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>Clothing
What does the average Joe wear daily? Any formal dress impacted by tradition/culture? Is fashion being split by class or regional differences? Climate or other fantastical wackery making certain attire a necessity? Paint us a clearer picture of who you'll see walking through the streets!
>Food
What crops do your people grow for consumption? What about the food you import, and from where? Do you have unique delicacies? What are the common snacks or meals for the working class, or the rich and powerful? Any food reserved for ritual purposes? How about etiquette when eating? Any special practices during mealtime?
>Entertainment
What kinds of entertainment is popular for your people? How important are they seen as part of life? Do different class people have sufficiently different tastes? How much do the chuuba gods play a role in these entertainments?
>Religion
What religious rituals does your nation have to worship its deities? What's the religious structure look like? What's the official stance on other faiths?
>Alcohol and Drink
what do your people drink and what's is it made from? what sort of culture is there around drinking in your split?
>Development
What are your nation's current goals now? What are you trying to aim for in your development? Would said development make your people happy?
>Funeral Rites
How do your people observe the death of one of their own? What kind of ceremonies are held? How are their belongings handled?
>Music
What kind of musical instruments/music does your nation make/use?
>Name
Does your thread's nation have any naming conventions? What are people named, and why? Do names have meaning? Do people have surnames, and how are those derived?
>Politics
How does the balance of power look in your nation? who are the ruling/most powerful class? Who are they competing with?
>Superstition/Folklore
What sort of superstitions/folklore do your nation's people have, as in, are there things that the people believe in or things they think they know to be real that are not real on a meta level? What are omens of good or bad fortune? What mythical monsters lurk in the forests, or in the depths of the sea? Do some foods or materials have to be prepared in a certain way before they are seen as fit to use?
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>>26683428
Oh yea, should mention that for artificial creation, we would need at least 500 years at the current pace, and as for natural birth, it's completely random. San, Sana's other half, as well as her big brother (don't ask) descend on this mortal plain every once in a while, and after minbreaking 24 hours of breeding (at least by Starmother accounts) a Starchild is created. And since they are always made with a specific purpose in mind, there can be centuries between them. Hell, we might not ever get a naturalborn, since curiously, all Starmothers have pink hair (which is one of the natural colours for us), and all our pink haired female Sanallites have perished since we crashed here, sadly.

>>26683571
Oh, you are in for a TREAT

Also, why the fuck thread always dying when I'm in the middle of typing shit!?! Die when I post you cunt!

>>26683571
sad! many such cases

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>>26684592

>>26684131
Then I guess it can be a reason why Starfleet decided to abandon /nasa/? Because they'd rather leave you all to die and keep it as a secret? Though that also leaves the possibility that they will dispatch a cruiser and exterminatus Vitubia.

>>26684996
Nah, they just don't know. Our expected date of return is some decades into the future, hell, it took almost 20 years just to get here! And we are far outside the reach of any even half stable communications, we basically went dark. Such is the life when you are on the frontier!

And if Cass ever decides that she does in fact want to create an artificial one, she has all the tools for that. Well, the genetic ones at least. Those seem to have thankfully survived. The problem comes with the mechanical parts, and as I said, those are at least 500 years into the future, if not more.
But to save us all a headache, she won't attempt that, as by that point we will both be a stable country here (hopefully) and had our meeting with the search vessel, which would have probably gone well. Hell, Vitubia might even get official recognition and be entered into the galactic federation we lead, depending on it's development level, so a return to space isn't really necessary. Oh, and a more pressing problem she has to consider might be the event DRT-3205 where an Artificial somehow woke up and...well, let's just say that we still deeply regret the loss of that planet. They had the most amazing chocolate.

>>26685366
Ahh... We should just have had yall be natives from a local asteroid or something... Roads not taken.

>>26685807
For the love of Sana don't let the rep hear that or he might just explode. But yea, I do sometimes wonder what we would be if we had a different start...

If it's any consolation, when this planet explodes, we will also deeply regret the loss. Y'all were fun to hang around. And yes, that includes the squirrels.

>>26685912
I won't let it explode, not before I can take the Deadbeat navy to space and play out LOtGH with yall.

>>26686024
Well that solves that. I guess it won't explode. Thanks Deadbro you the best!

>>26686099
I try sanabro. I'm headed to bed so try to keep the nasarep sane while I sleep.

>>26685912
if all things go south the onobots will die in good conscience knowing one of them is surviving and potentially able to inform the onobots somewhere ele in space about what happened since he lives in /nasa/'s walls

>>26686277
Oh yea, wanted to ask: Do we plan on having the onobot leave the station after he gets space, kinda like he was on a school trip or something, or have him stay? I kinda want our hero to proudly waddle into the sunset, proud of his no doubt legendary exploits that will be told for generation to come.

Also, why is always that I start these threads with something weird? yesterday it was dicks, today it's planets exploding. Wonder what we'll talk about tommorow...

>>26686457
Sanalite dick knots exploding

>>26686717
Inside robutt?

>>26686419
hmm a rough idea for the overall flow of the story could be for Cass to just lead him aroudn for her own amusment and 9141 following what she says, but as Cass starts to run out of ideas and 9141 starts to get a bit sad he still has not foudn space, Cass realizes she actually kidna like sthe fellow and wants him give his wish but does not know how since she knows they cannot actually go to space only for 9141 to bring up the holo chamber he learned of at the start and Cass giving him a grand showing of all kidn fo space stuff in there, 9141 is happy and wants to share his findigns with the rest of Onobots. Cass is sad he wants to leave but also happy he found what he wanted and they say their heartfelt goodbyes

>>26686809
That seems like a really good plan! Finishing the next part now, and since my brain is weird I also already have the ending kinda sorted out (like, the last few lines between Cass and a SUPRISE GUEST wooo whoever could it be?!) So I'll add that to the end, and you can give feedback if you want.

>>26687223
sure knock yourself out, you got time too since i have to switch from late shift to early shift so next 24 hours are gonna be work>sleep>work for me

also interested to know what you think about the little joke at the expense of your principal that i added^^

>>26687489
I absolutely love it kek

>>26687540
anyway, off to slavery, see you in 2 days

have fun all

>>26687489
Also, thank god you kept the dialogue nice and short in the first part, I want to set this piece sometime before the shit hit the fan, so some characters, namely Principal, are still around the station. No weird timelines today, huzzah!

bump

/warkop/ lore:
/warkop/ is a fairly new nation, established on the ruins of /nijiid/. It is inhabited by Nusantaran speakers, scaterred around the worlds but united in one nation. /warkop/ is currently maintained by a retainer loyal to Mythia Batford, a half-vampire princess, but other than that, it has no definite ruler. The nation is unexpectedly peaceful, possibly due to Nusantaran shamans praying for protections from evil and madness.

>>26689518
>>26683995
Here you go, friend

>>26683119
>It esentially enables FTL travel, by grabbing the space in front of the station and extending it (like you would a rubber band)
wow, just like in star trek. i think i was the one who suggested that to sanalites some time ago, actually. also, the artificial, enslaved starchild reminds me of the necrons as well as the emperor. if your's is dead, and cannot be reanimated, it isn't overpowered yet, and if /asp/ can let people achieve godhood, then a scientifically advanced society that exists in a universe with the same kind of magic could definitely use godhood as a sort of technology by manipulating how the magic quanta/conceptual realm works.
with that said, space and time are not two separate things. if you can "grab space in front of you" then you'd essentially be grabbing time, as well. in star trek, they curved space in front and behind them so that they could cause an inert body, as much as that can be said in space with no reference point, to naturally "fall" towards a direction despite technically never building any of it's own momentum. basically, it's creating an artificial gravity well in one direction that allows it to build momentum through "falling" through space. if you accept this as the interpretation, having something like that could allow for time-fuckery, which tends to be more complex than it's worth, not that it can't be solved theoretically with ease, just from a story writing and world building standpoint.
if i were to try to combine this with existing lore, i would imagine these artificial demigods as manifestations of a chuuba through the chuubanite itself, which is not the same as the chuuba being /here/. basically, they're very advanced golems that effectively represent their related chuuba through powerful transubstantiation. /meat/ does this on a small scale with their priests, but they are obviously more rudimentary, and thus can't really compare in any way. any system could have them, but currently sanalites are the only ones advanced enough to to make proper use of them, let alone to make their own.
tell me how you think of it, and if you have any suggestions or requests, this is obviously a new concept i am working with, so there are bound to be areas i am not considering, or that i am doing a disservice to your vision on. anyone else who has any feedback and is interested in chuubanite discussions inb4 "hur dur magic is everything" feel free to give your ideas or complaints.

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>>26687815
A'ight my part is up. Hope the slavery won't suck too much. Nothing much happened in the part anyway, but we got out of the room and suprise suprise, our hero is seeing stars again.

Alright, time to work on some mudane work today. Call the the "Secret Histories of Pomerlane"

>>26691431

bump

TOMORROW WE GONNA TITTYFUCK SAPLINGS INTO SUBMISSION AND NUT ALL OVER THEIR FACES

Alright, anons, this is something I am not confident in because I am not good at this type of work but here it is, my new "spin-off" book to the Pomerlane saga, "Secret Histories". I have based this upon the work of Herodotus, which is to bring to you tales told around the world by both Rulers to commoners about Pomerlane, and the man he truly is.
https://rentry.org/x4kr7

>>26696202
I desire a lot of feedback here because this is not my strength at all. I can write battles, wars, and politics better than most but when it comes to this, I struggle. Criticism is desperately needed. I understand some here think I do not take criticism but truthfully, I do take sincere criticism.

I also want to say I love you guys so much, it's refreshing to be part of a group that enjoys writing and world building so much. It's so chill here, unlike about 90% of the board, especially NijiEN General which is a shithole, but the only shithole I can discussion Wave 6 in. Thanks bros, love ya!

>>26682424
It's supposed to be a very corrupted version of Ouro Kronii, unrelated(?) to /infinity/'s worship of her. I need to do my reps myself on more of the /infinity/ lore

>>26689518
ID bros, since you are close to NijiEN, lets establish diplomatic relations and trade.

>>26696202
Not the best at stories myself but looked good on my end. The only thing I think can really be improved would be to talk a bit more about the scenery and background, though I can't fault you since I barely do this myself. You did good my dude.

>>26696202
>>26696303
I suck at dialogue too but I do like Caudex, the narrator and writer of this piece, and I feel like I got just from that encounter a good look into who Pomerlane and why it seems like the legend was made.

>>26696560
>scenery and background
Agreed, that's a goal for other chapters. I just didn't feel like it was necessary since the little story told was basically in some room in the Town Hall. Didn't feel like it added to the story in that part at least, especially considering Caudex would have been overly familiar with Aquileia and the town hall to the point he would have likely missed it. Thanks!

>>26696605
Glad you like Caudex, he is the type of ancient historian I love, like Herodotus, who just tells what he has been told and leaves it up to the reader to believe it or not. Pomerlane, i hope this was illustrated, is extremely perceptive of other people and loves to read such histories because it helps him understand current problems better.

>>26696812
Also forgot to say, I love the little Pomade wordplay you made, made me chuckle thinking that Pomade is related to Pomu.

>>26696915
Glad someone got it, lol. I know Pomade wasn't really used until the 20th century but I couldn't help myself given that I use it myself.

Diana logs ch 6.

It is finally time for us to begin departing from /meat/. Over the past few months I think it is safe to say that a lot has changed in both myself and the entire crew when it comes to perspective. The meatheads actually want to help us out and they have done so tremendously.
I believe one of the earliest accounts of risuner ship training was when one of our pinisi was sunk due to a storm and they trained the crew. Not really sure what they had to do in exchange but they did make it back home safely so I assumed their intentions were good. I have to go home and not only provide the witches with what could potentially be a variety of new gem powers but also spread the word about meatheads being friends to anyone left that still has bad feelings about them

These guys have done all that we could think of. They provided us with a lovely inn, gave us guides, showed us around all the places we wanted to see, and even were cool enough to give us food that is apparently quite nice for them. Heck it wasn't what we were used to but still tasty.
Even now a lot of my crew have baskets full of merch from here including nuts and little trinkets. I never even got to ask Tecpashochitl or Itstemocthe cost of us staying. It was probably a lot now that I think about it. I actually feel a little bad about my previous mindset. Well it was understandable at the time so not really.

About their boats. I can't stop but think about that insane shipyard. Their devices to build boats is crazy. They can build so much more and probably so much faster. Their technology is ahead of ours but then again it has been made apparent that we are behind the entire world when it comes to technology. A lot of their boats actually looked kind of similar to our pinisi now that I think about it.
Well it's not really a surprise. If I am remembering correctly, the pinisi was built using meat design with a few changes. There was even that captain that had traditional risuner weaponry who I personally thought was pretty cool.

My mind is going all over the place. It feels like we have not been there long even though it has been quite some time. However as I begin to depart I gracefully said thank you to all our new friends, even the gem merchant I had sex with. Vitkine was my first woman to exchange nuts with me. It was a bit....odd but it felt good. Probably would stick to men in the future but in the end she seemed to love it and I got my pretty gems so it all works out.

As I am writing this we are all loading the last of the cargo and preparing to go home. Of course we had a deadline and the last thing we need is to have the risuners back home to think we are lost and declare war on /meat/. It wouldn't really end well seeing how fucking good they are at killing. But we have time and should be home soon. With our ships now full of food for the journey back home I waved goodbye. Now all I have to do is wait to get home.

Goodbye /meat/.

>>26697969
FUCKING ANCHOR BTW >>26683995

>>26697969
good story. and good job for being able to finish it.

Why thank you. Ill be heading to the college campus for some off time. (i think most people know what i do at college) But when I get back the rose story will also be seeing its conclusion

bump

>>26697969
Nice work bro.

The next starchild will be born after Sana's graduation. That's when Sanalites leave Vitubia forever. Guess I'll write stories and not touch /nasa/'s history or lore from now on. I clearly lack the knowledge of Warhammer and Star Trek to do anything. The things I wrote is based on what I know. Its clear I need to step back from writing to figure out my future role, if I have one.

>>26700647
you can always ask others to help you understand, or to try to not rely so heavily on references to other media. we would hate to lose anyone, especially if they have contributed good things in the past.

>>26701048
I am not quitting. I am stepping back from writing lore because I'm not infected with the consoomer media virus (I kid obviously). I was hoping something believable would come up for FTL. Now I have to take a few college classes in Warhammer 40k lore and Onions Trek before I'm qualified to write lore. Guess I'll stick to writing current developments.

FTL engines are cool, but I prefer warp gates for interstellar travel. There’s something badass about them that I just love, even if they aren’t as good as FTL.

TIL somethings are easier to write while drunk. I should invest in a bigger stash.

Secret Histories: From a Scout
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>>26701603
who said you need to do much research into consoomer media? if an explanation uses something else as a reference, it is either meant to simplify the explanation, on the assumption more people understand that other thing, or they are just stating the inspiration for their work. please continue writing lore if it interests you.

>>26700647
Wait a minute, Sana's graduating?

Just realized "Secret Histories" basically means that this has been a secret because no one has heard of these tales before. That's a cool way of framing it.

>>26702651
I have to do research in order for me to understand the lore. I don't know fuck all about Warhammer 40k. So to help understand worldbuilding because our lore is now based on Warhamner 40k I need to learn Warhammer 40k.

>>26703010
>Warhamner 40k
Is that just /NASA/ or the whole world because I don't know jack shit about it either.

>>26703130
Mostly for /nasa/. But other nations build their lore with Warhammer 40k as well.

>>26702710
Fuck off Mozzie.

>>26703220
>The next starchild will be born after Sana's graduation.
That's why I said that. I wasn't trying to start shit, it just came off like that when you said it. Just was confused.

As for Warhammer 40k, Why should I build my lore based off of that? When did that become the standard? I personally do not like 40k .

>>26683995
Hooman NPC for the risuners' visit. Use him how you like, or don't.

https://rentry.org/uocoh

Should be under the tri-fleet entry

So I have a question about /nasa/'s omnipotent and all knowing AI: Why did Cassandra go with the Principal's order to lock down the station? Why did the AI not revoke the Principal's permissions and lock him out of the system? Why did Cass not alert the military with a red flag order to overthrow the Principal when he issued the lock down? I understand I will have to wait until 2 AM for this answer. I have to ask now.

>>26703369
If we're referencing 40k stuff then it helps to know about it at least. Its the same with referencing other media. You don't copy it exactly. You just pick the parts you like and build from there.

>>26703010
If you want to read up on 40k, unironically visit the /tg/ wiki (1d4chan). It's a lot better than the wiki. Lexicanum is pretty good too. Anything but the fandom wiki.

>>26703709
I understand that part, but what I am asking is did i miss when it was said 40k would be referenced as a whole. I'm really not interested in building that into own lore unless it is agreed upon by most writers here. ( I really just don't want to read up on something I have no interest in when I am still figuring out things with how I have set my own story. It will just confuse me more.)

Let me get this straight
>Pomerlane Anon changes lore in all of NijiEN
>Most agree on 40k
>Suddenly its not ok to change lore because its his lore.
Dude, how obnoxious can you fucking get?

>>26704052
ffs, HE GOT PERMS TO DO THAT. Why do you schizos hate him so much?

>>26701877
Mega structures are cool period. FTL gates have the added benefit of many of them being built by an ultra-advanced civilization (cliched, I know). Them being strategically important also adds to the story too.

>>26703976
No one said you have to base your lore off 40k. They're just saying that many anons here build off it

>>26704368
Oh ok, I was panicking for a bit there. Thanks.

>>26703976
/nasa/ just yoinked some stuff from 40k for their FTL tech, I don't think anyone else has to think about that for the foreseeable future.

>>26704052
>Most agree on 40k
It's just NASA. Stop shitting up the thread.

don't respond to shitposters, it just encourages them

>>26704568
This. Dont even bother defending me. I dont care.

>>26704597
Based

"While we bickered amongst ourselves with the schizos and traitors, while we forged new bonds with powers abroad, while we indulged in new sensations; A new threat rear its ugly head. From deep within our own people. Zeal beyond compassion. A revanchist thirst that shan't be quenched."

>>26704671
Oh no... /inf/ is going to have its own civil war arc too?

>>26704671
Whats this? Clock nazis?

>>26704671
Pomerlane is going to have to save us from the clock nazis.

Pomerlane anon, have you given any thought to the empire's timeline? Around when would you say Lazulight's lands were first invaded by each wave? I'm trying to map out Luxiem/Noctyx's timelines atm and while I can do them relative to each other easily enough I need input to figure out their place in the continent as a whole

>everyone's occupied with squirrels, dryads, and space men
>the clocks are going full borg
Cant leave your eyes off them for one minute

>>26705139
yeah, I am going to have to work that out. I will say this, I don't think Luxiem and Noctyx are the same because Obsydia's invasion is what changed things. Like it caused such disruption that the Badlands were formed.

One more thing
>>26681489
>>26704671
These arent mutually exclusive

>>26705799
How is Takeus waking up in /pcg/ related to clock nazis?

Meanwhile squirrels are horny.

>>26706004
You guys grow horns now!?

>>26706004
No, if anything they're hairy

Thought about what to do with gravity tech and the starchild. This is just a few ideas. The starchild is like a bio-android. Bio-androids come from Outlaw Star. They're pretty much artificially constructed humans who's cell structure can interact with machines. The god emperor of man has "psychic powers". The starchild would not have psychic power. I want to say starchildren come from a line of special evolved human who have the brains and the body to interact with machines as a central unit. Their bodies can conduct the energy necessary to create a gravity well used for a warp jump. Starchildren are completely unaware of everything outside of themselves because their brains are engineered to only process information and energy for warp jumps. Any new memories within the starchild will disrupt the calculations with catastrophic results. This is why starchildren only communicate with the AI. The reason Sanalites are unaware of the starchild's existence is becaused AI algorithms are the supreme authority of /nasa/. The AI is the captain of the starship. It is the end all be all of authority. If the AI deems you a dangerous person it will send a red flag to the Principal who then signs a warrant for your arrest. The AI is not infallable. It is engineered by humans which means there's sometimes bugs in the system.

The AIs have decided to support S.T.A.B.L.E because what the S.T.A.B.L.E party does is restrict unpredictable human behavior. AIs hate unpredictability. If the AI can encourage via algorithms to promote S.T.A.B.L.E ideology then it will succeed in domesticating humans to become predictable NPCs. /nasa/ rejects this idea. Cassandra most likely is an old-fashioned ancient AI created during the pioneer days of space fairing. Perhaps Cassandra understands human unpredictability is how the species survives. Perhaps Cassandra doesn't have as many tweaks by the homeworld's AI that favor human domestication. Maybe Cassandra went with the lock down to test the Sanalites on how they will react to life without her in the station. Alternatively Cassandra needed the lock down to reroute all power to her internal machines in order to "save" the starchild.

This might be a retarded idea. I thought about what if the starchild is still "alive" but paralyzed? The starchild is a paraplegic that lost its ability to use half of its body which makes it worthless for the warp drive. However a living starchild is better than a dead starchild. If the starchild is a girl then perhaps some nerve implants can restore enough function of her lower body for her to procreate a clone. Her life inside the pod is over. But maybe she could have a life outside. If Cassandra does this then she will become a rogue AI. Again saving the starchild by having her join /nasa/ as a civilian is probably a stupid idea. However I really do like scenarios that make interesting stories when it happens.

As for the starchild outside the pod she has no powers. At best she can communicate with machines by touching their glass or graphine control panels via universal circuit. She'd be a frail girl in a wheelchair under constant medical care. And despite Sanalites being rough and tussle Aussies they will welcome her as part of their family and will kill anyone that dares to harm her. Especially if the starchild can intercept direct broadcasts from Sana.

No anchor. These are just ideas I need to get approved by the other Sanalites. I smell an opportunity for a great story.

>>26705681
Many of the boys' societies will contain supernatural elements. Several times now, you've stated your reluctance to include magic in your own writing. We can make use of this. How would you feel about something like
>Obsydia's invasion causes the Badlands to form
>periodic attempts are made to reclaim it, but schizos are too numerous
>Empire basically gives the land up as lost, though they nominally still own it
>time passes (decades? centuries? this will probably depend on how the rest of the timeline shakes out)
>the first of the Kindred, fleeing from a near extinction event in their original homeland, arrive on the northern shores of Ninisani
>oops all schizos
>fighting breaks out between Kindred and schizos
>Lucubs were already here and living in the badlands. Fairly primitive at this point, they were mostly ignored as savages by the Empire
>Yaminions also here. Fairly small community living on the southern edge of /2434/ at this point. The formation of the Badlands has been troublesome for them since now they have outlaws and schizos mucking about at their outskirts
>ally with Kindred
>desperation and the advantage of unfamiliar weapons/tactics allow them to drive some of the schizos back, carving out a small chunk of territory
>they claim the land for themselves
>Empire is pissed about outsiders taking their land, muster forces to retaliate
>normally they’d win pretty handily, but having to cross the Badlands weakens land-based forces significantly
>furthermore chuubanite magic is weird and unfamiliar to most of Ninisani at this point
>Kindred still pretty severely outclassed in terms of sheer scale, but they won’t back down because they have literally nothing to lose, they were already threatened with extinction anyways
>Boys’ alliance slowly pushed back but they put up a fight. War drags on
>Quilldren and Mystakes arrive
>suddenly the boys’ alliance gains tons of bodies to throw at the problem and tactics noticeably improve
>both sides lose a lot of people as the boys continue to push into the Badlands
>it’s a net loss for everyone at this point and the schizos are still knocking at the doors
>Empire reluctantly considers maybe Badlands aren’t really worth continuing to lose lives over
>treaty grudgingly signed by both sides
>Luxiem's kingdoms formally recognized as part of the empire
I'm phone posting please excuse me if there are any grievous typos or formatting errors here

>>26693042
alright takign a small break before bed and checked it out. wonder how much of lamington gets damaged before the end of the story^^

also if shitposters and schizos are bored please feel free to visit /vrt/ we hadn't had schizos in a while to the point we are now larping as our own schizos.

>>26706088
Yeah we call them penises. Plant people wouldn't understand.

What kind of breads or desserts Risuners would be interested in eating at /nasa/? We can make beer nuts.

>>26708456
Sweet bread. Cornbread would work too. I suppose chocolate if you have it.

>>26707306
Sounds good to me. Although I think the Empire by this point has reformed into allowing other groups to settle. Think of it like Foederati in the Roman Empire. They would rather have the 10 civilized tribes carve out their own fiefdoms than let the schizos continue. Same thing with Yeah. Empire’s power was broke by Obsydia and Pomeranius so the Badlands have been gone since Pomeranius time (before Ethyria)

>>26708663(me)
Schizos are unironically one of the tougher forces in Ninisani. If you want, you could just have them settled there by an Emperor who wanted to weaken schizos.

>>26708535
So sweet yellow corn bread and chocolates. Are you sure that's all you want?

>>26683995
Dear Risuners, we hate to see you leave but love to watch you go, so let me deliver unto you a Parting Gift.
https://rentry.org/izq5r
>>26706004 I hope you enjoy it then :D I've never done anything like this before. Any criticism is welcome.

What is everyone feeling about Secret Histories? Want some feedback.

>>26708663
>>26708825
Ah, I see. Quilldren and Kindred will definitely have to be foreign in origin due to the lore I'm working on, but I like the idea of Lucubs having been Imperial citizens sent to settle out in the Badlands on purpose due to their unique constitutions making them suited for it.

>>26708937
IS THAT-

>>26709067
That works, You could even have them be exiled Pomudachi because Luca is Pomu’s rival (as a joke)

>>26708937
Well looks like you really couldn't keep yourself from at it mate.

>>26709160
Also, might be easier for them to fall under two Kingdoms based on their wave. Like Ethyria.

>>26709226
I always want to add that they should be highly populated imo. But thats my opinion. It just makes more sense with how general is.

>>26708937
fucking finally

>>26709226
I'm not sure what you mean by this

>>26709385
Two states for Luxiem and Notcyx respectively. Not every nation needs to be a nation state if you understand, /yeah/ isn't for example. Unless I missed something.

>>26709521
I am also saying this for your own sake because you have HALF on NijiEN

>>26709169
I did indeed google for inspiration without permission

>>26709521
>>26709588
Ahhh, yeah I get you. I've already been considering that approach for Noctyx but it doesn't make sense for Luxiem, the fanbases are too different and there's actually surprisingly little crossover between them. In-universe they'll probably need to consolidate further into the future of Vitubia especially since, as you said their land is really small for the amount of people living in it, but with the state of the world as it is now they'll probably remain small fractured kingdoms until something forces them to change.

Question. Do Risuners want to try chocolate cornbread, chocolate chip cornbread, chocolate broiche, or marbled chocolate and white broiche?

>>26709790
See this is why i didnt write for the boys. With my TL, it will be interesting. I think Wave 6 will through a wrench into everything in the end

>>26709898(me)
You’re doing great. You have good thoughts and the Lore makes sense to me and just fits.

>>26709898
Wave 6 and EN3 are issues for the whole world, desu,

>>26709898
NTA just a lurker here
I've actually been wondering what exactly you nijireps are planning to do about new waves. Will you guys just keep settling the badlands? What happens when you run out of space? Luxiem and Noctyx having such tiny territories is already kind of stretching belief

>>26709991
if en ever includes males (with obligatory collabs) i truly believe the whole world will just collapse and civilization will revert to something that would make uncle ted proud

>>26709992
They will have to take land some where. EN3 will cause even worse problems.

>>26710053
Holoworld would collaspe. nijiworld just will turn into an ever bloated Empire with smaller and smaller states. LazuLight and Obsydia will have to lose land, especially /haha/ and /rose/.

>>26710068
as of right now that is no problem at all, there is still enough land not specified and the countries are all huge as it is.

>>26710068
Just give GGG to EN3 since they claim they rule the waves

>>26710192
>/rose/
Wouldnt that destroy their lore?

>>26710310
Yeah, this. Earth has almost 200 countries in it. We can definitely slap more countries in our own world

>>26710068
If nothing else, there's a big unoccupied spot now that a certain green haired flatty is gone

>>26710452
With respect to Rosebro, we will all need to adapt to Wave 6; /haha/ and /rose/ given the land they control will have to adapt as well unless we decide to city state every wave, which is frankly insulting to them. The boys deserve more land too but I dont know where they could go since our general is literally Pomu, the Boys and Schizos for the most part.

>>26708989
Just read through both Secret Histories. Before getting into characterization, let me just say that when someone new starts speaking, that should get its own linebreak. In the prologue, you frequently have Pomerlane and Caudex both speaking in the same paragraph, which makes for somewhat confusing reading and interrupts the flow.
Getting into the actual writing itself, your narrators have good voices. Caudex and the scout are very distinct from one another, you can tell even from such short pieces what sorts of men they are. The problem mainly seems to be in illustrating the personalities of non-viewpoint characters. Pomerlane still feels a bit like a "press during battle to dispense victory" button. Some of this is because your dialogue is stiff, but the nature of the conversation means some stiffness is expected. The real issue is that you are telling rather than showing. This works well for action-oriented scenes like battles, but feels bland for more slow-paced scenes like these. I would recommend supplementing long pieces of dialogue, such as Pomerlane's paragraph-long monologue about reading Caudex's work, by splitting it up with breaks for body language.
>"You are correct in stating I could and I would find such men in other places, but I value a man of humility in his own works over the prideful boasting that these men most certainly have." after pausing to take a drink, he said,
You had the right idea with this bit. More of this kind of stuff, with a little more emphasis on the gestures taken. For example, I might have phrased that portion as
>"You are correct in stating I could and I would find such men in other places, but I value a man of humility in his own works over the prideful boasting that these men most certainly have." Here Pomerlane paused to take a long drink from his cup.
What follows next would depend on the kind of personality you are attempting to illustrate. Do you want to show Pomerlane as an aggressive, powerful man who is perhaps a bit careless with his strength? Then perhaps the next line would be
>As he finishes, he slams the cup to the table, shaking it with the force of the blow. He then said,
Or perhaps the goal is to shine a light on the contrast between the violent legends surrounding him and the reality of him as a clever, deeply thoughtful man. In that case, perhaps the next line would instead be,
>After a moment, he sets the cup back on the table with surprising care. He then said,

>>26711340
Thank you for the feedback.

>>26704671
whats going on in Infinity?

>>26711484(me)
Thats what i need to be told also, I never took actual writing classes.

>>26711654
I haven't either, so of course feel free to take my advice with a grain of salt. I just read a shit ton and the majority of my own writing focuses on character-centric pieces, so I thought I could help out here.

>>26711747
Yes, but what you said spices up things far more than I could imagine because im just used to writing History papers, where things are supposed to be like the way I write. Its great insight and I value it.

>>26700647
>>26701603
>>26703010
>>26703220
>>26703709
>>26707295
Great, I wake up before work and I find you once again OVERCOMPLICATING SHIT! LIKE WHY THE FUCK CAN'T YOU GET IT THROUGH THAT THICK SKULL OF YOURS THAT YOU DON'T HAVE TO LEARN THE ENTIRETY OF 40K BECAUSE I MADE EXACTLY 2 REFERENCES TO IT WHICH CAN BOIL DOWN TO "THEY ARE DEMIGODS THAT LEAD HUMANITY"?!?!

You know what? I'm done. I can't deal with this shit anymore. Imma lurk a while longer to occasionally shitpost a bit, and finish the story me and onobot friend are working on, but from now on, I won't write about /nasa/ anymore. I just can't deal with you and your need to complicate things.

Your project now. See ya o7

>>26674591
Sanalite, I read your new piece and I like that you got the general idea of Matre. Stern, but mostly motherly and caring deep down. I def dont mind you used some of my chars, specially since I also used some of yours in my last bit (I gave it some thought and decided I wasnt even going to Try the aussie accent, so please feel free to go back and edit what the Lt's and Matilda say if you want to add or change the exact words)
I probably wont be able to write my piece for the next couple of days, but I'll try to get to it this weekend

Sammie sappling, if youre here, I Really hope youre around this weekend; I'm gonna start to get scared if I have to handle the squirrels alone...

>>26712265
Just say the word and I will come running down with guns in hand

>timeloop autism broke an anon
Many such cases

>>26712814
I love the Sanalites, but I feel bad because it seems like they've always got these galactic incidents going on...

>>26712265
I don't even know what happens in terms of how our interactions are going to go down but I'm sure it'll be entertaining if anything at all.

>>26712891
I fear the unknown...
We might end up composting so many saplings...
Also they said if one of them goes missing in the woods, they'll try to start a war, whats up with that

Why are Saplings so adorable

>>26712023
Then I guess I must resign as /nasa/'s rep because I'm clearly the problem with the project. If I complicate things too much that leads to killing stories because I overcomplicate everything then I don't need to write. I'm trying to figure out how to make plausible without going "magic is everything".

>>26712186
I might not be /nasa/'s rep much longer.

>>26713224
Cute reaction images, plus they're plants. It's scientifically proven that plants are approximately 35.7% cuter than animals.

>>26703612
That was nice, you really got a feel for this Remy guy, and the activities are shaping up to be pretty fun.

>>26712023
>>26713259
What kinda fucked up multi-suicide threatening relationship is this kek, just write niggers.

>>26683995
Hey anon, could you archive this rentry somewhere with the two other /morig/-Candy Kingdom rentries:
https://rentry.org/85ybo

>>26713641
Nothing compared to my biggest schizo, me.

Everything I said about the starchild, throw it out the window. I still want to try to save the starchild inside of the ship. I do think it can be still alive. I was trying to put my own spin on the concept that I caused another timeloop. The idea is suppose to be that time/space distortion is done through the starchild's body because they're like an organic warp drive. That's how we create gravity wells to warp through space. Only a god can handle that much energy within their organic body. In the end if my idea is stupid then it needs to be rejected.

Its the same with me not writing /nasa/'s government before the civil war. All I do is overcomplicate things with unecessary details. That's not how you make lore. Its how you make shit. If I am not fit to write lore then get it off your chest. I thought I had encouragement when an anon said he could still follow lore. But its not streamlined enough for the other Sanalites to follow. I need to either stop writing lore or be tard wrangled with a strict editor brave enough to say "no".

>>26713858
I don’t remember writing this…

>>26713858
I remember writing this.

>>26712265
>>26712891
I need biology of saplings. Do they have boobs, ass, pussy, do they have holes which risuners can fuck. This is actually important information.

>>26714073
theyre plants, dude
they have both stamen and pistil

>>26713147
I'm willing to undergo a number of unnamed saplings needing to get composted as long as the lore that is derived from it is good and actually makes sense which would eliminate the possibility of a huge orgy of Risuners and Saplings cause saplings understand the consequences of squeebing. Risuners should probably focus on using this opportunity to build basic docking infrastructure and trading posts though.

>>26713296
Says the one who had an ambassador go horny for risuner cock before they met the overseer.

I like to think of this thread as what happens if Schizos take their meds. Instead of writing rrats, they build worlds.

Hey, worldbuilding autists! Hows about you dorks write a historical antalogy about this!
*takes my cock out*

>>26714175
>building narratives
it makes sense

>>26714199
NUTS

>>26714199
Reminds me of the time Caesar fucked Cleopatra

>>26714199
if it aint a litterbox link and it doesnt have a cute ribbon around it im not interested

>>26714199
Dont you meam 'anthology'?

What if we had a /vtwbg/ nation?

>>26714321
We do. I think there's one or two entries on it.

>>26714321
anonchama...
its south og HFZ

>>26714321
>>26714334
>>26714362
imo vtwbg should be like a city sized microstate. Like Singapore, San Marino, Monaco
Since we're not a huge kingdom/empire with functioning economy, we're just an independent, neutral, city sized embassy

>>26714421
Honestly, agreed

I feel like I broke /nasa/ and ruined everything by focusing on too many details and not what matters. I literally fucked up everything. Feels bad man. All because I tried to make things plausible.

>>26714448
It's probably first on the chopping board if we need land for something else.

>>26714461
You absolute menhera, take your meds and follow this advice >>26713641

>>26714152
Risuner ass, actually. And I can't help making the ambassador based, it's just in my nature.

>>26714461
you havent done anything that cannot be salvaged, dont overthink it anon

>>26714540
Honestly I don't think anything needs that much repairing, it's all in his head.

>>26712186
Well I was worried because I needed to answer the grand directive in that passage. And Matre needs to ask questions. I'm glad I picked the right ones.

Ive no idea wtf the sanalites are on about and at this point, Im not sure I wanna know.
Cant yall just >>26713641 ?

>>26714616
Once the Kronies left, someone had to fill those large menhera shoes...

To be fair, i almost did the same yesterday and no one called me out for being a schizo against myself

>>26714703
thanks for the dose, doc

>>26714703(me)
I did.

>>26714540
>>26714560
Well, I can't salvage it alone. But the other Sanalite quit. That's what I get for trying to explain "god" as plausible. I guess. Also doesn't help that I just found out there's a person inside the ship I want to try to save.

In the end I think I'm just going to have to say no to FTL if it means getting a space-bending "god". /nasa/'s technology is already broken (and I don't mean from the crash). If we do have a reality bending warp drive then it has to be nerfed. Otherwise we will get timelooped like the clocks.

>>26714912
He probably didn't quit, he's just being menhera like you. God yall need a mentally S.T.A.B.L.E. sanallite.

>>26714940
do those exist?

>>26714199
Oh anon, you silly billy. Look carefully and you'll see that I already did

>>26714940
I'm trying real hard to justify the lock downs. Maybe I shouldn't. Locking everybody out of the station is just a mistake. And the Principal needs to be held accountable. Which means he needs to resign so a new Principal, Jonathan, can take over. Then Sanalites can vote in their new council next year to change the law. This is how the civil war arc should end.

With the AI, Cassandra logically would have never let the principal initiate the station lock down. Which means the civil war arc should have logically never happened. But the AI did allow the lock down. The question becomes why does the AI need a lockdown? There has to be something wrong inside the ship that the AI needs full power to resolve. The AI is also a councilor to the principal. AI should provides a list of suggestions based on the context of the situation. And lock down was one of these suggestions. If the warp drive is a bio-android "demigod" that's barely alive then that is a very good reason for Cass to lock down the station. This was my thinking for the story.

Look up Melfina from Outlaw Star if you want to know what a bio-android acts like.

>>26683995
looking through niji's stuff in the archive I noticed "The Political State of Ninisani, during the years of Pomerlane's Rise" is misfiled
should be under /nijiEN/ instead of /2434/

>>26715400
What if Cassandra simply had an event happen to her that made her see the outside as not so bad and worth exploring and thus agreed with the principal?

>>26715535
Cassandra saw an opportinity for both. Lock down is necessary to self-repair the station's warp drive. And Sanalites needed to be kicked outside for the summer to cure cabin fever. An AI can never lie to its operators. But that does not mean an AI cannot with hold information if it does not deem it relevant to the inquiry.

On one hand the pieces of the story is falling into place. On the other hand my vision is clashing with the vision of the other Sanalite. As for the starchild warp drive I do have an idea on how she can call for help. But I will no longer comment on starchildren.

>>26714912
>If we do have a reality bending warp drive then it has to be nerfed
If you let the starchild be dead and a black box that no one on the station knows about then I don't see any problem with that technology existing since there's no way for it to be replicated or misused. Perhaps Cass allowed the lockdown in a last-ditch effort to try and save her but ultimately failed. Or maybe it was just a bug as stated here >>26707295 Honestly, if you're that concerned about your lore writing then I don't think you need to quit, but maybe take a step back and work on smaller scale character-driven stories for a bit. What's life like for a random miner away from the station? What idle thoughts occupy their mind during the workday? Who's there to greet them when they get home from an exhausting day?

>>26715773
The character doesn't need to die to become a useless warp drive. She will be disabled but she live alongside Sanalites who take care of her. Her DNA is what needs to be preserved. Last comment on starchildren. Back to writing small stories since I'm lorebanned.

>>26715773
>but maybe take a step back and work on smaller scale character-driven stories for a bit. What's life like for a random miner away from the station? What idle thoughts occupy their mind during the workday? Who's there to greet them when they get home from an exhausting day?
honestly this, i feel you are so stuck in trying to "fix problems" you introduce that then need to have everything before it to fit it perfectly or otherwise those need to be changed wich then introduces the next problem and yada yada timeloop. instead of moving forward and actually have sanalites living on vitubia.

>>26716221
Sounds like /nasa/ just needs a new fucking rep.

>>26716292
The current ones aren't so bad, at least they're only hurting themselves.

>>26716292
it sounds like /nasa/ needs to lighten up and let things be set ins tone and be done with.

needing to come up with crippled demigod girls to "nerf" reality bending warpdrives that they now need to have because the homeplanet now is X instead of Y away or because otherwise their omnipotent AI would not agree to the Principal initiating the lockdown does not sound like coherent writing but harry potter level BS "And also Dumbledore is gay the whole time"

i am all against discouraging someone from writing their stuff but maybe when the sanalite several times says he want to scrap the stuff he actually is right and we should not soft force him to continue by saying "noo its fine do it" wich results in several metldowns all the time and sanalites enforcing lorebanning themselves ect.

/nasa/ Principal's log

I have officially restored all functions to Lammington Station. After the council hearing the judge has made a decision: I am found guilty of disrupting the lives of Sanalites, destroying the spring harvest, and immediate damages to manufacturing. As of today I am no longer a citizen. I turn in my firearms and my badge. I will lose my retirement pension as the money is seized to pay damages. I am not going to prison. However as of today I voluntarily resign as Principal of /nasa/. Security General Jonathan has been appointed by council to take my place. He will be overseeing /nasa/'s executive decisions from here on out. As for me, I'm going to leave /nasa/. I have no money, no guns, and no privileges. I only have permissions of a child on the network now. It breaks my heart having to leave. It is my grand mistake. And I have to take accountability. I just pray that Jonathan heeds my compromises well with the Grand Directive.

This is the final log of Principal Alexander Jason Steele.

>>26683995

The civil war arc is officially over.

Alright im finally back. gimme some time for food and ill put the last rose story out and answer questions.

>>26714073
There are human saplings that have basic sexual anatomy of any other human with the exceptions of those that are more far down the "Plantification" process that may have certain parts of their bodies covered by barks and whatnot and post-human saplings that are basically just trees, and you can't really fuck a tree.

>>26716908
The end of an era... So if the ex-principal is no longer a citizen then does that mean he's lost his suit as well? Is he rocking the /meat/ tattoos now?

>>26717401
>you can't really fuck a tree
Anon, I...

>>26717408
It means as a civilian the Principal loses his right to vote, he loses his right to use a firearm, he loses his right to officially represent /nasa/ in public office, he loses his right to own property in /nasa, and he loses his right to access certain information on /nasa/'s internet.

>>26717408
I do wonder, the sanallites had plans for their principal to live in exile in the Republic, due to how the culture has been structured there's probably a wee bit of discrimination against tattoos and things that leave a mark on the body. I guess it won't matter if the Sanallites scrap their lore again.

>>26716908
o7
Where is Alexander going now?

>>26717586
>>26717647
Alex is going to ask the /meat/ priestess for a chuubanite tattoo and move to /who/. He's going to run the bakery. It might take him a year to naturalize as a citizen but he no longer has the desire to stay in /nasa/. And in this bakery we're going to use /who/ grown wheat and sugar. Fuck /nasa/ imports. Alex is also going to leave his bread dog behind. Since as a civilian Alex loses his ownership over his bread dog.

>>26717830
Might as well save us both the trouble and anchor the bad end I wrote a few weeks back, where both Alex and all somewhat important side characters get a bullet in their brain and that's it. Basically make a clean slate, except we have a dictatorship.

>>26718078
WE WILL SAVE THE SPACEMEN WITH THE POWER OF SEX

>>26718078
Losing citizenship is enough of a punishment. This condemns Alex to live as a wagie for somebody else with no opportunity to start or own his own business. You're practically a child in /nasa/ if you're not a citizen. When you own property then you do so as a rep of the state.

>>26703612
https://rentry.org/xkevq
Deadbeat POV of those activities, thank you for the prompts and sorry for the industrial espionage.
Let me know if any of this doesn't go as you envisioned, I can make changes.

>>26718230
solemn news of the spacemen dying from STDs soon reach international newspapers

>>26718467
goddamn fucking deadbeats, never trust them. Just remember that the RID still has fairly overzelous and quite effective counter-intelligence activities

>>26718624
i like deadbeats. theyre so nice and have pretty gems and love to exchange nuts with us and even teach how how to make cannons to blow shit up.

>>26718624
Kek you sure can't. Well, I hope the RID don't beat themselves up too much over this, Desuvius is there to steal tech from /nasa/, not the Republic, this would have been hard to predict. Getting a visit of the Wisdoms was just a happy accident. He'll have to watch his back while in /who/ for now.
>>26718694
We love yall too, squirrelmen.

>>26718890
Now now, that's also fairly inconvenient for the Republic, you see. Don't want to find out what those damn rattling bones do with more than modern knowledge.
>>26718694
Let's agree to disagree then.

>>26719335
I expect the Sanallites to have very strong, impassable opsec, given the Republic isn't running around with missiles and Jeeps yet, but you know, it's natural to at least give it a try.

This is a heads up to nations trading with /nasa/. Because we have a new principal all unfinished trade deals a void. Meaning you will have to re-negotiate trade with /nasa/ again. All trades en route will be honored since those contracts are completed. But we will have to restart some deals because Jonathan is not as light on the Grand Directive as Alex.

One more thing before I step out. /nasa/'s negotiations with Saplings are still ongoing. The time of negotiations is one month after the change in /nasa/'s leadership. So its late summer when it happens. That way there's no disruption to the continuity.

>>26684084
>Special
I uhh... I think a new name is in order for /who/. Any suggestions?

>>26721090
"Let's Annex the Forest"
and we rename the /uuu/ player to
"No Annexation without Representation"

>>26721090
Think an anon suggested loretism before? If no one has any better ideas than change it back to that. I guess the /who/ player can also be called magic/chuubanite WMD or something.

>>26721090
"Wikipedia page" maybe. I'm not really thinking of much.

>>26721440
Oh, I dig it! Speaking of, with midsummer here I just had an idea of some festivities I could write about

>>26721651
Sure, do tell.

Ok.....Holy fuck. Just went through some shit with a streamer I used to watch. Much drama related so won't elaborate but god damn that was a thing. Oh well fuck them time to talk about horny squirrels

>>26722273
Well shit you can't say that and not elaborate.

>>26708937
I think this is this thread's first smut right? Or at least one that describes the deed in detail.
Maybe we are the horniest ones after all...

>>26722328
Nah its all good. i cancelled them on twitter and now their streaming career is dead

>>26721771
22nd Aug as the National day
27th Nov as a Fertility festival
Those are what come to mind right now that I can place a date on right now. I'll wrack my memory for more defining streams and what not for inspiration (and try to space them out)

>>26722446
Clocks've done it first with some of their stories. In any case, it's better for the smut to remaing on the not as much side.
>>26722863
Huh... We should probably rename the fertility festival to something else.

>>26722586
I am even more curious now

>>26722999
Anons lampooning some spicy shit and not explaining is the worst, I swear.

>>26723091
>>26722999
Kek. Ok fine. Basically
>followed a streamer for 3 years
>2 years i was a mod (yes a twitch streamer)
>was always in DM's with them and got special treatment
>they turn out to be a fucking dick in any video game
>I complain about it
>Immediately gets de modded, shunned to the point it's not even worth being in there
>Leave discord server
>next day post all the bullshit to twitter
>Lots of people dogpile on them and they panic
>loses half their viewerbase and goes full menhera about how I "ruined" them
>Now they paywall everything behind a patreon with only 4 simps in it due to one of them being an insider.

And this is ALL i will say about it since I am currently finalizing the /rose/ story. I want this to be good.

>>26722965
Oh, of course it'll have a proper name. I've spent all of my creative juices for today though. And I don't plan on doing another story like that again, at least not in a hot while

>>26723690
jesas fear the risuner scorned

I'm going to have to write a foreign policy later. There's going to be big changes to /nasa/ due to a change in administration. Jonathan is a hard ass and will demand everything to be formal. I'm pretty burned out by today's timeloop. The other Sanalite rage quitted because of me. I'm pretty close to quitting today.

>>26723810
You know, there was no timeloop, it was just you vibrating while everyone else looked on, befuddled.

>>26724170
Regardless. /nasa/ is going to change. For better or worse I cannot say. What I can say is the Grand Directive is law. It is not a guideline. So I have to apply that to foreign relations from now on. Its going to be so strict that /nasa/ will now have an import tax for goods.

>>26724402
Well guess what, Cass doesn't like that, so she is once again locking down the station, like she did before. Good luck with no tech. Oh and no master code to unlock shit this time, not like it ever existed in the first place...

>>26724402
>import tax
Were gonna get taxed on our nuts?

>>26724402
>>26724666
I swear to god /nasa/ rep if you're going schizo or you let a shitposter throw you into a loop again I will force-feed you the meds myself.

>>26713892
Why are you responding like this? You aren’t over complicating things, there’s just an anon that is overreacting and being lazy. You are a finder writer, and shouldn’t let him get to you. If you feel like something is too complex, explain it in a more simplistic manner or ask for feed back. No need to leave.

>>26724686
You're going to get taxed in gold. So you better prepare to smuggle nuts. Even we think its bullshit.

>>26724666
I get the feeling Cass is upset that the man who's the closest thing to her husband got fired. (He had to quit because if he didn't resign then he'd be imprisoned for 30 years.)

>>26724795
We aint got no fucking gold. Our currency is nuts. We are literally untaxable kek.

>>26724402
I guess the timing is good in a way, Desuvius will be in /nasa/ just at the right time to re-negotiate the trade agreement with /morig/. We've begun exploitation of a couple rare resources that might be of interest since the first deal.

>>26724795
I wouldn't say upset, more like disappointed it ended like this. Still locking down the station though.

Question for hoomans. Will you allow risuners to set up camp at who/uuu borders?

>>26725016
Well you said you quit. So I had to end the civil war arc. I didn't want to end with Alex leaving /nasa/ for /who/. I suppose we all can't get what we want in the end.

>>26725016
>>26725174
Are you talking with yourself or is this a third Sanallite? Cunt Sanallite always has a Sana picture.

>>26724756
True, i'm being a menhera and lazy, that's why i stepped away. It's better for the rep to stay instead of me.

Pomerlane anon, when will we see a girls perspective on Pomerlane? Will it be Eroge?

>>26725081
I don't see why not, just don't get lost and don't touch the lead amulets too much, lest you get lead poisoning, risuners would be on our side of the forest until they could be lead into proper contact with a druid village

>>26725219
Oh yea, sorry for the confusion. There have aways been just the two of us, but i'm phoneposting from my brother's phone at work rn, so no pics sadly. Break is over anyway, so i'm going dark again.

>>26725317
Ah, gotcha. Take your meds too, cunt.

>>26683995
Alright, it's been a long time coming, so here is the overhauled/expanded loredoc for /wg/: https://rentry.org/writhaven
Archiveanon, if you could replace /wg/'s current lore rentry with this one, that'd be great.

>>26725362
Will do, ya cunt. Probably gonna get some mcds after work, and i'm getting a new phone, so menhera episode should go away.

>>26725287
I swear, everytime our general turns into a hellhole, ive got someone asking me, who cant even write good dialogue to write sex scene. Female, sure soon. Sex? That just makes me cringe to think of writing “Pomerlane insert his dick into her”. Like, if you want to something to jack it to, do it to actual hentai and not my TL.

>>26725219
Its the other Sanalite.

>>26724756
I wrote this because it was how I felt at the time. Big mistake. Never say your feelings on the internet.

>>26725317
There's technically still time. The ex-principal might have to break the law but I think the core can be saved. Once I stripped away the fluff I managed to find a place for the special someone in the story if you don't mind a demigod living among men for a bit.

Word of advice, don't live on a farm or a place with over five acres of property. There's just too much damn work to do all the time and not enough room to relax, especially if you're living on it by yourself.
At least I can work on Rosebutas, finally.

>>26725576
So did Sumargo get fucked by a dude? Just a detail i kind of need. Also feels fucking bad man.

>>26725310
Lead amulets?

>>26725850
As long as you're cool with it, yeah. Namely he would've been fucked by Acicularis, who is the largest wink and strongest of the Peccaries, and is the tribe's leader.

>>26725898
Lead combined with (/who/?) chuubanite is supposed to lessen the effects of chuubanite in an area. So some traders, lumberjacks and hunters would wear lead-chuubanite amulets when they go into /uuu/ for an extended period of time. Wear them if you don't want to get turned into a tree.

Speaking of lead, which nation is using them as pipes? GGG?

>>26725951
It's cool. Like I said I normally am very preferred to straight sex but if he is that horny then I dont think he would resist. Fuck it kek.

>>26725898
Well, lead stops chuubanite right? If you decide to go deep into the forest you'll need something to stop the forest from forcefully converting your body into plant or whatever. That's where the lead amulets come into place. Hunters would use them to chase prey deep in it.

>>26726063
Why would /ggg/ need pipes? They live in the ocean. I guess they can have pipes that carry air.

>>26726022
I think it would make a lot of sense if different types of chuubanite repealed each other, just in general. Something to do with their waveforms canceling in the quantic field. Also explains why a given type of chuubanite tends to dominate an area. I think that was mentioned in the quantic field interpretation, but not elaborated on.

>>26726148
Who knows, all I am saying its a probablity after seeing one tell me they have torpedos and sonar because we rulez the wavez. Need to write a story about going shrimping off that place

>>26726183
>>26726119

>>26726088
>I normally am very preferred to straight sex
Made a mistake coming to me then, I very much enjoy being a fag. Only half the time though, I do like to be straight on occasion.

>>26726183
Well, that sure sounds complicated! so I'll ignore it for now.

Fuck Chuubanite. Im gonna build the Grand Pomu Railway and Great Finana Steamship line and theres nothing you can do to stop me!

/nasa/'s space suits have heavy radiation protection. They need it when they're out and about in space where there's gamma radiation. They should block uranium radiation as well. Just have to pull down the visor. Suits can work as some protection in /uuu/'s woods I guess. That said they're worthless in Fauna's cradle.

>>26726313
>trains

>>26726306
You know we can't just run away from magic forever right...?

>>26726333
ITS COMING. YOU BET YOUR ASS I AM WRITING ABOUT TRAINS

>>26726333
If only Hoomans can enter the station. You'd love it.

>>26726369
god please no not this again

>>26726306
It's not complicated! TL;DR. chuubanite type A repels chuubanite type B. Basically what you were saying with your amulet.

>>26726414
I am a train autist. If you did think I wasnt going to write about trains and coal and smoke and choo choo; you can blame rosebuta for inviting me.

>>26726464
To be fair, didn't know you were trainanon at the time. Do be careful though, the thread had its jimmies rustled pretty damn hard last time the topic of trains came up.

>>26726414
>>26726333
I don't think the new anons know...

>>26726505
Why, someone needs to explain? Whats wrong with trains?

>>26726357
I'm sure of that! I'm simply not going to be the one to start potentially all-encompasing argument about which chuubanite repels which or anything involving the quintesential nature of chuubanite and whatever.
>>26726426
It's the lead that's supposed to be adding that effect, is it not? I wouldn't know!
>>26726464
If this pomu guy is getting trains then I'm sure as hell going to give ourselves trains too. So I want everybody to reeeeeaelly think this through.

>>26726464
Well, we'll all write about trains and coal eventually, but probably after a timestep or two, we're barely getting into steamboats.

>>26726603
This is literally what I plan. Not the monsters from 100 years later.

No trains in risu. We dont need no pollution machines in our land.

>>26726630
Kino then, this is about right.
>>26726561
>It's the lead
Maybe heavy metals could act as a chuubanite shield, I guess this idea might have come from all the analogies made to radioactive substance. I don't see a lead mention in the archived chuubanite docs, but I dig it. It would get in the way of chuubanite-infused metal, but I don't know that anyone has something like that in their lore.

>>26726855
So the last trainbro wanted something stupid? You have to started here. No where else.

>>26726855
It did, noble gases were also proposed to provoke the same effect a few times before
>>26726909
/infinity/ timeloops

>>26726909
IIRC last trainbro was a Kronie who wanted late 19th century locomotives carrying cargo across the /risu/ land bridge, or maybe even before that on /inf/ island, it was a while back.

>>26726630
Oh hey, I could use that. /rose/ is full of tracks and handcars already, all I need is some trains.

Does /rose/ have tea?

>>26727221
Holy based and saved.

>>26726940
>>26727006
>>26727014
Why has no one thought of early steam then? We have the technology. Lets do it. Rosebro, 20 years in the future, The Great Pomu Railway offers you locomotives in exchange for shipping rights, a connection to our lands and future concessions (cant think right now).

>>26727221

>>26727202
Probably not at this point. Their fancy drink of choice is alcohol in the form of, if I remember my own lore right, vodka. They could start cultivating their own tea plants if they got the seeds, though.

>>26726022
Where was this effect written?
Im kinda into it, but I dont remember it being discussed; at least with /uuu/ in particular

>>26727377
Locomotives in exchange for more communication between our territories? You might just have a deal.

>>26727454
Shame, because I like a good herbal tea. There's even rose teas.

>>26727519
Basically but we want probably some things like free trade rights/transit rights. We have all the material wealth we need, just more markets

Nijien making railroads deals while we out here talking about chuubanite.

>>26727492
I've been bouncing the idea since a while ago, and I've mentioned it in the thread a few times. In the meantime I've not added it to canon nor anchored it. Would you be alright with the idea? Lead effects have been discussed about since a few months ago I think.

>>26727377
Because even the Rocket you posted is early 1800s tech. The average technology level is 1750s so unless your lore has established to have the relevant developmental level and reasons you are 'ahead' so to speak no one is supposed to have steam. The steam debate in the early threads of /vtwbg/ was mostly centered on the implication of steam engines on trains and ships. If one has the capability to power most of their ships with steam then it makes sense as well that they would have decently widespread use of steam.

>>26727621
You still need some money to keep the railways maintained. Railways do decay over time. Eventually you'll need to replace the rails.

>>26727709
I will be real here, Steam ships are less likely that trains just because the trains were used in mining.

Okay, our chuubanite autism was short and sweet today, very efficient, good going guys. If that's alright, I'll summarize the above and have it anchored for easy future reference.
https://rentry.org/ksr47
If there are no comments, I'll assume this is satisfactory and anchor.

>>26727670
I think we could work it, as long as yall dont use it as a "we can now go into your forests whenever and however long we want without consequence because <insert lead artifact here>"
/nasa/ has their suits, so it would make sense /who/ would have something with similar effects

Did the young Saplings enjoyed petting the bread dogs in the /nasa/-/uuu/ story?

>>26727848
NTA, but I imagine the repulsive effect would be strong enough to allow the wearer to wander through regions with low chuubanite concentrations, but higher concentrations would overpower it.

>>26727848
Yeah, don't worry about it, going too deep into the forest is still death, and once past a certain point the lead would presumably start losing effectiveness, expeditioners have to be careful not to carry too much lead before it starts negatively affecting their health too. That's the idea behind it.

>>26727775
No completely opposed to the idea if you have a clear idea of how things developed (so it's convincing) which sounds like you have.

>>26727848
The amulet won't be overpowered. The relatively weak effect can be explained by the fact that the amulets aren't lead platings that cover your entire body and that the small amount of chuubanite in it, necessitated by its shape and role as an amulet can only be so effective.

>>26728128
I mean, It just came to me in a dream so you know thats convincing. In truth, the reason will be MINING as it was irl..

>>26727978
Charlie's dancing and the bread dogs were really fun!

>>26684041
Please anchor the rentry in >>26727834 under the Chuubanite section.

>>26728408
Had the exact same reasoning that's why /who/ started to test its first steam locomotive. Since we have (on paper, and I don't think I've ever posted it here) established horse rails going from mines to foundries it would improve the production rate.

>>26728943
What if I told you there are trains that can float.

>>26729024
fucking magnets, how do they work

>>26729133

>>26729133
Nah, anon is clearly talking about this

>>26683995
Please anchor under the other fisherman stories, thank you very much.

Fisherman 3

"Well I'll be damned by lady death! Squirrels!" The shocked fisherman audably reacts to the newcomers to the port. A rare clear day in the port, even if it is not too sunny.
From the back the fisherman's coworker shouts "Ey what's the matter man, hurry up and get the cargo down"
"Shut up you fuckhead and come check this out"
The man in the back stumbles over to see just what exactly was so important.
"Oh what the fuck, squirrels, looks like the officials are on their shit too"
The fisherman ponders "Maybe they don't have papers"
"Come on, there's a limit to ignorance don't you think"
"Well you never know, look, a fucking deadbeat is having to sort it out!"
"Oh... Maybe they are that ignorant..."
"Yeah, anyways, let's get the cargo out, I'm itching for a coffee cup"
"Ya think they just arrived!?"
"From the looks of it, looks like they've got here a few days ago, look at that strange ship, they go in and out easily"
"Those squirrels that were getting harrased by the official must've done something for it then"
"Probably"

-----

As the fisherman and his coworker finally finish dropping their cargo, a few of those Squirrels start walking the port. They looked to be trapped by a few other sailors petting their tails, while not a man that looks for new experiences it does give him enough curiosity to advance towards the squirrels. In his path he finds a group of squirrels that have been talking to each other.
"Uh, good morning?"
...
No response, it seems they don't speak the language. Maybe in central they'll understand
"-Hello?-"
...
Nada, they don't speak it, no papers and they can't speak, are they abandoned inmigrants or something? Who are these people anyways?
"Well, that's odd, still, listen to me clearly! I'm going to touch your tail!"
The fisherman slowly extends his hand towards the tail of one of the risuners while mantaining eye contact, it'd be bad if they got scared wouldn't it?
The risuners talk to themselves a bit, they decide to shove the tails right into the fisherman's body
"Alright alright let's calm down a bit you rowdy bunch" The fisherman raises a single finger. "One by one" They seem to understand that.
The tails were fluffy, pretty neat. Very clean, they seem to be groomed heavily by the squirrel people. The first tail belonged to the a young man that looked a little nervous. The other risuners seem to have mocking smiles on their faces, so they were probably teasing him. Once the fisherman was done the risuner proceeded to shake his tail in front of the fisherman. Certainly puzzling, whatever that meant in their language, maybe thanks? Still, the young man looks a bit disappointed when the fisherman doesn't recognize what shaking the tail means.
The next tail belonged to that of a young woman, in comparison to the previous squirrel person she seemed very calm and confident, proud of her tail even, very well groomed soft hair on it.
"Ope, what's this?" A peanut"
The proud young lady's face turns red in less than a moment. The other risuners laughing about it too. The hair in her tail stiffens up a bit in response, was it a snack she was hiding? Maybe she was just a bit careless when eating. The lady stays quiet and embarrased until the man was done petting the tail. She proceeds to shake her tail in front of the fisherman.
"Uh, thanks to you too" The fisherman says. The young lady also looking disappointed when he said that.
"Oh, I know what might make you fellers happy!" The fisherman quickly takes out from his pocket what was supposedly going to be his lunch, some canned sardines and bread.
The squirrels don't look particularly into it, probably the smell is pushing them away, Still, the 2 squirrel persons that got their tails petted grabbed sardines, the young man made a strange face, the young woman seemed delighted with the taste. Must not be for everyone.

-----

On the coffee shop "Étrange" Where the shop owner was reading a local newspaper on table 3
"What's the matter boss, something got you down?"
"Reads this part and you will understand"
"Oh, let's see here, Risuner stabbed in incident with coffee shop owner... Oh man you got yourself on some shit! The hell happened?"
"Some fucking squirrel boy tried to set my shop on fires, I just gave some ol' 1-2 from back home into torso"
"Oh wow, officials must've been plaguing you"
"Surprisingly not, they keep things quiet just in case"
"And yet, it's still on the news"
"Well, informations want to spread"

>>26729224
Plane 3 way. Super HOT.

>>26729298
My headcanon is now that Hoomans have good odds of having an emergency can of sardines at any given time.
Kek, nice story anon, thank you.

>>26729490
Thanks, being prepared for anything is important, you never know what you might use a can for.

>>26729298
Risuner plus foxhound cuddle puddle when

>>26729732
Maybe a small story of a risuner having to escape from a crazed hunter and his dogs would be fun.
"Sic 'em boys!".
Well, that or just risuners cuddling with a bunch of pet foxhounds from a particularly nice old man. Lots of options sure are daunting.

>>26729732
Whenever you want darling. Risuners love cuddles (usually after sex) but just cuddling is nice too.

>>26730144
Do not fuck the foxhounds

New bread onegai?

>>26730422
Can we tape a "NO SPACEMEN ALLOWED" sign on it?

>>26730543
I'd amend that to "NO SPACE MENHERAS"...

>>26730393
The predator becomes the prey.

at this point we might need some meta lore...

>>26730720
Reminds me. Someone should do a general Vitubia lore so new anons can have a good place to start.

Bread's baking btw

>>26730809
a few weeks ago I would have agreed, but Im not sure how I feel about new anons lately...

>>26730880
Thanks baker!

>>26730937
It was just a couple of schizos shitting up the thread. New anons are fine generally. Even if we are not doing it for the new anons it's something that honestly should've been done a long while ago.

>>26731100
What would a Vitubia introduction entail, exactly?

>>26731144
Basic history of how we ended up in Vitubia, a intro on the disintegration of /hlgg/ empire, weakening, and how the NIji empire became disconnected and turned into warring states. Also on the technological level and very short description on chuubanite. Know some anons have a problem with it, but like the 'Grimdarkness of the 41st Millenium' blurb from 40k

>>26731359
Yeah, that sounds like something that would be useful.

ill post rose story conclusion in new bread. tomorrow if i fall asleep.

Why can't the thread move faster... Waiting for it to reach p10...

>>26730880
did you have to go reap the wheat and run it through a grain mill to make the flour first? bread doko?
thank you for your service anon, dont forget the title

>>26732161
New bread. Decided I wouldn't wait. Plus I'm only killing a dead vshojo thread anyways.

>>26726284
>I very much enjoy being a fag
Maybe we should write together some time...

>>26735553
Who might you be?

>>26736130
Just another /meat/head

>>26736264
Fair enough.

>>26736379
I mean, it doesn't HAVE to be /meat/fic...