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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>31892402

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.31970006

>>31969810
Who's the one next to Gura?

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

Dungeon Crawling - pt. 2: Shoto sex. Gay, Monsters.:>>31900802

Brown, Black and Blue, Because I Love You: Chapter Six: tags: Noel, Flare, Lamy, abuse, racial abuse:>>31938152

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) absolutely destroying Miko's ass with a variety of toys:>>31908671

Seven minutes in heaven with Kanata.:>>31930280

I'd really like to see a story about getting back together with a chuuba after a horrible breakup, or something about rekindling a loveless marriage. That idea about Aqua helping you and Suisei love each other again that was being bounced around a while ago would be nice, for example.:>>31936335

>> No.31970104

>Ame & Ina
>uoh
you havin a giggle?

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>> No.31971599

>>31970101
This rabbit isn't wearing her panties properly

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>>31969205
Polka goes hard, damn. Even threw in the fake shame at the end

>>31970947
This fucking brat needs to pay for her crimes already. In fact >>31969881

I'm officially requesting Miku mindbreak. Pekora finally gets sick of Miku's Homolive shit and traps her in a room with sex starved Nousagis for a free conversion therapy session. Pekora watches, teases, mocks and finally masturbates from behind bulletproof glass in front of miku while she gets turned out in every hole as penance for 2 years of brrat shit. Bonus points for Casca-ization

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>>31971814
What?

>> No.31972085

>>31971872
Miko not miku. I'm sleep deprived anon

>> No.31972230

>>31971872
Who would win in a fight between Miku and Miko?

>> No.31972368

>>31972085
I know, just ribbing

>>31972230
Miko. Miku's weakness are her extremely long twintails, if you grab one it's basically over.

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>>31972230
Miku, because Miko weighs like 70 lbs wet.

The return of Miku through Jashi-chan has reminded me of an old debate over whether Miku's curtains matched her blue drapes

>> No.31973905

>>31972891
Idols shave because it's the right thing to do.

>> No.31973994

>>31973905
Mio....

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>>31969881
I'm not the anon who originally requested this but I thought it was a fun idea so here's my best recollection of the prompt which I cant find in the archive now:

Suisei asks you to explain what kissing is and demands you teach her about kissing first hand. Suisei hates you, but she slowly becomes addicted to kissing you and develops a fetish for mouth bacteria exchange after doing research to understand it better.

Has a reverse Girlfriend X vibe to it. If someone can point me to the original prompt I'll forward it to the prompt archive.

>> No.31974585

>>31974384
What the fuck is this!

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>>31969881
Nobunaga is forced to do a JAV stream despite hating the idea. The stream pulls in more numbers than ever before, so the company forces her to do it again and again. Eventually she becomes void of emotion due to it and the JAV isn't as fun so she is graduated. Hololive offers a helping hand and she thinks it's a ray of light in her life but now all she does is have sex with circus animals

>> No.31975359

>>31974585
I dont understand the motivation for your question. It's just a prompt I saw awhile ago that made my dick move.

If you mean why suisei and kissing, suisei outted herself as neurotypical awhile ago and revealed that she doesnt understand kissing is.

>> No.31975522

>>31975359
...Wouldn't that be neurodivergent?

>> No.31975630

>>31975522
Anon only weirdos know why humans kiss.

>> No.31975878

>>31975630
I mean people kiss because they love each other romantically right? That's all there is to it.

>> No.31975995

>>31975878
> love
Not really.

>> No.31976070

>>31975878
Watch Excalibur.

>> No.31976085

>>31975995
Well when you elimnate that factor, I don't know why either.

>> No.31976183

>>31976085
Do you jerk off because you love yourself? Do you eat one too many cups of dessert because you love yourself? No, you do it because it feels good.

>> No.31976209

>>31976085
Also you're autistic

>> No.31976435

>>31975878
I'll land spoon in mouth
Suisei believes its about cell exchange to immunize eachother against diseases and strengthen immune systems. Chat then tells her she will never get kissed with that attitude
https://youtu.be/nqG6LsZ6CLU

>> No.31976450

>>31976085
Cuz they're horny.

>> No.31976596

>>31976435
Wow, she sounds like a redditor.

>> No.31976670

>>31976435
That theory does kind of make sense in a way, at least from a very surface level understanding of disease and immunization...but isn't it ineffective due to shit about viral load?

>> No.31976844

>>31976596
> being smart/logical is reddit
Explains why you're here

>> No.31977002

>>31976844
Thanks?

>> No.31977090

>>31976844
>>31976670
>>31976596
>>31976450
>>31976183
>>31975995
>>31975878
>>31975630
I just want graphic, vulgar descriptions of Suisei forcing a guy to have face sex with her, bullying him to not talk about it, becoming obsessive that he might be kissing other people and exposing her to germs, mentally focussing on the process of swapping spit too much and being generally unreadable by the protagonist who thinks shes losing her grip on reality.

>> No.31977231

>>31977090
See, that's a better prompt than "Suisei don't know how kissy work", but you're still gonna have to write it yourself buddy

>> No.31977435

>>31974384
>>31977231

You're probably right, but I really think I laid it out pretty clear with the GFX reference. It's not my idea though I was hoping someone knew who posted it.

>> No.31977601

>>31977090
Now that's pretty god damn hot. I'm gonna add it to a list of WiPs I've never finish.

>> No.31977644

>>31977601
*I'll
Fuck, my brain isn't working.

>> No.31977650

>>31977090
>>31977601
Race you

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>>31969881
>In a Japanese mountain resort
>The biggest party room is booked by Cover
>Their guests are whales who paid massive amount of money for the girls
>Today's the turn of petite girls
>Zion, Rushia Laplus and Gura show up, ready to serve their big fat VIPs
>A-chan is the MC of this event, her introduction interrupted by a fat VIP making out with her on stage
>The men cheer him on, and the orgy start
>The VIPs quickly surround the girls, they split into groups with one girl each
>A group pound Rushia on a big bed
>A group bring Laplus into BDSM chamber
>A group drag Gura into the hotspring
>A group force Zion to eat A-chan pussy on stage
...

>> No.31978949

>>31973994
Need to eat hairy wolf pussy and floss with the remainder.

>> No.31981207

Hairy pussy is gross. Shaved is the only way

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>>31981207
wrong

>> No.31981395

>>31978216
This sounds like a doujin by that "Another Color Summoner" fella.

>> No.31981814

>>31981207
As someone who lives in a tropical country it was a pretty big shock to learn that there are people out there who actually prefer unshaved.

>> No.31982005

>>31977650
A never ending race...

>> No.31983357

>>31981207
Strongly agreed. Trim the hedges if you're expecting company in the front yard, you animal. Goes for guys too.

>> No.31983407

>>31981814
What does your locale have to do with it?

>> No.31983520

>>31983407
I'm guessing the connection is that people in hotter climates would shave more since it would be more hygienic.

>> No.31983620

>>31983520
That was my first thought, but upon reflection, it seems a stretch to believe it.

>> No.31983652

>>31983357
But humans are animals.

>> No.31983684

I don't really care about shaved or hairy pussy in terms of looks or sex, but shaved is better for BDSM. You can see the effects of hitting the area with implements better, and it's much easier to apply small clamps at the right place and without getting them entangled.

>> No.31983866

Sabão crácrá, sabão crácrá, não deixa o cabelo do saco enrola

>> No.31983975

>>31983620
People shave to go to the beach. Can't wear a bikini with pubes. It was assimilated into the culture. Having pubes is weird and antiquated

>> No.31984665

>>31978216
Okay, Laplus BDSM sounds pretty interesting. You could tie ropes to her horns and connect them to various things and places while she chuunily swears revenge.

>> No.31984859

>>31984665
I'd rather shoot ropes in her than tie ropes to her

>> No.31984966

>>31984859
That's fine. The prompt speaks of groups, and I don't mind shooting later when she's properly set up.

>> No.31987191

>>31969881
Ina trying to resist her urge to breed the other members of her generation even as they unknowingly rile her up more and more

>> No.31988586
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Tsuki kire da ne?
https://files.catbox.moe/950hj6.mp4
https://files.catbox.moe/2hjuho.mp4
https://files.catbox.moe/y1nx6k.mp4

>> No.31989359

>>31988586
Why did I watch any of these clips...?

>> No.31990232

>>31988586
Nice rabbit noises. I can imagine them coming out in other situations as well

>> No.31990297

>>31989359
Because they are unbelievably adorable? What are you, gay?

>> No.31990480

>>31990297
Boring. You've got shit taste.

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>>31990480
DAMARE
https://streamable.com/8tmjld

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>>31989359
>>31990480
This guy hates pego noises

>> No.31992860

Will there be more of the Detective Ame and Inspector Watson story? Also, I Iike how like 50% of the archive are about either chuubas hurting (you) or the other way around. Never change guys.

>> No.31993423

>>31978216
Korean hands typed this post.

>> No.31994733

>>31992860
Sorry anon but the writer for that fic hasn't been seen since like last year.

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>>31982005

Well heres my attempt anyway if you want to still go for it


>>31977090
The 4shit auto janitor thinks I'm sending spam so go to the website "Ren" and then "Try" dot co/yp9zs


Need feedback. AA anon I am not submitting this as a story, it's not a story at all it's a proof of concept I typed out in an hour. Alternate setting: High School study group. If you think Suisei as a high school bully works better than OL bully lmk

Safe for work so far please suggest fucked up mouth and saliva shit if you got any

>> No.31996311

>>31996075
Will delete around 11ish probably unless I forget or I stop caring.

>> No.31996736

>>31996075
Anon rentry dot co is filtered because of the dot co , rentry dot org still works.
https://rentry.org/yp9zs
...
It's decently written. I think with expansion it could be a good fic

>> No.31996785

>>31996075
It's pretty good. You're pretty good. Fuck you for mentioning Baldwin, though. That shit doesn't belong in fanfiction, although it certainly fits the writer stereotype of depressed, lonely permavirgin.

>> No.31996827

>>31996075
Holy shit Suisei in orange leggings is sex

>> No.31997042

>>31996785
Believe it or not I had forgotten that Alec Baldwin killed a woman and was referring to that time he called a guy a faggot on twitter and they cut off his thumbs in south park, and I didnt think of what else Baldwin did until just now lmfao

>> No.31997164

>>31994733
Sad, but thanks for the info. I will have to look for other stories that catch my attention then.

>> No.31997280

>>31997042
That shit doesn't belong in fanfiction either. We're trying to escape the real world, not peg references to it.

>> No.31997545

>>31997280
Well I will probably use very little of the opening monologue in the draft.
My main concern is whether or not they should be younger. I somehow cringe at the idea of a grown man being bullied by Suisei as compared to Suisei bullying someone "her own age"

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>>31969881
An anthology of Polka making basic mistakes during dangerous circus acts and brutally dying each time, such as falling from a tightrope or being eaten by a tiger

>> No.31997931

>>31997545
What Suisei lacks in age makes up with her stacy attitude - a combination of fame, confidence and social retardation - and the starstruck aura she carries around with her by virtue of being a celebrity. It'd work more on fans rather than someone who has no clue or does not care, though, admittedly.
At the moment it's not necessarily unbelievable if you characterize him as someone weak of character being swept into her pace.

>> No.31998284

>>31997931
I can see him having two conflicting images of Suisei, her social side as an idol which he believes and the spit equivalent of a semen demon who succumbed to a fetish based off of a scientific misunderstanding and her genuine sociopathy, which he denies exists.

>> No.32000070

>>31997586
So... gore/hateporn or comedy anon?

>>31975110
Is this you? Why did Polka suddenly catch your attention?

>> No.32000242

>>32000070
Whichever you want and no. I just try to think of something unusual at least once every two threads

>> No.32000265

>>32000070
NTA but Polka's hot and the thought of her crying is even hotter

>> No.32000527

>>31987191
I like the idea of Ina's tentacles ignoring her orders and acting on lust alone

>> No.32002490

>>31997586
This but Polka's stuck in a groundhog day loop of dying until she can perform the perfect circus day.

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Man, all these recent streams and outfits make me wish I had started writing a summer themed story a while ago, even though it's winter where I am.
Speaking of, what's a good excuse for people to wear yukatas in a world where Japan doesn't exist?

>> No.32005612

>>32005155
Popular fashion in [insert fictional Eastern country here]

>> No.32005623

>>32005155
A cargo ship full of textiles got isekaid to fantasy world, and (insert your cast here) just won a shipping crate full of them in an auction.

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Why do you not like this image? I thought it was pretty good but last time I posted it you didn't care...

>> No.32008617

>>32000070
What? Also Polka has always been one of my favorites but the Porka meme never really made me lewd post with her. Now that she lost weight there's potential again

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Talk.

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>>32012422
Busy writing, unless you can come up with an interesting topic.

>> No.32013503

>>32012422
Everyone's watching streams tonight anon pls understand

>> No.32013512

>>32012422
Uh....
Chuubas in giant robots.

>> No.32013812

>>32013512
>mecha
ew

>> No.32013956

>>32013812
What about if they were in big stompy mechs instead?

>> No.32014203

>>32008273
I never really had sex thoughts about fubuki, shes so fucking small I'm pretty sure I would destroy her

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>>32012422
Listen!

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>>32014203
>I never really had sex thoughts about fubuki,

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>>32013452
WHERE DID HER HAT GO WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK

>> No.32014552

>>32013452
I watched Dragon Ball Super Super Hero alone in the theater... it was pretty average. I considered blowing a load to a chuuba during the movie but there was a guy that came up randomly to check on the rooms so I couldn't

>> No.32014579

>>32014422
You have seen the eldritch truth anon.
There never was a hat there.

>> No.32014679

>>32014203
Pretty sure that applies to almost all of hololive.

>> No.32014759

>>32014552
>there was a guy that came up randomly to check on the rooms so I couldn't
What the fuck? Where do you live that this happens?

>> No.32014770

>>32013452
Why do I want to suck and kiss her tentacle hair

>> No.32014823

>>32014759
NTA, but where the fuck do you live that this DOESN'T happen? Happens here in Australia too

>> No.32014855

>>32014759
I mean he was security. It's pretty standard stuff no?

>> No.32015055

>>32014823
>Australia
What? That's where I live. I have never seen random guys come into the movie theatres to check on the audience, both at Hoyts and Limelight.

>> No.32015173

>>32015055
I think it's part of the 11PM curfew or something. If anything the fact that he walks around with an assault rifle probably indicates that

>> No.32015580

>>32015055
A random security guy with a torch usually comes in halfway through the flicks. Has always been the case. I remember having to stop fiddling with my first girlfriend through one of the Chronicles of Narnia movies because of this

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>>32008273
The age of Fubuki is over.

>> No.32015978

>>32015580
That has never happened to me, even late at night. I feel like that would ruin the experience for the customers too, take them out of the immersion.

>> No.32016767

>>32015173
Didn't know kangaroos were that dangerous.

>> No.32017002

>>32016767
Exposure to the former Haachama Exclusion Zone tends to do that to wildlife.

>> No.32017209

>>32015800
She'll always be #1 in my heart.

>> No.32017253

>>32015978
Sounds like you got the lax Hoyts chief

>> No.32017441

Do we actually have multiple ausfags in this thread or is this just bugfag talking to himself because that would explain so much

>> No.32017679

>>32017441
It's like 3:PM and the Americans are asleep.

>> No.32017727

>>32017441
No, I live in Australia. I don’t think I have any Australian blood I me but I was born and raised here.

>> No.32017731

>>32017441
US, Australians dont exist, dont buy into the english genocide denial.
There never was an Australia. They sailed to the middle of the ocean and threw everyone off the boat

>> No.32018636

>>32017002
>Going to find rare artifacts like Lace (Haachama's lingerie), Arachnid (The discarded shell of a molted tarantula that Haachama raised as a pet before devouring on stream) or even a Container (empty psych. med bettle)
>Run into incredibly disasterously mutated wildlife like Kangaroos with seven legs that use all of them to leap insane distances and gore you with their claws instead
Such is life in the Zone

>> No.32018828

>>32018636
Wait I saw he eat crickets but she didnt eat a tarantula did she?

>> No.32019112

>>32017727
Why do you still live in Australia?

>> No.32019511

>>32018636
Going to the Meat Grinder with Haachama!

>> No.32020241

>>32018828
Tarantula was like one of her earliest eat weird stuff vids.

>> No.32021864

>>32019112
I don’t have any reason to move somewhere else. It’s not perfect but living here is fine. As long as I get the occasional visit to Japan that’s enough for me.

>> No.32022397

>>32021864
Fuck off, we're full.

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>>32021864
Are abbos likes blacks? How's the drinking water?

>> No.32022667

>>32022397
Mate I was born here. Tell that to the all the Chinese exchange students and landlords.

>> No.32023944

>>32022617
Abbos are like ghetto blacks with the added warcry of "IT'S MAAH LAAND" ever since the government decided that they need to respect a minor civilization that our ancestors stomped all over, and name all our suburbs after them.

Drinking water's generally tasty in Sydney. Tastes foul in Cairns, somewhat like burnt rubber.

>> No.32025489

>>32023944
kek, the American Indians usually stay on their reservations and get drunk; occasionally whining about something unimportant.

>> No.32025891

>>32023944
I see the stereotype of Australians all being casual racists is true.

>> No.32026191

>>32025891
If you count that one random Aussie on /vt/, sure. You do that.

>> No.32026684

>>32025891
>casual racist
Fuck off, nigger, I'm full-time.

>> No.32027006

>>32025891
Kind of hard to not be racist in Australia when the aboriginals huff gas for fun.

>> No.32027180

>>31996075
alright. That was good, really. I share the sentiment with the other anons that the intro is dumb, though. Besides namedropping Baldwin, the whole monologue feels like you‘re projecting about yourself, instead of actually describing the fictional (you).
Especially the part about “society ripping you apart” or whatever feels out of place since in the end, it’s basically just Suisei ripping into you when no one else is looking.
THAT, on the other hand, is pretty hot. That’s why I like the idea of the office-setting as well. School bullying is an old hat, but Suisei bullying you LIKE a school bully and getting away with it because nobody thinks that would still be a thing in some peaceful office opens a lot of new dynamics.
Besides that…
>ugh, not a story - feeling cute now, might delete later
You got your (you)’s - just write the fucking thing, dude. preferably with Suisei mindbreaking herself into becoming you spit-addicted tsundere plaything

>> No.32028576

>>32027006
While it’s good to keep in mind that aboriginal people DID get invaded and fucked over by our ancestors in many ways, people also have to remember that the Maoris in New Zealand had zero problems whatsoever when white settlers took over. They got along great and integrated themselves into the new society just fine while keeping their culture alive.
It’s the close-mindedness and refusal to change of aboriginals which put them where they are now, at least to a certain extent. Even now they refuse to do anything with their lives. An aboriginal family used to live down the street from me and there was fucking litter everywhere, all over the place to the point where it was blowing into the whole neighbourhood. Lots of children there too, none of which were going to school.

>> No.32028720

>>32028576
They sit around in the middle of the street in groups occasionally where I live, drinking, shouting and blocking traffic.

>> No.32028758

>>32028576
Do they not know how to pick up trash?

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I want to breed this kusogaki and I hope that one Anon continues his Shion slave fic one day

>> No.32028844

>>32028811
Shion slave fic?

>> No.32029098

>>32028844
The fic's called Credit Where It's Due and it probably features the best brat correction concept for Shion

>> No.32029307

>>32029098
Ah. Yes, it's being written. Second part won't be out for some time, though.

>> No.32029910
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Holy shit

>>32022617
>Are abbos likes blacks?
Can't say, I only know (and have only ever known) one aboriginal person, and he was a half. We go to the gym together, he's cool.
I have once seen what >>32028576 was talking about though, with the rubbish-covered houses.
>How's the drinking water?
Fine? At least here in the capital city, I don't know why would it be assumed as bad. I obviously think tap water tastes worse in other countries and cities, but I'm pretty sure that has something to do with our bodies getting more used to the water we drink daily and applies to anyone.

Anyway, vtuber fanfiction, am I right? Here, have this Lui.

>> No.32030140

>>32029910
That’s a mighty fine Lui.

>> No.32030657

>>32029910
I want to kiss this hag's thighs

>> No.32030789

>>32029910
This woman is old.

>> No.32030855

>>32030789
That’s the best part.

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>>32029910
I like Lui

>> No.32032842

死ぬんじゃねえよ

>> No.32033367
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>>32032842
New kanji acquired.

>> No.32033485

>>32033367
WHAT THE FUXJ
SHOW ME HER TITS NOW

>> No.32033743

>>32033367
my god…

>> No.32033934

>>32033485
Looking her up, it's https://mobile.twitter.com/nrumcos

>> No.32033936

>>31969881
Wafting the scent of Mio's burrito shits after releases a torrent of effluence into your apartment's bathroom as she buries her head into her arms out of embarrassment, then pinning her down and slurping the brown elixir out of her plumbing directly next time she runs for the bathroom.
/ringo/chads, rise up.

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>>32033367
>>32033934
cool

>> No.32034079

>>32033934
Booooooooooobs.

She doesn't whip them out, though. That sucks.

>> No.32034090

>>32033936
Sorry anon there aren't anymore works of classic literature vaguely related to paradise lost that can make a good title for this.

>> No.32034142

>>32033936
Talk to a doctor, because your brain is riddled with worms.

>> No.32034154

>>32034090
"Catcher in the Brown Eye"?

>> No.32034168

>>32034027
Mori's idealized form.
God she's hot.

>> No.32034206

>>32034142
Listen, buddy. Shit or no shit, if you don't want to lick Mio's fartbox clean after a long day of dance practice, there's something wrong with YOU.

>> No.32034343

>>32034154
so fucking dumb but i giggled so hard over this.

>> No.32034386

>>32034154
Johnny Got His Gun would be better but that would require (You) to be a quadruple amputee with no face.

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>>32034154
I took a little break from writing Brown Black and Blue and this was the first post I saw. Got a good laugh out of me.

>> No.32034503

>>32034386
I was on board until you said "no face". It's not possible to partake of her posterior's provisionings without a face.

>> No.32034669

>>32034090
>>32034386
weirdanonv2 don't do it. the first time was an experiment and the second time was a joke, but there's no escaping the court of public opinion a third time. you'll be branded a scatfag for life

>> No.32034700

>>32034090
>>32033936
Okay wait after thinking about it for a bit you could probably finagle it as "Divine Comedy" or "Inferno" ,"Purgatorio" and "Paradise" if you want it to be a three parter.

>> No.32034852

>>32034700
I feel like a journey through hell sends the wrong idea about licking a hot wolfgirl's asshole.

>> No.32034921

>>32034852
No that's exactly what it is you fucking sodomite. You're going to hell you degenerate sinner.

>> No.32034952

>>32034852
you're not being completely honest there, you wanted to drink mio's diarrhoea, not lick her butt

>> No.32035045

>>32034921
I'd gladly run through a mile of hellfire covered in kerosene if it meant I could watch Mio take a dump.

>> No.32035094

>>32035045
holy fucking shit you can't be serious, this is too fucking funny to be real

>> No.32035205

>>32035094
I am a very serious scatfag, anon. I wish to reach under and pluck the fruits of her colon for my own contemplation.

>> No.32035266

>>32035205
Which one is better Paradise Lost or the Kiara scatfic?

>> No.32035384

>>32035266
Which Kiara scatfic? WWCD or the Pekora one? Either way, they're more comedic whereas Paradise Lost is played straight. I'd pick Paradise Lost at the end of the day, but the two Kiara scatfics are better reads... if that makes sense. They're more verbose.

>> No.32035569

>>32035384
Please kill yourself. Please?

>> No.32035638

>>32035569
Now that's just rude.

>> No.32036404

Hey writing chads! Wanna come over to /vtwbg/? We're doing some neat lore writing!

>> No.32036497

>>32036404
only if you read paradise lost and winner winner chocolate dinner then give a critical analysis of both

>> No.32036939

>>32036404
Surprised you guys are still kicking, but you guys already got an entry on us last I checked.

>> No.32037257

>>32036939
Yeah. Just asking if there's anymore who would like to write for their home threads.
Not just for /wg/ but other threads too even /horni/ based on the amount of lewdfics here

>> No.32038387

What's the matter, Anon? You said you loved Mio's cute animal features. This is what you wanted.
https://twitter.com/kulukulukukulu/status/1564568740750331905

>> No.32038836

>>32038387
Still would.

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>>32038387
What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: How much planning do you do before starting a writing project? Do you just jump into it and write off of an idea or do you plan an outline first?

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Yandere Aqua

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>>32038894
Impregnating this hag and saving her from a childless life.

>> No.32039809

>>32039540
I really like the idea of a yandere that is so stupid they're more a danger to themselves than to their love.

>> No.32039994

>>32039809
>Aqua threatens to hurt herself if you don't pay enough attention to her.
>She's also not afraid to stab another girl if they so much as look at you.
Hot

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>>32035205
If I could, I'd see you crucified

>> No.32040311

>>32036404
I haven't actually been there before, but don't you guys write about /vt/ threads instead of actual chuubas? Where's the appeal?

>> No.32040448

>>32038894
>Bonus
It's a mix. I only ever do planning if I enjoy doing it (i.e fantasising about various scenarios and adventures), though I sometimes jump straight into a story blind when I feel like it. Both ways of writing have their advantages.

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32040502

>>32038894
Halfway through the next chapter of Brown Black and Blue. It's almost to it's conclusion. I'd give it two chapters before the main event.

I'm going to try to make a more surrealist work if I can manage it. I've had this idea in my head for a long time that's almost like a dream sequence but I haven't been able to execute properly. I'm still working out the kinks.

I'm also starting to get some ideas for a new story like Building Block Doll. Need to turn it over in my mind a bit more before I start it though.

> How much planning do you do before starting a writing project? Do you just jump into it and write off of an idea or do you plan an outline first?

Inspiration just slaps me across the face and I run with it. Building Block Doll was a spur of the moment chapter and I only began planning it properly around 10 chapters through.

Normally I don't develop a proper outline until 2-3 chapters down. I need to have a little time to test the ideas I have and get some good character work started. I often plan my stories in terms of character arcs rather than event 1 leads to event 2.

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>> No.32041794

>>32038894
I start with a basic premise and then just start throwing shit in as it comes to me.

>> No.32042499

>>32041424
If this board is moving so fast because of Kronii, then I can't wait for Gura to collab with Tempus. The shitshow will be immense.

>> No.32042594

>>32042499
God you'd probably have to bump the thread every minute if that day comes around.

>> No.32042939

>>32042499
HoloEN is just unsalvageable at this point. I'm not even one of those parasocial types, I just don't want to see the further whoreification of English vtubers.

Makes me sad if I'm honest. Nobody wanted this and yet they're doing it anyway.

>> No.32042961

>>32042594
Eh, I don't think it can get any worse than the Rushia yab. Only thing that could rile up the schizos beyond that would be someone like Lamy openly admitting she has a boyfriend, leaving no room for cope.

>> No.32043014

>>32042939
>I just don't want to see the further whoreification of English vtubers.
>I'm not even one of those parasocial types
You sure fucking sound like one.

>> No.32043123

>>32043014
I'm the sorta person who likes really seiso stuff (Sora, Flare, Suisei, etc.)

So seeing HoloEN collab with men is just more dating bullshit. Doesn't help that Hologay is insufferable.

>> No.32043181

There are a bunch of threads where you guys can talk about that, doesn't have to be here.

>> No.32043350

>>32042961
Her fans (minus the /become/ fags) are chill so that would suck. From my experience they aren't as insane as fancucks but I could be wrong.

>> No.32043985

>>32038894
Picked up my my own prompt with the premise "slutty, taken chuuba seduces drunken (you) during a party into hot cheating sex and (you) don't regret it" because I just couldn't get it out of my head. Its going fairly well... 5.5k words. Probably 2-3k more to go. I haven't jerked the jerky in a while, so that helps too.
For the question: I don't write an actual outline, but I do mentally map out a story before I start writing - especially the setting, important scenes/plot-points, the ending and how I will get there. When I have fantasized about everything long enough, I just need to connect the scenes on paper.

>> No.32044031

>>32043985
Who's the chuuba?

>> No.32044416

>>32043123
Suisei collabs with men all the fucking time.

>> No.32044625

>>32044416
Lmao so does Sora

>> No.32044740

>>32044416
Why are you responding to bait?

>> No.32044912

>>32044740
Poe’s law, my friend. Especially relevant when you are aware of the type of people that come here.

>> No.32045240

>>32044031
Hoshikawa

>> No.32045614

>>32045240
Ngl I expected Polka after all the talk about her recently

>> No.32045839

>>31969881
Tokino Sora easing you into having nice, wholesome sex with her.

>> No.32045923

>>32045240
NUHOOOOO!!! YEAAH!
I FUCKING LOVE SLUUUUUTS!

>> No.32046040

>>32040311
Chuubas are regarded as deities. It's a world where the heavens is always punishing its worshippers.
Anything that happened to them such as yabs will result in disasters
Magic is fueled by belief in one's oshi
A chuuba graduating means they die, resulting some of their believers going mad or worse, every magical items that tuned to them going meltdown
/here/ chuubas such as Kiki are seen as literal god emperors
/asp/ is comitting apotheosis to become gods
and /meat/ declares war on corpo gods in the name of indie supremacy

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>>32046040
Some primers to get you started on /vtwbg/

>Using thread history as analogs to actual myths and history
https://rentry.org/vtwbg-meatannals

>Introduction to each nations
https://rentry.org/ziuog

>The 2hu Genocide/Antedilvian Hyperwar that resulted in Custodians (our formal word for jannies) to split the dimension /vt/ out of /jp/
https://rentry.org/4onof

>The death of Konoe and its anomaly on /voms/
https://rentry.org/xmc88
https://rentry.org/hidhh

>/vrt/
https://rentry.org/x9scn

>Deadbeats becoming the Marines form One Piece
https://rentry.org/goddess-faithful
https://rentry.org/black-fleet

>Nijisanji empire, its member states, and lore
https://rentry.org/Tsukinode-Empire
https://rentry.org/Fairy-Festival
https://rentry.org/6s2kh
https://rentry.org/haha-religion

>Miscellaneous /meat/ lore
https://rentry.org/vtwbg-meatlore
https://rentry.org/meat-KTF
https://rentry.org/longpork

>> No.32047034

>>32046040
>>32046690
How is the lore for this even more autistic than I thought it would be?

>> No.32047089

>>32040202
The feeling is mutual.

>> No.32047202

>>32045240
Cannot wait to read it

>> No.32047317

I'd like to crucify some vtubers (with consent and without permanent harm)

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>>32047034
You've barely scratched the surface

>climate analysis
https://rentry.org/vtwbg-climate

>/inf/ acts like Mechanicum, blessing their cannons in Kronii's name
https://rentry.org/infinity-stories-deliverance

>Tales of pain and suffering
https://rentry.org/Colderonie
https://rentry.org/n3vyk
https://rentry.org/5cz4q
https://rentry.org/hidhh

>300 pages of military autism because Pomu told a man to do it
https://rentry.org/y3e3u
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRbjyPu0Z3QmezZuL8jbtqRhzHz78ceQH1qlGhKfiG_V0q4R7FAN_maEIPzib4gG6D8MFQl-2R_K05y/pub

And pic related, some potential endings for each nation's victory

>> No.32047374

>>32046040
>>32046690
Hard pass, sorry. I took a glance at your introductory document as well as some of your stories, and it is all wayyy too much.
I’m not interested in writing about OCs to begin with, and the amount of lore you already have is impossible for someone new to catch up on. I remember briefly dropping by /vtwbg/ in it’s early days when people were deciding where they wanted their threads to be on a map, that was kinda fun, but what it’s become since then is a bit much.

>> No.32047429

>>32047374
It's alright
But if any other anons are intrigued, feel free!

>> No.32047527

>>32047355
>Pomu told a man to do it

I feel like one day Pomu will tell some guy to relinquish their first born to her

>> No.32047566

>>32046040
>>32046690
>>32047355
HOLY MOTHER OF AUTISM!

>> No.32047606

>>32043123
This is peak cognitive dissonance

>> No.32047641

>>32046690
>>32047355
>>32046040
This gives me a colossal worldbuilding boner.

>> No.32048567

>>32047355
Eh.
I was mildy interested when it came to the original concept of /vt/ pseudo history on a map but this has just grown too distant for me to even care.
Also what the hell is the /wg/ rep doing in there, their world building feels so detached from /wg/ proper that I question the point of using us as a foundation.

>> No.32049220

>>32048567
To be fair, /wg/ is pretty diverse between discussing all the different stories and prompts, writing process talk, thread celebrity conversations and arguments, the /ringo/ and futa timeloops, the hornyposting, the discussion of chuubas or current events that get brought up more or less randomly, the Luna rape...

>> No.32049533

>>32049220
I like the idea of 'LUNA RAPE' being the warcry of a secret sect of cultists.
>Thread celebrities
Term always rubbed me the wrong way, mostly because it's almost used exclusively to refer to at least two people I can think of immediately. Why not just use the term 'authors'? Discussing their works isn't usually a bad thing, ala MatthewAnon for example. Feels less forced and drama-whorey.

>> No.32049714

>>32049220
Yeah but if you're not going to use the thread as a foundation for your world building then what's the point?
It's like writing about a Mecha setting and not having mechas, it's missing the point of making it in the first place.

>> No.32049800

>>32036404
>>32037257
>>32046040
>>32046690
>>32047355
>>32047429
cool, hope you put this under the "insufferable circlejerk raids other threads with its offtopic autism again" lore entry

>> No.32049904

>>32049533
Thread celebrities is imageboard culture.

>> No.32049915

>>32049714
I just wanted to express that it's not easy to use this thread for worldbuilding, you're right in what you said.

>>32049533
That's fair, I don't mind author discussion that's related to their work. The complaints about something being offtopic are probably the worst part of the thread.

>> No.32050309

>>32049533
>Thread celebrities
I always thought that was meant as a soft insult rather than as a term of endearment. Since it's about the hardest you can go since writefags has always been the norm for referring to writers on an image board.

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>>32027180
Fell asleep after I got home, forgot about checking this, the intro actually based on Kyon's pity self introduction where he rambles about the nature of coincidences. I thought it would be funny to find a similar theme to be sort of a meta theme for Suisei mindbreaking herself, my first choice was unintended consequences for social gaffes.
I was also considering a monologue about how fetishes develop, but I felt that's too on the nose. Its not something I wanted to focus on too long before I got to the face sex.

Also deleting a link that's gonna in a thread for days for something like this is usually the smart way to go because you dont want random people still talking about it after the thread has changed the subject to luna cnc or luna rape proper.

>> No.32052834

>>31969881
A fic about Miko crushing Suisei's balls after discovering she's a guy.

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This is the worst thread

>> No.32053845

>>32052834
Not the suiballs...

>> No.32054026

>>32052921
Because of the diarrhea drinking?

>> No.32054391

>>32054026
100 posts about ironic shit eating even though there's a greasy faggot stroking off his hog and moaning to the stuff you people are saying "ironically" because paradise lost is "sooo funny", and then yet another world building discord raid because much like in real life these people can't take no for an answer and would probably rape if they could get away with it

>> No.32055069

>>32054391
>discussing writing in the writing thread is le bad

>> No.32055162

>>32054391
You're not wrong, I prefer my /wg/ threads safe to eat near, but this is what you get when you talk about how much you missed /meat/ and /ringo/ for fucking days, you get reminded why they died

>> No.32055494

>>32055162
/meat/ is comfy and wholesome.

>> No.32055557

>>32054391
Anon they've only come here like three, maybe four times to advertise their thread ever since it's inception.

>> No.32056488

>>32049533
That term is only used when the named anons are talking about their latest ERP session/dick pic exchange or some other bullshit

>> No.32056615

>>32056488
Really? I've seen it used in theead when referring to all discussions about authors as a general use term for notable writers here.

>> No.32056990

>>32056615
Can you pinpoint when? I'm not trying to prove you wrong, I just can't remember many instances of that happening. It's mostly 'writeanons', then when the thread goes to shit because people constantly bring up the usual named suspects to talk about dumb shit, the term 'thread celebrity' gets used because it's more fitting considering they're not writing, or talking about writing.

>> No.32057046

>>32056615
Exactly this. It's a catch-all term for any one particular person being discussed too much at that point in time.

>> No.32057126

>>32056990
It's a bunch of shitposters with hateboners for a couple people. Don't let it take up space in your head.

>> No.32057920

>>32055162
/meat/'s alive right now
Judge them
>>31761872

>> No.32058066

>>32056615
You may have been misunderstanding then. While a writer on this page could potentially be a thread celebrity, that's almost an idealistic idea of what it's like to be a writer here. You're only going to be elevated to thread celebrity status of you do something that makes people hate you, like talking about harvesting chuuba organs, drinking shit, or being Pekofag and waiting 4 threads to reply to something.

Publishing something, even a long awaited sequel to something a lot of people read will get you one reply, asking when the next sequel will come. It's easy to become a /wg/ thread celebrity but writing is unironically the worst way to do it.

>> No.32059204

I need research material.
Suggest manga with tsunderes or yandere. Anime is ok but I dont have all the time in the world

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>>32059204
Preferably "romance" or whatever fucked up version of romance Dere types have

>> No.32059566

>>32058066
>Publishing something, even a long awaited sequel to something a lot of people read will get you one reply, asking when the next sequel will come.
Pain peko

>> No.32060181

>>32058066
It is sad to see how many views some stories get, and how little attention in the thread despite that.
Doesn't even have to be lengthy feedback, but leaving a compliment or message would be courteous to someone who provided you with free, non-profit entertainment.

>> No.32060712

>>32060181
But that would take a post away from teh epic bants with scat anon

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>>32059204
>>32059270
Nhentai doesnt have the tags I need

>> No.32062969

>>31976435
Why is this clip edited as if it's an episode of the Monogatari anime?

>> No.32063346

Dragon Age 2 sucks. My warden died for this.

>> No.32063480

>>32063346
The sheer amount of recycling killed it

>> No.32063846

>>32063346
Origins->Awakening->Witch Hunt is already a good enough trilogy.

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Pst
>>/v/

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>>32060181
You know, I can do better about this.
Gotta treat our writefags better before they graduate.

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>>32064407
>Gotta treat our writefags better before they graduate.

W-what? They graduate? Th-they don't actually do that right? They'll be around forever. They'll write forever and ever.

R-right?

>> No.32064686

>>32064407
I've dropped like 3 series already from lack of feedback

>> No.32064765

>>32064686
which ones?

>> No.32064925

>>32064686
Well, that just means they didn't catch the attention of thread-goers at the time.

>> No.32065139

If you want feedback, focus on writing about the most popular chuubas IN THIS THREAD, and stick to vanilla fetishes if you're including smut. Make shorter, easily digestible one-shots capped at around 5000 words, and incorporate popular genres - fluff, smut, and abuse are three off the top of my head, although they're the most obvious ones.
If you want to get replies from people here, you need to appeal to people here.

>> No.32065514

Is 2nd person most similar to 3rd person or 1st person mechanically?

>> No.32065602

>>32065514
first person. replace "i" with "you"

>> No.32065913

>>32065139
And also suck their cocks, that will give you a lot of attention. Take it from me

>> No.32065964

>>32065913
Nobody wants to take it from you, pekofag.


Everybody wants to give it to you

>> No.32066020

God I want to drink Mio's diarrhea

>> No.32066046

>>32065964
I don't need anything from you.

>> No.32066058

>>32066020
I made this post.

>> No.32066127

>>32066046
You weren't going to get anything from me, shithead. Apart from a silent prayer for you to get liver cancer.

>> No.32066352

>>32065514
third person.

>> No.32066455

>>32065139
I dont know if one shots vs series is a big difference.
>>32065514
Writing in second person is like writing in first person for someone else, its cancer. When I was a kid I always wondered why books were in an eternal past tense, it felt unnatural to be describing a story happening right now as if it's actually being remembered and retold by the main character after the fact. Why is it "No Jessica had never seen his face like that when she looked at him" and not "No, when Jessica looks at his face again she realizes she had never seen it like this before."

Then at some point I read Gravity's Rainbow and Ulysses and realized it's because you sound schizophrenic if you break conventions.

>> No.32066547

>>32066127
Tough luck, I don't drink alcohol

>> No.32066560

>>32064665
>He missed the graduation ceremonies and AA's funeral following The Accident

>> No.32066684

I see the earlyfag is working hard today.

>> No.32066873

>>32066684
Nope, he's not here yet

>> No.32066923

>>32066873
Whatever you say earlyfag.

>> No.32066951

>>32066923
Nevermind, he's here now

>> No.32067164

>>32066455
>I dont know if one shots vs series is a big difference.
That's your prerogative, but for mass appeal it's better to create something self-contained, that doesn't require an extended attention span.

>> No.32067197

>>32066455
>Gravity's Rainbow and Ulysses
Thomas Pynchon is an overrated hack writer and Ulysses is overhyped by people who haven't read the book.

>> No.32067430

>>32067197
I get why people like Pynchon, hes great at writing, randomly giving a well written monologue about the differences between empire and nation building being the paper bureaucracies signed to engage in them takes talent.

I have yet to see a post modernist produce a good plot though. They focus so much on telling the story in a quirky way that the plot is shit. Like the harmonica he loses down a toilet in New York washing up sparkling clean in a river in North Carolina is hardly a deus ex machina and more just... what you'd expect.

>> No.32067654
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32067654

>looking for /Uoh/
>Found this thread.

>> No.32067909

>>32067654
We hate children here. This is a hag thread. Get lost

>> No.32068065

>>32067654
this anon doesn't speak for me >>32067909

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32068629

>>32067909
>We
Serial shitposters love doing this.

>> No.32068779

>>32068629
Someone want to explain fubuki shadow?

>> No.32068827

>>32068779
Lolicon.

>> No.32068848

>>32068065
>>32068629
Prove that you love children then

>> No.32068901
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32068901

>>32068779
Lolicon. Just like Flare.

>> No.32068967

Can we get another incredibly sexy image like the Ayame from last thread for the next one?

>> No.32069009

>>32068848
Uh hagbros? What even is this behavior

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32069031

help, the ff14 patch has absorbed my writing time

>> No.32069109

>>32069031
We don't like homostars either. Get out

>> No.32069123

>>32069031
Stop playing a trash game

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32069222

>>32069031
>ff14

>> No.32069318

>>32069123
>>32069222
man idk why I'm still in it either

>> No.32069647

>>32069031
Why would you ever play FF14 instead of the objectively superior FF13 part 2?

>> No.32069830

>>32069647
Is this a joke?

>> No.32069876

>>32069830
If you're referring to FF14 then yes, it's a joke of a game

>> No.32070560

>>32069830
I'm sorry I lied I only ever played FF13

>> No.32070599

>>32069830
I wanted to fit in with the cool kids

>> No.32070668

>>32065514
The "style" of second person used here is more similar to first person pov then third person due to the fact that the writers here like having it with personality, and effectively only use the pov like it's first person anyway.
It can be written closer to third person pov but that requires writing with a generic You, rather than the more characterized You that the thread likes.

>> No.32070782

>>32069830
no

>> No.32070839

>>32069830
The game is terrible anon.

>> No.32070897

>>32069830
You're a joke

>> No.32070926

>>32069830
I'm a joke...

>> No.32071037

>>32070782
Oh nooou squayalo enixu, take arr the tiem in the warudo, 15 more yeals to make ff15? Why not take 2 decades for lound number? We just filed arr of ouro western blanch and cancerred Deus Ex 3, just take arr of theyle money

>> No.32071137

>>32066455
If you want to do something different with tense, it definitely has to be more out there than just going with present tense.
Unless you're writing short stories told in first person, and in an (almost) stream of consciousness manner; present tense can work there.

>> No.32071189

Next thread :pauseman: ...

>> No.32071439

New thread
>>32071373

>> No.32071489

New thread
>>32071353

>> No.32071545 [DELETED] 

>>32071489
So we're not using this bait thread right?

>> No.32071604

>>32071545
i don't trust you all to not use it so i don't make new threads

>> No.32071619

>>32071545
You replied to the real thread on accident, the bait was >>32071439 (no followup posts after the OP)

>> No.32071708

>>32071439
>>32071619
What was the fake thread about? I’ve never seen the jannies remove it so quickly?

>> No.32071758

>>32071708
would've been the guy deleting his own thread

>> No.32071796

>>32071708
>>/vt/thread/32071373
Look it up in the archive next time (or install 4chanX)

>> No.32071837

>>32071758
You can't delete you own thread on /vt/, trust me I tried deleting a thread I made about an indie before.

>> No.32071954

>>32071708
It was the thiccwithaq/nyantacha rushia twitter image.
Which I assume the jannies delete on principle once reported since there is no good thread coming out of something using that as an op image.

>> No.32071978

>>32071708
It's proof that there's a jannie in /wg/ and it's that guy who posts the dancing rat gif

>> No.32072268

Hello?

>> No.32072395

Uh... gentlemen? I believe this is the part where we discuss who should we rape next?

>> No.32072431

>>32072395
Just go to the new thread.

>> No.32072548

>>32071978
There’s always been a jannies in /wg/, but people here are too stupid to report threadshitters, and instead reply to them.

>> No.32073543

I go to bed and wake up to this shit
jesus

>> No.32073573

>>32073543
Fuck off, retard.

>> No.32073603

>>32073543
Idiots will always reply to the shitposters.

>> No.32073727

>>32073573
why don't you go ahead and make me, hotshot

>> No.32073780

>>32073727
Kill yourself, pekofag.

>> No.32074096

>>32073780
> Wrongfully accusing someone of being Pekofag
Checked

>> No.32074124

>>32074096
Sounds like something pekofag'd say. Stop shitposting and just kill yourself.

>> No.32074491

>>32074124
> Rightfully accusing someone of being Pekofag
Checked

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