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Story recap!
There were 2 stories posted last thread. I hope I didn't miss any

An Incredible Bitch >>57320066
Tags: Suisei, NSFW, Hate sex

Tower of Tattle Part V >>57443032
Tags: Shiori, High Fantasy, Gaimanesque?

CLEAR!

Word of the Thread
Use them to inspire whatever you want as long as it's chuuba related
>Pain
>Competition
>New
For extra context the table these came from is called Scavenging Results

>>57436199
I'm assuming you're the author? I just read chapter 3 and I like it. A lot. I'll use this chance to give a full review, so here goes.
First off, I like the worldbuilding you've done. I was a little foggy on the details until I read the series landing page, which gave me a clearer picture of the whole situation. Some of it felt excessive just to say "Japan now dangerous", but it was still really impressive how much it had been thought out. The picture you've painted of this depressing, cursed Tokyo is really vivid and I love it.
Your writing style is good. Nice use of vocabulary, adjectives and descriptions. Your action scenes can get a bit bloated, but if someone handed me Heartbreak Tokyo and said: "This was written by a novelist who makes a living off writing," I wouldn't have batted an eyelid.

The characters are great. Seeing Polka's fall is a really interesting subplot you've inserted into the narrative, and I am both dreading and eager to see how that plays out. Your protagonist is probably the most compelling Anon I've read here, in a really strange sense of the word. His schizophrenia, mysterious past and fondness for killing makes me really want to see what's next in store for him. It’s been a while since we’ve had a properly deranged Anon. There is one thing about the characters that I'm struggling to wrap my head around though, and I guess it includes the plot too. Now, this story features Kson. It's implied that once she was able to leak smoke from her nostrils, and considering Rio is a ghost and Polka is a fox-girl, it's safe to assume Kson was once a proper dragon -- KIryu Coco. The part I don't understand is how the fuck does a transformation like that happen? How does someone who's part dragon suddenly... *not* be a dragon? Is there a transformation process that most human-hybrids can do? Or should I just turn my brain off and not think too hard about it?
I'm also a little confused at what Kson exactly knows. I assume more of her past will be revealed later, but I was really not understanding what was going on during Kson's monologue around the middle of chapter 3, where she tries to figure out what's going on. She refers to "he" and "him" a lot without any clarification of which male she's talking about. After a long while pondering and scoring over the text from that section, I think I have the basic gist of what she was talking about. It's still a little fuzzy though, so some more clarification in the later chapters would be nice. Or maybe I'm just too stupid.

Finally, the story. It's very good. As I said before, your worldbuilding sets up the narrative really well and I’m thoroughly enjoying the mystery aspect it’s got going for it. There are few series in the archive I want to see the continuation to as much as this one. As I mentioned earlier, I’m seeing a lot of similarities to The Cover Job, especially around the beginning, so I’m imagining the two stories as parallel universes to each other to feed my autism. I think narratively this one is the superior story, but that might be because it currently has more written for it. Two cakes, but two very different flavours. I enjoyed the inclusion of Mashiro as well. It was unexpected, and while I don't really watch him seeing the other vtuber companies involved felt narratively fitting. The chaotic, almost psychotic feel to this story that’s fueled by Anon and things like that nightclub with the masks creates a really interesting atmosphere. I’m looking forward to the next part, and whatever else you might have planned. Kudos.

>>57446800
I was trying to understand, what was so "isex" about this picture. Until I realized that it actually says "Ice X"....

>>57444632
HoloX, but EVERYONE except La+ has turned into children younger than she is

>>57447781
Are their outfits scaled down

>>57447781

>>57448334
That's boring. Everyone should get a cute dress with different amount of gothic lolitaness and frilliness each.

>>57448334
Not at first, no. Maybe a chapter could revolve around La+ scrambling to scrounge together outfits for her new little sisters. Eventually, she makes scaled down versions of their outfits after many false starts and YouTube tutorials on sewing.
>>57448408
Yes, this is basically how I imagine it'll be La+ is slowly driven insane by her new charges, but also slowly grows out of being a kusogaki herself

>>57447781
>>57448334
>>57448408
What if the four others managed to remove Laplus' limiter shackles with some one-time technique and by pulling them off all at the same time, but one of them got stuck on each of the other members which causes the change?
Now Laplus could take over the world, but she is busy taking care of the rest of HoloX.

>>57448736
That has potential. Lap-chan can turn into a big-titty onee-san too, or maybe not.
I guess the plot could kick off like this:
>La+'s limiters are removed.
>"Ahhh! After 10,000 years, I'm free! It's time to conquer the Earth. Lui! Prepare the invasion plans."
>"Ah... eto... nee-san, nee-san, I need to go to the potty."
>"... huh?"
>"No, I gotta go to the potty first!" Chloe yells.
>"Hmmm, you're stinky," Koyori says.
>"What the hell is going on?!" La+ cries.
>Cover arrives to stop La+, only to discover this has happened.
>While Cover works on a solution, HoloX still has to make money. So they decide to have the HoloX girls still be vtubers. La+ is the designated tardwrangler.
>All sorts of shit happens during their streams, mostly with La+ having to keep them from hurting themselves or doing something too risque for minors.
>La+ could already take over the world, if she wanted to. But she has to learn how to cook chicken nuggies JUUUST right so Chloe doesn't cry all the time...
That's what I got so far

>>57449078
>Seems like conquering the ass was never truly the goal. It was the children I raised along the way.

>>57449194
I guess that's basically the story. La+ may have unlimited power, but it's barely enough to help her raise four rambunctious kids. Also, ass.

>>57448507
>No LolLui in tight spandex shorts
Bros...

>>57451089
Okay, there can be an exception.

>>57444632
Matsuri gives you a shady energy drink right before you have sex

>>57449194
>"I want to conquer the Earth!"
>Suddenly, La+ is in a Gachimuchi video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VEOhHvCpn0w

>>57451802

>Watame literally has a Red Riding Hood accessory to wear
God damn it. Can I still do it with Nene?
I was banking on having her high amounts of energy and her airheadedness help move the story in the direction I wanted and deliver a funny line at the end. I can't do that with Watame, it'd feel way too out of character.

>>57452676
Anon you make a fic with the characters you want to write a story with, even if there are better chuubas that would thematically fit better. After all this is your fic, you write what you want to write.

>>57452676
While Watame doesn't have the high energy, she is part of the bakatare trio so airheadedness would fit her

>>57453078
more like the bukkake trio

>>57452798
Yeah, fair enough. Just a little annoying when you're trying to think of a character that'd work for an idea, you decide on one and straight-up start thinking up dialogue in your head, and then you do a quick search of something to help inspire you to do more and you get slapped in the face with "actually you should've thought of this character lel"
>>57453078
Meh, I'm not feeling it. I'm banking on a real "bimbo" energy for the girl that Watame just doesn't exude, so I'll stick with Nene. Need a girl that'll accidentally shove her huge tits into a wolf boy's face without realizing or thinking about it. And one that won't realize he's not her granny Botan until he's already knotted inside of her. Watame just feels wrong for it, she's too...aware of herself.

>>57454100
I mean at this point it sound less like you're already set on bimbo unintentionally seduces a wolf boy. At this point it doesn't matter if someone else fits better as the grandmother or little red riding hood; the story you actually want to tell is in what you're already coming up with rather than in what inspired it.

>>57453330
Covering Flare with white goo while she frowns at you

>>57454609
>Covering Flare in Ectoplasm to fuck with her when she comes to your grave on the anniversary of your death.

So how are your wips coming along anons?
Bonus Question: What's a fic you've read recently? Share your thoughts on it.

>>57456165
Progress is pretty decent, did over 2k yesterday. It feels good to be back in the swing of things.
>Bonus
I've been reading the various contest fics submitted, most are pretty decent. I'd have to say I like By the Sea the most so far, but I have a clear bias for adventure stories.

>>57449078
That must lead to some wacky fucking streams in universe.
Though, I'm pretty sure a fic like this would need to be set in the same kind of mix of lore and idol streaming as their manga universe in order to really work.

>>57456165
Progress is stalled because of work and other obligations. I'm taking some time off soon anyway.
Bonus:
"Incredible bitch", the suisei hatefuck fic. It was hot, i liked their dynamic. It does feel a little weird and mood whiplash-y but i imagine that's how emotionally immature teens would act in the face of this feeling they don't understand. I wish i could see more development of that kind of couple.
"Please, Mrs. Usada", the pekomama /ss/ fic. Not my fetish at all, but i did like the not smut characterization of her, i thought it was sweet. The sex scene was pretty hot, i might borrow some of the general feel of it for my own pekomama work.

>>57456165
I wrote some more. A few pages worth. It's still something though, that's what's important.

>>57456165
it's still a very rough draft, But this is becoming a nice learning experience.

>>57459359
What a wholesome cucker Chloe is.

>>57459359
There is no way a plot like that is ever gonna feel natural, but I commend you for trying. Especially since I feel this is either going to be something where Chloe not falling completely is going to feel unsatisfying narratively, or it's going to be something where the actual cosplay maid sex won't be hot enough. It's going to be the kind of fork where you can't satisfy both conditions and you can only go for one.

>>57460104
I had that feeling as well. once I get all the ideas out on paper I want to see what I can do to piece it together in a way that will probably go better narratively. Thank you for your feedback none the less.

>>57456165
I haven't started yet. My last one had a lukewarm reception, so I'm taking a step back to see how I can do better next time.
>Bonus
I've been reading Heartbreak Tokyo to look into how to write good combat. It's brutal, but in a good way.

>>57460335
What was lukewarm if you don't mind me asking? Did you get appropriate feedback that might paint a clearer picture for how you might be able to improve?

>>57460104
I don't think that's the case, if Chloe is written as loving enough.

>>57460583
A little, but not much. Most of the feedback was essentially "oh hey, look at that." Which is still nice to know that they liked it, don't get me wrong. But it doesn't help much with knowing what I did right/wrong.

>>57456165
It's coming. I have hit what feels like a brick wall since writing this much.

I still think Ayame being Little red riding hood and Mio being the wolf was an alright idea when I first made the prompt.

>>57462898
It's a good idea but it just doesn't fit the general tropes and scenario I have in mind tbdesu

>>57456165
Surprisingly well! Have scenes I want ro write, stuff I want to explore.
>Bonus
Finally started one of the behemoths or /wg/, cover high

>>57463206
Are you the one that wanted little red riding hood to be Nene and the wolf Botan?

>>57463573
Yeah, and that's probably what I'm gonna write. It just kind of clicked once I thought of it and the ideas have flowed into my head so I can't really think of anything else now.

>>57463748
While it isn't what I was expecting, I am genuinely interested in seeing it written so I do look forward to how the story will turn out.
No rush though, anon. Finish whatever stuff you have to do before you work on it.

>>57444632
Lamy discovers her breast growth issues is tied to the fact she needs to get milked in order to get her bust to shrink to a more reasonable size.
Of course Marine was more than willing to help her with this problem. And it turns out there's plenty of milk to drink
Lamy x Marine, Lactation, Breastfeeding.

>>57464377
Hot

>>57447563
I appreciate the detail you've gone into here, it really means a lot.

The action feeling bloated I can understand, I tend to have a vision in my mind for the fight scenes and get a little too overindulged getting that vision across. It's great to hear that you enjoy the characters so much, and everything going on with Roundtail as well as Anon being my own personal favourites. I will be touching more on the idea of people being able to change forms, but moreso in regards to the effects it has on people rather than the process itself.

I totally get your confusion around Kson's knowledge, as looking back I can easily see how one can get lost in her monologue and it was also mentioned in a review when chapter III first came out that wasn't something that can be easily inferred right away. Rest assured that'll be given some more expounding on soon(relative to the story anyway not my speed as a writer).

The comparisons to Cover Job aren't surprising, as part of my inspiration was the author mentioning that he had had the idea for the Anon in that being more of a thug than an assassin. I do think they've gone in such different directions that it definitely is a 'Two cakes, but two very different flavours' thing. Thank you for your review!

>>57463573
>>57463848
Oh, wait, no, rereading it, you got it a little wrong.
Red riding hood will be Nene, and her Grandma will be Botan.
The wolf will just be "the wolf" and will be a shota wolfboy.

>>57461946
If that's all you got to work with at the moment, the best thing to do is to just keep going and see if more constructive feedback comes your way. You got this, anon, give it your best.

>>57464656
There's also the possibility of Marine getting into the surging bustline and getting milky tits herself.

>>57464879
Thanks anon. I'll keep at it.

>>57464861
Any plans for a woodsman character or will the wolfboy just drag them back to his den?

>>57466361
Nah, no Woodsman character. Fic's going to be lighthearted, simple setup into Botan scene into Nene scene, and end with an abrupt little punchline:
"Hey, wait a minute..." Nene carefully inspected the young wolf, who was currently dozing off while still tied inside her. "I don't think this is actually Granny Botan!"

>>57464377
>>57465206
I like your magic words, anon(s)

>>57466666
Based on those numbers of yours I would've expected the wolfboy to get his stomach opened and filled with stones anyway.

>>57466666
That sounds hilarious, also checked them quints.
Hoping to read it when it comes out, satan.

>>57461946
If you didn't get much feedback, it probably means what you wrote was written fine but maybe a bit boring. That or it was outside of the threads preferred chuubas and/or tags.

>>57466666
That's distressingly Nene

>>57456165
Thread needs bumping so I guess I'll post the WC of the new WIP.
Bit of an iffy conundrum in my mind about how "bimbo" I want to write Nene. It's fun to have her be 100% clueless, but I'm not sure how in-character it is.

>>57444632
I want to see a story where your chuuba girlfriend is your sunshine and emotional rock and the fear of something happening to her and you slowly dying of starvation and loneliness without her.

>>57472490
>Bit of an iffy conundrum in my mind about how "bimbo" I want to write Nene. It's fun to have her be 100% clueless, but I'm not sure how in-character it is.
It's acceptable for the purpose of your fanfic.
On an unrelated note, I can't read bimbo without thinking of Bijou anymore.

>>57472670
Bimboo

>>57444607
Balsa Chapter 21: Voracity

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR_u1me2lmIiig7owrU6n2xELjic8HJUM5v-baOaEv-Lc1kGibBoBLVzZNzFKFX8cUgydDlIwmRetWX/pub

tags: (you), multiple chuubas, medieval fantasy

Sorry that this one is a bit shorter. It all tied together in a way I liked and any additions to it would've felt more like artificial inflation than actual meaningful content. I hope you and enjoy and, as always, critique is welcome. While this chapter is short, it's quite dense in information and as promised, Fubuki is getting her redemption arc and Polka is going to get into an interesting predicament.

>>57472923
So the first few sections could use another pass at proofreading I think.
>to find that the god’s he bestowed upon Ciyana’s daughter a golden gavel.
Reads a bit awkwardly, I think you were going for "to find that the gods had bestowed upon Civana's daughter a golden gavel"
Scene transition overall was a little less jarring this time around, the next section with the beast however, the reader is given almost no mental image for what this thing even looks like besides that it might be a quadruped. With fantasy settings and creatures, the writer needs to have strong descriptors to put the image of something that doesn't normally exist to us in our heads.
While I'm glad Polka is getting some sort of explanation and closure around her previous behavior, the scene itself had me scratching my head a little towards the end. The pure 180 in behavior on Iroha's part just doesn't make sense. She is trying to play a part here and the change in mood is a little too heavy handed. If Iroha planned this encounter, how come her cover story was so bad? Her immediate confrontational reaction to Polka's questions was also extremely off putting considering the role Iroha is trying to play here.
There should also be a line to show the scene transition from the previous castle scene to out in the forest.
The final argument was ok, I know why it's happening, but Botan's approach seems a little out of place. Given her age, what she's seen, what she's done, why is she storming off like a teenager on her period who just got told she can't go out on friday night? It seems not entirely like her to not give someone the chance to prove her wrong.
The loophole found is an interesting take at least. The overall core of the plotline promises to have some meat to it and exercise a few clever concepts.

>>57475255
>So the first few sections could use another pass at proofreading I think.

yeah I saw. I read through it one more time and saw the errors. Am correcting them as we speak. God I hate proofreading so much.

>the next section with the beast however, the reader is given almost no mental image for what this thing even looks like besides that it might be a quadruped

I figured I already explained it didn't I? You're talking about the organ eater? I didn't describe it twice because I thought the last chapter I did and doing it a second time would've been redundant.

>Iroha

I looked back at it and I see why you thought that. I didn't intend for it to sound as though Iroha planned this, it was completely happenstance that they are going in the same direction. I didn't think someone would view it as Iroha's intent but I should've played up the surprise a bit more. It does look more like she anticipated this rather than it coming as a shock.

>but Botan's approach seems a little out of place

I should've added it this chapter but I will add it in the next. I'll give Botan a moment to exhibit why she acted like this. Because you're right, it is out of place and it's very unnatural for her to lose her head this way. I'll make sure to give more meat to that come next chapter.

>The loophole found is an interesting take at least. The overall core of the plotline promises to have some meat to it and exercise a few clever concepts.

Glad to hear that. I'm glad the the overarching plot is promising at least.

Thanks for the critique. I wish I had the power of foresight because all of this seems so obvious in hindsight that I can't believe I didn't think of it. Keep hitting myself in the head because I people can always interpret a scene differently based on the way it's framed.

It's reading day so here's a few things I caught up on.
>Tower of Tattle
The prose and formatting are pretty interesting. Part 3 was definitely a change of pace in a decent way. The overall interactions between the main character and Shiori are enjoyable to read and the descriptors for the archiver's subtle mannerisms are nicely painted.
Also
The Heart
That slaps me on the knee.
>Cover High Finale part 1
An enjoyable installment to the series as always. The date was wonderfully fluffy and perfectly fitting for the pair. The chunni level nonsense that occurred for a simple contest was spot on. The way both got too carried away was excellent, and the formatting and description of the event really sold the intensity.
>A cursed dagger
A funny, silly, but ultimately fluffy fic involving Anya is a treat. God I wish it were me getting hounded by Mio at the halloween party. I think the author handled the tool of having a speaker to a person's inner thoughts quite well and it made for some good comedic moments. Some feedback I can give is that I think it would help the overall presentation if Anon's inner thoughts were formatted differently as well. Plain text works still, but I think it might bring it forward that extra step, especially since the showcasing of inner thoughts is a big part of this fic. Overall, I enjoyed it. Nice work!

>>57476403
i'm glad The Heart joke hit. at some points it felt like i was contriving very hard just to get that joke in. but if one person laughed it was worth it

>>57475897
I'll be honest, I don't remember the organ eater from last time. Which is likely why I forgot what it looked like. Either way, it's not bad practice to give some extra omph to its descriptors even in the moment, things like just describing its maw when it goes to strike, or how its nails puncture and press into the stone floor. Little things like that can be sprinkled into later scenes that can help jog a reader's mental imagery.
So even if the Iroha thing is happenstance, why is she playing herself off like she's helpless? I think that's the main part that makes it seem like she's up to something.
So while you might add the explanation for why Botan acted the way she did, the idea that it seems to go against the preconceived characterization a reader has of her so far is the root of the problem. Yes her and Anon's relationship has grown a bit, but I don't feel like it would be at a place where she is flying off the handle over a mere conversation. It's also getting tough to get a gauge for how much characters interconnect and feel about one another, since their interactions don't feel that deep at the moment. It might have been for fitting for Botan to get angry tears and argue about how she would rather take chances with a half baked plan than potentially having to watch anon die via initiation. There's a good opportunity to showcase how she would take the worse odds imaginable if it was the path that didn't spell her friend's likely death.

>>57477094
Fair enough. I'll keep that in mind then. I sometimes worry that describing it again would be redundant and feel more like I'm trying to fill pages than tell a story so that's why I didn't go into detail the second time around. I didn't want it to look like I was just filling space.

>I think that's the main part that makes it seem like she's up to something.

It's exactly as it looks. She's found an opportunity and she's taking it. That's why she's playing dumb and innocent. She's got a spear who has no idea who she is and wants to see if she can get some info off her before she goes to complete her task.

>It might have been for fitting for Botan to get angry tears and argue about how she would rather take chances with a half baked plan than potentially having to watch anon die via initiation.

In the way that I'm writing her (which isn't how you would and like you've said before, you've got a better grasp of Botan than I do), I am trying to make it so that her cards are close to her chest even when she's in the midst of a breakdown like this. That's why I had her stop and turn like she was about to say something, only for her to bite her tongue and walk out. But, as you said, I should've added something extra to really build on that. At the very least, you telling me this ensures that scene is going to happen. Ayame and Anon are going to get a moment too, as well as Fubu. (you) are going to be quite popular next chapter lol.

I get exactly what you're saying but I think it's another example of me already knowing exactly how it is in my head but not elaborating enough to the reader to make it make sense. Because I already know exactly why Botan is behaving this way, but that's only because I can see what's coming. It also doesn't help that I've been a bit neglectful with Botan and Anon's relationship I think.

>>57477803
So if she's playing dumb and innocent, why the sudden change to hostility? Someone who knows what a spear is and what they're capable of sure as hell wouldn't try to provoke them needlessly.
Botan can certainly play her cards close, but at this point I would think there's a little less of that considering the stakes. Adding some more body language and such would have helped for sure. I'll also give you fare warning now, if you want to write Anon getting more popular, you'll need to do the proper legwork to make it believable. The interactions have been sparse to say the least, so if any of them are trying to get real cozy and intimate, you gotta sell it like you mean it.

>>57479016
Fair enough. I wanted to make it look more like the two were getting on each others nerves. Alright, I'll try to tone it back a bit.

>you'll need to do the proper legwork to make it believable.

What I mean is (at least as far as chapter 22 is concerned) I'm going to resolve the outstanding issues between Fubuki and Ayame with him since I don't want to leave those up in the air. The next chapter is going to be a lot of character work that desperately needs doing, though if I can pull it off or not remains to be seen. I will only promise to do the best I can with it.

I'm sorry if it feels like I'm not improving. Many of your critiques are common from chapter to chapter and I don't want you to think I'm ignoring it. I'm just trying to do different approaches to see what works. Adding so many characters makes it difficult to do them all justice.

>>57480012
Doing your best is all anyone can ask for. I also wouldn't say your aren't improving, you are in some areas, and the places where you feel you are meeting similar critiques are not easy things to master, so don't let it get you down. You are right that with the more characters and relationships you add, the harder it is to give them the potential depth they might need, which is where longer running series can shine. Just keep at it and give your work the passion you feel it deserves. You'll get there.

>>57476525
Well it got me, that's for sure. Good show.

>>57480012
You're very earnest and cute, not to mention the fastest writer around currently. Ganbatte!

>>57472856
>>57472670
>Biboofication
>It doesn't make you airheaded, it just makes you pronounce all your hard 'g's as soft 'g's

>>57472670
>Bijou
>Biboo
>Bimbo
>Bilbo
>Bamboo
Enough!

Wishlist time. Tell me what sort of thing be it an interaction, scene, character or anything else that YOU wanna see in writing.

>>57444632
advent should drink some semen
>>56108968

>>57486629
a part of me really wants a good horro fic about "mori speech"

>>57486629
I wanna see some more enemies to lovers. It's a generic as hell trope but I love it. That recent suisei hatesex was a nice filler.

>>57476403
Glad you liked it. Formatting is one of those things I keep wanting to experiment with (one of the benefits of fanfiction imo is using the mechanics of writing and its nature as its own medium) but end up not quite going all out due to my own unique brand of meticulousness. I like to keep that stuff consistent so using italics for other's thoughts and regular font for Anon's kind of unintentionally overrode the desire to experiment. Like I used bold for emphasis during the thoughts but only ever used it once in dialog despite having the intention to use it more, for example.
Still, baby steps and all that. Thanks for reading,

>>57487715
>mfw I'm gonna deliver on that on multiple fronts
I love that trope myself and it's gonna show all too often soonish.

>>57487883
Super understandable. Every step forward counts. Thanks for the fun story! Also that's a cute cactus.

>>57486629
More raw, pure /ss/ smut, with nice detailed descriptions about all of it. None of that dark groomer stuff either, just fun dumb sex.
I wanna see Choco get slammed by a little angel boy. Get that holy/unholy mix in there.

>>57486629
NoeFure petplay, pleasuring each other as much as they pleasure their master

>>57486629
chuuni bullshit, which is what i did for my thread in divegrass instead of writing!
yippeh!!
also shameless plug

>>57487310
>horror fic about "mori speech"
What would that even be about? The wording is making me imagine (you) are some guy who lives near Mori and for some reason her normal behavior is utterly terrifying to you and gets described as if she was some horrible eldritch creature.
Maybe with some "romance" where she drags you on a date and it's described as if you've been kidnapped by a monster.

>>57486629
I always wanted a smut fic that was a futa chuuba going around building a harem, (mind-breaking them with their cock) and impregnating them all. The impregnation part is important. Alternatively, pairing of certain chuuba ships but one of them is a futa and the other gets knocked up

>>57488332
I can hook you up, but they might need a little help in learning the pet role a bit. Good thing I'll have a wide selection of potential teachers.

>>57488912
something like you are being stalked by a wendigo/cryptid thing (or at least you perceive it)
that ends in a chase in the woods
of course, the joke is that its just Mori being your neighbour and being overly enthusiastic about anything
>"hold up. He's taking the trash out. Holy shit deadbeats he's doing it, what a madlad. Big ups my dude, that's so cool holy shit"

>>57487906
Well you have my interest then anon.

>>57489161
The "mio bullies you with love" concept but instead it is "mori has a crush on you and thinks you're cool and dreamy" but it's some silent hill 1 psychological/survival horror type thing

>>57489161
God that just reminds me of that comedy CBT Mori prompt where she's still doing the typical Mori talk even when she's kicking and slapping your balls.
>Holy shit you took nine knee shots in a row! Big ups for your pain tolerance my dude.

>>57489359
And now that I have you, I'll shameless shill my upcoming options that I hope you'll enjoy since I love talking about it. I'll be dipping into and exploring different aspects of starting out as enemies and becoming lovers later, with how that evolves differing from each girl. Each will have their own infatuation start from a different place, and how the pair overcomes their differences and accepts that they want to have sweaty hot sex will also have its own unique flavoring. This is the list I got of girls that will undergo that kinda thing so far
>Chloe
>Iroha
>Koyori
>Suisei
>Noel
It's gonna be a grand ol time of confusing feelings and hormones.

>>57486629
Most of the things I want to see written is stuff I want to write myself. I’d like to see another take on chuubas in performance cars though, since it looks like Holoturismo as been abandoned.

>>57486629
Kemonomimi petplay (that's clearly an in-universe equivalent of raceplay).
Mostly because I think it has a lot potential from that comedy prompt about Marine dressing like a rabbit girl and acting as a caricature of a pekolander, to the more obvious pure smut ideas.

>>57490888
>Marine parading as a pekolander when the group needs to be incognito
She just wants an excuse to try and seduce anon since she knows he has a thing for animal girls.
That's brilliant brilliant brilliant!
I do like the idea of the raceplay for it in general, and will likely get real into that when I can.

>>57482140
I appreciate that. Thank you lol.

>>57481009
Right. And once this one is done, I'll see what didn't work and make the next even better.

I really do appreciate the critiques. They've helped me grow a lot.

>>57486629
shiori~n dressed as and acting like a cheerleader for my favorite college football teams...

>>57491506
I just like giving feedback when I can since it's always nice to receive.

>>57486629
I'd like to see more mutually enjoyable BDSM, that doesn't end in sex too quickly. Just two loving, kinky partners doing their favourite kind of play.

>>57495528
While I joke a bit and strongly consider giving Lunahime a kinky sex dungeon, I don't know the first thing about BDSM since I've never tried it myself before. I wouldn't know how to possibly portray the kink and sell it. That doesn't mean I won't entertain the idea of trying though.

>>57495942
What if instead of a sex dungeon it's a dungeon-dungeon with traps and treasure?

>>57496795
Why not both?
I do plan to add some more dungeon delving staples and goodness to my story when it becomes appropriate. Anon's gotta make money somehow to support all his women.

>>57489551
(You) are black, and Mori won't stop reminding you about how much respect she has for your "culture" and "you people"

>>57497203
I don't think that could work for an entire fic. The joke would get old.

>>57495528
For the longest time i've been wanting to write something about meeting a-chan at a "newbies night" at the local dungeon. I would have to do a lot of a-chan reps and consider the pacing of the whole thing

>>57499341
Being fair I think it could work for like a short comedy fic that has that as one of the jokes involving Mori being a weirdo.

>>57495942
I think you could totally manage that. At the end of the day it's mainly about the sub giving trust and power to their dom, and the dom using that power and trust to fulfill both their fantasies.
The specific techniques and devices used aren't decisive (though I guess the thread could answer most questions about them as assistance).

Guess I'll ask this question just to see if there's a consensus, I'm a bit on the fence about this
If you want to write an animal humanoid with animal genitalia, what do you run with:
>Regular Kemonomimi, just with animal dick for some reason(leaning away from this because how do you do the balls? Are they human skin or animal skin?)
>More beastman kemonomimi: lower body is furred and animalistic(kind of like a werewolf's legs), torso is skin save for a patch of fur on the chest, arms are animal from the elbow to the fingers, human skin for the rest, head is a regular kemonomimi head(what I'm currently running with)
>full furryrpprh

>>57501000
>accidental keyboard smash at the end
god, I'm tired

>>57501000
im partial to a minotaur styled thing? something like bull head, human body and maybe hooves with a horsecock

>>57500907
Yeah I think I would definitely ask the question if anyone has experience with them or where might some good resources to learn might be. Thanks for the encouragement friend, I'll definitely keep this in mind when I eventually get to candy kinkdom.

>>57501000
First off what chuuba are you working with?
If this is the horse pussy fauna one I honestly think going more conventional option of it's just fauna with the pussy of a horse would work better.
If this is the wolf boy one, just steal the idea furrys use for their porn and have them be de facto like a human cock but with the details of the animal as long as it makes sense/makes it hotter.

>>57501243
Are you planning with Luna as a dom, sub or switch?

>>57501370
Wolfboy one. I'm not giving him anything less than a full red rocket, though. Furries who bitch out on the animal cocks are fucking cowards.

>>57501410
Haven't thought that far, mostly just got attached to the idea that when you court Luna a bit and she gets both sexually attracted to you and pent up, she leads you to the castle dungeons so you can have a bit of fun, with a room she secretly outfitted. When you expect a cotton candy tea party, you get a sex dungeon with all the bells and whistles. I have to imagine she would like to play the dom most of the time, but would likely switch it up every once in a while so she can see her man be a man.

>>57501599
Then go with what you want to write anon. Seriously, it's your smut fic, write what you want to write.

>>57501841
Fair enough, I just like to see what other people would rather see. Especially when I don't have any particularly strong feelings on any of the options.

>>57501370
im the guy of horse pussy fauna
baldur's gate has fucked my mom and burned my crops,then armored core came and poisoned my water well

so its not happening for a while

>>57489154
"Bark, Noel-chan" "Polka-chan I'm wearing cow horns..." "I said bark!"
>>57491349
I can only imagine Marine trying to sell the disguise by shoving a bunny tail plug up her butt and everybody slowly realizing why she's walking funny

>>57495942
Hah, it'd be funny if Luna had a whole dungeon dedicated to getting pretend-abducted. Some Luknights have to roleplay as evil raiders that kidnap and torture the princess before she's rescued by other Luknights in shining armour, and then she turns the tables on her "captors".

>>57443951
First off, thanks for the detailed feedback. I never had anyone use the comment function before. I'll go off the top.
1. To me, pity and disgust are born from the same place. It's the acknowledgment that the person before you is below your station. That said, neither is the same as compassion, which is an important distinction.
2. Hehe thanks. When I was brainstorming the starting location, I wanted a place that was anomalous in nature and gave the feeling of being on the "frontier". The inspiration behind that was the old(?) lore of the likes of Miko and Aqua being "virtual residents," and I extrapolated that outwards. Not that this word itself is virtual, but more like, a fic written for here needed a place that represented it. So in that sense, Somalia-esq is correct. I don't really plan on having more "sites" as nations I don't think.
3. I agree with you. As it is it's a bit clunky. A third "like" might help but I feel that a "list" like that works better to emphasize a special moment or something. I do it later in the fic with Marine and her smile if that makes sense. Instead, I would simply rewrite that to flow better. Which I might do after the voting is done. I typically have a "no rewrite" policy once something is published.
4. I think I see what you mean by them undermining each other. It's a bit hard to explain but there's a feeling that it's "one after another." I'm just unsure of how to "fix" it. I have a general idea: Simplify it? Space them out? All of the above? I'll have to meditate on it for a while so I don't run into that problem again next time.

Thanks for the effort and time you put into this, as well as the kind words. Seriously I appreciate it a lot.

>>57502623
I want to give mini Marine a tongue bath until she cums all over my tongue.

>>57502240
>Luna's Tomb of Horrors
This is just making me imagine Luna having an elaborate multi-floor megadungeon ala Castle Greyhawk that's run by a bunch of LuKnights running around and releasing captured monsters and scattering treasure all according to a bunch of arcane rules Luna made to make the princess kidnapping more entertaining.

>>57502773
based

>>57502773
Need minigirl chuuba fics
Imagine one of an accurately sized rrat jacking off a cock with her entire body

>>57502187
Now you got me thinking about the power dynamic some girls would love to exercise over Noel after the events I got planned happen. That shit is gonna rock.
>>57502240
Ohhhh the kidnapping roleplay is a good angle.
>Luna orchestrates you and her to be kidnapped in your sleep by Luknights
>in a dank dungeon....again. Anon has had it with waking up in cold jails. Sees Luna with him
>a voice from behind the door orders in a very nervous and awkward tone that if you want to ever see the light of day, you need to have sex
>Anon decides he is no ones showpony and wont subject the princess to that, and promptly blasts open the door with his magic
>Before he beats up the Luknight further, Luna has the embarrassingly admit that she set the whole thing up
>Feeling bad that he messed up her kink a little, anon puts on a fake air and acts more like a shining knight, which also gets luna a little randy again
This girl sure is fun.

>>57503023
Imagine putting mini Gura in the chum jar

>>57503807
>Minigirl who's actually really into the idea and uses her tiny hands and tongue to force you to bukkake her with the force of a firehose
Goddamnit.

>>57503807
>>57504243
AGAIN, I AM IMPLORING SOMEONE
PLEASE WRITE COCKDRUNK POMU HUMPING AND WORSHIPPING YOUR DICK

>>57504833
Drunk you say? Now there's an angle I can possibly work with. That would probably be the way Anon and Pomu decide to get naked and nasty with one another.

>>57503484
You could do it like that, but that Anon was surprised instead of giving informed consent both hurt the actual play and makes it questionable as BDSM. Consent is important to differentiate it from violent crime.
It's your story of course, but to me it'd reflect poorly on Luna. Though flaws always present opportunities for growth, of course.

>>57504983
I think he means less alcohol drunk, more cockmusk drunk. Fairies are weak to that sort of thing, you know.

>>57504983
NO
NO DRUNK
COCK-DRUNK
SHE NEEDS TO BE DROOLING,LEAKING AND HUFFING YOUR CROTCH, BEGGING TO BE COVERED IN YOUR SEED BECAUSE SHE'S A FREAKY FAIRY

>>57505069
Anon is a consentchad, he's not about to do things with a lady that she doesn't want. I think with what you're saying in mind though, it would probably make sense for Luna to get Anon's okay to go along with some roleplay with her. That might make for a cute moment between the two of them.
>>57505144
>>57505152
I mean the idea is that one would lead to the other.

>>57444759
>>57443032
>The Tower of Tattle Part III
I looked at your original posts for this and I can really see where the 'you wanted to make this a VN' aspect came in with the route splitting puzzle for this. I like it even if it does kind of feel nonessential/adjacent to the 'real story' despite the foreshadowing.
>Part IV
I like the prose here, though I can't really say much since this is pretty much an in-between chapter for both events and character relationship.
>Part V
>sussuri
>Sussurokawa
Again, this feels like another in-between chapter. Though I did like the reveal about who the protagonist is. Actually ties in part 3 to everything else, and makes it seem less like it was just a fun aside. Hope the big ending for this ends up great.

>>57502623
I'm gonna theorycraft cuz i really enjoy theorycrafting this kind of stuff. I apologize in advance because I am really adhd, and the chances of this being helpful are about fifty fifty.

A lot of times, I've noticed that what makes something "work" or "not work" is more of a uh... resemblance thing. Which is to say, I think that honestly if you take the same logicogrammatical approach to a passage, what will make it work or not work is not syntactical, or even semantic, but its resemblance to, for example, a form of speaking. That's the most concrete one I've noticed, when passages are strongly charactervoice influenced, and therefore sound to our earbrain like a speech. But I also think it can be helpful to think loosely about like...resemblances to patterns of perception? If that makes sense? Like if you're walking down a trail, or if you're running down it at race pace, or if you're being chased by a serial killer, or if you're pissed off while you're walking it, there's an overall throughline that dominates the way you're gonna perceive the trail.

In this case, because the perspective character is sitting around musing, and he's drinking and having a fanciful time to himself, I think the passage reads much more strongly as conscious musings on his part. By contrast, earlier in the story:

>"Your gaze moves towards the horizon, the sun has almost completely set, and a fine red line is all that separates the orange vestiges of the day from the dark blue of night. Caught between the two, that fine red line blazes, like a fresh and bleeding wound in the sky. "

This reads almost like an old school CYOA, where it's like a narrator separate from the perspective character. When it's coming from the narrator-as-separate, I think there's a little more credence the brain is willing to give toward being fanciful. But, really, I feel like a specific thing happens in that paragraph, which is that... the moment is like... washing over him. That's what it feels like. It's like when you stop a moment and take a deep breath of salty sea air, and it sort of takes over you, right. And I really really feel that from what you're writing.

"There is not a cloud in the sky, the moon is at its zenith - full and lurid with ethereal white as it looms above the open water like a spotlight. The grains of the beach seem to glow white underneath the cold radiance of the moon. You stare out into the ocean, dyed a black-blue like a mean bruise from the night sky. Your gaze starts on the tides as they ebb and flow like time-caught ink spilled on a canvas. Your eyes begin to trace up the waves until they rest in the deep black of the distant horizon."

I really think this is ninety percent 'there.' Funnily enough, I feel like the fact that he's drunk makes his use of artistic metaphors strain just a bit, but I don't think that's the fundamental issue. I feel like what's happening is that the metaphors don't feel uh... flowy and contiguous. It feels very like... segmented. One, then two, then three. Instead of washing over him it kinda feels like he's playing an adventure game and he clicks one part of the screen, then another, then another.

So, I think it's a matter of a slight mismatch between rhythmic schema (one and two and three and four) and scene, where actually the scene has very contiguous elements. The moon is white, which makes the beach glow white, but the water is still so very dark next to it, so dark that it looks like ink. The wavey motion of that ink makes your eyes trace the waves back and back and back to the dark horizon, right? So at once, the approach seems to me to a. adjust the rhythm to the scene and b. take note of the contiguous aspects of the scene, and be judicious in how you want to express their relations.

Anyway, I hope this at least gives you something to springboard off of. Thank you for indulging my theorycrafting.

>>57505714
oh i also wanna add that i literally live on the beach and though it's been like a decade since i've been out there sitting at night alone just pondering under a full moon, this really is how it fuckin feels. the part about like... following the waves out into the forevernothing like... that's genuinely what it's like. it really calls out to you. it's serene, beautiful, and a little primally scary honestly, and you reminded me of it.

this is... super autistic, but i will mention when the full moon is out, it kinda creates this static electricity look over the water. the waves break up the moon so much, and the water's still so dark, that it looks like very faint static lines are going through all the water. it would obviously be horrendously autistic for me to expect people to know exactly what a full moon on a dark beach looks like, but i thought you might like to learn that, because the static across the water is also very pretty.

>>57464377
>That fucking spine

>>57507107
GREAT HEAVENS WHAT IS HAPPENING THERE

>>57505522
Given that Luna is experienced and Anon is new, you could have an interesting dynamic where Anon agrees to roleplaying one of her kidnappers and torturers, but she gives him ooc instructions on what to put her through next.

>>57507107
It's like all of her belly fat has wriggled up to her breasts.

>>57507107
>Lamy Goes to the Chiropractor

>>57507447
He is a man who will give his best towards whatever a pretty girl asks him to do, so this would track.

>>57507447
Almost sounds like an escape room, but with sex instructions that Luna has hidden

>>57507993
Written is a good idea,. makes it less disruptive.

>>57507993
>"What's twaking so long-nora?!"
>"I-I'm trying the best I can here!"
>"It's bween fifteen mwinutes! I've alweady gone dwy!"

>>57505714
>>57506231
I think I see what you mean. Thank you for the detailed follow-up.

>>57508689
What would be the funniest puzzle to get stuck on? The towers of Hanoi; the fox, chicken and grain; or maybe a riddle where the answer is very clearly supposed to be something lewd like "Luna's pussy" but you're overthinking it and getting it wrong.

>>57486629

I just want more hardcore chuuba bondage. Existing or not. Doesn't even have to lead to sex. Just them being tied up is really hot to me.

How many hours until voting begins?

>>57486629

Some sort of unique spin on chuubas being full-on crazy. Meaning, it's used in a unique way that makes sense, and doesn't feel too out of character for them.

>>57509791
>hardcore chuuba bondage
So something like a fic where Fubuki incurs a massive debt while gambling and enters slavery in order to pay it off... Only to find her debt growing ever larger everyday despite "servicing" as many people as she can.
Nothing more hardcore than debt bondage after all.

>>57495528

Seconded, honestly.

>>57505069

I mean, there is such a thing as CNC. Consent is given beforehand, but there's still an element of surprise. It sort of exists in a moral grey area, I think.

>>57510324

You've got me drooling, stop it.

>>57510324

Also, Fubuki Jerma arc confirmed?

What is your most niche, hyper specific fetish you want written

>>57510934
Female chuubas getting eggs laid in them by various creatures

>>57511389
everyone knows what you like insectfag

>>57510934
I kinda wrote all of mine
Guess I'd like to see someone else write a chuuba performing general cock worship(with a focus on ball worship) on a shota with a big dong
Preferably some sort of monsterboy shota

>>57510934
brapping but not related to smell. I fucking hate the smell of farts and or similar gross stuff, but a girl triying and failing to hold a fart, or getting plapped and farting OR losing control after a sweaty sex marathon and farting
that's the great stuff

>>57510934
LGD NTR

>>57504833
There's a scene like this in Ninissnni Scenario. Understandable you'd want more though

>>57510521
An element of surprise is definitely important, you lose a lot of thrill and creativity otherwise. That's what understanding your partner and safewords are for.

>>57510324
Damn, the next arc of Kaiji gets crazy.

>>57511640
Man I wish I knew enough about Reine and Kiara to actually write about that. Mostly because a lot of the spice there is in the relationship getting broken apart alongside the lesbo breaking smut.

>>57511631
>First night with Fauna
>She's nervous so when you start fucking she lets out a fart
>"OMG ANON IM SO SORRY PLEASE FORGIVE ME"
>You explain to her that its ok. Vaginal queefs are totally normal
>"Ah...yeah...yeah you are right... Sure"
I have nothing else really, but thats a hot thought

>>57510934
This is probably just my autism combined with my love of quests and vidya but I really fucking like when numbers show up in text. Like I'm pretty sure the only way you can really do it in a chuuba fic is going to be in really specific scenarios.
Something like a litrpg thing having levels and stats go down during a fic aping a bad end; or a mind control app fic showing visual progress until a girl gets her resistance broken down. I'm pretty sure the only thing that would be specific to chuuba fics would be a fic about a chuuba getting fucked on stream and seeing their view count and Superchats spike until the stream gets banned at the exact moment the sex finishes.

>>57513114
What if she sharts instead

>>57513169
This Anon is what happen if /wg/ and /#/ have a baby.

>>57515384
What did you mean by that, huh?

>>57513169
>a litrpg thing having levels and stats go down during a fic aping a bad end
>Shiori raping HoloFantasy Anon and stealing all his skills for her archive

>>57509794
I mean if everyone’s good to go I’ll release it in a couple of hours.

>>57517122
HoloFantasy does actually have skill loss/stat down mechanics in place, they've just never come up...
Pic unrelated I just want to fuck Scarle

>>57517404
I imagine the closest we got was the Fubuki gambling thing a while ago, right?
spoiler] also mega based

>>57509791
What kind of hardcore bondage would you like to see?
And would it be better if they can't really move but can still relax for a while, or if it gets uncomfortable quickly?

>>57517404
Do you mind sharing the idea behind the system then? Because I can at least conceptualize perma-health loss occurring from losing a fight but I'm not sure how stat/skill loss would work outside of losing items and the associated skills given by them. (Except maybe in an Ina style mindfuck/memory loss kind of thing)

>>57515973
I meant that he likes fanfiction with numbers.

>>57517612
>>57518060
The penalty for true death isn't the story ending (since that would fuck up a lot and be kinda 'WHAT'), it's losing part of who you are to a mysterious entity for the opportunity to wind back the clock to the critical moment of failure and change your destiny. But things will never be the same regardless as the world around you will grow darker and change; or someone else close to you may be the one to take the blow instead. Changes happen subtly at first, but it becomes incredibly obvious that things aren't the same if it keeps happening, especially with regards those around you.
I want losing in battle to a severe degree to have real consequences without just 'lol the story is over now ty for reading goodbye!' since in any RPG where that happened the players would lynch the GM. Severity of said consequences is dependent on who or what is being fought.

>>57518841
Man the more you talk about HF's world tendency stuff the more I want it to come up, or at least another chapter of Pure Black

GET TO WORKplease

>>57518841
Ah, I take it this change in system happened after the polka/marine chapters once you got over making this a story of rapey bad ends so death would still have consequences instead of ending in a rape then cue the epilogue.

>>57517404
If you could fuck Scarle, how would you do it? Asking for a friend who's curious and totally not using it for inspiration for a scene.

>>57519796
Going off the full version of the image he posted about 17 hours of ceaseless paizuri in every possible position

>>57519249
I am, I am. Just grinding away at bits I'm having trouble with. PB has had its second chapter outlined for basically forever alongside a uh... Chaos system. I just want to get this actual chapter done so I can focus on other stuff without making people wait even more...
>>57519400
Yeah, but in the event that happens, it'll just lead to a cool rescue op.
>>57519796
Relentless paizuri into hardcore anal. That 'Scarle in the wall' set is burned into my brain.

>>57520071
>99 FUCKING THOUSAND WORDS
Oh my god.

>>57520071
>cool rescue op.
Matsuri losing her boss fight remains the biggest missed opportunity this fic has had.
>Chaos system.
Those words make me think of two things. That's either a solo rpg chaos factor thing, or it's a doomsday clock mechanic that shows the progress till the end of the world.

>>57520393
I reckon its a Dishonored thing where being a bad Rogue/Assassin and getting seen or causing a ton of destruction changes the world state

>>57520071
>>57519937
Paizuri it is. Thanks for keeping it easy. Uh... for my friend.

>>57520071
NICE

>>57520482
Point to Anon.
Only it's more relegated to, and this is actual spoilers I guess, how many people Anon lets Bibi consume. How long powerful can a familiar be before it's stronger than the host it's bound too?

>>57520650
Butchered that spoiler, I'm tired. You get the point, though.

>>57520650
You can never trust a FAT FUCK

Voting form is up. I couldn't be fucked making it too fancy, so you'll have to bear with something simple:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdlEP3lOlGJI42lNOAcrM1Lr0rGcxZAGhdF7sl371xLhYsbTg/viewform?usp=sf_link

Voting closes on the 4th of September, 11:59PM UTC -12 to give you guys some extra time to read. I didn't make the second and third favourite stories be a requirement since someone who isn't into smut might not have read three NSFW stories, and vice-versa. Let me know if I've fucked up somewhere.
If I'm not around to make the next thread (which I probably won't be), would someone mind putting this in a post near the top?

>>57521700
Nice. But any reason why it's a short response instead of a multiple choice or drop down selection?

>>57521700
I'll update the OP rentry and add this link

>>57521852
I could make it a multiple choice if that'd be easier for everyone, but I figured writing the title of the story would suffice.
>>57521879
Gracias

>>57521852
Anon, it takes like two seconds to write the the title of a story.

>>57522079
De nada, my good man

>>57521700
So when the voting period is done will you make like a cool graph to show the results?

>>57522103
It runs the risk of mispellings inconsistent capitalization, even trailing whitespace, requiring manual intervention, which can introduce human tabulation error. It's simpler, cleaner, and less risky to have choices. That's why we have ballots for elections or multiple choice for exams. And yeah it's easier to select a choice than type it out, as any UI designer will attest, users are lazy lol

>>57522672
>This guy put in FacelessDegenrate.org for his favorite I just don't know what he could mean

>>57522252
Looks good. You just reminded me to add the voting form to the contest archive too.
>>57522335
What kind of graph do you want? Column? Pie chart? I can make one but it'll look like shit.
>>57522672
Point taken, but I'll still have to manuallty verify everything regardless to avoid counting two votes for the same story (favourite and second favourite being the same story, for example). I'll patch it up now.

>>57522834
I mean I'm not saying it's the biggest deal in the world I just saw something in the design that could potentially be different, and asked a question about it. And when pressed by you I offered my reasoning. Either approach has its pros and cons.
>>57523631
Point taken as well. Thanks for setting up the form in the first place. I still have some more stories to read before I vote!

>>57523631
So you're changing the form?

>>57524181
Yep, it's all done. There was like one guy who got in before I could make the changes but I've manually put his votes into a spreadsheet.

>>57522252
Where is this? In the main archive’s rentry?

>>57524696
>/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>>57489815
Is this like a series then?

>>57524921
I'm pretty sure going by context clues it's Holojourneys.

>>57510934
Obesity to the point of immobility, focusing on a chuuba getting cared for and potentially sexually manhandled by her caretaker

>>57524921
>>57525208
If there is a discussion of how a holo will be loved and the author is using relevant holo images habitually, you can assume it's about HoloJourneys. It's the most consistent series, and the one in which a lot of thread discussion will pay off in the years to come.

>>57527155
Wasn't there an Okayu fic like this? She gets so fat she had to get moved by crane, and eats everything that she's even eating Korone and (You) out of a home, until you snap and feed her a poisoned onigiri.

>>57507107
My god I can't unsee it now

>>57510934
Chuubas getting into a catfight that slowly turns into a sexfight
And not the kind where one dominates the other, I love my fights where both opponents are at an equal level so both of them hold nothing back, giving it their all when both know they have the same chance of winning, a constant back and forth between the two
It’s not something hyper niche but there’s not a lot of fics about it either

Up you go!

>>57444632
I was trawling through the archive of old /wg/ threads for ideas, and found a statement that aged well >>50108029
>I would literally have sex with a rock if it was a Hololive member
Makes me think of a dumb romance fic about rejecting Bijou when she was just a gemless pebble then years later she's trying to reconnect now that she's one of those idols you like.

>>57530010
So you're saying... she used to be a pet rock who tried to romance you, but now she's an idol and is trying again?

>>57530081
Yeah something like that.
I'm imagining a gag of her "speaking rock" and (You) overreacting but I'm not sure the rock silence and overreaction cycle would really work in second person.

>>57530278
If you want, you can probably do something weird with her speech. Like, for example:
>It's been two weeks since Dad bought you this Pet Rock from the Dollar General. Just one of his half-assed attempts to show that he still buys you toys. But hey, it's the thought that counts, right?
>But you've noticed something... weird about this pet rock.
>Whenever you stare at its googly eyes, you could swear that it actually... talks.
>[Hi AnOn!]
>Holy fuck, it actually talks.
>You're not hallucinating, are you?
>"You... talk?"
>[ThaAaTs RiGHt!] it says. [I LoVE YoU]
>"DAD THIS FUCKING ROCK TALKS!"
>[Hi DaD!]
>But even though you can hear the rock talk so clearly, your Dad just looks at you as if you've gone mad.

>>57509591
A very simple answer, but Luna didn't realize you wouldn't add her verbal to the end

>>57524921
The other anons are right, now get reading.

>>57530278
>>57530830
I think it would be way funnier if (You) were the stereotypical bully in middle school and bijou is a rock.
So you keep punting her, changing her googly eyes and drawing things with markers, only for both of you to meet again after highschool and you falling in love with her after her "glow up"

>>57531778
>add her verbal to the end
Add her verbal tic

>>57532121
That's making me think this is Bijou's revenge and she's plotting to get you to fall for her so she can pay back your rejection.

>>57532780
but then she also falls in love with you and now its awkward.

>>57532780
>>57532863
Wait a minute... You guys are leading this into yet another hatesex situation, aren't you?

>>57466666
Why do I feel if the wolf tries to go after 'grandma Botan' he's gonna get eaten instead and be last seen trying to claw his way out from the house before being dragged back by Botan?

>>57444632
A Roboco/Bijou fic called Robot Rock. Contents up to (You), but it has to be called that and it needs title drop(s)

>>57533680
Eh, if the shoe fits. Sounds like a good prompt to me.

>>57533945
BIjou owns a minning company and then comes across a strange ore.
Turns out it's Robocco encased in a protective capsule, and the first time she steps out of it, Bijou says "It's a robot rock!"

>>57533945
This reminds me of that video with the robot and the rock men.

>>57533680
not really, i was going more for drama, like a Koe no Katachi but that doesnt make me want to kill myself.
Honestly just a lighthearted story of the typical disney bullshit like picrel
>>57533945
>>57534280
>Roboco and Bijou encounter
>Seeing as they speak different languages (Apex and Rock), they try to communicate
>"Rock"
>"Robot...Rock?"
>Roboco shakes her head and points
>"ROCK"
>"ROBOT?"
>"ROCK!"
>Synthetizer starts playing
https://youtu.be/sFZjqVnWBhc?t=38

>>57533680
Honestly, this doesn't feel like a hatesex scenario at all. It more feels like it would be a drama romcom thing where you fall in love, learn about your past and how you hurt biboo, make amends, then have a big damn kiss inside of the cave you first met her when she was just a little rock.

>>57534902
Yeah, the hatesex scenario has to be the painful rock shoe footjob.

>>57536535
>does this gets your rocks off anon?
>aaaarrrrgh biboo... you rock my world
>anon, i do? You really mean it?
>yes biboo, you rock!
>rock and stone!
>TO THE BONE!

>>57537005
Stop making me want to write wholesome Bijou rockmaking.

>>57536535
Bijou tricking you into putting into her nutty putty cave

>>57533932
On an ordinary day, you’d be right, but this day she’s going to be a little sleepy, so she’ll take it a little easy on him.

>>57537463
What if her cave locked you in by crystallizing around your dick?

>>57537202
>anon, it's a boy! What shall we name him?
>Karl
>i love it!
>look, my parents sent us these clothes
>For Karl!

>>57537596
Yea it's more a thought if he gets greedy and tries to press his luck by going after her again on another day.

>>57537463
>Dying in a cave accident is just a euphemism for being unable to pull out

>>57510254
>"I don't understand... I'm so fucking stuck on this stupid combination lock. I found the sentence, I translated it correctly, and I already surmised that the answer is to convert the words to numbers through goroawase... but I'm one digit short," Anon sweated
>the answer is to add Luna's nna to the end, converting to 7

>>57537463
>>57537621
Bijou's Revenge plot was to make you fall in love with her then seduce you into sticking it in her cave. There she will crystalize your cock inside, locking you in and milking you until you die of a heart attack. Except halfway through your mild melted love confessions get her to release you.

I like to imagine Bijou's energy attack is similar to the Omega blaster from DBZ
luv my powerscaling rock
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mOWmq5w2hic

>>57537709
>dada...
>what are you doing up, karl? It's late
>couldn't sleep
>would you like me to sing you to sleep?
>yes, dada
>"Born underground suckled from the teat of stone. Raised in the dark from the safety of our mountain home. Skin made of Iron, Steel in our bones. To Dig and Dig can makes us free. Come on brothers sing with me! I am a dwarf and im digging a hole. Diggy Diggy Hole. Diggy Diggy hole."

>>57539099
Meant for
>>57531778
>>57532493

>>57539242
I feel like she wouldn't just let you go after warming up to you, she'd make sure you're okay and continue in earnest.

I have no idea how to kill Ciyana

>>57541650
Cartoon piano falls on her when she leaves her house

/wg/ doesn't have a team, but divegrass is on if you want to watch >>57535205

>>57541816
based. a fitting end.

>>57541650
Just Genesic Emerald Tager Buster her

>>57517639

I mean, I like it when the bottom can't move or speak, and really has no choice but to let the top do whatever they want. I especially like it when their arms are fully restrained. That's why I like armbinders and straitjackets a lot.

>>57543628
Oh, right, that reminds me. If there are any pioneers in the thread, I would really appreciate some clips or other sources that showcase her personality the best.

>>57544966
Thoughts about mummification?

Running right off the high of yesterday's chapter. Feels awesome. I struggled writing the last chapter so much and now this chapter is flowing out of me like water. Feels excellent. Already finished five pages without even a bit of difficulty.

>>57545229

I'm not really opposed to it. I just like it more when you can definitely tell the limbs apart from the body, and the body isn't just an amorphous mass. That's why I'm not the biggest fan of tape, either. I like leather and rope more, I think. Canvas is a good substitute, too. I like belts and straps.

>>57547175
Sounds like an X-cross with straps securing her all over to me. I'm more of a rope suspension kind of guy, but I can dig it.

>>57545229
>Mumification

>>57548136
Ironic, because she is undergoing Shionification.

>>57548136
>Mumeification

>>57548198
>An Owl's Punishment

>>57531786
Don't worry boss, I'm already 22 chapters in.

>>57548215
>>57548198
How bad could something like that really be?
realized I forgot the picture for my original post FUCK

>>57548328
Mumeified Suisei would be so autistic, the universe would just collapse in itself.

>>57548198
>Becoming one note and never streaming
I dont want that for mumei

>>57548764
Just talking about the face, don't worry.

>>57548749
Yeah she'd either actually become Lex Luthor or she'd do the Suisei thing of just wandering off and getting lost, then the Mumei thing of not wanting to bother anybody so she doesn't say anything and starves to death trying to figure out where she is

>>57547779

Honestly, I like when she's kneeling on the ground more, with her arms bound behind her back.

>>57550045
Hm, that'd be a bit too far down for my taste (though it is nice symbolically). If you put her on a strap-compatible table it's much easier to reach everything relevant.

>>57550345

I mean, sort of. You can grope and squeeze as much as you want, you're right.

>>57550345
>>57550705
What's your favoured chuuba to get tied up? I'm thinking about writing some bondage shorts.

>>57550934

Hmm. I think maybe Kanata or Towa. I like their designs a lot. Either them, or someone who talks a big game, but would ultimately fold. How about you?

Eight pages in two hours. It is a good day my friends.

>>57551136
>150 words in one week.
Slow and steady wins the writing rumble.

>>57551867
The second writing rumble, that is

>>57551110
I haven't given all holos a lot of thought in this regard, but currently I'd have to say Polka. I think she'd have a lot of fun hanging from the ceiling and moving around as much as she's allowed to.
Towa would probably be too loudly embarrassed for my tastes, but I can see Kanata as a cute and stoic model. Finally getting a reaction out of the quiet ones can be very satisfying.

>>57552079
Oh, brother, I'm aiming for the third.

It's around time to bake.
Any volunteers?

>>57548286
Fantastic work soldier.

>>57552275
Heads up, I'm gonna have Polka conjure a sex swing at some point. We're gonna get fully acrobatic in the bedroom.

>>57521700
I'm doing my part.

>>57521700
I wish you all luck, but I wish myself the best luck of all

>>57556147
Sounds good!
If you also put good ankle and wrist cuffs on her and some chains on the ceiling, you can hang her up in all kinds of positions and make her work for what she wants. Very fun exercise.

>>57537005
*plap* *plap* *plap*
This is useless.
*plap* *plap*
This is worthless.
*plap* *plap* *plap*
This has no value.
*plap* *plap* *plap* *plap*

>>57537005
>CLACK CLACK CLACK
>BEAR MY GEODES YOU FUCKING ROCK SLUT
>CLACK CLACK CLACK

Baker?

nyo

>>57563784
Let's wait a bit more

live?

>>57570909
Hololive!

>>57571200
Sora is so cute in that outfit.

>>57571262
It's such an unexpected outfit for Sora that it makes her even cuter

I take it someone is willing to bake a new thread, they're just waiting for this to get bumped off then?

>>57576464
It's evening in the Americas, surely someone there has time...

Alright, alright I'm making the thread. Don't blame me though if it's fucked, I've only done it twice

>>57577467
>>57577467
>>57577467
new thread

>>57577416
Alright. I'll put mine in the freezer for later

>>57577524
>No thread recap
I don't know about this one.

>>57577643
Yeah, me too.

>>57577643
There's a post cool down tard