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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread: >>27195813

>> No.27329147
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.27329224
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were five stories posted in the last thread.

Building Block Doll: Chapter 18 Tags: Sora, Suisei, romance, omatsu, omorashi >>27198472

Anya's Zweihander tags: Tags: futa, sweat, facefucking, dismemberment (no gore) >>27217491

Nobody asked for this Tags: Pekora, NSFW, Femboy. >>27223340

To be 17 again Tags: Ookami Mio, haglove, NSFW, netori, creampie. >>27264279

Holoturismo Ch 2 - Turnkey >>27292232

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Kanata wants you to impregnate every member of her gen, and at the end they hold her down so she can't escape getting impregnated too: >>27199291

Kronii committing suicide:>>27208258

(You) are a shota recruited as part of a sting operation whose goal is to lure out an infamous shotacon disguising themselves as a student in a local highschool.:>>27209310

Gura and Kiara molest Mori under the guise of helping squeeze her boobs into the mocap suit:>>27232475

Raping Laplus with the rest of HoloX in the room trying to pretend nothing is happening:>>27251464

Helping your elite, world-record-breaking Chuuba wife deal with all her excess breastmilk!:>>27259566

It won't happen but I want to see a sequel to curse but Mio suffers from a miscarriage and then suffers from a mental breakdown / becomes suicidal when she realises she'll never see Ayame again.:>>27264621

I need a story Between Ame and Gura, where Ame takes care of Gura, but Gura keeps killing Ame so another Ame from another timeline has to replace her. I put it on the prompt with more details.:>>27278794

Being sexist to Kronii and then raping her:>>27291967

After getting deunk at the offcollab Mori and Ina take a shower together. Alternatively Sora teaches a kouhai the real reason everyone respects her (mindblowing pussy eating):>>27294311

Gura wrangling you Texas style.:>>27297412

The Shion tragedy daughterfic idea from earlier this week:>>27301801

raping Gura while she's afflicted with tonic immobility:>>27317902

>> No.27330003

>>27329109
The friend thread. Also what happened? I went and showered and the last thread was archived.

>> No.27330461

>>27330003
>Also what happened?
Coco joined vshojo and /vt/ is losing their minds. I just wish her luck.

>> No.27331334

>>27330461
>Coco joined vshojo and /vt/ is losing their minds
Jesus Christ, at times I think /vt/ is full of children. Anyways thanks, I should probably ignore this place for a day or two.

>> No.27331424

>>27331334
It simply means we need to shitpost harder than all of /vt/ combined

>> No.27331426

>>27329879
>raping Gura while she's afflicted with tonic immobility

>Scientists believe that tonic immobility in sharks may be related to mating, because female sharks seem more responsive than males

Not rape, since gura is doing it for mating, also it only lasts like 15 minutes. Too short

>> No.27333226

>>27331334
I think the bigger surprise isn't that Kson did, but that she brought Mike along with her, too. That's the one that's causing the real shitstorm. Kson and Melody have always been friends so this isn't that big of a surprise.

>>27329109
God, I want to come home to a sad Fbk only to comfort her with the power of my hugs, kisses and dick.

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>> No.27336014

>>27329109
It's been a while since we had a good Fubu fluff piece. What happened /wg/?
Is our poster girl doomed to be the face of feces-focused word work from now?
Isn't she a hag as well, worthy of wordy worshipping?

>> No.27336018

Seems we may have to take a temporary hiatus until everyone stops sperging the fuck out about Kson

>> No.27336323

>>27336018
No

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>>27336018
I mean I guess we can do the 'other' yab ritual at this point.
Does anyone have any story ideas they want brainstorming/extra ideas for?

>> No.27336948

>>27336323
Keep in mind I'm not saying that because I like the idea, I find this spamming fucking irritating as shit. But the thread moves way slower than most generals so it's going to be a lot of pointless posts to keep it afloat.

It's up now though so may as well try to keep it going

>> No.27337613

>>27331334
>at times I think /vt/ is full of children
Only at times?

>> No.27338196

>>27336948
I mean we've somehow managed to live through previous yabs, admittedly I'm reasonably certain we only lived through the fallout of this year's yabs and drama by effectively circling wagons and talking story ideas till the board calmed down.
Speaking of which
>>27336831
I'm honestly half considering picking up the Shion daughter fic and rape concept but I'm kind of running into the problem of how to connect the two ideas and go from point a to b of "Shion my beloved daughter" to "raping my daughter". I know the aggregation post pitched some ideas about how to go from there but perhaps I'm too "pure" to envision your 'fall'.

>> No.27338405

>>27336831
I'm getting inspiration for Brown Black and Blue Because I Love You once again.

Anything you'd like to see?

>> No.27338849

>>27338405
This is probably not in your plans but I'd love to see a scene of Noel beating up Flare as usual (well as usual for the fic) but halfway through she starts crying, beating on Flare harder so she doesn't talk about it.

>> No.27339254

>>27330461
Damn, I thought it was just a joke but I guess it's official now. It doesn't affect me too much since I wasn't watching Kson anyway but still sad to see. At least it wasn't Nijisanji though, this place would've imploded and then exploded.

>> No.27339336

>>27338849
I actually intend to make it more like that. Lazy Oni is my morally grey abuse fic. This one is (most likely) just going to be purely, 100% wrong abuse and sadistic. Similar to Moona's Ordeal. Unless people want something else, of course.

>> No.27340009

>>27339336
No this is fine. It's been way too long since we've gotten completely fucked up abuse and sadism and it'll be interesting to see how you've progressed on writing something like this.
Though I guess if I do have something to request it'd probably be seeing another 'bad end' even if you decide it's non-canonical since I enjoyed the completely fucked up ending to Moona's Ordeal better than the standard ending.

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>>27336014
I'm planning on writing several short fluffy ones when I get the chance, alongside a longer self-indulgent one.

Meanwhile here's (pic related) in hopes of it getting picked up and written by someone here. I don't trust myself enough to write it, so hopefully someone else will.

>> No.27340605

>>27340416
Wasn't there already an anon that picked this up?
Though I guess once something is in someone else's "Deep WIP" pile it's better to ask again rather than hoping that anon is still working on the idea.

>> No.27342577
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>>27329224
Mori waking up after the offcollab to find that everybody has stolen all her liquor, done her hair, and replaced all her clothes with more girly stuff

>> No.27342779

>>27342577
So something like a bimbofication/stepfordization fic starring Mori as she slowly get more and more girly?

>> No.27343202
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>>27342779
Yes, and they could even call in the girl in Hololive who actually does that

>> No.27343332

>>27342577
This, but at the end she dies of a DT from lack of alcohol.

>> No.27343474
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>>27343332
>DT
She dies of a Devil Trigger?

>> No.27343855

>>27343474
Exactly. It is a DMC crossover fic after all.

>> No.27344411

>>27343202
>Luna pulls your head down and whispers into it.
>"You know what you need to do to stop me from doing it again-nanora."
>She hands you a piece of paper
>On it is an address and time.

>> No.27344781

>>27343855
No motivation allowed beyond this post

>> No.27345736
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>>27344781
Fuck you.
Stay Motivated.

>> No.27346236

>>27345736
Why the fuck do you even still come here? Nobody likes you and you don't contribute anything anymore except shitposting.

>> No.27346479

>>27338849
>Noel beating up Flare as usual (well as usual for the fic)

No, no. You were right the first time. The parentheses are redundant.

>> No.27346520

>>27346236
That's because I'm not him and just saw a very easy opening for a joke.

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>>27346520

>> No.27347860

>>27344411
>It's a dentist office
>some guy in a ski mask gives you a paper bag containing a gun

>> No.27348114

>>27347860
>Luna ordering you to wipe out dentist offices, sugar free candy shipments, and Health activism centers in order to keep her from corrupting your tomboyish friends from further becoming girly girls.
I'd say it has potential.

>> No.27348302

>>27342779
Wow. I'm into that kind of shit, and I just read it as a prank.

>>27343202
Given Luna's past life, it's almost as if...SOMEONE DID IT TO HER!!!
youtube.com/watch?v=y9UddG2YUz8

>> No.27348534

>>27348302
I mean it starting as a prank sounds like it would be a good 'second act twist' for Mori to find out after she starts her 'fall' and starts truly becoming feminine.

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>>27348302
>Given Luna's past life, it's almost as if...SOMEONE DID IT TO HER!!!
She did it to herself, and now falsely believes they all secretly want to be girly girls deep down.

>> No.27350541

>>27350086
The idea of Luna spouting a fucking villain monologue to you about how all girls desire to be cute and feminine all while still speaking like how she normally speaks sounds fucking hilarious.

>> No.27350693

>>27350541
>Pwetty drwesses, twintwails, flower cwoans
>All giwls are to be cute nanora.

>> No.27351978

>>27329224
A fic about dealing with an animal chuuba shedding their fur.

>> No.27352022

>>27351978
There's that Fubuki brushing greentext in the archive

>> No.27353314

Any last Mike cat prompt ideas? before you know....

>> No.27353534

>>27353314
Unironically still want "Gay sex with Mikeneko" and not just because of the Mike name jokes, though at this point I'll probably just consign it to maybe writing it myself in the future once I get my WIPs in order.

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>>27351978
If that chuuba is botan, would she be embarrassed or indifferent?

>> No.27354690

>>27354437
I feel like she'd try to pretend to be indifferent about it but secretly get embarrassed now that someone else has to deal with her shedding.

>> No.27355112

>>27353534
>once I get my WIPs in order
I've been here long enough to know this is cap

>> No.27356331

>>27352022
Honestly forgot about that fic. Rereading it, it's very cute. Though I wish it was a full fic rather than just a greentext.

>> No.27356338

>>27336018
Honestly I’d be down. Just have no threads for a few days and have stories build up, then when we come back they all get released at once.

>> No.27356364 [DELETED] 

>>27336018
Honestly I’d be down. Just have no threads for a few days and have stories build up, then when we come back they all get released at once.

>> No.27356424

>>27356331
>>27356338
>>27356364
Honestly what the fuck is happening

>> No.27356621

Honestly

>> No.27356681

>>27356424
Those last two were mine, didn't mean to post it twice.

>> No.27356853

>>27346236
Rent free lmao.

>> No.27357369

>>27356338
Eh, as bad the board is zooming right now we've survived worse. Admittedly those worse incidents had the jannies and mods actually working but I don't see why we should hibernate the thread.

>> No.27357372

Man this Coco shit must be souring in at least some author's mouths given how emotional it was when she left

>> No.27357703

>>27357372
Why would it? Genuine question, because other than the fact that /vt/ hates VShojo I can't really think of a reason to get mad.

>> No.27357988

>>27357703
Precisely because of Vshojo in particular. Though looking back, her hanging out with Melody was probably the first warning sign. If it was just her I wouldn't care, but the others...

>> No.27357991

>>27357703
she DID say she'd never work for another company
other than that i don't really care, she can do what she wants

>> No.27358192

>>27357991
>she DID say she'd never work for another company
Ah, yeah, that's a good reason.

>> No.27358296

>>27357703
That's plenty reason enough. More to the point though, it feels a little disgusting since she was sort of the face of anti-corpo for a while, and pulling Mike along with her has a hostile undertone

>> No.27358714

>>27357372
I feel fucking bad for HCAnon. I thought AA had it worst when Rushia left but he was able to shove her off to the sidelines to be a side character. On the other hand Rushia and Coco are main characters in HC.

>> No.27358897

>>27357372
I was soured long before this. She left for "creative freedom" and became egirl number 9 million and 1. Honestly, this is little surprise.

>> No.27360294

>>27358897
This.

>> No.27360529

>>27358714
Was Rushia ever intended to be a major character in HF? She was set up as the chapter boss but I don't think she got the same joined the party thing the other chapter bosses got.

>> No.27360583
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can we go one week without some stupid shit

>> No.27360652

>>27360583
Look pal it ain't up to us

>> No.27361699

>>27360583
Blame Coco for being a traitor.

>> No.27362087
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>>27358714
It doesn't fuel any motivation I'll give you that.

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>>27336014
Fubuki Fluff? What about Fubuki Abuse?

>> No.27362464
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>>27362087
My condolences.

>> No.27363533

>>27362169
How about fubuki smut

>> No.27363701

>>27363533
We've run the entire gamut of fubuki smut at this point. What fetishes or scenarios are there left?
Drugged up Sex with My Friend? Mutual Masturbation with a Fox?

>> No.27363803

>>27363701
Both of those sound great, but
>What fetishes or scenarios are there left?
Why does it matter that something's already been done before?

>> No.27363835

>>27363701
giantess fubuki crushing you

>> No.27364122

>>27363803
>Why does it matter that something's already been done before?
But anon if it's already done before how can you create a snappy title involving the words 'Fox' or 'Friend'? That's like 2/5ths the appeal of making another Fubuki fic.

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>>27363701
My man, I have nearly 30 years of porn consumption under my belt. There aren't enough bits of bandwidth on the Internet to transfer around all the ways I would love to make love to the sweet hag fox if I could instantly transfer them onto text straight off my brain.

>> No.27364619

>>27364266
Well that thumbnail is deceptive. It made me think that was Fubuki in a very spicy bunnygirl outfit.

>> No.27364652

>>27363701
Both of those sound like they would instantly be the best story in the arcchive

>> No.27364782
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>>27363701
Why do you float those ideas like they're somehow not the hottest things ever?

>> No.27365038

>>27364782
Anon you gonna be a fag or are you gonna give us a source?

>> No.27365081

>>27364652
>>27364782
Making an idea that's Fubuki + Fetish is easy.
Actually writing a (good) fic out of it is the hard part.

>> No.27365155

>>27365038
gomene

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/90775938

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>>27365155
Praise be with you anon

>> No.27365618

>>27361699
Quite a few holos like vshojo. How is it traitor?

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>aphrodisiacs is one of Marine's favorite kinks
>zero stories exploring the subject
I mean I like Friend too, but

>> No.27365722

>>27365618
don't reply to the retard

>> No.27365794

>>27365685
inb4 no one watches streams

>> No.27365810

>>27365685
drugs are bad! Marine would never!

>> No.27365834

>>27365155
Holy shit, that fucking pink tint on her eyes to show she's hypnotized is so fucking hot.
We need more hypnosis/mind control fics.

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>>27365834
Boy do we

>> No.27369187

>>27365685
Replace that with "mind control/hypnosis" for me.

>>27365834
>>27367845
I'm not the only one to have that fetish? There's a pleasant surprise.

>> No.27369776

>>27369187
It's more common than you think.

>> No.27370059

>>27369187
Anon, MC/hypnosis is honestly rather 'common' as a fetish we just haven't seen much content involving it. Which if I had to take a hard guess on why may be due to the thread's origin from the abuse threads.
Though thinking about it, how would you write a compelling chuuba mind control fic?
A lot of the draw is in personality so "absolute hypnosis" is kind of opposed to the concept. I guess something like "common sense alteration" would be more in line with the 'ethos' of chuuba fic since it lets you keep more of the character alive while they're mind controlled.

>> No.27371220

>>27370059
There was a nice ASMR thing I found awhile back that had an interesting take on the idea. Instead of instant hypnosis, the process was gradual. At first she lost control of her body, doing as ordered even as she was still consciously aware and verbally resisting, but as the effect sank in she gradually lost control of her mind as well.

>> No.27372278

>>27371220
Ah I think I've seen that concept as well though usually in bimbofication/transformation/corruption rather than in mind control.
Could be interesting honestly, that sense of 'progression' can make the process much more appealing than even the end result, especially if the end result would be something like a personality dead mind controlled sex doll. It could also lead to a hot scene of making them slip off the slope with your cock where previously they were fighting back.

>> No.27374663

HotspringAnon, if you're here. Just know I'm really thankful for you working on the Irys sequel

>> No.27375582

Should I add slice of life bits to my story that have little relevance to the plot and don't progress it at all? It'll increase the word count so I'm wondering if people would skip over that to get to the main story or actually read it.

>> No.27375782

>>27375582
Depends, can you write them good?
Because that's probably going to be the main reason to include them if you're not sure, since well written SOL can get you some nice character interactions that pure plot/event progression can't get you.

>> No.27375786

>>27375582
does it affect the characters' relationships with one another?

>> No.27375970

>>27329109
why is a simple loose t-shirt, the hottest thing a female can wear?

>> No.27376092

>>27375782
>Depends, can you write them good?
I have no clue, it depends on what my audience (/wg/) thinks.
>>27375786
A little bit, but if you were to skip over the SOL chapters the story would still make sense. Kind of like an anime OVA.

>> No.27379054

>>27329224
This Mumei prompt from /who/
>>27372182

>> No.27381331

>>27329224
Lui gRoominG Mori through her praise. Whether it’s grooming as in making Mori her girlfriend or more SFW into wearing dresses, not drinking and so on is up to you, both are good.

>> No.27382382

http://poal.me/pi2o77

>> No.27383350

>>27382382
Lmao what the hell is the neither guy doing here then?

>> No.27383591

>>27383350
That one at least makes sense given that it's tourist season due to recent events.
I'd honestly be more concerned if someone voted 'write' only. Because why the hell would you stay here if you only wrote?

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>> No.27386324

Why isn't your time gonna come in the series archive? Is there a chapter requirement for a story to be a series?

>> No.27386436

>>27386324
Think it might just be something that 'fell through the cracks' with the writer not asking why it hasn't been series archived.
The usual chapter requirement was 3 chapters but there's some exceptions if the fic is clearly intended to be a series (and AA is on the ball to archive it as such).

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>>27329224
Botan taking you with her to the gym.

>> No.27387852

>>27329224
You get put into the body of one of the Hololive girls. Turns out, everything they talk about that's fantastical is real, and now you have to deal with it.

>> No.27389030

I reread "Helping Friend" out of curiosity. Fic is suprisingly pretty good even when I read it outside of being horny. Especially like how Fubuki was written, because there's like an inherently absurd element to this scenario that Fubuki somehow managed to fit in and shine in.

>> No.27389359

>>27389030
A Fubuki fic I don't remember? That's really weird. I wonder what-
>futa
Oh, that's why

>> No.27390232

>>27389359
Hey for being a Futa on Male fic it's suprisingly good. I'd say you should give it a shot if you're bored.

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>>27386324
If you're the author toss me a series description and I'll move it over. Currently catching up with everything.

>> No.27391720

>>27389030
It's one of the few stories I can look back and say "I think i did pretty good" . Maybe I'll post it in AO3 later, maybe add some knotting to please that crowd

>> No.27392991

>>27363701
Nothing wrong about having stories with similar premise or smut with similar fetishes.
I just need me more Fubuki smut/fluff/smut+fluff.

>> No.27393042

>>27363701
Longform consensual netorase + corruption

>> No.27393124

ntr fags get out

>> No.27393385

>>27393124
Anon it's just the one anon whose dream fic is getting someone to write A Consensual Aki Netorase fic. Let them dream about it happening.

>> No.27393436

>>27393124
Kill yourself.

>> No.27393531

Man that Hypnosis NTR WIP I had sounds tempting right now, idk why

>> No.27393924

>>27393531
>Hypnosis NTR WIP
Explain.
I can kind of a lot of directions on how you'd do that. The most impactful probably being something (You) and Chuuba you are dating are both hypnotized into having changed common sense, thus leading (You) to watch everyday as the Bull has sex with the Chuuba all the time while you watch, a strange pain popping into your heart as you watch with interest.

>> No.27394304

>>27393924
Nah. A chubba hypnotizes another chubba and steals it from (you)

Original inspiration is that chloe hypnosis stream and this moment https://youtu.be/L8eyAqkdIQE

>> No.27394440

>>27394304
But she rubs it in your face while having the hypnotized chuuba say horrible things as well right? You know to make it hurt.

>> No.27394615

>>27394440
Pretty much. I was going for the recorded video route, but it's really cliche among NTR stories. Add to that, I can't decided who is doing the stealing, chloe or Lui. This is why the WIP is on the void right now

>> No.27394760

>>27362169
What kind of abuse are we talking about here?

>> No.27395050

>>27363701
Do you want to include a fetish list from /d/?

>> No.27395088

>>27394615
Well if you want something less cliche, how about having the fic start in media res with (You) wake up in a room tied up to a chair while Chloe and Lui are having extremely passionate sex. Which starts the flashback if you want to build up the tension first or you can immediately Lui/Chloe explaining how they are much better than (You), que the rest of what you have planned. Maybe ending with an epilogue of (You) getting hypnotized to do something humiliating.
It's slightly less cliche since I only vaguely remember it as the ending to an NTR doujin series I half remember reading.

>> No.27395212

>>27395050
That's true. There's only been scat and a fly so far. It can get way, way worse.

>> No.27395508

>>27395088
I didn't consider the media res route. Yes, it's an interesting proposition. I just fear it may be too ambitious for my current writing abilities. But I appreciate the help

>> No.27395936

>>27329224

I don't think we've had a fic about literally skullfucking Fubuki's ear canals and cumming onto her brain yet. Any takers?

>> No.27396026

>>27395936
That's not where the ear canal goes

>> No.27396089

>>27396026
It is now.

>> No.27396266 [DELETED] 

>>27395050
I mean if you want to do a game of pick a /d/ thread topic to create a Fubuki prompt out of I can start.
>Amputee
Fubuki loses all of her limbs in a terribly traumatizing accident. Thankfully (You) are a friend she trusts. Surely you won't violate that trust and take advantage of this quadruple amputee kitsune?
Also fuck. The architecture thread got moved to /d/. I hope something like that doesn't happen to us. We would not survive without board rule 1 enforcing kayfabe.

>> No.27396332

>>27395050
Please share a fetish list from /d/. I don't browse that board because there are a lot of dick girls.
>>27395212
Don't forget the horse!

>> No.27396391

>>27375970
That's not a T-shirt in the OP image

>> No.27396484 [DELETED] 

>>27396266
>spoiler

it all started cause /become/ started a war with a janny, now all fetish threads are getting purged. Hopefully we are still considering on topic

>> No.27396588

>>27396332
>Don't forget the horse!
FUCK, I completely forgot the horse! Mustn't forget that one-of-a-kind masterpiece again.

It's Bellerophon, in case anyone else did. An exquisite slice of equine loving.

>> No.27396758

>>27396026
You underestimate my boring cumshot

>> No.27396839 [DELETED] 

>>27396484
>meat is gone too
WTF did Lamy do to piss off a janny so much?

>> No.27397195 [DELETED] 

>>27396839
How the fuck?
I thought they dodged getting preemptively nuked due to being more the defacto R18G vtubers general.

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>>27396839

>> No.27397352 [DELETED] 

>>27397256
can't say i'll be sad to see the back of the /become/ schizos
janny's right, it really is just a circlejerk with a surface-level connection to vtubers

>> No.27397456

>>27350693
I would totally do this but i don't think i'm good enough for it yet

>> No.27397483 [DELETED] 

>>27397256
>all images and discussion should pertain to virtual Youtubers
How the fuck do /meat/, and /ringo/ break that rule? /become/ you can make an argument does, but /meat/ and /ringo/ are literally for discussing fetishes in direct relation to vtubers. /meat/ especially is both a fetish thread, and a thread for certain groups of vtubers. It's hardly different from a small corpo general.

>> No.27397521 [DELETED] 

>>27397352
You have a point, but the other generals didn't deserve to take the fall too. You could argue Ringo is for vtubers who do omorashi streams and meat is for R18G chubbas

>> No.27397669 [DELETED] 

>>27397352
>it really is just a circlejerk with a surface-level connection to vtubers
The exact same can be said for /wg/. This is a fanfiction general first, with a few vtuber characters tossed into the works. It's largely the same situation, albeit with a slightly different focus.

>> No.27397672
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I said before I was jealous of you guys for having dreams with chuubas but I didn't know what kind of cruel tricks my brain would play on me.

>Get told I need to do a realistic, but sham marriage to Botan for reasons I don't remember anymore
>I go along with it, and now I'm really unsure of what the fuck to do because I've never been to a wedding, let alone my own
>Have to go through the whole process of buying a ring, clothes, working on making preparations
>Never actually see or talk to Botan at all
>Day of the wedding comes, I am severely underdressed and unprepared
>Nobody from my family there, they're all guests from Botan's side of the deal
>For some fucking reason they're all fat blacks, like a collection of multi-gendered Big Smokes
>All in all, nervous and awkward about the whole situation, but still really excited and looking forward to seeing Botan in a wedding dress and spending time with her
>Time comes for her to walk down the aisle
>I wake up, not even getting a glimpse of the lion hag in an all white wedding dress

>>27396484
>Hopefully we are still considering on topic
If the Drawthread can stay up then we certainly can too. I wouldn't be worried unless we have a real tranny janny on the loose.

>> No.27397724 [DELETED] 

>>27397521
i don't disagree at all. the only thread of logic i can see is that they're more or less just offshoots of this thread with a focus on a specific fetish and subset of vtubers focusing on said fetish

i feel bad for the ringo and meat guys taking the fall too

>> No.27397784 [DELETED] 

>>27397483
You're talking about a janny in power-trip mode. They're the most dangerous when they're like this which usually happens when their moms stop making them chicken tenders and make them eat salad for a night. It can also occur when their stock of Doritos and Mt. Dew runs low. Fear the power-tripping janny for they do it for free. Fear it.

>> No.27397846 [DELETED] 

>>27397669
we are still focused on making fan content based on virtual streamers. Literally giving back to the community more than the numbers thread having imaginary Olympics and causing tribalism over numbers

>> No.27397933 [DELETED] 

>>27397724
I feel most bad for /meat/, ringo was mostly fetish thread but meat is basically 95% general for a subgenre of vtubers and 5% holdouts of when they were the cannibalism shock fic general. They did not deserve this.

>> No.27398038 [DELETED] 

>>27397669
fanfiction is medium through which this thread communicates its love for vtubers; it isn't surface-level at all, unlike /become/ which was literally just a lamy-themed chatroom for freakshows like you

>> No.27398074 [DELETED] 

>>27397933
I feel ringo was a necessary evil. The fanfiction and hornyposts there aren't that different from stuff you can find here, but obviously not everyone wants to see pee poo prompts and stories here, therefore ringo's reason to be

>> No.27398124 [DELETED] 

>>27397933
/meat/ is surprisingly comfy. Took a look at thread in trash and it seems they're handling the situation pretty well; some might even say it's an improvement.

>> No.27398129 [DELETED] 

>>27397933
At least /meat/ can make a thread for their flagship Vtubers and their friends, I guess

>> No.27398135 [DELETED] 

>>27398074
Pretty much. Its the same why reason /d/ exists, after all.

>> No.27398435 [DELETED] 

The last /ag/ got moved to /d/ probably because someone posted a bunch of 3D kson pics.
It was basically the mint castella thread and fan art exclusively of chuubas.
I hate this, all the actually good threads are getting nuked

>> No.27398507 [DELETED] 

>>27398124
kek it's true. They literally took off the limiters and started posting all the guro they wanted

>> No.27398707 [DELETED] 

>>27398435
>/vt/ is getting the /v/ treatment where all good threads relating to the topic are on different boards
fuck

>> No.27398777

>>27396332
Giantess
vore
inflation
Rule 63
erotic horror
amputation
corruption
futa
transformation
Giant genitals
Possession
Flattening
Smegma
Human Livestock
Nipple penetration
Hypermuscle
All-the-way-through
Monster sex
Mind control
Personality excretion
Mummification
Machine sex
Body swap
Extra body parts
Stuck/trapped in places
hardcore BDSM

Just to name a few.

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>>27398707
History repeats itself
>>27398777
Thanks, also checked.

>> No.27398968 [DELETED] 

>>27398707
I honestly don't mind a /vtg/ board. It would certainly help generals that repeatedly get killed by the random catalog faggotry.

>> No.27399048
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27399048

So anon, what's in the oven?
>Fubuki grooming little (you)
>Marine getting her boyfriend drugged and non-con'd
>Kiara romance fic based on the epic of gilgamesh

>> No.27399052 [DELETED] 

>>27398968
It wouldn't necessarily be bad, but what purpose would /vt/ proper serve at that point other than a garbage pit of bad narratives?

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>>27399048
>Fubuki grooming little (you)

>> No.27399220

>>27399048
>Kiara romance fic based on the epic of gilgamesh
So Kiara would be enkidu in this situation right?

>> No.27399238 [DELETED] 

>>27399052
The same reason /v/ exists. Shitposting and faggotry as if it were /b/ confined to a specific topic.

>> No.27399241 [DELETED] 

>>27399052
at the very least it would serve to highlight how atrociously poor the average thread's quality is to even the random board crossie

>> No.27399391

>>27399220
No, she would be more like Gilgamesh.
Here's the spin I gave it
>Kiara is a phoenix like in her lore
>She's lived countless lives
>She meets (you) out of casualty
>Proceeds to fall in love
>As you age, you notice Kiara is "different"
>You pass away
>Kiara spends a few of her lifetimes lamenting you
>Finally decides to do something about it
>Ina uses her elderitch powers to send her to the underworld
>She brings you out
>You have no idea who she is
>She takes care of your mortal flesh until you die again
>She dies
>She doesn't come back
>A certain pair of flowers grow entangled on top of a mountain

>> No.27399612

>>27398777
>Body swap
Your Name but with Fubuki and (You).
Alternatively,
You and Fubuki switch bodies after a magical incident. The only cure, sex. At least that's what Fubuki keeps saying is what needs to be done before you can switch back bodies, but surely there's another way out of this outside of fucking yourself in your foxfriends's body?

>> No.27399771

>>27396266
>Fubuki loses all of her limbs in a terribly traumatizing accident. Thankfully (You) are a friend she trusts. Surely you won't violate that trust and take advantage of this quadruple amputee kitsune?

This sounds really fucking bizarre.
I would LOVE to read it.

>> No.27399952

>>27399612
fucking yourself in fub's body is mega gay

>> No.27400049

>>27399952
Do not think for a second I'd believe you wouldn't want to take Fubuki's vagina for a spin on the receiving end.

>> No.27400237

>>27399952
>>27400049

Also watching Fubuki (in your body) not only react to watching you user her body on your dick, but also watching her experience the feeling of having a dick, and what it feels to have a dick inside her own body's vag.

>> No.27400475

>>27400049
Of course, but i'd use her body to record the most degenerate material I could think of. Maybe have some lesbo sex with the holos, fubuki can stay with my body trapped on brazil for as long as i caree

>> No.27400568

>>27400237
>Watching (You)buki's face contort in pleasure as she delivers her first creampie and falls in love with the experience, taking the opportunity to bust nut after nut in her own body until there's no possible chance she hasn't impregnated herself
Exquisite.

>> No.27400804

>>27400568
with your own kids, no less
enjoy paying 18 years of child support

>> No.27400830

>>27400568
>Having an orgasm causes the body switch to happen again and again.
>Have wild sex with Fubuki that grows more and more passionate as you keep switching bodies.
>Truly falling in love with each other's bodies after you both pass out from fucking each other so hard.
Holy fuck, this has potential.

>> No.27401162

I'm scared to how fast this thread turned into become fubuki

>> No.27401546

>>27401162
Gross. It's just body swapping, not abject schizophrenia.

>> No.27401920

>>27397672
Fate has granted you the prologue to a Botan Marriage fic, don't waste this opportunity. Write about Botan walking down the aisle, marrying her, and enjoying the honeymoon with her.

>> No.27403226

I'm trying to go to sleep now and all I can think of is (You)buki railing me. Cheers, guys.

>> No.27403339

>>27397672
this dream is like something you'd find in a music video for some obscure band

>> No.27403631

>>27403226
you're welcome/my condolences

>> No.27404053

I'm kinda thinking of writing a Watame JOI fic because her cute and beautiful voice really does things for me. What sort of triggers/words would she use if she were to theoretically do a JOI asmr stream?

>> No.27404075

>>27403226
just jerk off and cum in your face and pretend is (you)buki doing it, it's pretty much the same thing

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>>27404053
>*crunch* *crunch* *crunch*

>> No.27405593

>>27404280
God my dick twitched.

>> No.27406810

>>27370059
>Though thinking about it, how would you write a compelling chuuba mind control fic?
Personally, I'd go for HoloX hypnotizing the rest of the company through different induction methods every chapter, as part of their plan to TAKE OVER THE WORLD!

>>27372278
Most good hypnofics, in my experience, have that.

>>27375582
Do they expand on characterization or help with pacing?

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>>27404053
"Oh, what's that? You're throbbing so much it's painful? Fufu, it's leaking so badly your hand is all sticky, is it?
How lewd, Anon... Aren't you way too lewd all on your own? After all... Watame... warukunai yo ne?"

>> No.27408991

Making haggis out of Watame's bladder!

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>>27399048
Replayed Hotline Miami recently, and HCAnon mentioned a while ago one of his ideas for The Cover Job was that you were more of a thug than an assassin so I've started working on something in the vein of those.

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>>27329147
"Match-Made", Round 2. Thanks again for all the positive feedback on the first chapter - it really got me going.
I don't know if I'll be as fast with the next part, but I'm working on it. Got some stuff coming up, though.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy this as much as the first installment - let me know what you think of it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRCxIJoXWqVWRSbxlY-NAw8ck_2Og_3B7hYp1jMbf2lD3BXlJHmNz0Tlpl84XSKyXFln0ncp4KQRfvO/pub

Tags: Koyori, Suisei, SFW (nudity), Fluff, Drama, Forced Marriage

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>>27411789
I loooooove spicy drama

>> No.27413296

>>27411789
Surely Abe wouldn't be opposed to the harem ending, right..?

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>>27411789
Oh man... I don't want Suisei to be stuck with a card carrying ugly bastard, but now I feel bad for the notcat notfox notbombu.

>> No.27413749

>>27317902
Gura looks hot here but uncomfortable to look at, as some sharks die when they don't constantly move through the water. It's like actually trying to kill the shork and it feels bad to risk killing someone.

Instead, what about safer competitive breathplay with Gura? (You) try to fuck her above water where's her breathing is worse and she gets winded really easily (add some gentle choking when needed), and she is trying to fuck you under water, using her extraordinary lung capacity to keep you breathing mouth to mouth?..

>> No.27414916

>>27413749
Gura dragging you to the bottom of the sea and giving you air only to extend the play sounds hotter, fucking brat

>> No.27416041

>>27414916
(You) dragging her to the beach and having your revenge!

>> No.27416580

>>27413749
Does Gura breathe via ram ventilation?

Does Watame breathe via shark ventilation?

>> No.27416684

>>27416580
>Does Watame breathe via shark ventilation?

I think she breathes via Asacoco.

>> No.27416984

>>27399048
>Kiara romance based on the Epic of Gilgamesh
Never thought I'd see babylonian mythology mentioned itt. I think the fic has potential.

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>> No.27421559

>>27421343
Yes, Polka-chan, what's your question?

>> No.27423425

>>27421559
Why do you stuff a eggplant into the front of your trousers when you're at the school?

>> No.27423583

>>27404053
She would ask you how it feels and then (after a pause for your imagined positive reply) tell you that she's happy you're having a good time, and that she hopes you can wait with finishing until she finishes streaming to make the good time last longer.

>> No.27423987

>>27421343
Clunny

>> No.27424058

>>27404053
You're not allowed to cum until you beat her in janken.

>> No.27424569

I'm going to sit on the face of all authors until they finish the next chapter of their WiP.

And no, I am not Polka. I am the opposite of Polka.

>> No.27424629

>>27424569
You're an anorexic boy?

>> No.27424767

>>27399391
What flowers would they be?

>> No.27425407

>>27411789
Hey anon if there isn’t steamy sex with both of these women at some point im going to be disappointed it’s what Abe would want

>> No.27425494

>>27424767
Dunno yet, need something with symbolism.

>> No.27426379

>>27425494
Well there's the edelweiss which german soldiers use to pin on their uniform as a sign they braved the alps and survived. I think that would work seeing how Kiara is a proud australian.

>> No.27427168

>>27411789
I have discovered bullying Koyori gets me going, especially when she cries. Thank you anon for the new fetish.

>> No.27428551

Miyoshino Shiki loves fruits and is making yabai sounds while trying to eat salami and sausages for a dare game.

>> No.27428735

>>27428551
I remember when people thought she was a guy.

>> No.27429760

>>27428551
Just now I realized I posted this in the wrong tab, because this post would be on topic in the bizarro /vt/ thread.

>> No.27430136

>>27428551
>Miyoshino Shiki
Literally who?

>> No.27430365

>>27428551
>>27429760
the prism thread is fucking dead most of the time and you post these here....

>> No.27430873

>>27411789
Your writing is a notch above what I expect of in fanfics. In particularly liked how the first Anon/Koyori interaction went in the first chapter - it works for both characters.

That said, I don't think the worldbuilding works if you think about it too much (the existence of rooms to newly assigned spouses imply people are just as horny as ever - but if that's the case, why the spouse assignment system? If it is a case of "people don't get togheter due to social interaction issues", why does the system even works?). Koyori's actions also seen a bit... Extreme, given how she met Anon a few weeks ago and they seem to barely have interacted in the meantime. That said, I think too much and we have barely seen Koyori 's side of the story. Great job anyway.

Unrelated, I have a Kurokami fluff fic in the works. That counts as Fubuki fluff, right?

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>>27430136

>> No.27432001

>>27431709
>trap

>> No.27432371

>>27411789
>>27413296
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>>27432371
are you ok?

>> No.27433510

>>27432371
He's manifesting.

>> No.27433727

>>27329224
I'm aware of the 2 rapefics and the Kiara reverse saviorfag story in the archive, but could someone take a crack at a fic where Kiara's needy tendencies are turned up to hyperbolic levels, causing her to break into the homes of kfp at night, forcing them to do such things as cuddle, praise her, and fondle her so she feels better about herself

>> No.27435943

>>27433727
So like a literal Kiara rapist fic? Perhaps with more of a focus on Kiara's mental state.

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>>27435943
sounds more like a menhera episode than a rape. Those usually end with the girl screaming at you before kissing you

>> No.27436592

>>27436274
...I want Kiara to do this to me

>> No.27436781

>>27436592
ummmm based and same

>> No.27438228

>>27436274
Latinas are crazy. My latina girlfriend was sending me pics of her spreading her pussy and asking for videos of me cumming, then she later broke up with me because I wasn't Christian, and one month later, she was making out with me again.

>> No.27438646

>>27438228
big w for you if true

>> No.27438834

>>27438228
I swear, those conquistadors were the luckiest men on the planet.

>> No.27439609

>>27438228
Unironically, they are some of the most insane chicks out there.

t. Sudaca.

>> No.27439656

>>27438228
Still got those vids anon?

>> No.27439790

>>27432558
no, i have exams next week and I fear loosing my scholarship

>> No.27439908

>>27439790
good luck anon

>> No.27440303

>>27439790
>loosing
Oh it's over for you pal

>> No.27440536

>>27329299
Genuinely thought holoturismo is dead. Loving where this is heading now

>> No.27440983

>>27411789
I think the conflict between Koyori and Anon feels a bit... forced? Maybe over the top? I can’t put my finger on it but it doesn’t feel right, like there should have been more build up or interactions to get where they are now. Still though, good shit.

>> No.27443541
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I like this hololy thing, getting to look up close at 3d models and pose them is nice

>> No.27444541

Whoever wrote the recent pekora fic, I applaud you, that was top quality stuff Hope to see more

>> No.27444943

>>27444541
i appreciate it brother. I think I can do better tho.

>> No.27445118
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>>27329224
Taking in stray Fubuki and Kurokami and raising them to be successful adults. Or raising them to be your daughterwives. Whichever you prefer.

>> No.27445359

>>27445118
This, but Kurokami steals your body and raises Fubuki and (You)rokami into her daughterwives.

>> No.27447566

>>27444943
Are you going to make something that ISN'T femboys next or are you typecasting yourself, to do another fic like that?

>> No.27447926

>>27447566
Don't worry about that. I'm the one who decides what to write in the end. As far femboys go, there is nothing else I could do aside from maybe a mike cat fic for the funny. I do have another WIPs with different tags, just need to get to them eventually

>> No.27449778

>>27411789
Fuck me this is a good series. The way you write the characters are so damn good. It feels strange to say this but the koyori wine pouring scene was kind of hot

>> No.27451225

>>27329224
A formal scientific log of the observable effects of Koyori's Lactation drug on each Holomem.

>> No.27452977

>>27385334

>> No.27453269

>>27329224
Having a date with your Hoshiyomi gf

>> No.27453450

>>27453269
Anon where's the chuubas in that prompt?

>> No.27453527

>>27453450
suisei

>> No.27453549

>>27411789
Damn government... Needs [removed] correction...
>>27453450
NTA The Hoshiyomi gf is Suisei in disguise trying to discreetly score some vitamin D from her male fans?

>> No.27453693

>>27453527
>>27453549
I guess that makes more sense, the only other way I'd think it would fit would be if (You) were actually Suisei (Boy).

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>> No.27456590

>>27455826
An infinite loop of ever-smaller Laplass...

>> No.27458205

>>27445359
If a chuuba ever stole my body I would simply use my textbook knowledge of all my weaknesses to defeat them, reclaim it, and then rape correct the everloving dogshit out of them.

>> No.27459282

>>27430873
>Unrelated, I have a Kurokami fluff fic in the works. That counts as Fubuki fluff, right?
It absolutely does and I thank you for it.

>> No.27460159

>>27458205
> Gotta chase her and club her over the head, what's she gonna do in this body, run 30 metres and collapse from exhaustion?
> I just gotta wait, the brain in that body will never produce enough happy chemicals to keep her motivated for anything.

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>> No.27462627

>>27451225
This but it's written like a doomed scientist's log that gets less scientifically dry and more obsessed with breast milk production the longer the log goes on for. Eventually ending with Koyori ending with Koyori announcing to the log that she'll start taking them to get induce more milk.

>> No.27463054

>>27462550
i can't believe she's proof reading omarun's continuation

>> No.27463352

>>27463054
Give it up anon Omarun is Cute and Funny never getting a part two.

>> No.27463829

>>27404053
Does this Watame pic I found in the horni thread motivate you to do the JOI?
https://files.catbox.moe/9pkso7.png

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>>27463352
Over my dead body it isn't. Now, when it's coming out, well, I guess we'll see how many adderalls I have left at the end of this stint.

>> No.27465042

>>27460159
anon...

>> No.27465144

>>27463352
anything can get a next part, aye? you never know, someone just has to step up and write it. instead of complaining that noone elses doing it

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>>27464575

>> No.27465449

>>27464575
Given how many WIPs you've been talking up over the past year, I'd trust you about as far as I could throw you.

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>>27465449
I'm not going to say that's unwarranted, but if I ever drop a story or have no intention of continuing it, I'll make it known.

>> No.27467533

>>27465993
Jesus christ how many stories do you have WIP? So far I'm counting like 4?

>> No.27468018

>>27462627
hot

>> No.27468241

>>27467533
Last he gave out the exact stories he was working on it was like 10, and they weren't vague wips either. They seemingly had solid ideas.

>> No.27468910

>>27411789
Finally got round to reading this, and it is thoroughly enjoyable. Both Anon and Koyori act out their surface motivations fairly clearly, and the part where he eavesdropped on her really highlighted her own personal motivations.

Also can't shake the feeling that there's something more sinister with Suisei. Maybe you've got a spicy plot twist cooking, or maybe I'm just in need of meds.

>> No.27469135

>>27465993
do some planning my dude

>> No.27470469

>>27468910
Honestly wouldn't even be mad if this fic Selen's us with a third chapter cruel plot twist involving Suisei.

>> No.27472241

>>27467533
Not really 10 like the other anon said but stories that are about half-finished right now, I have 4. Then Hag Orgy which I haven't started on part two just yet, and the next chapter of Holoturismo that's in similar state.

>>27469135
I try to, but unfortunately my time on this earth has taught me that when it comes to me, planning is indispensable but plans are useless. To be honest, this is why I was initially worried about releasing those stories in chapters to begin with because I'm so easily distracted.

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>>27470469
please no

>> No.27473006

>>27472689
I mean I'm not saying Suisei would die in a car crash. It could be setup for some PseudoNTR where Suisei was manipulating Anon all to amuse Her and Her husband (who she loves due to how the algorithm seemingly works at a sexual level). You know for a cruel third chapter twist.

>> No.27473137

>>27473006
yeah nah

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>>27473137
Don't worry anon, if this isn't what the author has planned for chapter 3/whatever Suisei is doing then I'll write my own fanchapter and make it as cruel as possible.

>> No.27473462

>>27470469
Suisei kills herself on stream blaming the system, if we are going full Selen crash
Her husband actually putting in work and becoming better for Suisei's sake which plants doubt into the legitimacy of her love for Anon

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I'm gonna need the strongest fluff you've got.
Leave the bottle.

>> No.27474139

>>27473409
Based as fuck. Remember to make her boyfriend black for as big a whammy as possible against all the incels posting here.

>> No.27474190

>>27474020
What's wrong, anon? Mom finally told you to get a job or move out?

>> No.27474774

>>27474020
Play it again sam

>> No.27474821

>>27474190
My dog died my dad's got cancer and I'm quadriplegic. Do you have a rec or not?

>> No.27475033

>>27474821
Paradise Lost

>> No.27475132

>>27474821
...how are you posting if you're a quadriplegic? do you have a dedicated scribe for shitposting on 4chan?

>> No.27475172

>>27475132
I think he's being facetious, anon.

>> No.27475401

>>27475033
Admit I laughed at this. Saw it coming like Hasselhoff on Baywatch, but it was still funny.

>> No.27475482

>>27474821
Paradise regained

>> No.27475965

>>27475482
Quite a refined palate you've acquired.

>> No.27476504

I'm horny and want to jerk off. Which story should I beat off to?

No ringo or insect fics, thanks.

>> No.27476684

>>27476504
Petting Your Fox

>> No.27476812

>>27476504
Hot Like A Star

>> No.27476832

>>27476504
Nursing catto

>> No.27477050

>>27476684
Actually whacked off to that a few days ago. Great story, both parts. Would like to see more of that universe's Fubuki explored, as the background was really cute. Wouldn't even have to be nsfw to be interesting.

>>27476812
>>27476832
I'm going with Hot Like A Star simply because I haven't read it, whereas I've read Nursing Catto several times.

>> No.27477242

>>27476504
stolen dreams

>> No.27477773

Is the author of Hot Like A Star here? What's going on in this fic? Is it rape or isn't it? I'm so confused. She sounded legitimately afraid then turns around and says she wanted it. I did a double take at this.

>> No.27478047

>>27477773
Read to the end, it's a commission fic and the guy who paid for it wanted it that way. The smut is still good if you can forgive the insane characterizarion.

>> No.27479023

>>27478047
Yeah, once the characters straightened out, the sex was pretty good. I couldn't get off to it though, the whiplash from the tonal shift halfway through kinda broke the story.

>> No.27479373

>>27477773
you got tricked my dude, that fic was criticized to hell and back when it was posted for this exact reason

>> No.27479581

>>27479373
Oh, really? At least it wasn't a shock fic. Still, this story probably would have been really good if it was all the way rape or if Sara Hoshikawa was the one pressuring Anon from the beginning. The author knows their smut.

>> No.27482620

Roll over you're hogging the blanket

>> No.27482841
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Holy fuck guys, thanks for all the feedback. I was a bit surprised by some of the guesses (and wishes) for further plot points, as I always had a fairly good idea where I wanted to go with the story. Kinda fun to see what other routes I could take, but never have thought of before. Some of the ideas aren’t even half-bad. No car crash though.
Thanks for making me aware that the jumps and time-skips take a bit of the natural dynamic out of Koyo’s and (you)r relationship. I couldn’t find a better way to significantly progress the plot without them though. The story is already far longer than I expected, so I felt them necessary. Sorry about that.
That Koyo’s actions and the premise as a whole is a bit over-the-top is intended, as it was a rather absurd prompt at some point… but I wasn’t confident enough to give it a genuine comedy tag.
Anyways, thanks for reading my blog - hope to see you in the next one

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>>27482620
haaaah?

>> No.27483727

>>27482846
Throat swabbing Aqua while squeezing the milk out of her massive titties...

>> No.27483968

>>27414916
I agree with this. Imagine being forced to inhale Gura's breath as your only source of oxygen.

>> No.27487488

>>27483894
>>27486774
some (wholesome?) reverse rape failure greentexts from the Rosemi general

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>>27411789
Just read the first chapter and holy shit.
This is some great stuff. Your prose is really engaging.

Have a picture of my wife in return.

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>>27487488
I read this in her dumb voice. Tho, i can't imagine rosemi in a NSFW scenario. She is too anti sex, despite how much she tries to be otherwise

>> No.27489621

>>27488733
I tried making her lines close to how she speaks in her streams, glad it worked out.
And yeah, same. Hence why none of these actually work out, and anon doesn't push the matter.

>> No.27490628

>>27482846
Sex with Aqua while the tiny Shion doll (who's alive) watches!

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Why are we still here, Anonymous? Just to suffer?

Every night, I can feel it. My eye. My sight. The life I lost... the friends that betrayed me... it won't ever stop hurting. It's like they're all still there.

You feel it too, don't you? I'm gonna make them give back our past.

>> No.27491438

>>27491280
This could be a prompt where Michael deals with trust issues at her new job.

>> No.27492059

>>27491280
>My eye. My sight
damn, did they stab her eye too? This sounds like the start of a heel turn

>> No.27492862

>>27487488
Very cute, very Rosemi.
>>27329147

>> No.27493020

>>27492059
The power of an idol is great and terrible indeed. To ascend to it and be torn from it, can cause... Difficulties in living.
...
Mike cat would honestly be a pretty compelling character for a drama piece if it wasn't for the crippling stupidity.

>> No.27493712

>>27493020
All good villains need a crippling weakness to cause their downfall

>> No.27496445

>>27493712
Assuming they don't win.

>> No.27497055

>>27496445
true, Mike will win the girl, the story and the hearts of all fans

>> No.27497638

>>27497055
I wanna stick my dick in her

>> No.27498172

>>27496445
>>27497055
After a torrid, violent turn of events including at least one gunfight, Mike and Kson will convert Kanata. Then they will rescue and rehabilitate, in order of severity, Aloe, Sio, and Hitomi Chris. Finally, after a cataclysmic final battle featuring the main themes of all three games before it, Kson will fight and subdue all of ex-HoloCN, who will abandon the CCP and join her side.

The story ends on a cliffhanger as the new squad advances on Cover HQ.

>"Source??????????" 8^O (<- this emoji denotes the questioner's low testosterone)
It was revealed to me in a dream.

>> No.27499183

>>27497638
Why?

>> No.27499197

>>27497638
Gross

>> No.27500184

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