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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>46785231

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Partners in crime 3: learning to cook: Tags: Kurokami, Fubuki, Ayame, SFW: >>46791312

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Going on a fossil dig with Mumei where she constantly has to act like she doesn't know exactly where all the bones and ruins came from that she may or may not have had a hand in causing to happen.:>>46786835

Accidentally stumbling upon Coco chained up in Cover's basement:>>46795634

Anon and his team of outlaws (or he recruits said team) live their adventures and run away from their pasts in spaaaaace:>>46798753

>> No.46851280

We've been getting bumped off pretty fast lately

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Thanks for the feedback!

>>46793061
HJanon? Any plans for the next chapter of Kuro's errand boy?

Seeing as how I had to cut this chapter in two while editing and have the bulk of the next chapter already written, hopefully that will take less than a month and a half to be done.

>>46793343
...thanks for the kind words, AI-chama? I do struggle with dialogue a lot.

>>46820664
Thanks for the feedback! I did spend some time thinking on the setting, hopefully I can live up to the expectations. Characterization is something I struggle with a lot. You're pretty on point on Kurokami - I intended for her to be a bit more of an antisocial loner than she actually acts, plus some culture shock with the whole Kami thing, but I may have gone a bit too far.
You're right on the mark about the dark secret, even if it has been plainly stated a few too many times to count as a straight secret by this point. The specifics are probably getting explored two chapters from now
Hopefully her characterization will get more appealing once Anon can get past her initial antisocial behavior.

>> No.46852665

Bae didn't know there's actual balls inside the sack....

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>>46851968
I got some good plans. I haven't forgotten where I left the anon of that story. I got my brain focused on two other hags at the moment as I work on the next arc of HJ, but I plan to return to Kuros errand boy hopefully soon. At the very least I want to use that next chapter to get some experience writing Botan, since I can't have a journey with hags without the La Lion.

>> No.46854587

>>46852665
Sure, just like she doesn't know what sex is or what Tinder or a boyfriend is

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>>46852665
Her and IRyS both thought that there was just cum in the sack, which isn't that unbelivable when to me cause I remember hearing about a 70 year old woman who hated sex with her husband because it hurt all the time only to find out he'd been putting it in her urethra the entire time. Some people just don't know and never investigate

>> No.46857761

>>46852665
how so?
>>46854587
There isnt a normal living person alive that doesnt know Tinder, but they have to act like they dont know it because otherwise unicorns blow a gasket

>> No.46858097

>>46851280
Mostly slow hobby thread being drowned under constant cuckbait/shit flinging threads

>> No.46858218

>>46855833
my ex was legit flabbergasted when she learned that erections could go away without cumming
she always thought guys stopped just because they were tired and they would sleep and cum afterwards

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>>46852665
she's a bit special

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Auntieanon, doko...!

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>>46858954
he's sure to return, just like footjob lamy, dont lose hope

>> No.46860417

>>46851280
An entire generation from a small corpo just got axed.
>>46858896
I don't even know what the backstripe is.

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Alright, so I managed to finish the Fubuki route in the Hololive VN, but now I'm stuck on Okayu. Whenever I try asking her on a date, she turns me down. Is there a specific flag I missed? They're always a bitch to find.

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>>46848976
>you are a filthy muggle born living the quiet life with your parents in the suburbs when one day, one of your sneezes sets the family cat on fire.
>not soon after, a weird letter comes flying into your house.
>youreawizardanon.gif
>your parents are a bit skeptical of this revelation at first, but apparently wizards are a thing now and they can be pretty convincing
>also, the tuition in Hogwarts is free, so dad can blow the college fund he started for you on the sports car he always wanted.
>You're super excited, having spent the better part of your youth reading books on wizards and witches
>Immediately, you start preparing for the school year and take in all information provided by the faculties beforehand
>apparently, there are houses in Hogwarts and all the brave hero kids go into Gryffindor, while the dark mysterious villain types go into Slytherin
>You'd be fine with either, you decide
>fast forward to the sorting ceremony
>"There's no doubt in my mind, it's RAVENCLAW for you, my young fellow!"
>you're a fucking side character. A red-shirt.
>Devastated, you go sit down at the table full of nerdy loser types.
>enter the girl with the wolf-ears sitting next to you.
>she's currently wiping her tears because all of her friends got into different houses, leaving her all alone wearing the blue.
>you bond over both receiving the bad ending in this sorting ceremony and somehow stick together from then on forward.
>will you get entangled in a mysterious plot and be forced to become heroes despite your boring-ass house?
>or will you find the pleasure of living a quiet school life while experiencing your fist love with this wolf-eared cutie?
>you decide (if you write it)!

>> No.46861096

>>46860977
You need to make sure you interacted with Korone all three times, otherwise Okayu won't accept the date to make Korone jealous

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Has anyone played the Aqua VN? I've been going through and man I wish Fubuki had a route, her outfit is sex. Almost makes me wanna write Fubuki incest.

>>46860977
There's a hololive VN?

>> No.46861273

>>46861112
Someone posted in on Reddit two days ago

>> No.46861277

>>46861001
>''Wow Mio, this is great but huh''
>''what's wrong Anon?''
>''where are the bathrooms?''
>''what?''
>A white bald student appears
>''Bathroom?''
>Mio looks at him
>''I dont know what's he's talking about either''
>''Oh anon i didnt introduce you, this is Nate Higgers-senpai''

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>>46861096
Are you fucking kidding me? I completely ignored her from the get-go, thinking it would lock me out of the Okayu route. I need to redo the entire fucking game now.

>> No.46861521

>>46861273
I don't use reddit, i need a link

>> No.46861881

>>46861289
You should've saved after the first meeting scene.

>> No.46862178

>>46860977
Which VN is this?

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>>46858954
Working on auntie fucking as much as I'm keeping up with uni and work. Last semester and all that.
I was facing a bit of writer's block, I'm sitting on 5k of scrapped bits for ALS. I decided to focus on a bit of Fubuki's and Anon bonding when Fubuki first became his babysitter.
I have a segment where Fubuki was a failed 3D idol, and takes up vtubing when she hears about it and receives a gift from her nephew that reignites her confidence, but I'm having trouble making her learn about vtubing in an organic way, natural way.
Plus I've been going over and over To be 17 again although I haven't felt the spark to write it as before.
Shit sucks, might disappear for 6 months and then post a chapter again.

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>decide current chapter should get to X scene
>okay no problem
>10k words of scenes and dressing later
>still probably 3-4 scenes away from X
I'm caught between weird expectations I made for myself and trying to let myself let things be as they are since that's how I feel I do my best writing. Anyone else have similar stuff happen to them?

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>>46861112
Im surprised she doesn't, I thought it was pretty heavily implied pre-release. Nevertheless you should write that

>> No.46863167

>>46862787
I don't know how far in I am but so far, Marine and Fubuki only have joke routes.

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>>46863167
>Boning your degenerate head maid
>just as a joke, haha

>> No.46863745

>>46862247
I always had a feeling those fics were made by the same anon.

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>>46863357
>Day long threesomes with your sister and the horny maid
>only for fun tho haha

>> No.46864015

>>46861112
Does the Aqua VN have a tl? Too lazy to go over to /jp/ and check

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>>46863357
>>46863759
How can one pirate be so sex??

>> No.46864321

>>46863357
It's actually kinda like that. In a joking manner, Marine hits on you as soon as you wake up. If you choose to reciprocate, it's implied that you bone and then she buys a ship and you set sail with her, Fubuki, and Aqua.

>>46864015
None that I know of, I'm just using my shoddy japanese to get through it.

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>>46862247
Ah, I see. Uni and work at the same time sounds like a bundle of AIDS.
>vtubing in an organic way, natural way
Would be funny if she learned about it through Kenji, who discovers it whilst browsing the tubes and whose simping for his oshi becomes borderline obsessive, further widening the rift between the two.

>might disappear for 6 months and then post a chapter again.
PLEASE NO

>> No.46864682

>>46864321
Can it be played with N5 Japanese?

>> No.46864909

>>46860417
Frenulum

>> No.46864989

>>46864682
Eh you're gonna struggle a lot with just N5.

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>>46864321
That end sounds fucking amazing. How can Aqua dumpties even compete?

>> No.46865167

>>46864989
Time to do my reps then.

>> No.46865351

>>46863745
I did make a post with all of the stuff I have written so far, so that might be that.
>>46864618
That sounds fucking stupid, but I did consider it. I got two scenes going, one in paper, one brewing in my head, the chapter has a motif about casualties and mundane every day things.

>Fubuki is at a grocery store
>Meets with Aki, one of her old partners from her idol days
>Small talk about life, about the group's past members, etc
>Aki asks Fubu-chan if she knew anything about virtual idols
>Fubuki figures it was some sort of NicoNico Douga fad, alternatively, she knows about Kizuna Ai
>Aki talks to her about a small company that was looking for new blood, Hololive
>Fubuki does some research, Anon antics ensue

Alternatively, instead of Aki, I thought of making it be Sora who meets Fubuki and then tells her she can get her a spot

As for the second scenario,

>Fubuki and Kenji are in their bedroom, Kenji pulls out an old polaroid that he found
>It's of Fubuki and her mates
>The world idol gets thrown around, her phone's "Data gathering" function works the algorithm for her
>Fubuki stumbles upon virtual idols
>Learns about different corpos, checks out Hololive


Nothing that really feels right, that bums me out because I don't want to write out that segment.

>> No.46865613

>>46865154
That's what i thought too but I also thought it was hot that Aqua has a smell fethish and steals your shirt to huff your scent.

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>>46865613
Damn son, they went there? I don't know why I find it so attractive that a girl would steal my stuff just to huff my musk. Alright, what hag might have a smell fetish?

>> No.46866509

>>46866073
Lui does.
Imagining her taking whiffs of my ballsack sends my dick into the outer realm.

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>>46866509
Anyone else? There's gotta be more hags into enjoying the smell of their man.

>> No.46867646

>>46867485
Maybe the smell of their step son while he's at school and she's washing the clothes.

>> No.46867952

>>46864160
her eggs are screaming to be used but she keeps getting ignored

>> No.46868542

>>46864160
Don't post this shit here

>> No.46868605

>>46865351
Sounds like you're stuck on the idea of introducing her vtubing work into the mix. Does it have to be that way? Introducing Hololive as something she's not yet a part of means the focus will necessarily shift to that as a new major plot point, else you risk it being underdeveloped and a distraction at best. Your readership already understands the relationship between Hololive and Fubuki anyway.

>> No.46868979

>>46868605
>Introducing Hololive as something she's not yet a part of means the focus will necessarily shift to that as a new major plot point, else you risk it being underdeveloped and a distraction at best.
That's what I fear, and that's what bums me out so much. The scene's there, it just doesn't have enough to hold itself together, at least not yet.

Man, this sucks, whatever way I see it, I can't really make it work.

>> No.46869373

>>46868979
Instead of writing a chapter with both back story and sex with her nephew, maybe you could try writing a chapter with no back story and 2 sexes with her nephew.

>> No.46869487

>>46868979
I think this is more a sign that you need to workshop/think up what you want out of the story at a higher level than just scenes or events you want to happen. Sometimes you need to kill your darlings and call it a day if you want to keep the story going.

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>>46868979
When I've been stuck on a scene I was trying really hard to make work, more than a few times the answer was to NOT make it work. That was kinda my inner brain telling me that this wasn't the scene meant for this piece, so I found a new scene. The relief you get when you do that is like no other when you find the scene that was truly meant for your installation instead of what you were originally bent on. The right scene is out there somewhere anon, keep doing your best!

>> No.46869659

>>46869373
NTA but goddamn would that miss the point of his fics. Seriously, the appeal comes more from the plot, drama and spicy taboo than from pure smut content alone.

>> No.46869894

>>46868979
The problem with such a major plot point is that it's long-running; you can't adequately expand and close it within a few scenes, or even chapters. It sounds to me like it's something you've got to commit to if you want to include it, which may start to interfere with the main draw of your story.

This sounds like a pretty negative bunch of spiel to me, but as a big fan of this series, I'm quite biased and see the shift of focus as a threat to what I enjoy about the story, so take this post with a massive dose of salt. I don't really care about what Fubuki does as a day job; I have long since filed this story under AU and suspended any disbelief I have for her questionable income. I'm just enjoying seeing this house of cards being built... and waiting for the inevitable fall.

>> No.46870846

>>46869487
Know that feeling.

>>46869510
I know, but shit, it's always such a bummer to sink so much time on a scene or chapter only to realize that it's not going to work.

>>46869894
I see where you're coming from, and that's precisely why I wanted to make the scene work. I believe in padding out the main events with fluff because it gives room for the story to breath, and the setup that I was going for was meant to help cement that house of cards.

I guess the compromise I can go for in the end is have Fubuki already be a part of hololive and just happen to get a confidence boost from Anon.

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>>46870846
I know its a drag man, but trust me, you'll feel so much better with the new finished product. I've scrapped upwards of 10k in a couple chapters of HJ before when the ideas just didn't feel right. The pain is temporary, but the glory is eternal.

>> No.46872302

Is it just me, or have things gotten more civil here lately?

>> No.46872416

>>46872302
It's just you.

>> No.46872487

>>46872302
we are always civil, there's only one filipino living in these threads that gets ignored most of the time

>> No.46872500

>>46869894
>have long since filed this story under AU
what does this mean?

>> No.46872756

>>46872500
NTA but it means Alternate Universe, which in fanfiction terms means they're treating it as if it was the same characters but in a different world/situation than 'canon'

>> No.46872965

>>46872302
I think the lewd posting has been toned down. /haha/ is more degenerate than /wg/ these days

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>>46872500
its weird to be in a fanfic circle that has no knowledge of the usual terms (like AU) or even the ''Chatroom fic'' structure
i dont mean it as a diss, its just weird

>> No.46873327

>>46851280
Fast board, and people seem to be afraid of bumping.

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>>46848976
Anon discovers he has the ability to stop time and move within it. With his newfound ability he....will have to endure with the stick in the mud Kronii, who is also able to move within Anon's stopped time and is constantly getting on the way of his fun.
Featuring two modes you can take this story home
>Friendship mode: Anon and Kroniii will realize that even when you feel like you are ''out of time'', you still can live your youth
>Romance Mode: As the clock ticks down, Both anon and Kronii must stop their pursuit of a prom date and join forces. Maybe both of them can find love in this school?

>> No.46876259

>>46870846
>I guess the compromise I can go for in the end is have Fubuki already be a part of hololive and just happen to get a confidence boost from Anon.

This sounds like a much more amenable plot device, as much of the backstory will simply be assumed by the audience who are already familiar with the real Fubuki. It can be used to create additional scenes without hogging the limelight, unless you want it to.

I'm ridiculously glad to hear you haven't given up on the series due to writer's block. I'll probably forget and end up posting "Auntieanon doko" in another month, but for now, god bless you and have a happy Easter.

>> No.46876552

>>46848976
Suisei and Lui rape mori

>> No.46877185

>>46876552
Suicock or regular gay rape?

>> No.46877349

>>46873105
Yeah but that's just an artifact of this writing general descending more from the other writefagging stuff on 4chan than general fanfic culture.

>> No.46880220

>>46861001
So what timeline is this the book/movie one, the game one, or your own timeline?

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>>46848920
Let me know how the action scenes are. I use the imperative verb more than I ever used it in latin class. Hopefully the link works.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17nqkT-cNn4MAicIOhyj_DbGuZz507xPJfhHrY-mz9F4/edit?usp=drivesdk

Tags: NSFW, Flare, rape, goblin, orc, paizuri, naizuri, anal, gokkun

>> No.46880642

>>46875951
So does council chase after you to Egypt or will you be the one that gather a group to go after Kronii?

>> No.46880859

>>46880568
I-is this weirdanonv2?

You published an edit link, by the way.

>> No.46880863

>>46880568
Anon the link works but you just sent us the sharing link rather than the anonymous published link.

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>>46848976
You, a fresh-faced new addition to the workforce, are hired by Cover as a manager. And you quickly discover that the vtuber industry is more cutthroat than a House of Cards episode. All schizo rrats are true. Internal politics are a nightmare. Talents with bad blood are backstabbing each other constantly behind the scenes. Rival companies engage in corporate espionage and try to crush each other by poaching talents, having paid agents pose as obsessive fans to harass rival chuubas, sabotaging concerts and other events, manufacturing drama and fanning the flames on social media, and every other underhanded tactic you can think of. Thrown into this whole mess with no safety net, you'll have to either learn to play the great game, or become just another pawn.

>> No.46884758

>>46880859
>>46880863
Whoops.

>> No.46885768

>>46880568
>Speaking tersely, Flare responded, “Fuck off, not all elves use bows,” the two barbarians were taken aback from her response, “and by the way I’m a half-elf not a full elf and especially not a dark elf so you can go fuck yourselves if you thought I was a dark elf. And before the two of you leave to go back to your frotting chambers I should have you know that elves would prefer to wield Anduril than a bow of Galadhrim.”

This is actual autism. Do you speak like this in real life?

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>>46885768
I think it would've been just fine had he had her emote during this reprimand of hers.

>> No.46886073

>>46885920
No way.
>and by the way I’m a half-elf not a full elf and especially not a dark elf so you can go fuck yourselves if you thought I was a dark elf.
Is this supposed to be intimidating? Who puts their life story into an insult?

>I should have you know that elves would prefer to wield Anduril than a bow of Galadhrim
What even is this? The author's just coming across as a frothing LOTR nerd. Hope it isnt representative of the rest of the fic's quality.

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>>46885768
Personally I'd do it like this.

> Speaking tersely, Flare stood up and replied, "Don't joke with me, not all elves use bows!". Her boldness took the barbarians by surprise, who both looked at each other in confusion. "And by the way--" The elf continued, taking on a rather brash posture, "I'm a half-elf, not a full elf-- and especially NOT a dark elf!" her emotions were shining through (insert reason why she doesn't like comparison here). (Dialogue here is too out of place without an action from the barbarians)

>> No.46887638

>>46886707
Yeah, that's a much better way of writing it

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>>46886707
>ywn be that close to Chloe

>> No.46889333

>>46888958
Brother to get that POV you'd have to be touching her cheek with yours why would you want that

>> No.46889519
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46889519

There has yet to be a story about amputating a holo's limbs and using her as a literal human onahole.

Why?

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>>46889519
Because Roboco is the only one who fits that bill without it coming from hate and nobody watches Roboco

>> No.46890285

>>46889782
>without it coming from hate
Why does it have to come from hate? And why is that a bad thing?

>> No.46890421

>>46885768
The only two character traits that I know Flare has is that she's an otaku and doesn't like being drawn with a bow. I tried to show that in the fic. Sankisei is generally regarded as the worst generation in hololive so I don't watch them that much. Anyways, thanks for reading the fic.

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>>46890285
NTA but there are only two angles I can see this from: wanting to hatefuck someone so much you just turn them into a humanly incapable sextoy, or it's a fetish shared between the participants

Unless we're talking about a scenario where someone is just an amputee before the events of the story take place, or the lopping off of limbs come from a twisted place of love

>> No.46891667

>>46890421
NTA, but I like characters that have read LotR and reference it. In this case it's a bit ironic because by Tolkien's standard Flare is a Dark Elf, but hey.

>> No.46892327

>>46890421
Sankisei is literally the golden gen, not a single one of their members isn't top 10 popularity, yes, even Flare, she has extremely high number of whales. How to tell if someone got all their info from /vt/ 101

>> No.46892354

>>46892327
Noel's a whore

>> No.46892491

>>46889519
I made this kinda shitty greentext once. >>28081992

>> No.46892966

>>46892491
That's incredibly arousing.

>> No.46895431

>>46881198
Where someone go with this prompt? Despite the large word count, it seems pretty vague. It just sounds like "You work at internal Cover and it's bad".

>> No.46895468

>>46889333
>he doesn't wanna do cute fluffy shit with Chloe

>> No.46895834

>>46895431
NTA but I saw it as Heartbreak Tokyo/Cover Job but you're a manager.

>> No.46896159

>>46880568
I've came twice to this fic so far. It's pretty good.

>> No.46896716

>>46895468
Ew. Imagine the smell. No thanks.

>> No.46897275

>>46896716
Most effeminate man

>> No.46898073

>>46895431
Choose any conspiracy that /vt/ has come up with, assume that it's true, and run with the implications of what that means for the people behind the curtain.
>one talent raped another, now you have to bribe and/or threaten the victim into staying quiet
>a rumor is spreading that one of your talents has a boyfriend and now you have to tardwrangle her before she does something stupid and turns into Rushia 2.0
>that big upcoming concert has been cancelled due to infighting and/or meddling from a rival corpo, do damage control and exact payback as needed
>a senior manager is abusing his authority and making advances on one of your girls. look the other way and play it safe, or take them down to protect your talent (and secure yourself a promotion)
Etc.

>> No.46898399

For the love of God, whatever you do, please never refer to the labia majora as a woman's "flaps". I'm begging you.

>> No.46898431

>>46898399
What you don't like the term 'meat flaps'?

>> No.46898474

>>46898399
Alright, well let me know what your favorite euphemism is for the labia then

>> No.46898619
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>>46898431
It is the least sexy term I can think of. Maybe a slightly less sexy term would be "mud flaps" referring to Flare's labia.

>>46898474
Honestly, I prefer to keep it simple. "Lips" is one of the sexier terms out there. Honeypot, referring to the vulva as a whole, is also really hot.

>> No.46898837

>>46898399
I think it's appropriate after a certain size, because giant pussy lips can look like "flaps" sounds.

>> No.46898901

>>46898837
>after a certain size
Just how fucking massive does a vulva have to be for "flapping in the wind" to become an appropriate descriptor for a naked vagina? Who is possessed of such a thing?

>> No.46898903

>>46898474
I think 'folds' is okay.

>> No.46899593

>>46898903
"Folds" and "her crease" are all right too. They get the job done well.

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>>46898619
>>46898903
>>46899593
I'll take that into consideration, thanks

>> No.46900573

>>46880220
that would be ultimately up to the author, but I think either the game timeline or a custom one would work better, since the book universe is pretty set in stone.
Maybe you'd even live in a timeline were absolutely nothing out of the ordinary happens at school and you spend the better part of the day trying out anti-pregnancy spells and potions with Mio?
Or maybe you have to go on a quest to keep Mio's Slytherin friends from turning slaves of the dark arts?

>> No.46900797

>>46898399
Flaps sounds like they'd be a euphemism for a bird girl's wings.

>> No.46900900

>>46892354
*Marine

>> No.46901410

>>46900573
Alternatively
You could just join Hufflepuff and let yourself get roped into whatever weird bullshit Nene gets up to

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>>46848976
I would like to request some lovey-dovey Iroha sex. I don't usually read smut but I am in the mood for some gozaru.

>> No.46903080

>>46901410
That sounds like the best time honestly but that's because wizarding adventures with Nene would just turn into insane bullshit real quick. I want to imagine her familiars (husbands) would be great to fuck around with.

>> No.46904623

>>46898619
Honeypot is a little weird to me personally. A bit too flowery, no pun intended

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So how are your wips going anon?

>> No.46906594

>>46880568
This was incredibly difficult to read, as if everything is a run-on sentence. The "questing guild" suggests you have a case of isekai poisoning. There's a self-contradiction where Flare seems to to fantasize about being impregnated despite being fully aware that it wasn't possible. I think it's fine being used as Lalatina dirty talk, but it really doesn't make sense to have that as thought monologue without acknowledging it.
Sometimes less is more, and it's definitely better to do away with the dense bricks of text so they don't bury the parts that people are reading for.

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>>46905874
I managed to get in 500 words each for my two main WIPs, and now they're sitting just under 8k and 5k. Not as much as I would've liked but I should be able to get both out before I go on my trip.
>Captcha VDSTD

>> No.46909028

>>46848976
Marathon sex but with Koyori.

>> No.46909462

>>46909028
The author who wrote that is MIA

>> No.46909968

>>46901410
>"Nene please stop casting Lumos in front of my face."
>"No."

>> No.46910170

>>46909462
Doesn't have to be the original author that wrote Fubuki marathon sex, anon.

>> No.46910184

Do people here actually love Harry Potter? I thought it was YA for teenies. Don't want to judge though, maybe it's deeper than I think.

>> No.46910442

>>46910184
'Love' is a bit strong. I read them back when they were first coming out, and all the streams of holos playing the new game dug up old memories.

>> No.46910525

>>46910184
hermione SEX

>> No.46911012

>>46910442
Fair. I guess I was born too late to read them in the times when they were actually bussing.

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>>46905874
Just when I strive to buckle down on one, I get an entirely new idea

Like this morning I woke up with an idea for turning HoloX into an actually nefarious secret society/your personal harem. Will I do anything with that? Probably not, but maybe if I start now, one day...

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>>46905874
5k words in, a week or two of being fonished

>> No.46912692

>>46912184
Is this fic what I think it is given what that image is implying?

>> No.46912982

>>46910184
People LOVE Harry Potter. Quaint setting, slice-of-life plot (rarely seen in western books at the time), and general comfy british prose.
A lot of people like to reneg nowadays and say it's overrated, but it's actually perfectly rated.

>> No.46914076

>>46910184
yeah, the game was a trip down memory lane - besides that I don't feel too strongly about the franchise.
I just thought it was cute how Mio was the only one who went with the first suggestion of the sorting hat (without looking the answers up first) and thus ended up all alone in Ravenclaw. Made for a nice prompt.
Don't get me wrong though, the setting is secondary to the possibility of getting sweet sweet Mio fluff in any capacity.
On that note:
>Author of "to be 17 again" struggling with the revamp
Don't you dare quit on me!

>> No.46915650

>>46905874
I've finished my 4 month hiatus to 100% Binding of Isaac so maybe I'll start making more than half a paragraph of progress per session again

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46916495

Do you want Miko to rape your oshi? Has she done it already? Probably

>> No.46916732

>>46916495
I wouldn't want that, but it won't happen either. Miko only wants the blussy

>> No.46916807

>>46916495
I will stop her

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>>46916495
Miko has a non-zero chance of dying if she tried. That's probably why things with Pekora are so weird, like imagine having to call an ambulance for your friend after they have a heart attack trying to rape you

>> No.46919016
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>> No.46921015

Live! LIVE DAMNIT!

>> No.46921623

>>46916732
to bad that the blussy is reserved for Suisei's genetic brother (me)

>> No.46922606
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>>46912692
That depends, what do you think this image implies?

>> No.46923050

>>46922606
Alright, what have you written? I want to see if your writing is as good as your drawing skills.

>> No.46923586

>>46922606
I think your first image implies a lot of slimes are going to be invading her body and your second image implies she's disappointed with me for thinking as such

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>>46923050
Feeding a black fox.
Those aren't mine. The sauce is https://twitter.com/kamimurahiiro/status/1644340142289850370

>>46923586
On mark

>> No.46924418

>>46909028
I'd rather have Marathon sex with Shion

>> No.46925516

>>46924103
Damn. They're really cute little doodles and it reminded me of the one drawfag we've got here that did a portrait of Miyuki that I know I saved but can't find anywhere

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>>46925516
I got you

>> No.46926338

>>46926265
Nah that ain't the one, that's Mistletoe

>> No.46926407

>>46926265
This bloke's other pic https://files.catbox.moe/7q8iw8.jpg

>> No.46928491

>>46926407
If we track them down we could get the oyakodon blowjob...hrm.

>> No.46929140

>>46928491
They clearly don't like this place anymore given that they've been gone for many months

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>> No.46933338

>>46933230
Tribute it and tag her on twitter.

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>>46933338
Noted, always post the source when posting traditional art
https://twitter.com/momoco_haru/status/1597144762028789760/photo/1

>> No.46934041

>>46933816
Just trace it and pass it off as your own. If anyone calls you out, tell them Nene's your oshi.

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HIROMOOT LET ME POST

>> No.46934876

>>46929140
Not true, though to be honest I haven't checked the thread in about a month now. Just busy with other stuff, and worked a couple of 80 hour weeks recently on a project to move an environment that had been in the same spot for 30 years.

Did a little bit to Holoturismo Ch 3 but honestly not enough to get excited about. Actually considering rewriting the whole chapter since the pacing is leaving a lot to be desired. Hopefully no more stressful projects for a while.

>>46928491
You have no clue how much I want to draw that.

>> No.46935196

>>46929140
hater btfo forever

>> No.46935778

>>46934876
I knew it was you BB. Have you still got that Miyuki sketch?

>> No.46936569

>>46933338
Seconding this

>> No.46936708

>>46896159
Thanks.
>>46906594
How were the action scenes in your opinion?

>> No.46936744

>>46934876
With how good your smut is, and how good your drawings are, have you ever considering drawing a doujin?

>> No.46938233 [DELETED] 

>>46936708
Save me some time here - is there anything in particular you want feedback on in that fic?

>> No.46939320

>>46935778
Yeah
https://files.catbox.moe/ya2280.png
Bonus Irys doodle because I was horny.
https://files.catbox.moe/fbt1jo.png

>>46936744
Thanks. I'd be lying if I said I hadn't, but I've always had trouble staying focused on one project for long periods of time so it hasn't crossed my mind in a long time.

>> No.46939402

>>46912982
The prose isn't that good. An example of this is the walking being replaced with stretched their legs.

>> No.46939851

>>46936708
Uncompelling. Too many unnecessary details turning scenes that were very clearly meant to be fast-paced into a crawl.

>> No.46940095

>>46939320
>IRyS anal
God bless you.

>> No.46940240

>>46939320
Really like the way her anus wraps around that cock, as if it's greedily sucking him in. Can't well tell it's IRyS though.

>> No.46940447

>>46939402
That's an overused criticism that's nonnoticable when reading. JK Rowling's prose mogs yours and mine.

>> No.46940533

>>46940447
Give us an example of your prose eh

>> No.46940850

>>46940447
I'm Cormac McCarthy.

>> No.46943690
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>>46940533
Pic rel
>>46940850
Prove it. What did the outhouse at the end of Blood Meridian symbolize?

>> No.46944326

>>46944107
>What did the outhouse at the end of Blood Meridian symbolize?
NTA but as distant relative I can safely tell you that it's a metaphor for the time McCarthy got felt up by a fat drunk in a bar's bathroom one time. The death of his innocence and all that shit

>> No.46945248

>>46944326
Lmao gay

>> No.46945440
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46945440

>seven Rushia's
Would she be jealous of herself?

>> No.46946769

>>46944107
>What did the outhouse at the end of Blood Meridian symbolize?
I'm not telling you.

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>>46946769
Oh my god he really is Cormac McCarthy

>> No.46951143

>>46945440
4 > 3 > 6 > 1 > 2 > 5

>> No.46951554

>>46880568
>gobling
>orc
Kys

>> No.46952079

>>46945440
Seven Rushias would end up killing you and/or each other after the best orgy you ever had.

>> No.46952568
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>>46945440
I know I shouldn't pick 6. I know.
But...

>> No.46954475

>>46952079
>>46952568
7 needy, horny Rushia's, each trying to out-do the one before to be the only one who wins your life

>> No.46955340

>>46951554
>minor spelling mistake

>> No.46955483

>>46954475
Rushia battle-harem
You have to tame seven menheras to win the battle-harem wish-cup

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Bump

>> No.46959516

>>46919016
What is happening in this picture? Is she trying to repair a gun while being shot at?

>> No.46959595

>>46959516
I think the file name is implying she's biting the gun.

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>>46921623
Based Suicest enjoyer

>> No.46959794

>>46959595
But what does that achieve? Is she tearing it apart?

>> No.46960009

>>46959794
That's what appears, she's bit through the dust cover and that's the recoil spring going flying so the gun definitely isn't gonna work anymore. Look at it as if it's a POV shot.

>> No.46960064

>>46960009
Interesting. Thank you for the explanation.

>> No.46960593

>>46959794
Lions need iron in their diet anon.

>> No.46961086

>>46960593
That lion needs my dick in her diet

>> No.46961679

>>46945440
>seven Rushias
Holy shit.
Maybe she wouldn't be jealous of eachother because she only cares if you're finding her attractive, and they're all her.
Teaming Marine and Lamy up though is cheating. Holy shit the never ending cum that would be drained from me is a night terror worthy, Chloe and Kanata would be mogged.

>> No.46962357
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>>46945440
I'd go with gen 6 since it has the most variety.
>Cunny
>Hag
>Kemomimi hag
>Girl who's embarrassed about the whole ordeal
>Stinky perverted shortstack

>> No.46962909

>>46945440
If they all just have sex with me I'd pick 3 because I wouldn't want 4+ at once, but if they also have sex with each other I'd go with Shiraken.

>> No.46963044

>>46848976
>>46962357
This picture makes me want an action story where you take on all five members of holox at once in a fight, and only just lose by a hair’s breadth.

>> No.46963101

>>46954475
This, but they come in one after another and stab the previous one.

>> No.46965165

>>46945440
6 but only if all the Rushias are forced to make out with each other while I jerk off alone.

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46965908

I've been going down a bit of a writing rabbit hole, and I've got to ask. This is probably really only directed towards very few individuals from here, but I ask nonetheless.

Do you enjoy the generic setting tropes (Tolkien-esque fantasy for example), or do you write them because it's what is familiar? Have you no desire to branch out, try something unique and make it something of your own? Every time I see something fun, I get the desire to try something new myself, I just haven't done it because I'm not someone who dedicates large amounts of time to writing, so I don't have the time for it. What about (You)?

Bonus post >>633510261

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>>46965908
whoops forgot to cross post it from another board. Ignore whichever post I linked

>> No.46966477

>>46966440
You don't mind if we ignore your actual post too, do you?

>> No.46966776

>>46963044
>>46848976
>barely losing a viscous fight against HoloX
... as you lie there on the floor, broken and bleeding, they're quite pissed that you came so close to defeating them. In the middle of debating the most painful way to dispose of you, Koyori suddenly suggests that you're untapped potential and could be made into their "little helper" with some chemical manipulation.
Not soon after your "therapy" begins and a short way off from losing your mind, you realize that it's come to a few tensions between the girls, seeing that a male in the holy halls of HoloX is a novelty for them and they're quite immature when it comes to interactions with the other sex.
Cunning and desperate as you are, you decide to play into this and begin wooing the girls individually in the hopes of riling them up against each other. Things like faking a delirious state in which you compliment a particular member on her unrivaled cuteness, for example.
Will you be able to brake the sisterhood from the inside by the power of your charm?
Will you even become the new leader of HoloX in a weird twist of fate?
Or will you genuinely fall in love with one of the girls - or all of them?

>> No.46967113

>>46965908
I do have a lot of ideas that involve my own “unique” worlds and settings that I workshop in my head, but I haven’t written any yet since I’ve been caught up writing regular vtuber romance fanfiction. I’d like to branch out someday and try building my own story setting but it won’t be for a while since writing things like that take a lot of time.
This thread actually had a brief discussion about this where we talked about how Tolkien has practically influenced all fantasy literature and it’s hard to escape from his influence to create something truly unique in the fantasy genre.

>> No.46967192

>>46965908
No I fucking hate it and if I have to write one more Japanese school setting scene I'm going to die of terminal artistic stagnation

>> No.46967242

>>46965908
It depends on the individual tropes and whether I like them and/or think they're useful, really. Tropes are tools that help you write something that your readers understand without needing as much exposition, because you can rely on their existing knowledge instead of having to explain something they have never encountered before.
I'd say you should almost always include some generic setting tropes; including all makes you boring and derivate, including none makes the work too weird and hard to get into (putting a twist on familiar tropes or explicitly turning them on their head counts as "including" them).
That said, there's many contradicting common tropes for one kind of setting, so you have a lot of freedom to choose. Today's fantasy, while still ultimately derived from Tolkien, is so different from his work that reading LotR can feel fresh and unexpected when you're used to Warhammer, Warcraft, D&D, Elder Scrolls etc. Even the difference between the thoughtful, artistic, serious Gimli that Tolkien wrote and the Scottish loudmouth comic relief Gimli in the Jackson movies shows this.

>> No.46967555

>>46967242
Gimli and Legolas are miles better than their movie counterparts.

>> No.46967745

>>46965908
This may just be my own perspective but for both writing and reading the 'generic settings' are pretty much best for 'junk food'/popcorn fics where the focus is more on having fun with characters and shenaniganry than with events with world shaking consequences.
Since yeah, you could strike out on your own, worldbuild up an original setting, but do you really want to bother with that when you just want to write out a fun adventure in a fantasy world or make a fanfic with characters you like/set in an already existing setting? Sometimes you just want to write/read a story that gets to the point and have fun with it.
As an example, think about this thread's generic setting. 20 minutes into the future Tokyo(ish) with vtubers that look exactly like their models irl. That's pretty much the setting that half of the stories here go with since it's the easiest way to tell a story about a the chuubas you like without it getting bogged down in bullshit neither you nor the audience really cares about.
Let me guess /lit/ or /tg/?

>> No.46967892

>>46967745
NTA but /lit/ and /tg/ are far from that number of posts.

>> No.46967992

>>46848976
Liar Game but with chuubas.

>> No.46969253

>>46966776
So this would be that holoX hypnosis idea but it runs with the faking hypnosis variation of the fujocast prompt?

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>>46966776
I quite like the idea of gaining HoloX's grudging respect while simultaneously pissing them the fuck off by showing them how you can stand toe-to-toe with their full, combined fighting strength. Could lead into the hypnosis fic like >>46969253 said where you join their side, by hypnotism at first but eventually do it willingly.

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>>46965908
I'd have to say my setting derived from many different works that set their own tropes. Some of the tropes I definitely enjoy, but it is also a great deal of fun to build off of them and create something a little more unique to yourself.
I still haven't fucking made that map of where the journey has transpired so far within the world. I thought it would be a pretty cool thing to make the map and put the image of where is uncovered at the end of each arc. Someday.

>> No.46970808

>>46848976
botan sex

>> No.46971819

>>46970758
Map making is fucking hard man

>> No.46972020

>>46970758
How autistic are you planning going to for your world map on a scale from "draw on paper some land masses" to "simulate it scientifically"?

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>>46971819
A friend showed me a decent map building site I might try at some point.
>>46972020
I guess somewhere in the middle? I have a very rough picture in my head of where certain countries and kingdoms are in relation to each other. A map will also help me remember what direction the party has gone / is going, along with possibly helping me choose the next parts of the story based on the current location and the surrounding areas.

>> No.46972964

>>46970758
I was going to say you are getting caught up in the wrong part of this, but I suppose that's the whole point of what was asked.

>> No.46973068

>>46967745
/v/, of all places. The discussion sparked my interest until they started shitflinging over whether halflings were pedo bait or not

>> No.46973774

>>46965908
The most successful fantasy author nowadays is Sanderson, whose biggest series has crab people fighting in a planet without dirt. Familiarity isn't require for commercial success

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>>46973774
Crab people on another planet aren't exactly new, either

>> No.46974116

>>46974057
I think his point is that it's not very reminiscient of Tolkien, nor is it a very common setting.

>> No.46974133

>>46974057
Every book is just a remix of the dictionary anyway

>> No.46974352

>>46974133
>>46974116
I know, I just wanted to post my favourite book jacket.

>> No.46976144

>>46970708
So in this scenario what would you be? A superhero, a masked rider, a meddling kid?

>> No.46976166

>>46962357
I think I’ve come to realise that gen 6 is my favourite Hololive generation. Up until now there was always at least one thing about a generation that prevented me from saying I love it.

Gen 0: Sora and Roboco don’t interest me that much. Sora is cute tho.
Gen 1: I rarely watch gen 1 members.
Gen 2: A strong contender, but three of five members inconsistently stream and I don’t watch Choco.
Gamers: They’re all pretty great, but it’s only 3.5 chuubas and I don’t watch fatto catto a lot
Gen 3: Flare’s fanbase is weird and green menhera is dead
Gen 4: Luna
Gen 5: Would have been my favourite before gen 6. Everyone in gen 5 is great but Triangle is dead, so it’s only four people.

Then gen 6 came along, and there’s no glaring flaws yet. Even Laplus isn’t as bad as the catalog makes her out to be, she’s entertaining, as is the rest of her secret society.

>> No.46976396

>>46976144
Some hero who arrived to take them down to stop their evil reign.
Some horny dude who made a deal with HoloX that he’d get some fuck if he beat them all at once. The only reason they agreed was because they thought there’s no way that would be possible.
Some rando that wondered into their hideout and used self defence.
Some failed experiment of Koyori’s that has sentience and tried to break free from the lab.

>> No.46977141

>>46976166
You're now considered an outlaw in the Candy Kingdom.

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>>46976166
I don't appreciate your implied slander of her royal majesty.

>> No.46977977

>>46977934
No offence, but her voice does filter me when I try watching. Like sometimes it's not bad but others it really puts me off.

>> No.46978046

>>46977934
NTA, but come on. She's an acquired taste and everybody knows it.

>> No.46978171

>>46977934
i like luna as a side character but her solo streams dont interest me
She is no Roboco, that's the best thing i can say about her

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>>46977977
I think it's relaxing as fuck to put on in the mornings as I'm easing into my work for the day.
>>46978046
Since everyone knows shes an acquired taste, I feel like that is less a mark against her and more just a statement of how not all viewers will enjoy her, but she has merit still in her own right.
Also my circus fennec loves this princess, so she's more than alright in my book.

>> No.46978533

>>46976144
>meddling kid
All women fear the heroic shota

>> No.46979542

>>46978533
This just gave me the amusing image of holoX being an actual serious evil secret organization that gets defeated by a 1X year old shota playing superhero in an outfit that looked like it was cobbled together with zero budget.

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>>46978501

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>>46979949
>How did she break her mattresses?
The answer? Me. I helped break them.

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>>46963044
I'm thinking of doing this but should Chloe have retard strength as her reason to stay toe-to-toe with everyone else or should she have another trick up her sleeve?

>> No.46982576

>>46982340
Since she's the "cleaner" for the organization, I imagine she'd be geared towards stealth, infiltration and assassination rather than face-to-face combat. The rogue of the party, essentially.

>> No.46982632

>>46982340
Honestly Chloe doesn't really seem like she'd fit with super/retard strength. I think with an idea as 'thematic' as this you run her powers off her design and either go for invisibility/super stealth (going off the 'cleaner'/intern theme) or go with Orca powers (going off the orca theme).

>> No.46982794

>>46982340
If any of them would have retard strength it would be Kazama "my manager doesn't let me go places on my own" Iroha.

>> No.46983913

>>46982794
Did Iroha learn samurai techniques in order to help control her wild retard strength?

>> No.46985729

>>46983913
No, she was taught them by someone as a joke.

>> No.46986877

>>46985729
They trained her Ninja techniques as a joke.

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>>46978046
>>46978501
>acquired taste
i dont know what is that standard copy paste opinion from youtube comments or reddit, i liked Luna from day 1, what is common is that most people cant form and opinion of their own, and repeat mindless memes, like she breaks character or whatever

>> No.46987068

>>46986877
A ninja samurai, a janitor who smells, a shackled demon lord, a mayonese dog and a dominatrix hawk girl walk into a bar...

>> No.46987125

>>46904623
I have a bunch of euphemisms for vagina that fit different contexts.
For example, when it's a passionate smut scene, more flowery/fluffy words work better alongside the more allusive ones
>Her garden
>Her flower
>Her pink bulb
>Her lower lips
>Her womanhood
As for harsher ones, I like to use words that feel "dirtier" like cunt
And then there's all the meme-words, of course.
>Her hot pocket
>Her wizard sleeve
>Dick microwave
>Hairy handbag
>Cock strangler
>Slut-and-slide
>Slut cave
Finding the proper words for a particular scene helps set the tone.

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>>46987125
>Her garden
>Her flower
>Her pink bulb
>Her lower lips

>> No.46988251

>>46988204
>>46987125
Lower lips is fine, but the rest makes it sound like you're a woman

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>>46982576
>>46982632
I'm glad I asked first. I have no idea why that thought didn't cross my mind, and I can probably do more with the stealth stuff anyways,

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>> No.46992450

>>46992366
Is there a version of The Fisherman's Wife with Ina?

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>>46992450
I don't think so, I've seen a tentacle doujin though

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>> No.46996162

>>46996062
Why has she imprinted a symbol of Satan upon her halfling?

>> No.46996967

>>46996162
That's just the pentagram all Fubuki tails have.

>> No.46997680

>>46996062
>The little acorn thingy is the real Fubuki and the Fubuki we all know and love is an empty shell she manipulates from a distance

>> No.46997769

>>46997680
I'm going to fuck her phylactery and she can't stop me

>> No.46997805

>>46982340
I think Chloe’s specialty would be agility and speed since she’s the assassin. So if you were to face holoX she would try landing a backstab while you’re distracted by the others.

>> No.46998022

>>46997805
yeah I was workshopping encounters in my head last night while I was in bed and I had the thought of Lui catching one of your arms with her whip for Chloe to sneak up behind you and suplexing you, which is why I asked about retard strength. A knife fight in the dark with Chloe interests me too, though.

>> No.46998308

>>46998022
>A knife fight in the dark with Chloe interests me too, though
Fuck yeah, knife fights are so cool. that krauser fight in re4 remake got me itching for knife combat

>> No.46998447

>>46997805
>Deflects Iroha's katana and jump over Lui's whip
>Chloe was hiding in the shadows and jumps at you in midair, where you cant dodge
that or the good ol ''hiding in someone's shadow''

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>>47001914
MIO-SAMA...I KINDLY REQUEST PERMISSION TO RAWDOG YOUR DAUGHTER

>> No.47004192

>>47003732
>That ass sweat
Holy fuck, that's asking to be lapped up.

>> No.47012301

>>47003732
>having to go undergo three great tasks to rawdog Subaru

>> No.47013912

>>47003732
sweat lube sweat lube sweat lube uwaa

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>> No.47014963

>>47014730
If by "finish my part of the group project" you mean "viciously fucked nerd Fauna's ass, pussy, and tits in exchange for her doing my part as well as hers when I would have just done it for free", yes.

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>>47014730
This kinda freaked me out, because I'm actually currently scrambling to finish my part for a university project since I'm meeting with my group in an hour.

>> No.47016177

>>47015025
Show them what you're writing while you're at it

>> No.47016775

>>47014730
>Mumei your silly and aloof college friend
>who is in reality is a nightmarish entity wearing a dead girl's skin

>> No.47018130

>>47016775
So in this scenario would you have known the 'dead girl' before her getting possessed by mumei?

>> No.47018861

>>47018130
>GOOD route
OG Mumei was a bitch that tortured anon for years in higschool. The creature is happy to let you unleash all of your lust and hate into its vessel (which can regenerate) in exchange for food (people) and you not exposing it to the public
>BAD ROUTE
Anon never knew Mumei, but accidentally found out about the creature so now he has to keep the secret otherwise he'll get eliminated. Luckily this thing is willing to let him live if he helps its goals.
>NIGHTMARE ROUTE
Mumei was Anon's true friend and the love of his life. Seeing the creature wear her skin sends him over the edge,as he ''helps it'' while triying to come up with a way to end the creature and then himself

>> No.47018879

>>47016177
That actually wouldn’t be too bad. I don’t think any of them watch vtubers (except maybe one guy who watches anime) so I could pass it off as a regular story since it’s not smut.

>> No.47021144

>>47015025
Mumei's in your walls.

>> No.47023613

>zooming
Well at least there will be another low effort sputnigger story

>> No.47024028

>>47023613
We hating on weirdanon now too?

>> No.47024682 [DELETED] 

>>47023613
What's a sputnigger?

>> No.47024868

>>47024682
Think he's referring to the AO3 handle of a popular and regular longtime contributor here.

>> No.47025375

>>47024868
Oh, I probably should've guessed he was talking about me. I guess he didn't like the Flare story lol

>> No.47025813

>>47025375
In fairness you did shit out a bunch of low effort shitposts around the time of those niji yabs last month. I get that those fics were more intended to troll the ao3 audience but you have to admit they were trending to being shitty as you put in less and less effort for them
.

>> No.47025940

>>47025375
Don't take any notice of him, he's just intent on shitting up the thread.

>> No.47026332

>>47025813
I'll be the first one to admit that I've written some pretty terrible fics. The timing is just a little too convenient and I know how defensive people get about their oshi's. On the plus side it gave me a new idea for a fic.

>> No.47027238

>>47012301
And that's the easy daughter. You'd have to do much more before Mio lets you have Ayame.

>> No.47027633

>>47025375
The one thing that Flare story was not, is low effort. Misallocated effort, but honest nonetheless. >>47025813 got it right. There are so many things more worthwhile you specifically can do, such as refining your action scenes, than to waste time on a third Niji yab story you clearly don't actually care about.

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>>47027238
I'm pretty sure it's easier to ask for forgiveness than permission when it comes to getting Mio's approval towards rawdogging Ayame.

>> No.47029609

>>47028185
I guess Mio wouldn't mind if you managed to satisfy her precious daughter and kept her safe.

>> No.47030297

>>46848976
Anon is a student trying his hardest to impress the girl he has a crush on by being a straight A student but one day accidentally gets mixed up in shenanigans with a bunch of troublemakers (Shion, Gura, Laplus and Kobo) so he ends up stuck in detention with them.

>> No.47030595

>>47030297
>Shion, Gura, Laplus and Kobo
What is this an elementary school? Would you be a shota?

>> No.47030643

>>47030297
I want to be the teacher who correct those troublemakers brat and help Anon confess to this girl he is into

>> No.47030652

>>47030595
They're all adults

>> No.47031383

>>47030297
>chuuba Breakfast Club
I'd read it.

>> No.47031982

>>47030652
>Kobo
>Adult
Anon…

>> No.47032620

>>47030595
I figured it would be freshman year of high school or something.

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>>47030652
Why are they still in grade school then?

>> No.47033084

>>47030652
Kobo is 6 years old canonically

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>>47032665
Probably because their IQ's combined are like <290 and they're also too bratty to have a teacher feel bad about failing them

>> No.47034199

>>47033346
Gura would be really annoying to spank because unless you hold her tail up she will reflexively use it to cover herself

>> No.47034705

>>47034199
You'll have to either make her accept it or tie it down.

>> No.47035022

>>47025813
I liked that those stories were named as low-effort as well.

>> No.47035038

>>47033084
>>47031982
Kobo is legal as per her debut

>> No.47035099

>>47035038
Yeah, but nobody here watches her streams, so does it even count?

>> No.47035113

>>47035099
>nobody here watches her streams
It do be like that.

>> No.47035178

>>47035099
I mean, that still doesn’t change the fuck that she’s legal.

>> No.47035194

>>47035099
I watch her streams, I just don't like talking about it here since few people do.

>> No.47035214

>>47035038
Ignore the pedos.

>> No.47035242

>>47035214
You're outnumbered

>> No.47035521

New threads
>>47035329

>> No.47037272

>>47035178
A bit of Freudian slippage there, but you're right.

>> No.47037364

>>47035099
Surprisingly enough Kobo is quite funny to watch. Zeta and Kaela are fucking sleeper tier though, especially Zeta. At the very least I recommend people watching her clipped interactions with Kiara or ESL moments.

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