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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>46075903

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

HoloJourneys: (Restoring Nature and Pomu: A Summoner's Vow) Chapter 24: A Battle Between Legends Old and New: Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff):>>46186375

HoloJourneys: (Restoring Nature and Pomu: A Summoner's Vow) Chapter 25: A Castle In Ruins, and A Forest Reborn: Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff):>>46186375

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Impregnating Towa's butt:>>46076940

Zeta loving gentle femdom and manipulation, corrupting (you) into becoming her personal boytoy:>>46094298

Flare or Sana raping (You) because they heard that you dislike chocolate coloured girls and they want to correct you.:>>46124521

Rough Iroha sex that precedes the most diabetes inducing cuddling session ever.:>>46142882

(You) are playing baseball with the boys, and end up hitting a foul, sending the ball through an open window. Rushing up to see if you did any damage, you see that you smashed the lunch of a girl from the year below. Two of her friends try to kill you, literally, but you're able to calm them down by profusely apologising and promising you'll buy her another lunch. When that's not quite enough, you're also coerced into making a new bento for her every day for a week.:>>46146864

Haachama impregnation smut onegai.:>>46179015

>> No.46237955

>>46236244
I really need to start reading HoloJourneys before there’s chapter 30.

>> No.46238733

>>46237955
Considering how hag-focused the fic is I'd not be surprised if the first big sex scene appeared in Chapter 30.

>> No.46240250

>>46237955
You really should. Don’t be intimidated by the 10k word chapters. They’re worth the read.

>> No.46240324

>>46240250
>They’re worth the read.
They really aren't.

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>>46236193
Pikamee stealing strangers bikes in order to raise enough money to buy a new, top of the line bike along with a Abus Granit X-Plus 540 bike lock.

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>>46236147

Lion Taming!
A Tsundevil's Mind

rentry.org/clrpt

Tags: Towa, Rurudo, Collar, BDSM

This was inspired by >>39320829 and the need for more collar, petplay and submission stories. This one's not really focusing on the action or anyone but Towa yet, but I've wanted to write a piece in a stream of consciousness mode for a long time.

>> No.46243141

>>46243014
It's dogshit. Short, poor grammar, cringeworthy narration and no point to the story. This is embarrassingly poor.

>> No.46244450

>>46243014
It's strange and unfocused on what it wants to be, but the style does have potential if you're willing to write a longer fic with it. As it is now it's kind of too short to really work.

>> No.46244732

never trust rentry links, they always mad trash fics

>> No.46244901 [DELETED] 

On a scale of 1 to whore, Noel's definitely a 10

>> No.46245201

>>46244450
That's fair, it is fairly short, especially without the following events that are still growing in my head. And it's more snippety than focused, because covering a continuous timeline wasn't really the point, but that doesn't mean it's not a problem.

It's like unlikely I'll write more like this, it's harder and limiting. Stream of consciousness is just something that I found interesting since I learned about it in school, and I enjoyed trying it out.

>> No.46245534

>>46245201
Just don't write any more at all.

>> No.46245732

>>46245201
Fair enough.
Hope your next fics are better

>> No.46245805

>>46245732
There won't be any next fic. He's giving up writing.

>> No.46246068

>>46243014
I wouldn't have put it so rudely as the threadshitter, but it does need some work. It's difficult at times to tell what's going on and the erratic nature makes it quite dull. A solid effort, but needed a lot more time in the oven.

>> No.46246080

>>46245805
nta but lol
lmao even
Anon, don't let this tool get to you

>> No.46246205

>>46246080
>so buttmad he's samefagging

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>>46238733
Maybe it will. Maybe it will.
Poor anon is quickly approaching critical mass with all the stress he's went through on top of not nutting at all. A hero needs to be tip top shape and have a healthy sex life to overcome the bigger threats that are coming.

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>>46246205

>> No.46246623

>>46246265
You know how to use inspect, good job you. Keep seething for me, but spare everyone and don't do it in story form.

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>>46246623
>/wg/ home of both great writers AND great comedians!

>> No.46247089

>>46246834
And you're neither.

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>>46247089
Oh yes, I am nothing more than a humble pleb compared to your greatness, o great Anon. I bow to your infinite wisdom.
Please, share your knowledge of literature with us unwashed masses so we may partake in your enlightenment

>> No.46247363

Stop replying to him retard.

>> No.46247555

>>46247363
Ohoho, not linking to my posts to indirectly insult me! What an advanced tactic in argumentation. I suppose the next gambit will be 'stop replying schizo'? Genius, such genius! Then next will be 'stop talking like a faggot!'
I have much to learn from o, oh wise anon. Consider me in your humble tutelage.

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>>46246265
come on man, its hard out there in the coconut rice restaurant, let him unwind a little

>> No.46248231

>>46247555
Anon, just stop. I was on your side to begin with but now you're just being a cringelord. Leave the threadshitter alone, his aim is to get people to reply to him and you're being nearly as bad.

>> No.46248655

>>46248231
Provided you are replying in good faith, then I'm sorry.
As sorry as the state he is in right now, I may add

>> No.46248778

>>46245201
For what it's worth you did manage to get a pretty good narrative voice for Towa. The full stream of consciousness thing wouldn't really work out for a full fic but I think you could make a good towa pov fic that's suitably 'colored' with her perspective to feel like her if you wrote in a more traditional format.

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>New Legend of Polka drops
>Polka has experience camping and enjoys it
>Comes up with her ideal camping trip
Right then, how am I going to incorporate that into my Polka story?

>> No.46249599

>>46249305
>gen 5 goes camping
>Polka was the one who talked the others into going and takes the role of the leader/coordinator
>Botan goes full survivalist and shows the girls how to spearfish and which berries/mushrooms are safe to eat
>Nene spends most of her time hunting for cool bugs and getting lost in the woods
>Lamy brings a cooler full of booze
>It's empty by the second day of the trip

>> No.46250276

>>46249599
But what do (You) do?

>> No.46250368

>>46250276
You're in the body bag they're burying in the middle of the forest.

>> No.46250393

Jack, give me a saucy prompt

>> No.46250610

>>46250393
What kind of saucy are you after, senator?

>> No.46250684

>>46250393
Chloe being raped by a ghost

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>>46250393
>"A saucy prompt, huh? Oh, well I've got several. What about A-Chan whipping your balls off with a riding crop because you can't keep up with work at the Hololive office? Or having sex with your oshi while she's speaking with her fellow chuubas in a collab?"
>"Or, maybe... maybe you're in for something a bit more... red."

>> No.46250784

>>46249599
All of gen 5 is actually a good idea. I’m currently writing Polka fluff, but I’ve also had ideas for a road trip with University friends, so I might be able to combine the two into one story.

>> No.46251091

>>46250393
You agree to help nene finish summer homework but you end up getting distracted by going with her to search for beetles

>> No.46251131

>>46250368
So you're Aloe?

>> No.46251148

>>46250765
yeah, that sounds good

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>>46250393
Fubuki going out to a big greasy burger with her messy eating being described as if it were a sex scene

>> No.46251446

>>46244901
*Marine

>> No.46251871
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>>46251148
>"Then here. You and your oshi -- can be anyone you want, but it's better if it's a tsundere -- absolutely hate each other. Like, absolutely fucking hate each other's guts. Then, one night at the Hololive office, both of you get locked in the meeting room. Some automatic door is jammed because of a power outage or some shit; you decide. Then, as the heat intensifies, both of you start stripping, and that's where it gets frisky. Mutual attraction works in weird ways, so you guys bang on the table."
>"But then, suddenly, the lights go back on. Not only that -- the whole goddamn Hololive office comes into the room. It's Yagoo's surprise birthday party, apparently, and both of you are locked in each other's grip under the very table he's blowing his candles on. You struggle not to move to not attract any attention, but the pleasure's just too much. You even time your thrusts to the happy birthday song everyone's singing for Yagoo. As he blows his candles, both of you blow your loads, with everyone none the wiser."
>"Now excuse me, I'll have to go to the bathroom and wash my dick real quick."

>> No.46251949

>>46251871
goated prompt unironically

>> No.46251954

>>46251091
>You will never hear your childhood best friend talk for hours about the cool beetles she found
AGH JUST DO IT. KILL ME.

>> No.46252007

>>46251871
Fucking amazing

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>>46251949
>>46252007
>"Oh, and one other thing. You can play into the 'hatefuck' angle. It's red because your oshi's a virgin, you see. The sex was a 'youthful indiscretion' on her part, whatever. But you really want to fucking destroy her. So when everyone comes into the room, and you're under the table, she says 'anon let me go'..."
>"But you don't. You have a wild grin on your face. You tell her that if she doesn't shut the fuck up, you'll drag both your naked asses out from under the table and give Yagoo a really nice birthday show, one that he and the rest of Hololive Production will never goddamn forget. Up to you whether you actually do it or not."
>"Enjoy the rest of your day, fellas."

>> No.46252739

>>46246068
I thought that might bit difficult to understand - I've dug my own grave there a bit given that I wanted to be a purist about the mode, so no direct speech (even though I've read soc stories that had it) and no excessive descriptions masked as thoughts to establish time, place, events etc.
And you're right that it certainly wouldn't have hurt to make it slower and stretched out to reduce the erraticness, but I didn't have particularly high hopes of navigating the mode well without feedback (no matter how much I iterated and expanded), and the whole perspective is probably not a good fit for /wg/ anyway given how explicit and description-focused smut tends to be here.
Therefore I just left it as an experiment that I would've regretted not doing, and will move to something more typical for the time being.

>>46248778
Thank you, that's very nice to hear! I can't really hope to be good enough at soc to please an audience with it that wants something else in the first place, but the narrative voice coming across well (to someone, at least) is a good accomplishment. The story probably wouldn't continue from Towa's perspective, not 100% sure though.

>> No.46253340

>>46251131
You're the fall guy. She was supposed to be the one in the body bag but she knocked you out and had you replace her spot in the bag so she could escape.
Gen 5 only finds out because Nene wanted to keep a trophy from the corpse and found (You) instead of Aloe.

>> No.46253522

When does a piss scene cross the line from comedy to fetishism?

>> No.46253850

>>46253522
Do it like how Prison School handled it. That manga was a masterclass in ecchi comedy.

>> No.46254205

>>46253522
Around the point it crosses the line of absurdity into making the reader think this is supposed to be erotic; though if you just keep describing it and keep the scene going, it’s going to cross the line back to being absurd.
Though it’s very subjective and the points where people are going to find it’s absurd or just fetish material or crossing the line back to being absurd are going to vary between the individual.

>> No.46254230

Once upon a time, there was Pika. I gave her a hug, she smiled and lived happily ever after.

End.

>> No.46254326

>>46254230
Beautiful

>> No.46254859

>>46254230
All right everyone let's go home; this man won /wg/

>> No.46254980

>>46243014
I liked it, the stream of consciousness was a little odd, but it worked okay. It felt like it ended abruptly.

>> No.46255630

>>46254205
>though if you just keep describing it and keep the scene going, it’s going to cross the line back to being absurd
That's what I'm going for right now.
>Though it’s very subjective and the points where people are going to find it’s absurd or just fetish material or crossing the line back to being absurd are going to vary between the individual.
And that's the worry. If you continue a scene long enough, it can get absurd, but it can also last too long and make the reader go 'are we still talking about piss? hm... hmmm.......'
>>46253850
That Prison Schoolscene was so fucking funny. And how they kept bring it up in various ways, basically making the blondie 'the piss girl'.
Where they suceeded is keeping it short, and not really dwelling on it long enough to make you do anything more than laugh, or react disgustedly.

I'll have to ponder the subject more... hm....

>> No.46256045

>>46255630
Man I'm telling you I lost my shit whenever Hana and Kiyoshi got together because I knew something golden was gonna go down. Based taste, anon

>> No.46256057

I'm probably really late for this, but I made a entire chart for the Nijisanji VN for people who struggle to get a particular route
If you're wondering where I got all that info from, I looked directly at the game's files through Ren'Py

Putting it as a Gdrive because the image is too big for 4chan
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1V1pVCAn6xjaJ9o59uQbLYETIHwMt5d0w/view?usp=sharing

>> No.46259149

>>46236193
Being forcibly partnered with Gura on a school project and have to do everything in your power to make sure her sheer stupidity doesn't tank your GPA.

>> No.46260799

>>46253522
Like, pissing when? During sex or just pissing because they gotta pee?

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>>46259149
>"Okay Gura, I have all the information and points put here, all you have to do is literally copy paste them onto the slides for a presentation. Can you do that for me?"
>Gura:

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What's everyone working on during the tail-end of the week? Doing some writing? Reading? Outlining? Editing?

>> No.46261246

>>46260799
The actual reason is so context dependent, far removed from either of those two, and retarded that it's hilarious. Maybe I do have a funny scene on my hands.

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>>46261058
As soon as I finish RE4 I'll probably get back to writing some stuff.

Ashley's very cute in the remake and it's giving me the urge to make a fic about rescuing a chuuba

>> No.46262477

>>46254980
Thanks, glad to hear that! The current end will just end up being a switch to another perspective, hopefully.

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> Miko reads Marine doujin
> gets so horny that she basically admits that if she met Marine after reading it she would rape her

Someone stop this menace

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>>46261287
I do love rescuing chuubas. I'm also fine with them rescuing me too.

>> No.46264886

>>46087505
Hey, bit late on the feedback but better late than never I guess.
First of all, I really enjoyed your witty way of writing, you had me laughing all the way through. There might have been a lot of very stereotypical scenes, but they were enjoyable nonetheless with the humor you infused them with.
Overall characterization was pretty good, although I felt Rosemi was a little bit off at times (especially so during the sex scene, but I suppose people might have different headcanons for that, I think Rosemi would be way more embarrassed and freaking it hard).
It'd be nice if you could tell more easily which route you are on, or what kind of influence your choices are having.

As for what to fill the gaps with, I think being on a route for a particular character should give you more specific 1on1 scenes with that character. A little more quality time spent with them, more cute flirty scenes, and some with a bit of sexual tension (like the lap sitting for example) to have a smoother and more natural build up to the final sex scene, that kind of stuff.

With all that being said, thank you so much for all of your hard work. You did a wonderful job with this, and the fact that you not only kept up your creative and funny writing all the way through, but also made an effort to move the character sprites around to add to the immersion is simply incredible. I'm really looking forward to the sequel!

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>>46261027
>Your information was stinky, so I got better information.
>Gura, this is all about space consipriacy theories! This has nothing to do with the Ancient Pharaohs of Egypt. Where are your sources!!?
>I made them up!

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>>46267365
>Gura this says the pyramids were built from the top down how the fuck would that even be possible
>That's what I wanna know!

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>>46267824
>Gura, you dedicated four single spaced pages about how the ancient Egyptians played a card game that used actual magic to kill each other with.
>Yeah that happened though! I got sources!
>If you tell me your source is one of your stupid chinese cartoons again, I'm going to murder you.

>> No.46268223

>>46268114
>Gura the Japanese could not have sent aid to build the Great Pyramid, they did not exist as a culture yet.
>Oh where's your source on that, stinky?

>> No.46270113

>>46263034
Why? Marine molests girls all the time. She couldn't keep getting away with it forever just because she's cute.

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>>46263990
>ywn have Flare save your life then return the favour down the line

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>> No.46275342

>>46273985
Why boob

>> No.46275437

>>46275342
A witch did it

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>>46273985
It must be sweaty for Shion to wear a silicone chest piece out on the beach like that.

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Just found out that listening to R&B allows me to write lewd and smut without actually needing to be horny. I feel like I just unlocked a great and powerful secret.
Does anyone else get mental fuel for their writing from certain types of music? I sometimes write my SFW stuff with background music, and the words tend to fly when I do that.

>> No.46277408

>>46275342
oppai loli is just the best

>> No.46277527

>>46277408
so true brother

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>>46264886
>I think Rosemi would be way more embarrassed and freaking it hard
I don't really have an answer for this. It's true, and it's not like I don't write other characters to be embarrassed at times.
My two justifications and dialogue convenience and character narrative.
Reacting to something with embarrassment bring dialogue riposte to a screeching halt, and puts the blame on the other person. It doesn't do much good for conjuring up consent. The only reason it works for the others is because MC-kun catches on that Petra WANTS to be pursued. And with Selen, it's just funnier when she gets bullied.
In terms of character narrative, it shows Rosemi as being unexpectedly receptive, which is a subtle green flag to the MC, and shows that Rosemi may actually be thinking certain things we're not privy to, but chooses to act a certain way.
Also, Rosemi does tend to get flanderized as a dummy, but I feel like I put in enough of her good traits (earnestness and politeness), that it's not too slanderous.
Alright, cope over.
>specific 1on1 scenes with that character
Got it.
Yeah, in Ninisanni Scenario, the common route is more of a sampling, with the ends being short and sweet. Because of the scope of the project, I didn't have time to fill in the gaps as much as I wished to, which I intend to correct in a future work.
>With all that being said, thank you so much for all of your hard work.
Thank you for trying it out! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
>made an effort to move the character sprites around to add to the immersion is simply incredible
Half the fun is seeing the characters come to life. Since I didn't have CGs, I had to work with what I had, but turns out, you can do a lot with limitations.

>> No.46278190

>>46276965
Absolutely, but it's so specific to a particular scene that I don't have a jack of all trades for all my fics.
I wrote a pain-focused drama fic with this song on repeat.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FK8q-SnaGO4&ab_channel=Metric-Topic
As well as morally questionable smut with this on the background
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMruydE3DlE&ab_channel=devalon

Often if you associate a song to a particular feeling or emotion it might help you put it on paper.

>> No.46278706

>>46278190
Metric is soooo good. That song was already one of my favorites before it became semi-popular due to that one video.
Can definitely see how it would inspire.

>> No.46278809

>>46278190
I've also had specific songs tied to scenes I've done in the past. Some songs have repeat uses for later scenes, but I usually have to find a new one. I'm curious to see if I can use the bump and grind tunes for other smut after the one I'm writing.

>> No.46283519
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>>46276965
I tried to right some of HBT's action scenes while listnening to a podcast and holy shit was it so much harder to get into a groove as opposed to blasting Duel 35 or Breath of a Serpent or whatever I named the chapter

>> No.46283768

>>46283519
I don't think anyone without severe ADHD can write good while having their attention split like that. What kind of podcast were you listening to that you thought you could write with it?

>> No.46284079

>>46283768
>I don't think anyone without severe ADHD
You appear to have the wrong idea about ADHD because it sure isn't going to help writing in that scenario; rather, it'll just make it significantly harder.

>> No.46284166

>>46283519
If it's not a song with lyrics that I already know front to back, it will distract me. Otherwise I can jam out pages with songs in the background.

>> No.46284363
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>>46283768
It was one I had listened to before while I was at work it's about professional wrestling, obviously I didn't factor in that it was different then because I don't like my job but I enjoy writing

>> No.46284765
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>>46284363
>Don't like job
>Like writing
I'm there with you bro. This hobby has been a godsend since things at my job started declining.

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>>46284765
>>46284363
If only one could get paid for their writing. Surely that would be the best of both worlds!

>> No.46285474

>>46285114
If only... too bad there's no opportunities like that around here.

>> No.46285591
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>>46284765
Brainstorming fics has gotten me through some pretty insipid meetings. Thankfully nobody ever asks me questions about my department so I'll never reflexively say 'HAG SEX HAG BREEDING HAG MARRIAGE' when asked how things are looking for the week.

>>46285114
If I could just get paid for whatever I posted sure, but commission work sounds like the death of my enjoyment so I'll likely never do that.

>> No.46285724

>>46285591
>Brainstorming fics has gotten me through some pretty insipid meetings.
The best part about wageslavery is it gives you EIGHT HOURS of droll simple work. It's virtually impossible not to let your mind wander and stumble upon a couple good ideas for scenes.

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>>46285114
I gotta echo >>46285591
On both things. Making it a job would be a good way to kill my love of it. Also, I'm regularly writing during the workday, and my role leaves me mostly meeting free on most days. I do have to pretend to care about what is going on while my head is going 'Keep writing so you can get to hag sex breeding and marriage, just keep writing, these hags need love.'

>> No.46286566

>>46285806
>>46285591
>>46285474
I was making a joke. As someone who does get paid to write, whenever I try to write in my spare time, I can't get rid of the feeling of "I could be getting paid for this" so I don't have any motivation to finish it, since personal satisfaction can't compare to the satisfaction of getting paid. All of my stories in the past year or so have been either rushed or short because I feel like I should be working on a commission instead of writing for myself. But hey, if that's the price you gotta pay to make cash then whatever ig.

>> No.46287028

>>46286566
>since personal satisfaction can't compare to the satisfaction of getting paid.
I disagree with that idea but you posted wakipai so I'm too distracted to think harder on it

>> No.46287425

>>46284363
>>46284765
Keep it like that bros. "If you work in what you like you won't work a day" etc etc is a fucking meme. You don't have to like your job, it just has to put bread on the table.

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>>46286566
You gotta step away from Mammonite thinking. So long as you can pay the bills wealth doesn't matter all that much.
There's so much of a focus on capitalistic ascendancy to demonstrate value and appreciation, but the internal satisfaction of completing a project you put 100% and hearing words of appreciation from those that truly respect your efforts is much better than selling out to write furry fanfics or peddle self-help books to 40+ year old wine aunts.

>> No.46287740

>>46287425
Oh for me it's never been about loving your work to that level. All I ever card about was getting the paper to provide for myself and my loved ones. It works so much better when you dont really care about what you work on. My own job has declined in a sense because it's just not challenging, some of the people I work with are bad at collaboration, and I'm just kinda bored of the product itself. I'll come through whenever someone asks me too, but I'm pretty checked out and coasting.

>> No.46288881

>>46287607
nta but, I agree
If you really devote yourself to writing, you'll have to resign yourself to a life of being lower middle-class (unless you were well-off to begin with or you hit it lucky in the published author lottery).
But a life of doing what you want is worth it, really. As long as the bills get paid and you get to chase inspiration (going to new places, buying new books, etc) sometimes, you should be good.
Which is why I hold down a boring as fuck job that pays the bills. I don't have to think about when I get home either, so I have more time for writing and other things.

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>>46288881
>*lower-middle class
>*I don't have to think about it

>> No.46289254

>>46286566
please someone write more wakipai...i just discovered i have this fetish a few days ago

>> No.46289487
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>>46289254
Since Watame is helpless thirsty for this fetish I feel like I should understand a bit more about it. I think we've talked about it before with how it's basically more of a leading window to more erotic things, but what do I really do with that in a smut scene? Just kinda focus in on it and help it make the penis harder?

>> No.46289572
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>>46289487
>helpless
>helplessly
dammit, I'm not safe either tonight.

>> No.46290032

>>46289487
you can work on
>the alien pleasure that comes with using such a part of the body as a pleasure tool
the best armpit porn is always when one of the parties is surprised at how mindblowing this new thing feels and either blows a gigantic load or realize how horny they got
>the humilliaton aspect of someone skipping more erogenous zones for an armpit
>Sweat, lots of sweat
>Kinda related to Sweat, smell and smell mixing (cumming in armpits)
the sky is the limit!

>> No.46291104

>>46290032
well that's kinda good to know. I could work with the alien aspect of it when the time comes. I have to imagine with all the different interesting extra parts most chuubas have: tails, horns, big ears, etc. Pits might be lower on the priority list of things to play with at first.

>> No.46291903

>>46291104
yeah that's also a part of the appeal, the ''shame'' of that weird part being requested
say Coco for example
how would she feel if you look at her ass, tits, horns and tails and you go ''armpit''
that's a guaranteed ''what is he cooking'' kind of deal

>> No.46293069

>>46236193

Maybe something chronicling a previously mentally stable chuuba' spiral into madness, and how it affected the people around them.

>> No.46293105

>>46291903
I know when you "let someone cook" you are prepared to handle a mess, but I don't think she anticipates THAT kind of mess.

>> No.46293149

I don't have any ideas, but I feel like SMOK would make a great cast for a fic. I don't usually watch 3+ JP collabs because when they talk over each other I can't follow along at all, but I watched some of their 1 block minecraft and it made me laugh a lot. They have good chemistry. It's very cute how they all bully Subaru.

>> No.46294441

>>46293149
>bully suburu
>say literally anything to suburu
>speaker shattering OI's *undecipherable duck noises* can only be heard.

>> No.46295257

>>46236193
After a lot of begging from her part, both you and Mori are going to roleplay the horse post

>> No.46295772
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46295772

>8 pages and counting on a piss scene
I think I may have gone a little overboard bros...

>> No.46296018

>>46293149
Subaru is the Cirno of SMOK.

>> No.46296086

>>46295772
Gross.

>> No.46296425
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>>46295772
Based

>> No.46297609

>>46295772
I know you're doing this as a joke but you might be singlehandedly summoning /ringo/ back from their banishment.

>> No.46297930

>>46297609
If the ungodly amount of scat we've got in the archive didn't do anything for them, this pissfic certainly won't

>> No.46298143

>>46297930
I'm still salty the guy who request Mio into (You)r mouth never reviewed Miso Soup.

>> No.46298205

>>46298143
Probably a tourist who left thinking his request'd never get answered. Silly, silly boy.

>> No.46298440

>>46298205
If only he knew....
Then there was that guy who requested a Kirche fic. He also never responded. I even sent her the link on Twitter but never received a reply :(

>> No.46298643

>>46298440
>ancientfag tradpilled gamer girl wife.
Yeah, I wouldn't either. This is real... what's the term? Cringekino? I'm physically recoiling whilst reading this but still finding it funny. Kudos.

>> No.46299629

>>46295772
Good

>> No.46299731

>>46298643
That was more or less how the dude described her.

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>>46236193
Having a comfy post-stream nap with your girlfriend Fubuki, who needs to rest because she's old

>> No.46302103

>>46301424
She dies the next day

>> No.46302263

>>46236193

Towa BDSM. She tries to do a femdom, but you end up trying her up and dominating her instead.

>> No.46302304

>>46302103
Could be a kino drama
Theme song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dPLTzdatUPw

>> No.46303834

Bump

>> No.46304041

>>46303834
Anon, you didn't need to bump it.

>> No.46304064

>>46303834
Anon, the thread is near the bump limit, why’d you even bump it? Just let it die.

>> No.46306004
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>>46302103
I wanna hold Fubuki during her last moments

>> No.46306063

>>46304041
>>46304064
He didn't reply to you. He knows what he's doing when he shits up the thread.

>> No.46307495

Bump

>> No.46307558
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>>46236193
Sleep deprived sex with Koyori

>> No.46308942

>>46307558
I love this hag

>> No.46309140

>>46276965
if it comes to writing smut, nothing really beats Sade's Smooth Operator for the pure, smooth, and taut sexual tension between (you) and your oshi. And yes I exclusively write while having music being played as it helps set the mood.

>> No.46309424

>>46307558
hot

>> No.46310512

>>46307558
Koyori... you're too old to stay up all night...

>> No.46310591

>>46310512
You'll make her feel young again if you do it right.

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