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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

The Scent of Lavender: Genres: Sniffing, Underwear, Flowers:>>49530543

Cover High/Pekora Penultimate Chapter: Tags: SFW, Pekora, Pekomama, Fluff/Romance, Comedy:>>49641982

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Forging an intense bond/rivalry with a chuuba after you try and kill each other:>>49536128

Being forced to have lovey-dovey impregnation sex with a chuuba that hates you and that you hate in kind.:>>49599426

Mio's womb has no more eggs and (You) make it your mission to fuck her nonstop until your cum revives her womb and gets her pregnant.:>>49610186

This:>>49614303

A hardboiled investigation on the Suisei train crash.:>>49649721

Pekomama seduces and dominates Miko after she notices how horny and desperate for her daughter Miko is.:>>49659950

Anon slowly breaking down the strong-willed Flare's defenses so she cheats on Noel.:>>49661517

Sora revealing she's Pekora's long lost sister:>>49666329

Slaughtering Batarians with Pekora.:>>49672654

NEPOBO get fed up with Lamy's drunken antics and decide to cure her alcoholism by making her chug semen:>>49674459

Oyakodon BDSM with an embarrassed Pekora and her kinky mother:>>49674516

As the mafia wars rage on the city, you pledge loyalty to [Chuuba of your choice] as their faithfull soldier:>>49691446

Ever since her letter of marque was rescinded, Marine's been...off.:>>49705728

Shion just has a good day.:>>49713714

>>49641982
I’m glad you’re still around, anon. A truly delicious chapter - chef’s kiss. First things first, I still hang on to the opinion that your interludes can be a little over-the-top when it comes to flowery descriptions. Granted, they paint a pretty good picture of the scene, but I’d say you don’t have to lay it on THAT thick with the adjectives.
Besides that, I enjoyed everything about the chapter. I love the little experiments you do with formatting and the implementation of links and other media - very pleasing on the eye. Especially the text exchange worked quite well.
Funny enough, when I read that anon would be meeting pekomama in this chapter, first thing that came to my mind was the exact same scene where anon sees pekomama for the first time and thinks to himself “damn, if that’s what pekora will grow up to be, I HAVE to put a ring on her!” - guess that line of thought is just plain rational, all things considered.
As for pekomamas character, I don’t have many complaints at all. I would maybe preferred her a bit less sexy and a little more teasing (she was quite lenient with anon, I’d say) but other than that, she was well fleshed out and likable.
I just wish you would finally stop blue-balling us with the well overdue lovey-dovey pekosex, god dammit! Every new chapter just fuels the need that much more!
Good job, anon. Really. I’m looking forward to more, as always.

Words of the Thread
>Release
>Curious
>Playful
Use them to inspire whatever you want as long as it's chuuba related.
For extra context this was rolled off of a table called animal actions

posting my horny fic from /wawa/:

The stream cuts out and your pod opens. By now you know exactly what that means and stumble forward. Your bare feet hit the cold ground and the cool air envelops your naked body.
You reach the table and crawl on top of it, your hands and knees finding their positions on their own. You wait patiently on all fours.
The clicking of the door getting unlocked is enough to get you half erect in anticipation.
"Aww, you are waiting properly for me!" Kiara cheers as she enters.
As she walks towards you she pulls down the zipper of her uniform, exposing more of her chest.
"Good chickens get a reward", she says, pulling your face between her breasts as she hugs your head. You get rock hard because of the soft, warm sensation.
Way too soon she releases the hug and walks around you with a giggle. You can hear a soft clink as she puts a bowl right below your tip. With a clack she opens a body of lotion and spreads some on her heads.
"Ready?", she asks and immediately grabs your penis. Her hand barely reaches around your swollen member.
Her grip isn't all that strong and her hands are soft and warm. She starts moving, up and down.
"Have I ever told you what I even need this stuff for?"
Up and down.
"I use it for my seiso sauce. Of course I mix in other things so it tastes better."
Up and down.
"But the taste remains, of course. And that's the best part, you know?"
Up and down. You feel her other hand grabbing one of your balls and slowly massaging it.
"It got the idea from a German story, 'Des Kaisers neue Kleider'."
Up and down.
"I guess that would be 'the king's new clothes' in English. No, not king."
Up and down.
"The emperor? No, that's Imperator. Anyways, you probably know the story, right?"
Up and down.
"There were clothes only smart people could see but nobody could see them. Or so."
Up and down.
"And that's when I had the idea for the seiso sauce: if you know the taste and can guess what is in the sauce you are not seiso."
Up and down.
"Genius, right?"
She is awaiting a reply and since your entire body is trembling already you just weakly nod.
Up and down.
You feel something soft and warm on your ball that isn't getting massaged and in the next moment Kiara sucks it into her mouth.
Up and down, up and down.
She is increasing her rhythm and your feel her hot, wet tongue exploring your ball while the other one gets grabbed a bit more firmly.
Up and down, up and down, up and down.
Kiara's tongue wraps around your ball, you can feel her heartbeat pounding through it. She moves her head back a bit, ever so slightly pulling on you.
Up and down, up and -
You release your semen into the bowl below you, relief shaking your body, washing away all the tension the anticipation had build up. Your arms are shaking but you successfully struggle to hold your position.
Kiara releases your balls but keeps stroking you, as strong of a grip as she can muster when going down, less force when going up, she is determined to milk you dry for every last drop.
“That was so much”, she finally says happily, “well done, my cute chicken!”
After wiping her hands she picks up the bowl and lotion bottle and leaves, cheerfully shaking her ass on her way to the door.
“Only three more months and you will be released from here”, Kiara promises. “But until then you better behave, you hear?
And in German we say: Auf Wiedersehen!”
“Auf Wiedersehen”, you reply with a dry throat. All that is left for you now is to crawl back into your pod, watch more VODs and streams and hope Kiara comes back soon.

>>49723857
>>49721444

>>49723857
Based and chickenpilled

>>49645264
>>49645341
>>49645750
>>49646091
>>49656137
>>49722401
I appreciate the feedback. I’ll admit, I may have let my libido guide my hand and leaned a bit hard into “your son calls me mommy too” territory for Pekomama. It’s good to see that I at least seemed to nail her relationship with Pekora and their love for each other despite the teasing. Also glad that the twist with Pekomama’s scheming was well-received. I was originally going to have “Chaos is a Ladder” play during that part, but ultimately decided against it because I thought it might come across as trying too hard. The addition of music is mainly an attempt to reinforce the “visual novel” feel of the story, which thankfully seems to be paying off so far. I’ll try to ease up on the adjectives a bit and avoid getting TOO flowery with my descriptions.
And as always, I’m glad that people are liking my take on Pekora and her relationship with (You). She’s my favorite chuuba to write, so it’s always a good dopamine hit when someone mentions that CH got them to like her more. This story’s been a blast to make, even if it’s taken so long, so thanks for sticking with it this far. I hope that the finale ends up being worth the wait for you guys. And yes, I do still plan on Pekora receiving a well-deserved breeding once this is all over. Hopefully that will be worth the wait as well.

Cover High sex AND HoloJourneys sex?
/wg/ has a great Smut Summer ahead of it.

>>49725715
The peko relationship is pretty great. It also really shows that she's your favorite by how your write her. I've certainly grown more excited to write about this rabbit with a questionable moral compass because of your work.
>Spoiler
I'll love to read it when it happens.

>>49721467
futa aqua humilliation fic where Suisei finds out she has a dick and turns her into a buttslut that cant cum without help

has anyone here experimented with a vigilante/ super hero setting? i feel like i want to write something like that but i just dont have a good idea

>>49729760
Like full on capes and cities and stuff? Or are you more interesting in any setting but exploring the motivations and sacrifices a vigilante makes? While also going into how WHY they feel the need to take justice into their own hands?

>>49730055
Hmmm i never considered the second one, if im being honest my idea of capes was something like the incredibles, where bureocracy and social discontent forces them to act like vigilantes

>>49729760
Read Worm.
It's a webnovel, but the best superhero fiction to come out since Watchmen

>>49721467
>>49677004
We've had eating out Fubuki's ass but can get get a story about (You) huffing the scent of Fubuki's butthole and getting addicted to it like a drug to the point you chase Fubuki like a madman because you need to sniff her ass?

>>49730595
Those are the typical go to's for making someone take up the mantle of being a vigilante. You can also use things like the incompetency of the current law structure, or the complacency of those sworn to be that first line of defense. Straight impatience or personal vendettas are also a decent route. I'm not sure which chuubas you could really just throw into something like these though.

>>49731411
And people will try to convince you ass eating isn't related to brain worms

>>49729760
I've played around with the idea in my head of chuubas as superheros/vigilantes/magical girls but I've never really gone beyond idle speculation since I inevitably hit the stumbling block of 'how do you handle the double life' aspect.
Last thread's discussion was enlightening in showing that going for the 'make up a fake 'normal identity'/roommate' isn't an unfeasible option. So I guess there is a way to have that double life/secret identity aspect be part of a story without delving into actual roommate bullshit.

>>49732074
In terms of double life, I would just make some aspects of the vtuber identity the secret identity, and others the hero identity. It's easier with superheros because you can just have their hero identity be their kayfabe and lore, and have their secret identity be their actually displayed personality when vtubing

>>49732261
Yeah I suppose it could be something like that.
Though honestly chuubas don't really fit the traditional western superhero mold. They're more suited to being like magical girls where the separation of identities is less explicit.

>>49733417
You honestly could fit Chloe into the secret identity role kinda easily if you take a few liberties with HoloX. Chloe herself puts on an entire character for her streams and has been pretty upfront about that, so there's a clear separation of identity you can use. You can make that cutesy stinky orca the girl she shows the world, and when she puts on the mask, she gets more serious and does whatever vigilante things you want. You can also take it in a direction where it ends as an origin story of how she joins HoloX.

>>49729760
Steelheart-esque superpowers would be cool for chuubas psychologically

>>49730655
Webnovels? This is a thread for weebnovels.

>>49730655
That's not just a recommendation /here/ because the protagonist has the power to control bugs is it?

>>49735973
Funny if true

>>49733657
>Koyori there's no way that Killer Whale is my sister! They're pussies feel way different!

>>49736392(me)
>Minor spelling mistake
*Their...It's so fucking over for me

>>49735973
I mean, no, but the connection is pretty funny.

>>49735883
I understand you're likely kidding, but it's made me think of how devoid Japan is of superhero stuff.
Trying to get inspiration on superheroes solely based on Japanese works would be a nightmare.
What do you have to look at? My Hero Academia? Shy?
You'd be better off embracing the Super Sentai campiness than that schlock

>>49721444
Here's a really short story I wrote about an extra autistic Suisei who decides one day she wants to marry you.
This was originally supposed to be a prompt but I thought some dialogue would be good, and it ended up becoming a quick one shot. It's probably still better to treat it like a prompt rather than a story considering how low the word count is.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQYwlo61wpj6qvYqt-pCZ61h9_prD3yenPz2FLEIwIkFY4ZjCG8L3n3qTNBbcDa4CwPTVn-cEnG65RT/pub
Tags (I guess): Suisei, SFW

>>49727681
smut summer, I like it.

>>49738460
you’re right, it is really short. So short, in fact, that I have no idea what this is trying to be. Something comedic? A psycho-thriller? Fluff? Judging by the lack of tags you don’t even know yourself. Had you written a prompt, I would’ve at least had an idea what to do with the scene you proposed, where the journey was supposed to go.
This way, it’s really just a few lines of awkward dialogue that go nowhere. No context, no prospect, no nothing. Also,
>we’re going to get married
>we’re
>we are
it’s six words.

>>49740380
ふゆだ

>>49721467
Chuubas spiking your food right in front of your eyes it can be Nene awkwardly convincing you to eat it or Suisei applying pressure to force you to eat it

>>49740380
I'll do my part to make this an extra steamy, sweaty, smutty summer.

>>49741940
>Nene hands you a glass of fizzing pink liquid that's giving off heart shaped clouds of steam
>"I...asked for water."
>"It is water!"

>>49740380
I think summer smut sounds better

>>49743525
Well the fics are summer smut, but the season is smut summer.

>>49742077
>Nene that's spiked
>She gives you a smug look
>''Nene doesnt see any spike in it''
>...
>''Oh well, lets just get this over with''
>Drink the juice and blackout
>When you wake up you are in a tent near the river
>Nene is roasting a marshmellow
>''Its bad for you to be so much time indoors''

>>49743652
Alternative ending
> Wake up in a room full of beetles
> Nene is holding two bows full of beetle food
> Offers you one

>>49744305
> You are dressed as a beetle when you wake up

>>49744463
Shut up, Kafka.

>>49741963
Impregnate ALL the hags!

>>49725715
We are starved for good Peko sex so I'm hype

>>49748555
Delicious wakipai from the back

>>49750927
Her coat hides all the sex

>>49752162
Makes me feel sympathy for Miko.

>>49752220
Much like my feelings on O.J Simpson, I personally wouldn't but I understand

>>49748521
Wanna know the best part? The more time goes on, the more hags there will be.

>>49753782
im gonna sit and wait patiently until bae turns into a hag

>>49753853
Most of us will probably be dead by the time that happens

>>49753853
I can easily cope by remembering that she's an ancient embodiment of chaos. Easily hag status in universe. Can she be impregnated though? Let's find out.

>>49753853
>Anon angrily rolling a dice until the results come up to 30+ so he can finally fuck Bae.

>>49754366
Maybe there's a sex position that would be optimal for the impregnation of Baelz Hakos.

>>49755739
Some sort of position designed for mating that presses her down...shame something like that doesn't exist

>>49738460
Honestly it probably should have stuck to being a prompt but otherwise it's kind of cute.

>>49755415
>Bae changing the result because she wants to be impregnated at the peak of her fertility

>>49758461
Squidward and Patrick are horny.

>>49753853
>>49755415
>>49757826
>"Hey anon, do you want to have hot unprotected sex and pump me full of babys? Im ovulating right now"
>Negative possibility, skittle squad

>>49760463
haven’t heard that one before

>>49758461
it's really fucking funny that the entire ocean has banded together to rape fubuki

>>49746369
Nice. Anyone else for some A-Chan fanfic? There's only like...four or five ish dedicated fics of her?

>>49748555
>>49752162
I haven't wanted to sex the Peko before, but now I'm not so sure.

>>49761247
The entire animal kingdom lusts for the fox.

>>49763356
Don't fight the urge.

>>49765346
With looks like that, I think you're right.

>>49761247
Didn't even notice that lobster claw.

>>49763356
She keeps it on the down low well enough, but it's one of those things that once you see it you'll keep noticing

>>49721467
(You), a slovenly drunken mercenary in a high-fantasy world, pay a visit to a local inn whilst travelling in a band of like-minded sellswords to fulfill a contract - investigate a string of disappearances in a rural waterside hamlet and put a stop to them. The area's known for dangerous creatures hailing from a mountain bordering two city-states which use tablelands and forests at its base as a hunting ground - with rumours of wyrms dotting the sky at twilight abounding. Fears for your life couldn't outweigh the sheer amount of coin being paid by the magistrates of several villages who want to protect trade routes, you spend all your time at rest stops dousing yourself in ale to stave off these fears, when you hit it off with a particular fox-eared serving wench as she's taken in by your tales of adventure, glory and your vulnerability over your latest contract. Drunken, desperate sex ensues as you lay bare all of your desires to this girl who has you completely enamoured.

>>49773004
Hah, this would have been a good bait and switch prompt without the image. But I wouldn't want to miss it.

>>49773004
So (You) get seduced by Fubuki into sharing your secrets, then wake up with your liver eaten?

>Get inspired and come up with some exciting ideas and ways to rework some scrapped stuff
>They're all way further down the line then where I am now
Hate this fucking hobby. It's great.

>>49775857
If you weren't a masochist already when you picked up the pen, you'll be one by the time you put it down.

>>49775389
If you wanna go with that, sure. It's open-ended because it's entirely up to the writer.

>>49721444
Sand Planet: Chapter One
Tags: adventure, action, (you), Suisei, AZKi, piracy, realistic fantasy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSJRnp1YGK1bT8CvgJ0qc3tU5JmsnQ5XCfewOssxVL5VerADt3AzYiapwZI2hRV3gP9l3acZOD9iAPM/pub

It's been fucking forever since I wrote something so forgive me if it's a bit rough around the edges. Still trying to get my groove back.

>>49776083
I can bear any pain as long as it has meaning...or for the prospect of writing a good schizo meltdown

>>49776209
Well that certainly took a turn.
Were you spelling Chloe's name that way on purpose? At first I thought it was just a typo, but then it kept happening.

>>49776209
i got excited because i thought this was the ''AZKI is your hologram wife and you are a smuggler'' prompt but once i got past the initial dissapointment i gave it a fair shot
i think its a bit too straightforward. It flows well, but it lacks a bit of description and is a bit too stiff (like Azki just shouting out of nowhere) in some parts plus the ending is super abrutpt, but since you said you are getting back its understandable. Still i like the idea and you painted an interesting setting ,so ganbare

>>49776873
I always spell it that way out of habit. I always see chloe and think klow-ee rather than cole. I'll fix it in a moment, sorry about that.

Glad you enjoyed it though.

>>49776939
Yeah... I haven't written in over a year and a half so it may be a bit rough at first. I'll make sure to take note. I'll do more description and make it less stiff.

Thank you for giving it a chance. Hopefully I'll work the bugs out quickly.

>>49776209
>That misspelling of Chloe
Glad to have you back SakuraSummeranon.
Yeah it is rather rough as a starting chapter, it's rather light in content, and the formatting being spaced like that kind of exaggerates it.
Still I think it has potential.

>>49776209
This was an interesting first chapter that leaves on a good cliffhanger. I like how Chloe asks for money first and I like how a character dies. The one nitpick I have is that the ships shouldn't have S.S. as their prefix since they're not steam powered. The names of the ships alone would suffice. But it's in a fantasy setting so this nitpick is sort of pointless because in this universe it might be custom for ships to be prefixed with S.S. Not bad for your first fic in over a year.

bump

>>49721467
A story where Pekora remembers Miko's touch and has to distance herself from Miko in order to not rape her before masturbating

>>49730655
Why are people recommending that garbage pile, it has some cool shit in it but most of it is pure chore where author isn't afraid to retcon shit because he disliked how people interpreted his characters

Does ye anons here have any one chapter fics ye wishes had sequels or updates to them? I personally wish 'Definitive Proof of Sakura Miko's Heterosexuality' and 'Unhealthy Addictions' had some, but I'm curious to see what the anons here have read that they want more of.

>>49783637
>Unhealthy Addictions
i forgot that even existed, what a mess that fic was

>>49783809
>what a mess that fic was

Eh? Is there something I'm not getting from this fic? I mean, it seemed fine to me.

>>49783637
Butterfly bound, Broken Heartlock and I know auntine anon is still around but more Auntie's Little Secret.

>>49783809
I agree but I still think the fic has potential to be pretty good

>>49784278
awful main character

>>49783637
Holoreality, For a series fic that I wish got more chapters than just the one we got since it had so much potential.
Final Chapter: Omega for a one-shot that I also wish got more chapters/ more fics done in that style since hi-power chuuni shit is my jam.

>>49783637
Auntie's Little Secret first and foremost.

>>49784396

Eh? I mean, he does smoke a ton, and have a nihilistic fatalistic perspective on life, but that's nothing that many anons don't do. And I guess he was harsh on Polka and a bit moochey off Suisei. But he does ultimately do good by preventing polka from offing herself in the fic, and is good at heart under it all. Is this just me, anon?

>>49784571
Anon that fic has had multiple chapters at this point. I'm pretty sure the question wasn't pointed as a general what fics do you want to see come back.

>>49783637
Funny Uncle

>>49785751
I think I remember the last time someone talked about that fic in this thread the author said they'd abandoned the concept and just dumped their outline of taking care of matsuri for the rest of the pregnancy with the ending being her raping you after revealing (You) were the father all along.
I'm pretty sure at this point that concept would have to get 'adopted' by an anon in order for it to continue.

>>49785625
I'm pretty sure I don't care about your shit opinion.

So how are the wips coming along anons?
Bonus Question: If you're based off of a prompt how far do you think your fics has diverged from the original idea?

https://f95zone.to/threads/lista-de-juegos-en-espanol-spanish-games.31851/post-10772114
Buenos noches, amigos.
Ninisanni Scenario de la traduccion automatica! Muy bien!

>>49787891
Still planning, and writing down cliffnotes for good scenes that helped themselves into my mind and need to be captured before they're gone again.
Slow progress as usual, but I've accepted that I can't be on the same level as the local writing beasts when this is just a side thing of a side hobby for me. There's just too many things that one could write, that most will have to remain unwritten.

>>49789340
No tienes idea de cómo onions

>>49789499
>onions
hermanos de la espanola btfo
CuatroCanal esta ganando

>>49787891
Back to the planning stage. Most of the scenes for the chapter are outlined already, but I'm still deciding on what order to do them in and how to string them together in a way that flows smoothly. A festival is a bit of an open-world setting, so there's no "correct" order to tackle the various events in, with a couple of exceptions.
Bonus question: This whole series actually started from a prompt I posted myself way back when. "Pekora incessantly pranks you because she has a huge crush on you." Then I decided to take a crack at it myself. Originally it was going to just be a fluffy one-shot, but new ideas kept popping up in my head and I just ran with them. Before I knew it, the story's scale and cast size had both exploded, and I was sitting on the biggest writing project I've ever had. I regret nothing.

>>49721467
You manage to find out where your oshi lives, which route she takes to work, where and when she usually leaves the house and so you kidnap her. The girl you used to revere is now locked up in your basement and (You) have become her new master, her new God. Intense mindbreaking and corruption ensues.

>>49791073
Rape! RAAAAAAAPE!

>>49791073
This, except you treat her as a (captive) goddess.

>>49783637
Personally Guilty Caretaker

>>49785751
Interesting, I found that there is a another fanfic some overseas anon wrote. There is a story from two months ago about the 'Funny Uncle' story. If somebody wants I will try to upload it here.

>>49776209
Interesting premise and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I think towards the end I would add a small detail about Azki or (You) splattered with a little blood because of what just happened next to them. /wg/ is gonna get a heaping helping of pirates this summer, that's for sure.

>>49792877
What's the funny uncle story?

>>49793172
It looks Matsuri sneeks into the room and raping you while you're sleeping

>>49793276(Me)
Pretty normal, but the plot is ok I think

>>49783637
I know im in the minority here but i would love another yuzuki veterinary service
I think the author learned his lesson

>>49793674
>I think the author learned his lesson
What do you mean by this anon?

>>49793787
He lost three fingers and a nipple last time he posted

>>49793787
He had a bit of a shitfit over a dumb discussion and implied he was gonna delete his works. Of course, people dragged him a bit until he realized he was on the wrong and calmed down then apologized. Of course some people kept taking potshots at him, but i think he deserves another chance

>>49792877
Overseas stories? Do share!

>>49791073
Isn't this basically "Obsession" but with any oshi and possibly less of a (You) that is a heartless bastard?

>>49794223
Wasn't that because someone literally posted one of their fics but with a scene changed?

>>49794809
yeah, and while i get why he was annoyed, he then got a bit too mad.
but, as i said, he did apologize, which is extremely hard to find in this site so i say give him a chance
if you are lurking here buddy, know at least one guy will read your stuff

Holding grudges against anonymous authors is pointless, and ultimately just playing into the hands of the shitposters. Everyone is welcome to share their work without vitriol and spam.

What are you bros doing over the weekend towards your own progress? It can be anything from actually writing/outlining/drafting to not actually writing at all, but your activities can help give you the rest you need, or even the inspiration you've been looking for.
This weekend I need to work on our backyard a bit, the patio needs sprucing up and I'm helping to make a garden bed. Gonna try to be conscious of the textures and feels so the nature autism can flood my brain. I'm also seeing a play today that's gonna be some exaggeration of king henry's six ex wives, so maybe I'll get some good monarchal vibes I can use later from that.
Unfortunately I may not get much time to actually sit down and write this weekend, which kinda sucks since my brain is really itching for it, but I'll try to make the best of it.

>>49796184
im triying to finish a modern history assigment and catch up on my oshi's stream so i can finally write without feeling like im lagging behind.
aside from that, im thinking on researching some topics for a new WIP

>>49796184
feeding my Darkest Dungeon 2 addiction

>>49725715
>spoiler
I'm waiting for that anon, god bless

>>49796678
I am over mine, and currently getting back into my darkest dungeon 1 addiction.

>>49796184
My beta has gotten back to me and I have to implement edits to chapters 1 to 3, then work on 4 and 5.
Other than that, I have a hankering for quesadillas...

>>49796184
Probably going to spend it staring into static for another three days

>>49721444
Oh yeah I wrote this the other day

https://rentry.org/p6dtf

The Private Elevator
Tags: Reine/Reader, office setting, light verbal abuse, massage, blowjob, smut

>>49798337
Imagining Reine actually saying these lines is making me laugh for some reason.
Still, it's a pretty cute/hot one-shot.

>>49799352
I definitely forced her character into the role, but I tried to use some insults she actually says. Could have used more direct lines looking back on it.

>>49799544
It's less that I find Reine saying it completely ooc/comical and more that I find her saying it kind of cute in a strange way. It makes me want to pat her on head and go 'aww' at her saying mean words.

>>49799945
That was basically the feeling I wanted the MC to have, so I'm glad the perspective went through. Thanks for reading!

>>49778837
caught me. Amazing someone remembered that little tic.

Thank you, and I hope it does. As you know, I haven't written anything in ages. I'm writing chapter two now and I'm hoping it'll have a lot more meat on it.

>>49780057
Really? I had no idea that was the case. I always though it was State Ship (IE USS= United States Ship). Maybe it's just different when it's relegated to a country instead of a privateer or pirates. I will take note.

>>49793047
I'm hoping I won't disappoint.

Didn't realize pirates were in right now. Lot of pirate stories going on? I got this idea from playing far too many hours of civ6 so I actually already got something of a plot stitched together.

>>49798337
Solid prose. You made OL Reine look so hot in this fic. The descriptions, man. So detailed! The text in that massage scene and the subsequent BJ, my God. It was so damn hot.
Her OL tsundere-ness and dominatrix vibe are the cherries that top this cake. Great work, anon. I hope there's a sequel to this where they get into increasingly compromising but sexually tantalizing encounters in the office

>>49801782
/wg/'s Smut Summer has sparked some interest in pirates. Let's see what will happen!

>>49802235
It'd better have that scene in Pirates where they fuck as the ship burns around them while specifically avoiding their bed

>>49801782
Glad you liked it! I have a couple of stories I want to continue, but I really need a flash of inspiration to sit down and actual write. I'll try to push myself more and will post here if I write any more.

>>49802368
More power to you, Elevator Anon. As for inspiration, may I suggest either the prompt archive or these words of the thread? >>49722778 You'll never know where that next smut fic will come from

God I want to fuck Reine so fucking bad I can't fucking take it anymore give me that peafowl pussy you stupid frigid bitch

>>49803088
Incredibly based and same

>>49705899
There's a lot that's been taking up my time lately and not all of it is very productive, so there hasn't been much progress on chapter 2 since I've also been juggling a few WIPs. It's at 10k words as of yesterday with only 3 scenes left to write if all goes according to plan. There's a lot that needs editing but fingers crossed it'll be done by mid June.
Towa is currently being bullied into picking out clothes she wants.

>>49800900
>Pirates were in
Can't say for other people's WiPs, but so far we have what you just posted and the current arc of HoloJourneys is going to have some pirates in it soon. Probably a certain pirate hag as well.

>>49721444
Sand Planet: Chapter Two
Tags: Adventure, action, (you), AZKi, piracy, realistic fansty

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQZHY4frTs_NPM8EX7TS89ms-ucCc0i1XfvXO7nxlbX28d7jqZSrPzYXxTvVi5UQBThXdspPp7nx00g/pub

I tried to be more descriptive and give the dialogue a less stilted, wooden tone. I also made sure to spell Chloe's name correctly. I hope you enjoy and I hope this one is a bit better.

>>49804482
That was fast.

>>49806547
Got a lot of inspiration. I've been playing civ6 for a time so long over such a short period I am embarrassed to say the number. During that time I came up with various plots, this being one.

>>49804482
Interested to see what happens next.

>>49721467
Anon, an experienced mercenary, gets tasked with the mission of a lifetime. Protect the VIP and deliver her to her destination.
The amount of money is exorbitant, the vip is a pale half elf with a body blessed by the gods and the misision does not care for collateral damage
The catch? Well this fucking drunkard is a pain in the ass, she's demanding,clingy and dumb. Can Anon take her to her parents before he dumps the spoiled princess in the nearest garbage can?

>>49806547
SS anon is machine

>>49804482
hey that's a bit better! i still stand by my point that it goes a bit too fast and that it lacks some dressing. The part where they get in the lifeboats for example.
They get in the lifeboats THREE DAYS LATER land. It feels kinda rushed and you missed a good chance to spend some time with the characters.
However i do have one major gripe; the fact that the story kinda unfolds like a game map.
We know next to nothing about what's outside, except until one character goes ''well go there'' and suddenly there's a a river and a fort. Id suggest introducing some scenes of scouting, of wandering or even talking. Hell it could be a nice chance to make Anon stand out

I suggest working small details like this:

>Everyone! To the lifeboat!” AZKi shouted

>You ran to the side of the ship, getting on the starboard lifeboat,before helping lower a barrel of water from above

> “How do we know they aren’t just going to shoot the lifeboat too?” a panicked voice you cant pinpoint screams

>''Just get in, goddamit!'' You answer, cutting the rope
>“We either risk it or stay aboard the Hoshiyomi. I know which chance I’d rather bet on.” Azki's command is enough to shut them up

>>49812392
Fair enough. I guess it is a bit of a trap to have Lui use maps that reveal too much. I'll try not to use it as a plot contrivance, never even thought about that.

I'll try to tweak things like the example in the future. I'm hoping for third time's the charm. I'm glad it's a bit better at least. Thank you for sticking with it.

>>49812524
hey not a problem man, we all make mistakes. Just keep grinding and you'll get over them. you can do it!

>>49803475
S'ok. Best of luck, Anon and take your time. This stuff doth does take time after all.

>>49811772
This, but with Botan as the protagonist.

>>49721467
Anon goes on a comfy road trip with3 chuubas of choice.

>>49815497
nah

>>49811772
fuck that guy for always talking about lamy drinking cum, i just fapped to that thought

>>49783637
Sorry Anon, but Definitive Proof of Sakura Miko's Heterosexuality is about as one shotty as a one shot can get. It had one gimmick and I tapped out my imagination on it. I don't even know where it could go besides banging her in front of the whole office or fucking her on a members stream while chat cries, but at that point it's a different tone entirely.

>>49818359
>banging her in front of the whole office or fucking her on a members stream while chat cries
NTA but mate, you don't need a reason to produce some quality smut, and those are some HOT ideas. Plus, we're bereft of Miko sex in the archive; if Miko sex was currency, we'd all be paupers.

Also, sex foob.

>>49818477
I would love to write miko but without her retarded speech she isnt miko and i just laugh every time i picture her talking

>>49819126
sex the fox

>>49721434
God imagine blasting that bicolored bush with my load.

>>49820901
No thanks, I'd rather imagine doing that but with my own load.

bump

>>49804482
I'm already seeing improvement over the first bit! I like that Mel is included, hagpire doesn't get enough love. Lui was an interesting include but once I thought about it a little more, the role you gave her on the ship is perfect. Keep having fun with this, anon. I'm interested to see where this story goes.

>>49824351
idiot

>>49824574
I love the hagpire. She's criminally underrated and I want to use her in more stories. She's such a cute retard.

I'm glad it's improving. I'll keep going through with it. Glad you like Lui's role as well. Thanks.

>had a dream where Chuubas were robots and the setting was similar to zachbell mixed with a bit of medabots
>NeBo got ''eliminated'' from the tournament, so lamy equipped Botan's guns and Polka was that fucked up 4 arms fanart version
>Anon (or the protagonist) had Sora, who had the power to mix any chip/part
Last time i have icecream before a nap

>>49826671
I feel you 100% man. I kneel to the fact that you took your love and just got her in there. I've got a long way to go to finally get to writing her in myself.

>>49796678
>>49796773
2 is a big step below 1.

>>49826988
You've been gifted by your dreams a chance to write a chuuba battle royale fic. Do you take it?

>>49828839
Me personally I don't mind the major changes, I just believe the game has some fundamental flaws Red hook has to sort out.
The new areas would've looked amazing in DD1 tho. I would kill to play the sprawl in 1.
Also
>>49721467
>DnD/Darkest Dungeon based fic, in which the chuubas play in GM Anon's campaign. The chuubas are in character/world constantly but there are constant 4th wall breaks for the usual TTRPG reasnons.
The chuubas could have various degrees of knowledge of DnD, so some act calm and collected while others ask questions every minute.

>>49831919
Which chuubas would fit best into the DnD player archetypes?
>the munchkin who min-maxes to hell and back
>the one who plays a brooding edgelord
>the murderhobo who keeps trying to kill everything
>the nympho who keeps trying to seduce everything
>the one who keeps forgetting about the rules
>the one who doesn't really want to be there
>the only one who makes actually rational decisions

>>49831919
That reminds me of a prompt pre-rushia yab about Gen 3 playing a ttrpg and by sheer coincidence they all came up with each other as characters.

>>49832499
>the nympho who keeps trying to seduce everything
Marine, bonus points if she has horrible luck and constantly rolls low

>>49818359
I mean, we could always have the fallout of the banging, or any of those ideas ye already posted. Miko sex is miko sex, and it absolutely got me balls to the walls laughing in the way pretty much no other fic did.

>>49832499
>the munchkin who min-maxes to hell and back
Koyori
>the one who plays a brooding edgelord
La+
>the murderhobo who keeps trying to kill everything
Chloe
>the nympho who keeps trying to seduce everything
also Chloe
>the one who keeps forgetting about the rules
Iroha
>the only one who makes actually rational decisions
Lui

>Box of wine: Poured
>Google docs: Open
>Multiple tabs with true crime cases of rape victims: Open
>Hand: In cock
Yep, it's writing time.

>>49839854
>Yep, it's writing time.

May the moomers be with you, young padawan

>>49839854
I am interested in this story.

>>49831836
but i dont know how to write action...

>>49721444
Sand Planet: Chapter Three
Tags: Adventure, action, (you), AZKi, piracy, realistic fansty

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRaqcgVOcE9DBEEGucR3j_llbdRPjmwchR6KK-Vwa1eAar_fWz6AWilwBJ8BYV-Q97o-aKY8Zk_GmOf/pub

>>49848135
Go do some CRP to get experience, I recommend.

>>49852064
CRP?

>>49852064
The fuck is CRP

>>49721467
Interrupting the chuuba battle royal tournament in order to find out what CRP is.

>>49852064
>>49853723
>>49856196
I think he means Chat Role Play lmao

>>49856740
Combat Role Play. I personally go on discord to do it, and with a no-time-limit turn based format, but there's probably other sites out there. It's basically a form of RP but geared towards combat.

>>49856885
Oooh, I didn't know there was such a thing! You guys use any rulebooks like GURPS or whatever?

>>49839854
Please don't put your hand in your cock

>>49856945
Well, no rulebooks, it's mostly just free-form text based stuff for me. Basically how it works is that each player takes their turn by writing out what their character does, and their reasoning for why it might work and how they're exactly doing it, then the other players do so as well, one by one. If there's a contest between one persons actions and another person's actions, its usually decided by how plausible the actions were.

For an example, if I decided to write that my character punched your character, then maybe I'll write "my character steps forward, then attempts a light jab at your OCs face, then follows it up with a cross." Then on their turn, knowing that I attempted two blows up high, they might decide to go for a dodge and counter for now, exploiting the lack of reasoning given to my first attack in order to take some liberties with interpretation, so they might write that they "duck down with a crouch and step forward then go for a hard and fast hook to your OC's liver. Since your OC stepped in for a jab, they're likely within firing range for return fire when I step in turn, and committing to the punches likely mean they'll be open for fires in return. If this lands, it's unlikely your OC would be able to return cohesive fire back due to the shock people go into, after getting hit with sufficient force in the liver." Then, the turn passes. And so on and so forth. It gets a bit rules lawyer like, but it's pretty fun.

In addition to that, I do recommend ye does their research and imagery work in addition to CRP practice. Look up actual MMA(Mixed Martial Arts) fights, HEMA(historical European martial arts) fights, IRL gunfights, action movies, comic books, manga, and anime, then break down and analyze their fight scenes to get a better idea of chereography and other fine details. You can also get a good idea of writing from any action webnovels or books online that are similar to the kind of genres you want to write action about.

I find that it's also good to help visualize combat. Go mime out the moves irl if it helps. If you need props, pick up some sticks from the local park to act as weapons, you can clean them off by using some water, and shave off their ancilliary bits with some elbow grease and knifework. Do some sketching as well in stick art of your characters in combat, don't need to be fancy, just needs to be enough for you to figure out how the fight looks. Maybe add some basic arrow directions for vectors and speed and other whatnot elements and you should be solid.

And in addition to that, also study the actual fundamentals of the kinds of combat, such as boxing online, or something if you really want to get into it. Learn some interesting bits and pieces of anatomy. Read up on psychology and dark alter egos and how actual grizzled veterans act in combat to get an idea of how people act in action. Read up on parkour in order to get an idea how to properly convey maneuver. Read up on warfare to get an idea of what war is actually like from a scientific standpoint (r/warcollege is a good one, but there are other sources).

Write down profiles for the environment and for the players in the fight, and refer back to it if ye's confused on the scene.

I'm currently busy with stuff, but I'm fine taking someone under my wing long-term for this, anon. I'm admittedly not done actual dedicated stories before, more of a worldbuilder and CRPer and reader....but a guy can try, no? Though...I kinda don't know how I would contact ye though.

>>49856945
Well, no rulebooks, it's mostly just free-form text based stuff for me. Basically how it works is that each player takes their turn by writing out what their character does, and their reasoning for why it might work and how they're exactly doing it, then the other players do so as well, one by one. If there's a contest between one persons actions and another person's actions, its usually decided by how plausible the actions were.

For an example, if I decided to write that my character punched your character, then maybe I'll write "my character steps forward, then attempts a light jab at your OCs face, then follows it up with a cross." Then on their turn, knowing that I attempted two blows up high, they might decide to go for a dodge and counter for now, exploiting the lack of reasoning given to my first attack in order to take some liberties with interpretation, so they might write that they "duck down with a crouch and step forward then go for a hard and fast hook to your OC's liver. Since your OC stepped in for a jab, they're likely within firing range for return fire when I step in turn, and committing to the punches likely mean they'll be open for fires in return. If this lands, it's unlikely your OC would be able to return cohesive fire back due to the shock people go into, after getting hit with sufficient force in the liver." Then, the turn passes. And so on and so forth. It gets a bit rules lawyer like, but it's pretty fun.

In addition to that, I do recommend ye does their research and imagery work in addition to CRP practice. Look up actual MMA(Mixed Martial Arts) fights, HEMA(historical European martial arts) fights, IRL gunfights, action movies, comic books, manga, and anime, then break down and analyze their fight scenes to get a better idea of chereography and other fine details. You can also get a good idea of writing from any action webnovels or books online that are similar to the kind of genres you want to write action about.

I find that it's also good to help visualize combat. Go mime out the moves irl if it helps. If you need props, pick up some sticks from the local park to act as weapons, you can clean them off by using some water, and shave off their ancilliary bits with some elbow grease and knifework. Do some sketching as well in stick art of your characters in combat, don't need to be fancy, just needs to be enough for you to figure out how the fight looks. Maybe add some basic arrow directions for vectors and speed and other whatnot elements and you should be solid.

And in addition to that, also study the actual fundamentals of the kinds of combat, such as boxing online, or something if you really want to get into it. Learn some interesting bits and pieces of anatomy. Read up on psychology and dark alter egos and how actual grizzled veterans act in combat to get an idea of how people act in action. Read up on parkour in order to get an idea how to properly convey maneuver. Read up on warfare to get an idea of what war is actually like from a scientific standpoint (r/warcollege is a good one, but there are other sources).

Write down profiles for the environment and for the players in the fight, and refer back to it if ye's confused on the scene.

I'm currently busy with stuff, but I'm fine taking someone under my wing long-term for this, anon. I'm admittedly not done actual dedicated stories before, more of a worldbuilder and CRPer and reader....but a guy can try, no? Though...I kinda don't know how I would contact ye though.

>>49858942
>>49858585
Namefags deserve the rope.

>>49859388
Yeah, my bad anon, tis a misclick.

>>49858942
Thanks for the detailed explanation, anon. As long as everyone sticks by the "rules" of coming up with something sensible then yeah, I can see how CRP can work.
I'm not the anon who said he didn't know how to write action, but coincidentally I am writing a fic with a few action scenes in it. I tend to just keep the action (and the associated descriptions) minimal, though when I read that OL Reine fic, I also saw the benefit of having detailed, but smooth descriptions (it was smut and we're talking action scenes, but still)
As for contact, I realize that I haven't included an email address with the fics that I've released so far, so I'll probably make one and put it in there once I'm done with the full release.
I'm the guy who wrote the Operation Nimrod pilot and The Scent of Lavender
>If you need props, pick up some sticks from the local park to act as weapons, you can clean them off by using some water, and shave off their ancillary bits with some elbow grease and knifework.
You know, I bought a 357 Python revolver replica from China like pic related for this reason. It's helped me a lot with scenes involving aiming pistols and such, so I'll say this advice is plenty useful

>>49859485

Ye's welcome. Best of luck on that. The process I think might work is to jot down the basics of the situation and players, then make a step by step of what happens as a plot summary, then fill in the detail step by step while tweaking elements as ye goes.