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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>38755154

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Hot, hot summer: Tags: Shishiro Botan, fluff, slight NSFW, slightly /ag/:>>38771082

Auntie's little secret. Ch. 2.:Tags: Fubuki, NSFW, /ss/, Grooming, Fluff, Dark:>>38846508

Mio greentext: tags: Mio, Greentext:>>38780283

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

getting caught in the middle of the kemonomimi revolution:>>38771713

as sort of an extension to the NTS Lui cuck fic except Lui takes (You)--her husband out on a date and shortly after she leads you to a love hotel where you and Lui have vanilla sex.:>>38784044

Fubuki pulled your pants down in front of the entire office as a joke:>>38786953

This kemonomimi petplay discussion has gotten me to dig up that Kemono Nene prompt that was stuck in my head:>>38790546

Going spear hunting with Vesper.:>>38799738

Suisei's rags to riches storyline has her finally get into an idol company despite the many prior failures, and even managed to convince Cover to let her in without a rebranding. A giant outlier in the industry. How she did it is by learning the tools of the trade. Bribery via sexual favors.:>>38807696

Myth gather at Inas grave to pay their respects:>>38817250

Bae getting mouthraped by Mori. Extra incest and a sprite please:>>38822710

Teaching Mori how to play Bloodborne then beating all of the bosses for her.:>>38826907

All the hags were turned into lolis! (You) have been tasked with watching them while the other holos work on a cure!:>>38838050

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>>38868641
>mori thread
Dangerously based

>> No.38869523

>>38869113
It's not really 'based' because it fits the discussion of the previous thread. Stop misusing words.

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>>38846508
It's an interesting chapter but the strange way it shifts perspectives within the same scene kind of fucks with immersion. Like it has a good skeleton of events but the execution kind of ruins it. It's like it can't decide whether a scene should be in Anon's perspective or Fubuki's and gambles that having it in both would work. You really need to pick a perspective for a scene and stick with it, this 'hybrid' third person/second person within the same scene just doesn't work even if the narrative is interesting enough to at least keep the story afloat.

>> No.38869812

>>38869523
it's based because it'll make a select few seethe.

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>>38869812
Eh, fair enough.

>> No.38871039

Behold, the most based chuuba in all of vtuberdom.
https://youtu.be/0HyzQWgfJ-k

>> No.38871192

>>38869812
That's not based, that's just inviting shitposting.

But that was your intention all along, wasn't it?

>> No.38873448

I want a fanfic about being raped by Ayamefriend

>> No.38873450

bump

>> No.38873717
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>>38868719
(You) are dating all the girls in council though none of them know you're cheating on them. through a web of shenanigans, you manage to keep all the girls in the blue but eventually get caught and have all 5 pissed at you

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IsS_VMzY10I

>> No.38873770

The HoloEN cock rating fic gave me a chuckle and an erection (in that order). Kudos to the anon who made it.

>> No.38873807

Picard: Lui
Riker: AkiRose
Data: Roboco
Worf: Pekora
LeForge: Botan
Troi: Watame
Beverly Crusher: Mio
Wesley Crusher: Laplus
Q: Sora
Guinen: Fubuki
Lore: Haachama

>> No.38873864

>>38873770
I'm pretty sure that fic was a copypasta from a while back rather than something made for here so I'm not sure they lurk wg.

>> No.38873919

>>38873807
I don't think Roboco is autistic enough to be Data.

>> No.38874005

>>38873919
Nobody in Hololive is, but she's a robot so she'll have to do.

>> No.38874063

>>38873770
>go to bed with boner for Mori
>wake up to new thread starring Mori
>boner is still there
So that's how it is, huh?
>>38873770
The Sana one was beyond hot conceptually. Trading nudes with her live on stream is like... Fuck, dude.

>> No.38874630

>>38874063
That can't be healthy

>> No.38874632

>>38873717
Harem juggling an entire gen/group of chuubas sounds like it'd be a fun romcom fic. Actually thinking about it, it's a bit bizzare we haven't had a 'harem' fic of a chuuba gen yet, closest thing is the first chapter of holoreality setting up the concept but not delivering yet due to still being in its first chapter.

>> No.38874680

I look forward to the next chapter of The Broken Heartlock. I wish the author anon good health and a happy holidays.

>> No.38874745

>>38874632
This idea came to me after remembering an episode of carnival fantasm (type moon crossover ova) and there was an episode where the two main protagonists juggled the girls of their games. It goes as well as you'd expect

https://youtu.be/p4GKWmELzAY

>> No.38875943
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> wake up at 5AM with the urge to do a soft rework on an old series
> turn on PC and get to work
> spend over an hour writing events of first chapter in barely different way
> see that I've written only 700 words out of over 10k
I don't know what I was thinking.

>> No.38875986

>>38875943
You still don't need a puzzle

>> No.38876006

>>38875943
>1 hour spent
>700 words written of a REWORK
Yeah nah, I'd say that's pretty decent progress

>> No.38876249

>>38875943
Anon that's pretty decent speed for a rework of a fic. Especially if it's a rework where you can still use old material and are just fixing holes.

>> No.38876754

>>38876006
>>38876249
This is called gaslighting and it's immoral...

>> No.38876848

>>38876754
This isn't your pity party, fag, and you're not going to get a motivational booster every time you doubt yourself because you wrote less than you wanted or because you spelt your name wrong. You've been told it's decent progress. If you're looking for a cup of hot cocoa and a pat on the back, you can fuck off.

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>>38876848

>> No.38877000

>>38876848
Nasty response but the best possible one in this situation and something everyone needs to hear
If you wrote less than expected don't complain about it just write more
Nobody else is going to write your fic and posting about how little you wrote is not going to magically change that, the only solution is hard work

>> No.38877473

>>38876848
someone's on their period

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>>38876874
Are you crying? Are you fucking crying? I'LL GIVE YOU SOMETHING TO FUCKING CRY ABOUT

>> No.38877569

>>38868719
You’re an up and coming child star being offered a once In a lifetime opportunity by industry veteran Mori but first she needs to make sure you know how things work and that you have to be a team player (sex).

>> No.38877584
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>>38868719
man since everybody started talking about it along side boning the pink woman

I want a HoloGeographic™ fic narrated by David Attenborough

>> No.38877635

>>38876874
>>38877534
I love Friend abuse. She's so charming and friendly, so utterly undeserving of abuse, that visiting wanton cruelty and sadistic torture upon her just seems right. I want to see that genuine, almost saint-like spirit completely shattered and documented, and for nothing but a husk to remain.
In literature, of course. In reality, I hope she lives a long and prosperous life full of warmth and comfort, and I see her as something of a role model.

>> No.38877724

>>38877584
I wrote a fic similar to that idea once.
It was okay.

>> No.38877875

>>38877724
link onegai

>> No.38878076

>>38877875
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSVfSLwA4QtBq4yVZVltrPL3ih3Dr4vKoZC0DqiyUIpP6flj_3gwK-Orcm8EXagZbe9CxuxmAAvsxWu/pub

>> No.38878324

>>38878076
>but as she was leaving, we all heard what sounded like a trumpet being played underwater. What followed next will haunt me and the crew for the rest of our lives. Our senses were overcome by the stench of rotten eggs. An inescapable fart cloud had formed around us and, like a skunk’s spray, stuck to our clothes.

Laughed very hard.

>> No.38879689

>>38878324
:D

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quick, talk about calli sex before people wake up

>> No.38879843

>>38879820
No thanks

>> No.38879867

>>38879820
Why don't you start it off instead of getting others to do the work for you? Do some writing.

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>>38879867
why do myself what I can make others do at gunpoint?

>> No.38879994

>>38879939
Uh-huh. Well, good luck with that.

>> No.38880065

>>38879994
jeez, lighten up some will ya

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>>38879820
>Imagine getting into an argument with Mori that escalates.
>She starts to get violent
>You run between her legs to escape to your short king hole.
>Unfortunately she grabs you and places you on top of the highest shelf.
What are you to to do?

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I happen to know a very good Mori sex story I think all of you will enjoy. It starts with Mori getting back home to her farm, and meeting up with an old friend.

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>>38880141
wait, am I woody-sized here?

>> No.38880547

>>38880350
Yeah, something like 5'0"

>> No.38880605

>>38878076
I laughed. Shame I missed this one on release, it was a quick and fun read.

>> No.38880618

>>38880547
I guess I'll leap off the shelf, use her tits as a bounce pad and leap out the window into the bushes outside and make my escape until she's calmed down.

then come home with something yummy and say I'm sorry

>> No.38880977

>>38868719
Kson getting Mori/Choco drunk and raping her/ selling their holes on stream.

>> No.38880986

>>38880141
Start dribbling a ball so the argentinian football team mistakes me with messi and rescues me

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>>38880222
I remember that fic.
Could not take the smut seriously at all.
Fic basically became an unintentional comedy for me.

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>>38880986
Fuck that was stupid but effective. Well done.

>> No.38881532

>>38880986
>Mori and Pekora fighting over Messi while he plays football with Nene

>> No.38882139

>>38846508
>>38852570
I really enjoyed this. I felt a solemn sense of foreboding build-up in the first half of the story, and was surprised to see it resolved in such a quick fashion, but as it served to continue the plot without contrived drama, I didn't mind. That, and the short length of the blowjob scene (I would have loved to see some reciprocation involving licking Auntie's beardless clam) are the only criticisms I can think of.
I think your work particularly nails the immorality of this situation and succeeds in representing it as an alluring forbidden fruit rather than the disturbing child abuse it would be in real life. It's a pleasure to read and I hope you continue it.

Now that I've got this out of the way, I'm going to masturbate to it

>> No.38882217

>>38880605
Glad you like it.

>> No.38884044

>>38869617
I must've become engrossed in writing it and then messed up the perspectives. I'll give it a quick rewrite once I'm home
>>38882139
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I take your critique at heart.
I intended for Fubuki's mental torture to drag on, but figured it would've just dragged the fic on without purpose. Where I am going to focus drama is everything happening behind Anon's mother's back.
As for the blowjob scene, I have no excuses. Smut really burns me out, but short erotica passages are my thing.

Also
>I will now masturbate to it
Thanks.

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where is everyone?

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>>38868719
Sleeply Submitting to Suisei.

>> No.38886032

>>38885901
I'm writing inside my grandpa's bunker with post apocalyptic ambience music playing rewriting an old story of mine. I can only speak here whenever I come outside to stretch

>> No.38886065

>>38885901
Argentina plays today so im going away and making sure my house is locked in case we lose and the government gets overthrown

>> No.38886110

>>38886032
what are you writing? if you're alright with giving some details.

>> No.38886121

I wanna be spitroasted by Chloe and Ayame

>> No.38886135

>>38886121
Why those two?

>> No.38886177

>>38886065
good luck Argentinian bro may god help you and your team--wait who're they playing against?

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>>38885901
Fixing up my chapter, a friend gave me some decent advice last night, so I'm making a final pass at it and fixing up some sentences.

After that and posting it, I'll probably make a rough outline for the next chapter, I have most of the ideas in my head, but it's been better for my throughput to have a better outline first.

>> No.38886349

>>38886210
can you give any details about what fic you're writing?

>> No.38886394

>>38886135
Ayamefriend made me horny for it

>> No.38886400

>>38886110
>>38886349
Detailbeggeranon...

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>>38886400
I'm just trying to strike conversation okay?!

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>>38885901
I caved and bought Frontiers. The momentum mod has immediately made the game way more enjoyable, alongside removing crashes and performance issues from Ryujinx.

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>>38886474
Lonelychama...

>> No.38886689

>>38885906
Submitting in what sense?

>> No.38886843

>>38886135
In case you missed the stream, they cutely talked and screamed while playing air hockey today. I'd recommend watching the VOD of Ayame's birthday stream, it was great fun overall.

>> No.38886889

>>38873717
I think there's one similar to this in kronii general but it ends up with them raping (you)

>> No.38886921

>>38886689
Why would you submit to Suisei anon?

>> No.38887106

>>38886843
Im thinking about writing a fic where they gank Ayamefriend and fuck her, but I realized people outside of /hlgg/ wont understand

>> No.38887126

>>38886921
I've already submiited to her in terms of achievement. She's the living her dream while my life remains stagnant. I'd also forfeit my life and body to her.

>> No.38887159

>>38887106
It would still be hot, though.

>> No.38887254

>>38887159
Would like her guidance on it, maybe can get the guy who likes to draw porn of her involved too

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>>38886536

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>>38887106
>>38887159
>>38887254
The fuck are you people taking about?

>> No.38888608

>>38888533
Ayamefriend is a /hlgg/ thread celebrity that used to write long posts about all the streams currently happening with Ayame images attached.

>> No.38888753

>>38888608
...And this translates to you wanting to fuck them?

>> No.38888883

>>38888753
Not me, but it's not a big surprise. Thread celebrities that act cute and/or cheeky always attract suitors.

>> No.38889190

>>38888883
That rings a bell for some reason

>> No.38889249

>>38885901
Rereading old material and hoping that Winnie the Pooh doesn't invade.

>> No.38889360

>>38888608
ah yes nothing says vtuber fan quite like simping for possibly-female-possibly-trannoid thread celebrities

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Is that Subjugation fic still being worked on?

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>>38868665
HoloJourneys Chapter 13: A Bjornholm sendoff

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQDQCwDQ08W8u7311qIBh3OaZrT448vNGQKmtZU2iPPbqK5e8HrWcoq9p2aQHfR5RvA787Dd1yNaqCL/pub

Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

That's a wrap for this arc! What started out as just a little side story idea evolved into six chapters, and I'm really happy with the types of scenes I was able to make and the characters I was able to introduce. It also allowed me to flesh out some world building ideas I'm particularly looking forward to expanding on later.

I'm hoping the next arc will be just as fun for myself and anyone reading.

As always, feedback is always appreciated.

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>>38891442
Speedy Gonzales...

>> No.38892591

>>38891442
Jesus, you're a fucking writing machine. I oughta start reading this series

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>>38892591
Thanks! Though I have to admit, chapters 2 and 3 are very rough around the edges compared to others. I've been thinking about giving them a once over soon and hopefully improve their prose.

>>38891606
To be fair, I had a couple days off last week and my wife was out of town on a business trip so I took the opportunity to just be a neet and pretty much just write.

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>Another one goes into WIP hell
At least it's finished in my head

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>>38896778
GET BACK TO WORK FUCKER

>> No.38897129

>>38896778
I'll finish in your head if you don't work on something else at least.

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>>38896778
I don't know who your WIP is about, but do it for her, whoever she is.

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>> No.38899211

>>38899100
Lulu's lulus...
God, Ring porn has given me such a bizarre fetish for ghost girls but also the coming through the screen shit.

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>>38899211
I just like how this artist is able to make her both creepy and cute at the same time

>> No.38902586

>>38900173
He accentuates Lulu's most striking feature; her beautiful, unwavering gaze.

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>Do some shameless egosa
>Someone masturbated to one of my smut fics
I've made it, lads.

>> No.38903246

>>38902949
Which one was that?

>> No.38904548

>>38902949
>Someone keeps referencing one of my smut fics as their favorite
It's a good feel. May he nut eternally.

>> No.38904629

>>38904548
>>38903246

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>>38904629
One guy swears by Interrogation, I've seen Matsuri's Baby Carrot 2 (The squeakquel) thrown around a few times and I distinctly remember (read as: I saw it the other day doing an archive search for a specific date) someone saying they chain masturbated to the Ina ALT in HF. There's been a few situations in which someone says they really like the smut I've put out, and it's always flattering.

>> No.38906251

>>38904909
I'll take the opportunity to say I've nutted like 8 times to "remembering how to love her" and think of it as one of the best smut pieces I've ever read

>> No.38906299

>>38904909
Does chain masterbating involve a chain?

>> No.38906392

>>38904909
How did you decide to make the plunge into smut? Did it just make sense to paint a picture of for the story?

>> No.38906690

>>38906251
High praise. I'm glad you get so much, uh... Enjoyment out of it. Thank you!
>>38906299
Maybe? He could be using a little crane and winch for all I know.
>>38906392
What do you mean? Smut in general? I've always been horny and took writing commissions in private for smut for a long time alongside a lot - and I mean *a lot* - of ERP throughout the years on various sites and games. Just... Sort of carried over that experience into writing stories about chuubas I wanted to see getting fucked like animals.

>> No.38906983

>>38906690
I've written smut for myself before, and even did a little ERP back in the day. I was more so asking about when you decide you want to add a little smut into a series that has been SFW until that point. But you kinda answered that by wanting stories about chuubas fucking like animals.

>> No.38907262

>>38906983
Oh! Well, the initial concept was a fever dream idea as I was playing MGQ again while dabbling with tabletops. It started SFW - yes - but it was always open to NSFW occuring. It just was frequently dodged via the rolls never aligning (before Marine, of course). The alts started as a way to alleviate some potential sexual frustration for the reader who may have wanted to see that particular chuuba in the chapter getting fucked while still adhering to the world and all that. Polka got a full bad end sequence, Ina, Coco and Marine got alts, etc. It was just luck/a matter of time.

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>>38906983
man, I fucking wish I could write smut for myself
every time I try to get off to it, it doesn't feel right
it's a fucking curse I tell you

>> No.38907794

>>38907262
Gotcha, well I'm not sure I could get into the mindset of alts, since i even thought about for the Koyori bit of chapter 11 of HJ. I couldn't really feel good about the idea though because of how rapey the situation would have been, and that just ain't my vibe.

The coyote might get another chance at sex for science down the road, who knows? I also haven't put anything remotely smutty to paper in years, so it would definitely involve getting a lot of rust off if I ever decide to add some.

>>38907369
I can see that. I don't really know how to explain the mindset that helps make it appealing to enjoy after you've finished it. Honestly the better nuts to it came during the writing process itself.

>> No.38907958

>>38907794
Nah, I can’t do that either, I’m incapable of fapping to something that’s incomplete
It’s why I’ve taken to requesting drawthread for pics that are related to my stories so I can at least get something out of it

>> No.38908177

>>38880222
>>38881241

I need a link or a name

>> No.38908311
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>>38907958
Not a bad solution you made for yourself. Sometimes its all about finding the alternate routes to get you something that you want, even if its not the entire thing.

>> No.38909397

>>38906983
>did a little ERP back in the day
You reminded me that I used to have an ask.fm when I was 11-13
Holy shit, it's like witnessing a cringe monster.

>> No.38909495

>>38909397
>ask.fm
Ok pal just because you reminded yourself of your cringe memories, didn't mean you had remind me of mine.

>> No.38910216
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>>38909495
>tfw I used to ERP when I was 11 with a 16-17 year old emo chick with a sonic OC. She even had a blog where she uploaded stuff about her life and pics of her even. She was really cute. We ERP'd for 2 years. Last time I spoke to her was when I was 13 and she wrote me a message on ask telling me she was going to disappear for a while to study for university admission tests, I wished her the best of luck. She didn't come back for months, after that I dumped the website. Almost 4 years later I was reminiscing of those times and I reopened ask for the hell of it and saw one last message she had left me that I never saw back then. She said she missed me and wanted to keep in contact, and left me her facebook credentials. I never replied. ...that explains why I have such a strong fetish for age gapsHuh

>> No.38910260
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>>38907262
So, any Fubuki side chapters in the works?

>> No.38910576

>>38910216
lol you were getting groomed.

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>>38910576
Damn.
Now that you mention it, it was fucked up. I don't think I ever told her my age at the time. I wonder if she thought I was just a retarded teen instead of a kid

>> No.38910804

>>38910690
Well if it makes you feel any better, you may have dodged a bullet rather than missed an opportunity.

>> No.38911460

>>38907369
I've never been able to empathize with this sentiment even remotely. I get off to my own writing moreso than almost any other author's because I know what I like better than anyone else. Stories written by me will hit the tropes I like while involving the characters I like and be paced the way I like. There'd have to be a disastrous failure in execution for it not to be hot after hitting all those bullet points.

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>>38909495
my second girlfriend tried to get me into RP, and i kinda got the gist of it
problem was, i got the wrong idea out of it because she invited me to one of those sexual Rp and i started beating people up because i learned about ''battle rp'' so i made a DBZ namekian that had four arms and i was calling everyone a faggot for not fighting back.
They though i was trolling, my GF started bitching at me, we broke up

>> No.38911740

>>38911646
Holy shit are you me

>> No.38911852

>>38911646
> i was calling everyone a faggot for not fighting back.
Kek

>> No.38912333
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38912333

Romance/Drama recommendations from the archive?

>> No.38912372

>>38911460
NTA but I share half the sentiment. I write what I like to see and I can recognise just how hot it is but I can't get off to it because my brain is stuck in critque mode. So instead of jerking off, I just end up thinking 'how can I make this even better? Even hotter?' but of course that 'hotness' I'm striving for never cums, just like me.

>> No.38912421

>>38912333
Try Paradise Lost. It's high drama.

>> No.38912462
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>>38911460
It's because of a horrible disease called Autism.

>> No.38912505

>>38910260
NTA but its never going to happen.

>> No.38912817

>>38912421
That fic always made me laugh because of how meta it was.

>> No.38913245

>>38912817
>how meta it was
Are you trying to imply that the archive is a shit slurry?

>> No.38913250

>>38846508
I came here for /ss/ and just felt kinda gross by the end, which is probably the intention so well done.

>> No.38913346

>>38913250
>just felt kinda gross by the end
Why, though? It wasn't presented anywhere near as disturbingly as, say, Apple of her Eye. Is it because of Anon's lack of clarity in what he's doing?

>> No.38913410

>>38913346
I think so. I ended up just feeling sorry for him feeling crushed by all these emotions he can't understand.

>> No.38913440

>>38911460
I believed that initially, but then I came to the conclusion that it committing it to words would result in overthinking what words should go where, and by then it made more sense to just imagine it because I would need to visualize it in my head anyway.

>> No.38913453

>>38913410
>Anon needs love and ends up getting fucking groomed
Many such cases!

>> No.38913621

>>38913410
That feeling of immorality is like catnip to me. The idea of submitting to your hot Aunt's will and indulging in her affection despite an underlying sense of wrongness is sublime. In real life it would be disturbing, but in fiction form I find it delicious.
Mind you, the moment it shifts to include control of little Anon, it becomes really fucking disturbing. Right now she just wants to fuck him, thankfully.

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>>38913621
>Mind you, the moment it shifts to include control of little Anon, it becomes really fucking disturbing.

>> No.38915672
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38915672

I wish there was more regular, lighthearted, sexy /ss/ smut in the archives and that all the /ss/ wasn't just dark abusive grooming stuff

>> No.38915912

>>38915672
you should write it if you want it, bro

>> No.38915955

>>38915912
sadly I'm the anon that can't get off to his own stuff

>> No.38916014

>>38915672
/ss/ writers are all fucked in the head and that's why they write /ss/

>> No.38916049

>>38915672
The coco alt chapter of holofantasy would be good for this if anon wasn't definitely for real at least 18 years old or 16 depending on the country of origin

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>>38915955
damn...I'm not into /ss/ myself and have two projects on my plate, otherwise, I'd help you out (with my current fic I found out I'm very fond of vanilla-ish romcoms)

>> No.38917593

>>38912333
Our Cures

>> No.38918406

>>38915672
One day I'll write that San /ss/ fic.

>> No.38918534

>>38915672
There was that one /ss/ fic from the beastanon with two chapters. Never read it but it seems like it's conventional /ss/ dom.

>> No.38918533

>>38912333
Exposure Therapy

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>>38918406
I have one in mind that I want to write, too, but please do it. I don't even care which girl he does, as long as she ends the fic well-fucked.

>> No.38918625
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>>38918534
Guess who you're talking to

>> No.38918830
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>>38912333
First Summer Memories.
God I wish that anon comes back and updates one of their fics.

>> No.38919098

>>38918830
lol he gone, nigga

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>>38918830
I like this little halfie like you wouldn't believe

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>>38918830
>>38919241
Someone write about Flare and her Bunda, or else she's getting raped (By me)

>> No.38919657

>>38918533
>Romance/Drama
>Drama
>Exposure Therapy
I get that it’s worshipped, but it doesn’t fill every single vanilla genre there is.

>> No.38919722

>>38919415
Is there a Lore explanation about why all the Holoelfs have big massive fat asses? or is it just the water supply?

>> No.38919735

>>38868719
>>38919241
>>38919415
Flare lusting after white human cock onegai

>> No.38919804

>>38919722
It's from their human sides.

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>>38919722
>Elfs dont fuck
>Elf woman need to attract males to reproduce
Its just Evolution

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>>38919722
Need more AkiRo...

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>>38919722
>I am not remembering that a potential HJ from this fat tiddied half elf is months of work and chapters away

Pain, pure pain.

>> No.38921158

>>38919905
This pic and that one where she has a pubic jungle make me act goofy
I think Lamy is the perfect girl for a "stuck in wall" situation

>> No.38921302

>>38921158
I bet Lamy has pubes softer than freshly fallen snow...

>> No.38921426

>>38921158
>Lamy gets shitfaced
>Wakes up in the hole. Ass and tits too fat to pull herself out
>Gets used like an ATM, one of the guy puts vodka in her asshole.
>Lamy wakes up in her house

>> No.38922461

>>38921158
Mind posting the public jungle?

>> No.38923129

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/5872349

>> No.38923200

>>38923129
>Slight tummy pudge too
Diamonds

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>>38919722
Elfs with big asses attract more mates giving them more of a pick of who they want to breed with

>> No.38923447

yesterday was mori, today it's elves it's like a new flavor every day

>> No.38924376

>>38923129
ペロペロ

>> No.38926182
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38926182

When you're writing a JP chuuba how much does there peculiarities in speech influence how you write them?

>> No.38926765

>>38926182
Not at all. Everyone gets a thick North American style of speech regardless of their own unique traits in order to produce a uniform experience and to make it easier to write. Yes, it means characters like Miko will lose several of her most memorable characteristics, but ultimately getting it done is more important.

>> No.38927285

>>38926182
I'd rather punch myself in the face than have to write in peppeloni speak again

>> No.38928058

>>38926765
>thick North American
>Miko
I know the 'joke' is that you'd be presenting everyone as speaking generic english but this just made me think of someone doing what old 4kds english dubs do and gave Miko a thick accent to 'translate' her weird way of talking.
While of course making it seem like this is happening in AMERICA despite the unstranslateable japanese things happening.

>> No.38928173

>>38928058
Yes. 4Kids always had the audience's best interests in mind and Americanization is an integral part of localization, now shut up and eat your god damn jelly donuts.

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>>38928173

>> No.38930650

>>38926182
I sprinkle it in here and there, but try not to use it too much lest it get annoying.

>> No.38931116
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>>38868719
You're Bae's boyfriend who's slotted to die, but Calli concern fags for you and warns you about your upcoming death flag in unconventional ways (like showing up in your food or on a tv screen--pic related.) So Bae doesn't have to live with the sadness of losing a loved one.

But as soon as you cheat death sensei he keeps coming after you in a final destination-like style. and you need Calli's help to get past all your death flags so you and bae can live happily ever after

>> No.38932227

so quiet...

>> No.38932226
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>>38868719
Choco is tired of waiting for you to get the hint. You WILL come to the nurses office and she WILL drain your balls everyday before AND after classes

>> No.38932369

>>38932226
She won't, actually. Not since the ChocoSen author disappeared.

>> No.38932397

>>38932226
no way fag

>> No.38932592

>>38932226
>>38932397
>violantly avoiding Choco-sensei sex to keep yourself pure

>> No.38933045

>>38868719
Comforting Yugo with your dick after she gets fired for bringing in low numbers.

>> No.38933054

>>38916049
Don't forget that when he saw highschoolers he had couldn't tell how close they were in age

>> No.38933261

>>38933045
yugo's a guy, anon...

>> No.38933293

>>38933261
your mom's a guy

>> No.38933352

>>38932226
>>38932592
Sounds like the premise for a comedy about trying to keep your purity because you want to lose it to (Another chuuba, maybe Mel?) and the shenanigans you have to do to escape from Choco-sensei while trying to get the attention of that other girl.
Which of course lasts until the third act twist that shakes up the relationship and presumably turns it into an actual romance with Choco as reveals pile up.

>> No.38933517

>>38933261
You probably think Tamaki is a guy as well.

>> No.38933704

>>38933293
>>38933517
>don't know niji shit
>educated myself a little
oh ok, nvm then

>> No.38933956

>>38933704
Yeah, nijisanji are a weird bunch.

>> No.38934045

>>38933956
A weird bunch that don't belong in a Hololive thread. You have a literal fucking sticky to discuss the graduation of your nobody. It doesn't belong here and never will.

>> No.38934057

>>38916049
What are you talking about he's clearly 1X years old.

>> No.38934257

>>38933352
you have a few instances where choco sensei gets herself stuck in a messy situation after a failed rape attempt, you help her out because you're a good person even if it could lead to a potential trap.

you occasionally get to see the more human side of choco sensei and maybe one day she gets really drunk and you happen to catch her getting hit on by thugs. you fight them off and piggyback sensei back to her apartment. it's here she spills her guts to you about (insert correlation to you and her past/ dark back story) and that's why she wants you in her life

you actively can't look at her the same way anymore and she gradually stops trying to force herself on you in place of something deeper and more genuine.

>> No.38934700

>>38934045
>hololive thread
Have you lost your marbles? This is the writing general.

>> No.38934794

>>38934700
just ignore em, that's that same retard who throws a fit whenever someone says something they don't like.

>> No.38934984

>>38868719
After a long day at work, (You) come home and want nothing more than to crash and sleep. However the moment you open the door you are shocked to see your gf as well as many of her friends sitting around waiting for you. They say this is some kind of "intervention" about your "undiagnosed autism".

>> No.38935460
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>My oshi screams at me because I keep refusing to take my medication in the morning
>tearfully ask if she'll stay this time, because I'm so lonely without her and she always leaves
>She promises to stay
>I take them
>She's gone
Any fics for this feel?

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>>38935460
There's "You have to take your meds!" in the archive for something similar in regards to theme, but the closest thing to that I've seen outside of short schizo post on /vt/ is pic rel

>> No.38935949 [DELETED] 

>>38934700
>>38934794
You're not welcome here nijiniggers. Go back to your containment sticky.

>> No.38936008

>>38935949
Why do you always seethe so recognizably? There are few threads where it's so obviously a single schizo all the time.

>> No.38936065 [DELETED] 

>>38936008
So what you're telling us is that you're frequently getting told off and lump all those people together as the same person. Says a lot about you, but that's to be expected of a nijinigger.

>> No.38936081

>>38936008
Just ignore him. Think up a fun prompt or something instead.

>> No.38936099

>>38936065
Cool it with the racism.

>> No.38936118 [DELETED] 

>>38936099
This isn't your safe space, twitter tranny.

>> No.38936143

anyone got a good list of music to play for romcom fics?

>> No.38936197

>>38936143
Nothing beats Ram Ranch.

>> No.38936635

>>38936143
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fatXOqtEe9U

>> No.38936757

>indog hours
should have known better

>> No.38938107
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>> No.38938163
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>> No.38938275

>>38915672
There was a Korone /ss/ fic but it was grooming

>> No.38938292

>>38938163
This is the kind of art made for cum tributes

>> No.38938307

>>38938292
Miko in general was made for cum tributes

>> No.38939295

>>38938163
How would she react to getting slapped?

>> No.38939302

>>38938163
Miko looking at you in disgust when you tell her you want to jerk off at her ass!

>> No.38939448

>>38938307
True that, at this point I jerk off more to cum tributes to her than to porn of her

>> No.38939508

>>38939295
Depends on who the slapper is.

>> No.38939629

>>38939508
Let's say for the sake of arguing that I'm a random passer-by who took advantage of her leaning over in excitement while playing a crane-game to slap her perky buttocks.

>> No.38939928

>>38939448
I'm pretty sure only like 3 of those exist

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>>38868719
Laplus is repeatedly cockblocked by her crow whenever she tries to make a move on (you)

>> No.38941186

>>38939629
She would be embarrassed and throw a tantrum if you stayed around.

>> No.38941346
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>>38908177
They're talking about "The Grim Reaper's Stable"
Which is archived with the a typo as Mori is spelt as Moir

>> No.38941435

>>38941346
No it isn't

>> No.38941517

>>38941346
The only good Mori fic

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>> No.38942382

>>38942084
Based

>> No.38942442
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38942442

>>38942084
>Wetness clinging to fingers
Oh baby, that's the stuff.

>> No.38942451

>>38942084
This is very hot if I imagine it to be consensual.

>> No.38943059

>>38942084
Why do all people who post porn never choose good images

>> No.38943116

>>38908177
Read it and post reaction

>> No.38943255

>>38943059
t. pleb with zero taste

>> No.38943579

>>38943255
t. Fumihiko filthlicker

>> No.38943593

>>38943059
It's a good image, Aqua needs to be spanked a lot more.

>> No.38943886

>>38943579
that's not fumihiko you absolute fucking retard

>> No.38944364

>>38943886
Implying I said it was

>> No.38944814

>>38944364
you have no clue what you're even talking about, do you?

>> No.38945396

>>38868719
Miko trying her hardest to rape you

>> No.38945934

>>38944814
Do you?

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>> No.38948641

>>38943593
Does she want to be?

>> No.38948894

is it me or is it really quiet as of late

>> No.38949504

>>38945396
This but the ending reveals you were actually a blonde/blue haired holomember the entire time.

>> No.38950553

>>38868719
Towa is a boy and the best friend of (you), a popular guy in school. Towa is also a huge faggot and absolutely wants to get dicked by the BAC (Big Anon Cock) but figures you don't swing that way. Towa then wishes to be a girl so he can go out with you, and once he becomes the Towappi, he approaches you and finds out you were gay and wanted to dick your TowBro this entire time.

>> No.38950709

>>38950553
I loled at BAC

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>>38950553
Towa...

>> No.38951288
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38951288

>>38868719
Having sex with your loving, slightly tsudere girlfriend Towa

>> No.38951295

>>38948894
Same amount of posters just more space between
I jerked off to Mori and took a nap maybe others did the same

>> No.38951345

>>38951288
this one's the superior towa prompt

>> No.38951440

On the subject of Towa, is Deal with the Devil still being worked on? I loved that first chapter.

>> No.38951776
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38951776

>>38951295
work, fapping, and hopefully doing some writing.

>> No.38951806

>>38951440
God you just reminded me of it's existence.
Didn't the author say something about the chapter being a prologue to the actual fic that was already done?
My heart melted and I need more.

>> No.38952373

>>38951288
I'm not a fan of Towa but I just wanna say that I'd love to see a fic where she suffocates (You) with that juicy ass and forces you to eat out her butthole.

>> No.38952460

>>38952373
Can't force the willing

>> No.38952540

>>38952460
Make it seem like you're really unwilling and Towa does it as a 'prank'.

>> No.38953075

>>38951295
I jerked off to Lamy but Mori is scheduled for Tomorrow

>> No.38953153

>>38952460
Do what >>38952540 mentioned because I'd be really unwilling but rather than it being done as a prank have Towa do it as a means of punishment.

The only ass I'd willingly be suffocated by is Fubuki's.

>> No.38953493

>>38952540
>oh no don't make your ass even plusher Towa-sama that'd be terrible

>> No.38953964

>>38953075
>Lamy
Elf has some good porn. Relying on cute romantic stuff makes it so the porn made of you is always of high quality.

>> No.38956255

>>38868665
>inb4 who
Yugo was a menhera from nijisanji who recently got fired. I wrote this short fic (800 words) for the purpose of saying one joke that I thought was funny. AA, don't bother archiving this. Anyways, enjoy! Let me know if I should post this in the new thread or not.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQIQbnqMScJ6QH1Z-JL9VN-_jclu7ASnzxrSn2Jq4qOipsrFowrwMH0PPKhNvXNFERUrft7A9o9fhQQ/pub

Tags: SFW, Comedy, Tragedy, Yugo Asuma

>> No.38956321
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38956321

>>38868719
Kiwawa ass worship.
https://youtu.be/Awmy7k97Dio

>> No.38957567
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38957567

>>38956321
>ywn be able to use Kiara’s big Teutonic ass as a pillow after a long day at work
>ywn cuddle in bed and be able to squeeze and knead it to your hearts content
>Kiara will never laugh and call you weird for being obsessed with it but still show her butt off and encourage you to touch it to your hearts content
Everyday it gets a little harder to keep going...

>> No.38958726

>>38957567
I once saw a gif of Kiara bouncing her (fat) ass enticingly. Never once did I think it to be real and canon, but here we are. God I want to fuck this chicken a little more every day.

>> No.38960234

Gokkun fic of Lamy drinking a beer mug full of cum (or multiple)

>> No.38960345

>>38960234
Ok, but where's the conflict?

>> No.38960568

>>38960345
she chokes cause the cum is too thick

>> No.38960653

>>38960345
Her getting (You) to cum enough to fill it up

>> No.38960963

>>38960345
The cum is so hot and thick she starts to sweat buckets, the logical conclusion is that she strips down to keep chugging semen

>> No.38961261
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38961261

How often do any of you go back to stuff you've written and give it a touch up?

>> No.38961961

>>38961261
I want to remaster all my old stories, but I could use that time to make new ones or watch autistic vtubers. Hmmm decisions decisions

>> No.38962956

>>38961261
Loser mentality

>> No.38963082

>>38961261
I do re read my old stuff and ponder what I could've done better, but instead of fixing them I just leave them as they are, they're a token of progress.

>> No.38963410

>>38963082
I haven't thought about it that way. In my case, my first couple chapters were in dire need of some punctuation edits, after I learned more about some the rules to help sentences flow better.

>> No.38963886

>>38963410
There's a big difference between editing for clarity and editing the actual content of a story.

>> No.38964541

>>38963886
Yeah, I think that's what I was going for in terms of "touch ups". Making things more clear and easier for the reader.

>> No.38964665

>>38964541
>>38963886
If you didn't do it when it was posted in response to feedback, it means you didn't get feedback, which means no one read your story, which means there's no reason to touch it up.

>> No.38966450
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38966450

Paging the Suisei incest kiss fic author. How's it coming along?

>> No.38967055

>>38966450
I've written 3 more words since I last talked about it. That last ETA is looking grim. I swear imposing time limits on myself is actually a hindrance.

>> No.38967362

>>38953075
Lamy doesn’t get enough porn.

>> No.38967449

>>38967055
That's a bit unfortunate, but thanks for the update. I can relate to that, it sucks

>> No.38968051

>>38967055
Because it puts you under timecrunch for no reason. Just work on it when you can. Feeling like you NEED to get something done by a certain point, of course, makes it feel like work, which then makes you not wanna do it when you've myriad other distractions at your fingertips.

>> No.38968232
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38968232

>>38948641
Does it matter? Aqua is a maid that doesn't clean the house and she has a big, shapely, soft ass.

This is all you need to make sure she receives regular spankings. Nothing sadistic, just bare hand.

If she likes them, more power to her. If she doesn't, too bad.

>> No.38968896

>>38951440
>>38951806
Part two has been stuck at about 75% completion since I first released chapter one, I’ve hardly worked on it. Work started kicking my ass and I was trying to put all my focus into one story for once.
Now that I’ve finished the story that was my main focus I can finally start on my other WIPs, though A Deal With the Devil is about third on the waiting list. I’m just really struggling to decide what I want to do with it. I could write a few fluff scenes with Towa, have her learn to love (You) then call it a day or I could make a more involved plot, although the problem with the latter is I have no clue what that plot could be about.

>> No.38969284

>>38968232
It's about the opposite for me. I'd only spank her if she enjoys it because I'm not a violent abuser, but I'd insist on her cleaning the house. I hate dirty houses, and cleaning the house myself.

>> No.38969618

>>38868719
Throat hort has claimed most of EN and modern medicine is powerless. Fauna's cum is a biological wonder of natural healing, but it quickly loses its efficacy after leaving her body. It's up to her to travel the world and personally creampie every talent's throat with her miraculous futa milk to save the branch.

>> No.38969783

>>38968896
The could be no plot and just have it be a cool bunch of interactions between Towa and Anon. A slice of life fluff in which you show Towa all the cool shit humans do which inevitably ends up with the two fucking like rabbits and getting Towappi pregnant and giving birth to the antichrist, thus dooming humanity for the rest of eternity.

>> No.38969788

>>38969284
I feel like if you wear a maid's uniform on a constant basis, and you don't ever fulfill your duties as a maid, you consent to this kind of treatment.

I'm not a slaveowner, I would help her wash the dishes that she piled up in the sink. But only after pulling her over my lap, flipping her skirt, and making her marshmallow butt strawberry coloured.

>> No.38969910

>>38968896
nothing wrong with writing something short(er) and sweet. Not everything needs to be a 10 volume epic with an overarching plot - especially when you have no plot to write about.
btw, what are the stories higher on the priority list about?

>> No.38971489

>>38969788
I mean, if you spanked her for not cleaning and she doesn't start cleaning anyway she probably doesn't mind having her butt accosted by a firm palm.

>> No.38973201

>>38968896
For the 'bigger plot focus' route', I'm reasonably sure you'd need to expand the cast and scope in order to to expand the possibilities of what story you can tell.
Conceptually the characters you can add are mostly the divine/demonic with Kanata, Choco, La+, and maybe a mundane normal character.
Since the alternative is pretty much timeskip of fluff shenanigans until you throw in the last act twist that keeps Towa and Anon together romantically after twisting something set up earlier in the story. (Not that there's anything wrong with this but given that you're still in-between just making it a big fluff fic you're clearly weighing your options.)

>> No.38973529
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38973529

>throwing your maid Towa off the scent that your real doujin collection involves mostly demon girls getting lovingly fucked silly

>> No.38973959

>>38960963
Just letting you know i just busted the fattest nut to the idea of Lamy downing that mug, covered in sweat and leaving in the couch a sweat imprint

>> No.38975167

>>38973959
what if that Lamy was (you)

>> No.38976121

>>38975167
Become was always a shit forced meme fuck off

>> No.38976780

>>38976121
I was just checking for reactions to see if I could make a body swap lamy story, but I guess that is a no

>> No.38976882

>>38976780
>Making a dude drink cum
Very gay

>> No.38976993

>>38976882
I know right, hot.

>> No.38979294

>>38969783
This is what I’m leaning towards, but I’m a little torn. I had a fingering scene with tail play in mind but I don’t know if there’ll be sex
>>38969910
I was planning to finally get back to Holocalypse, but an Anon mentioned he wanted to see Cover Job 2 so that’s the current focus. It might even be fourth on the priority list because I’ve been working on a Polka story that will be set in the same universe as A Deal With the Devil.
>>38973201
Yeah, Kanata was definitely a prime candidate I was considering introducing. If I decide to go the simple fluff route of showing Towa around, I still might have her make an appearance.
After discussing this though, I’m starting to form ideas of a greater plot… we’ll see what happens.

>> No.38983863

>>38979294
>but an Anon mentioned he wanted to see Cover Job 2
Funny. I left this general for good some time ago and then saw that a handful of anons were waiting on one of my fics, and thus I kept working on them because I didn't want them to experience what it's like to follow something that will never finish.

>> No.38984409

>>38979294
>Cover Job 2
Hell yeah, I fucking loved that concept.
>>38983863
Subjection?

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>>38983863

>> No.38986098

>>38976993
That's gay as fuck.

>> No.38986097

>>38983863
Good on you.

>> No.38986169

>>38971489
And you know this how?

>> No.38986222

>>38973959
What would be hotter? Her chugging effortlessly or really struggling to down that cum?

>> No.38986474

So those last four posts pre 310 were saged to get the thread to die quicker right?

>> No.38986769

New thread
>>38986251

>> No.38989022

>>38986474
Yes

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