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Story recap
There were six stories posted last thread (three in prose, three in greentext)

>>55327114
HoloJourneys: (Across Deserts to the Oceans Blue, A Shining Star Debuts) Chapter 36: A Chest Filled With Booty
Tags: Nene, Pomu, Kiara, Marine, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff

>>55336228
Shiori stalker greentext
Tags(?): Shiori, SFW

>>55382342
Sora's Secret greentext compilation
Tags: Sora, Romance, Drama, SFW

>>55455638
Shiori's something
Tags(?): Shiori, SFW, gore, /meat/

>>55469025
Shiori at the movies
Tags(?): Shiori, SFW

>>55498386
Fuwa Moco Fic
Tags(?): Fuwawa, Mococo, NSFW

I want to have sex with Fubuki.

I love me some bad bitch gangs in suits. Thanks baker.

>>55505268
Bijou sending you what you think are cool pictures of caves and crystal deposits only for it to be pics of her pussy

>>55507723
Only for the bravest of cave explorers.

>>55507723
>Oh boy! I can't wait to spelunk into that, Bijou!
>I bet if I get real deep, I might even find a geyser!
>Look at how sparkly and radiant it all looks!

>>55507723
>>55508872
>Geologist anon and Farmer anon going on a boy's night out while Marine and Bijou mop about not being fucked

>>55509687
I can be convinced to want to write about boning a lot of things, but I don't think Bijou is one of them. That said, she can be a prime target for having her advances rejected, but only if she keeps trying to send subtle signals.

>>55511182
>not wanting to manhandle the tiny fit womanlet, bending her over furniture and watching her legs shake in the air while her entire body spasms, unable to do anything about her orgasm
>not wanting to put her flexible body to use

>>55511182
>having her advances rejected, but only if she keeps trying to send subtle signals.
>Bijou walks in attached to an IV drip.
>"Anon... I have rock cancer. I don't have long to live, I-I don't want to die a virgin."
>Thus starts your quest to find the cure.

>>55511486
I got other manhandle targets. A few fit girls too. It's covered. I just wanna protec Bijou.
>>55511685
>Anon will use all the elemental knowledge and power at his disposal to heal Bijou's rock cancer
>He still can't find a single recording of rock cancer.
>"Anon...the only way to cure rock cancer....is if I am filled with the essence of life."
>Anon changes his plan of attack and starts looking for the best potions, herbs, and maybe even a fountain of youth

>>55511182
>>55511486
Bae and Bijou should collab in a room with me, shoving their armpits in my face

>>55505159
>What if Ame helps you shed
>You are sick from fever in bed. This always happens when you start shedding
>What sucks even more is that you can't even see that well as your outer eyelids had hardened and turned opaque.
>"Is my lovely investigator feeling any better?" It's Ame's voice.
>Even though the old skin dulls your sense of touch, you can still feel the Ame's hand on your chest.
>Heck, you could even sense the her fingertips running through the rough texture: wherever they touch seems to spark a little tingling sensation you seldom feel otherwise.
>Constriction of the shed prevented you from even breathing heavily, less so speaking, so all you could let out is a weak moan.
>"It never takes this long huh~ Want some help?"
>You feel Ame's arms on your neck, and before you could react, the few small openings on your lips that you have been relying on to mouth-breath are blocked by Ame's lips
>Ame pushes herself against you, and gently nibbles at the thin shell covering your mouth
>Your body froze, not just from the not-so-great range of motion of joints during shedding, but also from the mixed feeling of exhaustion, arousal, and happiness clashing into the instinctive fear and subordination that triggers in situations like this.
>Finally, you start to feel Ame's tongue stuffing through and touching your teeth.
>"Alright, this might hurt a little~"
>Instead of the gentle gnawing, Ame now bites firmly into the shed that is starting to come off and starts peeling it away.
>She did it swiftly and without hesitation.
>Before your freshly exposed lip could feel any pain, Ame spit out the shed and again covered your mouth with hers.
>That slippery warmth is the very first thing your skin is able to feel in days, and you just want to indulge in it as long as it lasts

>>55516165
Fuck, anon, what did I just read.
This is the kind of shit I go to /wg/ for. 10/10 good job

>>55506029
>>55498386
First off
>Fuwafuwa
You should probably fix this.
Other than that, this is a pretty rushed out smut fic. While there really isn't any hard minimum word count to make a smut fic I think you should have spent more time on the actual smut trying to make it erotic.
I get that you're a begginer but I'm going to say it, this fic isn't that hot. You're writing is in the right direction but you need to work on two key things. The first is setting the mood, while the smut you have written in this fic does look technically competent, it's not going to give boners if you can't arouse the reader and get them in the mood. The second is length, it's just too short. Even if someone was already horny enough before reading the length isn't enough to make anyone nut to this.

>>55516165
What the fuck? I don't actually understand what's going on here. Are you supposed to be like an animal guy?

>>55517243
not him, but I think that's the case. You're a gatorman, Harry

i wonder who could be behind these posts

>>55516677
thanks!
it came out of the frustration that fellatio and kisses can't be had at the same time
>>55517243
yeah Ame's members are called investigators and depicted as humanoid alligators in detective outfits

>>55511486
I am thinking very indecent things

>>55517376
Yeah, nah. So far IRyS, Shiori and the twins are the only EN members I have any interest in.

>>55517882
i think it was a joke about cicadas my dude

My word document keeps auto setting its proofing language to french

>>55517882
Who asked?

>>55518075
Oh, shit, I see it now. I was really confused what I'd have to do with alligators... my bad.

>>55517662
you wouldnt happen to be thinking about corrupting the two genki small girls of EN right? doing stuff to them after they get out of dance practice in shorts and oversized tshirts

>>55518422
>oversized tshirt
Yup. That got me thinking of some cute morning after imagery.

>>55518422
o-oh no. Never. Never, never, never. And I would certainly never think of taking one of them to my room and giving her a deep tissue massage that's really just an excuse to fondle her private parts. Th-that's silly and very illegal so it's something I am completely opposed to.

>>55512449
Bijou has greyscale, she just needs a shit ton of moisturizer. A very particular kind of moisturizer

>>55518681
por que no los dos

>>55519969
Guess we'll need to find the ultra magical moisturizer.
>Finds it in a strange hole in the wall shop
>That'll be 999 gold
>What? The sign says 20!
>Well there's this thing called supply and demand. The SUPPLY you need is immense, and the DEMAND your friend has for it...also immense
>Just pay the man Anon! I am literally dying here! From rock cancer! Buy the lube so you can fix my rock cancer with your cock!
>I hate my life sometimes.

>>55518162
Quelle vie

>>55518162
Make one of the characters inexplicably french. Trust me it'll be hilarious.

>>55521582
>"That's IT! im tired of this!"
>*Biboo pulls a gun*
>"Its time to get raped Anon!"
>*A bullet shoots the gun out of her hand*
>*Luna pulls up*
>"Town aint big enough for the two of us nanora"

>>55523318

>>55512449
>I just wanna protec Bijou.
She's cute, made for molesting.

>>55523408
>"Yew swed yew were gowin oot fer mewlk!"
>"Luna, we're not even in the candy kingdom right now, you can talk normally."
>"*Ahem* Like I was saying! It was Thursday and you know what we do on Thursdays!"
>"Bijou has rock cancer! What was I supposed to think!?"
>"Shut your mouth and march your sweet ass back to my castle, and wait for me in the basement. Once I'm done with this pretender, your ass is mine."
>"You know it's not really rape in your case since I've been willin-"
"I said MARCH! Nanoraaa"

>>55524489
Local man just can't stop being raped by little girls with dominatrix tendencies.

>>55506029
>Holojourneys
>Chapter 36
I swear, I'll start this series some day...

>>55525761
>Shiori when you ask her to give you the holojourneys story from the archive

>>55525761
>Shiori when you ask her to give you the holojourneys story from the archive

>>55526678
>"Is there like a CliffsNotes version?"

>>55518162
Oh, is Anon 'aving la technichal issou and is now retard? Honhonhonhon

>>55527982
>"That IS the CliffNotes version. You're gonna be stuck here reading with me, FOREVER."

I liked the original ArchiveAnon more than Shiori, she can be unsettling sometimes. I hope she lets him out of the basement soon.

>>55505159
Balsa: Chapter 19

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTjnRkePMoovpwUl3Vkgd83eX0dAVkGbZ2-uRZOqW9XjpTFo508LnT6nDwGtRcyGCvsfafXs2JMIWg_/pub

tags: (you), Ayame, Botan, Civia, medieval fantasy, NSFW

time for our first sex scene. Things are getting steamy.

>>55529962
>*Walk to the exit*¨
>"W-w-aah wait!"
>*She grabs your waist, triying to stop you, but she's way too light to even stop you*
>"WAIT WAIT, YOU CANT DO THAT! THAT'S CHEATING"
>You continue walkingdown the exit, while she starts throwing a tantrum
>"YOU....ITS..THAT'S...NO....BWEEEE"
>start feeling bad as she clings to you while ugly criying
>"IM SHORRYYYY BWEEEEEH..."
>cue to you consoling shiori whle she bawls her eyes out

>>55505268
Fuwawa beating the shit out of Mococo for backtalking on stream.

>>55532512
I may not be into it, but the whole "Fuwawa is abusive to Mococo" thing is bringing back abuse that I feel like we haven't had here in a while. It's kind of refreshing.

>>55532961
>but the whole "Fuwawa is abusive to Mococo" thing is bringing back abuse that I feel like we haven't had here in a while. It's kind of refreshing.

Only in /wg/ could bringing violent sibling abuse be refreshing lol

>>55532349
>She finally calms down after a while
>Turns out she just wanted to spend time with you, and doesn't know how to express it without coming off as completely deranged
>You pat the little oreo head and she sighs
>"So chapter 1! This is where it all starts and it's a doozy! I hope you don't mind that I do my own voices."

>>55533380
It just reminds me of the old days, when abuse stories were way more common. This was the Chuubas Being Abusive thread before it became /wg/, after all.

>>55531858
>very ample breasts
#NotMyAyame

>>55532512
i had a dumb silly idea that i couldnt work on anything except a shitpost
Basically, it would be something like Fuwawa realizing she's stealing Mococo's thunder so she lets her sister be the "mc" for one day, with her being the "un un" girl in the back
Cut to Mococo having insane rants, throwing racist remarks, telling people to kill themselves and even having a full on metal jacket moment on fuwawa who can only cry, piss and go "un un".
it would end with Mococo apologizing for "getting a bit caught up" and Fuwamoco having twice as many subs

>>55534084
The good old days. /wg/'s glory days.

>>55531858
I basically narrowed in on the part with Ayame, and I think you could have done a little more to show WHAT anon's thoughts were that the oni was getting a read on. We go from conjuring an apple to her revealing part of her gift when the thoughts she was teasing anon for were back before that event. It might help if you expressed Anon's wandering thoughts more. It would also go a long way in explaining the sudden need to act on those urges shortly after. Since, with how the story has played out so far, it's kinda out left field that he just decides to get down with Ayame. That said, since there wasn't really an expectant build up, the smut itself being super short isn't a huge shortcoming. Though with how the chapter ends, I'm not exactly sure why it even transpired like that in the first place. Unless you plan to build off that with Ayame later, but as a guard, she's just been regaled to sitting at the castle.

>>55534599
The ascension made Ayame's boobs grow really big. This is something I definitely did not just make up on the spot, nice bit of trivia. Whenever a woman goes through the ascension they get big boobs and whenever a man goes through it... well, we'll have to see, won't we?

>>55537654
I hope it means the rest was satisfactory.

I did explain it a bit confusingly. Initially I was going to make it so that she could make imagination become reality but that's way to busted so I scrapped it in favor of this. I wish I would've thought of what you suggested, that would've been far better way of illustrating it, though I can always elaborate on it further in a way less confusing.

It'll be elaborated on further as we go, this is going to be an important plot coming into the climax. If you want a of a spoiler/explanation on the theme I'm trying to get at she acts this way because she's afraid of change and of letting people in. Her standing guard all the time is a juxtaposition for her mental state, at least that's what I'm trying to get at.

Thank you for reading through it. Hope the rest of it was serviceable at least

>>55539080
Do you have any proof that big titty ojou is a good idea?

>>55505268
requesting a fic of Shiori archiving the details of her Goth GF impregnation sex by anon, that is, (You).

>>55505159
>>55537896

>>55542261
I have... ample proof, shall we say

>>55543332
Oh, is that her size in your story? I can live with that, it's not especially big.

>>55505268
>>55542374
More of this

>>55532512
I already wrote that exact story as a green text like 4 threads ago. I'm over it... Mococo beating the shit out of Fuwawa though, now there's some untapped potential.

>>55544560
What if Mococo had a bigger penis than Fuwawa?

>>55532512
I've posted this on /hlgg/ a few times might as well post it here. Its more about manipulation and conditioning though.
>Stream ends
>Suddenly Mococo gets slapped by Fuwawa
>Moco-chan you stepped out of line today
>I speak you respond, that's how it has always been, you always mess things up when you speak first or if you talk back to me
>Fuwa raises her hand again ready for the next slap.
>Where is my UN UN, are you not listening to me again?
>UN UN
>The responsible one is Fuwa right
>UN UN the tears are welling up at this point
>The one who gets us out of trouble is Fuwa right
>UN UN (seems like a whimper at this point)
>So you will listen to Fuwa from now on right
>UN UN (you can barely hear it over the sound of her muffled cries)
>Fuwa puts her hand gently on where Moco was slapped, Gomen Moco-chan. I'm just so clumsy sometimes but you know I always look out for you.
I had one where Mococo was the one who abused Fuwawa instead.

>>55544798
It makes sense from a visual design aspect, but personally I think they would both be quite small.

Read
>My Little Ruffian
Wow, that was surprisingly erotic for a fic that's 50% about belly rubbing Mococo. Pretty good smut fic. Surprised whoever wrote it didn't submit it for the rumble.

>>55526678
>>55529962
I genuinely want Shiori to help me get back into reading and finding enjoyment in it even if she shatters my mind.

>>55550876
You should read "I am not the demon god's lackey" if you're looking for books and mind-shattering lovecraftian eldritch horrors

How are everyone's entries going?

>>55553683
It's killing me.
On one hand, I already know how it'll go down and wrote out a third of it already. But at the same time I feel that it's too experimental and not as fun to write as my main thing.
I was thinking of shelving it and focusing on my main thing for now, then to salvage it at a later date. But I also want to pass in something for the contest.

>>55554036
What do you mean by experimental?

>>55554273
It'll spoil things if I explain too much, but it has mainly to do with perspective switches. That, and I'm not too confident with how I'm writing Suisei.
I'll figure something out.

>>55554036
Anon it's a contest. It's literally the best time to have fun by gambling on an experimental concept for a fic. Since either goes great and creates something really memorable or at worst creates something interesting. Better to have something wacky and out there rather than playing it safe.

>>55554719
Shit, you're right. Absolutely right.
I just hope I can do it justice.

>>55553683
Been trying to get the FUWA/MOCO saviorfag story but for some reason the creativity just isn't flowing.

It's weird because I know exactly what I want for the first 3 or so chapters and I have a good idea of how I'd want the plot to go but when I sit down to write it I have to fight to get the words out. It's so weird. Nothing I can do but sit on it I guess.

>>55553683
I gave up on writing the massive WIP I had and settled for submitting something smaller to the contest. It seems a lot more doable and I have a great scene planned for the end. I'm dangerously sick with Iroha fever at the moment, so hopefully releasing this will reduce my symptoms a little.

>>55554849
You have two choices ahead of you. Either you write something else and see where your head naturally takes you or you sit down and force inspiration to come to you by forcing words to come out until they start to flow.

>>55555555
Great, now I have to watch an indog stream. I guess I can write while doing it

>>55555957
or perhaps make a story with the dog twins similar to BBD. I've been wanting to make another like story to that but just haven't found the right grouping for it. Maybe I'm just approaching this wrong.

>>55557284
What would that even be like? A story about house training the dog twins?

>>55557585
I was thinking more along the lines of them babying you/chuuba of your choosing but I haven't thought about it any harder than that. I'd have to think about how I'd even want that to work.

>>55544061
fuck it, this must be preserved

>>55505159
Fuwawa Sex Backseating Greens
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vROLdKUC5daqm9lwXHVKGKvUXkv5vjmTLJ37QTkDb2I7axjxLyG5-oU46LKR5PoouzmRZ_nzlttFu4t/pub
Tags: Fuwawa, Mococo, NSFW, Greentext

I need to unclog my nuts

>>55560175
Thank you. My nuts are now unclogged

>>55560303

>>55553683
I'm having some issues with setting a scene, but I've other wise made good progress, I think

It seems that the Ayame fever has died down...

>>55561503
Who?

>>55539080
So a trend I've noticed with your writing is that you tend to not describe the full picture that is in your head. You are THINKING about those things that make the scene make sense and mesh together nicely, but they are either given to the reader with a one liner or not at all. I know it's difficult to do, but when you have your chapter written you need to try reading through it from top to bottom as if you have fresh eyes for it. Take the words at their face value and see if they depict the things they need to. As for Ayame's general theme. I wasn't thinking about any sort of theme for her since the way characters come and go and are generally the chuubas in name and appearance only, it doesn't encourage me to think they will have an overarching theme or even development. For that kinda thing you need to make use of subtle foreshadowing. A prior conversation that hints that Ayame being included or something like that.
Also the thing you mentioned earlier about the boobs getting bigger via their ascension, how huge are botan's now? Those kinda mountains would make it impossible to run the way she does.
I think you could have just gone with how Ayame's tits were perky and got the same feeling of enticement across. The larger boobs on her itty bitty frame aren't even referenced during the sex anyway.

>>55561503
There's literally Ayame sex posted in this thread.

>>55561503
rrat!Ayame is a funny joke, but we've kind of run through every major variation of her. Except maybe that fightsexual Ayame concept from a year back.

>>55562362
I mean I could say the same about Fubuki and Suisei. Except for the alt!Suisei prompt that has yet to be fully explored.

>>55562690
And the noblewoman Suisei seducing her brother to save his dick from being soiled by entering peasant Aqua's dumpy.

>>55562690
>>55562831
Can't forget the suisei concept based off of the rrat of her being The Last Romanov.

>>55562690
I got my own Suisei cooking that I hope people will enjoy.

>>55563589
Sequel or another take on the cooking with a comet concept?

>>55562362
There's the BDSM girlfriend rrat!Ayame, the lonely school mattress rrat!Ayame and the poor escort rrat!Ayame...surely there is room for more!

>>55550876
Just imagine how worth it it'll be when you finally get to reading smutty chapters and fics together.
>She bounces between giving in depth feedback on the sex itself and buildup to getting completely hot and bothered.
>She will NEVER interrupt her reading to act on her urges, but she is clearly fighting hard
>The instant the chapter ends or the box is closed, she pounces on you like a wild animal
>You may or may not have to reenact what you just read to the best of your ability.

>>55563753
What else could there be for rrat!ayame? A Cyberslut in a cyberpunk setting? A Fantasy world sex slave that really learned to love her new job?

>>55563744
Dang. I realized how that sounded the second I posted it. No, I'm not that fluff molding genius who made cooking with a comet. I meant that my Suisei character is baking in the oven and is almost ready to be taken out for her first real spin. Sorry if I mislead you or got your hopes up.

>>55561503
I've got plans of my own for that oni. She's one of the holos that I definitely want to include in TSD's main cast.

>>55564076
She could be a kinky hedonist princess that everyone has to treat like a virtuous virgin lest they anger Queen Mio.

Bikou's last stream urges me to write daughter incest lolidom.

>>55564275
TSD?

>>55565006
Total South-Korean Death

>>55564275
New series? I can't find anything with that acronym in the series archive.

>>55565006
>>55565314
Talent Security Division

>>55565394
Fuck. I feel stupid for not remembering that. My bad bro. Looking forward to it.

>>55565394
Ah, that three parts to be a series thing fucked with me.
Clearly you need to put in more title drops in the next chapter so people don't forget.

>>55561503
Never!

>>55561503
Nah. I've actually be thinking about how her role will play out in my own series. Ayame does offer a lot of things I enjoy.
>Fightarded
>Village of Onis promises to be fun, with big women to boot
>Mio will be there too
Just gotta make it through the next 3 or 4 arcs...then we'll get there.

>>55553683
The smut needs a little more work, everything else is good. Have to write a proper lead out sequence too

>>55565306
Kek

>>55562362
What about a Santa Ayame who doesn't understand the meaning of christmas and her version of it involves fucking every good behaved male throughout the world?

>>55563967
Would this involve any form of multitasking, anon?

>>55568317
>Shiori guides your hand almost unconsciously with hers as she gets to the really smutty parts
>No matter how much fondling you do, she continues to read
This is a kinda hell I can get down with. We'll save this idea for later.

>>55568598
>"If you can make me cum before I finish this chapter, I'll let you put it in my ass tonight."

>>55568317
That sounds like a Christmas Special.
Ayame has fucked Santa to death. Now per The Santa Clause she has become the new Santa and must fuck her way through the entire world's Christmas eve.

>>55568692
God damn. I really want confrontational and psychotic sex with this dumb book nerd. I also haven't gotten to have an outlet realized yet for enemies to fuckers. I NEED it.

>>55560175
Love the zoom in bonus pubes. I always could use more chuuba pube/pit hair art

>>55563753
The rrat!Ayame that wants to tackle her sex addiction so she can go back to living her life again. She turns down saviourfag anon because sleeping with him turned out bad for the both of them. It was emotionless and hollow like never before and it finally broke her down enough

>>55568966
What if you entered her room where Shiori laid on her bed naked, and narrated whatever you did next as if it was a fanfic? That'd be pretty weird and hot.

>>55568598
I eagerly await to see it written in a story in the future, anon.

Reason I asked if it has multitasking or not is because that's something I cannot do (no matter how hard I try) and if I were in such a scenario with Shiori I'd end up disappointing her because no matter what, I could only focus on doing one thing and then I would forget to do the other.

>>55568805
How did she manage to fuck Santa Clause to death in the first place? Did she manage to track him down or did she pounce on him when he visited her house to deliver her presents?

>>55569383
>"As he stepped into the room, Anon laid his eyes on the most beautiful sight he had ever seen. The chiaroscuro-haired temptress lay among the rose petals scattered upon the sheets, her voluptuous figure wearing naught but a smile. Her finger curled to beckon him forth as she stroked her hand lasciviously down her thigh..."
>"Shiori what the fuck are you doing."
>"...he asked in confusion, taken aback by the singularly breathtaking sight before him."

>>55569383
The concept of having conflict with Shiori is so fucking good. My initial idea is once within a certain part of the archive, or instead of a bookmark she places you within her own book, in which she creates the story as she goes. Soon her own excitement just makes her want to insert herself into the story, naked.

>>55511486
I just can't be horny for Bijou, because of all those geode pussy memes I can only imagine Bijou sex as being extremely painful

>>55569721
Hey, that aspect of her framing what you say as dialogue right in the moment was just was I was thinking. Great treatment of the idea!

>>55569850
You could have her suck you off while treating her to a vibrator and some rubbing of her rocky clit.

>>55568598
shiori does Hysterical Literature? it's on youtube

>>55569472
I look forward to it too. Maybe Advent will get their chance to show up a year from now. God I hope it's sooner though. Multitasking isn't something dudes can't "Truly" do anyway, so don't feel too bad about it. We come up with ways to fake it, but in a brain chemistry sense, we can't do it for real. You just kinda half listen while you'd be focusing on letting your magic fingers do the work. Truth be told, if I write this little scenario when the time comes, and so will I I'd make a point to write how Anon has completely fucking tuned out to whatever Shiori was reading and just thinking about fingerblasting her like I did to quite a few goth gfs at the mall during my younger days. They were into hot topic too, go figure.

>>55569850
My headcanon is that she can control how hard or soft her body is at will

>>55569850
That's why she needs the lube >>55521582, her rock cancer isn't curing itself without it.

>>55561975
>description
Yeah. The problem is is that I always feel as though I have described it well enough or at least satisfactory enough but it doesn't translate as well to readers. I want to describe it clearly but without belaboring it, though I guess explaining it too much is preferable than too little because at least it's clear. It's kinda like your suggestion with showing Anon's thoughts as a way to exhibit that: I'd have done that over what I did, I just never thought of showing it that way. That's what's making improving this such a bitch. I'll keep trying to get the power elements across more clearly, maybe what I see as over description is actually just right.

>characters in name only
I try to write chuubas as close to character as I can but it's difficult to balance vision with personality. I find myself actually rather frustrated writing adventure stories with them since a lot of them aren't fit to be villains or often have personalities that don't quite gel with what I want to write, ayame being one such example. I'm trying to write her as close to real Ayame as i can but at the same time, Ayame growing up in this environment would change her dramatically. It's soooo much easier to write them in character in a romance or fetish story and not become frustrated with the limitations. I always sacrifice character closeness for the sake of artistic vision in the end it seems.

>tits
Oh I was just making a joke LOL. But I can make it canon if people want that.

>>55569383
I am by no means a writer at all, I just came up with this lame thing while in the Novella general but the ending was kinda similar to your prompt.
>You enter your bedroom
>Shiori has blankets around her reading as per usual
>You sit at your desk
>She knows you've entered but doesn't say a word
>She's too busy with her book
>Or so you think
>You turn around and focus on your pc
>Shiori has gotten up slowly creeping towards you
>You're still unaware of this
>She's finally behind you
>She wraps a blanket around you to your surprise
>You turn around
>She steals a quick kiss on your lips, just a smooch
>She giggles and goes back to the bed
>Wrapping herself around the blankets again
>But as she walks back you notice
>She wasn't wearing any panties just then
>She made sure you would notice
>She's back to reading
>You approach her, a passionate desire taking over you
>She giggles a little and adjusts herself
>Her legs pop up from under the blanket
>Her pussy is in full view
>She continues reading as if you weren't even there anymore
>She's letting you do whatever you wish
>She starts saying in a monotone voice out loud, as if it were lines from the book
>"And so there he was..staring down at her, lust and desire building in both his eyes and..his male member"
>You know the book she's reading doesn't have any lines like that
>She continues saying out loud, as if instructing you on what to do
>"He gets ontop of her..slowly unveiling the covers, while she waits in anticipation"

>>55570642
So assuming that becomes canon, how long ago did Botan use to be a chestlet?

>>55569721
>"A more cowardly man might have run away from the unexpected offer, but not him. Her charm, his sexual frustration, and the fact that he was already getting rock hard, made him decide to take her up on her proposal."
>"Fuck it, I can't with these antics today. Will you shut up if I do you?"
>"...he exclaimed, only getting a smirk in return before she spoke. 'But I didn't say anything yet, love...' Her answer seemed to anger him for some reason as he approached her bed at a quick pace and promptly dropped his pants, revealing how well-endowed he was. He sat down on the bed in front of her, grabbed - ow! - her hair and made her suck on h-mmmm!"

>>55570642
>description
Try imagining a scene as a photograph in your mind, and note the most eyecatching features. Then describe those eyecatching features in very flowery or allegorical way.

>>55570912
>you can hear her muffled voice even as you're forcibly bobbing her head back and forth
>pull her back
>"-gliding expertly along his thick-MMPH!"

>>55570843
Buttons is around 300 years old and she ascended at age 17. After the ascension, that's when her boobs ballooned.

If you're asking by how much, her original bra size was b32 and her current is DD32. It was a huge adjustment for her, especially considering proper fitting clothes are expensive

>>55571127
>"Ah...and...fuck...then he impre..impr..impregnated her!"
>"Shiori we cant afford a kid! im cumming outside"
>"...muttered the faggot"

>>55570642
A friend told me that the one of the most important factors to a decent fantasy story is the descriptors and the setting. Since it takes place in a world not like our own, we as writers need to clearly paint that picture for the reader. I think where some of your difficulty may lie is that you present these power elements in a very rapid fire fashion. Ayame's gift for example, a way to do that more gracefully would have been to make a small off handed remark by her back during one of the previous times she and anon interacted, just to give the reader an idea of what the oni capable of.
>"The bathroom's down that hall and to the right" Ayame says out of the blue, and she gives Anon a a cheery and satisfied smile.
>"I say! You've been worried about that broke sole in your shoes for days! I found a new one that should fit you in the storage supply. No need to thank me!"
Little things like that in combination to Anon's own reaction to them can better paint that picture, while at the same time, not having the reader have to process it all at once, since there was a lot to juggle with that small interaction you wrote.
As far as characters go, I can't speak a ton to what the real ayame is like since I haven't looked into her a whole lot yet, but regardless of that, it's always a challenge to achieve that balance of staying true to character, and how they would be because of their upbringing and situations. I'm honestly not sure how well I achieve this balance myself. I tried to focus on showcasing key aspects of each chuuba's personality and letting them grow more into some of those traits as the story goes on. Like despite Watame's shitty situation she was dealt since she was a small sheep, she retained this naturally bright optimism that is actually close in line with how the actual one approaches her life, despite her own hardships.
There are a lot of liberties you can take if you spend the time to set up the background and prior experiences. HoloX is a good example of this and the direction I'm taking them in. I hope that kinda makes sense and helps you out a little. You can keep improving, not even the skies the limit.

>>55571717
>Shiori flips Anon's breeding switch along with his short fuse
>"A-Anon is fueled with a dangerous n-need to fuck his enemy like she were a cheap w-whore! Shiori feels like she's about to break! She thinks to herself that Anon isn't trying hard enough, he could break her mo-"
>A hard slap echoes in the bedchamber as Anon's palm turns Shiori's cheek red
>"He's finally being a man! Taking charge and asserting his-"
>Another slap, this time breaking the skin on Shiori's opposite cheek.
>"Shiroi is more turned on then she's ever been in her entire life! She looks at the man fueled by a hate filled lust that lays on top of her. Her lions ache for him to mark him as hers, and to choke the air from our throat."
>Anon left the home base of Advent a changed man. He learned a lot about himself that day...and probably just fathered another child.

>>55572255
>Her lions ache
Freudian slip?

>>55572255
>shiori has Lions on her home
damn, someone stop her!

>>55572334
Yes.
>>55572355
Not even a pack of lions will deter anon! He'll breed any lioness hags thrown his way. He surely knows how to by this point.

>>55570642
>Oh I was just making a joke LOL. But I can make it canon if people want that.
No. >>55543332 is acceptable in terms of size, but anything actually large makes her less adorable.

>>55569472
Her natural Oni instincts detected a man coming down the nonexistent chimney of her apartment, and her honed sex instincts caused her to rape that man to death while she was asleep.
Truly the power of Ayame's Ultra Sexstinct is immense.

>>55571717
>"...muttered the faggot"
I giggled.

>>55571717
>"...muttered the faggot"
I audibly laughed.

>>55571717
>"...muttered the faggot"
I went into a coughing fit

>>55572781
Poor Santa. He went down the chimney expecting to give people presents, he didn't expect to be jumped on by a oni who craves sex and lost his life in the process.
How the heck did she manage to get him hard though? isn't Santa an old relic who's sex drive is dead?

>>55571717
>"...muttered the faggot"
I died from laughter and am now posting from the afterlife

>>55557913
Hi anon, I don't typically browse this thread. But someone in /baubau/ linked this post. Are you actively going to be keeping track of these so we don't need to keep adding to the screencap? If so, can you post these in the thread as you add updates?

>>55573837
It's a christmas miracle!

>>55573942
I don't browse /baubau/ on a regular basis, so I can't guarantee I'll be able to pick everything up on my own. But if you/the other ruffians can tag future additions with a specific codephrase, I can do a search for it on warosu and find them.

>>55575240
>codephrase
I don't write any of them. But I could respond to good ones I see in our thread with "Insaneo style" so you know that the one I'm responding to is good. That's a meme from something, but luckily doesn't have many people say it in the archives.

>>55575492
Works for me. Unique enough that there probably won't be unrelated posts clogging up the search results. I'll keep an eye on the archive and see if anything turns up. I wouldn't want to spam the link every time something new gets added though, so that part will be on you guys.

>>55575492
I like how painfully unfunny the insaneo style skit is. It goes on for so long too, it's torture

>>55576567
It's perfect for the feeling the video is going for.

>>55505268
(you) being put in charge of giving selen a disciplinary spanking for starting drama repeatedly

>>55577609
>Selen getting punished for management cancelling her tournament and any future ones
Sure sounds like Nijisanji!

>>55577891
I didnt know if it would be too real world or not but I thought the idea would be a fun topic

>>55505159
Gentlemen, after many long days of work, it is with great emotion that I present to you the first chapter of my new series, which I have dubbed "Reach For The Stars":

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTwePj_vvtX0kX40i32jTOKXxW5X_lPHxcHtMI14mOs2XwPfc0ugeScMtJCV5lnFntJazA2joa6r9Gg/pub

Summary: (You) grew up aboard the Claudius Space Station under the care of one Sakura Miko. You always had a desire to go out there and explore the galaxy beyond the space station. A chance encounter with a purple-haired Trailblazer and her companions who came to help out during a raid by space pirates might be the opportunity you've been waiting for for so long...

Tags: Houshou Marine, Hoshinova Moona, Rikka, Airani Iofifteen, Sakura Miko, AZKi, Tsukumo Sana, SFW, Science-Fiction

>>55577609
What kind of drama?

>>55579789
Having sex with an unidentified male (me) post stream. Neither knew the mic was on

>>55577609
What would you be in that situation, a Niji manager? A friend? The latter sounds much less dystopian.

>>55517589
Huh. NTA but today I learned that alligators shed. Neat.

>>55574535
I'm envious of Santa now. Poor bastard probably hasn't gotten laid in god knows "how" long and suddenly his desire for sex reactivates itself (unwillingly of course) the second a severely horny oni (in her sleep) rapes him to death.
Whether the prompt itself gets picked up or not, I eagerly await for it to be written. Would be interesting to see Ayame dressed as Santa and slipping down the chimney with the intent to milk every male dry good or not.

>>55581373
How is she going to do that in one night? There's billions of males, she has a tiny fraction of a second for each of them

>>55580183
a friend or like a family member. Someone who has got tired of her actions

>>55581570
You underestimate her power.

>>55581570
She visits them in their dreams and they all coom in their sleep.

>>55581729
I was going to post something like she defies the laws of the universe and multiplies herself into clones of herself and sends them out throughout the world to milk every male dry and that once they are done, they vanish. Then the real Ayame would personally visit (You) because she has a crush on you and she really wants to give you the greatest present of them all which basically is her raping you against your will. She would then abduct you and groom you into being her lover and househusband who's only purpose is to satisfy her sex appetite and any masochist urges she may have. But >>55581803
posted a scenario that makes more sense so I wouldn't mind going with his choice. Plus I've always wanted to know if a male (in their sleep) could cum until they are bone dry.

>>55582612
Post it meant for >>55581570

>>55582612
Ayame visiting you specifically would be cute. Maybe in London.

>>55579767
Well, kind of a lot to unpack here so my thoughts might not be perfectly put together, but I'll kind of just spew them out I guess.

The setting is cool, I've always enjoyed the common-place aliens Star Trek kind of thing. I think the en media res opening is super unnecessary, and just makes half of the fic in italics for no reason. An expanded focus on the drudgery of being on the space ship would also have helped get Anon's desire to leave and explore across better, and the whole pirate attack doesn't really seem to have much urgency to it at all because Anon and Jerry go from being separated from everyone when the attack starts to finding Miko completely fine and unharmed in literally one sentence. I feel like that more than anything as long as you expand on stuff like that this series as a whole will benefit from it. Kinda weird that in the far-flung space future that he has just a phone, too.

>>55585726
Well, I kinda thought that maybe the in media res wasn't that good an idea, but that the point where I realized it, it was too late for me to turn back. And I it's true that I could have expanded a bit on Anon's life on the space station. A lot of things I could have done better, really. But thanks for reading, I appreciate it.

>Kinda weird that in the far-flung space future that he has just a phone, too.
Well, I did say many threads ago that Star Rail was one of my sources of inspiration. Every PC in that game has a cellphone for some reason, so I just kinda rolled with that lol.

>>55587857
>Star Rail
Ahh okay. Makes sense I'd miss that then because jacking off to Kafka is as much as I've interacted with Star Rail

>>55588079
>jacking off to Kafka
Based. She's so fucking hot.

>>55585096
>>55505268
Giving Ayame an enema to flush out all the filth in her shitpipe so you can brutally eat out her ass with your tongue. You then wake up the next day nearly suffocating because Ayame has plopped her bare ass on your face and she won't budge until you've ate her out.

>>55588296
Hell YEAH, brother. That sounds fantastic.

>>55588296
I would read this. I would read this so hard

>>55588296
Could be fun

>>55590655
Then I hope you enjoy the thought of Ayame "demanding" you let her plop her ass on your face because she's gotten addicted to you eating out her ass that she NEEDS to be eaten out everyday. I hope you've got a really strong tongue.

>>55590794
This is the twisted sibling of the "Ayame wants to play with your dick all the time" prompt.

>>55590794
You're framing this as some kind of monkey's-paw commitment. I see it as paradise, as long as she cleans that dumper.

>>55590876
I was kind of thinking about it but instead of playing with your dick, she wants you to play with her ass and whenever she desires it.
>>55585096 should never have been posted because its his fault that I've gotten interested in Ayames ass.

>>55590979
Oh she'll defo clean it, anon. (You) in the prompt have made it very clear with her that if she wants her ass eaten out, then she has to make sure her butthole is throughly cleaned out so that you won't end up lapping anything "vile" when she sits on your face.
If your tongue never gets tired then you are right that this would be seen as absolute paradise. I was just thinking of a scenario where after a 3 hour session on tonguing her butthole, she suddenly demands another session 1 hour later and your poor tongue is still too sore and tired and needs to recover.

>>55590981
She does have a cute ass.

>>55591207
That picky little sod. She thinks she can demand another session an hour later? What gives her the right to end the first session? No, there will be no early escape for her - she requires extensive asshole correction regularly over a half-day period, minimum.

>>55591780
Your tongue must be endurance-trained well

>>55592035 (me)
Oops, I dropped my image of ojou butt on accident. Sorry

>>55591715
While it isn't as developed as Fubuki's, I still want to worship it and have my face glued to it 24/7 so that her scent is the only thing I can smell when she's not sitting on my face.

>>55591780
>What gives her the right to end the first session?
Ayame could possibly be thinking you need to use the loo and being the ever so nice girlfriend that she is, she'll ask you to stop the session and let you do your business. Or she might need the loo but if you're too into eating her out, she might accidentally piss everywhere (luckily not on you).

Or she can suddenly just decide she's had enough and cut it short. But she is "very needy" so when she demands her ass needs tongue, you WILL answer her call. You will answer it even if you are currently in the bath to relax (she'll barge in and join you in the bath).

There's not nearly enough fanfics of chubby chuubas!
I will take this offense personally, and write slampig sex!

>>55591858
I'd happily drag my balls through a field of broken glass just to have even a millionth of time spent on the scenario you're describing. You best believe a little tongue discomfort can't stand before the sheer might of my butthole-bolstered willpower.

>>55592318
Hell YEAH, brother. Sounds like heaven to me.

>>55592506
I have one cooking but don't see myself in the headspace to do extended writing until I clear out my game backlog. Maybe in another half year or so

>>55581570
As the new Santa she has that same power to deliver her 'gifts' at the stroke of midnight even if it involves fucking her way though the entire world. This is of course powered up by her Christmas Spirit so that everyone experiences her near simultaneously.

>>55505268
(You) hypnotize Noel using a coin/your voice/Flare's merch/etc. into showing off her ungodly body. Lewd times ensue~

Really just me being shocked there's nothing like this already.

Writers doko?

>>55599697
I'm write here.

>>55599697
Here. What are you hoping that I'm writing?

>>55599697
Busy fucking your oshi

Clear.

>>55592318
>luckily not on you
/ringo/ would like a word

>>55592506
Man, i miss /ag/

>>55599697
And on that note, i gotta get back to writing

>>55607427
>/ringo/
Do not pronounce that accursed name ever again.

>>55603601
What about my oshi? Will you fuck my oshi too?

>>55599697
Busy thinking about what to do for my contest submission.

>>55607553
I like it there. It's a good thread, and they produce fics as well. Granted some are too much for me, but others were good

>>55505268
NEPOBO feeding cum to lamy

>>55609053
You speak as if it still exists. Could you tell me where, so I can avoid it?

>>55579767
What this anon >>55585726 said covers most of what I want to say, but I’d also like to point out your dialogue. A lot of it feels forced or unnatural, as if the characters skipped a few lines in their conversations. They sometimes didn’t feel like real people talking, but rather bad AIs. I would overall just recommend making this longer by adding more descriptions and dialogue.
I’m looking forward to where this story goes however, because space exploration is one of my favourite types of stories and we have hardly any in the archive (Astra lost in space could have been great, dammit). If you can refine your writing and pull off a grand adventure, this’ll be a great fic.

>>55610145
Ask and it shall be noted.
>Botan does it with straight frenching it down her throat.
>Nene spits it
>Polka is currently trapping anon with her fennec vicegrip

>>55610145
>>55610713
YA
ME
NA~

>>55610428
It does, i just saw it on the catalog last week.
It got banished to /d/ for quite a while though

>>55610521
Yeah, like I said to that other guy, I admit I could have done a better job at some parts. Still, thanks for reading, I appreciate it a lot.

>>55579767
Autism. Pure, unadulterated autism. Turn yourself in to science that others may study you, for your twisted psyche may yet hold the cure for developmental disorders.

>>55613909
>complaining about autism
>while talking about a vtuber fanfic posted on an anonymous Indonesian skydiving forum

>>55615393
That means your autism stands out amongst everyone else's. You're a special, unique breed. That you couldn't figure this out from my last comment only further confirms this theory.

>>55615547
We're an autists autist. So autistic even we are outcast from the autistic outcasts for being too weird

>>55616476
Why are you paying attention to this retard ?

>>55610713
So is Lamy being punished here, or is she taking a challenge, or are you not on fellatio terms with her yet?

>>55599697
I just woke up! Don't know if I'm gonna write today because I slept like shit though.

>>55505268
Bijou peeing herself. Hell, anyone of advent could use a fic of them slowly losing control, desperately triying to hold until thye finally lose and pee themselves

>>55616529
Because hes right, even though noone wants to admit it. We are to other weebs what weebs are to normal people.

>>55616809
Could be a little bit of the first 2. Could also be the group is just bonding. I'll know when I get there.

>>55617240
Nene's cute smile is just begging for some violent irrumatio here.

It was actually a futa prompt but i like your idea

>>55617323
I do share the sentiment. I'm not often a rough or aggressive in that way, but sometimes I really just wanna grab a handful of hair from the back, and just go to town on a mouth. Nene could take it like a champ too, at least in the context I'd be writing it in. Good notes all around today.

>>55618978
Nene does seem like she has maaochist potential with how you've written her. Not because she's especially kinky, but because she's playful, tough and adores strength. The opposite kind of masochism that Shiori would have, in a way.

>>55610428
It’s been sent to /d/ where it belongs

>>55599697

>>55599697
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH I CANT FUCKING WRITE, NO MATTER WHAT I DO THIS FUCKING SCENE ISNT WORKING but ill keep triying tomorrow

>>55622444
Switch to your other wip anon, if you can't force inspiration to come to you then maybe writing something else will get it to come by instead.

>>55622444
Tomorrows a new day bro. Get some rest, clear your head a little, and tackle it with a fresh perspective. You got this.
>>55622193
She also has been known to wanna be used in that sorta sense, so I'll be happy to oblige. Dang it's gonna be such a good exploration of character and experiences. When a man with slight misgivings gets told he can be as rough as he wants, there's nothing quite like it.

>>55623031
There's like 3, maybe 4
im barring my doors, they are not getting in!
>>55623096
i blame baldur's gate, my oshi being cute and her friends being cute

>>55623270
Your excuses are acceptable. Our oshis being cute can be quite the distraction.

>>55622444
Don't force it. One of the single most important things I've learned as a writer is to not force the inspiration. It always comes and if you do it before it makes for sloppy work.

I always find that consuming media, be it TV, games, manga or a book helps. I got inspiration yesterday for the Ayame-Anon thing from fucking Fruits Basket of all things lol. You always find it where you least expect it.

>>55571802
>Like despite Watame's shitty situation she was dealt since she was a small sheep, she retained this naturally bright optimism that is actually close in line with how the actual one approaches her life

I never even thought about it in that light. I guess what's more important that it being 100% without fail exactly like the character is that her core remains true to character. Despite the situation, Watame is very kind at heart. If I were to write the twins in a similar situation, the most important thing to never change is their bond and the banter they have as siblings, even though they would act far different in a world like Balsa. Honestly that is a brilliant way to see it because I've always had a huge, huge struggle with trying to balance character accuracy with the tone of the plot.

Your critiques are always very helpful and informative. I greatly appreciate them. My book has benefited greatly from your input.

Woah!

don't die on me

>>55622444
I know how you feel, man. I'm trying to introduce two characters into my story that (You) already know, but it feels so hard to do it naturally given the scene I've written. I've rewritten the thing like three times.

>>55505268
FuwaMoco/ any chuuba doing an apology video but they're apologizing about doing something absurd. Something like shooting down and killing Santa or hijacking a rocket to the moon.

>>55627877
so just a normal Fuwamoco apology then?

>>55622444
Not sure if it works for you, but something that always made me write a lot is reading something awful, and just thinking about all the ways I could've done it better.
Find some meh content, and then extrapolate what you could do better with it, and then try and use those ideas to make something.

I'll probably just get troll responses, but have there been any good Lamy smut stories in recent months? She's invading my dreams again.

>>55628663
Unfortunately no, we've been in a troublesome woman deficit for a while now.

>>55628903
I want Lamy to kiss me like then intentionally vomit directly into my mouth

I don't read fan fiction, can't say i plan to either, but wrote an idea that came to mind.
Doing proper lore over Cover's lazy ass (advent)

Think I did a decent job of channeling each girls personality with several references woven throughout for fun.
Any bored anons are welcome to critique, no matter how harsh. Reasons appreciated ofc.
Maybe I think too highly of myself but pretty solid use of the existing paper thin lore, imo
https://pastebin.com/FbBEHYdQ

>>55628663
I have some Lamy sex planned for the far, far future, but unfortunately I can't say there has been any recent stories featuring her. The best Lamy smut I've read here is The Warmest Elfnogg, but it might not be for everyone.

>>55629274
Your prose is kind of thing when it comes to describing actions. It's kind of hard not to notice when you kind of shove as much action/movements as you can into a single paragraph.
As for the fic as a whole. It's kind of extremely mediocre. I can't really say anything bad about it other than the weird way you write actions, but I also can't really say anything in praise.
Man, going back to pastebin really shows how bad its default formatting looks compared to rentry.

>>55629274
Considering this is about lore, /log/ might also be interested in this :)

I finally figured out what my main antagonist's plan is 80% into the story

>>55628903
Source on the full image?

>>55630989
>Plan so clever even author doesn't figure it out until it's too late
Damn they're good

>>55631311
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/81970

Big fan of his 'Cheating on your GF with Okayu' ones too

>>55630989
I'm torn between several potential antagonists. I may end up just using all of them and turning the plot into one big gambit pileup

>>55631426
Thank you very much.

>>55630885
Whatever happened to that place? As far as I can tell doing a casual browse of their recent threads it's like 75% discussion of a vtuber romhack, and the rest consisting of bumps and other setting worldbuilding that no one else responds to.

>>55630526
If it wasn't clear, I was purposefully writing within the constraints of the available lore, it also won't do much for you if you haven't been paying a lot of attention to advent
The goal was to essentially give a least-cringe, 'logical' explanation to them becoming Vtubers.

I'm also aware some don't like action writing like that. Alas, it's how i like it.
tl;dr I wasn't necessary going for quality fiction. It's constrained.

>>55630885
Hm, I'm a sporadic /vt/ visitor, swear i haven't seen that general.

>>55633975
It used to be a vtuber worldbuilding general with a different name. /vtwbg/.
>>55632867
It expanded from a single worldbuilding project to open worldbuilding, lore, fangames etc. to keep itself alive. As far as I can tell, all the hype around the initial setting died out once the few autists who still had an idea what was going on had done all they were excited about. It's hard to get new people to stay around when you've decided all the most interesting things already, established a lot of boundaries that anyone joining later just has to accept, and there's no discernable goal to work towards.
The latter is the big problem of all pure "worldbuilding" projects - there's no finishable product like a story or a game to work towards, so it just keeps going until it collapses under its own weight.

>>55630989
I haven't figured out what the antagonist's goals and purposes are, and I'm currently up to the part where I'm supposed to write about the antagonist's goals and purposes.

>>55516165
Is this supposed to be a prompt or a story?

It's just about that time again.

>>55638163
Time for sluts?

>>55638374
Sara's a massive slut.

>>55638482
And I love her for it.

>>55631317
I mean I already sort of had a vague idea, I was just struggling to come up with the trigger for her plan being successful without it being a forced contrivance.

Now, not only do I have it figured out, it's going to be fuckin cool when it happens. Can't wait for the big moment. It's like edging while masturbing and this is going to be one huge cum shot

>>55638518
She'll tell you she loves you and then suck your neighbour's dick! She's Hoshikawa Sara!

>>55638904
Festival...

>>55599697
About to get started with overhauling my contest entry. Man, I have to admit, it's tough to write a realistic romantic relationship.

>>55638482
The old discussion for an Our Cures sequel where Sara tries to steal you from Ayame is something I still think of from time to time. A battle of the sluts.

>>55599697
Getting there. Off to a good start for just under an hour

>>55640233
I thought it hadn't settled on Sara but only on the girl being blonde. Though saying that it did remind of those Our Cures sequel concepts that got discussed. I think there were two that got discussed, the first being the college romance drama involving both Ayame and Anon cheating, and the other being something wacky involving Ayame's Yakuza connections.

>>55607427
I picked "not on you" because I know there's a majority (I think) on this thread that do not like piss and I wouldn't want my prompt being ignored or hated.

>>55640713
I still wonder how the Yakuza sequel would work. There would be such a large difference in tone and genre it would be hard to call it a sequel at all. It'd be like if Chilli Powder and MSG became Heartbreak Tokyo.
What I'd personally like to see come out of Our Cures is the alternate routes the author had nearly made canon, like the timeline where Aqua wins or when Aqua is the one to reject him.

>>55607610
Only if you ask nicely

>>55642224
I mean the "obvious" way to handle it would be to lean harder on the comedy side of the romcom and effectively have the story be a wacky comedy about dealing with Ayame's Yakuza family interspersed with romance scenes as Ayame trains you with half remembered movements from the Oni Martial Arts...
Yeah there's no real way to get more "Our Cures" out of this particular concept. Though in fairness any sequel to that fic is kind of in the same boat or either breaking their relationship apart in order to rebuild it for drama or keeping the relationship as is and just dragging the cast into another "adventure".

>>55640945
You can share the other option in >>55503211 if you want

NEW BREAD! GET'CHER NEW BREAD HERE!
GET IT WHILE IT'S TOASTY AND HOT!
>>55643001
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>>55642224
Or the timeline of your pic related where Anon ends up cucked by or in a threesome with Ayaqua.

>>55643258
Koropan?!

>>55642857
Lui... stop staring at me like that...

>>55643183
As tempted as I am, the only thing I like in those ringo threads is things like sweat and piss. Things like farts and poo is such a turn off and its why I don't want to put my prompt idea in that thread (even though I very nearly did).
Sorry. Of course you are free to take the idea if it interests you so much as you have my full permission to do as you please with it.

>>55643258
Cute OP

>>55642857
cute hag

>>55640945
That's perfectly fine and understandable, i was mostly just poking a little fun at it.
That said, i still 1000% wanna read your fic

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