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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Definitive Proof of Sakura Miko's Heterosexuality: Tags: Miko, Comedy, NSFW, Voyeurism, HoloJP:>>36622702

PD, PT: LuiMio: Tags: NSFW, Mio, Lui, Lactation, Nursing Handjob:>>36639982

Tenma office smut: Tags: Tenma Maemi, NSFW, short fic:>>36658041

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

After a cataclysmic event caused in the future by Rushia, Flare is sent back in time to prevent it, going through painstaking efforts to get her fired by manipulating her, Mafu, and KoreKore into causing a termination-worthy scandal:>>36609199

Blackmailing Polka with images of her sucking company cock in Upd8 to keep her job:>>36613039

A story similar to Foxes over ducks but Fubuki genuinely loves you and she saves you from a loveless relationship with Rushia.:>>36614295

Flare abruptly waking up one morning in a battle-ravaged shithole in Pakistan with no explanation or understanding of her surroundings and trying to get home:>>36620300

Mio Armpit sex:>>36632518

Suddenly Suplexing Suisei!:>>36657611

Futa Suisei drugs Mori when they go out for karaoke with Rohypnol and rapes her. Bonus points if Mori wakes up partway through and ends up getting mindbroken.:>>36660599

I still want to see a story where (You) have to help both Botan and Rurudo go through their mating cycles together.:>>36667748

you (picrel) is tasked to subdue Myth and Council, including omegay:>>36675426

Can we get a fic about sitting on Laplus's head and forcing her entire body into your asshole?:>>36698760

A Cat's Life but with Fauna's cat instead of Okayu.:>>36699601

Trying to correct Ayame's shitty behavior only to realize far too late that you aren't the first to try.:>>36701585

Suisei no Majo but with Suisei as the main character:>>36717146

Siisei take a lot of pride and like to gloat about how you, her, and Toko are all friends and there's zero romantic or sexual feelings involved. Only problem is you and Toko have actually been fucking like animals pretty much every day since the day you met and have just been hiding it from her.:>>36718169

Noel being blackmailed by high ranking Cover employees about her "other job" and then being forced into becoming their cum dump.:>>36724627

PMC operator Fubuki committing warcrimes all in the name of being able to drop white phosphorous.:>>36737650

This but with Noel and whoever else fits the bill.:>>36743033

Milking your holstaurus Sana:>>36753369

Kson getting gangbanged:>>36758196

>>36758665
I wish there were more badass Mio fics.

>>36758665
Are fics about Kson and Nazuna allowed? Or are they too contentious to be here?

>>36759903
I wish we had those. Join in if you'd like. Nazuna is a fucking babe.

>>36759903
are you an actual tourist or just larping as one? i feel like there have been too many similar permutations of this question for them all to have been genuine by this point, like they're just baiting creative (You)s

>>36760258
Stop being a schizo, nobody's out to get you. And at the very least, it spurs discussion around those chuubas

>>36760330
i don't really mind all that much, the replies are usually funny. just forgive me for not believing there are truly that many distinct people that would ask the incredibly inane question of "is this topic allowed here?" it feels staler and more artificial with every repetition

>>36759903
Everything is allowed. Nothing is sacred.

>>36760003
And also a cocksleeve to dozens of ojisans.

>>36760742
God I hope so. That tiny body deserves to be fucked like a toy

>>36758772
A shonen battle between Bae, Irys and Kronii that ends when you enter the classroom and see your three students doing chuuni shit and playing pretend

>>36761041
Three cocks at once would destroy her and leave her a quivering mess.

>>36761053
That sounds more like a very narrow section of a story rather than one whole

>>36760330
>spurs discussion around those chuubas
I mean if you want to spur some discussion about them.
Narratively, if you want to include them in a fic with their former co-workers would they work better as another mask for Coco /Rushia or as separate individuals altogether?
Because on one hand you have the fact that it's kind of like 'baggage' that weighs them down, but on the other hand the baggage seems like it would be interesting drama fuel, especially if the actual rl drama has already cooled off enough to play around with the idea.

>>36761180
>it starts with bae and irys just goofing around, kronii is telling them to clean the classroom
>Irys grabs a broom and starts spinning it like a lance
>Bae grabs a trashcan lid and a ruler
>kronii pretends not to be into it
>they start powerscaling like Chunnibiyou, shouting power names
>Kronii gets way too into it
>as they all gear up for the ultimate attack, Mr. Anon walks in
>they all realize how dorky they are
it can work as a fun oneshot

>>36761180
I mean it does remind me of that old prompt about (You) trying to wrangle your chuuni classmates because they don't have powers, only to get saved by them when they do demonstrate their powers.

>>36759062
How would you describe armpit sex?

>>36762638
Replace hand with armpit

>>36762638
Sweaty

> browser Pixiv for lewds to aid the thread's discussion
> end up saving 30 images
> jerk off
> don't post any of the images
> repeat until I have a folder with 3k images from Pixiv
Sigh...

>>36758719
>>36744428

>>36758772
Eating Towa's ass

>>36763564
I want to grab that ass but I'm not getting my mouth near it

>>36761338
(You)r presense honestly seems rather superfluous there.
I think it would either need to perspective flip to (You) eavesdropping on the entire thing or (You) being another student in the chuuni brawl if you want to justify a second person perspective here. Otherwise just pick Kronii and and have the fic be about her chuuni feelings getting stoked by the flames of battle.

>>36761053
>>36761338
This does sound a bit interesting to write, but I don’t watch Irys (model fugly) or Kronii (cringe).

>>36764750
Just use it like a prompt and not as a request. Just use a group of chuubas you actually want to write.

Man, some times I really envy the series writers. Choosing which of my quarter baked ideas to write next is damn hard.

>>36766015
>Choosing which of my quarter baked ideas to write next is damn hard.
I do this as well, having a series doesn't change that.

Are there any stories in the archive with a good kissing /make out scene?

>>36766015
What ideas are you bouncing between anon?

>>36767561
Like, a kiss that lasts for a paragraph or more?

>>36717072
>>36717178
>>36717712

https://pastebin.com/DYFURctz

Fubuki-in-space anon here again with a major overhaul of my initial concept. I didn't find too much to change in the cold open due to it's mostly physical nature but I completely rewrote and greatly expanded the "slow" start of the story to try and address the issue of Fubuki not seeming like Fubuki. Do let me know whether it worked at all, and if there are any other issues I should address before moving forward with the story.

>>36768381
Right now I'm deciding between ideas about an Aqua bully fic, a Nene x Shota femdom tease, a Risu smut comedy, a Marine historical smut, a Suisei humiliating you fic, and a drunken university Mori romance. That's not even mentioning the 3 fics I have partially written and will some day come back to for sure, no lie.

>>36768997
The more kiss detail the better.

>>36769822
I wrote Kronii making out with a dog once

>>36769946
I can see this happening IRL

>>36769946
I hate that I'm intrigued.

>>36770211
Time (s)Mutt in the archive
Only a paragraph of making out towards the end of the sexo

>>36769822
>historical smut
What does this even mean. Sex with Marine in the 1700s Caribbean?
Also what kind of humiliation is Suisei doing?

>>36770431
Yes, basically that. I don't know how far I would lean into the pirate setting, at the moment the idea is just one sex scene that only works in that context.
The Suisei idea is the least thought through but it's CFNM and mostly her laughing at your increasingly naked body.

>>36770805
>laughing at your increasingly naked body.
What, are (You) suffering from lewd dance MMD syndrome and are slowly losing clothes as the song progresses?

>>36771478
You make it sound like a disorder that can just randomly affect any citizen at any given time...which would explain a lot of them...

>>36771478
>>36771504
It's quantum clothing, sometimes it's there and sometimes it isn't.

>>36771534
People are only clothed when you look at them

>>36771712
What kind of conspiracy theory is this?

>>36770276
Well, that was an experience. The ending was very good.

>>36758246
To be honest, a good part of why I remember that fic at all is that it cuts off before any action happens, thus cucking me out of content.

Then I re-read it on a whim months later and realized that it actually has a really good core to it (that you squandered on a punchline).

The fake politeness works as a veneer for being really horny about discipline and it makes sense that she wouldn't talk like that in day to day conversations. You've also had an interesting sequel hook there, with her spending an extended amount of time in bondage. Being fed with a spoon and given water from a bottle, carried to the toilet and back, having TV channels flicked for her so she doesn't get bored, with no control over when or if that happens, it would all turn incredibly chafing. That's besides the concept of periodically being used as an onahole without being so much as asked. Or being spanked again to refresh her butt's healthy redness.

>pinch Ayame's butt
>"Did it hurt?"

>"Yes"
>"Alright, I was up for another round of sex, but if you're still sore, that'll wait"

>"No"
>"Okay, good. Get ready for more paddlin'"

>>36772591
Ah, finally, the /wg/ Twine game is coming to fruition.

>>36766015
Honestly that doesn't go away even with a series.

>>36763564
This but literally and it's a dolcett fic where she gets off on being snuffed

>>36771504
Of course, every idol occasionally experiences their clothes gradually disappearing when they perform a choreographed dance routine. It's just one of the dangers of being an idol.

https://streamable.com/s8irb3
Just leaving this here for my brothers and sisters in scat, of who we have a few of.

>>36775612
I was expecting Noraneko and was not disappointed. Good one, anon.

>>36658041
Very nice, I hope you do a continuation one day

>>36777200
Ayame was really cute in the latest hologra. I almost want to like her.

>>36769662
>>36758719
You should have attached it to the anchor and added an image if you wanted this to get attention.
It's decent but I do have to echo what I said last thread that you really should hold off until you have something more to show for this.

don't die just yet

Slow thread huh?
What's a historical setting you think might be a fun setting for fic?
That marine stream a few days ago made me think the 80s would be a fun setting (even if 80s throwbacks are getting more and more common). The glitz, glamor and idealistic ideas of the future seems like they'd be a great backdrop for something like drama centered on the idol parts, or exploring the wacky alternate world of chuubas somehow coming into existence in the 80s as a thing like they are today.

>>36782329
Honestly I think great depression would be a nice set piece, for what I don't know exactly yet but I think something could be done with it.

>>36782417
The interwar era is an underused piece of history but I honestly can't think of it as a good chuuba fic setting. It's in a weird midpoint where it's not far back enough to be fantastical but too close to really be interesting.

>>36762930
pleaso do this but with Mio helping you to form a Harem

>>36758772
I want to suck on Polka average size cock

>>36783485
Yeah you're right about that. It's shame that it's so underutilised because personally I think it to be a pretty intresting period of time.
I was thinking further on it but I could only come up with one decent idea.
Suisei's (Or any musically inclined chuuba I guess) music career greatly benefiting from the economic boom only to come crashing down hard in the laters years.

>>36784637
For a JP tuber I'm pretty sure the economic crash of the lost decade fits better as a time period rather than the great depression unless you really need that interwar era flavor.

>>36784916
Ah you're right, I completely forgot about their crash.

>>36782329
a post apocaliptic setting but none of that gay shit of zombies or muh nuclear winter
have a piece about you living in a small settlement, exploring ruins and having fun with a chuuba

>>36785252
Funnily enough, that's the initial draft idea of ShadowLive

>>36785704
Shame the guy making it died

>>36784009
I mean, that's basically the entire plot of PD;PT, except that Mio isn't barren then.

>>36763564
Compelling but I'm working on something else at the time.

>>36785252
>>36785704
There's was also incomplete rapture with kanata but it's a damn shame that it was never continued

>>36782329
A slice of life fic about (You) and various chuubas living within the nitty gritty walled city of Kowloon I've been dwelling the idea for a while but it does feel pretty ambitious.

>>36779644
I'll get back to you guys when it's done then. First time writefagging, wasn't really sure whether posting WIP stuff is acceptable.

>>36791464
It's fine in principle, but people have been burned before by attentionwhores who constantly talk about their writing process or ask questions related to it but end up not (or poorly) delivering. Also, reading multiple early drafts can be tiring. If you want to, it's best to only talk about your WIP at a few crucial points. If you want to incorporate as much feedback as possible, writing a followup and touching up the original post-release are possibilities.

>>36785252
But would there be a plot then? Because that sounds like the setup to a slice of life.

>>36792933
Girl's Last Tour.

>>36786560
>That's basically the entire plot of PD;PT
I know but you can never have enough Hag harems

>>36794384
UOHHH harems...making them fight...

>>36758719
>>36777215

>>36785704
Huh? Wasn't the initial draft the whole shadow monsters and Ayame part? When did those two come into the process and basically define what that fic was?

>>36792933
Even the slowest of SoLs have plot, what are you talking about
sure the plot isnt the focus but its there

>>36798927
The idea itself came from a dream of mine where I explored ruins of a post apocalyptic world with not a single living things in sight except a female companion that switched every so often

>>36799028
And yes, when I say every so often I do mean that I had that dream several times over the period of many years. And there was a shadow creature aspect to it, but it was fairly different

>>36759062
Soul Eater ripoff where a chuuba becomes the weapon of another chuuba

>>36799185
Anya...

>>36799339
Anya is no weapon, she's just Reine's and Ollie's toelicker

>>36799185
>Mio and Fubuki are Ayame's sword
>Aqua is Shion's wand
>Ogayu is Korone's gloves
>Rami is Botan's Sniper Rifle
>Laprus becomes Lui's whip
it has a lot of potential

>>36800436
That setup almost sounds like it would be a chuuba battle royale.
Though it would still need a plot even with that setup. Who'd be the viewpoint character? The 'obvious' solution would probably be (You) and your oshi as the wielder/weapon pair but a story like this almost feels like it calls for the cast to just be chuubas. (Though obviously with one pair favored to win by virtue of being the viewpoint characters)

Any fics that involve a plotting/manipulative Anon?

>>36806856
The Corrupting Nene series is literally about you manipulating Nene into being a ruthless killer. It is a greentext series, but honestly the laconic style of the 'prose' works really fucking well at conveying how fucked it is.

>>36769822
How would an Aqua bully fic work? I'm interested on how you would write this autistic introvert as a bully

>>36807808
Is it not a fic about bullying Aqua? That's where my mind goes

>>36807808
NTA but the words Aqua bully makes me think of her only pretending to be retarded so she can force you into being her tard wrangler.
...
Either that or (You) are her childhood bully who meets her years later still bearing the aftereffects of your bullying. With flashbacks to the past as you try and make amends in the present.

>>36807808
lol
The idea is you are Aqua's bully but her autism makes her think that that means you actually like her. You use this to your advantage to bully her further.

>>36807808
She streams over her kouhai.

>>36782329
>>36758772
Suisei hasn't stopped getting weird messages to her answering machine ever since she subscribed to a newsletter of an organization who is very against the Yakuza movement that's been roaming the streets. One day, she receives an package to her door...

>>36803503
meh you could make it chuubas vs robot/shadows/filipinos and have different teams with you as a combat engineer or something
not to mention you can play around with stuff like
>Botan is the only wielder in Nepolabo, Lamy is a rifle, Polka is a SMG and Nene is a Magnum
>Different forms like Mio becoming a Naginata with fubuki but a Odachi with Ayame
>Weird combos like Gura using Baelz or Ame and Mel

>>36814544
Fun Fact: the Japanese are afraid of silent phone calls.

>>36800436
>Miyabi is Temma's broadsword
>Rikka becomes an energy pistol for Shien
>Oga is an enormous scythe, but nobody is powerful enough to wield him and handle his demonic energy

>>36814544
She receives some form of blackmail against her by the yakuza and has to be their sex slave.
Please god I need more Suisex in this thread.

Is this love
That I'm dreaming
Is this the love
That I've been searching for!

>>36803503
oh fuck this activates my chuuni braincells.

>battle royale for chuubas
>chuubas are designated into two roles, Wielder and Weapon, with Weapons having further class breakdowns.
>a single Wielder can only have a limited number of Weapons, depending on their rank and latent power.
>(You) however, are an anomaly, somehow roped in when you made a pact with a chuuba(your oshi perhaps) who is an unclaimed Weapon.
>you're a shit wielder, knowing almost nothing, but you've got one thing other wielders don't, which is you don't have a limit for the Weapons you can wield.
>you don't know what's the purpose of this battle royale, only that for now, you have to survive.

Yes this is a Fate ripoff I know.

>>36814544
>an package
FML
>>36815615
It's a reference to Hotline Miami you dip.

>>36815727
Sounds like a cross between Fate and Xenoblade

>>36815987
And Soul Eater... I think.

>>36815727
This sounds like a premise straight out of a shonen battle harem anime.

>>36815727
More shamelessly chuuni nonsense. Love it.

Did all the good writers leave or something? Where's sakura summer anon? Constant garbage recently

>>36821082
Yes anon, all the writers have left to go back to writing fanfiction for other fandoms. You can leave now.

>>36821082
Be the change you want to see.

>>36821082
He's under my desk right now, sucking my dick like a good little bitch.

>>36821277
I'm not leaving, don't get buttmad because I insulted your story or something. Nothing personal.

>>36821366
Dumb fucking advice from a dumb fucking person. Do you think customers can't criticize cooks too?

>>36821369
Tell him to get writing again when he's done

>>36821447
t. has never written a single story

>>36821627
No shit, doesn't mean I can't criticize. Don't write at all if you can't hack it. I'm not even naming and shaming here, I'm being considerate. Just the level of quality in recent fics has been rock bottom.

For fucks sakes, stop replying to the threadshitter and his piss-poor bait.

>>36821707
You sound mad lol
I doubt you even read much.

>>36814911
I mean it does still need like a plot to tie it all together. A cool concept can only go so far after all.
Maybe something like (You)/chuuba randomly finds themselves deep into monster land and has to become a wielder in order to get out. Now that they're a wielder they get pressganged into the organization and are forced into the fight against *Insert whatever monster the writer finds interesting here*.

>>36821773
I read at least a couple paragraphs of everything that comes through

>>36821768
Sorry for hurting your feelings I guess.

>>36821768
Insulting /wg/'s writers, even just the collective, is a sure-fire way to get (You)s. It's happened in the past and /wg/ never learns.

>>36821898
Don't samefag, say what you want to say to me.

>>36821838
I mean if you want them to get better then say what they're doing wrong. Writers all want feedback, so call out the works you see as 'shit' and lay out what's wrong with them.
Even if you're the one eating the soup you should still see what's wrong with it.

>>36821917
I'm not samefagging, and I'm not talking to you. Fuck off.

>>36772182
Sorry for the cucking, I can see how it feels like a waste to end it right there. Though the punchline is what came first, so I'm fine with it - it just needs to go in the remake so I can write something serious in the same mold.
Extended periods of time in bondage are a good idea, but not what I'd imagine happening next; even though it would turn out badly for her long-term, it's something Ayame would probably enjoy at first; she's kinky, and still lazy at heart. I have an idea for a "redemption arc" before getting to the more heavy bondage, my (and her?) favourite thing.
The politeness as something Ayame enjoys as an expression of submissiveness, and that keeps her from overstepping her boundaries too much, is definitely a fun element. I'll try to keep it around like that.

>>36821992
Dude, there's no need for such hostility. Aren't you embarrassed getting so angry? I'm not trying to start a fight with you here. And yes you are samefagging, its obvious.

>>36821958
I usually do give my opinion when they are posted, not on every fic I read but most of them, I just noted that the general quality of writing is really on a landslide right now.

>>36822194
List your opinion on the last 5 fics posted.

>>36822321
That's a trap. We both know how that game ends and I'm not going to give you the satisfaction.

>>36822444
Trips of wisdom!

>>36822194
>>36822444
Then share your thoughts on any fics that you consider at the rock bottom.
If you want better fics then enlighten us on why the recent stuff isn't to your liking.

>>36823528
Are you legitimately this stupid? You seriously can’t tell when someone is shitting up the thread? Fucking hell, no wonder they get easy (you)s.

>>36823829
You're shitting up the thread too, you know. You sound... extra mad. Spicy, even.

>>36823914
Everybody in this thread is a dumb fuck, you know this.

>>36823829
Consider it me giving them a litmus test to see whether they actually hate the new fics being posted or are just another threadshitter. Even someone talking about how much they hate your work is helpful to a writer so they can see where they can improve.

>>36824138
You're just helping to shit up the thread.

Random question:
When a story has multiple love interests, do you prefer when there's one main girl who will obviously win or when there is an attempt at ambiguity?

>>36824661
I prefer it when the author finishes the story.

Which story has made you the happiest?
Which has made you the saddest?

>>36824698
None

>>36824698
The story that made me the saddest was Paradise Lost, a tragic tale of woe and heartbreak
Happiest was Paradise Regained

>>36824661
I prefer ambiguity, I think it adds a little mystery that can keep me reading.

>>36824661
Genuinely it depends on whether the author can actually write 'harem' good because if they can't they should just stick to having one clear winner. Ambiguity is only good if the author isn't dead set on one girl winning before the story is already written, because if the author already knows who's gonna win the false hope they give for the readers that like the other girls just turns to disappointment.

>>36824661
Obviously win

>>36824898
Clearly some faggot chump that liked match made.

>>36824960
Easily had the shittest ending of any fic in the archive.

>>36824661
Monogamy and harems are overdone, I prefer polyamory between everyone.

>>36825153
Might as well tell everyone you prefer sucking Tempiss dick

At least get more coherent bait.

>>36815727
Sounds like Valkyrie Drive, actually.

>>36824960
I'm gonna be honest with you I'm a bitch who saw in thread that match-made ended with koyori winning and Suisei getting a shitty end, so I never read the last part. Mostly because I thought match made was going to be like a menhera wrangler length multipart series and not a koyori romance mini series.

>>36825296
The author just has below sea level taste.

This thread is so shit today.

>>36825361
I'm not gonna disparage an author for having a clear narrative arc they wanted to follow but goddamn did the worldbuilding for the first two parts make me think it was going to be a decently long story about a love triangle with themes of going with the good fate assigned to you (Koyori) or risking it all to seize your destiny (Suisei)... or something like that but in less chuuni terms.

>>36825670
I like how the thread was slow and comfy until three hours ago.

>>36825857
NTA but since I was team Koyo I was happy with the ending, but I do agree that your idea of having it be a true mystery with one final deciding moment at the end would have been better.

Hey AA you forgot to archive the last PD;PT chapter in the series archive.

>>36826992
Nothing of value was lost

>>36758719
Beware, Miko is Coming

Tags: NSFW, Miko, Masturbation

https://rentry.org/cmtsx

>>36826992
LuiMio? Even then the archive wasn't updated at all yet

>>36827779
Plot and (assuming this is intended for) smut wise, this is a bit too short. It kind of needs way more buildup to the deliberate anticlimax you were going for. Perhaps by writing more about her desires or going in more detail about her fantasies, or 'showing' rather than telling about the details of Miko seeing Haachama changing or the pekomiko rape?
The narration style is good as is but it really needs more stuff in the middle in order to make the ending work.

>>36828072
The man loves his hags.

>>36828098
As for whether this is intended to be smut, it kind of is? It started as a smut idea and then naturally had the humour intrude upon it, ending up with a mix that I enjoy. I don't think I'm good at complex characters and emotional journeys, and people fucking just for arousal's sake seems boring to write to me.
As for the criticism, that's fair. I might add something more in the middle, especially Miko's fantasies/preferences - that would be useful as something to build upon, if I have good ideas for the actual Suisex.

>>36828098
I added a bit more. Probably not enough, but it's time for work here. Maybe I'll look at it again later

>>36827779
Miko-ti....

>Goddammit Matsuri! Your pussy really makes me feel a Festival of Sensations.

alright folks, we're back to square one. What's in the works? Anything you'd like to share about your upcoming works to the fine folks of this thread?

Bonus question: What was a story/series which the plot did not go the way you expect?

>>36832659
I'm going to do my hardest to get that fly fic out by the end of today.

>>36827779
>>36828574
Its kind of hot and funny, but it really needs a sequel with that buildup to Mikos decision

>>36834275
The divorce one right?

>>36834275
If the fly became unhinged after the divorce and told Fubuki about how it would commit terrorist acts, would Fubuki make the call to get it SWATted?

>>36834533
Yeah. Life stuff has been keeping me from finishing it and it's not even that long to begin with.

>>36758772
Scarle getting raped by a flip or taco. Or her getting raped by both at the same time.

>>36832659
Next chapter of a predator's touch. It's a bit longer than usual, but should be posted sometime today.

>>36832659
I picked up a WIP for a sequel I thought I would never see again and wrote some 3000 words over the course of the weekend. Stalled now because we have another stupid tropical system to worry about.

>>36836071
Is this that sequel to that Mio incest fic?

>>36835170
Are you a flip, a taco or Scarle?

>>36836507
Nope, not that one. This one's been in the discarded pile for a year now. I guess sometimes you're just in the mood for a thing or another...

>>36836663
Scarle

>>36839314
Post tits.

>>36841382

>>36758719
Here's that divorce fic that I've been talking about lately. Uh, I don't know how to write courtroom drama so I opted for comedy instead. Hopefully it gets a laugh or two out of someone. I know they will if they like really old memes like I do. Anyways, all feedback is appreciated and, most importantly, enjoy! If this ends up being a dud then I hope it at least inspires someone to write a proper fic ;)


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ7hv_me2QXNENPXP17oSLMP37IDU4Icy1uFxIGPVAQeAu6f8I32z6YeE34ZTaZvRh7ah1q_xyrrER1/pub
Tags: SFW, Fubuki, Shien, Oga, YAGOO, Ina, Suisei, Fly

>>36842719
>I don't know how to write courtroom drama so I opted for comedy instead.
And I'm not reading

>>36842719
I forgot the comedy tag again. Whoops.

>>36842719
So Fubuki really wasn't the mother of all those fox-fly hybrids?

>>36827779
That was fucking hot. Nice one.

>>36835055
This post got ignored but I want you to know you gave me a chuckle.

>>36842719
This read like a fever dream after browsing old YouTube poops. The 'WHERE ARE THEY NOW' segment in particular made me snort, but the entire thing drew quiet 'What the fuck's out from under my breath. An utterly idiotic (if not sometimes heavy-handed in its shitposty nature) ride from start to finish, but it got a giggle out of me. Color me shocked to find something fly related I liked. Good stuff, Anon.

>>36822120
That's part of why extended bondage is a good idea: she would enjoy it as an excuse to be lazy, but the boredom and lack of control is going to start chafing her after some time. Hell, even just being tied up and blindfolded, then left to wait for the punishment and/or reward would be grating after an hour.


Speaking of laziness, maybe that can be used as a centerpiece for discipline? Like, get her into maid roleplay, with the stipulation that when she wears the maid uniform, she has to obey without question. You can touch her anywhere, have sex in any position, spank her without even explaining what she has to be sorry for, etc. Then you abuse this to make her actually wash dishes and do the laundry.

>>36832659
Still working on Okayu smut

>>36844887
Thank you! I'm glad it's hot for some people, despite it not being the whole point. And masturbation isn't the popular kind of smut, but Miko's fantasies help bring in some yuri diversity I guess.

>>36832659
I'm on the last scene of Heartbreak Tokyo chapter 2, which is a fight scene that I'm kind of struggling with. Still, if it's not done by Friday morning I'm gonna punch myself in the face

>>36846416
Oh yeah didn't you say you'd cut off your balls or something if you didn't finish it by last weekend?

>>36846416
I did say last week it should be done within the week, but with my job and the chapter being way longer than I thought, that may have been a touch inaccurate of me. Don't remember saying anything about my balls

>>36846923
I did say last week it should be done within the week, but with my job and the chapter being way longer than I thought, that may have been a touch inaccurate of me. Don't remember saying anything about my balls

>>36847100
Nah, I remember you saying you'd castrate yourself too.

>>36847180
With how much I've been jerking off to characters to not slip in some smut in some kinda fugue state I might have damaged my balls anyways

>>36847554
Meh, post someone new, kson is getting old.

>>36847652
faggot

>>36847652
You're not gonna like who else I'd post, I think...

>>36846138
I can definitely see her ending up spending at least half a day tied to the bed, probably because she failed to get up in time on the next day though. That way the punishment has some irony to it, and it fits a more casual morning atmosphere.
Housework is definitely in the cards, maybe right after the spanking. For full obedience I prefer a more natural dynamic where what's permissible is something she has to intuit rather than making it ritualistic, but I can see the appeal of the latter as well. It's certainly good for initiating some form of roleplay.

>>36842719
>I opted for comedy instead
And you ruin it. Don’t know why you do that, but you ruin it.

>>36842719
ill admit i wasnt really sold on this until the YIIK reference came across and i laughed a bit too much.
way too shitposty and not funny enough without the references but these threads have definitely seen worse

>>36842719
Eh, it's a bit too disconnected joke wise, it's like you took as many shots as you could take and hoped enough landed to make it funny, some did land and get a chuckle out but for the most part it just added to the 'meh'.
I think conceptually the fly divorce fic idea really needs to be built around a single joke rather than trying to shotgun quick laughs.

>>36850152
What is this retarded monkey-speak?

>>36842719
The jokes didn't land for me, that's really all I have to say about this.

>>36851232
American English

>>36851305
It sounds horrible.

>>36851305
Barely legible English, the mark of a SEAmonkey.

>>36853210
That's what I said, don't know why you repeated it.

>>36853434
Shut the fuck up, seanigger.

The struggle I have between writing a chuuba that's too out of character even though I have enough precedent and writing some kinky debauched sex and accompanied dialogue is a huge reason why I write so damn slow...

>>36855025
>The struggle I have between writing a chuuba that's too out of character
Then don't write them as out of character?

>>36855284
Don't know if this is a joke or not but given how retarded /wg/ usually is I'm going to assume you fell out of the stupid tree at birth and hit every branch on the way down

>>36758772
Anal sex with Mori but she's depicted as grossly out of character and has an entirely original history to the point you couldn't even tell it was her if you weren't explicitly told

>>36855025
My guy, just say you’re a slow writer. No need for all this cope.

>>36855025
Hololive needs to help its fan work community by making all chuubas release a sex tape so we can better understand that side of them. I'm willing to bite the bullet and help them film them.

>>36858377
>Hololive needs to help its fan work community by making all chuubas release a sex tape so we can better understand that side of them.
You have no idea how Japanese idols work, do you?

>>36858686
Cope

>>36858726
Cope about what?

>>36858755
And seethe.

>>36858755
About Tempus having constant backbreaking sex with ID and EN, of course.

>>36858377
That’s a quick way to lose millions of fans. Don’t know why they would ever do that.

>>36858820
To gain millions more than they'd lose, duh

>>36858847
But men aren’t interested in sloppy seconds nor whores. It’ll be a net loss for the company.

>>36858995
They're neither sloppy seconds nor whores, incel

>>36858995
The popularity of porn on the internet is a direct refutation of your idea.

>>36859028
>Release a sex tape
>Not whores or sloppy seconds
What drugs are you on?

>>36859063
Not him, but how many of those men would date those women?

>>36859099
I dunno. I'd date Mia Malkova for sure. Also, they're not in a relationship with you and never will be. I was hesitant about using the word as >>36859028 did, but you're crossing into incel territory now.

>middle of the morning in SEA
well that explains why the thread went to shit. Anyway has any of you ever tought of writing a murder mistery?

>>36859077
Apparently I'm just normal, not a fedora-tier loser like you

>>36859195
I hate to admit this, but I have a kind of murder mystery story autistically plotted out scene by scene that I never bothered to actually write lol

>>36859195
It sort of like a time travel story where it sounds very interesting but requires so much fucking planning in order to actually do right (i.e following the rules of detective/mystery fiction of having the case be solvable by the readers just before the characters reach it) that I really don't want to commit to it unless I can find a fun way to spin it.

>>36859642
As an actual story or fanfic

>>36859195
>murder mistery?
i dont think i could write one without forgetting some extremely important detail that instantly gives the mistery away

>>36842719
I agree with >>36851088
There are moments that seem like they should be funny if this was a visual medium, but it isn't, so things like "Suisei tries to strike part of the record but accidentally deletes the whole thing" doesn't mean much of anything.
A novelization of Airplane! would be a weak story, and this is in the same vein as that.

>>36861609
Hololive fanfic

>>36863569
What's the premise if you don't mind sharing the idea that made you plot out the mystery?

>>36859195
I've had rough idea for a mystery that involves murder further on down the line, but those kinds of stories require a lot of meat on the bones in order to be engaging. And I don't think I have the chops for it.

Is there a fic about Noel being an abuser? Really liking her new development

i just lost my fujochadcast greentext fic because i fat fingered my keyboard and the rentry tab closed itself
it was supposed to be a surprise but ill guess ill let you know

>>36866041
You didn't make a copy?

>>36866041
Ctrl + Shift + T to reopen a closed tab. Lots of times the text might be cached.

>>36866106
i started the draft but i was on a roll so i just kept going. I was totally in the zone and thinking on chadcast smelly pubes that it totally went over my head
>>36866152
the first thing i tried, sadly its all gone. Im going to sleep horny and sad at the same time. will try to tackle it tomorrow

>>36866041
>fujochadcast
Good. That's a sign from the universe that you shouldn't be writing such crap.

>>36865573
her what

>>36866311
>That pic
Bae when she realizes I'm rubbing the wrong hole (it's the right hole).

>>36866646
nta, but Noel is not in a good place right now

>>36866311
>Mori with an overgrown stinky bush
Goddamit now im hard

>>36866962
How is that any different from normal, she's fucking loopy

>>36866962
is she malding about piracy again?

>>36866962
What's wrong with Lui's apartment?

>>36866627
>Look ama i fit in

>>36866962
Yeah, no shit. She has BPD, they’re never good mentally

>>36866962
i haven't heard anyone mention this except for you in this particular general for some reason, and you consistently refuse to elaborate. i think you're just off your pills, schizochama

>>36868644
Check her Twitter.

>>36868788
i've gone back over a week and the worst i can find are one where she's playfully complaining about poor sleep and another where she's developed a rash. are you planning on substantiating this with something, or should i just go back to telling you take your meds?

>>36865573
>Really liking her new development
What did she do this time?

>>36869351
nothing, we've got a schizo on the loose

>>36867187
Yeah, she’s malding about piracy.

>>36867180
She’s not loopy, she just needs to take her meds.

>>36870482
>she just needs to take her meds.
Wow, noel is literally me.

>>36844996
>>36850537
>>36851271
>>36861778
>>36851088
Thanks for the feedback! If I ever do a remake then I'll take these criticisms into account.

>Goes from someone who can't even hit notes in an easy difficulty song to near full comboing hard difficulty in 1 day
BAE PLEASE I KNEEL YOU HAVE NOTHING TO PROVE
GET SOME REST YOU HAVE DONE ENOUGH FOR YOUR FIRST DAY

>>36871075
Brratchama...

>>36859178
t. cuck

>>36871105
Sorry about that, was meant for global

>>36871130
Incel

>>36871139
no wonder this place is so shit, globaltards not staying in their containment thread

Somebody's internet cafe must be going out of business real soon, this threads been extra brutal during SEA hours

>>36871174
I'll say its the idiots that reply to them.

>>36871053
Glad we could help, don’t be discouraged though.

>>36871105
>Brratchama...
What happened? Why did the jannie delete the post?

>>36871518
Don't worry, I've posted worse and I've yet to leave.

>>36871765
NTA but I'm curious, what does 'IWBTG' even mean? It just makes me think of 'I wanna be the guy' and I doubt it's about that nightmare.

>>36871765
Yeah, only said it because they’re some shitters who try to scare away writers.

>>36871765
What other works did you write?

>>36872134
That's weirdanonv2, so Paradise Lost and Regained among other stuff.

>>36872616
>weirdanonv2
is he really or are you guessing?

>>36871886
The title is a reference to that torture session disguised as a video game. As I was double checking "A Winner is You" it triggered an associative memory I had with the game so I decided to make it the title of the fic.
>>36871891
The gesture is appreciated even if it doesn't really apply in my case. I hope the guy who wrote that Tenma fic in the previous thread continues to write more.
>>36872134
A lot of stuff. If you want to read a bad fic I wrote then I suggest: Fubuki and Bae Are Trapped in a Room While Mumei Films Then Something Unexpected Happens.

>>36872705
Oh, shit, I was right then.
A giant Mike Tyson should've knocked the everloving dogshit out of Fubuki as soon as she tried to leave her children.

>>36872705
Just wanted to make sure, Anon.

>>36872705
>Fubuki and Bae Are Trapped in a Room While Mumei Films Then Something Unexpected Happens.
Jesus, that was you?

>>36872796
>Mike Tyson should've knocked the everloving dogshit out of Fubuki as soon as she tried to leave her children.
But that’s typical woman behavior

>>36867187
>she malding about piracy
I'm sorry but what?

>>36874520
her roommate

>>36874520
People have been taking Noel private membership streams and uploading them.

>>36874549
Oh, I thought people like her just got over it since it'll be a waste of time.

>>36866041
Fuck, hope you manage to rewrite what you lost. I know how you feel since that shit happened to me whenever I had to write a report.

>>36874549
Is she having anti problems as well?

>>36874993
nah the idea of people bypassing her absurd paywalls sits forever in her mind rent free

>>36874993
Noel has antis? But she's so nice and calm.

>>36874039
Yeah. I wrote it with the express purpose of pissing off the hooman that requested it. Doesn't excuse the shoddy writing but I succeeded in my goal.

>>36875229
>I wrote it with the express purpose of pissing off the hooman that requested it
Sound likes a dick move to do.

>>36875197
That’s what she wants you to think.

>>36875262
Sounds like you're that little bitch hooman.

>>36875262
They were a whiny bunch last year and Mumei isn't fun to make fun of like Mori so what could else could I do?

>>36865573
There's two series about the concept, Noel Bullydere has her abuse you, and Brown Black and Blue because I Love You has her abuse Flare.

>>36875262
HoloEN prompts and stories aren’t welcome here.

>>36875810
'Here' being Jakarta?

>>36875882
No, in the writing general.

>>36875720
I think that anon means an actualy abuse story

>>36871053
If you really are weirdanon2 like your other post suggests, then a 'remake' really needs to be structured like your other comedy fics and be written around landing a single joke rather than trying to shotgun as much wacky stuff like this fic tried doing.
>>36876043
If you mean domestic abuse, then that would Brown Black and Blue, that entire fic is domestic abuse writ large. It may not have landed its ending but it has some seriously fucked scenes in the middle that are pretty good if you're looking for (non-sexualized) abuse.

>>36876191
>It may not have landed its ending
What didn't you like about the ending?

>>36876451
Still the same as my old feelings about it >>34598170
But too say it in brief,
The preceding chapters moved way too fast to make the ending have impact.
It's worldbuilding was too nonexistent and introduced stuff at the literal very end (The fact they were married).
It wasted a lot of potential for good scenes in its rush to the end.

>>36876676
Damn, would you say it's worth the read even after that? Because I don't want to read a fic and then be disappointed.

>>36875810
Based.

>>36876752
Not him, but you should give it a try.

>>36875473
What?

New thread
>>36877070

>>36876752
Honestly it has some very good scenes in the middle that if you enjoy reading non-sexualized abuse/pain it's at least worth a read.

>>36876988
>>36877402
I'll give it a try then

>>36877552
Don't! What if it's bad and you don't enjoy it!? You'll have to live forever with the fact you tried something new and it didn't work out! Can you really stomach such a reality?

KANATA RAPE

ONWARD, BRETHREN! TO THE NEXT THREAD!