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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>40883946

>> No.40959430
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread

Unhealthy Addictions ch 1: Tags: Hoshimachi Suisei, Omaru Polka, SFW, suicide attempts, depression:>>40925908

Lost and found; Chapter 1: TAGS: Hakos Baelz, SFW, Fluff, Slowburn(?):>>40934023

>> No.40959596

>>40959573
Both of them were shit

>> No.40959752
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) are a manager taking care of a VERY drunk chuuba who begins forcing herself on you. What do Mr. Anon Moose?:>>40884918

Nene refuses to let you leave school until you help with her math homework(she's very bad at it): >>40892205

This normal Ina picture >>40894077 reminded me of this greentext fic/prompt:>>40895613

Intern Anon (You) have a lot of hot sneaky manager sex with A-chan, no matter the time, the place, the venue or the event.:>>40916923

After an accidental minor doxx while trying to post a Google Doc /here/, Risu (herself a regularly posting author) realizes that Reine is one of her favorite /wg/ creators, spiraling into a massive collective realization between dozens of people that every author that has ever posted here is themselves a popular VTuber:>>40932967

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>>40959489
There needs to be more femboy Suisei fics.

>> No.40960820

>>40959573
>>40960497
Ive playing a lot of valorant and these type of images make me imagine Suichan as Yoru.
Your own dimension hopping psycopath yandere...

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Sorry for letting the thread slide off I took a smoke break while writing a review...which is now gone as a result. Shit.

>>40925908
I originally had a lot more to say, but essentially I'm into it. I'm not as against the suicidal stuff at the beginning, I thought that was fine, but I'll agree that the protagonist is a bit much after that. I think that he gets a little too upset at Polka a little too quickly, I think if his anger at her trying to perform was stretched over a few days his blow up and her openness about feeling that it's all she's good for would come across a little better. It is difficult to write somebody as unlikable without them going too far and being intolerable, it's something I'm struggling with in one of my own fics, so I'm not gonna blame you too much on that, but that is the biggest critique I can see reading this.

>>40934023
This is cute but it does move at like Mach 5, so definitely don't worry about giving stuff more time to breathe especially if you want this to be considered 'Slow Burn'

>> No.40961876
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what's a thing you want to include in a fic but ultimately cant because its inmersion breaking/autism inducing?
I really want to have some smoking in my fic, but a chuuba smoking is a no-no since that kills the vocal cords and i cant just ''lol lmao'' ignore it

>> No.40962785

>>40961876
Just write a Towa fic

>> No.40963427

>>40961876
you know, despite the dangers, certain people will still smoke so just have them say something like "I'm trying to cut down on it" and note that, well, they haven't
either that or you have them smoke just one stick a day, and have your POV character note how much willpower it would take to actually stick to such a habit (it'd be easier to quit altogether)

>> No.40964971

>>40959489
Punishing Axel for browsing 4chan.

>> No.40966604

>>40961876
I mean I can see chuubas smoking if they aren't in the 'Tokyo vtubers' setting. Though given that your autism is kicking in I take it your fic is set in that setting?

>> No.40966623

>>40959407
How do we fix Suisei?

>> No.40966968

>>40966623
Breast expansion

>> No.40967824

>>40959489
Tiny Bae crawling under the covers and waking (You) up by playing with your morning wood

>> No.40967943

>>40966623
Make her a home-cooked meal

>> No.40968117

>>40966623
Tie her up and mind break her with orgasms

>> No.40968448

>>40966623
Extensive chemical treatments to cure or at least abate her autism

>> No.40968456
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>>40966623
Why would you fix perfection?

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>>40966623
How does anybody get fixed?

Trick them into joining the military!

>> No.40968808

>>40966623
By breaking her and then putting her back together again.

>> No.40969378

>>40966623
By having her fall in love and then marry me and then move in to a cute little house than me and then share a big comfy bed with me and then have multiple (minimum of 10) loving children with me and then growing old with me and then dying happily of old age together surrounded by our many children and grandchildren and great-grandchildren and then being buried in a couples coffin with me and then being reincarnated with me in another world and then and then and then

>> No.40969955

>>40969378
That me? Me.

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>> No.40970116

>>40966623
by shitting in her mouth and then eating her shit after she digests your shit

>> No.40970601

>>40970116
What if she vomits it up before she can digest it? Is she doomed?

>> No.40970753

>>40970601
obviously you shit in her mouth again

>> No.40970899

>>40970753
Ah, of course. My mistake.

>> No.40973038

Where is everyone?

>> No.40973058

>>40973038
Getting drunk and looking at pictures of Gura's feet.

>> No.40973087

>>40973038
I'm at home preparing a TTRPG session.

>> No.40973089

>>40973038
Doing other things.

>> No.40973157

>>40973038
Writing

>> No.40973334

>>40973038
Rewriting after beta reading revealed that the part I feared was gonna be shit turned out to be, in fact, shit

>> No.40973341

>>40973038
I'm at work.

>> No.40973366

>>40973334
My condolences, anon. Keep on keeping on, my man

>> No.40973411

>>40973334
Out of curiosity, which of the 3 emails turned out to be the winner?

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>>40973411
He's not me, anon; I'm still writing my shit
Also I'm gonna read Paradise Lost later. I suppose I could lose a bit more sanity after ST

>> No.40973571

>>40973539
>I suppose I could lose a bit more sanity after ST
Did you rike it?

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>>40973571
Let's just say I didn't know a writer could be so proficient at describing the motions of fly genitalia and leave it at that

>> No.40973806

>>40973038
Watching movies

>> No.40975713

>>40966623
Feeding her home-cooked pastries until she's too fat to go about her daily life without your help

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>>40959489
impregnating the entire pantheon

>> No.40978211

>>40976116
Even Omega?

>> No.40978257

>>40978211
Say what you will about clockgen but the omega smut fics there were hot.

>> No.40978409

>>40978211
A mouth is a mouth.

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>>40973038
Just woke up. Might try to bang out a couple paragraphs of my current chapter before shit starts ramping up for the day.

>> No.40982060

>>40979765
Anon that literally says oyasumi

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>>40982060
I fucking know, but it looks more likes she's waking up for the day then the following part.

>> No.40982270

>>40982060
Translator's Note: oyasumi means goodnight.

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What are some fetishes you want to see more of in fics?

>> No.40984430

>>40984365
more impregnation
i want to see the hag's eggs see the light of the tunnel
i want to see the brats turned into real woman
i want to see girls getting bred

>> No.40984536

>>40984365
Consensual sadomasochism
Also, ABE GUIDE MY DICK I WILL IMPREGNATE THAT RABBIT HAG OR DIE TRYING

>> No.40984600

>>40984365
femdom without going ryona or yandere

>> No.40984899

>>40984365
Wakipai. Also while technically not a fetish, I want to see more smut fics (or just fics in general) with with animal chuubas, utilizing their more animalistic features and natures.

>> No.40984989

>>40984365
Watersports

>> No.40985935

>>40984989
which are good chubas for the certified hood classic of ''trapped in an elevator and she pees herself''?

>> No.40986206

>>40985935
I want to see Aqua running around looking for a bathroom and is too scared to ask anyone for directions and then just ends of pissing herself.

>> No.40986378

>>40973087
Based, hope it’s a good session

>> No.40986539

>>40986206
while Aqua isnt a bad pick, i would rather see a more confident girl get broken down by the humilliation
Suisei or Iroha for example

>> No.40986646

>>40986539
Iroha constantly denying that she pissed herself on the job despite standing in a puddle of yellow.

>> No.40986911

>>40984536
>Consensual sadomasochism
Same. Theres a lot of rape and enthusiastic vanilla sexing but little BDSM. Im hoping for more additions to the Collarverse at least, and maybe Sex with Hags or Hedonists Reckoning will get sequels with more BDSM stuff than just spanking if God is good.

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>>40959489
kiara is still fucking all of the jps, get writing lads!

>> No.40987037

>>40986967
Is she wearing Korone's T-shirt

>> No.40987271

>>40986539
>Suisei
This reminded me of that Suisei prompt about her crying because she pissed on stage during a live she put her heart into.

>> No.40987375

>>40987037
yes
https://i.4cdn.org/wsg/1673273042746910.webm
>>4909163

>> No.40987449

>>40987375
whoops wrong quote
its on wsg

>> No.40987523

>>40959407
>>40959573
>>40959752
someone needs to make a hitman mod for the strongest idol 47

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> gen 3 all together talking about touching dick
> Marine whispers sexual things
> Even Pekora participates in it
I'm eating good tonight

>> No.40990008

>>40984536
Fun fact, Pekora is probably gonna reach hag age this year or next year

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>>40990008
That explains my rising urge to BREED this rabbit.

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>>40986646
>collarverse Iroha holding it in until you, her husband, tell her its okay to wet herself

>> No.40990426

>>40990077
She's staring right into my soul

>> No.40990727

>>40990008
Man, the thought that someone that incapable of handling themselves is 30 makes me shudder

>> No.40991740
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>>40990727
Yeah it's a little uncanny, seeing a womanchild THAT old.

All the more reason to make her a proper woman by starting a family.

>> No.40992491

>>40984365
Gokkun
That lamy story broke me, i really want to see more chuubas chug semen

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>> No.40994723

>>40990080
>Be you
>Husband of Iroha
>Iroha has been drinking lots of water, so she can stay hydrated of course.
>Get trapped in an elevator with her
>Her legs tingle
>Tugs on your arm
>"A-Anon, I-I really need to go..."
>Everything is going as planned
>Talk to Iroha about it being okay
>Tickle her so she can't hold it in
>A warm stream of yellow gold runs down her leg
>She's crying
>You're beyond hard
>Lick her neck until she runs another river in her pants
>Hell, get your hand in her panties and massage her so you can apply pressure
>Finally she lets it out, her pants are soaked
>She's a broken mess
>Give her your jacket to tie around her waist so she can hide it
>Bring her back home
>Lock yourself in the bathroom while she bangs on the door and continues to make puddles under herself.

>> No.40994759

>>40994723
A good husband would drink it.

>> No.40995294

>>40990727
Doesn't she live on her own with her monkey?

>> No.40995422

>>40995294
She lives next door to her mother and I think Jill is at her mom's house

>> No.40995569

>>40994723
>conditioning Iroha into peeing in a bowlegged position

>> No.40996139

>>40995422
>We've had no news of the monkey because he's been too busy fucking pekomama
FUCK
HE'S LIKE TAIGA 2.0

>> No.40996762

>>40996139
So does this imply that Taiga fucks Mio?

>> No.40996774
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>>40996139
I imagine it's more of an everyday test of restraint that she doesn't ring it's fucking neck rather than she's having sex with it.

>> No.40997054

>>40994723
You are an evil person anon.

>> No.40997822

>>40959489
Earfucking Mio and cumming inside

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The guy who read Shrunken Troubles and said the writing was rough at parts, WDYMBT?

>> No.41000240

>>40982536
That is a most beautiful creature. Both of them.

>> No.41000543

Tips for writing third person better please?

>> No.41000773

>>40984365
Reverse rape

>> No.41000824

>>41000543
This might sound daft, but... read third person stories. You're in luck that they're how the majority of general literature is written outside of this thread.

Are you having any issues in particular when writing in third person? Being categorical about your issues will help in receiving better suggestions.

>> No.41001697

>>40992491
All the gokkun stories in the archive feature futanari. Interesting.

>> No.41002200

>>41000773
Who would be the most likely to do reverse-rape? I think Koyori.

>> No.41002649

>>41000543
try to visualize the scene like an eagle eye kind of view. Where are the characters? what do they see? do they have to walk to,say, grab a glass? One thing that helped me start working on third person is firing up a game, like gta for example, and try to write the scene im currently playing. You can also do that with a youtube video

>> No.41003059
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>>40959489
Fucking Lui's fat matronly bottom while she wears fishnets.

>> No.41003086

>>41000543
Be aware of the two types of 3rd person perspective: Limited, where you write as if you had a camera in a character 's head, and omniscient, where the narrator is all knowing. Most fiction is written in 3rd person limited.

>> No.41003123
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>>40959489
Having your fat bottom be fucked by a matronly Lui while she wears fishnets

>> No.41003160

Asking Lui where the station is because you are lost

>> No.41003472

>>40987605
Link? I wanna watch.

>> No.41003647

>>41003123
This, but she amazon presses you.

>> No.41004958

>>41003647
This, but you're both wearing fishnets.

>> No.41005113

>>41004958
This, but "wearing fishnets" is actually only a figurative term - you're actually both stark naked, but you snuck onboard an outbound fishing trawler and are literally having sex inside the fishnets.

The fishermen notice, and elect to dunk you both into the freezing sea water as both a practical joke and a punishment, but it doesn't stop you and you both canoodle whilst holding your breath.

>> No.41005215

>>41000543
If you're already writing in this thread's style of second person you're basically half way there to writing third person prose; all you need to do is to get used to writing with a named character.

>> No.41005793

>>41003472
I forgot but just search something like "marine pekora noel flare talking about something strange"

>> No.41007015
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How do you even write Lui anyway. Y'all talking about her like she is a mega dom, but each time I watch her she is a super dork.

Oh yeah, I forgot wg doesn't watch streams. my b

>> No.41007106

>>41007015
She's a dork and the closest you'd get her to be a dom would be something like this prompt from last week
>>40836719
>>40837706

>> No.41007259

>>41007015
Depends on the context. If she’s in Holox serious mode, she’s gonna be a manipulative, 5d chess playin as bad bitch.

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>>41007015
Being a dom doesn't necessitate also being a frigid evil ice bitch and isn't mutually exclusive with dorkiness. I dunno how to describe it, it's just something about her charisma and dependability. Even if she does let Choco shittalk her as a joke or scream at horror games or whatnot, it doesn't detract from my impression that she'd enjoy pampering a maso into an embarrassed mess

>> No.41007626

>>41007015
People are the same way about Botan. She's said herself that she's submissive but people think she's some crazy lioness who'll fuck 'em fifty times a day in the amazonian position.

>> No.41008012

>>41007626
Ever since before her debut people were talking up Botan to being this cool deep voiced Amazonian woman, and then after her voice was revealed and she was just another girl, people still haven't stopped coping about it

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>>41008012
I like her for who she is.

>> No.41011170

>>41009170
I wish she wasn't so old

>> No.41012034

>>40959489
Breaking into Pekora’s house and raping her mid stream

>> No.41016760

>>40973038
I've spent my entire saturday coding the hard backup job while ignoring all other responsibilities and I don't even know why.
I guess it's too chilly for my kung-flu recovering ass to be outside anyway.

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>>40999049
Oh hei that's me
What I meant was that some of the sentences could've been recast in a better way, but I found the writing good overall
The parts with the fly stand out, especially

>> No.41019100

>>41017721
He did a great job with that fic. Couldn't have made a better first impression.

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>> No.41025230

Which chuubas would be the most nightmare ex-girlfriends?

>> No.41025489

>>41025230
>Ame will fucking shoot you
>Kronii might lop your head off
>Fauna will send you explosive mail
>Mumei will watch you from a tree every night

>> No.41025731

>>41025230
Ignoring the ENshitters and their garbage chuuni lore, Matsuri is likely the HL chuuba most likely to be a psycho ex. She is emotionally immature and prone to breakdowns, with an extreme lonely streak. She also has a high libido, which anecdotally is indicative of a crazy girl to me

>> No.41026042

>>41025230
Ignoring wannabe Japanese and their delusions of grandeur, Reine is likely the HL chuuba most likely to be a psycho ex. She's not used to having people say no, can hire people to make your life miserable, and will get you back whatever the cost. She also has a high libido, which anecdotally is indicative of a crazy girl to me because I spend my free time posting on 4chan.

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>>41025230

>> No.41026189

>>41025230
Fubuki
No, really

>> No.41026238

>>41026189
Extrapolate

>> No.41026286

>>41026042
t. buttmad ENshitter

>> No.41026719

>>41026286
Isn't Reine HoloID though?

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>>41026719

>> No.41026893

>>41025230
Matsuri or Rushia are the obvious go to's. Maybe Polka? I feel like Noel, Lamy or Suisei would also be a particular pain in the ass.

I don't really think any of the ENs would work and I don't watch ID enough to give a good feel for.

>> No.41027383

>>41026893
Polka would just kill herself desu

>> No.41027510

>>41027383
All good, as long as she's out of your hair. It's them trying to get back together with you; that's the annoying part.

>> No.41027675

>>41025230
Rushia would be the most obvious answer. Bonus is she can change her identity multiple times just to get back with you.

>> No.41027731

>>41027383
She does strike me as being more in the "wallow in self-pity" camp but she could always teeter.

>> No.41028017

>>41011170
t. most homosexual man

>> No.41028222

>>41007015
I'd write her kind of like me (I'm also a dom and a dork).

>> No.41028274

>>41028017
She's only so chill because she's already in menopause. Why would you want a woman in menopause?

>> No.41028365

>>41028274
nut in her freely and excessively

>> No.41028429

>>41028365
And then what? Now you're stuck with an unfertile woman for life

>> No.41028461

>>41028429
that's the point babyyyyy

>> No.41028487

>>41028429
For someone who doesn't want to have kids, that's the best kind of woman you could possibly have.

>> No.41028975

>>41026189
Is this going by the Omelas fan sequel?

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>>41028429
>Now you're stuck with an unfertile woman for life
Why? She got your dick under lock and key?

>> No.41030546

>>41030374
Anon, women that age, and especially of that type aren't looking to fool around anymore. If you're not in it for long term, not only will she know, but she will not give you a chance either

>> No.41031068

>>41030546
Yeah I don't think I need the romantic advice of someone who sits on /vt/ all day. How about you just don't be a nasty-ass creep who advertises his intentions to everyone in a 5 mile radius.

>> No.41031336

>>41031068
rude

>> No.41031766

>>41031068
Hiding your intentions with a woman that old is what's nasty

>> No.41034147

>>41026893
>Suisei
Why would suisei be a pain in the ass as an ex? What's she going to do? Live her best life to try and get you jealous?
Then again having your sister also be your ex sounds like it would make home life rather hard.

>> No.41034506

>>41034147
>Live her best life to try and get you jealous?
Yeah basically.Being constantly passive-aggressive by sending you reminders of just how much fun shes having and what you're missing out on to make you come crawling back because she's internally seething on the inside that she got dumped.

>> No.41034776

>>40992491
How do you feel about Pomu in a cum jar

>> No.41035431
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41035431

Just had a crazy old man try to force his way into my apartment, glad I can relate a little to the girls I'm writing in Heartbreak Tokyo now.

>>41034147
>spoiler
The idea of Anemachi wondering aloud why (You) and Suisei are suddenly not close anymore despite being practically attached at the hip all your lives makes my stomach churn with dramatic tension. The reuniting make-up sex would probably be god-tier though

>> No.41035590

>>41035431
>Just had a crazy old man try to force his way into my apartment
Why didn't you let him in?

>> No.41036734

>>41035431
Yeah, me.

>> No.41037596

>>41034776
NTA but minigirls get my dick hard (for them to climb) so that sounds great

>> No.41040105

>>41037596
Are you going to let her climb out of the jar?

>> No.41040191

>>41035431
That spoiler sounds like it would end with the two of you fucking uncaring that Anemachi can still hear you.

>> No.41040302

>>41040191
The twist being Anemachi knew all along, she subtly trying to push the two of you back together

>> No.41040821

>>41040302
>Anemachi gets her siblings locked in a storage closet.
>Holds onto the key, staying silent outside as they argue the night away.
>Then suddenly it gets silent.
>Concerned she takes a peek.
>They were making out.
>She wants to interrupt but listens long enough to see that this is actually fixing their relationship.
>Now she's stuck watching her siblings fuck without revealing herself.

>> No.41041583

>>41040821
>Both of you step out next morning,
>Both sweaty and incredibly disheveled
>Awkwardly try to lie Anemachi

>> No.41043676

>>41034506
What if she was the one that dumped (You)?

>> No.41044128

>>40959489
Teaching Bae (or a zoomer of your choice) how to pirate.

>> No.41044357

>>41044128
This make me think of (You) leading Bae and a crew of zoomers on a speedboat to board and takeover Marine's Pirate Ship while it's on its maiden voyage

>> No.41045828

I'm feeling zesty today, gimme some fruity prompts

>> No.41045878

>>41045828
femboys

>> No.41045891

>>41045828
Suisei incest

>> No.41045967

>>41045828
Oviposition.

>> No.41046017

>>41045828
Marine consuming an entire crate of lemons after an order mix-up.

>> No.41046026

>>41045828
Fucking one of the JPs while forcibly teaching them English

>> No.41046361

>>41045828
Hag teaching cunny how to please (You)

>> No.41046412

>>41045828
Brutalizing the idiots Ame and Gura who have been neglecting their JP reps

>> No.41046800

>>41046412
hot

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>>41045828
Ame fucking Bubba and giving birth to his puppies

>> No.41046958

>>41046823
I did not expect to see that today nor did I expect to save it.

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>>41046823
god DAMN

>> No.41048573

>>41046361
... That could be good

>> No.41048993
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41048993

Series anons, doko?

>> No.41049090

>>41048993
Oh, y'know
around

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>>41048993

>> No.41049261

>>41049090
You sure some of them didn't drop dead already?

>> No.41049404

>>41049261
I can't speak for anyone else, but I'm not dead just yet

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>>41048993
HF's progress has been in a dire spot for the past month but I do want to write some more tomorrow when my weekend starts, if only a little bit.

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>>41048993
Kurokami's errand boy is going smoothly now. I MIGHT have to take a break from it after this current chapter though since I outlined a lot for the next chapter of HJ and I'm itching really hard to write more of it. It also hasn't helped that this entire week I've been flooded with images of Watame that fills me with a NEED to BREED. I'm dying from just having two WiPs. My hat goes off to you anons who can juggle multiple works while keeping your sanity.

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>>41049441
>The Lighthouse but it's Hololive
who's gonna be the holos at the lighthouse, anons?

>> No.41049971

>>41049840
Overated movie. Would make for a bad fic.

>> No.41049983

>>41049648
Will we eventually get to breed Watame in HJ?

>> No.41050115

>>41049971
I thought it was good, especially the visuals. I suppose the fic could be two holos stuck at a lighthouse on a remote Japanese island (accidentally left during a company vacation) and will have to wait until someone comes back... hopefully

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>>41049983
Of fucking course. That was half the reason I even started this series. I wanted to write the fun fantasy story I always wanted to tell AND get to score with the sheep...along with other chuubas.

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>>41050163
Based.

>> No.41050421

>>41050115
If no one rescues them then they can eat each other... out.

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>>41050421
Exactly.

>> No.41050767

>>41049840
suisei and miko
both are deraged and fruity
Also The captain's dialogue in Miko's retardspeech sounds fun

>> No.41050817

>>41050767
Imagining
>HARK!!
But as Luna or Miko is really fucking funny

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>>40959489
Bae wakes up one morning to find herself shrunken to five inches in height and becomes stuck in a Groundhog Day loop of predatory chuubas losing to their instincts and swallowing her when she tries to get help from them

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41051177

>>41050767
>"You don like me cookin?!"
>"You're fond of me lobster, ain't yuu?"
>"FAQ!"
>"HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKU!"

>> No.41052166

>>41051056
Aight, Time to do research on how many rat predators we have. Like I don't imagine a kirin or a sheep eating a rodent

>> No.41052971

>>41052166
Off the top of my head theres: Okayu, Botan, Lui, Mumei

You could write a funny segment where Bae is relieved to find Shion since she likely wouldn't try to eat her, but then the little witch just tries to use Bae in some concoction.

>> No.41052981

>>41052166
I mean deer have been observed to eat meat if they need nutrients. Which could be a good chapter twist; Bae finally thinks she's found her escape route but Fauna's too hungry and eats her.
Also makes me think of the story having end of chapter predator/carnivore facts to both explain the predators behaviour and to also act as a joke.
I.e something like Bae finally manages to escape the holoHQ and finds you, but then your instincts take over and you rape the minigirl, with the end of chapter infobox going something like; "Let's be honest, Who wouldn't?"

>> No.41053067

>>41048993
Working on an overhaul nobody asked for

>> No.41053192

>>41053067
which series?

>> No.41053358

>>41053067
Subjection?

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>> No.41056004

>>41055472
You damn hag, teasing a young man... pregnancy correction is needed...

>> No.41056147

>>41055472
No you aren't. And I still wouldn't fuck you even if you were the last hag on earth.

>> No.41056449

>>41055472
I think I'm the same age as her...

>> No.41056708

>>41048993
Doing great.
A few threads back I had a nice back and forth with some of my readers, and thus realized some of my series were better because I actually wanted to write them, as in, something to happen, while others were just exercises.
Eye opening.

>> No.41056710
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41056710

I just read the latest Cover High chapter and man, your writing always blows me away. There's always so much to your level of prose and the vast selection of adjectives, maybe even too much to the point where it gets overly purple. There'd be times when there would be a big paragraph of fancy wording and inner thoughts in between two lines of a single person's dialogue which I felt might have bloated the story a little and dragged on conversations. This is all completely subjective though, and regardless it makes for great reading for someone like me who struggles with vocabulary and writing descriptive, flowery paragraphs.
As the other Anons said I think the reveal of our transfer student's troubles felt a bit sudden, even if the implications and hints were there. Don't get me wrong, I lean towards main characters that aren't blank slates, but I just feel that some more build up and focus on that aspect of the story could have been put into the previous chapters. I don't blame you one bit though, it's fucking hard to land those, especially if you hadn't planned it from the beginning.
Other than those two minor gripes and maybe the Miko scene being a little rocky, this was a really well written addition to CH with some fantastic fluff. Pekora has never really done anything for me and was simply entertaining, but this whole series combined with her new(ish) outfit has made that opinion on her do a complete 180. The confession was great and I am eagerly looking forwards to the festival and this story's conclusion. Thank you for the meal.

>>41048993
Despite having a passable amount of motivation and drive, I've been on a road trip for the past few days and between my car getting towed and my friend clogging the hotel toilet, there's been little time to write and no time to visit the thread. Once I get back I should be able to work on one of my series, though I don't know which one and I'm half expecting all of my inspiration to vanish the moment I step foot back into my house. Each chapter is sitting at about 3k+ words and I have no idea which one will be released first. I also might have to catch up on some reading for the stories posted during my absence.

>> No.41057203

>>41055472
The first time I ever fell in love, as in, actually thought of a woman dearly and wanted to do a thousand things with her was when I was around 14 and she was in her 40's.
She was different from all the woman I had met to that point, she was honest, she was cheerful, it was like her spirit hadn't aged past 17, but that didn't stop her from maturing. We had tea together, we walked barefoot on the beach, I watched her read by herself by the distance
Last time I saw her was before I began attending college, I remember her asking me if I had a girlfriend. I usually hate that question because I've always been bad with girls my age or I only attract fags, but I gave her the honest answer
I told her that I wanted to meet someone like her. I didn't dare say that I wanted to be with her because I knew that was impossible. Why would a lady like her want to date a lanky teenager? She giggled and told me more or less the same thing that Marine says on that pic.
...I should put this on a fanfic.

>> No.41057274

>>41057203
That sounds viscerally bitter. I'd read the shit out of that.

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Fatfics up!

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>>41037596
Based minigirl enjoyer

>> No.41060289

>>41052166
Probably every animal a girl in hololive is based on would eat a rat if it was dead in front of it. Even Pekora.

>> No.41060486

>>41060289
People have misconceptions about herbivores. It's the food they eat the most, but if a rabbit or a deer sees some nice tender meat, you bet your ass they'll take a couple bites out of it. Same with carnivores, they also snack on fruits and plants sometimes.

>> No.41060534

>>41060486
The main difference here being of course that herbivores can digest meat but carnivores can't digest plants, they eat it to aid with digestion and it's pretty rare

>> No.41060997 [DELETED] 

guy dies cause snail walks on salad

>> No.41064350

Fanfics down

>> No.41064655

>>41052971
You forgot Fubuki.

>> No.41065501

>>41043676
I don't she'd give a shit in that case. If she got bored and dumped (You) then (You) might be bitter but that's it. No crazy ex scenario. Her seething is her "hates to lose" dialed up to menhera levels.

>> No.41066719

>>41064655
I wasn't sure off the top of my head if foxes eat rats. If they do, Polka is also included.

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>>40959407
Finally I'm done with V2 of the backup job. Around 400 lines of code to process a grand total of 1314 story links.
You can find the .zip file under the "1-15-2023" folder in the MEGA folder:

https://mega.nz/folder/hAUVVCgZ#KO1zaSeht1ICBbkHT7NtFw

There were 14 stories that 404'd since the last archive backup and I copied them into a folder.

Under "Stories" you will find "!WG - Hard Archive Master Index.html" which will serve as an index since the story names are no longer part of the file names, so it's very cryptic to find. I managed to implement some filtering nonetheless, so it's not as much of a pain to find the stories.

I also copied the code, in case anyone wants to take a peek. It's not perfect, but I had to do a much smaller number of manual corrections and story pulls than last time, so it's getting better with time. I'll take some time later to comment on it, because otherwise it's very barren of instructions.

>> No.41068843

>>41067533
Very nice, you are doing your part to combat the menhera author menace

>> No.41070509

>>40966623
You can’t fix someone that’s been broken since birth.

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>>41070509
you don't get it. I can save her.

>> No.41074384

Fanfics up

>> No.41074397

Fanfics left

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>>41007626
That confusion would make for a neat little fic

>> No.41076816

>>41075320
What would it be?
Something like Botan doing something innocuous but (You) start thinking she's planning to eat you?

>> No.41077927

>>41007626
>>41075320
>>41076816
>(You) frequent some common space with Botan (insert high school/college/work/whatever the fuck), dodging being around her because you find her scary and she has a reputation for being fierce and aggressive
>eventually ends up interacting with her unwittingly or accidentally
>turns out she's just a big dork and hagat heart, at least and isn't really unpleasant in the least
>start knowing each other better through casual conversations, strike some good chemistry together
>learn she just keeps up a tough gal public persona to protect herself from bullshit, feels relieved that she can mellow out around you
>cool level-headed alpha lioness in public, asks for hugs and headpats in private
>relationship ensues
>get to bed her
>still expect to get eaten the fuck out by her
>she wants you to tie her up in bondage and dominate her
>mewls and moans under you
>demands cuddling after

>> No.41078038

>>41077927
PLEASE

>> No.41078454

>>41066719
I'm more so referring to when Fubuki said she wanted to eat Bae.

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>>41077927
This pleases my inner S.

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>>41078454
I see...tell me more. How does she want to "eat" her?

>> No.41079069

>>41078610
She wants to put Bae in a "Hakos Burger" then gobble her up.

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>>40973038
On my three days off, instead of writing I played a fuck ton of Elden Ring for the first two and then today I'm feverish and in bed all day. I'll write...next time.

>> No.41081379

>>41080918
and here I thought I was the only one who had 3 days off and played Elden Ring instead of writing...are we...?

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>>41081379

>> No.41083437

>>41081576
you ever thought of making a dark fantasy fic to write? I came up with an idea during my run and once I finally start posting some fics I'll more than likely finally get to it.

>> No.41083554

>>41083437
That genre requires too much world building, I did make one once but it sucked so I threw it away

>> No.41083697

>>41083437
NTA but I do have a outline/snippet dark fantasy type thing buried somewhere. I like the ideas in it but it'd be a lot of work I'd have to dedicate to it.

>> No.41083855

>>41067533
thanks fatto catto

>> No.41083910

>>41080918
>today I'm feverish and in bed all day.
You have the constitution of a AIDS-ridden starving Ethiopian kid

>> No.41083994

>>41083554
I feel like depending on which chuba you focus on the lore writes itself. but that's just me

>>41083697
If I didn't already dedicate myself to Kurokami I'd be writing my Dark Fantasy. though with some anons having good ideas for prompts and other projects I'm more passionate about it seems like it'll be a while till I actually get to it, especially with my current rate. That said, I noticed I'm speeding up some the more often I write, so that's something

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>>41083910
I still wear masks and sanatize my hands when I get home so my immune system probably got weaker over the years

>> No.41084674

>>41081379
Plump sort ahead
Therefore seek grass

>> No.41084905

>>41084674
grass, o grass
Therefore grass, o grass

>> No.41085259

>>41083554
Can you give an example of dark fantasy?

>> No.41085564

>>41085259
From here or in general?

>> No.41085981

>>41081379
You guys too? First year we have MLK day off. Finally, something good to come out of the civil rights movement.

>> No.41086245

>>41085564
Just in general. I'd count the LoTR but I don't know what separates fantasy from dark fantasy.

>> No.41086387

>>41086245
Game of Thrones I guess

>> No.41086627

>>41086245
Healer isekai

>> No.41086706

>>41086245
>I don't know what separates fantasy from dark fantasy
Basically, take every form of drama that you may include in your story and then give it the most cynical and miserable conclusion possible. Then, cover all your characters in filth and make them edgier than Bismuth. Optionally, cover the entire landscape of your world in rubble and make about half of all trees burnt/dead.

>> No.41086775

>>41086245
Regular fantasy: a hero goes and kills a dragon
Dark fantasy: a hero goes to kill a dragon but it rapes him

>> No.41086910

>>41086775
My favourite part of LOTR is when Smaugg raped Bilbo then came all over the town of Dale, utterly destroying it

>> No.41086918

>>41086245
Nah LotR is high fantasy
Dark Souls, and Diablo are good examples of video games with dark fantasy settings
Berserk is dark fantasy
Warhammer Fantasy is dark fantasy
Basically it's a fantasy setting, but it would suck to actually live there

>> No.41087182

>>41086775
Wait, isn't that just Holofantasy?

>> No.41087313

>>41086387
>>41086627
>>41086706
>>41086775
>>41086918
Thanks for the answers!

>> No.41087422

Aren't most of the popular isekais dark fantasy? SAO, Overlord, Youjo Senki, Re: Zero, Shield Hero, etc...

>> No.41087505

>>41087182
Pretty sure that would be the holofantasy Pure black spinoff where I'm reasonably certain AA is planning on that happening.

>> No.41087702

>>41087182
It's a universe where your friend raping you is just magic being magic so yeah

>> No.41087763

>>41087422
Overlord definitely ticks a lot of boxes but lacks the hopelessness because of how powerful Ainz is, and Shield Hero maybe , but the others no.

>> No.41087901

>>41087763
Have you seen Youjo Senki?

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41088069

Are there even any series here in which the world the characters live in would truly suck to be put into?

>> No.41088093

>>41087901
Looking it up, it is officially classified as dark fantasy. I figured it was too modern for the fantasy classification.

>> No.41088317

>>41088069
UUUOOOOOOHHHHH VAGINA BONES

>> No.41089255

>>41088069
Holocalypse
possibly Menhera Wrangler, if you're anywhere within 100 meters of a chuuba

>> No.41089490

>>41088069
Subjection, holofantasy pure black, and arguably the hormoning.

>> No.41089973

>>41088069
holofantasy pure black sounds like a miserable world

>> No.41091954

>>40959430
Despite having Ina and Ayame in this fic there's only one pun as I'm not clever enough for puns. Enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ40a2hZn5jOhbKwAnwSiza5EEKxJYJLcm2CCk5eg9e_CkVImNIxf3qLFWDKj9lpfpOVyjNzzK1hfm3/pub

Tags: NSFW, Comedy, Ina, Ayame, Capybara handjob

>> No.41093383

>>41089490
>Subjection
You know that didn’t cross my mind but yeah. One side is enslaved or homeless, the other side pretty openly implied to be a pack of backstabbing sociopaths. Wonder how that series would have panned out.

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>>41091954
Pff, that was pretty good. Got a few chuckles out of me.

>> No.41094572

>>41088093
Scifi is a subgenre of fantasy anon

>> No.41094830

>>41091954
Is this the Mumei Rune guy?
Same feedback as last time, you’re either taking it too far or not far enough. Bear/otter/wolf/etc are funny because they’re all euphemisms for homos, but twink ruins the joke.
Alternatively, something about Ina not knowing that capybaras only have a single udder.

>> No.41094856

>>41094572
no?

>> No.41096015

>>41094856
Playing devil's advocate here but softer sci-fi and 'harder' fantasy basically merge into one genre outside of theming, like obviously they diverge the more they play into their genre but when the (space) witch is slain by a (laser) sword after they tried befuddling the hero with their vile (psionics)/magic the similarities do crop up.
For some reason this is making me think of a April fool's joke chapter for holofantasy that's just a shitpost pastiche of sci-fi tropes.

>> No.41096679

>>41096015
So Space Fantasy, like the Star Wars trilogy.

>> No.41096733

>>41096679
Dune is a better example. You have dragons, swords, shields, crossbows, except all modernized

>> No.41097139

>>41096679
Pretty sure the combined genre is more known as science fantasy as the combined genre is more like fantasy wearing sciency sounding skin.

>> No.41098069

>>41094830
Yeah, you call me MumeiRuneAnon or MRanon for short.

>> No.41098162

>>41098069
Sorry, You'll always be weirdanon2.

>> No.41099124

>>41098162
Stop deadnaming them

>> No.41101656

>>41098162
It was worth a shot :p

>> No.41101796

>>41101656
I'll start calling you MRanon! In exchange for you accepting $30.

>> No.41101887

>>41091954
I thought your fic was okay. Shame it was ignored.

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>> No.41103545

>>41101796
No, it's only a joke.

>> No.41103546

>>41103458
>Holofantasy, but Coco is a loli, and Anon is an oji-san
Cursed, but I'd read it.

>> No.41103557

>>41103458
So, you’re going to discuss anything at all?

>> No.41103670

>>41103545
I'm going to stop offering, then. It's been more'n a year and this time was entirely out of habit

>> No.41103910

>>41101887
It’s just another run of the mill fic. Nothing much to say about it.

>> No.41103960

It's that time of the thread again!

>> No.41104050

>>41096733
>Dune is a better example
Dune is Science fiction. If you want an alternative example that isn't Star Wars, then I would use Harold Shea series by L. Sprague de Camp and Fletcher Pratt

>> No.41104052

>>41103546
AA, really missed that opportunity when writing the mirror universe of pure black.

>> No.41104377

>>41096679
>>41096733
>>41104050
If you guys still care, then I would recommend looking up the Dying Earth Genre. It’s mostly compose of novels that are Science Fantasy. Gene Wolfe and his Book of the New Sun should be a good start.

>> No.41104406

>>41103670
all according to keikaku.
>>41104050
I'd call Dune science fantasy since gigantic sandworms, spice that delays aging, and space nuns that can choose whether or not they have a boy or girl aren't exactly realistic.

>> No.41104484

>>41104406
Dune is soft science fiction, which means its already not realistic. If you want a realistic Science Fiction, then you want Hard science fiction. That's more well known for its concern for scientific accuracy and logic.

>> No.41104645

>>41104406
>all according to keikaku.
I don't get it, dude. I would be fucking thrilled if you just ordered a pizza with it, or spent it all on coffee or blow, or even that you withdrew it just to wipe your ass with it.

>> No.41104835

>>41104484
>That's more well known for its concern for scientific accuracy and logic.
Yeah, and it’s fucking boring I don’t know how people can read it. Just authors fellatio themselves for skimming over Wikipedia.

>> No.41104897

>>41104835
>Yeah, and it’s fucking boring I don’t know how people can read it.
Speak for yourself. I think it's fucking great. I love reading about nanites and the workings of biomechanical augmentations. Deus Ex and Cyberpunk were great for that shit.

>> No.41105022

>>41104897
Deus Ex and Cyberpunk aren’t hard science fictions.

>> No.41105037

>>41105022
They have elements of hard science fiction in them.

>> No.41105152

>>41105037
Anon, for a book to be hard science fiction, the book, from beginning and end, have to be scientific accurate and logical. Just having elements of it doesn’t make it one.

>> No.41105193

>>41105152
That's just being pedantic. You know what I meant, so I'm not going to waste precious off time arguing with you

>> No.41105232

>>41105152
You sound like one of those pretentious pricks that thinks "hard fantasy" is basically just "the dark ages"

>> No.41105319

>>41104897
Anon hard sci-fi isn't about the specific tech it's about how hard the thing sticks to actual sciences which is why it's stereotyped as assholes in space subs shooting at each other.

>> No.41105339

>>41104484
I know that. Soft science fiction might as well be science fantasy especially in Dune's case because Star Wars lifted many elements from it.
>>41104645
I intend to make a series to that fic which if everything went right would've been released right about now but many things have delayed it and then I would've collected the monies from it. I don't like talking about fics before I start working on them. My apologies. So consider dammerung a free appetizer to the main course.

>> No.41105403

>>41105339
If you do ever find the inspiration to write a sequel, I'll hold you to that!

>> No.41105412

>>41105339
How the fuck are you planning on turning that into a series. Doesn't Mio die at the end of that one fic?

>> No.41105721

>>41105403
Cheers.
>>41105412
The series description would be: A race of extraterrestrial bugs harrass the girls of Hololive.
A lot of it is in my head already, I just need to type it out.

>> No.41105785

>>41105232
>pretentious pricks that thinks "hard fantasy" is basically just "the dark ages"
That's Dark Fantasy. Hard Fantasy is basically Lord of the Rings. You know, fantasy series that strives to present stories set in (and often centered on) a rational and knowable world.

>> No.41105799

>>41105319
This guy gets it.

>> No.41105993

New thread
>>41105818

>> No.41107603

>>41105785
Maybe I'm misunderstanding what you mean, but I wouldn't describe LotR's world (Arda) as "rational" or "knowable".
Gandalf has seen Frodo be unable to toss the Ring into the hearthfire at Bag End, and yet he is sure Frodo is best-suited for the task of destroying the Ring because Frodo has wisdom and moral character. The Ring is destroyed because Frodo's mercy towards Gollum and self-sacrifice have made him worthy of succeeding by divine grace.
Tolkien keeps the world, and especially its magical elements more similar to fairy story and myth than most equally elaborate fantasy (especially those with "magic systems").
And then there's Tom Bombadil, the intentional enigma too content with singing, strolling about and his wife to give a fuck about the Ring or just anything outside of his borders in general.

>> No.41108591

>>41107603
Anon, hard fantasy isn't about rationality it's about the author having worldbuilding autism and creating living, breathing worlds alongside their fiction.

>> No.41108643

>>41108591
Ah, that's a much better description. I'm not too big on detailed genre distinctions but that way it makes sense at least.

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