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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

Bunny Trap 3: Tags: NSFW, Pekora, tentacles, insect, soft vore: >>33454721

Auntie's little Secret. Ch.1: Tags: Shirakami Fubuki, /ss/, grooming, fluff, dark, NSFW.:>>33505367

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

matsuri shows some kindergarten age girls the pleasures of lesbian sex.:>>33459860

HoloMyth gets fucked by a bunch of rich Japanese Oji-sans.:>>33462457

Chuubas coming to existence as virtual existences on Cyberyoutube in a dark cyberpunk future.:>>33462778

I, too, can't let go of the cyberpunk-ish setting I wished for in my prompt from last thread. Brainstormed for a bit and came up with two more fleshed-out premises:>>33464187

Hakos Baelz finally gets her rratshed finished. She celebrates it by finally doing a masturbation session:>>33474652

a comedy fic featuring Fubuki,Axel, Baelz, Towa, Oga and Roberu:>>33475209

Probing the sexy alien:>>33494377

Marine, your wife, wants you to open up to an open relationship to spice up your sex life and have multiple shared partners in bed.:>>33506206

Mori's gift for Kiara's birthday is one of those '' i have to follow your orders for a day'' coupons, kiara inmediatly cashs it for a night of anal sex (and prostrate milking). by the end, Mori becomes a buttslut and cant even get hard unless she's the bottom:>>33516769

So, this is how /wg/ dies.

>>33541521
It's like being dragged behind a truck naked yeah. At least earlyfag had the decency to make this a Festival thread

I've written 23 words in the past hour and a half.

Just 977 more to fill my daily goal.

>>33541634
Hahaha. You having fun, there?

>>33541634
Polka fic?

I've been writing here for a year and I feel like retard for realising that my first draft doesn't have to be my final draft. So many writing blocks could've been avoided...

>>33541682

>>33541767
Yeah, learning to know how to make a subsequent version through rewrites and editing is pretty key to making longer works unless you fully subscribe to the serial release model a lot of fanfiction writers fall into.

>>33541842
There's no possible way it'll ever sound "good" to you when reading it back, so perhaps just write and keep writing, then re-read it tomorrow.

Hang in there!

>>33541634
Don't worry about quality when you're making a first draft. Just shit out that rough idea then fix it in editing.

>>33542325
Yeah, this. He said it way better.

>>33539545
Nene catches you, a snobby rich kid, doing coke in the school bathrooms and thinks you're actually some cool and tough delinquent she can learn how to be cool and tough from. For some reason you feel extremely bad about breaking her childlike ideals of you so you endeavor to clean up your act and try and be the heart-of-gold delinquent she thinks you are.

>>33542769
I would never do drugs so the whole foundation you're building that upon is already fallacious.

>>33542769
This makes me think of this being a comedy about two idiots that don't even know what actual delinquents are outside of anime/manga.
Maybe have Botan or Suisei being your delinquent sensei that you've bribed to teach their ways?

>>33543031
>"Remind me again why we're squatting like this?"
>"It makes you look tough."
>"It does?"
>"That's what the internet said!"

Lmao half the catalog is Twitter screenshots right now.

>>33543970
Why are they leaking so much [SEXUAL ENERGY]

>>33543970
>removed the pubes

>>33545116
I'll do it every time. Problem?

>>33545116
That's probably part of the censorship to get it posted here - pubes get you banned - but even so, BASED AS FUCK. Trim your hedge you fucking disgusting animal.

>>33544268
their heat cycles have synced up

>>33545538
Is that why steam is coming off of their bodies?

>>33545812
sure

Why must this dumb clock bitch be starting shit again when I'm ramping up my progress on her fic. Now I'm feeling all yucky about having her be my oshi again, even though I really do like her stuff. Someone gotta tell this clock woman to stfu, literal self-sabotage

>>33539480
A remake of a classic
-----
BECOME: Repercussions of Sake

The Janny waited. The hot pocket spun in the microcwave. There were Lamys on the board. He didn't see them, but expected them, now for weeks. His warnings to the Mods were not listened to and now it was far too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
Janny was a Janitor for fourteen weeks. When he was a noob he posted and said to dad "I want to shitpost daddy"
Dad said "NO! YOU WILL BECOME LAMY!"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now on the front page of /vt/ he knew there were Lamys.
"This is the Mod," the readio crackered. "You must fight the Lamys!"
So the Janny gotten his hot pocket and went to his computer
"HE GOING TO BAN US," said the Lamys!
"I will make him become," said the Lamy and she threw sake. Janny tried to ban her. But no one could do capcha
"NO! I must kill the Lamys," he shouted!
The radio said "No, Janny. You are the Lamys."
And then, the Janny was a Lamy.

orca

>>33548231
A good stink is a sign of a successful chuuba

>>33548231
Do you know anything interesting that happened to Chloe that might be good fic material?

>>33548573
raped by a ghost

>>33548608
>>33539545
Fic where you are the Ghost haunting Chloe, with your last act being to rape her so you turn into her baby and gain a body.
Then have incest sex with her when you grow up.

>>33541767
Same. I'm trying to break the habit by shitting out the outline of my story and planning to go back later, but it's hard to resist putting at least a bit of effort and thought into the prose/flow of the writing. I also get the feeling I'm not a very good editor, by that I mean shit, so I want to do more on the first draft.

>>33549065
Maybe just say 'fuck it' break your idea down into chapters and commit to a serial release style?
In a way they're both styles that try to get past that initial writing anxiety but if you can't help yourself in trying to get that first draft perfect, maybe the answer for you is in just releasing and moving forward.

>>33548573
Rape aside, that other anon had it right with the ghost thing. I could imagine a Horror Intolerance-type situation with her, except instead of a horror game it's her freaking out over every single noise that her old rickety-ass house makes.

>>33543970
I would tongue both of their assholes to the point my jaw calcifies in place and requires painful surgery to correct. Then I'd do it again.

>>33543970
Damn, Ayame's parents look like this?

So how are them WIPs coming along lads?

>>33553606

>>33553606
I spent a miserable week at work and barely got anything accomplished, and now that I'm off I'm more focused on cleaning and fucking around than I am working. Just expanding/rewriting scenes I've already 'completed' before going on at this point. I keep thinking about getting art done on top of it, but damn them drawfolk are pricey.

>>33555079
Is the art needed specific enough that you can't use AI instead?
Because that's like the thing you can do as an alternative.
Other than that I think you need to 'move forward' if the fic isn't complete yet and focus on finishing that first draft before going back and rewriting.

>>33553606
I'm working on a particularly difficult scene right now. I know I want to get from point A to point B, but figuring out how to get there while making the emotional beats land is giving me some trouble. It's kind of an important scene, so I want to make sure I thread the needle just right.

>>33555476
As much as I love using AI to make bitching artwork, this isn't something that can be AI generated, sadly. I wanted to get a sort of 'reference sheet' so I could commission a bigger artist into making a piece of art for something. I was told that the artist in question sort of draws things very verbatim, and I figured it'd be good to have something as a 'this is exactly what it should look like' safety net to avoid confusion down the line. It's all theoretical, anyway.
And, yeah, you're right. I just like to obsess over parts until I'm sure they're good and I can fuck off to continue.

>>33545116
There's a bushy version?

>>33556345
Yeah. Artist is Gamarenji. You can find the picture and the uncensored cum version on kemono.

>>33555567
The only piece of advice I can think of that might help is perhaps taking a step back and thinking through what you actually want to get across to the reader and thinking about how you can put those emotional beats across. Though this is really only applicable if you're at the 'banging your head against a brick wall' thinking of what to do next since if you're not committed to a path yet you can still think it through.

>>33549650
Perhaps, but then going back to change things becomes much harder.

>>33553606
Not much actual writing done but lots of brainstorming over the last few days for ideas. It's like a mental block got lifted and I'm starting to get the flow going back again.

>>33557669
Them's the breaks if you do go down that path. Pretty much the only way to mitigate is to keep hush about minor grammar fixes and actually telling the thread if you change a key detail in a previous chapter. Other than that it's accepting that once you post it's there until you decide to take it down.

>>33553606
On and off. I thought I’d feel accomplished today because I wrote a shit ton of words, but then looked at how much I have left to go and realised it was like a drop in the ocean. Small lake more like, but daunting all the same.

>>33539785
>matsuri shows some kindergarten age girls the pleasures of lesbian sex

>>33553606
I keep procrastinating because I need to refer to my reference material to write a particular scene

Which does the thread want more? New chapter of Let Me Feel of Your Pain or Brown Black and Blue?

Having the cruel thoughts of adding to the Shirakami/Kurokami/(You) love triangle prompt where although Fubuki had rejected you and now you're dating her sister Kurokami, you can't help but compare her to Shirakami Fubuki, as if your heart still pined for her. This of course strains your relationship, causing Kurokami to hate you, Fubuki to have exceptionally awkward moments as a peace broker, and (You) being crushed by your own emotions that you've apparently have no control over. In the end everyone just gets hurt, ruining what was once a perfectly balanced relationship between the three of you.

>>33559307
I would like a Let Me Feel Your Pain chapter more. I think that fic's just on the cusp of something really fucked happening with the buildup coming in from the last chapter.

why are so many of you guys into ryona or abusive stuff? wanna talk about it?

>>33561174
Most of my (non-physical abuse) stories are just thinly veiled trauma dumps. It's ok though because it's fiction.

>>33561174
Well you see this general originally started out as "Post chuubas being abusive", which attracted some writing due to concept being easier to do in writing than in art, then it just spiralled from there till the writers got bored of JUST making abuse fanfics, then we became a writing thread.

>>33561174
I have a fetish for being overpowered and manhandled by a woman who loves me more than anything else in the world as a 6ft tall and relatively powerful adult. It probably has something to do with a lot of unhealthy relationship and mental stuff but at the end of the day it's all just stories, and I definitely don't have the pain tolerance for knife/blood'play'.

>>33561174
I wish i knew
my parents loved me, my brother is a good person and didnt diddle me and the school bully only picked on a black kid, so i have literally no excuse
sometimes i just stay there,with my dick out after a fap, wondering why the fuck is the scenario so hot for me and if its something wrong with me

I don't think wanting to be abused is too weird if it's consensual.

>>33561174
I was bullied a lot when I was a kid and fantasize about beating the shit out of/bringing a knife to school and stabbing my bullies to this very day.

>>33557049
Found it. Thanks anon.

>>33561927
No problem. Enjoy.

>>33561174
Well in my case it's that fluff and such was my bread and butter. After a while it gets boring, you want to try something new, and in the world of fiction, you can go absolutely horrid as you want to.

>>33561174
I'm a worthless sack of shit and a chuuba beating the shit out of me at least would be affirmation of my worthless nature.

>>33561861
I mean, maybe if it's not motivated by hating yourself. Just like consensual sadism isn't an issue if you don't do it because you hate other people

Show some love to smut writers!
What fics have you jerked it to?
>Festival of sensations
>Sad, genuine smile
>Cascade of white.
>Foxfamily

>>33563136
I haven't read more than 200 words in over 4 months

>>33561174
Does rape count as abusive?

>>33539451

>>33563136
Not much of a smut reader and much less one who jerks to words, but from the ones I did read I enjoyed "Petting your fox" most.

How do squirrelgirls fuck?

>>33566948
Obsessed with you finishing on their mouth. Have a gokkun and cum in food fetish. Their tails shake when horny. Change positions a lot during sex

>>33539480
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS9j5YtTbt9IQZEr9WOyDYB4LH_pKjzGpK1Q31jSsbEstFivj3IwVqMuMGRMYv08xkcUHMDN_R6Edkj/pub

Let Me Feel Your Pain: Chapter 14
Tags: Roboco, (you), Fauna, realistic sci-fi, tragedy, ryona, romance

In late winter, squirrels may be seencourting, one, or more, chattering males chasing a female through the tree or across the ground. Once she is ready,the female squirrel will run off and engage the males in a mating chase within her territory. Typically, the dominant male will find the female first and can mate with her, but not always.
Females can mate only twice a year, but males may mate at any time. After mating, the male plays no part in the rearing of his young.

I can imagine Risu prancing through a fantasy village, attracting males and then running back to her treehouse as fast as she can to take their nuts.

>>33566948
God that Squirrel is such a fucking slut and I love it.

Reposting this from the last thread I was in that I could make an update about writing on September 4th feels like something came full circle. I really need to Caffiene max and get my ass in a chair, my internet is going to go out in 3 hours anyway and theres nothing i can do to stop it, the ISP doesnt care whether or not i have internet after 5PM.

Heres Risu being horny.
https://streamable.com/ggmgyo
https://streamable.com/nzxtpw
https://streamable.com/mlxxbv
https://streamable.com/2hecgt
https://streamable.com/gr7zt0
https://streamable.com/ur5ulb
https://streamable.com/snt3cc
https://streamable.com/ky48ci
https://streamable.com/rksurn
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oZ-L-t9ApbM[Open]
https://youtu.be/5V_TATskEEY
https://youtu.be/raH5-aKOLr0
https://streamable.com/wkc5xq
https://streamable.com/a1ztoz

>>33563136
Many, but my favourites are
>A Brat's Punishment
>Driving the point home.
>Extrapedestrial
because I love BDSM scenarios of chuubas being bound, punished and/or dominated. The second one is nonconsensual which is a bit of a downside to me but it's basically required for the plot, and it's still hot.

>>33567213
>Risu stubbornly refuses to eat anything unless you cum on it first

>>33571396
I am now horny for the squirrel

>>33571396
I'm not sure I'm enough of a marksman to cum on my ass.

I'm dry as a bone on the Suisei fic.
Give me some spit fetish scenarios. This is the last tim I write a fetish I dont have.

>>33572233
Have you included her raping your mouth with her tongue?

>>33572863
That's gonna happen at least multiple times. In chapter two I'll have her spread a string of saliva out of the guys mouth, then kneel in front of him with her tongue out while it pours into her mouth.

>>33572968
Well how long do you intend on making this anon?

>>33572968
If I could make a timeline of where the fic is going it would look like this.

>Suisei acts socially retarded about what kissing is.
>a mailroom guy at the hololive office makes fun of her and she takes it personally.
>mouth rape #1
>threatens him to not talk about it
>suisei returns home, feels shame and disgust about having his dna inside her body
>awakens some sort of aberrant breeding fetish
>decides to extract gifts from mailroom guy so it feels less dirty
>confronts him in the mail room and exhorts him
>mouth rape #2

From here I haven't decided how she feels about the gift, maybe the gift makes her feel like he really understands her or something. Meanwhile management is starting to think mailroom guy is sexually harassing Suisei.
Vague ideas that could come up in the future:
>Love triangle with Suisei using blackmail to keep mailroom guy from finding real love
>Suisei tries to quit bullying mailroom guy but starts having withdrawals.
>suisei realizes mailroom guy actually looks like her 2d kamioshi.

>>33572233
She writes a letter, just so she can use a stamp which requires being licked to stick to the envelope. She pulls out the guy's tongue with her fingers and uses it like a rag to make the stamp wet.

>>33572233
Suisei demands you spit and drool into her palm while she does the same and then lick up the resulting spit-mix pool with her

>>33574510
Hot

>>33573693
What do mean 'gifts'?

>>33575138
I'm thinking he either buys her some expensive pair of gloves that she hadn't told anyone she was looking at, or some otaku nonsense that he would actually have to understand to have bought.

If you're asking why she would extort anything from him, her initial kiss with mailroom guy was provoked as a sort of reward for letting her talk to him like shit and acting passive during it.

She literally just changes her mind randomly after sleeping on it and decides to retcon her behavior to having been manipulated by MRG and decides she needs a reward.

Suisei's social retardation and tsundere attitudes are cranked up to 11 in this series.

>>33572233
Do what my crazy ex did to give me a spit fetish
>Suisei sees you eating a lollypop
>walks up to you, do something to get you to open your mouth
>take the lollypop, swirl it like she's sucking a dick
>gets it back on your mouth and rolls it around your tongue
>then makes you sit and gets all the spit and candy she had on her mouth drizzle to yours
The only good thing that bitch did, she stole my car battery when we broke up

>>33572233
Suisei takes your drink and leaves you with nothing but backwash and spit. She expects you to drink it all.

>>33561174
Basically >>33562907 and I was also bullied by a group of older girls when I was in high school.
And before you say it, no they weren't bullying me because they liked me secretly. They bullied me because they knew I was a mongoloid who couldn't defend themselves.

>>33575422
I only have >>33573693 this outline written up to the confrontation in the mail room and mouth rape #2. I'm thinking about ending chapter 1 on a cliffhanger with her recieving the gift.

>>33575532
Maybe that could work when I inevitably get to the part of the story where she decides MRG needs to enjoy kissing her and only her and no other girls The basic idea behind the writing aside from the original prompt left by another anon in reply to the Cold Steel story post, is a gender bent Mysterious Girlfriend X.
>Suisei wants your spit inside her.
Suisei wants to touch herself while thinking about your microbes invading her body.
>Suisei does not comprehend the concept of love, is extremely offended by MRG insisting kissing is something people do because they love eachother.
>Suisei wants to prove MRG wrong but MRG is almost as retarded and stubborn as she is and keeps insisting Suisei is wrong.
>Suisei is slowly falling in "love" with MRG, but her idea of love is canonical to Suisei's actual IRL shoujo inspired delusions.
>She misinterprets this as an addiction to MRGs spit.

>>33573430
I have no idea. Current word count is at 3,325 words and I think it needs at least another 1,500.

If you mean how many entries are involved? I see can only say that I see the story starting in late fall and probably wrapping up by New Years.

>>33471368
No problem mate.
I promise I'll read chapter 7 once I have enough free time

>>33577081
Eh, no rush. It'll be a bit before the 'final' part is done anyway. Fucking Sorath just casually dropped Devil Daggers 2 out of nowhere so that'll inevitably slow things down alongside other factors.

>>33574510
Btw I want to work in Suisei's food lore into this but I honestly forgot what foods she can actually eat. I know she mainly drinks apple juice but what does she eat?

>>33577561
She hates all types of veggies and loves meat, especially yakiniku.

>>33577561
I was researching this for my own fic recently. She really doesn't eat/like vegetables and seems to go to yakiniku fairly often with the other girls. Likes hot pot, shio ramen, Anemachi's cooking. I don't remember if she likes sweets or not, for some reason...

>>33577678
>>33577842
This almost makes me want to write MRG as a vegetarian just so she can force him to eat a bento full of spit, mongolian barbecue and bacon.

>>33578003
You should do that, that sounds great.

>>33577678
>She loves meat
Yeah, mine.

>>33578123
I don't think she's a cannibal.

>>33561174
I stubbed my toe when I was in the second grade, and it bled everywhere. I've always carried that experience with me, and it turned me into the twisted individual I am today. It's no exaggeration to say the reason I want to want to see chuubas crying in pain as I rape them is because of that stubbed toe.

>>33563136
>What fics have you jerked it to?
Waaaaaaay too many for me to bother listing them here. There's so much quality smut in the archive you could almost feasibly look nowhere else for porn, for the rest of your life.

>>33578100
Reminder that this is the prototype for MRG

>>33578705
If I knew whether or not the Japanese celebrate Halloween I'm almost 99% certain they don't) I'd have Suisei oblivious to the resemblance until a halloween cosplay party where MRG does a Ritsu impersonation.
I mostly just think it would be fun to write Suiseis eyes dilating, her autistic brain switching from office job Suisei to fangirl "talks to her fucking 2D oshi's soundboard while shes alone in her room" suisei, dropping whatever shes holding and forcing the object of her hatred and bullying to do custom voice lines and borderline worshipping him for a single episode before returning to normal. It feels like a funny scenario. But I've taken up too much of the board trying to reignite my enthusiasm to write I should really make dinner and coast on the serotonin I've given myself to actually putting ass in chair.

>>33579695
Good luck with the rest of the fic anon, looking forward to it.

>>33579695
NTA, but thanks for the reminder to go strangle the pharmacy for my Addy's, because I'm running out.

>>33579695
I will never take adderal

>>33579695
>he hasn't watched the cowboy bebop movie
The Japanese do in fact celebrate Halloween.

>>33580054
I have seen the Bebop movie, but iirc the Bebop movie takes place in America and Algeria.

Regardless I love the scene so much I'll probably work it in. As it stands right now my fic is already much darker than I intended it originally.

>>33580330
Was it meant to be more erotic than rapey?

>>33580385
No actually. I just also want to use the setting to have some funny stuff in the background. I'm taking the setting as if the Hololive shorts are serious and there is actually an office building somewhere in Tokyo where monster girls apply to work and everything you see on stream takes place in soundstages constructed for them to stream in.
Bow whether Pekora is actually an immigrant from Pekoland who works at that office I haven't decided, but when Suisei tells pekora that mailroom guy belongs to her and to keep their relationship a secret she will be talking to an actual 4'11" blue haired rabbit girl.

I guess it's a little true to form, Mysterious Girlfriend X was extremely melodramatic in the first few episodes too.

>>33580747
Will Suisei also throw up?

>>33580885
Probably if she ever goes through saliva withdrawals and tries to steal a half eaten bell pepper for a fix but Suisei is the addict here not MRG.

>>33568882
Well this chapter had some drama, did feel a bit rushed with the pace it went at. Especially since the rushed nature doesn't really expound on why roboco would do this... Especially when earlier chapters had her be supportive of Fauna.

>>33583127
I can see that. Something I didn't really think of is that I have foresight that the reader can't possibly have. To me, this is exactly as it should be but if I were reading it it does seem a bit disjointed and quick to the punch.

Something to work on. I need to elaborate a bit more on things it seems. It only seems good to me because I already know what's going to happen.

Bump

>>33579695
>If I knew whether or not the Japanese celebrate Halloween I'm almost 99% certain they don't)
Some do. Not so much the trick or treat aspect but they dress up and stuff.

>>33586381
What's with this alter Matsuri?

>>33581173
are you gonna have her buttering the muffing while eating (your) icecream?

>>33586480
its just to dress up and have sex.

>>33586652
It's an official color variation she has that she hasn't really done much with other than make a tweet with.

>>33586695
Is there a better kind of holiday?

>>33586652
How new?

>>33553815

>>33586695
More just going out for parties and selling limited time Halloween products. Sex is more Christmas Eve. Japanese men are also little bitches who are too afraid to approach women, to the point where Japanese women are started to get frustrated, so even then there wouldn’t be that much.

>>33553606
working on it pretty fine. this chapter's gonna be a long one, but it takes a lot of work to convince Flare to join in on a threesome with a shota who stole Noel from her, then to break her down to the point where she'll pledge herself to him and they can then have the PROPER threesome.

>>33586667
Hmm, maybe in public, like she starts bumping her feminine side against a table.

A recurring thing I wanted to do with Suisei is constantly having Anemachi interrupt her masturbating before she can cum.

>>33587968
I should say I stupidly deleted about 800 words of Suisei pleasuring herself because I started questioning whether I wanted this to be sfw or nsfw. I know I specifically dont want full on penetrative sex

>>33588140
Its your call my man
i find a girl squirting hotter than full on sex

>>33588513
I made a rule for myself that I wouldnt do anything you couldnt put in a Seinen manga, I think if I put sex in this it would take the life out of it, because at its heart, it's just a story about a pure anime girl who wants to practice kissing on her aqcuaintance and gets in too deep.

I feel like you could slip in squirting into a seinen with the right visual metaphors

>>33589016
Yeah I was thinking it's better just to focus on kissing and spit, sex could come in a off-shoot chapter.

>>33589016
>I feel like you could slip in squirting into a seinen with the right visual metaphors
I have no clue how you'd write that in prose without going into wacky dream description land.

Why does a single small (not yet) fic need 100 posts of discussion?

>>33589306
board zoomin and it keeps thread alive
discussion is good and helps keep people motivated to see things through anyway

>>33589196
Suisei's ankles locked into place and she watched her lower body gently jerk once and then shudder. Her eyes crossed while a long burning, soothing stream of relief came out of her.
The tea finished boiling on the stove, and Suisei laid still imagining the pot was screaming on her behalf.

>>33589016
>I wouldnt do anything you couldnt put in a Seinen manga
Wot?
Oyasumi Punpun shows sex (technically rape)
Gantz has fully drawn underaged dicks and titties
Berserk has... too much to count
I understand that you don't want to write a sex scene and I'm okay with that but your excuse doesn't make sense.

>>33589306
What's wrong with discussing a chuuba fic in fanfic thread for chuubas?

>>33553606
Just gutted 4k words from my chapter when I realized it served no purpose at the moment but I'll probably add it in the next chapter where it might fit better. On the bright side, however, I figured out a better scene to fit into the chapter and I've done about 1k words already for it which is great.

>>33587923
Based

Its a silly question but can someone explain to me in full what counts as "soft-mindbreak?"

>>33589306
What's even sadder is that a fic was updated with a new chapter, and it is getting ignored.

>>33590057
Sure just let me read the first 13 entries to catch up so I can comment on this one.

>>33590038
Google it.

>>33590057
Two series got updated with no attention

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>>33590057
Both of these comments are retarded.
You could have commented on the two fics you feel are getting ignored, but you dont actually read so you just decided to complain that nobody is talking about something neither of you are talking about.

>>33590038
Going off of wording alone, I assume it's about someone getting their will/desire not to do something get broken like in a mind break tagged erodoujin but not 'falling' as hard or as deep.

>>33589306
Forced discussion or something like that, always happens when the board is zooming, which brings the quality of /wg/ down.

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>>33590310
You guys new to /wg/? That's how its always been. Unless you're part of the big three, you get ignored.

>>33590841
I don't know if it's the same author or what, but I think they may just be autistic. That Botan guy with an obnoxiously long title kept making hundreds of posts about his unreleased story thread after thread. This has the same spirit so I'm inclined to believe it's him

>>33590601
This. It's so fucking disgusting, this high-horsing. I've got zero interest in Fiddledanon's trauma dumping.

Don't know what the other series here is but I'm assuming it's Bunny Trap from last thread so I'll just say fuck pekofag, not reading his shit.

>>33590796
So, something like half breaking them but not going the whole way? Is that how it goes?
I ask because "kintsugi" has the tag yet I'm too blind to see where the "Mind-break" comes in.

>>33591407
Oh, isn't the soft mindbreak coming from the fact that the ending is very ambiguous as to whether you ended up with Mio or not?

>>33591530
That's dramatic miopost. I think the mindbreak is more that the protagonist's will against Mio gets broken down until he fully accepts her.

>>33591057
>Don't know what the other series here is but I'm assuming it's Bunny Trap from last thread so I'll just say fuck pekofag, not reading his shit.
The series that was updated was Let Me Feel Your Pain. Do you even read the thread before commenting?

>>33591661
>I've got zero interest in Fiddledanon's trauma dumping.
Do you? Fucking retard.

>>33591009
That’s called attention seeking. The only way to combat that is to ignore him.

>>33589306
It's easier to discuss something that will never be written than something that is written

>>33591706
Don’t get so triggered because someone called you out.

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A little over 42 by my count poster number 33589306, would've been only 38 but then a few posts were made complaining about it. Apparently 14 of them are (me) and 8 of them are just answering questions after I finished writing down everyone's input. Spit is a pretty weird focus so I was just asking for ideas. I definitely dont want to hog any attention in the evening thread where all the conversation happens anyway so I won't say anymore about it until I publish it.

>>33568882
I can't really give any feedback in terms of writing, other than to say that you accidentally wrote "shit" instead of "shirt" when talking about Roboco at one point.
I enjoyed the chapter. Despite the fact that I can't wait to see how the story resolves the current arc, I like how it's paced.
Interesting choice of beliefs for Fauna. It'd be amusing if you could expand on that a little later on, but don't force it if it won't fit.
Also, please throw Roboco off the roof. Thanks.

>>33592488
You're one stupid fucking indog. Go back to the fucking catalogue, threadshitter.

>>33591654
Huh. I guess that is a soft mindbreak.
...
Man that seems to be a common theme for Matthewanon fics huh?

I'm going to rape every author until they post a new chapter.

>>33592598
>I definitely dont want to hog any attention in the evening thread where all the conversation happens anyway so I won't say anymore about it until I publish it.
That ship has sailed, anon. No point in trying to avert it now.

>>33592696
:(

>>33592598
Anon it's really best you just ignore all that.

I see we’re in the part where everyone is just post random shit.

>>33592916
ESL-kun....
Kill yourself.

>>33592599
I'll change that real quick. Thank you for pointing that out.

I will be elobrating more on what Fauna said about her past in the future. It'll be a central focus. [spolier]I may or may not have been a wiccan at one point in my life[/spoiler]

>also, please throw roboco off the roof. Thanks.

Literally made me spit out my drink.

>>33593101
>spoiler
That's pretty gay anon, what part of the triple goddess and the goat lord attracted you to them.

>>33593321
I was a dumb 19 year old who didn't know shit about shit and needed something to fill the void lost by a departure from Christianity.

It is not a time in my life I look back on fondly lol.

>>33593647
Do you at least have a vagina?

>>33593838
In a metaphorical sense.

>>33593838
You could say that. I'm not a tranny, if that's what you mean. Let's just say it's complicated.

>>33593880
Tranny?

>>33593984
I... you could say... you're not a... you have a metaphorical... you what?

what the fuck is happening

>>33594228
I won't go into too much detail but I'll describe it as I have very abnormal and ambiguous body construction that is quite rare in humans.

>>33594228
He's a hermaphrodite, hence the hermaphrodite fic he tried writing ages ago.

>>33594366
mate we all know you're a herm, no use in being vague.

>>33594284
We just learned Ryonanon is in the first train Eonism.

>>33594608
what

>>33594284
I don't know but I think I'm just gonna come back later

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>>33594510
I thought nobody was that certain. Ah well. Now I just feel foolish.

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>>33594483
post bod, wanna stare at you and laugh if you're ugly but jerk off if you're hot

>>33594284
It's schizo hour

>>33590920
But according to last thread, the big three includes the train to Kafka guy which is the same author of Let me feel your pain, so it shouldn’t be getting ignored.

>>33594284
i dont know man, im making some pasta and reading that mio daughter fic
is alright

>>33596158
nta, but the person from the last thread and >>33590920 are definitely different people with different opinions on what the "big 3" are.

>>33596274
the pasta or the fic?

>>33596494
the pasta's delicious. miofic, not so much, kinda shit

>>33596494
i dont know what the other guy wins by impersonating me but both are alright, the pasta isnt high quality and i didnt do grocery shopping so no sauce
the fic is fine, amateurish but its pretty endearing

>>33596823
fuck off man you ain't me

>>33596158
I'm new to this general since like, July so I could be wrong but Let Me Feel your pain never gets as much attention as First Train and Kafka. I'm the spit fic guy, but I'm only writing at all because someone told me I had to write shit myself I've never actually posted a story before, I dont really read chuuba abuse-guy's stuff though and anytime I've seen him mentioned his stuff's been slightly controversial.

He or I guess she now has a reputation for being hardcore, but he also liked my idea for a training by abuse scenario once so I guess we have similar turn ons even though they seem way more hardcore than me.

What I'm saying is he has a niche, and a niche audience.

Why the fuck are two randos pretending to be?

>>33596977
>I'm new to this general since like, July
All newcomers have to participate in a game of soggy biscuit with the thread as a failsafe for whoever busts last

I CANT TELL WHOS WHO ITS LIKE WERE ON AN ANONYMOUS IMAGEBOARD ALL OF A SUDDEN

>>33597280
WHICH ONE DO I SHOOT?

>>33597884
me, please

>>33597884
We are one step away from tripfagging

>>33598102
I would rather endure the impersonation than see a tripcode in these threads.

>>33598445
Sell me on first train to kafka, I don't like sad stories.

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>>33596158
I write both Let Me Feel Your Pain and First Train and Kafka. I've never really minded the less exposure. So long as someone is enjoying it, even if it's literally just one guy, I'm happy to keep writing it. I've never been a numbersfag, I write because I love doing it.

Don't worry. The only time I ever stop writing a story is if I don't know where to take it or it's not getting any positive reception at all.

>>33599051
did you mean to reply to him?

>>33599051
Haven’t read it. I’m not the guy you’re thinking of.

What the fuck is going on? What made the thread go off the rails?

>>33599191
Ope.
Yes.

>>33599051
If you don't like sad stories you're gonna hate it. It's literally just an in depth string of shorts about some horrifc abuse scenarios.

>>33599384
a guy wrote about his dinner? lunch? snack? and somehow that sent us into the clone wars

>>33599051
It's an anthology of sad short fics about abuse that is not portrayed sexually. It's rather hard hitting even if some of them feel like extremely OOC fanfiction that's probably more fitting for an original abuse anthology than a fanfic one. Still some of them work at being short fics that portray the abused.

>>33539545
(You) are a teacher at holoschool. After saving money and spunk for a week, The brothel you were supposed to spend it all gets busted. With nothing to lose, you offer one of your students all of the money in exchange of them emptiying your balls
you can pick the chuuba you want but please write them as a gaki

>>33600360
I think I'll pass then I dont want to be sad. I'm sad all the time irl so I like to laugh in my head when I'm alone. With the thoughts. About the funny people. In the funny mirror.

Did you know Watame's roommate has a sister who is also a Vtuber? I checked the archive to see if she has a fic about her but she doesn't. One of her teammates does though.

What the fuck did I just read. I'm gonna go digest Uruhulk.

Just got inspiration for another Building Block Doll like fic. I need a chuuba.

>>33601938
F U B U K I

>>33601938
Sasaki Saku

>>33601095
Name?

>>33601938
If it's about amputee nonconsensual sex I know a chuuba who's said that's a pretty hot fetish.

Another question I forgot: do you want it you x chuuba or chuuba x chuuba?

>>33602165
I've never seen Saku unfortunately.

>>33602141
Fubuki would actually work pretty good for the fic I have in mind.

>>33602379
>Another question I forgot: do you want it you x chuuba or chuuba x chuuba?
It's your fic, write how you want.

>>33602441
I don't mind either way. If the thread has a preference then I'll do that.

I'm glad this thread is finally

>>33602529
Then write.

>>33602627
Fine fine

>>33602174
Uruka gets buff
Or Hakushika Iori depending on what you're asking the name of.

>>33602590
Is this a writing prompt?

I'm glad this thread is finally discussing ideas for future fiction, I hope someday we can learn to collaborate on full blown stories.

>>33602379
It's romance again? I'd prefer anonxchuuba but don't pick something that'll stifle your creative vision; if you want yuri, write yuri
Also sasaki saku's... a bitch tbqhwyf

>>33602907
>Uruka
Literally who?

>>33603275
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRV0iDRl907-sIlI5PvPjxEcUqS1gmG3NAqSox2wkAo1sK-RWtzBmm7uSuaha0cAfebxnM2-zLoi_5-/pub

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>>33589575
I just remembered Testament of Sister New Devil has an implied squirting scene after the female protagonist is forced to submit to the male protag, it has a jump cut to the loli grandma demon mopping up the floor by hand and saying "that's our girl... four whole times."
So it can definitely be done

I love sluts
That will be all

>>33602907
Watame's sister is also her sister? Am I being bamboozled?

>>33604284
Bless you fellow slutposter

>another 1k words written today for a total of almost 5k
>still haven't gotten to Flare enthusiastically taking big shota dick in her anus
the hell am I doing with this chapter

>>33604284
We need a fic where you fix a slut rather than indulging in her bad behavior. Slowly, ever so slowly, enduring her abuse, you fix a truly broken girl who in reality just yearns for someone to praise her, to love her for herself and not for her body

>>33568882
harem ending anon is in shambles, i feel it

>>33604772
clearly you're beating around flare's bush. get to the seggs nerd

>>33605005
Alternatively we need a fic where the slut utterly breaks you into being worse in every way despite your best efforts at fixing her. Instead she fixes you into being her kind of guy.

>>33605005
>ruining a perfectly good slut like that

>>33604286
The adderal is finally wearing off and I want to say no, I must have said something weird or forgot the right euphemism to say they have the same character designer.

>>33603845
It had an entire scene where a girl not just sticks a ball tail up her asshole, but masturbates with and ultimately cums from it... So, I guess it's all about how much you want to push the envelope.

>>33604772
It better be a bit shota dick, anon; elven assholes are stretchy, and feel lonely if not filled to the brim (evolutionary adaptation due to risk of Ork rape).

>>33605126
>she puts you in an amazon press
>she tells you where to cut your hair
>she forces you to work out
>she learns how to push your buttons so you became an agressive fucking machine

>>33604284
Sluts are disgusting. At least a whore can claim she's doing it for money. A slut is nothing but a soulless being that leads astray the hearts of men into sin, for merely a little pleasure.

>>33605126
Ending with her falling head over heels for anon now that he's been moulded into her ideal guy, and anon cheating on her dumb ass causing her to have a complete mental breakdown as she realizes what kind of road she's on

>>33605126
Isn't there already a fic about that scenario?

>>33605299
it is, but also half-elves are infertile due to being filthy half-breeds so their vaginas are stiff and cold and their buttholes specifically are extra sensitive in addition to having the elven stretchiness

>>33605499
Dumb shit question from a dumb shit indog.

>>33605348
Unless you're in it for the same kind of non-committal pleasure in which case sluts are great. Stop falling in love with anything that gives you the slightest speck of attention nerd

>>33605253
Roommate refers to the person behind the avatar so I was confused for a second. im also pretty sure Watame is a single child

> hey, would you be interested if I brought back (series no one cares about)?
no, fuck off

>>33605530
This is ridiculous.
Elves in general are so long lived their fertility cycle is very slow to prevent overpopulation. If they were able to have a child every month there would be billions of elves by now. Half elves reach sexual maturity decades and decades of years sooner and go into estrus at least once every 12 months.

>>33605891
Per laws of exponential growth, if elves started at the same time as we did and could reproduce once a month instead of once a year, than according to some basic calculations we would have roughly 2.3 trillion elves in the world right now. Yeah, exponential growth is a bitch

>>33605348
>not wanting to fall into a spiral of degeneracy together with her
weak

>>33605005
sounds like an ayame fic to me

>>33606209
Which one

>>33606248
no, i mean it just sounds like ayame'd be a perfect fit

>>33606330
No, there is one. Say it

>>33605891
nah I like mine better
half-elves are such freaks of nature that they're not even able to reproduce, leaving them doomed to never have a solid group foundation and always pitied for their biological failure

>>33606209
ayame is not,she's a whore
she's purely in for the money, you pay her and then she lays there, wipes herself after you cum and asks you to pay for her uber

>>33606397
Species don't just spontaneously go unfertile

>>33572233
suisei gets some water ink on her tongue and he glands produce an enormous amount of saliva as a reaction (like a dog) and you just happen to pass by to be her receptacle

You ever noticed half elves, despite always crying about how oppressed they are always identify as half elf and never half human? You would think if it was such a privilege to be human they'd eagerly hide their ears and pretend to be human. Mighty suspicious I say.

>>33605499
Closest thing is Festival of Sensations but that doesn't really lean too hard into the corruption aspect. Like yeah Matsuri has kind of turned the dude's sex drive to max but she hasn't really changed him for the truly worse by the end of the fic.
>>33606455
Anon, what the hell do you think a mule is?

>>33606455
I believe that anon is comparing half-elves and mules. Both of which are unable to reproduce.

>>33606455
>go unfertile
they don't go infertile, they're born that way
>>33606685
like this

>>33606685
Explain how mules are still alive then smartass

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>>33606739
I can see it working either way desu, but I feel like elves are meant to be so magic and special it would take multiple briefings to get a true half elf because elf Gene's would be so dominant.
Not dominant in the normal way Genes are dominant because dominant Genes are always sucky (shortness, obesity, depression, unibrows, baldness, dark skin, dark hair, dark eyes, low IQ) but just like... magical blood?

>>33607204
This poster is fucking based.

>>33607312
> elf genes being dominant ones
Never happens. It's always human genes being stronger than the other races. That's why it's a plot point in the first place

>>33607312
I can see either explanation, sure, but I'm gonna stick with mine bc it gives me a very easy explanation to make her a natural buttslut and prevent her from getting pregnant in any way because it's hard to deal with pregnancy in a multi-chapter smut series, when you're also not into pregnant sex nor lactation

>>33606670
What about Coffee-stained lips?

>>33607667
One solitary person read that fic, doesn't count

>>33607647
>spoiler

>>33607647
Yeah but only ovulating once a decade/year/century depends on how long the elf lives already kind of solves the pregnant sex issue because they would effectively be infertile. Having a stretchy asshole.would work for any kind of elf even though it actually makes no sense except for male elves.

>>33607721
Petition to remove all fics that got less than 5 (You)s and all fics that haven't been mentioned by name in the last 6 months from the archive

>>33607647
>nor lactation
Dang it man, you were almost incredibly based, now you've been downgraded to just based.

>>33607940
That'd be less of an archive and more of a catalogue

>>33607800
fair enough. meh, I've already written a fair bit into it and don't feel like going back and editing it. the series will have a fair bit of impregnation play anyway with the pekora chapter and the pekomama bonus chapter

>>33607940
Petition to ban this poster for life for posting child terroristic nudity threats off topic racism outside of /b/

>>33607204
Because they haven't died, dumbass.

The real answer is that they're a crossbreed between Donkeys and Mares

>>33605499
Can't remember the name but it was a Polka fic.
Maybe Clowns are happy

>>33607971
I'm sorry anon it just doesn't move the penis
all my degeneracy points went into unusual things fucking girls like shotas and animals and monsters

>>33608348
>fucking girls like shotas
what did he mean by this

>>33607667
Eh, having reread that, it doesn't really hit the same beats of corruption (sexualized) it's sort of like the difference between a rape fic that treats it like smut and a rape fic that treats it like violation and defiling of a woman they're similar in what happens but different in how the world/narration treats the events.

>>33608659
He likes things that fuck girls, things like shotas or animals

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>>33608348
This is the writing and reading thread everyone.

>>33608659
He means women having sex with short men (less than 6 feet tall).

>>33606392
Frigid Oxygen, Sweltering Hemaglobin

>>33609026
my brain cells are too few and precious to spend on making sure my 4chan posts are written well
they all need to go into the stories

>>33609150
I feel like being anal retentant about writing would grow brain cells

>>33606392
The unreleased rrat!Ayame fic set in a highschool au?

>>33605530
That's quite the specific fantasy

>>33608348
>monsters
What kind of monsters?
Humanoids like orcs, goblins, trolls, etc; or like the monsters from bunny trap?

>>33609596
The former.
Orcs, goblins, demons, devils, humanoid aliens, bowser

>>33609764
>bowser
What?

>>33609931
yknow
from mario

>>33539480
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSF9ji9VqC8eRbfn9vy2hA7L2M8dmNhSCyukH4lUPJ786LX3ZqaCnVGdJGVmA5mTvUvFiopOZSoAVwW/pub
Lemon
Tags: (you), Kiara, diapers, omorashi,

This is the first time I've ever written Kiara so be gentle, still trying to learn how to write her correctly and probably won't do it right the first try.

I have a few other ideas for fics like this so if this one doesn't land quite right, let me know and I'll try something different. Either way, I do hope your enjoy.

>>33609764
So you're still into humans, just abnormally tall ones with purple skin. Gotcha.

>>33609988
I know where is from, I'm just surprised you named him at all.

>>33610057
>diapers
Sorry anon I want to give you a (You) for writing but idk if I want to read that.

>>33610057
Probably should have waited until the next thread was made.

>>33610141
peach/bowser porn is really good ok

>>33610057
Jesas, you're a machine. I'll give it a read later, though it's not really my style.

>>33610223
>takes accelerants to write more
>feel overwhelmed and need to nap
What the FUCK drugs, how goddamn useless are you? My parents were right this shit is stupid.

>>33610319
Didnt mean to tag you

>>33610156
It's softer stuff. It's more grounded and less like... about the ageplay aspect. I won't begrudge you for skipping it.

>>33610169
I am doing it now because I'm not very confident in this piece so if it's garbage I won't have to sit and see the garbage for 300 posts kek

>>33610290
I might write something later tonight as well. That discussion about half-elf breeding habits and sterility gave me an idea for something I've always been meaning to try. Either that or I'll take that idea into another chapter. I probably have one more left in me.

New thread
>>33610252

>>33610587
Thanks anon I'll go over there right now and make sure your early thread stays alive for an hour until we hit page ten. Newfag.

>>33610090
I mean they're allowed to be a little weirder than that
as long as whatever's fucking the girl has legs and a penis that ejaculates semen it's good in my book
well, with a few exceptions. it's a case by case basis

>>33610786
>was curious about what pronpt spit fic anon keeps referring to about Suisei
>looked up when Cold Steel was published
>think I found the source of the prompt
The prompt mysteriously DOES NOT EXIST in the archive.

Bizarre.

LUNA RAPE

>>33612022
does luna really deserve to be raped?

>>33612105
She would literally kill every girl in hololive if she ever got her hand on weapon as revenge for her life as a child actress

>>33612105
Absolutely.

>>33612196
>Areola peek
>Butthole just ought of sight
I mean when you show me things like these, then yeah, I'm raping her alright.

>>33605759
Who are you quoting?

chuubafictionarchive.com

or

vtfanficarchive.com?

>>33612571
vtfanficarchive.com

>>33610587
Why does every new thread have such horrendous start?

>>33612724
That's a fantastic start, you tasteless fucking indog.

>>33612904
Urolagnia Is such an unhygienic fetish, you savage animal.

>>33612571
Personally prefer chuubafictionarchive.com if only so we don't scare too many newfags off.

>>33612571
the first one's better.

>>33612571
Well I just woke up. Are you buying a fucking domain name for me or are you doing your own shit?

>>33612571
Must we make a website? I can’t see good things coming from it.

>>33613635
I've been considering, yeah. Then set up a redirect to the archive as-is now. The long ass URL is cumbersome.

>>33613729
Just a redirect to the archive as-is, not a separate platform a la AO3 is what I have in mind.

>>33613729
If I had to guess he's going to do a redirect to the script archive to make something you can actually type into a search bar. I wanted to do the same thing with a firebase URL but ultimately decided against it.

>>33613819
Yeah, I feel you on that. I just figured most people are in things capable of bookmarking, though. The URL makes my brain itch in the wrong ways because it's ugly, but ultimately something that can be dealt with by ignoring it. I was going to do VTCFFCD.org or some shit before I said 'this is probably a waste of cash, huh?'

Bump

>>33614124
Might be, but $20 a year isn't really that big a deal. VTCFFCD is definitely better than the long ass script, but it's also kind of a long acronym and easy to misplace.

I'll look at some of those newer vanity URL and see if anything sounds clever and fun.

>>33539545
Matsuri gets fucked by an oji-san in a dark alley.