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This is the writing thread for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://pastebin.com/asvcqDLL

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

>> No.4385266
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Have an idea you'd like to see done? Reply to this post with it here! Try to be as clear and concise as possible - the clearer and more detailed your request, the higher chance it has of being picked up.

Consider adding your prompt to the prompt archive using this form! This helps keep your prompt available to see in the future in case no one takes it right away. No data is collected for this:
https://forms.gle/UkvBGLQPTRkqq5q37

The current prompt archive list is available for viewing here:
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What has been your favorite story that has been written.
Pretty interested in what other anons have to say

>> No.4385691

>>4385562
I've had a lot of fun reading the Holofantasy series. It's pretty well-written, and the fact that everything is decided by rolling dice makes me wonder what will happen next even more than usual.

>> No.4385725

>>4385562
the contenders for the top spots for me are: Holofantasy, Aqua-manager, Aqua-Anon in the rain, Exposure Therapy.

>> No.4385828

>>4385562
The Omelas-verse, all the Polka fluff, Holofantasy and 'While my guitar gently weeps'

>> No.4385938

>>4385562
Omelas series, Gloves off, and Exposure Therapy

>> No.4386580

>>4385562
Coomer one: rapist Kiara quadrilogy

Normal one: Teddy Bear

>> No.4386722

>>4385166
I actually really adore My last days. It was the first fic to genuinely move me to tears and kinda inspired me to start writing as well.

>> No.4386739

>>4386722
Fuck wrong reply but point still stands.

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i know we branched from a literal abuse thread, but I wanna know if people are interested in stronggirls/musclegirls, since I'm thinking of a story involing that
I can probably guess right that most people like a more "tame" level of musculature, but thats the beauty of writing, since everyone can imagine it perfectly suiting their own preferance.

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>>4386971
I dont mind

>> No.4387025

>>4386971
I'm fine with muscular girls but not extremely muscular like jojo or hokuto no ken tier muscles

>> No.4387085

I've got the itch to write some Pekomoon, anyone have any ideas?

>>4385562
HORN-Y was the og that got me hooked to this general (back when it was abuse general). All Omelas works are kino, Bomb Defusal was one I requested and enjoyed a lot, however I really enjoy all stories written here.

>> No.4387325

>>4385562
In no particular order: Exposure therapy, While my guitar gently weeps, Holofantasy, Omelas extend universe, Kiara rape fic, feeding strays are the ones I can remember from the top of my head. Flipping the question, I don't think I've come across a fic on this thread that I didn't like. There's another Gura fic I remember about (You) working at a fishery and come across her stealing fish but I just realized it's not in the archive. Is the writeanon here to post it again?

>>4386971
I love me some buff girls so I say go ahead anon. Good luck

>> No.4387423

>>4387085
Horny or not? If you want horny, you could have Pekora making Moona fuck her for a job with Usaken.

>> No.4387492

>>4385562
Omelas the fan sequel that's the one that made me stay in this thread

>> No.4387618

>>4385562
The subaru meds and gaslighting story, aqua/manager story, guitar gently weeps with Kanata, and Suisei graduation day

>> No.4387709

>>4385266
Continuation of Holofantasy bad end with polka. Could be like a noncanon side story or something along the lines of that

After Anon and Polka shared thier intense night together, Anon comes to his senses. Anon realizes that Polka is fucking insane and wants to return to Coco to tell her that he's fine and it wasn't her fault he was taken or just get away from Polka and the only place he can think to go to is Argomery. Did Polka really take anon a continent and a half over or was that a bluff? Maybe he can determine that by how long his hair is or if he grew some patches on his face. As anon travels back to Argomery he can face encounters with different members of Hololive with the looming threat of Polka on his back 24 7, living in fear of what would happen if he got caught. Which that could add to his motivation of continuing back to his new home. Could be a short story of Anon barely getting anywhere since he was caught by Polka or could go on to be the length of a normal Holofantasy story and continue as a spin off.

This is just an idea i had after reading the Holofantasy bad end with Polka.

>> No.4387729

>>4385562
misdirection is a masterpiece

>> No.4387856

I'm thinking of maybe writing a story with a similar premise to Faust, but in Mephistopheles' place would be Towa, trying to tempt anon to buy a membership for a Hololive member's channel. Just don't know if I'll be able to deliver.

>> No.4387931

>>4386580
teddy bear had me smiling from ear to ear

>> No.4387949

>>4387325
>Gura in a fishery
Do you remember how long ago it was? I can delve into the old threads and see if I can find it.
Off topic, I'm really glad to see so many people like Holofantasy or the various horny stories I shat out. Thank you all.

>> No.4388266

>>4387949
I think about a month ago?

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>>4388266
The only thing I could find that explicitly mentioned Gura that wasn't already grabbed was a pastebin link that seems to have 404'd for some reason (which may have been it) and this, which also isn't archived (yet). Unless they specifically didn't mention Gura in the text when they posted the story, which would be weird and require deeper investigation. Unless it's REALLY old and was written back when we were still the abuse general, but I don't see anything there either.

>> No.4388590

>>4385562
Haven't gone through the whole archive, but I'm especially partial to Exposure Therapy, the Nene/Polka/Botan bully series, and Good Nene is a Bad Yandere

>> No.4388668

>>4388455
I'm thinking it's probably that deleted pastebin. It definitely wasn't back during the abuse general it had a bit of fluff in it.

I remember the story went something like this. (You) were the only person working the night shift at a fishery (whether you were a guard or an actual worker I don't remember) and you come across Gura stealing fish. She was depicted as being kid-like and such. Every once in a while she come along stealing fish and (You) would try initiate conversation.

>> No.4388691

>>4388455
Also thanks for looking anon.

>> No.4389954

>>4385562
the kiara story series

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Words in the Water.
https://youtu.be/kelhD-VgWCk


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQPibBN_IKSgIWa5IaStYm1vEtig2E6Wy8hD6k-2elcOFUVZt0r6l-edPECaMubTfTNk7eiih5ue7oC/pub

>> No.4391146

>>4385562
Not a regular poster here and typically don't like people acting too out-of-character or crazy AU divergences, so not really a fan of most of them, but I thought Exposure Therapy was very engaging and sweet

>> No.4391331

>>4390928
I dig the somber mood, well done especially considering it's relatively short!

>> No.4392261

>>4388668
Was it >>2565279? If so, I've reuploaded that anon's work here: https://controlc.com/78f72892

>> No.4392385

>>4392261
Hey, that's the dead pastebin alright, and it sure enough is a story about a fishery. Thanks, Anon!

>> No.4392423

>>4392261
Yeah that exactly it anon! Thanks!

>> No.4393614

>>4392261
I usually keep a close eye on these threads, but I never saw this story before. That's odd.

>> No.4396102

>>4385266
You are YAGOO's student and you join him on a journey, where he set out to personally go searching for broken girls to save them. Would be funny if scenes like: Suisei attacking him with an axe and Yagoo disarming her with some kind of martial arts or him wrestling someone like Botan and winning were included.

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It was a rainy day and there was around. A perfect day to jump off a bridge, when a 'wah' comes from behind you.

https://controlc.com/79f01ed2

you still die either way, sorry.

>> No.4397694

>>4397389
At least it was quick and painless.

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>>4396102
I like it
>(You) very quickly beginning to realise something isn't normal about your new boss or the girls he's recruiting
>descending into Hell to recruit literal demons
>dimenion hopping becomes commonplace as you travel with YAGOO more
>seeing YAGOO manhandle monsters, aliens, gods, and cosmic horrors all to save those who need it
>YAGOO revealing his troubled past and teaching you the secrets to his strength
>YAGOO teaching you about what it means to be alive and human and his philosophy
>seeing YAGOO finally get serious about a fight

>> No.4398523

>>4398314
I like how these threads have evolved to shitposting about chuubas being abusive to anime light novels

Which you know, I dont mind

>> No.4398625

>>4398314
>>YAGOO teaching you about what it means to be alive and human and his philosophy
Would be too kino for any man to handle

>> No.4398760

>>4398314
>"Anon, I've taught you everything I know. Now it is time for you to start your own Hololive."
>"But, boss..."
>"None of that, now. Go. Forge your own path. I believe in you, son".

>> No.4399607

>>4398314
Would Nijisanji be a rival organiazation or that one group that comes in clutch to save you.

>> No.4400779

>>4385266
You coincidentally meet an adult Shion at a cafe and remember she was your bully through high school but she's regretful of her actions. Could turn into a romance or they just end up as friends

>> No.4401923

>>4399607
Most likely a friendly rival

>> No.4403721

Friendly reminder to add your prompts to the archive in case some anon doesn’t pick it up before the thread reincarnates.

>> No.4403859

>>4385562
Omelas series, Stalker Aqua, Investigation Codeword: Newfoundland and the two Kanata stories

>> No.4404617
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>>4400779
>adult Shion

>> No.4405784

>>4385166
I need stories of fluffy cuddly vtubers being rubbed

>> No.4406032

>>4405784
Fic something like Toy Story where Debiru, who is a plushie gifted to you by your eccentric younger sister, reanimates when you go to work to stream on your pc and secretly loves all the cuddling and talking you do to them when you come home.

>> No.4406558

>Made good progress on my story the last two days, feel pretty good about it
>Have a shitty ass day and lose motivation to work on anything
I hate days like these. I'm beginning to hate the weekends.

>>4404617
>Adult Shion; it's just regular kusogaki Shion but 5cm taller.

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>>4385562
well it was definitely Korone that actually got me into these threads, or at least those little greentexts about her beating the shit out of people
also really like the ones with Botan, yandere Polka, and Ina going full lovecraftian horror

>> No.4407708

>>4385562
Definitely the Chris Redfield one. Absolutely destroyed my sides.

But if we’re talking actual long stories then all of Matthew’s fluff stories have been great.

>> No.4407774

>>4387856
Dew it. Belieb

>> No.4407815

>>4385266
Mori keeps resurrecting you every time you die (even though it's extremely painful for you) so Kiara can have a fixed-point immortality friend.

>> No.4407949

>>4390928
Very nice, I like the subtle details and how you told the story without explicitly stating anything. Very good!

>> No.4408071
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>>4407708

>> No.4408144

>>4408071
>Yagoo trying to get you to fuck Mio before it's too late

>> No.4408208

>>4406558
I hate that I keep telling myself I'll work hard on my stories during weekends but it always ends up being an unproductive weekend and I barely make any progress in the end

>> No.4408211

>>4408144
A DROP! JUST A DROP ANON. PLEASE MY GOD SHES DRYING UP AS WE SPEAK, I CAN HEAR HER LAST EGGS SCREAMING OUT AS THEY DIE. CAN'T YOU SMELL IT? SHE'S GOING INTO HER FINAL HEAT GAIJIN. SLING YOUR CUM BOLAS, ENSNARE YOUR FUTURE. IMAGINE ANON. I M A G I N E.

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>>4385266
Suzuhara lulu exploiting your fearboner to most efficiently extract your generic material to propagate her species with. Or a story where you become restless and anxious when you'e not being in her embrace, like you get the feeling you're being watched or something is just around the corner trying to get you and only lulu's lulus can calm you down.
There's another idea by an anon:
>Lulu trying to understand how romantic relationships work and kinda ends up speedrunning it.
>Through a mix of very basic understanding of love and EnthraNORMAL ART STUDENT CHARM she'd whisk you from acquaintances to dating to married and with a child on the way.

>> No.4409433

>>4409364
Somebody save this anon

>> No.4409665

>>4409433
I would if I knew how to convincingly write Lulu, same with Calli and the other anon because I deeply enjoy the prompt of her essentially torturing you for the crime of not spending time with her. It's a really great idea; both of them are! I'm just fucking incapable of writing either of them in a way that doesn't make me want to die.

>> No.4409864

>>4390928
Turned on some jazz for this one. Well written, coupled with a tasteful amount of subtlety. Hope you find your diamond in the rough one day, Anon.

>> No.4412045

How do I make myself anonymous when sharing a google doc?

>> No.4412064

>>4412045
Click "Publish". Nothing about you should be posted.

>> No.4412158

>>4412064
Got it, thank

>> No.4412279

>>4385266
you are tricked into a dark alleyway by korone where she kills and eats you, but your spirit lingers in your corpse-cum-victuals, rejoicing in perverse glee as you become one with her, in a sense, as you move through her digestive tract

>> No.4412299 [DELETED] 

>>4412279
who

>> No.4413673

>>4385266
Kiara obtaining the Red Behelith from a mysterious stranger. Mostly because she’s the one holo I’m certain would use it if pushed.

>> No.4414425

>>4380123
>>4380346
Sorry anon, Autism possessed me so here a google doc on Kanatan
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRf-d7XTl5EcupVNal2BMVmnPLKin_GiK5fSmmIa33PcA8a9Y5IcT-nXU8GjvZK2eU8hAxv89OWayY5/pub

>> No.4414884

Bump

>> No.4415027
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>>4412279

>> No.4415334

>>4398523
>shitposting about chuubas being abusive
Excuse you, I was writing fics about actual abuse and gaslighting from the get go.

>> No.4415802

might try finishing the Choco/Mio fanfic today, p1 was one of my less successful works but w/e

>> No.4417033 [DELETED] 

>>4414425
Wow, this is a hot pot of info. Yeah, this will definitely be useful. Poor angel, it seems lile she's been through a lot.

>> No.4417047

>>4385562
the melancholy of minato aqua series

>> No.4417165

>>4414425
Thanks, this has been really helpful. Poor girl has been through a lot and is a nice friend. Also makes me realize that I'm way off on writing her in the rapture fic. Gonna either have to trash that or redo the entire thing. I feel bad for getting her wrong now.

>> No.4417229

>>4417165
Don't worry about it, compiling all those gave me inspiration for some fics ideas too.

>> No.4417259

Any MoonaFics around? I'm trying to get a better feel for her character and I'm not even sure where to start looking.

>> No.4417270

>>4417165
It's fine to get some chuuba personalities wrong in fics i think. I'm pretty sure I get Fbk's personality wrong in most of my fics but what matters is that you did your best to not stray too far off.

>> No.4417353

>>4417259
There are only two Moona fics in the archive. One being a NSFW greentext and the other being this one https://pastebin.com/fXgqRDFg if you can gain anything from it.

>> No.4417371

>>4417353
MoonaFics is what her fans are called.

>> No.4417393

>>4417371
Ah got you thanks. I was wondering why is was written like that.

>> No.4417431

>>4397389
I love my Wife!

>> No.4417535

Fanfiction has no tags for hololive so had to look in the web show category. There was a cool one called Living with a bunch of myths.
Could be some self insert acoustic garbo, but so far, it seems okay at best.

>> No.4417589

>>4417535
Give link

>> No.4417708

>>4417259
She's one of the character in Cover High. You should check these out. Pretty good characterization imo.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQKo3GTo_kKAmFuh4SgHSmRmadboI3Ff343u7Pp4X9CLlmPW9tTsLjbaqrMRdmm2fDSzrJIa8X4rboB/pub - Cover High/Pekora Ch. 1 (Pekora, SFW, Fluff)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTCdmhZ9rNTdoHtPPMLGF72Vr5bmTDqOqSgB6bEcmoVdWUte68SuTiJVFh5I6_8_odWKLjjNWwXD7-Z/pub Cover High/Pekora Ch. 2 (Pekora, SFW, Fluff)

>> No.4417743

>>4417589
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13846146/1/Living-with-A-Bunch-of-Myths

>> No.4417755

>>4417708
Anon...I wrote those. The whole reason I'm asking is because I worry I've been portraying her as way too deadpan.

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>>4417755
Oh sorry. In terms of Moona's personality, you wrote a better representation of her compared to "Moona's revenge". That one has too much dom energy oozing out from moona which is not really something you'd find watching her streams. It's a good fanfic don't get me wrong. Especially paired with her pic related song cover.
She's deadpan but that comes mostly because she's lacking in English vocabulary. She often struggle to find correct words to express her thought. She's a bit more chatty in Indonesian however, as you can see in her collabs with her ID peers.

>> No.4418042

>>4417755
I'm not a huge fan, but yeah she's a bit too deadpan in the story. She's real subdued and takes the 'serious mature' role because of it, but she's a prankster like Pekora and lights up when she can get people.
https://youtu.be/3t0-qk33Ybk
https://youtu.be/lC8Du3Dp9fo

>> No.4418184

>>4417915
>>4418042
Got it. Thanks for the input.
Moona's going to be pretty important for the next chapter, so I'll try to portray her more faithfully.

>> No.4418276

>>4417535
Got any other tips for scouring the site for more fics? Need more new stories to keep myself entertained, lord knows how many times I’ve re-read the ones in the archive.

>> No.4418604

>>4418184
Cheeky, that's a word that comes to mind. Serious but cheeky. The scene where (You) craft the trap, she'd have set it up so it would backfire on you somehow anyway. Add a delay or height sensor so it doesn't go off until it's on you, rather than Pekora beating you to the punch. Which could also work similarly:
You: You did this!
Peko: Hahaha, wasn't me, maybe you're just that stupid! haha
Y: Then who
followed by either adding moona (not necessary) or peko feeling bad for You. It could come out later in a smug comment from Moona in the halls "How'd your trap work out?"

I mean, that's just me, I like thought exercises like this, but Moona is definitely a prankster/comedian.

>> No.4418856

>>4418604
I think it may be too late to change her mannerisms in the first two chapters without making some pretty drastic alterations to the story. Maybe her initial aloofness can be chalked up to a combination of (You) not spending much time with her, and her being "on guard" due to not being used to interacting with you.

>> No.4419051

>>4418856
Don't rewrite shit, I was just throwing shit out as an example. No one should give a fuck about characterization honestly. It's up to the writers to make a story, not jerk off fans.
Sassy black Gura can be a thing, and who's to say otherwise?

>> No.4419350

>>4419051
Yeah that's fair. Lots of stories take creative liberties with chuubas' personalities.

>> No.4419975

>>4418276
I'd say discord servers like the inacord has channels for writers but uhhh, do you really wanna go to a vtuber discord server for some fanfic?

>> No.4422321

>>4419975
Recon can be good intel gathering. Just gotta lurk, get what you need and dip. No need to be active if you don't want to be.

>> No.4422508

>>4386971
Fucking SEX

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NEED MORE PEKO FLUFF
PLEASE
AAAAAAAAAAAAA

>> No.4422936

>>4422766
BE PATIENT ANON ROME WASN'T BUILT IN A DAY

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Yandere Ayame fic that i've been working on and delaying for quite a while, simply because I've been trying to figure out how she would act as a yandere. Perhaps this is way too ooc for her but I hope you guys can enjoy it either way

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRnLC6aeaFJoBnLRb_BhDbwdgaNTjhzlEPYlm6eLfYOHSDlrVNLhBHM3-JWkOyssXLa_HUHsOxLxWiV/pub

>> No.4424118

>>4386971
Can I get some Kiara snu snu?

>> No.4424729

>>4424070
It's OOC, but that doesn't stop it being good. I like the characterisation, you wrote both girls well.

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>>4398314
>Has to do various tasks for the holomembers to get them to join, simple or tough
>Singlehandedly beats up a rival yakuza clan for Coco
>Helps Aqua do her maid jobs
>Takes out an entire army and raids a castle for Noel
>Performs with Polka at a circus, doing all sorts of insane stunts that even she can’t do
>Takes off his limiters and defeats all of holoEN in a 1v5 battle which impresses them enough for them to join

>> No.4425593

>>4425256
>bribes Okayu with food

>> No.4425847

>>4424070
Nice a yandere fics, it's been a while since the last one

>> No.4427055

>>4409364
Anon if you’re still alive when I finish my two other stories I’m working on, I’ll help you out. But I’ve only watched one lulu clip ever so I’ll need to study

>> No.4427915

>>4422766
I have a pretty long Pekora fluff (with NSFW stuff(sorry!)) story (17 - 20 pages) but I'm not satisfyed posting it yet as it would be my first creation I'd ever throw on the internet. I want to work on it a bit more to give it more fine tuning. I'm a bit of a perfectionism, my bad. Give me 7 days and I'll post it.
I'm the Anon who about 6 - 7 weeks ago asked a couple of questions regarding details in stories - I have not given up on my little project.

>> No.4427921

>>4424070
Poor Fubuki, she gets hurt, mentally abused and/or killed like every other story. It's a good thing that that makes writeanons pump out more fluff about her to compensate though.
I have to ask though, why Fubuki? It can't just be because of Omelas, right?

>> No.4428133

>>4427921
>It can't just be because of Omelas, right?
I've got some bad news about the entirety of these threads, anon.

>> No.4428249

>>4427921
This used to be an abuse general. Omelas was an incredibly well received story. Fubuki is a very popular vtuber. Perfect storm.

>> No.4428335

>>4428133
>>4428249
Newfag here, I liked the Omelas original and fan sequel, but not really the other two parts, and they don't really seem in line with most of the abuse tropes that are repeated here. Were they also really hyped when they released?

>> No.4428560

>>4408071
>>4408144
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gZ6NNgEhD7A
this is yagoo with Botan

>> No.4428584

>>4428335
They were received well but they were very different - which isn't a complaint, on my part. If memory serves they were very well received because the author is fairly beloved for their works, those included.

>> No.4428797

>>4428335
They were hyped because of the context when they were released. This was an abuse writing thread and most stories where short smut I think Omelia was the first one to cover that pshychological abuse. And that anon continued writing while other anons did their own continuation of Omelia

>> No.4428987
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>>4427915
Godspeed, anon.

>> No.4429300

>>4427055
I shall never die.

>> No.4430710

>>4417535
Your error is looking at ff.net, which the majority of writers abandoned.

https://archiveofourown.org/tags/Virtual%20Streamer%20Animated%20Characters/works

>> No.4430769

>>4430710
What the fuck happened to FF.net? I used to use it pretty frequently. Is AOOO just that much better? Or is it the ability to make a bunch of shitty spam tags?

>> No.4430789

>>4428797
>I think Omelia was the first one to cover that pshychological abuse.
Technically, I think the first one was my Subaru gaslighting fic. Omelas was the first one I've written that has zero sexual content except for one throwaway line, though.

>> No.4430812

>>4430769
I think it's because A03 just allows people to be as degen as they want..

>> No.4431021

>>4430769
ff.net does not allow smut, complies with copyright (you can't write fanfic based on the works of Terry Goodkind for example), you can't tag something like a poly triangle or a crossover of more than two works of fiction.

the free-form tag system on ao3 has its upsides and downsides, but mods will symlink your redundant tags.

>> No.4431023

>>4430789
yes, thats what I trried to type but well ESL brain

>> No.4431145

>>4431021
Wait, what the fuck? I've seen smut on ff.net. Did something change?

>> No.4431357

>>4431145
Smut (well, NC-17) has been formally banned on ff.net since 2003 or so, it's a question of not being noticed. For example, in the 2012 cleanup they deleted an estimated 17000 Harry Potter fanfics. This is in contrast with AO3 where you can tag a work with graphic violence, rape and so on.

>> No.4431559

How tf do you write a convincing character
It requires hundreds of hours of research just to write convincingly, nevermind writing well
All of my protagonists are self-inserts in one way or another and other characters are like furniture on a set

>> No.4431750

>>4431559
Watch a few streams/clips to get a general sense of their personality, then wing it and see what happens. If it sucks, it sucks. Mediocrity is a necessary step on the road to adequacy.

>> No.4432710

>>4431559
Yeah like the anon above said it comes down to a bunch of research and the then trial and error. However I think one thing you should keep in mind is it sometimes fine to take a few creative liberties here and there. Not everyone is a scholar on every vtuber out there so I don't think you would have anyone at your throat and tweaking some parts may better fit your stories.

>> No.4437926

whats the goriest chuba fic so far?

>> No.4438046

>>4431559
The easy way to avoid self inserting is to not think of what you would do, but what the character would do, if that's something you're concerned with in particular. Try and imagine the character as someone or something other than you yourself with a different upbringing and experiences. A more cowardly character would be inclined to avoid conflict while someone with a rougher past would seek it, that sort of thing.
>>4437926
Shark Tooth has an Anon having his cock bitten off, Asset Procurement has a throat/heart stabbing, Newfoundland has some shotgun antics. Take your pick.

>> No.4439029

>>4385266
Polka tries to seduce an overseas intern with her limited but forceful english.

>> No.4441099

>>4431559
Watch movies and read books. See how they express themselves, what motivates them and how they act on it. Take note of the flaws and how they don't have all the answers, but they use what they have to get through situations.


https://youtu.be/bXmgaqFHKfA

>> No.4441479

>>4428560
God I want a horny Botan to hunt me down and force me to impregnate her

>> No.4441539

>>4429300
Hang in there

>> No.4441772

>>4385266
All the Okayu fics so far are too abusive and no fun. I wouldn't mind a simple vanilla fic of getting a private ASMR session that becomes more.

>> No.4443904

So what are some fics where a chuuba abuses their significant other and they end up either dying or in the hospital and the chuuba regrets it immensely?

>> No.4444983

>>4443904
That I remember:
Omelas + Anchor, Guilty Caretaker, Hard-Knock Love

You can find the links in the OP >>4385166

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>>4390928
good stuff brother

>> No.4448825

>Botan will never pin you to the ground and forcibly empty your balls after years of you ghosting her
Bros...
>>4424070
Man, Fubuki sure is a favorite for shit going bad.

>> No.4450653

>>4448825
It's fun to imagine that beneath all that cheerfulness and positivity that Fubuki has her own fair share of troubles and hardships surrounding her and I like to make my own versions of what Fubuki really is like.
I'll try not to insert Fubuki into abuse or tragedy fics as much though.

>> No.4450739

>>4430769
I've seen a lot of former FF.net authors relocate/make forum-type sites like Sufficient Velocity or Space Battles their primary posting spaces, mostly because of how the author-reader fic-review loop works

>> No.4452796
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>>4385562
Exposure therapy, Omelas extend universe, "No Friend, Waifu!", Fluffy.

Guess who's my oshi lol

>> No.4452848

Someone... pls... write something

>> No.4452914

>>4452848
once upon a time, you were a faggot
that didn't change
the end

>> No.4453212

>>4452848
How about (You) write something

>> No.4455490

>>4453212
>How about (You) write something
You step out of house and see a gren haired girl. RUSHIA I AM FAN! You scream. She turnes to yo and smiles. I lov you too. You make out with rushi and fuck. The end.
There, I wrote something.

>> No.4455725

>>4455490
Trash, Unoriginal, Rushia is OOC, shitty OC, hire an editor, learn to use a line break, the romance is too forced, the ending is too abrupt
Never write again

>> No.4455856

>>4455490
Bravo, Nolan

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>>4455490
can you teach me to write masterpieces like this anon

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>>4385166
>be me
>le 22yo kissless virgin
>be tired of studying for college exams
>go take a park in the local walk
>"thank god, this place is empty, I hate those stupid dog owners that are always here"
>sit on a bench looking at a pond
>myehehehehe.mp3 plays
>I turn my head and see a big anthro squirrel
>well, big for a squirrel, she's quite tiny compared to me
>she hasn't noticed that I'm looking at her, I can hear her saying "I'm RRRRRRRReal smuth"
>she has my wallet in her hand
>get out of the bench and confront her
>"don't forget to take your meds"
>I take my meds
>in front of me is just a regular squirrel, my wallet is on the floor
>idea.exe
>take squirrel home
>go to sleep
>next day don't take my meds
>"hey anon, do you have any nuts? I love nuts, big nuts"
See ya later virgins.

>> No.4456117

>>4456018
Tomorrow's headline:
22 yo man arrested for animal cruelty after capturing and raping park squirrels

>> No.4457568
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4457568

An alternate tale to >>4390928

https://youtu.be/jg8JoPFlaN8

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRJQgcyCJqxilWBEdg9BPNJ-raAvAjGdBW2-WEkKkpb9F7vP4DjWuR8uxKvHQlyu-2fgiDtv6khNo7i/pub

>> No.4457835

>>4452848
I’m trying anon, I’m trying...
>>4457568
Oh shit that was pretty good, did you take inspiration from the pet sematary book at all?

>> No.4457945

>>4455725
>Trash, Unoriginal, Rushia is OOC, shitty OC, hire an editor, learn to use a line break, the romance is too forced, the ending is too abrupt
>Never write again
Yes, that’s why I want other anons to write

>> No.4458113

>>4457568
Oooh that gave me some goosebumps. Good job anon.

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4458240

>>4457835
I am a huge Stephen King fan, but the theme itself is a classic folk story from around the world, wanting to bring them back, and the question of can or -should- you. I just go with what I feel in the moment, I was more interested in the beginning and middle. I decided I didn't want him to go through with it. Also he didn't meet the tall one directly, but that was the original end.

>> No.4458615

>>4457568
I'm enjoying how you describe your environments and reflect on the mindset of the protagonist. It's really nice and adds a lot of atmosphere.

>> No.4458873

Anyone have any SFW requests for Luna, Mio, or Roboco stories? I noticed one in the request archive for Mio, but a couple of anons said they were working on it already.

>> No.4459222

>>4458873
for Roboco: Many years have passed since a great war that cost the lives of billions. On his way from work, Anon finds an abandoned body of a girl, a machine used in the war. He is so captivated by her beauty that he takes her home. After fixing her up a bit, he manages to activate her.
Can Anon teach love to a machine created for murder? Can the girl do anything else besides killing? maybe at anon's suggestion she could try dancing and singing ;)

>> No.4460620

Anyone have any fluffy Fubuki prompts? I felt like making another fluff Foob fic after watching her 3rd anniversary stream.

>> No.4460987

>>4460620
Sleepy fox cuddles.

>> No.4461030

>>4460620
Fubuki coming home late from her job and finding her boyfriend/husband asleep on the sofa/bed while waiting for her. Seeing him like this, Fubuki joins him, accidentally waking him up and profusely apologizes to her BF/husband with him simply smiling and hugging her sleepily.

Hope that's enough, this is something I would write myself, but lack the ability to.

>> No.4462156
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4462156

A story that got requested from me ages ago, about Marine feeling insecure about her age and weight, with your job being helping her to get over it. I feel bad for putting it off for so long, and it didn't really go in the direction I had hoped it would, especially the ending, but I needed to get it done. Definitely not my best piece of writing but I hope you guys enjoy it all the same.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTi8auPEeuTgvnkAbUEtoo_3QDyc3pexw1cuDpbrF4h7Bc5CiSCRNd8uwghdJ95YRmYvtOOsSw7GqCV/pub

>> No.4462864

>>4458615
It's so fun to write. There's not much need for it in less dramatic works though, it'd feel fucking weird to get that deep in something fluffier, I would think.
Probably why I keep getting stalled on my fluff stories, because I have to constantly pull myself back from over-emphasizing scenes.

>> No.4462969
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4462969

you guys are awesome

>> No.4462992

>>4452848
Sorry anon, the demand for pudgy chuuba fics seems to have dried up

>> No.4463088

>>4462156
Ahh, how my heart is filled. Don't be so hard on yourself, Anon. It's lovely.
>>4452848
i'll headbutt you
>>4462992
The problem is that there's a notable disconnect between 'pudgy' and 'gurgling microexplosions in the stomach' bbw stuff. Most likely the Kiara story made people wary to request anything out of fear of it turning out like that, alongside tummy-centric stuff being a sort of niche fetish which few people in the thread probably have. Like, if you want a request, there's always something like lightly teasing Okayu that her clothes don't fit as right as they did before while you poke the sides of her slightly-larger-than-normal stomach and she gets embarrassed and defensive, but that's all I really got because I'm not into vore or people masquerading as katamaris.

>> No.4463119

>>4462156
Good fic anon, really enjoyed it

>> No.4463330

>>4463088
>Most likely the Kiara story made people wary to request anything out of fear of it turning out like that
That was a bit of an exception that I was even a little hesitant to give the architecture thread, so I frankly would not have chosen it as an introductory sample to my work if I could help it. I found it somewhat amusing someone had already decided to post it here for me when I first started looking into the general, ironically or otherwise.

I'd like to think I can do whatever vibe though as long as the idea appeals to me, and was honestly hoping I'd get some tamer or sweeter prompts here for practice with something I'm not super experienced with since /ag/ tends to go a little crazy with their ideas.

>> No.4463380
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4463380

U SLEP MEETING ROOM, ERRYONE GO HOMES, BUT NO FBKS BECUZ SHE FIND U SLEP. SHE CUDDLE WIT U. U WAK UP, FBKS DRUL ON SHRT. VERY CUTE, PAT PAT PAT.

Don't mind me, just felt like shitposting this instead of writing it. God knows I don't need something else on the backlog.

>> No.4463432

>>4463330
Okayu idea still stands as something soft and tame. Just gentle relationship teasing and reassuring of love despite physical appearances, that sort of thing. Someone else requested more happy Okayu stuff anyway, and I think this would apply to that, as well, though I understand if you don't want to take it.
>>4463380
Finally, the literary genius we've been waiting for has come to join us - remember us when you become a famous romance author, Anon!!

>> No.4463645

>>4463380
SEQUEL:
U MAK PANKAKES FUR FBKS. SHE SEZ TANKZ UND BLUSH. HEART EYEZ! U RSH FBKZ TO HOSPITLZ, HERT EYZ VRY DNGRUS SYMPTONS! DKTR SEZ NOT DNGRZ, ONLY IN LUV. IN LUV!?

I realize now that I could have just drew on an alpha layer instead of deleting around it. This is why I stick to writing.

>> No.4464025

>>4457568
Nice work. I like how you explored the backstory over time, and the ending was a great touch.
>>4462156
I enjoyed this one a lot, especially the scenes where (You) reassure Marine.

>> No.4464058

>>4458873
For Luna how about the candy kingdom (or wherever she's from) is taken over and she is now labelled as a fugitive. (You) are a peasant in the country that took over her kingdom and come across her trying to hide and you take her in out of pity. She's lived a very sheltered life so you have to teach her the way of the peasant.

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4465215

>>4463330
well you did kinda ask for weird requests so I obliged

still feeling the itch for something with Botan though
I kinda like the idea of her formerly being this strong fierce lion that people expected from her upon first impression.
But after overindulging in her love for meat (or being overfed by her lover who knew she couldn't resist their cooking) she puts on some weight.
She's still quite strong and muscular, but now its buried under a layer of fat. And like her body, her personality has also softened up, becoming much more playful and prone to laughing, you know basically just how she actually is on-stream.

>> No.4465559

>>4462156
Adding to this, I always enjoy how much of a concrete guy Roberu is in almost every story he's featured in. Hell, this one even alludes to Shien. Really, good story, Anon. Thank you for the hard work.

>> No.4465750

>>4463380
>>4463645
Fucking masterpieces
You are a literary genius

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>>4462156
Great work

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4467451

>>4462156
Yes

>> No.4467780
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4467780

An Okayu fic, though not exactly a happy one.

A Cat's Life
https://controlc.com/2b9b76c0

>> No.4468110

>>4467780
Adding to the list of miserable Okayu tales, are you?
This reminded me a lot of the cat I lost a year ago. Spent an entire day sick. Was great the next day, jumped up and let herself be pet, purred, went to her bed and quietly passed. In short, fuck you, Anon. Thank you for your work.

>> No.4468599

>>4467780
>https://controlc.com/2b9b76c0
10/10, made me cry. Fuck you.

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4468699

>>4462156
That was beautiful

>> No.4468725

>>4467780
I wont read this. But Good work anon. I dont want to cry anymore

>> No.4468738

>>4467780
These tragedy fics are hurting me. I'm going to lose it the more I read these.

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4468778

Im surprised no one made a fic with this idea

>> No.4468853

>>4467780
Fck reminds me a cat I used to have. fuck you

>> No.4468903

>>4468853
Write more tho

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>>4462156
Beautiful work anon, thank you so much!

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4470486

If nothing goes wrong, I should be finishing and posting a Botan story I've been working on for the last few days tonight. Was gonna finish it this morning but I slept in till way too late. Now I've gotta go be a wagie.

>> No.4470540

>>4470486
I look forward to it anon!

>> No.4470590

>>4470486
Hey, great! Have a good day at work, Anon!
That Botan pic is seductive. Oh man that eyeshadow. Fuck.

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4471229

>>4470590
JdotKdot is always good at expressive eyes that stand out.

>> No.4472904

>>4471229
Between him and that one artist who draws a lot of Polka I'm starting to think I have a "Very striking eyes" fetish

>> No.4473279

>>4472904
It's a based fetish. Eyes really get me going personally.

>> No.4474436

>>4468778
it's too much pain, anon. I don't need that in my life

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4474658

>>4472904
>>4473279
yup

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4475019

>>4474658
Holy shit that polka

>> No.4475025

>>4474658
Aw yeah thats the guy, I love those eyes so much.

>> No.4475042

>>4474658
That artwork is pure sex.

>> No.4475294

>>4467780
oof, it hurts, but it's very well written
thanks, but also fuck you, anon

>> No.4475371

>>4474658
The dude is also very polite if you post a reply to any of his artwork he will reply with a ''thank you!'

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4476201

>>4470888
I approach her, she's at least half my height. There are dead fish right beside her but the overwhelming scent of M&M candy and Doritos fills my nose instead. I'm rock hard by this point and my bulge fits right into her thigh gap as I pull her against me. She gives a look of concern as her intimidation fails to have the intended effect. I feel moisture on my bulge as something soaks through my pants. This erogaki is sopping wet... I see a small glint on her exposed fangs as she herself realises this. I push her to the ground and release the kraken. My dick against her face stretching all way past her delicate hairline. She goofily looks at it cross-eyed then licks from the base to the tip. Her tongue is a little rough but not irritating. It's clear she hasn't done this very often but she does her best. As she wraps her tongue all the way around the tip, she works it into her small mouth. After about a minute I'm almost at my limit, but I feel a terrible grating sensation on my dick. This fucking mesugaki let one of her teeth scrap my dick and it hurt like a motherfucker. She apologizes with her eyes and continues.

She can tell I'm reaching my limit again and works her way back to the tip. This time however, she gives a mischievous look and reveals a mouthful of needle sharp pearly whites as she puts it back in her mouth. I feel every single point resting softly against my skin as she gargles something incomprehensible, but the meaning was clear -do I as I say or I'll bite your fucking dick off. Before I realize it myself a look of sheer terror comes across my face. The corner of her mouth goes into a knowing smirk, satisfied knowing that my life is now in her hands.

>> No.4476321

>>4476201
She grips the base of my dick hard and dick-steers me to the right. She pushes me back and I land on the bench of an abandoned fishing boat. I glance to my right and realize that we're now in full view of a busy ocean dock. This fucking erogaki wants to do it... Here in full view of all these people. She mounts me reverse cowgirl and I start to mouth out some words, "I can't, if people see me I'm gonna go to J-". But I can't mouth the words. Something... Something is obstructing my throat. Her pulsing tail is wrapped around my neck, only occasionally releasing its grip just in time for me to pull my next breath. With some effort, she slowly guides it inside. Eventually I'm all the way in, but she's just sitting there. My heart is pounding out of my chest and my dick is throbbing, what the fuck is this dumb shark doing? Just slowly humiliating me in front of all these people. Fine then, if she wants a show then I'll put on a show. As I go to thrust, the grip of her tail tightens and I can't move any more. What the fuck? What does this brat want me to do? Hardly thinking, my gaze follows her tail down my chest to her half exposed derrière.

>> No.4476435

>>4476321
As I start to lose my last breath a strange solution worms its way into my mind. Wait the only thing I can do in this situation is... Still not thinking straight, I reach my hand under the tail and feel a perforation. I can feel her heartbeat pounding hard through her tail now. I slowly do the only thing I can do, I slip a finger right into her butthole.

Before I get it all the way in, my dick explodes into pleasure as her hips start moving on their own. She purrs into action, like a key was just turnt. I can hardly hold back myself as I thrust deep. As I reach my limit, her tail grips my neck like a vicegrip and my other head is gripped even tighter. The dumb shark she wants it.... UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
I cry out as I fill her with all my shrimp. She collapses back on me, all the juices now leaking back onto me. I become aware of the screams from the ocean dock and the clicking of the shutters. I can hear the police sirens now, before I black out the last thing I see is the shark girl disappearing into the ocean, a gleam of her tail in the sunlight as she disappears beneath the whitecaps below.

>> No.4478584

Frightening.

>> No.4479007

Just a quick question. How do you share a google doc anonymously? I've never posted with google docs.

>> No.4479377

>>4479007
Click the Publish button. Shouldn't show any of your information and give you a URL to share.

>> No.4479471

>>4479377
Oh thanks.

>> No.4479739
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4479739

I tried writing something serious. Hope you enjoy.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQUACFyFH9q1PGCtWVwwriHYts7Rn6dEnNZZLBuIfhYYxNetiMgMDvCe4RWStxH9mzjpsqPOE0IwfIG/pub

>> No.4480411

>>4479739
excellent work anon. If it weren't for the pic I would've pegged her for Suisei until the final paragraph

>> No.4480420

>>4479739
Very nice anon

>> No.4480688

>>4480411
The comment about the thighs gave it away for me

>> No.4483475

I've started reading these stories and I think I'm too autistic for them because I get way too emotionally invested in them.

Keep it up, I guess..

>> No.4485152

>>4467780
pain but also pain

>> No.4485183

>>4483475
Which ones really grab your nuts, Anon?

>> No.4486316

>>4485183
I'm a romantic sap so I'm just reading the fluffy stuff right now and feeling the pain.

>> No.4488639

i do hope emotional and physical abuse stories keep being made, somehow i just love them, gives me some sort of satisfaction.

>> No.4488722

>>4467780
Its a terrible day for rain...

>> No.4491782

>>4488639
There'll be more. Some always drift back. For now the tide seems to be flowing in the realm of tragedy, though fluff survives - abuse had a fairly long run and most ideas were ran through, but ideas have a funny way of cropping up down the line.

>> No.4492361
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Poi.

http://controlc.com/2aac0c64

]I realized part way through that this was a lot like my previous story, but felt like it was a bit of a waste with how far I had already gotten with it. Ah well.

>> No.4492818

>>4385266
A proper story from marika tourney greentext where you are Aqua boyfriend, watching her from the sidelines, but she lose by one point to Suisei. Suisei take you as her reward, fucking you in front of your girlfriend.

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>>4492818
Forgot the image

>> No.4493135

>>4492361
I swear I'm not a masochist but that was pretty hot.

>> No.4493441

>>4492361
jesas. I got hard at just reading about Botan's breath on my throat and my bleeding wristles.
Really liked the HS scenario you did, I kek'd at the stacy Kiara. Are you thinking of continuing it? It would be great if Shishiron just reclaim (You) as her bf along with Lamy And maybe Nene & Polka too

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>>4493441
I didn't really plan on continuing it. I've got a few other things I'd like to work on, but I will definitely keep in mind that someone wants to see more!

>> No.4493747

>>4460620
Fubuki - shy, fluffy and easily excited, doesn't know how much her significant other wants to cuddle her all the time

>> No.4493901

>>4492361
Yes! Finally! A horny life raft to cling to in this current sea of tragic stories! Good work, writebro.
As much as I'd want Anon and Botan to get together, the cliff-hanger is a pretty decent endig, too. No matter if you continue this story or go with something else, I'm looking forward to it.
As for the writing itself, there were some minor word repetitions, but besides that very well written all around

>> No.4494290

>>4492361
that fucking kazoo kek
top tier

>> No.4495348

>>4492361
I am a masochist and that was pretty hot, part 2 when?

>> No.4495416

>>4385562
To whoever wrote cover high, thank you, keep up the great work

>> No.4495484

>>4417755
Nice stories man, when are you going to do chapter 3?

>> No.4496051

>>4495484
Started on it a few days ago. Progress is gonna be slow due to IRL bullshit, but it's being worked on.

>> No.4498387

>>4408211
Holy shit my sides

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>>4464058
I haven't written in years, and I'm only about 10% of the way through what I want to write, but any feedback so far? I tried to tie it into the Luna/Pekora request that was in the prompt archive, as a bit of a what-if scenario for where the prince marries Pekora. I do plan to expand a bit more on the backstory later, I just haven't found a great point to mention it yet. Writing-wise, I've mainly noticed the pacing is a bit wonky, so I'll likely need to go back over it again later.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQsSnE0I9cI9SPlupPtG_e8UeiLYe_-Xe3_fgzIAwp9T9G9na4-tZZR0nVzBhJntQo_zgy8zsxqDtNY/pub

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Author of "Final Case" here
I just finished this Gurame gorefic
contains graphic depictions of cannibalism

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qiwMFUPHnHcBTjMkyZVe6E8zmSRQ5HCtsSJKGThnyM8/edit

>> No.4499601

>>4498941
It's off to a good start. Only note I can think of is that the fletcher goes from "she's delusional" to "she's telling the truth" without much explanation of what convinced him.

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Final Yab

All I need to do now is wait; everything is about to come together. The result of months of work and a considerable chunk of my oil fortune.

To a computer scientist, finding something (or someone) is just a matter of narrowing down the possible places to look using indexed information, then exhaustively searching the rest. Well, sometimes it's just an exhaustive search. She's normally in Tokyo, but that metropolis truly is too vast to search with bruge force. But I could narrow it down, and it didn't have to be Tokyo.

I only had one photo, but it was enough. With the OpenStreetMap dataset and a bit of script-fu I had a list of places that might work: all 19,821 bridges in Japan between 20 and 120 metres in length that crossed a river. From there only the relatively simple task of grabbing satellite images and streetview and uploading the entire dump to mechanical turk.

A flyover city might be considerably easier to search than Tokyo, but it's still hundreds of square kilometres filled with millions of people. Nevertheless I was on the next flight to Japan. Even in the age of Coronachan getting a visa is just a matter of money. I started by posing as a researcher and contacting a few convenience store franchisees. Turns out most of them are run by the Yakuza, which made things easier. A small "research" fee got me passwords and addresses of the ip cameras all around town. Luckily nearly all of them had audio as well.

A push notification popped up on my phone. I clicked it and started listening...

"Your change is 47 yen. Can I warm this up for you?"
"Yah"

>> No.4500187

>>4385266
No matter how rich or famous one is, death eventually finds them. The time has come for Mori to carry out her duties and reap the souls of her senpais.

>> No.4501210

>>4498941
Well first of all, thank you for picking up the prompt I suggested. I didn't expect anyone so do especially so soon.

As for critique of the fic. I think it's off to a good start. I liked the idea of combing the two prompts, you're killing two birds with one stone. Overall I think you got a solid foundation and it seems well written so far. It's only the start of the fic so I don't think you need worry too much about inserting the backstory yet (Well that depends on how long you're planning on making this). The only critique I have is the same as the other anon said. The fletcher does have a drastic change of mind without any proper convincing.

Again thanks and I look forward to the rest of it anon!

>> No.4502139

>>4385266
a cat and mouse game between Amelia and Suisei, would be great if it was death note potato chip levels of dramatic

>> No.4503971

>>4493747
Yes! This, please!

>> No.4504155

Anons, I need a name for the main antagonist of my story, and it obviously can’t be anyone from the vtuber scene. Any ideas?

>> No.4504277

>>4504155
Bob

>> No.4504297

>>4504155
Depend on what kind of story it is

>> No.4504403

>>4504155
Chris.

>> No.4504419

>>4504155
my cock

>> No.4504567

>>4504155
John Smith

>> No.4505014

>>4504155
John Doe

>> No.4505271

>>4504155
Xi Jinping

>> No.4505288

>>4499511
holy moly

>> No.4505431

>>4504155
negus

>> No.4505534

>>4504155
Tommy Ten Inches

>> No.4506084

>>4504155
Winnie the Poo

>> No.4506159

>>4504155
GOOYA

>> No.4506428

>>4502139
I really want to see this, but I'm terrible at mystery writing.

>> No.4506793

Since there's a lot of onion bullying here I figured she deserved some happiness. I'd write it myself (maybe I will) but I'm already working on two other stories so it might not happen.

Aqua moved out and began living on her own in the city to try and fix her social anxiety, but becomes increasingly depressed as she continues to struggle, sometimes with everyday tasks. She gets into a public situation easy for others to resolve but struggles to, and (you) step in to give her a hand. Through various encounters, she begins to rely and depend on (you) for help, but (you) slowly push her to become more independent and self-sufficient.

>> No.4506888

>>4385166
*SLAP*

>> No.4506939

>>4506888
Checked, based and abuse-pilled.

>> No.4509138

bomp

>> No.4509800

>>4499511
Well, it's well written graphic cannibalism, at the very least.

>> No.4510045

>>4493901
Thank you! I'll be sure to look out for reusing words in the future. It was something I had thought might be happening, but I didn't really go back to double check.
>>4495348
Like I said before, I didn't really have a plan to do more of it. But I will make a note that people want more after I work on my other stuff!

>> No.4510079

>>4510045
What else are you working on, Anon?

>> No.4510288

>>4510079
A tragedy fic where you take a beach trip with Ame, not knowing the end of the world is about happen. There's that one request for Calli resurrecting you, but killing your friends and family for not devoting yourself to her afterwards.
And some Coco smut, but I haven't quite decided where I want to take that yet.

>> No.4510330

>>4510288
Well hey, all of these sound stellar! Bonus props for taking that Calli prompt after that naysayer from the last thread - thank you! Look forward to everything you're working on.

>> No.4510393

>>4510330
I'll be sure to try and deliver

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>>4492361
Damn it, I hate men being submissive and masochism/abuse in general, but being Botan, the way you wrote this and the way the story progresses got me quite erect. The way she starts to soften up and become more girly activates my almonds. My maledom fetish would really like to see anon turn the tables on her at some point, even if just in case she's in heat or whatever.

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>> No.4514943

>>4512557
Im glad you could enjoy it despite your relative dislike of the subject matter

>> No.4515458

>>4514943
It was a good story anon, good job.

>> No.4516504

>>4385266
"Ace Detective" Amelia Watson (also your gf) has noticed (You) acting strangely for the past few weeks. Believing the worst she thinks you're planning on breaking up with her when really you are planning on proposing.

>> No.4518583

>>4516504
That sounds like a Gosling slayer of an idea, Anon. Hope it gets picked up.

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>> No.4523214

I'm curious as to if any indies are popular enough for stories. There's the Beatani short above, but I mean more fleshed out things. A Nina magical girl story would be fun.

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>>4492361
From one Botan friend to another, very impressive work. If you decide to make a little sequel in the future, you have my full support.

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>>4526075
Sank Yu

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A safety bump to see us through the night.
I really want to keep writing this segment of HoloFantasy but there's never any energy nor time. Things have been difficult and still are. Forgive me.

>> No.4529793

>>4529719
I believe in you writeanon. If it ever gets difficult it's fine to try and sort your ideas with other anons in the thread or just take a break every now and then.

>> No.4529816

>>4529719
That feel is real. Hang in there.

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>>4409364
For the anon who wants a Lulu's fic. I tried to build a genuine friendship in a few paragraphs based on a few streams I've watched of Lulu. I never really get into the meme of her being an eldritch being but I tried to describe as much as I can imagine what an eldritch Lulu is like while still being fuckable and really came of as someone more submissive in bed. Just think of it as her thinking about how a female human mate would behave towards its male mate.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vStCNJ9sOVheK7HWUI0h1Zxi8FT3b5IHPiwjf_wdOx2G3doJDwamVIm8kCMdPAVlziApSn-I4D4oP1Q/pub

If I had more free time, I'd really want to write more about shota Anon breeding the rest of Nijisanji girls that Lulu had kidnapped for him.

Sorry if this came out amateurish, English was not my mother tongue.

>> No.4531444

>>4504155
What kind of story? Fantasy, sci-fi, urban fantasy, slice of life?

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>>4530925
A̶̳̝̺̼̩̝̬A͉͚A̬̖A̧̦̦A͔̻̟̫A̸̳A̖̳̟̝͝A̵͇̳͈A̻A̡ÀA̬͎͝A̪ͅAA̧̖A̩̝̳̫̱A̫A̸̩AẠ̧̹A͉̣̕A͚̭AA̷͉̘̦̹A̘̳̦̭̼̺͜Ą͓̭̞̬̻̰̞AẠA̼̯̫͚̱̱A͎͎͉͚͉̭̩͝A͔͓̹̰A̻ͅA̬̬͜A͈̝A̴͍͓͙̟A̙̟A͙̼̻̺̕ͅA̰̣̻̣̘A̘̭̝̥̯̩̺A̖͎̭͔̜̪̳͡A̷͕̪͉A̹͎̳͡Ą̥A̬A̬͔̩͎̯A̤̖̤A̠̮̦͉A͕̦AA͖͡AA̯͕͚͈A̙̱̻A̯̙̬A̦̠͝A̼A̱̜̰̫A͓͖̻̻̖ͅA̙̤̼͍̰̩A͚̰A̬̟̠̭A͎͙̠̘͞Ą̫͚̱
You took everything we asked for and gave us more than we could've ever hoped for. We thank you kind anon for delivering this story that our heartboners enjoy.

>> No.4533532

>>4470486
Are you the one who wrote gunned down? I've been wanting more from that one...

>> No.4535627

>>4530925
I wouldn't have known that you're ESL if you didn't say so. I don't know much about Lulu but you did a good job capturing her as "eldritch girl who doesn't quite understand humans". If you do decide to write more in this story, I'd be very excited to read it.

>> No.4540157

>>4468778
I don't understand this. Can you please explain?

>> No.4541114
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Short Fubuki fluff that I wanted to write after abusing her a bit too much in my recent stories.

>> No.4541161

>>4541114
I'm a retard and didn't link the actual fucking story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT_ZOnVShwI32T-x8cABN6CDNd3IssPN-9GwywYSQHFufSSdbrALwZGaQrPxUDW-zaOXNTf5Mm9vi7v/pub

>> No.4542051

>>4541161
Always love me some good fluff. Nice one anon!

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>>4541161
Oh, that's my prompt!
Thank you so much for this Anon, you did a great job!

>> No.4544188

>>4533532
Unfortunately no, I only wrote For We May or Might Never before this one.

>> No.4544980

>>4506793
this sounds great, I can't wait to see it

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>>4467780

>> No.4546687

>>4385266
You live in a small town and recently you have found yourself a girlfriend, a beautiful green haired girl named Rushia. It was nice being together with her at the beginning, but after awhile she started complaining how you go meet up with friends and accuses you of cheating. Her constant accusations really annoy you, and she can see that. Thankfully, Rushia is a smart and caring girl and apologizes for what she said and it doesn't happen again. But something seems off, your friends don't invite you anywhere anymore, in fact the whole town seems off. You still see the townsfolk, but the atmosphere around them feels...less lively, they still talk to you, but you don't see any emotion coming from them, no joy, no anger...
Apart from your girlfriend Rushia, who is always by your side, the town has become dead silent...

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I've got an idea for a schizo fic but it's far too messed up so I'm not going to share it

>> No.4547877

>>4547815
Anon I think it's far more messed up to say you have an idea and not tell us about it. Just do it.

>> No.4547978

>>4547815
pussy no balls

>> No.4548011

>>4547815
post it

>> No.4548088

>>4547815
These threads originated from fantasizing about mental and physical abuse, and there was just a cannibalism story. You'll be good.

>> No.4548190

>>4547877
alright

>Akai Haato finally manages to seal away Haachama for good
>stops streaming because she realized how much it messes with her psyche
>fast forward 3 years
>Akai Haato is living a happy live, no schizo outbursts anymore
>recently gave birth, lives as a single mother
>someday, without warning, Haachama takes over again
>she takes a look at Akai Haatos newborn child
>suddenly, after three years of silence, a new Haachama Cooking stream pops up on her channel

>> No.4548293

>>4548190
Hey that is a pretty fucked idea, you were right. Someone write about it please

>> No.4548535

>>4548190
That sounds fucking gnarly. Dig it.

>> No.4548848

>>4548190
o-oh my

>> No.4548900

>>4548190
I was going to say Haachama would love this but I think that's too dark, even for her.

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>>4548190
> Haachama cooking: Baby
> Haachama cooking: Baby Food

>> No.4549145

>>4549063
>"I wonder what she's gonna do with glorified apple sau-OH MY GOODNESS!"

>> No.4549650

Anon slowly realizing the girls at the company he's interning at strange features aren't actually costumes

>> No.4550270

>>4548190
These prompt ideas never stop being so fascinating, I'll give it that.

>> No.4550440

Damn I've written and read so many 2nd person fics in the past few months that I've completely forgotten how to write 1st person and keep subconsciously switching to 2nd person.

>> No.4550664

>>4385266
(You)r gf, Rushia, actually gets off to the thought of you fucking one of her friends. All this time you thought she was a yandere that was close to snapping at all times when really she's just been trying to put the idea of you cheating into your head. It's been months now. She's tired of waiting for you to cheat on your own. She's going to make you cheat whether you want to or not. May god have mercy on your peepee.

>> No.4551139

>>4548190
I thought you were going with the classic "Haato's baby is Haachama's reincarnation" but this is even worse.

>> No.4551251

>>4550664
Anyone in particular?

>> No.4551324

>>4551251
Probably one of her genmates that she feels physically inferior towards such as Noel or maybe Marine

>> No.4552899

>>4551324
Good choices. Could exploit her chest insecurities.

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