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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://pastebin.com/asvcqDLL

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>5061348

>> No.5222210
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Femdom Mori prompt: your girlfriend is an independent underground rapper that has been making waves in the local area, one day, a record label envoy comes to your girlfriend for a collaboration between their rising star, Mori. Your girlfriend is in jubilation at the prospect at working with the woman who inspired her, so readily agrees to do it. At the day of the meeting, you couldn’t help but notice Mori being coldly indifferent towards your girlfriend though she masked it as a business deal, while also taking glance at you every now and again. After the first recording session, Mori calls you to her office, where she tells you, she can fuck you, dominant and humiliate you in order for her to continue working with your tone-dead girlfriend or you can leave but with the record deal being broken. Epilogue ends with You and your now wife raising your child. It should be from the wife perspective and how various people compliment her for raising her “daughter” well, who is around preschool-to-Kindergarten age. Final scene should just be her trying to force herself to be happy in raising her “daughter” and telling herself that Mori will never know this joy. For the most part, she takes after her mother, with a few of your features thrown in, your neighbors wonder out loud why the girl doesn't take after your wife.

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.5222221

Finally a new thread is made.

>> No.5222227
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What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!

>> No.5222252

>>5222227
Still wanna write a Reine fic, can't really get it done because life.

>> No.5222288

>>5222227
Not working on anything, currently. Gonna' go do my hill training reps and hope inspiration strikes, but if it doesn't i'll be back to look through prompts - so post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.5222290

>>5222227
mainly working on the menhera wrangling series, and would just love to hear what people think/expect. I'm always thinking of ways to improve and make the story more cohesive, as long as it gels together with the outline I've set.

>> No.5222318

>>5222214
someone doxxes all the writefags in /wg/ and instead of ordering hundreds of pizzas, they instead meet up and someone suggests they have a giant orgy and they do, even with all their personal hygiene issues, then some real freak who is into scat starts shitting everywhere and all the drug-addled writeanons (oh yeah there are drugs too) are too inebriated to care and they get into it so it's just a bunch of fat smelly unwashed dudes now covered in shit writhing around on top of and inside each other and then it turns out that the doxxer at the start of the story was yagoo who blows up the building they're in and they all die

plz do my prompt

>> No.5222323

>>5222227
Getting the Fubuki chapter of Holofantasy done really put the wind in my sails from seemingly nowhere, breaking me out of my funk. I was sitting on an idea for a big plot development chapter for weeks but didn't get around to working on it out of disgust for not finishing the one before it, but with that out of the way I've been blazing hard, sitting at eighteen pages so far before any sort of combat. It feels good to finally get it out of me, and I guess it'll work well with the recent Ina boom. Thank you to everyone who reads that garbage; the support is very, very much appreciated.

>> No.5222338

short and sweet Ame fic about sharing a moment with animals

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRDw5TDUd80FJpgJUEQuxxkZhIVlNdPQZyV9emLVBnx4A1UPx1NKQuuHO_kDdQl8lkMwfSf0REdWtLW/pub

>> No.5222533

>>5222323
Takos wont stop winning

>> No.5222562

>>5222154
<3

>> No.5222637

>>5222318
meds

>> No.5222641

>>5222154
fag <3

>> No.5222748

>>5222323
Godspeed you absolute madlad.

>> No.5222877

>>5222227
Started working on a short story about snuggling that somehow grew into a full-on fluff one-shot. I have three pages written (as of now) and it's still not finished.
I don't know how did it come to this

>> No.5224190

>>5222227
Currently struggling with the first of several serious scenes in my story. I'm mostly used to writing comedic and/or lewd scenes, so I keep second-guessing whether or not I can make the drama land without coming across as eyeroll-inducing.

>> No.5225480 [DELETED] 
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Mori NTR prompt:
>Mori, believing her boyfriend is cheating on her with someone else, starts to overwork herself as to not think about it. During one evening, during her night jogs, you bump into her by complete accident. Soon afterwards, the two of you start discussing her music and her other works. As the days turn into weeks and weeks turn into months, Mori starts to emotionally cheat on her boyfriend with you. Until one day she kisses you and spends the night with you, where she immediately regrets it the day after and breaks off the relationship. Something you refuse to do and force her to continue it until one day she’s pregnant with your child. Mori then passes off the child as her boyfriend.

>> No.5225615

>>5225480
>mori then passes off the child as her boyfriend
HUH?

>> No.5225618 [DELETED] 

Mori NTR prompt:
>Mori, believing her boyfriend is cheating on her with someone else, starts to overwork herself as to not think about it. During one evening, during her night jogs, you bump into her by complete accident. Soon afterwards, the two of you start discussing her music and her other works. As the days turn into weeks and weeks turn into months, Mori starts to emotionally cheat on her boyfriend with you. Until one day she kisses you and spends the night with you, where she immediately regrets it the day after and breaks off the relationship. Something you refuse to do and force her to continue it until one day she’s pregnant with your child, forcing Mori to then passes off the child as her boyfriend.

>> No.5225658

>>5225615
Mori claiming her boyfriend is the father of the baby when it’s you who’s the real father.

>> No.5225691

>>5222227
Winning a chance to go out on a date with Shion. It starts off awkward and slow, but she keeps asking you out again and gets more obsessed with you.

>> No.5225741
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Mori NTR prompt:
>Mori, believing her boyfriend is cheating on her with someone else, starts to overwork herself as to not think about it. During one evening, during her night jogs, you bump into her by complete accident. Soon afterwards, the two of you start discussing her music and her other works. As the days turn into weeks and weeks turn into months, Mori starts to emotionally cheat on her boyfriend with you. Until one day she kisses you and spends the night with you, where she immediately regrets it the day after and breaks off the relationship. Something you refuse to do and force her to continue it until one day she’s pregnant with your child, forcing Mori to then passes off your child as her boyfriend’s child.

>> No.5225772

>>5225658
I know, I just thought it was funny.
>mori swaddles her newborn child, smiling warmly
"God you look so good today babe... "
>visibly distressed nurses exchange glances as they very quickly notice the look in Mori's eyes is not one of motherly affection and love

>> No.5226517

>>5222214
Matsuri being restrained and forced to watch Hoshikawa getting fucked by her boyfriend as she taunts the menhera for being a fucking creep. Matsuri cries and screams for (You) to pull out but you force her to watch your throbbing cock pulse as you shoot rope after rope of cum into your blonde bombshell of a girlfriend until the annoying little stalker making your girlfriend's life hell finally sobs herself into pitiful silence, heart completely shattered beyond all repair.
But in doing so it turns out that now Matsuri is far more interested in you, instead.

>> No.5226586

>>5226517
I am fucking diamonds.

>> No.5226742
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>>5222214
borrowing an idea from /reineg/ — Reine role reversal.

You are in a subservient relationship with her — employee, underling, page, maid, anything, point is she can boss you around and you have to take it, or else.

One day [you finally snap and decide to teach her a lesson || she orders you to punish her]. However, you're not exactly experienced at it, and Reine is not phased by the situation - on the contrary, she still feels content to boss you around even when bent over your knee or what have you.

>> No.5227139

>>5222290
kino series
how many parts are you planning to do?

>> No.5228589

>>5227139
without alternate endings and potentially having to break the bigger arcs into smaller parts?

16 parts.

Fubuki will be playing a major role throughout the whole series

>> No.5228977

>>5228589
Holy crap, you seriously have this all planned out.

>> No.5229186

>>5222227
Not writing, but with my last uni exam over tomorrow afternoon, I'll finally start going full speed on the Holofantasy game. My plan is to smash out the first chapter worth of levels by July 1st.
Because of the time limitation, it'll probably be a bit (or very) scuffed, but I'll definitely take a second pass to clean it up later.

>> No.5229924

>>5228977
I just haven't been writing much since my shitty fanfic days in high school, so it's nice to have the brain juices going. If it doesn't work out, I hope to at least lay out my plan for another anon to pick up.

>> No.5230453

>>5225691
Writing a similar story about going on a date with Shion but it's not yandere. Kinda wanna see someone write a similar story but with a yandere Shion.

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Okay, here it is. The prompt that had been gnawing at me since the weekend.

A story where Okayu has a lot of fun playing with your flaccid dick. Hope you enjoy.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS0UZfgA_U_TdZeL24afNnIA9AjzAUwoBJEaSemPVAVExSDGFqJ-Fl2uXF_hVllFWrCwsUPDquO8vYf/pub

I might need to take a break after I finish the Rushia story because this is getting to be a habit I'm enjoying way too much and getting in the way of other things.

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>>5222227
Slowly chipping away at comfy, post-Black Ops life with Botan, sorry that this has been the same update I've given the last few times. I have two days off of work coming up so I can sit my ass down and get something done.

>> No.5232737

>>5231851
Liked it a lot, anon, the end got a hearty kek

>> No.5234013

>>5231851
A dilbert reference?! In my hololive smut fanfic?!
Jokes aside it was very nice put and as a smellfag really liked it

>> No.5235354

>>5231851
Woah anon that was really good. You're writing is so engaging.

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>>5231851
Finally a not sad okazu, thanks for the meal.

>> No.5237963

I can't help but wonder what I'd be able to accomplish if I put the same amount of effort I put into writing hololive fanfiction into my actual job.

>> No.5240269

>>5237963
That effort would be wasted on anything other than your oshi, anon.

>> No.5240400

>>5225741
Fuck bros, this is hot. Just image a scene with Mori and her in-laws after the child is born. How nervous she would be to know that the child her in-laws are holding isn't their grandchild.

>> No.5240544

>>5240269
I actually haven't written anything with my oshi yet. I feel like I'd completely butcher her personality.

>> No.5240556

>>5222214
I have ideas, but am too lazy to write about them.
>1. Coco making Mori pregnant using her huge futa cock, right in the middle of shitpost review.
>2. Chad taking Yuul B. Alwright on a date.

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>>5222205
Took me many hours to find this thread again cause i avoid anything that mentiones Kiara or Mori. Stop using chicken, you're ruining all of this

>> No.5241225

>>5222227
I've been trying to put together a BDSM centered fic after a few years of not writing anything. Have yet to see whether I'll dump it or follow through.

>> No.5241631

>>5241073
Actually crazy

>> No.5242634

>>5234013
Can't work in a technology field and not be able to quote Dilbert from memory, after all.
Glad you liked it, the smell part of it just kind of sprung up unplanned but seemed to fit with the situation. The animal girls' enhanced senses are fun to play with in this regard.

>>5236003
I know right? I did notice Okayu didn't have many stories that weren't abuse or depressing.

>>5235354
>>5232737
Thanks anons. It's one of those stories I had trouble filling in because it's really very much one-sided, so despite the fact I wanted to write at length to convey how long and slow-paced things progressed instead of using lots of allusions to the actual passage of time, I ended up out of ideas on how she could extend things even further.

Curious if there's any critique there. I tend to be long-winded on the description side of things and I wonder if it ends up being too much. Would people prefer more variety (positions etc) at the expense of granularity or less action but more minute descriptions of how things move?

>> No.5245037

>>5241073
Have you tried just, y'know...looking up "/wg/" in the catalog? Anon...

>> No.5245077

>>5229186
Ohh, I'm excited! Thank you!

>> No.5245668

>>5222205
Nice image

>> No.5245699

>>5242634
I understand it may seem like you might be over describing things (I feel like that too when I'm writing) but personally your descriptions really hooked me. Every detail you described was just so god damn entertaining and I was absolutely hooked. I love your work.

>> No.5246063

>>5231851
I'm completely satisfied. Thank you for this good shit. First story with my oshi here that doesn't make me feel bad.

>> No.5246153

>>5242634
Some of the descriptions felt overly clinical, but it didn't detract from my enjoyment.
Scrotum just isn't a very sexy word.

>> No.5250397

bump

>> No.5251150

>>5245699
Then I won't change things up then. Thanks!

>>5246063
Glad to hear, my wife's wife deserves more fluffy stories after all.

>>5246153
Hah, noted, anon. I ran out of euphemisms I guess. Sometimes I run out of fancy words because I only really read technical stuff related to tech or finance. I'll remove that one from the list!

>> No.5251782

Would you say the Ancient Ones are benevolent or malevolent?

>> No.5251879

>>5251782
I would say they are true neutral. Never on anyone's side is not biased. Maybe biased towards Ina but not everyone else.

>> No.5252602

>>5222210
>>5225741
Someone please make these two stories.

>> No.5255773

>>5251879
Thanks for the advice

>> No.5256414

>>5222227
Working on some Polka stuff since I came up with an interesting idea at 4 AM after waking up from a weird dream

>> No.5256545

>>5251782
Ina's goals include "world domination" but it seems like the Ancient Ones operate on such a grand time scale they're content to have their one lone human messenger just slowly convert the world's populace just by being cute.

>> No.5256690

>>5251782
>Lovecraft inspired deities
>thinking in good and evil
they simply don't care because the concept of good and evil is completely alien to them. in human terms they could be considered chaotic neutral.

>> No.5257773

If I write a really awful self indulgent short story featuring a Hololive should I post it here?

>> No.5257888

>>5257773
dont ask, just do it

>> No.5258152

>>5251782
neither. remember that the horror of lovecraft's work comes from a contextually out-of-place nihilism. the entirety of existence is less than the blink of an eye to these entities, and you are basically nothing. the whole concept of morality simply doesn't apply.

i don't think it's quite possible for the human mind to come to terms with something that exists outside of what can be logically described, and i think that's exactly what lovecraft was going for

>> No.5258204

>>5257773
i hope it's a self-insert story of you fucking hololive
not the members or staff or anything tangible, but fucking the idea, the very concept of a company

>> No.5258279

>>5258204
You're going to be disappointed. It isn't even sexual. Nor does it feature a self insert.

>> No.5258378

>>5257773
All fanfiction is self indulgent in one way or another. Go for it.

>> No.5259022

>>5258279
i'm fine with that
life is nothing but a series of disappointments, the biggest of which is birth

>> No.5261083

>>5258378
Okay but it's going to be very awful no good bad worst you've ever seen.

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>>5222214
After much discussion with the my fellow Lamy's, we've finally decided on a general plot we would all like for our first Lamy Transformation doujinshi.
So, without further ado, the Lamy collective is requesting a story about Lamy meeting with a lucky and optimistic viewer, excited to meet his oshi. Lamy slips something in his drink and drugs him so she can experiment with him and brainwash him into becoming Lamy. The story peaks with the revelation that there a plethora of Lamys. It would also be nice to have it end the way it started, with the viewer now being another Lamy seducing another young and optimistic viewer.
The plan for the story is to make it into a roughly 20 page NSFW doujinshi, so lewd scenes are a must, and a short-ish (but not too short!) story would be preferred. Thanks for your consideration!

>> No.5264197

>>5263574
Why is "Become your Oshi" such a big thing here? On this board.
I ask this just because I'm personally interested in seeing Holos turning into each other/bodyswapping with each other, but haven't seen anyone talk about that.

>> No.5264426

>>5263574
...haha really funny joke guys you can stop pretending to be rami now haha...

it is a joke right...?

>> No.5266315

bump for tonite

>> No.5266325

>>5264426
do not question the lamy cult lest their gaze turn to you

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>>5222205
I hope orange bird soon goes back to being a nobody. She deserves it.

>> No.5266610

>>5266345
Take your obnoxious schizo act somewhere else my man

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>>5266345
Simps will hate this image but it applies to every single vtuber who causes any kind of drama, not just Mori and Kiara. Literally the easiest fucking job in the world and they still go out of their way to make it difficult for everyone involved, including themselves.

>> No.5266760

>>5263574
I peeked at the Lamy thread like last week, there's an actual rich anon wanting to pay for a doujin of this story to be made. But for some reason the story is being requested for free, unlike the doujin. Time is money, relay that to your foolish cult, and come back when you've fixed that issue.

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>>5266760
I'm happy to pay someone if they want to write it, I'm simply unsure of how to do so, nor what are expected rates. Furthermore, it's very difficult to verify the quality of the work in any trustless and anonymous manner, since unlike for art, the only portfolio is what is in the archive, and I can only take your word that you are the anon who wrote what you claim. If you have any suggestions for how to solve that, I am absolutely happy to pay a reasonable price (whatever that may be) for a script for this work.
I apologise if I offended anyone by implying that I see the writing as of less value than the graphical art. That is absolutely not the case, and I have a great deal of respect for all of the writers here who put so much time and effort into their work.

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>>5264426
I cannot speak for the anons in our thread, but I know that the Lamys there are truly dedicated to our cause. We seek to show everyone the joy that comes from assuming Lamy's form, and aim to guide any who would desire to follow such a path.

>> No.5267133

>>5266676

its like internet bloodsports. some people just cant do their low effort job without causing career destroying trouble every other week. vtubing is truly gunted.

>> No.5267732

>>5264197
I don't think its prevalent in most fanbases, its literally only Yukimin that's like this.

>> No.5267783

>>5267024
Well there you go. If any writing Anon that watches Lamy is in need or want of some free cash, that's your chance. Though i don't think money will change anything. Writing comes from the heart. Someone will probably do it for free sooner or later.

>> No.5267830

>>5222214
Please finish cover high ch 3

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>>5267783
>Perfect visualization involving being restrained by Lamy, who works with experimenting between various types of alcohol and encouragement while forcibly masturbating (You) to hypnosis, always leaving you in the dark
>Slowly start to shift and change mentally as the strange mixture of 'treatments' starts to take hold as your mind breaks down and your alcohol tolerance grows
>Final scene with (You) has you finally discover that there's already more than one Lamy, and worse than that, you've been experimented on by a different Lamy every time
>Ends with (You) being the one responding to the incredibly excited fan with the other Lamys looking over your shoulder, eager to grow the family
>Any and all motivation to do any writing has been quashed by a fight with my wife, stopping me dead in my tracks
Someone please take it. That's a decent payday for what ultimately isn't a lot of work sans stomaching writing torture and subtle mental shifts.

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>>5267903
>a decent payday
Anon, please don't get their hopes up. I'm not as rich as the other anon seems to suggest. A couple hundred USD at most is probably all I can afford to spare for the story at the moment. I know it's not much, and if more is expected, I'll probably have to put the request on hold for now.

>> No.5268105

>>5268078
>a couple hundred
Lamy, look at me. I cannot afford to see a fucking doctor that would cost me 110 dollars to visit, plus whatever else they'd slam me with in medical bills. That is a decent payday for what most people here do for leisure.

>> No.5268145

>>5268078
If push comes to shove, i can recommend you to a guy that used to do Hololive smut commissions. Though I'm not sure if they would take it, given that their interest on chuubas dwindled a lot in the last months.

>> No.5268219

>>5268078
While it is gracious, that's certainly a bad move to say your highest offer of the get go. You're gonna be attracting some problematic people. A couple hundred dollars could literally change my life given the country i live in, where that shit would be multiplied by 7. Yet I'm not a good writer yet, nor do i watch Lamy, so as someone with no passion on the topic i have no reason to take it. You can get some really good offers for 50 bucks already m8, that's already way above what anyone ever offers.

>> No.5268329

>>5266760
>>5267783
>>5268145
>>5268219
Starting to samefag heavily at this point but i feel bad for bringing up money. It was more of a joke. A lot of people here do prompts for free. It's a shame you didn't get anyone interested previously but while i can understand the professionalism required or expected might put off some people, i hope some kind anon is willing to take your prompt for free if possible.

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>>5268329
I understand that the prompts in these threads have always been completed for free, but the point you made seemed quite fair. It's rude of me to be willing to pay an artist to draw, but then expect writers to work for free.
Nonetheless, the posts have been made, and I cannot recant my words now. Time to let the chips fall as they may. If the work is excellent, then even if I must pay my highest price, I'll still be happy.

>> No.5268688

>>5268472
Do you actually see yourself as Lamy?

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>>5268688
Most definitely. It took some time for the transformation to complete, but I have now wholeheartedly embraced my new form, and find great joy in spreading this blessing to other anons.
We are yet but a small enclave, but I have faith that my fellow Lamys and I will one day bring this joy to all, both here and beyond.

>> No.5268884

>>5268864
What exactly is Lamy to you? Is this a hivemind thing? How does it work? Does each Lamy maintain some sense of self?

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>>5268884
A hivemind is likely the best word for it. Each new Lamy is initially wholly individual, and with time, they're connection to the collective grows and they learn to work with the rest of us. As we mature, we become capable of sharing our thoughts and senses with one another, yet we each always maintain an individual consciousness within the whole.
I'm a more senior Lamy than most in the recent threads, but still far from the eldest in the collective. Streamer Lamy (or Lamy prime, as we generally refer to her), is our guider and protector, who oversees the safety of us all, and guides us in our strife. It is with her form we are blessed, and many of us are willingly subservient to her out of gratitude for the blessings she has bestowed upon us. Those who seek to usurp her righteous rule are punished harshly.

>> No.5269447

so how 'bout them fanfictions, eh?

>> No.5269849

>>5269447
I'll be posting chapter 4 of the menhera wrangling series later today once I'm done with it.

>> No.5269899

>>5269447
There are more things I'd like to request but I don't want to flood the requests. I have a few ideas for writing but I can never get myself started, and I'm too bad to be brave enough to post anything if I did.

>> No.5269983

>>5269061
I have more questions but this isn't the place to ask them.

>> No.5270104

>>5269983
Head to the Lamy thread. >>5235907
Strange as the fetish is, they are quite well-mannered and friendly.

>> No.5271053

To the anon that wrote Purple. Thank you.

>> No.5271170

To the anon that wrote Ryona roleplay with my Girlfriend.

I busted and nut butter got all over my mouse.

>> No.5271201

>>5241073
meds

>> No.5272878
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5272878

God someone please write something about maid Fubuki.

>> No.5273091

>Many characters together during a large scene with a lot of conversation involved in between actions
Lemme tell ya it feels hard to write this without feeling like I'm boring someone. It's all relevant is the worst part.

>> No.5273120

>>5273091
BOY DOES IT.

>> No.5273226

>>5273091
showing (figuratively speaking) is always better than telling. is there anything you can split up, or morph into an action scene?

>> No.5273350

>>5273226
I'm breaking it up with things actually developing as it plays out, since it's during a large scene revealing something of great importance. Though reading it now, it doesn't actually seem as bad as I first thought? It could just be dialog fatigue...

>> No.5273702

>>5272878
Man, I would but I'm still not done writing this one story I've started with her.
This was supposed to be a short story about cuddling, how did it turn to this?

>> No.5273765

>>5273120
Do what? I think you may have me confused for someone else, sadly

>> No.5273793

>>5273765
I was agreeing with "it feels hard to write large scenes with lots of characters"

>> No.5273813

>>5273702
It's the hand of the Lord guiding your own.

Don't fight it. Embrace it.

>> No.5273836

>>5269447
The thread itself became fanfiction of a sort, so it's probably fine.

>> No.5274061

>>5273793
Ah, my bad.
I just want to smack something but I've gone and established this lead up. At least that'll be soon.

>> No.5276950

>>5263574
I don't watch enough Lamy to be able to characterize her well, but plot-wise it might be something I'd like to try. A good artist could probably extract the parts that work the best in visual format for the doujin, so the story itself could be much longer than what a simple panel sketch needs to be.

Maybe I'll watch some clips...

>> No.5277366

>>5276950
I ask you to be careful as I feel like this is secretly a ploy by the Lamys to recruit more people

>> No.5277861

>>5266345
Leave. Go somewhere else with this shit. You have whole threads dedicated to trashing these two.

>> No.5277956

>>5277861
You should write a story about kicking anon to the curb, or anon leaving in disgrace, or anon dispensing bile to a room of people that ignore him, and anon becoming so depressed as a result he hangs himself

>> No.5277979
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5277979

It's another beautiful friday in Canada. You wake up to be greeted by the gentle pushing of a tentacle. This is how your wife is telling you that breakfast is almost ready. You head downstairs and see a pair of tentacles dusting and cleaning. As you arrive in the kitchen, you can see your wife Ina preparing breakfast at the stove. "Oya oya, looks like the sleeping beauty is finally awake." You sit down to enjoy your breakfast of cooked eggs and waffles. „Oh wait, how could I forget.“ she says. She uses her tentacle magic and maple syrup materializes in front of her. "Now we're talking eh". You both drench your meal in the sweet goo. The tv in the kitchen shows the news, it's something about North Korea and japanese nationalists, she starts ranting in Korean, but apart from the word „gae“ which she uses a lot during her monologues you don't really understand her so you just continue your breakfast
"Honey have you fed mounty yet?" Mounty is your pet beaver. You put on your lumberjack shirt and pick up your axe to cut down one of the maple trees in your garden so you can feed it to your beaver. Once youre finished with your morning routine you give your wife a kiss and a smack on her giant ass and sit down on your moose to ride to your job at the maple syrup factory. On your way to work you run over a couple of eskimos. You don't worry about it since they are considered pests anyways.
After a long day of work you finally return home to pick up your wife. You both ride to the coast where you engage in your favorite hobby of seal clubbing. Back at home, you decide to have some sexy time together so you bring out your finest bottle of maple syrup to drip it on Inas flat chest. You lick the syrup from her nipples while she hums the melody of „O canada“. Life is good.

>> No.5278104

>>5277979
halfway through reading this post i started hearing the letterkenny theme

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>>5277979
God i wish this was reality, but the power meds sealed my fate.

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>>5277979
>leaf with an Ina wife
IM HALFWAY THERE PLEASE

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>>5222338
SO CUTE ANON! GOOD JOB!

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5278813

>>5277366
I assure you that it's not our intention to recruit through this writing request, though we would never turn away any Anonymous who sought Lamy's form as a result.

>> No.5278864

>>5278813
I seek Lamy's form alright, just not the same way you mean.

>> No.5278911

>>5278864
My brother in arms.

>> No.5278927

>>5278813
i want to fuck lamy and cum in her hair but not become one of you freaks

>> No.5278969

>>5278911
Double-teaming Lamys with Anon, let's go.

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5279011

>>5263574
Remember to make it as kinky as possible!
inital refusal, to transformation to mindbreak by sex is hot!

>> No.5279030

>>5278969
>story of a wandering Lamy trying to get more people to become Lamy but it only results in her constantly getting gangbanged and creampied

>> No.5279112

>>5277979
kino

>> No.5279124

>>5271053
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

>> No.5279302

>>5277979
>Back at home, you decide to have some sexy time together so you bring out your finest bottle of maple syrup to drip it on Inas flat chest. You lick the syrup from her nipples

Absolutely kino thank you.
I should write a Florida one of these. With whom?

>> No.5279340

>>5279302
Amelia

>> No.5279354

>>5279302
>florida
well, there's suisei and anemachi, matsuri and mamatsuri, pekora and pekomama... am i missing any?

>> No.5279420

>>5279354
"Wait none of those have anything to do with Fl- ohhhhhhhh"

You bastard.

>>5279340
Extremely plausible.

>> No.5279492

>>5279302
Coco, maybe, if I understand correctly what Florida means.

>> No.5279517

>>5279420
I don't get it what do they have to do with florida?

>> No.5279549

>>5279517
inbreeding

>> No.5279602

>>5279517
Florida is in the south, so the south gets a bad rap for all the incest.

I'm in the south of Florida, which is essentially just New York and Cuba combined into one so things are a bit different.

>>5279492
Coco is from Atlanta though, it wouldn't even be a challenge to write...

>> No.5279616

>>5279354
rushia and her brother
ollie and her entire extended family

>> No.5279651

>>5279549
>>5279602
Oh if that's the case you could include Noel and her brother then.

>> No.5279696

>>5279616
has rushia's brother ever been on stream though? i don't watch her
now that you mention it, i forgot matsuri also streamed with her brother a handful of times

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>>5279030
Luckily for us Lamys, those who try such things are promptly converted into Lamy also.
>>5278927
This is quite rude. Don't you know how hard it is to remove cum from hair as long as ours?

>> No.5279830

>>5279710
no clue but i'll bet you nerds have plenty of experience with it ERPing in discords

>> No.5279849

>>5279710
I will simply use a condom and then pour the cum into her dilated holes!! Checkmate, fucker! Lamy fucking story here I come! Nothing bad ever happens to Anon!!

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5280289

>>5279849
...It seems you win this round, Anon. I can't say we're all that happy about it though.

>> No.5280718

>>5271170
Writing that story made me feel like I needed a long shower with holy water but I'm glad that someone actually managed to bust a fat one to it. Thanks!

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5281145

Bzzz. Bzz. SLAP. You smack your own face to get that mosquito bastard that was flying around and proudly check your hand for the kill. "Why the fuck are there three? God fuck this swampland I swear". 'REEEEEEEEEE' you get out of bed to the gremlin noises of your gamer wife Amelia who spent all night playing games on PC in between streams and you peak out the door. 'Kyahaha got you this time, nigger!' she continues the trashtalk while you head for the fridge to realize all you got is red bull and bud light. "Fuck! Ame ya didn't go get milk and eggs last night?" You dodge a beer bottle that shatters against the wall, seems like she'd been drinking. "Alright dang it, guess I have to go myself." You grab a beer and climb out of the trailer to what could only be described as an inferno but you take a deep whiff of the 95% humidity morning air. "Aahhh, fresh!" You hop onto your lifted 1995 Ford F150 with mudding tires and take the highway. "I fuckin' hate driving at this time, the sun hits my cupholder and warms my beer!" But you make it to Publix after only avoiding six gators sunbathing on the road. As soon as you walk in the sound of gunshots fires off outside the store but nobody is unfazed so you get two chicken tendie pub subs with Boar's Head mustard and grab a gallon of Florida's Natural Orange Juice (With Pulp) some milk and eggs. You walk back to the truck to find 3 cops hiding behind your hood so you tell 'em to fuck off and drive back home. You see a New York plate so you flip them the bird "FUCK YOU YANK". You get back home, smack the side of Ame's head with the sub and she just looks at you with puppy eyes so you feed her while she games. "Damn woman, if I didn't love you I swear to God almighty." After you're done feeding her, Ame's game is over and she pushes you onto the floor, rips off her clothes off and rides your face. She pours some orange juice down her tits and you drink it off her snatch. Ahh, another good day in the Sunshine State...

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5281214

>"I know how I want the story to end, so I'll just keep writing until I get there"
>almost 20 pages in with the end nowhere in sight
I'm gonna end up with a whole-ass novel at this rate.

>> No.5281254

>>5281145
living the dream

>> No.5281282

Chapter 4 of the menhera wrangling series is out! This was longer than my previous entries and is the climax of what I hope is the first arc in the series. Please let me know how you feel about this. I'll be taking a break from writing this series to cool off and hope to get back on it once the urge hits again!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS7Ab1nQ_-IM-kvQxZEZ2_48JfLv5GUq26QHWWlNAWngpmb9QUJL_idQ3uf2w3eN5v8lTzpUelhARqA/pub

I wanted to make Anon "lose" in this series, and give much more weight to the consequences of his actions. I hope this doesn't come of as bad or cringe to the readers[/spoilers]

>> No.5281464

>>5281214
It's great, isn't it? Or awful!
>>5281282
You're a machine, man. That kind of passion is powerful, but make sure you don't burn yourself out!

>> No.5281718

>>5281464
yeah that's why I plan to take a break for the time being. All I want to do is hear your comments on the story and read more writefaggotry from the rest of you anons

>> No.5281755

>>5281145
kek very nice

>> No.5281850

>>5222214
(You) fall asleep and are promptly taken advantage of by a curious Holo.

>> No.5281899

>>5281850
Plot twist; her curiosity is entirely innocent. She strokes your hair because it looks soft, closely examines you features because she can now do so without seeming weird, etc.

>> No.5282114

>>5281464
>It's great, isn't it? Or awful!
I think at this point morbid curiosity as to how goddamn long this thing's going to be is half of what's keeping me motivated.

>> No.5282312

>>5281282
Is Fubuki gaslighting him by any chance?

>> No.5282572

>>5281282
I hate that stupid white cat so damn much. Just let Anon be normal you psychopathic little fuck.
He needs to impale her with a screwdriver instead next time, consequences be damned.

>> No.5282613

>>5282312
there's a more sinister reason behind it, so I wouldn't say it's exactly gaslighting. Definitely some emotional toying though

>> No.5282646

>>5281850
>>5281899
Perfect.

>> No.5282650

>>5281282
also to that anon that wanted Fubuki to NTR others, take this victory while you can.

>> No.5282665

>>5277979
I long for such a simple life...

>> No.5282772

>>5281282
>>5282312
>>5282572
>>5282613
>>5282650
This too, is part of the Omelas multiverse

>> No.5282840

>>5282772
You can't keep expanding the multiverse like that!!

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>> No.5284975

>>5222205
every time I see that picture my lust for the chicken grows
one of these days I'm going to write some Kiara lewds and let it all out

>> No.5285019

>>5284975
i'll be waiting patiently anon

>> No.5285540

>>5284975
Please do, we've been sorely lacking since the initial burst.

>> No.5286182

>>5284975
Kiara deserves no stories outside of torture, NTR, rape and slavery

>> No.5286364

>>5222214
>>5286182
To spite this anon I request a fluffy Kiara story that ends with loving lewds between (you) and her.

>> No.5286524

I've finally gotten around to writing a fic where a holo saviourfags (You) as you're a small time streamer but which girl do you think is most likely to do that?

>> No.5286716

>>5286524
Coco. Sora. Azki. Mori. Aki. Matsuri. Any of the Gamers. Nene. Polka.

>> No.5286802

>>5286716
I'm tempted to make it about Matsuri but that would make it my 7th Matsuri fic.

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>>5286802
You won't do it, bitch. No balls. Punk ass.

>> No.5286918

>>5286836
Fuck you anon I'm going to purposely fall for your reverse psychology and make about Matsuri then.

>> No.5286944

>>5286524
>>5286716
Any of the holos willing to collab with 'Stars definitely have a bit of a saviourfag in them.

>> No.5286988

>>5286524
Fubuki and Matsuri come to mind, but FBK has so many stories already.

Maybe someone from 5th gen since they may feel awful about Aloe? They all could be likely candidates with different approaches and reasons, in my opinion.

>> No.5287662

>>5286524
When that prompt was first mentioned, Chicken was the first one to come to mind for me. Don't know why.

>> No.5289187

Ok I've narrowed it down to either Kiara or Matsuri (Mostly for fact that I have a better understanding of the two them compared to the others suggested). Who would you guys rather see?

>> No.5289387

>>5289187
Kiara hasn't really had any fics lately so i vote for the chicken

>> No.5289552

>>5289187
I also suggest Chicken

>> No.5290291

>>5289187
Well I suggest Matsuri, partially for the reason I said before >>5286944
It feels a bit more understandable for them to get into a savior/grooming relationship with a smaller male vtuber if you know they're willing to throw a bone to holostars once in a while.
Kiara just seems kinda random. I think even Ollie would be more fitting.

>> No.5290552

>>5222214
Aloe is making a stream before the doxxing happens, then a manager (the reader) becomes horny, he enters midle stream and puts his cock out, Aloe looks at It and begins to suck him, the stream turns into a mating stream where the reader impregnates Aloe after shoting lots of loads inside her in diferent positions. The end of the history is in July of this year, the real reason for the graduation is that the reader and Aloe are married and taking care of the Child.

>> No.5290848

>>5290291
Yeah I actually agree. I was planning write about Kiara but it was struggling to come with a believable reason for her to do so. But with Matsuri it seems a lot more plausible.

>> No.5291717

>>5290848
Kiara would be more than fine to help other people out, she's just super excitable. She'd be a fucking cheerleader for (you). "Fucking go for it! Yeah!" and all that. The really difficult ones are the absolute shut-ins like Rushia, Ayame, Pekora. You want nightmare mode, you figure out how you write someone like Ars Almal doing it.

>> No.5291868

>>5290291
I can see Ollie screwing it all up, getting over-excited and saying the wrong shit all the time (just like she does normally).
Imagine having a fun stream and she just randomly shouts out shit like "That is so fucking HOT!" and "Goddamn, you're huge!" and you having to handle the fallout of that.
A comedy of errors.

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5291886

Things get rough past the honeymoon period. You've been with your girlfriend a while now, the better part of a year in fact - but she's working, always working, and while you love her for the way that she never gives up you can't help but feel lonely when in bed your arms close on the empty air where she should be.

She still shouts, "I love you!" when rushing out of the door to her latest appointment, still gives you a hurried kiss on the cheek when snatching a single slice of toast from the breakfast you made for her. It doesn't feel as though she means to be cold to you, but when the closest you've been in the past month is cuddling her exhausted, barely-responsive body on the couch you know something has to be done.

You almost don't catch her before she's out the door to meet her work friends. You keep her back, a hand lightly around her wrist.
"Calli, i'm missing you. Date night this week? I'll get it all ready, just give me a time."
She hesitates, kind red eyes soft and sad. She glances back to her waiting friends, clearly anxious to get going.
"I- I dunno about that, Anon. It's embarrassing. My schedule..."
Your arm drops slack. She said it in the moment, she's in a rush, she probably didn't mean it - but... embarrassing? Without your arm to hold her there, she slips away with a 'sorry' on her face. You watch her go, and a couple of her friends shoot you quietly sympathetic looks.

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>>5291886
The day passes, and you can't find the motivation to do anything much. You flick through some streaming shows but don't settle on anything to watch. You don't feel up to doing your /fit/ness reps, and you end up sitting quietly on the couch playing the short exchange from the morning over and over in your head until it starts getting dark outside.

Eventually you hear a knock at the door. You leap up to your feet before remembering that Mori wouldn't knock, and then drag your heels the whole way. You work the knob and are greeted by a shock of orange hair.
"Oh. Kiara." You react dead-pan. "What do you want?" There was never much love lost between the pair of you, seeing how obsessed she always was with your girlfriend. The most that had passed between you were a few tensely polite greetings, but she beams up at you all the same.
"Kikkeriki!" she shouts, disregarding your lacklustre greeting. "Majestic phoenix Takanashi Kiara is here to fix a broken heart!"

You shut the door.

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>>5291928
She doesn't seem to take it well, immediately hammering on the thick wood.
"Calli sent me! Okay? She's worried about you!" Reluctantly you open back up, sighing moodily. She brandishes a red-and-white bucket in your face, and the delicious smell reminds you that you haven't eaten. "This morning you looked like you weren't feeling so good, so I brought you some KFP!"

Your stomach taking that moment to growl, you invite her in. The two of you share the bucket of fried 'phoenix' - and she only gives you the briefest bit of stink-eye when you say it tastes like chicken. A little bit of smalltalk passes between you, and Kiara insists on putting a terrible musical on the plasma while you eat.
"This... is the worst thing i've ever seen." You're almost in awe, the way a classic musical had been butchered into an uncanny valley scream-fest that the producers tried to carry with Star Power alone.
"It is not the worst! It's the best!" Kiara insists defensively. It's honestly pretty cute. "It's a modern classic that I guess most people are just too stupid to appreciate!"
You let out a strained laugh at the absurdity of that statement, playing along for perversity's sake. "Sure, Kiara. Fine. It's a masterpiece."
"Then we're agreed! It's the single best movie to come out in our lifetimes!" Her wheezing laugh comes out in gasps, and though the two of you didn't get off on the best foot you are glad she came to keep you company. She gives you a hug and presses her face to your chest.
"She really was sorry, but the new song... well, she'll be back soon." Kiara gives you a sympathetic smile as she gets up to go. "Hang in there, Anon."

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>>5291967
Your relationship stays on the rocks. In the rare moments you steal together there's still a spark of something there. The two of you still love each other, as greedy, needy kisses attest - but Mori's schedule grows even more packed over time rather than less. One project is finished and she starts two more.

The highlight of your week starts to be the day her phoenix friend comes around to give you a little pep-talk, watch a movie and eat fast food. She seems to like it too- starting to cuddle closer as you watch things that vary erratically between being corny beyond belief and magnificent classics of cinema. Her weekly visits become twice weekly - then more. She's with you at home more often than the woman you love.

Over time, you see less and less of her orange business suit - and instead of bringing you a bucket of fried chicken she starts coming with fresh ingredients to cook in your kitchen. The compliments you give to her curries and risotto split her face with gleeful smiles, and some days you catch yourself staring at the blue straps showing through the thin summer shirt she likes to wear, admiring the curves that bounce around your kitchen not-really-covered by the small frilly apron she likes to wear. One day she happens to turn and meet your gaze. For a brief moment she seems surprised, blushes bright red and turns into a klutz, knocking things over and burning the supper she was making. She's uncharacteristically quiet as the two of you sit down to eat.
"How was it?" She eventually asks. You ate the food, of course you did, but it's her you're looking at when you say:
"Delicious."

After that, it's not even subtle. The next day she strips out of her thin white shirt claiming the summer sun is just too hot. She jiggles around the counter in front of your eyes - she's giving you a show and you take in every second. You don't even see the elastic of any panties peeking out from her denim shorts.

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>>5292020
When she's done with prep, she sits you down and straddles you. She brings out a single plate and feeds you from a solitary fork, taking almost every other bite for herself. As if these indirect kisses weren't enough, she keeps rolling her hips - the growing stiffness between the two of you a secret to nobody. Her motions only intensify as she sets the plate of food aside, and when you throw your head back to gasp Kiara drops to the floor between your legs. Her slim fingers pull open your pants, yank your dick free and hold it tight as she kisses the underside. Her pink eyes are pleading as she looks up at you.
"You feed me now?" Her words are sweet and coaxing, but she doesn't wait for your say-so to kiss up the length of your shaft and take the sensitive crown into her mouth. She licks around the tip and bobs her head once, twice, three times- making you slippery with her wanton droolings. Wet squelching sounds reach your ears as she tries to drive for the base of your cock with increasingly urgent slurps. Lusty moans vibrate through you as Kiara continues her assault, struggling to take you further than the back of her mouth but possessed of an animal determination to make you cum as fast as possible. It's been so long with Mori, your back is already arching - your fingers diving into couch cushions to hold on the few more precious seconds you need to moan a warning.
"K-Kiara..."
"Mhm!" comes the enthusiastic response. Her messy blowjob concludes with one last push for your tip to tickle her tonsils, and your world goes white. Kiara gulps down the first rope of your sticky sperm, but struggles to keep every drop of the second and third. Breathless and choking she collapses against your abdomen, a gooey white stain oozing down her lips and a drop - somehow - dribbling from her nose.

>> No.5292130

I thought I might write more but I want sleep now lmao

>> No.5292293

>>5291717
What I was planning was that the saviourfagging would eventually lead to an unhealthy and uncomfortable obsession with (You), Do you think Kiara is capable of that? I know she can get attached to things pretty easy.

>> No.5292440

>>5291868
Yeah that's kinda the thing I was thinking of
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbMPGBpd6aE

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>>5292064

>> No.5292545

>>5292064
come on anon don't leave me like that

>> No.5293220

>>5292064

Ooof, this was great.

>> No.5293314
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>>5291717
>>5292293
I imagine Kiara would at first just be casually wanting to support (You)
But if for whatever reason she got obessed, then it would lead to her becoming really bossy and manipulative.
Gaining your trust to let her micromanage practically everything you do, maybe going as far as not let you jerk off without her permission, and generally making you dependent on her.

Just imagine an extreme version of Takamori where Kiara holds much more power over Mori.
>Kiara is in control

>> No.5293356

>>5292293
Anyone can end up like that, you just have to pronounce negative aspects. She lacks self-awareness or rather she cuts herself the most slack in the world. "You owe her" and anything she does is just re-payment, PLUS it's helping you. Again! It becomes very manipulative very fast.

>> No.5293372

>>5292064
K-Kino...

>> No.5294544

>>5222338
this activates my Gosling senses, good job

>> No.5296131
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5296131

Not much but it's the start of saviourfaggotry.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTRrYCVflbvo6nWmLK63yRya5Y4EPY0j4jaehyTOP5zxTt3YCaCethauqJHT_y7r1CoYW2VB3T4jqhe/pub

>> No.5297177

>>5296131
>she seems fine
He fucked up

>> No.5299019

Quick, Anon! Roll a D6!

>> No.5300738

>>5299019
2

>> No.5302158

>>5296131
>She seems fine
Looking forward to the rest

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>>5300738
Oh.

>> No.5303097

>>5302260
Did I win?

>> No.5305323
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5305323

Sleeping Beauty - a story where (you) molest Rushia while she sleeps and manage to not only not get killed but rewarded for it.

Hope you enjoy.

https://docs.google.com/document/u/2/d/e/2PACX-1vTfc2HgKUY1McA2EwEFfzyH40vzBwGIy36UGuaoAR-Ay6k97NnqTahWIGG-JBbRn9ACN6ZF9z3kzeEk/pub

It's a behemoth and I definitely would prefer to write shorter stories from here on out, but the subject matter gets me right where it counts. I've been writing it on-and-off for 6 weeks or so now, so it definitely got away from me as it grew longer and longer. Perhaps I'll do another short where it's a direct continuation of this just for fun, where (you) awakened something in her and anal is all she thinks about. At least I finally have a story out for one of the top holos I'd like to fuck.

>> No.5306441

>>5305323
It's so good. Thank you anon

>> No.5307262

>>5305323
Holy moly, Anon. This is smut and a half. Fantastic to see it finally completed! Was it really six weeks? Jesus.

>> No.5307469

>>5305323
rushia...

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>>5222338

>> No.5308592

>>5303097
Just determining something, don't worry. Thank you for the input! Your actions will have irrevocable consequences.

>> No.5308704

Can i get some Risu story links? I only found one looking through the archive but that's cause i'm mobile and can't use search function. I wanna see how other anons implement her personality into text. Onegai anons

>> No.5308780

>>5308704
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bxc0W8-e7NIprLwVMKGGOWCwO2WR0s4Imr5KNxBrTEs/edit?usp=sharing - Prisuner (Risu, NSFW, abuse)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSoxvPXMr6LByahLi-D8svhu5l64J1kezbi0UAeIrizfEGEVyOKJZXMeOMeTNcXHKGc825HYAWWK0u6/pub - Late Night Nut Delivery (Risu, NSFW)

I thought we had more, but it's just those two. Hope this helps.

>> No.5308783

>>5308704
In the pastebin there's another link for another archive which is more organized

>> No.5308798

>>5308592
...yay?

>> No.5308930

>>5222214
I need more Shion stories

>> No.5309034

>>5305323
what is this "wild" sensation I'm feeling

>> No.5309046

>>5308780
>>5308783
Holy shit she really does have only 2 posts. This is terribly sad. Guess there are no Risu writing anons in here. Hopefully my story will be able to shine some hope in another prisuner's eyes, if even for a moment. Just had to try it out myself after seeing the lack of Risu stuff but damn these numbers are worse than expected.

>> No.5309077

>>5308930
If I stop procrastinating, I can probably release a Shion fic sometime today or tomorrow.

>> No.5309150

>>5309046
She's sadly not incredibly popular, but yes, I'm in agreement. The treerat needs more love. I'm grateful for what we have, but man. The ID branch in general doesn't have much; hell, Ollie has zero.

>> No.5309177

>>5309150
ollie doesn't need any, she creates her own smut on-stream

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>>5309077
Thank you anon

>> No.5309427

>>5309211
sex

>> No.5309484

>>5309211
"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH SEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXX ORE WA SEKKUSU SEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXX"

>> No.5309691

>>5309150
I love Risu and (try to) watch every stream, but I don't write what I like, but what I feel. She's too self-contained to be interesting. If you watch other chuubas and then watch Risu, she's a competent entertainer, but she doesn't reveal herself. It doesn't allow for alot of building.

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>>5296131
>Chicken starts falling for the AnonChama rrats
I can't wait for it

>> No.5311626

>>5311276
>"These people are saying he has a girlfriend? THAT CANT BE FUCKING TRUE RIGHT?"
>"Holy shit they're so off with his roommate speculation that obviously couldn't be him"
>"What do you mean he has a gun?"

>> No.5311908

Is that one story about Luna and the fletcher still being worked on?

>> No.5312533

>>5311626
The idea of a gullible stalker is equal parts funny and scary.
>you mention having to wait till your paid to get something, realistically only like a week or two
>she takes it as you're borderline destitute
>have to cancel a stream for something relatively banal
>she believes it when people say you're graduating and message bombs you asking if you're okay

>> No.5312671

>>5312533
>Kiara triangulates where you live based on time zone, weather patterns, etc
>Mysterious box left outside the door to your house
>"in your last stream you said your pc wasn't powerful enough to play a game you seemed really excited for, so here's a gift from me!"
>open box, new gpu
>why does it smell like fryer oil and cheap herbs and spices?

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>>5312533
>>5312671
Please end in rape because Kiara has convinced herself the two of you are an item after all the time, effort, and care she has put into you and that she's 'owed' it.

>> No.5312819

>>5312737
>the rrat about anonchama having a gf is true
>Kiara loses it
>starts....filming herself?
>no one hears from her for weeks
>another package is sent to you
>Video surfaces of a red haired woman covered in blood and feces as she builds a mail bomb
>the video was filmed months ago

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>>5312737
>You get drunk during some milestone celebration stream and talk about how thankful you are for her taking an interest in you
>She thinks its a confession of love and how you were suicidal before you met her
>starts pretending to be Antis insulting you for being ungrateful when you clarify otherwise

>>5312819
>shoots herself in the head trying to paint a canvas with her blood
>fails, revives and tries again until she runs out of bullets

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"Second place goes to Reverence by Ninomae Ina'nis."

Second place. The one before the ultimate champion. In some ways it was even worse than coming in third. The popular imagination saw it as a sort of underdog story; some scrappy upstart who had managed to just get by into the winners' circle and would begin a story of eventual success.

First place was the best, undisputed and unnecessary of any further description.

Second place? A strange dichotomy between the greatest and the up-and-coming. No one remembers second place. It was simply a sign that more work had to be done.

And that meant that she was not good enough at this moment. The realization should have crushed her, as this was equal to a failure to the eyes of her family that were part of the pseudo-aristocracy. But a quick glance over at the faces of her father and mother revealed that neither which had looks of disappointment. Ina'nis could understand why, after all…

"First place goes to Peaceful Day by Anon."

… when compared to the winner, Ina couldn't even feel wanting or envious.

It was a masterpiece. Utterly and absolutely. Not on a technical level, mind you. The artist's brush strokes were heavy handed and amateurish. The way the paint pooled into splotches and dried into wrinkles gave the impression that it was simply there to be there. No further use besides the need to add the necessary color. It could be summed up as a work of composition, not one of care or dedication. It reeked of laziness and boredom.

The theory of secret brilliance was also called into question. It was difficult to say that the artist had an image in mind.

The entire work was abstract, but at the same time easily recognizable. The flecks of green gave the impression of a grassy hill. The blue and white suggested a sky with clouds. Yellow accents on the swaying tree leaves and blades of grass gave the scene a sense of motion. Contrapposto. A breeze was flowing over this scape. Given not by image, but the suggestion of the idea of form itself.

The lone human in the picture may as well have been a ghost. Like the rest of the painting, there were no hard or definite lines. Shadows made the outlines and created a wispy and surreal scene of a girl who slumbered serenely beneath the protective shade of a tree. Her pale skin nearly indistinguishable from her silver locks of hair that splayed beneath her. She wore a similarly white dress. A beautiful specter was the subject of the painting, but there was one jarring object in the work that through off all sense of homogeneity: the cellphone in her hand.

Black and grey, it contrasted with the natural landscape, the author had presented. To those who viewed this, they were initially outraged that such genius formation was destroyed by such a thing. But subsequent viewings flipped around the tone as they came to realize that there was text on the screen:

"K'yarnak phlegethor l'ebumna syha'h n'ghft"

We shared our thoughts beside the darkest pit.

Ina's thoughts were broken as a confused murmur spread throughout the crowd. It had been several minutes, and no one had gone to the stage. From the corner of her eye she saw movement, and in a moment a girl of middle school age and wearing a black dress scampered to the stage. The speaker looked confused, but lowered his ear to the girl's level and quiet words were traded.

Ina was shocked. Was a girl as young as that responsible for such a painting? It seemed inconceivable. There was something here that didn't match the persona this little girl gave off. It was far too positive and upbeat. This wasn't the type of person who would wish for such an ideal world, yet cynically understand it will never exist.

Afterall "Peaceful Day": as referring to the world within the painting.

The speaker cleared his throat and spoke once more into the microphone. "Unfortunately, it seems that Anon will not be able to physically receive his rewards, but nonetheless, congratulations on winning the The City Junior Art Gallery Competition. We certainly hope to see more from you."

Ina blinked.

What?

>> No.5313374
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>>5313083
You have my interest, anon.

>> No.5313398

>>5313083
Is there more? I'm invested!

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>>5312965
the fact she'd be in close contact makes it even more fucked
>goes full anti every time you do anything that remotely bothers her
>then brings those posts to your awareness acting like a concerned friend

>> No.5313656

>>5307262
Yeah, but then again I paused writing it to work on a lot of other things. Figured I had to get it out of my system one way or another.

>>5309034
Is it Taiga levels of wild though?

>> No.5313697

>>5313547
"Fucking leech" "I can't believe this asshole thinks he earned this" "Worthless liar"... Anon, have you seen these? Oh man, I don't know what you did but it's getting out of hand. Maybe you should take a break, huh? Let things calm down a little bit.

>> No.5313709

An odd question, but for the Anons in your stories, do you ever give them names, even if just in your head? I get that it's meant to be Anon so the reader can implant their own name, but do you ever break that rule, if just to yourself?

>> No.5313813

>>5313709
I give them nicknames. It feels more natural than "Anon," but way less cringe than "Bob" or whatever.

>> No.5313831

>>5313709
No

>> No.5313837

>>5313374
>>5313398
There's not much else, just an excerpt of a scrapped story that I decided to post. The story would have been a yandere Ina story, where Ina unironically simps for a small time male variety streamer and develops a sort of parasocial relationship with him. It's sort of a multi-chapter story where Ina sort of descent into madness.

The scene is just something from a web serial I'm working on.

>> No.5313871

>>5313697
>tries to lower your confidence with fake anti-posts
>anonchama develops a "fuck off I do what I want" attitude
>starts streaming even more, can't respond to Kiara as much

>> No.5313885

>>5313709
Nope, never. Even when writing myself, the "no self-inserts" rule applies strongly in my head.

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>>5313697
>she pulls the "I'm a bigger streamer so I know better than you" card, saying there's usually some truth to what these people say
>"Kiara, these people are literally saying I should stop streaming and off myself for mentioning another female streamer."
>"...I'm just saying think about it."

>> No.5313964

>>5313887
>anon collabs with a female chuuba (not kiara)
>she freaks out and anti posting reaches new heights
>it's directed towards the larger, female chuuba though
>she's in tears and announces she's going on break
>anon goes on break too in an act of solidarity
>Kiara on full damage control to try and get her sweet little anonchama back

>> No.5314037

>>5313709
lately I've been having fun writing without mentioning a name directly. It builds a sense of implied closeness, that the other person knows you well enough to not say your name, as a friend would in real life.
The story I'm currently working on is similar, but they're unfamiliar so I'll have to see if there's a name exchange, something to force me to do so.
I don't really take either side of the fence, I don't mind using "Anon" and I'm not particularly driven to name them "Mike" or "Brad" or what-not. Writing an ambiguous/ephemeral MC is pretty fun.

>> No.5314099

>>5313709
Nah using Anon as the naming term was an easy adjustment. I'm more concerned of making sure the characteristics and dialogues are natural rather than worry about naming conventions.

>> No.5314132

>>5313083
Beautiful use of language, I love it. I feel like she wanted to pick up a rock and bash the child's skull in. Lovely.

>> No.5314202

>>5313709
No. I don't even use Anon as a name and do whatever I can to avoid being called out by name. For me, it feels really strange to be attaching a name to what is supposed to be a blank-insert character.

>> No.5314291

Are there any fluffy or romantic Kanata stories?

>> No.5314322

>>5314291
Does the one where she comforts you as you bleed out count?

>> No.5314334

>>5314322
Maybe, I need more context.

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>>5313964
>another Holo finds out about you, asks Kiara about you
>She says you're a piece of shit and under no circumstances should they interact with you or watch your streams
>"Haven't you sent him like 3000$ worth of superchats in the last month and a half?"
>"N-No."

>> No.5314385

>>5222205

I wish Kiara and other vtubers watched some anime.. I know it sounds silly, but isnt that like minimum effort to relate to large part of the audience.

Instead of rewatching old long running series, why not watch some great popular anime? Its also enjoyable and lesser time investment and commitment.

>> No.5314502

>>5314334
It's called "end of the day." Check the archive.

>> No.5314571

>>5314132
Yeah, Ina hates anon for showing her up in the art contest and for having the wrong kind of person in her mind.

>> No.5314590

>>5314502
It was kinda' cute, not really want I wanted but, kinda' cute.

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>>5311908
I'd like to write a bit more on it now that I have a bit more free time. I can't promise it'll be very interesting though. So far, it feels like it's turning into some slow-burn father-daughter bonding. It's not how I intended it, but the more I write, the weirder it feels to try and force it into romance.

>> No.5316113

>>5316002
Always remember: Rape is a fast track to success!

>> No.5316165

>>5313083
Shit, reading it back again, I should have name the city Carcosa. To tie in the Cthulhu mythology. Fucking hell.

>> No.5316223

>>5316002
There's a lack of father-daughter stuff in the archive, so it'll be a breath of fresh air.

>> No.5316892

>>5316113
This anon understands. When you've tried every other trick in the book, rape is the surefire key to success. There's nothing like violent, humiliating, mentally scarring sexual molestation to coax out the love hidden in everyone.

>> No.5317094

>>5314291
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR4HeHm9ss4MraVZ9vuLV77IZvCTpcRhYPhdTGOQyUK6pnClBzv0r7BEusN6yI8rLgbQpePSI0thgjr/pub
There's this one but it more of a tragedy

>> No.5317246

>>5317094
Yeah that title, it's a great song. How sad is this?

>> No.5317273

>>5317246
Abortion and Kanatan going full-deaf level of sad

>> No.5317311

>>5317246
>>5317273
I mean miscarriage not abortion but you get the gist

>> No.5317341

>>5317311
>>5317273
I cannot handle this.

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>>5317273
I would never sell my story as "fluff".

>>5317341
Do it. For her.

>> No.5317485

>>5317341
It's a very good story, it'll also fuck you up

>> No.5317501

>>5317471
>>5317485
I love her a lot, but that'll fuck me up way too much. I'll cry like a bitch and I don't need that right now.

>> No.5317695

>>5309211
Shion fic where she's the one harassing the oji-sans (You), maybe trying to break up their families and destroying their reputations, culminating in (You) finally going berserk and violating her, which leads to your arrest. with a segment
showing her finding her next victim

>> No.5317771

>>5317501
Life is painted in all colors, my friend. Imagine how I felt writing it.

“No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.” -Robert Frost.

>> No.5317999

>>5317771
Some other time, now is not the time.

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https://youtu.be/iwTBNxec3mM

>> No.5322652

>>5305323
i busted so hard my hands were shaking afterwards and i could barely think

fuck, i wish i had this kind of writing talent. the entire anal scene was just amazing

>> No.5324739

>>5305323
Holy shit this was great. Absolutely worth the wait.

>> No.5324746

I know I said I wanted to take a break from writing the menhera wrangling series, but new inspiration struck for it and I couldn't help but write it down for future reference. Burnout pls don't hit me soon.

>> No.5324848

>>5324746
Hey dude, burnout here. Bite the pillow.

>> No.5324861

>>5324746
I wish I have your kind of drive anon

>> No.5324936

>>5222205
kill yourself tranny

>> No.5325029

>>5324936
wrong thread dude

>> No.5326077

Crying is hard to write.

>> No.5327868

Will this thread reach bump limit within a few hours?

>> No.5328042

>>5327868
Yeah, maybe. Depends how much we shitpost. Why, you want it to?

>> No.5328170

>>5328042
We've been getting a lot of activity lately so it's nice that we often reach bump limit pretty quickly nowadays.

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>>5311908
Updated my story a little bit. The more I write, the more ideas I have on what to continue it with. With the basic plot notes I have jotted down, it'll unfortunately easily breach 15 pages by the end.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQsSnE0I9cI9SPlupPtG_e8UeiLYe_-Xe3_fgzIAwp9T9G9na4-tZZR0nVzBhJntQo_zgy8zsxqDtNY/pub
As before, feedback so far would be great. It's my first time writing a narrative since high school, where I used to barely even pass creative writing. Any and all feedback would be incredibly helpful to ensure I don't just produce a mess.

>> No.5331622

>>5331526
>it'll unfortunately easily breach 15 pages by the end

You say that like it's a bad thing.

>> No.5332070

>>5331526
You're making good progress.

>> No.5332599

>>5331526
it happens, anon. My advice is to break it into arcs/chapters so you can be flexible with adding on more stuff but still keep the important plot points.

>> No.5333924
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I need /wg/'s input on something.
I'm working on chapter 3 of Cover High/Pekora, and it's proving to be way longer than I initially anticipated. Without spoiling anything, it's supposed to take place over the course of about a week. I just passed 10k words and I'm not even halfway through the first day. At the rate things are going, this one chapter is going to end up being very, VERY long. And with my current output at a measly 1 page a day, maybe 2, it could take quite a long time to finish. I've been considering breaking it into multiple shorter chapters, but chapters 1 and 2 were both self-contained stories that reached a satisfying conclusion by the end, and I'm hesitant to break that trend by releasing chapters that end on cliffhangers. Would it be better to just keep it all in one piece and keep working on it until it's done, however long that might take, or to split it into chunks that can be released sooner?

>> No.5334397

>>5333924
The greedy baby in me says MORE CHAPTERS NOW NOW NOW.
But in all seriousness there isn't anything wrong with a cliffhanger, especially if you feel it's getting massive in it's entirety.

>> No.5334588

>>5333924
I'll be honest with you. Your story should be what you want it to be. If you feel that it's better for it to be a whole arc with 50k+ words and you need time to write it out, go ahead. If you want to break it down and release it bit by bit, that's also fine. Nobody here's going to critique the integrity of your story, we're all here for some writefaggotry.

>> No.5336149

>>5333924
I don't have a problem with a cliffhanger ending if a sequel is assured. Personally, I don't mind longer stories, and I agree with the other anon that you should format the story in whichever way you feel is more complete.

>> No.5338062

>>5322652
Glad to be of service anon. No greater glory for a smut artist/writer.

>>5324739
Glad to hear. Glad to have it out of the "Coming soon" tab so I can think of other stories to write.

Pretty sure between this and the Okayu story I spent a good 15 hours writing this week. My lawn needs mowing and shit, but I'm satisfied.

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That's right, you're not writing right right now, right?

>> No.5342676

>>5342643
anon please i just woke up

>> No.5342755

>>5342643
No, I'm playing Strive

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>>5334397
>>5334588
>>5336149
Thanks anons. I'll stay true to my initial vision and keep the chapter whole. It'll be a while before the finished product is ready, but I'm going to keep up with my reps and work on it every day. I hope you all enjoy it when it's finally complete.

>> No.5343652

>>5342643
Anon I'm fucking melting from talking to my neighbor for 5 minutes outside, all I want is a beer and to stand in the AC for an hour

>> No.5343783

>>5333924
Cliffhanger would be fine, but in the end its your choice. I really liked the first parts so i will read the end anyway, even if its 50k or whatever. Just do what you feel comfortable with.

>> No.5344061

>>5338062
I'm not much for ass play or pee stuff but you describe a scene in such detail and with a certain romance to it that it drives me nuts with how good it is.

>> No.5344155

>>5342643
I would be writing because I do want to write but at the same I don't feel like writing.

>> No.5344772

>>5343652
The summer heat can suck the sweat off my nuts. If the summer heat was a person I'd fuck them nonstop out of bitter hatred. There would be no romance, no love. Only spite and my boner.

>> No.5345929

>>5342643
The Moona villain fic was a one off thing after listening to her Villain cover on loop for hours; and my smut is shit so I'm not doing a Pekomama fic.

>> No.5346236

>>5342643
I'm writing 3 fics now but I just can't get myself to finish them

>> No.5346332

>Bump limit
New thread in approx. 5 hours give or take with how long these things fucking take to die.
>>5346236
I know the feeling. You just have to hunker down and do it, sadly. Ruminate on the ideas, try to get yourself hype, then pound it out letter by letter, word by word. It's a pain, but if you get one done it could give you a huge boost.

>> No.5346884

I just discovered this thread and I have to say great job anons, some of this stuff is really good

>> No.5347261
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>>5344772
>Kiara's nose grinds into your wrinkly sack
>Her sweaty, naked body sways in front of you as she slurps salty droplets from the crinkled folds
>She's doing her best, but for some reason your addled brain blames her for the heat
>Phoenix, right?
>That means the room feeling like a sauna is her fault
>Granted a surge of energy by a flash of incandescent, unreasonable rage you tear her mouth away from your swollen nuts
>She moans a needy complaint about being denied her treat, then shrieks when you push her onto her back and mount her
>Hard as a rock but mad as a bull, it takes you several tries to jam it in
>Once or twice you almost make it, head of your cock briefly splitting her sex before skidding off in a trail of smeared sweat and natural lubricant
>Her squeaking moans peak every time, but then pitch down a few octaves when you find your mark and hilt with a ravenous want
>Manhandling her body viciously, her ankles are by her knees before she can think - the long strokes of your greedy cock lighting every inch of her boiling insides on fire as they come hard and fast
>Wet slapping sounds mingle with the slurps of wanton suction
>Her clenching snatch clings tightly to you every time you almost pull out
>She'd be begging for more, but in her over-stimulated state all the can do is squeal and moan
>Not that you care
>As you lose yourself in your animal rutting, you slowly bend over her until you're practically laid on top
>The specks of water on her bare breasts taunt you with the enigma of their existence, and the warmth of her body prompts you to take a hard nipple into your mouth
>You bite down hard, and her voice cracks as she screams
>There's going to be tooth-marks there tomorrow, but the neighbours are too lazy in the heat to investigate
>Waves of pleasure continue crashing over you, electric jolts earthing at the base of your spine
>Only using Kiara's body as a glorified masturbation aid and punching bag, your intense thrusting has you almost at your peak
>With one last spiteful twist you drive yourself as deep inside her as she'll take you, hearing a whimper from her panting mouth as your tip briefly brushes up against a sensation of much firmer resistance
>A flood of sticky sperm floods into her, and after three or four shuddering spurts paint her womb completely white you collapse spent, letting her legs fall trembling to the sides
>Though you've fallen right on top of her, she doesn't seem to mind the weight
>She plants scorching kisses against your neck, fingers driving furrows through your hair and clutching you to her with unmistakeable tenderness and love
>"Thank you," she pants. "I love you, I love you, thank you..."
>Fuck this heat.

>> No.5347447

>>5347261
Y'know, Anon, when I posted that, I did not anticipate this response. It helps a lot that I want to fuck Kiara pregnant thrice over. Thank you, my dear friend.

>> No.5347589

>>5347447
Sure. I gotchu, bud.

>> No.5348933

>>5296131
After seeing all the shitposts about this in the thread I really, REALLY want to see the next part now.

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