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>>28040968
Note: Sana died on the way back to her home planet

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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Brown, Black and Blue Because I Love You: Chapter 2 tags: Flare, Noel, Lamy, abuse:>>27924599

Ina's Back: Tags: NSFW, Ina:>>27930754

Anya fic: Tags: Anya:>>27941695

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Kidnapping and torturing Aqua to force her to go back to streaming:>>27938624

Reine writing fanfics but those fanfics become reality, and she starts writing Yuri fanfics of her fellow Holos that gradually get more and more detailed and graphic.:>>27962114

A fic about hosing down Fubuki to get rid of the smell.:>>27984901

Helping Kanata move into her new place.:>>28009910

Due to an extreme lack of personal hygiene related to a previous incident in which she was raped by a stranger wielding a garden hose, Fubuki has managed to become one of the rare modern cases of bubonic plague victims.:>>28021264

Milking Mio and Botan.:>>28025693

>Stealthily groping Botan's body under the pretense of "helping" her stretch her body.>>28035977

I desperately want to be chained to a rock akin to Prometheus by a hot chuuba only for her to eat my liver while I'm still alive.:>>28037827

I really enjoyed Fucking Fubuki in her Ass.

>>28041183
>Ina's Back
A shame I missed this last thread, that was real good.

>>28041569
This

>>28042430
God bless that second of the model turning around. Such a divine back

>>28041183
As hilarious as someone stumbling across that fic because the only tag is "Anya" would be, the more detailed tags for Archive Anon based on the wording I saw in your archive are: Anya, Ollie, Risu, Reine, Iofi, NSFW, bondage, watersports, sweat/scent, brap. Also it was called 'ID Punishment Game' in the /ringo/ archive, but I think that name was made up.

>>28041034
Anything about Olivia.

>>28044218
>The only tag is 'Anya'
Legitimately got scared I did this before I realized you were referring to the recap. I'll update it with the proper (these) tags when I wake up in a few hours.

Hey, writer of that Gura incest story here.

I realize the corner I had wrote myself in and I feel like it's only natural to allow the voting fall down to (you).

>keep going with the plotline
>backtrack and redo Chapter 2 without Mori
>rewrite Chapter 1 and make it a oneshot.

>>28047123
Without Mori. Fuck her. I refuse to read anything with her in it even if Gura is my oshi

>>28047123
I'd say keep going.

My only gripe with your work is the "too fast" pace of the scenes.

>>28047123
You could drop her out of the story going forward, if you want to. Writing new stuff is more important than re-writing the old before you even have one complete version. You can always do reworks or write alternate versions later, unless the plotline absolutely requires her and she can't be replaced by someone else. Then you have to make that decision now, of course.
If you think you're in a corner because you included Mori, don't be too worried about the 1-2 people bringing the Mori hate meme here - they're obsessed, but can't help it.

>>28047581
>If you think you're in a corner
No, I'm in a corner because of Mori.

It's more the fact that the next chapter will involve Ina but then I realized that it'd probably be impossible to Ebi to basically teleport from Gura's place to Ina's place, even with the idea that she's staying in a hotel because of that video game tournament.

>>28047832
It would feel convenient for Ina to stay nearby, but I don't think it would harm the story much. That Gura is fucking her cousin alongside Mori and someone's filming it is already far in the realm of fantasy, you don't have to adhere to where the talents would likely live or stay irl.

>>28048036
Huh, yeah in retrospect, that does make sense.

Alright, continuing on the trainwreck until there's nothing left with the train.

>>28041034
The classic "teacher/superior brings you in for extra credit and uses her authority to fuck/humiliate you."

>>28044914
>>28049685
Olivia could be either the teacher or the student.

I'm wondering if you guys have anything you might want to see in one of my ryona fics as far as physical abuse. I've got one idea for the FlarexNoel story but I want that one to be a surprise. Anything you'd like to see?

>>28041569
>>28042432
Glad you enjoyed it, but why? What possessed you to read such a pile of overwritten, badly formatted word vomit?

>>28051626
The title was informative and enticing, and it started right where I want to be

>>28047123
Personally, I'd start reading it again if you got rid of Mori.

>>28050432
I could go for anything involving tits. Slapping, pinching, pulling, squeezing...

>>28051697
The title's one of the few things I'm pleased with. Thanks, anon.

>>28050432
Sadism in general. I love a character who "whistles whilst they work", so to speak. Moreso if their victim doesn't deserve it in the slightest. Mental abuse is great; gaslighting and rule by fear are wonderful.

Are people here just into nsfw stuff? I'm having creative writing classes soon and I figured I could use some practice, do yall provide feedback? I dont exactly read alot of books and my grammar sucks (ESL), but I figure I woudlnt mind writing a short tragedy doompost about gura

>>28052049
Can't go wrong with fucking, or ass, or Fubuki.

>>28051697
NTA, but despite being hella verbose, that fic had a simple promise and it delivered well on it, and that's honestly enough for me to like a fic

>>28052602
There's almost an equal split between NSFW and SFW fics. Most of the casual conversation is dominated by NSFW talk. If you'd enjoy writing it, feel free to post it. Yes, most of us provide some form of feedback.

>>28052602
>yall
Jesus, but to answer your question this thread does provide feedback and isn't only nsfw.

>>28053095
nta but as a guy who's only lived in the southern united states his whole life I hate that people now assume I'm some retarded moral crusader if I say such a natural word for myself

>>28053274
>retarded moral crusader
Nta but I don't assume you're some variant of SJW, just inbred

>>28053274
It also sucks because ya'll is a good substitute for the second person plural but now it is forever ruined.

>>28051805
FWIW, she's not in the next chapter.

>>28053637
So long as she isn't mentioned, I'd be down to read again

>>28052602
If your story is especially good or bad you'll get a lot of feedback, even. SFW or NSFW doesn't matter much, NSFW is just more talked about because the prompts for it are more evocative by nature - and it's easier to have a little collaborative storytelling in the thread when it's about smut.

>>28053885
Nothing better than spitroasting a slag with the lads.

>>28053059
I'll cook up some stuff and probably get shred to pieces then, better here than by my profs I guess.

>>28053623
Sorry for appropriating the word I wasn't aware of other meanings than second person plural. I kinda learned most of my english from twitch (I know terrible) and some Texan streamers use the word frequently enough for me to have picked it up over the years...

>>28054116
We'll be a lot more honest than your profs, at least. The worst feedback you can get is silence, though if you're writing about Gura you'll probably get at least one or two bites.

>>28053095
Fuck y'all it is a useful word. Who the fuck types "you all". Fucking autists.

>>28054814
ok, autismo

>discover cover high peko prankster yesterday
>finish chapter 5 to find out its not finished

How old is this fic and is it a never ever? the archive doesn't seem to show upload dates.

>>28055739
It's a never-ever. Last upload on the series was Christmas, I think, and sporadic before that. Dude was more interested in ritual posting and mental health blogging than actual writing.

>>28055898
I figured. Thanks for the confirmation though. It was a rad ride while it lasted.

Also if the fine architect is here who wrote My Girlfriend Omaru Polka, that shit was awesome. You're a gentlemen and a scholar, best bit of architecture content I ever read. It really spelled out some of the reasons I'm into bigger girls, I never really put it into words and just accepted it.

>>28054116
It's not your fault, anon. Many things were taken from the south by the north and this is just another one.

>>28051975
>>28052373
I will take note for coming chapters. Thanks.

>>28056095

>>28041034
Impregnating a gen of chuubas and sticking them into milking machines till they break from pleasure.

>>28042430
I just read that too, pretty hot.

>>28055739
I think the last proper chapter was a year ago, maybe a little less. We last saw him in the thread about half a year ago IIRC and he said he’d definitely finish it, but then again nothing is holding him here to write fan fiction for random strangers on the internet, nor is he obligated to tell us he’s leaving/giving up so I’ll put my bets on a never-ever, even though I hope someday he’ll return.

>>28058810
I hope he returns some day too. I gotta know if peko gets tried for prank crimes.

>>28058810
>>28059185
Isn't he the "stay motivated" poster in every thread?

>>28052602
SFW, NSFW, I'll read either if it seems interesting.

>>28054814
>Who the fuck types "you all"
No one. You type "you guys."

>>28056095
Reconstruction should have kept going for a few more decades.

>>28059291
No idea, im a newfag to these actual threads, but I've been slowly getting to some of the archived stories since I found To be 17 again.

>>28059291
He stopped doing that.
Now it's only a ritual post that's done by other people.
Get Motivated!

>>28059459
Not to sound pedantic but in Latin the second person plural is translated as either you all or ya'll.

>>28059646
So he's dead?

>>28055739
It's being worked on as of recently. More free time to devote to writing, and getting caught up on HF has helped me remember how words work after the dry spell. The rest of the story is all mapped out, so if I ever do actually throw in the towel, I'll post an abridged version so anons can at least know how it ends. But that's not happening today. Thank you for your patience.

>>28060281
>It's being worked on as of recently.

>>28060197
Yes, his fighter plane got shot down over Ukraine and now only his Digital Ghost exists; slowly breaking down into garbage data.

>>28060843
The Digital Ghost of Kyiv...

>>28060843
God, I wish I was breaking down into garbage data...

>>28060281
Hey guys, is this that archive guy? Is he really responsible for all 5 series?

>>28060952
No, that anon is saying that they "caught up on HF", meaning they've finished reading up to the most recent chapter, not that they wrote HF.

>>28060952
No, everyone just reads everyone else's works here and uses them as inspiration. It's a feedback loop we've got - reading other works inspires you to write, which inspires others to do the same.

Except for a certain brazilian.

>>28061049
Stop replying to bait, you fucking retard.

>>28060952
Yes and no, that anon's ghost isn't directly responsible for creating HF but the tapeworm that crawled up all of their asses eventually chained its way to the Archivist.

>>28059663
I think that's irrelevant, not pedantic? We're discussing English, not Latin.

>>28061142
>Except for a certain brazilian.
Can he double jump?

>>28060281
Nice

>>28061151
>jokes count as bait

>>28061210
Take the wormpill and give yourself coffee enemas. Trust me, I've read it on /x/ and they wouldn't lie, right?

I've decided to put in the effort and read everything in the archive. In the interest of pursuing discussion, and the fact that every fandom needs an underqualified, overconfident reviewer, I will also be posting my ratings in the google doc below. Please reread the fics and disagree with me at your leisure.

As a side note, I will mostly be avoiding the series directory for now, since they'll take too much time per story, and greentexts, since they are what they are.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS8N9BKdNt4Umgi0nDTulXAv2qxteeMs3JzRYAj3VqLTxECEqLguQOIZfP_7OOxAE6eupK7E9O-W7rt/pub

Imagine landing on Sana's hairy bush. The absolute stench of it all. Having the various rivers be her sweat. I'm now hard

>>28063250
Godspeed... I guess?

>>28063250
See you in a few months

>>28063250
good luck anon!

>>28063250
>and greentexts, since they are what they are.
I mean, I feel like greentexts are a legitimate medium in their own right, but you do you.

>>28063250
Good luck!

>>28063924
I didn't mean that they were all bad, just that I'm less equipped for writing about it, since they all tend to be shorter than the prose-based stories

>>28063250
I'm actually hoping you see this through. Underqualified and overconfident though you may be, constructive feedback is always welcome. It shows that you've read and enjoyed the work. Besides, that more or less sums up most of us, too.

>>28060281
Rad to hear

>>28064133
Ah, that's really understandable. I get the "I don't really grok this, so I'll just not say anything" approach all too well.

>>28063250
I'll be waiting for my stories and my stories alone to receive ten times the effort into the review, and that none of them will be below 9.9/10

Don't disappoint me, anon.

>>28063250
rather based, don't give up!

>>28064133
if the reason greentexts are hard to review is just becuase their so short, wouldn't it make sense to read them all and just only bother mentioning the ones you have somthing to say about? just a thought.

>>28063250
What are you counting as a series, anything specifically in that directory, or things of X length that comprise of chapters?
As an aside I think it would be useful to hyperlink the stories in the review, although that's just an artifact of wiki autism so do whatever you want.

>>28065847
I'm already reading them all so I may very well do that.

>>28065988
I'm more referring to things in the series archive longer than three chapters. In the case of things like Omelas, I'll just review them together.

>>28041034
Through a serious of hilarious misunderstandings and screwups Myth end up the owners of Cover

>>28044914
Slow and progressive first-time smut onegai

>>28044914
Aside from the obvious romance fic with undertones of a future tragedy, how would you use Olivia in a fic?

>>28065354
that reaction image is deeply unsettling

>>28069332
NTRing or being NTR'd by Cebo

>>28069500

>>28069332
Flashbacks in a fic where you have to take care of her now reanimated self who can barely remember who you are and has no idea what she herself used to be like.

>>28040968
And here we have chapter 4 of Gura's Cousin.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ8H720HBWnwxDqLYDmyPgs_DwPlzmoYlHB-pFh--QDS739NBJ7zMOcJ3u3IcVUmYCqAT48hic0Mo2N/pub

>>28069332
I mean, I'd go full crazy multiverse bullshit.

Man with the new L2D for 1st gen, we need more stories of them getting fucked behind the model while they are streaming with the only indication being that they're moving back and forth on the stream with heart eyes randomly showing up.

>>28070636
Wait, where's 3? Also, since you've done this much, give me a series descriptor for the series archive.

>>28071021
Fubuki when I give her a new pair of glasses.

>>28071111
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSomBziNY2sPLhH8dyPK-V1QZnnd6Q8k7PIeCmZ3JEl47s_cItl9VYZDAvwEQ4MVH2JuSgHAZUII--g/pub
(Mori warning)

The description for this series:

"Gura's cousin, Ebi, felt so ashamed in realizing he had masturbated to her. However, when he comes over to have one last reunion with her, the lingering feelings of affection for his cousin and the lust he had for her avatar creates a whirlwind of sex, drama, and incest."

>>28069332
I'd treat Olivia as a separate entity from Ollie as a result of Amelia/Kornii timeline fuckery.

>>28056067
Thank you, i'm very happy that you liked it. And i'm glad my chubby chasing came through in the work.
I want to write a couple more episodes for it soon

>>28071345
Awesome, thanks Anon. Now I just need to hope I'm not forgetting anything else.

>>28071393
>I want to write a couple more episodes for it soon
NTA but consider me stoked. Tummy groping is needed urgently.

Is three chapters the only 'rule' for what counts as a series? Could I technically take one of my one shots, split it into three parts and call it a series?

>>28071719
Technically, but the hard and fast rules cut both ways and if it's not really a series then it probably won't get enough attention to get series archived.

>>28071719
Not necessarily; generally I work off 'intent to continue' but three entries is the safe-ish zone that most people seem to agree with, at least on the surface, if only because it shows *actual* dedication into making something a series. Like, I would add "Brown Black and Blue because I love you" to the SA right now if there was a description thrown at me due to there being clear intent to continue.

>>28071021
I'm surprised that there isn't much fics about chuubas having sex while streaming given that its such a hot, voyeuristic concept. Especially with fanart like these.
https://files.catbox.moe/m8o6p1.jpg

>>28072708
There was that Rushia NTR fic that played with the concept. Other than that the only thing close I remember is that Subaru erodoujin of her masturbating while streaming.

>>28073119
There's also the Ollie finger yab.

I want more stuff like that.

>>28073186
I mean I guess there's still room to just do a normal sex while streaming fic given that the Rushia fic went with the soft viewer NTR route.

>>28070636
Considerably better without Mori. You've gotten better at the smut, but it's still slightly too short. My advice would be to focus on the sensations they're feeling and include them in the prose to pad it out. Right now, your smut is quite action-oriented, whereas it should be more like... taking an action or two then spending a while describing the new sensations elicited by that action.
Tell me about Ina's death grip as her inner walls tighten as she begins to feel waves of pleasure rock her brain, how the warmth and wetness of her unbelievably tight pussy greedily devours more of Ebi's dick, as if it were eagerly trying to milk his balls for all they were worth.

Apart from the smut, your diction's pretty good, as is your spelling and grammar, and as a plot device to keep the smut scenes going as Ebi gradually forms his own harem, Morty works quite well. I was a bit taken aback at just how quickly Ina let a stranger into her abode and allowed him to take risque photos of her, but hey, it didn't snap the suspension of disbelief in twain.

>>28070422
Oh god that sounds like it's the set up for a tragedy fic about accepting that Ollie isn't Olivia and that the girl you love is dead.

>>28073827
>Keep trying to bait Ollie into doing things Olivia would do
>Except from brief flashes, small things nobody who wasn't supremely in love with Olivia would notice, she's just not there anymore
>Ollie has no real frame of reference for you aside from being "the nice guy she thinks she may have known before who cries when he thinks she can't hear"

Wake

>>28077282
slep

>>28041034
Story of Miko getting stalked and sexually harassed as a child by a stranger and having to move after her parents found out but she gets kidnapped after becoming a streamer by the same person who managed to track her down. She becomes his unwilling sex slave until the stockholm syndrome sets in.

>>28078199
That...kind of sounds like it has potential, but also like something the BBD guy would have to do to.

>>28078641
I don't think that anon writes straight up fapfics they usually go for more dramatic themes and stories with a sexual edge to them rather than straight up smut.
Though in theory I guess you could play this concept for drama and mind break rather than just dark smut.

>>28079045
Fair, but he's the only person around (to my knowledge) that's willing to write hardcore UOHHH, or at least something akin to it before Migo gets kidnapped. There's plenty of decent prompts for it but few people ever bite.

>>28079045
I posted the prompt hoping for a dark smutfic but I really would love a drama focused fic where Miko would slowly lose her sanity and fall in love with her captor against her wishes and the extra smut in the side would be really nice as well. Like imagine the reason she is a lesbian was because of the trauma she suffered as a child only to have to relive that again but worse and her mind would shutdown and force her to embrace it as a fucked up form of coping.

>>28078199
Miko being prone to Stockholm Syndrome was talked about some threads back and I like the idea - though more without uoh, and with a kidnapper that genuinely wants the best for Miko (from his perspective).

>>28079687
And what is the 'best' from the kidnapper's perspective?

>>28079721
I was thinking about a desire for Miko to love him, and happily live the rest of her life as his submissive wife. It could mean something different as well, of course.

>>28079544
Honestly wish we got more dark fucked up smut in general.
There is just a certain je ne sais quoi to fapping to something fucked up that just keeps getting worse that is just engrossing even after you've blown your load to the dark and smutty events occurring.

>>28079906
I was going to write realistic rape but there was a severe lack of an audience for that kind of content, so I decided not to.

>>28080466
>severe lack of an audience for that
lol. lmao, even.

>>28080466
Bait.
>>28079906
It's difficult to write well, I think. It would be great, but yeah.

>>28080466
Are you actually fucking kidding me? Lack of audience? Are you just being obtuse?

There's definitely an audience for Migo raping Pego.

>>28079906
This is what I was going for when I commissioned 'That's the way Fubuki crumbles"; negative response kinda shafted any momentum and the idea faded to the back of my skull

>>28080671
The negative reception was because you opted to go about it in the stupidest way possible by shoving in your race fetish bullshit and then backpedaled saying it wasn't bait.

>>28081052

>>28080671
If that really was what you were going for in your mind then you either didn't convey it well enough or MWanon didn't really do what you wanted justice since that fic was pretty much the kind of standard rape you'd find in a 'normal' rape fic/doujin.
...
Then again my standards for dark and fucked up smut is stuff akin to the works of Asanagi, ShindoL, Darabuchi, etc. So I might be thinking way darker in terms of tone then you when I say "Dark and fucked up smut".

>>28081241
It was about as fucked up as I was wanting to go. There's still a little bit of a mental roadbump when it comes to your oshi being raped

>>28081318
Relatable...I would never want to read dark stuff about my oshi, she's so precious and kind.

>>28079827
I know this prompt is meant to be brutally serious but I couldn't get the idea of her being kidnapped because the kidnapper is annoyed with her voice and tries to get her to speak properly.

>>28081318
>He doesn't want to read about Fubuki getting kidnapped, raped, and then sold as a sex slave.
>The experience gradually wearing down her mind and body as she sold and resold to ever more cruel masters.
>Until she gets sold to (You) a shell of her former self.
>You help her recover, cleaning her, feeding her real food.
>Fubuki starts to smile again

>That's when you the time is right.
>You drug her so she's locked in her own body.
>Then cut off all of her limbs to start the process of turning her into a human onahole.
>By the time she regains control of her body she can only despair seeing what's before her.
>A wall of her fellow idols turned into onaholes.
>A slot in the wall seemingly reserved for her right in between Mel and Matsuri.

I do not see it

>>28081992
Haha, that's so over-the-top it sounds more funny than tragic. But I'd definitely read something like that.

>>28081193
fucking kek, that gif is amazing
saved

>>28081621
This makes me think of Miko's kidnapper being her former language teacher that went insane after trying to teach her to speak properly.
Now years later, He escapes the asylum with one goal. To rape miko. Also to teach her how to speak properly.

>>28079906
At some point i will write realistic rape.

>>28080671
No, you were purposely trying to get inflammatory material posted to rile up the thread. You can’t say it was purely for rape purposes when you decided you wanted large black men to do the job straight after the thread had expressed their hatred of the idea.

>>28082799
Migo don't look...I'm ashamed

>>28041034
Reine wearing a vibrator for an entire stream while Kiara gets to control it.

So I have to ask, is the interest in "dark and fucked up" just in regards to smut, or is there interest in non-smut chuuba fic that's also fucked up?

>>28085763
>is there interest in non-smut chuuba fic that's also fucked up?
This literally used to be an abuse general

>>28085799
Yeah but even at it's worst the abuse never really got to really fucked up levels.

>>28086257
Probably because it's, in my opinion, hard to pull off. It's a delicate balance, I think. If you go too retarded it loses its edge, you know? Great attention needs to be paid in order to maintain the balance of the process and effects it has while not just fucking killing the person in the process. You need to make every cut hurt just as much as the first so that both the victim and the reader don't grow numb to the torment.

>>28085763
I'd prefer the "dark and fucked up" to mostly be smut

>>28085763
I'd prefer the "dark and fucked up" to mostly be sfw, keeps the edge that way

>>28087916
I suppose with the kind of abuse this thread prefers (long term domestic) it's pretty much a given that it never really dips into into 'depths' since it can only really do that once since logically it can never go back to where it was before if something permanent ever happens to either abuser or abused.
I guess it can be used as the ending but "abuser goes too far and kills/permanently cripples the abused" can only be used so many times before using it as the ending becomes trite.

>>28088640
It'd make for a good (if not long) one shot if paced properly. Doesn't need to be a series - but it could also work as one, I think, if it showed a build up from the beginning to the end. There doesn't have to be a return to what was there before if the abuser is dead set on burning down any bridge they can and making sure their target is trapped in the flames the entire time.
Doesn't need to end in that either, I think. Could be a last minute table turn that ends in (You) dying, being arrested, family gets involved, etc etc. There's options to help diversify things. Hell, it could end in you being arrested then cut to a sequel where you finally get out and the first thing you do is rape the shit out of the chuuba you were using as wall combo practice. I still majorly feel like it's all a matter of execution and planning.

>>28088902
I think the latter could work for the Miko prompt earlier. The sexual harasser could be arrested by the local police and Miko moves far away. But when the criminal (you maybe) finally gets released, you find out about her by chance when she was streaming and, filled with great lust for her well developed body since her adolescence managed to track her down and kidnap her. Sex slavery and mindbreaking commences.

>>28088902
>I still majorly feel like it's all a matter of execution and planning.
Yeah, I agree. An abuse fic going for fucked up is pretty much in a dance building up that perfect moment of when it all crashes together and making that and it's aftermath land with the viewers.
In theory this would be easiest with a one shot since the writer knows in advance how long the fic should be but a series is also doable if you're going for slow buildup to the pay off.

>>28040925
Is this thread exclusively fanfic writing? I'd like to write a letter to Sana to express my feelings but I can't even think of where to begin. Also not sure what I should leave out in case Cover reviews letters before forwarding to relevant parties.

>>28089790
i mean its definitely writing-related but i feel you've got the right end of the wrong stick here pal

>>28089790
I mean we mostly do fanfiction since it's the easiest to discuss and feeds into itself but other kinds of writing are welcome and in theme with the thread.
Though... I have no clue what kind of advice you're looking for here when it comes to writing a letter. Especially since something like this seems rather personal to how you as a person feel towards Sana.

Anons share your favorite NSFW stories. Preferably ones with hot sex.

>>28089965
Paradise Lost, Paradise Regained, Winner Winner Chocolate Dinner, Mercifully Short Shitpost, Botan/Mio Ringo, 15000 yen is 15000 yen

>>28089965
>inb4 the shock fics get shared
But personally still think Lies come to Light is still the best work of ryona written here. It's not a fic everyone will like but goddamn it the prose there does a great job at conveying the anger behind every hit.

>>28090117
Shame I'll never top it since I can't even remember what the fuck spurned it on, but thanks.

>>28090164
I think its a yab where someone opened her door during her roommate's stream. It's kinda amazing how Matsuri hasn't had a meltdown like Rushia yet.

>>28090333
I think AA is less refering to the incident that caused and more asking where the burst of inspiration that led to a ryona fanfic came from given that they don't usually write ryona.

>>28089965
Hight density comet, Kiara rape quadrilogy, Matsuri's baby carrot and disastrously tight ass. They're all masterpieces.

>>28090333
I recently went to her general and they say she's mellowed out as of late. Guess her Menhara days are some what over.

>>28089924
True that I could think of the co tents of my letter myself, but do we know if they get reviewed before the girls receive them? I don't want to have my message thrown out because I carelessly mentioned something I shouldn't have. I figure anything regarding roommate accounts is strictly off-limits, as well as explicitly negative stuff (not that I have anything like that).

>>28090492
chuck a heckin' air tag in there bro

>>28090458
Yeah, more this. I guess it was all the Ratclick I was playing plus seeing a thousand and a half bait threads pop up in the span of .3 seconds, I dunno. Glad it was so warmly received, though. Seeing the other Anon review my old work has been mortifying though. Not that I don't appreciate it, I was just rusty as all Hell for a good while. Could pull a Golden Duck and retouch them but probably won't.

Man, I really wanna smash Aqua's asshole.

>>28089965
All this talk about Miko makes me really want a story of her getting absolutely destroyed by sex.

>>28090492
Unless you're trying to perfect the vitriolic backhanded compliment letter, I don't see why you'd want advice from here over her simp general.

>>28089965
PavoNashi Maldives

>>28091005
Agreed

>>28090682
Oh yeah the archive was originally organized such that your stuff got its own section until the rentry move...
Huh.
That anon is pretty much just going to go through your entire early work before going back to the abuse thread fics.
>>28090492
Anon.
Literally just write what you want to say to Sana and hope it reaches her. You're not gonna get a response either way so just lay it out like a prayer and get what you want off your chest.

>>28091235
>That anon is pretty much just going to go through your entire early work before going back to the abuse thread fics.
Yup. Should've fixed that or ran it through a scrambler awhile ago or some shit.
>>28090864
Now we're talkin'.

>>28091568
What a puffy maid

>>28091568
Yeah too bad fixing the ordering would pretty much just consist of the boring and tedious job of running through the old threads and moving shit in order. It'd only be for until the rentry archive starts but that still sounds tedious and genuinely not worth it.

>>28091568
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THAT FAT FUCKING ASS IS BEGGING FOR A PLOUGHING SO BAD

I'D SLAM INTO THAT PUCKERED RAISIN SO HARD THE SURFACE TENSION ON HER BUTT CHEEKS WOULD SHATTER MY PELVIS

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK

>>28091973
Anon, no! Calm down! Don't think about how Aqua's fat, plush ass would jiggle and bounce with every thrust as she squeals out in confusion from having her unused ass forced open by your dick!

>>28063250
This will actually be really helpful IMO, especially if you're really nitpicky. I'm always looking to improve so harsh criticism does wonders, at least for me.

>>28063250
Would you be updating this every so often or just release all your reviews once you've read through everything?

>>28092260
Aqua Anal Training sounds like a great fic.

>>28092664
I already have too many wips, I already have too many wips, I already have too many wips...

>>28092260
IMAGINE HER DROOLING FACE AS HER RROM TEMPERATURE IQ IS EXPOSED TO A TIDAL WAVE OF SENSATIONS SHE'S NEVER FELT BEFORE AND PROMPTLY OVERLOADS ITSELF
IMAGINE HER RHYTHMIC GASPS BEING MADE IN TIME WITH EVERY THRUST YOU MAKE AS YOU PISTON INTO HER SHITPIPE
JUST IMAGINE FORCING YOUR ENTIRE WEIGHT DOWN ONTO HER AS YOU CLUTCH HER FOR DEAR LIFE WHILST YOUR ORGASM FRIES ALL RATIONAL THINKING, AND TORRENTS OF SEMEN GUSH FORTH FROM YOUR DICK INTO HER EAGER INTESTINES
IMAGINE LISTENING TO HER LOW GASPS AS, PINNED UNDER YOUR WEIGHT, SHE'S FORCED TO ACCEPT EVERYTHING YOU PUMP INTO HER, LOAD AFTER LOAD, UNTIL HER COLON ACTUALLY ACHES DUE TO SEMEN-RELATED DISTENTION
IMAGINE NOT TYPING EVERYTHING IN CAPS LOCK

>>28094348
what's one more anon?

>>28094405
>rrom temperature iq
oh dear

>>28094348
Abandon them.
If they've been languishing since last year, perhaps they just weren't meant to be.

>>28094405
We're the same, you and I...

>>28071393
That's awesome to hear it was very nice. I laughed, I cried, I came. Also I lost it at the Down Shrek scene.

>>28094405
TAKESHI? TAKESHI?!
TAKESHIIIIIII!

>>28090489
Matsuri hasn't had any real drama since Haachama a year ago so it's probably true

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: If you've ever abandoned a wip because it wasn't really working out, share what it was supposed to be about and tell the thread why you think it wasn't working.

>>28097383
Bonus question: a comedy piece about Kuro nursing you when you have a light fever, except she is really bad at it between not being good at communication and being a supernatural being. I didn't manage to make the comedy hit, and I also didn't find a way to turn it into a decent fluff piece , so I scrapped that

>>28097383
writing about chicks with dicks, slow process let me tell you. Lot of real life stuff making me too tired to write at night.

>Bonus
I had a story with Sana as a secondary character, probably will drop it. Can't really make an adventure going through australia without too many aussies. I still could use POGman, but that shit falls into the niji/holo crossover territory that makes schizos trigger

>>28097383
Bonus: That prompt about Okayu and Korone both cheating on eachother with (You) as their roommate, but both of them acting coldly around you when you're all together only to immediately leap on you when you have any alone time with one or the other. Just was in a rut with smut and didn't want to do anymore at the moment, never got back to it. Had another fic about winning a date to a Cover-ran amusement park with an in-disguise Mori while the 'real thing' performed on stage as to not arouse suspicion that was supposed to be a nice sort-of-fluff sort-of-friendship fic that I just lost motivation for, for one reason or another. There's a lot in the 'never ever' pile.

>>28097383
Right now I'm working on Brown Black and Blue and I'm trying to start Let Me Feel Your Pain again. I'll be honest, the reason I haven't been working on the latter is because the Fauna romance is not interesting to me. I have a lot of the rest of the story already planned out if only I can get through this next segment.

The other bit of good news though, I think I've finally found a direction for Lazy Oni to take. The reason I wasn't continuing it was because I was stumped on what to do next but I think I found just the thing.

Anon, can you help me find fic about Ollie and "ship of theseus"-theme. Where some parts of Ollie gonna replaced one by one,until person stop becae Ollie. I cant find it in archieve.
Thank you

>>28099143
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRP2DCTFEkR2B50hhZ8Ordo51OC0YvViJVrZ53IfGNH4Mu_FJoOEoE-WiDA2zKPo5GsNYNAkjIhJNw5/pub

>>28099135
>Lazy Oni
I think I said this before back when Lazy Oni first came back, but whatever path you choose to take that fic on I hope you stick to it and foreshadow how you plan to end it.
The original ending for this fic didn't work because it was incongruous with what came before it, so as long as it fits with the story coming before it whatever path you pick should work.

>>28069332
>You're Olivia's friend and have a crush on her
>You know she's about to get killed because rich people problems
>You can't stop it,
>You try to reanimate her, but fail miserably, killing yourself in the process.
>Olivia comes back once night because of a curse being fullfilled or some shit
>All she remembers is you calling her "Ollie" with care but everything else, including her memories of you are nothing but mist.

>>28092385
I'll just repost the link every time I update, probably a few stories at a time.

>>28100082
Doing god's work

>>28099135
>I'm working on Brown Black and Blue
hot
>I'm trying to start Let Me Feel Your Pain again
i didnt knew you were the same anon, nice
>the Fauna romance is not interesting to me
i'm literally shaking and crying rn

Why not go reread that one story you like?

>>28091005
Miko shouldn't be allowed to be this sexy. That collar on top of everything else is unfair

>>28106533
Seriously, how did she think this was okay?

>>28079906
>Honestly wish we got more dark fucked up smut in general.
How fucked up do you mean?

>>28041034
Sana using her space powers to fuck (you) from any distance.

>>28108553
Why do we always lose the titcows

>>28104335
Yeah, I'm the same. I've been affectionately nicknamed abuseanon because the vast majority of my stories are in some way abuse related. I think the only non-abuse stories I've written are Building Block Doll and To Slay a Monster.

I think the reason it's boring is that I need to get chemistry going. I actually quite like romance, but I need to make it genuine, else it's very lackluster. That's why I retcon'd the LamyxRoboco plot thread in BBD.

>>28108964
Rushia...

>>28109777
I'll reiterate, why do we always lose the titcows?

>>28109870
In the realm of possibilities, there surely is a story concept involving the boards becoming boing and the other way around. I haven't discovered it yet, sadly

>>28112563
I mean the obvious story concept for board to titcow is 'be careful what you wish for' where a flat chested girl gets the boobs they've always wanted but soon come to regret it, perhaps they get mind broken by their new sensitive tits, or corrupted into becoming sluttier.

>>28118935
Terrible back problems cause her mindbreak, she gradu-hey wait a minute...

>>28120733
>Sana was a flatty before becoming Space
I mean it fits. Especially since it's another link to Ina.

>>28041034
a chuuba is streaming and somthing completely innocuous causes her to remember something she'd forgotten for most of her life: she was sexually abused as a child.

>>28120858
She wasn't flat, she was so BEEG you can't see the curvature.

>>28123412
I'm happy Sana is graduating.

Gearing up to write a hag sex one shot.

Who should the lucky hag be?

>>28123624
Akirose Netorase to give that one anon the fic they want.

>>28123624
I feel like aki doesn't get much love.
Lui could be nice too

>>28123624
OL Lui

>>28123781
>>28123815
Aki is actually the perfect choice for the fic I have in mind. I will get to it.

I unfortunately don't watch Lui at all so I can't write her with any degree of accuracy.

>>28123781
>>28123815
The age of the elf hag is on the horizon

>>28108471
The kind of fucked up that makes you question what the hell you're jacking it to after you've cum and start seeing how horrific the events being depicted are.
>>28124103
Oh shit that one anon is about to get their dream fic.

Rest

So what lucky writefag will get their story featured here? Will kroni be able to pronounce half the words in any given fic? Maybe its worth it to find out, or maybe not. This chicks voice is atrocious.

>>28129183
>Going to end up reading a bunch of garbage reddit retardation
Probably better than 90% of what /infinity/ throws out but I don't expect them to read anything worthwhile. It'll be the most boring, sterile shit ever. If they popped in 'Mumei at the windowsill', though...

>>28129183
It's going to be 99% percent ao3 shipping fics and maybe a greentext from clockgen if they get lucky.

>>28040968
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSeBIHNH5ireonWvL-mk-V2qaQnC4W3zfA7rPGnQ5U1aciCdPNZdNo9d3gvitpKu5C-x2llR-Mr71DC/pub

Blooming Rose
Tags: Aki Rosenthal, hag sex, /ss/, fantasy, impregnation, vanilla

>>28129183
On one hand, it's not like they have a lot of fics written about them.
On the other hand, the ones that they do have are some of the best in their genres, Mumei at the windowsill being a great tragedy piece, and Your time is gonna come being great at smut.
I'd love if somehow they found and decided to read windowsill, just for how out of place it would be as a story not based on shipping and reddit-tier memes, and just as a good story overall.

>>28129183
Seems to be a fic about them playing gay chicken so far.

>>28129494
>>28130134
Mumei at the windowsill is too long. There's a max of like a thousand words. Would be cool though

>>28131419
>Max of a thousand words

>>28131548
It's a fanfic reading stream anon, it's either they have a word count max or they just pick one fic to read for the entirety of it.

>>28131548
Cause they have a show to do anon, can't get caught up on someone making the Ulysses of shipping fanfiction

>>28131667
well they SHOULD

>>28131419
It is on AO3, so it's not like they wouldn't be able to find it. It is far too long for what they're reading though, at 3.6k words, and it is comprised mostly of walls of text, with little to no dialogue. They would have to alternate narrating just so one doesn't do nothing for 20 minutes. And also, look at their audience; they're entertained by brainless yuribait and comedic shipping, the polar opposite of the tragic clinical introspection that windowsill is.
I do think that if Mumei ever does a solo fic review stream she would read it though. No time limit nor needing to include your collab partner would allow for the slower narration style that that fic needs, as opposed to the giggly rapid-fire reads that they're doing.

>>28129183
>1000 word submissions on twitter
>subversive romance cliche metashit
inherently flawed conventions, it's going to suck because it's not full-on explicit AO3 erotica

>>28131875
>Chuuna fanfic reading stream that goes meta and starts bleeding into the stream
God that sounds like it would be an amazing steam...
Too bad I'm pretty sure the only person that could do that (skills and motive) would have been someone like Schizo arc era Haachama.

>>28129780
I know this isn't the best feedback but this fic reads really badly and doesn't really have a hook to pull in the reader via the prose that by the time the smut hit I was already just skimming through it

>>28133277
give EN time, im sure they will go schizo at some point. Mumei seems like the type that will want an edgelord arc to her character.

>>28134716
I mean it seems like she'd have the motive but I think Mumei has the skills to mix in pre-edited content and live VA work in order to create the kind of atmosphere the schizo lore had; because that was pretty much the 'power' of that arc.

>>28134716
What is Gawr.

>>28134716
>All of EN deciding to read fanfiction that's more out of the way live on stream
>Gura reads Out of the Blue
>Ame reads Ameranthine
>Ina reads Girl of Emptiness
>Mori reads Psycho Killer
>Kiara reads any of her abuse stories
>Bae reads Horror Intolerance
>Kronii reads Rolling Girl
>Mumei reads Mumei at the Windowsill
What are their and their chat's respective reactions?

>>28133922
>but this fic reads really badly

Not the most helpful critique I've ever read. That doesn't mean anything specific to me.

>doesn't really have a hook to pull in the reader via the prose

I don't agree with that either. The hook is that she can't have kids and needs to lay with anon, unless you're meaning something else. This feels a bit subjective.

I think you just didn't care for the story, which I don't mind at all. But not liking it doesn't mean its poorly written.

>>28135233
POG

>>28041034
Is there a way to tell which of these stories have been taken?

>>28135524
I mean if you want a more specific critique then I feel like that entire introductory scene is superfluous and only serves to bloat the fic with, let's be honest here, unneeded justification for why it's happening without really introducing or developing the characters the reader cares about while also turning off reader due to everyone feeling off at the start. Like if this was a bigger story it would be justified as part of a build up to the sex but the fact that it's just a one and done sex scene means the need really wasn't there.
If you still wanted that justification built in then it probably could have been placed more organically inside the one scene.
>>28136299
Just pick a prompt you like and write it, the two cakes problem really isn't that big of a deal.

>>28135233
What does Sana read?
>>28135835
Unironically this

>>28136649
>Sana
Who?

>>28136750
Some waste of space that never streamed.

>>28136649
“Beating the shit out of Sana because she won’t shut up about astronomy”

>non-zero chance Kronii and Mumei have seen and read your time is gonna cum

Well Fuck

>>28137975
lol don't flatter yourself

>>28137975
Anon they only read the shit posted under the twitter hashtag.
It's still in the less then a 1 percent chance bracket.

>>28138731
Do people still think 4chan is some super-secret club?

Gonna take a small break from writing more installments of Gura's Cousin.

The most I can say about what I'm considering for the development is five words:

3 down, 2 to go.

>>28041034
A description/encyclopedia fic in the vein of Holofuta or Holobrothel but for chuubas giving blowjobs.

>>28138981
I mean, name any stupid belief, you'll find people who genuinely buy it. That's no exception.

>>28140021
>Someone's actually going for a full set of a Holo gen in a smut fic.
Honestly don't get why this isn't done more. Seems like an easy way to set a 'goal' for a fic.

>>28138981
a lot of holoen probaly use this site but if there's any one i don't think does it's kronii and if there's a second it's mumei.

>>28140032
#1 with a bullet has to be Koyori

>>28140916
I wouldn't let a coyote near my dick, she'd put mayo on it and eat it off

>>28140032
Mel may not like blood, but she’ll still suck you dry

>>28138981
>Do people still think 4chan is some super-secret club?
I don't know, anon, do people here throw a bitchfit whenever someone supports a non-hololive vtuber?

>>28141692
I like nijisanji

>>28141692
I've yet to see someone up in arms over me jacking it to Elira

>>28141692
Just the earlyfag, who is salty as fuck over being put in his place

>>28141692
That’s literally only one person, who is also a tribalfag. He’s legit mentally I’ll and can’t stand the sight of non-Hololive vtubers in the OP or in this general.

>>28141692
Hoshikawa seems to be pretty well liked. And there was the whole Selen thing, but let’s not get into that.

>>28141884
>Just the earlyfag,
So, is it finally confirmed that Subjectionanon was the earlyfag?

>>28141910
I'd get into Selen if you know what I'm saying

she'd eat me :(

>>28141809
Daily reminder Elira is probably into mpreg fanfiction
https://twitter.com/EliraPendora/status/1545114976926457856

>>28141922
>Subjectionanon
Who?

>>28142196
A schizo who has admitted in the past in shitting up /wg/.

>>28141978
>Elira MPregnating your Omega boy pussy with her Alpha Female cock.
Hot?

>>28141910
I really like Hoshikawa. She's a total bro. Would be mega fun to hang out with.

>>28142249
can't beat the barbed dragoncock

>>28142253
>Wingwoman Hoshikawa helping you take care of yourself and pick up chicks

>>28140356
Because it's very likely that the writer in question may only like one character in the entire generation or conversely they despise one member of the entire generation. Case in point, Mori.

>>28142394
She is a saint if she can get me a date with Fumi, that fox hag is sex incarnate.

>>28142394
>”That girl’s been making eyes at you all night. You should go talk to her. What, you scared? Don’t be such a pussy. Here, take a shot. It’ll help.”

>>28140032
You know, now that you mention it, I probably should have put blowjobs and other stuff in HoloBrothel as well. I wonder which Holo would deny sex and accept exclusively blowjobs...

>>28141809
I want Eliza to molest her little brother (me)

>>28142507
Something about fox girls makes me diamonds.

>>28143122
and then selen finds out

>>28142507
>There's too many goddamn Nijis, what does that one look li-WOAH
sign me the fuck up

>>28144581
Holy shit, that's a cutie. Really nice dress.

>>28142783
>That entire image set
God...there's a fic about it on Ao3 but it doesn't do it justice in the slightest

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/99363485

>>28144581
You had my curiosity, but now you have my erection.

>>28144581
Does she speak any eigo at all.

>>28144941
No, why would she? She's not an idol.

>>28145061
does this mean... i'm an idol?

>>28145353
No, you're just some guy wasting your life on 4chan.

>>28144795
Sheeeeesh, really wish I could read Japanese

>>28145474
You didn’t need to kill the guy, anon.

>>28145061
Cuz I want to understand sexy fox hag.

>>28145839
Just learn japanese.

>>28145474
Why do you have to tell the truth?

>>28146099
Because it amuses me.

New thread
>>28146133

>>28142394
>Hoshikawa grooming you into a silver-tongued devil that has the entire female populace swooning
>Hoshikawa getting procedurally jealous over your success with the ladies
>“Haha anon, you sure are the talk of town. I wonder what moves you got to get all these girl‘s head spinning. Care to show?“
>But that would be totally weird - you are best mates, after all.
>Hoshikawa having a menhera episode over your continuous friendzone.
>Hoshikawa making you realize she is all you ever needed through the power of her body

>>28144581
I really love the way she talks in 3D. She’s so expressive and the tracking captures her movement perfectly.

LUNA RAPE

Keep reading your fanfics. Don't mind me. I will be here touching you all over while you read.

>>28148339
I already wrote about you stealthily sucking me off Vox

>>28148536
And what makes you think I will *just* suck you off this time?

>>28148976
I had my palms read and I was told I'd destroy every vtubing twink I met