writing all right, just not about VSPO. I've been wanting to insert them into something for a couple of months now but I don't have a WIP with any space for the esports girls at the moment.

>> No.59571754

>>59571652
I'm sure you'll find some space for them eventually. They're not that tall, after all.

>> No.59571854
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>>59570691
This just makes me imagine a fic about Anon getting roped into rescuing Pekora thinking the descriptions were metaphorical... but then it cuts to having to literally climb a tower called Loneliness while dueling a dragon called Insecurity.

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>>59571754
True, but most of them are pretty big in other areas.

>> No.59573732

>go on a walk
>come up with five new ideas for the book
>awesome, time to get going again
>sit in front of word doc
>can't fucking write no matter how hard K try

I hate creativity

>> No.59573987
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>>59573732
Why can't you put down your notes in your phone when you have those ideas rather than waiting?

>> No.59574579

>>59573987
I put my ideas down, I just for some reason can't get the wheels spinning. I don't understand why.

>> No.59574867

>>59571854
>but then it cuts to having to literally climb a tower called Loneliness while dueling a dragon called Insecurity.
And with Pekomama 20 metres behind you, amused and holding a camera to film your heroic exploits and manoeuvres. You promised, after all.

>> No.59574990
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>>59573732
>>59574579
I make a list of all the scenes in the story first and then start writing. If I just have all the scenes listed, I can go through the actual writing of the story with a machine gun pace.

>> No.59575866

>a dragon called Insecurity

>"I AM ALIVE... I AM FIRE... I AM DEATH!"
>"Master... You who hath given me life, granted me power, must now give me purpose."
>"Bestow upon me a name and I shall see thine enemies ruined, thy territorial possessions immense, thy bidding done."
>your name is Insecurity
Fucking really? That's what you name me?

>> No.59575963

>>59571652
Are there any good clips of them?

>> No.59576052

>>59575866
It's a flex. Anyone would expect to be killed by a dragon with some edgelord name. But having it go down in history that they were felled by Insecurity? Their souls would probably kill themselves a second time out of embarrassment.

>> No.59577690

To the authors out there, what do you think (regardless of audience reception) is the best work you've ever produced?

If it's a toss up between multiple, what is the best work in each genre you've produced?

>> No.59577801

>>59577690
I'm still proud of Time (s)Mutt
It was nice and simple and I feel I had some really good moments in there

>> No.59578011

>>59565877
>You probably want to update that for double checking fics that get updated or reworked

That's difficult to check for because even if I ran an MD5 checksum against the text contents themselves, with the way we services are dynamic nowadays the code being copied is almost guaranteed to change even if the actual story text remains the same so there would be a lot of false positives.

The simplest answer IMO is just to keep the previous archives available. It's not like they take much space to begin with and you can always compare between the two.

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>>59577690
I'm really proud of HF6 personally but I can't remember most of what I've made by this point, I just remember a strong feeling of satisfaction with that one

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>>59577690
I’m pretty proud of chapters 11, 24, and both parts of chapter 31 for HJ. Really getting into Koyori’s role as a mad scientist was so fun. The ferocity of the Botan fight in 31 was so brutal in my opinion. The next part where I finally get Watame coochie is just a personal favorite for obvious reasons. 24 was just pure hype for me throughout it. I try to find something to be proud of with every chapter I write, since I like to think that I’m not only improving step by step, but also the fact that I just went out there and did it. And since I’m a phone poster while I travel, have a pic of the starting party in marketable figure form.

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>>59577690
For romance, Building Block Doll is definitely my best work.

For adventure, Balsa, even though I know practically know one reads it. The chapter "The Best Within Ourselves" is the first time I've ever written a chapter that I felt was perfect to the letter. From the chapter title to the final line, it is one of the single best chapters I have ever written of any book I've produced.

As for abuse fics, Apple of Her Eye stands at the top of the stack for me and I will at some point give it a proper novelization.

>> No.59581380

>>59577690
Every story I make should be the best thing I've written, otherwise I am not improving

>> No.59581782
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>>59577690
That'd be Beware, Miko is Coming. It's still short, but after I expanded it a bit I felt happy with how it portrays Miko's psyche and leads into her spontaneous decision. And it's not like there is much competition.

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>>59577690
Bit of a grammatical mess when I first released it (I've since fixed that), but I'm proud of The Taste of Sin. It's the first time I've ever written something so sexual in nature (even if there is no sex yet) and I think I did a decent job.

>> No.59583995

>>59577690
My magnum opus is finally coming out of the WIP phase...

>> No.59584130

>>59583995
The scat story to outscat all others...

>> No.59584192

>>59584130
Not only scat, mind you. But futanari cumflation...

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>> No.59587492

>>59577690
Honestly? The Filthy Frank X Hololive greentext. If only because I successfully captured the atmosphere I intended for it.

>> No.59589536

>>59584192
Mutual cumflation?

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>> No.59594764
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>>59593776
No no no Ayame, you can't pretend to be a NERD just cause you heard the rumours that the Fujo Club was getting laid by the new and only male member. Everyone knows already knows you're a slut

>> No.59594954

>>59594764
>pic related
I have a growing desire to write Nakirin yuri.

>> No.59597409

>>59574867
I'm imagining this with pekomama giving you equipment, but instead of a sword, shield, and armor. It's just a bunch of guns with words like "Kindness", "Love", and "Understanding" engraved on them.

>> No.59599183
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>>59423165
Greentext Shiori fanfic writer, submitting a two parter, second half is probably my first and last full NSFW writing.
>>59571627
>>59597511
Enjoy if you have a read, otherwise just for archiving purposes so they don't disappear.
Tags: Multi-part, Shiori, NSFW

>> No.59599415

>>59599183
>probably my first and last full NSFW writing.
Really? That's a shame to hear, because you did pretty well with it!

>> No.59599610
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>>59599415
Hmm, I'll clarify slightly.
It'll be my last NSFW in that sort of style, mainly because I have absolutely no experience with not being in the lead so I had to use my imagination for almost all of it and I was more worried it didn't make sense or it was messy, moreso than the actual content itself.
That being said, I'm glad you think so.

>> No.59600122

>>59575963
Depends on what flavour you want.

>> No.59600291

>>59599610
Most people here are doing exactly the same thing - building a scene purely based on their own fantasies. And you know what? A guy's fantasies tend to cater to a guy's desires; something synchronous with the majority of people here, if not to an exact degree.
What I'm saying is that even if it's not realistic - which few people are going to be able to tell here of all places - the fact is that it's fucking hot. And that's all that matters when you're building a fantasy for others to see - that you project vicariously the same emotions that you feel when you first daydreamed what sex with Shiori taking the lead'd be like. You did good. I'd love to see more from you like this.

Personally I like her taking the lead. She's a very forward person.

>> No.59601023
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>>59600291
Y'know, fair enough.
I tend to like the idea of a little bit of realistic things in my stories, most of it is fueled by personal experience mixed with imagination to fill in the blanks. For example: "Is this how a person would react to X situation?" or in Shiori's case: "Is this how Shiori would behave?"
Thanks for the mini push, perhaps I'll do something again another time when the prompt is spicy enough. I think I'm more caught up in the realistic aspect than the enjoyable aspect but that's just me being new to writing.

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>>59601023
God speed, anon.

>> No.59602358

>>59600122
The cute and funny kind.

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>>59607566
Topical due to a bit of earlier talk about Cyberpunk but was that on accident?

>> No.59609450

>>59607769
Nope, just got hit by it like a fucking bullet train.

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>>59609450
Oh shit, lucky you cause they spoiled that in one of the first big trailers they did. Cyberpunk's got some heavy gut punches in it for sure, I had to go lie down after the DLC.

>> No.59610816

>>59577690
Pokemon cards; never opened is my favorite fic that I ever wrote. Not only did I write it in less than half an hour but I thoroughly enjoyed every second of writing it.

>> No.59613260

>>59607769
A cyberpunk setting and chuubas fit together way too well but I can't really see a story in it outside of "idol drama in the cyberpunk future". I mean you could obviously have the standard cyberpunk plot about punks on the edge of society making a big score... but it feels weirdly disconnected from that natural fit of actually virtual vtubers that make the connection feel so natural.

>> No.59614501
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>>59602358
If you're after the cute and funny kinds you might have some luck with Shinomiya Runa or Tosaki Mimi, but I don't watch either of them too much. Runa's way of speaking especially is very much CGDCT so you'll either love her or not love her.
Noah isn't exactly cunny since she has tits, but her speech and mannerisms give off little sister vibes, and she's a bit of an introvert. Here's a cute phasmophobia clip of her being teased by the other girls: https://youtu.be/sawwbTpb0FI?si=vQ7mo0lAhDjrdDag
If you're more into bratty girls then you could try checking out the Kaga sisters, especially Nazuna. She's got a really dirty mouth.

>> No.59616355
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>>59577690
Probably CH chapter 6. It took a long time both in story and in real-life to reach the point where (you) and Peko-chan's relationship starts to become explicitly romantic, so getting to finally write that tipping point was goddamn satisfying. I'd also been struggling up to that point trying to get Moona's character down right, and I think that chapter was the first time I feel like I managed to "nail it."

>> No.59616802

>>59614501
o7
thank you, anon.

>> No.59621140
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>>59577690
Maybe Cascade of White? If I look at it from the perspective of whether it accomplished what I had planned for the story, then it's probably the one that fits the most. Not nearly my longest or the one that was aimed at my own fetishes, but definitely the one I can say "yeah, it came out just like I envisioned" most easily.

I still hold a pretty soft spot for Foxfriend and overly nice boyfriend, I don't think I've been able to replicate the feel of that story ever since.

>> No.59624768

>>59599610
Imagined sex is usually way hotter than actual sex, anyway. And if someone is here talking about vtubers they already want women who aren't real but superior to the real thing.

>> No.59625530

>>59624760
BB, you're still here? I can't remember the last time I heard from you.

Cascade of White holds a special place in my heart and is definitely one of my favourite fics in the archive. The whispered dirty talk is phenomenal.

>> No.59627575

Sex with Fubuki but in space where people split into factions and it's an allegory to life's problems and history.

>> No.59627834

>>59625530
Thanks, that was the idea. I wanted to practice that to incorporate it in other stories. I think my descriptions are good, but my sex dialogue is pretty lacking... I don't think it made its way into anything else yet though.

And yeah, I think last time I checked the threads was back in March, life's been too hectic all year so not a lot of personal time recently. Things might settle down here soon so I want to start writing again.

>> No.59628941

>>59577690
Uhhhh I don't know, I feel like pacing is my hardest thing to get right, so that's usually my metric for how good a thing I wrote is. Victory or Death maybe.

>> No.59630957

>>59627575
What would that even be, a fic where you go on a monologue about the state of space states (with names on the same level >>59571854 as this, i.e having to escape from the Interstellar Union of Stress into the Heartbreak system) then you have cybersex with Fubuki?

>> No.59631395

>>59613260
Vtubers themselves are pretty cyberpunk

>> No.59632199
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>>59577690
Cooking and a Comet for sure. It just clicked and came together in a way that I've been chasing since. Not that I view the things I've written since then as worse, but nothing has quite flowed from brain to page the way that one did at that scale.

>> No.59632293

>>59631395
I mean yeah, the whole virtual personas controlled by a Japanese corporation thing literally just needs a dose darkness/drama in it and you have something you could naturally have in a cyberpunk setting. It's just that, this specific aspect kind of pigeonholes everything I'm thinking into the direction of either corporate skullduggery or perfect blue. I guess there's also that cyberpunk IRyS outline/greentext that has chuubas be a high power cyberpower thing.

>> No.59632467

When do we use "whose" and when do we use "who's"? I didn't understand the examples online and am hoping someone can explain it to me.

>> No.59632606

>>59632467
"Whose" is normally used when asking about which person an item belongs to. "Whose shoes are these", "Whose computer is this", etc.

"Who's" is literally "Who is", and is used in all those scenarios. "Who is the president", "Who is going to the store", and so on.

>> No.59632696

>>59632606
I think I get it, thanks.

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>>59632696
Hold on, I realize I could've clarified further for a more comprehensive view on the subject.
"Whose" refers to the owner of possessions, either physical(shoes, computer, book) or metaphysical(whose opinion, turn, actions).
"Who's" refers to gathering more information concerning a person themselves.

For a more reliable method, when you're not sure which one to use, try typing the sentence with "who is" or "who has", and if it sounds right, it's "who's", and if it sounds wrong, it's probably "whose".

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>> No.59636058

>>59627575
Collab with the worldbuilding thread for the setting, whatever it's called now.

>> No.59636173

>>59594764
It's okay, I'll fuck nerd Ayame too.

>> No.59636231

>>59633177
Ok, that makes a lot of sense. Thank you Anon.

>> No.59636614

>>59636058
I don't think anyone who world builds/writes hangs out there anymore outside of their fire emblem hack guy. I think that /log/ is about as close as a non-direct chuuba general can get to dead without actually sliding off in the first few posts. Good thing Advent and the contest gave this place the shot in the arm it needed to be in a good place creatively.
Though I guess we're kind of different cases all together last I checked no one really cared for what other people wrote there, meanwhile we at least will always have that writing community thing of checking each other's work.

>> No.59637429

Anyone baking? If not I'll start warming up the oven.

>> No.59637446

>>59423151
What happened to that one story in the archive of futa Mori fucking Ollie while she begs for her life? It also had a sequel I’m pretty sure.

>> No.59637987

>>59637429
Thank you, Anon

>> No.59638050

>>59637446
If you can't find something, check all the iterations of the Mega Hard Archive.

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>>59638151
>>59638151
Bijou's armpits!

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