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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Worshipping Mumei's cute and soft butt:>>45912786

After a long day of work, your plus-size wife Omaru Polka asks how you're doing and notices your low energy almost immediately. She ties her hair in a ponytail and gives you one of the best blowjobs of your entire life, as well as her asking you to rough her up a little and call her your personal cumdumpster.:>>45919325

Making Polka have an eargasm by rubbing her fluffy ears and then making her have a violent orgasm when you keep rubbing them.:>>45934369

Anon tries to stick his dick into the dickshredder while the myth and council girls try to save their manager's penis:>>45954907

A chuuba you wouldn't expect to be yandere getting increasingly clingy and menhera:>>45958803

Might be a good time to request yandere Kanata. She's got an expression like that on the nurse outfit, so maybe she stalks you, kidnaps you and cripples you, then makes you dependent on her? Her diseased mind pulls her away from the light of Heaven, and she becomes an imp. This makes her worse.:>>45963146

Maybe something involving the demon and angel chuubas being what they are? I just think they're neat.:>>45997799

Tenma having heart issues from playing horror games and having to take medication so she doesn't die.:>>46011807

Taking your wife Ame out for a walk after a long day:>>46017325

One of the hololive girls (one of EN or Fubuki preferred) reads through Auntie's Secret:>>46069205

>>46075988
Impregnating Towa's butt

>>46076940
I can't say I've watched her much, but she doesn't seem like she would be the type to let you put it in her bum.

>>46077814
NTA but I think that while it would be fairly hard to convince her, Towa is the type to reluctantly, despite her embarrassment, going along with things. I think anal is one of those things

>>46078425
Adding to that, she's not the type to enjoy it, and she would make sure you know by saying "Ah~, this is/you're the worst" in her tired and slightly annoyed voice, but would still let you finish inside.

>>46078702
That's part of the fun

>>46078702
God that's hot

>>46078702
Couldn't you just trick her into enjoying it by saying only the baddest of devils enjoy anal? For a devil that tries so hard to be a bad bitch but bungles it, it seems easy to set it up so she just has to take it and thinks shes doing evil now.

>>46081821
You must think Towa is retarded

>>46081821
>Wait a minute, this isn't devil training! This is anal sex!

Meanwhile Kanata's sphincter would crush your dick like an aluminum can.

>>46082835
would

>>46077814
Who says she has to let you?

>>46082390
But she is??

Any thoughts for scenes in the sequel to Ninisanni Scenario? I have the general plot and setting fleshed out, but need some fun shit to fill in the gaps.
More cute? More lewd? More sex? More romance? More comedy? More collab scenes? More scenes dedicated to individual girls?

>>46087505
Actual yandere scenes. I told you, you can't escape me.

>>46082835
>Sad genuine smile-verse
>Anon wants to do anal with Towa
>Towa is too scared of it
>Kanata overhears it
>Steps in during their sexy time
>Towa has no idea why she interrupted them until her winking asshole blows kisses at anon
>Towa can't keep his boyfriend's gaze on her for more than two minutes before he impregnates Kanata's butt
>Has to watch

>>46087555
Oh, I've already got a couple of those brimming.

>>46087505
Harem route maybe? Personally more stuff in the Tinkerhell ending vein of seriousness would be nice, though I just really like that ending.

Enough to have a fic in the works inspired by it

>>46091580
>Harem route maybe?
Haha, maybe I'm more in tune with consumer desires than I thought
The sequel is literally entitled Ninisanni Scenario: The Harem End, meant to be a continuation of what happens if you get all nine routes and go on all nine dates.
Don't tell anyone though, I want to keep it as a secret for /wg/ eyes only.
>spoiler
I'm honored truly. I love, love, love the concept of devious fairies

>>46091986
Ah, well in that case some full gen collab scenes would be nice.

>devious fairies
Kind of redundant but based all the same.

>>46087505
Personally, I'd like to see each girl's route be longer, so more cute. Also, please God have an affection point tracker.

>>46075988
Zeta loving gentle femdom and manipulation, corrupting (you) into becoming her personal boytoy

>>46092751
>Also, please God have an affection point tracker.
What about getting rid of affection points entirely? After all, it is an end. Doesn't make much sense to track that kinda stuff when you've already captured all the girls.
I'd still have choices though, for replayability and clever reuse of certain scenarios.
>>46092723
As in Lazulight, Obsydia, Ethyria? I could consider it. I was thinking of drafting some interactions we haven't seen yet, stuff like Enna x Elira or Finana x Pomu, since we don't get much of those in streams.
>Kind of redundant but based all the same.
How easily most creators gum things up and try to make them innocent beings. Chaotic-neutral fairies a best, especially when they're not necessarily evil, but their motives are still incomprehensible and foreign.

>>46094698
Yeah that's what I meant, though uncommon collabs like that could be pretty interesting if done well.

>Finana x Pomu
Well, so along as you handle that collab better than they themselves did you should be good

>>46094988
>Yeah that's what I meant
Mass collabs will be a bit of work to fit on screen, given my animation style, but it sounds like a challenge. Would be fun to give each gen a scene of gen unity.
>Well, so along as you handle that collab better than they themselves did you should be good
Boggles my mind how some chuubas just don't get along.
Elira x Selen, Petra x Rosemi, Selen x Petra, and Finana x Pomu, have excellent dynamics that really strike home, and they're largely contained within the gen/lore.
One can't fault them though, because even if they come up with a good stream, if one participant is a bit flaky then it never pans out

>>46095262
I was just making a joke about how their hotel off-collab went

A lack of Elira and Selen collabs is kind of a shame, though from what I've heard it's apparently they just don't think they have much in common and their schedules rarely line up anyway? I'm not sure though

>>46095939
yeah, Selen's a sweaty (actual) gamer girl while Elira is just the everyday normalfag

>>46094698
Well one of the things I liked about the VN was that I really had to think about each choice as they were kind of nebulous. Even when it came do dealing with more than one girl in a scene, I was never quite sure what was the correct choice until it came time to do the sweep. However, trying to achievement hunt proved to be a pain in the ass without any in-game way to keep track of what was working.

Do what you think is best, it's your project after all. The VN being short made keeping track manually not so bad but if the scope creeps then it can become a rather large thorn.

Why does this thread talk so much about Niji nowadays? There's barely any Niji content in the archives

>>46096557
Well why the fuck not?
Certainly better than tribalfagging.

>>46082532
LoL good one

>>46087606
Hot

>>46087505
I think this might be a good time to give a review of the game as I recently 100%’d it. Overall, I enjoyed it. The dialogue was witty and funny, the protagonist was refreshing and this might be something weird to point out, but I really liked the title screen. Maybe the filter was a bit too strong but the way the girls are all disinterestedly looking at/ignoring you (besides Pomu) paired with the music was like, my shit.
I think Rosemi and Millie might have been a little out of character at the beginning, but they were fine throughout the rest of the game, as were the other characters. That’s another thing I’d like to point out - given you had the task of juggling 10 characters, you did a marvellous job at nailing their personalities.
One thing I couldn’t stand was having to ctrl through the entire first two thirds of the game just to find out if I picked the correct options (for achievements). It was not fun, I’m just glad I played later and had the advice of my predecessors to help me out, and even then I didn’t enjoy doing that. The cinematics were cute, but I think a cooler reward would have been a bonus storyline or something.
Tinkerbell, Rosemi, Petra (I enjoyed the Anya reference) and Nina were my favourite routes. While the rest were decent enough, though I did glaze over a little during the Selen gun autism. The Pomu bad end was a really funny way to troll the player.
I think one sex scene was enough for each girl, since they didn’t do much for me and having two per route felt a bit forced/rushed. I think having a build up to one good sex scene instead of two kinda unnatural scenes would have been better. I did love how horny everyone was and the way characters interacted with each other. I wish humans talked to strangers like that irl.
On that note, my preference for the sequel is more comedy, more lewd and more romance.

>>46087505
>>46096768
Oh, and I forgot to add:
Well fucking done.

>>46096557
He says while posting an image of one of the biggest unityfags.

>>46096557
Dunno. Just don't participate and ignore it. Either they'll be forced to start creating their own content when they realize nobody else cares, or they'll get bored and go away.

>>46097223
>they'll be forced to start creating their own content
Did you miss out on the VN?

>>46097328
This is the average nijifag intelligence, is it? Good thing you lot are going to get bored soon.

>>46096557
Niji content outside of VN discussion is pretty much 1% in these threads. I see one, maybe two prompts per thread and they very rarely get discussed.

>>46097560
Keep seething over nothing then.

>>46095939
>I was just making a joke about how their hotel off-collab went
Oh Jesus, is that their preeminent collab? I don't keep up religiously with their channels, I've figured they've collabed more, I didn't even pick up on that.
Yeah, can't blame them for the bad vibes there.
>A lack of Elira and Selen collabs is kind of a shame
You're telling me. /haha/ is starved for dragon sister interactions.
But the lack of commonalities seems to be the chief motivator. And Selen tends pack her schedule (see
>>46096169, Selen has a lot of FPS gamer girl collabs). Still, a zatsu with the both of them would be heaven.
>>46096392
>However, trying to achievement hunt proved to be a pain in the ass
A common complaint I hear, which is why I want the sequel to have a more chill experience this time around
>>46096768
>I really liked the title screen. Maybe the filter was a bit too strong but the way the girls are all disinterestedly looking at/ignoring you (besides Pomu) paired with the music was like, my shit.
Marry me.
>you did a marvellous job at nailing their personalities.
I spent a lot of time watching those I haven't before. It was the entire reason I included Ethyria in first place. I realized the catalog posters were all overblowing things. They were cute, strong personalities that absolutely fit.
>One thing I couldn’t stand was having to ctrl through the entire first two thirds of the game just to find out if I picked the correct options
Yup. Truthfully, minmaxing was only meant for those that wanted the extras, but it seemed to lead people onto the impression that there was secret content gated behind 100%ing.
If it's any consolation, the sequel WILL be the extra content.
>glaze over a little during the Selen gun autism
Another common complaint. I chalk this up to my lust being at peak from the concept of Selen feeling me up while teaching me gunplay, and thus not noticing how little bantering dialogue.
Definitely the worst scene in the VN. I'd tie it with the Millie storm drain scene, but the ritual poster in /nijien/ seems to like that one.
>I think one sex scene was enough for each girl, since they didn’t do much for me and having two per route felt a bit forced/rushed.
This is something I've also noted amongst other players. Due to the pacing of the common route (my intent being to thoroughly introduce the girls before you get to choose), the sex scenes were shoved to the end, one after the other.
>I wish humans talked to strangers like that irl.
They did in the past. You can still find some chill girls around that day, but a lot of girls are direction-brained and predjudiced, if not outright malicious.
>more comedy, more lewd and more romance
More of everything, you got it boss.
>>46096827
>Well fucking done.
Thanks anon, I really do appreciate it. This is all fansa, and knowing it hit home makes aware that some people really do feel the way I feel.
>>46096392
>picrel
Ironically enough, I hate having to type in /wg/ in the search bar, because at any given moment, 8 other threads pop up. Not to mention, once an anon thought I was talking about the Wallpaper General board (but he was probably just retarded).

>>46094298
I want to write Zeta, but I can't see her as a top...she's so pon and dorky.

>>46059370
>>46061481
>>46063809

I was the anon who asked about using it for writing last thread but never got to show what I tested. The characters are /fvr/chuubas, since using an AI tool to help with writing about chuubas using AI-generated designs isn't the silliest idea. Also I just wanted to ask about the story idea in general, since I've been going through a block.

https://litter.catbox.moe/6w0y41.png
https://litter.catbox.moe/09d7x0.png

This is a prequel to how Jubilee Jonagold acquired a PC, since she's one of the least financially-stable FlaVRs. MC is working in the red market and Jubilee wants to sell her kidney so she can afford a gaming PC since the GPU prices are too high. MC offers to build it for her instead since he knows about computers, after calling her a dumb bimbo. They fall in love. Tags: comedy, romance, SFW, fluff
and a sequel chapter should be her getting cheated on with Minta, but GPT3.5 won't write vulgarity or sex scenes anymore. And if it does I don't know how to get it to.

>>46098982
I'm not much of a literary critic and maybe it is because I know the prompt it was given, but I don't like what the bot has written much at all.
It feels too serious for a silly prompt like that, and lacks wit.

>>46098662
Reminder that Zeta was grooming Axel pre-debut

>>46099178
compared to what i wrote last month before i decided to try the AI.

>>46099717
Looks like dogshit.

>>46099717
I think that looks better than what the AI wrote. And don't mind the threadshitter just above, he's trying his best to rile people up who don't know him yet.

>>46101125
dogs i like, scat i don't. was a draft i wrote a while ago anyway.

>>46101215
>I think that looks better than what the AI wrote.
It doesn't do a very good job of hiding details for comedic effect with this unique plot. At best, I got to learn how those famous writers have certain lines that are easily reproducible, but just saying
>"As we chatted, I couldn't help but feel drawn to her"
In the style of someone who writes about Victorian-era romance won't excite a reader.

>>46101886
>scat i don't
Shit taste

>>46101920
I don't want to taste it!

Cheese

>>46102639
Mmm, looks tasty.

>>46103375
But enough about the wolf.

>>46103411
There needs to be more cannibalism fics.

>>46096557
All it takes is good fic to change everything anon. That's been the path this thread has taken ever since Omelas.

>>46099717
I mean it looks like you have your writing fundamentals down at least. I think if you want to make better stories/write better prose then you simply need to write more and get into the improvement loop that comes out of sharing your work and listening to criticisms about it.

>>46078702
This, but she learns to love it.

Yab?

Series anons doko?

>>46112861
Depends on the series...

>>46112861
Alive, technically.

>>46112861
Here and cruising along. I'm pretty excited to show what I got cooking once it's done.

>>46112861
Alive and kicking

>>46112861
Alive merely because fanfiction keeps me going.

>>46112861
Waiting in the future

>>46120474
I'm awful with time travel nonsense, what did he mean by this!???

>>46122576
He's read all the chapters that follow in your favorite series, and is waiting for the authors to post them

>>46122576
He's waiting for his past to become our present

>>46122576
I wanted to say that new series authors will emerge.

>>46075988
Flare or Sana raping (You) because they heard that you dislike chocolate coloured girls and they want to correct you.

>>46124521
EN3...the mezoamerican brown queen...onegai

>>46124521
Flare doesn't get enough love

>>46124521
AGHHH I HATE CHOCO ELVES LITERALLY THE WORST

Any updates on either the Nijisanji or Hololive VNs?

>>46127160

>>46087505
Given you now have experience with the engine and writing Nijisanji characters, how long do you think the sequel will take to make? Not rushing you. Just genuinely curious to know how much you think you might have streamlined the process.

>>46128233
2

>>46128541
2 what?

>>46128616

>>46126312
Hololive VN?

>>46128233
Depends how long I take to write. I'm still planning on taking a couple months off, only writing a couple scenes a week.
Once I start work, writing will probably be done in 3 months, first draft edit and final draft edit in a month or two, and scripting and staging will probably take another three months.
So less than a year, I should think. Being able to reuse assets will help loads, especially in terms of UI and clean sprites.

>>46125493
Yeah they suck! In fact, I think they suck so much I'm gonna send Flare my address and a copy of the key to my front door so she can come over and I'll say it to her face!

>>46130919
>Flare, you suck!
>not yet...

>>46132600
>Flare shows up with a shirt in your size that says "I LOVE BLACK QUEENS"

>>46124521
I had a dream last night that Sana was trying to seduce me but we were outside and that made me uncomfortable. I eventually agreed to finger her but she was being way too loud so I stopped. It was a pretty weird dream because I obviously haven't thought about Sana in months.

I love boobs. Especially fox boobs. I want to suck on them.

>>46135797
coward

>>46137300
>fox boobs
You might call them Foobs.

>>46137347
Please andastand, Kronii was hunting me with a gun before I met Sana and we agreed to go back to her place to continue but I woke up...

>>46135116
I see the loophole going on here. You still get to call yourself a racist if the black girl raped you against your will.

>>46139115
This sounds like the makings of a good fic.

>>46137613
And her ass? You can call it a Fubooty.

>>46139296
this gif would be hilarious with a ''its over'' text over it

Also break will break that cracka

>>46140151
Was Viego's Queen really black? I'm almost sure she wasn't and it's just that her soul is inside Senna.

>>46140654
well half yes half no
since camavor is based around spain, its not far fetched to think of isolde as brown, specially since she was just a seamstress. But the original joke was about how viego wanted to fuck Senna because she was black or some dumb shit that led to the ruined massa joke.
god i loved viego why did they have to ruin him in ruination

In case VNanon is still lurking here, I just wanna say I love the VN so far. After getting one ending I decided to go for the super seducer, which was pure hell to figure out. Haven't looked through all endings yet, but I have the cork board saved for easy access.

Also no one seems to have mentioned it yet (to my knowledge), but I absolutely love the comments you left in the chapter files. Almost better than the VN itself. Btw, Millie's max love check seems to be broken, because it checks for Mlove <= 7

>>46141759
Awesome, glad you're liking it.

>Also no one seems to have mentioned it yet (to my knowledge), but I absolutely love the comments you left in the chapter files.
Oh yeah, those. I kinda just use the comment lines as a personal diary to keep me sane while working. There's some vestigial joke images and notes in the game files, but I wouldn't go peeking around until you've finished all there is to see, because there's stuff that will spoil you. Picrel is one of them

>spoiler
Yup, Finana's is messed up too. They basically do the opposite, giving you the achievement if you have anything less than maxlove, which is why nobody's noticed. It'll be fixed in the next grammar/bugfix update.

>>46075988
Rough Iroha sex that precedes the most diabetes inducing cuddling session ever.

>>46140942
>Knocked up Gwen
God I wish I was Viego in that image

>>46075988
(You) are playing baseball with the boys, and end up hitting a foul, sending the ball through an open window. Rushing up to see if you did any damage, you see that you smashed the lunch of a girl from the year below. Two of her friends try to kill you, literally, but you're able to calm them down by profusely apologising and promising you'll buy her another lunch. When that's not quite enough, you're also coerced into making a new bento for her every day for a week.

>>46146864
>its like feeding a deer to the point that anon has to leave the lunch in a bench and wait in the bushes
>after an entire year, Aqua finally comes to him
>''I...UUHH.,. I''
>''I REALLY LIKED THE ONES WITH CILANTRO''
>anon stands there
>''but...i didnt use cilantro''
>Aqua looks like she's choking, she starts criying and sobbing
>turns around and attempts to run away
>trips and falls flat in her face
>Anon rushes to her, she looks at him with tears down her face, a bloody nose and snoot and dirt all over the face
>''IWB I...I MENGT O-G-OGOEAGNO''
>Anon cringes
>''I didnt use oregano either''
>Aqua starts criying louder as she pees herself, liying in the ground
>anon walks away

>>46148179
MY HEART

>>46148179
And then anon dies.

Stinky paizuri or gozaru thighjob?

>>46148179
it could be better if she throws up before asking, then pisses herself
just for the full on spaghetti dropping

>>46152534
Both. What is keeping me from having both?

>>46153282
Whichever one you don't pick will go be knotted by a dog

>>46153304
can it be a horse instead? i dont like knots

>>46153304
What the fuck man? You know what? Fuck your ultimatums. I don't have to abide by that shit. I'll kick the dog before it gets anywhere close to my doofy holox jobbers.

>>46152534
Where are these VR events held again?

>>46153304
In that case, neither. I'm not touching a girl who would fuck a dog.

>>46154147
What if she doesn't have a choice? Whichever doesn't get picked by you will be forced to have a dog breed her

>>46152534
Gozaru thighjob. I want to see what a dog orca will look like.

>>46154346
This is turning into some SAW bullshit.

>>46153304
Anon, I keep up with hentai art. Gozaru's already been knotted.

>>46155393
>Hello Anon, I want to play a game.
>Before you lay too chuubas, chained up for convenience
>Chloe is laid on her back for a perfect titjob
>Iroha is standing up for a thigh job
>You have to make a choice, anon, and whoever you don't pick, will get knotted by the dog next to you
>The clock is ticking, anon, make your choice, and cum fast.

>>46155393
>hello anon, i wanna play a game
>do you remember when you said ''you were so hungry you could eat a dog?''
>well looks she's going to eat one

>>46152534
>>46153304
The stink mixing with the dog seems natural. I wanna look at her as the one so foul-smelling that she'd attract dogs on the street with her pheromones, them thinking she's a bitch in heat.

How to get off a writers block? I used to write a lot (Some holo ,and some OC).
But semester I started my thesis and didn't have much time to writing. Could that be one of the reasons I'm having a block? Is also my fault because I'm being kinda lazy.

>>46157095
there's two ways around it
a) you just live you life for a while,maybe some days.
inspiration will hit you when you are doing some soup, you'll try to run to the pc and spill hot soup all over your legs. This has never happened to me in any way shape or form
b) forcing yourself to write something, doesnt matter if its good or not, until you get over it. The constant exercise will get your head running and figuring the solution. That said, if you cant write for a day, that's okay.

>>46087505
Hag sex
Hag impregnation
Hag pregnancy
Hag lactation

Verification not required

>>46157095
Honestly as much as I say that you need to make it a habit; this is still a creative endeavor. The best way to get back in is probably to just start with a fun idea or prompt and writing for fun.
You'll need to get into the habit of writing if you want to make anything big but if you just want to write something for fun then there's nothing wrong with just having the doc/word file open and writing what you want to write when you want to write.

>>46157285
This poster is exactly right. I was about to write a post, but he covers it.
To add to the first point, creative inspiration comes in the weirdest way. Just leave the house, try new things, and you'll find inspiration in the strangest settings. Sometimes it won't relate at all to a specific character you want to write about, but it's still inspiration nonetheless

>>46155739
kek

What's everyones favourite cryptid/ folk creature? This is relevant to a fic I'm writing by the way, I just figure somebody may have an esoteric one I don't know about

Dibs on Mothman

>>46159719
I really like the Flatwoods Monster.
The Mad Gasser of Mattoon is a really weird lesser known one.

>>46159719
The Kurupi should pay one of the Holos a visit. Also sorry but mothman is boring and overrated

>>46159719
Probably deep-sea monsters like the kraken/leviathan. The ocean creeps me out, so they unnerve me more than any land-based creature.

>>46159719
The bunyip but for reasons mostly unrelated to the cryptid thing.

>>46159719
Faeries just work.
I like the idea of them not being entirely good, and not entirely bad.
They're also tied to the earth, so you don't have any Hell/demon/Lovecraftian nonsense getting in the way.

>>46159719
Gnomes are the best. They're a bit of American folklore that is underrepresented.
I love how they're helpful, but also tend not to be around.
Sometimes they steal things, sometimes they give you presents. The idea of just having to live with their mischief is so damn cute.

>>46159719
Do sewer alligators count?

>>46160953
t. gnome

>>46159719
Mermaids are peak.
They're denizens of an unknown world, but still remarkably human.
There's some red string of fate cross-cultural concept that just works with them.
And how sailors see sirens when lost at sea for many days, and it entices them.
They're mysterious, but also not as much as other cryptids. Like they could actually exist.

>>46161103

>>46161137
Your mermaids are pathetic. My mermaids are otherworldly creatures who live in a cave city deep below the water of the Amazon river, and as they come out, they shape shift into mermaids to lure men into the cave, and as the men arrive they turn into pink dolphins and rape the men. Afterwards the men are transformed into more of them or something I don't remember the specifics

>>46155513
Sauce for interested parties?

>>46159901
Good ol' West Virgina and their giant glowing red eyed monsters, though it does seem closer to being aliens which isn't exactly what I'm after. People seem pretty quick to dismiss the Mad Gasser as mass hysteria when there was guy in a city near where I lived who got arrested for throwing boiling shit at people for no reason.

>>46159920
Leave it to the South Americans to come up with a little goblin with a prehensile cock that rapes sleeping women. I'm sure trios of Kurupi commit armed robbery on mopeds nowadays moreso than rape

>>46160221
I LOVE a good kraken, unfortunately my plans don't include much seafaring.

>>46160329
The Bunyip sounds like someone trying to convey a hippo to somebody except neither of them have ever seen one before, but that's definitely interesting an Aussie folklore seems like an underappreciated subject.

A fluffy lamia definitely intrigues me

>>46160869
A nefarious little fairy is the star of the fic!

>>46160953
Big fan of whimsical little forest people. Went to the mushroom village and gnobody gnew you

>>46161041
I'm gonna say no.

>>46161137
I prefer Kelpie, but they're pretty similar.

>>46161584
Have you heard the theory that mermaids are manatees based on an account from Christopher Columbus.
>>46161824
Ah, then another good cryptic is the Mongolian Deathworm. If you want a peaceful one then the jackalope is an American classic.

>>46161824
Minigirl ero...

>>46159719
Michigan Dogman.

>>46159719
I've always been a fan of the wendigo, and not the cannibal things. I'm talking about the 9 foot tall deer-human.

>>46162432
Ko'one...

>>46161584
>and as the men arrive they turn into pink dolphins and rape the men
"Oh no, don't, stop! *smirks*"
>>46161824
>A nefarious little fairy is the star of the fic!
POMU POMU POMU POMU

>>46163687
Do you want to be gang raped by pink male dolphins?

>>46164565
"Oh no Finana, don't turn into pink mermaid and rape me! *sly wink towardds the camera*"

>>46164565
Oh no, anything but a gang of angry futa mermaids! *Smiles and nods at onlookers*

>>46164633
>>46164732
Finana futa is to Niji what Marine futa is to Hololive. Is this statement correct?

>>46164785
I don't know, hag dick feels different from zoomer dick.

>>46164890
Hm... that might be true. I didn't think of it that way.

>>46164785
Sort of, but I imagine her coworkers would be disgusted by her stupid little fish cock even more than Marine's and her own willie.

> staying up late to write again
> heart attack symptoms are back

I... really should visit a doctor...

>>46165977
I found out too many fic authors died last thread, don't join them, anon.

>>46165977
You really should.

>>46165977
Nope, keep writing. You're almost at the finish line - and I'll let you ponder which I'm referring to!

>>46165977
I'm going tomorrow and I'll ask for you

>>46165977
Having a cardiovascular disorder triggered by writing is some next level procrastination ability. I kneel.

>>46165977
Anon, are you ogey?

>>46165977
Tenma...

>>46075903
https://archiveofourown.org/works/28149435/chapters/84640111
Bit outdated though.

>>46170461
>that many tags
i fucking hate AO3 so much

>>46170461
What the fuck? There's more words in the tags than there are words in the fucking synopsis. And what are these tags, anyway? Is this even chuubas?

>>46170540
>>46170491
I like the tags because it makes the giant mass of fanfics very searchable.

>>46170461
>aged-up characters
Pussy

>>46170461
Wrong writing general?

I got to thinking about what author I'd like to see write what chuuba and I think the My Cures guy could make some stellar hag courting smut

>>46173087
He'd make a great scat fic for sure

>>46170540
After a Google search I think that anon may have confused us as being a writing general for anything involving vtubers rather than a writing general for writing vtuber fanfiction since the character in the character in that chapter is a character that plays a vtuber according to a minute of googling this.

>>46173124
Nah, Our Cures was really good. For scat writing try the holojourneys fag, he writes nothing but shit.

>>46175327
Gottem

What kinds of stories do people want to see more of? For me, I'd like to have some more action fics in the archive.

>>46075988
Haachama impregnation smut onegai.

>>46178972
I've been wanting to try my hand at an action-focused story for awhile now. I've never tried writing combat before

>>46178972
I want to see idea/prompts that get discussed and built up in thread like the fujocast hypnosis idea or the alt!suisei in the main timeline idea one get written.
Though I know the only way fics like those are gonna get written is if I pick up the pen and start writing them myself.

>>46178972
Omelas styled stories so its not just Fubuki that has them.

>>46180577
Wow, that artist really nailed Rakshasa and Asura.

>>46181924
What do you mean by omelas styled story? We've already had plenty of emotionally abusive chuuba fics back in the early days.

>>46182575
And we need to see more emotionally abusive stories, anon. I've always wanted to see one that could involve someone like Suisei or someone harmless like Mio (but you'd be the one emotionally abusing her because it isn't in her character to abuse you).
Just no magic shit please.

>>46178972
I'm writing an action-focused fic But I have to spend extra time editing the action scenes because I'm better at writing dialogue

>>46183077
>Suisei
What would that even look like? Maybe it's the alt!Suisei idea poisoning my image of her but right now I can only envision it as long periods of cold emotional distance interspersed with short bursts of Menhera moments as she threatens, cajoles and lovebombs you into staying with her.

I give up. I've tried everything I can think of to get this dumb bitch's route. Nothing fucking works.

>>46185763
Wouldn't it be cool a VN checked your PC and changed the behaviour of characters based on that? Like how powerful your PC is, or whether you have certain software installed (like programs that artists would use).

>>46186082
Not really?

>>46185763
Do you buy her the protein shake? Cause for me that seemed to be the deal breaker and you're supposed to give her the choccy milk after fighting against it.

>>46186147
Aww. I think so, but fair.

>>46186151
Nope. I bought her the choccy milk. No cigar.
>>46186217
A ton of games have read your PC info and used that in-game. It's not really shocking anymore. If anything, I just get pissed off that they're flashing my info in my face. Feels like an invasion of privacy, if that makes sense.

>>46075928
HoloJourneys: (Restoring Nature and Pomu: A Summoner's Vow) Chapter 24: A Battle Between Legends Old and New

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSvlVrDKWmzyVJhJDfYsf6xn7McmtvPZd0JA3SWyid0cCojQxZR9opsgzWY4d5SD2h_3agxoVGyR9og/pub

Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

HoloJourneys: (Restoring Nature and Pomu: A Summoner's Vow) Chapter 25: A Castle In Ruins, and A Forest Reborn

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQW4zAvpSgYxQg8qy1G15RnCrqAhW-DKtt-zkNXSUHqHo08egi-Oay5dDBtEKf1uyN1XOWtg2dy6W8T/pub

Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

The thread anniversary, all the anons posting their good experiences, and just writing this arc's conclusion in general got me so hyped, I pumped out a DOUBLE DOSE.
That's a wrap on this arc! I'm incredibly happy with how it turned out and all the steps it took to get here. I learned some good things as well that I hope to apply to my future chapters. Hope you enjoy the read, and I'm always happy to read some feedback.
As for where the adventure might go next, we'll explore some warmer climates and maybe run into someone I'm particularly excited to start writing.
"Ahoy."

>>46186082
That'd be cool. Eternal Darkness and MGS are the only games that come to mind when interacting with the player's console. Sure there was DDLC but I think that only checked your steam account.

>>46178972
Action but it ends in unprotected rape + impregnation of the defeated chuuba.

I am a man of simple tastes.

>>46187530
This, except it's not rape but willing submission to a superior male.

How do you guys know if your writing is good? How do you know when you've written a good relationship/dialogue interaction? It's what stops me from attempting anything. I feel like anything I write will be shit and I won't be able to tell.

>>46187734
OK I should clarify, when I say rape this is basically what I mean. I just like some initial struggling to spice it up.

>>46188157
The way to find out is to write something that should be interesting to the audience and then listen to their feedback.

>>46188157
You dont
just like saying something might make someone cringe or make them go ''ooh man i getcha'', you dont know until its out and you cant undo that
but that's what makes it good, so go out there, be cringe and then learn from your mistakes so next time you are less cringe

>>46188157
>>46188252
you just have to remember we're all writing extremely self-indulgent chuuba fanfic so performance anxiety is thoroughly secondary to having a good time

for example

>>46186375
this guy clearly wants to fuck every hag in the universe, you see any shame in his posts? no

>>46186375
Thanks for the two chapters at once! You should think about informing /hag/ of your work.

>>46187530
>>46187734
I like to imagine that the key difference for the Marine smut side chapter in Holofantasy was that she performed naked dogeza after losing the fight and awoke Anon's primal instincts

>>46187530
>>46187734
submission is so based. It doesnt even have to be violent or mindfucky, just someone clearly understanding that their partner is superior

>>46185763
Going off memory but
don't simp -> protein shake -> choccy / pick her during the Finana pool scene / refuse to join club -> roses -> purple

>>46189996
oh and pick her during the piano scene

>>46188157
>>46188430 is right on.
Even if you may not start out as good as you might hope, that doesn't mean you should stop trying. If you're passionate about the stories and worlds you want to create and see, and are open to the feedback of others, you can keep climbing higher and getting better every time you put something on paper. Never hold yourself back from what you want to do because you're afraid someone might not like it or not agree with what you've written. Give it your best and feel the pride in what you've created and the fact that you did it.
>>46188578
I peruse /hag/ a lot, which probably comes as a big shock, but I don't know how I would even go about talking about it there. I also feel like since anon isn't physically balls deep in any hags yet, it might not give the average hag enjoyer the release they are looking for just yet.

>>46189996
Laid out, it looks really easy. I doubt you even need all the choices.
My bet is that guy is an actual buta Rosebud who wants to be in the fanclub

>>46157285
>>46157689
Thanks, yesterday I got out of my house and bike a little and got kinda tired. Maybe today I will write whatever is on my mind just to get into the habit again.

>>46192370
You could also do what i do and try and work on another thing, just to get the mind running.
even if it turns out shit, you go ''well this could work in...ooooh! i have an idea!''
ganbare my guy, you have this

>>46190076
>I peruse /hag/ a lot, which probably comes as a big shock, but I don't know how I would even go about talking about it there.
I think you could just post it there casually, like "Hey I wrote this hag-focused story, sex eventually, check it out if you like". No announcement like here

>>46159719
I really like El Silbon, it's more of a legend but i like the concept. But if we are going cryptids only I think Mongolian death Worm, that shit is fucking awesome.

Any fic (or fic idea) about submission? the recent posts got me craving for it

>>46192776
just anything suisei or iroha nsfw

>>46192776
the collar greentexts are nice, if basic

>>46192776
Sexually bullying Aqua throughout the day as she is forced to work for you as a maid so she can have a place to stay, like flipping up her skirt as she is trying to clean the room and fuck her against the still dirty desk, cumming on her food and pretending like nothing is wrong with it even though she knows, forcing her to clean you in the bath, etc

>>46192776
Making Towa to admit that she really does enjoy anal through relentless training of her ass

Mmm story time

>>46193275
This but the roles are reversed and its Alt Aqua sexually bullying you as you work as her personal butler and have to endure her sexual harassment even when she has friends over.

>>46195909
>Alt suisei is a mental jenga tower
>Alg aqua is a slutty bully
Does this mean that Alt Towa is actually cool?

>>46196873
No she's still a loser somehow

>>46186375
Just finished reading these two, the grendel fight was pretty cool, Sylph being introduced and her having a more modern way of speaking is great, sometimes Undine speaks like an old man which is a gripe I have with her.

Chapter 25 is the real star here though, the end of this arc brought so much cute fluff, that I needed. I was wondering what would happen to Pomu after this was over and I'm glad she's joining the gang. Being snuggled in between two hags before falling asleep is awesome.

Unfortunately, I'm gonna have to deduct points because Fauna sex was possible and Nene could have been walked in on it, I can forgive that though, but Nene sex while taking a bath was right there and I feel robbed. Overall a very solid ending anon, thank you as always.

>>46196873
She tries to be a good girl but ends up screwing everyone over.

>>46196873
She tries to be good but always ends up doing evil.

>>46195909
That doesn't sound like Aqua

>>46192785

>>46198707
That's why he said Alt Aqua.

>>46198797
But why would you use the chuuba who's the meekest and most bulliable and turn her into a bully? Why not just pick someone who's actually a bully like Korone or Suisei?

>>46198837
To change someone completely is the point of "mirror universe" kind of concepts. If the core appeal to you is "bully story" of course someone like Suisei or Korone would make more sense, but if the core appeal to someone else is "bully story with Aqua" that's not an option.

>>46198965
Honestly it just sounds like you're not good enough to write a motive and characterization for her to be a bully without changing her character entirely

>>46199282
(You)

>>46196953
I'm glad you enjoyed it, but my points man! I need those! You gotta understand, you can't just have your v-card taken by a mystical being of nature that sits at the top of the natural order food chain. I share your sentiments over being robbed though, it's getting harder and harder to not write in fluffy sex, but the time has not come yet. I have a slight feeling that once that dam first breaks, I'll be looking for excuses to write fun and hot sex scenes. If I even can write half-way decent smut.
Thanks for the kind words about the ending. I'll keep doing my best to make the next arc enjoyable too.

>>46198837
Because its a fanfiction idea and its a universe where things don't make sense.
Next you'll say an alt Mio where she kidnaps young men and rapes them to death in hopes to get pregnant (but can't because her womb is too barren) doesn't make sense.

>>46201882
>but can't
shut the fuck up with your false flag Taiga, your mom will be pushing out my children in nine months while I grope her tits and watch and there's nothing you can do about it

>>46201882
>but can't
Can't wait to prove how wrong you are.

>>46202326
>>46202462
Taiga would be dead in that scenario due to old age and the reason she wants to be pregnant because the child will be named after her dead cat.

>>46202559
Might not use that first bit, but her daughter being named Taiga is good shit. Ima steal it.

None of the holo hags are 40 yet, right? Don't worry bros, we might need a doctors assistance, but we can breed them all. They might be retarded, but /wg/ could ways use some more writers.

>>46204490
Botan, Korone and Luna are very close to or already 40.

>>46202559
I like thinking of Taiga as some sort of guardian who stops mortals from unleashing the sex beat hidden within Mio. If he didn't cockblock everyone and Mio reached her full SEX state, she would cause the apocalypse by making every man cum themselves to death.

>>46204953
>Taiga... All this time you were protecting me...

Korone's relationship with Okayu is very strange. She met Okayu when she was still in uni while Korone was already a hag. More than a decade of an age gap... Korone is not only a bully but also a groomer

>>46205170
based

>>46205170
Wasn't Okayu the one who reached out to Korone though?

>>46205080
>>46204953
Reminds me of that one prompt where Mio rapes anon out of spite and she accidentally kills Taiga who was trying to save you.

I want to sniff Mr. Koro's ears.

>>46188157
You don’t, and in all honesty it probably will be shit. Should that stop you? No. Everyone was shit when starting out, especially me. Going back to look at my old works is a pure cringefest. But knowing that I’ve improved is a great feeling. /wg/ is in dire need of new blood right now, so don’t feel afraid to write something. You’ll at least get a little feedback on how to improve for next time.

>>46207777
I highly doubt she'll let you touch her ears let alone sniff them

>>46208105
Let me?

>>46204490
>but /wg/ could ways use some more writers.
Kek

>>46208105
If you scratch her ears do you think her leg starts involuntarily shaking?

I live my life without taking any risks in hope that if I stay alive long enough one day I'll be able to experience the technology that will allow me to have sex and marry a virtual version of my oshi even long after she has graduated.

>>46204490
>>46208601
>Hagborn anon writes about his mommy
>everyone asks when he's going to NSFW her

>see all this hag breeding posting
>write Alt Mio who is a horny infertile teenager
im such a twisted psychopath and this world is my plaything

>>46208662
If she gets comfortable enough I don't see why not.

>>46208943
Oh god, the thought of me, a younger man, petting a 40 year old dog woman and scratching her ears and rubbing her belly thus making her shake and roll over uncontrollably while she's trying to work causing her to get embarrassed and annoyed with me to the point she tries to bite my fingers is making me insanely horny for Mr. Koro...

>>46208834
So she's just Marine but not a hag then?

This Mio talk is making me want a continuation of that one story where she gets romanced by an equally hag-aged (You) while making her daughters cringe themselves to death.

>>46209354
Me personally, I'm about her humping your leg at the slightest show of affection when she is in heat.

>>46209716
>Hey hey! hello girls! your mother and i were wondering if you wanted to join us in a pottery class! we'll make matching bowls for our noodles night!
>both cringe into non-existance

>>46211129
Getting together with Mio despite hating hags so you can fuck her daughters!

>>46213168
getting together with Mio because you love hags and because you want to be a dependable dad in these girls life!
Bonding with subaru by building things in the shed!
Bonding with ayame with dad jokes!

>>46213447
The good ending

>>46213447
Imagine Mio's shock when she gets home early to find you balls deep in one of her daughters while you kiss the other

>drunk
Looks like its time to write.

>>46223882
iktf bro

>>46223882
I don't think your oshi approves, anon

>>46224842
My oshi is an alcoholic.

>>46226604
>no pubic jungle
#NotMyLamy

>>46226912

>>46227032
ill forever remember you aibou

>>46227075
o7

>>46227032

>>46227075
>>46227881

>>46231462
Anon, you didn't need to bump it.

>>46231462
Anon, the thread is near the bump limit, why’d you even bump it? Just let it die.

>>46231544
>>46231545

>>46231545
He just can’t handle the fact that threads die.

Not like anything gets discussed when the thread is as dead as this.

>>46231544
>>46231545
>>46231888
Where were you guys a year ago?

>>46231922
Yeah, but you still have idiots like this >>46231763 bumping a thread even though it’s close to the bump limit.

I've never seen people get so mad about bumping a thread. I don't think there's any point to bumping at >270 and do agree it would've been fine to die there, but why are anons taking it like a personal attack? What difference does it make?

>>46232089
Not them, I just think if you're going to bump, at least put some effort into it, make a prompt, or ask a question to stir up discussion, or else, why even bother to bump in the first place?

>>46232089
I just don’t like it when people just prolong a thread that ran its course and essentially died already. Pretty much this thread is dead and nothing will be discussed, so again, why brother to bump it.

Just kill yourself earlyfag

>>46232180
Are you new to 4chan? Thread bumping is a completely normal thing to do. Some people even just say "bump" without posting an image. It saves the trouble of making a new thread and keeps any discussion that happens confined to a smaller amount of threads in case anyone wants to go back to look for something. But in this case yes, I don't think a bump at 280 vs 310 would have made a difference.

>>46232478
>Thread bumping is a completely normal
I know, I'm just saying, put some effort, like a question or a prompt, because more often than not, I just see the anons who bumped the thread thirty minutes ago, needing to bump the thread again, because lo and behold, just saying bump or posting an image, isn't good enough to stir up talks. I'm not against thread bumping, sorry if you thought I was, maybe I needed to be a bit clearer, I just think people should at least, put some speck of effort into it.

>>46226912
Why would Lamy have a jungle down there? I know there's that one hot Lamy image but it seems more likely she'd shave rather than not.

>>46232684
Nice run-on sentence, ESL.

>>46232437
>>46232772
Always find it funny that there’s this fag always trying to make every civil discussion degenerate into some shitfling.

>>46232684
If it's just "bump" every single time then I agree with you, but every now and then it's fine to not bother coming up with something interesting. I think images are fine though, there've been mutliple cases where discussions have been stirred up by a single image used to bump the thread.

>>46232908
>I think images are fine though, there've been mutliple cases where discussions have been stirred up by a single image used to bump the thread.
I've yet to see it happen, but then again, I could have missed them, so maybe you're right. Still think just saying bump isn't really worth it, but I'll leave it at that.

>>46232877
It's almost like there's some kind of fag interested in creating an early thread. An earlyfag if you will.

>>46233030
They happen, but rarely, and it usually depends on the girl on the image. So it’s not wholly reliable.

>>46232877
You can't even mildly critique fics anymore. Or else you get labelled as a shitposter.

I really don't get why some people are so invested in threads dying early. Do they just feel powerful if they get to pick which 4 pictures are at the top of the thread? Give the prompts and stories posted in the thread their proper time before casting them into the shadow realm.

>>46234184
Bro, just scroll up, people gave answers, I don’t know why you’re trying to restart it.

>>46234227
I don't think he's interested in the answers, anon.

>>46234184
>some people
There's your problem - you think it's someone other than the same shitter that it always is.

>>46234975
Take your meds

>>46233700
How are writers suppose to improve if you can’t criticize their works?

>>46213447
Great idea, but don't you make me long for this family I will never have...

>>46235150
Not that hard to start a family in todays time.

>>46235305
I meant Mio as a wife and Ayame and Subaru as daughters and Fubuki as my wife's wife

>>46235325
Oh, in that case, it is unrealistic and unlikely.

>>46235325
>>46235519
There are always women from anime conventions, but they have their own issues.

>>46236020
Yeah, no, some of those women are legitimately psychotic. I’ll avoid them at all cost

>>46236020
But some of them are fat and icky.

>>46234975
It's really frustrating there's no capacity for self-moderation here. 4chan's loopholes are taken advantage of by a repeat schizo and there's nothing that can be done about it.

>>46235325
This made me crack up and imagine Fubuki watching you fuck Mio and her daughters while crying and masturbating while imagining herself in Mio's place

>>46236234
>ban by popular vote
>each thread develops its own lynch mob
>shittalk their oshi at your own peril

>>46236251
If her and my wife allows it I'll gladly fuck the fox as well.

New threads
>>46236139

>>46235325
Lower your expectations

>>46236298
Suppose it wouldn't come without its own set of problems. Still better than the current system, though.

>>46236338
Imagine compromising on your ideal woman.

mating press your oshi daily and then stream it

Writing is gay