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Story recap! There... were Six stories posted in the last thread

Dont you love her madly? tags: NSFW, Pippa, abuse, non-con.:>>40321574

HoloJourneys: (From Rolling Plains to the Forest of Pomu) Chapter 15: A Mountain to Climb, In more ways than one: Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff): >>40343312

HoloJourneys: (From Rolling Plains to the Forest of Pomu) Chapter 15.5 Interlude: A Windy Day With a Water Spirit: Tags: Tags: (Watame, Polka, Nene, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff):>>40343312

HoloJourneys: (From Rolling Plains to the Forest of Pomu) Chapter 16: A Lesson Carried by the Wind: Tags: Tags: (Flare, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff):>>40343312

HoloJourneys Bard Tales After Midnight: At full peak with a half-elf: Tags: (Flare, semi-NSFW?, kissing):>>40343312

Koyori greentext: Tags: Koyori, Greentext: >>40350987

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

A Koyori clone, modified for an experiment to be as yandere as possible, has escaped the lab and is on a mission to kill the real Koyori and anyone who gets in the way of you and her.:>>40332909

Nabokov protagonist anon who is able to see Mori as a child when she comes to reap spirits, falls in love, and starts to kill people in increasingly more gruesome and creative ways to see her.:>>40357632

A fat, unwashed, hairy fatto catto is infamous in school for stealing girls' boyfriends. She's not scared of sex and is very upfront about wanting to fuck, which ultimately seduces the boys who are waiting for their girlfriends to feel "ready" before they put out:>>40399840

After Kiara finishes her Geoguessr stream she molests Mori while she sleeps.:>>40412146

>>40417345
This idea popped into my head a few hours ago while working on my main WIP and I had to write a quick piece about it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQX38K_OWF41TTcpzamciwwBYjWuYqV7xTRbV-2Zl_rm4nf97sVLWPGlQ0yc_ouveG9ZKcxHEtXKS6j/pub

Tags: Suisei, handholding, SFW?

>>40417316
Lewd coco.

>>40419037
It's cute but the editor in me can't help but point out that the prose needs a kick in the 'show don't tell' direction. I know it's a wip but it bothered me enough that it's probably worth noting down if you're planning on continuing this.

>>40419037
Lewd

Short but cute. That kind of coy affection really fits Suisei in my opinion. I like that this story is a kind of snapshot of their relationship. Suisei's possessiveness coming out is adorable. I'm a sucker for quiet moments or reminders of affection in the midst of chaos.

Besides some punctuation errors, I think you could have made this a bit longer. Suisei teasing you and showing affection as the both of you interact with other chuubas at the party, all the while you hold hands. I'm not really 100% sold on the sweat part, I feel like that its a bit much. Or that it could have been the "payoff" at the end, as I feel the ending lacks in weight.
I echo >>40425944 as well. It needs a bit of action and description to bridge some of the dialogs.

>>40419037
Jesus, that’s a lot of sweat but very cute regardless. Suisei is really bringing those stories home as of late - not that I complain.
Could’ve maybe used another once over for proofreading, but I have no gripes besides. Thanks, anon!

bump

Which chuubas wouldn't let you do anal no matter how much you begged?

>>40432981
I can't see Nene giving it up but also husbands are probably hardpressed for sex anyway

>>40432981
Aqua feels like she'd be the type that needs to get 'broken' into it.

>>40432981
any hag that needs to get pregnant.

>>40432981
Kanata.

>>40432296
Bump

Any goals you anons got the weekend? Outlining, brainstorming, writing, reading, wording. It's all a goal.

>>40437239
I'm going to facefuck nerd emoji Fauna.
I dunno. I need to do more. Probably will.

>>40437239
I'm going to try and finish my current work by the end of the weekend.

>>40417410
https://streamable.com/qn8r7w

Proving to a self-conscious about her age Korone that she's still as sexy and desirable as younger women

>>40437239
I'll probably see how far I can push my WIPs forward.
Also, this is unrelated but that image really makes me want to see a smut fic about bullying nerd fauna

>>40440138
If anything she's more desirable. I'd rather date a girl closer to my own age than some zoomer with incomprehensible taste.

>>40440475
>a smut fic about bullying nerd fauna
Man, using virgin nerd Fauna as your free-use fuck toy because she's too meek to say no/is too into somebody actually lusting after her is money. Like a dom version of the fujo chadcast stuff that makes gets me going.

Sadly I've emboldened to only make new WIPs if it's incest themed so it may be a while before I touch on either.

>>40434114
Really? Nene? The girl who shaves her pubes into heart shape and wears G-strings? The most sexually zoomer of the bunch? You can't see her doing anal?

>>40442796
ESLchama…

>>40443087
No, he's correct in this case. You've outright said you couldn't see her giving 'it' up, with it in this context being her asshole as a penis receptacle.

>>40443270
I’m not >>40434114. In fact, I never even disagreed with him. I’m just pointing out he’s ESL. Way to overreact.

>>40443422
So you're just some random faggot. Even worse. Regardless, you're wrong.

It has come to my attention that Fubuki apparently does countdown ASMR now

https://files.catbox.moe/5dujl6.ogg

>>40443753
I don't recall this from her most recent ASMR... although to be fair I probably fell asleep and missed it. I'm going to have to give it another listen.

>>40437239
I want to review the last 10th of FFC or so because I ended up never editing it, and after re-reading it again it's lacking in impact, so there's some stuff to improve on.

Sides that I have a lot to catch up on with real life stuff so probably not a lot of writing for me. Getting Covid set me back a whole two weeks. Also hopefully I can finally clip some video from my trip to the mountains a few months back and make a montage. Some good chase footage in there...

>>40440475
>>40441413
>make her skip class to blow you in the bathroom
>buy her skimpy lingerie that you make her wear under her school uniform
>make her walk around school all day with remote vibrators and a butt plug
>tie your filled condoms to her panties and don't allow her to remove them until after classes
>finger her at lunch in front of her friends

>>40441413
>Incest themed
You're Fauna's older brother who bullies her into becoming your own fuck toy at school and only at school until Fauna seeks you out on her own at home.

>>40449680
Kinda walked right into that one didn't I?

Don't fucking tempt me though, that idea kinda reminds me of this small doujin https://e-hentai.org/g/2236974/10f77bac69 I find extremely hot.

>>40450588
Earthquake we have a earthquake! Viuyuyu

>>40451059
...I don't know what that's supposed to mean

>>40452946
It's when the ground shakes due to seismic activity. Either get below a table or get outside if you can do so quickly.

>>40437239
Figure out how to make this whole story work fucking hell, coming up with a decent time travel story with few cliches take assloads of thinking
which is not exactly my strong suit

>>40453771
Anon take my advice.
Outline that shit first. Cliches suck but it's better to have a working idea that you can plot out to be better than to be writing it by the seat of your pants. Especially if you're going to be making a time travel plot more complex than ' go into the future/past and do x'.

>>40454827
Oh yeah my man, I did do an outline It's just that I feel the 'time loop' thing is rather cliche already. But if I can't think of anything better, I'll look at other works that did time looping well instead and see what I'll come up with.
Apologies for the lack of specifics; with time travel stories, it's easy to spoil shit

>>40454827
I still have no idea how to even do an outline.

>>40455352
Anon with time loops there's basically only two 'general' styles the 'groundhog day' loop of one event eternally being redone until a perfect ending, and the 'peggy sue' one jump backwards style where it's about trying to prevent what went wrong in the future from happening.
There's a lot of room to play around in that space but the concept is well treaded enough that not falling into conventions is probably impossible.
>>40457073
If you have experience making greentext it's sort of like that. Writing out a laconic series of events that you're planning to expand into actual prose later. It can also include stuff like character notes and other bits of planning you're doing.

>>40417410
A chuuba contracts you to impregnate her. You (being a male) gladly accept the chance to sex a cute girl. After a successful insemination she even tells you she plans on raising the child alone. Great! You just had how unprotected impregnation sex with no strings attached. You manage to stick around at least a little bit during the pregnancy. As you do so the idea of actually being a father starts seeming kind of nice to you. You talk to her about this and she flat out shoots your idea down. Make it real sad.

>>40457513
Yeah, that's the issue I have. It's like with isekai plots -- what do you do that's interesting that hasn't been done already?
Thanks anon. I'll probably won't go hard on the time travel mechanics and just focus more on characterization and the plot. I'll have to admit that thinking up something on the level of Steins;Gate or whatever is too cerebral for me at this point in time lmao

>>40457578
This prompt feels very 'Reine' for some reason.
>>40458029
Honestly being fanfiction is a boon here since being a character centered journey is pretty much the ideal for a lot of time loop stories so having a good collection of character to play around with is to your benefit here.

>>40417410
San buckbreaks Sana to earn the right to impregnate the other members of the Council

>>40458927
I don't think that's what buckbreaking means anon.....

>>40459034
But what if Sana has a dick too

>>40459175
San would have to magically turn into a southern white american

>>40458646
Essentially the reason I picked up fanfics in the first place -- the characters are ready-made. I just gotta be consistent with their characterizations (tl;dr more stream/clip/lore reps lmao)

>>40459336
Easy, he just becomes a white dwarf

>>40453771
There's time travel mechanisms that aren't overdone already. Like the paradox-free one where there's only one timeline that can't be changed retroactively, and every instance of time travel already leads to the events that are unfolding.

>>40461754
>stable time loop
well shit anon I was thinking of going for a multiple timelines scenario but that sounds interesting. I'll look into it. Thanks much!

Are you toiling?

>>40462250
Fair warning, that style of single timeline is even more headache inducing then the usual time travel explanations since you the author have to plot everything out such that any changes have already happened 'from a certain perspective' while seeming to not in others.

>>40462726
But there aren't any changes. Everything happens as it was always going to because you can't change anything.

>>40462726
Yeah, it's like in Primer. That fucking movie was such a goddamn headache to understand, though I got it... after reading a few diagrams
>>40463948
Well, to be more accurate, anon, there actually CAN be changes... it's just that they already happened because your future self caused them to occur.
It's a fucking headache, believe me

>>40463948
From a higher level it all makes sense since it's in a single stable loop, but from a story perspective you're going to have to set up the plot in such a way as to be deceiving and 'bootstrapped' so it's going to be a headache to write out and plan.

>>40464383
>From a higher level it all makes sense since it's in a single stable loop, but from a story perspective you're going to have to set up the plot in such a way as to be deceiving and 'bootstrapped' so it's going to be a headache to write out and plan.
Hm, I guess that's the most natural way to build suspense there. I like having characters from the future openly coming to the protagonist until the point where the characters from the future have to travel into the past again to do the same things they just did all over again.

Dic... uh, wordcount measuring time!

Show us your numbers, anon. Numbers numbers numbers! Done some good writing since last thread?

>>40468748
No.

>>40417410
Beating up Fubuki in order to steal her ball.

>>40469695
Beating up Fubuki in general sounds good to me. Not because I hate her, mind, she's dear to me. She's much too cute and cheerful to go unviolated.

>>40469695
(consensually)

>>40469977
Cringe. She should be beaten senseless and raped.

>>40470073
Based.

>>40469799
Gently spanking Fubuki instead.

>>40470080
SEVERELY unbased.

>>40470080
How does this help you steal her kitsune ball?

>>40470080
As children we all wanted nothing but candy for dinner sequel?!

>>40471201
He's dead anon.

>>40470427
She can't prevent you from stealing her balls when she's over your lap.

>>40470073
>>40470080
Well, different strokes for different folks (and foxes).

>>40472122
This is making me think of a bait and switch smut fic that seems like it's going to be setup for a spanking fic but once she's over your lap you steal her balls, throw her away, then stretch your wings to fly out of a nearby window.

>>40472526
is this a fly joke

>>40437239
I sent my work to a colleague and she asked me to put it in Google Docs so that she can read it without downloading.

Lost the ost/docx file, so I'm spending today reformatting it from a pdf to Google Docs.

>>40473895
*odt

>>40473895
Finger her, anon.

>>40473849
It is well established that flies lust after fox flesh.

>>40438511
>>40440475
Good shit! I believe in you can do it.
>>40444283
Glad you seem to be recovering, hope the reviewing goes well and you find the paths to improvement you want.
>>40453771
You can do it! That kinda shit makes my head spin but keep trying and you'll get there.
>>40473895
Sounds wild, it's nice you got a friend who helps proofread your work. I got a friend who does similar stuff for me, and it's been a lifesaver.
Good shit to wake up to. You're all gonna blast your goals this weekend.
I also want to write about nerd fauna now. Maybe that's the next small thing I'll take on after Kurokami's errand boy, which I hope to make progress on a little bit this weekend.

>>40417345

Cover High/Pekora Chapter 7

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSJTbIokofBkQpPXzmeZJxECYm87aH_bPMAsNCR-2ZJ94M4VaxC0NwhMjMSbd_tQyQRER5IvIvwRF9M/pub

Tags: Pekora, Multiple Chuubas, Fluff/Romance, Comedy, Mild Ryona

We're on the home stretch now. The next chapter will be the finale of the main story, plus a possible short epilogue. And the promised NSFW bonus chapter.
Special thanks to AA for proofreading again.

>>40477980
YOOOOOOOOO
Fucking cute dude. I loved this chapter.

>>40477980
What the hell, I thought the series was over after Chapter 6 and the Christmas special
Fuck yes, this is an excellent day

>>40479839
You either die a hero or live long enough to see yourself become the villain

>>40468748
Finally broke 1000 words on my wip. Slow going, and entirely my fault as I'm having fun writing the prose in a style that I'm not sure is going to work.

>Write 2k words
>Immediately lose motivation after brainstorming a hell of a plot.
Fuck

>>40481812
2k ain't nothing to sneeze at my man. Let yourself take a break and the motivation will come back to you. Or we can just beat it into you later.

>>40474101
She is a 2view vtuber who lives in another country--I'm not ...

>>40477980
bless your soul, will read it in bed later tonight. I need the proper environment to immerse myself and be able to properly gosling.
Review will follow.

>>40483269
Fingering in your soul

>>40483269
>this dudes got a 2view reading his fics
god damn son, you made it. I wish I even had a 1view that I knew was reading my shit.

>>40477980
>spoilered tag
Nani?

Fanfics up

>>40485034
NTA but don’t do it anon. Stick with admiring them from afar. Getting close will only make you realize that your adored 2 view is a high-maintenance broken girl like all the other BPD schizoladies out there

>>40490118
Who said anything about them actually knowing who I am? It would just make me smile to know people enjoy the stuff I create. And the fact they liked enough where they talked about it with someone. That's the soul lifting shit right there.

Bump

>>40417410
some kind of story about pic related.
Possible scenario is that (you) are the son of a wealthy businessman, living in a mansion with your two sisters and a whole brigade of servants. As nature has it, you are a healthy young man interested in the fairer sex no less than any other, so on some occasions, you might have snuck the odd glance or two at the clumsy maid Aqua and her scrumptious posterior, much to your sister Suisei's dismay. She promptly steals the maids uniform and corners you in a particularly dark corner of the house to keep. your. eyes. on. her. The family bloodline must stay nice and clean, after all.
Sorry not sorry, but I automatically think of Suicest when I see this blue-haired tease. It's almost a Pavlovian reaction at this point.

>>40493690
Whats with Suisei and Incest-
>spoiler
Well, fair enough.

>>40493690
Ugh be still my writing hand

>>40477980
MY HEART. THIS DAMN FIC WILL BE THE DEATH OF ME

From Marine's scene to Miko getting annihilated, to Don-Chan this chapter was a rollercoaster. An utterly fantastic rollercoaster. Great work!

>>40493690
>spoiler
You and me both man

>>40493690
Ok after no consideration whatsoever, I've decided to add this to my WIP list. I just want to know one thing.
Do you think she would be reluctant in doing this yet pressing on forward for the sake of the family bloodline or more than willing to whatever it takes to keep the bloodline pure?

>>40496139
I think Suisei would both silently and externally seethe at the fact her brother finds lowly maids attractive. She would also be pissed that Aqua's dumpy threatens to persuade him to mix with commoners.

>>40496386
The former seems like a good motivation to make any kind of sex with Aqua a problem even if Aqua can't get pregnant from it.

>>40477980
What a rollercoaster. I love how this chapter seemed to have a theme of people opening up, from Anon revealing how little he thinks of himself, to Marine dropping the pervert act and just being the kind, sweet, supportive friend, to Miko coming clean about her intentions, to Flare having a scene for herself in general, hell even Astel got a scene to open up.
But you know who didn't get a scene to open up? Moona.
Yeah, I see what you did in the last scene when she turns back and it's mentioned how her expression shifts ever so slightly. You can't fool me.

>>40496386
So a correction of some sorts, showing that a commoner couldn't even dream of comparing to noble like her.

>>40496139
I'd like to think that Suisei had always thought it an unspoken yet irrefutable given that you would end up together. I mean, this is about the sake of the bloodline, right? Anemachi is out of the equation because of "X" reason, so there is not even the hint of a chance that you wouldn't end up together.
That could've been the reason why she did not put that much effort into her relationship with you up to this point and focussed more on the arts and her hobbies so far.
That you now show interest in another woman - a maid no less - is so outlandish, so outrageous that drastic action needs to be taken so that you may realize that Suisei is all you could ever need - for anything.

>>40498651
Drastic action including Aqua being forced to wear a chastity belt?

>>40498102
I don't think there's any amount of correction Suisei can do to me if I'm hankering for big phat ass Aqua and her tiddie biggies. Suisei can't even compare in those departments. You might be able to build it up that way, like the fact that her brother is attracted to a body type she will never have makes her resort to something drastic and a little demeaning for a noble, dressing like the maid in question. While she is thrilled to shag her brother, she hates every second of pretending to be like some third class tramp.

>>40499453
she will dress like the maid in question, and start eating a lot to get curvier

>>40499050
you misunderstand. This isn't about Aqua. This is about committing outrageously incestous acts with Suisei in Aqua's uniform. I couldn't care less if the onion is locked in a storage room or doing the dishes while the good stuff happens.

>>40499560
tell me more.

>>40499664
But Aqua getting cucked makes fics better :<

>>40499703
fuck off architect
i like my girls fat enough to accidentally rip a pair of pants triying to force their massive ass in but i dont do landwhales

>>40500131
I don't get you NTRfags in the slightest, but I always figured that cucking a character like Aqua is the least appealing choice you could make. She's already broken and at the bottom. Building her up enough that the emotional devastation of getting cucked would have a significant impact at all seems like too much of an hassle.
Picking a character with at least some bit of confidence to shatter (like Towa in Sad, Genuine Smile) makes a lot more sense to me.

>>40501188
NTA but isn't NTR more about shattering your own confidence and finding it erotic rather than shattering her confidence?

>>40417410
As one of the king's most trusted and renowned knights, you are assigned to be princess Lamy's personal bodyguard.
The princess is a shining beacon of kindness, justice and love of her people, while possesing unrivaled beauty and class.
However, her achilles heel seems to be Alcohol, her drunken self not only being crass. unbecoming and pretty much pathetic, but also dead set on getting you to defile your liege
Will you be able to protect princess lamy decency while also avoiding putting a bastard inside of her?

>>40501467
Sounds like the only way to solve the dilemma is to elope together and then marry her.

>>40500716
That's fair enough
All women in my fics look something like pic related.
Blobs are disgusting however

>>40501188
I'm not an NTRfag, I just like Aqua being an idiot that others have to deal with. She'd be kind of confused and silly about it for humour's sake, not devastated.

>>40501941
you know what, i can accept that.
Im glad we could see eye to eye architect, please tell me more about your next project

>>40502151
Well I've always been skinny so I tend to go for bigger women. I don't need more bones in my life. I'm taking women so big that they'd straight up snap my neck by sitting on my face.
As for fics, I have one in the works that focuses on the chubby girl aspect, in which a fatto catto and you fall in love, except that you're cheating on your girlfriend while doing so.

>>40501413
Some enjoy one, some the other. Much like some prefer being a sub and others prefer being a dom.

>>40501467
Would Lamy shove alcohol up her asshole just to get drunker?

>>40504075
PSA to anons: please do not perform anal wine in real life, you can and will fucking die
Also don't be like that one retard that chugged wine off the barrel of a FAMAS and got lead poisoning

>>40501188
So in a hypothetical Suisei incest NTRs another chuuba who'd be the best one to get destroyed emotionally?
Fubuki? Towa? Miko? Sora?

>>40505574
>Foobs
>Towa
Maybe, but not quite
>Miko
Wouldn't really fit the fic unless you cuck her from Suisei
>Sora
Too pure, so perfect.
Think about this anon, what chuuba do YOU want to see smile the most? She's the NTR target

>>40505550
That sounds like something a /k/omando would do.

>>40504075
>Walk in your apartment
>Lamy is laying on the floor, a vodka bottle up her ass and a puddle of piss
>just another Wednesday
>>40505550
Yeah ingesting anything up your asshole is a pretty bad idea, just like anything related to weapons and fire near your body

>>40505966
>Yeah ingesting anything up your asshole is a pretty bad idea
What about semen?

>>40505660
Mio or Watame.

>>40506000
did i stutter? there is a reason people use condoms in anal sex

>>40437239
Shut up nerd

>>40505660
Honestly I think Miko would be an interesting pick. Like you said it would have to be you cucking her, not Suisei but I think it highlights the classism more.
While you might purely lust after Miko's body, she's deeply in love with Suisei who wants nothing to with her and wants to set her brother straight. Just like a love(?) triangle. Also when it comes to the fucking, it'll show that Suisei is all (You) need while cucking Miko, showing her that her love is nothing but a pipe dream.

>>40505660
Mori...
I dunno the deathstar connection makes it feel like it would work and imagining Suisei cucking Mori makes my dick hard but I'm not sure it would work on a character level.

thinking about how this cat's butt didn't get spanked enough. she should probably learn how to behave. thoughts? objections?

>>40507529
Do it. Discipline that cat.

>>40507529
i do not support animal cruelty

>>40507529
Make a butt drum out of that ass like you're playing in a death metal band

>>40502617
Ideal Mooner bodytype

>>40510457
Ideal body type for a handful of chuubas, the ones that you want to engrave your name in their hearts and wombs

>>40510606
Don't do this to me. Goddamn I love tummies.

>>40510836
need MORE fics with chubby chuubas.

>>40510836
>>40510969
All chuubs look cute with some chub

I'm good

>>40511738
Amen brother

Vaginas exude a large amount of heat on normal human women, let alone on certain female dragons, whose body temperatures would only naturally be much higher than a normal human's. If one were to approach Coco's bare vagina, especially if she was aroused, you would probably be able to feel the heat of it on your skin. The natural heat is also probably conducive to arousal in its own right. Much like a 15 year old going through puberty and getting erections at random, a side effect of being a dragon breed is probably often, unprovoked arousal. Who knows, it may even be permanent. Coco might literally be "in heat" at all times. On top of what may be almost perpetual wetness between her thighs, her naturally high body temperature probably makes it difficult for her to wear human clothes comfortably. But then again she may get off on the feeling of being wrapped so tightly, so to speak. The sensation of her wet vagina would probably resemble putting your finger into a bath of hot honey. The juices more viscous than normal and just hot enough that you almost risk a burn. Imagine the smell and the taste of her inner thighs after one match. Wet and sticky with a musky odor and all salty-sweet from the combination of her various juices... In addition, Coco's vagina may even be larger than those of human women, or at the very least anatomically different. The vaginal walls of human women only contract significantly during sex if experiencing orgasm. Due to her dragon nature, Coco may resemble some member of the known animal kingdom in that her physical control over her vaginas muscles is much greater. It would not be unreasonable to suggest that Coco could flex and contract the muscles in her vaginal walls to masturbate and in effect "milk" a penis for all it's worth. Her cervix may even be penetrable with little to no pain experienced, a sort of inverse "knot", a way to ensure that not one drop of her mate's semen will escape her.

>>40505966
stop being mean to lamy

>>40512319
>constantly sweaty dragon-wife who will just drag you into seemingly randomly and won't release you until every drop of your semen has been milked into her

>>40507529
This makes me think of that discussion last thread about Okayu cucking Sora. Because it made me think about her punishing both of you for cheating by spanking both of you.

>>40512319
>HFAnon hearing Coco rip the door off her hinges at 5AM

>>40512319
Hololive Geographic

>>40518858
I FUCKING LOVE THIS HAG

How much suffering can we inflict upon this hag? How much of it is self-inflicted?

>>40519937
>How much suffering can we inflict upon this hag?
Very High work for high reward. You'd have to try really hard to get into her life to cause suffering because she's built up a pessimistic acceptance of bad things happening.

>How much of it is self-inflicted?
Most of it.

>>40519937
I want to clip the tendons of those wings on her head.

>>40520265
That was hard to read, but I'm hard thanks to the fact that it's such good background info for Lui when the time comes. A bitch fueled by betrayal and scorn that wants to see the world burn and remade.

>>40518858
i love MoriLui
just two dorks who found a great friend in each other, both with shitty luck in love but great friends.
UNITY LOVE!

Get a random fic from the archive and tell your thoughts about it.
>Become Tarantula
Prose was compelling enough as I read it but the plot is kind of shallow due to being incredibly predictable for the concept.
Overall, it's rather meh.

>>40527791
>Just a little crazy
I've read it before, but it's months ago so I kinda forgot the whole plot. Rereading it again made me realize that a crazy GF like that is only hot in paper, but in reality I won't even get hard if she was swinging an axe to me as a greetings.

>>40527791
>Lion's Den
In case you forgot what AA looks for in a woman, Botan in this is a little unhinged and obsessive, and a little violent too. It's short, but it's basically just one scene of Botan declaring ownership of you and it's pretty hot.

I rate it one and three-quarter Tsavo Man-eater's out of two

>>40527791
>Anthology of Sapling Greentexts and Shitposts
I fucking hate sapling shit so much, its not funny, its not hot unless you are a flaming homosexual and the mommydom they shill so hard its nonexistant because Fauna stopped triying to be the dommy mommy years ago.
Fuck you saplings

>>40529201
>but in reality I won't even get hard if she was swinging an axe to me as a greetings.
Well obviously you wouldn't get hard.
You'd be dead

>>40527791
> Matsuri's Matsuri
Wholy unamused by it. The reasoning for Anon doing it was weird and felt off character, Matsuri doesn't feel like Matsuri, and something about the writing style rubs me the wrong way. Stopped reading somewhere around where it turned into blatant pseudo-rape.

>>40493690
>Suisei notices your eye-fucking of Aqua doesn't stop even after you two started having a regular sex-life
>Comes to the conclusion that you probably just have a maid fetish so she has her own custom maid outfit tailored to wear

>>40531806
>it turns out that you're not into maids
>you're just retardsexual

>>40532060
Wow, he's just like me!

>>40532060
Suisei pretending to be a retard to feed your fetish sounds good too, especially since she'd hate to do it. She does it all the time to mock Aqua, but actually having to it unironically would make her seethe.

>>40530627
Exactly my point. Imagine having to remember the attack pattern of your own gf like she's a souls game boss or something, with each day she add a new pattern to it too

>>40532060
I like my low-IQ women safely in Bimbo territory, because plain low-functioning autists are not attractive to me.

Back in high school there was aDramatic Arts class I took, which was terrible class in hindsight because the teacher kept forcing me to perform with the Spec-Ed kids in it to carry them to a passing grade, and one of them was this really low-functioning autistic girl who was apparently obsessed with me. Another girl I was friends with in that class took the same bus home as the autist and told me that she'd just talk about me for like 15 minutes straight every day, and constantly ask clearly personal questions about me that my friend was not comfortable answering. The autistic chick wasn't hideous or anything, but like you could not hold even a relatively simple conversation with her so it was very uncomfortable going to that class.

>>40529671
Dont call me out like that...

>>40527791
>It has been "0" days since Haruka Karibu Fucked The Timeline
This is technically competent and plucky, but I can only imagine this is supposed to be part of something more.

>>40537555
Sounds cute. You made a poor choice passing on her.

>>40537555
And you didn't hit that why?

>>40537555
I realize this actually happened to you but a fic about carrying Aqua and a supporting cast of dumb chuubas through drama class sounds like it would be a fun romance/comedy fic especially since I could see it ending on a big damn kiss as the two of you perform the lead roles in a plot relevant production.

>>40540303
>>40540485
Ignoring the moral quandary of fucking someone that mentally deficient, the last thing I needed when I was 16 was the stigma of being a retard-fucker. I was not being hyperbolic when I called them Spec-Ed kids, that and any Religion classes were the only ones they shared with the general student population.

>>40540597
That's actually a pretty nifty idea yeah

>>40533688
This is probably out of scope for the suicest but this makes me think of (You) corrupting/bimbofying Suisei to be your kind of retard as she slowly starts hating playing a retard less and less from your manipulations.

>>40541432
As a professional potato peeler I can tell you for a fact that the pussy grip strength is wild. You missed out.

bump

>>40549145
bump

>>40417410
Getting raped by Mumei after you, all accidentally, repeatedly interrupt her attempts at masturbation

>>40549950
Genuinely what is her appeal? It's never clicked for me.

>>40550505
Low level/cute autism combined with a good singing voice and decent synergy between her character concept.

>>40550620
Acceptable. Thank you.

Be honest. How many of you have paid actual money for a 4chan pass?

>>40471749
I have posted like four new works this month alone, what in the blazes are you talking about

>>40552543
me
you arent gonna get many answers during indog hours

>>40552543
What feels like the entirety of Taiwan is rangebanned. I have no choice.

You ever go back to your old prose and think about how better you can do it now?

>>40555136
We've got a Taiwanese national browsing this pokey smutwriting forum?

>>40556021
Yeah, it feels good. Imagine not growing your skills

>>40552543
Fuck no lol

>>40556759
why not
support hiroshijew anon, don't you love 4chan? it'll die without you, now post your credit card deets

>>40549950
Seconding this

>>40556021
Every goddamn time. I've gotten better but not much. But improvement is improvement. Brick by brick, tock by tick.

>>40556021
I think looking back at it like that just shows how much better you got anon! keep going and you'll get even better in no time at all

>>40556021
All the time.

>>40556021
Does it count if it's within the very same chapter you're writing

>>40562436
If it's not done yet, can't you just go back and change it?

>>40562535
ofc but it's more like "shit, I should rewrite all of this" several times over

>>40562436
Kinda? Like that other anon said you can at least still edit it.
In fact a lot of my recent writing sessions have been going back over sketchy prose and cutting off shittier sentences while adding in more detail. Though it usually involves a quick session wonder why I though it seemed good in the first place before the editing starts.

>>40562972
All part of the process. At least you caught the things you're not satisfied with before you posted the story rather than after.

>>40556021
Yeah, but it's precisely one of the parts I like the most.

Is there a lesser known/appreciated fic in the archive that you like anon?
Say something about it, maybe the author's still in the thread.

>>40566909
I Thought you Wanted to Dance
Despite being very short, it has some of the most compelling characterization in the entire achieve.

>>40477980
alright, review-time as promised!
First of all, I really really liked that chapter. Cute and fluffy as expected. All interactions involving Pekora were on point and I liked the clash with Mikochi as well as the party-scene.
However, I do feel like the "talks" with the various members of the crew (especially Marine and Astel) dragged on for too long. They followed a similar pattern to one of the previous chapters, where everyone got their chance to "talk it out" with Pekora, except it didn't really work as well this time. With Pekora, the talks were guided by the special inter-character relationships - it felt as if each pairing had their own set of challenges to overcome.
In this chapter, everything centered around (you) suddenly turning into this basic-ass MC with trust/abandonment issues, where everyone has to pat you on the back for half the chapter and tell you it's okay.
Don't get me wrong, I like it when (you) are not just a blank slate to self-insert into, but to me you had already developed anon's character well enough through the chapters that these "talks", where every flaw just suddenly gets explained away by "le ebil bullying in the past", actually felt detrimental.
Maybe that's why I liked the part with Flare the most among them all - that one was actually about something of sustenance, mainly the conflict with Miko.
On a different note, the way you write dialogue is *mwah* - chef’s kiss. The interactions flow superbly and the banter is witty and relatable. The way you describe scenes is good, but you sometimes throw a lot of adjectives around, making it feel as if you are so dead-set on painting a vivid picture that the text can feel quite flowery and… pretentious at times. That could just be my personal preference, though.
All-in-all a dope fucking chapter, I’m looking forward to the next one! Especially the NSFW bonus chapter, hehe

>>40568382
Yeah that's fair. I'd been dropping implications of (You) not having the best social life prior to the story ever since chapter 4 and figured I should address it at some point. But the execution was admittedly sloppy. I could have spread it out better over the previous chapters, or just left it implied but never elaborated upon. I am not a clever man. I'm glad you still liked it though. I'll try to make the 'payoff' at the end worth the long wait.

>>40570496
I want it to smash cut the second he cums inside her to him waking up in the morning as his thirty daughters storm his and Pekora's bedroom.

>>40571561
So this is how it starts.

>>40568090
Oh man I remember reading that.
That fic had the best integration between plot and smut in its climactic smut scene. Really hope that author comes back and runs with the sequel bait ending.

>>40571561
I do not endorse teenage pregnancy.
Fast forward about ten years, however...

>>40572196
I know this was the thumbnail for a stream but that image is making me imagine the next 'panel' being Pekora in a stereotypical cardboard house going "It was supposed to be the Year of the Rabbit-Peko!" while harassing bystanders walking by.

>>40572516
I want him to meet Pekora's mom and immediately lose his mind.

>>40573460
You've been reading AA's peko oyakodon prompt, haven't you?

>>40574234
Doctor...I am AA. After seeing his reaction to Pekora's outfit, I imagine seeing "Pekora but more mature in every way" would probably cause a minor short circuit in his awakened hormonal brain. It'd be funny. I'm not saying he'd try to, y'know...but what do I know.

>>40574567
O-Oh.
Could make for a fun ALT episode...

>>40574567
>He still has Don-chan on when he goes to visit Pekora's house
>As soon as a horny thought about her mother crosses his mind Don-chan begins to strangle him

Fics that have the childhood friend trope?

>>40576514
Out of the Blue

>>40568090
>>40572309
Thanks for remembering! I'm still around and active, though I don't really have plans for a sequel aside from a general idea that even still I'm not all that sure on.

>>40576514
Petting your fox

>>40576514
Petting Your Fox. It's fantastic read as is, but it's (at least for me) an enhanced experience thanks to the Childhood Friends trope.

I love MatthewAnon's works, I hope he writes more like this.

>>40529978
if you think that's bad you haven't seen the subhuman Risu spammers who've turned those threads into one-sided gay rape roleplay

>>40417316
I'm not a writer but thanks for the beautiful Coco art

>>40579436
DiSmaSSD is pretty good yeah

>>40579436
Readers are welcome as well, if you're curious :)

>>40579871
>that bit of pudge
AAAA

>>40556021
Yup, even with my most recent story. I try not to go back and change anything though. Fall for that temptation once and things will never be the same

>>40552543
Moi. I've got two, actually.

>>40574936
Two for one special

>>40432981
>this request
who the FUCK does this and how fucking desperate are you

>>40573460
Become Pekodaddy.

>>40595079
I HATE SUBALUNA. Unhand me, and get away from my princess, you filthy animal!

>sometimes think about writing Luna
>remember in any spoken dialogue I would have to spell out all her fucking baby speak.

It's fine for a quick joke, but I would want to tear my head off after a couple pages of that.

>>40595484
Man, thinking about it there really isn't any good alternatives to writing out Luna baby speech.
'Official' hololive subs dodge doing it unless it's part of a joke but there is so much lost from not writing her dialogue like that, that it's like writing Miko without her having a weird accent.

>>40595484
I don't have a problem doing it but people here call it obnoxious and hard to read so I don't do it anymore

>>40417316
god I love this bitch
I miss coco

>>40595484
Its your fic bro just dont.

>>40596848
What fic did you write it for?

>>40596848
In addition to it being painful to write, I also imagine it being hideous to read.
>>40596903
>>40596484
The only alternative I could think of, is to establish it as merely an act in front of her knights or subjects. Some bullshit about the law of her kingdom and its princess must speak in that way. Whenever in foreign company, she can talk normally. This princess is damn cute enough where that might be the route I take at some point.

>>40597485
I mean in theory, in a more realistic setting (or as realistic as you can get with the /wg/ default of Tokyo vtubers) you could also play it as an act she only drops around you as she gets more comfortable around you. Since that would let you play it out for comedy while still having Luna speaking normal when it's time for dramatic shit to happen.

I was triying to brainstorm this concept but i just cant get it out of the ground, so if any of you wants to iterate on it.
>Anon, the son of a lower duke, gets thrown into an arranged marriage between him and [Chuuba] to strengthen an alliance
Initially i thought Mori, with the story being about her being treated like shit by others because she doesnt have blue blood, but aside from getting drunk together, i cant make it work
Then i thought lamy for a bit but same stuff, and im just lost

>>40600675
Mori seems like an easier chuuba to put into this role. She's in a constant inner conflict between wanting to be the person she really is on the inside, and trying to show the world more of what they expect her to be. She also likes to be extremely crass at times but was often chastised for it. While the political marriage is something she despises, she does it out of forced duty, and starts off by getting as winedrunk as possible on the off chance the arranged husband will just leave her alone. Pretty good jumping point for bonding and trying to break through the defenses she's built.

>>40600675
Why would (You) get married to her if she wasn't from nobility?

>>40599624
Aki ordering me to wait outside the bedroom while Mel vigorously porks her all night with her massive futa dick

>>40601052
>Anon's dad is a general in the revolt, while they manage to take power rather easily, they need power and influence quickly, or the enemies of the kingdom will act
>So anon is to be married to the lady of the Deadkeep, Calliope of the House Mori.
>Of course, that's the official story, in reality the general wants the power of the Deadkeep, and since none of the nobles want to marry the daugther of a commoner-turned-into noble, its up to his deadbeat son to be useful for once
So the marriage goes through because the Deadkeep is a shithole in need of commerce and allies, but Mori isnt stoked because she thinks anon is just a shitty blueblood
>>40601211
People could buy or kill their way into nobility, bourgeoisie people also exist, which is why i think making Mori the daughter of a knight who married into a merchant family could make her ''a commoner''
Also if someone writes this, make sure to mention that ''She has the manners of a common whore but the body of a luxury one

>>40601817
>anon has to marry mori
>his dead constantly calls him deadbeat in both their presence
>mori eventually uses this as a loving petname for anon

>>40600675
I think the thing you're missing is an 'act one' plot to have the characters act on because the vaguely fantasy setting arranged marriage thing kind of needs some other crisis or event to push it beyond the initial state.

>>40601817
Dowry must've been massive.

>>40601817
I kind of like it. If i were to write it, i would write her as a bitter drunkard that spends her days in her fortress because she dislikes the political games, but also cares for her people.
Could make a decent story about doing the right thing despite being hated.
Also anon putting a few kids inside of her might turn her into a beloved queen

>>40419037
Cute

>>40417410
Giving Ina a nice welcome back

https://files.catbox.moe/w4uoq0.png

>>40608075
Why was Fubuki eating cinnamon rolls with her feet??

>>40602366
Why doe she have to get such hot outfits...that dress is so pretty.

>>40608075
abayo chocoball

>>40608738
The compromise between what Yukisame wants to draw and what Mori would want to wear happens to be at a pretty good point.

>>40608187
How many capybaras do you think she jerked off?

>>40609891
Eugh...none? What a disgusting thought. It's like that one time somebody brought up the idea of snuffkin fucking moomins it's just a bad conceptualization

>>40609844
Eyes rolled back flushed Mori has been a consistent weakness and this is no different.

>>40610099
Disappointing

>>40609844
It could probably be integrated as part of that inner conflict mentioned here >>40601052 with the fancier dresses being representative of what the outside world wants her to be and like a fantasy version of her alt outfit representing her rebellious nature (perhaps with it only being shown/described when she's sneaking out of the castle?)
They could even represent the 'synthesis' of those two positions by way of her having a bit of the outside outfit in her inside outfit or vice versa.

>>40608738
i love mori's outfits. She always looks like the middle point inbetween a tryhard and a slut and i love her for that
Also, 3/4 outfits show armpits and that's a damn good thing

>>40610738
Hell yeah. May not care for her beyond the realm of "I want to abuse every inch of her body with my dick" much but damn if that desire isn't pretty strong.

>>40610099
Welp, time to google capybara penises.

>>40611576
why?

>>40611576
It looks like a degloved fat finger, half of it has more tissue than the other. Odd looking, but pretty average by nature's standards

>>40614985
is that disappointment i sense?

>>40615157
If I'm to be honest, there are some cool/fun/interesting looking animal dicks out there, but Capybaras are definitely not on my list of animals I want to imagine women copulating with. But hey, if Ina said she jerked some off, that'd be fine by me.

>>40615303
out of curiosity, what IS on your list of aninals you want to see women having sex with?

>>40615430
animals too

>>40615430
Idk it's not something I find myself thinking about often. My off the top of my head answers are just stuff like dogs, dolphins, horses, boring stuff. I vaguely remember there being an animal who's cum pressure is so strong he'd turn your organs into a slushie if he came inside, now I'm not sure if that was a whale or something else, but that sounds like a potentially very interesting to watch game of deadly pull out

>>40615925
what the fuck.

time to fuck my google search history

>>40600675
I've been thinking about what other chuubas really fit into this/ would be interesting for the concept.
>Ayame
Wouldn't have the 'objecting to the marriage' aspect but having her be an actual Oni princess might be interesting; especially since you can probably have SENPAITACHI be her kemono attendants.
>Towa
I think it would be cute since it would actively do the gap moe thing of Towa having to play the part of the devil princess all the while showing her normal kind self outside of the role she's forced to play.

>Coco
Would probably be very fun were it not for the inevitable comparison between another fantasy series starring Coco as the main girl. Even if the dynamic would be much more different than the one portrayed in holofantasy.

>>40614985
Sounds pretty par for the course for a mammal. Primates and equines tend to have the weirder looking dicks.

>>40616392
When I think mammals I think red rockets, thus capybaras subverted my expectations

Operation: 'Turn an outline into a greentext so I can post it and forget about it' is a-go!

>>40417410
Just had a dream. Fuck, I’m goslinging so hard rn.
>You are a stray in a big city. Orphan or something.
>Find an old abandoned multi-story carpark where you can get away from the bullshit
>hang out there regularly, one day a girl shows up. Her name’s Towa.
>shesjustlikeme.jpeg
>you talk, mainly about your plans for the future… how you’ll hit it big one day
>she suggests you’ll meet up there regularly. You tell her to be your guest - you’ll be here every sunday anyways
>she comes by. You hang out - talk, laugh
>There’s a stray cat that you take care of and play with
>Years pass, you finally find a job in *insert humble profession here*
>Towa comes by less regularly. She apologizes profusely, telling you she has something big lined up.
>Tell her you understand. Then…
>cat dies. Towa is devastated.
>She stops coming to the carpark. You don’t.
>Soon after, building’s due for demolition. Apartments supposed to be build there.
>Towa is a star now. An idol. You’ve seen the posters in the subway.
>Decide to go there for onelastride.mov
>She’s there. Top floor, hair blowing in the wind and shit.
>Years later you buy an apartment where the carpark once stood - together.
>You have a cat, too.

>>40620373
>She stops coming to the carpark. You don’t.
>Soon after, building’s due for demolition. Apartments supposed to be build there.
>Towa is a star now. An idol. You’ve seen the posters in the subway.
There seems to be a real big unexplainable jump here that you kind of need to glue together since it seems like it's the setup and the ending but without an emotional climax or point to connect it together. Yes I know it's just a loose outline made up by a dream but how'd you connect the two points together?

The story you're looking forward too WILL come out.

>>40627842
I know but not until February, or even later if he gets addicted to another game

>>40417410
Mori goes over to Inas hotel expecting to get to hang out and nerd out only to realise by hanging out Ina meant “a week of reshaping Mori’s guts and using her as a onahole for the 2 foot tacock. Bonus points for stomach deformation and mind break.

>>40627977
What is it with Ina and being Futa of myth?

>>40628406
She already has tentactles and dark powers.

>>40628406
It's more of a case of there's nobody really else that works. The long dong is a good contrast to her petite body. and combine that with her hidden S tendencies (Or the rrat that she has anger issues) and you got a good combo.
Other myth members (besides Gura, who is the other futa target) are unironically too submissive and breedable

>>40624286
I suppose you could make that the reason why she comes by the carpark less and less frequent before the cat dies?
Like you said, that would be a plot point the author would have to tie together, should someone ever decide to pick it up - I just really needed to get this out of my system before I forget about it, like it usually happens with dreams

>>40627842
The author already confirmed that he's not writing a sequel.

>>40630005
Sounds like you'll have to do it yourself

>>40630005
He is but its a story you aren't even interested in.

>>40630005
Just make up the sequel in your head, then as a joke write it over the course of a couple weeks.

>>40630073
Why would I do that?

>>40630181
So you get the story you were looking forward to - and in a way that suits you, even!

>>40630205
But I don't write. So, again, why would I do that?

>>40630254
I've given you a good reason to, if that's not enough to motivate you to do something that's your issue. Sorry.

>>40630181
To spit in the face of the author that refuses to write a sequel.
They've had it too good thinking they can't get their fics hijacked.

>>40630292
>They've had it too good thinking they can't get their fics hijacked.
Hmmmm.................

>>40630303
What series are you thinking of hijacking anon?

>>40630399
I dunno. Yours, maybe.

>>40630625
Oh no, please don't write a sequel to a story of mine! I would hate it so much!

>>40630862
Oh, you would? Well, maybe not, then. Perhaps another time.

>>40630971
>anon only hijacks fics if the original writer approves of it
Based

>>40630971
Very respectful, thank you

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>>40633639
You know we're near the bump limit, right?

>>40633639
Yeah, Anon, six more post until a new thread. Might as well had let it die.

>>40633734
Four more posts now.

>>40633639
You really couldn't have let the thread die?

>>40633639
Any point for why you did this?

>>40633776
One post left.

>>40509745
I'm thinking I'm gonna go for a mixture — butt drum for the fun of it, then a proper discipline session.

fucking retard's not even hiding it anymore

>>40633975
Why do you care? Don’t you already Sage these threads do to your psychosis?

New thread
>>40633926

>>40633975
It's disgusting how blatant it is. This oughta change.

>>40633975
Why would you? This board has no moderation. Unless you post a chuuba with some spilt milk on her, then you're Satan and you get banned for 5 years. Who cares if the board is unusable 99% of the time? The faggot could use a trip and be spamming "hehe penie" 500 times over and never once be banned, have his post deleted, etc. The moderation is fucking ass and 85% of the report reasons are never enforced unless it's /hlg/.