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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Balsa: Chapters Five and Six: Tags: (you), Botan, Nene, Polka, medieval fantasy, adventure:>>51795114

Balsa: Chapters Seven and Eight.: Tags: (you), Botan, Nene, Polka, medieval fantasy, adventure:>>51880161

Short fic bae: tags: Bae, short fic:>>51764048

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Self-indulgent request for the Nijifriends among us… the story leading up to/following picrel:>>51762172

Botan and Korone like to play wrestle in the office, but Korone never wins. Feeling bad for her and thinking Botan's getting a little too cocky, (You) wrestle Botan yourself and utterly manhandle the lion until she's completely submissive.:>>51770850

Nerd Fauna finally catches you cheating off her tests which lands you both in detention. The model student is no less than pissed with you, but you need to get back in her good graces so you can continue to coast through your exams.:>>51812364

To calm her nerves ahead of her big return concert, Gura has a nice, relaxing drink of three bottles of Buckfast.:>>51831957

Ina helping you get used to cold Canadian winters:>>51847636

Anon is a lowly yakuza thug, who suddenly finds himself tangled with protecting the Daughter of the head honcho, Lamy.:>>51883081

>>51895783
My menhera wife.

Fubreasts!

>>51896535
There hasn't been a fubuki story in a while.

>>51896777
There's going to be another soon.

>>51896791
Tell us more about what you're working on, anon.

>>51897284
Well! Have you ever wanted to be shrunk down to the size of a grain of rice, then captured by ants and taken back to their hill, knocked up against your will and forced to give birth to a thousand young, then eaten by your children for nourishment?

>>51897822
NTA but can't say I have

>>51855325
Fuck you. I will write a two sentence VN if I have to just in order to prove you wrong.

>>51897822
Nope, never.

>>51897882
Better yet, write a real VN and make it the best thing you've ever written.

>>51898015
I've never written anything, so technically that would be the best thing I've ever written.

>>51897822
What did i jsut read

>>51897865
>>51897893
>>51898094
Ah. Good thing that's not being written, then.

>>51897822
Man bugfag is just escalating their bug fetish huh?

>>51898241
So were you lying when you said there would be another Fubuki fic soon.

>>51898499
No! And don't worry, it definitely won't involve ants.

>>51897822
Bro is this a legitimate fetish of yours? Getting eaten by ants??

>>51898951
So it isn't the prompt about Fubuki pouring molten aluminium down an ant hill before getting punished for her sins by getting a shrunk into the slowly burning ant hill only to be saved by a heroic ant?

>>51880161
I'm liking the lore tidbits you are dropping here and there. Botan being a follower of the space goddess makes her a girl after my own heart. I too enjoy the blessings of a cosmic beeg girl. I really like the pantheon of religions you sprinkled in, a very nice fantasy touch. As far as other anons are saying regarding the length of the installments, I'm thinking it might have more to do with the fact that a single advancement is named to be two chapters. I can kinda see why you set in your head that the different scenes are actually the turning of a chapter, but we don't really need to resign ourselves to that in our fic formats. Perhaps as a challenge to yourself, you can keep the splitting of chapters in your head, but when you write chapter 9, really let yourself get into the weeds of the details of everything you want to depict. Then, when it's done, see how long it is, and it could end up being close to what you have been writing as two chapters so far, and warrant it's own installment.

>>51895783
What a crazy polka.

>>51903243
Sexy*

>>51895819
Roboco falls and her head breaks, but while you're freaking out a tiny Roboco crawls out of the head

What's a good alternative for the word 'Ojisan' in the context of Shion being a streetwalker trying to attract the attention of an older man? I'm trying to think of an alternative since the fic is set in a fantasy world and I dislike the language mixing trope for chuuba fics unless it's explicitly in a world like modern day.

>>51906160
Uncle?

>>51906321
Doesn't really have the same associations in English as it does in Japanese.
I guess I'm not really asking the right question; I'm more looking for a good word for Shion to refer to (You) while she's trying to get your attention.

>>51906160
She could start with daddy right off the bat.

>>51906504
Old man would be fine, wouldn't it?

>>51900193
No, it isn't, though that sounds pretty cool. I'd call the ant Flik.

>>51906592
Yeah I guess something like that or "Old timer" would work. I guess I was just too hung up on Ojisan being the natural word that I associate with Shion in that situation.

>>51906160
Old man

>>51906160
UOOOOOHHHHHHHHH

/wg/ is dead... it's over...

>>51911268

>>51895819
Cuckquean Mori asks (You) to fuck Kiara

>>51914789
Yikes

>>51914789
The only way I'd fuck Kiara is if it was a brutal hatefucking.

>>51914789
The only way I'd fuck Kiara is it was a sensual encounter between two trusting lovers.

>>51914789
Done.

> give it your all
> still isn't enough
Fics for this feel?

>>51895819
Emotionless handjob from your autistic girlfriend who treats anything sexual as a chore but will not deny your sexual needs when you ask her to.

>>51919900
Like do you want it where everything is given and you DON'T push past it somehow and win the day? Or do you want to overcome the odds in a dramatic flair?

Still no dreams of supple fox flesh.

>>51921766
I want the protagonist to give it his best, fail, and give up, instead looking for something else to do.

>>51922912
I'm afraid I'm all out of "giving up", so I can't help you there.

>>51923069
You're giving up on giving up? What a quitter.

>>51923139
You fucking bitch.

>>51923346
That's my name, don't wear it out!

Fubuki Fox Fuck Fest.

There's a title for you to work with

>>51923841
I will not give up until you are forced to accept that my indomitable spirit is not to be taken lightly.

>>51924254
4F

>>51924254
Fubuki Family Foxy Fun Fest
For when the ancient fox spirit relatives come over and there's only one dick to share around.

>>51928611
Yeah, mine.

>>51929597
I made this post

>>51928611
How many female relatives of Fubuki are we talking here?

>>51924254
You just stole my title

>>51931571
They live a very long time, so an extensive network of nubule foxes numbering in the double digits at the very least.

>>51932600
Nubile foxes. Not nubule.

>>51914789
This but she's creepily into it and wants you to document it like an NTR sex tape.

>>51928611
If I had any spare time I'd be writing going over to Fubuki's house, having vanilla sex with her that night, then the next day getting a blowjob under the table from her younger sister at dinner time and a footjob from her mom while chilling in the kotatsu, which afterwards leads to the most mind-blowing sex you've ever felt while Fubuki is asleep.

>>51901543
You're a Sanalite? Great taste.

That's just what I did with chapter nine. Found a point that could've been another chapter but kept on going though it still didn't break ten pages. If chapter ten isn't more than 12 pages I'll just release it in a trio. This whole segment that's coming would make for a great trio of chapters anyway, just have to see how it pans out.

Thank you for reading and the feedback. I'm paying extra attention to give more motion in the dialogue segments and I'm glad you suggested it because it definitely does add way more personality to the scene.

>>51935384
....You're giving me ideas. Almost makes me want to scrap the current plan in favour of this, but... hmm.

>>51936386
Calling me a sanalite is a little generous, I wasn't catching too many of her streams when she was around. She just has a subtle but powerful role in my series and I'm always happy when it comes time to write her in again. Looking forward to how the next chapters look.

>>51906160
Wouldn't ojisan still work?

>>51895819
Fauna getting gangbanged by an entire stable's worth of horses

>>51942197
Manager is already cursing themselves for not stopping this tweet. Gotta respect the bad bitch attitude on faunas part to do ANYTHING involving horses.

>>51941110
For what I'm writing, No. I'm trying to keep it mostly "western fantasy" so I'm trying to avoid stuff like honorifics and the use of Japanese words for flavor that's acceptable for chuuba fics since it doesn't fit in with what I'm going for.

>>51944367
"John" should suffice then.

>>51942972
I never realized she was a horse girl until now.

>>51936494
The little sister should probably "innocently" sit on your lap and give you butt rubs in front of Fubuki instead

>>51946139
I mean Kirin's are basically dragon horses. It's pretty obvious she'd be a centaur.

>>51895819
Anon is caught in a love triangle between delinquent Suisei and gyaru Okayu.

>>51946282
I do love me some lapsitting.

>>51922662
I had a dream about Selen doing a cosplay maid stream. I don't even watch her.

>>51895790
Balsa: Chapter Nine

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTzQpqqjwXyWJBQYtA2QRnxR7CRFNEvok_yXI6j-QM9Jq-E7yz3JTl1Udrch05t12e1eIpFGm8jJt-P/pub

tags: (you), Botan, Fubuki, medieval fantasy, action, adventure

I tried this time just to write one large chapter instead of splitting it in half. Tell me if its long enough or if I should do three chapters of the size that I've done before. Either way, hope you enjoy.

>>51934444
>Mori holding a camera in the corner
>"Alright Kiara start crying, and Anon, take that condom off!"
>"wha-"
>"DON'T LOOK AT THE CAMERA!"

>>51951707
Gross

>>51948873
Too old but you have the right idea.

>>51954900
>too old

Fag

>>51954900
The amount of art of holos sitting on your lap is sadly limited.

>>51955909
Why isn't she wearing a bra? It's very indecent of her to go around like that

>>51955946
Do you know where we are?

>>51955946
All the better for you to fondle her from behind

>>51955946
It's a miracle she's even wearing panties anon.

>>51955532
You should expand your horizons

>>51895819
Making the horrifying discovery of what ultimately happens to everyone in Nene's husband collection

>>51960088
That's just a euphemism for making them hard, sucking them off and drinking their semen.

>>51961352
Get that half-breed away from my rat.

>>51961608
She may be a half-breed but she'll do more than just that with the rat.

Damn, dialogue heavy fics take so long to write. There really is no way around it, I just have to buckle up, hunker down and put in the hours. 2 hours to hit only 500 words is no joke.

>>51962784
For me it’s the opposite. Dialogue is probably the easiest part of my stories to write. It’s the narration that has me banging my head against the wall.

>>51962950
With dialogue, you have to think carefully about what the characters will say. You can't use synonyms, you have to do it exactly as the character would say it otherwise it sounds off. Meanwhile for narrating, you can often just turn your brain off and write whatever comes to mind, and it won't matter at all. I haven't had a single brain off moment in all 11k words of this fic, since the narration is also technically dialogue because of the POV it is written in. Of course it isn't as intricate as the dialogue itself, but I still have to tread carefully. At the very least the fic is turning out ok, or I hope it is.

>>51922912
Those who give up don't have a story worth telling. A story needs a true and fulfilling end.

>>51942197

>>51963834
That's debatable.

>>51963834
Requiem for a Dream.

>>51964180
That proves my point, actually.

>>51964233
How so?

>>51895790
A Deal with the Devil - Chapter 2 (13.7k words)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSPb4JeHnApukcSWzsjGTpevw_1_4Y07DfxVRyslQ7LicYkH8b2IBCYw2ceJF3u5wf5JzaUQ8XFI7p6/pub
Tags: Towa, Polka, Roberu, Ayame, SFW, Fluff, Cohabitation

Finally, the second chapter. I considered leaving this for little longer to edit it some more, but I've already been working on this for too long so I thought I may as well publish it. I honestly can't think of more tags to add, but I hope you guys enjoy the copious amounts of Towa fluff I've crammed into this story.

>>51964233
Everyone ends up either in prison or on drugs, and yet it's a classic. It is the antithesis of your retarded point.

>>51964723
A classic pile of shit. It proves my point.

>>51895790
>>51964679
And for those of you who prefer fennecs over devils (or just felt sorry for Polka), I have something for you as well:
A Crash Course on Fennecs and Love (8.8k words)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ_tLkJBn4JNxmnCGXE8cnNsvR7EoWIr4qtFpZ8N5SjAX3Jg6P2bJVNNa6M2EFE2LfspMhrnEcakOri/pub
Tags: Polka, Shien, Nene, Lamy, Botan, SFW-ish, Sexual tension

Honeslty, I'm not too confident about this one. I started writing it on a whim a while ago and went in headfirst with zero plans. I even completely changed the ending like twenty minutes ago, so forgive me if it's among some of my rougher stories. I'm also iffy about the beginning, since I needed to justify Anon's apathy but couldn't really get it across very well. Like A Deal with the Devil, it might be able to use some more editing, but it's been a struggle to find time so I thought I'd just post it now. This likely won't be another series and instead a two parter, with three installments at max.

>>51964679
>>51965083
Damn you really treating us today

>>51964739
It proves that you're a contrarian idiot whose taste is worth nothing.

>3 stories to read
damn son. I wanted to write today.

>>51895819
GAMERS hotspring sex fic onegai.

>>51968230
I can give you hotspring sex with Mio since I did planed for that scenario, but the others won't be involved.

I would like to hump this woman's posterior.

>>51965083
Got through this one first since I love my funny clown fox. While I can see how you feel that way about the beginning, and I admit I was wondering where it going myself until you hit me with the actual reasoning behind it, it demonstrates that feeling quite well. Not a lot of writers can capture what it actually feels to be that way, so nice job! The interactions between such an anon and the people around him was good, I was also really entertained by how you made gen5 bounce off one another like that. I'm hoping I can do the same when I get the gang fully together. Overall, this was a very cute little oneshot, and the ending made me feel good.
> prefer fennecs over devils (or just felt sorry for Polka),
Oh no bro. It's a good thing I read this one first then. I can know she's got her happy end this way when I read your other story in a bit.

>>51968230
Fubuki's anniversary stream was cute as fuck.

>>51895819
Young chuuba of your choice learning how to masturbate by grinding on pillows and other experimentation

>>51964679
It's strange, I like the dialogue and the events happening are pretty cute but there's just something 'lacking' with the narration that makes it feel empty. Like there isn't a solid character or desire behind it to tie everything together; at least in the beginning before other characters get introduced.
I guess this might be an artifact of you going for pure fluff rather than mixing it with comedy or drama, since during the pure (You) and Towa scenes it kind of feels like two people with no chemistry trying to have cute fluffy shenanigans. It gets better with other people since there's actually chemistry for the dialogue to bounce off of or at least enough texture to make the dialogue interesting. Towa and Anon kind of both feel like two smooth innocent surfaces so when the two of them are together the dialogue is kind of basic/uninteresting/mediocre since it's just bouncing off without any good spin.
Like it gets better at the end since you actually introduce some character into Anon's narration to actually make the bouncing of dialogue between them interesting even if it literally was mostly horniness but the beginning 'date' kind of felt a bit empty in how it described everything.

>>51960088
>Looking down at the vegetable curry Nene made you and seeing your friend's face

Here's a question for the thread: what are you greatest influences, both for the story you're working on (if any) or just as a writer in general?

>>51975199
Sopa de nekko uma delicia

>>51975562
Bukowski. As juvenile of an answer as that is I appreciated how raw his writing style was. One excerpt from ham on rye always stuck with me.
'"One day I'll be happy like any of you, you will see." and they kept dancing as I watched from outside.'
The second greatest influence I had was Gabriel Garcia Marquez. One hundred years of solitude is my all time favorite work of literature

>>51975562
For me, Madoka Magica is one of my largest influences. Not only because it's good but because now I'm absolutely hooked on the godhood ascension narrative. Part Six of JoJo recently awakened that in me, terrible part but I am a sucker for that stuff.

As for the current work I'm doing, it's a mix of Trigun, Claymore, Moribito (both the anime and the the actual book its based from), monster hunter and more. I'm pulling inspiration from a lot of different sources for this and I think that's why I have such a clear vision.

>>51964679
Got through this next. It was incredibly fluffy. I enjoyed how you wrote Towa's pronunciation of things she is unfamiliar with. I have to say I enjoyed the scenes with other parties and personalities involved more than the pure anon/towa scenes. Their interactions almost feel TOO smooth, which isn't a bad thing necessarily, since this screams your desire for pure devil fluff, which it does quite well. I also really enjoyed the little connecting link you put in to the Polka chapter, giving fox hag lovers like myself their good end. Although, now I'm tempted to squeeze a fluffy fennec scene into this arc somehow, which is gonna be overloaded with fluff with other hags, and also sex. The stresses of cohabitation are showcased pretty well so far, I'm interested to see where more of this goes. Thanks for the stories today, anon.

>>51975562
Christ where do I begin? I would probably say my greatest influence as a writer and my story belong to an RP group I was part of over 10 years ago. Within it I just gave my character the ability to make pacts with elemental spirits as a way to even the power scales with another member of the group who was getting too edgy and powerful. I ended up playing the roles of my own character plus the other 3 spirits I included, and I loved it. I draw a lot of inspiration involving fantasy magic and cast interaction from a lot of different places, primarily the tales of series, zatch bell, black clover. I also want to point out that easily my greatest influence for coming back to writing and getting the story I want to create out there is (You), the thread. The stories you all write, fantasy, fluff, smut, oneshots, they all helped bring me back to this hobby I love so much. I wouldn't be able to put these ideas into words without you. I hope I can return the favor somehow for some of you.

>>51975562
I don't really know. I've read a lot, and my writing sort of springs from how I think or what I think would be funny to read. My favorite manga is spirit circle.

>>51963349
>Flare will never tell you this the night of your 18th birthday after everyone else has gone to bed

>>51975562
Murakami, very strongly and shamelessly. At least how it gets translated to English. It's so plain, yet descriptive. Quite surgical, not flowery. It has a certain rhythm which is just fucking satisfying to me. If a character is cooking, he'll really run down the ingredients and the process involved (i think he owned a café or something, he likes to cook at least), and he makes a lot of reference to say, jazz music just because he loves it. But then he can go ultra surreal and a character's narrative might drift into a dream before you even notice wtf is happening. I haven't been around here in some months but these were the things I tried out;
Yandere Polka Wife, a simple little smutfic https://rentry.org/23evr
"A-chan", something more ambitious, and unfortunately I had a sort of creative crisis and I don't think I can continue it, but I'm proud of the first couple of chapters https://rentry.org/nko46

>>51975562
unironically Goblin Slayer
The fact it was all born from a failed TRPG campaign,written by a shmuck with 0 previous experience, using placeholder images such as lancer from Fate and despite all of that it still manages to tell an interesting story about a guy completely consumed by revenge finally finding light at the end of the tunnnel completely changed me
Kumo made me realize that all i needed was to go and write, and i can polish the edges as i go along

>>51975562
Visual novels and abridged series, mostly. When I'm planning out dialogue I tend to picture it in my head as a scene from one or the other depending on whether the tone is supposed to be more serious or lighthearted.

>>51975562
I'd have a hard time pinpointing their influences on me precisely (and sometimes a great writer's works may show you something you probably shouldn't attempt, because it's hard or specific), but I would have to answer Buddenbrooks, Hobbit+LotR, and the poetry of E.T.A. Hoffmann.

>>51978301
>all i needed was to go and write, and i can polish the edges as i go along
It really do be like that
Godspeed

>>51978167
that's really hot. I may actually write that at some point. Coming of age sex with an experienced older woman is so hot.

>>51978206
Based Murakami enjoyer. I just don't like how he writes the same kind of MC all the time, though I'll have to say that he tries to write outside of that mold from time to time.
Also, with the English translation, it's technically either the writing of Jay Rubin or Alfred Birnbaum. I'll say that they both capture him very well, though I prefer Birnbaum's translation of Norwegian Wood over Rubin's

>>51951607
Chapter length was good this time around. It felt like one consistent flow of events as well within a central plot line, which makes it a better read in that regard. You're also staying consistent in showcasing mannerisms and reactions to the various situations going on, so nice work! I honestly don't know how you're churning these out so fast, not that I'm complaining, but I suddenly feel like a slowmo now with my own pace. I gotta get cookin. Anyway, I think the singular chapter mindset you took with one works well with you, so try experimenting with that more going forward.

>>51964679
Wait is that Ayame the one from Our Cures? Did you just make a connected universe?

>>51978167
>Seaside resort, sensual, hormone raging SEX with the half-elf.
Yeah bros. I'm thinking it's time soon.

I'm this close to losing it. This is not a joke. I need a chuuba girlfriend.

>>51985469
Masturbate

>>51985783
That would only get rid of half of my problems

Hello?

>>51987333
currently writing kemono fiction, please stand by

>>51895790
Balsa: Chapter Ten

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6p6cBuhSHUKo79qpPhO8GIS7KhK-E4R24fl-GXHjcS96HmoQoCiED_scVZj-_b3o_rCE9vNAqBuf4/pub

This one is admittedly a bit shorter, but I think the content justifies the slightly lessened length. It's a lot packed into a little. I hope you enjoy, even if this ones just 15 pages.

>>51980905
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Glad to see I'm improving as well. I think my pace is owed to the fact that I usually make it a point to consume some sort of media beforehand and that gets my inspiration flowing.

>>51988983
God, you're just pumping these out aren't you? I love it.

>>51989266
I might be slowing down here soon. I have about 5-8 more chapters planned out plus whatever side content I come up with as I work. I haven't quite figured out where I want to take the story after that.

Nonetheless though, it's been fun writing these out. Can't remember a time I enjoyed writing this much since Building Block Doll. It's just one of those stories that comes once in a blue moon where everything just comes to you easily.

I dreamt I was a pirate on the seas, except instead of pirate things, I was engaging in reforestation by throwing pinecones into the ocean, whereupon a massive tree would erupt from the waves.
There was a critical lack of fox sex involved, unfortunately.

>>51988983
Still, your pace is nuts right now. I only managed to write 12.5k words of new HJ so far this week, and I think you probably doubled my word count with your recent releases. You're motivating me to work harder son. My inspiration is flowing, and my desire for hags and sword fights in immeasurable. This chapter is getting done soon.

>>51990600
Hags with swords...

>>51990330
Sounds pretty suggestive. But more importantly, how did Friend get my Sans shirt?

>>51990600
Glad I could help!

It truly goes to show that one of the best spices to any story is hags. Their superiority is proven yet again. There is no story a hag or preferably hags can't improve with their presence.

>>51990915
Except after I typed all that, I just realized I'm face to face with my greatest literary foe: Character appearance descriptions. When I describe a new chuuba, it can sometimes take me an hour of going back and forth between their reference sheet and my words to get it right. It also doesn't help that some of their clothing is fucking complicated and I don't know what the call half the things they wear sometimes. It's a major hump to get over, but I'll do it.

>>51990711
futa hags...

HAG SEX HAG SEX HAG SEX HAG SEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

>>51990600
Will HoloJourney have a (temporary?) futa hag?

>>51991431
Uhhh you know, my default answer was no, but then I thought of the possibility of double teaming a chuuba with a hag with a magic dong. Might be a funny detail to add in during a threesome, so I won't flat out dismiss it. I ain't writing about (You) playing with other D's though, even if they're just on a hag.

>>51987832
What kind of kemono?

>>51992025
I think we had the same idea there - it opens a lot of possibilities that aren't gay. You could even have a wholesome teaching sequence, with theory and/or practice.

>>51992871
>teaching your oshi to jack off

>>51992401
all i can say its that she's not originally a kemono

>>51992871
>it opens a lot of possibilities that aren't gay.

But what if we want the gay ones?

>>51992025
Would you do a strap-on?

>>51992871
I'll keep the idea in my hat for now, but first there's a lot of other scenarios I'd want to write first. I'm not sure who I would give a magical dong to be honest. Watame would be funny to do that with I think, and kinda track for their current true partner relationship, but it also might be incredibly confusing for Anon to witness her plow someone. Maybe that's part of the magic? Who knows, but it'll go on the list. I might just run into a situation where it just fits out of nowhere and it'll happen.

>>51993501
We got magic my dude. Mana can be used to create and harden into shapes. We don't need that caveman shit.

I'm already two pages in chapter 11 of Balsa. Only reason I have to stop is because of family stuff. I've never had this much fun writing a story since BBD. Expect another chapter tomorrow I'd say.

>>51993592
But what if the strap-on was something like a belt that turns on like a lightsaber?

>>51996686
NTA but that sounds dangerous. Also don't you think it is more fun if she also can enjoy it?

>>51996686
But mana can already change color and glow depending either on what element you draw it from, or your natural color. Polka's natural mana is purple, Flare's golden, and Watame's yellow, for examples. I suppose a belt would add a certain detail to the scene though. Like the thought that belts even get made for that stuff and are intricate enough for lights and effects.

>>51992915
My oshi jerking me and herself off at the same time would be pretty hot.

>>52000873
>Not giving your oshi a Dutch Rudder

>>51992977
Is this a fic about a chuuba that's racist against kemonomimi waking up and finding out they're a kemono now?

>>51998004

>>52004372
That image is the initial inspiration for making Polka's purple. Her specialty being conjuration also sorta fits with a purple aura, since purple doesn't always have a definitive color association with a primary element. I made Flare's gold since it's a sign of immense raw magical talent and potential, and Watame's is yellow since as a more supportive and background color, it fits well with her natural musical magic. Now you have some more unasked for HJ lore facts. Hope you enjoyed this segment.

why are you guys so gay

>>52006641
> Suddenly

>>52006873
he didn't say suddenly

>>52007209
Out of 10!

>>51996133
Nice, keep writing. What brought you back here?

>>52010920
Just got the fancy for it. I got inspired to write Sand Planet and that worked a lot of bugs out since I was so out of practice and now I'm writing this.

Feels amazing to write again. Forgot how much fun it is when you're really passionate about the thing you're doing. Maybe I just needed a break for a while.

Forgive me everyone...I've started another WIP...

>>51964679
that Ayame... don't tell me...

>>52004058
nope, just a girl who is already happy and collared

>>52011804
Yeah, she has a cock...

>>52012239
Nice

>>52011762
The chastity spell has already been cast on your testicles.

>>52012244
dammit, i knew it

>>51965083
>This likely won't be another series and instead a two parter, with three installments at max.
At least you are planning on continuing it. Though i do wonder.. since both of them named anon, how would you tackle it when the time comes and the polka anon met with towa anon?

>>52015885
They immediately come to blows like fighting game characters in a mirror match. The winner then subsumes the loser to become one being.

>>52018561
Which one is you?

>>52018561
Me on the right?

The time of hags is over.

>>52023742
Everyone will turn into a hag with time.

>>51895819
Mumei autistic handjob

https://vocaroo.com/1k65pCJOkCCi

>>52005018
Can you tell us about the possibility of future hag pregnancies in HJ?

>>52024513
I hate that this is somehow getting me hard. Cockshock so severe she has to get drunk to get over it. What the fuck.

> extremely horny
> want to write smut
> choose first idea that comes to mind
> write 15 words
> stare at words
> feel extremely lonely
> erase whole thing
> continue being horny

>>52024621
Let's just say the miscarriage loss arc is gonna be great.

>>52025238
Same bro, I'm pretty burnt out on writing smut.

>>52024513
WOW dude, good job

>>52025238
at this point I just open Tavern whenever I need a quick nut

So how's the wip coming together anon?
Bonus Question: Do you remember the first fic you made for this place? Was it any good?

>>51974068
I think you just nailed one of my biggest fears when it came to this chapter. The entire time as I was writing this I was worried that the lack of plot and "purpose" in the story would make it flat, since it's basically just a few half-connected scenes of vanilla Towa fluff. I don't think this will be as much of an issue in the upcoming chapters since I'll be throwing Kanata into the mix and adding a major goal to work towards. Thanks for bringing this to my attention, I didn't notice it as much in the editing but now that you point it out it becomes painfully obvious.
>>51976094
Thanks for reading. As I mentioned to the other Anon, I hope the problems with the Anon/Towa scenes won't be too rough in the next chapter.
>since this screams your desire for pure devil fluff
Yes, I desire this dumb devil very, very much. Good luck on your stories.
>>51981112
>>52011804
Yup, it's the same slut that we already know and love, fast forwarded a couple years. I decided to set this story, the Polka one and Our Cures in the same universe just as a fun experiment, but it's all just cameos and will have no actual relevance to the plot. They're all standalone stories.

>>51969832
Thank you for reading, again. I'm glad you liked this one, I wasn't sure if it'd be a very heavy hitter and it's also good to hear the beginning wasn't as bad as I thought it'd be. I have plans for gen 5 to turn up in the sequel, and there will of course be lots of Polka teasing.
>>52015885
I don't really plan for the other 'Anons' to interact, since that'd make things unnecessarily complicated. As I said before, they're all standalone stories with a few cameos. Thanks for the read, I hope you enjoy the next part.

>>52029762
Still working, same as usual. But at least it's a new chapter now, and I'm not editing past chapters

a writer writes, right

>>52031118 (me)
>bonus question
The Scent of Lavender. I guess it was good.

>>52029762
1k new words. Might be a bit hard to focus on writing for a bit though, now that shit's going down.

>>52029762
Fucking Fubuki in the Ass. It was right after Coco's graduation and I wanted to contribute something to stir morale; but damn, was it garbage.

>>52024621
>Can you tell us about the possibility of future hag pregnancies in HJ?
I don't want to give too much away, but lets just say that down the road, there will be an entire adventurer's guild worth of mixed children, who all want to kick ass like their dad, mom, and non blood related aunts, these kids will have a lot of aunts in that regard.

>>52029762
So far so good. I wrote the first half of the next chapter and I'm going to add some meat to it then continue on with the next. This'll probably be the longest chapter thusfar.

Yeah. Apple of Her Eye. Never figured people would take to that lol. Got the affectionate nickname of Abuseanon after that.

>>52029762
Not terrible. I got probably 3-4 more scenes for this chapter to go I think. I'm still deciding how much more content this chapter should include, but I'm gonna be out doing other stuff today, so I can mull it over there.
Bonus: I'm still writing the first fic I made for this place. Some people seem to like it, despite how monstrously long it's become. I sure as fuck like it at least.

>>52032687
>anon takes a break from adventuring to take care of his pregnant hag wives
Sounds great. I hope their won't be jealousy and bitch fights over Anon, they all deserve to be happy and enjoy his company and cock together.

>>52033215
>jealousy and bitch fights over Anon
oh nooooo that would be terriblleeeee. A fiery and icy elf both spitting racist remarks at each other and trying to assert their role as anon's #1 elf. What a cruel and horrible world that must be to live in.

>>52033350
Fair, it would be fun if it's an open conflict that anon resolves with some kind of contest or in a Solomon-like way.
I was mainly afraid of prolonged drama, with passive aggressiveness and tensions threatening the group's cohesion.

Off to the land of Nod.

>>52033939
There will be some growing pains here and there, but nothing long termed or anything that won't ultimately be put aside for the better of the group. These girls will go through immense and dangerous trials together, and while they love the same man, they also form a bond that's unbreakable in the end.

>>51895783
polka cute

Has anyone ever wrote a story with Polka doing her copulation tie? If not, there's a suggestion for you >>51895819

>>52035604
It'll be a while till things get freaky with the funny fennec, but I plan to at least make that a central element of the love making.

>>52035604
>have an orgy
>Polka ruins it when she locks down the cock

>>52036198
That's pretty hilarious.
>Polka is clamped on your cock and no one else can get a turn
>the rest of the girls go out to do something else for the next 4 or so hours
>come back and force their turn with you anyway when Polka finally lets you free

Fics for this feel, anons?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xw3-lZH7GB8

>>52036198
>ruins

>>52035815
I look forward to it.

Miori kidnapping and having her way with a fan, and keeping him in her basement yandere style

>>51895819

>>52036916
What are you looking for? Chuuni action fics, or just fics with cool Iroha action?

>>52024513
This is actually amazing. I can't even imagine the autism that went in to collecting all those sound bites. I'm kneeling.

>>52039004
Cool Iroha action, mainly. Though I wouldn't mind chuuni action stuff too

>>52039218
Not many fics with Iroha, though the last two fics in the archive involving her does have some cool action with her.
>Starsword Infinity
>Dark Medicine
As for cool chuuni action I'll have to throw my recommendation to
>The Hero's Fall

>>52039794
It's like she's just begging to have a dick shoved in there

>>52039535
Oooh! Thank you, anon. I'll add these to my reading list.

>>52039844
yeah, mine

I heard that touching grass is a good way to help refill your creative juices so I spent last night in the woods. I came up with a very good idea for my WIP's climax but idk if it was worth 100 bug bites lol.

>>52039794
the smoothing of the chin triangle is nice but everything else is a strict downgrade

>>52039794
Is this her main look from now on? It looks a lot less cute and doesn't fit her voice.

>>52039794
pinching fubuki's chubby cheeks and rubbing my smelly dick across them.

>>52041161
go wash your dick anon

>>52040832
>>52040968
meh,its gonna be like migo. people initially hated her new sexo model, but then they learned to love it

>>52039794
Plastic surgery friend...
She's going to get a boobjob next...

>>52041271
i liked miko's new model immediately and i don't like this

>>52039794
Not into the moe blobification desu. Sad to see.

>>52041216
Why? its not like it hurts or that I've got an infection or anything.
I do genuinely need a shower though.

>>52040549
You know what they say. Collect bits of the world, and give it back through your writing.

>>52039794
I like it in motion a lot better, still images will take some getting used to but I like all the cute faces she can make

>>52041971
Can she still stick out her tongue?

>>52041971
>>52042006
3.0 is supposed to have an ahegao. I'm waiting for that.

>>52039794
>Fubuki before and after sucking the souls of men to regain her youth.

>>52041971
yeah old model looks good when still, but its kinda janky (but it had charm with said jankyness).
Im feeling exactly how i felt when Azki changed models. og was clunky and the new is 100% better but it was cute in its own way

>>51964679
bless thy soul. I was about to lose hope! All around a really good chapter - I definitely enjoyed the read. However, I do agree with the others that it feels a bit lacking in parts.
I mean, one of your big talents is writing smart and witty banter, no question about it - Our Cures was just superb in that regard. Considering that, the relationship of Anon and Towa here feels a bit too innocent, sterile and... formal? Making it really corny at times. In my mind, Towa would've hugely profited from being a more confident retard - not admitting to her innocence and getting caught up in the consequences (drinking sea water, having to go to the toilet, even the kiss).
You did pick up on making Towa try to act more 'devilish' later in the chapter, but that could've been a major plot point from the start. This way, she was just really shy, unknowing and apologetic for the longest time, which she doesn't strike me as in her streams at all.
You're also very good at the scene descriptions, but it feels like you get a bit lost in them. I mean, you've written almost 14k words and drawn a very vivid mental image for us, but from what I can tell, the only reason why the two protags like each other is because "Towa sexy" and "Anon nice".
I also have mixed feelings about the cameos. I thought them neat at first, but as it went on, it almost felt a bit too 'on the nose' - a bit too interwoven, especially in Polka's case. I actually read 'A Crash Course on Fennecs and Love' first and I have to say that reading about Polka in 'Deal with the Devil' actually took away from her character in her own story. Which leads me to…

>>51965083
All in all cute and fluffy, just how I like it. I’m not too much of a fan when it comes to Anon’s borderline nihilistic outlook on life, but kudos to you for actually giving him a bit more depth of character. You can also use that as a base for further character development in later chapters, as he continues to hang out with Polka.
Speaking of which, Polka is cute and likable. The self-doubts and constant apologizing fit her and the setting very well.
However, I will repeat my point from earlier: the information I got from 'Deal with the Devil' left a bit of an aftertaste in my mouth and it colors the whole interaction with biker-anon as one big rebound instead of the steamy, passionate love I thought it to be. I mean, that could be a plot point in itself, but I don’t know if that’s what you really wanted to go for.
Also… Jesus Christ, they jump each others bones fast! I mean, I don’t mind - that’s what I want to happen after all, but that almost came out of left field, really! Would’ve liked a bit more development in that regard, maybe?

In conclusion, I realize that my criticism reads kind of harsh, now that I look back on it. I don’t want to beat you down by any means - I just want take the time and be plain and honest because I love your works and I KNOW you can make the next chapters even better. The later chapters of Our Cures are among my absolute favorite, after all. Thanks again for the amazing volume of entertainment - I’m looking forward to whatever you put out next.

>>51895790
Balsa: Chapter 11

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTEddLvllHTKbSvAnMtLHlJph2Qx4T6PJeauZoXebNCebUoJE8wSBNqhYFIrgePimwgvJKMNZtrDug1/pub

Everything sucks and everyone's sad. I hope you enjoy it.

>>51895819
Gura piss fic.

>>52039794
The new model doesn't look like her papa's artstyle at all. More like generic moe anime.

why's it so dead

>>52049968
I don't have time to write. I'm watching an archive of Tenma playing Ender Lilies

>>52049968
I was reading a Yuri manga. It just finished on them fucking. So now I gotta look for more Yuri.

>>52039794
I actually like this new model a lot. It is significantly more emotive and rounds off some of the features I never liked - I'm happy her 1.0 chin is gone forever. I wonder what motivated this model change? Wish I was good enough to understand the whole stream rather than tidbits.

I think her new mouth really needs teeth when it opens up wide, though, even if it's just fangs.

>>52043910
>Bildschirmfoto
Cute Gerkonbu

>>52050739
She mentioned it was because her face was different in her first outfit compared to her newer ones. Her ears too. And so for consistency she had to change, or maybe she wanted to change. Both, likely.

>>52051232
Oh, that's why, huh? I thought she was just going to roll with the discrepancies forever. Whatever; I'm happy to see more of her default outfit in the future. I wonder how fast they'll wheel out her alternative outfits. The model's so expressive, I imagine it'll take a lot of work...

>>51895819
Being sexually abused by Suisei because (You) look like a shota despite being an adult who's just turned 18 but are cursed with being a midget.

Shark in the Screen Episode 1: "Gura Sells Her Soul" will premiere in 4 hours. This is the Hololive AI animatic drama I've been working on the past two months. The length is over 26 minutes long.

https://youtube.com/watch?v=AXc2BKKIJHs

>>52051894
This except you're in your 50s

>>52046608
It made me sad :( But I still enjoyed it in a way.

>>52039218
I'll give you cool Iroha action at some point, but it'll be a short while till she has a chance to come back into the story.
I also have a cute frenemies date planned for her too. Honor bound samurai isn't gonna know what hit her when she experiences the fluff I got planned.

>>52046608
Normal bard anons, it's our time soon. Time to rise up. All in all, I enjoyed the chapter, the somber feeling was present through most of it, and it worked well as a licking your wounds kinda phase.

>>52051850
The newer outfits don't require work. This rework she received makes her look exactly like her suit outfit does.

>>52062439
>This rework she received makes her look exactly like her suit outfit does.
No, it doesn't. The face is completely different as is the lack of bold outlining.

>>52062790
Ok lol

>>51895819
your classmate / work colleague Fubuki shows up one morning all giddy and cheerful after mustering up enough courage to get an appointment at the salon for a little make-over. Nothing too fancy, just a bit of freshening up, new haircut and the like.
However, her fragile confidence is quickly shattered when she overhears the other girls gossiping over lunch how they “liked her old look better” and that the new look is “too gaudy”.
At least there’s still (you) who by some dumb circumstance slips up and calls her cute in the hallway (the truth). Good luck with rebuilding the self-esteem of the crying fox girl now huddled in your arms!

>>52064178
That's not how that works, why would she cry in your arms? You barely know her

>>52064178
Better story is she starts getting bullied for it and you ever so slowly start helping her out until one day you stab one of her bullies and run with her out into the woods never to be seen again. That is, until 7 months later when a police officer finds you in a wood cabin with a pregnant teenager Fubuki by your side

>>52064743 (me)
There's so many ideas boiling in my head right now with the concept of protecting Fubuki from bullies in a shitty school setting. If they weren't whole entire scenes I would post them.

>>52058083
Aw hell yeah, anon! Nice. Looking forward to it.

>>52065067
>If they weren't whole entire scenes I would post them.
Come on anon, some of the better stories that have come out of this place started out as greentext chains effectively making up an outline for a fic.
Post em.

>>52065477
> Your classmate Fubuki isn't particularly popular, but you occasionally glanced at her from time to time. You weren't popular either, but not to the same extent.
> One day she comes to school with a completely different haircut. It looks a bit out of left field, but you like it.
> The other girl classmates however start mocking her for some reason. Not like you ever understood them anyway. They are hyenas.
> Fubuki admits to having seen the haircut in an anime and wanted to try it out.
> Gets seriously made fun of for it.
> She sits down at her desk looking like she is about to cry.
> You pay it no mind. You do feel bad, but this sort of stuff is common in this school.
> Next day you arrive in class and see that Fubuki's desk is completely vandalized.
> Ignore it.
> Fubuki arrives in class late for some reason.
> Sees her desk.
> Teacher tells her to sit down.
> Fubuki quietly complies.
> You spot her at the cafeteria.
> Someone trips her over as she is carrying her lunch tray.
> Gets covered in milk and gets made fun of.
> After that Fubuki stopped eating in the cafeteria.
> Overhear from girl classmates that she was eating in the bathroom by herself and that they did something to her.
> ...
> Fubuki doesn't return to class after lunch break.
> Next day she arrives with a different school uniform. It looks old, since it doesn't fit well on her. You're not sure why she would wear something like that.
> One of the girls trip her on her way to her desk.
> Teacher tells students to stop joking around cause class is about to start.
> Fubuki is bruised from her fall, her knee is bleeding.
> ...
> Just ignore it.
> The next day, you arrive early. Her desk is vandalised again.
> ...
> Grab school supplies and clean up the stuff as much as you can.
> Other students start telling you off, asking you what the hell you're doing.
> One of the guy bullies pushes you around, asking if she's your girlfriend or what.
> Fubuki arrives in class soon after, just as you're done cleaning.
> Tell them to give you a break then go to return the school supplies.
> Someone sticks a piece of gum on Fubuki's tail as you're leaving class. She doesn't notice it.
> You hear them holding in their cackles from the hall.
> ...
> Return to class and see someone putting glue on your seat.
> ...
> Leave class and go slack off.
> Return just before lunch break.
> See Fubuki leaving class with her homemade bento, going the opposite way from the cafeteria, likely into the bathroom.
> ...
> Call out to her.
> She freezes in her tracks. Fubuki looks scared.
> Tell her you know a spot where she can eat in peace.
> Say it is fine if she doesn't want to come.
> Fubuki takes a while to decide. She must think it's some sort of prank again.
> ...
> Tell her she has gum stuck to her tail.
> Fubuki looks surprised.
> Take off your jacket and wrap it around her waist to hide the gum.
> Tell her you'll help her get it off later, but that first she should come eat.
> Fubuki hesitates, but finally accepts.

>>52052510
"Gura Sells Her Soul" is out now! This is Part 1 of "Shark in the Screen", a five-part Hololive animatic drama series using AI-generated art.

https://youtu.be/AXc2BKKIJHs

Story Synopsis: "Hololive vtuber Gawr Gura is on a business trip to Japan to prepare for her company's biggest 3D concert of the year. During her stay, she finds herself unwittingly thrust into the unfeeling and cutthroat world of corporate vtubing. Gura must navigate the delicate relationships and competing interests of her managers, genmates, family, and personal inner demon, but as the barrier between her virtual avatar and her true self slowly falls apart, she begins to question the very nature of her own identity."

Finally done now I can go touch grass, before starting episode 2.

>>52043910
Hey, thanks for the detailed review. I definitely see what you mean by the interactions being sterile, it’s something I noticed as well, but it was harder creating an interesting dynamic like I did in Our Cures compared to this one. In that story they hate each other so witty dialogue isn’t too hard, but in this one they’re both ok with each other and a bit shy, so dialogue ends up being more innocent. I’ll try thinking of ways to spruce up their dynamic.
>not admitting to her innocence and getting caught up in the consequences (drinking sea water, having to go to the toilet, even the kiss)
Would you mind elaborating on this? Would it have been better if Towa drank the seawater and got sick?
As for Towa, I plan to have her grow throughout the story. I absolutely agree with you - she’s strong willed and doesn’t have much problem meeting new people. But three years ago I remember she was more shy and lacked confidence (although maybe not to the point that she is in this story), and I plan for her to grow into what she is now by the end.

It definitely could be a rebound for Polka, who knows? I tried to push the idea that she’s getting desperate and has already fallen for a lot of guys in the past. This will be a major plot point in the sequel.
As for the ending, that’s kind of like… my fetish, if it counts as one. No slow build up, no words or verbal consent. Just a mutual understanding of horniness between two people who just met. I experienced something similar in the past and it changed me forever. I won’t spoil anything but I plan to address that as well and slow things down for a better development.

>In conclusion, I realize that my criticism reads kind of harsh, now that I look back on it. I don’t want to beat you down by any means - I just want take the time and be plain and honest
No, not at all. I really appreciate the lengthy feedback, these are what help me improve. Thanks a lot of reading.

>>52067303
>Would you mind elaborating on this? Would it have been better if Towa drank the seawater and got sick?
NTA but I think they meant it more in a narrative sense rather than in a specific event sense. I.e there should have been friction/disagreement/misunderstanding to give the initial 'date' some (narrative) conflict rather than for them being like a podcast where everyone agrees with each other.

>>52066993
>26 minutes
I shall give it a watch within today. I was just waiting for the premiere to end so I could see it from the very beginning. Exciting stuff

>>52066966
And then you ask her to shit in your mouth. A romantic comedy.

>>52066966
For some reason this just makes me think of Fubuki going "Carrie" on the rest of the school with (You) making a futile effort to try and stop her. It then ends with her dying in your arms confessing her love before passing away.

>>52067303
>No slow build up, no words or verbal consent Just a mutual understanding of horniness between two people who just met
Amen brother, I LOVE that shit sometimes. I'd love to take a crack at writing that myself at some point, but I'll need to wait for a good chuuba to show up that it'll work for.

>>52072488
The thread was already bumped, go take your fur shit somewhere else, fox fucker

>>52068087
Yup, that makes sense. I'll be sure to work on it.
>>52069633
My Bruzza!

>>52072952
Now who should be the lucky lady? My problem is all the chuubas I have planned relations for have a lot of buildup for them. With the exception of one pair where it'll finally be a matter of "the tongue is mightier than the sword", but maybe that situation is kinda close?

>>52073932
What about Chloe? Suddenly pinning her to the bed as she immediately begins freeing herself from her clothes could be extremely hot. If not Chloe, I can actually see Mr. Koro being like that, surprisingly. The difference is she would be way more violent and dominant about it.

>>52072952
>>52073932
>>52075239
> Off topic images

you have wrote more of your WiP today, right anon? Right?

>>52075514
I will, after I decide if I should buy Risk of Rain 2 or not. And after I see if I like Castlevania or not. And after I browse /vt/ mindlessly for two hours. And after I watch 50 more Vtuber clips. Actually, I guess I'll write after I wake up tomorrow...

>>52056072
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Can't wait to show you what's next.

>>52059764
Glad I pulled it off well enough. I was worried it got a bit too dramatic at certain points. It can be difficult to balance sadness and levity at times. I'm very glad you're enjoying it.

>>52075514
Yes, Pekola.

>>52075514
I don't have a wip but I wrote something ~1000 words today yes.

>>52075239
You know, you might be onto something there. I already established a slow building relationship of sorts between Anon and Chloe already, and how the orca is currently perplexed why the anon is even on her mind so much might lead into a scene like that perfectly. Like they end up together through unexpected circumstances again, while the thoughts and actions they have had about the other in the past boil to the surface, and they form another partnership out of necessity at first, and right in the middle of it, they admit the attraction to themselves and just go at it.

>>51922662
>>51990330
>>52034167
Anchoring >>51895790

>>52082750
how is this a story

>>52082780
Awfully discriminatory to imply that a weeks-long ARG about the inability to dream is not a story, for shame.

>>52082750
>>52082946
>>51895790
It's not a story and shouldn't be anchored.

>>52083174
Are you the writer? It's not for you to decide.

>>52083284
Ok dude.

>>52083507
So you are the writer? And you admit that it's not a story?
After considering your opinion and looking back on things, those posts don't even seem to be on-topic for the thread! Curious!

>>52075514
This tilted ogey makes me uncomfortable

>>51895819
A chuuba on her hands and knees begging, pleading, with tears in her eyes to suck your cock

>>52087144
Who?

If I had my way in life I would have my mouth surgically attached to Fubuki's vulva a la 'The Human Centipede' so I could ceaselessly and tirelessly eat her out.

>>52089222

>>52089401
It's my one sole wish in life.

To whoever made this post, thank you. Any time I start to doubt myself I pull this thing out and reread it and it helps keep me going

>>52089579

>>52087531
A chuuba

>>52066993
That’s cool.

>>52090164
All of them

New thread
>>52090223

>>52090067
You got a link to the full video?