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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>50101287

>> No.50241510
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were five stories posted in the last thread.

HoloJourneys: (Across Deserts to the Oceans Blue, A Shining Star Debuts) Chapter 30: A Desert is No Place For A Sheep: Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, Koyori, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff):>>50125901

Sand Planet: Chapter Four: tags: action, adventure, piracy, Suisei, AZKi, (you), realistic fantasy:>>50153257

Blood Bound 2: Tags: SFW, Ayame, fantasy, Bae:>>50170549

Borderline: Tags: SFWish, Amelia, Incest, Western, Kissing:>>50194400

Fujo Fantasies - Chapter 2: A Roll of the Die: Tags: SFW, High School AU, Bae, IRyS, Mori, Fujoshis, Ayame:>>50196378

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Realizing that your stinky best friend Selen is actually a girl with sex appeal:>>50102776

I know we had a story similar to this a long time ago, but I'd like to see it expanded.:>>50108830

Manhandling Ayame by the horns causing her to have a shameful orgasm.:>>50116904

Pet play with Zeta:>>50121255

Comforting your gf Korone after you finally bring here to meet your parents, only to discover in the moment that they were massive kemo racists:>>50167311

A chuuba tries to take care of you while you have hay fever, with varying degrees of success:>>50187483

A time travel fic with Ame about how your family tree is actually a circle.:>>50189120

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Fox

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Words of the Thread
>Scary
>Plans
>Helpless
Use them however you want prompt, short story or full on fic; as long as it's chuuba related.
For extra context these were rolled off of a table called Visions & Dreams

>> No.50243035

>>50241646
Banana!

>> No.50243089

>>50241532
Anon tries to write a fic but is constantly distracted by his fox wife draining his balls

>> No.50243313

>>50241646
Why do you like her so much, /wg/ bros? I've always just thought of her as the least interesting member of gamers.

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>>50243035
Corn!

>>50243089
This is a fantastic idea. I thoroughly approve of it. It doesn't have to be about a fic, or even necessarily smut - I'm imagining a comedy where a guy tries to go about his normal daily life along with various hobbies except Fubuki keeps appearing and sexing the energy out of him.
He goes to work? She's under the desk waiting to suck his cock. Runs to the bar for a few drinks to relax? She's the bartender, giving him a few too many shots more than he asked for. Tennis on the weekend? She's the opponent and she doesn't care about staying on her side of the court. Going fishing? She's the catch, in a mermaid costume, and ready to breed. Skydiving? She's the instructor and it's a duo jump now. Everything results in sweaty, horny fox sex.

>>50243313
This was asked a few threads ago iirc. Again, she's earned my infinite respect as a human being and I look up to her. On top of that, fox girls are really hot, and I enjoy how enthusiastic she is about everything.

Although if I was going to choose an oshi purely on entertainment value, it'd definitely be Korone...

>> No.50243458

>>50241532
Turning Mio into your personal fuck sleeve when she hits rock bottom and finds out she can never get pregnant.

>> No.50243725

>>50243313
>least interesting member of gamers
But enough about Mio.

>> No.50245385

>>50243725
Both are imo, the most boring of the old gen members. Not to throw stones, but I just don't see any appeal and would like to know what the appeal is for people that do enjoy them.

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I sleep.

Let's go, dirty dreams...!

>> No.50247793

>>50245385
I can understand Mio since she pioneers the hag genre and is usually just that loveable aunt you want to stick your dick in. As for Fubers I couldn't tell you since her personality changes on a dime in fics. I think people just like her design and her baseline personality of being genuinely cheerful and happy.

>> No.50247874

>>50245385
The Foobs' energy is unmatched. As for Mio, she's an adorable goof. Imagining women of their age being this cheery lights a spark in my heart

>> No.50248451

>>50245385
I like listening to Mio's fortune telling

>> No.50249904

>>50248451
Has she predicted a financial crash yet?

>> No.50249970

The archive (google and rentry) haven't been updated in over a week. I think I remember AA being busy with something a while ago. I'm a bit too new to know if this is a somewhat common timespan for the archive to go neglected.

>> No.50250171

>>50249970
Its what's normal for now, it used to be that AA updated it roughly every thread.

>> No.50250207

>>50249970
His dead man's switch hasn't activated yet, so I'm guessing he's just preoccupied.

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What are you working on anons?
Bonus: Share to the thread an underrated fic from the archive that you like.

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>>50249970
>Forgot to hit save before because I did it in a stupor after work
Fuck me, give me a minute.

>> No.50251844

>>50251102
I'm sick as a dog, so all writing is paused until I get better.
Bonus: Sleeping Beauty. It feels like it got memory-holed after Rushia's termination, but it remains one of my favorite assplay stories.

>> No.50252127

>>50251102
>Bonus
I don’t see holotourismo mentioned much. Granted it’s only been two short chapters and not everyone’s a car guy, but fuck me I want to see more.

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>>50251478
Silly old man makes everyone think he's finally kicked the bucket every time he makes a mistake.

>> No.50253526

>>50241532
Making Fubuki cum her brains out by blowing smoke on her face and putting the cigarette out on her tummy.

>> No.50253620

>>50253526
You're not Mads Mickelson and you never will be, trash.

>> No.50253761

>>50253620
And thank fuck for that. I don't like smoking in general nor do I smoke but I wouldn't mind seeing a fic about fullfiling one of Fubuki's ryona fetishes.

>> No.50255162

>>50253761
>fullfiling one of Fubuki's ryona fetishes
She has a ryona fetish?
Also for some reason this is making me think of beating up Fubuki in a sexualized boxing match.

>> No.50255461

>>50255162
Nene and Fubuki are very vocal about their fetish of being treated badly by very tall, grizzly old men. Though they do not have a ryona fetish, as that anon puts it. It's just being mistreated, like that one Darkness scene from Kobosuba. "I want to get home late from work while my man stays on the chair watching TV and drinking beer, and I want him to scold me for being late, and that I should put this body of mine to use to buy some more beer". I feel like there are more Holomems with a similar fetish, but can't remember now.

>> No.50255969

>>50255461
Matsuri, on the other hand... she has all sorts of degradation fetishes, including ryona

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>>50255461
There really aren't enough stories that capitalize on Nene's masochistic streak.

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>>50256074
Yeah, thankfully Disciplining Nene is great so it can scratch that itch a bit for me

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>>50256122
I wrote that one...two years ago. I wish I wasn't the only one to cover the subject.

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>>50257178
A bit of cash can solve all your problems!

>> No.50258592

>>50256122
>>50257178
I don’t really want to slap the Nene, but if she’s into it, I guess I’ll have to explore it.

>> No.50258687

>>50257178
Well, I thank you for it either way

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Mandatory foxpost

>> No.50262723
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>> No.50262756 [SPOILER] 
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>> No.50263299

>>50262723
>>50262756
Why is Mio fucking her least favourite daughter so ruthlessly

>> No.50263343

>>50262723
dunno why, girls dryhumping other girls is hot.
like, i dont even mean futa or strapon, just a girl humping other girl

>> No.50263379

>>50263299
She's tired of waiting for Subaru to give her a granddaughter

>> No.50263447

>>50263343
It's a lot more common in Japanese schools from what I hear, but take that with a weeb grain of salt

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Just a question. We usually have 65~ IPs at the end of the thread. Let's say 20 of those are a shitposter switching IPs, that still leaves us with about 45 people who participated in the thread. Are all those anons just waiting for stories that fit their exact niche to comment, or for series that they like? It feels kind of weird, how few people read stories here. Is everyone just writers busy working on their own fics that don't really like reading all that much? Is it burnout from reading too many fics?

>> No.50265274

>>50264704
I think quite a few active posters don't read all the stories, but on the other hand a lot of people who don't post in /wg/ still read some stories. Even accounting for people rereading, fics on rentry get over 50 readers readers easily.

>> No.50265579

>>50264704
The thread talked about this semi-recently. While some stories don’t get a lot of replies or feedback, a good number of anons are just reading them as they come, but sometimes are not sure what they want to say about it, or are just shy.

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>>50264704
>its a ''math expert'' episode
your math is wrong dumbass. Lets put it with simple numbers.
lets say there's 10 anons, and one writes a story. alll the other anons might leave a review, but that's assuming
>they are all awake at the same time
>they all want to leave a review
>they all like the story enough to keep reading
>they are up to date
Even if there's two guys who make the joke of posting the ''my aunt'' meme every time a new HF chapter drops, they sometimes miss it, the thread dies, etc
Feedback will always be inconsistent in a small community, doenst matter if we all read the stories or not.

>> No.50268811

>>50264704
I don't read every story posted

>> No.50268855

>>50264704
I liked it
Isn't very good feedback

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Not even a normal dream this time...

One day. I believe!

>> No.50269000

>>50268855
I can't speak for all the authors, but an "I liked it" is very good to hear. Feedback is nice, but praise is nicer!

>> No.50269262

>>50268907
are you sleeping well anon? You won't dream properly if you ain't sleeping right.

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>>50269262
Sleeping better than I ever have before... although I routinely wake up to use the bathroom halfway through. Maybe that's why, but that's rather hard to control. Maybe just no liquids for a few hours before bed...? I dunno. It'll happen eventually. Might be worth checking out /x/ for the lucid dreaming threads.

>> No.50271410

>>50264704
Eh? Don't we have about 40 average?
Some people come in here just to hang out. Based on the response rate, I'd say we have five reviewers and probably fifteen people that actually read shit. I know I don't read every fic.

>> No.50271470

>>50268855
Even so, it makes the effort worth it for externally motivated writers
Please comment every chance you get

>> No.50271694

>>50271470
No. I only comment on works that interest me. Commenting on works that don't interest me would give their writers the false impression they've written something that was worth the time it took to read it.

>> No.50272630

>>50264704
I don't read most fics as they come out, only stuff I see highly recommended or that matches my porn tastes. Still interested from a technical perspective what's going here as a writer myself though.
Also generally not interested in giving reviews but I try to scribble down a few comments whenever someone makes one of those "Go to the archive and pick a random fic" posts

>> No.50272890

>>50264704
I love the Kanata booba face so much

>> No.50274170

>>50271694
Well, that works perfectly fine too.
Live your life how you want to. Stick to your principles.
I think in a broader forum 'I like it' would mean less than this smaller general, but if you don't deem the with worthy of commenting on, that's up to you. Just depends on whether you're opinionated type or not. Sometimes bad feedback can fuck people up if it's the only feedback they receive.

>> No.50274894

>>50264704
Time is precious. I won't spend it reading something someone admits to writing in an hour about a chuuba I don't care about that only got 2 (You)'s telling them to proofread for grammar. Series posts will also naturally garner less attention the further they go. Oneshot wise, some times it's just hard to comment on a fic because it's too bland, even if its good. And some times I hate a fic but I don't want to be mean.

>> No.50275002

>>50274170
I like to give good feedback regardless of the content at hand. Even if I don't like a story I try to be objective on the writer's strengths and flaws.
Something like "I don't like the story, but your prose works really well." is leagues better than just commenting "it's shit"

>> No.50275283

>>50274894 (me)
Also I will admit that you can absolutely click bait me into reading your story with a nice picture, a brief description, and good tags.

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Alright then, I have some free time. Give me some smut ideas and you better read it.

>> No.50276197 [DELETED] 

>>50276053
Check the prompt archive, retard.
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.50276879

>>50276053
anything to do with miko then

>> No.50277446

>>50276053
Miko finally managed to convince Pekora to fool around in bed together, but since Pekora is shy and Miko is a yuri-addicted virgin coomer it starts out very awkwardly, bordering on sexual harassment of a bunny girl too embarrassed to do anything.
Luckily the sleepover is at Pekora's place and Pekomama (a good wife, but bisexual at heart) saves the night. She gives the two some trusty toys and techniques (your choice) to use while having fun dominating the two cute virgins as they beg for another orgasm.

>> No.50277739

>>50264704
Anon, this is pretty much the 90-9-1 rule that hits every internet community. The vast majority are a bunch of lurkers we can confirm exist by way of viewcounts on rentry pages. Other than that its going to be the occasional poster that reads some fics and occasionally posts feedback, and then it's our usual list of writers.
As for me, I try and read everything alongside provide feedback but even I don't read hard fetish fics, or stuff I'm not interested in entirely (Yuri).

>> No.50278475

>>50276053
In a Fantasy-esque world, (You) are part of an army that's taken control of Miko's shrine. Now you are put in charge of defiling it and sundering its protections over the countryside by raping its priestess all over the shrine.

>> No.50284243

>>50278475
Why would it take an entire army to take a shrine from a single illiterate girl?

>> No.50284378

>>50263343
THIS, holy shit. Fully clothed girls dry humping each other automatically turns my dick into fucking titanium. I am not the slightest bit into yuri but this is something else, but I don’t know why.

>> No.50285105

>>50284243
Miko's shrine makes the land a living hell to march through. Which is why (You) need to rape her all over it in order to defile it. Or perhaps mindbreak her to make the curse go the other way.

>> No.50286156

>>50285105
How about I just woo the miko and convince her heterosexuality is the more fun path?

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>>50241532
I look at the prompt archive and all I see is commitment, commitment, commitment, even if the ideas are good. Kinda wish I could just write without caring about time again. Better times.

>> No.50287043

>>50286608
In fairness due to how the prompt archive is set up that tiny bit of effort to archive a prompt it's kind of naturally set up to favor 'higher effort' prompts.
So if you want to get something simpler, the easiest thing to do would be to either go back a couple threads for ideas or make something based off the words of the thread post >>50242020

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>>50287043
I haven't really ever made anyone jerk off with a story less than 2k words long that isn't a greentext, and I've kind of grown tired from greentexts. Either I go the extra mile and do 4k words, or I just waste my time. That barrier is what keeps me from committing to prompts on a whim, because I absolutely do not write 4k words in one go

>> No.50288268

>>50287363
Honestly that sounds like a fun constrained writing challenge.
>You have exactly 2000 words to make something smutty.
Could maybe be a fun thread contest if we ever get around to doing those.

>> No.50288931

>>50286608
I look at the prompt archive and see that 2021 prompts are overwhelmingly HoloEN Myth.

Where did the magic go?

>> No.50290763

>>50288931
2022 was a very rough time to make myth fanfics.
Its only recently that the board's overall mood for them has turned around.

>> No.50290902

>>50288931
There was never any magic there to begin with.

>> No.50293137

>>50288931
We can bring it back by writing more myth smut.

>> No.50293968

>>50293137
Someone is currently working on kiara smut, Chadcast is moving along on a couple fronts, and who knows where else myth might show up?

>> No.50293981

>>50288931
Gura asks herself that every night.
I have a feeling Bae is going to get a lot of stories this year.

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>>50293981
It's already 2024, the year of the mouse...

>> No.50294401

>>50293981
Year of the rat(fuckers)

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>>50293968
Working on Kiara smut has been the worst idea of my life, its too hard to advance and not jerk off
Also 6k words, a lot more to go

>> No.50294867

>>50294576
Anonchama, your punctuation reps...

looks hot

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>>50294867
its a draft and i have to write with a raging boner, spare me sire

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>>50294576
>''Lets leave that for the second date''
Damn Kiara being a buttslut is genius

>> No.50296253

>>50294576
I'm eager to jerk it to your fic anon.
Please pull through.

>> No.50296524

>>50295768
If i finish this with both of my nuts intact, i plan to take a breather and then write the second date, where you go to town in Kiara's shithole
>>50296253
Thanks. hopefully it gets you off. Its like my second smut and despite my whinning, a pretty fun thing to write

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Finding out about a fully voiced 40 second animation of futa pikamee and Kson sharing an onahole is pog moment

>> No.50301507

>>50277446
Lesbian oyakodon for Miko? That's hot

>> No.50304296

>>50241532
A fluff fic about a kemono chuuba doing animal things, Bae getting trapped in a rat maze, Okayu getting a giant cat tower, etc.

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My bumping is not needed for such a thread!

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>>50306895
>>50241532
Lamy jerking you off with a fleshlight then eating your cum out of it to determine whether or not you are worthy to impregnate a princess like her

>> No.50308658

Who would best fit the hacker archetype in hololive?

>> No.50308792
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>>50308658
>terminally online autist hag

>> No.50309073

>>50308658
Roboco could work as a hacker who's great at hacking, but is really pon in everyday life.

>> No.50309220

>>50308792
What does being terminally online have to do with hacking?

>> No.50309481

>>50309220
In cyberpunk fiction, hackers are basically wizards casting spells with tech instead of magic. Being terminally online is kind of a hacker stereotype
Combine this and the blacksmith lore, and you basically have the image of a cyberpunk hacker 'forging' their 'hacks'.

>> No.50309565

>>50308658
Kobo and Luna are the only two I can remember ever talking about coding. Lycoris Recoil has already proven the loli hacker archetype is a success.

>> No.50310254

>>50306895
Why does she look so aggressive

>> No.50310675

>>50310254
She WILL get you off and you don't have a fucking say in it.
Your dick WILL be stroked until you cum, and cum, and cum again, and again.
It's not your choice. It's hers.
She wants to jerk your rock hard cock until you erupt, until your nuts are drained completely dry, until you're a drooling, sweaty, exhausted mess.
You WILL cum. Because she decided that you will.
And she won't take a "no" for an answer.

>> No.50310774

>>50308658
Unrelated but thinking about which chuuba would be a hacker made me remember the whole 'virtual' part of the vtuber. Which made me imagine them being something like a digimon/smt demon in a cyberpunk future.

>> No.50311116

>>50299400
>Fapped to their big tit Pikamee animation
>Learn two weeks after cumming to that thing like four times that it was ACKSHULLY futanari
I wish I could will cum back into my body. Just clench my fists really hard and suck it back up in there where it belongs.

>> No.50311292

>>50311116
You gotta recycle that shit. That's what Taoists do.

>> No.50312286

>>50310675
My ultimate fetish is being made to cum against your will. Especially if you hate the woman who strokes you off but ultimately can't stop yourself. Haven't written it as a fic yet tho because there's no vtubers I don't want to make me cum.

>> No.50312302

>>50288931
To me it's easier to write about HoloJP because I know less about them and they're attractively exotic.

>> No.50312373

>>50312286
That's pretty hot. 'Remembering how to love her' had that down perfectly, imho. Fucking incredible.

>> No.50312474

>>50312373
>Remembering how to love her
Man, it's still kind of weird how AA's Omelas Fan Sequels are pretty much the definitive Omelas sequels rather than the magical bend the original anon made with the 'official sequels'

>> No.50312995

>>50312286
What if, inside the story, the vtuber cheated on you before? Then you wouldn't want them to make you cum despite how sexy they are.

>> No.50313247

>>50312995
I think at that point you kind of have to play into the cuck fetish to explain the arousal and that's not exactly my favourite thing. I'm more of a getting dominated by the girl who bullies you or being bound up by a crazy lady kind of guy.

Captcha: STD D8

>> No.50313450

>>50313247
That's fair. Maybe they did something non-sexual and less bad which made you dislike them, so you feel conflicted about them making you cum. And that they're just going ahead without considering your doubts makes you not want it.

>> No.50314771

>>50312373
I still wish to see a sequel to that fic one day. Would have enjoyed seeing Fubuki trying to break your will by raping you everyday (while trying to get herself pregnant so you'll never leave her) and you doing your best not to break while at the same time, trying to get through to Fubuki saying that you want to help her, get her to eat (as she's so terribly thin), that if she really wanted you to stay with her then all she had to do was not treat you like shit and abuse you, but it would be hopeless as she's too far gone and she can't listen to reason and the only way she will is if she makes you as horribly broken as she is.
And maybe on the times she "isn't" raping you and has time to herself, she'll think of what she's done to you and she'll weep silently (maybe?) to herself that she's so sorry but she just can't stop because she needs you with her and that she has to keep you hostage until you break.

>> No.50315917
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>>50314771
Ditto. The only way that relationship can realistically progress is downwards; there's no miracle recovery there, not at least before one hell of a steep descent into depravity and degeneration. I really want to see them both broken, to have him try to change her for the better and for those efforts to backfre; and for his purity to be equally sullied as in a fit of apathy he throws it to the wind and indulges fully in the crazed adoration she offers.
Of course, there's a million different ways it could go, but really I just wanted it to spiral further out of control; that feeling of helplessness as something inexplicably WRONG unfolds in front of you and you can't do anything to change the course of history is absolutely, positively sublime.

Or, y'know, wouldn't have minded anon and his black mates gangraping her in a truck, either way desu senpai

>> No.50316587

>>50315917
I'm fine with any options as long as that last thing you pointed out doesn't happen. Although since you mentioned "mates", I'm curious on what Fubuki would do when anon's friends find out he's missing and then they arrive at her house to see if he's there with her. Maybe she could offer up some lie to them about how he's changed his mind and wants to be with her? maybe they won't buy her excuse and attempt to barge themselves in and find you with your wrists bound to the bed before Fubuki sneaks up behind them and magically knocks them all out with something, or maybe they see how drastically thin she is and in a act of kindness, they ask her what has happened and attempt to help her but ask her where you are.
Or maybe they could throw it in their face about what she's done to you and that "you" are the reason on why they took you from her. But maybe that would be a bad idea and Fubuki might end up breaking your legs for good because you somehow "lied" to her when she has it in her head that your friends poisoned your mind with nasty lies and took you away from her loving embrace.

>> No.50317759

>>50309565
Kobo would be hilarious as a hacker.

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>>50316587
Nnnnnah. You lost me involving mates and/or other characters; I think divergent casts are invariably a bad idea when the focus is on a specific relationship.

>> No.50318643

>>50315917
>wouldn't have minded anon and his black mates gangraping her in a truck
Are you into bestiality porn? Why would you want a group of apes to fuck Fubuki?

>> No.50319347

>>50241532
IRyS getting split roasted by Towa and Kanata.
IRyS's horns being used as handlebars is a requirement.

>> No.50319433

>>50315917
>the friends who bailed Anon out to begin with are all his giganigga true blue loyal ride or die homies he made during his youth at an inner-city middle-and-then high-school

>> No.50319584

>>50317847
Have you genuinely not read "Relapse" and "Omelas fan sequel", anon? Those two stories are tied and in it you have a group of friends who bail you out because you tell them about how your relationship is with Fubuki and they tell you that you are in a abusive relationship and they bail you out.

>> No.50319869

>>50319584
In fairness to them the friends are ultimately a minor character/event that just tells us why (You) managed to leave Fubuki rather than actual real characters.

>> No.50320090

>>50319869
Oh, right, my bad. I assume if a sequel "did" happen, they wouldn't get a mention at all right?
Truly a helpless situation for our poor anon huh. Stuck in a room with a mindbroken, dangerously thin fox (who happens to be his wife) raping him against his will (and also secretly enjoying it because its been so long since he shared something intimate with her) and anything he tries to say to her falls on deaf ears because as far as she's convinced, your "heart" is tainted and its her job to cleanse you while also hoping to get pregnant as well. Also she would possibly end up still abusing you (though mental this time) hoping you'll break quicker and she would only feed you (if she's that far gone) if you behave and be obedient.
Although it makes me wonder. Assuming anon DOES break and Fubuki were to untie him (because she now sees that he won't try to leave her), you think he'll end up trying to kill her?

>> No.50321604
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50321604

Your Favorite fic WILL get an update.

>> No.50322365

>>50319347
Her horns seem kind of sharp-edged, but I guess you have to make some sacrifices.

>> No.50324380

>>50321604
It sure will...

>> No.50325345

>>50321604
Even if the author said he probably won't make a sequel?

>> No.50326241

>>50325345
What's the fic?

>> No.50326252

>>50321604
Yeah. When I write the update.

>> No.50326503
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ok i get the revolutionary concept to SAVE /wg/. hear me out guys
First we need a hag.
Then... WE BREED HER

>> No.50327070

>>50326241
Our Cures

>> No.50327385

>>50327070
Huh?
That author literally said they had a sequel in planning. Just one stuck in between concepts of 'run with Ayame being a Yakuza princess in hiding' and 'University Drama/Comedy'.

>> No.50327478

>>50321604
IT'S A JUNGLE DOWN THERE

>> No.50327859

>>50327385
I thought he gave up on it after discussing some ideas and deciding it probably won't be as good as the original.

>> No.50330000

Man... I always struggle with the first few lines of a story. Once I get the ball rolling it's not a problem, but setting the scene in a way that grabs the reader's attention is tough.

>> No.50331680

>>50326503
Go on.

>> No.50332201

>>50326503
I volunteer to burden myself with the task of breeding.

>> No.50332818

>>50326503
Why settle for just one? I sure won’t be.

>> No.50333303

What we really need is that slut content
where the sluts at? i have $200 and no sentimental attachment?
also dont say at my mom's house, i keep checking and i just cant find them

>> No.50333871
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>>50333303
I know just the place. Go to the archive, open the fic Blowing off Stellar steam, scroll to the very bottom and message the email there.

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>>50331680
>>50332201
>>50332818
the-then...we...huuuh...i g.-..i .... OKAY I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO, WRITING IS HARD

>> No.50335910

What's a concept you'd like to see in a fic? Not necessarily a prompt, but an idea that could be implemented.
>Learning to love again after disastrous past relationships

>> No.50336805

>>50335910
>MiddleSchool/Highschool bully turned into love interest
I love this trope to death in part because it happened with a girl that used to pick on me but i know some fellas might find it hard to like it and even tell me its cliche but im a sucker for that kind of weird romance
Also extra points if the relationship is between two fucked up people

>> No.50336909
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>>50322365
Well Kanata and Towa are an angel and devil. Got superhuman durability or some shit.
And Kanata already was grabbing them already without any issues.

>> No.50337215

>>50335910
>Pregnancy announcement/proposal
I know there's a few in the archive but I want more.

>> No.50337327

>>50335910
>Starting/raising a happy family
it's the epitome of fluff

>> No.50337438

>>50337327
I can promise you that I’ll get to writing that eventually, but it’s gonna be a long ass time before I get there.

>> No.50337641

>>50337438
I don't mind the wait as I'm kinda writing one myself but who are you planning with it?

>> No.50337748

>>50336805
kind of the problem here is that no girl ''fits'' the bully archetype unless you are willing to bend over some of the personalities, but i do agree that we need more fucked up romances where both of the participants are human waste

>> No.50337792

>>50337641
Who am I NOT planning for it is a better question. There will be happy daughters of all chuuba races. The ones belonging to hags anyway and a few special outstanders.

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>>50333303
hear hear.I love our cures but it doesnt satisfy the slut angle im looking for. Waiting for that slampig fic with high hopes

>> No.50337935
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>>50337748
> Korone used to be a bully, a really bad one at that
> Multiple girls are absolute stacies
> some girls have gyaru alts
> some girls treat the viewers like trash
> no girl "fits" as a bully

>> No.50338129

>>50337935
Honestly MR koro smut doesnt do it for me. I like her a lot but i just cant get it up to her, which is sad because she's the one who used to be a bully
As for the other girls, Stacy =/= a bully. A stacy would maybe laugh at you or roast you in company, but wouldnt exactly bully you
When i mean a bully girl i mean someone throwing stuff at you, blackmailing you and tormenting you with a smile as she spits in your mouth which only makes it hotter when you re-encounter her years later and fuck her brains out while choking her

>> No.50338337

>>50338129
You're not going to see them as a bully because they wouldn't show you that side of them on stream. Go with your gut. These girls are not the angels you believe they are.

>> No.50338503

>>50338337
oh dont get me wrong, i dont see them as angels, i see them as dorky nerds.
Like, people call suisei stacy, but someone who speaks to her dolls and has a childlike palate isnt a stacy. Which brings us around to the ''bending'' the character.
Who knows, maybe once summer break rolls out i will write a romance where you and your former bully share a shitty apartment in a bad neighbourhood, all while fucking and fighting and sometimes you eat a cooked meal and cuddle in silence in your old futon

>> No.50338632
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50338632

>>50337748
>no girl fits the bully archetype
Should have specified holo

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>>50338632
>selen will never look at you this after you ask her out in front of all her friends

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>>50337792
My man. I await the day you come to write it.

>>50338503
>a romance where you and your former bully share a shitty apartment in a bad neighbourhood, all while fucking and fighting
I love shit like this. Cohabitation is something that isn't utilised in too many fics here

>> No.50339710

>>50338632
>>50338720
>middle school, you sneak in the girl's lockers for a quick fap and some photos
>get found out by selen.
>Selen torments you for years in middleschool and early highschool since she's the track race ace, projected to go to the olympics
>starts with petty stuff like name calling and gradually ramps up, you start getting beaten up, thrown into lockers and then it escalates into borderline psycho behaviour
>forcing you to jerk off in camera, pissing on your lunch and forcefeeding it to you, sticking a dildo up your butt and laughing while you cum
>she genuinely gets off at your misery, masturbating while tormenting you until you cry.
>your parents/Staff finally realize and you change school
>fast forward years later. Fired from job for stealing and selling creepshots from your coworkers. you've stopped seeing a psychiatrist long ago. No friends, nothing
>Rent an apartment that is on the verge of falling apart, truly garbage part of the town
>And there's selen. You getting transfered got her expelled from the competition when her team was going to nationals
>Team takes it out on her, now she's the one getting tormented, except she fights back
>expelled
>joins another school, tries to find a new toy. Gets found out and expelled, again
>Car accident puts a permanent stop in her running career. Without a sport scholarship, she barely graduates
>Working dead end jobs she can barely stay hired for because she's a truly awful person
>And now, she has to share her rundown apartment with the guy who ruined her life
>Fistfight between you two. There, blodied and bruised, something snaps
>years of repressed anger manifest in the form of sex. fuck each other with the anger of a thousand suns, hair pulling, biting, spitting, punching and choking
>And that's the start of the lovestory

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>>50339710
I don't want my dick to like this as much as it does

>> No.50340789

>>50336805
>>50337748
I know she's not a bully but Matsuri sounds ideal for this kind of story.

>> No.50342488

>>50241532
(You) using one of those remote controlled vibrators while your oshi gf is trying to perform on stage, followed by her scolding you for it before getting raped

>> No.50342675

>>50335163
Twap...

>> No.50343171
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50343171

I dreamt.

Unfortunately, it was a nightmare about weightlifting; far from the raunchy chuuba-themed sex fest I actually wanted. What a shame.

>> No.50343630

>>50343171
Ganbatte, Porndream Anon!

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> oooOooo...!
> Isn't it... kind of small?
> So cute!

>> No.50343963

>>50343908
POV: You're a shota

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>>50343630
Thank you, anon. I'm sure with you support that tonight will be the night.

>> No.50344183

>>50343963
>>50343908
POV: You are you right now

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I'm confused. What POV is this?

>> No.50345130

>>50344961
Mine

>> No.50345333

>>50344961
the nine foot tall orc that kidnapped her's

>> No.50345337

>>50338503
>a romance where you and your former bully share a shitty apartment in a bad neighbourhood, all while fucking and fighting
i WILL definitely read it

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>>50339710
Where did you get this word for word recreation of my middle school experience?

>> No.50346089

>>50338503
>Like, people call suisei stacy, but someone who speaks to her dolls and has a childlike palate isnt a stacy.
This really is an underexplored part of the comet that isn't nearly shown off enough in fics. Like, yeah, I get that smut isn't exactly going to have a place for her being a cute little weirdo, but it's also not really shown off even in non-smut works.
I guess its because its something that conflicts with the 'fantasy'/myth Suisei has around her where its kind of incongruent unless you know more than the surface.

>> No.50346990

>>50338503
>Like, people call suisei stacy, but someone who speaks to her dolls and has a childlike palate isnt a stacy.
That's called a Giga Stacy, idiot.

>> No.50347888

>>50243458
Twist - she absolutely can still get pregnant. With multiple children. Constantly. God pregnant women are so hot.

>> No.50347948

>>50347888
That just makes the prompt useless, why even have that schlock of a twist?

>> No.50348009

>>50346089
Stacy is one of those words that have lost all meaning.

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>>50241532
Imma steal that guy's idea:
Dragon's go instantly in heat when they recognize a suitable partner to have offspring with. After you show your worth, Coco has to choose between her pride and her desire to carry your children

>> No.50348482

>>50347948
It would make sense if she was lying about being infertile and is now carrying a big litter in her womb.

>> No.50348692

>>50348193
i like the idea, but what even is ''showijng your worth'' in this context
Do you like, open a jar of pickles and Coco starts squirting?

>> No.50348902

>>50347888
Counter twist - she "can" get pregnant but only when she chooses to. The only reason she can't is because (You) mindbroke her with amazing sex and the only thing she has going in her mind is having her brains fucked out and sucking your dick bone dry.
Or if you don't like my idea you could always go with Mio being your friend with benefits and she merely sticks with you because she enjoys your company and she knows how lonely and depressed you are.

>> No.50348951

>>50348482
>lying about being infertile
How is finding out that she is infertile, "lying".

>> No.50349020

>>50348692
i mean it could be a fantasy setting.
>fight coco in her dragon form, both of you are evenly matched
>She goes into heat
>make up an excuse and tells you to comeback another day
or fuck her full of kids, i dunno man i already stole the idea

>> No.50349483

>>50348692
You know, beating her up in a shirtless fist fight on top of the Tokoyami Towa, standard dragon stuff.

>> No.50349778

>>50349483
>beat her up
>''Ready to fill me up with you hot baby batter anon? im sensing triplets''
>''what? no...i just wanted another move...''

>> No.50350199

>>50348692
Why do you think that's a bad idea? Can you imagine Coco struggling to open a pickle jar, you step in, pop it effortlessly and that alone makes Coco's womb go kyun for you?

>> No.50350356

>>50348692
It could also be that you're very wealthy and can afford a good amount of silver, gold and gems. Dragons love sleeping on treasure.

>> No.50350467

>>50350199
that's a fun concept for a comedy/smut comedy
Anon is like the most mundane shmuck that can do basic handyman jobs and that makes Coco unfathomably horny

>> No.50350607

>>50350356
>Dragons love sleeping on treasure.
She DID buy a very expensive bed.

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>>50350467
imagine being Coco's kid and seeing your dad fix an electrical outlet, that just means another sibling is coming in 9 months

>> No.50350829

>>50350767
Just a minor thing, but I think it should be a longer pregnancy for dragons (if she doesn't lay eggs).

>> No.50351023

>>50350829
If human = takes longer but she is more likely to birth several at once
If egg = pregnancy cravings are a ton of milk and chewing on bones, only one large egg but doesn't take as long to make

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>>50350767
>playing in the backyard with your 5 siblings
>remember something
>walk to the kitchen, Dad's reading the newspaper
>''Dad...can you fix my bike?''
>He looks at the Kitchen's entrance
>Coco is looking at him with slit pupils, breathing heavily and gripping the doorframe so hard she's breaking the wood
>''uuuh...maybe in the weekend champ''

>> No.50351258

>>50351057
And... what happens once her kids are old enough and they start fixing stuff for Coco instead of you?

>> No.50351329

>>50351258
she starts criying because ''whores are gonna steal them'' and then goes into helicopter parent mode

>> No.50351331

>>50351258
The younglings are eventually kicked out of the nest to find their own partners and start a family.

>> No.50351640

>>50351258
it depends if they are boys or girls
if they are boys, she's proud, and if they are girls she makes sures to pamper them so they dont become dragoncels in the future

>> No.50351967

>>50350767
Who the hell is coco?

>> No.50352406

>>50351967
my favorite whore-turned wife

>> No.50352602

>>50339710
This feels like series bait and yet I don’t know where you’d take this. Could be Selen and (You) turning their insanely toxic co-dependent relationship into a weapon to get back at the world. Just two truly awful people going around spreading chaos and rape and catalytic converter theft but it’s OK because it’s a love story and they’re the protagonists.

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>>50346089
Showing off Suisei's autism in fluff is honestly a lot harder than it seems, at least from my experience. You are on the right track of it not having a place in a piece of work. Like, what purpose would a scene of her talking to her doll serve? Even if you wrote specifically with the scene in mind, trying to make it work in the overall narrative (and yes fluff does have a narrative) is just a lot more work than needed. Like yeah, it's a cute detail about her character, but bringing up to just bring it up is IMO, a bad idea. I think it works best in an introductory scene as an ancillary detail.

I agree with you in general though, it's a detail about her not included enough. Suisei is actually quite playful and goofy. A good writer can make it work as a central premise I think. There's no such thing as a bad idea after all. It's just that Suisei's autism is a unique flavor and as she's said herself, she knows how to behave, so it's not as simple.

>> No.50352791

>>50352602
if you ask me, there's two clear directions
>The scott pilgrim one, where both of them realize how garbage they are and decide to take the first step to improve together
or
>The tragic one where they get shot/in jail/separated after a period of happyness, because karma or something

>> No.50352900

>>50352602
I feel like that doesn't really do the 'pathetic losers brought together' dynamic justice. If there's series bait in the concept it would probably be in the romcom shenanigans that eventually brings the two of you together, maybe with the ending being about eventually accepting each other and going out to a McDonald's drive thru and finding out on the radio that the two of you managed to win the lottery or something.

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>>50352791
why not
>At some point in the story, both of you start saving money for X thing after swindling people/selling weed or whatever
maybe a better apartment or something like that.
>both go ''the one that gets caught loses the right to the money''
>much much later, as they fall in love, one of you lands in the slammer
>the other uses the money for bail
>poor and broken, but at least we have each other

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Showing off personalities properly in writing is as difficult as something can be in writing. Much like writing in an ESL manner, the way that character's mind works in fundamentally very different from yours. If you were as funny or as charming or as entertaining and likeable as the chuuba you're writing about, you'd be in a position like theirs. As a writer, you can only hope to mimic a fraction of their power. How do you write that character saying a joke if you're not a funny person? You can't. You'd have to think like they do.

That's why the cream of the crop of fanfic writers are the ones who consume enough material that they can manage to start thinking how the character would act. And there's a world of difference between someone there and someone here.

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>> No.50353515
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>>50352726
Honestly, I feel like Suisei's autism would be best shown off in something like a slow burn romance with a focus on the gap moe between the idol she tries to be and the girl that she is.

>> No.50354101

>>50353473
Sounds like you're just a bad writer.

>> No.50354663

>>50354101
Fundamentally, all writers are. Writing is an expression of imitation. Neither you, nor I, nor anyone else, perhaps not even the chuuba herself, could write the character we mean to depict accurately. Such is part of being human. We cannot know everything, at all times.

>> No.50354722

>>50354663
>Neither you, nor I, nor anyone else, perhaps not even the chuuba herself, could write the character we mean to depict accurately.
Bad writer cope.

>> No.50354994

>>50354722
I agree. Skill issue.

>> No.50355824

>>50353473
>How do you write that character saying a joke if you're not a funny person?
You realize that writers have all the time in the world to come up with that stuff right? Even if you aren't naturally off the cuff witty you don't have to be because writing isn't off the cuff.

>> No.50356896

>>50352900
That lottery idea sounds cute. Imagine (You) winning the lottery and Selen expecting you to move out of the apartment and leave her behind, only for you to say, “pack your shit, I’ve found a nice place.”

>> No.50357704

>>50353473
>Showing off personalities properly in writing is as difficult as something can be in writing
Just watch streams.

>> No.50358248

>>50353473
I disagree.
In Bird by Bird, Anne Lammot said that she hated gardening, but wanted to add good descriptions of gardens to her books, so she pestered a friend who was super into gardening into telling her how shit worked, what he would see in X season of the year, how he felt, etc. In turn, the gardens in her stories were very well described and vivid. Many people tried to make small talk with her about flowers and stuff thinking that she was super into gardening and then she told it was the complete opposite.
You don't need to be your characters, you need to study them.
Like the others said, watch streams.

>> No.50360322

>>50353473
Stop making feeble ass excuses and just watch streams.

>> No.50360872
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50360872

What do you consider to be your best work? And what about your worst work? Why?

>> No.50361060

>>50357704
>>50358248
>>50360322
Good advice, I wonder why people still try and make excuses to not watch streams when it will help them.

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>>50353515
Absolutely, if written with it in mind from the get-go, the idea can work no doubt. The question is then what's the initial relationship between (You) and Suisei like and how soon does she show her hand? It's hard to say since Suisei is such an aromantic on camera. A childhood friend relationship would work. Or you can make it a bit of a comedy fic and have Suisei flip it immediately. Honestly, a fic where Suisei is an unhinged goofball at her boyfriend sounds like a lot of fun.

>> No.50361405

>>50360872
>best work
All of my works, i love every single part of them
>worst work
All of my works, i still can improve

>> No.50362092

>>50361060
>I wonder why people still try and make excuses to not watch streams when it will help them.
Laziness if I were to guess.

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>>50361060
Honestly there's no reason to not watch a stream unless you are making a shitpost short story/a short drabble.
besides, if you watch streams you end up discovering stuff you like.
I wasnt a 'ela fan, but i started doing research on her for a wip that never took off, but i liked her so much i wrote fanning the flames

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>>50361112
I think if there was a suisei fic to take notes from in order to try something like this it would have to be Safety Spats as despite it being a femboy fic the 'core' of the romance, of suisei hiding her true self and (You) accepting her would probably be a good possible base for a story centered around her gap moe.

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50363358

>>50361060
>>50362092
>>50362316
Showing off personalities properly in writing is as difficult as something can be in writing. Much like writing in an ESL manner, the way that character's mind works in fundamentally very different from yours. If you were as funny or as charming or as entertaining and likeable as the chuuba you're writing about, you'd be in a position like theirs. As a writer, you can only hope to mimic a fraction of their power. How do you write that character saying a joke if you're not a funny person? You can't. You'd have to think like they do.

That's why the cream of the crop of fanfic writers are the ones who consume enough material that they can manage to start thinking how the character would act. And there's a world of difference between someone there and someone here.

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>> No.50363535

>>50362316
>Honestly there's no reason to not watch a stream unless you are making a shitpost short story/a short drabble.
Agreed, but you still have people refusing to watch them even though it would help them with what they are working on.

>> No.50364196

>>50363358
You're an idiot that has Dunning-Kruger'd themselves into thinking getting a character right is impossible.
Watch some streams, watch some clips, make some notes, and try to write rather than think it can't be done.

>> No.50364372

>>50362316
To play Devil's Advocate, there's a fuck ton of Hololive streams out there and there's always more every day. Hololive has been a thing for like what, 5 years now? Theres probably more than 5 years' worth of VODs out there and that number continues to grow. There's not enough time in a day to consume Hololive. That's not even to mention the time and effort to sift through those streams for useful information. "Watch streams" while both a valid and effective piece of advice, is not very efficient, especially if you have other hobbies or responsibilities.

That said, there's still no excuse to not do your research, like at the very least watch clips (not that clips don't have their own problems) if you can't commit the time to watch two or three streams.

>> No.50364385

>>50353473
>>50363358
Bro, no matter how many times you repeat it, it won't be true. Just watch streams instead of making excuses.

>> No.50364506

>>50364372
oh yeah, im not saying GO AND WATCH THE ENTIRE NINA DARKEST DUNGEON VOD CATALOG or watch Botan play RE before writing.
just catching one or two streams is enough, then there's also clips and highlights.
Overall, just watching A stream is enough to get the feel for someone's personality

>> No.50364638

>>50364372
>"Watch streams" while both a valid and effective piece of advice, is not very efficient, especially if you have other hobbies or responsibilities.
I mean, it's better than wasting hours of your life trying to make excuses as to why you can't watch one or two streams like some people in this thread.

>> No.50365459

>>50364638
Clips would be fine, though you shouldn’t be relying on them that much.

>> No.50366072

>>50364372
Nobody is asking you to watch five years of VODs. Just watch a stream when they appear to get an idea of their personality.

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50366479

>>50241532
Koyori marathon sex

>> No.50366502

>>50366479
It annoys me her braids hide her human ears.

>> No.50366748

Honestly, I don't think there's only one right way to write/research any one chuuba. As characters, there's a lot of recognizable versions of each one, real, pretend, or imagined. You could write them exaggerated like they are in clips, the probably more subdued versions from long streams, how they come across in their lore and scripted content, how different they acted at debut vs now, how they talk about themselves irl vs how they appear on stream, memes and jokes they lean into, how they acted during a personality arc like Haachama's schizo arc or Matsuri's seiso reinvention, and the list goes on. They show many sides of themselves in different ways and at different times and fans interpret those things in their own ways as well, so I think it's fine to just pick the one that best suits your ideas and ignore others if it helps.

>> No.50366769

>>50364372
> To play Devil's Advocate, there's a fuck ton of Hololive streams out there and there's always more every day
Yes, and? Just watch a couple during the weekend. You make it sound like it’s harder than it is.

>> No.50367112

>>50366748
To add to this, you can also get some unique insight by listening to what their genmates/friends have to say about them. Talents are constantly telling stories about their experiences with their coworkers.

>> No.50367349

>>50366479
Please kemono writers dont forget to kiss the ears and fluff the tails

>> No.50367585
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50367585

Alright so I've been playing a lot of Honkai Star Rail and No Man's Sky and that gave me a sudden flash of inspiration. Which chuubas would be best suited for a sci-fi series about space exploration ?

>> No.50367812
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>>50367585
Usui Clear Rocket is the obvious first choice

>> No.50367834

>>50367585
someone mentioned AZKI as an AI that helps you navegate once and that stuck with me

>> No.50367843

>>50367585
Moona. She is calm, cool, autistic, and also her name is Moona.

>> No.50367854

>>50367585
Iofi
Roboco

>> No.50367860

>>50366748
Nah, bro. Watch streams. All the things you just said is nothing more than an excuse.

>> No.50368094

>>50367812
QRD ?

>>50367834
>>50367843
I could work with those nicely

>>50367854
>Iofi
I hate myself for not thinking of her immediately, I almost forgot her lore was that she was an alien.
>Roboco
I already plan to use her for a cyberpunk story I'm writing, but sure, why not ?

>> No.50368392

>>50366502
Why would she have human ears

>> No.50368460

>>50367860
I do watch streams, but I'll give an example. My oshi is Kiara. If I wrote about her based off of her streams I would be writing about an insecure Austrian girl who tries very hard to make sure everyone around her is always having fun and is a bit clingy. If I wrote about her based off of memes and scripted content, she could be my hyper capitalist boss who tortures me and mindbreaks me into only being able to cum when she commands it. Two different versions but both are the character of Takanashi Kiara. So which version I would want to portray would depend on what I'm writing.

>> No.50368784

>>50368460
>If I wrote about her based off of her streams I would be writing about an insecure Austrian girl who tries very hard to make sure everyone around her is always having fun and is a bit clingy.
Yes, we call that non-smut fiction
>If I wrote about her based off of memes and scripted content, she could be my hyper capitalist boss who tortures me and mindbreaks me into only being able to cum when she commands it.
That's smut fiction

>> No.50368840

>>50368094
>QRD ?
Japanese girl that really likes watching rockets take off.

>> No.50368919

>>50368840
Huh, cute.

>> No.50369042

>>50368784
They're actually both smut fiction, thank you.

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>>50368094
>I hate myself for not thinking of her immediately, I almost forgot her lore was that she was an alien.
She's there to make you "boldly go" where you've never gone before

>> No.50369636

>>50368460
That’s cool and all, Anon. But other people still need to watch streams

>> No.50369990

>>50367585
Marine

>> No.50370365

>>50367812
Who?

>> No.50370391

>>50368392
She wouldn’t. Or, I don’t think she would.

>> No.50370578

>>50370391
Fubuki does so why shouldn't Koyori.

>> No.50370626

>>50370578
Because Koyori isn't Fubuki?

>> No.50370681

>>50370626
Both are canids.

>> No.50370752

>>50370681
Both are Virtual YouTubers, anon. Not actually Canis.

>> No.50370889

>>50369621
Kek.

>> No.50371191

>>50370681
They’re anime girls for real woman, Anon.

>> No.50371593

>>50364372
You could even visit their generals, or their wikia page. Like, for real, people have multiple ways to learn about a certain chuuba. There’s no excuse.

>> No.50371804

>>50371593
The Hololive Wiki is surprisingly good.
The other vtuber wikis suck.

>> No.50371989

>>50371593
>You could even visit their generals, or their wikia page.
Or heaven forbid, TvTropes.

>> No.50372273

>>50371989
>TvTropes
Go back.

>> No.50372461

>>50371989
>>50372273
Nothing wrong with tvtropes.

>> No.50372919

>>50371593
Yeah, but idiots here would spoonfeed them, so they never have to bother.

>> No.50373789

>>50351967
A has been.

>> No.50374140
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50374140

Given the choice, would you rather have the chance to cum inside your oshi once, or would you rather be allowed to cum on any surface of her body twice?

>> No.50374293

>>50374140
She needs the pregnancy correction

>> No.50374363

>>50374140
Inside, easily. Pulling out is gay and retarded.

>> No.50374774

>>50374140
How is this even a question.

>> No.50374855

>>50374293
Would you really go as far as trying to impregnate your oshi? That's so rude

>> No.50375133

>>50374855
If you’re so bothered by the answer why even ask the question?

>> No.50375663

>>50374140
I would pick neither of those two options.

>> No.50375689

>>50374140
Inside once. She needs to have my children.

>> No.50376008

What are the actual odds of getting a girl pregnant if you cum inside? I know it depends on the stage of their cycle and that sperm can live inside them for a couple days, but there’s no way of guaranteeing it.

>> No.50376104

>>50376008
>What are the actual odds of getting a girl pregnant if you cum inside?
You know you can just search it up, right?

>> No.50376113

>>50376008
Use google or any other search engine.

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>>50375689
Specifically, this girl. I want to cum inside this girl.

>> No.50376190

>>50376008
If it's my seed, 112%.

Most eggs are genetically defective so even if she is ovulating, you can fertilize several eggs that don't result in anything. It's actually quite hard to get someone pregnant.

>> No.50376234

>>50376190
>It's actually quite hard to get someone pregnant.
Yeah, I fucking wish that were the case...

>> No.50376278

>>50376234
Word of advice, don't ever let your kids know they were an accident.

>> No.50376408

>>50376278
Fortunately, they were aborted - we were both 16 - but she wanted to do it raw using the pullout method, and I was young, stupid and REALLY horny... surprisingly, despite pulling out and finishing in her mouth, she still ended up with a bun in the oven. Shit sucked.

>> No.50376741

>>50376408
Im sure things were worse for the kid that never got to live its life. You are a terrible person.

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>>50376741
Low effort and could see it coming a mile off. You can do better than that.

>> No.50377129

>>50376408
As someone who's never smoked, never saw the appeal of alcohol and never had unprotected sex, it really makes me wonder how some teenagers are dumb enough to do it raw if they have first world education.

>> No.50377237

>>50377129
You're probably a more risk-averse person than the average human.

>> No.50377323
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>>50377237
What bothers me is just that. They know the risks, they do it anyway, because they are dumb. If you had a button in front of you that made sex 50% better, but had a 10% chance of permanently ruining your life, you wouldn't take it. At least I hope not. I think it's either lack of education or some form of ignorance. "It can't happen to me, I only did it once" sort of thing.

>> No.50377381

>>50377323
I suppose one way to see it is that: they know it's risky, they don't know how risky it is, they know the consequences, but they never stopped to think what those consequences truly mean. Therefore I conclude that it is both ignorance and lack of education, which baffles me, because it really shouldn't happen in first world countries anymore.

>> No.50377592

>>50377323
10% is a high estimate considering morning-after pills, and even then you can abort pretty early. I know the US and a lot of the Third World is obsessed with embryos and small fetuses but where I'm from aborting in the first few months is w/e.

>> No.50377724
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>>50377592
In my shithole of a country medical abortions are illegal. Shouldn't stay that way for long, given that nearly every single young women is a feminist and that has been the case for enough years that it is starting to matter. (the good type, not like in the US, which corrupted the idea). That's why we have to resort to... alternative measures, for now.

All that being said, in retrospect, I do feel kind of like a loser for ranting about teenagers having fun, even if it is life destroying fun, while I sit in an anonymous basket weaving forum jerking off to pretend anime girls who I've come to fall in love with being gangbanged in erotic art. And it is also pretty dumb of an argument, because ignorant and stupid people will exist, regardless of how much we try to change that fact.

>> No.50377789

I wonder what the seriesanons are up to

>> No.50377809

>>50377789
Busy aborting kids

>> No.50377901

>>50377724
It's natural to put down something one can't have, I think. We want to feel better about ourselves so we focus on the downsides of what others have and we don't; sex, drugs, children, work, no work, old age, young age...

>> No.50377921

>>50377789
Waiting for that one guy to give feedback on all the five series that he promised to read

>> No.50377965

>>50377921
Which guy? When?

>> No.50377988

>>50377901
Oh no, I don't want unprotected sex, alcohol, drugs, none of that. I value my life too much for doing these things. I unironically believe in... a society? How do I even put this? I believe mankind can do better. Something like that. I'm hopeful for it. That's why seeing some things like that, hearing about them, in this day and age, it's disappointing.

>> No.50378113

>>50377965
That >>50232751 guy

>> No.50378209

>>50377724
>abortions are illegal
As they should be
>nearly every single young woman is a feminist
Somewhere in South America I presume?

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>>50378209
You might want to take a look at what all the countries in which abortion is still illegal have in common, and reconsider your judgement. Or perhaps, going to live in one of those countries, if you like it so much.

>> No.50378508

>>50378344
Most of the EU is pretty strict on abortion. Stricter than the United Mutts of America at least. So your argument is worthless.

>> No.50378534 [SPOILER] 

>>50377724
Moral of the story, do it up the ass and/or mouth(though probably not in that order) to avoid pregnancy.

>> No.50378565

>>50378534
Do you really want to risk an assbaby?

>> No.50378571
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50378571

>>50378534
Don't do it at all. V-Voluntarily, of course.

>> No.50378631

>>50378534
>do it up the ass and/or mouth
Words to live by.

>> No.50378646

>>50337907
You can always just commission something

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50378670

>>50368460
>people are... le multifaceted and complex?

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50378760

R-Remember to use a condom, ok? It's not a safe day...!

>> No.50378820

New thread
>>50378672

>> No.50378827

>>50378760
Absolutely not. Not with you, Ui. You're getting triplets, at the bare minimum.

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>>50378827
Triplets? Have you forgotten to take your medication, perhaps? You're saying ridiculous things. The only thing I'm getting is out of here. Drop dead.

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