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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) wake up on a normal day and go about your business.:>>53566558

After being defeated by Kronii you find your memories slowly getting rewritten as she goes back in time to rape you all across your life. Your thoughts and body readjusting with each instance of her raping you echoing through the timeline.:>>53587502

I(Blue) join Hololive to tear off Omega's mechanical arm and put it on my wall like a hunting trophy.:>>53596460

Now this is a good edition. Big booba Anya will never die

>>53603088
>Anya 3D debut
>her tits are huge and have jiggle physics more aggressive than Kronii's

It's so fucking over

Give me your favorite parts of fics that made you go through pic related.

>>53604384
The action in Princess' Scepter.

>>53603955
Brother, it hasn't even started.

>>53602719
Okay can anyone explain what the hell that last prompt is about? Because it makes less sense the more I look at it.

>>53553274
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Been slowly trying to correct the various grammar and stilted structure as time has gone on but it seems to be a bit of a challenge for me.

Nonetheless, I'm glad you like and I'm glad you're reading. Not a lot of people are, so it's always nice to hear someone.

>>53603955
Board's become very fast over the last few days. Other generals are getting 404'd after half an hour; it's like some sort of strange weather phenomenon

>>53607071
We'll weather this storm like we have all the others. Keep writing and keep reading bros.

/wg/ is dying.

Reposting the writing contest rules post from last thread
https://rentry.org/WGWC
I think the issues from last time were
>What should the name be?
>Should the categories be themed /unthemed or sfw/nsfw?
>Do the rules need anything changed/clarified?

>>53608030
I don't think they should be themed, but they should definitely be NSFW. We don't need any more prudes joining the general.

>>53607071
the great yabbening of the summer of 23...

I'm going to write a scene in which two characters get drunk. I think it's only natural then that I myself get drunk so as to properly study the experience. This is critical to my research in writing an accurate scene.

>>53608688
I think you just want to get drunk.

>>53609062
No, no man. It's very important. You write what you know and as someone who forgot the last time they were drunk because they blacked out, I need to reeducate myself

>>53608688
I am about to write a blowjob scene.
It is only natural, that I suck a-

>>53609117
Are you an alcoholic rationalizing picking up the bottle again?

>>53608688
If that's true, does that mean that half this thread has a ton of sex with hot women?

>>53609310
Yup, that's about right.
t. sex haver

>>53609310
Maybe not hot women, but I do smash your mum on the reg.

>>53609254
... no...

yes

>>53609310
>be me, sex haver
>after sex mfw I realize I forgot to hone in on the sensations and put them into words in my head, AGAIN
>have to wait until next sex, but will likely forget again

>>53609570
Well if you relapse you can write an angst fic of your oshi fucking her life up.

>>53610693
Experience doesn't make you a good writer or artist. You have to study prose and read more. Just read erotica to get an idea of how to play out a scene.

>>53611084
I think my experiences over the past year since I started paying attention to details because I wanted to add them to my writing has helped me improve at least a little bit. Practice and reading of course play a big role in that, but I don't think I'd downplay my real life experiences either. I feel like it adds a lot of fire and inspiration to it sometimes.

>>53609310
Well, my stories include young men and older women for a reason.

>>53611452
Because you're into grannies?

>>53611682
You say that like it's a bad thing.

>>53611682
No, it's because the first time I fell in love was with a lady in her late 30's. She'll die without knowing that 8 years later I still think about her.

>>53613778
Why did you fall in love with her?

>>53613814
I was a wee lad of 14-15, staying over with my family at a step-step-brothers house for a summer vacation. The lady in question was his then-girlfriend.
Cheerful and bubbly. It was like her soul refused to age, but that didn't hinder her from being an intelligent, level-headed adult. Soft spoken, beautiful eyes, even more beautiful curves. She took a liking to me in the week that we stayed over. I learned to bake a couple of sweets with her, cook a couple of meals, we walked together on the beach at night, with her holding dearly to my arm as she babbled on about the sea and sand. I could've listened to her ramble on for hours.
I saw her a few more times down the years, and each time she just reminded me that she was too good for me. I have nothing to offer a woman like her, but if anything, I'm glad that she came by my life. 4 girlfriends and 9 yars later and my most tender feelings still belong to her.

>>53602617
Lui says she'll help you do your taxes, and tries to slip in a marriage certificate and an explanation for all the financial incentives the government gives for people who have kids

>>53609310
Yes, but it's not worth it. Too distracting while you're writing.

>>53616509
>midway through your new story, a warm and wet sensation makes you pause
>you look under your desk to see Marine inhaling your cock
>"...Seriously?"

>>53614508
Not him, but damn son. You remind me of that line in Heinlein's Stranger in a Strange Land.
>"“Anybody can look at a pretty girl and see a pretty girl. An artist can look at a pretty girl and see the old woman she will become. A better artist can look at an old woman and see the pretty girl that she used to be. But a great artist--a master--and that is what Auguste Rodin was--can look at an old woman, portray her exactly as she is . . . and force the viewer to see the pretty girl she used to be . . . and more than that, he can make anyone with the sensitivity of an armadillo, or even you, see that this lovely young girl is still alive, not old and ugly at all, but simply prisoned inside her ruined body.”

>>53617309
He failed to realize that a perfect artist - a grandmaster, if you will - can simply remake the world in their image, and thus turn the old woman back into the pretty girl

>>53616799
The guy being uninterested during sex sounds like an untapped market to me

>>53618862
the problem with a guy uninterested is that its hard to find the way to make him violently impregnate Marine.
That wip is indeed, kicking my ass

>>53617309
What a beautiful excerpt.
That is how I feel about my lady. All my love verses are for her.

>>53620216
>Magic
>Koyori's shady new chemical
>Ame is fooling around again
>It's a holoX conspiracy
Pick One?

>>53620216
>the problem with a guy uninterested is that its hard to find the way to make him violently impregnate Marine.
She finally pushes him over the tipping point and he bangs her into unconsciousness so she won't be able to harass him for the rest of the night

>>53621072
but that wouldnt be related to collaring or kemono sex.
I was thinking that maybe it could work if she was already collared but she entered heat, in which case Anon has to survive
Until he realizes he's being mean to Marine and an over the top scene happens,where every guy in the office salutes him as he goes to Marine's house, accepting his fate as a chewing toy
>>53621298
That could work for another idea, im saving it

Imagine the stubble scratching your face as you rubbed your face and tongue over her nethers....

So anons how's the writing coming along?
Bonus Question: What have you been reading recently?

>>53623595
Spent all of yesterday in front of the doc and doubled my word count. Now editing.
It seems like the longer my stories get, the more basic my prose becomes.

>>53623595
Quite slow. I'm a bit conflicted, I want to switch the POV character from MC to a rival of sorts, but I also want to keep said rival a bit mysterious. But it feels a bit weird to write a character's POV without being transparent about their thoughts and intentions.

>>53623595
Having to rework an entire scene because I absentmindedly injected too much angst into it.

>>53625952
I don't understand what's your problem here? I'm pretty sure third person is perfectly suited to having mysterious interludes that don't reveal much about the pov character while still deepeninga mystery.

>>53626980
I think the problem is more me being unfamiliar with that kind of storytelling than this being particularly difficult. Can you think of any /wg/ stories that do something of the sort? Make the POV character keep something from the reader, I mean.

>>53623595
>How's the writing coming along?
Pretty swimmingly, I guess.
>What have you been reading lately?
This: https://hrcak.srce.hr/file/367198
Also, The Second Coming by Yeats

>>53627121
I don't understand what you mean?
Do you mean a second person pov fic that still keeps at it even when it goes outside of the initial pov character? Because the only fic I've seen do that is Menhera Wrangler's SPECIAL chapter at the end where it tells it in 2nd person despite it being in Fubuki's pov.
Everyone else usually switches to using third person when they get out of the reader insert pov.

>>53627796
So how far along are you with editing holoslavia?

>>53623595
>So anons how's the writing coming along?
I came to a realization that I was scope creeping my fic, luckily I wasn't too deep into it that I couldn't course correct. I might hit the major plot points and then go back and add any extra scenes after the fact, but I'm a little apprehensive about this approach.

>Bonus
Not sure if this counts but I finished Avalon le Fae in FGO a few days ago and that was some good stuff. Probably the first time since FGO launched that I was thankful I wasn't a secondary anymore

>>53630747
>scope creeping
How bad was it? Story needs an extra arc bad or this would have taken years to get through bad?

>>53631069
Later. Too many ideas with dubious necessity. My idea was that the fic takes place over a year and that I would divide it into each season.
>About to finish "Spring"
>12 pages, 4k words, and still a scene to go, so 2-4 pages and all on a rough draft
Whoops!

>>53631535
>the fic takes place over a year and that I would divide it into each season
That doesn't even sound too bad unless you're really devoted to making it all full scenes. Like obviously you'd need to make a timeline for all of it but something like "Moonshine Blues" managed to work that 'work takes place over a time period' gimmick pretty well.
I mean, I guess it does becomes scope crept if you're not just going for vignettes/scenes all progressing through the timeline and want full scenes with a story woven through all of it.

>>53632238
>I mean, I guess it does becomes scope crept if you're not just going for vignettes/scenes all progressing through the timeline and want full scenes with a story woven through all of it.
Basically the problem. My idea was to alternate plot > fluff > plot but I'm worried about the plot getting lost (I feel like I have too many fluff scenes in mind vs plot) or readers finding justified issues with scenes that do "nothing."
I've always had a problem with writing too much, even in essays and papers. So I want to be conservative about it.

>>53623595
Killing two birds with one stone with a Miori fic involving oil/lotion.

>>53634892
Why would you want to kill birds?

>>53633313
Without having some of your work to reference, I honestly don't know how valid of a fear that should be for you. Since I take it this is supposed to be a fluff series/one shot? Because this genre doesn't exactly benefit as much as other genres in being a tightly woven story with minimal fat. It's very much one of those things where the journey is just as much a draw as the destination... But given the lack of context the only real advice I can give is that you might benefit from doing this as a first draft then go over with beta readers/editors kind of thing so you can write like normal and have scenes to cut later rather than preemptively cutting them now.

>>53627121
If you want stories that switch from 2nd person (You) to a 3rd/1st person chuuba, Our Cures, Holofantasy, Cover High, To be 17 again and The Cover Job all have segments like that, though I’m sure there’s more that I’ll remember with time.
If you want a story where the intentions of the leading character/pov character are hidden, the only one that comes to mind is Holocalypse.

>>53602617
This Lamy getting raped while Nene makes a sandwich prompt from last year
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I'm a little worried about the board's reaction to the contest. It's not very common for fanfiction to be seen in a good light.

>>53630221
Apologies for the late reply; I was working on something else.
Right now just the first chapter. I'm adding a few new scenes. I'm still a bit of a ways from getting it all edited and done.

>>53639111
If they don't like it, then they don't. Simple as.

>>53639111
The worst they can do is tell us to fuck off.

>>53623595
I started on chapter 16 of Balsa. I was feeling depressed but realized that was the perfect energy for this scene that I was writing and I got three pages for it. Needs editing, but I like how it came out.

Bonus: Precious little unfortunately. I'm trying to pick up a second language and it's very taxing on me mentally. I have to budget my focus. When I can read it's usually manga instead of books.

>>53639111
Meh, we're already known as the joke reply you send to shitty rrats. We're only going to do the mass shilling campaign for this first one anyway.

Don't die on me

>>53623595
I'm really excited for writing the ending of my story and have been playing it over in my head quite a lot. Only problem is that I'm at the beginning of the story and there's like a 60k word wall between me and the ending.

>>53640677
I don't think it has to be a mass shilling. We can just mention it once in some of the major threads.

>>53640745
You know you can write ahead right? Make a short draft about how you want tit to end so you get it out of your head. Then you can go through the rest of those 60k word without that weighing on your head.

>>53640772
No, it has to be a mass shilling. Nothing short of that will have an effect.

>>53623595
Pretty good. I had a gut feeling that the conversation I was including in a scene wasn't quite right, and after talking it out a little, I cut it out and felt a lot better. I also got a sudden inspiration for something much better to include, so I'm happy about that, and am going to write it in now.
Bonus: Haven't been reading anything specific myself recently, but my wife started an audiobook called the fourth wing, a story about a girl part of a military family who was working to join the scribe sect of their society, but her general mom decided that her scrawny ass should be a dragon rider instead, which is a process that kills most of its applicants, either by the training, the other applicants, or the actual bonding with their potential dragon. The prose isn't that great, but serviceable enough. The way the author writes action sequences is alright, and it gave me a few ideas.

>>53641024
I get that you want to make a splash but the last thing we need is people getting mad at us for shitting up their generals. That will result in the opposite of the intended effect and probably reduce overall participation. It's not like we need everyone on the board to join in, I think just scoring a couple new writers will be considered a success.
Then again, I don't know what your idea of mass shilling is so you could be on the right track.

>>53641292
No, it has to be shilled in every thread and we have to create new threads, too. Banner ads would be a good idea, but that's optional and only if someone's willing to pony up. Bugfag that's your cue.

Anybody who gets mad is going to do so temporarily because it's not like we'll be shilling more than one post a thread. They will not take the effort to do anything more than tell us to fuck off. On the other hand we can't afford to lose any opportunity for exposure. Everyone on the board must know about us.

So uh, anyone want to talk about any fic ideas they've had?

>>53640677
>we're already known as the joke reply you send to shitty rrats
I learned of this general because someone mentioned Kanata cucking Towa

https://rentry.org/WGWC
Seems like majority is in favour of the optional themes rather than the mandatory theme, so I've added that to the rentry. If it doesn't turn out too well we can try again with a solid theme in the future.
I'm kinda stuck on what to put in the new writers' section. We need to decide on the optional themes and what kind of advice we'll give for writing a story. Throw out some ideas, especially for the themes and we can see what sticks. I'll spitball a few as well.
>Seasons
>Embers
>Blindness
>Time limit
>Experimental viagra
>The hole in the wall/floor/roof
>The girl behind the glass

>>53643182
For the new writers section it should honestly just be something like
>Get an idea/see what you want to write
>Open up your word processor and start writing
>There's a lot to learn but the hardest part will be sticking with your fic and writing it.
Basically something that's more in the spirit of nanowrimo's how to get started writing rather than the absolute basics since by nature everyone here at least types in passable English.
Also here's some themes for the sfw side
>Origins
>Binding
>Parting
>Impermanence
>Ephemeral
>Dream

>>53643182
For the new writer's section, it might help to list some helpful resources for anything like prose, formatting, doc creation and sharing etc. For things like potential themes, it might be more helpful to listen general settings that are common in the prompt archive. That might be easier for a newer writer to starting thinking about rather than an abstract theme.

>>53644067
Ah yes, the four great chuuba fic settings
>Vaguely Tokyo, 20 minutes into the future
>Fantasy
>Japanese Highschool
>Post Apocalypse

What would be a funny way to treat amnesia? Preferably on an uncooperative patient.

>>53644481
You forgot:
>that one apartment where all the sex happens

>>53644481
Hey, if it works. Also, I'd even argue among those four settings, fics we have that focus on them are vastly different from one another.

>>53644510
Sex but the treatment is disguised by use of medical jargon until it gets revealed that the operating room is a king size bed and the doctor/nurses start stripping.

>>53643182
Giving tips/advice to new writers will boost engagement as they will feel more confident in their efforts, so I think that section is quite important. Practical information and resources like >>53644067 mentioned would be a must. I also think some more worldly advice like, 'make sure what you write isn't riddled with spelling and grammar mistakes or don't use comic sans as a font unless you're writing about Polka etc.' would be useful too.

As for optional themes, the more nebulous the better. Their main purpose again is to provide scaffolding for new writers to build from but that said, I don't think there should be too many provided.

>>53645212
>don't use comic sans as a font unless you're writing about Polka
For some reason this just made me imagine a fic that's just a normal straight laced Polka fic but all of her dialogue is written entirely in comic sans. Maybe it's like a depressing drama fic about her where the only bathos is that she's speaking in that font.

>>53645400
Hell, I'd read it

>>53645212
Here's what I'd give for advice
>read your writings out loud, it'll tell you if something's off or poorly phrased
>have a thesaurus on hand.
>read fics and short stories. Craft your own prose based on the aspects youlike about them, trim the fat on the ones you don't
>Check for grammer errors
>If you're unsure about a scene or such, save it on a different file and start over
>Most importantly, have fun!

>>53644067
>>53645212
Could you elaborate on what you mean by resources?

>>53645964
Totally valid advice. I'd even place special emphasis on your point about reading other fics before you start writing your own. That seems important.

>>53646144
Links to pre-existing (or dare I suggest an in-house) style guide(s) or tutorials on how to properly type, format, and publish a document so that it meats a baseline standard of being legible and presentable to those reading it. That's what I had in mind anyways.

>>53646556
*meets ffs

>>53645400
>When Polka's character breaks, she speaks in the same font as everyone else
KINO KINO KINO KINO KINO

>>53646556
That sounds like a chore, I’m not sure if many first time writers would be willing to read a guide when they’re trying to have fun. I get the feeling they would lose interest. Recommending that they read a couple stories is good though, that gives them an idea of formatting and an idea of prose styles so it kills two birds with one stone.

>>53646924
Sure that's fine, like I'm not saying we axe new writers because they didn't read how to use an Oxford comma correctly, just that some sort of guide rails would be better than none. But yeah reading past fics seems to be the best and least painful way.

>>53647041
Yeah, reading stories is the best way. Unless you’re severely ESL I don’t think you need to read a guide on how to write. I know for sure I didn’t and I doubt many others needed to either.

>>53646924
The few minutes it'll take to read some supplementary information is preferable to doing something like publishing your doc incorrectly or formatting your fic in a way that makes it harder to read. It's not gonna be an entire textbook worth of info, so it's not a huge ask to read a tiny bit to get yourself prepared.
>>53645212
>mfw I have Pomu's handwriting in comic sans

Reread
>Idol's don't go
It's pretty roughly written and needed another pass to add in detail/correct the grammar... but it's a funny reveal.
>>53646839
Oh god that just makes me think the entire fic is like Polka fighting against depression with her losing the fight being represented by her dialogue finally shifting to the normal text font used in the fic.

>>53647179
In regards to publishing, would the link to the main archive in the “How do I submit my story?” suffice? AA put it pretty well there so they can give the info section of our archive a read.
As for formatting and whatnot, I think a couple of pointers like >>53645964 did would be fine, with a few extra like “don’t forget paragraphs” or “enter a line break at the beginning of dialogue”. Just enough to cover the basics should be fine I think. My biggest fear is overwhelming the writers or worse, boring them.

>>53647408
Thanks for the reread. Can't believe it's almost been 2 years since I posted that.

>>53647770
Yeah I think reusing whatever snippets we have already is the way to go. It also is a shameless plug for how we as a community or more specifically AA set us up for success.

>>53647881
I was going through old threads and decided to give it a reread after seeing the post.
You ever write anything more after that fic? Despite its flaws it was a fun read.

>>53648042
I've written a few fics since then but I think it's been around 6 months(?) since I've last published something.

>>53645964
Does anyone actually take prose styles from other authors? For me, I found my voice after a couple works and have little desire to imitate others.

>>53648606
I remember when I was starting out last year, I tried to pay close attention to how some authors here were writing to get me back into the swing of things. I used what I read from all those authors and their good prose to get a feel for how stories might start out and get written. For better or worse though, I strove to make my own styling and I'm happy with it and trying to find ways to constantly improve.

>>53648606
You learn from others whenever you read them. Part of finding your own voice is listening to others

>>53646924
Playing devil's advocate for you. I do think there's merit in keeping the main contest rentry's intro shirt and sweet. Maybe the rentry has a short intro to writing and publishing and like a link to a supplementary document for more advanced tips and advice. Makes the document easier to approach while still keeping the info there to access.

>>53648835
>Part of finding your own voice is listening to others
Damn son. I might want to use that at some point. Not sure what chuuba it'll fit though, but I'm keeping that in my hat for later. Thanks bro.

A question for the thread.
What do you think of text/formatting gimmicks in fics? I.e stuff like that polka comics sans speech discussed earlier, or using stuff coloring text like how the koreans translate chuuba dialogue in our fics.

>>53649914
Can be distracting. I personally believe colored text and the like should only be used for special occasions or things that require heavy emphasis.

>>53649914
They can be cool if done well, which is a caveat for about anything ever but if they're bad I think it could be really annoying.

Shout to Dark Medicine while we're on this topic though, that did a little thing with coloured text and that was pretty cool

>>53649914
I actually like the style in Koreanbro's translations. Giving the chuuba dialogue their signature colour works for one chuuba because it puts the focus on the most important character, and it works for multiple chuubas because it clarifies who is saying what.

>>53649914
Only gimmick so far that I've done is Pomu's journal, which I was pretty happy with how it came out. It was a fair amount of work to get it looking the way it did though. I think simple text things like fonts, sizes, and insertable shapes are fine though if done in small doses. You don't want to overkill with any of that stuff.

Gimmick deez nutz

>>53649914
I'm incorporating something like that into my current WIP, but I'm only going to use it sparingly so it doesn't get too distracting.

>>53638513
its weird to see a prompt i mentioned being brought up like that AND its also weird to see aggroschizo has been doing his bit for like a year

>>53649087
>Polka reading all the stories involving her

Am I moving to slow with Balsa or is this about right? The arc with Botan and Anon or Loro is going to be around 3-4 more chapters while the Civia-Wata plotline will probably be wrapped up in 4-5. After that the plot is going to speed up again and Mel's plan is going to be revealed. Does that sound fine or is it getting too slow?

>>53654513
There's no strict rules for something like that, however the buildup should be justified by the end of it.
Personally, I'd only slow down and increase the number of chapters if I think certain characters need more flushing out/establishment.

How would you guys write Wagahai?

>>53655411
The royal 'we'

>>53655525
You know what I mean.

>>53655635
I actually don't. Do you mean translating "wagahai" into a western equivalent, or writing Laplus in general?

>>53655411
As a borderline hysterical brocon who's days away from pulling a boxcutter on her brother so he'll finally fill her cunny all day everyday.

But that's just me

>>53655960
Laplus in general. I'm trying my best to get her personality down behind the scenes, but I've felt like shit lately and it's clouding my brain.
>>53656028
I feel like you're projecting your fetish. Don't know why. Call it a hunch.

>>53653475
>hfw she reads mine

>>53654513
Slow for who? You just gotta write what you want to write. If the content is enjoyable, the pace at which it goes from one thing to another is fine wherever it is.

>>53656098
>I feel like you're projecting your fetish. Don't know why. Call it a hunch.
You're talking nonsense I would NEVER want La+ as my little sister and for her to wake me up in the middle of the night, straddling me and demanding that I teach her how to kiss or she'll bite my face and scream for our parents that I'm trying to rape her

>>53655411
A childish demon child who is only slightly retarded due to her inhibitors.
>Can't make a real world domination plan to save her life
>Thinks she orders everyone around and can't comprehend how they wouldn't bow to her power
>Is prone to chunni levels of playing the storybook villain, and will try to engage a hero in epic battles to showcase her superiority and then sex
>Can't resist being spoiled.

>>53655411
Laplus definitely got that chunni in her. Her character does play up the haughtiness and such but behind the character, she does seem like a pretty kind and sweet person; very endearing when she's not playing the character. She is also kinda of a girly girl.

>>53656480
Just trying to get a read on things. It's interesting for me, but that doesn't always translate to the audience enjoyment. And I can always add some excitement if people feel it's getting slow

>>53655248
So far that's what this mid section is being dedicated too, particularly the development of Koyori, Anon and Civia. Just trying to make sure it's still interesting to the audience. A lot of people say I have pacing issues.

>>53655411
A haughty yet ultimately sweet and loving child that trully cares about her ''subordinates''. Also really clingly and prone to moping and sulking when something doesnt go her way.
I know some of you really like gaki correction but laplus is "Little Sister i want to spoil rotten and also have my girlfriend connect and bully" for me

>>53655411
As a brat ToT

Tell me about Ina

>>53657871
I think you're missing the point I was trying to make, so I ain't gonna sugarcoat it. This was/is a story of your own vision and imagination. If things need to go slow to be the way you want them to be, so be it. If you want to cater to an audience's wants, take up a prompt instead. Balsa is YOUR story, and you need to not get wishy washy with how its executed because of how you think people might react to it. If it's interesting to you and you let that passion take you, it'll come out as interesting for others to read when you put the work in. Pull up your pants, put on your big boy shoes, and give the story the content your heart thinks it needs.

>>53627975
>>53636518
>If you want a story where the intentions of the leading character/pov character are hidden, the only one that comes to mind is Holocalypse.
This is what I had in mind, yes! Thanks for the rec I haven't read that one yet. I'll check it out.

>>53659843
Everybody likes Ina! She's the greatest! She's the cutest! She's sweetest! She's the funniest! She's the sexiest! She's the nicest! She's the smartest!

Everybody like's Ina!

>>53659843
Just watch her streams if you want know about her. Or just go to her general >>53510814

Don't know why you need us to tell you anything.

>>53659843
I'll echo >>53660226 slightly. Going to a chuuba's general to ask for background details and general things is great and works pretty well. Not that we can't help here, but a dedicated takodachi will tell you a lot more than we can on the fly. If you want ideas on how you're gonna write the priestess, hell yeah bring em here. I haven't been to a chuuba general so far that was unwilling to share love and info about their oshi, and even when I told them it was for the purposes of a fanfic. Some were even interested to see what I got cooking.

I've been completely bereft of dreams recently.

>>53661349
And nobody cares.

>>53661349
When are you finally going to >>>/x/ and free us from your off-topic bullshit?

>>53661349
Here you go! >>53602575

>>53661349
Ignore the shitposters, I like your posts.

>>53661900
They’re not shitposters. This is a writing general for chuubas, not some fag’s personal blog.

>>53659964
Fair, fair. I just worry sometimes. And critique always makes it better. I've only improved as much as I have because of how people responded to earlier chapters. I may be indeed looking too much into it. There's always that devil on your shoulder telling you that your work is complete shit and people are just too polite to say so, ya know?

>>53661900
Why do you always enable the worst posters. It's literally just some faggot blogposting. What's to like about it? If you want to read blogs, then go to tumblr, wordpress, or blogger.com. Don't know why you're encouraging that shit here.

>>53662172
Sounds like excuses to not write.

>>53662116
You are a shitposter and it's no different from Conan.

>>53662172
>people are just too polite to say so, ya know?
Okay, but who cares? The story is of your own vision and imagination. Who gives two shits what some anonymous person says?

>>53662241
>Conan
A few people discussing Conan to see how it fits with Mumei’s civilization theme really lives rent free in your head after all this months. Actually pathetic.

>>53662297
>Who gives two shits what some anonymous person says?
Words to live by!

I honestly don't understand what drives the dreamshitposter and his cheerleader. With all that energy, he could have written a fic about having sex with fubuki and his #1 fan could have reviewed it and posted about it. I also don't understand why this thread needs to know about what he did or didn't dream about. If he wanted his dreams to be inspired by a fic from here that would be one thing, but it's just sad at this point.

>>53662385
I can't help that it remains relevant and you were not discussing Mumei, you were arguing about Conan and Tolkien. Completely off topic.

>>53662396
>dreamshitposter and his cheerleader
I'm just assuming they're one in the same at this point.

>>53662505
Actually, genuinely pathetic.

>>53662572
Yeah that sums you up.

>>53662396
If you don't like his posts why don't you ignore them instead of spamming the thread. It's not like there's a huge amount of them to hide.

>>53662172
Yes, feedback can always help you improve, but that's exactly why you need to just do what your heart demands and see how it comes out. If people don't like it, someone will probably tell you and what they think you can do better. 90% of your chapter postings have received feedback of some sort, which is pretty awesome. If you're also worried about giving the characters and story you are making the justice they deserve, find ways to improve upon them from your own perspective. I'm constantly trying to keep things in mind like making my settings more vibrant and my ambiance so vivid you can almost feel it. I can tell you put a lot of thought and love into what you've made so far, so just keep it up and do this for yourself. The more practiced you get, the more you become capable of writing and you'll recognize that. Also, fuck that devil. She may be here to stay, but that doesn't mean I don't get to slap her around a little, take her by the tail, and literally fuck her for her bad attitude.

>>53662396
The Fubuki dreamanon seems nice, but he's either trolling or a bit mentally to think that this general is the right place for his posts. But he's also kind of cute? I don't know.

>>53662396
The anons that spend 10 posts whining about the dreamposts are exponentially more annoying than the original dreampost one can just ignore.

>>53662505
>you were arguing about Conan and Tolkien
You do know people can always check Warosu or palanq and see no one was arguing about them. They were discussing them. I don't know why you're trying so hard to rewrite history about it. Literally, someone brought up Tolkien because they wanted to create a Mythopoeia about Hololive, and Conan was brought up due to Mumei's lore. The dreamshitposter is just some fag using this general as his personal blog.

>>53662792
It was mainly a shot in the dark on the off chance one of them tries to explain why they choose to do nothing productive. Even a half assed explanation would be better than nothing. That would mean they are at least capable of some creative thought.

>>53662924
The only person trying to rewrite history is you because you're embarrassed about being called out on it. Anybody can check warosu and see that it was you and your enablers that started off on a tangent but went completely off topic and derailed the rest of the thread completely. Just because the first few posts were related to vtubers doesn't justify the next 100 of off topic bullshit.

>>53663106
Whatever bro. I hope you seek help.

>>53663175
You're the one that needs help since you spend so much time shitting this place up.

>>53662925
That's never going to happen and you know it. His enablers will just defend him even when they shouldn't.

>>53663282
Yup. That’s one of the signs. Always blaming the other anon when shitposting. Next you’re going to samefag and say that I or another anon are samefagging. You’ve done this multiple times now. Just fuck off.

>>53662925
In other words you have no reason and just want to make posts as off topic as the ones you're bitching about. Typical.

>>53663354
If you're so embarrassed for getting called out by everyone why do you still do it?

Y'all need to take a chill pill.

>>53662925
Just wait for that fag to post something NSFW again and do the needful. Male internet exhibitionists never change.

I don’t know why you guys just don’t report the dreamfags post. The jannie pretty much deleted them in the past.

>>53662396
The faggot wants attention, and his supporters just support him because people have voiced their annoyance.
They literally have no reason to defend or enable him, which is why all of them defend him with "" OH I LIKE HIS POSTS DONT BE MEAN!!!!" or "WELL HUUUH JUST DONT LOOK AT THEM?"
I dont care about him, i filtered his posts like a week after he started, but his buttbuddies really want to turn him into the thread main character

>>53663588
Here you go!

>>53663904
wtf I love dreamfag now

Dreamfag posts: 1
Posts bitching about dreamfag: 13

>>53664006
And most of them are made by one person.

>>53664006
more like
>3 posts
>"friends" of him defending his att whoring: 14 posts
>People bitching about him: 14

>>53663959
I stock only the sexiest of Fubukis.

>>53664177
Literally one post about his dreams so you're already making shit up and most of the other posts are about Conan. You just want to shit this place up.

>>53664449
He literally uses the same fubuki pics, like an avatar, every single time to ''be smug''
Also Conan was offtopic shit, just like this. Kill yourself already you discord troon chaser

both dreamfag and dreamschizo are colluding to generate many posts so that /wg/ stays bumped while the board is fast!
Thank you dreamanons!

>>53664560
Your post needs even more buzzwords.

And they said /wg/ was dying

>>53656386
PROMOTIONS

>>53664697
A few people arguing over inane bullshit taking over half the thread isn't a good thing.

That cyberpunk idea from a few threads ago had an interesting idea
Coco and Kson share the same DNA, allowing them to exist on the same universe, which would make an interesting story about them meeting

>>53665144
The thread is derailed due to the dreamfag. No point in trying to salvage it.

>>53665260
Yeah, you didn't like literally one post in the thread so we should just let the thread die. You are beyond schizophrenic.

>>53665144
I missed that, but does that mean you can't exist in the same universe if you have different DNA? That seems problematic.

>>53655411
Someone mentioned writing Laplus as speaking in either forced Shakespeare's English while in chuuni mode or Zoomer speak while knocked out it and while I'm pretty certain that is not an accurate way to translate how she speaks a part of me really wants to write a fic with that as the gimmick.

>>53662237
I'm writing the next chapter right now lol. I just wanted to get thoughts on how things are moving.

>>53662297
I do lol. I'm not going to take it so much to heart that I'd alter the entire story, but a lot of the time my work has vastly improved when people input. But if nobody has any input, that's fine too. Just want to make sure. If people would say it's too slow for instance, I could think of several ways to add a bit more excitement to it, but not adding those scenes wouldn't hurt the plot in any way.

>>53662813
>If people don't like it, someone will probably tell you

Yeah, you're right. I forget sometimes that, unlike most websites, people are never shy about critique, both merited and not.

You're right. Sorry for making a thing about it. I need to just have confidence in myself and not listen to the devil on my shoulder.

>>53665948
When are you going to next ragequit the thread?

>>53665948
>read the word "burp"
>penis gets hard
i'm a broken man

>>53666183
Imagine if a drunk Koyori burped right in front of your face. Haha what sicko would like that haha definitely not me

>>53665948
You don't have to be sorry about it. We all got spots of weakness. Like I said though, the devil on your shoulder isn't always a bad thing. Sometimes we need her to get our best work out there the way it was meant to be. We should always question how we can do better, but also fuck the devil when we feel like it. We may create some of our demons, but that doesn't mean we can't use them to our full advantage and pleasure.

>>53662172
You need to a certain sense of narcissism that allows you to disregard other's opinions. It's hard not to take it personally when people are critical, to feel like you could have done more. But the majority of the population are not creators. They don't care about the effort it takes to put out works. Some just want to criticize, but most are rather neutral.
Remember, nothing you do is ever wasted. You do it for yourself and if it goes unappreciated, or is nitpicked to death, that's fine. That's their interpetation. Obviously there's always good advice buried within, but nithing that should ever steer you away from your vision

>>53662396
I think fiction is most comparable to a dream shared with others. It's sort of strange how he isn't inspired to write his own shit after seeing us having fun writing.

>>53665144
Honestly with that idea it always seemed like it was more biopunk than straight up cyberpunk.
Though outside of that setting idea specifically I prefer Kson being Coco's continuation rather than them being two different people since for all intents and purposes Dragon girl is just cooler and her being "in hiding" lets her still get used especially since it pairs her up naturally as a character to use alongside Rushia/Nazuna.

>>53655411
She's due for a story where world domination is actually in reach for her.

>>53668247
Give me two more years, we'll get there.

>>53666667
I've written a couple things for here before. Didn't enjoy writing, myself. It's very difficult to articulate thoughts in a sense that feels 'correct' and often I'd spend 20-30 minutes thinking about one or two sentences only to scrap them afterwards when nothing worked.
I'm envious of the writers who can just "let go" and flood a page without worrying about how it looks.

>>53669043
That happens to me a lot, actually. But when it happens like a dozen times, eventually something snaps and a page or two flows out onto notepad++ somehow. I think the snapping gets easier as I practice writing.

>>53669043
>often I'd spend 20-30 minutes thinking about one or two sentences only to scrap them afterwards when nothing worked
If this happens, the sentences preceding it were leading in the wrong direction. Try deleting the last five lines/paragraphs and going a different route.

>>53666667
Because it seeks attention.

>>53659843
She says a lot of puns so if you write a fic about her make sure to include them.

>>53665384
the prompt mentioned something about the metahumans from holo being created from scratch, so the way i can see it working is
>Coco Dies/Goes Rogue
>Kson is birthed, using her genetic data and mixed with more human genes
>>53666685
honestly Kson being someone with Draconic traits its a cool idea. It could also be used to replicate my favorite DBZ scene
https://youtu.be/JPEa_t1U7nk?t=95

>Kson stop's Coco's Punch and everyone freaks the fuck out, Coco included
>"Hey bitch...There's another dragon in town"

>>53672057
>honestly Kson being someone with Draconic traits its a cool idea
But Kson is just a Japanese delinquent not a dragon.

>>53672057
Here's one of the things i added to that promp, basically being the same as you said>>53511237

Kson, Nazuna and Henya leading the other vshoujos into a metahuman revolution, a la Magneto and his Brotherhood of mutans, could easily fit into a conflict inbetween corpos and Freedom fighters

>>53668247
Yeah, world domination of the playground.
Half the joke about Laplus is her being an ineffectual chuuni goober. The other half is UOOH demon cunny

>>53672489
You assume they watch streams.

>>53672057
At this point it's more of a question on what kind of story you want to tell with Kson and Coco not being the same person. Like yeah there's the obvious fight bait but outside of that, the only thing I can see being done with that concept would be an metal gear solid style fight for what their legacy means to them.

>>53602617
Ina, your best friend since middle school misses your signs because of her prudish autismo. Years go by, she sinks into neetdom, and in one of the days she ventures out for supplies, she sees you at the supermarket. You talk and talk while she feels a buried crush coming out of its grave, only to then realize that you have a girlfriend a thousand times prettier than her.

>>53677888
So basically, every basic prompt about lost love ever?

>>53678047
Yeah.

>>53678153
How unimaginative.

>>53677888
This but she desperately tries to take you back after inviting you over for drinks and tries to rape you with her neet stink.
Futa dick optional.

>>53679453
Sounds fucking retarded.

>>53679453
>Futa
You faggots are so fucking annoying.

>>53679453
>futa
hot and good, keep going

Looks like aggro-schizo's back.

>>53680102
No, he got ban earlier. Futa has always been hated here since the beginning.

>>53680102
>>53680207
I was about to say that. Jannie deleted and ban him earlier in the day for shitting up the thread.

>>53680207
>Futa has always been hated here since the beginning.
That's not true at all.

>>53681494
No, its true. Only reason why futa even got fics is because you had an idiot waste his money on it.

>>53681494
Why does futa irk people so much anyways?
I don't want dudes in my porn, and lesbian sex does nothing for me. Simple as.

>>53681494
>>53681584
stop engaging with someone clearly shitting on the thread and trolling you goddamn retarded mouthbreathing autists

>>53681608
Nobody is shitting up the thread. Someone saying people here hate futa is not shitpost.

>>53681584
>Why does futa irk people so much anyways?
I'll have to check warosu, but I think it might have something to do with a select few just spamming it to the point it got annoying. I'll have to check warosu.

>>53681545
I wrote a futa fic for free and there was that one guy who made a bunch of futa id fics so I think what you just said is patently false.

A bunch of my favorite fics are futa... It's just sexy.

>>53682494
I think he’s confusing the idiot who spent money on mid insect sex and won’t shut up about it.

>>53682718
I can't remember the last time bugfag posted about his fetish here, are you even reading the same thread as us?

>>53683152
It was in July 8.

>>53683357
That's centuries in /vt/ time.

>>53683357
Wow 10 days and counting, the guy really just can't shut up about it

>>53683392
No joke, but do people here have bad memory or something?

>>53683590
Glad you agree.

>>53683831
I think they’re trying to downplay it

>>53664912
Would you rather the thread be dead and archived? Because this is the alternative

>>53684533
>Would you rather the thread be dead and archived?
I say this without any hint of irony or sarcasm, but yes. It would have been more dignified than whatever this shitshow is.

>>53602563
Are there any nijisanji fics? First time coming here.

>>53684957
there's a few of them, you can search in the archive.
There's also a VN, which is pretty good

>>53685118
Thanks. Do you recommend anything?

>>53685201
To be more than a friend, You owe Her and She owes you.
I like selen and there's not enough Nina

>>53685201
NTA but seconding the VN

>>53685201
Selen's "my dragon wife can't be this cute"
One of the best fluff pieces we have about the purple dragon.

>>53685349
>>53685373
>>53685981
Thanks

>>53685349
What do you want for Nina? Give me some prompts.

>>53686300
Nina, your best friend since middle school misses your signs because of her prudish autismo. Years go by, she sinks into neetdom, and in one of the days she ventures out for supplies, she sees you at the supermarket. You talk and talk while she feels a buried crush coming out of its grave, only to then realize that you have a girlfriend a thousand times prettier than her.

>>53686530
So basically, every basic prompt about lost love ever?

>>53686618
Yeah.

>>53687046
How imaginative!

>>53686530
You shitposter, you! And here I was genuinely asking...

>>53686300
You get invited to a mixer to fill the numbers, and there you meet Nina.
people think you are gonna hit it off (since both are on a dry streak and both are into games) but everyone is surprised when you start fighting over RTS autism.
Except that, next morning, both of you wake up naked in a motel in the middle of nowhere, cuffed together.
Time to learn how the fuck did both of you end up in this situation, while also triying not to kill eachother

>>53687444
The prompt works better with Nina than Ina.

>>53688096
N'Ina...

>>53687128
You made me smile anon. Thanks.

>>53689907

>>53686530
Seems trite and pretentious.

>>53687469
But who did it? Seems like it would either rely on Nina being the twist or your friends on the mixer colluding. I wonder if there's another way to go about it as well? Let me think.

>>53691605
>But who did it?
Does that really matter? It's just a set up

>>53691605
the twist could also be
>once both of you get drunk, recognizse how lame the fight was
>actually hit it off
>Walk Nina to the station, like a gentleman
>since both of you are drunk, get into a bus to fuck nowhere
>fuck it, both of you are horny and tired, motel it is
>"oh look they have handcuffs! so corny!"
>"uuh, whre's the key?"
>"meh, forget it"

>>53692147
Of course it matters. Why wouldn’t it? If the set up isn’t handled well, the rest of the fic suffers.

>>53686530
That doesn't sound like Nina at all.

>>53694369
Watch her streams.

>>53679453
This except she pretends that her tentacles are out of control while they make you have sex. Then she makes up a quest to help her regain control of them just so you will be with her longer.

>>53686530
Seems rather contrive that she runs into you by chance.

>>53695652
But I have a girlfriend that's hotter and more sociable than Ina. Why would anyone pick her?

>>53696135
Your girlfriend can't stimulate your nipples, ears, mouth-pussy, prostate and urethra all at once.

>>53696135
Oh, I didn't mean "be with her" that way, you wouldn't end your current relationship.
I meant going on a journey with Ina or staying at her home because she convinces you that she needs help to save herself and the world from the dark powers that she is tainted with.

>>53696135
Don't worry no one will remember her after what Ina's going to do.

>>53696135
I meant be with her that way, you'd cheat on your girlfriend and fill Ina with semen every day.
I see no issues with this.

>HAHAHAHAH WHAT THE FUCK IS DIAMOND CITY LIGHTS NIGGA?
Gura says as she shoves her cock in Pomu's mouth so deep that she can no longer sit up straight
>NIJISANJI WHO? HAHAHAHA HOW'S RIKU'S ASSHOLE TASTE YOU KNIFE EARED WHORE
She then take some tongues out and cuts pomu's wings off
Pomu then cries out in pain for her lord anykara
>HAHAHA SHUT UP FAGGOT, ONE MORE WHIMPER AND I'LL GO FOR YOUR NIPPLES TOO, OH WAIT YOU DON'T HAVE ANY!!!
Gura then kicks her in the stomach and flips her over to rape her little fairy asshole with the her ginormous shark tail
>HOW DOES ALL OUT WAR FEEL LIKE HAHA YOU LITTLE SLUT
Pomu could no longer speak as Gura picks her up and carries her over to throw her out the window into oncoming traffic
>2434 MORE LIKE, ONE LESS USELESS NIJIWHORE HAHAHAHAHA
Gura decides to take a bath and makes sure to scrub every part of her body after violating whoremu's pathetic body, then gets on her computer and organizes an off collab with all the holoEN members (except Kiara) to piss on the fairy whore's rotting corpse as a final send off to NijisanjiCN
>HOLOLIVE THRIVING, NIJISANJI IN SHAMBLES
>THANK ME LATER YAGOO
Gura yells out as the stream ends.
>Tempiss next please!
all the people in the comments plead.

Riku laughs from his big golden yacht as he watches the stream and orders the EN branch to be disbanded for good, like a gangrenous limb severed from a terminally ill host.
>do not worry, our investors will not mind

and this is the story of how the western vtubing renaissance started.

>>53697059
>2434 MORE LIKE, ONE LESS USELESS NIJIWHORE HAHAHAHAHA
cringe tribalism overall, but that rhyme got me pretty good.

>>53697059
Kek'd. Based, fuck the nijiniggers in this thread, especially fairyfags.

>>53697601
Kill yourself retard.

>>53697059
This was definitely something.

>>53696733
My would he cheat with a woman that’s inferior to his hot girlfriend?

>>53699845
Because Ina stuck a tentacle through your ear and now there's an oyster buried in your skull telling you to do everything Ina says.

>>53697059
Fuck you for reminding me about how I want Selen to take my anal virginity with her tail.

>>53701077
That’s not how it works.

>>53701287
Actually, I'm a neuroscientist and this is exactly how it works.

>>53602617
Lamy makes Shion turn (You) into an orc to live out her rape fantasies. She also makes you rape Flare

>>53701401
Well now I know not to believe you.

>>53697059
>>53602575
Should be anchored.

>>53702070
It's not even a story

>>53702216
Yes it is. It's a good one too.

>>53702297
Not really though it should still be anchored.

>>53678202
You're right, he shoud've just prompted "Hag sex (with impregnation)." Now that would be a fresh breath of air.

>>53703771
It would still be unimaginative

>>53696135
They wouldn’t

>>53693206
>If the set up isn’t handled well, the rest of the fic suffers.
Forget the set up, if the beginning isn't passable or decent then any interest on that fic is lost.

Chuubas who are interested in the paranormal?

>>53704751
Actual interested in the paranormal, or normie reading tea leaves paranormal?

>>53704751
Chloe's literally haunted

>>53704751
Scarle is haunted too.

>>53704866
Nobody cares about nijiniggers.

>>53704751
Marine has an interest in the paranormal iirc.

>>53704866
Hunted, not haunted. By me. Wanting to cum in her asshole.

>>53705125
I made this post

>>53704804
Actually interested in the paranormal./x/ tier shit.