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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread: >>53500475

>> No.53506856
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STORY ANCHOR
POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.53506887
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.53506911

>>53506828
I forgot to change the subject so just pretend it says Friend Edition.

>> No.53507926

>>53506911
I like the Friend Edition.

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>>53507926
You have good taste!

>> No.53509009

Do we need to start looking for threads to merge with? I'm noticing ever since pekofag gave himself the boot we've been dying during his usual shitposting hours of brazillian late night. Maybe the worldbuilding thread? Especially now that they're only barely connected to their collective autism settings and are now whoever's there is making their own autism setting independently instead.

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Now it's my turn to go to bed; don't die again, /wg/!

>> No.53509130

>>53509009
Fuck off already discord groomer

>> No.53509227

>>53509009
Not from my point of view, at least; today is just an especially fast day for the board. If /wg/ is usually reaching 100+ replies before the thread is archived and a new one is made soon after, that's tolerable to me.

>> No.53509364

>>53509009
No matter how much shilling you do the answer is still no.

>> No.53509464

>>53506828
I can't remember the last time we had Fubuki in the OP

>> No.53509855
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Please look at the new Koyo outfit.

>> No.53509936

>>53509855
Boobs.

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>>53509855
I love it, and it activates my breeding almonds.

>> No.53510169

>>53509227
I mean objectively we are doing pretty well in terms of actual activity and discussion. The only thing regretful is that some of the good ideas from the dead threads haven't really gotten the time to shine.
In fact I kind of want to pick up that cyberpunk tragedy IRyS idea, though I'm having trouble coming up with a good cast for it.
I guess the obvious picks would be holoEN with cameos from the other gens as part of the death squads hunting (You) down. With Myth being from the first go around and Council being the dwindling party.

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Who's the easiest chuuba to write, in you opinion?
I think Pomu and Gura both have really distinct voices and behaviors. Their dialogues always flow really easily.

>> No.53510315

>>53509009
Not at all. When the board reaches SEA hours and there's a stupid nothingburger or two for them to latch onto, it's just a way of life that the catalog will be filled with garbage and the current thread might be booted off. We told the worldbuidling dudes if they want to contribute and improve relations, they can try getting more involved with the fics we have that actually do decent worldbuilding and offer their feedback and whatnot. If they just wanna keep casting their shill line here, they ain't gonna get very far. It's not a sign of death that the thread gets bumped off by catalogers shitposting. Even the main chuuba generals that aren't about the chuubas who are usually the targets of that shitposting aren't safe.

>> No.53510423

>>53510169
How does the thread the idea started in being dead take away its time to shine? You just bring it up again, like you did right now.
Also, once you reach a cyberpunk setting, you can use any chuubas you want basically for your cast. Roboco is an easy include since the tech is easily there to support her existence. It's all up to you.

>> No.53510440

>>53510169
>I mean objectively we are doing pretty well in terms of actual activity and discussion. The only thing regretful is that some of the good ideas from the dead threads haven't really gotten the time to shine.
Without a summary post these ideas developing out of discussions are hard to properly anchor to the prompt anchor post, sadly. So if there's an especially interesting idea developing it'd be good to put it in the prompt archive, and to mention that it was done.
The prompt archive feels underdiscussed and -used currently.

>> No.53510642

>>53510440
The prompt archive would be a good place to put summaries or link multiple posts which contain discussion about a complex prompt idea, yeah.

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>>53510233
I've been told my Pomu comes off very naturally and readers can really hear her voice within her dialogue. Flare also seems to come rather easily for me, and Botan is quickly getting that category too.

>> No.53510927

Since there's some discussion about the thread already, I want to ask if there has been any updates/developments about the writing contest that was planned?

>> No.53510956

>>53510791
How do you capture Flare's voice? What's the mindset you use while writing her?
I know she's a bit of a straight man, but what does she have beyond the typical tsundere serious girl routine?

>> No.53511079

>>53510642
Honestly I think it's better for thread discussion generated ideas to get the fujocast prompt treatment. Get all those posts compiled into a gdoc and have it be in the story archive so someone can actually stumble on it randomly rather than the prompt archive... Though this speaks more about how the prompt archive is kind of failing its purpose rather than how effective the archiving a prompt collection as a story is.

>> No.53511173

>>53511079
We could at least try to market the prompt archive a bit more. If new prompts come in I'll do a summary post about them sometime.

>> No.53511237

>>53510169
I know people dont like to "cross streams" but the concept of megacorps works really well with many companies
>Holocorp breeds their metahumans from scratch. They are the strongest but they have too much territory to cover
>Niji conglomerate artificially Creates them and throws them into the meatgrinder. Those that survive can even go toe to toe with Holos
>Vshojo corp is a front for a metahuman PMC. Their leader seems to share dna with one of the few slain holos
>Some metahumans are independant contractors and Will do any job for free. They are called "indies"

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>>53510956
While she's a straight man at times, Polka and Watame can bring out that more easy going side of her. When the two aren't saying something completely ridiculous. She's also a has a really fun and contagious laugh once she gets going. For me, she is the most level headed of the group, able to keep focus easily, and tries not to dilly dally too much, but that said, she has her slight mischievous side as well, which can shine when teasing others in her own way. The more important thing I keep in mind, is that she's cool in that way that she's confident, but there are times she knows she isn't invincible.

>> No.53511495

>>53510927
Not much more than the last time it got brought up
>No particular theme, only categories are Smut and Not smut
>500 word minimum word count and a sanity max word count between 8-10k
>Winner decided via poll website
At this point it just needs someone to step up to administer the contest (i.e set a submission period, set up a contest email, set up the polls).

>> No.53512754

>>53511491
Honestly, she sounds like a best pick for an adventurering group in terms of mental stability.

>> No.53512802

>>53511079
Yeah. Prompt archive's problem is that "sex with okayu" or "a chuuba doing the frankesteiner on you" is way too wide and clutters the page.
As you say, only those that get discussion and/or attention should go the prompt archive

>> No.53512953

>>53511173
What the prompt archive needs is a fucking revamp to simplify the current format. The current prompt archive looks more like a request board, it should just get simplified into something that's just pure prompt idea and details so its easier to use and browse.

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>>53512754
Why do you think I included her almost right away?

>> No.53513929

>>53506887
(You) get turnes into a shota, awakening hololive's talents to the pleasure of being an older sister

>> No.53514020

>>53513929
>>53512802

case in point

>> No.53514349

>>53514020
That's just a prompt that was anchored so it'll show up in the prompt summary post of the next thread. You have to fill out the google form in the third post to put something in the prompt archive.

>> No.53514359

>>53511237
If I knew any chuuba outside of the holosphere well enough, they'd honestly be a perfect way to setup that this 'loop' wasn't doomed from the start since they'd be a great way to have a 'third act twist'.
As is, I don't really know anyone to really pull it off. Though maybe this detail will help someone else that wants to take a shot at this cyberpunk thing.

>> No.53514624

>>53509009
However much you attempt to fatalistically doompost like this it's never going to be rooted in truth. We've had a fairly consistent fic output for months, and saging during night hours or heavy board traffic is no cause for alarm

>> No.53515062

>>53514349
In utter fairness if that anon did submit it to the prompt archive it would effectively take up the same kind of space as this prompt submitted last april
>4/4/2023 6:33:08
>Shirakami Fubuki
>sex????
>Yes!
>Fubuki luring unsuspecting shotas to her apartment and having her way with them.
Though fun fact, looking at the prompt archive, literally no one has submitted anything to it for a month. The last entry come from may 28 2023. Which just shows how out of the way the prompt archive and submitter are despite it being in the same post as the prompt anchor image.

>> No.53517045

Botan is into womb tattoos and friend's mom.

>> No.53517415

>>53517045
Too bad womb tattoos are kind of in a weird spot when it comes to writing about them. Half of the appeal is in the visuals giving the character a feeling of corruption and enforced horniness. That's kind of lost in writing so you have to explain that half while relying on their other half of being a magic smut plot device to carry the rest of the story.

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>>53517415
I gotta agree with you for the most part. Now that I think about it, I could potentially write one as a device to unleash max horniness and kinks. The idea that there are temporary magic runes to do that kinda thing is pretty acceptable within the world I've written. I also considered describing Choco with one anyway since I feel like it would add some extra flair to things.
If Botan is down to try one sometime, that might be fun to make happen.

>> No.53518208

>>53517665
It could just be something like a generic pleasure rune that could get overloaded for maximum sensitivity and horniness. Not talking specifically about HJ here but I think writing wise something like that could be easier to explain without having to effectively do an entire spiel shilling the womb tattoos and its sex appeal. I.e something like that idea from monster girl encyclopedia explaining the tattoos on certain monster designs.

>> No.53518562

>>53517665
>>53518208
personally, i like the womb tattoo being a tool to gradually corrupt.
something like it makes the user horny bit by bit until it receives semen, its an erogenous zone, randomly flares up and turns the girl into a quivering mess

>> No.53518797

>>53506887
Something involving Watame where she listens to all the troubles (You) have in life and offering you advice to help you get over it and become a better person.

>> No.53518800

>>53518562
Oh yeah, especially if it's something that grows with the corruption. It would be a great way to do the corruption progress bar in-universe without having to bring up numbers or having in-universe apps for it.
Actually thinking about it.
It's weird how we haven't gotten a traditional (sex) corruption fic.

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>>53518208
Yeah I like the rune idea. I'll give that a go sometime down the road. Also slightly related, I have thought of a cute idea where either Anon starts a demi-human field guide of sorts from all his experiences OR Pomu finds him a degenerate book on the mating habits and known weak points of demi-humans. The latter option also allows an opportunity to combine both of them, since he will just add to the entries things he found out that weren't currently in there.

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Today was productive. I hope it was productive for you too.

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So seriesanons, anything close to being done?

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>>53520065
That's great bro. It will be productive for me soon. I got my errands done for the day and I'll be just be playing nurse for my wife otherwise. I plan to make some time through the day to work on my next chapter a bit.
>>53520087
Depends on what you consider "done".

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>>53520087
After changing my mind half a dozen times on what the first NSFW side chapter of Heartbreak Tokyo's gonna be, including writing 1k words for something I decided against, I've finally settled on something I'm more confident in. Soon? Probably not, but it's progress.

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>>53520087
Just broke 2k into the first real chapter of Talent Security Division. The outline in my head's got a bunch of characters I've never tried to write before, so that's going to be fun. I'll try and get it done before the month is over, because August is going to be hell for me.

>> No.53520877

>>53520692
That's good to hear. Have you written anything here before? The prologue was pretty nice.

>> No.53521050

>>53520607
Taking a guess from the image it's going to be a schizophrenic masturbation session with spirit!Coco.

>> No.53521099

>>53520877
Disciplining Nene, Late Night Nut Delivery, A Brat's Punishment, and Cover High. This story is going to be very different in tone from anything I've written before.
And yes, the CH finale is still being worked on. It's not abandoned.

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>>53520087
no progress from last update, still have like, 3 connected scenes but it lacks an ending and cleaning up.
Exams are closing in, Winter memories just came out and im going out today

>> No.53522259

>>53521302
>Bae when she lowrolls her age today but (You)'re still horny.

>> No.53522792

>>53521050
That's kinda close to the idea I had written the 1k for, but no. That howlsfm animation with Shermie but featuring Kson is basically what I'm going for

>>53521099
Oh word. I'm looking forward to what comes next!

>> No.53522896

THE fic will come soon

>> No.53523068

>>53520087
Yes. Close to being done, yet so far from the actual release. But I'll get that sorted out soon enough.

>> No.53523095

>>53522896
The fic?
Oh wait, THE fic?

>> No.53524245

>>53523095
The very same

>> No.53524547

>>53524245
But the author... he died in Ukraine...

>> No.53525212

>>53509464
Earlyfag hates Fubuki for some reason.

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>>53510233
Aqua, I guess. Just make her retarded and add some slurping. Strangely enough, JPs tend to be easier to write than ENs for me.

>> No.53526790

>>53525968
Writing JPs in English just gives you a lot more freedom because you don't can't
replicate the speech patterns precisely anyway.

>> No.53527133

>>53510927
>>53511495
Is Lord of the Board finished? I might set it up in the next few days if I feel motivated enough and nobody else (who would honestly be better suited) steps up. There's a couple things I want to finalise, though.
We shouldn't need to make a seperate thread for the contest right? We can have a /wg/ thread as usual and have an extra post for the contest included.
Secondly, are we going with the rule that all fics need to be submitted to an email address? I personally believe linking your story to a separate "contest anchor" in the thread would be better, where the stories are stored in a separate archive people can access at any time to read. Obviously there will be a gap between the end of the submission period and the beginning of the voting period, but I feel like it will drum up more excitement seeing other anons also participating in the competition rather than everyone submitting anonymously. If potential contestants see the contest archive being filled with stories it might motivate them to jump in. A silent contest with no updates until the voting period sounds a bit sad. Releasing all the submitted stories at once might also overwhelm the readers. Allowing stories to be accessed the moment they're complete will give them more time to read everything.
If I'm going to set the contest up I'd really like to go with the contest anchor and separate archive method rather than a submission to an email with a mass fic release. What do you guys think?

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>>53525968
From what I know so far, she's just a bumbling simpleton with an aversion to speaking directly to people. You'd be fine just making her as soft spoken and adding some stutters here and there. Once in her comfort zone she seems very sweet and even opinionated about her interests. She's also got a very spankable fat ass.

>> No.53527903

>>53527133
>Is Lord of the Board finished?
Yes, and the next one is decently far off. The next happening is divegrass in some months.

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>>53520087
I finally figured out how I want to advance the plot for Balsa. While the Wata-Civia subplot is going to be a slow burn that gives them both some heart, I'm finding the anon training arc is feeling more like filler than story so in the next one to two chapters you'll be seeing something very exciting. Also got a good character arc for Koyori planned in the meantime.

I'm about halfway done with the next chapter so (hopefully) it will be released relatively soon. Sorry it's taken so long. Just got stumped and I didn't want to rush things.

>> No.53528621

>>53527133
Sounds good to me

>> No.53529350

>>53510315
For what it's worth, I don't think any of us has come casting shill lines since that chat you mentioned. I've been hanging out reviewing what I get to read, I'm pretty excited about that Talent Security thing. I also started on HoloFantasy, but that's gonna take some chewing...

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>>53529350
Hope you enjoy the ride. I like HF a lot and it's a big part of what helped inspired me to get back into writing and make my own story.

>> No.53530242

>>53529350
>I don't think any of us has come casting shill lines
Fuck off groomer >>53509009
>"we" should merge with another thread uhhh how about the worldbuilding thread haha

>> No.53530722

>>53530064
It's great, the prose is evocative without being verbose, which is an issue I tend to suffer from. The dice system is also a lot of fun, reminds me of my questing days, I never considered using something like that without having the readers do the roll, but it does add this nice element of unpredictability to the encounters, I kinda want to start something with a similar dynamic.
Similarly I began HoloJourneys, but that's even more chewing, I'm questioning reading just the last chapter to review it before going back to the start, but I'm not sure how standalone the chapters are.

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>>53506856
Balsa: Chapter 15

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQVUzhZhqUFxe3Zbn9iLz-zJ9j8ozjdTl3j1b4ai2QZzr8TJQMKd8SQCCWV98iZ2zzkIWEyFoU5jcKg/pub

tags: medieval fantasy, (you), Botan, Watame, Civia, magic

As always, critiques are welcome.

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>>53530722
As the dude who wrote HoloJourneys, I can say you might be confused if you just dive into the latest chapter. Nothing in it is really standalone, but you do what works best for you, and I'll be happy to hear what you think and if there's anything I could be doing better.

>> No.53534325

>>53534015
That is such a creepy watame image. It's so unnerving to look at.

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