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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>32071353

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

First Train and Kafka Stop Ten: I Am A Prisoner/I Am A Skunk/I Am Humiliated:tags: anthology, multiple chuubas, abuse, dark themes:>>32120783

HoloEN: Experimentation: Tags: Holomyth, comedy:>>32164123

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Okayu gets stuck. The dog comes home and decides to take advantage of the situation.:>>32075136

Lamy wakes up after her drinking collab next to Lui and both are naked. How does Lamy get out of this very awkward situation?:>>32130967

(You) are a slave taken in battle by the snow elves of the north, there you face a terrible existence under your cruel master Lamy. Until one day you discover her terrible secret, she's only a half elf.:>>32133451

picking up a half-feral Koyori in a post-apocalyptic setting and raising her as your murderous daughterwife:>>32145939

Laplus was your wife but when she sealed her powers she forgot everything and thought she was your daughter.:>>32150189

>> No.32167651

Anya HATE

>> No.32167708

>>32167029
Kronmei masochism
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TFmWUEBGqVsSdUSrmnVDPBbKR1z8iin_l3bZRIAN-5U/edit
tags: kronmei, bullying, wedgie, swirly, yuri, domestic(?)

>> No.32171136

>>32166959
/wg/ reclining once again. It's truly the end.

>> No.32171594
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For some reason there is an unusually large amount of NTR porn featuring Mio

>> No.32171991

>>32171594
what happened to Archer's eyes?

>> No.32172033

>>32171991
looks nothing like archer you stupid twat

>> No.32172089

>>32172033
it looks exactly like him you blind motherfucker

>> No.32172208

>>32172089
go look up a picture you fucking bat

>> No.32173496

Anya's dagger...

>> No.32175668

>>32173496
Huh, I was sure there was a futa story with that name. I guess it being Anya should've tipped me off that there wasn't. There should be though... unfortunately Anya has crossed too much into relevancy so I can't pity write her anymore

>> No.32176092

>>32175668
>Anya has crossed too much into relevancy
When did that happen?

>> No.32176135

>>32176092
I don't know but it's been a while already. She just suddenly rose into popularity a couple months ago

>> No.32176309

>>32176092
The Japanese finally noticed her... Also she stopped playing shitty games on stream.

>> No.32176809

>>32167128
Luna RapeAnon Rape!

>> No.32177144

>>32175668
Anon there's literally two Anya fics that have the word 'Dagger' in the title... or maybe you're thinking of Anya's Zweihander?

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>>32176809
Rape rape? Alright

>> No.32179399

>>32177144
Why the fuck would Anya have a zweinhander I swear to god if there's an actual fic with that name-

>> No.32179756

>>32179399
Anon that's a reference to the sword she has beneath her skirt.

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>>32179756
...T-That big? Oh my...

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>realize I'm making Suisei too sociopathic
>walking a fine line between menhera Tsundere and just a yandere

Need advice. How can I make this rapist sympathetic

>> No.32180851

>>32171594
There's also a lot of beast porn too.

>> No.32180968

>>32180713
You can't, pekofag fucked it up recently too

>> No.32181141

>>32180713
You can. I suck. Wink wink.

>> No.32181242

>>32180968
I think I have an advantage in that suisei does not actually fuck the guy, she just swallows his saliva and masturbates about it later.

>> No.32181293

>>32180713
Watch clips from her radio show in order to get a more ques of a "casual" suisei.
Either that or make a writing decision about what lies at the core of the comet (in regards to characterization) and use that as the base for how Suisei acts for your fic.

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Requesting futa prompts

>> No.32182119

>>32180713
>making Suisei too sociopathic
Just don't make her sociopathic, then. Easy fix, right?

>> No.32182191

>>32182074
(You) find a group of futafags and slowly bifurcate them with a power saw.

>> No.32182488

>>32180713
Give her a core. She needs something that makes her human. What’s driving the actions she’s taking? It needs to feel justified, as if you yourself could be driven to do it if you were in her shoes. Something that’s at the core of all of us, but taken to an extreme in her that tipped her over into whatever she’s doing.
Gl I guess

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>>32182074
Coming home from work to find a big gross cumstain on your carpet with your pet dog girl Korone saying it's your fault for not letting her fuck you. In the middle of her rant about how you should let her knot your ass or else she'll cum on every piece of furniture you own you grab her by the hair and rub her nose in her own jizz until she apologizes.

>> No.32182751

>>32181293
Her what?

>> No.32182847

>>32182648
We really need a /wg/ robot chicken event where we take these nonsensical stories and just shove them all in one place

>> No.32183052

>>32182751
Her fucking radio show, you stupid indog. Can't you read? Or are you so much of a clipfag you don't even know she's got a radio show? Why are you even writing her?

>> No.32183282

>>32183052
NTA I don't think her radio show is translated he might find some clips but it's not pure Suisei it's usually Suisei with Marine or guest stuff

>> No.32183386

>>32182074
>Kiara shows her appreciation for Ame's work on the 3D concert by enthusiastically servicing her cock
>Ina gets revenge on Mori for drawing her in a revealing swimsuit
>the HoloX girls indulge Koyori's love of "mayonnaise" by cumming on everything she eats
>Kaela shows Gura the reason "69" is her favorite number

>> No.32183493

>>32183282
>I don't think her radio show is translated
There's plenty of TLed clips out there, one channel that does a lot is this one:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCKB3ca8dE153yEGVgIrK4kg

>> No.32183802

>>32183386
>Kaela shows Gura the reason "69" is her favorite number
Okay I know this is a Futa prompt but this sounds like a comedy fic about Kaela trying to teach Gura math, with Kaela spouting fun facts about the number 69.

>> No.32184246

>>32183386
I've written most of these chuubas in the past, why do I feel like I can't anymore? Ugh, so annoying

>> No.32184645

>>32183802
Theres so much to love about The number 69! 69 is asemiprime number, and aBlum integer, since the two factors of 69 are bothGaussian primes!
The sum of the sums of the divisors of the first 9positive integers, the thirdcomposite numberin the 13-aliquot tree. Thealiquot sumof sixty-nine is 27 within the aliquot sequence (69,27,13,1,0).
69 is astrobogrammatic number and acentered tetrahedral number.

Because 69 has an odd number of 1s in its binary representation, it is sometimes called an "odious number." Of note is that 692(4761 in binary) and 693(328509) together use every decimal digit from 0–9. 69 is equal to105octal, while 105 is equal to 69hexadecimal. This same property can be applied to all numbers from64to 69!

On many handheld scientific and graphingcalculators, the highestfactorialthat can be calculated, due to memory limitations, is 69! or about 1.711224524×1098.

"A..."

>> No.32184786

>>32183052
That's a little intense of a reaction to me not being aware radio was still a thing in 2022.

>> No.32184862

>>32184786
It's not literal radio it's a podcast...

>> No.32184953

>>32184862
Actually it's Japan they have an entire culture around old trains. It might actually be radio autists

>> No.32185031

>>32184786
Fubuki and Marine have one too. They got to talk to ZUN once.

>> No.32185240

>>32184862
>>32184862
Why call it a radio show then is that a JP thing? The only guy with a radio show I follow is our Burger Lord.

>>32184953
The japanese are good at using marketing to keep old media relevant. I can see that. My only comment on it would be that in Backstreet girls the characters go to a radio interview and get introduced to the concept of Gap Moe.

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>>32185240
Forgot the picture of the king.

>> No.32185412

>>32182847
How the fuck would even you organize something like this?

>> No.32185741

>>32182074
%Chuuba_Name% goes around fucking and impregnating her friends and building a harem

>> No.32185745
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>>32182847
Enough AI stuff please

>> No.32185985

>>32185745
How does that relate to AI
Also MidJourney fucks relentlessly, doesn't surprise me that it won a competition

>> No.32186023

>>32185745
NTA but I think they were referring to the show robot chicken rather than an ai.
Presumably it'd be an event where wacky prompts get picked up and turned into short fics.

>> No.32186070

>>32185745
that’s not what Robot Chicken is, anon

>> No.32186080

>>32185412
Well what I would do is make a sub header similar to the prompt recap posts, saying the date of a deadline where as many stories as you can write would be published in a pdf.

So September 15th is the deadline for the first issue of the /vt/ magazine, any story of 500+ words can be submitted and then the best would be included. Or all of them included. Then I'd put them in a pdf and see if I could convince the Draw thread fags to add art.

But that would be something I'd do in a perfect world where /vt/ wasnt such a rancid, /r9k/ flavored newfag cesspool.

>> No.32186197

>>32186080
Reddit spacing, opinion discarded.

>> No.32186277

>>32185745
Robot chicken is sort of a millennial tiktok anon, it was a show on adult swim that made fun of other cartoons. It was stop motion claymation, and it had no meta plot or theme, it was just 15 second clips flashing through on a fake tv screen. The meta story of robot chicken is that you are a robot chicken created by a mad scientist and forced to watch cartoons.

>> No.32186332

>>32186197
What opinion?

>> No.32186628

>>32186080
Honestly that does sound fun. No clue how many would actually participate in one.

>> No.32187035

>>32186277
The star wars specials were kino. Also, checked.
>>32186332
I dunno.

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>> No.32189781

>>32186080
Fun idea, but as it’s been said before, getting /wg/ to cooperate on something together is like herding cats.

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Slutsuri is hot

>> No.32190343

I know that guys have a decent amount of control over when they cum, via kegel exercises, but what about women? How much control do they have to hold back an orgasm?

>> No.32190434

>>32190343
I think very little

>> No.32190511

>>32190343
Kegel stops the cumshot but you still kind of orgasm from what I understand, but since you prevented the cum from coming out, it doesn't register and you don't go into refractory. But women can't hold in anything because it's a whole body thing.

Source: literally made all of this up

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I feel dirty. I cheated on my oshi by watching Finana's countdown ASMR whilst she was streaming her own countdown ASMR

>> No.32191545

>>32191358
Who's your oshi?

>> No.32191755

>>32191545
Okayu

>> No.32191790

>>32190434
>>32190511
Damn. There goes that idea.

>> No.32191860

>>32191755
Well, did you cum to Finana's?

>> No.32191873

>>32191860
Yes

>> No.32191987

>>32191790
Hm, actually, according to two crazy-sounding women in a random quora thread I stumbled across, it seems possible, just harder to do compared to a man. So it's a plausible idea.

>> No.32192269

>>32191987
Anon quora is larp when it comes to shit like this please don't actually believe them. It's for the better, between the couple pissing into each other and the guy who came into his daughter's yogurt with the help of his wife, amongst other weird shit like 60 year olds describing how they have daily prostate orgasms, I'd rather just distance myself from it all

>> No.32192501

>>32191873
Finana's was meant to get you off, Okayu's is never sexual... unless that's changed recently. Because you have needs and Okayu isn't satisfying them, you are forgiven for cheating.

>> No.32192540

>>32192269
What the actual fuck have you been searching for

>> No.32192588

>>32192269
After some more research, it seems like it's still up in the air. Some women are saying it's possible, others are saying otherwise. Not much information on it though, most articles were just tips about how women can speed up their orgasm instead.
Anyway, as long as I know it's not dead-set impossible, that's enough for me.

>> No.32192630

>>32192501
>Okayu's is never sexual... unless that's changed recently.
It has.

>> No.32192671

>>32192540
Stuff like "is it bad to hold in your pee for X hours" gets you some really fucking weird nut jobs suddenly making it about diapers and fetish

>> No.32192725

>>32192501
Okayu has turned into a semen drainer the past year or so. Korone doesn't mind and thinking about the logistics of that make it hotter. I think it's related to Okayu having lost her weight so she's more confident in herself, but she's become pure sex, especially in membership ASMR

>> No.32192759

>>32192630
Color me intrigued

>> No.32193117

>>32192671
The UK had to make a PSA about this because a lot of women were holding their pee in so it would feel better when they peed.

>> No.32193208

>>32192725
>>32192630
Think the last time I subbed to Okayu was for the Valentine's ASMR... would you say there's even better now?

>> No.32193222

>>32193117
Fucking Matsuri...

>> No.32193354

>>32193117
Though it is bad for both sides, holding in pee is much worse for women as they're way more likely to get an infection from doing so. Also, unlike men, when their bladder gets full, they REALLY gotta go. This is why the lines on female bathrooms are memed to be so long.

Anyway, it's fine to hold in for a couple hours here and there, just don't make it consistent.

>> No.32193375

>>32192671
You'd be suprised, it's a common thing amongst women. When full, the bladder pushes down on the shaft of clitoris. Then when they piss, it apparently feels 'orgasmic'. They're called peegasms.

>> No.32193427

>>32193375
I mean in men peeing can feel good too depending on certain circumstances but alas this topic has went on for longer than it should already

>> No.32193658

>>32193375
Matsuri...

>> No.32193774

>>32193375
>Will never barge in on Matsuri in the bathroom mid peegasm and facefuck her
AAA

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>>32167029

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 6
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTKvNG3W2fDrNRVJIpV89wC-4k2rtfdWHpCuP93oi-QM-vxUY96rMnTuTB61Z95kBcwpmkdmuphrphl/pub

Tags: Botan, Vanilla, SFW

I'm getting more comfortable writing and I more or less know what I wanna do with each character so it all comes down to my laziness. I'll try to write a bit more every day but I promise nothing.

>> No.32194691

>>32193658
speaking of… what would Matsuri’s reaction to having the object of her affection (male/female) stolen from her be?
I remember she had a sort of meltdown over Hoshikawa or Haachama or something, but never paid enough attention to recall how that manifested.

>> No.32194755

>>32194691
she cried over hoshikawa's rejection. i dunno if how she publicly reacted to hoshikawa kissing gundou much later

>> No.32196122

>>32194755
I thought she was trying to set Gundou up with Kanda

>> No.32197004

>>32196122
Hoshikawa or Matsuri?

>> No.32197471

>>32197004
Hoshikawa

>> No.32197603

>>32196122
dunno what she was doing at the time but she ended up fooling around with gundou
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BiVk07oQZRY

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>>32197471
I think she's a huge shipfag in general.

>> No.32197917

>>32197838
she's especially a massive gunkan shipper, always has been.
tbf gunkan gets along unbelievably well, they are crazy cute

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>>32197603
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BiVk07oQZRY
Now I'm no /u/ fag but...

>> No.32198143

>>32197967
it's like an ASMR stream too, enjoying just listening to it

>> No.32198481

>>32197917
it baffles me how nijiJP can ship their opposite-sex talents and no-one bats an eye, but the instant a holo comes within 100 virtual meters of a male there's rioting in the streets

>> No.32198547

>>32198481
It's just the culture they've cultivated. Niji has been doing it from the start whereas Holo stopped all that around the start of gen 3.

>> No.32198584

>>32198481
because everyone on this board is either mentally ill or a troll taking advantage of this. perpetual hate is the status quo. take no note of what happens on /vt/
you'll find if you never venture outside of this thread and explore greater /vt/, you'll enjoy vtubing a lot more

>> No.32198695

>>32198481
What about HoloID?

>> No.32198748

>>32198695
Who?

>> No.32198752

>>32198695
Risu WILL Daddy Daddy Do your brotuber, and you WILL like it

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>>32198481
It's not just niji, it's pretty much everywhere except holo. I don't particularly think that's a bad thing though, different companies will appeal to different audiences.
I watch everyone, though.

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Since we're on the topic of Hoshikawa, check out this pic of 2 guys putting her on the spit.

>> No.32198907

>>32198877
bruh

>> No.32198911

>>32198877
hot

>> No.32198926

>>32198877
It's gore, don't open unless you're into that.

>> No.32199021

>>32198877
Gore(snuff?) stuff like this always confuses me.

>> No.32199098

>>32199021
i don't get it either
guro in general i just cannot understand
like, in some way i can actually understand stuff like insect sex because it is sex adjacent, but guro it just boggles my mind
someone put a lot of effort into drawing that so they clearly get a kick out of it

>> No.32199240

i hope that one anon is still writing that hoshikawa fic

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>>32198752

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>>32167029
It's smaller than all the others by far. Only 20 pages of mostly dialogue, discovering what male friends can be like, and plot progression. I hope you can enjoy it despite this.

Holofantasy Chapter 7, Pt. 3.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQeCRKPcmq4xS_QWQ59UJUju0ltITKy3W3fli3bXoRlR0lyw6rfs3CUQ3SQFY2IqaH67h2whje8U7ca/pub

I finally got hit by the motivation bat again, and the next part or two will be much larger and actually get into the meat and potatoes of...everything. I was just stuck on the bar stuff for one reason or another. Special thanks to the Anons who generously provided rolls for the story via their perception. Thank you for your patience. I'll try to have the next parts out faster, but as always, no promises.

>> No.32201904

>>32201046
Don't forget to tag it, AA.

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>>32201904
Right, uh...
>>32201046
Coco, Shien, Roberu, Kanata, Polka, Marine, SFW, Comedy, Adventure, Romance.

>> No.32202359

>>32202259
Good lad. This'll help AA archive your work.

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>>32201046
>New Holofantasy
>Stars
LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Incredible writing, as per usual. I have minor gripes with Shien's character as I feel he's a little more goofy/retarded and not as threatening irl but that's the only negative criticism I have. I'm damn excited to see where the story goes from here, it's getting serious. I also hope Shion becomes a character in the story. You are an eternal treasure AA, thank you for this.

>> No.32204552

>>32182074
Koyori was working on a shady drug to get (You) to have an utter magnum of a cock.
Problem is Chloe ruined the experiment. Now you got to deal with Koyori's incredibly embarrassed confession that she's got a rather noticeable Koyote Kum Kannon between her legs and that Chloe is nowhere to be found.
Chloe will not walk straight for days after she is found...

>> No.32204958

>>32201046
A blessing upon my day. Where’s that image of a guy dressing up for new holofantasy chapter but not his grandma’s funeral?

>> No.32205112

>>32204958
Did you check reddit? That's probably where it's from.

Who am I kidding, you've been checking reddit all day.

>> No.32205298

>>32205112
>bringing reddit up out of nowhere
I’m pretty sure we know who thinks about it more.

>> No.32205635

>>32205112
>Having fun!? Reddit!!11!!!1!
Stop trying so hard to fit in.

>> No.32205810

>>32205298
>>32205635
>samefagging over getting called out for being a redditor
Don't you have any shame?

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>>32205810

>> No.32206013

>>32205901
Yes, we all know how to use the inspect tool.

>> No.32206492
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>>32205810
>>32206013
Lmao

>> No.32206737

>>32206492
>called out for using inspect tool
>does it again
You're not very smart, are you?

>> No.32206947

>>32206737
>Inspect tool on a phone
You are the biggest dumbass in this thread.

>> No.32207095

>>32206947
I accept your concession.

>> No.32208208
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That was the most low-effort, most obvious bait I've seen on /wg/ in a long time. How did you niggers fall for that.
>>32201046
You say 'smaller' but it's still borderline autistically long, so I'll have to save reading this for later.

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>> No.32212660

>>32211079
Would you still do Polka forma normal?

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>>32201046
>my illiterate ass still having to finish chapter 6
I'll probably finish reading this series in the geriatric ward

>> No.32218920

>>32194636
Pretty sweet hungover lion. Maybe break up the dialogue with some details about what's going on though. You kind of did it at the start then dropped it but I get why, I've found myself getting into the flow of a conversation and not wanting to break the typing streak

>> No.32219581

>>32198481
That's because Hololive is based on AI-chan, and her idol kayfabe and not just otaku gamer avis.
Something that obviously doesnt carry over to the EN branch because it would make no sense to bring over idol culture to the US.

>> No.32220100

>>32219581
>it would make no sense to bring over idol culture to the US.
Which is a tragedy all on its own. Idol culture isn't without faults but I dream of a day when the bitch princess from hell attitude finds its match.

>> No.32220575

>>32215069
It IS almost a small novel's length

>> No.32221039

>>32220575
How big was chapter 6 in total anyway?

>> No.32221387

>>32220100
Sorry I'm a little slow on the tale this morning, what's the Bitch from Hell attitude is that a thing in the US?

>> No.32222087

>>32185745
You know theres still no such thing as AI generated art, it's still just a machine doing plagiarism with pictures off the internet and it's probably going to end up in a lawsuit if its allowed to be submitted to art shows.

>>32180713
I think I've gotten a fix, did a deep dive on japanese bullies. Apparently mean girls in japan are fucking hardcore.

>> No.32222291

>>32221387
/wg/ isn't the place to spill my spaghetti over that, but let's just say it would be nice for society to have women act more like women and less like men.

>> No.32222902

>>32222087
>AI generated art, it's still just a machine doing plagiarism with pictures off the internet
Anon... Plagiarize a lot of shit enough and it becomes original. Take a look at literature and you'll see ideas get stolen and played with enough that they've effectively become original. If an AI plagiarizes millions of images, is it really plagiarism at that point? Because if it is then there's a chain of plagiarism going throughout history that needs to be settled first.

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>>32167128
awkwardly bumbling your way through your first time with your girlfriend Fubuki

>> No.32223154

>>32221039
241 pages, 110,474 words

>> No.32223295

>>32223154
Truly a man amongst men AA.

>> No.32223386

>>32223154
When's the physical release?

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>>32223154
One-fifth of the way to being as long as Lord of the Rings.

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>>32222902
I got to play with the build of the upcoming Dall-E, and I always like running religious symbolism through an AI generator because theres something bizarrely meta and ironic about an image making an image of an image, and I would run the same sort of lines through it every few rounds.

"LSD, Christ, Glory, Bliss of Heaven"
"Christ, Joyful, Glory, Hallelujah"
Etc. Etc. Etc. And I noticed after a few tries I was actually getting nearly identical runs of a painting of jesus that I actually recognize from real life, and it was the same picture over and over being pasted here and there with some of the blurry details being rearranged.
I did it with other AI generated pieces too, and nothing of note was ever produced regardless of what spiced up prompts I gave it. The only exception is this image, which I call "Hypostatic Union".
But I've said enough to doxx my weird habits and interests.

>> No.32224161

>>32222993
This but in the heat of the moment before (You) have sex with Fubuki, your conscience flares up along with memories of someone else. Causing you to leave Fubuki in the middle of the night, as you resolve to go for (Insert other chuuba here) instead.

>> No.32224428

>>32223154
What a monster.

>> No.32225607

Thanks for reigniting my interest in writing, /wg/

>> No.32226447
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>>32167128
Calliope Mori has to run, hide, and fight for her life as a fugitive from a near-omnipresent mob with the coordination of a hivemind as well as a special clandestine government agency equipped with some of the most advanced weaponry in the world.

This is entirely because she did a cover of a rap album with the n-word in it and didn’t feel like censoring it.

At no point is this treated with any less gravity or dramatic importance than being accused of a war crime, including by Mori who makes the argument that doing so was necessary and/or justified.

For the main plot most of the focus is on the action and intrigue as Mori is hunted across the country, and, provided she survives long enough to escape overseas, the globe.

>> No.32226662

>>32223995
Last time we measured dicks the entire series was almost as big as the Two Towers

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>>32226662
thought that said "the series' was almost as big as the Twin Towers" for a hot second

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>>32227033
Right now the entire series is taller than the Twin Towers.

>> No.32228428

>>32226447
Kant-bot was right. N-word sayers are the most oppressed minority.

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>>32224096
Dude. That's literally how we work too. We learn from what we've seen (ex: an image of Jesus) and then we can draw Jesus in a pose we've seen (ex: slamming a basketball). It's incredibly naive to think that the AI acts any different. The AI can draw things you know in different art styles too. Do you even realize what means? It's never been done before. We humans, our special touch in art, is our art style. The AI can make never before seen or created images if you tell it to.

What people fail to realize is that AI is an emerging form of consciousness. People don't want to accept that at some point, some program in a metal box will be as conscious as we are. I don't know if it makes you insecure or what, that you want to hold yourself as special. That's because we ourselves hold consciousness with too high of a standard. At some point we will have to draw a line. At some point we will create life, and we will coexist with it. I honestly am quite excited to see the AI right movements that the future will hold because not to put too much of a target on you, but people like you undervalue the worth of AI.

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>>32229229
On a related note, I wish I could write a story about helping a Robco to becoming more sentient and protecting her from the people who hate AI, but honestly I'm too much of a pro-robot to even manage to think why someone would ever believe AI won't be able to be alive like we are. It would require me to get outside opinion and that's just too much of a colossal effort.

>> No.32229776

>>32229229
Sorry Musk but AI will never gain true sapience. Nobody even knows how consciousness works let alone know how to program one.

>> No.32230183

>>32201046
This was really sweet, Thank the fucking dice for not cucking coco out of her romance rolls. I'm pretty sure if those had failed the skeins of fate would have conspired to make it so that she would have failed all of her future rolls. Thankfully the pattern has now broken.
It's nice to see that this fic has finally returned.

>> No.32230343

>>32229776
Consciousness programs itself.

>> No.32230360

Just read that Brown, Black and Blue thing from the archive link, and it feels like I've done something wrong.
Why did I read that?

>> No.32230494

>>32229229
Makes me scared. I don't think we're ready.

>>32229642
Didn't Koyori claim to have created Roboco? You could have her try and bring her rogue weapon back to HoloX against her will.

Now that I think about it, it'd basically be the Zeta Project with chuubas.

>>32229776
Ever hear of neural nets? They're AI's that program themselves, so no one knows how they work.

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>>32230343

>> No.32231074

>>32223995
>A story from (here) almost/100% outwrites the entirety of the lord of the rings
Based

>> No.32231131

>>32167128
bestiality fic where fubuki doesn't just fuck the horse, she marries it.

>> No.32231186

>>32230360
Because you thought it would be the sexy kind of ryona, and by the time you realize it wouldn't be you were already in too deep.

>> No.32231395

>>32231074
And that's just chapter 6. By the time HF is done, it'll probably be longer than J.R.R. Tolkien's entire collective works.

>> No.32231784

>>32231131
This but it's also an NTR fic where she gets stolen by the horse on your wedding day.

>> No.32232093

>>32231395
But will it be better? I feel like that's what you should be asking.

>> No.32232104

>>32229229
I dont think you understand what I'm saying or you're being overly pessimistic about what artists do.

Theres a piece of art from spain that's really controversial, I forget the name but it's an artists self portrait and a portrait of the kings daughter being dressed by her handmaidens. The controversy is who is actually the subject of the painting: was the painting made as a portrait of the king from the perspective of his inner self? Or was it a political egalitarian message, here, this is what the king saw on this day. Look upon my painting and you are a king peasant for a moment peasant. Is it a mirror, if it is a mirror then why, why are the servants at the center of the painting etc. etc. etc.

Im not of the opinion that painting has to be full of meaning, after all it's just painting, but if you look into the metaphysical aspects of what Odd Nerdrum is doing or even just the normal painting controversies like "Are the peasants praying in the field in the Matins portraying piety? The hardship of pastoral life? Or is it a funeral for their dead son like Dali suggested?" You'll see that the process is completely different for AI. AI takes those works and produces a soulless pastiche of images, and sometimes they can be beautiful for a second, but they never have an inner realm you can explore. I'm not saying art is some unkillable magical human thing that will be eternal, corruption, money laundering, nepotism, postmodernism, Pollack, and photography killed painting years ago. Painting was dead before WW1 started. Picasso and Frieda were only celebrities in their time because they were political activists, Dali is more memorable for his savant garden films than he is paintings.

As for consciousness: we can't define consciousness. There are arguments over whether every atom in the universe is conscious on a level from 1 to 100 and there are elimination materialists who believe we are not conscious. According to Marcus Aurelius's definition of consciousness computers have been conscious since maybe 2003.

When GI is finally created it will not be like us at all, comparing our processes of cognition would be like expecting the biology of a creature that evolved to breathe the liquid methane under the ice of Titan to be similar to the human genome. So whether or not AI will ever be conscious or not is not something I'm interested in discussing because theres no definable goal post outside of asking if it is conscious. People like Yuval Harari and Elon Musk and even Jeff Bezos overstep their bounds when they talk about this shit but I really don't care, my original point is that in certain contexts AIs use thousands of copyrighted images to generate a picture, and because of the machine process being effectively the same as copy and pasting a picture this is going to be a legal issue at some point.

>> No.32232177

>>32232104
Mucho texto tldr
>I was just trying to say machines can be sued

>> No.32232357
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>>32232104
I'm curious about the painting you mentioned. Do you know it's name? Pic unrelated.

>> No.32232417

>>32232177
If machines can be sued for taking inspiration from literally thousands of sources and ideas then the entire fucking creative industry is built on copyright infringement since humans only steal from dozen sources to make their shit.

>> No.32232471

>>32231784
kek!

>> No.32232544

>>32185745
POV: you are cyng about AI art calling it crappy then crying how you lost to this "crappy art". Sounds like a skill issue desu

>> No.32232679

>>32167128
government enforced loli scissoring

>> No.32232782
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>>32232357
After a quick google I found it, Las Meninas by Diego Velasquez

>> No.32232876

>>32232679
this, but with real scissors.

>> No.32232908

>>32232104
The thing is, AI isn't conscious yet, and you're arguing as if it is. It can't express it's feelings YET, and that's the main point of it. There's no clear line between conscious and non-conscious, one day, as you said, we will realize that we have created life.

That being said, if you could give a long description of what you are feeling exactly like whoever did that painting was thinking, why do you think it's any different? Because the AI didn't come with the words itself? It will, eventually. That's what AI is. For now, they rely on us giving input for it to produce anything meaningful, but that's because we designed it that way. The true self serving AI isn't the ones you see creative art for the public. They are being developed in labs and progress is being shared from time to time. AI is an umbrella term for a lot of things. AI can already describe jokes for example, or do incredibly specific things it wasn't taught such as "This cartoon reminds me of something from a certain museum, who do you think it is?" and it replies with Leonardo from Teenage mutant ninja turtles. If for any reason we employed an AI that we use to create art with the capability to develop prompts itself, then yes, we would get art with meaning.

>>32232544
See world's best tournament chess player vs. Machine

>> No.32232963

>>32232679
a bit sus innnit

>> No.32233041

>>32232908
> If for any reason we employed an AI that we use to create art with the capability to develop prompts itself, then yes, we would get art with meaning.
This fell flat, I was meaning to type something else. The problem is that we don't have conscious AI yet, so no, slapping any sum of its parts can create art with meaning just yet.

>> No.32233070

>>32233041
> can
Can't.

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>>32232679
But with which lolis...

>> No.32233261

>>32233088
all of them and then some. there will be cunnies on a scale you didn't realize was possible.

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>>32232782
Thanks, I've seen this painting before but forgot the name.
>>32232908
Sorry to burst you're bubble but AI gaining consciousness isn't physically possible. It would be cool as hell but it just isn't possible.

>> No.32233307

>>32232417
Right, ok you're not understanding then.
If I look at a copyrighted nintendo image for Pokemon and then draw my own nearly identical pokemon it's not copyright infringement.

If I use a machine to take that picture, and then photoshop it into another context where I am fucking a copyrighted Bulbasaur in the ass while charmander is rimming me, that is copyright infringement. AIs do not actually take inspiration from things they literally copy and paste them all together, the machine process itself is basically just using— I can't believe I'm explaining this.

There is no AI artist who's feelings I'm hurting by saying hes not a real artist, a script programmer at a desk created a desktop tool that could steal thousands of images off the web and photoshop them together for him with a Dream filter, stop thinking of the process as if theres an actual robot imagining something on it's own after taking inspiration from a picture that isnt what's happening.

That said Copyright is bullshit and japan needs to adopt fair use anyway.

>> No.32233411

>>32233307
You drawing them is also copyright infringement

>> No.32233517

>>32233411
nta but i'm pretty sure this general is copyright infringement.

>> No.32233623

>>32233307
> can't hurt feelings of an AI
There are already chat bots who remember everything you typed to them. It's very rudimentary but yes you could offend an AI. You don't see it as offensive because you don't see them as alive, and fair enough, they aren't quite there yet. But even if AI was only as conscious as an ant, you could still technically offend them. Just because they aren't a person doesn't mean you can't offend them.

>>32233285
Enough 1s and 0s and you get yourself a brain. You're in for a rude awakening buddy.

>> No.32233735

>>32232679
>yuri
>in /wg/

>> No.32233747

>>32233623
Are you a fan of Elon Musk?

>> No.32233765
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>>32201046
>>32204958

>> No.32233782

>>32233747
He's done good, he's done bad. I don't follow celebrities.

>> No.32233827

>>32233765
what kind of psychopath wears a hood over a hat. pick one lunatic.

>> No.32233864

>>32233827
You've never done that?

>> No.32233921

>>32233285
Glad I'm not the only artfag here. One of the reasons I like running religious symbolism through AI is it's probably the best metric I know of for meaning and it immediately gives me a reference for how good the ai is at emulating that.

We've been playing around with microprocessors more than a lot of people realize, weve already found the bare minimum number of atoms that can be used to store information. We could be running into an actual hard limit on physical machines in a few centuries.

That said I'm a religious guy, I believe in providence, wherever AI goes and whether good or bad will depend largely on us. Sin can make a blessing into a curse, and I can only imagine how much destruction AI assisted warfare can do in a few decades.

>> No.32233974

>>32233827
Is hood culture n shiet

>> No.32234093

>>32233864
no, i've never killed anyone.

>> No.32234103

>>32233921
> in a few decades
How about one or two decades ago? How about now? The javelin Ukraine is using against Russian tanks is entirely AI. You click the button and it does all the targeting by itself

>> No.32234226

>>32234103
I'm thinking more along the lines of AI fighting 2 billion simulated battles in a few minutes shot by shot in real time during a battle assuring maximum casualties in a land invasion of Taiwan

>> No.32234375
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>>32233921
Art is pretty cool. I know a lot of people jerk off quantum computers because of the microprocessor issue or something like that. Who knows if they'll be better.

>> No.32234446

>>32234226
We don't want that though, so it will never happen. Humanity wants the least amount of casualties, that will be the status quo moving forward. What you will probably have is wars fought entirely with unmaned machines like drones and such, but that kind of already happens too

>>32234375
Quantum computer is about to get a massive MASSIVE upgrade in like 2 years with a new model.

>> No.32234699

>>32167128
Did... did this get updated? (The image ) the prompts feel different

>> No.32234744

>>32234446
>We don't want that though
>we

Anon, I hope china never has a soviet union break up because their leaders are so psychotic I genuinely believe they would prefer to nuke the entire planet to save face rather than admit they fucked up.

>> No.32234889

>>32234744
Why would you even consider for a second the world enemy, the country of 1.5 billion subhumans, to count as WE

>> No.32234927

>>32234699
I just realized it had drawings. Did I slip into a different timeline?

>> No.32234975

>>32234699
>>32234927
based blindanons

>> No.32235343

>>32167128
a combination of >>32231131 and >>32232679. fubuki (as a loli) is forced by her parents to marry a mare and to rub her pussy all over the horse's pussy.

>> No.32235437

You people are disgusting then you wonder why we dont visit this place

>> No.32235587

Petition to have another Anya thread

>> No.32235632

>>32235343
this, but this anon >>32235437 is the horse.

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Reply to this comment with your most fucked up bullying scenarios.

>Suisei and Matsuri training Luna to not cover her face while they slap her repeatedly

>chuubas cutting up the new girls clothes

>forced alcohol consumption and physically abusive rape and blackmail

>> No.32235778

>>32235437
It's not like anyone here writes.

>> No.32235807

>>32235763
What the fuck is wrong with you? Seek actual mental help, you sick freak.

>> No.32235928

>>32235763
are these supposed to be sexy or sad? i genuinely can't tell anymore.

>> No.32235951

>>32235807
"Hey doc."

"Evening anon, why are you here?"

"A guy on the internet said I needed mental help."

"..."

"He said it isnt right to get aroused by chicks being violent to eachother."

"And you came to me about this?"

"Yes."

"Jeez, you do need help."

>> No.32235999

>>32235928
Little column A little column B.

>> No.32236024

>>32235763
Ayame tears off Ina's fingernails one by one then has her boyfriend fuck Ina in the ass until her asshole prolapses which she forces Sana, who she has also captured, to lick the cum off of it.

>> No.32236099

>>32235999
So which is it? sexy or sad?

>> No.32236259

>>32235999
i see... that's kind of weird anon.

>> No.32236294

>>32235763
You writing a fic with these?

>> No.32236389

>>32233261
I was hoping for some names so I don't have to decide on my own.

>> No.32236805

>>32236099
Did you not understand what I said?

>>32236294
If they're realistic I can tweak them a bit. I'm the Suispit anon, I'm basically writing an office setting themed Nagatoro chan plot, I'm 2500 words in and I've never been bullied so I dont really have a lot of personal experience to draw from with people being shitty to me outside that summer I worked at a dollar general.

Or weirdly here, when I ask for bullying scenarios and people try to bully me for it. I'm not into Erotic Roleplay dudes.

>> No.32236914

>>32167029
Troubled Fox
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSwwi7NAude_OpdRMlZdJuNrqRFddBTuU8jc4D79yC1KsR2d_dyXjaiXRAtmIepfOh3MtTfQdK5q6-q/pub

Tags: Fubuki, SFW, Mystery, Thriller

First ever fanfic and I'm not 100% happy with it. Feels more like an original fic with Fubuki's name dropped onto the protag. But practice makes perfect, I guess.

>> No.32237286

>>32236914
Still reading, but I had no idea Fukuki was 18. I thought she was over 100 years old and some kind of Showa era kitsune.

>> No.32237444

>>32237286
It's been 18 years since she was released from the seal stone of Fushikawa-hôn but she is 1100 years old

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>>32236914
It's a cute little fic, there's nothing wrong with it on a technical level but I do get your concern over Fubuki being kind of plain.

>> No.32237570

It’s interesting to think about, isn’t it? The notion that one day AI could subsume the practice of writing as a whole. As others pointed out, what humans create is ultimately a function of the millions of experiences they’ve had over their lifetime, which could easily be broken down into audio/visual information and fed into a machine. With enough exposure, a machine could have “lived a life” and create something original from those components.

Yet I think there is something missing from that formula to create art: preference. When you write, you’re choosing what to focus on in terms of theme, subject, and style in a broad sense, but more importantly, you’re choosing to highlight facets of life you're personally interested in. You could spend paragraphs detailing the weight and feel of a handgun, you could go on and on about the beauty of the human foot, you could fill pages with nothing but your adoration of summer weather. Within your story, the stuff you’re passionate about will bleed through and mark your work as your own. And I don’t know how a machine will ever have a “preference” or “affinity” for anything unless it’s fed that information with an explicit “Yes/No” flag attached to each item. (Which of course would have to be curated by, you guessed it, a human.)

What I’m saying is that AI couldn’t take over any creative process because fetishes are indelibly human.

>> No.32237629

>>32237488
Not retarded enough to be Fubuki. Needs more crying

>> No.32237646

>>32237286
She was 17 when she debuted which is 108 in fox years.

>> No.32237674

>>32236805
I can think of isolation, name-calling, shake-downs and manipulation. If you're looking for a bit more extreme, you could always look towards those revenge porn/power fantasy anime and manga. They usually start out with egregious bullying.

>> No.32237724

>>32237570
Anon you're replying to a robocuck who fetishize being replaced by Data from Start trek weve explored this topic enough

>> No.32237957

>>32235763
the bullies find out that the girl they're bullying got raped and start bullying her about it. saying things like "you're used goods" and "now no man will ever love you".

>> No.32238076

>>32237724
Robotics is the next step of human evolution. We already do it through glasses and phones, prosthetic limbs, implants, so on so forth. We won't be replaced, rather, we will evolve.

>> No.32238187

Anyone have any weird writing rituals to produce their smut?

I load up on fish oil, vitamin B, lecithin to lubes up my brain

>> No.32238248

>>32238076
Oh boy, can't wait to be called fleshcuck by synthcels here a hundred years from now because I'm suspicious of transferring my conciousness to some Boston Dynamics Robo-dog

>> No.32238345

>>32238248
I trust transfer of consciousness as much as I trust teleportation. It's literal death of being. I'd do everything in my power to preserve myself in my own brain, and you should too. Enhance the fuck out of your brain, but don't transfer for Christ's sake

>> No.32238576

>>32238187
>Anyone have any weird writing rituals to produce their smut?
Yeah, I write.

>> No.32238799

>>32238187
I dance naked under the stars to infuse my smut with lunar energy

>> No.32238816

>>32238187
Manatee sperm pills

>> No.32238902

>>32236914
I liked it and it kept me interested. The one gripes I have with the fic is the overuse of the word "lover" when "boyfriend" would be a better choice and the sentence "The liquid of a heart" sounds awkward. Other than that it was a good start to your career in fanfiction.

>> No.32238951

>>32238902
> liquid of a heart
I'm assuming he is incorrectly referring to blood? The heart doesn't produce blood, so it isn't the liquid of the heart

>> No.32239108

>>32238187
I smoke crack while listening to Exmilitary.

>> No.32239271

>>32236914
The writing is fairly decent, though you should experiment a bit more with your sentence structure. It's quite monotone, not really conveying the tension of a mystery / thriller setting.
For example: Instead of...
>It must have taken multiple minutes for Fubuki to reach the end of the staircase. Her whole body was shivering. She could barely stand still, her phone almost slipping out of her hand.
Maybe try something like...
>It must have taken multiple minutes for Fubuki to reach the end of the staircase, her whole body trembling so hard that her phone almost slipped from her hands on multiple occasions.
The plot is a bit wonky and cheap (like the basement Fubuki conveniently NEVER enters, the red heart... also, what woman would be okay with not picking her own wedding dress?) but that might have been necessary to keep the mystery aspect alive. Your concern with Fubuki being replaceable is valid, but that's often the case - especially for shorter pieces. You could try to work her mannerisms into the fic, but even that's difficult when there's hardly any dialogue.
All in all, good work. Keep it up!

>> No.32239536

>>32237286
>>32237444
>>32237646
Is Fubuki being over 100 years old an actual canon thing?

>> No.32239539

>>32238951
>>32238951
Everyone knows blood is produced in the balls. That's why girls dont have periods until after they lose their virginity.

>> No.32239695

>>32235763
I hope you don't mind, but I might just tweek a few of those ideas for Brown Black and Blue and (possibly) Lazy Oni. Absolutely devlish ideas, especially the first one. I love training by abuse.

>> No.32239954

>>32239536
No, I lied

>> No.32240020

>>32239695
I dont mind in my story Suisei did this to a girl in high school who stole her crushes attention and has some sort of nostalgic feeling when she gets in a similar situation with the protagonist. Matsuri I can see as involved purely because Matsiri and Suisei are obviously the mean girls of Holo

>> No.32240101

>>32240020
I'll be sure not to plagiaris that. Just put my own spin on it.

>> No.32240131

>>32239536
Only in fox years.

>> No.32240277

>>32240101
Well it's not really plagiarism since it's based on something that actually happened. The whole scenario was a viral webm involving 4 girls where they just recorded their leader slapping the shit out of a very submissive girl who just kind of stares at her shoes.

>> No.32240912

>>32240277
So you plagiarized a real scenario

>> No.32241013

>>32236914
Cute little fic you got there anon. Nice job.

>> No.32241040

>>32240912
To some teenage girl in japan that video was the most horrific, humiliating, demeaning moment of her life.
To me it was not my proudest fap.

>> No.32241144

>>32240131
Ah.

>> No.32241249

>>32240912
That's not what plagiarism is.

>> No.32241458

>>32241249
> I went to Japan and told this joke
> Suisei went to Japan and told this joke
Just because you're basing it off something that happened doesn't mean it's not plagiarism or completely unoriginal/uncreative.

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>>32241458

>> No.32241783

>>32241458
Tfw the diary of anne frank is plagiarism And also fake as fuck

>> No.32241879

>>32241783
It's an auto biography. That anon is basically taking Anne frank's real life stories and then putting Suisei through them. That's not creative or original, it's plagiarism and you'd get sued for it. He's being dense on purpose

>> No.32241988

>>32241783
Go back to /pol/

>> No.32242047

>>32241879
Never knew Suisei was a fan of the Confederacy.

>> No.32242448
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How many artists are here on /wg/?

>> No.32242805

>>32242448
Regulars that have posted art? At least three. Pekofag said he used to draw as well, so I'd make that four confirmed.

Unless he's the one who drew the Pekora tentacles pic last thread.

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>>32242805
Yeah it was me. I made an updated version today cause I didn't want to start a new drawing. The Sana artist isn't here anymore, so I feel like it's just 2

>> No.32243537

>>32241988
“Laziness is seductive, but work produces satisfaction." "I can shake off everything as I write; my sorrows disappear, my courage is reborn.” “I've found that there is always some beauty left -- in nature, sunshine, freedom, in yourself; these can all help you.” “No one has ever become poor by giving.” “I don't think of all the misery, but of the beauty that still remains.” "How wonderful it is that nobody need wait a single moment before starting to improve the world!" No one has ever become poor by giving" "In the long run, the sharpest weapon of all is a kind and gentle spirit." "Human greatness does not lie in wealth or power, but in character and goodness." "As long as this exists, this sunshine and this cloudless sky, and as long as I can enjoy it, how can I be sad?" "There’s only one rule you need to remember: laugh at everything and forget everybody else! It sound egotistical, but it’s actually the only cure for those suffering from self-pity." "The good news is that you don’t know how great you can be! How much you canlove! What you can accomplish! And what your potential is!" "Dead people receive more flowers than the living ones because regret is stronger than gratitude." "Sympathy, love, fortune… We all have these qualities but still tend to not use them!" "Parents can only give good advice and counsel but in the final analysis the development of ones character is in their own hands."

What have the 12 year old girls in your life done with their lives anon? Have they casually cranked out a masterpiece of literature with penetrating, vivid insights into the human condition that rival the transcendentalists? Have they submitted a work for publication in a single draft that never needed to be edited, revised or had instances of plagiarized quotes or anything in them? If they haven't why not that's a perfectly normal and believable thing for a fucking 13 year old to do while hiding under the floorboards. Anne frank may have went into a real oven but this shit is unbelievable. The only believable entries in the diary are her obsession with the development of her and her friends breasts, her letters to her imaginary american friend kitty, and that rant she gave about how shes not like other girls. Those are things 13 year olds talk about.


>>32242047
What

>>32241879
Writers take inspiration from real events all the time

>> No.32243831

>>32243082
Nah it's definitely three (if it were just two, it would be only you and I, and there's definitely someone else).

>> No.32244286

>>32243831
You the one who did FoS fanart or you never participated?

>> No.32244429

>>32244286
think he is also referring to the shitty botan drawing

>> No.32244897

>>32244429
That drawing has inspired me to make an attempt at drawing things again.

>> No.32244922

>>32243537
I remember reading somewhere that her father dramatized the actual contents of the diary

>> No.32245182

>>32244897
your pekora drawing is only a little bit better, her face is fucking hideously disproportioned

>> No.32245303

>>32245182
Haven't posted anything yet.

>> No.32245427

>>32245303
probaly better you don't

>> No.32245557

>>32245427
Nice typo, indog. Probably better you don't speak English.

>> No.32245591

>>32244897
Same. I drew something in hopes of inspiring someone better than me to draw too

>> No.32247043

>>32242448
I'm technically learning to draw but I suck and i have no idea how to transfer a notebook drawing to digital except by taking a picture of it. Never fucked around with tablets. I dont even draw in an anime style, I try to emulate Milo Manara.

>>32244922
If that actually was the story, and it's what I believe, i wouldnt call the diary fake, but the official story is that the diary was submitted completely as is with an introduction added by the father.

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32247793

I think I'm gonna take a break from writing LWALIEYK? to start other projects. Lately I've been feeling like I'm writing for obligation and not because I want to, and that is making the fics worse so I'll just stop untill I get more inspiration

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>>32247793
What are your other projects?

I've got Don't bully me with your kisses Suisei (possibly a series)

A Subaru pure love tomboy sex story. (One off short)

A man discovers Moriko Kyoho living in his basement (originally planned to be a series now paired down)

Phase Connect Generation 1 robs a liquor store (one off)

And the vague idea that I want to do something with marine at some point.

>> No.32249074

>>32247793
>writing for obligation
Worst possible feeling and absolutely a sign you should consider otherwise, but for what its worth, series writing always has moments like this

>> No.32249170

>>32248216
What's the deal with Moriko? What's she like, is she cool?

>> No.32249460

>>32249170
Terminally online albanian girl. Nice soothing radio voice, somewhat sexy accent. Very much into 4chan humor. Hates reddit. Actually autistic and obsessed with tanks. Has a crush on the dude from xenoblade. Every 3rd sentence is a reference to a meme. LARPs as an Americaboo, yells fuck off EU if a european comes into chat. Probably racist.

>> No.32249588

>>32249460
She handles her humor better than Pippa pipkin, she isnt just a manic turbogoblin. Very mean sometimes, an actual irl tsundere, which makes her random moments of gap moe even cuter.

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>> No.32250803

>>32225607
Give it your all.

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>>32248216
A tale about a romance (probably with ayame) in the middle of a middle age battlefield. I stole this one from a thread a whike ago and I think the idea is interesting to say the least.
I'm also considering writing some NSFW fics but that'll take me ages cause I don't feel as near as comfortable writing.
And maybe I write another vanilla romace a bit shorter with Okayu or Iroha, who knows

>> No.32251315

>>32234744
I don’t want the world to get nuked before we’ve managed to create animal girls.

>> No.32251374

>>32235437
>Over 100,000 archive views
>we dont visit this place
lol

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> your oshi
> scenario you'd want to be trapped in with her
> her reaction

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>>32251315
THIS. I don't give TWO SHITS about faster-than-light travel or interstellar colonization, the cure for cancer or a better movie than Serenity

ALL I CARE ABOUT IS SEX WITH THE WHITE FOX

>> No.32251538

>>32251498
I will die on Mars watching VR porn of my oshi fuck you

>> No.32252750

>>32191358
That's a long refactor period, her last asmr was a week ago.

>> No.32252913

>>32252750
Unarchived membership ASMR

>> No.32252951

>>32252913
Do not fuck with me on such matters anon I'm a 2 year member and she spent all night playing Fire Emblem and lusting over anime shotas

>> No.32253466

>>32252951
Hiss

>> No.32253798

>>32251493
>[your oshi]
>[degrading sexual position]
>[pure ecstasy/abject guilt]

>> No.32253826

>>32251493
Does it have to be a lewd scenario?

>> No.32254163

>>32252951
Not to be a Debby downer or anything, but why are you here? No one watches streams in /wg/.

>> No.32254275

>>32254163
Oh, thread's almost at bump limit and it's early morning in Indogland. Right on schedule.

>> No.32254361

>>32254275
I mean, calling me the earlyfag is a good way to sidestep the issue, but doesn't answer my question.

>> No.32254467

>>32253826
>Does it have to be a lewd scenario?
Anon, did you forget where you are?

>> No.32254681

>>32254163
>No one watches streams in /wg/.
A few do watch streams, most don't, I supposed they watch clips that are translated, but I doubt that.

>> No.32254847

>>32254681
>I supposed they watch clips that are translated
I watch clips, but only because I really can't watch streams due to my scheduling. If I had free time, I would watch them, but sadly I don't. It's not as black and white as you make it out to be.

>> No.32255147

>>32252951
Are memberships even worth it? Wouldn't it be better to just torrent it for free? Or is this some loyalty thing I don't know?

>> No.32255516

>>32255147
>Are cars even worth it? Wouldn't it be better to just steal a bike?

>> No.32255545

>>32255147
Live content is generally better when it's live anon.

>> No.32255630

>>32255545
That's true.

>> No.32256669

>>32254681
>>32254163
Other than asmr, why would someone who doesnt speak Japanese watch Japanese streams? I'm a dumb motherfucker but I've never been so dumb I sat like a retard through 3 hours of content I don't understand.

>> No.32256732

>>32254681
I watch my oshi's streams, but for everyone else I watch clips or read translations of their zatsus. There aren't enough hours a day to do a deep-dive of every chuuba there is so they can be characterized absolutely perfectly, so usually I try to aim for "close enough"

>> No.32256999

>>32256669
Pretty much this. I have no problem watching people like Xqc and Forsen's 6 hour streams full, but since I don't speak Japanese when it comes to watching chuubas I can't do streams

>> No.32257100

This was a weird thread. AI, Nuclear war, art posting, art history, Anne Frank redpills, copyright law, and fact drop about the number 69

>> No.32257194

>>32255147
>Are memberships even worth it? Wouldn't it be better to just torrent it for free?
Not him, but where do you torrent them? I know /t/ has roommate shit, but I'm not interested in that.

>> No.32257216

>>32254467
I don't think so, I'm in the place that has more SFW stories than NSFW stories.

>> No.32257218

>>32257194
nyaa.si

>> No.32257299

>>32257194
/t/ still, there's a thread for it.

>> No.32257314

>>32257100
That's why we need another Anya thread

>> No.32257371

>>32257314
Who's Anya I never pay attention to the thread "edition"

>> No.32257404

>>32256669
That's never stopped me. My Japanese is limited but I can pick up the general topic/direction of a conversation and it's enough to enjoy a stream of a chuuba who speaks slow, easy Japanese.

>> No.32257502

>>32257371
Anya pays attention to you, dear friend

>> No.32257515

>>32254361
NTA but your question has been answered multiple times in the past.

>> No.32257627

I should make a Anya story to commemorate the success of this thread

>> No.32257687

New thread
>>32257255

>> No.32257763 [DELETED] 

>>32256669
You put it on in the background? You don't have to actively watch it. I usually listen to Fubuki's streams like a podcast whilst playing games, alt-tabbing when she gets excited to see what's going on.
She's cute and it's relaxing.

>> No.32257909

>>32257763
What's with the name? Some drama I don't know about?

>> No.32257938

>>32257763
I prefer watching English Vtubers live and watch jp clips. Put of principle I usually click the link for the Stream source to give them my view, even though it probably fucks with their average viewer uhh... fuck I'm blanking on the word that means "how long I let the video play for" in the youtube analytics.

>> No.32257974

>>32257909
Oh, I accidentally put the name on.

>> No.32258010 [DELETED] 

>>32257763
Lol, the janny who camps in these fucking threads is such a goddamn tightness you couldnt pull a needle out of his anus with a tractor.

>> No.32258070

>>32256669
You put it on in the background? You don't have to actively watch it. I usually listen to Fubuki's streams like a podcast whilst playing games, alt-tabbing when she gets excited to see what's going on.
She's cute and it's relaxing.

>>32257938
Viewer retention. I used to do that too, but eventually it became really annoying and I just bought a membership.

>> No.32258071

>>32257974
Ah I thought you got canned for that

>> No.32258144

>>32257909
I mean I half remember some anon really fucking hating that fic for some reason. I think it was due to the protagonist?

>> No.32258164 [SPOILER] 

>>32258071
For calling someone a schizo? Shit, that'd be the day, wouldn't it?

>> No.32258231

>>32258164
Schizo and meds get thrown around so much the word should be filtered just so /wg/ can work to rebuild its vocabulary

>> No.32258242

>>32258144
Protagonist is cringe, yeah. A total Mary Sue.

>> No.32258281

>>32258144
Make that two

>> No.32258352

>>32258231
Some other pair of buzzwords would just become /vt/'s go-to vernacular. I imagine "Seek help" or "Touch grass"

>> No.32259876

Early threads don't matter because no discussion happens on a bump limit thread

>> No.32259977

Luna rape

>> No.32259991

>>32244286
That and the Miyuki one from a few weeks back yeah.

>>32251498
Based. Same, anon, same...

>> No.32260014

And futa too

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