/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

Story recap! There... were six stories posted in the last thread.

Ame face sit: Tags: Amelia Watson, femdom, nsfw, guro :>>31337791

Corrupting Nene: Dragon Hunt: Tags:Nene, Coco, SFW, Fanchapter:>>31339745

Say, Can You See? - A Short Story 1: Tags: Mumei, Fauna, Mori, Pekora, Korone, Shion, Okayu, sfw, fluff?:>>31351166

The reflective rain: Tags: Suisei, melancholy(?):>>31357987

First Train and Kafka Stop Seven: I Am Two: Tags: multiple chuubas, anthology, abuse, dark themes:>>31386785

First Train and Kafka Stop Eight: I Am Sorry: Tags: Tags: multiple chuubas, anthology, abuse, dark themes:>>31424771

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Suisei kidnaps Mori and keeps her as her sex slave.:>>31339056

A fic where Suisei gets kicked in the balls.:>>31353809

Shorts about biting each holo tail:>>31357242

AZKi leaving (You) to recover from your injuries behind a rock and telling you to survive before going off alone to heroically gun down the army of invading bug monsters:>>31369388

Groundhog Day but with Miko and Pekora on Christmas:>>31379268

Cyberpunk 2077 but Azki replaces Johnny Silverhand:>>31381196

Deep in the depths of hell, where no mortal has ever seen, a shinigami and a demon lord are having a fight to put any mortal battle to shame:>>31401252

teaching loli chuubas that their cunnies are their most valuable asset. and showing them exactly why.:>>31403655

gently raping loli fubuki right in her tight little fox cunny.:>>31405968

tending to your daughter fubuki's tiny fox holes. pleasuring her until she screams in exstacy.:>>31406669

Basically this but in fanfic format:>>31407312

Asking Marine for a screwdriver because you'd like to screw.:>>31410712

gura gets raped by dolphins.:>>31421416

I am once again shamelessly asking for a fic involving fucking the daylights out of the holomamas:>>31424004

Suisei getting blacked:>>31434811

Aqua is nervous about an upcoming performance and binges on UberEats the night before on stream. Unfortunately the morning afterwards she has a really nasty stomach ache, and the performance is only in one hour. She doesn't have time to be sitting on the bathroom groaning.:>>31467285

Abusive puppy play with Flare. Putting her in a cage and crate training her, pulling her on a leash, etc:>>31472730

Kaela putting up a comedy show just for you and you try your hardest to not laugh but in the the when you laugh she stomp you balls:>>31483105

I still want to see a fanfic version of the Ollie finger rrat:>>31495063

>>31496856
>>31496883
>>31496926
>>31497143
>>31497298
The fuck is a hafu

>>31497386
You know how Flare is a half-elf?
Haachama is a half-human.

Poggers thread, dude!

Aren't short fics more exciting than long fics? You can take an idea, wring it out for 5-10k words, and finish before it outstays its welcome?
Why do the more prolific writers gravitate towards seriesfics?

>>31497864
Because you get to build on what you wrote before instead of having to start over all the time.

>>31496856
>hafu edition
>posts image of a quarterfu
mean by this what did he by this what mean did he by mean this what?

>>31497661
What's the other half?

>>31497947
Yeah, you get to build on an idea you've already thoroughly explored. How is that fun?

>>31497959
Pepeloni?

>>31498017
Far from every idea, or set of related ideas, can be thoroughly explored in a chapter-length fic.

>>31498053
Aaaah, I see. You've got a problem with purple prose and tend to take a chapter to write a paragraph?

>>31498078
Yes, just like every writer in history that wrote a book more than 30 pages long.

>>31498093
That's some serious projection, there. I don't think you should attribute your problems to every other writer in history. Please don't reply to me anymore since you aren't taking this seriously.

>>31498125
Come on, you can't beg for replies. That's not how this works, just keep making ridiculous statements about how every book should be as thin as your cock.

>>31498165
Wow, looks like I've hit the nail on the head. You must be really sensitive about your inability to get to the point. What series do you write?

Shut up no one cares..

>>31497864
Because a shallow dive by way of a short story can only explore a little bit, sure it gets out "strong" scenes but sometimes the pool is deep enough that a one-shot does not suffice, sometimes it needs the proper foundation of a series in order to actually explore the idea in a way that's satisfying to write and read.

>>31498219
I care.

>>31498190
None, I was just bored. And now I'm bored again because you're bad at this and went to internet psychology way too quickly. At least keep up the facade of having an actual argument.

>>31498237
Thank you for the concise, informative reply. This is the different between a proper writer and a writer so purple his balls look like grapefruits.

Not even an hour up and the thread is already derailed. I’m going to sleep, this is shit is sad.

>>31498256
So you've realized you argued yourself into a corner, and that you can't come up with anything else. Well, I accept your concession, but why did you even reply if you weren't a series writer? This question wasn't aimed at the plebs.

It's Spiderman time.

>>31498300
>talking about writing
>"derailed"
Try better next time, anon. Or rather, just don't wake up.

>>31498219
>>31498300
I can't wait for this thread to be about stupid bullshit no one cares about. Really shows the fags who do this type of shit have no lives.

So this is pekofag doing his arrogant but ignorant jackass routine right?

>>31498431
I dont know about thread celebrities but I like how >>31498237 and >>31497947 make the same point but he reacted so differently to them

hello /wg/ this is the anon who wrote altare fucking magni's corpse. i am making another. yes, it will be posted here when finished. no, i will not stop. mag/reg is the best when it's violent.
also, im taking your critiques from last time to heart. thank you for those btw.

>>31498431
But you don't understand. His intellect is one that'll be studied for centuries. Vonnegut? Hack. McCarthy? No semicolons. Dick? Too many drugs. Only pekofag's writing remains. He's gunning to be Brazil's only philosopher and will be renowned by his half-monkey countrymen as the only one among them that can structure a sentence properly.

>>31499019
Holy shit, stop fucking egging him on already. You're just as bad as he is for shitting up the thread with this nonsensical bullshit.

>>31499004
How are you going to implement "Damn, son"? I'm really curious.

>>31498431
Woke up 10 minutes ago

>>31498431
I don't think he's done that in a while, Anon.

>>31498495
One was an asshole, one wasn't. Come now, this isn't difficult.

Please be silent, everyone. The jester's back

>>31499019
Throwing out the names of your favorite authors doesn't make them important or you sound any smarter. Au contraire, you just look like a pseud to me.

>>31499590
Says the guy who uses “au contraire” in casual talk.

>>31499057
It's kinda funny. It's like watching an animal at the zoo perform tricks for treats. For the animal it's an important part of their life but for everyone else it's entertainment.

>>31499681
Except you're throwing frogs to the monkey and watching him use them as fleshlights

>>31499670
Too big a phrase for your brainy-wainy?

>>31498429
Honestly, just wait for the next thread to appear. There’s literally no way to salvage this thread.

>>31496926
your daughters, moona and risu, are fighting with each other. as punishment, you make them rub their pussies together until they both cum.

>>31499745
A good compromise might just be saging and not bumping, but I doubt it would really work barring mass cooperation AND the retarded argument taking up too much screenspace.

>>31499758
> t.

>>31499745
t. earlyfag.

>>31499745
>There’s literally no way to salvage this thread.
It genuinely astounds me how terrible /wg/ is at night, what should have been a slow and comfy thread is just full of bullshit from various shitters with nothing better to do. The last thread lasted for two days; I'll be surprised if this thread lasted for one with the pace its going.

>>31499745
>>31499822
I don't think individual threads really make a difference, especially considering each new one is linked in the old. I usually write whenever I don't like how the thread's looking currently, that way I get something positive out of it. Ultimately it's about the stories and not the thread itself, right?

>>31499939
Wrong. It's about the thread.

>>31499876
Isn't Moona Iofi's wife?

>>31500552
Let's be honest not even ID themselves keeps their lore consistent.

>>31500608
They do, and yes >>31500552 Moona is her wife an Risu their child. This has never been questioned or said otherwise unlike >>31500608 implies

>>31496926
Haachama in a very serious situation (something like a funeral or a love confession) that's taken completely seriously in narration and tone but is comedically undercut by Haachama speaking entirely in her ESL English.

>>31501300
>your dad died? ror, rumao

>>31501300
>Ohhh my Godddd!!! Hahaha!! Reallee?? You want to...to be Haachama's boyfriend!!!?? Hahahaha!!

>>31501794
This is the point you just sock her in the gabber and drop your dacks. She's meeting the rest of your family whether she likes it or not.

>>31501964
She was going to say she's very excited and accept, she just has nervous laughs and it sounds mocking.

Just popping in to say I want to FUCK AND IMPREGNATE HAACHAMA. That is all.

>>31496856
>>31496883
Chama's boobs are very BIG.

>>31502160
>That tummy
>Those fat thighs
>That look
>Those sweaty tits peaking out from below her thin shirt
NEED TO BREED THIS CHUBBY BLONDE BIMBO SO BAD AUUUUUGH

>>31496926
Mori drinking late at night alone in a bar. Gets too drunk for her own good, catches the eyes of other drunk patrons and then gets pumped and dumped.

>>31502160
She would eat the baby.

>>31502160
I agree. Fatchama my beloved.

>>31496926
Fatchaama being beset upon by a group of architects to take out all their lust upon her tummy, belly button, thighs, ass, tits...basically everywhere.

>>31502337
This but "pumped and dumped" means she gets talked into making incredibly risky financial investments that nearly immediately fails and leaves her holding the bag.

How are those projects coming along?

>>31503086
I was making a second chapter but dropped it when I realized I actually was making the third chapter.

>>31503086
Drafted out something important that'll finally come up but still haven't written out much of the actual story due to being conflicted as to how I want something to happen/if I want to change some stuff around location wise.

>>31503262
How does that even happen?

>>31503262
kino

>>31503086
Coming along nicely. Managed to break through a block that was giving me particular trouble.

>>31503537
To not spoil anything, it's as if I decided I wanted to buy a candle and then wanted the candle to melt, but instead of slowly describing how I made the purchase and how the candle melted, I just mentioned the candle was already melted.

>>31503086
>Filename
Heh.

>>31503807
So you cut out the filler?

>>31497964
Me. She's my daughter.

>>31496926
Investigating houses that are labeled as aquariums on Google maps with Amelia Watson.

>>31504138
Kek. If I knew anything about Watson, I'd love to write this.

>>31504138
This but You are actually Gura and the second person perspective is used to hide this until the last sentence.

>>31504017
Yes but the filler was integral to the plot and could explore concepts in a way that'd make them seem less out of the left field when properly introduced. Imagine the candle would later unmelt itself and that would be a mystery in the plot. Also imagine that the candle melting was not something you expected when you bought it.

Is this analogy too difficult? I'm sticking to it either way.

>>31504452
It's getting a bit hard to follow, yeah.

>>31504452
What fucking story are you writing? I feel way more invested in it now because of a weird fucking candle analogy. MC Ride should cameo in more stories.

>>31503086
Got some inspiration for the next chapter of Brown Black and Blue so I wrote down the notes. This is going to be deliciously sadistic. I'll need to wake up a little more before I write it though.

>>31504524
You're filling in the mystery with your imagination. It's not that great and I'm pretty certain the reception to it will be lukewarm at best. It's pretty much just something to keep my brain busy while I procrastinate.

>>31504894
Time to go rummaging with the archives to figure out what has had only one chapter published thus far. Your fucking life ends twenty minutes from now.
>>31504746
>Koyori screaming at a limp penis

>>31504187
She's stubborn, resourceful, street-smart, compassionate, probably racist, and has a silver tongue. I'd write it because I love a good conspiracy but I'm in the middle of other projects at the moment.

>>31504982
A loser weeb gets granted one wish by a genie and wishes for a horny Koyori. But when she suddenly shows up he's too nervous to get an erection for 10 minutes, and once he does he cums as soon as her hands touch his penis. Koyori leaves dissapointed and the genie laughs his ass off.

>>31504982
DON'T READ IT

>>31505372
what the fuck

>>31505372
Ah, yes yes, A Deal With The Devil. The candle allegory makes sense now, it's used in a summoning circle. What the FUCK was that Anon

>>31505372
What am I looking at?

>>31505467
>>31505486
>>31505501
It's a pig

>>31505568
A living one might I add. Not as rare as you'd think

>>31504894
Well then looks like you've activated my amateur detective senses.
Because the words second chapter imply that you've at least released a first one.
Assuming you're a writer here.
Let's see there's currently three fics I can think of in the archive that have a first chapter and no sign of continuation where I'm sure it's not authored by a regular writer from her "The Demon, The Elf, and The Cop" , "A Deal With the Devil" , "Diary of a New Life" and "Tortured By A Devil".
Taking a hard guess.
I think you might be the writer of Tortured By a Devil as that's the one fic of those four I can think of that needs more 'foundations' whereas those other fics have gotten their setups done and dusted already... well not the ayame fic but that's not one I'm betting on given that it's about a year since the last update.

>>31505600
Good job detective, you got them all wrong.

>>31505568
Looked like Ted at the end of I Have No Mouth But I Must Scream.

>>31505467
>>31505486
>>31505501
>>31505568
>>31505595
>>31505729
Reversed image search of it and found this video. Look at your own risk. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h0-tyN5J9Zo

>>31505646
kek

>>31505763
Nature can be weird sometimes

>>31505646
Thanks for narrowing it out.
With the red herrings out of the way, the answer has already been revealed.
The fic you're writing a chapter two too is ________Fuck If I Know_______

>>31505646
But how do we know he didn't get it right and you're trying to get him off the right track?

>>31506000
Because you'll see it when I release it

If I release it

>>31506060
That's a weird looking owl.

>>31496926
a young haachama takes a vibrater to school for show and tell and uses it in front of her whole class.

I'm probably imagining it but wasn't there a fic where Matsuri left you in disgust because you ejaculated too early?

>>31510959
Not lore accurate. She would just laugh a lot. A LOT. But she'd want to do it again

>>31510959
This is just spitballing ideas but you may have misremembered an ao3 fic/a caption fic that had a matsuri image as coming from /here/?
I did a quick runthrough of the archive just in case but there is no matsuri fic that runs with that as a concept, or even any premature ejaculation fics at least from what I remember.

>>31496856
Crazy alien fat fucking titties. She has no business being so sexy

>>31511801
As mean as it is, is it wrong that I'd want Matsuri to laugh at my penis?
>>31512141
Its possible I'm just imagining it.... but I do know I seen it before and I remember she had left you in that room in disgust because you ejaculated too early and you feel like an absolute loser that you lost your only chance to get laid.
I'm gonna try and skim through the archives myself.

>>31512760
That does not sound like any fic in the archive.
Are you sure you read it off of a link from here?

>>31512760
>As mean as it is, is it wrong that I'd want Matsuri to laugh at my penis?
Not if there's correction afterwards

>>31512760
I'm vaguely remembering something like that. Maybe it was a prompt?

>>31512760
I don't remember a fic like that but I do remember an Anon requesting a fic where Matsuri cucks you and sends you a video of her getting fucked. Not sure if it got anywhere though.

>>31512760
Wait, I just realized something.
Was this done in prose or in greentext?
That might be the reason I don't remember this.

>>31512760
Matsuri the shota con has a premature ejaculation in it. Though I don't quite remember her leaving you in disgust.

>>31512994
>>31513807
It could have been a prompt as I probably should have said it was never put in the archive with all the other stories, but it might have also been a greentext as well as I do remember it being a wee bit long.
"If" I ever find it I'll paste it here. I wish it just didn't pop in my head when Matsuri popped into my head.
>>31513997
If I remember right there was also a bit where she leads you to a hotel room where she clearly wants to have her way with you and that leads to the preamture ejaculation (or was it tiny dick?) when she pulls down your boxers.

>>31514083
You're misremembering that fic. There's no hotel and the premature ejaculation happens because of paizuri with fubuki.

>>31514083
Okay I checked ao3 for all of their Matsuri fics. Didn't find anything close.
I think this is getting more and more likely to be either a prompt you remember or a fic you dreamt up.

>>31514758
I'll keep looking regardless. I'm in the archive of all the past threads and I've got time to kill.
Thanks for listening though. Hopefully I find it soon.

>>31514746
Wait what fic are you referring to?

>>31514906
Matsuri the Shota Con

>>31502766
So Mori meets tards from /biz/?

I refuse to believe that in over 1K fics not 1 anon made a fic where a chuuba mocks you for being premature. I get it that you live the best life you didn't have through fics but goddamn

What keyword do I even use to search for premature in Japanese sites anyway?

This thread edition is very fitting now that Haachama is showing off her underwear on stream.

>>31515878
That's disgusting

>>31515926
Just like eating a spider, I guess

>>31515382
That fic didn't have a paizuri.

>>31515838
早漏

>>31504138
I've been with my wife for 10 years now. We met in high school, and I got her pregnant. She is and always has been a lazy person and a shit cook. I wouldn't even mind eating shit food if she at least made it on time. But she rarely did.

We'd get into screaming arguments constantly about how lazy and worthless she was. I felt like an asshole for it, but goddamn she was a real piece of work. The only reason I dealt with all this was for the kids, and also because the sex is great.

But one night, I got fed up. Not only did she get drunk, neglect the kids, and made me top Ramen for dinner, but she decided to give me attitude too. She was being real fucking bitchy. So I told my grandparents to keep an eye on the kids and told my wife we were going to go out and have dinner together. I drove maybe 3 blocks to a quiet area (we live in Oregon, it's not hard to find a quiet field) and I got out of the car, went around like I was going to open her door for her and let her out, and I just beat the shit out of her while she was still seatbelted. After a few punches, I asked her if she wanted to go back to her parents. She started screaming and yelling and said yes, so I beat the shit out of her again. Then I asked her what she wanted to do. She finally got smart and said she wanted to go home. So I took her home and dared her to start trouble. I even handed her my cellphone and dialed her mom's number on the drive home. I made her talk to her mom, while daring her to fucking say something.

Before that incident, I had never laid a hand on her. But I had always threatened it. I told her "one of these days, if you don't straighten up, I'm going to lay hands on you."

All my meals have been on time, and she just recently tried to make a meatloaf. It was mediocre, but I was just thrilled that she tried.

Do with this information what you will.

>>31516403
> 5 results in Pixiv
It's over...

I know that Vtuber aren't real and all but... AGHHHH IWANT A HACHAAMA GIRLFRIEND GOD WHY PLEASE WHY MUST I SUFFER LIKE THIS HOW MANY WHORES DO I HAVE TO GO THROUGH TO FIND A HACHAAMA????

>>31517415
>54.4kg
Chubbychama bros...d-did we...lose?

>>31517415
Go back in time to when she was in Australia and deflower her.

>>31517486

>>31517415
God she's so fucking hot

>>31517415
I need to-
>>31517579
I NEED TO FUCK HER! I'LL DO ANYTHING! I'LL KILL ANY MEAN I JUST NEED THIS BITCH ON MY FUCKING COOOOOCK AAAAAAAAAAA I'M GOING INSANEEEEE

>>31517486
>>31517579
She'd have to be less than 1,50CM for her to even classify as slightly overweight on BMI scale. Accept it, you've lost

>>31517486
Apparently according to haatons she said she was 62.3kg during her time in Australia but she was bullied for it so she went on a diet

>>31517909
THEY LOST TO EMUS WHO CARES WHAT THEY THINK

>>31518461
I wish Haato got raped by an emu...

>>31519912
Time to google what an emu dick looks like.

>>31496926
Matsuri getting embarrassed about being too sensitive and orgasming with very little stimulation. With you lightly teasing her about it.

Bump

Autosage?

>>31522859
No.

I like this image

>>31524471
... I wouldn't mind letting her get her grubby drunken paws on me.

Cute ojou

>>31525220
Fuck off

>>31525249
What's wrong?

>>31525459
Your streaming schedule, you lazy whore

>>31525511
The commie fears the sigma oni

>>31525459
My wife during our wedding night.

>>31525616
Sigma balls you damn dirty Oni

>>31528334
this but with my balls

>>31528508
She can gobble both, anon. No need to fight

>>31525459
>>31525616
JUST STREAM ALREADY YOU DUMB WHORE

>>31517909
Girl's being bullied into weightloss is weirdly hot to me

I was gonna bump with nice lewds but Pixiv file type is webp or something so none of that

>>31533293
webp file format makes me violent

webp is great, much like webm. It just takes time to be implemented everywhere.

>this entire thread

>>31535848
As long as the posts have a nice image attached

writing is fun

I wanted to write today but dog hort. Please undastan

> haachama is aiming for 45kg
Oh no no architect bros, what a devastating defeat

>>31496926
cover offices have a strict dress code of no clothes at all, and sex is mandatory multiple times a day.

>>31549839
Sounds like my gay uncles house

What are some of the most extreme smut here? And don't shill scat, it's been recommended so often it's not funny anymore

>>31551125
Pretty much the examples of "extreme smut" I can think from our archives are Lies come to Light and the insect sex fics. Suppose the two beast fics also count but those aren't really made for fapping. Other than that, you might want to look at the fetish threads and their archives.

>>31551504
how well is beast received around /here/ anyway

>>31551612
There's a few people here that I think like it but the fics that have been posted either aren't that good or turned into a fucking joke so I can't really say

>>31551612
Similar to other extreme fetishes, I think it's just one guy who really likes it.

>>31551806
>>31551918
I ask because I'm /wg/ newfag and if it'd be received enough I might take a stab at it

>>31552055
what animal?

>>31552172
dog or wolf
idk with who though

>>31552202
i think the most obvious thing would be with a dog or wolf chuuba.

>>31552267
nah, too predictable

>>31552323
maybe you could do some kind of predator/prey thing. a chuuba thinks she's gonna get eaten by her natural predator, but she gets raped instead.

>>31552055
Bestiality's neither here nor there for me but I'd definitely be interested in reading it were you going to produce it. My suggestion'd be Nene gets a pet dog, and whilst getting changed it licks her down-there spot. At this point you could have some comedically absurd rape as the dog overpowers her a la Old Yeller, or just have her get turned on and kick things up a notch or ten.

That, or literally anything with Fubuki.

>>31552425
eh. my preferred beast scenarios are the ones where the girl's super into it. so maybe one of the super horny or animal lover chuubas.
for some reason my brain's gravitating towards choco, akiro, mel, or lui

>>31551612
People were pretty fine with it when the two beast fics got posted, but then again those two fics weren't really smutty.
>>31552202
Honestly even if it's predictable sometimes something low concept is the best for a smut fic.
...
Also because the idea of Mio going out to the forest to finally get bred after not finding success in the world of humans sounds pretty hot.

Think I got a decent idea in mind. Someone passes off their dog to Choco for an attempt at veterinary services(with the reasoning being like "you can take care of people so you can take care of animals too right?"), and she gets a little too into "healing" him
Simple and effective

>>31553374
Go nuts, nigger

>>31497864
Series fics have more time spent with characters to make you care for them more and longer plots generally have more time for set up, development and intricacy. Also seeing the same characters/groups grow together and slowly have more meaningful interactions over time is something I personally like to see.

>>31553086
Not a fan of rapey beasts or beast NTR?

>>31553937
Nah, my preferred stories are "just curious what it's like" ones, or ones where they already just really like it
NTR ones could be good if it falls into one of those two categories as well though

>>31515838
I’m writing a premature ejaculation fic right now, but she comforts you instead.

>>31553086
Why Lui?

>>31554709
That's what the "for some reason" is there for, man
idk why I just think it'd be hot if she specifically got knotted

>>31554781
How dare you do this to my oshi. Fuck yourself.

>>31554907

>>31554781
Why would the bird woman not have sex with a bird instead?

>>31554990
because I don't find bird sex hot and I'm writing the story

>>31554990
...Their size, generally. Unless you want her to get fucked by a vulture or a giant condor or some shit.

>>31555065
>Lui stuffing an entire rainbow lorikeet up her coochie

>>31556202
How would Lui's eggs taste?

>>31556202
>Lui unbirthing her bird mascots
Hot?

>>31556896
High fat content, so quite greasy.

alright fuck I'm done with writing noel/shota magni /ss/, my first story for this board
I'm probably gonna share it here as a draft, get some feedback and see if there are any small changes I could make, then publish it somewhere more official like on Ao3
now someone tell me how the fuck I share this without doxxing myself

>>31557473
Just insert it into google docs and post the edit link.

>>31557550
walk me through it I'm a retard and I'm NOT giving anyone here a link that'd give them my email

>>31557650
Take your story, paste it into a google doc. Then, copy the link from the address bar and post it here. Easy.

aren't you supposed to publish it first? i've never used it before so it's not like i know anything, but i feel like you're skipping a step. and a few other people have leaked their emails here trying to show off their writing by doing something slightly wrong in google docs.

>>31557860
yeah I figured that out and also figured out that the fucker was trying to get me to leak my email

>>31557889
>not using a throwaway
Kinda deserved it desu

>>31557889
lol

>>31496883
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQKkmh7nA8SV8P3dIxY4WrFqXsnpt7ItZDGQh2xZGSzBuIKI23xANSuK92gWLF0TuU8XLSi39ErYsg0/pub
Tags: straight shota, shotadom, drugging, ntr

Story about Magni Dezmond from Tempus, as a 10 year old boy, drugging Noel with aphrodisiac potions and fucking the shit out of her
Have ideas for more chapters so I'll probably write some
if there's any glaringly simple issues or easy fixes I could write in they'd be appreciated.

>>31558177
Okay, before I even try to read it - spacing, motherfucker. You've got paragraphs, which is good, but no line spacing. As a result, your story still looks like a block of text.

>>31558396
did i just seeing someone advocate for redditspacing on my board?

>>31558396
thought 1.5 would be enough
switched it to double

>>31558177
heh, nice title.

>>31558475
Not that line spacing; space between paragraphs.

>>31558574
Shoulda said paragraph spacing then you dumb nigger. I agree though, this shit is eye cancer

>>31558597
I thought it would be obvious.

>>31558574
>>31558597
fixed

>>31558664
Perfect. I'll read it.

>>31558177
Very impressive. I can't say Noel felt particularly in-character at the start, but that's not so much a bother to me as it might be one of Noel's fans.
You've got quite a handle on dialogue. It's expressive, context-appropriate and flows smoothly from one scene to another, and best of all - it's plentiful. I also didn't spot any mistakes, but then again, I was engrossed to the point I forgot to even check.
I thoroughly enjoyed the set-up to your universe and I'd like to read more of that. Not necessarily smut, either.
The smut itself is quite well-written, with a great deal of emphasis on descriptive imagery. I can't give much objective criticism, though, as the proportions given became comical in my mind; Magni's disproportionately-sized shota dong somehow evolved and economy of scale and Noel's tits ballooned to match them in my mind. At that point, any hope of taking it seriously disappeared, but that's a purely subjective view.
Very good quality fic.

>>31559554
sick
I'll see if I can keep the size down a little

>>31558177
Damn anon this is really nice. I dont watch Magni at all so I have no idea if he is represented properly, but Noel seems pretty good although a bit too competent whereas she always struck me as airheaded.
The smut is fucking hot. We really lack for good /ss/ fics and this is one of the better ones. Thanks for the good read

>>31559801
I shoulda mentioned I fucking squirted dick juice all over my legs reading this. Good stuff

>>31559831
>I fucking squirted dick juice all over my legs

>>31559801
I kind of tried to do an opposite thing with magni here, real magni on the outside seems like a huge chad but is actually hilariously a cowardly idiot. shotamag on the outside is an innocent cute boy but is actually a dominant demon. ol' switcharoo kind of thing

>>31556896
The real question is when does Lui lay eggs?
Does she lay them as soon as she's pregnant or does the fetus develop a bit before spending the rest of the time as an egg?

>delete old ao3 account so I can make a new one with a different username that's not connected to my usual socials
>have to request an account
>it's going to take 2 weeks
guess I'm not posting it there any time soon

>>31560534
You know you can make pseudonyms or hell make your fics fully anonymous on ao3 right?
https://archiveofourown.org/faq/pseuds?language_id=en

>>31560534
2 weeks is pretty quick for an AO3 account

>>31560639
no I didn't
too late now
lmfao

catto

>>31558177
You know, I guess I could drop this here too
Here's a pose I made in Koikatsu that inspired me to write this in the first place
https://files.catbox.moe/zdrqru.png
(there's also an animation but it's SUPER rough, so idk if I even want to post it)

>>31561169
>I can paste the images in my stories
well fuck I know what I'm doing tomorrow

>>31561325
I think it's better to leave links as whole images in the middle of it can break the flow hardcore.

>>31561721
NTA but there's no fucking way I'm going to click on a link in the middle of a story and divert my attention elsewhere, leave the image in the story or go home

>>31561755
How can you be this autistic but also have no sense of formatting

>>31561831
I could ask you the same thing

>>31561957
>Image that breaks up a huge block of text
vs
>Blue link so you admire the picture normally without it being squished into a g. doc or taking up a HUGE portion of a rentry page
You already bothered to middle click the story you dumb faggot, why are you purposefully trying to make the reading experience worse? This isn't a book where you can devote a whole page to art, something is going to suffer.

>>31562176
>image that doesn't break flow and can simply be scrolled past
>link that you scroll past at your own loss as it is impossible to tell what is in there without breaking concentration by clicking it diverting your attention off-tab
You are retarded and if it weren't for the fact you're into vtubers, I'd be scared for your surrounding gene pool

>>31561957
>>31562176
christ, both of you calm down
I'll figure something out tomorrow
probably see if I can make it an embed link or something

>>31562289
Wow, you're a retard.

>>31562360
No u

>>31562289
Actual idiot, here's another good reason to not have a fucking image in the middle of the fucking story. You wanna talk about diverting attention? How about this? Wow, suddenly there's a shitload of color that wasn't here a minute ago that, now that it's on my screen, is purposefully dragging my eyes away from the flow of the story!

>>31562419
That's not out of place at all and you can just scroll past it
But I'm talking with someone genuinely autistic so there's no real point in trying to discuss anything

>>31562300
Well there's that new gdocs feature that lets you have borderless documents that could let you get away with having the full image not get squished. Though I'm not sure if that transfers over for gdocs publishing. I haven't really experimented with gdocs usage outside of like basic formatting.

i've never seen someone get so mad over image placement before

>>31562457
The image will still be in your periphery as your reading the next lines though. Why not avoid the situation entirely?

I said shut the fuck up, I'll figure it out

>>31562516
Because most non-autistic people want to see the image without diverting attention to tell instantly if it's relevant to their interests
Not click a funny link and navigate to a new tab for a random chance of the image being interesting
I would not click on shitty koikatsu images

>>31562419
Honestly I could see something like that working if you're going down the route of hypertext fiction and already including elements of sound and visuals into the work but yeah in traditional web fiction something like that wouldn't really work in the middle of a sex scene... Though perhaps it might work if it was pre-sex as a deliberate flow break.

Can someone briefly skim through the first few paragraphs of Present Day, Present Time: koro and tell me if the image is distracting at all? I think that'll be a good way to end the debate.

>>31562756
When the image is used very early on it's not that bad, like >>31562651 says. It leads with it, you see it, it sets a scene for the rest of the story. If you just drop it in the middle of the fucking story it would definitely become a lot more distracting.

>>31562516
>periphery
Just scroll down so it's no longer on your screen??

>>31562856
>The story is above and below the image due to it being slammed in the center with no regard for formatting
>Just skip the story until it's gone lol!

>>31562516
How big is your phone screen?

So what about linking to music?

>>31562956
i always skip that shit, mostly because it's cringe

>>31562890
Are you retarded? I'm starting to see what the other guy's talking about. To read the text above just position the screen so the image is barely off screen below, then scroll to see the image, observe, then scroll down past it so it's just barely off screen above.

>>31562890
>>31563028

>>31562999
The story's already cringe, so I'll do it anyway.

>>31562908
>implying im a phonefag

>>31562956
I like music in stories, and would like to see it done more often. I’m pretty sure most Anons who put music in their fics link a YouTube video.

>>31563028
1: You're a screenlet, I have no idea how you're hiding that. It's front and center as soon as you open the story - and, if you need to put in an image, that's 100% the best way to do it.
2: I already said that Koro's way of doing it isn't nearly as fucking distracting as dropping one or several more way lower.

This thread degenerated quickly over asinine bullshit.

>>31563133
The earlyfag works in mysterious ways.

>>31563133
They're being very stupid about it, but the topic of images and music in stories is decent in itself. Let's see whether the other guy is countering "screenlet" with "fontsizelet".

>>31563133
I regret saying anything

>>31563121
>screenlet,
This is so fucking retarded at this point I'm sure you're this idiot>>31497864 coming back for another round.

>>31563213
I have no issue with the music, it's the whole argument about image placement that's bothering me.

>>31562756
Phonefag here, it works as is even with the image squished.
Honestly this probably isn't a good comparison since that /ss/ pic isn't exactly a scenesetter unlike that okakoro pic.

>>31563240
But it's the truth. That was me opening the story and viewing it as it's intended in the published document in a separate tab by itself. The fact he could hide the image from his view entirely means it was either zoomed way the fuck in or he's on a screen that allows him to do so. That would work FOR HIM specifically and only him.

I just run on light novel logic. LNs have art spreads in them all the time.

>>31563402
In fairness light novels have pages that space things out, unless you exclusively read your light novels on the high seas in which case it is kind of similar.

>>31563133
I just hope it’s just one fag throwing a tantrum and not multiple people.

>>31562956
An extension to this question, theoretically if instead of being linked the sound/music just played seamlessly would that be better or worse?

>>31563402
Books should bring back wood-engravings. Those are cool.

>>31563831
How would you manage that? Especially if music was meant to play at a pivotal moment?

>>31563831
worse. Just give readers an option if they want to listen to the music.

>>31563831
Generally speaking, unless you're going for an interactive visual novel, with timed text and sound shifts, music only detracts from the story, because it won't match the timing correctly.

>>31562956
>>31563831
Why do you guys even want music? All its going to do is distract the readers.

>>31563853
Fucking around with Twine, there's a way to have music play when the user clicks the link to the proper scene.
Of course this is all reliant on the fic being a thing the reader has to download since it would be playing it via the browser accessing a file relative to the fic's location.

>>31564115
Mood music

>>31564156
Yeah, and I said it will distract the readers.

>>31564156
If you need music to get your reader in the right mood, your story is shit.

>>31564115
To act as background music or use to use sound effects to accentuate a scene.

>>31564131
I know nothing about Twine, but surely you could pull binary blobs from a server, store them in memory and manipulate them with JS without touching the filesystem.

>>31564115
Mood music to fit the atmosphere, or battle music. But if you're going to get distracted just don't click it?

>>31564281
This. Giving people the choice is important. I'd be curious to see TwineAnon's take though. I've been excited to see what they've been up too.

>>31564176
...Or some people just enjoy listening to music while reading as it enhances the experience? Why the fuck are you even complaining? There's not a single fic in the archive that has automatic music, it's all optional.

>>31564281
>But if you're going to get distracted just don't click it?
I misread the entire situation, I thought it was something that was going to be forced, if its optional, do whatever.

>>31564352
>There's not a single fic in the archive that has automatic music
How amazing would it be if one of the scat fics played the brown note when you opened it.

>>31564428
kek

>>31564428
>Fic automatically plays the brown note.
>Entire fic is about the aftermath of chuuba shitting their pants.
Kino?

>>31564389
No you're understanding it right. The first question was about links leading to optional music. The second question was about automatically playing music.

>>31564589
>The second question was about automatically playing music.
A bad idea, just make it optional.

>>31564729
I think we can all agree on that.

>>31563402
They have a page dedicated to that illustration, hard to do on a fanfic.

>>31563631
It is

>>31564487
I’m not into scat, and I’m fairly certain neither is the rest of this general, so no.

>>31564487
I can appreciate the artistic value, but I wouldn't read it.

>>31564487
Absolutely kino, would read that in a heartbeat.

>>31565536
this

>>31565124
I mean in theory having it done via links would emulate pages somewhat.

>>31565762
Going to be honest, unless the link is from Imgur or other image hosting sites that are trust worthy. I ain’t clicking.

>>31565815
Don't know why the author wouldn't use imgur. Pretty fast and convenient.

>>31565947
Catbox exists?

>>31565965
I don't personally use Catbox, but if its trusted sure.

>>31565815
>>31565947
>clicking on another link just for a image.
At that point, the inclusion of the image is a hassle.

>>31565815
No I mean it links to another document with the image as the header so the new image doesn't "break flow" like that one anons says.

>>31566135
Ah, that makes more sense. And more practical since it won’t ruin the reading experience.

I don't think there's one objectively correct answer to this. We're just talking ourselves in circles.

>>31566254
Yeah, but it does make for good discussion.

>>31566254
Yes, which is why you should all bow down and accept my word as fact

>>31496926
Gawr Gura ties you to a bed and uses Atlantean dolphin pussy jelly to force you to coom your brains out inside her for hours, then uses the threat of crying rape to keep you from reporting her as she does it again and again for weeks, leaving you a broken husk

>>31566450
this except instead of gura or some other disgusting EN it's literally anyone else

New thread
>>31566366

> wake up
> 150 posts
/wg/ isn't dea-
> it's all shit posting and bickering
It's over

>>31566254
I mean I think this is sort of a 'blind men describing an elephant' situation where everyone is sort of right from their perspective and no one really has the objective truth for how to integrate multimedia into web fiction.

>>31566811
Fair.

>>31566811
It's a writing general why do we need multimedia

>>31567112
Because if art and music CAN be incorporated into a story, the question arises of whether it should, and how best to do it.

>>31567112
Art when used correctly is cool. Music in certain scenes can be great to accentuate action. Even VNs which are primarily reading have music and stuff to help set up a scene. The real meat and potatoes of what you're interacting with is still reading/writing.

>>31567258
Then that'd make this a manga general or an anime general

LUNA RAPE

>>31567292
That's quite the leap.

>>31567345
You WRITE a light novel, you DRAW a manga, you ANIMATE an anime, you LISTEN to an audiobook. Which one of these apply? Do you hate writing so much you can't do with it alone? Then what are you doing here?

>>31567401
Did you know light novels also have images in them?

>>31567401
How does someone miss the point this badly?

>>31567401
>your stories must have only writing and nothing else or else you hate writing
Anon, there's no polite way to say this. You're an idiot.

>>31567401
>yeah I like adding optional music to my stories, just something extra for people to listen to if they want. It's no big deal.
>NOOOOOOOOOO!!!11!!!1! YOU CAN'T DO THAT REEEEEEEE
If you don't want images or music to accompany your writing, then don't put them in. There is zero reason to freak out when others do.

>>31567401
>you DRAW a manga, you ANIMATE an anime, you LISTEN to an audiobook.
Anon...
All three of those still need to have their plot written.

>>31567734
You write the plot. If you want to draw about what you wrote later, we have a drawthread.

>>31567401
>ID
Shut up.

>>31567956
That's Anya

>>31567956
> ID
Surely you mean JP?

>>31567878
>>31567571

I see the long-nosed master financiers have sunk their talons into this thread, too.

>>31568298
What the hell do goblins have to do with anything?

>>31568487
They keep posting about raping Luna every thread.

>>31568487
The jews, son. The stinking kikes.

>>31568760
Goblins are actually quite nice, I don't think you should judge us based on their culture. Rape is like giving hugs to them. Honestly, it's kind of racist for you to denounce them for it

>>31569043
if hating goblins is racist i'm racist

>>31569694
Same, but for elfs

>>31569869
ELFS?

>>31569900
Plural or elv

>>31570032
> or
Of

>>31569869
elves are for raping goblins are for murdering glad we can agree

>>31570131
Let goblins rape elves and murder them together in their dens

>>31570170
no goblins get nothing
elves are human fuckmeat ONLY but NOT for loving which is why noel is a traitor and held in the stockades

>>31570421
Noel rapes Flare all the time. It's Stockholm Syndrome relationship you fool

Luna futa rape wins

>>31572430
Normal Luna rape, please.

futa luna rape wins

>>31572530
I rape you for shit taste

just came to mori's mom

>>31572646
POV you're mafumafu.