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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>36410916

>> No.36589062
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.36589111
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Chapter 5 A city of magic and reunions: Tags: Watame, Flare, Polka, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy:>>36551015

Chapter 6: A mage's tower and a reason to win: Tags: Watame, Flare, Polka, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy:>>36551015

Chapter 7: A miracle of water, starlight, and arrows: Tags: Watame, Flare, Polka, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy:>>36551015

>> No.36589302
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Magni works at a diner then complains that his uniform is ugly.:>>36418481

Mio reading all the comments about wanting to breed her dusty barren womb and her reaction towards it.:>>36421338

Finding a disgusting baby moth monster under your house and trying to exterminate it while it mocks you before it kills your neighbours:>>36459580

A story in which Haato switches to Haachama and slices your penis off with a scalpel in horribly vivid detail after you they catch you in a part of their room you aren't supposed to be in (based on a weird sci-fi future chuuba dating sim dream I just woke up from):>>36461576

(You) being Fubuki's trusted close friend, then maybe you stumble upon her changing or her constant teasing causes the camel's back to break, and in a moment of weakness you rape her.>>36466125

Story about pic related.:>>36478767

Fubuki Glasses-TF full with hypersensitivity and being worn by an unsuspecting Pekora:>>36502053

Catching Fubuki practicing her whisper voice:>>36517961

A fic about the kemonomimi getting turned into animal form and trying to get back.:>>36539489

Being raped by Harpy Mumei!:>>36542990

A fleshed out version of this >>36551167 :>>36553269

In order to seal the deal for peace and unify the land, you are to be married to a powerful lady. However, your political enemies have convinced the shogun to pick Lady Ookami, of the Ookami clan, a generous but heartbroken widow who is getting up there in years:>>36574979

Risu casts a spell on your nuts that massively increases your production and gladly takes responsibility to drain them dry:>>36588980

>> No.36591360

>>36589041
Can Noel be saved?

>> No.36593054

>>36589041
i can save her

>> No.36593621

>>36593054
And how are you gonna complete that herculean task?

>> No.36593733
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>>36593621
Lots of lovey-dovey impregnation sex, with a side of post-coital cuddling and loving compliments whispered into her ear.

>> No.36594352

Pollatio 3 Onegai..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T2PD4QV-bq0

>> No.36594411

>>36594352
suicide onegai

>> No.36594412

>>36594352
>tfw Gal Polka blows you in Bully Girls
SHUT IT DOWN THEY KNOW

>> No.36595676

>>36594352
I want to shove my hand down her throat and see what she's hiding for her circus act.

>> No.36595784

>>36595676
It's like twenty feet of tied handkerchiefs, and at the very ends is a set of keys to your house

>> No.36596806

>>36595676
She's hiding a plug down there. Pulling it out will cause her to start vomiting out her body weight in semen from all the dicks she sucked at upd8

>> No.36597268

>>36596806
Cope, seethe, and dilate.

>> No.36597608

>>36597268
Mald and vibrate moron

>> No.36598027

>>36594412
Finally getting recognition in the ultimate way; chuubas recreating the smut we write.

>> No.36598593

>>36597608
Is that supposed to be an insult?

>> No.36601411

>>36593621
Thorough happiness training

>> No.36603374
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>> No.36604343

>>36603374
Ojou my beloved...

>> No.36605508
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rrat Ayame..

>> No.36606852 [SPOILER] 
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Ayame as a sub!

>> No.36607436

>>36606852
I know she isn't tied up but this made me remember the foreverial tiedup delitized guy. Thanks for that.

>> No.36607688
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>>36607436
Oh you fucker.

>> No.36607721

>>36596806
She only sucked mine because I'm her boyfriend

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>>36607721
I don't remember making this point. Pic related: I attached a GoPro to my penis.

>> No.36609199
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>>36589111
After a cataclysmic event caused in the future by Rushia, Flare is sent back in time to prevent it, going through painstaking efforts to get her fired by manipulating her, Mafu, and KoreKore into causing a termination-worthy scandal

>> No.36613039

>>36589111
Blackmailing Polka with images of her sucking company cock in Upd8 to keep her job

>> No.36613756

>>36613039
This but it doesn't work because the picks you took of her sucking cock is yours.

>> No.36614295

>>36589111
A story similar to Foxes over ducks but Fubuki genuinely loves you and she saves you from a loveless relationship with Rushia.

>> No.36615630

>>36609199
>After a cataclysmic event caused in the future by Rushia, Flare is sent back in time to prevent it, going through painstaking efforts to get her fired by manipulating her, Mafu, and KoreKore into causing a termination-worthy scandal
I read that as "going through Pakistan" at first and was confused.

>> No.36616087

>>36614295
Sounds like a shitty fucking story.

>> No.36617076

>>36616087
Indeed.
Its so shitty, I'm going to remove it from this thread.

>> No.36617559

>>36617076
Remove yourself too.

>> No.36618021

>>36617559
I tried to. Apparently I left it up for too long.
Whoever does the next thread please ignore it.

>> No.36620300

>>36589111
Flare abruptly waking up one morning in a battle-ravaged shithole in Pakistan with no explanation or understanding of her surroundings and trying to get home

>> No.36620349

>>36620300
She gets raped in the refugee camp because she dresses like a whore

>> No.36620390

>>36620300
She becomes the leader of an radical Islamic terrorist cell by happenstance

>> No.36620772

>>36591360
>>36589041
Can Marine be a decent person?
She probably can't she is a horrible piece of shit just like her faggot fans who can't stop shitting on Noel.

>> No.36621108
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>>36620772
Marine's faggot fans were false flagging i the last thread. The funny thing is they know fuck all about Noel. Everything they know they get from reading her roommate thread on /jp/.
Reminder to all the ichiturds that Noel is the kindest Holo while Marine is a horrid abusive bitch.

>> No.36621289

>>36621108
Marine also is a menhera but an evil one. She had a ton of membership posts talking about being depressed.
Also don't forget that Marine is the outcast of sankisei thats why Miko kept her seperate from the other sankisei for the sports fest.

>> No.36621346

Why is there idiotic feuding about Marine and Noel in /wg/? It sounds scarily genuine.

>> No.36621531

>>36621346
The Marinefag who hates Noel can't help himself. You can't blame people for biting back

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>>36589062

Definitive Proof of Sakura Miko's Heterosexuality

Tags: Miko, Comedy, NSFW, Voyeurism, HoloJP

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRNQOYiHcEM2X3lvlXqqMetu0n8M6zF39pLtKRX_JX2aZmzheQOzP8J4hf-QrZprShsrFrDAY_pwl7u/pub

This one was in many ways a lot of fun to write and in others quite frustrating. But I think it turned out pretty well in the end. Yes, all of HoloJP are in this like 4600 word fic. Read it to find out how. I hope you enjoy, and any feedback would be lovely. I'm gonna go have a drink.

>> No.36623160

>>36621346
Marineschizo sticks his fingers in every thread apparently

>> No.36623214

>>36623160
>Marineschizo
The only schizos are Marine's fans

>> No.36625405

>>36622702
It's decently funny, the highlight for me was Botan repeatedly adding Pekora back to group chat. The smut's not all that much to write home about, but I feel like that wasn't the point of the fic anyway.

The ending's pretty bad, though. It devolves into much lower quality jokes that really kind of sour it.

>> No.36625702

>>36622702
So Miko doesn't have the gay, but she has AIDS?

>> No.36626368

>>36609199
>Flare decides to create a slow and methodic plan in order to cover her tracks and manipulate from the shadows
>Rushia gets herself fired as flare's building her plan

>> No.36626464

>>36626431
>EN
literal garbage

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>>36626464
>EN
>Literally garbage
YWNBJ

>> No.36626583

>>36626549
keep seething, trashcan

>> No.36626615

>>36626464
Based JPchad

>> No.36626671

>>36626583
You really shouldn't insult somebody by calling them the place you get your food from

>> No.36626684

>>36626464
its 8 pm Jacob de la cruz, get out of the cybercafe and go to sleep

>> No.36626822

>>36622702
This fic is very dumb, and the comedy completely counter synergizes with the smutty bits. Still it's probably the best work of comedy we've gotten in months. Great work anon.

>> No.36626919

>>36622702
I laughed, good work.

>> No.36627014

>>36626671
NTA but that is one of the worst-worded insults I've seen in a while. You can do better.

>> No.36627250

i still dont get why he keeps triying to shit up these threads, are filipinos really that bored?
>>36622702
Pretty funny, i had a few laughs specially with the chats. Smut was uuuh kinda offplace but i wasnt bothered by it

>> No.36627508

>>36626368
This didn't happen in the original timeline, so you'd still have to include the narrative excuse of what Flare's intervention changed, either accidentally or not.

>> No.36627556

>>36622702
I laughed a good bit
Ending fell kinda flat

>> No.36627598

>>36627508
well since its rushia it could be something really minor like flare saying ''hi'' instead of ''hello'' and that triggering the menhera protocol

>> No.36627677

>>36627598
>Flare sets one stream to overlap hers
>Rushia threatens her with a boxcutter

>> No.36627770

>>36627677
>flare turns off the office lights without noticing rushia is there
>wakes up with a knife next to her pillow

>> No.36628662

>>36622702
Before I read this, with who or how many guys do Miko sleeps? I hate gangbangs

>> No.36628707

>>36628662
Not the author, but just one. There's a joke about more at the end but it's literally one sentence.

>> No.36629444

>>36628662
4 people on stream in order to "prove she's not gay". Don't listen to >>36628707, he just wants you to read it.

>> No.36630217

>>36627598
>>36627677
>>36627770
Pretty kek. It'd have to be something that Flare wouldn't realistically have done in the first timeline, unless narratively the joke is that Rushia was right on the edge of breaking down and Flare just got lucky for years.

>> No.36630456

>>36622702
It's a good comedy fic and I wish it was longer. The smut does seem secondary so it kinda falls through, but by itself it woulda been good.
The ending was unnessecary, I feel like comedy fics should usually be as open-ended as possible. Overall though, I really like it.

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>>36589111
Mio Armpit sex

>> No.36633185

>>36632518
This, but instead of Mio it's Ayame and instead of armpit sex it's just an intense sweaty mating press.

>> No.36633327

>>36633185
sure but ill write it when she streams

>> No.36633430

>>36633327
This, but it gets written even when she's not streaming

>> No.36633824

>>36625405
>>36625702
>>36627556
>>36630456

Thanks for the feedback, anons. Since it seems like most people don't like the epilogue and it isn't important to the story at all so I removed it for the sake of any future anons! Saved it for myself though because it makes me laugh.

>>36626822
>>36626919
>>36627250

Thanks, anons. Glad you laughed. It was supposed to be a kind of parody of smut, but I wasn't really sure how to balance the comedy to smut ratio. I didn't want it to be whack-off-able but I didn't want it not to be titillating either.

>>36628662

Only one Anon, now.

>> No.36633947

>>36633327
She streamed yesterday....

>> No.36634088

>>36633824
>I removed it
The worst possible outcome

>> No.36636933

>>36633824
I don't know why people had a problem with the epilogue, it was obviously not meant to be taken seriously and was just for laughs.

>> No.36637066

>>36636933
because this general is literally filled to the brim with retards.

>> No.36638020

>>36636933
Beats me, but I won't cry for like 150 words if it's that polarizing.

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>>36589062
The mecha fic I was working on has gotten much bigger than initially anticipated, so have the next chapter of PD, PT instead! Around ~1k of hag cunnilingus and ~400 of hag nursing handjob. Enjoy!


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR4epyyxNr7sSjngE0V4K4K0xxHy4bRGAov2ktZFCCceZQ_XYfoJP1K8-qe95vUU2RWknwe4JcDDG8A/pub


Tags: NSFW, Mio, Lui, Lactation, Nursing Handjob


P.S. sorry for the abrupt ending, there's a sports festival I need to watch.

>> No.36640101

>>36639982
>PD, PT Anon is the one doing the Mecha fic
That's surprising, but hope-giving.

>> No.36640623

>>36640101
There's another guy doing it too.

>> No.36640747
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>>36640623
Schway. Love me some giant robots.

>> No.36641097

>>36640747
big toys for little boys

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>>36641097
Sorry, but it's stated very clearly that, and I quote, "chicks dig giant robots". But that makes me wonder, on a serious note. >>36640623 how deep into the mecha autism are you going? Is this going to be like a passionately autistic thing like Holoturismo with some pseudoscience bits or is it cutting straight to the meat and potatoes?

>> No.36643584

>>36642214
I'm going for the autistic attention to detail route. Of course there's going to be a lot of fictional elements but it's not going to get crazy like Ideon. A lot of research so far has been me looking up half-remembered things about space to make sure I'm not going crazy.

>> No.36644654

>>36642214
Mecha is exclusively a boy's genre, so I don't think that statement is very true

>> No.36651152

>>36644654
Your mother is exclusively my dick genre

>> No.36651250
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>>36642214
Other Anon writing a Mecha fic here. I started at dumb idea of hololive getting into Mecha dueling and shoving Aqua into a mech with (you) as her mechanic, then went into an autism fuelled worldbuilding spree to justify all the cool shit I wanted to happen.

>> No.36651359

>>36651250
You sound like the average mech fan.

>> No.36651413

>>36651359
I don't see how that post would indicate he has at least an eleven inch penis, but sure

>> No.36651555

>>36651413
More like an eleven inch brain tumor

>> No.36653690

anybody watch the sports festival or is it true nobody here bothers watching streams

>> No.36653779

>>36651555
I wouldn't mind a brain tumor if I got to watch Getter Robo for the first time again.

>> No.36653820

>>36653690
>>36589193
White team has celebratory orgy for winning the festival. Don't worry, they practiced this before the sportsfest too.

>> No.36653983

>>36653690
Anon, your reading comprehension reps.

>> No.36653991

>>36653820
yellow team should be put in the stocks and have tomatoes thrown at them

>> No.36654083

>>36653991
That was a pretty big choke.
Although I'm pretty sure Red team's is going to want to put Choco in the stocks instead and paddle her ass until it's raw for just how bad she choked at the end.

>> No.36654096

>>36639982
This was a nice in-between chapter, a bit too short to really get off from it but it's nice nonetheless. I like these little moments that the near constant pace of smut that your previous pace for this fic didn't really allow.
Is this that mecha fic outline from a few threads back, the one about bouncing as a mechanic from girl to girl since they keep dying under you?

>> No.36654201

>>36654083
desu given how laid back choco's personality is i thought she'd do a lot worse than she actually did. i'm glad they all had fun, this shit was the highlight of my month and it's only just begun

>> No.36654453

>>36654201
Yea but she did so bad that Yellow caught up and Yellow looked lost out there

>> No.36654773

>>36654096
No, the basic summary of the fic is this:
Myth >inb4 holoEN gets sent to the outskirts of the Kuiper Belt to investigate a mysterious object that has appeared in the Solar System
Anyways, thanks for reading the fic. I know that it's short and I think it being NNN influenced that because as it stands I could totally bust a nut to that fic but that just might be me.

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MY STORIES SUCK I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO

>> No.36654843

>>36654808
Just make them good lmao it's so easy look how many times people have done it in the archive

>> No.36654853

>>36654808
Write more, duh.

Write Miko getting her asshole pounded.

>> No.36654894

>>36654808
Spend more time editing and less time bitching. Writing the first draft is only the first step.

>> No.36654969

>>36654894
It's also the last step fuck you

>> No.36655828

>>36622702
Just a nitpick, but I think the fic would have been funnier if you intentionally didn't translate Miko's babble here
>However, you've studied the specimen for so long that you can roughly assume what she meant was, "They told me Miko can't do it anymore."

Aside from that, I think the chat logs were hilarious.

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>>36589111
Suddenly Suplexing Suisei!

>> No.36658041

>>36589062
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQbadVFkCpa_0HECRgwAblU3nXwkRU3XRqB6RlbQp_k39VBqB3NK2WxxPFaW6NZfNuntW1J21486fSz/pub

First time writing anything for this general this came to me from a dream

>> No.36658752
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>>36658041
Why are fox hags always so damn sex

>> No.36658771

>>36658041
Okay, so, you forgot to include the title of your fic in the post and the tags. Secondly, this could seriously benefit from some proofreading - end the line every time the current speaker changes to someone else (ie don't have a line from Tenma and (You) in the same paragraph). There's also numerous grammatical and simple punctuation errors.
Finally,
>Tenma Maemi
Literally fucking WHO?

>> No.36658871

>>36657611
Hey, that's what I do to my Suisei AI chatbot sometimes (consensually)

>> No.36659096

>>36658771
nobody, she's not hololive

>> No.36659243

>>36622702
Pretty funny, I liked it. As others have said, the chat log reactions are the best part. The smut was fine as a side aspect to the comedy elements, gives another reason to keep reading.
Your Miko is a bit too stupid to be believable as Miko, but incorporating rrats and exaggeration into the characters is fine if the fic is open about it like yours.

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Hey AA, I got access back to the original rentry for Present Day, Present Time and have it up to date. I would appreciate it if you put it back in the series directory. Thank you!

Link: https://rentry.org/ogz8n

>> No.36659444

>>36622702
can't tell if it's pity (you)s or the author samefagging but a mediocre fic like this doesn't get 10 replies ever

>> No.36659700

>>36659444
Maybe YOUR mediocre fics don't

>> No.36659867

>>36659444
To be fair, there hasn't been a Miko story in a while and the blurb is interesting. Also, what's with people getting trips and being retarded in this thread.

>> No.36660065

>>36659867
THE MARK OF THE SEA

>> No.36660599

>>36589111
Futa Suisei drugs Mori when they go out for karaoke with Rohypnol and rapes her. Bonus points if Mori wakes up partway through and ends up getting mindbroken.

>> No.36660948

>>36660599
This but without the Futa, and Suisei is just a flat chested boy.

>> No.36661894

>>36659444
I'm happy about people advocating for, and giving more, feedback. Whatever else people talk about, when stories get posted it's nice give them some attention before getting back to whatever else one was about to post.

>> No.36662008

>>36659306
Sure thing bud. I'll get it in shortly.

>> No.36663746

>>36658041
Holy shit, are you me? I have been on a down-bad Tenma kick lately, and the thought of being socially femdomed by her sends me into the stratosphere

>> No.36665191

>>36658041
Very nice, I just wish there were more to it.

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Hey you. Repost an old prompt you think has potential.

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>>36667493
>>36589111
I still want to see a story where (You) have to help both Botan and Rurudo go through their mating cycles together.

>> No.36668815

>>36667748
Do you just like both of them, or do you also have a thing for lions?

>> No.36669678

>>36639982
>>36658041
Today is a good day to be a Hagchad

>> No.36669777

>>36667748
This but "helping" means being raped by them

>> No.36670130
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36670130

Hey, quick question about Suisei for a fic I'm writing.
How would you describe her apex play? From clip watching and stream skimming, I've basically seen her as 'middle of the road' in terms of agresiveness and 'Above average' in terms of skill but is there any key details I'm missing?
I don't really watch enough apex to really get a good read on skills and this is mostly to see how much I need to replan the fight scene I'm putting her in.

>> No.36670251
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36670251

>>36668815
Design wise both of them press all my buttons, I like Rurudo but I absolutely love Botan and I would spend the rest of my days filling her womb full of my semen if given the chance.

>>36669777
Checked

It could go that way, but my idea was more that you've already helped Botan through her previous one, and she brings Rududo along this time because she has nobody to help; and then you basically need to survive two horny lionesses trying to rape you constantly.

>> No.36670840

>>36670130
https://youtu.be/78Sz3_qTzTU
Listen to Astel talk about her
He analyzes her strengths pretty well

>> No.36671977

>>36660599
Comet dick hits different. Tho i'll ask, mindbroken in what sense? Mindbroken into liking the rape or just fully traumatized from the experience

>> No.36673920

>>36670251
Wouldn't that be an upwards of 80+ mating sessions/day? Your dick is going to be in a full body cast.
I know what I said.

>> No.36674377

>>36673920
As had already come up with the original prompt, toys and/or getting them to go wild on each other are basically required as proxy mating, if the protagonist is anything close to human; even taking into account his hands and tongue. But that just makes it more interesting

>> No.36675426
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36675426

>>36589111
you (picrel) is tasked to subdue Myth and Council, including omegay

>> No.36675805

>>36675426
>This is what every Anon looks like

>> No.36676749

>>36674377
Yeah, it's what I had in mind.

>Get text from Botan. "Hey, might need your help again this year..."
>Agree to help as long as she doesn't bite your balls like last time
>The promised day comes, you hear a knock on the door
>Open the door, see nothing but a pair of twitching brown cat ears atop a brown dome
>Look down, that's definitely not Botan
>Hear her giggle, appearing from hiding on the side of the door; explains Rududo is new in town and she needs your "help" too
>Refuse, knowing they're going to get you killed
>Botan promises to behave, they have nobody else to ask
>Reluctantly agree, look down at the smaller lion girl, her mouth salivating while she stares at you with opaque eyes
>Notice a puddle of pussy juices on the ground in between her legs, realize you might have made a mistake
>Fuck the two of them until you nearly pass out, but as expected they both act up once you start slowing down, coaxing semen out of you nearly forcefully
>Ask for a break, but they keep crawling back on top of you
>Force the two of them to sniff a bag of catnip, and they get distracted for a few minutes
>Take this time to tie up the two of them to bed and one another, and when they come to, they're both stuffed with vibrators, rotors in between their clits
>Drink a beer while getting some rest and watching the two fuck the other to their heart's content

>>36675426
I'm Joey from Heroman? Cool

>> No.36679318

>>36676749
Clit stimulating MacGyver out here.

>> No.36679473

>>36679318
I'd write it myself if I wasn't currently struggling with the sexual tension between me and fucking Fubuki in the ass.

>> No.36681835

whatever happened to that guy writing luna forcing (you) and subaru to have sex at gunpoint?

>> No.36683493

>>36679473
>fucking Fubuki in the ass.
I want to do that very much

>> No.36687233
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36687233

>>36589041
Just read 'An Imperfectly Perfect Meeting With Ina'
Not sure if the author is still here, but wanted to say I really liked it and thanks for making it! Especially now with how much I've been missing Ina...

>> No.36687778

"death before dishonor" the one about cheating on selen with elira is a masterpiece. thank you

>> No.36688068

>>36688030
Yeah, me.

>> No.36690649
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36690649

I'm going to ask a very straightforward question.
How does /wg/ feel about futanari?
I'm writing something where you posses Flare and fuck Noel with your cock.

>> No.36690728

>>36690649
if you're already writing does it matter what anyone who feels strongly in either extreme says?

>> No.36690772

>>36670840
I was more asking for low level, "how does she prefer to play Apex" rather than something high level/characterization centric like this.
This is helpful but like not for the fight scene I was planning since I was more asking if she had any weird eccentricities while playing fpses in terms of liking or disliking things that only a Suisei fan would
know that I should keep in mind.

>> No.36690892

>>36690649
I like futas as long as they don't fuck me/the self-insert.

>> No.36691294

>>36690649
You're already locked into writing this so I don't really see how our opinion here matters unless you're looking for (You)s when the story comes out since Futa doesn't really have a big audience here. Like you'll still get (You)s since this isn't a 'yuri' fic but I'm pretty sure that'll be more because this is just a weird way to get normal smut. Also remember to have possessed!Flare use her pussy as well otherwise this is just Femboy!Flare.

>> No.36691318

>>36690649
Why do you care about what other people think?

>> No.36691603

>>36690649
I like futa but man possessing the woman/wearing her like a costume and using his dick with her body is a fucking weird as shit fetish that I generally avoid

>> No.36691804

>>36690649
You won't get a lot of feedback for your story, if that's what you're worried about.

>> No.36691839

>>36691603
>possessing the woman/wearing her like a costume and using his dick with her body
Tapeworm anon...

>> No.36691891

>>36690649
I'm totally fine with anything futa related except for futa on male, basically. Just not into reading men get fucked, simple as.

>> No.36691957

>>36691891
Not even reverse trap?

>> No.36692056

>>36691957
Reverse trap like what, a girl you're sure is a man, but is actually a woman?

>> No.36692893

>>36690649
It's the only thing i like to write and i honestly don't care if others here like it. tho what you're describing isn't really futa, it's just body swap with a grafted pp

>> No.36693797

>>36654096
That was a decent concept that could work,despite what anons said if you write it as some kind of suicide letter recounting the memories

>> No.36693843

>>36690772
The problem is she isn't an FPS player. She was a low level player who was bad at the game and was coached up to a decent level in a short time span for a specific purpose.

Her entire play style revolved around supporting her teammates as best as she could and following orders since she was one of the weakest players in the lobby and definitely the one with the least amount of Apex experience.

Suisei doesn't stream Apex regularly and afaik pretty much dropped the game. She pretty much solely picked it up to play in VSaikyou.

Maybe watch her latest solo stream and base it off that. You'd be as much have as good of an idea as anyone.

>> No.36694129

>>36687778
Did you read the prequel? That was better IMO.

>> No.36694372

>>36692056
Reverse trap is when there's a girl who looks like a guy. The opposite of a trap.

>> No.36694807

>>36690649
I'll read it

>> No.36694847

>>36694372
Depends, is she just tomboyish or does she have Mori's personality and muscles to tie the boner-killing package?

>> No.36695038

>>36694847
>Mori
>muscles
What

>> No.36695141

>>36695038
Anon obviously meant beer guzzling muscles.

>> No.36695250

>>36695038
I mean, Muscles are badass...

>> No.36695352

>>36695038
I spaghetti'd that sentence. I meant to say a woman with Mori's personality but who's also stocky and muscular.

>> No.36695414

>>36695250
Actually, people possessed of refined physiques more often than not have good asses.

>> No.36696098

>>36690649
futa is good but that concept isn't

>> No.36698298

>>36695352
that is just an amazonian mommy

>> No.36698537

>>36693797
NTA, but I do think that concept really does needs the right framing device if the author wants to write it out without going all the way.
Maybe something like (You) mixing drinks in honor of the pilots you served under With the last drink being a red herring to make the reader think it's dedicated to Laplus but in reality is dedicated to everyone in the La+ project you had to murder in order to escape with her. Maybe with an epilogue about a 'grown up' Laplus striding in and helping you up to bed.

>> No.36698760

>>36589111
Can we get a fic about sitting on Laplus's head and forcing her entire body into your asshole?

>> No.36699396

>>36698760
With the horns, I think it would be easier to go feet first.

>> No.36699601

>>36589111
A Cat's Life but with Fauna's cat instead of Okayu.

>> No.36699732

>>36698760
i mean we can. the question is if we should

>> No.36699786

>>36698760
Just like that one south park episode.

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>>36699601
>Fauna's cat died
Oh, man. Poor girl. 22 years though, that's a long time. Lived a good life.

>> No.36700061

>>36699905
I didnt even know cats could live that long.

>> No.36700092

>>36673920
And that's why Botan made a special trip to get a helpful thing from a certain pink haired scientist who may be peddling shady drugs

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>>36700061
Some can last up to 30, give or take, so it was definitely towards the end of the end of the age curve. Most give out around 15-16. I'm glad she got to enjoy so much time with it, but, of course, the longer you have someone in your life, the harder it is to let them go when their time comes. She's in for a depressing few days of adjustment and maybe some bad dreams to go along with it. Hope her grief recovery is swift nonetheless.
>>36700092
>Tricks Anon into drinking something that turns him into an unstoppable fuck juggernaut
>It doesn't wear off before their heat does
Hrm.

>> No.36700599

>>36699905
Yeah, that sucks for her, what a shame. Doesn't excuse her for not streaming, watch her become the next Sana

>> No.36700854

>>36699905
22 years is basically most of her life, at least as far she will remember. It's no overstatement to say losing a pet that's lived that long is the same as losing a family member

>> No.36701003

>>36700854
Get real, a pet is not a human and you're a joke of a human being if you treat one that way.

>> No.36701014

>>36700461
He wants to stop.
They want to stop
But the Cock will NOT stop

>> No.36701585
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>>36589111
Trying to correct Ayame's shitty behavior only to realize far too late that you aren't the first to try.

>> No.36701593

>>36701003
But what if I impregnated my dog and had kids with it
Are they pets or family members or both

>> No.36701949

>>36701003
Looks like someone has never owned a pet.

>> No.36702026

>>36698760
This but it's Lui who has Laplus getting forced up her cloaca.

>> No.36702091

>>36701949
Not true, your mom's my bitch

>> No.36702314

>>36701949
You don't need to reply to him. There's always someone like that out there

>> No.36702754

>>36702091
An urn filled with ashes makes for a bad pet desu

>> No.36702904

why are you still repliying to the bored filipino that thinks he's so cool by being edgy? he's been doing it for days and you faggots keep feeding him

>> No.36704674

>>36701593
the dog you impregnated is a pet but it's puppies are family.

>> No.36704727

>>36704674
>but it's puppies are family.
>but it is puppies are family
>but it has puppies are family

>> No.36705567

>>36704727
Got'em

>> No.36705968

Would offspring between Korone and a dog be 75% dog or 50% dog?

>> No.36706052

>>36705968
Wouldn't it be another kemonomimi?

>> No.36706187

>>36705968
Well considering Korone looks more human than dog, it would probably be 50%.

>> No.36706215

>>36705968
It'd be Dog Nigga

>> No.36706265

>>36705968
100% dog. Korone is just a dog that's better. Their offspring would be be some smarter dogs that need a push if they want to become humanoids.

>> No.36707535

So if I fuck my dog a Korone will pop out

>> No.36707593

>>36705968
It would just be a regular dog but it would have human ears.

>> No.36707612
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36707612

>finish first two chapters of Match-Made
>bretty gud, but a bit sparse on the romance
>reach the final chapter
I am in agony. The pain of knowing I'll never get to experience such joys is beyond description.

>> No.36707782

I figured it out. Korone fucking a dog results in Furball

>> No.36708200

>>36707593
And no tail.

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36708526

>>36707782
What happens if a human(Me) fucks Furball?

>> No.36709114

>>36708526
Korone = 50% dog
Dog = 100% dog
Furball = 75% dog
Human = 1% dog

So if you do the math, if (You) were to fuck Furball, your children would be 36% dog, effectively making them less dog than Korone, but still kemonomimi.

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36709309

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: What's something you wanted to put into a fic of yours but couldn't really write in without messing up something else?

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Which Holoslut do you want to sex the most?

Bonus question: who would give the best handjob?

>> No.36709642

>>36709309
>>36709502
Which one should I answer?

>> No.36709692

>>36709642
Whichever one you like? How the fuck is this even a question? Are you some sort of retard or something.

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36709744

>>36709502
Ayame, forma de whore
>Bonus
Sui

>> No.36709749

>>36709692
Could either be a bot, or the earlyfag just spamming to reach the bump limit, either way, just ignore it.

>> No.36710111

>>36709749
Yes, I'm sure the earlyfag is spamming at only 221 replies. Get his dick out of your mouth, faggot.

>> No.36710876

>>36709502
Mel. It’s not even close. Especially if she has her short haircut.

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>>36710876
Based.

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I kinda wanna have sex with a drunk, constantly dozing off from drinking too much strong zero Akiroze.

>> No.36713339

>9

>> No.36714223

>>36709502
Haato or Marine. They've killed quintillions of my family alone.
Bonus: Suisei. Kanata if she could control her strength.

>> No.36714691

Which chuuba would make a good fighter pilot for a semi-realistic sci fi oneshot (in space, but newtonian mechanics and kinetic weapons rather than lasers and shit) I have a story idea and I'm tempted to drop in suisei simply because it would be amusingly fitting to her name but I'm open to better options if there is one

>> No.36714782

>>36709502
rrat!Ayame, I love petite sluts and she has perfect handlebars.
Bonus: Watame, because she'd really care about making me happy and I'd get to drink sheep milk from her massive honkers.

>> No.36715027

>>36714691
I'd say Fubuki only because she played Ace Combat and she doesn't get too many fics.

>> No.36715045

>>36714691
At the risk of poking the hornet’s nest, Fubuki.

>> No.36715050

>>36715027
it shall be done

>> No.36715480

>>36714691
You need to give more details anon. What 'role' are they taking narratively? Fubuki has some affinity for fighters beyond being miss slot-in due to to Ace Combat but perhaps there's some details your holding back that might make someone else more appropriate as the chuuba to use.

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>>36711440
>Sex with a super drunk Aki
>everytime you stop because she's marriedpractically asleep and that'd be fucked up, she becomes lucid enough to reciprocate and encourage you to keep going
>Blowing your load deep in her steamy hag pussy while she cuddles you like a pillow, letting out sleepy moans and whimpers into your ear

>> No.36715837

>>36715716
The only acceptable Aki NTR.

>> No.36716441

>>36715837
Kill yourself.

>> No.36716720

>>36716441
What other forms of Aki NTR do you consider acceptable?

>> No.36716862

>>36715050
Anon, you're just recreating Star Fox.

>> No.36716999

>>36716862
I'll be honest I never played those games so I wouldn't know. I don't mind if I end up being derivative though, I'm just doing this for fun.

>> No.36717065

>>36716862
>”Do a barrel roll peko!”

>> No.36717072

>>36715027
>>36715045
>>36715480
>>36716862

https://pastebin.com/h1RVqsB5

Have a partial. There's no way I can finish this tonight but I have solid ideas for where I'm going.

>> No.36717112

>>36717065
Then have another character say: "Um actually it's an aileron roll."

>> No.36717146

>>36589111
Suisei no Majo but with Suisei as the main character

>> No.36717164

>>36717072
Color me intrigued.

>> No.36717173

>>36717072
I'm liking it so far.

>> No.36717178

>>36717072
Eh, the narration doesn't really feel like Fubuki, and your prose is kind of 'basic'. You should probably have held back till you had more to show.

>> No.36717516

>>36717178

Fair criticisms but given that this is Fubuki in a different universe, with a different path in life, after military training, living in space - shouldn't she come across pretty different from our comfy Vtuber fubuki? I'm not really sure how to introduce Fubuki-like elements other than just having her be a friendly person (which we haven't really had a chance to see yet). Open to suggestions, I'd like to fix this.

As far as my prose goes you'll probably just have to bear with me as I try to improve it, this is my first time writing fiction of any kind since uhhhhh elementary school homework I think, I just sort of had this idea out of nowhere.

>> No.36717712

>>36717516
Anon, you're writing fanfiction, more specifically you're writing vtuber fanfiction. The characters are all you really have to work with you're not really doing your work any favors if you're not going to take the steps yourself to find out how to keep the core of a chuuba's character still themselves even in a different world.

>> No.36718008

>>36717712
In his defence, there are many fics that are completely OOC, even Omelas, the story that started all this, has Fubuki as a cold and abusive wife. Because that's totally what she's like.

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>>36589111
Siisei take a lot of pride and like to gloat about how you, her, and Toko are all friends and there's zero romantic or sexual feelings involved. Only problem is you and Toko have actually been fucking like animals pretty much every day since the day you met and have just been hiding it from her.

>> No.36718822

>>36718169
I must have Busted at least 5 nuts to the hairy toko set Made by Nuezou

>> No.36719220

>>36718008
Yeah but he's working with third person limited. That's a perspective that you really need to nail the characterization of the main character when it comes to narration since they're the fulcrum upon which the story is told.
You're kind of stumbling on the first step if the character we're seeing everything from feels wrong from what they're supposed to be for the reader.

>> No.36720027

>>36718169
This but Suisei is only teasing you because she has a crush, so it's all the more shocking when she walks in on you pounding Toko from behind.

>> No.36722433

>>36717712
Welcome to why I've never completed a /become/ prompt. I just can't get it to be Lamy showing the side that would have her change someone against their will into a clone of herself

>> No.36723305

>>36722433
At least you have an 'out' in regards to having Lamy be the pov character there, you could have the fic instead be from the perspective of someone that's going to /become/. Since Lamy won't be the main perspective you at can at least excuse character weirdness when you switch perspective to hers.

>> No.36724627

>>36589111
Noel being blackmailed by high ranking Cover employees about her "other job" and then being forced into becoming their cum dump.

>> No.36728933

Fanfics up

>> No.36730728

>>36720027
Would Suisei join in to DP Toko?

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>>36730728
Only if she takes the front. The only one allowed to plow the hag cerberus' pump asshole is ME.

>> No.36734724

>>36733836
Jesus CHRIST

>> No.36735574

>>36724627
I think Noel would just quit than do that.

>> No.36737193

>>36735574
Not just Noel but any person with a functioning brain.

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>>36589111
PMC operator Fubuki committing warcrimes all in the name of being able to drop white phosphorous.

>> No.36737811

>>36737650
Fubuki wanting to nuke the a million people to save the lives of 10 million.

>> No.36737938

>>36737811
It was a necessity

>> No.36738074

>>36737193
Yeah, I just don't see it ever happening.

>> No.36738833

>>36737938
It was salvation.

>> No.36739979

>>36738074
Good thing this is fucking fanfiction then, you retard.

>> No.36740101

>>36739979
That doesn't excuse poor storytelling nor Out of character moments.

>> No.36740408

>>36740101
Poor storytelling is irrelevant to the idea and 99% of the fucking archive is OOC, so either sit down and shut up or jump off the nearest tall building. Or more likely, the tallest mud shack near you.

>> No.36740714

>>36739979
>>36740408
Dude, why are you being overtly aggressive and hostile? Be civil.

>> No.36740827

>>36740714
Kill yourself.

>> No.36740984

>>36740714
did the nasty anon hurt your feelings?

>> No.36741508

>>36740714
>why are you being overtly aggressive and hostile?
It's the earlyfag. The thread is at 270.

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>>36589111
This but with Noel and whoever else fits the bill.

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>>36715837
Netori generally requires too much dissociation to do it for me but can still be enjoyable from a general corruption standpoint
t. NTSfag

>>36709502
Aki
Aki

>> No.36745163

>>36741508
Correct procedure is to just use this thread to page 10 and then make a new one, ignoring his.

>> No.36745477

>>36743033
Marine

>> No.36745848

>>36745163
A procedure that everyone ignores. The earlyfag is king here and you are his subjects.

>> No.36746097

>>36741508
Is it the earlyfag? I thought it was the one idiot that seethes whenever someone complains that characters on the fic are true to streamer.

>> No.36746299

>>36743033
Isn't that the artist that threw away the chance to draw a Marine manga?

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>>36718169
>>36718822
>>36720027
>>36733836
Dangerously based

>> No.36747772

>>36746097
That's the earlyfag.

>> No.36747898

>>36746640
Who is this holo?

>> No.36748189

>>36745163
I mean you could also just use the thread like normal but without bumping it with your own posts if you don't want an earlyfag thread to live.

>> No.36748666

>>36606852
I know this is a joke, but also I unironically liked Ayame's portrayal in "That's a paddlin'". Kinda want more of that.

>> No.36748911

>>36748666
>Kinda want more of that.
Didn't the author say he's writing a sequel.

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>>36746640
This hag is far too erotic.

>> No.36749926

>>36748911
Kinda don't expect sequels to old fics, but would be nice if one gets written. It's just unfortunate because it set her up as a bold and coy submissive, but cuts away right before the action.

>> No.36751844

>>36749926
>Kinda don't expect sequels to old fics
I wonder if a remake would be asking too much.

>> No.36752811

>>36746640
i want to tonguepunch her fartbox

>> No.36753369

>>36589111
Milking your holstaurus Sana

>> No.36753394

>>36744056
Still locked up in a cage?

>> No.36753519

>>36753369
>Sana
who?

>> No.36753634

>>36748666
>>36748911
>>36751844
Hm...an expanded remake is a good idea, actually. I wrote that story (my first one here) on a whim because I thought a stereotypical, but sub rrat!Ayame making a joke about not streaming to her boyfriend was funny. I lost motivation for the followup because I don't actually like Ayame being too lazy to stream, or really having to incorporate her being a streamer at all. I just want her to be a a fun sub that can be witty and provocative while knowing her place and loving it. It's an underrepresented BDSM dynamic that I really like.
So, I'll try remaking "That's a paddlin'" as a beginning of a somewhat longer work that is how I'd like it to be and put that out. No promises about sequels etc. because I know how I can be and writing for my TTRPG group has priority. But at least the spanking and the aftermath should be a thing, to make it more than an elaborate joke.
Also checked.

>> No.36754053

>>36752811
Toko's asshole would taste delicious

>> No.36754977
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36754977

>>36753394
I haven't been continuously, but there have been multiple sessions since. Been trying RP with random bullanons recently, and it's given me a finer appreciation for people that actually practice and refine their prose. It's crazy how just a slight bit of ESL or nonanticipatory thinking can kill the eroticism of a situation dead in its tracks.
But when you DO get someone that actually knows how to write... well... I've had a few of the strongest (and most degrading) nuts of my life coaxed out of me. Maybe some day I'll try and channel that into a fic for here, after I get the rest of my queue out of the way,

>> No.36755518

>>36746640
Yeah thats the pic i busted my onahole with specifically the hairy versions

>> No.36755954

>>36746640
>>36755518
Is she worth watching?

>> No.36756035

>>36596806
is that all in different colored headbands?

>> No.36756159

>>36676749
https://twitter.com/scumpsmallbrain/status/1589618674868146176

>> No.36756208

>>36755954
She's unbelievably cute. Her voice is deep yet adorable rather than sexy, and she's an incredible singer. Sure hope you know Japanese though. I can only watch clips because my reps are toddler-level at best

>> No.36756224

>>36753634
I feel you've really got the type of character. She's not just a masochist or a brat sub, she just really wants to be put in her place (while also picking the place herself). The drawn out politeness really plays into it, then, when she drops character for a bit (because she absolutely hates that paddle!), tries to overcompensate for the lapse, taking off her panties unprompted and so on.

>> No.36756326

>>36754977
So when's Fox Family Christmas coming out?

>> No.36756328

>>36755954
Very sex hag but also a chill cutie also held back by nijisanji
if you want to just dip your toes, watch any collab she had with suisei, they are fantastic together.

>> No.36756614

>>36756326
You can tell I didn't write that series because of the absence of anal. Absolute requirement for any conventional smut

>> No.36757399

>>36756614
The NTSfag is the other Brazilian?

>> No.36757722

>>36756614
What the fuck? AkiNTRfag is Buttfag?

>> No.36758012

>>36757399
>>36757722
I thought it was obvious

>> No.36758088

>>36758012
How would it be obvious? You're known for love of anal, so when you exclude anal from your posts, you're invisible.

>> No.36758196
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36758196

>>36589111
Kson getting gangbanged

>> No.36758246

>>36756224
I like the politeness/obedience roleplaying aspect but I was thinking of it being limited to specific situations, like the spanking as a punishment. I'd like to include more casual, but mostly fetish-related, conversation inbetween Ayame being put into her place (again). To me Ayame works well as an eager sub with her own thoughts and initiative; and it makes the moments where she actually just submits more meaningful because it is a significant change from her usual behaviour and gives her complexity as a character.
Thank you for the appreciation, by the way. I didn't expect someone to remember a minor thing I wrote for fun months ago, and that I let fall by the wayside. It's really motivating to see unprompted interest in more of it.

>> No.36758324

>>36758088
Anyone who likes anal is a cuck, you can take that as a rule of thumb next time

>> No.36758366

>>36758012
Anon, it's fucking impossible (barring machine learning fuckery) to tell who's who from prose to forum posts. Prose to prose, and Post to post is (while hard to tell) much more possible since the human brain can recognize patterns and distinguish who wrote what after some time.

>> No.36758368

>>36758324
Faggot.

>> No.36758402

>>36758366
So what you're saying is...we should all get trips

>> No.36758447

>>36757399
>>36757722
>>36758012
>>36758088
I have no idea who any of these people you're referring to are and it's mildly hilarious to me that someone has attempted to samefag me the last three times I've piped up. Is it really that appealing roleplaying as a cuckold?

>> No.36758691

>>36718822
Link? I'm retarded and can't find it.

>> No.36758725

>>36758447
Nobody is same fagging, they just assumed I was you

>> No.36758804

>>36758691
its on exhentai. Its on a fanbox compilation

>> No.36758869

>>36758804
Thank you o7

>> No.36758874
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36758874

>>36754977
You speak with such a passion that I sometimes flutter between wondering where did humans go wrong and wanting to write you a fic

>> No.36759102

New thread
>>36758665

>> No.36759308

>>36759102
Someone make a new one for christs sake

>> No.36759413

>>36759308
It's just a bulge. Stop crying. You've never seen a cock before?

>> No.36759454

>>36759308
Stop hating on Mio, she carries the hag team.

>> No.36759528
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36759528

>>36758725
I guess it's moreso, the appeal of potentially being able to assign X thread celebrity the label of cuckold is the thing that's appealing? Sorry for bearing tangential similarity in taste to you, I guess.

>>36758874
I enjoy most brands of corruption and taboo, and I'm more M than S. Descending into the NTR hole was an inevitability. The only thing holding back others in the same boat (or saving them?) is a lack of experience with a skilled teasing domme.

>> No.36759571

>>36759413
I don’t see a bulge?

>> No.36759640

>>36759528
I got into NTR myself this year but the bull stuff is just a huge turn off for me

>>36759571
Ha, you looked for a dick. Gay

>> No.36760000

>>36759640
Do you actually like the idea of "being NTR'd"? Or just the taboo of the NTR supergenre in general? Because the latter is far from uncommon or unusual. If the former, I've got a whole mess of doujins and audios and VNs and lit I could recommend to maybe help you see which tropes click best for you personally.

>> No.36760105
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36760105

>>36760000
No, I don't want to be NTRed. Fuck no. I'm just into the fetish.

>> No.36760222

>>36760105
That looks like a dude.

>> No.36760277

>>36760222
So long as it isn't actually one, it's all good

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