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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>51895783

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were five stories posted in the last thread.

Balsa: Chapter Nine: tags: (you), Botan, Fubuki, medieval fantasy, action, adventure:>>51951607

A Deal with the Devil - Chapter 2: Tags: Towa, Polka, Roberu, Ayame, SFW, Fluff, Cohabitation:>>51964679

A Crash Course on Fennecs and Love: Tags: Polka, Shien, Nene, Lamy, Botan, SFW-ish, Sexual tension:>>51965083

Balsa: Chapter Ten: tags: (you), Botan, Fubuki, medieval fantasy, action, adventure:>>51988983

Balsa: Chapter 11: tags: (you), Botan, Fubuki, medieval fantasy, action, adventure:>>52046608

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Roboco falls and her head breaks, but while you're freaking out a tiny Roboco crawls out of the head:>>51906081

Cuckquean Mori asks (You) to fuck Kiara:>>51914789

Emotionless handjob from your autistic girlfriend who treats anything sexual as a chore but will not deny your sexual needs when you ask her to.:>>51920229

Fauna getting gangbanged by an entire stable's worth of horses:>>51942197

Anon is caught in a love triangle between delinquent Suisei and gyaru Okayu.:>>51948371

Making the horrifying discovery of what ultimately happens to everyone in Nene's husband collection:>>51960088

GAMERS hotspring sex fic onegai.:>>51968230

Young chuuba of your choice learning how to masturbate by grinding on pillows and other experimentation:>>51972619

Mumei autistic handjob:>>52024513

Has anyone ever wrote a story with Polka doing her copulation tie:>>52035604

Miori kidnapping and having her way with a fan, and keeping him in her basement yandere style:>>52037292

Gura piss fic.:>>52048216

Being sexually abused by Suisei because (You) look like a shota despite being an adult who's just turned 18 but are cursed with being a midget.:>>52051894

your classmate / work colleague Fubuki shows up one morning all giddy and cheerful after mustering up enough courage to get an appointment at the salon for a little make-over:>>52064178

A chuuba on her hands and knees begging, pleading, with tears in her eyes to suck your cock:>>52087144

>> No.52091023

>>52090223
Sex with broad elves

>> No.52091235

>>52066966
I really do hope you make this into a full story one day as I really did like reading it and it made me feel bad that Fubuki was getting bullied over something that wasn't her fault at all. (You) calling out to her and taking her to a spot where she can eat in peace (and offering to get the gum out of her tail) could be the beginning of a wonderful friendship (and something even more). On the downside, it would also mean you would be a target for bullying as well but I could see you enduring it as you just want to see Fubuki happy and will put up with anything if it meant there is happiness in her life.
Just don't make her die in your arms as she confesses her love to you. That would suck in my opinion but I wouldn't mind that ending if anon in that story takes his own life as well to join her in the afterlife.

>> No.52093032

>>52090274
Betting on horses with Lui.

>> No.52093060
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>>52090274
Fubuki.

>> No.52093250

>>52090274
Mio is your school bully but she bullies you with love and affection in order to mind break you and become her friend (and hopefully lover).

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>> No.52095601

>>52093250
>(you) are a sullen misanthropic loner
>the only reason you haven't shot up the school is because you don't have access to a firearm
>you spend most of your time listening to your edgy bullshit music and wishing death on your classmates
>then one day this weird half-breed chick takes notice of you and just will not leave you the fuck alone

>> No.52098201

>>52095601
Does that mean you end up being the father of Subaru and Ayame?

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I just dreamt about being one of Gura's boyfriends from earlier in her life, having had the chance to fuck a cuter and more innocent Gura, but not taking the relationship seriously enough and then losing her, only to see her as a Vtuber a couple hundred years later and regretting it all. It hurts. This dream hurts. The fuck. I can feel it all as if it was me. This emotional damage is real.

Dream responsibly, kids.

>> No.52098504

>>52098363
I mean, you fucked Gura and got to live a few centuries. I'm sure you'd be able to turn it around

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>>52098363
>Dream responsibly, kids.
It's better to have loved and lost, as they say. Some of us are still struggling to find that happiness and suffering, in equal measure.

Well, then. Nose to the grindstone, as they say... if the grindstone were a pillow.

>> No.52100200

>>52095601
Not what I was expecting but as long as (You) don't end up corrupting Mio to end up like what you are then I accept it.
>>52098201
God I hope not. I never thought that far ahead and I was mostly just interested in seeing Mio hanging out with you but your autistic mind makes you paranoid and the act of kindness she shows to you makes you think she's bullying you. And then no matter what you try and do to her she'd never leave you because in her mind you are someone who needs companionship and love and she's going to break down the walls you've put up no matter what.

>> No.52101119 [DELETED] 

A lot of stories need more pee scenes

>> No.52101239

>>52066993
Finally got around to watching this. I'd have to say that the sound design is the best part of this video - from the SFX to the music for the characters.
Another thing is the writing. I like the approach you did with having the characters be what they look like during streams, but otherwise they're treated as "what they could be behind the scenes."
The art, meanwhile, is serviceable. It's AI art, but it manages to give life to the whole show, so it gets a pass from me. The prompt wrangling must've tough as heck.
Once again, I'll say that if there's ever a "vtuber procedural" story, this is it. I'm glad it turned out the way I expected it to.
I like the way Gura was written in particular. You can tell how scared she is, while still trying to meet everyone's expectations. Using Gawr to embody her self-doubt was also a nice touch. The subplot with her brother though, damn. It hits hard. At least it gave her the gut punch necessary to actually take up the ambassadorship
Can't wait for Episode Two! If this turns out as vtuber Perfect Blue, that would be kino as fuck

>> No.52102652

Page 9 already?

>> No.52104307

>>52098363
>only to see her as a Vtuber a couple hundred years later and regretting it all.
What kind of fish did you dream yourself to be?

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>>52090274
Kobo tries to move in to your house after the A.C breaks at her own

>> No.52104434

>>52100200
>as long as (You) don't end up corrupting Mio to end up like what you are
no, I was thinking more the opposite. she gives you the positive attention that you've been so starved for and reverse-corrupts you into being a better person

>> No.52104692

>>52100200
>God I hope not.
Why not? Good timeline Mio needs someone to impregnate her before she becomes too old!

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>>52104692
I'm on it bro! In 50 or so chapters, Mio will be fully impregnated. Anon is not quite ready yet to stand in the presence of the hag supreme without cumming instantly.

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>>52100200
why not corrupting mio? A story about her triying to pull you to the light but slowly falling into the pit until she becomes a truly despicable person like you
maybe she's a hag in a cafe that you start using to launder money, and things go from there.
All im saying is that i want mio to be all smiles as she poisons a person because ''they were going to hurt those she cares''

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Can Pekora be considered a hag now, since Her roommate is 30 or older this year?

>> No.52105648

>>52105241
She can be, yes. But you'll have to ask yourself what hag-like qualities she exhibits.

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>>52105241
What a delightful coincidence/development.

>> No.52106398

>>52105648
I guess one thing that's changed over the years is that she doesn't really use that meme laugh of hers anymore and instead has a mature chuckle/ very ojousama-ish laugh sometimes. It's honestly quite attractive now compared to back then

>> No.52106598

>>52101239
Thank you! It means a lot that you and others enjoyed it and paid so much attention to it that you picked up on all these details. Can't wait to start working on part 2.

>> No.52106789

>>52106598 (me)
>>52101239
The AI art was indeed the most time consuming part. Mainly because I wanted specific poses and that can be hard for the model to accommodate. I might need to streamline my process for part 2 in order to finish the story. As for part 2 I'm so excited to get to writing the script, it's been a while since I last wrote because the last month has mainly been art and video editing.

>> No.52107038

>>52066993
Finally got the time to see this in full.
First things first. You really need to practice your dialogue to make it sound more natural. Either read it out aloud or show it to other people. Because there were a bunch of spots here that felt awkward, like bits of terminology and dialogue phrased weird scratted here and there.
Second, you should probably consider expanding the text box/decreasing your font size if you're going for longer strings of dialogue. Without VA the cut off basically 'cuts off' anyone reading a continous string of dialogue into two different strings mentally.
Finally, This really needed voice acting. I know AI voice alone isn't adequate enough to handle the needs of this script but I think even amateur VA work voicecloned as appropriate + Direction could have given these scenes the extra punch it needed. I know you're trying to keep this a solo work but damn some of these scenes would have hit harder with some polish/editing to the dialogue combined with appropriate Voice acting.
The art and music carry the appropriate vibe to it but, the way you're writing this still makes it feel like you're writing with Voice in mind which leads to there being something missing even with the words, art and music being there. I think you could fill in this pothole but it's going to have to involve a change in writing style for future episodes. I.e switch from writing like you're making a script to writing like this is a VN.
Sorry if I'm being too harsh. I'm seeing a shitload of potential in the concept and medium you're working in but the teething problems that are coming up as you develop this are something you're going to have to adress eventually. Because I really fucking like this concept and the execution is like almost there that you just need to tinker with the 'formula' a bit more in order to get it to work.
As for the story. I really fucking like this plot you're cooking up. Genuinely hope you can fix or at least adress the issues I pointed out because damn you're making something great.

>> No.52107997

>>52067303
>in this one they’re both ok with each other and a bit shy, so dialogue ends up being more innocent
yeah, I 'm not asking to just copy the dynamic between Our Cures-Anon and Ayame either. Would've been a bit boring. It's just that there's a tad missing. Like a good steak lacking just a pinch of salt, you know?
>mind elaborating on this?
I don't want to push my scenes onto you, but I could've imagined the toilet incident along the lines of Towa waking you up in the middle of the night because she's "so very devilish". After all, waking someone up for no reason is totally something a devil would do, right? Anon starts out confused then turns irritated when Towa insist on beating around the bush. Just as Anon is about to turn around and go back to sleep, he hears Towa's whining and realizes her squirming, putting one and one together.
Another fun scene could've been playing with the 5 meter restriction. Like, you waking up to loud noises only to find Towa in the doorframe of the kitchen at the end of a rolled out tape measure, trying to fill up a glass of water with some garbage tweezers or something. Just as an example.
>that’s kind of like… my fetish. I experienced something similar in the past and it changed me forever.
based, I stand corrected.

I also have no doubt that you would've addressed a lot of my gripes in future chapters, anyways. Looking forward to it!

>> No.52108641

>>52107997
Right, those scenes you mentioned are a good idea. I had something slightly similar in mind for when Towa got more comfortable, but you’ve given me some good ideas. Thanks.

>> No.52108961

>>52104434
I like it!
>>52104692
Oh I know that, anon. I meant as in having to be the father of Subaru (who I make sure would be treated with love) or Ayame as I'd want to make sure Mio becomes the mother she wishes to be badly. Only time I'd be fine with adoption is if it was physically impossible for Mio to become a mother.
>>52105064
Because I genuinely like reverse-corrupting more and I truly want to see a Mio bullying (You) with love and affection to slowly turn you to the light and find a purpose in living and being happy. Plus I just want to see a story where you are loved and wanted even if its done through mind break and Mio has you wrapped around her finger and so deeply in love with her.
Sorry if I'm not making a lot of sense when I made this reply, anon. Mio is just a hag I don't want to see corrupted but if it were done through despicable things like hand holding in public then I'm all for it. Or maybe go for your scenario but I'd rather no crime gangs be involved (although that's just me).

>> No.52109119

>>52108641
What about a scene where Towa decides to be considerate and instead of waking (You) up just uses your mouth instead of the toilet?

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>>52108961
>Mio bullying (You) with love and affection

>"Anon-san!"
>You look up at the wolf girl, stomach already churning with terror and embarrassment
>"P-Please not today Mio...I really can't-"
>She reaches into her backpack and you start sweating, looking around at all your fellow students laughing while staring at the scene
>How much more will she torment you? What did you do to deserve her attention?
>"I made you lunch again!"

>> No.52109842

>>52109607
God you are EVIL! what kind of monster would make Mio give you her homemade lunch she made just for you (she somehow had a spare) and to make a scene infront of all the other students?
That's the kind of sweetness I like to see even though I would probably die of embarrassment if it happened to me. I hope whoever picks the story up goes with your scene and even adds more because I really do want to see you get embarrassed infront of the whole school by Mio but it not affecting her in the slightest and she genuinely doesn't realize what she's doing to you because she wants to make you happy and loved/

>> No.52109967

>>52104692
If Mio gave birth to an oni and a duck I'd think that she had been cheating on me.

>> No.52110239

>>52109607
I feel like this would only work if the viewpoint character was steeped in so much irony/self-hatred/delusion that they can somehow fnagle a reason to hate Mio and make up a reason to think of her act as disgusting.

>> No.52110477

>>52109607
>Mio falling asleep on your shoulder in the library
>Mio always seeks you out for group projects
>Mio introduces you to her friends and gushes about you in front of them

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>>52109842
>End of the day, trying your best to leave and get home as quick as possible
>'Someone' shouts your name just as your hand's on the door handle of the schools entrance
>Slowly turn around, already terrified because this is what you werew trying to get away from
>It's Mio, slightly out of breath as if she ran to catch up to you
>Wordlessly she reaches out towards your head
>You flinch and close your eyes, unable to take the staring of everyone whose way you're now blocking
>...
>...
>Pat, pat, pat
>"You worked really hard today, didn't you? I'm so proud of you!"

>> No.52110859

>>52109607
>>52110748
This kind of behaviour just makes it feel like Mio isn't your classmate, but your mo...oh, nevermind. Carry on.

>> No.52111485

>>52110748
Poor anon, he tried so hard to get away from her only for her to somehow catch up to him (and out of breath) just so she could give him the praise and affection she feels he earned.

You know what popped in my head right now? Mio finding out where you live and knocking on your front door (which your mum answers) and her introducing herself and coming to pick you up because she wants to go to school together with you. And then your mum letting her in (while being happy that you finally made a friend) and Mio going to your room to wake you up.

>>52110859
I truly hate how you know what I like, anon. But I swear that isn't what I had in mind when I made the prompt. I just wanted a high school setting where (You) are bullied with love and affection by Mio and she keeps this up until you break and fall in love with her.

>> No.52112676

>>52107038
Thanks for the constructive feedback. The font size is something I could change relatively easily, you're right that there are a lot of cut off sentences. The motivation for a larger font size was that because there is no voices I wanted the font to be more readable, especially for mobile viewers on small screens. So it's a tradeoff. I'll experiment with it. Yeah voices would be nice, if this gets bigger I'd be more inclined to hire amateur VAs but as this is a relatively obscure fan project it's hard for myself to justify putting in those kind of resources. Though if anyone wants to voice act this themselves or with AI that would be awesome. Are there specific dialogue lines that you found particularly awkward? I've been torn about having it feel more like a movie or more like a visual novel, I stuck with movie because that's just what spoke to me but a con is that I'm not able to have as much inner dialogue. I could try though, I know anime and plays tend to have a decent amount of inner thoughts and monologues compared to movies.

>> No.52112947

>>52104380
She likely doesn't use AC, but rather a several years old fan.

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tourist bump

>> No.52114494

>>52112947
Yeah, me

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>>52114427
Hey tourist, any sights you want to see from our fics? We can show you around.

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>>52115091 made me imagine one of those used car salesmen trying to sell /wg/ to >>52114427
Adventure? Horror? Romance? Drama? Netorare? We've got it lad, take a gander all commissions are negotiable.

We've got everything, everything I tell ya. Hags? Our hags are so haggy their tits are sagging. Uoh? Our cunny fics are guaranteed to put you on a watch list! Shota? We've got little boys getting molested and discovering sex. Ryona? Abuse? Get your fix man, we've got psychological and physical. Up for some vanilla? Our fluffy stories are a bite of sweet pastry, and what better pastry than a cream pie?

>> No.52117946

>>52115893
And don't forget the adventures and epic stories! Please buy.

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>>52111485
>Amomchama hearing her son's blood curdling screams after the woman he's spent weeks avoiding just shows up in his room one morning

>> No.52118862

>>52115091
I never used the thread before but i briefly looked through the archive. Read the Ina JOI thing and this https://archiveofourown.org/works/36857314, sad that there was only one part
I actually wrote something myself a month ago for Kiki Lockheart so I get it when you lose motivation or don't feel like writing more

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>>52117946
If you buy now, I'll throw in a degenerate scene with a chuuba of (You)r choice. Want to dom a normally alpha chuuba? You got it! Want to be dommed by a normally beta chuuba? We can make that happen too!

>> No.52119016

>>52118862
>spoiler
Eesh, sorry to hear that. I can kinda relate too, a lot of my Rushia WIP's have been collecting dust because its kinda weird to write about her.

>> No.52119204

>>52118855
Your problem if you sleep naked, really.

>> No.52119828

>>52119204
Thank the lords I don't sleep naked then. I'm too much of a OCD clean freak who freaks out if my bare skin touches something like my own bed. That's why I wear things like pyjamas when I go to bed.
I'm also a light sleeper who'd wake up at the slightest noise I'm not familiar with.

>> No.52119905

>>52119016
Funny part it wasn't even the yab or whatever. She just got boring to me
now all i got left is this wip before it got too spicy https://rentry.org/a3mfp

>> No.52120322

>>52119828
It would be funny if you had a childish pyjama that you didn't want Mio to see. More of a comedy element than an (implied) sexual one.

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Last night I dreamt about fucking Bae; going into her room whilst she's streaming, telling her to get on the bed, unmuting her mic and then going to town on her backside.

I don't watch Bae, or even think about her! Dreams are so puzzling. I wouldn't have minded IRyS, though...

>> No.52120405

>>52120341
>Anon finally fucks a chuuba in his dreams
>Fucks the wrong chuuba
lmao.

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>>52120405
It's true pottery. I've had chuubas I barely ever think about show up in my dreams before my more desired ones; Iroha, Tenma. I THINK I finally had one with Watame in it last week, but I don't remember a lot of the details.

>> No.52120647

>>52120405
Pretty much. I've used up all my luck on this dream and now my chances of dreaming about Fubuki are astronomically lower.

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>>52120647
>getting to plow zoomer bae's fat ass
>bad luck
I'm running out of tissues from how much I'm weeping for you bro.

>> No.52120814

Your favorite series WILL update
Your WIPs WILL be finished
We're ALL GONNA MAKE IT

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>>52120814
Thanks bro. My current chapter is slogging a little, but I got hit with a surprise situation last night.
My wife was asked if we could foster nine puppies for the night since the original foster had an emergency and couldn't pick them up yesterday. It was kinda chaos since they all just got dewormed, but they're with their actual fosters now and out of my life. I'm brutally tired though, might just stick to outlining my scenes instead of writing for today. We are all gonna make it though.

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>>52120799
Hers just wasn't the butt I wanted to plow, bruv.

>> No.52121701

>>52121370
Look at this man, so picky with his butts. based

>> No.52121820

>>52120322
Would (You) be wearing these childish pyjamas while you sleep or would Mio happen to find them on your chest of drawers when she comes into your room to wake you up?

>> No.52122038

>>52121820
I thought you'd be wearing them, because the idea was a comedic scene where Mio comes to wake you up but you desperately don't want to get out of bed. Same outcome as sleeping naked or having morning wood, just with a different bend.

>> No.52122258

>>52120341
An on-topic dream for once

>> No.52122329

>>52122038
Oh, right. I asked because if they were childish pyjamas, then they might not fit (You) so then my next thought was just you sleeping in your boxers that would have an adorable pattern on it (like little chicks or something).
Or! you could have covers that have a childish looking design on them that you sleep in. Or maybe its your wallpaper that has a childish design on it and while you cannot stop your mum from entering your room, you CAN stop girls like Mio from entering it but it'd already be too late.

Was much better than thinking of You suddenly waking up after having a restless sleep and then screaming the whole house down when you find Mio in bed next to you sleeping peacefully.

>> No.52122636

>>52119905
Would you want someone else to write a Lockheart fic?

>> No.52123746

>>52122636
if you want to go ahead, one day i'll try to write something else

>> No.52123963

>>52104307
I guess I was an atlantean chad with a huge cock, since the Gura I was seeing I would guess to have been like 5000 years old instead of 9000, since she was a lot more shy.

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>> No.52126950

>>52126315
sniff

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>>52130137
It's how a simple image gives me fuel for shit way down the line in my own story
>back to thinking about having to court Luna and her wanting to find a way around her country's stupid traditional bylaws that she hates
>have to eventually bone, but preface with the fact that anon doesn't want to get her pregante and thus have to stay in her silly kingdom
>Luna by this point is too horny and smitten and now just wants raw creampies
I can't wait for this funny talking hag's arc to begin.

>> No.52130607

>>52112676
If you're going to stick with having no Voice acting then you do have one advantage. You can use formatting and editing to your advantage, i.e you can use bolding and italics when appropriate to add in the missing emphasis and texture that would have come out in VAing even if it's just a bandaid to the writing style.

>> No.52131200

>>52109119
Towpiss…

>> No.52131511

>>52115893
Abuse, smut, fluff? You want it? It’s yours my friend, as long as you have enough (You)s.

>> No.52132952
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> 5 minute long voice acted animation of Sana fucking Gura
> Somehow have never heard of this
I wonder just how many absolutely amazing Hololive animations are just tucked away in an artist that I like's like list on Twitter waiting to be found. In any case, I nut.

>> No.52134744

>>52132952
Link?

>> No.52137511
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>>52134744
https://twitter.com/Shinki_art/status/1667321403526324224?t=Ta-SxWYzQYAow-5Dt8O7Kg&s=19

>> No.52137560

>>52137511
The other 4 parts have also been posted on their profile

>> No.52141072

>>52130498
I don't see how that relates

>> No.52142874

>>52141072
Literally all it took was Luna telling someone "if its not raw, i dont even want it" and my brain just fired off like that.

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>>52141072
I had the weirdest fucking dream about /wg/ posting about holomem being fish/sea creatures like gura but the entire conversation was just 90% some anon making punny names about Holo name + fish and a conversation about what underwater/Atlantis!hololive would be like that was getting buried by puns.

>> No.52145969 [SPOILER] 
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You just turned 18 years old and finished high school. You are planning on entering university, getting a degree, then getting a second degree. With all the money you accrued during the years you spent in uni, you'll travel the world, then finally settle down in your mid to late 20's. At least that was the plan. A hag shows up on your doorstep and demands to be impregnated, twice, thrice, as many times as she wants. Do you throw away your future and submit yourself to being her husband and father to her children at your young age?

>> No.52146167

>>52090274
Are there any oil/lotion massage fics?

>> No.52146416

>>52146167
yes, paradise lost and shrunken troubles

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>>52146416
Anon the 'joke' doesn't even work anymore, shrunken troubles has a warning sign emoji and paradise lost has always been properly tagged.

>> No.52147210

>>52146864
i know, i felt like doing it anyway

>> No.52147369

>>52146864
Do you really think a tourist would have any idea what a (be wary) tag means? They wouldn't think twice.

>> No.52147876

>>52147369
>>52146167 (me)
Fortunately I'm a recurring tourist and a /d/generate so it doesn't work on me.

>> No.52149018

>>52147876
It doesn't work on you, but does it work for you?

>> No.52149125

>>52147876
that's a shame
could you please act horrified for us

>> No.52150246

I went to take a nap and I had a dream that was literally the perfect climax for Balsa. I've been struggling to come up with a proper motivation for the main villain but this gave me not only the perfect one but a climax scene that'll be fucking awesome if I can do it right. Exciting stuff.

I've got a good portion of the next chapter done as well. Was just so retardedly tired that I couldn't get the second half out and have it not be shit. So pumped to keep going now. I have it now planned out perfectly from beginning to finish.

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>>52150246
That's awesome. I had the same thing with my Selen fic. A dream inspired the ending.
/wg/ is quickly turning into a dream general it seems.
>>52090223
Also, last call for fetishes and stuff you want to see in the Selen bully fic. I'm polishing up the rough draft this week, and then it's full steam ahead.

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Would you sacrifice your left nut, one of your kidneys, both your pinky fingers and make one of your eyes have astigmatism if it meant you could marry your oshi?

>> No.52151039

>>52150566
>last call for fetishes and stuff you want to see in the Selen bully fic
Well, can you have her turned into a seedbed by tentacles?

>> No.52151747

>>52150566
>Piss
>Punching/kicking then kissing/fucking
>spitting/drooling in someone's mouth
> blackmail
> public humilliation
> concealed masturbation
That's all i can think off, goodspeed soldier

>> No.52151969

>>52090223
wamys pajamas are pure sex

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>>52149125
Anon wtf I how is this allowed here this belongs in /d/ or /trash/
>>52149018

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>>52152572
...What would you like to see more of?

>> No.52153125

>>52152572
thank you

>> No.52153457

>>52152892
Well I dropped by to see if there had been some new fics involving lotion/oil sex but if anyone here is up for writing some more /d/ stuff, I've got an appetite for some alien stuff, HR Giger-style, invading the earth, then hunting, breeding and seedbedding chuubas.

>> No.52153474

>>52150878
No lmao
>>52151747
Half of those are already implemented, my good sir.
A great list though, I'll try to find ways to implement the ones currently absent.
>>52151039
Too vanilla

>> No.52153733

>>52153457
>I've got an appetite for some alien stuff, HR Giger-style, invading the earth, then hunting, breeding and seedbedding chuubas.
You, my anonymous compatriot, have good taste.

>> No.52153803

>>52153457
>I've got an appetite for some alien stuff, HR Giger-style, invading the earth, then hunting, breeding and seedbedding chuubas.
Any chuuba in particular?

>> No.52154223

https://archiveofourown.org/works/48146878
Not the story we deserve, but the one we need

>> No.52154417

>>52154223
>>52090242
Please start anchoring your stories.

>> No.52154660

>>52153803
Preferably someone with an ego and would actively resist even if they've been seedbedded, like Suisei or Kronii

>> No.52154701

>>52154417
I don't think that's their story, just one they found

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>>52154660
There's a non zero chance something like that would get commissioned in this thread, but don't hold your breath.

>> No.52155484

>>52154989
I'll do it.

>> No.52155605

>>52150566
I don't normally watch Selen/read Selen's fic, but if these tags >>52151747 are in yours... maybe it'll be the start

>> No.52155735

>>52155484
Don't hold your breath, man.

>> No.52155987

>>52155735
Like, literally. It could prove fatal.

>>52154660
Anon is correct. There is a non-zero chance that something like it could be commissioned, but I'd have to be sufficiently interested in the idea so really don't go thinking it's guaranteed to happen

>> No.52156195

>>52154989
>>52155987
Yeah, I know.
I just put it out there since someone asked.

>> No.52156468

>>52150878
Yes, of course. The divorce papers she signs 5 minutes later will be a truly one of a kind piece of autographed merch. Well worth the price.

>> No.52156513

>>52156195
Fair call. Good on ya, I like the idea. If it's Geiger-style aliens, would this include the gruesome ending of all impregnations or be some kind of softcore alternative birth that doesn't end with their untimely and excruciatingly painful demise?

>> No.52156739

>>52156468
Then, how about this. Would you give away your non dominant arm in exchange for uncondi love from your oshi? If she dies, your arm returns, but if you kill her, you lose your other arm as well.

Answer carefully.

>> No.52156837

>>52156739
>Answer carefully.
Your questions are stupid and pointless.

>> No.52156985

>>52156837
The only stupid questions are the ones that go unasked.

>> No.52157038

>>52156739
Why would I have to answer carefully? I would never kill my oshi and I couldn't if I wanted to she's literally a phoenix.

>> No.52157122

>>52156513
My personal preference would be that the births themselves aren't outright lethal however the incubation period and birth would certainly take their toll on the host. The newborn spawns would try to feed on the host's breastmilk, and the adult aliens would re-impregnate the host again, repeating the cycle.
Unless the host escapes, gets rescued, or is somehow given nourishment, the repeated impregnations and births would eventually lead to death by malnutrition.

>> No.52157125

>>52156739
From the non-dominant arm? NTA, but I was thinking absolutely, I'd do that... but that would mean no more driving, gaming or typing among other things. That's a hard bargain. I don't think I'd take that deal, even then.

Could I have Fubuki's unconditional love in exchange for, I dunno... both my earlobes? I'll throw in my left eye too, to sweeten the pot. That's my good one!

>> No.52157187

>>52157038
In the tapestry of existence, truthful answers are threads that bind present and future.

>> No.52157245

>>52157187
Why are you trying so hard to sound pretentious?

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>>52157245
Words of wisdom resound, but arrogance falls silent in its own ground.

>> No.52157407

>>52157125
Your left thumb, your left eye, your left kidney and your left testicle.

>> No.52157898

>>52157407
What is this being sacrificed to? A behelit?

>> No.52158050

>>52157407
Still too much; opposable thumbs are very important and a major part of our ability to use tools. I'll give you both pinkies and my left ring finger, too.

>> No.52158262 [DELETED] 

>>52157122
Suisei wakes up in a strange and unfamiliar place, having no recollections of when and how she got there. The walls look like they are made of some organic material with intricate designs, yet it feels as hard as steel upon touch. Suisei walks out of the room she woke up in, out into some sort of hallway. She hears something crawling about, and swears she saw something on the corner of her eye running into a hole in the wall that is now shut.

As she explores the area, she stumbles upon something unsettling. A room full of women being bred by horrifying creatures straight out of her worst nightmares. Miko is among the women there, she has an empty stare on her face as a creature humps away into her. Suisei is speechless. She starts walking back, but trips and falls backwards, making a loud noise in the process. She looks behind her and sees one of those bipedal abominations staring her right to the face, drool leaking from its mouth full of serrated teeth. Suisei yells before being taken away to one of their chambers, where she is stripped of her clothes, then forcefully inserted into with an organ that protudes from the tip of the tail of the beast. She tries to fight it, but is pinned down by her wrists, with the creature hissing on her face. Suisei knows that if she keeps trying, something really bad is bound to happen. But perhaps that would have been for the better, given that what is in store for her is far, far worse than a merciful death.

The creature humps its tail forcefully into her again and again, scrapping at her unlubricated insides just as she saw them doing to her friend Miko. Soon, the creature's tail begins to pulse and undulate as something wet and warm is pumped inside of her womb. Suisei screams, horrified, putting a struggle once more, but it is meaningless, she is unable to overpower the creature that has her pinned down, filling her with its eggs. She soons passes out, not being to bear it anymore as her belly bulged further and further.

When she came to again, she was in a room surrounded by several other women, stuck to the wall by some gelatinous substance just as hard as the walls themselves, gagged with a tube going inside her mouth, down her throat. All she could do is look around the room at the other women, giving birth to grotesque creatures who are born shrieking out from their wombs, climbing onto their bodies to feed from their engorged breasts. Suisei could feel it inside her too, movements within her belly, as well as her breasts aching and oozing, but she was helpless, unable to do anything about the fate she was sealed in.

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>>52158050
Deal.

>> No.52158453

>>52158262
Man this scene is generic as all hell. Fucking anyone can get slotted in to a scenario like that.

>> No.52158529

>>52158453
What, you think Suisei would somehow be any special from all the other women being fucked by aliens?

>> No.52158614

>>52158453
That doesn't really make any sense, so I actually can't tell if it is bait or not. Most stories are just "generic scenario but with chuuba". The chuuba's reactions and body are what makes it different.

>> No.52158643

>>52158529
You're in a fanfiction thread not a fetish thread. When the only thing that can distinguish the character is a name easily slottable in or out you're not doing great fanfic even if you're working with everything appealing about a fetish.

>> No.52158731

>>52158643
Then write the story yourself instead of expecting others to do it.

>> No.52158750

>>52158731
Anon, it's just bait.

>> No.52158796

>>52158327
I expect my fox wife to greet me when I get home in a naked apron whereupon I will happily surrender the agreed upon digits. Good day to you, sir.

>> No.52158898

>>52158796
You have her unconditional love, but she doesn't know where you live, or your name, or how you look like. She loves you, but unless you meet her, nothing can come of it.

The organ collection will be done soon enough. No refunds.

>> No.52158915

>>52158731
He's being a piece of shit, my dude. Me, I just scrolled up and glanced over the last paragraph of your post and got an instant chub. Will read the whole thing after work.

I might actually end up getting this done

>> No.52158958

>>52158898
Should've put it in the contract. Since I'm still in possession of my bits, they'll be staying with me, thank you very much.

>> No.52158984

/wg/ - Writing Genie

>> No.52159019

>>52158984
It’s just one faggot and his enabler. Just report them for spamming/flooding.

>> No.52159130

>>52158915
No you won't. Don't be a contrarian that compliments a bad fic just because I posted that don't like their snippet.

>> No.52159206

>>52158915
It's just a prompt, or an outline. Don't get too excited.

>> No.52159343

>>52159130
Don't flatter yourself. If I like what I read, I'll be interested in more, and I really enjoyed that snippet. Your shit opinion has nothing to do with it.

>>52159206
Yeah, I know. Still, it managed to get me going. I went ahead and read it because my curiosity is insatiable and I really enjoyed it.

Who wrote this snippet?

>> No.52159399

>>52159343
>Who wrote this snippet?
Anonymous

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>>52159399
> Who wrote this snippet?
A very strange question to ask in an anonymous forum, thus I'm curious as to what answer you are expecting.

>> No.52159757

>>52159631
Yeah, I figured it wasn't WAv2, thus why I asked.

We'll see. No guarantees.

>> No.52159928

>>52156739
Yeah, I'd be a disabled stay-at-home husband who does some housework, watches stuff and plays GSG all day before fucking my oshi after she comes home from work. It's not ideal, but it'd be comfy.

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>>52159757
Such vague words.

>> No.52160416

>>52159928
Losing your non-dominant arm, or any arm for that matter isn't enough to constitute you as disabled. You might get some leeway from the government but you'd still have to work. Unless you mean you want her Vtuber salary to support you both, to which I'll just say it's highly unlikely that money will last you more than a couple of years, and that's with being frugal and only if your oshi is the most superchatted.

>> No.52161360

>>52160416
Are you sure? I know a guy who lost a foot to diabetes and he gets a check every month.

>> No.52162048

>>52160200
Finish your current work, then we'll talk.

>> No.52164107

>>52145969
>>52090274

>> No.52164883

>>52164107
Also adding that the reason I linked it to the request thingy (i really hope the original poster doesn't mind) is because I thought the prompt was really good and I feel any hag (a really aggressive one will fit better likely) would fit it.

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>> No.52169347

>>52166656
Hot

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>>52169347
She sure is, like the surface of the sun.

>> No.52170682

>>52153457
Come back in two months and by then I'd have whipped something up.

>> No.52170881

>>52170682
With oil and lotion? You randy devil.

>> No.52171663

>>52170881
Nobody said aliens couldn't produce oil/lotion.

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>>52090274
breast-focused Wamy lewds
paizuri, nipple stimulation, lactation maybe. whatever you got

>> No.52173561
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>>52090242
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTPqUGF5vsrsBsvyVD6Sns4HDU2ZdYE-GpcQCnnqFivhKZXxgTroQc3A_Qf_DTFB5_xlZUJasBKbwdK/pub

A fistful of Love
TAGS: Fluff, SFW

I got really inspired by the ''Mio bullies you with love'' idea of last thread, so i wrote this.

>> No.52173647

>>52171663
inb4 the aliens are oily snails

>> No.52174956

>>52173561
Ah, I love bait and switch ryona fics.
...And this isn't one of them. It's cute, though rather shallow given that it's effectively one gag played for the entire fic. Then again with a concept like this you're basically shoehorned into having something like this since the only you could get a dynamic that isn't like this fic would be if the viewpoint character was 1/3 tsundere, 1/3 steeped in irony, and 1/3 built out of lies to everything even himself.

>> No.52175644

>>52173561
pretty cute and simple, i like it
>>52174956
IMO irony is like, the worst component you can add to story like this. I remember there was a period of time where LNs with ''cynical'' mcs where on the rise and pretty much all of them crashed and burned because unless you are a great writer, its hard to make a genuine love story with a character who deliberately misses the clues and acts like a jackass. Oregairu pretty much took twice as long to finish thanks to its mc

>> No.52175703

>>52173561
I liked it. It was cute.

>> No.52176158

>>52175644
I mean you could have it so that he does notice the clues and know she's genuine about it but still lies to themselves about it because it's hard for them to accept that they deserve it. Though, yeah, getting that across to the reader is probably going to take an entire story arc.
Though what I'm saying is that in order for an interesting dynamic to come across the protagonist kind of needs to be flawed/rough around the edges since there's no story in (You) immediately folding or You going "Oh woe is me" for the entire story unless you make it a gag, and even then the concept kind of breaks apart the longer it goes on.
Which means they have to be someone that's built themselves out of irony, self-hatred and lies if you want the "hates Mio for loving someone like him" dynamic or go for another angle. Maybe a thug type that's so beaten down they've never understood love or a male!rrat!Ayame esque guy who's drowning themselves in pussy just to fill the void.

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>> No.52180255

fuck

>> No.52180348

>>52180255
Not who I'd have expected to go next

>> No.52182882

>>52090274
The alternate universe where hololive comes from underwater and Gura comes from the land.

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>>52180255
>>52180348
holy fuck, i was actually giving some thought to the last nina prompt.
At least it seems its on her terms

>> No.52185558

>>52182898
please don't stop giving thought to it
she deserves better than to be unpersoned

>> No.52185767

>>52185558
Her appearance is a long ways off in my own series, but I'm keeping her in anyway. She is perfect for the role I have planned for her.

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>>52090242
Balsa: Chapter 12

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSal3u9SM92OQeYpcEpzE1IkUBGf6G0MzeRxt9PcaptvzZw9rZUAvz7GNjnSxmXyEutkfTBGc5_Zm6a/pub

tags: (you), Botan, Fubuki, medieval fantasy, action, adventure

if you thought the last chapter was sad, buckle the hell up

>> No.52185898

>>52185558
i'd like to try, i never watched her as much as i wanted since bae streams so much and im also in college, but ill try to watch more to make her justice. I like her quite a bit

>> No.52186008

Listening to a hag crying... it hurts. It hurts so much.

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>>52185767
>>52185898
thank you
I'm going to miss her a lot. she was a hag who owned being a hag, a rarity of unparalleled value

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>>52186036
No problem my fellow hag enjoyer.
Nina is actually the perfect matriarchal leader for the kitsune country/village when HJ finally gets there. There will be lots of Polka background, the implications of soul SUCCING, and lots of sexual tension. I also have a few other cameos planned there since a lot of chuubas are foxes of some variety.

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>>52158262
Wait the janny deleted it. The fuck?

>> No.52188144 [DELETED] 

>>52187277
Maybe the poster got vacation'd? That deletes all his recent posts.

>> No.52188210 [DELETED] 

>>52188144
No, that's not the case. Just the usual power tripping.

>> No.52188374

>>52185799
Can you give a brief series description

>> No.52188506

tourist here, is there a fic with a chuuba raping (You) until break? Or something of the style?

>> No.52188618

>>52188506
Off hand I know 'Remembering how to love her' does that

>> No.52188681

>>52188374
So 12 chapters is the minimum for something to be a series for you now? That and handpicking which stories make it into the archive...

>> No.52188899

>>52188618
Just a shame it never got continued.

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>>52188681
You okay anon?

>> No.52188977

>>52185799
I also forgot to ask how people feel about the flashback segments. I know for a lot of people they can be hit or miss.

>>52188374
Botan is a member of an elite group of vampire slayers called the Spears. When she meets (you) while traveling on the road, you join her for an adventure full of tragedy and intrigue.

>> No.52190551

>>52188977
Thanks. You pumped out a lot in a fucking scary amount of time, kind of blindsided me. I'll get it made.

>> No.52190645

>>52188977
I feel like flashbacks are a lot more acceptable in writing form and other mediums. Still, the regular rules apply. So long as it doesn't become gratuitous and subtract from the actual present conflict, it should be fine.

>> No.52192027

>>52173561
very cute! Prequel to "Daddy's Girl"? God I wish I'd get mindbroken with love by Mio.

>> No.52192328

>>52190551
I'm just as blindsided. I have never worked this hard on any project before with such ease. It's one of those that just comes out so easy. I've already started chapter 13 as well. It's crazy.

I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I have writing it.

>>52190645
Fair enough. I will keep that in mind. I want to save some of the past stuff as well because I will almost assuredly be writing a prequel to this story.

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Best orgy stories in your opinion?

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>> No.52198518

>>52173561
I really enjoyed this, anon. I'm not that good at giving out reviews but just reading it over and over makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside as you've captured Mio's character perfectly.
You have satisfied my reverse-corruption and I thank you for it, anon. Good work!

>> No.52199235

>>52175644
>>52175703
>>52198518
Thanks a bunch, it was a spurr of the moment thing so im happy it turned out nice
>>52192027
i just added it as a nod, since i thought it contradicted the other story, but thanks to your comment i checked and turns out it fits, so i guess it is a prequel

>> No.52201870

>>52090274
Naked mud wrestling with chuuba of your choice

>> No.52203897

>>52186036
RIP

>> No.52204361

>>52154701
Don’t even know why he’s even anchoring it. Pretty sure stories written by people outside of here aren’t archived.

>> No.52204988

>>52204361
What about stories that are anchored here but are also on that website?
I know Menhera Wrangler is one of them.

>> No.52205331

>>52204988
Did you ignore this part:
>Pretty sure stories written by people outside of here aren’t archived.

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>>52118862
>and this https://archiveofourown.org/works/36857314, sad that there was only one part
I wrote that. I just didn't really have any ideas for a sequel outside of this one section I'm sharing now.
Narratively, Elira should get revenge, but it's funnier when Finana shows her powerlevel and it turns out to be tiny, like when she thought you're supposed to put an entire Tenga in the cooch.

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...underestimate you? No, I don't think so, Anonymous. You see at this point, I'm pretty much the Queen Bitch of the Universe. And not all your little virtual livers or holo members will stand in my way again.

>> No.52205906

>>52205770
Did you forget to take your meds, anon?

>> No.52206092

>>52205906
>he didn't get the reference
zoomerchama...

>> No.52206132

>>52205331
Did you ignore mine or did Menhera Wrangler not get written on here?

>> No.52206338

>>52206132
I’m just going to assume you’re just baiting at this point.

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>>52205770
>A Vtubing shadow war filled with skulduggery and occasional violence to thwart Enna's schemes of making the chuuba world as bitter and cunty as she is
There's only one way something like that can end...

Rape it's rape you rape her and she changes her ways after you rape her

>> No.52206426

>>52206338
No, I was being entirely serious and may have read your post wrong (as usual). I do know Menhera Wrangler was written on this site (and its in the archive) and that its also on ao3 if you browse through the hololive section.

>> No.52206515

>>52206426
He's the one baiting you, anonchama. Hostile posters are always trolls here

>> No.52206711

>>52206426
I don’t know how you can read my post wrong. It’s clear as day.

>>52206515
None of my posts were hostile so I don’t know where you get this idea I’m baiting him when I answer his question from the start.

>> No.52206713

>>52206426
>I do know Menhera Wrangler was written on this site
Anon... that explains why it gets archived here.

>>52206515
None of this post are hostile though?

>> No.52206948

>>52206711
I'm autistic and not very bright, anon.
Its why half the prompts I make don't make sense or how the replies I make don't make sense.

>> No.52206998

>>52206711
>>52206713
Nice English you've got there, kiddo.

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WHY ARE ALL MY IDEAS SO FAR AWAY FROM WHERE I'M AT

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>>52208671
It's rough at times brother, but remember; Do it for her.

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>>52208986
My ideas involve Lamy and they're...not good for the princess

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>>52209120
That's fine, mine are great for her. Her childhood and time before her arc takes place in the story is kinda shit, but it'll get better for her.

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Child bearing hips; hips that bear children.

>> No.52211932

>>52208671
This is a nice Shion picture.

>> No.52212422

>>52204988
>Menhera Wrangler
That’s a story written by an anon here.

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>>52211932
Indeed it is. I've had some trouble finding relatively serious Shion art and this artist has a few good ones

>> No.52213829

>>52188506
There’s plenty in the archive.

>> No.52214623

>>52146864
>Anon the 'joke' doesn't even work anymore
It never worked to begin with.

>> No.52215139

>>52185799
While I like that you're pumping these chapters out, I wish you held on to them a day or two to go over with any mistakes in punctuation and grammar.

>> No.52216001

>>52206948
It’s okay.

>> No.52216241

>>52173561
I enjoyed this quite a bit. I liked the execution gag and I think you do a good job overall of keeping it humorous, as I think the bit can run out of gas very quickly. I especially enjoyed the ending, more things change, the more they stay the same, as it were.
I don't really have any criticisms other than I would have liked to see it fleshed out a bit more. The scenes are pretty brisk and I think there's a right balance between serious development and the gag. Still, for a spur-of-the-moment thing, it's good.

>> No.52216847

>>52216241
>other than I would have liked to see it fleshed out a bit more
Like what?

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>>52090274
Kiara bimbofication!

>> No.52217028
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>>52216847
Like being bullied via love and attraction into going with Mio to the fall pep rally. Or being dragged with her to the fall formal, where she somehow rigged the event to make you both king and queen of the dance. There are no limits to what a girl who thinks you're meant to be together will do to make you see things her way.
Trust me, I've been there. And she even got me to marry her.

>> No.52217053

>>52217007
Basically, The Idolification of Ouro Kronii but Kiara?

>> No.52217893

>>52217053
Yes.

>> No.52217914

>>52216847
I mean in terms of what's already in the fic. The scenes already in there can be expanded upon, I feel. There's a lot of "telling" in the fic. Anon being the talk of the school is three lines when it could have been a climactic scene.
For example: We are told Anon is seething at the family dinner but there's no real insight into his thoughts. He gets bombarded with questions but from who? What's the scene like? His uncle is a dog kemonomimi, is that something that can be expanded? Those kinds of things.
You could do what >>52217028 says and add more, and I certainly would like that as well, but as initially said, the gag runs the risk of getting old without proper balancing.
I think for the fics scope, what's there is fine and works, it being compact is overall good, but I can help express a desire to see more.

>> No.52218474

>>52217914
>We are told Anon is seething at the family dinner but there's no real insight into his thoughts. He gets bombarded with questions but from who? What's the scene like? His uncle is a dog kemonomimi, is that something that can be expanded?
But that showing and not telling and the entire fic is about telling.

>> No.52218951

>>52216241
>>52217028
>>52217914
Thanks for the imput.
Not gonna lie, I like reading all of these ''what ifs'' scenarios, and even if i cant write them just yet ,they sure are fun

>> No.52219847

>>52218951
Glad we could help.

>> No.52220321

>>52217007
Hasn’t that been done before?

>> No.52220841

>>52185799
Damn. 12 chapters in such a short time. Congrats.

>> No.52221829

>>52220841
The beginning chapters are short. So you know, don’t expect much from them in terms of length.

>> No.52221865

>>52215139
I actually am, I'm just that bad at it kek I could certainly use an editor. I have many strengths as an author but that still remains to be improved on.

>>52220841
Thanks mate. I'm having so much fun with it. I think chapter 12 was probably some of the best work I've ever done.

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>>52217007
>Kiara
I partly wrote a very GSL song about the KFP to the tune of this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UvEzFW_pH1g
https://rentry.org/Autismus1975

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>>52221865
>mfw it took me over 7 weeks to write 12 chapters
In all seriousness, I'm glad you're having so much fun with it. Keep up the passion bro.

>> No.52222881

>>52222414
Kiara is Austrian, not German.

>> No.52223121

>>52222881
Yes, yes, of course. I also know there are slight differences between the German and Austrian languages, but hey, it's all Huhnsprech to me and the story I wrote

>> No.52223304

>>52222881
>He doesn't know she's an Anschluss defender

>> No.52223325

>>52223121
Not just language, but also in culture. Austrian are more civilized

>> No.52223537

>>52223325
Yeah, but a German got us to the Moon.

>> No.52223563

>>52223325
And incest if the Habsburgs are anything to go by.

Which is kinda based for me and my kinks but I know Kiara isn't a fan of incest. Not that that'll stop me from writing an inevitable forbidden love incest fic for EVERY chuuba I like

>> No.52223673

>>52223325
Of course there are differences, yes. For one thing, Austrians try to be nicer about things while Germans are more direct, on top of a lot of other things
Still, the original song is a banger, and to think that Swedes wrote it as a parody of the DDR only to make it sound unironically great just makes it even better

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>>52223563
well you have a plot there. Kiara genuinely disgusted at the idea of incest, yet she cant stop having wet dreams about her younger/older brother using her like an onahole

>> No.52224768

>>52224011
I've already got ideas and they're kinda like that, but it's gonna be more...romantic? As romantic as siblings I write can get before disobeying their primodrial lizard brains to fuck each other.

>> No.52224989

>>52223325
Austrians are just better than germany in every way.

>> No.52226335

>>52224989
Kek nice joke.

>> No.52226429

>>52224768
fair enough. i do prefer the raw animal instinct taking over before the heartfelt stuff. Something like walking on your reliable onee-san sniffing your boxers with one hand in her pants

>> No.52227370

>>52223537
That was American scientist

>> No.52228023

>>52227370
Anon, your history reps....

>> No.52228717

>>52228023
Sam Phillips, the director of the Apollo program got us into the moon.

>> No.52229405

>>52218951
>Thanks for the imput.
No problem, sort of scared of giving critiques because people might take it the wrong way. Glad you didn't.

>> No.52229493

>>52228717
>Actually ignorant of history
Man, the American Education must be a terrible joke.

>> No.52229573

>>52223537
>>52227370
>>52228023
>>52228717
>>52229493
>>>/his/

>> No.52229938

>>52226429
The Hoshikawa outline I have is definitely more in-line with "raw animal instinct taking over"

>> No.52230024

Why do I find it more awkward to masturbate to fics written by anons than I do masturbating to artwork by anons?

>> No.52230051

>>52229573
I'll admit. Only two posts are mine, but I shouldn't have responded. I just didn't want filthy euros downplaying America's great achievements.

>> No.52230132

>>52229405
If an author can’t handle some form of constructive criticism, then I don’t know why they would post it in the first place.

>> No.52230216

>>52230024
Writing is generally viewed as a personal thing in regards to the creator expressing themselves, at least in a way that's usually more noticeable than art.

>> No.52230510

>>52230051
America never had any achievement. It stole from others.

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>>52230510

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>>52230818

>> No.52231258

>>52230510
>Euros actually believe this.

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>>52230510
>America never had any achievement

>> No.52232031

>>52230818
At least Gura knows not to like anglos.

>> No.52232511

>>52230132
Some authors are very appreciative of constructive criticism that will help them improve their writing, sadly there have been a few writers who do get uppity when they get critique. So that anon's fear has some basis.

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>>52232511
How do we correct bratty authors?

>> No.52232733

>>52232651
By ignoring their future works.

>> No.52233083

>>52232511
I assume some authors are just a very few with fragile egos.

>> No.52233247

>>52232651
You don’t and that’s the sad thing about it.

>> No.52233386

>>52224011
>Kiara genuinely disgusted at the idea of incest, yet she cant stop having wet dreams about her younger/older brother using her like an onahole
Seems to generic. Needs something else to spice it up.

>> No.52233428

>>52233386
Incest isn’t enough for you?

>> No.52233929

>>52233428
Became too mainstream.

>> No.52233996

>>52233929
not him, but I trust that with so much extreme shit that comes out in doujins and porn these days, we'll get to a point where heartfelt vanilla sex becomes the most exotic thing out there

>> No.52234223

>>52233996
Never got this, vanilla sex is still top dog.

>> No.52234361

>>52234223
Of course vanilla sex great - never said it wasn't. I was just saying that with so many fetishes out there (and the ease with which one can indulge in them), then the plainest fetishes like vanilla, impregnation and others will eventually become "exotic" by comparison. Full circle and all that

>> No.52234478

>>52234361
>plainest fetishes
See, this is a you problem, other people think Vanilla is great and beats all others. And just because a few people on the internet says it isn't, doesn't make it true.

>> No.52234588

>>52234478
Don't get me wrong; I personally only whack off to vanilla stuff, and I don't like the more extreme things the internet has to offer. As to this point,
>And just because a few people on the internet says it isn't, doesn't make it true
you got me there. The internet is a big place, and it's not as if someone has carried out a survey on whether more people like vanilla over more extreme fetishes or vice versa. So yeah, I concede

>> No.52234994

>>52233996
>extreme shit that comes out in doujins and porn these days
Honestly I haven’t even notice them. They blend in all together due to how generic they’ve become.

>> No.52235008

>>52234588
Yeah, I get what you're saying.

>> No.52235205

>>52233929
>Became too mainstream.
What does that have to do with anything?

>> No.52235301

>>52235205
liking mainstream things is against the /vt/ charter

>> No.52235359

>>52235301
But why would anyone care about that? If you like something, shouldn't that be enough?

>> No.52235668

>>52235359
It’s possible they’re insecure about what they like.

>> No.52235824

>>52234361
>vanilla sex great
You can say that again. No other fetish ever comes close to it in terms of scenarios.

>> No.52235911

>>52233929
This is such a non-answer.

>> No.52236055

>>52222881
There’s literally no difference between the two of those things.

>> No.52236244

>>52233996
>but I trust that with so much extreme shit that comes out in doujins and porn these days
Most doujins are still vanilla.

>> No.52236296

>>52223563
>Which is kinda based for me and my kinks but I know Kiara isn't a fan of incest
So she says. People who says this often imagine incest scenarios.

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Just checking... yyyep, still love the fox, no change there. Phew!

>> No.52236364

>>52236296
>So she says. People who says this often imagine incest scenarios.
Kiara is too conservative for that.

>> No.52236622

>>52236364
You people really need to watch streams before saying things.

>> No.52236667

>>52233996
>we'll get to a point where heartfelt vanilla sex becomes the most exotic thing out there
heartfelt vanilla sex is the most exotic thing since its extremely rare and most mangakas and doujin artist are incapable of capturing that feel naturally. But when they do, god, it changes a man.

>> No.52236858

>>52230818
>>52231096
My cute shark wife.

>> No.52237091

>>52222414
Surprised to see an east germany video here.

>> No.52237255

>>52237091
You'd be surprised - the band that sang it is actually Swedish. IFA Wartburg was a pretty underrated band; they made so many funny songs

>> No.52237355

>>52237255
>IFA Wartburg was a pretty underrated band; they made so many funny songs
I'll check them out. I like the song

>> No.52237844

>>52237255
How did you even find them?

>> No.52238193

>>52235668
But they're anonymous

>> No.52238197

>>52236304
Okay.

>> No.52238241

>>52236858
She’s mine old man.

>> No.52238247

>>52237844
>How did you even find them?
You know, this actually made me pause and think, "how DID I find these guys?". That goes for the other bands I listen to.
To answer your question, I guess I got to them because I entered the Turbofolk rabbit hole way back when
Now I listen to Serbo-Croatian jazz tunes like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5_4exXn55jk
So this post isn't too off-topic, I stumbled upon these while doing research for the Holoslavia fic

>> No.52238349

>>52238247
Interesting. You’re dedicated to your fic.

>> No.52238530

New thread
>>52238281

>> No.52238582
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>>52238349
Thank you, anon. What I can say is that writing the fic has helped me learn about new music genres (and, by extension, the cultures associated with them), when otherwise I would've never heard of them.
So tl;dr writing good
As a bonus, here's a Gura AI cover of the 5'Nizza song 'Soldat'. I want chuuba covers of all these songs like you wouldn't believe

>> No.52238625

>>52238582
Never thought a fic would do that to you?

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>>52238625
Not to this extent, no. I would say that I'm pleasantly surprised

>> No.52238867

>>52222414
A GSL parody of a GSL song? I like it.

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>>52230818
Why do blue women hate Britain so much?

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>>52238867
Glad that you do, anon. We'll all learn gut kochen, dienst, socialismus, kapitalismus, Yagoo, und revolution at KFP Corp soon enough

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