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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

Little sapling.:tags: Ceres Fauna, NSFW, /ss/, dry humping, incest:>>45481171

The Idolification of Ouro Kronii:TAGS: Parody, Bimbofication, Ouro Kronii, NTR Parody, NSFW:>>45509779

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

You're dating Tokino Sora, and she really likes to switch her contact lenses. She almost seems to have a different personality when she puts in her contacts.:>>45337498

Professional, emotionless sex with your maid Suisei.:>>45349141

Sora keeps trying to attract a new roommate for splitting the rent and (You) are the only one who takes her up on the offer. Nothing could prepare for you what an absolute mess this girl is in her own home. You slowly rehabilitate her into being a functioning adult. There will be laughs, tears, and cum.:>>45377937

Taking Kobo on her first European vacation.:>>45402145

Steamy, post-concert sex with a horny and sweaty IRyS:>>45424183

Towa sucks your dick because she's trying her absolute best to stop smoking and she needs something in her mouth to help soothe her nerves.:>>45484954

Kronii starts dating (you) without knowing that (you) work for Subway and she relapses hard into her subway sandwich addiction by abusing your employee discount:>>45486158

(you) watch the disaster artist with Calli and slowly realize that the relationship between Tommy and Greg in the movie somewhat mirrors your own relationship with Calli.:>>45502485

Suisei's pads fall out mid-performance!:>>45529813

Towel marriage!:>>45535158

A comedy/SOL fic where you are in relationship with a chuuba (or multiple) except they're constantly trying to kill you for some reason (maybe they're ultra menhera).:>>45540938

You open up the Valentines Day with hololive youtube video to rewatch and realize that the video is saying that it's "live" and the chatbox is open, but empty. You ignore it and watch on, however when the video would normally end, it continues onward as if it was a live stream. The representations of the Holo EN members act confused, noting that the video should have ended, and yet it's still going on. Weirded out, you decide to enter a message into the chat. To your surprise the characters in the video react to your message as if the "you" in the video said it.:>>45603452

Haven't gotten started on Renpy yet, but I did find out that the artist who made the Valentines VN images posted them on their twitter. So I am probably going to use these for the "first draft"

>>45609995
If it works, it works.
Do they have different facial expressions?

Hey there chums, could use a spot of advice. I'm getting back into writing smut lately after some events, and I'm struggling with specifically the switch from setup to the actual steamy bits.
Like I have a mostly-comedic setup of basically "this isn't smash bros, this is anal sex!" but I don't know where to bleed the comedy away into hardcore fucking.

>>45611079
Seems like you need to read more smut then. Though for your specific scenario it seems like it would either be when the penetration starts or when the actions getting described start getting more erotic; whatever fits the tone of the story more.

>>45609995
Not the VNanon (still haven't played Ninisanni Scenario desu, although I did somehow play VNanon's other VNs that he deleted since), but as another VN creator, I can tell you Ren'Py is really easy to use for a simple VN, and the tutorial is pretty clear (besides, once you know the basics, it's easy enough to figure out the rest on your own).
Anyway, good luck on your VN-making adventure Anon!

>>45609995
That Gura is illegal levels of cute and smug.

oh god i've made a horrible mistake
i've never written actual bdsm before and i have no idea where to go from here

>>45613680
What's your scenario? That's a fetish /wg/ can help you out with for sure.

>>45613733
Rather generic, the classic 'trapped in an advanced 'full dive AR' suit that's running a porn scenario' scene. I'm just uncertain on how to write appealing dialogue when the lady isn't the dom and there's no actual second person in there, no matter how many toys I can write in.

>>45613680
Remember: safe, sane, and consensual. The safe-word is sacred and must be respected at all times. Avoid causing any lasting injuries. And remember the aftercare.

>>45613793
If she's in there with what amounts to an AI I'd either let the AI talk and behave like >>45613851 said, very much by the rules. That way the character can think about and talk to it with the hope that everything will be fine, but also with the slight suspicion that the AI is secretly malicious, like you often see in fiction. Otherwise you can just have the AI be creepily silent and do without dialogue, to focus on how and what the character feels.

>>45613990
Right. Thanks for the advice, I think I've got an idea on what to do. Focusing on the 'unreality' of the situation seems to be working to get my juices flowing.

More of you people need to write VNs for us, god damn it.

>>45614251
Do it yourself, you lazy piece of shit.

>>45614373
But if I write the VN, it takes all the fun out of it. Also, I hate writing.

>>45614424
>Also, I hate writing.
Why are you here?

>>45614452
Because the VN made me truly appreciate the talent of the individuals in this thread.

>>45609463
Fubuki and Reimu go on a tea date
>>45614251
I'll check out Renpy if it's so easy to use.

>>45614251
That seems way more complicated than just writing a story focused on a single character. Especially if you're not just shooting for simple comedy/smut and want there to be actual emotions involved.

>>45614251
I mean, writing a VN is one thing. Getting the art and other assets and making it all work in a program is the hard part, and I doubt anyone here will invest that effort in anything written by someone else.

>>45615512
I mean there are alternative engines to make something purely text (+ formatting) based with stuff like Twine, Choicescript, Inform, etc; though each of those are made for stuff that aren't VNs.

>>45609422
HoloJourneys: (Restoring Nature and Pomu: A Summoner's Vow) Chapter 23: A Grudge Revealed: Spite Vs Big PP Energy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT_3Vn-UoqTbQwWh_ef5ker1efV5AbRAJJueH4Ym_yc0BjT1H_iAFsbdhvgKz-d3lA_-V61LgOsaBEn/pub

Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

The final confrontation of this arc begins! I realized this arc I've been working poor Polka to the bone, she should get a nice reward after this is all over. I'm so psyched to be another step towards the conclusion and to start the next arc. I hope you enjoy it and I'm always ready to take in feedback.

>>45614424
>writing
There are other fun aspects to VNs, like art sprites, finding good BGs, the animation/choreography, music timing, and sound effects.
Writing is the lynchpin, but you can make up for it.

>>45614251
>sad pomu reaction image
I-I'll do it. Just no more sad Pomus, it hurts my heart

>>45617293

>>45617293
Do it faster. Or else.

>>45617293
Anon he's trying to trick you here take this

>>45617293
I'll toss a coin your way as well.

>>45617367
UWWWWOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH
I'VE NEVER ADOPTED SOMETHING SO FAST
COME MY CHILD, LET'S GET YOU YOUR BOWL OF EGGS

>>45617695
I can't believe you folded so quickly. But I respect the desire to work hard to make your oshi happy...good luck anon, and godspeed! Make Pomu proud!

>>45617472
>>45617404
Since I started writing Pomu I was resolved to not get down bad for her. Now, I'm not so sure. The temptation of knife-ears and thick thighs is strong.She's also just damn cute, I don't know how long I can resist.

>>45617940
It's okay, she's a fairy, not an elf. Loophole, natch.

>>45614424
I'm sure other anons here can write it for you while you take care of the rest.

>>45617940
succumb to your hidden desires

>>45609422
Have an incomplete SCP-like thingy https://rentry.org/2ia7a .
i lost motivation after a while but i managed to reach yonkisei, might finish it one day but for now im not that into it. I didnt proofread it so expect some grammar mistakes

>>45618335
Hidden? I've never made any attempt to hide my love and lust for this halfie hag, I don't plan on ever doing so.
>>45618035
Got to plow all the races in that case.

>>45617940
Something about her optimistic demeanor combined with her goofy old-American way of speaking is too moe.
>>45617852
Pomu deserves a happy end. I'm not sure if one is attainable for her, but she of all people needs it.

>>45618521
>Deserves a happy end
Leave it to me bro.

>>45618498
my bad, mistook you for the other anon who hates elves

>>45618595
Anon.... I don't have much time. You must *cough* *splutter* you must save the fairy!

>>45614251
For most here, it's much more viable to make a Choost-Your-Own-Adventure type of story, like the ones made with TWINE as this anon >>45616097
said. If an artfag likes it enough, it could be adapted into a VN through Ren'Py or TyranoBuilder with their help in making the assets

>>45618780
dont you die on me stinky dragon i've just started watching your shorts and probably will jump on a stream because you the friend of my oshi's friend

>>45618780
Don't die yet you worryingly long-necked dragon! Just stick around for another week, I'm writing as fast as I can.

>>45619079
totally unrelated but god do i find this artsyle so repulsive and unlikeable
like its fine on some frames but 90% of the time it looks like dogshit

>>45619079
Selen's neck is a charm point. More hickey real estate.

>>45618852
Though fair warning the examples I gave for alternate interactive story engines/languages probably aren't the best for 'conversion to VN'.

>>45609463
Mori has to explain to her mother about the horse

>>45620759
It's me. I'm the horse. And I'm going to show her fucking stacked mom why I'm in charge.

>>45620847
Mamamori will show you where her daughter earned her equestrian skills and suck you dry

>>45620759
The one she docked with?

>>45609422
Here's a one shot based on the discussion about an immortal that constantly gets attacked by chuubas from last thread. It's inspired a little more by the earlier ideas that spawned from the concept.

Starsword Infinity (~4k words):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vScqFqg9pWp25sVAy3CbtFsPkwZxpY4koSnMaN9pbxhL29od-XsZn2ZAsCEBGFUetxIeG4Z2TgdC30Q/pub
Tags: Iroha, Suisei, Comedy, Action, SFW

It might be a little on the rougher side since I banged the whole thing out in only a few hours after inspiration struck, but I hope the grammar is at least all correct. I planned to end it earlier but some of my autism took over and I ended up wanting to build some more of the world and background. Anyway, please enjoy this breather I wrote to take a break from everything else.

Finally, an excuse to write about gozaru!

>>45621521
It's an interesting one-shot though more from the worldbuilding you stuck in than the actual fight. It feels like a scene from a bigger fic or the media in res intro to a series.

>>45618650
I love elves and I'm going to breed my favorites, even if it takes me years.

>>45624115
God I want a sexy long-lived elf wife that will stay youthful while I age and will take care of me when I'm decrepit

>>45624115
For the purpose of starting a flame war for absolutely no reason
faeries > elves

>immortal
>happy
>silly
>tricksters
>magical
>small (adds cuteness points)
>ephemeral

>>45625039
Nice try, but I'm just giving myself both. Though the flame war among the three will be a nice fire to stare at.
>choco elf vs pale elf vs fairy
What delightful racism it will be.

>>45625039
>No minigirl to hug my cock with her entire body
Fairies > Elves by the sheer virtue that I can hold them in my palm and give them a full-lower half tongue bath as I try to eat them out.

>>45621391
The one from the AI sound clip, though it could be that same one

>>45617238
Polka really has been carrying everyone this arc, damn.

I think the sorceress's reason for doing what she's done would have flowed better if she explained why before the fight started rather than in between it.

I think you might have to tone it down a bit with the "I'll protect my friends" speeches for a bit, I'm an uber autist when it comes to that shit but lately it feels like I'm reading it every couple paragraphs.

You know since the arc is almost over I'm curious where you'll go next. Hag journeys is a pretty fun read, I'm waiting and want the flare sex chapter more than I do watame, but if we're all about hags here when are you gonna introduce Botan, no hag story is complete without her or Aki in my very humble opinion

What's the most painful way to get NTR'ed? I'm thinking receiving a video letter which shows your lover getting fucked and them saying goodbye but are there any other suggestions?

>>45627032
Your gf tells you and the bull to fight over her. He then proceeds to kick your ass and fucks your gf as she laughs about how you're on the ground crying.

How is your current project coming along?
Bonus question: What are some ideas you have for future stories that you may or may not get around to writing?

>>45627254
That does sound painful but I'm more looking for something that's like you finding out your lover got stolen from you in the worst way possible

>>45627032
It honestly depends on what level of NTR you prefer, the example you gave is pretty much the highest you can go while still keeping it 'realistic' but it can absolutely go further as it goes further along it gets significantly less realistic and your preferences will vary on when it goes to far or too ridiculous to take seriously.
In order it would be something like:
>Girl kidnaps/betrays you to force you to watch her get fucked by the bull one last time before saying goodbye.
>As before but you get locked into Perma chastity and forced to serve them.
>As before but serving them sexually
>As before but it also involves you getting feminized/sissified
Etcetera etcetera.

>>45611079
Comedy almost always turns people off and away from smut. Do keep that in mind. Either you jerk em off or you make them laugh, you don't do both

>>45614251
I'm already making a Hologame stfu

>>45619138
I love it

>>45625039
Saci Perere > faeries > elves

>>45627032
Show that to court and you got yourself a couple of millions in damage. If I was cheated on, I wish it happened that way. Instead you just notice some text messages while she's in the shower or some stupid shit

>>45627903
man i just cant take NTR scenarios seriously. Like this is so funny from so many levels
>''ah yes, i tyronne silverback the cucker the third (TM), will not only fuck this girl in specific, but also have buttsex with the guy im going to steal her from''
>''why? its a power dynamic! we did it all the time in Africa look it up''

>>45627993
>Holofantasy game Anon died
>Now more holo games being made
Hm...

>>45626936
First off, thanks for the read and feedback!
I placed the reasoning where I did since she would feel no need to justify herself off the bat. Only when driven to utter frustration did she decide to actually reveal the reasoning. I could see where I could have done it another way where she reveals her reasoning in an attempt to get the group to not trust or help Pomu, but I feel like I already drove the point too far home that no one is gonna turn their back on the silly fae. As for protection speeches, I'll definitely note that I should tone those down a bit, I think it ended up getting so prevalent since I keep thinking about how this arc is one of the first I've written where the enemies have pure murderous intent. I'll definitely try to tone it down a little going forward and be more mindful when I'm hamming it up too much.
I plan to post a little teaser when I post the next chapter to hint at where the story will go next. Botan is also planned to show up at some point. I need her around to start the Lamy arc anyway.
Hag sexual exploration is going to happen and the location of the next setting is a favorite of mine for those types of firsts. As for who are swapping V-cards first, you'll just have to wait and see.
Thanks again for the feedback, I'll keep getting better and make the reads even more enjoyable.

>>45628133
It's why I said preferences will vary since at some point it either gets too ridiculous, too melodramatic, or too insane.
The specific scenarios I've listed are fucking absurd for more mundane NTR settings but I've seen it work in fgo doujins/cg sets.

>>45627032
Finding her in your bed cheating, only for you to get blamed and gaslit and kicked out of the house.

>>45628265
I will not wait and see who does who first, I will astral project a mating session with Flare that is so absolutely powerful she's twitching and becomes retarded for a chapter directly into your brain if I have to.

Thank you for hearing criticism as always, I'm awaiting the next chapter and arc and thank god let's go Botan come on Botan!

>>45628622
That's the spirit! That's the type of enthusiasm that keeps dreams alive! I'm actually struggling a bit with how I want Botan to be introduced and what types of abilities she will have. I have another arc to mull it over though, so I got time to work through some of those ideas. Her being introduced into the dynamic is going to be a blast though from a day to day perspective. There may, or may not be daily wrestling matches with the La Lion since she keeps trying to take a less than playful bites out of the sheep.

>>45628133
Same.
I'm reminded of the spouses whose husbands go tranny. They've given accounts on how they've tried to accomodate, but the sex always ends up less about the wife's hot body, and more about affirming the now tranny husband as a woman.
Anything with that many psychological layers doesn't make sense. Seeing a naked woman's body should be the preeminent factor in arousal.

>>45629678
>I'm reminded of the spouses whose husbands go tranny. They've given accounts on how they've tried to accomodate, but the sex always ends up less about the wife's hot body, and more about affirming the now tranny husband as a woman.
Sana...

>>45629678
how the fuck did you extrapolate ''tranny sex'' from ''anon finds ntr scenarios funny''

>>45630064
>the sex always ends up less about the wife's hot body
Mostly this.
Sex should be about appreciating hot bodies and engaging in personal intimacy, not purposely living through trauma and personal issues totally unrelated to you getting pussy.

>>45629848
What is this referring to?

>>45632355
Pretty sure it's just a rrat but as far as I can recall Sana had a boyfriend who came out as trans and still wanted to stay together, but when Sana said that it'd be too weird for her her boyfriend crashed the car they were in to try and kill them both

>>45627873
How about-
>Girl sets you up to be killed/executed.
>Forces you to watch as she gets fucked by the bull as you die.

bump

>>45632584

>>45632584
Fuck this is such a based rrat.

Captcha: NTR GXG

>>45625039
Do pixies count as fairies? Because SMT has made me fall in love with pixies.

>>45636086
If either heard you comparing them to the other they'd try to kill you

>>45636208
Worth it.

>>45610721
In the Valentine's day special itself, but not from the OG art. I will see if I can screenshot and transplant without them looking like dog shit

>>45640311
she is bipolar

>>45640311
Fubuki watching me leave the room and come back(She doesn't have object permanence and thought I was gone forever)

>>45621521
I thought your story was cute anon and I really hope you continue to write more of it.

>>45640311
Cute Friend

>>45640311
This woman is over 30 years old.

>>45644743
I need her carnally

Actually, in case anons have not seen it yet and on the off chance it might inspire some of you, here is the valentines day "VN" that was made: https://youtu.be/FPGN6DfIaNc

The end of the video and the ones after will show links to unlisted videos that continue the story.

>>45644743
God that's so hot

>>45640311
UUWOOOAAGGHH HAG CELLULITIS AND BACK ISSUES

>>45640311
fubuki during the first half of fly rape versus fubuki during the second half

>>45648213
I knew someone was gonna make the joke, it was only a matter of time...

>>45649479
Fubuki gets raped by a fly?

>>45650046
Welcome to /wg/

>>45650046
The joke comes from a story in the archive called Shrunken Troubles, in a moment that is quite out of character for Fubuki, whilst laying naked next to Shion who she just recently had sex with, Fubuki asks what it would be like to have sex with a fly. For some reason it caught on around here and I don't know why. Doesn't help that the sequel Shrunken Blessings reinforced the joke

>>45650391
>doesn't fuck the fly
damn

>>45625039
how about you use the fairy's small body and magic to stretch over your shaft like a cock sleeve and use her as a condom when you're banging a sexy elf, everyone wins

>>45651078
nta just read it and see what the fuss is all about
I remember when I asked anons here what the worst fanfics on /wg/ were, and I was redirected to That's How the Fubuki Crumbles and Shrunken Troubles and how confused I was since they were both rather decently written

You can fit a really small fairy under your foreskin

>>45655400
>>45609463
A chuuba of author's choice gets shrunken down and put under anon's foreskin for a night in smegma hell

>>45655322
They're more memes as 'the worst ' due to subject material rather than objective quality. Though the first one is also shat on for being a mediocre rape smut coming out when that particular author's series was still fresh in the threads memory. Shrunken Troubles is purely shat on for the content, like the prose gets repetitive but no one's really shitting on it for that.

>>45656503
Yeah, exactly. And when I realized that even those two fics had decent writing quality despite their meme status, I thought, "Holy FUCK I have to improve my writing a lot more."

>>45609463

Towa being the opposite of a guardian angel. She does all she can to make things worse in someone's life, until they snap.

>>45609463

Sociopathic Hoshimachi Suisei digging her talons into someone's life, dominating and destroying it until the only one left in their life is her.

>>45657937
This, but she can do nothing but fuck up and ends up making everything in someone's life better. She eventually comes up with the "genius" idea that the only way to make your life worse is to attract you and cause you to date an "utter failure" ie: her.

>>45656503
Nobody really shat on Shrunken Troubles. One guy mentioned the overuse of the word slit and it was changed, the rest shit on it for the fetish choice, which you can hardly call an argument. What's that about the repetitive prose though?

>>45662923
NTA but I got super bored reading the sex scene because nothing new was happening. I just skimmed like the last third of the sex to get to the ending.

>>45663252
Well do you like bug sex?

>>45665049
This response question gets said everytime someone critiques the smut in that fic.

>>45665049
Not if it's boring.

you guys should stop biting. No one cares about shrunken troubles aside from the guy who comissioned it.
It would have faded into irrelevancy if shitposters didnt think it was the most hilarious thing to keep spamming it way past the point of it being funny

>>45622914
>>45641064
Thanks for reading. Unfortunately I don't plan on continuing this as I have *zero* clue where I'd take it. It was always going to be a one shot and I only added the other worldbuilding after finishing the rest of the story.
That and I already have too many series' I'm working on to start another.

>>45666826
This is just spitballing but I could see the 'Many deaths of (You)" being the series gimmick. Have each chapter be about a different death in varying places on the theoretical timeline with the overall metaplot being about piecing together the mystery as it ping pings across the timeline. Though thinking about it, this sounds like it would be a massive pain in the ass to plot out and write since it would necessitate having the entire thing already figured out.

>>45666213
Rent free

>>45668044
It's sounds like an appealing idea, but like you said I'd need to have the entire story and mystery figured out before starting, and sticking to a plan for my fics has never been easy.
If there's enough interest I might table the idea for later, especially since I've started taking a shining to Iroha, but the last thing I need right now is more WIPs to juggle.

>>45666826
im kinda late here but my review is that for a oneshot is pretty...lackluster?
like you actually did a great job at writing, but there's like 4 different callbacks/plot settings that wont go anywhere and just makes it weird because it feels like there's 3 chapters before it
that i havent seen

>>45649479
At least it's not a Paradise Lost joke.

>>45609463
Holy Shit, Subaru stole Luna's gun!

>>45673984
Yea, I might've overdone it with that part. I wanted to imply there was a long history between the characters but I guess that doesn't work in one shots.

>>45676055
>Saved mid forced cunnilingus by Subaru who instead makes you eat HER out, cucking Luna in the process

A cult tries to summon a demon, but just gets Towa.

>>45674268
True, that - those jokes leave a real shitty taste in the mouth.

Sometimes I really want to smack the bastard who's been writing my WIP.

>>45663252
>I just skimmed like the last third of the sex to get to the ending.
Yeah, I'd expect such a reaction. I don't blame you for it, mind - fetishes are really fucking weird to those who don't have them.
Kudos for giving it a shot, though!

>streamer is streaming YOUR game
This is more hazukashi than I thought it would be. I'm honored, but I also feel like it's still so amatuerish.
It makes me smile whenever he laughs at a joke though.

>>45678716
>Male streams game
>Immediately causes a collapse as everyone begins accusing everyone in the company of lusting after eachother

>>45677665
BA DUM *shoots anon*

>>45678716
what what? who's streaming?

>>45678716
Who?

im so horny after seeing bae's 3D that I can make a book about how im horny on her.

>>45678972
>>45678988
It's more Ninisanni Scenario. Sorry if I was a little vague.
https://www.youtube.com/live/DYYtrSqZDrk?feature=share

>>45679027
She's always been pretty attractive, but her 4th Fes performances supercharged her sex appeal by several orders of magnitude. Easily in my top 5 sexiest holos now.

>>45679218
C H A O T I C

What fic would do well in a game setting anyway
I'm thinking Cover High would make an amazing VN

>>45680284
If we're strictly talking about VNs then most of the stories could fit into one pretty easily, thanks to the 'novel' part of visual novels.

>>45680546
Maybe he's talking about the whole 'choose-your-oshi' aspect, and not just a static VN

>>45680668
Cover High has no shortage of choices, but he's right that a good handful could make compelling static novels.

>>45680546
I could see HF working as a hack-and-slash game.
HC is an open-world RPG in the vein of Fallout.
CH is a high-school romcom VN.
HBT is Hotline Miami, obviously.
FSM is a mystery/investigation game with romance elements.
I haven't read HJ yet so I can't comment on that one.

>>45681175
Fuck you, now I'm hyped about the potential

>>45681175
I've actually thought about making custom levels in HM2 based on the fights in HBT, but I've never touched the level editor before and I figure my time would be better spent working on the fic itself. Maybe way down the line when it's finished.

>>45681175
I remember we've had discussions about this here and there, I found one post talking about it >>20405805.
I think HF would work far better as a turn based combat game since that's like, its thing.
>HC
It's been so long...

>>45681175
>HF: Character picked at start of game battles through hoards of brainwashed monsters and people following the rest of the party being absconded with at the start of the game, each being a stage boss. Defeating them unlocks them for use/pick at the start of the next stage. Four player coop and unlockable bonus characters. Minor exploration elements can lead to secrets that change the ending.
>FSM: Point and click mystery game in which you work to uncover the strange circumstances surrounding an amnesiac girl. On occasion, you can ask her for a hint, getting a very vague sort of clue on how to continue or what line of questions might be worth pursuing.
CH: In an academy filled with numerous unique beauties and talents, will you learn to open up and love, or will your heart remain shackled beneath chains of hurt?

>>45681175
Honestly considering the tabletop influence I see Holofantasy working better as a gamebook style CYOA thing, but with like an in-built dice roller/resolving mechanic rather than
>You face a horny Marine
>Here are her stats
>If you win the fight go here
>Otherwise go here

>>45682460
>gamebook style CYOA thing, but with like an in-built dice roller/resolving mechanic
Sounds a bit like Disco Elysium, but with a more branching story as opposed to having multiple ways to reach a single conclusion.

>>45683438
It's probably more suited to 'single conclusion, multiple bad ends' like in the old gamebooks rather than a branching story if you're going to ape the actual chapters with each chapter being an adventure with maybe like one or two endings, though if you're aping the 'concept' then it could branch if you take the fact that chapter 2's chuuba enemy could have been Botan(?) or Okayu and Korone.

>>45681175
Just get some art and make a mod for Monster Girl Quest, it would have basically everything. Just need some new skills

>>45683438
Disco Elysium sucks.

>>45686847
Your mother sucks.

>>45686847
My dick, that is. That's what she sucks.

Today's the first day in a while where I haven't had to masturbate out of necessity. I haven't ever felt so happy about the prospect of not choking the chicken.

>>45687541
Why?

>>45687541
Why are you telling us this?

>>45679218
Anon, fuck you for posting this. There's an audio link that turns it into a soundpost that is included with it. Now I can't post it because your dumb ass posted it without said link.

>>45689394
Mwahaha!

Okay, so. Say a Vtuber specifically noted that fan writings of an nsfw nature were okay on their nsfw tag, and even sort of asked for some. Then presume I might have written one. Now, what would be the way I should distribute it via Twitter? Keep in mind I've never used the website before.

>>45691199
Use the tag (#likethis) with your post

>>45691199
I'll tell you how if you tell me the name of the chuuba.

>>45691475
Right, but like, in what form do I store the fic? Save as PDF? I'm not doing a raw google docs link, but that's what I wrote it in. Transfer it to some other site? I'm just unsure, and it's been like twenty hours I've been awake, so my brain isn't working properly.

>>45691572
Read the OP rentry for how to share stories and just give them the published URL or manually convert everything over to Rentry but be aware you're going to need to redo formatting for bold, italics, etc.

>>45691572
Why not publish with Google Docs? You can copypaste it over to rentry of course, it works too; but Google Docs are anonymous when published.

>>45691820
Anonymous? I didn't actually know that. I'll take a look at the, uh, OP? There's no links there.

>>45691946
>There's no links there.
What do you mean? Just go to google docs, paste your story then File>Share>Publish and use the link.

>>45691946
There's a link in the OP, and it has answers to important questions like how to publish. You just have to scroll down the top middle part, not the whole page. But like >>45692069 said it's as simple as File>Share>Publish in GDocs.

>>45692108
Oh, I see, you meant one of the first posts, not that actual OP. Alright. handled. Thank you both for the tips.

>Script archive is 404'd

>>45692276
Works on my machine.

>>45692276
Works on my machine.

>>45681175
I think HJ would be suited for a turn based RPG with timed hit mechanics like SMRPG or the M+L series.

>>45692338
>>45692350
Must be a problem with whatever Google is trying to route me through then

>>45691572
There's the gdocs publishing method mentioned but if you have an ao3 account you should probably transfer it there. Ao3 is generally the more 'acceptable' fanfiction site nowadays.
>>45692276
Works with mine as well. Are you sure you just didn't get unlucky and go to the archive the exact moment AA was updating it?

>>45692475
It's looking like it must be a problem with my browser...or something. It won't load in Firefox or Chrome, but trying it private mode works. How annoying.

>>45692264
Who's the lucky girl?

>>45692646
I don't want to say it because I made the twitter account recently and its tied to my online presence and I *really* don't want people who know I shitpost on /vt/ generals to find out what else I do. Let's just say it's a small corpo girl and we'll leave it at that.

>>45692747
Well whoever it is, ganbatte writebro. You're living some people's dreams right now. May we all have some vtuber; 1view, 2view, 3view, corpo, reading some of our stuff someday. Hope she has fun with what you've written.

>>45692881
there's really no guarantee she'll read it but thank you
it's the first thing i've written in a while and it felt pretty good to shake the rust off, i want to get back into the hobby now that i've got more time and i'm feeling less depressed

>>45693051
The hardest first step is sometimes shaking off those writing muscles and getting a piece out there, which you've done already! An audience of some sort can also be a great motivator. You got this!

>>45692747
I'll start searching then.

>>45692264
No, I meant the actual OP, the first post in this thread: >>45609410
It contains a link to a script.google.com website with the relevant information. I'm confused about where the confusion is.

>>45677618
>>45609463
A fertility cult begins a ritual to summon Choco in order to have her take part in an orgy. Instead they managed summon Towa and they're still going through with the orgy.

>>45694709
The fic has to explicitly mention that it didn't work because Choco isn't a demon.

>>45694818
But she is. She's just not a succubus.

>>45695335
Maybe she's just lawful evil instead of chaotic evil.

>>45677618
>"Archdemon, we beckon you from the Infernal pits by ancient pact and bond!"
>"Suppies!"
>"Fuck! Again!?"

>>45696150
What's her personality like for someone that doesn't watch her.

>>45696150
>The Eternal Order of the Second Death finally manages to get a vessel that's gone through Second Death and is capable of summoning the Unspeakable.
>That meddlesome priest has been defeated, Gary is pleased, and the rest of the cult is excited for the success of the Profane Sabbath
>After much preparation, an arm comes out of the vessel
>chaosreigns.jpg
>It's Towa

>>45614251
>>45614424
These are the most absurdly entitled posts I've ever read on this board, and this is /vt/ - the major league for entitled faggots.
>>45614915
Visual novel doesn't have to be a full-on dating sim with multiple routes. There's short visual novels with tight focus that can be read in few hours and visual novels with no choices and only one route. But yeah, even creating something like that takes quite a bit of effort.

An accident between Ame and Kronii causes the timelines to briefly merge causing a Suisei that never made it Hololive and instead became an embittered 3view who uses GFE to stay relevant to enter the current timeline. She'll eventually learn how our Suisei became successful and then plots to replace her by trapping our Suichan in her doomed world.

>>45628193
That's the shitty part. You can never trust that a VN or game in general will ever be made by an anon who claims it on this site. You'd be right 90% of the time if you guessed it wouldn't. And to make it worse, you have no idea if the project got shitcanned.

>>45697608
>Kronii ends up liking Chick-fil-A instead of Subway
>Current timeline:

>>45697766
The Vatican City has become the Vatican Continent that is constantly trying to expand

>>45697766
A mysterious benefactor appears to Yagoo, pledging to fund Hololive's activities into the foreseeable future.
It's Hitler.

>>45697914
Do Flare and Kiara become the faces of Hololive?

>>45697047
It's hard to describe without actually seeing it, but the best way to put it is a dorky womanchild, she constantly stammers over her words, but willing to bite back if need to but overall is pretty childish in nature. She's really caring for others and goes out of her way to help them even if minor.

>>45697608
This made me imagine the generic 'base' version of this being something like
>Our Suisei wakes up in the alt timeline.
>Initially gets shocked and seethes at getting seemingly knocked back
>Gets tied up with the people of the alt world including an alternate version of (You), her childhood friend that alt!sui is banging to chase her dreams.
>Eventually get into a confrontation with the alt!Suisei in the main timeline that she wins because she grew more from her experience in alt timeline than the other did in the main timeline.
>Our Suisei says goodbye to her alternate timeline friends.
>After a moment of silence she tries to contact the counterparts of her alt timeline friends in the main timeline to reconnect.

>>45698304
Yes, especially Kiara. But not immediately. It happens in a rather slow, but noticeable pace.
>Kiara starts to have more exposure. MVs, merch, and concerts
>Over the months, she even has constant 3D lives
>Turns out, Cover shelled out the money for a 3D studio for her own personal use in Austria
>Her subscriber base begins seeing dramatic growth. At this point, she's second to Gura with 3 million subs.
>Most of the new subscribers come from Argentina. And... Antarctica?
>Her German-language channel also goes past the 1 million sub mark with constant 15 to 30k CCV. Most of the supas are in German, though you catch snippets like 'Grüße aus Neuschwabenland, Antarktis!' and 'Stolzer Arier hier!'
>Meanwhile, certain other EN streamers are... beginning to stream less.
While writing this, a thought for a story where Hitler becomes a vtuber manager a la Ya Boy Kongming came to mind

>>45697766
>Watame thinks potato chips are just okay

Anyone else starting to work on their WIP pile of shame again ? I figured it was high time I got it done so I was wondering if others did the same.

>>45697766
>Flare actually likes her original outfit

all this alt universe stuff makes me share the only good gag i've ever thought
>anon slips into the timeline where everything is wildly different, but he's pretty okay with this and doesnt want to get back just yet
>except korone and okayu
>They are called Inugami Okayu and Nekomata Korone
>Anon screams ''I GOTTA GET OUT OF HERE''

>>45700543
>Anon has a panic attack trying to run from Inugami Okayu and Nekomata Korone
>Gets dragged to devil Doctor Choco's office by Fox Mio and Wolf Fubuki.

>>45701053
>jumps out of the window screaming
>''what happened chocosen?''
>''i dont know... he freaked out when he saw my medical diploma''

>>45701521
>anon thinks JP is boned so he runs to the EN office
>there, he finds Gura
>"Gura! Oh God, you're here. It's been terrible! Everyone's been WEIRD!"
>"Huh? Sorry, I couldn't hear ya," she says, putting down her headset. "I was streaming."
>"You... what?"
>"You know, streaming. Games and stuff, you know."
>"Oh no..."
>"I even have a..."
>"DEAR LORD DON'T SAY IT!"
>Anon could read Gura's lips as the forbidden word comes out of her mouth.
>"I have a S C H E D U L E"
>"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGHHHHHHH!"

>>45697608
>>45698472
Desperate needy menhera sex with SuisALT...

>>45702077
>he frantically makes it to ID
>everything seems normal
>''Anya please you gotta help me''
>She just looks at him
>''Two Mirrion''
>''AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH00

>>45702319
How different is alt!Suisei from regular!Suisei and how long would it take to notice the difference?

>>45702498
I think she'd be pretty different, mainly in that she's much less confidently headstrong and upfront, preferring to be sneaky and backhanded to get her way while lying all the while. You'd probably notice pretty quickly that somethings 'off', but alt!Suisei would likely be pretty good at putting the mask on and pretending to be the regular Suityan once it became apparent she's out of whack.

>>45702498
there would be small details, like her nails are trimmed way too short, she has little nervous ticks or she scratchs herself.
alt!suisei should also be extremely fake, which is why no one except anon or maybe towa/miko can sus her out. like an alien wearing her skin
also this is just my menhera love spekaing but her having small cuts in her body could be a good way for anon to finally sus her out

>>45703309
Now you're making me think of a bunch of physical things that she has to keep under wraps

>Constantly checking her roots because her hair isn't naturally blue
>Turning down food she normally would eat all the time because she has a retainer and has to eat in secret
>Wearing extra make up to hide the moles regular!Susei doesn't have
>keeping her long gloves on to hide her scarred wrists

>>45703309
>>45704781
>Below the choker there is nasty scar
Honestly it could be a pretty dramatic history. One where suisei gave it her all but still was dumped in the dirt, and now she has everything she ever wanted, she's gonna hold on to it with splintered and bleeding fingertips.
>''Suisei you have to go back''
>''why''
>''i worked for this...i deserve it.... i practiced singing until my voice gave out, i danced until my feet were bloody, i never drank a sip of alcohol or even touched a cigarette...and you want me to go back...''

>>45705095
>Have a running joke with Suisei where every time she messes something up you say samething along the lines of "Never gonna sell out the Budokan now"
>Make the joke to who you think is the normal Suisei
>She flies off the handle and threatens to kill you or herself

>>45707557
>the secret is out, you have to keep the lie about alt suisei for X reason
>Take her to a live TV show, everything is going well
>host takes a few jabs at her, laughs it off
>'>Suisei is all smiles and ''whoops hahah''
>have to take her to a abandoned building so she can scream, punch and hit stuff
>have to carry her as she has a nervous breakdown, criying and threatening to kill herself
>''why is it never enough... i cant be perfect...why me'''

>>45708619
>Despite the world swap, only you can still text and call the original Suisei somehow
>She begs you not to let the other Suisei fuck everything up
>Promise you won't let that happen, and ask her how things on the other side are
>Tells you how horrible it is for her, alt!(You) is a total creep and how she refuses to stomach the bullshit that alt!Suisei has built up as her persona and shit's already starting to fall apart because she won't play along
>alt!Suisei hears this conversation, and now more than ever refuses to return to her old world if it's already in the gutter
>Destroys your phone while you sleep and forces you to keep the lie going lest she 'start to slip up' and ruin her career in a myriad of ways

>>45709577
Do (You) also have to step in during her streams in case she does something the real Suisei wouldn't? Like alter Sui is more used to pandering to unicorns via flirting and whatnot?

>>45711072
>Miko's face when altSui starts having members only ASMR streams
>her face when she pays for a high tier membership to get in on that
>she says nothing about the strange behavior as long as she gets to cream to suisei's voice

>>45711072
>Mimko accidentally enabling all of alt!Suisei's bad behaviour because she gets all the lewd content she wants from her now

>>45711687
>>45712487
Would altSuisei also be secretly resentful of the main world's Holos because they didn't care for her in her own world? Because I like to think she's the type to hold grudges.

>>45712814
Oh totally. Imagine her talking behind Sora's back about wanting to wring her neck for being a cunt who blocked her from joining Hololive and forcing her to go crawling back to S:gnal

>>45712814
Some she would probably hold some deep resentment, but when some Holos would be genuinely nice to her, she would probably lean into it and enjoy finally being loved. It also depends how fine the line is in her head between "they only love me because of the other suisei" and "I'M SUISEI NOW"

>>45713310
How would she get around being sussed out by the like of Towa, Iroha etc. then? AltSui wouldn't know much about them.

>>45713853
She could probably have Iroha thinking she's just going through some changes or having an off time due to stress. But that will only work for so long. She could also appease Iroha by appealing to her simping for the comet. I got nothing for Towa though. Maybe she just calls the marble mouth out on being confrontational since she wants the sweet Aqua dumptruck all to herself.

>>45709577
i think it would be so much better if the focus on the story was how, despite being a ticking bomb, the core aspect of hardwork is still there.
So yeah, she might sabotage someone by spreading rumors or start pandering to unicorns, but she's still putting her 100 % on it
which ends in something like ''a knockoff cant replace the original but it can be its own thing'' or ''the sum of Alt!Suisei's imperfections is what makes her perfect''

>>45716517
I was kind of thinking about part of the other Suisei's anger being because she feels she's worked twice as hard as the O.G Suisei for a quarter of the success, and she wouldn't necessarily be entirely wrong because for the most part she is able to be as good as Suisei to keep up appearances.

>>45697047
She’s also very impulsive. She’ll do completely random shit on stream out of absolutely nowhere, and some days she’ll be willing to do weirder stuff than others.
Basically, she’s retarded.

>>45719193
To top it off, she LOVES seeing porn of herself. She's Matsuri-tier, and frequently talks about what her fetishes and who her favourite artists are. She hasn't directly mentioned it, but she's sort of hinted at being a frequent masturbator, and given her proclivities, I believe it.

>>45719927
Ogey.

>>45719927
Someone post the cum tribute

>>45705095
This actually hit pretty hard. Having spent so much time with alt!Sui you come to realise just how hard she’s worked, harder than your Sui but she just got unlucky and was never picked up by a corpo. You feel really conflicted and feel like she deserves happiness too, but then again, it’s not her world…

>>45707557
I can fix her. I will save her. You retards can keep vanilla Suzy if you like mid so much.

>>45719982
It's true? Do you even watch Suisei?

>>45720655
Towa talks with Suisei about her taste in art and masturbation habits?

>>45720362
>Anon is suisei's manager and is also madly in love with her
>the switch happens, he inmediatly sniffs her out after a day.
>Of course, Alt!suisei is deranged and threathens him saying that she'll sink him if he dares fuck this up
>Anon however, is a model employee and handpicked by yagoo, he isnt going anywhere
>''I worked for this...if im not having it then its not fucking worth it to stick around'' type of meltdown, now anon's on the backfoot because he cant just lose suisei
>Alt!suisei proposes a truce, she will act like suisei as long as anon shuts the fuck up
>On the flipside, Anon gets to have his way with her every night if he keeps his mouth shut
>Anon falls for the temptation
>Altsuisei is a ticking timebomb, anon finds himself falling down the abyss as he tries to cover her ass because no way he's losing the warm embrace of Suisei's body
>as weeks pass, they start enjoying this light
>Anon starts falling in love with the imperfections of Alt!suisei
>Alt!suisei not only living the dream, but also finding joy back in her life
a rare story of ''i can fix her'' and ''i can make him worse'' that ends in a stalemate

>>45720655
>Suisei
What the fuck are you talking about?

>>45720655
I know there's been a lot of Suisei in the last hours, but you're replying to a Towa-related post.

>>45720860
this sounds hot even if it's likely not true