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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>52614771

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were five stories posted in the last thread.

PD, PT: Subaru: Tags: NSFW, Subaru:>>52616090

Untitled Kronii fanfic because I'm bad at titles: tags: Action, Drama, Self-discovery:>>52683450

Cephalocuddle: Tags: NSFW, Ina, Kiara, tentacle play, foreskin play, fluff, first person perspective:>>52704206

Short Hololive EN fic: tags: Ina, Ame, Gura, Kiara, Mori, You:>>52723198

Shiina's Fetish:tags: NSFW, Amanogawa Shiina, Chisaka Airi, sweat, lesbian, smell, hairy:>>52749286

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Sweaty post concert sex with Ina.:>>52650667

I wanna see a softcore fic that just spends a majority of its wordcount describing in autistic detail, the process of undressing the mocap suits after the concert.:>>52652471

Connect the world has me starved of rat content, so im gonna work hyper hard and try to get lost and found 3 done by this week after i work on my exams:>>52670997

Partly for shits and giggles, but yeah:>>52673124

Your girlfriend Ayame takes you to her hometown to finally meet her parents, which unsurprisingly is an entire village of oni. What is surprising is almost every man and a few women challenging you to a duel because they all think you must be an incredible swordsman to have been able to take the strongest one of their village as your woman.:>>52679930

Kiryu Coco Horn Breaking:>>52693259

Fighting a losing battle to keep the Guras from escaping their filthy waters and polluting our blessed ground:>>52719497

The school slut Nene autistically gushes about her pet beetles in the aftermath of draining your balls:>>52724071

IRyS tries to convince a pretty boy(You) that you'd look totally cute if you cross-dressed. In trying to explain why you'd make a good trap, she gets a little too touchy-feely and realizes you've got a massive cock. She pretty quickly changes tracks and asks to fuck.:>>52754942

Anon is a 40's detective, chuubas get in the way of his investigation (and narration):>>52787265

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>>52795316
Balsa: Chapter Fourteen

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTNh4MoPUEAUgg874A6nYTgWFTt1RF-U7ZxfjrKYcIqmXquTyBQnigIdYXrdthUGJjdP61ns90YsSiA/pub

Tags: (you), Botan, Watame, Civia, medieval fantasy, adventure

I'm sorry that this one is quite a bit shorter than the others. I lengthened it as much as I could but the way it flows is exactly how I wanted it to be so adding anymore just didn't feel right. Otherwise, I hope you enjoy it anyway. Be sure to give me any critiques on things that need improvement.

>> No.52797782

What's a scene you wanted to include in a fic you wrote, but couldn't?

>> No.52798522 [DELETED] 

>>52797782
Piss.

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>> No.52799844

>>52799629
AZKi, my beloved... GPS.

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>>52795355
(in relation to this >>52799844)
You know what they say - fast cars and the Japanese countryside are an iconic duo. And it's no secret that you love a good drive down those scenic roads. But one day, as you cruise along at top speed, you begin to notice something strange happening with your GPS system. The normally emotionless voice guiding you on your journey has taken on a distinctly sweet and cheerful tone.
As you listen more closely, it dawns on you that the voice coming from your GPS is none other than AZKi - yes, THE AZKi herself, one of Hololive JP's most talented singers. At first, this seems utterly ridiculous - how could a GPS possibly be inhabited by such a famous figure?
And yet… the more time passes, and the more time spent driving together listening to her cute voice instructing directions of where to go next makes it harder for even YOU to deny that maybe… just maybe… there really is something special going on here between the two of you.

>> No.52800233

>>52800058
Bro falling in love with a GPS...

>> No.52800259

>>52799844
>>52800058
She is a virtual being, after all.

>> No.52800299

>>52795524
I need to do my homework on IRyS. That cross-dressing cock shock prompt is living in my head rent free.

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>>52795355
(You) have always been close with your sister, Lui. However, after you both left the nest and each went their own way in life, meetings grow somewhat irregular over the course of time.
You stay in touch, but with that much physical distance between you (she lives in Tokyo and you in the boonies or something) it's only natural that you aren't as involved with each other as you used to.
Luckily, there's a joyous occasion to bring the family back together: The announcement of your marriage/betrothal!
As you sit there gathered around the table in your old family home socializing, the old dynamics between your sister and you rekindle.
Realization soon starts to settle in as both of you can't help but think that your new wife/betrothed is nothing short of a second rate Luilui in every regard.
What do?
I'll tell you what. Forbidden incestous hawk-netorase is what to do.

>> No.52800776

>>52800058
This sounds like it's building up to a horror story with her where AZKi 'asks' you to drive to Tokyo and park in an unmarked building. You being the lovestruck fool that you are follow without a question (Insert horror here, idk maybe she bodyjacks you like that virtual AZKi prompt from two threads back).

>> No.52801456

>>52800776
>bodyjack
It could be like that. Say, a Fight Club-like situation where you slowly notice that you're yourself when you're awake... but things in your house become more and more girly the more times you sleep because that's when AZKi takes control
And all she does is play Geoguessr and shit

>> No.52802315

AZKi owes me sex

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>> No.52803435

>>52802832
I see this image and I'm reminded of that one prompt where (You) make it your mission to get Fubuki pregnant in her butt and you don't stop until she's 40% cum and you end up dying.

>> No.52803456

>>52803435
I don't think women can get pregnant in their butt

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>>52803435
I made that prompt!

>>52803456
They tell you that in sex ed, but see, how do you know unless you actually try? I, for one, am not convinced. I believe there's something specific about the backdoors of fox spirits that will allow me to produce triplets by dumping many, MANY loads in Fubuki's posterior.

>> No.52804234

>>52801456
I don't really see how that'd work as an ending unless it's a last minute reveal that (You) were a girl the entire time or maybe you have a personal link to Sora.

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>>52803589

>> No.52804561

>>52804302
I'd do IRyS too. Not my first or second choice, but she's up there. If she wants to get butt-pregnant, she can give me a call any day - I'll just nip off to the corner store afterwards.

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So what are you working on today anons?
Decided to try my hand on that hijacking a mech with Laplus and crashing at Lui's scifi idea. Not sure if it's going to go anywhere but I'm having fun thinking about and writing it.

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>>52805581
I'm getting some ideas on how to introduce Mel in the coming chapter. She was meant to be introduced in chapter 14 but I felt the way I did it was a lot better. Also starting to come up with a good arc for Koyori and Fubu

>>52797782
I may be able to include it at some point, but Botan looking over a Kurgan filled with the bodies of discarded initiates. May be a scene for the sequel though since I don't just want to jam in a somber scene where it doesn't belong.

>> No.52805857

>>52805581
it would be so fucking hot if someone edited a pee puddle under her in that picture

>> No.52806014

>>52805581
Currently dealing with a crisis of faith

>> No.52806680

>>52806014
Read up on the Shroud of Turin.

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>>52805581
Finally gonna get cruising into this next chapter. I got the scenes in my head going, the hags primed and ready to go, and a burning desire to get to the rewards this arc will bring me.

>> No.52808041

>>52807651
It truly is Hag Summer

>> No.52808202

>>52803456
I think there's actually a <2% chance of pregnancy if you cream inside a girl's ass. I read this somewhere but I don't remember where exactly, so you might want to double check.

>> No.52808941

>>52808202
Imagine how embarrassing it would be knowing you got pregnant through your butthole

>> No.52809096

>>52808202
How does the sperm get from the ass to the egg? The only thing I can imagine is someone pulling out of the ass and accidentally shooting a perfect shot and/or the jizz running into the right hole thanks to gravity.

>> No.52809160

>>52805581
Working, working. Still working... you know how it is.
>>52804234
No, that's not the ending, don't worry
The ending happens after you beat AZKi at a game of Geoguessr. Whoever wins gets full control of the body, no more second chances.
Unfortunately for her, she didn't know where the French territory of Mayotte is. You do.

>> No.52810046

>>52809160
>taking Koyori to Mayotte and watching her face fall when she sees it's just a normal tropical island

>> No.52811285

>>52795355
Anon is Laplus' older cousin who was asked to babysit her for the day. Both of you get along well so you indulge her in her chuuni fantasies.

>> No.52812324

>>52800776
So kinda like this video?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N_oBZxVcb54

>> No.52812609

>>52809096
>jizz running into the right hole thanks to gravity.
I think that might be it

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>>52812324
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zDxXSgGtPFE
>"Guessu! Go north from Hachioji until you reach Matsubaracho."
>"Go straight and take a sharp turn to JASDF Yokota Airbase Command."
>"Guessu! Go straight! Through the checkpoint!"
>"Duck your head to avoid the machine gun fire!"
>"Guessu! Take a left, go straight across the runway, and ram straight into Hangar 15!"
>"Get into the nuclear-armed Lockheed Martin F-35 multirole combat aircraft!"
>"Guessu! Arm the missile! Fire!"
>"Yaaay! We did it~!"

>> No.52812924

>>52810046
So I take it that she... thought it would be an island full of her own people?

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>>52776107
Glad you enjoyed it.

>>52775856
>>52778541
If I knew Sana I'd probably write it, I'm no fan of giantess but at that scale things like that kind of stop mattering.

>> No.52814075

>>52811285
For some reason this makes me think that (You) were grooming the young Laplus with the chuuni lore so that it's only logical for her to have sex with her cousin only to get caught and sent away before fucking her.

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>>52814075
>"Sorry Lap-sama, we're the only two Final Demon Gods of Pain left in the Universe."
>"But how will we have an army as strong and as smart as we are!?"
>"Well..."

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>>52814913
Can't say I'm into the incestual grooming bit, but the idea that Laplus giving you a lap dance while making shitty puns with her name is one I can get down with.

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>>52814075
That wasn't my intention at all...

>> No.52816058

>>52815465
Wouldn't any dance of hers be a Lap dance?

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>>52805581
When inspiration hits, it hits. It's weird how much a change of scenery has helped my writing. I've been making good progress on four separate WIPs, with this being one of them.

>> No.52816544

>>52815609
This place has ruined me into liking chuuba incest.

>> No.52816757

>>52816544
ladies and gentlemen...we got 'em

>> No.52818086

>>52816530
Is Lamy getting kidnapped here?

>> No.52818215

>>52816544
It's an appealing fetish for fictional characters. It's so taboo, but who would love each other more than family?

>> No.52818746

>>52816530
finally some Lape Ramy

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>one of my favorite artists reads a Selen X Pomu fanfic and he likes it so much that it breaks him into producing like 20 different drawings of Selen dicking the fairy
god damn, aside from the fact thats hot, i will now strive to produce something as influential as that

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>>52818086
Close. She's being attacked by triads.
>>52818746
Kind of fitting, if we're talking about the story with that title. (You) at the beginning kind of wants to fuck her while she dislikes you, but by the end Lamy will likely be doing everything she can to rape you.

>> No.52819974

>>52819707
Oh no Lamy, please don't put a gun in my mouth while riding my cock!

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>>52795355
Bae being hospitalized after nearly suffocating due to laughing too hard at a dick joke

>> No.52827602

>>52824328
That's essentially exactly what she said in Japanese

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An utterly fox-less dream session last night. I did ingest tea before bed, with caffeine being the primary stressor in coffee (I'm guesssing) but with no luck. Maybe I'll take some pre-workout before bed on Friday night.

>> No.52828468

>>52828043
Here you go >>52795316

>> No.52828478

>>52819974
Oh man, I just shot Anon in the face

>> No.52831863

>>52828478
t. Futa

>> No.52832361

>>52828043
I hope someone writes a story for you but you get monkey pawed and it involves scat.

>> No.52832811

>>52832361
I think that's your own desires leaking out there, bud.
But here's a tidbit for you: I REALLY liked Paradise Regained, disgusting as it may be. It's full of cheeky humour and is very clearly the author just running with the joke prompts that gave rise to the story to the fullest extent.
Weirdanonv2, you've got a massive kudos from me for that story!

If it's fetish scat I'd probably be... much less enthusiastic.
I'd still read it, though, despite the misgivings, out of morbid curiosity more than anything else.

>> No.52832838

>>52832361
Is there not enough fubuki sex in the archive for him already?

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>>52832811
Forgot to post a customary Foobs.

>>52832838
No.

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>>52832811
> Trust me, I just read about someone drinking diarrhea for the meme

>> No.52833111

>>52832811
I'm not actually him and was just shitposting here. Genuinely wasn't expecting a reply but I guess mentioning a vile fetish and lumping it with my oshi was a bad play.
If we HAD to see a vile fetish a least make it be piss

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>>52833111
I know you're not; that portion of my post was directed at him, not you.
Your oshi is Fubuki too? You can't be a bad person, then, and I'm in NO position to be taking the piss (heh) out of other people's fetishes.

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>>52832856
>No
you greedy fuck. Just for them, I'm NOT going to sex the white kitsune hag I generally don't find attractive in the first place.
I'm doing someone much better during that arc anyway.

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>>52833473
>I generally don't find attractive in the first place.
Them's fighting words, right there. Meet me out back in 20 minutes.

In all seriousness, you do you, anon. I wish you the best with your writing!

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>>52833473
GET AWAY FROM HEERRRRRRR!!!!

>> No.52833808

You would think by now people here would be inoculated to the odd scatological adventure story but any time it's mentioned everybody clutches their pearls.

>> No.52833913

>>52833272
Oh, right. I genuinely have a terrible time reading between the lines so my bad for making an ass out of myself.
>You can't be a bad person
And what if I were to tell you that while I do genuinely love Fubuki, that I'm just not interested in getting her pregnant?

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>>52833675
Thanks buddy!
>>52833678
You can't do shit Taiga. This is my world, and you won't be written into it.
Inb4: I write a stupid, grumpy, dumbass cat beastkin into Mio's arc that I have anon wallop the shit out of because he tried to keep him away from Mio.

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>>52833913
>while I do genuinely love Fubuki, that I'm just not interested in getting her pregnant?
Sacré bleu!

The pregnancy part really doesn't interest me either. I'm still in my twenties - not old enough to want kids yet. With that being said, if you tell me you don't want to sex Fubuki at all, well...

>> No.52834570

>>52834246
Oh I never said not wanting to sex her, I just don't want to impregnate her due to the fact I'm not mentally mature despite me coming up 34 at the end of the year. I'm more interested in things like handjobs, blowjobs, pussy eating, ass eating (and probably sniffing as well), and maybe anal if I really want to fuck her brains out? Those would come anytime I felt horny (or if she asked for it) and I'm not some creep who'd fuck her against her wishes and turn her into a sex addicted nympho.
But do you know what I desire more than getting sucked dry until I'm an empty husk? being cherished and loved. I'd take that even if it meant I was getting taken advantage of.

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>>52834570
Foreplay stuff is high-tier taste. The idea of focusing entirely on your partner's pleasure, or being focused on, is hot as hell. Anal's amazing, too, although for me it's more about appreciation of the ass than the actual act of sticking your dick where the sun don't shine. Actual anal doesn't feel massively different from vaginal.
I wouldn't want to fuck her against her wishes, but you're telling me you don't want her completely addicted to your scent and the physical pleasure you bring her, craving your attention and your body every time she gets near you? Brother, you're crazy.
I can understand the feeling of wanting to be cherished and loved, although I don't share it.
You have to reciprocate in order to have a healthy relationship and that means doing stuff you don't want to do. I'd rather play games or work on my own hobbies than do shit someone else wants to do that I'm not interested in.
I don't think you really want to be taken advantage of, anon. Or at least, you don't understand how that feels. It's crushing, and the pain never stops, but being addicted to that feeling of validation they give you causes a vicious cycle.

>> No.52838026

>>52836558
Obviously I'd want her to get addicted to me, anon. I just meant that I don't want her to become a nympho by me fucking her against her wishes. I'm just really, really terrible at wording what I say so if I tripped you up, I apologize.
And on the relationship part, I have no hobbies on my own so while I would hate it, I'd rather enjoy hobbies she likes because I want something to keep me occupied and busy and I want to feel happiness again.
Now I'm going to stop cluttering this thread up with spam.

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>> No.52845358

>>52845200
>Ui performs an abortion.webm
also, i say we rape her! who is with me?

>> No.52845677

>>52845200
deserved desu

>> No.52846327

Hey /wg/.
>>52817382
Lord of the Board OP is gonna do a wrestling stream to commemorate Nina's graduation this Friday with some of the LotB wrestlers. How do you feel about The Fly participating?
>If you were a LotB manager and would like your thread to participate in the event, get in touch with LotBOP. I can't guarantee everyone that asks to show up will show up, but we'll see what we can do.

>> No.52846910

>>52846327
Go for it. It was fun the first time.

>> No.52846921

>>52846327
Oh yeah our boy should go up there and fight

>> No.52847424

>>52846327
For sure. Hope this time The Fly reigns supreme.

>> No.52849623

>>52846327
Sounds good. Do we need to get in touch with OP or can we leave it in your hands?

>> No.52851558

>>52845200
Choco ain't using that womb anyway

>> No.52851965

>>52845200
>>52851558
>Punch Choco in her stomach
>Dust flies out of her womb

>> No.52852881
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>Want to write lesbian sex
>realize i dont know shit about lesbian sex aside from scissoring
i guess i gotta investigate

>> No.52853490
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>>52852881
Tell me about it. That Reine Fencing Corruption prompt had me intrigued but that would involve lesbian rape but I don't really know how that would work aside from the obvious.

Just face-sitting and unwanted fingering seems kinda boring tbqh

>> No.52853796

>>52852881
>>52853490
These problems are easily solved by making one of the girls a futa.

>> No.52853850

>>52853490
What about sticking her sword pommel up their cunts?
Yeah, I don't really think you can really vary it up outside of writing it emotionally/passionately.

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>>52853796
Futas only exist to be shamed by a real man with a real cock. Women barely can comprehend how a dick works, let alone how to do anything with it that feels good.

>> No.52854338

>>52853490
>>52853850 (me)
Though honestly you could probably get away with guro/sadism + psychopathy if you can't get creative enough with just lesbian stuff. It would probably be a good direction to take
it in if you want to focus on the corruption/moral degeneration aspect rather than the smut part.

>> No.52854619 [DELETED] 

>>52853490
Lesbian rape goes hand in hand with grooming.
Many girls have a "We girls must stick together!" mentally that often gets muddled with a misandrist outlook on men. As such, these girls will have their strongest bonds with other girls. The lesbian strikes in moments of weakness. Lesbian rape is a lot less violent than male-on-female rape, instead of fighting they get them plastered and whisper sweet nothings about their victim being too good for a man. Without consent, the lesbian strikes at her victims loins, at her lips, and keeps pushing until she gives in. Alcohol greatly helps in this.
A lot of touch between girls is seen as innocent because double standards, so, often lesbian rapists will shrug off their acts by acting aloof about it, as if it wasn't a big deal, and most importantly, that they didn't do anything wrong or abuse their victim because "They're BFFs"

Hope that helps.

>> No.52854933
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52854933

>>52854338
I could kinda just ape Camellia from Pathfinder Wrath of the Righteous yeah

>>52854619
I can see the idea of Reine trying using her status as a noble and THE IMPLICATION of being a natural swordswoman to 'walk girls home', and I've always been more for the mental/emotional punch of things than the physical.

>> No.52854996

>>52854619
Anon... You do realize that prompt is about Reine getting corrupted by her fencing teacher to go insane with her sword skills and sexually harass the girls of the poor district right?

>> No.52855255

>>52854162
that's a child

>> No.52855336

>>52854162
Men only exist to be shamed by a futa with a larger cock. Men barely can comprehend how a pussy works, let alone how to do anything to one that feels good.

>> No.52855544

>>52854996
Nope. I just went off lesbian rape there.
Gomene!

>> No.52856265

>>52855336
Too true sister!

>> No.52856481

>>52854933
Honestly whatever option you pick you, you should probably think about the lowest Reine will eventually go down to and work your way backwards in order to get the 'corruption arc' planned out. From there you can plan out what chuubas you can use as rape targets/victims and what will fit in as the supporting cast that slowly pieces together how fucked up Reine is becoming.

>> No.52857209

>>52852881
Anon needs further research.

>> No.52857821

>>52852881
Unironically watch more lesbian porn
Might teach you how to use fingers on a girl too

>> No.52858050

>>52855255
Her cock is still bigger than yours.

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>>52795296

>> No.52860090
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Bump

>> No.52860380

>>52857821
This, but with actual lesbians that love each other. Not some corporate production that ultimately presents what the target audience thinks hot lesbian sex looks like.

>> No.52860394

>>52858186
It should be illegal for this fox not to sit on my face

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>>52860394
It should be illegal for you to get within 200 meters of women.

>> No.52860777

>>52860572
I'll rape you Ui. Don't test me.

>> No.52860848

>>52860777
Gross...

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>> No.52862365

>>52860394
Doesn't that mean you can't fuck her without her getting arrested after?

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> have saved 200 different clips of Holos in 3D
> can't post them because they are videos so I don't know the context without having to look

>> No.52862800

>>52862716
You should give them descriptive names.

>> No.52862899
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>>52862800
Too lazy

>> No.52863033

>>52862899
>Refusing to form a heart with Kanata
Someone needs to smack Aqua's bare bottom with a paddle.

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>>52863033
Yeah, her punishment will be... whatever this webm is.

>> No.52863448

>>52863171
>bad and naughty children get put in the speen cube to atone for their crimes

>> No.52863763

>>52863171
That looks like Polka is breaking out Marine and Korone from the spinning reformatory.

>> No.52863935

>>52863171
God I love Sven Co-Op so much.

>> No.52865268
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52865268

So, what's a recent prompt you like and want to see written?

>> No.52865362

>>52865268
I wonder if that prompt where Shion is your teenaged aunt is still being written..

>> No.52865632

>>52795355
Chuuba of your choice drinking your cum through a straw directly from your dick.

>> No.52866128

>>52849623
I already told him you're onboard, but it would be ideal if the guy who was acting as /wg/'s manager for LotB contacts LotBOP anyway.

>> No.52866644

>>52866128
Whoever is the manager should say that if the fly wins we take over and turn it into a writing contest.

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>>52866128
Nobody acts as /wg/'s manager.

Unless you're talking about the guy who filled out the google form.

>> No.52866915

>>52866875
>Unless you're talking about the guy who filled out the google form.
Yeah, that's what I meant.

>> No.52867008

>>52866915
How do we get in contact with the LotBOP? Same email address he used to ask if the Fly's design was good enough?

>> No.52867095

>>52867008
Yup

>> No.52867223
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>>52867095
Done

>> No.52867497

>>52865268
fucking Irys in a dress
slut Nene
those kuudere/casual sex Kurokami greens from a few threads ago

>> No.52868298

>>52862365
They can arrest me but they can't unrape her

>> No.52868423

>>52795355
Getting Kobo butt-pregnant

>> No.52868733

>>52865362
Do you mean the one where she's your niece that's older than you?

>> No.52868803

>>52867223
Gracias, Anon.

>> No.52869564

>>52868733
NTA but I'm pretty sure they mean that. I think the prompt came about from a discussion about trying to find a new angle for chuuba incest.

>> No.52870375

A niece that's older than you is nice, but how about an aunt that's younger than you?

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>>52870375
That just makes me think of either Bae or Haachama to maximize the 'how is this woman my aunt' factor?

>> No.52871963

>>52870509
Shion would work too literally because of her slender and lithe build

>> No.52872510

>>52871963
And because she's very young.

>> No.52872908

>>52870509
This is the sexiest I've seen Bae. I'm not even into chubby girls

>> No.52873070

>>52872908
It's the hat

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>>52871963
Eh, if you're going purely by looks then yeah; but ironically I don't think Shion could really work for the inverse of the shion aunt prompt since the core for that relationship is responsible nephew/niece and irresponsble mess of an aunt/uncle... though honestly I think it would still work it would just be a different dynamic; something closer to a traditional aunt raising nephew story with the same potential for incest.

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You can't die just yet. There's work to be done.

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>>52868733
>>52869564
If it is the Shion niece prompt, it is in fact being worked on. I've got a decent outline in my head and some really good scenes I have in mind, but I'm currently stuck on a difficult part of the story. Other WIPs are also taking up a lot of the writing time I have.

>> No.52878925

>>52877121
I'm looking forward to being younger than Shion.

>> No.52879818

Shion needs rape correction

>> No.52879975

>>52879818
I think chastity correction would work also. Let her have a taste of how good cock can be, and then put her in a chastity belt until she behaves.

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>>52879818
I disagree. Shion needs consensual S&M correction.

>> No.52880167

>>52877121
You're the guy who wrote Deal with the Devil and Fennecs and love right? Is it going to be set in the same universe as well?

>> No.52880942

>>52880167
I hope his fics aren't all in a shared universe because that means they all inevitably end in nuclear hellfire

>> No.52881857

>>52880157
Does it also involve candle wax and her being suspended in the air?

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>>52881857
It can involve anything you like, so long as you respect the sanctity of the safeword.

>> No.52882421

>>52882030
Speaking about the safeword, I wonder what would have happened in "A brat's punishment" and Shion "didn't" beg to be fucked by (You). Would you have been too carried away on punishing her that by the time she "did" say the safeword, you wouldn't hear her and you end up traumatizing her for life?
It just makes me wonder and although Shion does deserve punishment, she doesn't deserve "too" much where it'd downright hurt her or scar her.

>> No.52883084

>>52880157
>>52881857
Oh, Shion in suspension bondage sounds great. She could bratty, flustered, obedient and romantic all in the same session.

>> No.52883545

>>52882421
If I remember right, the narration implied they'd done stuff like that a bunch of times before. He probably wouldn't have let things get out of hand

>> No.52883976

>>52883545
While you are right on that, I still imagine that "what if" scenario in my head and its why I avoid that fic in general. Plus I'm not a fan of bondage, sensory depravetion, and having a ball gag in the mouth.

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>>52880167
I mean I guess I could technically throw in a brief reference or two to make it "canonically" set in the same universe for the sake of it, but I don't plan to have any character cameos. This'll be a standalone story. In fact, the Anon of this story is in middle school so if he's the same age as the Anons in those two stories you mentioned, this would be the first fic in the timeline. Timeline...
Shit, I can already feel my connected-universe autism rising up. I should stop discussing this.

>> No.52884521

>>52882421
Shion is a witch, I think she could free herself if she wanted.
>>52883976
What kind of BDSM do you like?

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>>52884351
>The actions of the incestuous witch and her uncle inadvertently push Ayame's Yakuza parents to hide her away in a foreign country due to a series of coincidences.
This timeline shit is easy.

>> No.52885130

>>52884521
>Shion is a witch, I think she could free herself if she wanted.
And what if she's a normal girl in that story?
>What kind of BDSM do you like?
Dominance/Submission as I think that's the least harmful form of BDSM and I've always wanted to attempt to make someone submit to my desires. I of course would do all this with consent and I would also hopefully enjoy it being done to me.
I'd also want to avoid any type of bondage as stuff like that seems uncomfortable to me. But if I had to do it I will.

>> No.52885374

Guys Shion is an underage child

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>>52885374
Yes, which is why the only sex I want to have with her is loving and gentle

>> No.52885691

>>52885374
She is a Harvard graduate

>> No.52885815

>>52885374
Not anymore

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>>52885691

>> No.52886374

>>52885130
I don't think we had any switch fics, that would be interesting. Especially with your gentle approach.

>> No.52887071

>>52885130
That's a cute perspective. But I can't deny that something like having someone worship my body on their knees had an appeal that bondage and violence can't replicate.

>> No.52887125

I just learned that searching for reference while edging is a terrible idea

>> No.52887283

>>52887125
Did you shoot your screen again?

>> No.52887593

>>52887283
that guy wasnt me, and i managed to aim downwards so no

>> No.52888339

>>52886374
But do you know what'd possibly be more interesting? if the "gentle approach" failed and (You) find yourself in bondage suspended in the air and having your dick milked dry of all its cum by the one you were trying to dominate without violence.
Know what kind of violence I'd like for dominating someone? spanking with a paddle or whipping someone like that "pain and pleasure" fic.

>> No.52890172

>>52888339
Which fic? The only paddle I remember is from Hedonist's Reckoning

>> No.52891642

>>52890172
"Hedonist's Reckoning" is the one I'm thinking of, yes. That fic was really hot but I feel that it wasn't "really" punishing Ayame at all?

>> No.52894774

>>52891642
The paddling in that fic is supposed to be more painful than what Ayame would enjoy in terms of masochism, because she actually messed up beyond the kind of teasing you'd expect to happen for fun.
"Real" punishment in a BDSM context is tricky because it's all still consensual, of course. But you can make a difference between pure "for fun" punishment where the punisher merely acts angry and the punishee merely acts sorry, and "serious" punishment that's supposed to be a deterrent against acting the same way again in the future. The latter might be physically unpleasant to endure but still feel emotionally rewarding because it's part of being disciplined, if BDSM is an integral part of the relationship and not just what's practiced in the bedroom sometimes.
Ayame is also kind of punished in other ways. She feels bad about what she did and hasn't been forgiven yet, and she doesn't get to make it up to (You) with sex because it's obvious she wants it a lot anyway.

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>> No.52894970

>>52894897
Thread was already bumped.

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>>52894970
Sorry, glanced over and saw page 10 and it hadn't auto-updated in time for me to see that.

>> No.52895427

I had to reread some of Hedonists Reckoning before replying so the bump came late. But posting a hot diva is never wrong anyway.

>> No.52895575

>>52895427
Nobody said it was wrong

>> No.52897241

>>52894774
I had to find the fic and go through it again just to see what Ayame was being punished for to begin with. I think being spanked with a paddle just because she didn't make your dinner in time for you coming in is a bit overkill. I mean, are you going to punish someone next because they need to use the toilet and went and used it without your permission?
That's genuinely the only thing I disagree with in the fic. The rest (ie: the choking when she gives you lip and telling her to control herself and she gets sex when you feel she's earned it) is perfectly fine and acceptable. Although the end where she has to get dinner ready in 20 minutes doesn't seem possible unless its something that's easy to prepare?

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>> No.52900994
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>>52800696
I wish all of Holotori were my brocon sisters

>> No.52901896

>>52897241
I didn't mind the harshness but I can see your point. The inciting incident could have gotten more space and thought from the writer.

>> No.52902907

>>52828468
Why do you keep doing this instead of just reporting the post as off-topic?

>> No.52903568

>>52902907
That guy is a known shitposter.

>> No.52903758

>>52903568
calling him a shitposter is generous. Shitposters are sometimes creative or at least try to mask their own uselessness.

>> No.52903941

>>52903758
No, those are trolls, who thrive in trickery and tomfoolery. Shitposters just fling whatever shit they have at the wall to see what sticks.

>> No.52906133

Id rather see both banned desu

>> No.52906312

>>52906133
Yeah but then they cry and bitch when that happens and try to make us side with them by reporting the jannies and it’s all so tiresome.

>> No.52907693

>>52906133
Same

>> No.52908501

>>52906133
It's hard to hate DreamAnon since he always posts sexy Fubu pics, but I was really hoping he would stfu after having a dream with her in it.

>> No.52908611

>>52795355
Chloe, Iroha, Laplus and Koyori have an all out battle with the chuuniest of powers. Chloe's an apex predator like a dinosaur, Iroha's a samurai/ninja, Laplus is a god of destruction, Koyori's a mad scientist.
Then, their first grade teacher, Anon, calls them because class is about to start.
Oh, and Lui's also a teacher, and Anon is head over heels for her.

>> No.52908688

>>52902907
Jannies don't care and they haven't cared for 2+ months. That's how long this dream fag has been polluting /wg/.
It's also useless to call out because his butt buddies will immediately circle the wagons.

>> No.52908880

>>52906133
I like DreamAnon a lot. What in particular bothers you about him? He always has honest and open discussion about his thoughts and doesn't bite the bait that other schizo casts

>> No.52908917

>>52908688
They removed a few of his post. Hell, they even remove one from from last thread.

>> No.52908945

>>52908688
Has it really been 2 months? holy crap.
>>52908501
With the amount of posts he made so far, he could have just written a fic about anon wanting to dream about fubuki, and then finally getting it and it being the most mind blowing sex of his life. The twist could be that he meets a girl the next day at the convenience store that looks like fuubs.

>> No.52909054

>>52908880
He’s an attention whore.

>> No.52909074

>>52908688
no bro you dont get it, he blogposts but he does it with a fubuki image and ignores every single post that doest stroke his ego
that makes him not annoying!

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I'm sad that my

>> No.52909182

>>52908880
>discussion
That would imply he's actually having a real back and forth with anyone. The only things close to that is other anons trying to tell him how to induce enough of a lucid dream to get him what he wants so he fucks off. Honestly I don't know why he's here instead of the chatbot thread.

>> No.52909271

>>52908688
>It's also useless to call out because his butt buddies will immediately circle the wagons.
Posts that were immediately proven correct
>>52908501
>>52908880

>> No.52909413
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There are really only two types of people you need to know about here. People who spread positivity and create an enjoyable atmosphere, and people who spread negativity because they're bored.
You shouldn't reply to the second kind, no matter how much shit they fling.

>> No.52909439

>>52909182
Does he need to? I find it interesting, like a little dice roll blog. It feels rather on-topic, I think you're just a shitposter

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>>52909439
>Does he need to?
Yes, how is this even a questi-
>like a little dice roll blog.

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>>52909439
Yup. That must be me. Dude who loves writing, writes about hags, and reads all the cool stories my bros come out with. I must be a shitposter all right. I'm all for spreading positivity and making this a decent place to write and bounce ideas off of, but whatever these dreamposts, or rather lackofdreamposting, are, they ain't terribly constructive or positive.

>> No.52910476

>>52909413
This is a really good one I had no idea you were proficient with comedy >>52795316

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>>52910476
Didn't dream about Fubuki last night. Instead, it was about destroying a rental property with a sledgehammer. Pretty fun all in all, but would've preferred fox sex.

>> No.52910900

>>52910476
You're just as bad as he is.

>> No.52911795

>>52910828
You're on a roll! >>52795316

>> No.52912727

>>52910368
Enablers are the worst.

>> No.52913186

>>52912727
Yeah man, people who like this thing I don't like... worse than Hitler, all of them.

>> No.52913351

>>52913186
I don’t know why you’re ignoring the legitimate reasons why dreamposting isn’t even on-topic.

>> No.52914460

>>52795355
Your oshi tries to get through a collab stream while you're bound under the table and being forced to throat her raging futa hardon
Near/after the stream's end she lets loose a load that nearly drowns you, and spends what little time gets in post-nut clarity making sure you're alright before she starts feeling the need for another round.

>> No.52914571

>>52908688
They only care if people report it. Just wanted to tell you. Otherwise, they don’t know what’s happening.

>> No.52914951

>>52914460
If it takes you an hour to make your futa dom bust you are an absolute failure of a man.

>> No.52915688

>>52914460
Hell if you dont like futa jus make it about (you) being edged by your oshi until you fire the nut of your life

>> No.52915777

>>52915688
No

>> No.52915873

>>52795355
Koyori making you literally cum your brains out - into a test tube, where she can then experiment with hosting you in other objects while she toys with your soulless former body

>> No.52916684

>>52915873
I don’t think that’s both physically and biologically possible.

>> No.52917310

>>52916684
that could be a dialogue really
>"Listen Anon, i could sit here and explain it to you or we can put you in this roomba"

>> No.52918168

>>52917310
No one wants to be in a roomba.

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>>52917310
Roomba? Really? Nothing better than that?

>> No.52919848

I was really excited to see four replies in the story anchor only to realize there’s only one story and the other three are shitposts.

>> No.52919947

>>52919848
Yeah, get used to it. The retard seems intent on doing that.

>> No.52920231

>>52885130
>And what if she's a normal girl in that story?
Then she isn't Shion.

>> No.52920335

>>52918168
>>52918666
listen koyori has been lonely for a while, and after a bit the dildo just doesnt do it

>> No.52920447

>>52920335
Why not just befriend anon.

>> No.52920601

>>52920447
She's putting you in the roomba and fucking it and that's final
you can chose what to be next tho

>> No.52920670

>>52920601
I just don’t see why it has to be a smut when it could very well be a fic about Koyori making a friend.

>> No.52921389

>>52920670
>just don’t see why it has to be a smut
Fics nowadays need to be smut if you want people to read them

>> No.52921709

>>52920670
well if we take that angle why not Koyori making a super advanced roomba for the lolz and ending up giving it freedom once it becomes sentient, with the roomba becoming Anon, the manager of holox

>> No.52922356
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>>52921389

>> No.52922416

>>52921709
So like this?
https://youtu.be/X7HmltUWXgs

>> No.52922804

>>52922416
>Rick and Morty
Get Out.

>> No.52922823

>>52922416
the thing i had in mind was more alongside the lines of
>Koyori is bored out of her mind, sees her roomba cleaning the floor and decides to fuck with it
>makes it so everytime it bumps into something it says a thing, just for fun
>starts modding her roomba once that novelty wears off
>gets attached to it as she installs a speech and thought module
>considers it a friend

>> No.52923167
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52923167

>>52863171
it was a soundpost...
>>36736848

>> No.52923169

>>52920670
Anon, the prompt started with you splooging your intelligence out, I'm not sure what you were expecting

>> No.52923500

>>52922804
It’s a good show.

>> No.52923544

>>52923167
Free her...

>> No.52924290

>>52923169
It being a smut prompt detracts from it

>> No.52924955
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>>52923544
She's been freed from her mortal coil for a long time, anon.
You have to let go.

>> No.52925574

>>52922823
That could work. Still don’t know why she would fuck it. I would omit that part.

>> No.52925804
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52925804

If you used Japanese you cheated. You will translate "ne" into "hey" and you will like it.

>> No.52925852

>>52925804
No

>> No.52926556

>>52925804
You might as well take out the honorifics and translate accents if you're going that far.

>> No.52926716

>>52926556
You should be doing both of those things.

>> No.52926760

>>52926556
No, you'll write san as Miss or Mister, and you'll write Okayu as having a thick countryside accent.

>> No.52927394

>>52926760
Okayu? Don't you mean Frangelica Feline?

>> No.52927623

>>52927394
No

>> No.52927680

>>52926760
>"Come on Koro we gotta git to dat got dang ol' office." Okayu told her best friend.

>>52927394
4KIDSCHAMA NO

>> No.52928142
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>>52927394
Finally, I have an excuse to post this

>> No.52928154

You guys keep doing this bit but i would read the shit out of that fic.
Gimme that ye old english laplus

>> No.52928235

>>52928142
half of these are actual good vtuber names

>> No.52928250

>>52927394
>>52927680
A shitpost with 4kids-ized names and plot that's implied to be censored sounds hilarious.
Especially if it's some serious topic that's danced around with the grace of an elephant shot with a tranquilizer.

>> No.52928480

>>52928250
>Olivia, this is where Rachel and Carol where teleported to the darkness world right?
>Yes Lori, so please pass me that juice you are drinking, i need a bit

>> No.52928732

>>52928154
>Laplus speaking in a mix exaggerated old English and evil overlord while she's in chuuni mode.
>When she gets broken out of it she speaks entirely in zoomer speak.
That sounds fitting but painful to write at the same time.

>> No.52928905

>>52928732
>" AR THOU READY? HAVE THINE EYES DESCENDED UPON MINE GRANDEUR?"
>"Im sorry Laura, did you say something?"
>"Bruh like, get a clue dawg"

>> No.52928908

>>52928142
I don't know what I expected but Antonio and Rick got me good kek

Also I totally keep 'Suzy Housemacher' in my back pocket incase Suisei ever needs a fake name in a fic

>> No.52930537

>>52928250
>"Goooood morning weather hackers!"
>"Carol?! I thought you were on vacation for an indefinite period of time!"

>> No.52930694

>>52928235
I'm a fan of Marilyn Roger myself.

>> No.52931545

>>52795355
A fic, any fic, with any chuuba, but it's been 4Kids-ified

>> No.52931953

>>52931545
What does that even mean

>> No.52932120

>>52931953
It means the Vtuber has normal names but every thing stays the same.

>> No.52932314

>>52930537
>>52930694
How would Marine even work in that setting? Is she a walking censor bar?

>> No.52932549

>>52932314
The editors shrink her chest and lengthen her skirt down to her knees.

>> No.52932591
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52932591

>>52931953
It means that the chuubas have 4kids names, the dialogue has been translated completely, and the subject manner has been sanitized/wooselyfied to high hell (rice ball = "jelly donut")

>> No.52932621

>>52932314
She'd be the character who gets completely rewritten

>> No.52932629

>>52931545
Everything is 90% the same except for the obvious censoring to try and Americanize everything.

>> No.52932670

>>52932621
>sister Marylin, the wannabe pirate who is into stand up comedy and Pickles

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>>52931953
>>52932591
>>52932629
Dont forget scrubbing it clean off any mention of death, doesnt matter if it makes sense or not

>> No.52932944

>>52932740
To this day I have no idea why the strawhats didn't rescue Nami's mom from Arlong's dungeon.

>> No.52932951

>>52932740
The concept of "Graduation" fits perfectly here

>> No.52933012

>>52932740
They're not dead anon. They've just been sent to the shadow realm.

>> No.52933941

>>52932591
That sounds like dubbing? Why make a fic about that?

>> No.52934553

>>52928142
Those names are actually great though. If you were forced to localize for an American kids cartoon audience, I'd go with them

>> No.52934576

>>52933941
Comedy and nostalgia for the bad dubs of the past that somehow created a world that's close but somehow completely different to the source material.

>> No.52934633

>>52933941
It's dubbing gone too far to the point of unintentional comedy. I'd read it

>> No.52935551

>>52934576
I never experience it, so I don't get it.

>> No.52935928

>>52935551
You had to watch it as a child.

>> No.52936095

HoloFantasy should have a 4kids version

>> No.52936631

>>52936095
No it shouldn’t.

>> No.52936689

>>52936631
Yes it should.

>> No.52936867

>>52936689
Why? It’s completely unnecessary

>> No.52937112

>>52936867
Why not? None of this thread is necessary.

>> No.52937249

>>52937112
Because the person who wrote Holofantasy doesn’t want his fic to be butchered?

>> No.52937592

>>52937249
And so did the original creators of the anime. That's what makes it perfect.

>> No.52937862

>>52937592
The difference is that the author here has a say in it.

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