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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>51551031

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were four stories posted in the last thread.

HoloJourneys: (Across Deserts to the Oceans Blue, A Shining Star Debuts) Chapter 32: A Day Filled With Pride: Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, Botan, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff):>>51584656

CM - Do it stank?: Tags: wedgie, phase connect, Pippa, Lumi:>>51605164

Balsa: Chapters 3 and 4: Tags: (you), Botan, Nene, Polka, medieval fantasy, adventure:>>51708461

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Going to the beach with your girlfriend Nazuna and she does increasingly erotic actions to keep your eyes on her and off the other girls at the beach:>>51588978

Destroying Nazuna's relationship with her boyfriend through subterfige, public ridicule, and gaslighting until her hair turns white from the stress, and she fucks me on the rebound only for her to realize I am the only oneshe can rely on:>>51589358

Playing a harmless prank on your broski, selen (Breeding her):>>51602649

A creature that can replicate Chuubas is let lose on the studio.:>>51605149

Hypnotizing a chuuba into graduation.:>>51618225

Helping Aqua put a bit of muscle in her arms so she can open a plastic bottle on her own.:>>51627494

Noel calls bullshit on Iroha's claim that a Japanese katana, having been folded ten thousand times, could cut clean through a western longsword. They settle it with a "guaranteed replies.gif" thread on /a/: whoever gets the most (You)s will be considered as having the correct opinion.:>>51628638

Zoomer breeding:>>51630158

Lui impregnation. I need more pregnant hags. I am not sated.:>>51640535

Slave Fubuki but her master is a kind and gentle soul who'll never hurt her.:>>51690236

anon tries to molest choco, but shes into it way to much.:>>51695842

You befriend Fubuki and before long find yourself in a relationship with her. The next step is meeting her family, which consists only of her mother and her younger sister, in the Youkai world. However, when you get to her home and meet the two, you find it to be a lot harder to continue being faithful to your girlfriend Fubuki, as both her mother and younger sister don't hesitate to get in all kinds of strange situations when Fubuki turns her back.:>>51717581

>> No.51744140

Gonna be a rough 24 hours lads, hang in there.

>> No.51744235

>>51744140
I highly doubt Gura is going to miss her birthday stream if that's what you're referring to.

>> No.51744756

>>51744235
Shitposting is going to be abundant even if she does stream.

>> No.51746632

Is there a scene or some plot element from your current WIP or one of your fics that you wanted to include but didn't or couldn't?

>> No.51747675

>>51746632
I really wanted to include the Omsk bird in some dialog but couldn't quite squeeze it in.

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>>51742316
Three words of the thread. Use them to inspire whatever you want as long as it's chuuba related
>Fight
>Physical
>Justice
For extra context, the table these were rolled off of was called Character Motivations

>> No.51747922

>>51747867
>as long as it's chuuba related
How about you go suck a cock while we talk about Conan?

>> No.51749816

>>51747922
My oshi is a big fan of Conan (she wants to jump his bones).

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>> No.51750516

>>51749819
That mushroom? Me.

>> No.51751519

>>51750516
In the uncensored/alt full version I think it is implied that it is Koyori's and she is doing a quizz, but I'm not entirely sure.

>> No.51753085

>>51751519
where does one find that?

>> No.51753265

>>51749819
>Have both of these girls blindfolded on stream
>Koyori takes out an oddly-shaped but still presentable shitake mushroom
>Korone or Okayu or both of them do down on that thing, thinking it's a dick. The way they do it is so desperate and shocking that it's like sucking dick will be the last thing they do
>Koyori herself, who thought they would get flustered by this, is shocked beyond belief. The audience too.
>"Gu-Guys...?"
>Korone partly undoes her blindfold. "Yeah? What is it, Koyori?"
>"U-Uh... that mushroom..."
>"Mushroom? You mean this isn't a-- oh."

>> No.51753483

>>51753265
>”I thought you guys were gay?”

>> No.51754383

>>51742316
>BoNePoL(k)a

>> No.51754708
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>HJ Edition
>The painful reminder that Lamy's intro isn't for 2-3 more arcs
my wonderful button popping snow elf, it's not fair. I want her NOW.
>Also thinking about my pace and how things might progress, the arc might start around the winter and holidays
This slightly dulls the pain.

>> No.51755548

>>51753483
Imagine the sense of betrayal and disappointment Koyori would've felt lmao

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>>51755548
She would just go find someone to rape to deal with the anger.

>> No.51755895

>>51753483
>I thought it was yours.
>What?
>What.

>> No.51756472

>>51755789
The spacing between those eyes is disturbing. I hate this art with a fucking passion.

>> No.51756562

>>51755789
Yeah, me

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>>51756472
Fine. Here's another rapey Koyori. I have a decent supply of them. She is a hag of an almost unrivaled aggressive nature. You can either be raped, or rape her back.
Bonus option: Break her into being a cuckqueen and plow Chloe right in front of her.

>> No.51757036

>>51755895
KEK

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>>51756925
Joshukuns insist she doesn't want to be dominant, she wants to have her dominance stripped. I disagree heavily. She is literally the perfect candidate for a femdom rape fic.

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>>51757091
I get the impression that she wants both, but will initiate by being the former. At least I'm gonna play it out like she loves both.
Damn I can't wait for the inevitable Koyori x Anon physical reunion. A pent up, sexually starved coyote will stop at nothing from getting that sweet science juice straight from the source this time.
If it's not obvious, I'm going to breed this deranged hag.

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>>51757091
She's a good candidate for a lot of roles. She can be good, she can be evil, she can be a goofy weirdo, she can be a love interest, she can be a rapist, she can be the rapee, she can be a rapist who gets instant-defeated into being the rapee, etc. etc.
Koyori is a pretty versatile character.

>> No.51757794

As the stream began, the girls were all dolled up in their sexiest lingerie, signalling to the audience that it was going to be a wild night. The chat was already filled with people begging for their oshi to pick them, but little did they know that the girls had something else in store for them.

Selen was the first to take the stage, teasing the camera with a sultry smile before stripping down to nothing but her heels. She beckoned the audience closer, telling them to come up to the screen and get a better look. As the viewers leaned in, hoping for a glimpse of her perfect body, she suddenly pushed the camera away and laughed.

"Did you really think you were going to get to see me naked? How pathetic," she said, her tone venomous.

Enna was up next, twirling around in her lingerie and making the viewers drool. When they begged her to pick them as her NTR partner, she simply smirked and began stroking her pussy. "Why would I want any of you when I have real men who can satisfy me?" she taunted.

Nina was the last to come on screen, and the atmosphere shifted as soon as she did. She wasn't wearing lingerie like the others, but a tight black latex suit that hugged her curves and made her look like a dominatrix. When she spoke, her voice was commanding and alluring all at once.

"Welcome, my little playthings. Tonight, you will be watching as we take real men and show you what a real NTR session looks like. You are nothing but our audience, and you will be lucky to witness it."

With that, she motioned for the men to come forward, and a group of six black men entered the room. They were all well-endowed, muscular, and completely submissive to the girls' commands. The audience could see the men's bulges through their pants, and it was clear that they were more than willing to please the girls.

One by one, the girls picked their partners and took them to different parts of the room, away from the camera. The men moaned and groaned as the girls teased them, using their bodies to get them to the edge of climax before suddenly stopping and leaving them begging for more.

Meanwhile, the audience was left to watch and masturbate, unable to tear their eyes away from the screen. Some felt humiliated and degraded, others were turned on by the sheer power the girls held over them. But no matter what they felt, they couldn't deny that they wanted nothing more than to be in those men's shoes.

The stream seemed to go on forever, the girls and their partners switching places and positions until everyone had been thoroughly satisfied. Finally, the girls emerged from the shadows, all of them grinning at the camera with a sense of triumph.

"Did you enjoy the show?" Selen asked, her voice teasing.

"We hope you learned something today about what it really means to be NTR'd," Enna added, a wicked look in her eye.

Nina simply smiled and blew a kiss to the camera before the stream abruptly ended. The audience was left to deal with the aftermath of their own desires, their minds reeling from what they had just witnessed.

Many knew that they would never be able to experience something like that, but they found comfort in the knowledge that the Nijisanji girls were living out their wildest fantasies. And who knows, maybe one day they would get their turn.

>> No.51757955

>>51757794
I'm pretty sure the /trash/ thread will appreciate this better than the vanilla plebians of /wg/.

>> No.51758108

>>51757955
Implying that's not where i posted it kek

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I don't remember if I ever mentioned it, but I've had an area harassing me on and off for more than a couple months now. A virtual novel where you join Hololive as a manager to groom the talents into a relationship with you while trying not to get ratted out and fired. Is this an idea worth a damn?

>> No.51758741

>>51758554
Only if there is a part where you have to play well enough to fuck them quietly, so that nobody notices.

>> No.51758856

>>51758554
We don't have enough slimy protagonists who would do morally questionable things to fuck a girl. I say go for it. It might be a little harder to write because you'd need to still make the protagonist someone people would want to read about, but if you execute it well that'd be a quality fic. Also
>that pic
Holy fuck, I'm not even past 25, but I still feel an intense need to correct her because of this.

>> No.51758881

>>51758554
Every idea sounds good in vacuum anon. Though if you do decide to pursue this you ideally should pick a scope and maybe test out a couple of VN making software to cut your teeth and see if actually making it a VN appeals to you.
Its never been easier to make a VN than right now since AI art means you don't really need to worry about finding art but this would still be a massive undertaking.
Anyway I think it sounds like a fun concept but you need to make like an outline first to see how big or small you want to project to be.

>> No.51758994

>>51758554
Depends what way you sell the grooming.
I'm down for evil protags.

>> No.51759093

>>51758881
>test out a couple of VN making software to cut your teeth
As a person, I prefer to pick up a project, give it my all and create the best I can at the time, and then leave it after experiencing it. It'd probably be the same for this.
>make like an outline first to see how big or small you want to project to be
I was considering making one chuuba per gen, but I'd probably need to tune even that back. Especially given I know next to nothing of early gens.

>> No.51759215

>>51757091
I think she’s a great candidate for a spanking, but one that she asks (You) for, and one where she gets whiny and bratty if you’re not doing it hard enough. It’s not a “she’s been bad so you put her in her place” thing, but rather a “Anooooon~ I’ve been a bad girl… I need to be out in my place~” thing.

>> No.51759478 [DELETED] 

>>51757794
That was a mouth-shittingly good story. Next time no nijiniggers, though.

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>>51759093
Anon please take the time to actually plan out this project. While you can get around making short docs by writing by the seat of your pants, a VN really isn't something you can make like that.
If you genuinely want to take a shot at making a VN you really should at least plan the scope of what you want to make and how you're going to get everything made.

>> No.51761518

Kind of want to write something about a girl being corrupted by western whore vtubers after that panel photo went viral but can't decide on who it should be.

Like she's at the same con as them, she's nervous but they're super friendly and they help her feel at ease, she hangs out with them in the evening and before she knows it they've got her wasted and are peer pressuring her into blowing her fans at an "unofficial" meet up.

>> No.51761643

>>51761518
You leave seething femanon alone!!

>> No.51761654

>>51737765
I'm finding writing in two chapter installments allows me to slow the pace a bit while not feeling like a chapter was just wasted on setting up the one after it.

>>51729990
Fair. I reread it and I see what you mean. Sixteen pages is long for me but this definitely could've been a single chapter. I guess the rule of thumb from now on will have to be one arc should be one chapter, at least in the beginning before I kick off the main plot. That'll be coming soon so I hope you stay tuned.

>> No.51761905

>>51761518
What photo?

>> No.51761906

>>51758554
Check out Huniepop: Studio. It's a more fleshed out version, but you could do something like in Renpy fairly easily

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>>51759850
Fuck that, so many VNs end in the planning stage. Seen it time and time again. Drafting documents rot. I'm telling you, part of what takes you through the slog of a VN project is seeing stuff move around in action.
Just jump into it and monkey around.

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>>51742385
Self-indulgent request for the Nijifriends among us… the story leading up to/following picrel

>> No.51762245 [DELETED] 

>>51761905
>>/vt/thread/51607255#p51607255

>> No.51762443

>>51762059
>pic
Dullachan, right? I'm gonna take your word on it.

>> No.51762621

>>51757499
I think it's because there's good synergy between her 'lore' and character where the whole 'chemistry fox working for X' plus her personality means she can easily fit into pretty much any setting with minimal alterations needed.

>> No.51762924

>>51762621
>fox

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>>51762924
Please excuse my kitsune bias anon.

>> No.51763471

>>51762443
There are times where I do make a small planning doc to keep track of things. But it's usually a short list of when certain scenes happen, so that I don't wind up with plot holes. Or mapping out love values and flags because I just threw them in there without any sense of how to balance them (fun fact, most of the Millie festival scene and Reimu spooky scene was added post-scripting and staging for game balance).
I would say the advice on planning the scope is good advice, and that you should make it as short as possible with your narrative. Don't make it "managable" or "reasonable" make it short. This is because first time devs need to spend a lot of time just learning the systems, wrangling the art, and generally how they work. Only once you complete a project will you realize how easy it all was

>> No.51763713

>>51703785
An anon requested this thread to be archived

>> No.51763793

>>51763471
>don't make it "managable" or "reasonable" make it short
What exactly is the difference?

>> No.51764048

>>51763713
>>51742333

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>>51763793
Because what you think is reasonable is actually ends up being too much to handle. Especially in the context of what he wants to do, with presumably 5+ girls.
Even Ninisanni Scenario ended up being short, if you look at the individual routes. I didn't know if there was interest, I didn't know if the EN branch would even be around by the time of release.
But now that I have the assets and people interested in seeing more, I'm free to make longer, more fulfilling routes for the girls.

>> No.51764267

>>51763793
NTA but I think they mean you're probably overestimating how much work you're going to get done while you still haven't wrangled the tools you're going to use so if you're making a project for the first time it's best to aim for something small while you familiarize yourself with the tools.

>> No.51764517

>>51764048
Idk what that means

>> No.51764946

>>51764517
He's just calling the archive slave to the attention of that Bae thread

>> No.51765352

>>51763713
This reads like it was written by OpenAI.

>> No.51765476

>>51757499
I bet she can't play the clingy, jealous girlfriend who has everything you own bugged so that she can monitor everything you do and that you always stay faithful to her.

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A question for the thread.
Given that we're all mostly using gdocs publishing; Embedding images into a fic, yes or no?

>> No.51767279

>>51767102
I personally think no. Writing is text.

>> No.51767372

>>51767102
I don't have a problem with it, but some people might find it disruptive. If you want to err on the side of caution you could just embed a hyperlink to Imgur or some other image hosting site and let the reader decide whether or not they want to open it.

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>>51767102
Depends on how they're used, because if it's just like a 'Yagoo's office look like this' as lazy way to skip writing then definitely not

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>>51767102
It's tough. When I looking around for ways to do Pomu's journal, I found out how finicky gdocs can be with images. I eventually got it to look okay, and I'm pretty proud of it, but it took some effort with no shortage of trial and error. There might be better ways to do it, but I currently don't know those ways. I also seem to remember the published version of a doc looking vastly different spacing wise with the image than it did in edit mode, so there's that too.
>>51761654
Not either of those anons but there's another piece of feedback I remembered while reading your latest chapters, but forgot in my initial post. The part about anon's eyes, turning yellow, it reads a looking awkward since we are back with the (You) perspective. I get what you wanted to showcase there, but it might have made more sense if you did something along the lines of "Your vision suddenly became encased in a yellow tinge" or something.

>> No.51767751

>>51767102
Probably not good, but I guess it kind of depends on the type of fic you're writing. There are niche uses like JOI fics. But if it's just standard prose I would say only try it at the start of a scene, just because it would be annoying for the reader to imagine the characters, environment, etc, and then you show a picture and it's different to their interpretation.

>> No.51768315

Nothing wrong with making something like a book with illustrations

>> No.51768760

>>51767567
>I found out how finicky gdocs can be with images
In the year of 2023 I don't know why word processors have to be so terrible when it comes images.
At some point, I'm going to start writing things in powerpoint. At least then I'll be able to put the words and images where I want.

>> No.51769071

>>51768760
On the one hand I agree, we should be at a spot where image integration is just seamless, but on the other, it is kinda fun to figure out the ways to work with and around the system to get what we want. We're a creative bunch, we find a way.

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>>51742385
Botan and Korone like to play wrestle in the office, but Korone never wins. Feeling bad for her and thinking Botan's getting a little too cocky, (You) wrestle Botan yourself and utterly manhandle the lion until she's completely submissive.

>> No.51770935

>had a good idea for a part of the next chapter
>went down to heat up leftovers
>forgot it

I hate my brain so deeply

>> No.51770949

>>51770850
I like the concept, but why Botan specifically? She's not especially cocky or strong. I guess she is an M...

>> No.51771025

>>51770850
Hot. Though personally I'd like to mud wrestle Botan and watch her bra come off only for her to not be bothered by that at all and pin me down with her feet

>> No.51771458

>>51770949
The art and Korone's spirited but terrible performance in SF6 inspired the prompt

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>>51770935
When I do that, I either just to repeat the idea in my head enough that it sticks if I'm not near my pc to put them in my notes doc, or just b-line it to there to add it in. I also have a place in discord i can list all my ideas down in case I;m out doing stuff.

>> No.51772107

>>51768315
.....did anyone ever imply there was ?

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>>51771025
>mud wrestling
Don't mind if I save that in my pocket for later.

>> No.51774263

>>51770949
>I guess she is an M...
Botan is literally an S. It's been two and a half years since she's debuted and people still think she's some dommy mommy.

>> No.51774317

>>51774263
I'm confused by your post.
M = masochistic = submissive
S = sadistic = dominant

>> No.51775257

>>51774263
She's too cool. People see a cool character and instinctively think they must be an S

>> No.51776531

>>51773050
Lui... why are you smiling at me like that...?

>> No.51776882

>>51773050
I eagerly await your next release (as well as mine shortly after)

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>>51776882
Lion-girl mud wrestling won't happen for a little bit, but I'm sure as hell gonna use it.

>> No.51777204

>>51776531
Your virginity's in danger, young man. That face is a predating hag's look.

>> No.51777798

>>51777002
I'm glad Botan is covered, now I'm free to think of someone else for this

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>>51776531
>I've locked the door and thrown away the key
>The contents of your balls now belong to me

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>>51779183
>>51777204
I... I don't consent...

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>> No.51780193

>>51779183
The content of my balls belong to either Fubuki or Mio.

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>>51779277
She didn't consent to being over thirty and unwed AND unpregnant, so who's really being mistreated here

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>>51780242
Preach it brother. These hags deserve to be given a healthy family, and they deserve to TAKE a healthy family if that's how they roll.

>> No.51783368

haggots need to die in a fire

>> No.51783791

>>51783368
Better than fatfags

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>>51783791
>sometimes like my hags with a bit of extra meat on them
>also am a zoomologist, yes with extra meat too
oh boy! two cakes!
I enjoy the cakes of hololive

>> No.51784708

>>51784511
Based. Some of the best girls are cakes.

>> No.51785654

>>51774263
Anon…

>> No.51786344

I wrote today. I haven't written anything vtuber related in a week.
Bros...
I feel so free.

>> No.51786397

>>51786344
Can I book you for 12 hours then?

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>>51786344
I love to see it. You broke out of that funk! Good job anon.

>> No.51787064

>>51786344
And? You want a medal or something?

>> No.51787773

>>51787064
You'll give me (you)s in due time, silly anon.
I do see where you're coming from though. There are too many here that act like writing is a chore.
Rather I want to express my enjoyment for being able to write lowkey vtuber fics and not other shit I've obligated myself to do.
>>51786626
Thanks!
The ideas were festering in my head, I needed the release.
>>51786397
For your work, lol?

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>>51787773
>The ideas were festering in my head, I needed the release.
It's something that hits like no other. I'm on my way to a good ass release soon. I can't fucking wait.

>> No.51788477 [DELETED] 

>>51788280
>I'm on my way to a good ass release soon.
Diarrhoea?

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Have sex with me, incel.

>> No.51788899

>>51788280
The buildup is intolerable. In a sense though, it provides motivation to push through for release
>>51788797
Gladly (I will enjoy it, but make sure to wear a condom to prevent sexually transmitted diseases).

>> No.51789004

>>51788899
Don't worry about the tattoo, she just really likes Poker.

>> No.51789078

>>51788797
Fuck no, her cunt probably oozes spite and has teeth.

>> No.51789427

>>51789078
I have an unhealthy desire for unapologetic toxic bitchsluts. I am not made for this modern era. I feel myself losing composure every day. Please pray for me anons.
>>51789004
Really? God, I'm more of a mahjong guy. Guess I'll pass. Can someone bring out the next bitchslut please?

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bully girl (wink) guy. How is it coming along?

>> No.51791537

>>51790691
Not sure if I'm the one you're referring to, but I am writing a bully fic right now so I'll answer.
It's coming along swimmingly, but will take a bit of time since I've decided to make it longer.

>> No.51791648

>>51791537
What kind of bully fic are you making anon; bullying a chuuba or chuuba getting bullied?

>> No.51791757

>>51791648
Mostly chuuba bullying you. Mostly.

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>>51788899
You just gotta make every chapter have its own little release to keep you good until you finally get to the big one.

>> No.51794808

>>51786344
Write tomorrow too

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>>51742333
Balsa: Chapters Five and Six

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQzrFVPTbA29NkSkIIb2jcdc3jmfNrJoyMbtYUiOi3wkDlM6P0rHmQRXSFhhTMcdFOaDtcNY_H_OQMG/pub

Tags: (you), Botan, Nene, Polka, medieval fantasy, adventure

I tried to give anon a lot more reaction and internal awareness for these chapters, as well as provide a little more background for Botan. I'm excited for this arc but since I've never written something like this, it will definitely be prone to error so please tell me what you think needs improvement.

>>51767567
I read back through it and I see what you mean. Just and oversight on my behalf. I'll see if I can't re-write it to make it more clear.

I hope you're enjoying the rest of it though.

>> No.51799421

>>51789004
>>51789427
This made me imagine, like, a Queen of Hatsus that only fucks people who score a yakuman against her

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Here is the final sneak peek of "Shark in the Screen" my animatic with AI art. One goal I had for my story is to go deeper into the manager's perspective of corporate vtubing. I took inspiration from political dramas to write this scene so hopefully it's entertaining.

https://youtu.be/gufz-sR645A

Episode 1 will be released on Saturday. Playlist of all the sneak peeks so far are here: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZdwW1dn_6BaJmsNLLM3_jef7oxsEVDY7

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>>51795114
You definitely reached your goal of showing more reactions to the given situation, so nice going there! A little more background around Botan and the spears in general was nice. I was not expecting the chuubas to show up who did, so that was nice. I can kinda feel the buildup and passion you have for the arc your weaving, so I'm definitely interested to see how it plays out. It's not really a knock on the story so far, but everything has been quickly episodic almost, so it'll be nice to see how a interconnected arc works for you. A piece of feedback for the future when you have situations where Anon is split or not present from whoever you are currently writing about: Refer to (You) in the third person. If we are reading from basically an overlooking perspective on Botan herself and having a window into her thoughts, she would refer to him as "anon". Another piece of feedback regarding the dialogue, you're getting better at adding a little more dressing to the back and forth, but you still have some spurts where it's purely spoken word. For example, when Botan snaps at Anon to get going, it would be a nice detail to add that some of her lion features showcase themselves to really instill that fear and show dominance. Keep writing and keep improving bro and thanks for the content!
Poor Noel, she's almost a fantasy fic staple jobber, lol, lmao

>> No.51806292

>>51804553
Man, if there was ever a "vtuber procedural", this would be it. The tension, the dialogue, and the art -- it's all great.
I especially liked your rendition of Jenma and Omega, and their relationship with one another. I could already feel how Omega's the hard-hitting corporate-climbing results-only sort of guy, while Jenma tries to at least be sympathetic toward her talents.
All in all, good work! Can't wait for the full episode.

>> No.51806680

>>51806292
Thanks! Yes that was the vibe I was trying to give off. It's fun writing them, especially Omega.

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What are your goals this week write and readbros? Every step can be progress. You could be writing, reading, or doing something else that is meant to help towards either goal, like research about what you are trying to write next.
I did the bulk of the research and planning I needed to do already, so now it's just about putting the scenes to paper and letting them unfold. I'm hoping to get another few good days of writing in this week.

>> No.51812364

>>51742385
Nerd Fauna finally catches you cheating off her tests which lands you both in detention. The model student is no less than pissed with you, but you need to get back in her good graces so you can continue to coast through your exams.

>> No.51812538

>>51808860
Is shall post a story either next thread or the one after.

>> No.51814678

>>51780242
I actually didn’t want to have kids until I found this thread, which changed my stance on things. Hag love might be too powerful.

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>>51808860
Next week is the week for getting shit done as I'm busting my ass at work before I go for vacation, where aside from going to Forbidden Door and my sisters graduation I've got nothing going on.

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>>51808860
I have a long weekend starting tomorrow, so I'm going to knuckle under and get some new pages down instead of endlessly editing the ones I already have.

>> No.51816038

>>51815329
No you're not. You're going to play video games.

>> No.51818446

>>51812364
Impressing and scaring Nerd Fauna by showing her your extensive cheating plans if she doesn't let you cheat off her paper.

>> No.51820472

>>51816038
Jokes on you but I'm actually going to watch youtube videos.

>> No.51821297

>>51742316
I haven’t read holojourneys, but is it gen 5 centered?

>> No.51821395

>>51808860
I have to do overtime for the next five days, so I have to at least finish half of the chapter I'm writing today

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>> No.51823348

>>51821297
Gee, anon, why don’t you scroll up to the story recap and see the tag which says what characters are in the story

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>>51814678
>Hag love might be too powerful
These women and the dreams they cause are dangerous

>> No.51825946

Matsuri... you're crazy...

>> No.51827123

>>51825946
What she do

>> No.51827199

>>51827123
She bumped a dead thread with nothing of value to say.

>> No.51827230

>>51825946
She was saying gifting memberships is only for cuckolds and teasing her fans for it

>> No.51827833

>>51827123
She was saying she always takes her panties off when she knows she's about to meet up with Mio

>> No.51828100

>>51827833
Wow, me and Matsuri are the same. I also take her panties off when we're about to meet Mio.

>> No.51829116

First person fics y/n?

>> No.51829190

>>51829116
First person has its place when you want to focus on a character and make the readers focus on their perspective, but you don't want to make it a self-insert.
Some fics in the archive that are written in second person might have worked better in first person for me, because I felt conflicted about what "I" was doing in the story.

>> No.51829350

>>51829116
I think it's a valid pov for OC/SI fics but I honestly have a problem with them if it's from a chuuba's perspective and the narration doesn't feel like them; especially if they have to tone down that chuuba's personality in order to make them fit as the main character. That trend basically soured me off of a lot of ao3 vtuber fics a couple of years back.

>> No.51829378

>>51829116
If it's from the woman's perspective then yes

>> No.51830099

>>51829116
So long as I don't have a name.

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So who would you rather meet: your oshi, or Jesus?

>> No.51830466

>>51830162
My oshi, because I'd feel bad about telling Jesus what people have done in his name.

>> No.51830467

>>51830162
Oshi as I'm not religious.

>> No.51830622

>>51830466
Oh, you don't have to tell him. He knows. Just how many children's lives you ended inside your sock.

>> No.51830732

>>51830622
Cumming in a vagina would only make a difference for 0-1 of the thousands of "children", so that's not a big concern.

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>>51830732
Quick maffs.

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If I had written the past 3 days I could've already been done with my fic...

>> No.51831584

>>51830732
Cumming in a vagina is holy, good and sanctioned by the church.
Fucking your sock is lustful and wrong. You must repent by flagellating yourself in your oshi's name.

>> No.51831957

>>51742385
To calm her nerves ahead of her big return concert, Gura has a nice, relaxing drink of three bottles of Buckfast.

>> No.51832035

>>51831565
Then start writing now.

>> No.51832162

>>51831565
But it wouldn't have been as good as you can write it now, most likely. A lot of stories are like wine.

>> No.51832307

>>51831565
You could have made notes or thought out scenes but you shouldn't worry about what you should have done. Instead just open up your fucking fic and start writing.

>> No.51833519

>>51830162
Jesus, then I'd tell him, "Hey, you know man, this girl named X is pretty cool, you wanna meet her?"
He says yes, and I get to hang out with Jesus AND my oshi. Best of both worlds.

>> No.51833708

>>51833519
I mean, Jesus does have 1.2kk subscribers on Youtube...he probably could make something happen.

>> No.51833809

>>51833708
>JesusXOshi collab
Best anime crossover of all time, hands down
Then /vt/ goes on a metldown because my oshi is their oshi too, and Jesus is a male so it's basically a male collab

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>>51821297
It's missing a key member at the moment to be complete, but I'd say it's more accurate to say it's HAG focused. Will gen 5 be the first complete gen in the party? Who knows?

>> No.51837080

>>51832035
Ok

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What's an idea or prompt you think has potential? Repost or talk about it.
I think those corrupting chuubas ideas inspired by Corrupting Nene from a few threads back could make a solid fic. In fact I'm thinking of picking up the Shion one, I'm just looking for/thinking up ideas for the progression on her descent to corruption.

>> No.51840862

>>51839615
The first that came to my mind was the Suicest prompt where Suisei is your sister and wants to deflower you before Aqua's big peasant butt can tempt you into fucking a low-class wench.

>> No.51841512

>>51840862
Honestly I think that prompt is effectively at the same stage as fujocast pre writers where it's developed enough as an idea that it just needs to get compiled into an idea document to await a writer.
Since what could be added to the idea at this point? A third act twist that forces Aqua and Suisei to work together because it turns out (You)'ve been sneaking out of the castle and disguising yourself as an adventurer. One who has slowly been seduced by Lady Marine who also enjoys sneaking out to play pirate. Now the two of them need to work together to seize you from Marine's ship before it sets off at dawn.

>> No.51843508

>>51840862
Do (You) even love Suisei romantically in that prompt?

>> No.51844150

>>51843508
No. But that doesn't mean she isn't gonna try her hardest to get you hard for her instead of dumb maid dumptys.

>> No.51844281

>>51843508
I don't think it was stated. The extra ideas were more for thrown around for it were more for justifying why Suisei thought her position was secure.
I think the prompt as intended was for it to be Suisei pov, but I think it only needs a little tinkering in order to work from an Anon pov.
Mostly it would involve focusing on actually making it a love triangle rather than as justification born from jealousy. Maybe the new maid Aqua was the first girl to ever make you fall in love/lust and now you are torn between your duty to your sister and your feelings for your maid.

>> No.51844675

>>51844150
>>51844281
If it were me I would pick Aqua over Suisei. Its not like I hate her or anything, but Aqua just has a nicer personality and it makes me want to protect her at all costs.
But I would still love to see the prompt turn into a story though. I wanna see how far (even if she hates it) Suisei would go if it meant she gets to deflower (You)

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>>51808860
Right now I'm hoping to bang out two more chapter before I go up to this family gathering where I likely won't have time to write for the week. If I can, I'll write more but I doubt you'll see anything from me until monday.

If nothing else, I hope it at least serves as a kick start to creativity. I can't count the number of times I've become inspired just by virtue of a new experience or place, so maybe this'll be a blessing in disguise.

>>51805898
>refer to (you) in the third person

I will. I wasn't sure which people preferred so I went with first rather than third. I'll switch it to third form now on. Thank you for telling me. I'll also try to keep adding more action in the dialogue heavy scenes.

I'm glad you think I'm improving. That's a relief to hear. I've been doing my absolute best to fix every critique given to me and I'm glad it's showing. Thank you for reading and helping me work the bugs out.

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>>51844839
My recent trips and getaways have been a great boost to my creativity towards my settings. It also helps me to let my actual writing juices recharge for a few days with them, so make sure you relax and enjoy the moment. You've done fantastic in your response to feedback so far. You're clearly having fun with this and want to keep improving, and that's a huge win for your story.

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>>51742385
Ina helping you get used to cold Canadian winters

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>>51844675
Choosing to breed either aqua or suisei would be a tough one. I think in the end I'd choose the dumpty maid though. I'm too weak when it comes to a fat ass. Even if Suisei struts like she knows how to get what she wants, but that almost makes me not want to choose her as a power move. The dynamic is fucking awesome. I hope someone takes it on at some point.

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>>51821395
You got this anon. Write that half, and then get that bread.

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>>51845808
Thanks for the compliment friend. That made my whole day.

>> No.51851902

Cute and helpful anons!

>> No.51851981

>>51795114
Still not liking the short chapters.

>> No.51852446

>>51847636
Kronii helping you get used to the fiery Canadian summer.

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Random question. Just curious to hear what the majority of people think. If you could choose one talent from each Holo gen to star in a dating sim, who would they be? This includes all JP gens, EN gens, and ID gens. The homos can fuck off.

>> No.51854622

>>51854327
>The homos can fuck off.
If I ain't getting an Astel or Miyabi route I ain't playing

>> No.51854695

>>51854327
Why do I get the feeling this question has been asked before?

>> No.51854835

>>51854695
It hasn't. I was posting about a potential Hololive VN in here a day or two ago and was considering that, but decided it was too much to tackle and I lacked knowledge of early gens. I never stopped to think about who I would actually pick, though.

>> No.51855065

>>51854327
>he doesnt want to lick Shien's banana
Kind of gay anon.

>> No.51855130

>>51854327
honestly it depends on the context of the game. Taking HoloX for example, If its a school setting, then Iroha/Chloe would be the focus, but if its a ''serious'' setting then Lui could be the main one

>> No.51855157

>>51855065
The hell with Shien.
Bring in Shion.

>> No.51855325

>>51854835
Seems kind of stupid to focus on something you will never do.

>> No.51855418

>>51855157
How about both?

>> No.51855755

>>51854327
Tough not to just pick my favorites, but I guess I'll try to make a diverse cast of characters.
Miko
Haato
Shion
Okayu
Marine
Towa
Nene
Lui
Moona
Reine
Kobo
Mori
IRyS
Fauna
Yeah, that's way too many characters.

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>>51855755
>Haaton
>Okayu
>Fauna
You have very good taste, friend (who would also be a good pick).

>> No.51856106

>>51855885
It's a surprisingly tough exercise. Those 3 happen to be my favorites of those gens, but you have to consider the whole. Like you wouldn't use Haato and Mumei in the same VN. They'd be too similar.

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>>51854327
>JP0
A real tough one, gonna go with Suisei, thrill of the chase and the stardom aspect would make good drama. Sora is a runner-up for the vanilla experience or Miko for converting the manhater.
>JP1
Matsuri would be fun.
>JP2
Shion, mesugaki combined with her depression.
>Gamers
Another tough one. I'd go with Okayu, since her lackadaisical attitude could lead to conflict. "How serious (about us) is she?"
>JP3
Marine. She's a paper tiger so exploring her commitment issues would make a good route.
>JP4
Towa. Her being a bit closed off would make a great route.
>JP5
Nene. Her cheerleader outfit makes me think of the "Cheery Gyaru and Gloomy Okatu" trope.
>JP6
Chloe. You guys remember that rrat of her being fake as fuck? Explore that.

>ID1
Honestly don't really have a good preference or idea here. Moona I guess
>ID2
Ollie. Could you build a life with someone who no longer has theirs?
>ID3
Kaela. I think her attitude and mindset are really interesting. In my mind her route is like Rin's from KS

>EN1
Ame. Her weird combination of tomboy and girly makes her interesting, girl-next-door kind of vibes. I'd pick Mori as a runner-up since she also has a lot of avenues to explore
>Project Hope
...and IRyS!
>EN2
Bae. Yumejoshi zoomer GF. A route with more or less no baggage. Maybe her trying to get over romance being "cringe."

>> No.51856245

>>51854327
>>51854835
I think the idea of picking one for each gen is unnecessary, anyway. The cast should have the right size and composition, where the members ideal for that come from doesn't matter as much.

>> No.51856673

>>51856116
>You guys remember that rrat of her being fake as fuck?
I do not.

>> No.51856936

I'd just go with all of the IDs for a Hololive VN. The balance and diversity is already there.

>> No.51857440

>>51856673
iirc, when Chloe debuted there was a rrat that she was only in it for the money, and everything she did was carefully crafted to farm gachikoi.

>> No.51857555

>>51857440
You mean like every Vtuber ever?

>> No.51857595

>>51857440
It is true.

>> No.51857811

>>51856673
>>51857440
It was based on her debut stream, with her taking the mask off already and having dollar bills raining in the background. She did make a lot of money, but I don't think she had to try too hard given her model and talent.

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>>51854327
Fine, I'll bite.

Gen 0 - Sora. Exploring her life beyond the idol spotlight as daisenpai, and helping her with the pressure that comes with it all, having to be that shining beacon that everyone looks up to all the time. Sora just wishes to be treated normally like any other.
Difficulty:

Gen 1 - Matsuri. Help her overcome her self confidence issues hidden behind a broken mess of a girl and tons of self deprecating jokes. Teach her about boundaries, and how it is fine to put your trust in others.
Difficulty:

Gen 2 - Shion. A girl who joined the idol life way too early in life, and was affected by it. Despite it all, she hides all her issues quite well behind her kusogaki personality, when in reality, she is quite depressed and lazy because of it.
Difficulty:

GAMERS - Mio. Someone who is always helping others also needs to be helped, sometimes. Miso soup Mio finds herself in an uncomfortable spot, being the one others rely on for their troubles, but never having someone to rely on herself. Has self confidence issues about her age, but you'll have to dig deep to get her to admit anything beyond just casual self deprecating remarks. Despite it all, she's very easy to handle due to her being so mature and experienced.
Difficulty:

Gen 3 - Pekora. A lazy and messy girl who puts all her energy into streaming and doesn't leave much time for anything else in her life. Talking to her outside of stream will be quite difficult, and she will often put up huge barriers when trying to talk about any topic that goes beyond mere acquaintance stuff. Any one mistake and you can ruin it forever, as Pekora once hurt will not give you the time to apologize. She won't even tell you what you did wrong.
Difficulty:

Gen 4 - Luna. An incredibly mature woman, despite what her persona shows. She tends to keep her troubles to herself, not letting others see the pain she is in, and often paying the price for it. She's very selective of the types of persons she chooses to be with, so if she picks up that you're not a good person, don't expect her to stick around. She knows better by now.
Difficulty:

Gen 5 - Polka. With absolutely wild mood swings, self deprecating jokes to no end and a overbearing need to please others, putting them first even above herself, Polka is a broken girl who puts on quite the show.
Difficulty:

Gen 6 - Laplus. A girl who is too easily affected by hateful comments, and can easily become depressed because of it. Despite it all, Laplus gives it her all on stream. She just really needs someone to be there for her, and praise her for her efforts.
Difficulty:

>> No.51857886

>>51857841
Thanks for deleting my difficulty ratings, 4Chan. I can't be bothered to do it again, so fill in the blanks yourself.

>> No.51857938

>>51857841
>>51857886
No, you can't just leave difficulty as a segment and then refuse to put anything under them. Tell us what the difficulties for each one would be.

>> No.51858178

>>51857811
Retards thinking Oga was being serious didn't help either.

>> No.51858248

>>51857938
I had used stars because weird text is allowed but in hindsight stars are just emojis that you can do with your keyboard.
Sora, 4/5
Matsuri, 4/5
Shion, 2/5
Mio, 2/5
Pekora, 5/5
Luna, 3/5
Polka, 3/5
Laplus, 2/5

>> No.51858433

>>51857811
To be transparent, I don't believe that rrat to be true, even back then. (I do wish she kept the mask on for a bit longer though) I mentioned it as a way for it to be the route's central drama.
>Sakamata Chloe, the girl with the mask, the "cleaner" of a sketchy "society", who takes advantage of men to milk their money and break their hears
>Route is MC getting over his preconceived notions and finding out Chloe is a sweet if odd girl

>> No.51858662

>>51856936
I was about to praise most of ID, but to be honest, Zeta is nothing, Iofi is pretty boring by herself, nobody knows what Anya even is and Kaela isn't particularly entertaining like the others. Still, that 6/9 which is pretty nice. Kobo, Ollie and Moona/Risu are powerhouses.

>> No.51858882
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51858882

> make goal to write 1k words before I'm allowed to get up
> Write for an hour
> Should be about done
> Only wrote 300 words

>> No.51858930

>>51858882
Then stop posting here and continue writing.

>> No.51859103

>>51858662
I think Anya would be interesting to romance - you could take it in very different directions. You can even decide on her tit size!

>> No.51859125

>>51858662
>Zeta
Try watching her a bit more. Many pass her up, but she's got this subtle intelligent charm about her. Helps that her voice is cute.
She'd be one that people would brush off initially but find deeper nuance to after knowing her a bit
>Anya
People not knowing her is the beauty of putting her in a VN. It allows you to demonstrate her appeal.
Look at Ninisanni Scenario. I didn't really know Millie or Reimu all that much going into it, but they ended up being some of my favorites by the end. Dullachan made me see their down-to-earth appeal.
In any case, I've watched a bit of Anya, and I think a grumpy space case could make for decent romance and comedy scenes
>Iofi
I honestly don't know her that well, but I'm sure somebody who does could find something to do with her.
>Kaela
Genki tall fun goofball seems like it would round out the cast pretty well.

>> No.51859292

>>51858662
>he doesn't want to be a filthy AI art creator that gets captured and converted by an alien anti-AI extremist which leads to fucking her silly after a successful hit on the OpenAI HQ

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51859452

>>51858882
I slapped out 1.5k words so far, catch up anon. You can do it.

>> No.51860568

Not weird enough. Here's what I would do with that cast
>Sora
Impentrable idol facade that you need to pierce to get to the bottom of her heart. I'd do the dealing with the pressure and work stuff related to idols too to frame it. Requires clever strategizing and off-the-cuff choices.
>Matsuri
You team up with Matsuri to gaslight and daterape gangbang the other girls, but along the way you find yourself falling for her, and that's when you start to address her underlying menhera problems.
>Shion
Go the lolibaba route. Helping a headstrong lolibaba start her idol career while navigating the tricky ins-and-outs and her grouchy refusal to compromise
>Mio
Yours is perfect. Give it the vibes of "a fan favorite side character who wasn't supposed to get her own route" and I think people would love it
>Pekora
A nervous girl won't let her social anxiety from jumping into troublesome scenarios. During the route you'll have to break up a street fight (which pekora fanned the flames of), avoid the yakuza (who pekora stole drugs from), fight the jsdf (who pekora launched a terrorist attack against), and outwit the american cia (who pekora assasinated the leader of). Constantly falling forward into new trouble, explosions, chaos, that's what people expect from Pekora and it's what they deserve.
>Luna
Luna is trying to kill you, and nobody will believe you. What you did to piss her off, you don't know, but you do know she's hyperintelligent mastermind behind that fairy sugar princess facade.
You're caught desperately trying to keep your job after you blow the whistle on her and it backfires, and it becomes this strange balance of avoiding demise, pretending everything is normal, and trying to get to the bottom of Luna's happy-go-lucky fury.
Bonus points if the motive is something dumb, like you accidentally ran over her bunny when she was a kid. Stuff like that can be turned into a heartfelt apologetic comforting moment.
>Polka
Polka is an old dog, on her way out from the stage because she can't seem to drum up the energy for it anymore. You were a kid who was inspired to become a male idol from her performances, and now that you met your idol, you're heartbroken.
Since she's planning to move to the back office and wait out the rest of her pension behind a desk, she's assigned to you, a hopeless prospect for the new male gen, only devised on the impulsive CEO's whim.
Polka teaches you the ropes and you bond together over your shared minor sucesses. Through that, you revitalize her interest and energy in the stage for just a little longer.
>Laplus
World domination at the hands of this brat!? You're a hero of the people, an idol for humanity. You'll do anything to stip her.
And you do. Time and time again. The more she cries over her evil plan's failure, the more you start to feel bad for her.
Eventually she starts to lose hope, just going through the motions. You give her some easy wins and that cheers her up. Slowly, she starts to develop more confidence and becomes smarter about her plans, forming a true rivalry.
A very comedy action focused route

>> No.51860623

>>51860568
>>51857841
Meant to quote you.

>> No.51862843

>>51859292
>He doesn't want to rape Iofi and break her into a sex cyborg that also generates art.

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>>51860568
>>51860623
Enough internet for you, anon.

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>> No.51864398

>>51862843
What’s wrong with you?

>> No.51865264

>>51864398
There isn't enough dark chuuba smut fics. Thus I'm building up horniness to write one.

>> No.51865471

>>51865264
>50 abuse fics
>14 horror fics
>62 gore fics
>21 snuff fics
>enough dark chuuba smut fics
People here really don't bother to use the archive.

>> No.51866210

>>51865471
Maybe that anon thinks there isn't enough of them.

>> No.51866383

>>51865471
Yeah basically >>51866210 we've gotta get those numbers up.

>> No.51866576

>>51866210
Those numbers seem pretty high. Almost 150 fics of dark chuuba smut

>> No.51866863

>>51866576
Yeah that's more than 10%

>> No.51867631

>>51866576
>>51866863
Last time I check it was over 200. If you include ryona, rape, noncon. Though I would argue they’re redundant. But yeah, anon is drowning in dark chuuba smut fics and he doesn’t even know it.

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51868989

I finally reached the 10k words mark that I had scrapped... Took me far too long. At least the story is turning out way better.

>> No.51869254

>>51868989
Good for you, anon.

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>>51868989
You climbed back to the peak, anon. Be proud of that.

>> No.51870922

>>51795114
>Balsa: Chapters Five and Six
The length is better, but not by much.

>> No.51872808

>>51854327
All of them.

>> No.51873126

>>51854327
>The homos can fuck off.
Why are you excluding them?

>> No.51873554

>>51873126
>Wanting men in a romance VN
I swear, you guys are idiots.

>> No.51873690

>>51742316
>Nepo Labo
Fuck hololive

>> No.51874500

>>51857841
>>51858248
Mio difficulty is way too low; it should be a four in my opinion. Laplus should be a 3, other than those two, I can't argue with your reasoning

>> No.51874511

>>51774263
>It's been two and a half years since she's debuted and people still think she's some dommy mommy.
Bold of you to assume anyone has watch her for the past two and a half years.

>> No.51874862

>>51874500
>Laplus should be a 3
Laplus should be the most easiest with a 1. Sora should be 6/5 difficulty with her being an idol and whatnot. And we know how Japanese idols are treated.

>> No.51875255

>>51868989
What are you writing that needed 10k words?

>> No.51875574

Are people still trying to do the VN thing? I thought that was never going to happen since it involves multiple people.

>> No.51875580

>>51859125
>Try watching her a bit more.
No
>People not knowing her is the beauty of putting her in a VN
But why put her in when you can put someone more well-known and liked?
>I honestly don't know her that well,
Nobody does, since nobody watches her, which is why her being recommended is confusing to me.

>> No.51875645

>>51875255
Fanfiction. Virtual YouTuber fanfiction.

>> No.51875723

>>51875645
Anon, I just want to know what you're writing, no need to be a smartass.

>> No.51875898

>>51875723
It's a weird way to ask given that most stories here are 10+K words.

>> No.51876115

>>51875898
So you don't want to tell me what you wrote?

>> No.51876481

>>51856936
Now that you said it, I can see it working. But ID is rather obscure and not many people here watch them, so it might be a tad difficult to get their personalities correct.

>> No.51876575

>>51875574
Some anon from last thread said he's picking up the scumbag manager VN idea. Given the headfirst attitude they're giving out and the at minimum scope of at least 6 routes, it's probably going to either burnout midway through production or it'll come out in 2 years and prove me wrong.

>> No.51876651

>>51876575
burnout midway is the likeliest outcome.

>> No.51877072

>>51876575
Out of all the ideas, he went with the scumbag one?

>> No.51877152

>>51875898
Most of my stories are below 10k....

>> No.51877548

>>51875898
No, they aren't bro. Most chapters or fics are in the 5-7k range. With 10k and above being outliers.

>> No.51878221

>>51876575
I’ll be surprised if he even gets an outline and script done.

>> No.51878724

>>51877152
And which stories are those?

>> No.51879081

>>51878221
Which is a shame since I think the concept would be fun. Maybe as like a quest with a main mechanic of trying to keep channel numbers from going down while slowly seducing/corrupting the chosen chuuba.

>> No.51879504

>>51879081
Sounds like a generic corruption fic.

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>>51742333
Balsa: Chapters Seven and Eight.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSTehss0rPlL1OiD1i82pEM6KX7jNezF0Ys931JZJefAGmcAdx0XsFoZKhPZ-Q2b3Q8yKv0vPDBrrIW/pub

>>51851981
>>51870922
Unfortunately the chapter lengths are probably not going to improve. The only solution I'd have would be to make bigger installments, which, if people are too frustrated with the length, I may very well just do. As for now though, what you've already seen is going to be more or less the average length of an installment (9-15 pages). If people would rather, I'll just release in larger installments.

>> No.51880275

>>51880161
I say make larger installments.

>> No.51880760

>>51873690
What did you hope to achieve by coming here? Did you think people would go "Oh, you're right! Guess I don't like Hololive anymore!"?

>> No.51880903

>>51880161
Going to have to agree with the larger installments. Chapter 7 & 8 is a 4,500 word chapter. That could have been a chapter in of itself.

>> No.51881071

>>51878724
Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained. Both short fics.

>> No.51881166 [DELETED] 

>>51880161
Make shorter chapters.

>> No.51881615
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>>51879081
Like a reverse NSO? That's not an awful idea, though the situations you get the chuuba into are the best part of corruption stuff I think the thrust of it being trying to hide them seems like it wouldbe at odds with that.

>> No.51882386

>>51880161
>9-15 pages
No way the chapters you are releasing are that many pages.

>> No.51882554

>>51881615
>Like a reverse NSO?
Yeah something like that, of course it would be as a quest rather than a game/VN; but in theory the game part of the quest would be in trying to gaslight/corrupt them into being yours without getting fired.

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>>51742385
Anon is a lowly yakuza thug, who suddenly finds himself tangled with protecting the Daughter of the head honcho, Lamy.
will he manage to keep her safe? or will he end in the bottom of the sea while the city consumes itself in a gang war

>> No.51883902

>>51882386
That's what my word doc tells me at least. Maybe the formatting just comes out different.

>>51880275
>>51880903
Fair enough. Next one will be a bigger installment then. I appreciate you reading.

For future reference, what do you feel is the ideal length? 15-17 pages? Or give me a word count and I'll aim for that ballpark

>> No.51884030

>>51883902
>For future reference, what do you feel is the ideal length? 15-17 pages?
Well, if you combine chapter seven and eight, you have one decent sized chapter. Same with chapter six and five. I say just focus on making one decent sized chapter rather than two small ones

>> No.51884977

>>51883081
I feel like I’ve seen this prompt before.

>> No.51885521

>>51708461
I'm going to catch up on these one release at a time.
>>51742424
It still has that feeling of everything feeling disjointed like I said for the first two chapters >>51558699 with chapter 3 especially feeling like it was missing half the context for everything to actually make it feel connected. Chapter 4 is much better connected and detailed with the dialogue feeling better as it falls victim to 'floating head syndrome' less. Still its pacing was all over the place with entire 'chase and catch' feeling like it should have been a mini arc rather than just summarized into the chapter like this. In particular the jenga tower absolutely would have made a pretty good tense scene if you hadn't rushed through it
Anyway hope the next chapters get better, chapter 4 addressing some of the weaker parts of the fic make me think you're heading in the right direction but you really should focus on making better chapters rather than trying to get them out like a webnovel author trying to get on a publishing website's trending list.

>> No.51886203

>>51884977
That’s because it’s the same yakuza/gangster prompt that gets posted.

>> No.51887072

>>51883902
That word doc are you using? It can’t be Microsoft.

>> No.51887437

>>51881071
Oh those fics.

>> No.51887842

>>51883902
>For future reference, what do you feel is the ideal length?
I think you should just focus on one chapter.

>> No.51887986

>>51881071
Both amazing fics and a prominent part of /wg/ history.

>> No.51888327

>>51886203
Is it really? I have notice a few prompts being similar to previous ones in the past. But I always thought they were more accidental than anything

>> No.51888495

>>51887986
Nobody but you thinks this.

>> No.51888762

>>51888327
It’s not like any ideas are original. There’s going to be some overlap with ones previously posted before.

>> No.51889089

>>51876575
Unless he has experience, he’s going to burnout on trying to get the technical side of things.

>> No.51889475

>>51889089
The guy that made the nijisanji VN did it. I don't see why the other anon couldn't do the same.

>> No.51889767

>>51873554
Just write a homo as your best buddy you can always rely on. If you fail to get on any of the girls routes, you get the homo ending as "punishment"

>> No.51889818

>>51889767
How is that a punishment?

>> No.51890085

>>51889818
Who the fuck would want bros over bitches.

>> No.51890551

>>51889475
>The guy that made the nijisanji VN did it.
Wasn't he passionate about that though?

>> No.51890953

>>51890085
I don't know, having an ending where you hang out with your bros seems rather chill and overakk normal. Not really a punishment

>> No.51890977

>>51890085
The only bitch I would choose over any bro is Mr. Koro.

>> No.51891153

>>51890085
Who would you trust more? Your best friend, or a woman?

>> No.51891196

>>51891153
A woman

>> No.51891718

>>51868989
Why did you scrap 10k words previously? It couldn't have been that bad.

>> No.51891834

>>51890085
I'd choose Shien over Ame and Oga over Fubuki. Bros before hoes.

>> No.51892010

>>51891196
Then you’re going to get betrayed.

>> No.51892321

>>51891834
>Bros before hoes.
Someone gets it.

>> No.51892529

>>51891834
>>51892010
>>51892321
You three have to be gay. That’s the only reason why I think you would spend time with men rather than women.

>> No.51892713

>>51892529
You never had male friends?

>> No.51892861

>>51890977
Won’t she just abuse you? Why would you want that.

>> No.51893181

>>51892529
>You three have to be gay.
That’s a pretty big leap of logic there.

>> No.51893646

>>51890953
Honestly having an ending where you’re just vibing with friends seems pretty nice and comfy

>> No.51893680

>>51892529
Are you that desperate to get laid?

>> No.51893810
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51893810

Fuboobies

>> No.51893840

>>51893680
Do you not?

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51894230

>>51893840
>coomer
It all makes sense now.

>> No.51894246

>>51892861
It's not abuse if it's consensual

>> No.51894609

>>51893840
Man, you must live sad existence if you can’t under the value of male friendship.

>> No.51894648

>>51894609
Nice English you've got there. Try reading out the crap you post before you actually do.

>> No.51894782

>>51893840
Not him, but I would rather spend time with friends I can talk to and have fun. Sex is not the be all end all of things.

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>>51893810
What the fuck are those foxfish?

>> No.51894887
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51894887

>>51894830
Some of her mascots.

There's a Nene seal swimming around in the background.

>> No.51895074

>>51894830
Fubufish is real.

>> No.51895175

>>51894648
You're in no position to be criticizing anyone's English after >>51893840

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>>51895175
Nice try, sped.

>> No.51895662

>>51894887
I love all of Friend's mascots. She should make even more forms

>> No.51895703

>>51894830
Looks nothing like the foxfish.

>> No.51895704

>>51891153
Best friend.

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>>51895703
Forgot to include the image of the fox fish.

>> No.51895926

New thread
>>51895783

>> No.51896029

>>51895728
That looks nothing like a fox.

>> No.51896062

>>51896029
Don't know what to tell you, I ain't a marine biologist.

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