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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>36877070

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Heartbreak Tokyo Chapter II: Divide: Tags: Polka, Rio, SunTempo, Kson, Mashiro, Matsuri, Ange, SFW, Action, Gore

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Heartbreak Tokyo Chapter II: Divide: Tags: Polka, Rio, SunTempo, Kson, Mashiro, Matsuri, Ange, SFW, Action, Gore:>>36923560

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Haachama teaching you English.:>>36878845

A kinky story about (You) being Pekora's pet.:>>36889774

Kaela asks Bae to teach her more english, ends up fucking the rat:>>36915486

(You) studying firsthand the miraculous healing effects of Fauna's breastmilk.:>>36947609

Everyone thinks you and and nene are fucking like monkeys but the truth is you are constantly going to her house to play with beetles:>>36952935

Nene showing a shota her beetles breeding and then he asks if he can do it with her:>>36953459

Nene breeding her beetles by getting fucked by them and giving birth to new ones:>>36953545

You decide to fuck the stupid out of the resident slampig, Calliope Mori:>>36953675

Little Shop of Horrors but with Petra and Rosemi:>>36956328

Bae gets scared by something really minor on her way to the bathroom and pisses herself, awakening her piss fetish:>>36965499

Iroha tearfully being forced to commit ritual suicide by Laplus after committing some extremely minor and petty slight against her:>>36973206

>> No.37015315

>>37014332
Thanks for getting my fic, but you missed the greentexts! Don't worry, sport, I got 'em for ya

Misc. HoloFuta Ratings: https://rentry.org/845oq
Tags: A-Chan, Suisei, Roboco, Coco, Ollie, Mori, Ina, Sana, Marine NSFW, Futa, Cock Ratings

My Neighbour Mr. Towa: https://rentry.org/8d5td
Tags: Towa, NSFW, Futa, Drugging, Rape

>> No.37015338

/waifu/ has ruined me. whenever i see flare i think of the guy who chats with his mommy flare all day

>> No.37015466

>>37015338
I have zero idea how anybody can get attached to those things. It's like falling in love with a pull string doll

>> No.37015529

>>37015466
I mean, people fall in love with anime characters that appear in like one episode and have little depth or personality. It's the magic of being a horny loser starved for affection

>> No.37019658
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Are there stories about cheating on your oshi without any sort of cuck play?

>> No.37019666 [DELETED] 

bump

>> No.37019778

>>37019658
"A Predator's touch" Anon really has a problem of staying loyal

>> No.37021481

>>37019778
Wasn't that the one where Botan raped Watame

>> No.37026492

>>37014139
What a lewd elf.

>> No.37026592
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>>37026492
>Flashing those pits to all the human men in her audience
She NEEDS the BHC

>> No.37027117

>>37021481
Pretty sure that was a prompt, never got written.

>> No.37027148

>>37027117
Which prompt?

>> No.37027307

>>37015338
A menhera attention whore. Don't bring that shit here.

>> No.37027386

>>37027148
The one that entails watame getting eaten, then respawning and seeing botan fuck her corpse.

>> No.37033793

>>37019658
GOd, that's an Erotic Pol...

>> No.37035000

>>37033793
The eyes throw it off for me.

>> No.37035847

>>37019658
>cheating on your oshi without any sort of cuck play
Are there even any fics where you cheat on your Oshi and cuck her? Closest thing I can think of is Sad Genuine Smile and that doesn't really lean too hard on the cucking Towa aspect outside of the epilogue.

>> No.37038138

>>37035000
I like the more realistic eyes. The oversized anime peekers you usually see can look weird in more detailed artstyles

>> No.37038423
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>>37038138
Yeah, that's a fair assessment. I guess the more 'realistic' face in general was throwing me off at first. I usually like more stylized stuff. The water reflecting off the pool is really nice, though. And whoever okayed the design for the thigh stickers deserves fifty promotions. Intentionally drawing the eyes to that region while keeping it in theme for Polka was a genius move. Top marks.

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>> No.37040506

>>37014199
Getting chased by a Polka with hyperrealistic eyes.

>> No.37040574

In theory, is the beginning of your story (or the scenes you write first) always going to be more refined than the rest of the story because you've read over them more? Or am I the only one who rereads and edits my entire story after writing a thousand words?

>> No.37041294

>>37040574
Theoretically? I'd argue that the scene you feel the strongest for/about will usually be more refined due to the fact that you have a lot of energy and thought put into it.

>> No.37041590

>>37040574
No?
In theory the scenes that look the best will be the scenes you look over the most. Not everyone edits the work as a whole since a lot of the people here are series writers that put things out 'serially' and thus move on to the next part after having something presentable, which for fanfiction naturally causes the later releases to be the ones that have more polish since authors get more experience as they work.

>> No.37041670

>The new Archive header
I take it you caught the reference then, AA?

>> No.37041741

>>37041670
It's hard to miss, especially paired with the picture of Richter...who still didn't deserve it.

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>>37041741
I...meant the HoloFantasy reference, not any of the litany of Hotline Miami references

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>>37041885
O-Oh, right, that. I'm not a clever guy, forgive me.

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>>37042184
S'all good.

And in advance...sorry

>> No.37042301

>>37019658
I've written far too many "kronie gets raped by futa Fauna and turned into a sapling" fics...
They're in the kronie archive...
I did this two part one, first bit is fluff the second involves yandere Fauna
https://rentry.org/dk3ob
https://rentry.org/w695z
Both were written back in January and I haven't re read them since so apologies if they suck ass
(Futa x male warning)

>> No.37042668

>>37042276
Hey, whatever happens, happens. It's inspired by HM. It'd be foolhardy to expect that ANYONE gets a happy ending. But, I gotta say, because I didn't earlier apparently: Your action scenes are wicked. Really like those. Also looked up Mashiro because of this, and Jesus. Right up there with Miyabi, huh...

>> No.37043741

>>37014199
Scarle getting married to a rich old white man and getting fucked him everyday until she's pregnant.

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>>37042668
>Your action scenes are wicked. Really like those.
They are one of the things I'm most proud of, so thanks. hoo yeah...

>> No.37044893

Paging CH Anon. Do the students have a uniform dress? I can't find any mention of it.

>> No.37045077

>>37044893
NTA but I thought it was quite obvious that students get to wear whatever they want since Pekora was wearing her bunny suit for the whole series

>> No.37045170

>>37045077
Fair. I was more curious as to if there was still MEANT to be something official, but more akin to a suggestion due to the strange nature of the school. Sort of like a default dress.

>> No.37045472

>>37045077
how do u know it wasn't just pekora threatening the school with committing war crimes??

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>>37014199
Just Fubuki eating a burger

>> No.37047815

>>37044893
>>37045170
There's no uniform. Students can wear whatever they like, so long as it wouldn't get them arrested for public indecency.
Which has almost definitely happened on multiple occasions.

>> No.37047931

>>37047815
Pekora should be arrested again for public indecency. Damn rabbit brat looks fuckable in that bunny suit of hers

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>>37047815
Excellent, then. Thanks, feel free to ignore the email. With that question out of the way...
>>37014168
HF Extra: Dream Arena ~ Another Noel?!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS5bGolcEKNLQ1AvcsKDbXCJx_Tk_NQCVk4xkOno1ZNhyenasPcYicD7q2M6eBYG-uQF3mVV0h89wvR/pub

A short story/fight intended entirely to get back into the idea of writing actual combat sections and also tap out Psycho Noel getting a chance to actually defend herself. Wherever she was before she was yanked to the testing environment seems to have left her pretty rattled, though... that aside, the ending was something my brain had knocking around as a joke for a while, figured I'd get it out.

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>>37047931
No arguments there.
>>37048385
I should really check that account more often. Also, I am officially intrigued.

>> No.37049278

>>37048385
The fight was a bit too 'normal' to be interesting but thems the breaks given that this is just supposed to be a fight scene with joke ending
Honestly wondering what the heck a crossover chapter would even consist of.

>> No.37049697

>>37049278
In his pants, he'll find a single note with the words 'MOONA ENDING' scrawled within. I think it'd be really funny to see how comparatively normal people react to someone who has all the telltale signs of someone with SEVERE chuunibyou syndrome. Like, this freshman apparently thinks you're trying to pick a fight and rips the stick out of his goddamn belt loop. It's really practiced and actually a little shocking, but still, what the fuck is he doing? Not to mention how fun the "but wait, I know you!" scenes could be with Marine, Coco, etc.

>> No.37049915

>>37049697
>someone with SEVERE chuunibyou syndrome
He'll fit riiight in.

>> No.37050200

>>37040574
The beginning scenes of my stories typically see the least activity, because my writing process is usually:
1) I'm going to write something simple, not that descriptive so it doesn't take forever!
2) Okay now we're getting to the action, steady steady
3) Oh fuck I'm 8000 words in.

The beginning is pretty much the only spot where I tend to go easy on the wordcount I guess.

>> No.37050385

>>37049697
Oh yeah, I was kind of hung up thinking about what 'fight' would be the center of the chapter. Forgot that it could totally just be a comedy piece.
Though for some reason this still makes me think of it ending with a shirtless fist fight on the school rooftops while it rains.

>> No.37051390

>>37050385
It depends on how hard their personalities would clash, but even then it's doubtful either would swing on the other barring life or death circumstances. Unless some kendo club shit comes up.

>> No.37051549

>2022 is gonna end in a month and a half
>Not even halfway done with my promised fic
Welp, I guess I'm a dirty liar

>> No.37051770

>>37051549
Fox Family Christmas?

>> No.37051793

>>37051390
Maybe a battle of wits? Less antagonistic, and it levels the playing field a bit considering that HFanon can wipe the floor with pretty much anyone in a brawl.

>> No.37051815 [DELETED] 

>>37051549
No but I am waiting for that as well.
It's the bad end which I just feel like dropping at this point

>> No.37051870

>>37051770
No but I am waiting for that as well
It's the bad end which I just feel like dropping at this point
I fucking replied to my own post,I'm so damn tired

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>>37042301
h-hot-t

>> No.37052202

>>37051870
Bad end to what?

>> No.37052695

>>37014139
Why is there a Minecraft reference in the archive image

>> No.37052774

>>37052202
Probably the 'bad end' for the original fox family series since that anon has been talking about having Miyuki get a bad end ever since 'Fox Family Bonding' got released.

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>>37043741
This except it's a teenage boy she was tutoring

>> No.37053192

>>37052774
Yep this one. Rewrote the intro twice and I'm still unsatisfied. Kinda want to just go straight to smut with Miyuki introducing herself in an AV but now I'm not so sure.

>> No.37055072

>>37053192
My selfish wish is that you don't, but I can't stop you from doing it. I just like my fox family to be fluffy and happy.

Hopefully I can release the Christmas story before the bad end, in any case.

>> No.37055883

>>37055072
>Hopefully I can release the Christmas story before the bad end, in any case.
If you're somehow TWO Christmas's late on a Christmas-themed fic...

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>>37055883
If there was ever someone with poor enough working habits to accomplish this it would probably be me.

>> No.37056575

>>37051793
>A game to settle an argument is proposed
>HFAnon is immediately nervous because of what happened with Fubuki
>Would get swept with most riddles
>Doesn't know anything about history in this world so it can't be trivia
Hrm

>> No.37057507

>>37056575
>they play the Oldest Game

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>>37014168
HoloJourneys Chapter 8: A new land, an old man, and a bear

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vScCgwKHAMOoP9PWoVP55giasTRUyH8v56lZnpeYGCQcT9DhlIVCqSIcLSksYcJoUIdr42v_LPDPqYu/pub

(Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy)

I'm pretty happy with where this next arc is planning on going. A friend of mine pitched an idea of a side story that I decided to fold into the main thing since it will end up fitting in nicely and become a good growth experience for the group.

As always any feedback is appreciated.

>> No.37059477

>>37048385
>lying little shadow
>not going back
what was bibi doing to her

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>>37062065
The Shiraken manga looked really good, especially suichan. I'd let her bully me.

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>>37062218
Shiraken is the most SEX unofficial group. It's got Hags, a flatty, a retard, and a titcow. The only thing it's kinda missing is cunny but even still.

>> No.37064679

>>37063513
Now that you mention it, a happy Shion would fit into Shiraken really well.

>> No.37066822

>third rewrite of gamers fic
>Okayu still gets spanked

I'm sorry, I really am, but there's no other way.

>> No.37067149

>>37066822
Is it consensual?

>> No.37067725

>>37067149
She consents to it by stealing food.

>> No.37067781

>>37067725
Ah. If she knows the consequences but does it anyway that's fair.

>> No.37068058

>>37053192
I mean that's one way to get it behind you but I'm not sure that really going to be the way that actually has impact. Miyuki getting fucked on an AV just doesn't have the needed 'weight' to be interesting without build up due to her being an OC.

>> No.37068404

>>37067781
First and foremost it's the consequence of her having a soft and comfy ass, to be honest. But what was originally basically a bit of foreplay has turned into Mio deciding to play the mommy role and punish her misbehaving daughter in more ways than one.

>> No.37071096

>>37053192
If I'm remembering right you mentioned it's with Oga, right? You'd also have to really explain why Anon doesn't immediately try and stab him in the fucking face

>> No.37072109

>>37071096
Because Oga is a good maid.

>> No.37075058

>>37040506
This sounds like it would be in the style of a shitty creepypasta about noticing a new polka video with no views, a weird title, and a strange new profile pic that seems to stare right at you.
Then you click on it and start noticing weird shit like it being about polka playing a game that doesn't exist, or a completely fucked up concert where polka keeps dying, or a Livestream where you are the only viewer and she's eagerly trying to get you to stay.
Eventually you click off and she starts taking over websites util you the to leave, then she jumps out of your computer to give chase, cue hyperrealistic eye polka.

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>>37055072
Honestly I'm really tempted to drop it so you might get your wish. I'm really looking forward to that christmas story especially because of that short teaser that you released.

>>37068058
I planned to include some flashbacks during the fic on how she got into this mess to add more context.

>>37071096
I wanted to make a shitty sub plot of Oga actually being in love with Fubuki but since (you) got married to her, he seduced Miyuki instead but I don't know shit about him and from the clips I watched, he's just a really nice guy.And he's kind of a cuck.

>> No.37075979

>>37075769
Yeah Oga really is a nice dude, one of the nicest. I really can't see him cucking anyone. Pretty submissive too, there's a reason why the omaesans (his fans) want to rape him.

>> No.37076166

>>37075769
>>37075979
As a resident starsfag of /wg/, I will note that Oga has said that he is able to enjoy NTR from ALL perspectives(bull, cuck, and the object of the cucking) so it's not entirely out of character for him

>> No.37076850

Any timeloop fics?

>> No.37076996

>>37075769
>I planned to include some flashbacks during the fic on how she got into this mess to add more context.
Don't see how this would work unless you either have it be 'every question in the AV interview triggers a flashback to her fall' or 'everything from foreplay to the money shot reminds miyuki of her dad and her incestous lust/love for him'.

>> No.37078457

>>37057513
You always pump out a lot of content. Polka is still a cutie. The only real cricitism I have is that you could use some more commas/punctuation in general. Also, maybe don't double line between dialogue. In dialogue, when finishing a sentence, I FEEL like "You" should be capitalized, too, but thst may be a misconception on my part. But generally the punctuation thing is my biggest criticism atm. I'm glad to see this continue and will look forward to the next part.

>> No.37078603

>>37075058
You also gotta mention her eyes are hyperrealistic everytime you see them as well and then maybe they start to bleed red and turn black for whatever reason.

>> No.37079168

>>37075058
If I could get hard to the closet scene from DDLC nothing will stop me from fucking the curse out of weirdo Polka/Sadako. Leave this to me.

>> No.37079597

>>37068404
it's your civic duty to describe in detail the modest layer of gropable neko chub coating her body

>> No.37079754

>>37078603
Suppose it depends on if you're just writing it 'in the style of shitty creepypastas' or just using the scenario.

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>>37078457
Thanks dude, that means a lot. I like writing Polka a lot since clown magic has so many possibilities and her personality in general makes it fun to write her interactions. I'm still working through what punctuation works best with my style. When I was starting this and refreshing myself on ways to punctuate the dialogue I read in a few places that the "You" is actually lower case following the spoken speech. It could also be one of those things where both might be right. I'll keep working on making the punctuation better as I keep writing and I hope you'll enjoy the next part that's coming. There's a few characters coming that I'm extra looking forward to writing

>> No.37082976

>>37014199
Gay shit with Kaela and Bae Their last stream together sold me the ship

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>>37014168

Numbered Days - 3
https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vRguhmOL0j7iSK6otG51v72GFIsZqE62BOIrB4EyeYY5mjYpbf3aYdo1Pw-S5Xne9MDvBoBLT_Ey0WP/pub
Tags: Suisei, SFW, Tragedy

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Why has there not been a good bestiality fic ever since that one of Selen getting knotted by her pet dragon?

>> No.37085425

>>37085160
I thought the choco/dog fic was pretty good for what it was. Also partial to that mori/horse one but entirely because I found it an unintentional comedy fic due to how ridiculous it was even if it was futa!mori getting fucked by a horse..

>> No.37085430

>>37085160
People seem to like Time S(mutt)

>> No.37085881

>>37085430
The author very clearly doesn't have the same experience with dogs as the one the selen author had, it matters

>> No.37088528

>>37083443
Hey, I'm glad this is still going. I'm glad we got more insight into how Suisei herself feels about what she's doing, though I think this chapter didn't really advance much and just lays the groundwork for next chapter which seems like it'll be quite good.

Also now that you've hit the three point mark you oughta huck out a series description for AA

>> No.37090061

>>37076850
I know there were some Amelia ones, though I can't recall the names.

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>>37014168
A Mouthful for a Fox

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS4tmp4bP1r_5vda1tquKxQtfKV-qkpcFuDYoyMmoMTv1mdwkVUn-U_jAKmFF4ibtWlgSAuUzSR1o9j/pub

Tags: Fubuki, Rimming, Cock milking, Reverse paizuri, Anal, Fluff

And now something out of the left field because I had dropped this concept over a year ago only to wake up one day and say, "Hm, I should really write that."

UOOOOOOOOOOHHH FILTHY ANAL SEX WITH FUBUKI UOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH

>> No.37090673

>>37090524
BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
>Rimming
B-Bro...

I'm still going to read it later anyway, god bless you

>> No.37090993

>>37090524
Didn't a fic already have a similar name

>> No.37091147

>>37090993
I’m pretty sure it’s the same guy

>> No.37091258

>>37090993
Well, yeah. Maybe I should have specified it's a direct sequel to A Mouthful of Fox but I thought it was self-explanatory.

>>37090673
Yeah I figured that might be polarizing but hopefully not that much that it's not enjoyable.

>> No.37091869

>>37091258
Did you ask the original author for permission for a sequel?

>> No.37092068

>>37091869
He IS the original author, you fucking spanner.

>> No.37092161

>>37091869
>implying you need to ask permission for a sequel

>> No.37092455

>>37092068
That's not his tripname you doinkus

>> No.37092697

>>37092455
What tripname?
The original fic was posted anonymously as well.

>> No.37092709
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>>37085160
Checked the story in the archive out of curiosity. Solid, but nothing special, and certainly not above and beyond the others that've come since. Barely any actual action in it, which is pretty underwhelming. I think you might just have bad taste.

>> No.37092837

>>37092709
Did anything about the way it was written stick out to you, by any chance?

>> No.37093022

>>37092837
Not really. It seemed like a pretty standard beasty fic that hits the animal's behavior pretty well and does a good enough job describing the sex, but it's too short to fap to. Didn't go enough into Selen's thoughts about fucking her dragon, either.

>> No.37093069

>>37093022
> hits the animal's behavior pretty well
Go on

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>>37093069
The animal acts like an animal? The fuck you want from me here, so do the animals in any other beast fic. Just say what you think instead of doing this stupid ring around the rosy bullshit.

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>>37093162

>> No.37093346

WHY CAN'T I FIGURE OUT IF A FIC CAN USE BOTH PRESENT AND PAST TENSES REEE

>> No.37093494

>>37093346
I mean you can use both, it's just that making it read good when you use them like that is probably not gonna happen.

>> No.37093549

>>37093494
I think I might just switch to present tense. Fucking hell, both tenses sound good, in certain moments they FEEL right, but apparently that was always an inconsistency in my writing so I was doing it wrong.

>> No.37093671

>>37093549
ESL?

>> No.37093681

But... this IS right. I'm an idiot. Ok, maybe I got it.

"I yawn out, completely exhausted. Though I stayed in bed all night long, I only got one or two hours of sleep total. My heart was racing all night.

Was. Stayed. Got. And yet yawn works, because the action is present and the other ones were past events. I'm not crazy, this isn't inconsistent right? It shouldn't be yawned RIGHT????!!

>> No.37093709

>>37093681
Yes, that's how it works.

>> No.37093733

>>37093709
YESSSSSSSSSSSSS

>> No.37093745

>>37093681
Depends on the context for the rest of your fic, honestly. If the rest of your fic is in the similar present tense, then yes, that's how it works. If you're using past tense the whole time, though, and suddenly switch use present tense "yawn", then you've got a problem.

>> No.37093857

>>37093745
Is it alright to write something like this
"Browsing through my contacts on the phone, sitting on the park bench as the cold breeze passed by, I spotted one that stood out."

But then have sections where I'm using present? Because on that one, I'm clearly describing ongoing actions that already happened

"I let out a chuckle, but it’s plainly clear that I’m very nervous. My voice is trembling, this was more difficult than I thought It’d be. This was a bad idea."

This mix also works right?

>> No.37093916

>>37093857
Switch out "spotted" for "spot". That's something that's happening in the current moment, so it should be present tense.
For the second sentence, I'd also switch out the first "was" for "is".

>> No.37093959

>>37093857
>>37093916
oh, and "passed" should be "passes"

>> No.37093974

>>37093916
>>37093959
It's complicated after all...

>> No.37094033

>>37093974
It isn't too bad. If the actions are currently ongoing, use present tense. If they're actions that happened minutes, hours, etc ago, then use past tense.

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>>37090524
>Kissing your wife after she gave you a rimjob
Bolder man than I, lemme tell ya.

I've also realized I'm fucking weird because while I'm completely cool and down for butt stuff, anal plugs specifically are just a massive turn-off. Personal tastes aside you're still very good at smut.

>> No.37095719

>>37095594(me)
Meant anal beads, but plugs are a no go as well

>> No.37096141

>>37090524
for some reason assplay doesn't feel nearly as hot to me when it's the girl doing it to you rather than the other way around

>> No.37097676

>>37095719
Plugs are boring, yeah. I used to think the same about beads but they are quite fun when you actually try them out

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>> No.37100203

>>37100037
My daughterwife and my onahole pictured together.

>> No.37100265

>>37090524
I REALLY need to brush my teeth now. That was really icky.

>> No.37100311

>>37100037
The baby just looks like Gura's head on a tiny body. It's really funny for some reason.

>> No.37101026

>>37100203
I'm not sure if I want to know which is which.

>> No.37102333

>>37101026
It's awwright!

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>>37100311
The wonders of AI art.

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37104329

Tell me about your WIPs.

>> No.37104392

>>37104329
No and fuck off.

>> No.37104410

>>37104392
RIP

>> No.37105979

>>37104313
I do not like this image.
>>37104329
I'm making slow but steady progress on the mecha fic. Although, recently I had to make changes to the plot since the Oort cloud is further away than I initially thought.

>> No.37106054

>>37080935
>Clown magic has so many possibilities
I read this earlier and was dwelling on it at work. I think it's something I could work on; utilization of traits like that with magic. I'd like to thank you for the inspiration and again for the story. Looking forward to see where it's going.

>> No.37106073

I dreamed that I was in a long distance relationship with vtubers. They are Suisei, Haachama and A-chan.

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>>37106054
You're welcome and thanks for that. I'm glad it could inspire you. There will be clowning around where ever this story goes.

>> No.37106491

>>37100265
That bad, huh?

>>37096141
Honestly I struggled with that too even while writing it. As a quick one paragraph or two thing, it's a treat if you're into it and forgettable if you're not, but to write about it at length is hard because when it comes to things done to (you), it's way more difficult to pass a sensation along that you've never experienced. But lesson learned.

>>37095594
That's surprising, why?
Ultimately I used it as a crutch to get to the action faster, as opposed to having to go through lengthy prep steps or teasing to justify going so hard from the start.

>> No.37106814

>>37105979
I assume this will stray closer to real robot action than super robot stuff then. What mecha fiction are you taking inspiration from?

>> No.37108013

>>37104329
Started putting together the first chapter of "The Hangover Rushia Edition" (purely working title, as the hangover part is more the inciting incident and not supposed to go entirely like the movies), but getting all the background work for the rest of the plot in is taking a while. Still, it's fun trying to piece together the flow of the plot and characterization beats.

Hopefully I can get at least the first chapter out before the end of the year.

>> No.37108390

>>36923560
Man that was such a cool chapter. The way you write action fucking supreme! So visceral and gritty, really fiiting the tone of fic. I really can't give it enough praise. Also seems like things are starting to ramp up with all the story beats you're putting into play. I completely forgot about the Matsuri 'stalker' thing. It's was risky but it sure does play into the fic well.. That was great chapter, I highly anticpate the 3rd!

>> No.37109026

>>37106814
Yeah I'm going for the realism route though in a universe where there's kemonomimi, atlanteans, and lemurians there's going to be some weird stuff. I'd say the series that's influencing me the most is Zeta Gundam. Hopefully it turns out well and doesn't descend into incoherent schizo babble.

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Thoughts on a DDLG fic?

>> No.37112244

>>37112230
DDLG is cringe

>> No.37112260

>>37112161
>>37014199
A fic about Polka finding out you're cheating on her with other Polkas because you thought they were all the same person.

>> No.37112309

>>37112244
Yeah, why can't she be your actual daughter?

>> No.37112457

>>37112230
I'd be interested in reading but not with Gura. I think it would be interesting with someone who's flat but not 'cunny', then the relationship might have an interesting dynamic.

>> No.37112527

>>37112457
Shion/Laplus? Maybe Kanata even

>> No.37112547

>>37112230
>DDLG
doki doki literature glub?

>> No.37112563

>>37112527
Aren't Shion and Laplus cunny? Not opposed to seeing them though.

>> No.37112637

>>37112547
I'm glad I'm not the only one with this mindset. What the fuck is DDLG?

>> No.37112658

>>37112637
daddy dom little girl

>> No.37112872

>>37112457
Gura is into that sort of thing.

>> No.37113091

>>37112658
Oh. That makes a lot more sense. I could definitely see Gura in that.

>> No.37113191

>>37112457
I think it would be really interesting with Watame. Showing her the love her father never gave her and domming the fuck out of that sheep while she's reduced to a busty daughterwife sounds hot as fuck.

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37113457

>>37112872
Gura is into this sort of thing

>> No.37113622

>>37112547
Thought the same thing

>> No.37115942

>>37083443
Ahh I've been waiting for this. Suisei has really dug herself a deeper hole hasn't she? I'm enjoying her perspective and the wear and tear her actions have had on her. The lengths she goes for her dream, her drive and determination. It's all very disgusting honestly but also morbidly admirable? If I had to say one thing, I do think it's weird that you've decided to completly ignore Anemachi's existence but I guess you had reasons.

Anyway another bang-up job from you anon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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>>37113457
Chuubas violently fingering themselves post-stream after making a potentially lewd joke or two knowing it probably got a few of their viewers horny...

>> No.37119726

>>37014199
Being pinned down by a Noel / Flare tag team.
Being forced to father their children while knowing they're going to throw you to the curb after you knock them up.
Dealing with they'll never recognize you or call you dad.
Is it worth the money?

>> No.37120783

>>37106491
>That's surprising, why?
I think it's due to the nature of the ass that those toys seem more like they're holding something in. And, you know...what normally comes out of a butt?

>>37108390
Thank you! Having everything work for you is great to hear! Especially that. Like I said I felt like I was treading a line, so I'm glad that was good.

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>> No.37124415

>>37123336
I’m gonna punt this thing

>> No.37124451

>>37124415
It's called a lantern.

>> No.37124574

>>37123336
This is AI right?

>> No.37124649

>>37124574
Yeah, I go through /vtai/ and save cute images sometimes.

>> No.37125040

>>37123336
Astaghfirullah! Sister is not wearing her headscarf properly.

>> No.37125073

>>37106491
>That bad, huh?
It was my fault for trying to read the male rimjob part despite knowing I wouldn't like it. The rest was incredible. You've got a real talent for smut.

>> No.37127757

>>37123336
>Loli Sakamata likes to scare you while pretending to be a ghost
>Eventually get fed up and rape correct her one while pretending to be a ghost yourself
>this is why she's so terrified of ghosts as an adult

>> No.37127872

>>37015315
>>37014168

>> No.37127961

>>37127872
Already been archived, despite earlyfags pathetic attempt at preventing it

>> No.37127995

>>37083443
Man… I do wonder how it’s going to play out for Sui. I’m looking forward to the next chapter to see if she can make it.

>> No.37131214

Write faster, nerds. What do you think I'm paying (You) $0.00 for?

>> No.37132792

>>37131214
Suck my dick.

>> No.37132998

>>37131214
200 words a day, 100$. Take it or leave it.

>> No.37135682

>>37132998
can't believe people pay that much, that's stupidly expensive

>> No.37135963

>>37135682
I agree wholeheartedly

>> No.37137362

>>37131214
I fucking wish some comm money was all it took to get someone to write what I want. And no, Pekofag is not a viable option, I've tried bouncing the idea off him before and he couldn't really get in the right headspace for what I wanted, no disrespect of course

>> No.37138281
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>>37137362
Now now, I never said I COULDN'T write it. I just said it was something I wasn't interested in personally. I've written some things which I hate and made me question life choices and yet I got tipped for doing an excellent job, despise not only hating the character but also being completely new to the fetish. So yeah, throw enough money and I can get you anything~. I'm talking about writing of course.

>> No.37138386

>>37131214
You honestly expect people to be on general 24/7? Don’t you have a life to live?

>> No.37138792

>>37138281
I dunno, maybe? Something about the idea of fetish content being written by someone distinctly not into the fetish rubs me the wrong way, like a cook who won't taste his own food. If you pop me a few of your smut scenes you're most proud of and the burner email I might give you a shot anyways

>> No.37138793

>>37131214
What have you been doing? Other than being a leech?

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>>37138792
If it makes you feel any better, most people hate their jobs. I actually have fun doing what I do, even if it leads to unhealthy sleeping habits. I said "I hated" writing it, but it's really not that bad. I'm fairly loaded with comms already though, for at least a month more or so, but if you don't mind waiting and want to shoot some ideas, you can hit me up at the email at the bottom of Blowing off Stellar Steam. I can give you some more fics I worked on through email afterwards.

>> No.37140260

>>37131214
If you throw in a 2% increase for my superannuation I’ll consider writing some more.

>> No.37140717

>>37140260
No

>> No.37140834

>>37137362
Are you the Aki NTR guy? Didn't he write that 'Plastic Little' fic? Thought that hit your fetish buttons good enough?

>> No.37141702

>>37140834
What made you think that was done by me?

>> No.37141883

>>37141702
A shot in the dark.

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>>37141883
Gachi?

>> No.37142047

>>37141960
No, it's a saying. how do you not know this?

>> No.37142117

>>37141702
This one post from months back >>17681344 narrowed it down to either you or or a writer here that I can't really identity (maybe it was weirdanon2?)

>> No.37142472

>>37139099
>I'm fairly loaded with comms already though, for at least a month more or so,
Did you get even more?

>> No.37142555

>>37142117
I participated in that thread >>17767274 but I did not reply to that guy, no

>>37142472
Depends on who you are. But yeah, there was a couple of people hitting me up from AO3

>> No.37142658

>>37140834
I did like Plastic Little, quite a bit actually, but it's about as barebones as one can get to technically qualify for the NTS genre. There's much more that can be expanded on in terms of tropes, character depth, fetish play, etc.

>>37142117
How do you even remember this shit, I made that post and I barely remember it

>> No.37142712

>>37142555
I'm bugfag. Go figure - guess there was an untapped market for Vtuber fanfiction writers after all. I'm very glad to hear it!

>> No.37142774

>>37142712
That's what I meant by depends on who you are, silly. If I had gotten someone else I'd have told you about it

>> No.37143030

>>37142658
I vaguely remember someone talking about that fic and being arrogant about people not recognizing who wrote it and well the archives exist, enter "Plastic Little" and you have your search.

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>>37142774
Oh.
Well then.

>> No.37143128

>>37143030
>someone talking about that fic and being arrogant about people not recognizing who wrote it
Wait, are some people really that proud that they remember some random fic?

>> No.37143504

>>37143128
No if you follow the link you'd see it's the author being proud that no one could recognize he wrote that and (probably something else).

>> No.37143590

>>37143504
Oh okay, weird thing to be proud about, but I think they deserve little w.

>> No.37144455

>>37142712
>>37143050
In fairness there is a vtuber fanfiction commission market. It's just very concentrated on yuri/shipping stuff instead of male targetted smut.

>> No.37145073

>>37144455
Yeah, no shit, who would want to read stories about their chuubas riding the cock carousel?

>> No.37145315

>>37145073
wheredoyouthinkweare.jpeg

>> No.37145375

>>37145315
Keep your cuck fantasies to yourself.

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>>37145375

>> No.37146715

>>37145375
They’re called simps for a reason, Anon. Their chuubas could do porn and they’ll love them as angels.

>> No.37147319

>>37145375
What fucking fics do you read here that isn't made by males for other males to read?

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Wow. The female orgasm helps with reproduction. That's pretty cool.

>> No.37147384

>>37145375
Anon, I'm actually a cuck and your point is retarded

>> No.37147724

>>37147365
How?

>> No.37147777

>>37147365
Yet another reason it should be avoided.

>> No.37148567

>>37112527
Suppose those three could work. I think a fic involving flat chuubas with a focus on the fetish would be hotter if they're not super into into it and have to 'break' them into liking it.

>> No.37148852

>>37147724
It contracts and relaxes, again and again, pushing the sperm further up the reproductory tract like squeezing a toothpaste tube and making the womb narrower. Also, it dilates the fallopian tubes, thus making it easier for fertilization to happen.

>> No.37148945

>>37147724
You never had sex-ed?

>> No.37149038

>>37148852
Learn something new every day.

>> No.37149167

>>37144455
damn, I knew the market is either yuri/shipping or the furthest depths of fetishes, but I do feel a little saddened since my writing preferences lean more to straight stuff or just non-smut shit. But I guess the whole point of commissions is to be able to cater to the needs of the client since you're just providing a service.

also checked

>> No.37149335

>>37147365
It's also sad. It invalidates men not making women cum. I don't think I'll ever be able to and now I'm feeling bad over that fact

>> No.37149443

>>37149335
Figure out how to eat pussy good and it's not too hard

>> No.37149563

>>37149443
I don't like eating pussy, that's the thing

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>>37149563
Then that's a "you" problem

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>>37149600
I know...

>> No.37149835

>>37149167
I mean the commission market for 'our kind of chuuba fic' is literally like 3 authors at most so it's possible that there's a market beyond bugfag.

>> No.37150245

>>37149443
Exactly this. Skilled cunnilingus will always put you in the lead for the orgasm battle.

>> No.37150439

>>37150245
That sounds like cope, anon.

>> No.37150684

>>37143504
Now you're just making stuff up.

>> No.37150715

>>37150439
I'm not the one with trouble bringing women to orgasm...

>> No.37150938

>>37150715
Yeah, but eating pussy and saying is a skill is pure delusion.

>> No.37151219

>>37150938
I mean, as the one who brought it up in the first place, while it's pretty easy to learn, you DO have to learn it. If you're just mindlessly licking away without paying any attention, you aren't gonna do shit. It's definitely not hard, but you at least need to think a little about what you're doing.

>> No.37151240

>>37151219
Anon, don't lie and pretend you had sex before.

>> No.37151301

>>37151240
One actual time. It was ok.

>> No.37151323

>>37151219
I think I saw a tutorial once. Honestly, if I get to chance to again I might try out eating pussy but if it goes bad that's the end of that period

>> No.37151551

>>37151323
You are what you eat.

>> No.37151579

>>37151551
I'm glad I'm human, then

>> No.37151883

>>37151579
Most men don’t eat pussy though?

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>>37151883
And they're all pigs HAHA GET IT
I'll be here all night, folks

>> No.37151987

>>37151883
You're an insecure little bitch if you can't go down on a woman.

>> No.37152021
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>>37151883
You don't eat pussy because you're insecure
I don't eat pussy because I hate pussy
We are not the same

>> No.37152045

>>37152021
based analchad

>> No.37152049

>>37152021
That sounds like the exact same thing

>> No.37152195

>>37152049
It is, but the anon is in denial about it.

>> No.37152288

>>37152049
Not really. I hate the look and smell of pussy. The other guy probably likes pussy but thinks going down on a woman makes you inferior. It's completely different

>> No.37152389

>>37152288
So, you're gay?

>> No.37152426

>>37152389
Not quite. I hate pussy but I love women

>> No.37152486

>>37150684
I realize now I probably misread that post.

>> No.37152652

>>37152426
Sounds like gay but with extra steps.

>> No.37152713

>>37152652
It's complicated.

>> No.37152724

>>37152713
not really

>> No.37152773

>>37152724
I like cocks. But I don't like men. I hate pussy. But I love women. It's complicated.

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Why is Luna such a candy slut?

>> No.37152878

>>37152773
Is that how you justify not hating being forced to give blowjobs to a vespa riding, steroid abusing, coked out carjacker?

>> No.37152911

>>37152773
>I like cocks.
Okay, you're gay, everything else is just denial or cope. Not that hard to comprehend.

>> No.37152923

>>37152773
>Not an analchad
unbased

>> No.37152938

>>37152911
I'm not gay! I have relationships with women, and sex with men.

>> No.37152970

>>37152938
Yeah, I'm going to stop replying to you, you do you.

>> No.37152995

>>37152970
>Not realizing it's obviously a bit at this point

>> No.37153052

>>37152995
That anon is a repressed homosexual, and if he doesn't want to come to terms with that, his loss. Not going to bother with it anymore.

>> No.37153214

>>37153052
He should go to >>>/lgbt/ for support.

>> No.37153448

>>37152938
I got news for you: that means your gay.
t. Ice Cube

>> No.37153668

>>37153448
I don't get the reference

>> No.37153720

>>37153668
https://youtu.be/Zd8vzIRQLLM

>> No.37153753

>>37153720
>Law & Order SVU
I see why I never got it, I don't watch shit shows.

>> No.37153794

>>37153720
That's not Ice Cube, by the way.

>> No.37153841

>>37153720
That's Ice-T

>> No.37154143

>>37137362
What are you even looking for?

>> No.37154179

>>37153794
>>37153841
They all look the same to me.

>> No.37154193

>>37154143
Something niche, I presume.

>> No.37154283
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> decide not to do important tasks today so I can focus on writing
> end up watching several video essays on genres, cinematography, TV shows and a Spiderman 2 Pizza% world record
> do so for 7 hours
> only end up writing 100 words
Progress?

>> No.37154313

>>37154283
None whatsoever

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>>37154283
Rough for you.
I've been on a break for a while but I recently got hit with inspiration and started a new story. Wrote a total of 1k words today. Should be done sometime during the next thread.

>> No.37154445

>>37154313
>>37154357
I wish I could listen to music on Youtube and have Google available to me without randomly watching several videos every couple minutes of writing or researching as to why sloths can't just poop off of trees if most of their predator related deaths happen when they get off the tree to poop

>> No.37154461

>>37154283
>Pizza%
What the fuck is that?

>> No.37154541

>>37154461
Look it up, anon it’s wild.

>> No.37154553

>>37154461
You know that one ear rape song from an old Spiderman game? The mission about delivering pizzas? There's a speedrun around it.

>> No.37154659

>>37154283
Getting back into writing it after getting stuck in an editing loop for a bit. I'm like 4.5k words into this thing but I don't really have anyone outside of this thread to show it so I kind of get stuck easily.

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>>37154541
>>37154553
>First minute already has this man zipping faster than I knew you could even go in this game
This is gonna be a ride. Thanks.

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I hope we get a Luna thread next. She's been acting way more slutty lately and deserves the attention of more cocks on her

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>>37154784
She's been what? I doubt she's flashing her fucking pussy on screen or anything like that one day she will have enough of being treated like a baby but I'm curious.

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>>37154784
>lately
She's been slutty for like the past year or more. It's why I dropped her. Unless you mean that she's gotten worse.

>> No.37154948

>>37154672
The speed running community is insane.

>> No.37155008

>>37154784
How slutty is it to fish?

>> No.37155147

>>37154948
Yeah. I don't really look too much outside of my incredibly specific autism runner doing randomizer speedruns but there's still a whole wide world of other autists doing things but really fast and optimized.
But more than that, it's making me think of what chuuba would have the dedication to do a speedrun themselves. I know Suisei has that reputation of dedication, but I dunno.

>> No.37155187

>>37155147
>Suisei
She does not have what it takes to be a speedrunner.

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>>37155147
If he ever got hooked on it, it would unironically be Temma

>> No.37155198

>>37152938
I'm disappointed nobody got this reference.

>> No.37155338

>>37155198
Anon somebody posted a link to the video already

>> No.37155353

>>37154283
I'll hopefully be able to release my story within the next couple threads if I don't get caught up on something. I really should be doing more editing but reading over my entire story from the beginning is getting tiring so I'll do one final check then give it the green light.

>> No.37155507

>>37155147
>But more than that, it's making me think of what chuuba would have the dedication to do a speedrun themselves. I know Suisei has that reputation of dedication, but I dunno.
None of the corporate vtubers have what it takes to be a speedrunner. That shit is legit, intense. The only vtuber I know, is an indie one, and he was doing that shit for years before becoming a vtuber

>> No.37155594

>>37155194
He does have enough of the autism to do it, and he has tried psuedo-speedruns before so that wouldn't be too out of place for him

>> No.37155792

>>37155507
Name?

>> No.37155847

>>37155507
Closest thing is Fubuki running that meme category for minecraft about getting full iron armor and dying to a creeper.

>> No.37155924

>>37155792
https://www.twitch.tv/verniy

>> No.37156082

>>37155507
Fubuki did undertale speedruns.

>> No.37156179

>>37155924
Thanks.

>> No.37156216

>>37156179
Yeah, he's a good speedrunner.

>> No.37156426

>>37156216
Is speedrunning all he’s good for.

>> No.37156439

>>37156426
I mean, yeah, he's not really a great conversationalist

>> No.37156454

>>37155924
>Vods are more than ten hours long
The fuck?

>> No.37156485

>>37156439
The best speedrunners are shit conversationalists.
I love ZFG so much it's unreal.

>> No.37156674

>>37156485
Not denying it, but I want to be engaged as well.

>> No.37156708

New thread
>>37156493

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LUNA RAPE

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