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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>54697456

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54883589

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Moth to a flame:TAGS: Shiori Novella, SFW, Fluff,:>>54876919

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

A fic about being assigned to the same group as Aqua and her dumb friends in drama class and trying to carry them all to a passing grade.:>>54700968

well my idea would be that you're a new prison guard assigned to all the holo girls in prison, trying to romance them, but something dark and twisted may be hidden behind the cute smiling faces. Yes, I partly drew the idea from Gokusotsu Kraken:>>54773923

Lolibaba Mio nursing (You) back to health after you fall ill.:>>54781818

Fucking your hag girlfriend with a condom on and being completely unaware she's already poked a hole in it.:>>54818182

Fretting over Pochi when her old lady problems flare up:>>54876479

>> No.54884374

Contest Entry Anchor
/wg/ is holding a writing contest for the whole board!
Submissions close on 08/25. If you’re interested, you can find more information here:
rentry.org/WGWC

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>>54884374
We need a cute girl to attract attention!

>> No.54886508

>>54883644
Any sort of chuuba fanfic, but it's full of nothing but millennial writing cliches.
>"She's right behind me, isn't she-nye?" Miko asked as Suisei stood behind her.
>*another Watamelon blows up.* "Well... that happened," Watame said.
>"This, peko! So much this!"
>"Sousa boku wa yoru o utau yo stellar-stellar!" she sang, before pausing. "Erm... that sounded a lot better in my head."
>*Myth faces down Ina, who is being possessed by the Ancient Ones.* "Is anyone else seeing this???" Ame asks.

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>>54831046
Good so far. Starting to properly outline certain powers that also serve as themes and I wrote a very touching scene with Lui that I may expand on as I write the rest of the chapter. Just a bit stumped on one plot point I really need to iron out the details for if the climax is going to be any good.

I've been thinking lately that I wish I had a personal editor to look over my work before I publish it. Not like for grammar and shit, that's easy enough, but so that he could say "well this may work or this might not" so I could learn stuff ahead of time. Right now I'm struggling a bit with presentation and how much is too much. But as it goes now, I can only know after the fact and someone tells me.

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>>54883589
>>54884374
My contest entry. I tried to incorporate quite a few of the suggested themes. I gave it the bedtime edit so that's probably good enough.

The Perfect Day

Summary: After a long life, old man Anon seeks his perfect day.

Tags: Ina, SFW, Depression, Occult(ish)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT8rgRu2fiE27CFKsEcIfklVUpgrJcKQmSlmGRNtq4X1YGaoGE1TSKEk-xK_1j0IbkJHusYjvh0H-5U/pub

>> No.54886948

>>54886508
>I used one of those
Fuck.

>> No.54887461

>>54886948
Don't worry, anon; it happens to all of us.
How do you think I know these cliches in the first place

>> No.54888448

>>54886508
This but it's also the story you throw in Title Drops™ to other /wg/ fics then somehow make the actual fic endearing to create the perfect fic.

>> No.54888720

>>54888448
>A story that forms the basis for the /wg/ Novelistic Universe
I was about to balk, but then I realized that such a fic would be utterly cringekino.

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>>54875723
>>54875955
>>54876172
Watching her vtubing history stream now. She's alright. Kinda cute, even. She doesn't jump out and appeal to me like Korone or Fubuki do, but I like her well enough so far.
Or maybe I'm just making excuses so I have a reason to commission a fic with that outline, haha. That's a very amusing setup.

>> No.54888947

>>54886948
Something being cliche doesn't make it bad, after all.

>> No.54888998

>>54888720
A fic where a chuuba visits /wg/ and then gets isekai'd into a universe that combines different stories?

>> No.54889216

>>54888720
It would, and you don't even need to think of a good overarching plot for that. Just use that Kronii crashes together every timeline and now everyone has to fight each other like the plot of an old fighting game concept from a couple of months back. Then you have the basis for a fic that's simultaneously self-masturbatory cringe, and Endearingly Kino.

>> No.54889326

>>54886776
Saving this for when I wake up

>> No.54889365

>>54889216
>Melty Thread

>> No.54889370

>>54888998
Either that, or all the anons of the different /wg/ stories have to work together to stop some sort of universe-ending threat. You know, like... the MCU.
Jesus
>Shiori, the weird girl from Advent, has in her possession a book that supposedly links to other worlds.
>Nobody, under any circumstances, is allowed to touch it. There's a reason it was thrown in prison with Shiori in the first place.
>"Hmmm... I wonder if I can get more viewers if I open this book, peko."
>Pekora opens the book, and she sees worlds beyond her greatest imagination: HoloFantasy, HoloJourneys, Cover High, and the rest of the classics.
>"..."
>"...this book is useless, peko."
>Pekora throws the book to the side. After a few moments, a white hand begins slipping out of it.
>"Fucking finally," Omegaα whispers from beyond the void.
>>54889216
This can work as well. In fact, it might be the only solution to the plot - have Kronii crash together every timeline so all the anons can team up to beat the shit out of Omega.

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>>54886776
Jesus fuck Anon, where you an old, widowed man with schizophrenia in a past life? I obviously wouldn't know much about it, but it felt like you captured the feeling of old age and the inevitability of one's mortality really fucking well. This was a unique, thought-provoking story I would have never expected to see in a vtuber fanfiction thread of all places. I wish I could say more, but I can't find the words.
>"Were you real?"
>"Didn't I tell you already? You didn't need me to be real. You needed me to be here."
That was just a killer line. Your prose is quite good as well, although there was the occasional adjective that didn't really fit whatever it was describing. The fic might have been a touch long for the story it was trying to tell, since it felt kinda repetitive at some points, but overall it wrapped up really nicely. This is a strong fucking contender for the contest, well done.

>> No.54890841

>>54889216
It really would be like smash bros if you can get the same chuuba from different timelines like Link, Young Link and Toon Link.

>> No.54891224

>>54890841
Too bad the villains for this would be really thin. Corrupted Nene, Girl of Emptiness In a, The anon from Subjection and slaves, and... I can't really think of anymore.

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>>54886776

>> No.54891443

>>54891224
Suisei from the various gore/snuff stories in the archive

>> No.54891525

>>54891224
also Pure Black Noel/Coco

>> No.54891837

>>54889216
>>54891224
There should be some world-ending threat that defeats a lot of the characters fighting it, but then all the anons from the various universes combine to stop it just before it destroys the chuuba multiverse.

>GRAAAH, NOBODY CAN HINDER ME! WHO ARE YOU?
>I am many, but I have no name. I am...Anonymous.
>*kills the evil entity with a multiversal energy beam*

>> No.54892178

>>54891837
>the dust settles
>"...So how do we change back?"

>> No.54892397

>>54892178
If they were stuck like that for a time they'd have to spend a lot of it fucking their many, many partners.

>> No.54892861

>>54886776
Unless someone can conjure up an absolute gutbuster of a comedy/shitpost fic this is going to be the frontrunner for the entire contest.
Because this, this was perfect. It's like the perfect sfw Ina fic, with just the right touches from her lore and from her personality. If Girl of Emptiness was the best showing of lore!Ina this would be the best showing of the mix between.
I genuinely can't find anything to nitpick about this outside of one typo I found.
>gorcery store

>> No.54893011

>>54892397
>Fubuki's turn comes up
>the gestalt falls into disarray as dozens of personalities start fighting over who gets to be the dominant one

>> No.54893072

>>54893011
Or it's a multiversal thing where a lot of Fubukis show up and some try to get a second time in by pretending to be another one.

>> No.54894046

>>54893011
>Gestalt!Anon falls apart into a pile of bodies as a fly flies out of the pile
>It buzzes in it's native tongue a single word repeatedly.
>MINE! MINE! MINE!

>> No.54894113

>>54892861
Anon, we're just getting started, don't discount what some of the other authors might have in store.

>> No.54895851

>>54886684
>I've been thinking lately that I wish I had a personal editor to look over my work before I publish it. Not like for grammar and shit, that's easy enough, but so that he could say "well this may work or this might not" so I could learn stuff ahead of time. Right now I'm struggling a bit with presentation and how much is too much. But as it goes now, I can only know after the fact and someone tells me.
Anon. That's called a beta reader. You can find those online by just asking other authors and asking if they want to do that as a trade.

>> No.54896583

>>54886776
I never visit this thread but i saw my ina's name in the archives so i decides to check this out and i really enjoyed it. Thank you.

>> No.54897579

>>54896583
You might like girl of emptiness.
It's gone from the archive but the hard archive has it still

>> No.54899721

>>54883644
Chuubas but they're literally digimon, and you adventures in the virtual world with them.

>> No.54899741

>>54896583
It looks like it might win the current writing contest if it is in. Though of course it's still early days.

>> No.54899772

>>54883569
suisex

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>>54892861
>>54899741

>> No.54900538

>>54900358
You don't think it might win?

>> No.54900732

>>54900358
We have a contest running >>54884374 For this month until the 25th everyone's invited to write a fic in a competition that's our blatant attempt to fish for new blood.

>> No.54903395

>>54890841
>fighting anon team

>> No.54903561

>>54892861
>gorcery
Senility

>> No.54903651

>>54886776
I think I should switch my brain from "I have to try my best to win" mode to "participation is all that matters" mode real quick because there's no way I can write anything that tops this fic. This is beautiful.

>> No.54903694

>>54903651
Just include a sex scene and pivot to the NSFW category, duh

>> No.54904538

>>54889370
>Anons from every story fuse together
>Omega goes "Who are you!?"
>Breeder of hags and cunny
>Lover and abuser
>Partner and rapist
>Bull and cuck
>Torturer, and tortured
>I am Anonymous
>Linkin Park plays in the background

>> No.54904870

>>54904538
>Someone turn that shit off

>> No.54904951

>>54904870
>Are you fucking kidding? Nothing caps cringekino like LP
>A thousand different conciousnesses fight over the music choice.

>> No.54904992

>>54900538
>>54900732
It's a great story written by someone who's obviously skilled, I'm just confused as to why you're trying to declare the contest as over when we're barely a week in.

>> No.54905061

>>54904992
I don't see how
>It looks like it might win the current writing contest if it is in. Though of course it's still early days.
qualifies as
>why you're trying to declare the contest as over when we're barely a week in.

I just said that it's a favourite to win so far.

>> No.54905193

>>54888998
A fic where a chuuba visits /wg/ and then you start getting c&d from both cover corp and her personal lawyer.

>>54889370
>Quick, everyone! Impregnate a hag to prevent the collapse of the timelines!
>fubuki, go shit in that guy's mouth.
>but...
>do you want to live? Start shitting!

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>All these posts about winning or losing
>the real winners are the readers and writers alike since we get all these new stories
It's cheesy, but it's how I'm looking at this.

>> No.54905381

>>54904992
Anon, I'm going to be honest with you. "The Perfect Day" is the best fic I've read in months. Unless any of our regulars have an "Out of the Blue" tier one-shot wip they've been holding back my vote is already locked in. Like I'm still gonna write my comedy fic for the sfw category but I'm just putting my hat in for fun rather than winning.

>> No.54905425

>>54905301
This. I don't really care who wins. I just want to see us get lots of submissions.

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>Want to write
>Using all my mental brain juices on job applications and bullshit sections like: "What excites you about joining our team?" since I can't just say: I like money
Best chance I have is to just knock a chunk out for the day and try to recharge before diving back into my wip.

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This is all I'm going to say for what I'm writing.

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>>54906710
I'll not complain about some bellyrubs for the two good girls

>> No.54906975

>>54906710
Spitroasted by FuwaMoco?

>> No.54907099

>>54906710
Mococo getting "emotional" when you touch her tummy made me think that the two were implying something dirty. But it was just my mind in the gutter.

>> No.54907202

>>54907099
That's the idea, especially with Fuwawa saying it as though she was getting extremely excited.

>> No.54907424

>>54907099
They did previously mention that the reason their tails and ears are off limits is because they're sensitive and reserved for a romantic partner. So you're probably on the right track.

>> No.54907480

>>54905301
Alludes to the secret motive of the contest being to get all the threadwatchers in the thread to get off their butts and write something good.

>> No.54907673

Also did not know there was a contest.

>> No.54907752

>>54907673
we really need to advertise this thing better

>> No.54907909

>>54907752
It's a minor thing, but I thought the contest anchors that used the name field were more noticeable.

>> No.54908070

>>54907752
Maybe some other oshi threads are more responsive than others. From my pov, the oshi threads I frequent are less about chuuba discussion and more about throwing around pics and just saying CUTE SEXY WIFE. My mentions of fanfics in the past went unnoticed. ShisLamy thread might be a good place to go though if we haven't already. They are pretty interested in that kinda thing, at least a few of the regulars seemed to be.

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>>54908070
I posted an advertisement in the ShishiLamy thread a day before the contest, and I got completely ignored.

>> No.54908504

>>54907752
Putting it in the OP would probably help matters, since the first few lines are what people see in the catalog or scrolling page 1.

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>>54908349
Damn...last time I was there asking questions about Lamy's siblings they were pretty responsive and actually expressed interest in what I was writing since Botan was due to come in around that time.

>> No.54908569

>>54907752
Eh, I gave it a shot back by making a single post in two generals before the contest started (clockgen and /log/).
In all honesty we probably should have done a better job shilling the contest, but I didn't want to be as annoying as the fucking vtwbg guys were when they were initially building their thread so I just stopped at two. Going by the archives it looks like everyone else also made some token attempts as well.

>> No.54908621

>>54908569
How did those Lord of the Board guys do it?? They got a ton of submissions.

>> No.54909018

>>54908504
Yeah but good luck taking control of that. Format for our thread header has been static ever since the introduction of the recap posts.
>>54908621
I think it was combination of the their submissions being kinda low-effort enough that it only needs a bit of creativity from an Anon from a thread and their home thread already being popular. /wg/ is kind of only a haunt for writers, readers and occasional tourists at this point.

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>>54908569
To be fair, we've had a lot of recent events that have made the catalog completely visceral in the past week alone.
>General EN3 stuff
While this has been mostly positive, the the Shiori baiting has been insane, and the FuwaMoco stuff hasn't done the catalog a lot of favors either.
>Gura
Same old shit, here we go again, but now in surround sound thanks to Miko including her in her live. I just checked the catalog now and theres at least 3 bait threads about it.
>GFE that TEMPISS this [Insert scapegoat of choice] Deflection!
That speaks for itself.
I imagine most people who just want to partake in their own oshi's general are either fed up, annoyed, or just stepping away for a few. It's just the beginning of the month though, we can still try to throw the activity into other places and maybe someone will take a look and want to get involved. Also, as more submissions come in, the more likely someone might want to get involved, since they'll see others having fun with it. We can only go up from here lads.
>Mfw I self motivated myself to want to write some more. I'm gonna mow my damn lawns and then get back to my chapter! There's a hag in a box to be found and saved.

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>>54909018
>Format for our thread header has been static ever since the introduction of the recap posts.
almost as if handing over the OP to a bot was a bad idea.

>> No.54909305

We should hit each general once at least. Can we make a list of all generals that have been contacted?
>>54908569
>/log/
>clockgen
Which other ones?

>> No.54909316

>>54908621
Lord of the Board was easy to participate in and is about representing the whole thread, not just yourself - it got most of the attention from people who didn't have to lift a finger, they just watched. It also resulted in an exciting main event you could watch a stream of, not a bunch of nerds reading stories on their own and then discussing them.

>> No.54909590

I feel like it's worth noting that there are probably 5x more lurkers than posters. The overlap of people who reply to shill posts vs who actually participates are not necessarily exclusive

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>>54909590
Very good point. We should know that better than most.

>> No.54910680

>>54909305
Sure I can do an archive dive.
/vnug/
/rrat/
Ame general
/hag/
/pol/ka
/hfz/
Horni
Shishilamy
Global
/holoX/
Towa
/mogu/
nijien
That's pretty much every shill post of ours I can find that either linked the rentry or mentioned that is /wg/ holding a contest.

>> No.54910884

>>54909179
We could try to wrest back control, but I think it would be basically impossible. I can guarantee that if we make a thread to compete with the bot thread, the jannies would delete our one.

>> No.54911166

>>54910884
not if we make ours first.

>> No.54911178

Does anyone remember that story about helping your chuuba girlfriend with her period cramps? I distinctly remember reading a story like that here, but searching for "period" or "cramps" doesn't yielf anything in the archive. I could have sworn it was about Miko, but I don't see any Miko stories that involve the concept. Anyone have a clue?

>> No.54911213

>>54910884
I don't think the bot's necessarily a bad thing, I just think that editing the boilerplate for the bot would be the best way to advertise for the contest

>> No.54911370

>>54911166
I'd be happy to do that if I'm around at the time, but just as a heads up I cannot be fucked with the prompt recap. I also get the feeling that if we make a thread before bump limit /wg/ is going to be thrown into chaos because
>NOOOOOOOOO!! EARLY THREAD REEEEEEE!!

>> No.54911430

>>54911178
It's only tagged as Miko fluff but it is in the archive. It's 'A (Shrine) Maiden"s Burden'

>> No.54911474

>>54911213
Anon, that's the thing, we have no control over the bot. Someone just pulled up one day and let it loose.

>> No.54911505

>>54911370
if anyone still has a problem with early threads after almost two years of them, they can take their autism and shove it.

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>>54911430
Many thanks

>> No.54911660

>>54910884
I mean in theory you could go even earlier. Wrest control by starting a new thread format when the thread activity dies down in the afternoon/early morning and sage the link to the new thread in the old one (though obviously only try your luck for this once it's at the late 200+ posts). Perhaps you can get lucky and start it off if the thread dies.
Personally don't really care for the thread header but if you want to test your luck, you're welcome to try.

>> No.54911661

>>54911370 (me)
Adding onto this, making two /wg/ threads while the contest is ongoing might make things even more confusing for anyone looking for info. We can give it a shot, but maybe waiting until after the 25th would be better.

>> No.54911864

>>54911661
>>54911474
Well given that skynet is impossible to deal with right now, we'll have to make do with bog standard shilling

>> No.54912166

>>54911370
I don't care about the prompt recap. I never read that thing.

>> No.54912513

>>54911370
Eh, honestly I'm rather neutral on the prompt recap. I think high effort prompts deserve more time but honestly if it's good of a prompt it'll probably generate a big enough amount of discussion and greentext to justify making it a greentext compilation and having it live in archive alongside the other greentext compilation/outlines.

>> No.54912831

Should we make the contest story anchor bigger? Add some more stuff to it so it catches the eye?

>> No.54912897

>>54912166
I like the story recap but not the prompt recap. Nobody utilizes prompts much these days

>> No.54913351

>>54904538
>they say he has the strength of a thousand men
>and the cock length of around 1600 because none are below average and many are double that
>plot armor so thick he can pull entire new magic systems out of his ass
>1000 blank slates stacked on top of eachother, taken together he has about 3.71 whole personalities
>supernatural women from around the entire universe are attracted to him like a magnet
>sperm so potent he can breed anyone and anything: woman, man, child, hag, animal, demon, angel, eldritch monster, machine, plant, rock
>enough libido to go 3000 rounds before having to take an hour long break
>if he stops earlier than that, it's probably because he's having flasbacks from 200 different wars
>he can answer any basic question about any subject because he's simultaneously enrolled in over 400 high schools
>he has at least one girlfriend in each of those schools
>his name is...
>somehow he still has 0 names between 1000 souls but most call him... Anon

>> No.54913509

>>54913351
>He doesn't always drink beer. But when he does, he drinks Dos Equis.

>> No.54913576

>>54910680
We can contact /wAIfu/ too, maybe the JP generals as well like Pekker's

>> No.54914642

>>54912897
At this point, I only use the prompt board to either bump with a low effort idea or to throw away an idea I know I can't write.

>> No.54915077
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54915077

Thanks for the comments last thread. i was working on literally 2 hours of sleep until i tuned in for shiori and fujo demon possesed me
right now, i cant work on it but i promise i will try to clean it before submiting it to the royal rumble

>> No.54915114

>>54915077
Not pictured: Anon's CRIPPLING erection

>> No.54915916

>>54915114
Shiori's actually giving him a thighjob just out of frame

>> No.54916257

>>54915114
He's also wearing a painfully tight ball cage, the key to which was hidden by Shiori (it's in her vagina).

>> No.54916397

>>54915916
>Shiori can make you cum buckets while she goes on some autistic rant about different moth species and its characteristics
she's amazing sadly i already have a zoomer in my heart

>> No.54917998

>>54906356
Once you figure out how to bullshit efficiently that will all be gravy. Keep your head up

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54918092

>>54883589
>>54906710
And done.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRaT-dzuxsBfJClvUjp1i034w_vREgCyG8bu1LNRLvHviJVShGl9YH-dbt97jB49xS7Mx1277cISCpW/pub

My Little Ruffian

Summary: Anon makes the horrible mistake of rubbing Mococo's fuzzy tummy and now he must cool down the pupper in heat.

Tags: Fuwawa, Mococo, NSFW, belly rubs, vanilla

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>>54917998
Thanks Anon, I needed the slight encouragement. I'm actually feeling somewhat accomplished today so far. I managed to do half the mowing I had to, and I stumbled my way into fixing the pool filter motor by just taking it apart and putting it back together again. I'm in immense discomfort since bugs decided to bite my ankles and legs a little, but that'll hopefully pass soon. I'm gonna try to get to certain scene in my current chapter today. If I can meet that goal, I'll be pretty content.
I also thought about how it might be cute to eventually have a scene about a moth girl hag that feels naturally drawn to Anon because of his natural affinity for starlight magic. That would be kinda adorable. She'd be made the fuck up since I don't know any moth vtubers, but I like to think about little ways to showcase the non human side of all these hybrid women.

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>>54918728
>spoiler
There's Juniper Actias but I don't think she's a hag

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>>54918092
That certainly went from 0-60 pretty quick. It was serviceable as far as the dialogue goes. I would say you repeat using their direct names back to back too often though. You can use their natural descriptors to identify them in text, or even she or her if it's clear the focus of the action is still on the same individual.
The bit about the claws kinda seemed out of place. Like if Anon was slowly inching towards their ears or tails, it make sense to receive the warning, but the threat seems unwarranted. I think you captured the twins' excitable and overall cute nature pretty well. Maybe you could have added a line or two about how they might almost share sensations in a way, since how Fuwawa seemed to just know when Mococo was gonna climax came outta left field. The choice in the final shot was pretty good, we don't get enough finishers like that. I guess one more critique is that you can really take advantage of the idea that when the two start to have fun, they become almost uncontrollable. In the height of the acts, when Anon was feeling apprehensive, THAT might have been a good time to bring back the claw threat. Overall, it reads like you were stricken by inspiration and acted on it, and that's always great to see!

>> No.54920306

>>54919156
Looks cute. We could get super freaky with the extra arms. Hag or hag, it might be something worth exploring one day.

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>>54920306
She's alright, don't really watcher all that much because

>twitch

but she's inoffensive. Drew and rigged her own model so she updates it all the time too.

>> No.54923857

>>54920306
I don't see why you should focus on her, she is nothing special when you think about it. Most US chuubas have extra arms.

>> No.54924825

>>54922469
I mean I can't really knock the platform that much, my indie oshi is on there. That said though, I wish that site treated some of its users better. The drawing and rigging her own model part is respectable.
>>54923857
It was just from an idea of having a moth girl snuggle up to anon by instinct because of his light magic and soul. List me some chuubas with extra arms, since now I'm on a kick of using that idea.

>> No.54925372

>>54924825
Are you the guy with the condom hag sex prompt from last thread

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>>54925372
NTA. I'm the one who would lead a crusade against using protection with hags.

>> No.54925686

>>54924825
Koopa Fortuna is a known /k/tuber, you could use her.

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>>54925686
Are we hitting a misunderstanding here? When I said extra arms, I mean extra appendages, not firearms or weapons. Since all I'm seeing from this one is a normal girl with green hair, a nice hourglass shape, and a fat ass. She could get it, but wasn't exactly what I was asking for.

>> No.54926222

>>54926142
I was just making a joke in >>54923857 because I like the double meaning of arms.

>> No.54926353

>>54926222
You’re not funny

>> No.54926437

>>54926353
That's okay, not every joke hits the mark.

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>>54926437
They can't all be gems. If I knew who Koopa was before hand, it might have landed. I already got two planned gun using hags in my story anyway that I'm gonna breed, but I always appreciate the suggestions since they got my noggin a joggin.

>> No.54927566

>>54925372
Nope, that would be me who made the dire decision to want to use a condom on a hag.

>> No.54928165

>>54926353
>"Tch,you are not funny"
>"This does not help my revenge"

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54929082

You heard the lady

>> No.54929352

>>54929082
I'm going to write a violent rapefic of her. See how she likes that

>> No.54929471

>>54929352
Frankly I hope she does come here and see what we've written.

>> No.54929584

>>54929352
Anon, she's a woman. They're scientifically proven to be horny for that shit.

>> No.54929655

>>54929352
Why can't you be normal?

>>54929584
No they aren't stop spreading misinformation

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>>54929655
Oh boy, you're on the spectrum. And I'm not talking about visible light.

>> No.54929816

>>54929655
NTA, but what does she expect to get written about her for the most part?

>> No.54929985

>>54929816
Stories about petting fluffy kittens and riding unicorns, probably.

>> No.54930027

>>54929816
Normal fanfics, and not you know, rape and other bullshit.

>> No.54930100

>>54930027
Shit, you haven't watched a single stream of hers, have you? Fuck off, tourist.

>> No.54930287

>>54930027
What even constitutes a normal fanfic nowadays?

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>>54929655
>theaters brimming with women in shades of grey
>people literally begging to "stop masturbating on the showings"
>90% of best sellers aimed at women hasa girl who gets stuffed by some guy who would land in prison IRL
Rape is to girls what schoolgirl uniform is to men. A "risque" fetish that you would never do in real life but that you can let your brain rock.
The only thing that beats that is people who jerk off off to Cops, because in real life cops are fat fucks that shoot dogs and plant drugs

>> No.54930400

>>54930287
A fluff fic I guess. At least that's what I considered normal before indulging in this thread 2 years ago.

>> No.54930553

>>54930400
We got our range of fluff fics, but the girl has a little taste for the risque.

>> No.54930848

>>54930287
Anything that isn’t sexual, gore, or abusive.

>> No.54930880

>>54930553
>the girl has a little taste for the risque.
Or in other words, good taste.

>>54930848
Dogshit taste.

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>>54930287
>normal
Coffee shop AU, THEY WERE ROOMATES, chatroom fics, highschool AU's, Drama AU, Mafia AU
>Advanced
Adventure AU, Joke Crossover, Crime/Mistery Fics, long narratives, smut
>Fujo
Serious Crossover adventure, 3 Kingdoms recreation, Noir-Style fics, Isekai wish fullfillment, OCXCharacter, Advanced smut (Shibari, Gore, Rape)
>Fujo smell
ReaderXcharacter self insert smut CYOA, Harem Crossovers, SuperWholock, Extremely Niche smut (Bugshit, ryona,skin wearing)

Source: I dated the weird girl in highschool. I still talk to her, she's a sweet person but she also scares me

>> No.54931090

>>54930880
>Dogshit taste.
That’s what most people read

>> No.54931126

>>54931090
No, most people read smut, gore and abuse.

>> No.54931374

>>54931010
>Coffee shop AU
It doesn't matter what fandom I look for fics in, this stupid setting is fucking everywhere. I want to know what's the appeal of coffee shop settings for it to be so widespread.

>> No.54931432

>>54931010
What's the difference between adventure AU and serious crossover adventure? It sounds like there could be overlap. What exactly is a crossover in this context?

>> No.54931440

>>54931126
No that’s your mess up mind.

>> No.54931503

>>54931432
Sounds to me like the difference is adventure AU keeps the original characters whereas crossover is just the author playing with their favourite characters from different franchises like dolls

>> No.54931546

>>54931440
Prove it, retard.

>> No.54931706

>>54931010
>Pretty firmly on the Fujo/Fujo smell
Bros are we...you know....

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>>54931503
So is HoloJourneys adventure AU because I have OCs in it, AND crossover since I have chuubas in it? It's already falls into Advanced and maybe even Fujo Smell since it does include a harem.

>> No.54932299

>>54931374
its a cutesy idea of "oh i go to this cofee shop everyday and the barista there likes me!".
In reality,well, the barista fucking hates you.
Still an easy trope to relate for everyone who fell in love with a cute server
>>54931432
A crossover usually goes "okay here's goku and here's superman, they fight and eat :D" and that's enough for most people.
But for those who REALLY want to scratch the need, the serious crossover does shit like "Krypton and planet vegeta exist on the same universe, goku fell in japan and superman in USA, which made WWII go in favor of the russians where Zangief from street fighter..." and that kind of weird bizarro world where everything is connected.
Basically, the factor is how intertwined the crossover is
>>54931716
No HJ isnt a crossover, its an adventure AU with an OC in it. The world is still "vtuber land". If you added Leon from Resident Evil, then yeah, it would be a crossover unless you did, sorry im waiting until you finish to binge it
Harems by themselves are not necesarily stinky, but when every character from every media wants to fuck your oc, the stink cloud arises

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>>54932299
Alright thanks for clarifying on both my questions. So HJ pretty much falls just into the advanced category by that account. I'll spoil this now, I will not be adding leon from Resident Evil. Sorry to anyone who was really pulling for that to happen later. Thanks for the clarification on harem stink too.
>Spoiler
You might be waiting a long ass time then, which is either good or bad for you. Either way, thanks for the interest! You got me kinda thinking about how long it might take someone to binge everything I've written so far.

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>>54932932
>I'll spoil this now, I will not be adding leon from Resident Evil.
Damn

>> No.54933928

Wasn't there a fic that used the "coffee shop" idea?

>> No.54934263

>>54933928
There’s plenty of fics like that. Be more specific

>> No.54934348

>>54934263
It involved Matsuri and (You) being mindbroken at the end.

>> No.54934450

>>54934348
Oh, I don’t know. Check the archive if it’s there.

>> No.54934886

>>54934450
"Coffee shop" isn't in the archive if that's what you're thinking, anon. Its in the actual story which I know the name of already. The only reason I brought it up was because >>54931010 brought it up so I decided to bring it up and see if anyone else can remember it as well.
Coffee stained lips is the title

>> No.54935626

>>54934886
I remember that old thing. I remember it getting zero attention on release so I gave it a pity review. IIRC it had very few paragraphs so was like a collection of text walls, making it quite hard to read, and the author fixed that on request. I wonder if he's still around...

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>>54911178
>>54911430
Guess I should have tagged that better. I'll be more liberal with tags in the future.

>> No.54938222

>>54936422
Cute Migo!

>> No.54938498

>>54936422
What skin is she selecting?

>> No.54938815

>>54931440
NTA but do you know any women that aren't your relatives? Do they read a lot? Ask to see their kindle history.
Shit, ask your female relatives.

>> No.54938978

>>54938815
>Shit, ask your female relatives.
They young ones read hunger games and other young adult novels, my older ones just read whatever is a New York best seller. The other women in my life either don’t read, or just read regular books, save for two who read manga.

>> No.54939513

>>54938978
Do you have instagram or tiktok? Look up reels of women recommending books to each other

>> No.54939670

>>54939513
>instagram or tiktok
Yeah, this is the point I just ignore you with how stupid this is.

>> No.54940166

>>54939670
You won't know what women are into if you don't lurk their spaces. I'm being serious.
You don't use or don't want to use those apps? Go on goodreads and search for "dark romance"

>> No.54940263

>>54940166
>You won't know what women are into if you don't lurk their spaces. I'm being serious.
It's like using twitter, reddit, and 4chan to get a pulse on politics, flat out dumb.

>> No.54940287

>>54931374
Imagine the routine and slice of life inherent to a high school setting but with even less stakes and just all the characters you like talking to each other.

>> No.54940570

>>54940166
nta, but stop being terminally online bro. Just head to the library or books clubs. Using tik-tok and instagram, websites that’s used by grifters and scammers should no be used as a reference.

>> No.54940589

>>54939670
You're right, it is stupid. And you brought it up. 'tism.

>> No.54940800

>>54929082
God she is in /wg/ as well as /waifu/. I love her

>> No.54940864

>>54940570
I'll grant you those bad, but the fact remains. Next time you're in a brick and mortar book store look up "haunting adeline" and go down that rabbit hole. Women eat that shit up and ask for seconds every single time.
I stopped worrying about women knowing i like hentai after just reading synopsis for those kinds of books.
Next time some woman tries to shame you for hentai ask to see their kindle history.

>> No.54941441

>>54940864
Anon, I'm really trying hard to give you the benefit of the doubt but shit like this: >Next time some woman tries to shame you for hentai ask to see their kindle history.
Makes me genuinely wonder if you're honest to God just salty from a past experience and just lashing out now. And women shit on Cat and Mouse Duet Series as well.

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>>54931010
Where does incest fit?

>> No.54941718

>>54941662
That's not normal

>> No.54941719

>>54931706
Anon, fanfics written by men start at advanced and only get worse.

>> No.54941859

>>54941719
>only get worse.
How so?

>> No.54942128

>>54941662
Around Fujo.
Its the "oh wow so forbidden" fetish for a lot of people

>> No.54942954

>>54940864
>Next time some woman tries to shame you for hentai ask to see their kindle history.
Who hurt you, anon?

>> No.54943052

>>54941859
We only get more autistic. Either autistically horny reaching into that fujo smell tier, or just plain autistic. I.e making massive 40k AUs or writing absurdly long self insert fics.

>> No.54943616

>>54943052
>making massive 40k AUs
That's not autistic

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54944492

>>54943616
Nah, we need to go more autistic.

>> No.54944560

>>54942128
Fujo doesn't fit in with normal fanfic though.

>> No.54946486

>>54941662
Honestly at this point I'd say it's only at advanced tier. Like there's more pushback against it than what's expected of the tier but it's not really that weird all together.

>> No.54946528

>>54946486
In america it's weird.

>> No.54946602

>>54946528
I think he was talking about the civilized world and not a failed state.

>> No.54946809

>>54943052
>We only get more autistic
I don't see this as a problem.
This gave us many great series.

>> No.54946814

What the fuck is this argument even about? “Normal” fanfiction? We’ve deviated from “normal” since the beginning, this place is a niche within a niche. Who cares?

>> No.54946901

>>54946814
What argument? People are just having a civil discussion.

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>Glance over old WIPS
>Fix a couple of grammar mistakes
>Add a little spice to a sentence here and there
>Close file
>Suddenly scenarios that I scrapped begin flowing back.

There's no escape from this hell.

>> No.54947213

>>54946814
>Who cares?
The people talking about it? I understand if you don’t like it or want to talk about it, but there’s no reason to be this bitchy about it. Just ignore it or talk about something you want to talk about.

>> No.54947742

>>54946901
>>54947213
samefag

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>>54947742
Anon, we were having an okay thread, why are you trying to ruin it?

>> No.54948168

>>54947173
Come back to them anon. Your perfect fic for the contest is waiting there. All you need to do is to finish them.

>> No.54948728

I'm having some trouble writing dialogue for Iofi. She switches between speaking english, japanese, and indonesian so often, (usually within a singular sentence) that I can't replicate it in any convincing way. Any tricks I could use to mask the fact that I'm not a polyglot? Or would it be better to just move on and pick a different chuuba to write about?

>> No.54948901

>>54948728
She switches so often because she has an audience of people who speak different languages. Obviously she wouldn't do that if she's talking to just one person. She'd just use their native language.

>> No.54949122

>>54948728
Use her native language.

>> No.54949309

>>54948728
Use that trick from Talent Security Division and have her language switch be indicated by a font switch. Either that or use italics. It'll get across that she's a polyglot codeswitching languages without forcing the reader to have google translate/deepl in another tab.

>> No.54949428

>>54948728
What does this even matter? Surely you're not legitimately switching languages mid-fic, right? Just make it implicit early on that she's replying as appropriate to characters of different mother-tongues and then don't mention it again

>> No.54949486

>>54948033
yeah nice inspect element retard

>> No.54949913

>>54949486
This is going to be my last post to you, since I don't want to derail the thread with your petty bullshit, but you should get a life or do something productive instead of trying to shit up some online thread.

>> No.54950063

>>54948728
You could also just write something like "she mumbles something in japanese" or "you can barely make out CHINGER CHANGER NIGGER DAGGER of her rapidfire indo"

>> No.54950864

>>54948901
>>54949122
>>54949309
>>54949428

Thanks for the suggestions, I got overly fixated on producing accurate Iofi dialogue that it didn't even occur to me that if I were to achieve that; it would read fucking horribly. I'll just stick with something simple like her speaking english in the fic or use like italics/what >>54950063 said.

>> No.54951524

>>54948168
You know, many of my fics were nothing but a couple of sentences or blank pages at some point. Then I just glanced at them once and something poured out. A couple of them got out of WIP hell like that.
In the two years that I've been on /wg/ I think I've dragged 14 or so stories that I never finished.
Maybe my chef-d'oeuvre truly is amidst the scraps.

>> No.54951689

>>54950864
no problem

>> No.54952025

>>54949913
take your own advice and stop samefagging, everybody knows it's you pulling all this shit, you write in the same format everytime

>> No.54952807

>>54931374
Slice of life or some shit like that.

>> No.54953426

>>54931010
>Mafia AU
That’s normal tier? I thought it would be in advance given that some authors try to make it into crime/mystery story.

>> No.54953653

>>54940800
Like I said during her debut, she's /our patron/ chuuba

>> No.54953909

>>54940800
Wanting fanfic of yourself isn't that rare. Pippa does the same thing by reading fanfic of herself
https://youtu.be/MbkNVe8lDhY

>> No.54954825

>>54918092
Not even a week and they already have a fic. Good on you, anon. I’ll have to pass since I don’t like belly rubs.

>> No.54955536

>>54947173
Are you planning on continuing those WIP or is this a passing fancy? Because if it’s the latter, just work on the fic you’re on right now.

>> No.54956148

>>54953909
>Pippa
She doesn’t count.

>> No.54956486

>>54948728
>She switches between speaking english, japanese, and indonesian so often, (usually within a singular sentence)
If you don’t mind me asking, why would she do that? Like, is there a legitimate reason in-story to switch her language on the fly like that? If there is, then maybe post the excerpt so we could help.

>> No.54957705

>>54956486
NTA but bilingual people do tend to codeswitch when they're talking to people they're familiar with.

>> No.54957790

>>54944492
>OpThomas_Prime
And now I’m thinking of a crossover between Thomas the Engine and Transformers and how that affects the The Island of Sodor. Fuck you for doing that to me.

>> No.54957934

>>54957705
What? nta but I'm bilingual and I never do that since that's rude to do during a conversation.

>> No.54958578

>>54957790
>crossover between Thomas the Engine and Transformers and how that affects the The Island of Sodor
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9728197/1/Transformers-Prime-Beast-Hunters-Engines-Rising

>> No.54958864

>>54957705
No we don't. Although I do curse on my mother tongue.

>> No.54958937

>>54957934
I mean I do it with my family and friends. Though admittedly that may be due to how intermingled the two languages are.
t. Flip

>> No.54959369

>>54958937
>intermingled the two languages
I live in an area where people are monolingual, so switching languages like that is not advise

>> No.54959747

Oh I'm definitely going to write the dog twins at some point. These two are precious

>> No.54960278

>>54959747
They just said not to touch their ears or tails because then it might be hard for them to get married. I'm losing my god damn mind.

>> No.54960345

>>54959747
>soft-voiced big titty older twin
>tomboyish yet shy little twin
Oh yeah. They're getting written for sure.

>> No.54960508

>>54959747
i want to like them but the brain microwave cutesy speech turns me off, despite the content and the banter being spot on.
Im gonna give them like a month to let them find their footing and then try again

>> No.54961974

>>54960345
the amount of possibilities are endless. From fetish stuff, to romance, to saviorfagging. Yagoo really knocked it out of the park with this.

>> No.54962658

>>54960508
>i want to like them but the brain microwave cutesy speech turns me off
But its the same as Haachama

>> No.54964950

>>54962658
and i cant stand chammers by herself.
She filters me

>> No.54965168

>>54964950
Sounds like a you issue.

>> No.54965470

Chammers owes me sex

>> No.54965781
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oooo you wanna write about miori so bad ooooo you wanna make a whole series on miori ooooooo

>> No.54967919

>>54929082
this leads me to believe that not only was she on /vg/ either as a lurker or a active writer, but she's always wanted to be in a fanfic from the anons here. its kinda cute in a...sorta unconventional way i suppose. after my contest submission i'll work towards making a chunni shiori fic

>> No.54967964

>>54965781
Then do it?

>> No.54968187

>>54965781
Give Shiori a piggyback ride. Got it.

>> No.54969527

>>54965470
She doesn’t owe you anything.

>> No.54970057

>>54958937
So you speak spanish and english?

>> No.54970624

>>54969527
Your mom owes me a gobby.

>> No.54970796

>>54970624
Real mature .

>> No.54971211

>>54970796
Yeah she is, her tits sag like sacks of potatoes, but I still smash her on the reg

>> No.54971375

>>54964950
>i cant stand chammers by herself
Now I know you're being contrarian. No one would ever say that.

>> No.54971758

>>54971375
Her only appeal is that she sounds like a retard, while that may appeal to you, it doesn’t appeal to other people.

>> No.54972145

>>54971375
why do you care if he likes her or not?

>> No.54972471

>>54971758
>threadwatcher
>>54972145
Because she's very fun and creative in a way that stands out when comparing her to her peers.

>> No.54972729

>>54970057
Not him, but barely anyone speaks Spanish in the Philippines except rich landowners and their scions. There are people who speak Chavacano, a local Spanish creole dialect, but they're only in the southern part of the country. Most Flips speak Tagalog/Bisaya and English, then code switch between these languages depending on who they're talking to.
Unfortunately, code switching actually makes you suck in both languages in the long run.

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54973278

>Shiori is showing her mosquito child
He can't keep getting away with it

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>> No.54974179

>>54973984
Someone already posted this earlier. You don’t need to do it again.

>> No.54975343

>>54973278
Is having insect as pets really that much of a big deal? I’ve seen many videos of youtube about them.

>> No.54975783

>shiori likes fanfics, encourages everyone to write them
>is seemingly obsessed with bugs and insects
>Shiroi is the bugfucker

it all makes sense now

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>>54975783
Nnnnnot quite, but we'd probably get along.

>> No.54976264

>>54976132
That's exactly what she would say if she wanted us not to suspect her

>> No.54976837

>>54975783
AA still isn't out of the question. If the archive updates during Shiori's "archiving mission" then we all know who it is.

>> No.54977032

>>54976837
My vote is that it's Nameronii

>> No.54978250

>>54918092
I enjoyed it.

>> No.54978305

>>54978250
What did you like about it.

>> No.54979287

>>54978305
Nothing. I said I enjoyed it not that I liked it.

>> No.54979515

>>54979287
Then what did you enjoyed about it.

>> No.54980393

>>54979515
Nothing. I didn't even read it, I just gave it a reply because it wasn't getting much attention.

>> No.54980576

>>54980393
>because it wasn't getting much attention.
But that’s normal,

>> No.54981098

>>54980393
Story isn’t even that long, you could have read it in five minutes.

>> No.54981479

>>54978250
I wrote this post and the entire reply chain is some guy same fagging lol. I did actually read it and enjoy it though.

>> No.54981750

>>54981479
No, I’m the guy who replied to him about what he liked/enjoyed. What’d you enjoy/like about the story

>> No.54981971

>>54981750
I really liked the ending because it meant I could stop reading

>> No.54982186

>>54981750
It's really hot when people become horny in less conventional ways. Particularly I like when people get turned on by tickling, but cumming from tummy rubs is close.

>> No.54982573

>>54953426
Mafia fics are usually "x belongs to the yakuza and Y to the mafia, they fuck in secret" while the others have actual narratives behind them

>> No.54982577

>>54981971
Go away.

>>54982186
I can see why you’ll like that. I liked it is because it’s a fic for the new en members.

>> No.54982982

>>54981971
Hi Sasuke!

>> No.54983150

It’s obviously a little early, but I’ve set up the new contest thread. It’s technically got different stuff in it so I wouldn’t call it a duplicate. >>54982322

>> No.54983379

>>54983150
Finally, bread baked by human hands.

>> No.54984004

>>54948728
I use a different font, italics, bold lettering or even <<different language>> to indicate when they're speaking a different language compared to what they normally speak.
I've seen some authors (not here) just straight up not translate anything and simply put the language as spoken into the text, using context clues and character reactions to show what the character is saying to the reader. I think just using italics is the safest way to go about it.

>> No.54984275

>>54982982
You're not funny.

>> No.54984415

>>54983150
Good idea, but you could be even more bold and put the contest first in title and/or subject. Most people will see the first words and assume it's just the writing thread they always see on the catalog.

>> No.54984454

>>54984275
And you're not cool.

>> No.54984541

>>54911178
>>54911430
I'd like to see more stories that involve concepts like this and that Subaru story, Everyday Someday. Just (You) and a chuuba in a normal, healthy relationship that's been going on for a couple of years. That scene in A Shrine Maiden's Burden where Miko imagines having kids is really cute.

>> No.54984629

>>54984454
I never said I was? Do you even know who you're replying to at this point?

>> No.54984641

>>54984275
>>54928165

>> No.54985636

Would the Advent greentexts from a couple of threads ago where you find them at the supermarket be worthy of having a place in the main archive as a story, or should I just put it in the prompt archive instead?

>> No.54985644

>>54984641
Stop shitposting.

>> No.54986087

>>54985636
I'd just throw them in the prompt archive, they're not really that long

>> No.54986221

>>54931010
I'm going to sound like a genuine retard for asking this, but what is an AU?

>> No.54986293

>>54986221
Alternate Universe

>> No.54986560

>>54986293
That came to mind, but I wasn't sure. Thanks. Now I understand why there's confusion over coffee shop AUs being so popular.

>> No.54987106

>>54986560
No problem

>> No.54987250
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>>54986560
As opposed to Coffee Shop Astronomical Unit, which is how many Starbuck's wide one of Sana's boobs are

>> No.54987263

>>54985636
prompt archive

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54987264

>>54936422
Are you planning to write more stories in the future? It doesn't have to be a sequel or anything but your Miko was very cute.

>> No.54987663

>>54985636
Personally I'd only do a greentext compilation if the discussion after a greentext/concept gets posted has enough 'content' in it to either be a funny story all on its own or it straight up becomes the a possible outline to inspire someone to write the concept. If it's just a singular short greentext then the prompt archive should be a better place for it.

>> No.54988821

>>54983150
And the fucking earlyfag is pissed enough at the thread trying to reassert control that they're creating actual duplicate threads.

>> No.54988928

>>54988821
Just don't post in it. He can't keep it alive by himself. You could try reporting it as well, but I doubt the mods would care to look into the context and end up deleting both threads.

>> No.54989130

>>54988821
I wouldn't openly assume who is doing it, it just leads to fruitless speculation without much benefit. Let's just use the first contest edition.

>> No.54989212

>>54989130
?
Whoever made that second thread clearly doesn't have the general's best interests in mind.

>> No.54989275

>>54989212
That is true.

>> No.54989472

>>54984415
I might try that if I get the chance next thread. As long as it can still operate as the regular /wg/ thread simultaneously.

>> No.54989549

Welp, never mind. He’s spamming the catalog with /wg/ threads to sabotage us. Better get to reporting.

>> No.54989605

>>54989472
Maybe
>Contest Edition! - /wg/ - Writing General

>> No.54989699

I asked to have the contest included in the OP before, but there was no reaction to it. Shame that the usual baker was so unresponsive to that, I like their diligence in principle.

>> No.54989848

>>54989699
There was no diligence Anon, it was a bot made by one schizo, and now that we've made our own thread he's throwing a tantrum across the board.

>> No.54990463

>>54989848
That's fair. I guess I was refering more to the associated outcome (always having threads on time) than the actual virtue, then.

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>>54990463
I'd rather go a few hours without the thread than deal with this shit.

>> No.54990815

>>54990554
Samedesu. I really have no goddamn clue why someone would take the effort to make the thread and either script out a solution to grab fics and prompts or do the bitchwork of fishing them out; but not have the energy to actually engage with the thread. Would genuinely enjoy occasionally having to deal with borked threads than having this shit happen.

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>>54987264
I've written some more since then and got some more stuff cooking, but nothing with Miko. I'd love to write her again if I see the right prompt. Thanks for Miko's praise and I am glad you enjoyed it. That fic had a fast turn around so I'm a bit proud of it in that regard.

>> No.54991516

>>54883569
>>54991356

>> No.54991539
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>He's still making new threads
This either ends with this general getting exiled and dying or the earlyfag eating a ban and us having full control for a few days.

>> No.54991615

>>54991539
Probably exile

>> No.54991677

>>54991615
Totally unjustified, seeing as there's only one (1) faggot behind it.

>> No.54991954

>>54991677
I've made my peace with that outcome when many people were caring about who was making the thread rather than caring about the actual thread itself. Now we wait.

>> No.54992017

>>54991516
Yeah that's not 'us' but a single schizo who had been in control of our OP thread header for fucking months having a moment and spamming the catalog because someone else made a new thread other than them.

>> No.54992242

>>54991954
>people were caring about who was making the thread rather than caring about the actual thread itself.
I mean it's a bit of a false equivalence to say that people caring for one issue can't care for the other. It's more that usually we had apathy for the earlyfag since we could just post in peace in the thread but since he's having a fucking menhera moment over this shit. Well old issues kind of crop up once again.

>> No.54992348

>>54991615
There's always /log/ as a temporary shelter, if necessary; they would be happy about more activity.

>> No.54992379

>>54991954
Shut up.

>> No.54992727 [DELETED] 

>>54991677
And when have mods ever cared about justice? I once got a ban for answering someone's question when they needed information for a story because it was "off topic".

>> No.54992746

>>54984541
I'm glad you liked them. I'd like to write more fics like that in the future.

>> No.54992837

>>54992242
>>54992379
It's Sasuke, ignore him.

>> No.54993476

>The fucking schizo thread maker has made 9 fucking threads
>He's even fucking reusing images
What is it with this thread and attracting the worst fucking schizos?

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>>54993476
Y'get used to it.

>> No.54993687

>>54993476
Reading fanfiction isn't a hobby known for the mental stability of its enjoyers, really. Of course a lot comes down to chance also.

>> No.54994323

>>54993476
Just keep reporting them, that's all we can do at this stage.

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