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Story recap! There... were eight stories posted in the last thread.

To Slay a Monster: Chapter 4 & 5:Tags: (you), Flare, Noel, fantasy, adventure, mystery:>>26487478 >>26570841

A Predator's Touch, The Days of Dreams (Part 1):Tags: Botan, NSFW:>>26492263

To be 17 again. Ch. 5.:Tags: Ookami Mio, NSFW, netori, fluff, light chuuba abusecreampie.:>>26510824

Blood Meridian or the Evening Redness in the West :Tags: Gura, Mori, SFW, Comedy:>>26659584

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 4: Tags: Botan, Vanilla, SFW: >>26658023

Kiara Gigantism: Tags: Kiara, Warning for violence and death:>>26498574

Fubuku Poem: Tags: Poem, Fubuki:>>26543795

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

A fic about training Aqua's ass to prepare her for anal sex.:

pekora smothers her bushbaby to death using her juicy, puffy pussy.:

mori tries to awaken her inner nigger to become a better rapper, but in the process she has to consume hard drugs and rape her genmates:>>26548060

Ever since you had a bit too much to drink one night at the bar and made the mistake of inviting that blonde girl with the nice rack to your place, you’ve been having to deal with a perpetually-flirty vampire who keeps breaking in whenever she needs to “feed” off of you.:>>26552350

nene decides to have a night (or day) on the town, completely naked, and constantly masturbating.:>>26556619

Having a tryst with Sora in a hotel and facefucking her while she masturbates.:>>26563705

Over the course of several months, seducing and breaking down the resistances of all Holos with knife-ears one by one until they agree to anally penetrating you with their misshapen appendages, then cataloguing and rating each experience:>>26600768

Ntring Laplus by fucking her roommate:>>26618487

a child-like sapling is excited to finally see mommy again. but when they meet, instead of a nice, loving hug, fauna brutally rapes him while he's too confused by her actions to do anything about it.:>>26672528

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

A fic about training Aqua's ass to prepare her for anal sex.:>>26481935

pekora smothers her bushbaby to death using her juicy, puffy pussy.:>>26498447

mori tries to awaken her inner nigger to become a better rapper, but in the process she has to consume hard drugs and rape her genmates:>>26548060

Ever since you had a bit too much to drink one night at the bar and made the mistake of inviting that blonde girl with the nice rack to your place, you’ve been having to deal with a perpetually-flirty vampire who keeps breaking in whenever she needs to “feed” off of you.:>>26552350

nene decides to have a night (or day) on the town, completely naked, and constantly masturbating.:>>26556619

Having a tryst with Sora in a hotel and facefucking her while she masturbates.:>>26563705

Over the course of several months, seducing and breaking down the resistances of all Holos with knife-ears one by one until they agree to anally penetrating you with their misshapen appendages, then cataloguing and rating each experience:>>26600768

Ntring Laplus by fucking her roommate:>>26618487

a child-like sapling is excited to finally see mommy again. but when they meet, instead of a nice, loving hug, fauna brutally rapes him while he's too confused by her actions to do anything about it.:>>26672528

>>26552350
>Ever since you had a bit too much to drink one night at the bar and made the mistake of inviting that blonde girl with the nice rack to your place, you’ve been having to deal with a perpetually-flirty vampire who keeps breaking in whenever she needs to “feed” off of you.
I actually have been thinking of a similar idea for a few months, only it has Mel and Choco dragging you to their apartment and after a "trial run" decide to keep you as their personal 'life essence' provider
Mel uses semen as a replacement for drinking blood

>>26681071
What do they do when you run out of semen inside of you?

>>26681619
Choco uses her succubus magic to make sure you never run dry, you have to drink a lot of water though

>>26682095
Oh so you're going for smut maybe horror spin on the concept rather than going for drama and/or tragedy?

>>26682600
It's all smut

>>26679760
Never heard or seen this Vtuber before.

>>26684855
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCS9uQI-jC3DE0L4IpXyvr6w

>>26684855
Figured the earlyfag'd be a newfag too.

>>26685024
There will be a time when Coco is forgotten and not just shitposters shitposting which sucks.

>>26685843
if people still remember Chris then I’m pretty sure they’ll remember Coco

>>26686097
Nobody remembers Chris, she's just a name they find on the vtuber wiki. An ancient evil known by name and a single half-baked sprite responsible for all of mankind's sins. That's why she's brought up - for shitposting purposes. Coco's just done too much good to be interesting for shitposting purposes, besides for angry chinks, so eventually she'll be forgotten.

>>26686097
In all honesty, I think Chris has like one use in regards to fanfics in that their 'baggage' from being the 'holomem that never was' has ample room for creating a soft pseudoOC that uses that baggage for a character... Either that or as a surprise villain that's technically a Holo but I'm reasonably certain doing that in a mystery centered fic violates the tenets of a whodunnit.

>>26679816
Mori getting too drunk for her own good at a bar then gets pumped and dumped.

>>26687821
This but it's about Mori getting fooled into making questionable financial decisions after receiving financial advice while she's drunk enough to get fooled into investing.

>>26687821
Sounds like a regular night in Shinjuku for her.

>>26587547
Ended up reading it based on this comment you were right, it is disgusting but very funny. I laughed a lot. The author was clearly taking the piss with how exaggerated Anon's love of the 'subject matter' is and that live, laugh, love sign in Japanese. Best line was Anon abstaining from jerking off in front of Kurokami because it'd be weird, that was a perfect ending.
I skipped over the nasty parts, though. I'm so utterly disgusted that I feel like taking a shower for the second time today.

>>26689887
I have to ask, did you catch why it has the 'oyakodon' tag?

>>26690984
Come to mention it, no I did not. That completely slipped my mind while I read it. Why does it have that tag? There's nothing even approaching incest.

>>26690984
>>26691063
he’s referring to the food, not the fetish

>>26691063
It's meant to be bait. In the parts you skipped (You) can taste and smell chicken and eggs and conclude Kuro had oyakodon the night before.

>>26691273
Oh god, that's fucking foul...

Speaking of, what are everyone’s fetishes?

>>26692199
Hags

>>26692199
hypnosis, aphrodisiacs, assplay and bondage
also this place got me into wax play, so thanks for that

>>26691273
>(You) can taste and smell chicken and eggs and conclude Kuro had oyakodon the night before.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH

>>26692199
Monster girls... though that one is really fucking far from chuubas.

>>26692199
armpits

>>26692199
I like sweat. Biting is also pretty hot, gently when doing the biting and hard when being bitten. I also like the idea of picking up short women, not really even in a sexual way, just picking them up then placing them somewhere else, preferably somewhere high up so they can't get back down.
Although I wouldn't call it a fetish, I also really have a thing for casual intimate contact, especially when you're not dating them. For example things like brushing/playing with a girl's hair, having them sit in your lap, picking them up, letting them sleep on your shoulder, etc. extremely calmly and casually as if it's the normal thing to do, even though you're not dating each other. I dunno, it's weird but I'm a big fan of things like that.

>>26692199

>>26692199
Oh, you know.

>>26693125
Abayo, chocoball.

Who's the artist?

>>26693337
Kyattsu. He does a lot of futa if you're into that, too.

>>26692199
Screams of surprise or excitement, it's why I love tossing women and riding rollercoasters with them so much

>>26693622
Question since you're into it.
How do you prefer screams getting written out? I.e do you prefer it getting written out in all caps or do you prefer it getting described?

>>26687821
> swindling %chuuba_name% into making right life decisions while she's intoxicated

Vaginas exude a large amount of heat on normal human women, let alone on certain female dragons, whose body temperatures would only naturally be much higher than a normal human's. If one were to approach Coco's bare vagina, especially if she was aroused, you would probably be able to feel the heat of it on your skin. The natural heat is also probably conducive to arousal in its own right. Much like a 15 year old going through puberty and getting erections at random, a side effect of being a dragon breed is probably often, unprovoked arousal. Who knows, it may even be permanent. Coco might literally be "in heat" at all times. On top of what may be almost perpetual wetness between her thighs, her naturally high body temperature probably makes it difficult for her to wear human clothes comfortably. But then again she may get off on the feeling of being wrapped so tightly, so to speak. The sensation of her wet vagina would probably resemble putting your finger into a bath of hot honey. The juices more viscous than normal and just hot enough that you almost risk a burn. Imagine the smell and the taste of her inner thighs after one match. Wet and sticky with a musky odor and all salty-sweet from the combination of her various juices... In addition, Coco's vagina may even be larger than those of human women, or at the very least anatomically different. The vaginal walls of human women only contract significantly during sex if experiencing orgasm. Due to her dragon nature, Coco may resemble some member of the known animal kingdom in that her physical control over her vaginas muscles is much greater. It would not be unreasonable to suggest that Coco could flex and contract the muscles in her vaginal walls to masturbate and in effect "milk" a penis for all it's worth. Her cervix may even be penetrable with little to no pain experienced, a sort of inverse "knot", a way to ensure that not one drop of her mate's semen will escape her.

>>26693976
>"Alright listen. I know you're in a shitty situation, and you probably feel like you have to do something. And I just want you to let you know, that's complete and utter horseshit."
>"But-"
>"Shut up. Just sit on your ass, play with your cat for a few days, and wait for management to handle this. Anything you try to do will 100% just make things worse. Don't. Do. Shit."

>>26693998
>what are kegel exercises

>>26694231
>play with your cat for a few days
that particular case took much longer than a few days. anxiety gets exponentially worse the longer you let it set

>>26692199
Oh Christ.
Crazy chicks, being out of it while being abused by said crazy chicks, monster girls, armpits, aphrodisiacs, agegaps, simple loving gestures that escalate in rough sex, ryona (giving and receiving), power dynamics like pred/prey stuff, general fear and horror, light bloodplay, exhibitionism, sweat, tummies, ghosts (which could roll into monster girls I guess), clussy, forced impregnation, BDSM, gang rape, probably some I'm missing...I've got a lot of fetishes.

>>26692199
in no particular order: loli, shota, child-on-child, orientation play, public nudity/sex/masturbation, futa, reverse futa (if there isn't an actual name for that), crossdressing, transformation, hyper, piss, incest, bestiality (particularly with horses), rape (where the victim likes it), rape (where the victim doesn't like it). same-size unbirth, same-size cock vore, orgasm denial, forced orgasms, pet-play, power imbalances in general, and probably a lot more i'm forgetting.

>>26694554
>rape (where the victim likes it)
That's not rape then.

>>26693945
Hm, interesting question. I'd say anything that is, or is close enough to, a word should be written out, but everything that's just noise is better off being described with an adjective/adverb or two. To me, stuff like AAAAAAAHHH or OOOH looks a bit silly and doesn't encourage imagination as much as a good description.

>>26694548
AA, you're a weirdo.

>>26694554
>reverse futa
What does that even mean?
Something like A/B/O where boys can get pregnant from anal? Guys with vaginas but not boobs?

>>26694601
well they don't like it at first obviously

>>26694660
>Guys with vaginas but not boobs?
it's this. sometimes keeping the dick is fine too, but the pussy is mandatory.

>>26694653
>Person who writes chuuni nonsense and manages a fucking fanfic archive is a weirdo
No shit. Other guy below me mentioned orgasm denial and forced orgasms which were two I forgot so add that to the list.

>>26694721
So like traps with a vagina, or like musclebound baras with vaginas?

>>26694231
>"But... my cat's dead..."

>>26694822
>So like traps with a vagina
How is this not a woman at this point?

>>26694554
>horses
Did that Fubuki fic do anything to you? Bellerophon is the name of the fic.

>>26694878
>"And you're a necromancer. Put two and two together."

>>26694912
So you're saying Mikeneko with a penis would still be a woman.

>>26695122
>Fubuki acted grossed out as her friends helped dry her face but in reality she was turned on. Only she had seen how the stallion had looked her in the eyes when it swayed its massive horse cock. She knew that its giant load was meant for her ovaries. She even bit her lip when it happened and hoped no one noticed. Fubuki was getting that warm and fuzzy feeling inside of her. She needed horse cock.

Weirdanon, was this your work? Fucking hell, this is just hilarious. It escalates so fast.

>>26694822
why not both? i'm not picky.

>>26695122
yeah, i liked it. the writing itself definitely left somthing to be desired, but horses are hot enough to carry any smut fic.

>>26695322
Yes
>>26695447
Are you a girl by chance?

>>26695347
Okay so I have to ask then; what's the appeal of reverse futa?

>>26692450
>>26693029
>>26693059
>>26693622
>>26694548
Are these even fetishes? Sounds more like generic human heterosexuality to me. Isn't this all pretty standard stuff?

>>26695899
no, why do you say that?
>>26695998
i don't know. what's the appeal of normal futa? what's the appeal of any fetish?

>>26696006
>gang rape
>generic human heterosexuality

>>26696101
I mean in terms of writing something having a deep understanding of a fetish, the nuts and bolts of it as it were, tends to let you write the fetish better since you can distill the essense of it. Which is pretty key when you have to do weird shit that's visually reliant and have to transcribe it into the written word which gets much more mileage out of the 'feel' of things rather than the description.

>>26693029
HCAnon?

>>26692199
oneeshota

>>26696373
Roberu?

>>26696109
>He doesn't want to share the experience with his brethren.

>>26696006
I think they’re all valid. Fetishes don’t strictly have to be outlandish or extreme.

>>26696101
I only ask because it seems like women in particular like bestiality a lot. For example, Old Yeller, a shitty fic involving Mumei and Animal, has over 1700 hits on my ao3 which is more than it deserves.

>>26696101
Silly anon, girls don't exist online.

>>26696578
...
In all honesty it could be tag viewers, i.e people that specifically came from the bestiality tag in order to look for 'straight' bestiality content. I know I sometimes use ao3 to try and look for smut in a specific subgenre/fetish I'm feeling horny for during that time, and well if you're horny you just need the smut to be coherent and legible, actual objective quality be damned.

>>26696578
Link your ao3?

>>26696742
That makes sense. People get crazy when they're horny.
>>26696878
https://archiveofourown.org/users/apollospvtnik/pseuds/apollospvtnik

>>26697235
Yeah, I can remember a lot of times where I'm happily jacking it to the fantasy (not even the exact words) of some fucked up smut before having to click away in disgust afterwards because the actual content is actually rather bad or not something I'm that into.
Of course there's also that gap of views from your other bestiality fic but I'm reasonably certain that's because ao3 is an EOP site whose (main) userbase got into chuubas with their respective companies EN waves.

>>26697235
I love your descriptions. They're so blunt and nondescript, almost like afterthoughts to the actual works.

>Call me Risu because I've collected at least seven nuts from this fic.

Lot more than that

>>26692199
netorase, gentle humiliation, chastity, etc.

>>26679816
Sneaking past Anemachi in order to be the one to tuck Suisei into bed every night.

>>26696288
What? How?

>>26680027
>To be 17 again. Ch. 5.
UOHHHHHU NEW PART LETS FUCKING GOOOOO

>A Predator's Touch, The Days of Dreams (Part 1)
New Botan NSFW POGGGGGG

>>26700601
Some people are really good at detecting who's who via subtle means. Everything from descriptors to how they name their files.

>>26700825
You have to be 18 to post here.

>>26701008
That's not a very poggers attitude, anon. Pretty sus, too - probably a projection of your subconscious.You're a pretty sussy baka, anon.

>>26701008
Y'all kinda sus tho ngl ong fr fr

>>26692199
anything omatsu related, light petplay, power imbalance, humiliation

>>26700913
anon, please, I'm paranoid enough as it is

>>26694554
I'm into some pretty taboo stuff myself but jesus christ

>>26702200
Anon, you're posting in a basket weaving forum with a known reputation for locating, identifying and tracking international terrorists as well as digging up obscure and inconsequential information for shits and giggles.

>>26694554
I have to ask, are you the writer for a series here? Because it would be very funny if you were.

>>26702515
True that. Even when you're safe, you're not safe.

>>26700601
You talked about your desire to pick up girls before and you also wrote a story about benching Amelia and Aqua. I’m pretty sure nobody else fits the bill.

>>26692199
I have to accept that I have a huge weakness for animal girls. Not furry (anymore) but still.
I also am very weak for lovey handholdy kissy sex

>>26692199
I guess all in all I'm a pretty vanilla guy despite being quite horny. I don't have a lot of extreme fetishes although I do fap to a lot of various things.

I guess the ones I really could say I have a fetish for and they make me hard every time are things like anal play (sex, rimming, fingering, plugs etc.), pet play (girls acting subservient in general but especially if they're animal girls or pretending to be), lactation (bonus for things like milk sprays on orgasm, nursing handjobs or milking), lolis, belly bulges from insertion (bonus for anal), semen inflation and all the way through are kind of the main ones.

>>26679816
Something with this feels https://youtu.be/FvOpPeKSf_4 preferably with rushia

>>26679816
Fubuki sold as a slave but her master is a gentle and loving soul.

>>26692199
Assertive women. Not in the sense where they dom you(although I'm not against it), rather when she actively participates in the act of intercourse and physically conveys her desires to you. Telling you how much she wants you to cum inside her, locking her legs all over you, grinding her hips against yours, gripping you so hard her nails dig into your back and looking right into your eyes so intensely you feel like you'll melt and of course, creating a dynamic back and forth between the two of you, that shit turns me on like no tomorrow. Also cock worship. Yeah.

>>26703023
Busted...

>>26703023
You're telling me the events of a story are that revealing about the author? No fucking way...

>>26703853
Better watch out Anon...

>>26692199
Not really a fetish, but I am attracted to radiant women, who have enough energy to light up a small city, but who always has me in mind.
For the fetishes - close to vanilla like kemonomimi, thighhighs, but the most sacred thing for me is for the partner to feel really good, and the apparent ego boost from having an ability to make someone feel really good.

>>26703853
No, but anyone with a 'nickname' granted here has probably given enough details to build an idea of them from just their posting alone that one can make decent guesses

>>26700601
NTA but nobody else has a Miko picture named “uoooh miko sweat”.

>>26704453
The idea some hyper autist could have a dossier on our boys is scary 8

>>26705163
I'd wager the anon who admitted to jerking off to the idea of other writeanons has something like that.

>>26705304
I forgot about that.
Now I'm curious but it's best to not ask for detailed descriptions

>>26692199
Hypnosis, corruption, purification, mind control, anything along those lines as long as it's femsub.

Hmmm do I turn this "IRyS Valentine's Date where she said she wanted to break up but not really because she's always insecure except this time you believe her and now she's desperately trying to convince you that she still loves you" scenario inside your car into a smut where she sucks you off in the driver's seat or keep it as SFW fluff?

Decisions, decisions.

>>26706139
Sounds like the start of a CYOA story

>>26706139
If you want to write both, just keep it sfw fluff and release the nsfw bit separately.

>>26706139
Feels like Irys deserves a lot more smut than what we have in the archive, so an in-car BJ seems pretty hot. But imagine the logistics of having her trying to squeeze her horns between your stomach and steering wheel...

>>26704502
you don't rename your files before you post them? I thought that was common practice

>>26706670
That problem leads to an alternative ending where you switch seats, leading to you having to reach over and steer while being distracted by the bj.

>>26707007
NIGGA JUST STOP THE CAR

>>26707639
Boring

>>26707639
Actually that might be hot. Irys tells you to pull over in a parking lot and bends over against the hood of the car, where you proceed to slide her panties down and bang her right there. Assuming its nighttime for obvious reasons.

>>26692199
A bratty loli who can suck someone dry, cum on food, rape, insects, all the way through tentacles, bukkakes, emotionless sex, premature ejaculation (before penetration) and futas.

>>26692199
fertile older women with fat tits and tummy

>>26692199
Incest, Size difference(both ways), armpits, sweat and smells, loli, hags, straightening, rape(moreso coercion I guess and both ways though only if the girl is drugged/hypnotized), cheating(just not being cheated on), monster girls....probably just gonna stop there

>>26706139
Smut gets better the more you build to it, and fluff, while also good by itself, can lack spice. So the sweetspot would be sfw fluff followed by smut.

>>26692199
Obesity, corruption, bellies in general, gluttony and spoiled attitudes

>>26692199
Tying up and playfully dominating witty, but kinky, women.

>>26717979
Don't look at me like that

>>26692199
Hyper muscularity on woman. Gigantic giga muscles, especially her pectorals. Lots of flexing and growing and showing off. Starting insanely musclebound and getting exponentially bigger. No height growth from head to toe but extreme muscle growth. Invincibility and infinite strength.

>>26706181
It's fun to write one of these but goddamn do you need a plan to write one unless you want to struggle writing it.
There are a lot of tools to help make your life better in writing one but even trivial choices add way more words than you think.

Say, Can You See? Epilogue Chapter https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQJAYxSDn-nvyow7OkMG01_qWn5OWQzlNlnmLJOffAg1gPZp1J0vJ7RkSoLu8evkKUZDQRniPOiOwIk/pub

I'm starting to think strongly that I've set up a good premise for a sequel series. I also just got done reading Pat Buchanan's White House Wars, which gave me a good ton of ideas that I could write about with a sequel, so I'll have to plot that out. Thanks for the advice given over the chapters, the praise, the criticism, the everything. It started with a shitpost schizo idea but it turned into something kinda cool I guess.

>>26679771
Say, Can You See? Epilogue Chapter https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQJAYxSDn-nvyow7OkMG01_qWn5OWQzlNlnmLJOffAg1gPZp1J0vJ7RkSoLu8evkKUZDQRniPOiOwIk/pub

I'm starting to think strongly that I've set up a good premise for a sequel series. I also just got done reading Pat Buchanan's White House Wars, which gave me a good ton of ideas that I could write about with a sequel, so I'll have to plot that out. Thanks for the advice given over the chapters, the praise, the criticism, the everything. It started with a shitpost schizo idea but it turned into something kinda cool I guess.

>>26721425
I have wondered anon, how much of the story is informed by your own politics?

>>26721425
very sweet and charming, i enjoyed every second of this final chapter. yours has been the only ongoing series that's interested me for quite a while now, so seeing it end is a little bittersweet. i hope you find the motivation to work on that sequel at some point

>>26724250
Probably alot. It's the difficulty with making the sequel. When it got to the point where he wanted to run for governor of New York, there was always the issue of the story running off into /pol/and only supplemented by vtuber characters. But some people might like that idea so I will write it if I can make it work

>>26726147
Is your series more like West Wing or is it like House of Cards.

>>26727045
I don't know, I haven't watched either of those. In the ambassador phase, I tried my damndest to make the story mostly about the character interactions between the MC and the Hololive girls with the politics being background noise. But I think with this epilogue chapter (which thankfully it is just an epilogue chapter, it doesn't poison the whole series) I kinda dropped the ball abit. But it's a beta test to see if I could write a sort of "inside the administration" kind of story with Hololive characters. But then there's the issue of it being nothing more than political fanfiction

>>26730248
Moomers needs some eye drops

>>26721425
I'll say the same thing I've said to you the past... pretty much every chapter; you write really compelling 1st person narration and dialogue. Each chapter was really fun to read through.
Though in retrospect, this story really could have used more arcs to flesh out the characters because the parting, the ending of all of the 'tokyo arc'; it just does not have the power behind it since Dewitt's relationship with the other characters was so 'surface level'. It's like if 'Menhera Wrangler' didn't have the series wide fubuki arc to give the ending the punch it needed to hit me in the gut.
Structurally I feel like there needed to be something back there to make the ending mean something. Like it's missing a 'pre-enlightenment' and 'post-enlightenment' arc to show how the MC has grown from his time in Tokyo.
I guess my criticism can pretty much be summed up as; the japan/tokyo setting was really underutilized and could have been the base to use for a few narrative arcs to have the MC's change be done gradually rather than within a few chapters.
Anyway I liked my time reading this, I hope you can write more stuff that uses this style because it's very compelling. I just hope you make more planned out stuff in the future.

Who the fuck wrote that chunky polka fic? Go fuck yourself, you're actively attacking my mental state with how fucking SEX it is
I fucking NEED IT

>>26733186
It's a fair argument. The nature of the story dictates that I could not flesh out the characters without making the story long and dragged out. That's why it was kind of rushed. I think such stories would be better in animation form but in terms of text, you can only have the recurring cycle of coming into work, go to lunch with some character, and then go to bed so many times. Or maybe I'm just lacking that creativity. It's hard to write a story like this

>>26734758
...
Anon, you know you can break formula right? Just because the story had that formula doesn't mean you have to have that daily grind be the structure of every chapter. You could have done office shenanigans, solving personal problems, actual attempts at romance, etc. Stuff to break the mold and have your skill at writing dialogue happen someplace other than the structure you've set for yourself. Hell the fucking ambassador position pretty much gives an easy excuse to have had some low stakes normal days with the girls to have them try and break the shell as it were.

>>26734758
>It's a fair argument
You know what else is a fair argument, punk? That jet fuel can't melt steel beams, and look where the fuck that got us. So fuck you and your fair arguments.

>>26735467
kek
>>26735452
I'm not that creative and I don't know how many different forms of shenanigans I can put into a story. I do not want attempts at romance between the MC and any of the females. If I would do that, it'd probably be between the Holos.

>>26735736
I mean in fairness, losing Shion to Aqua would fulfill that starting line from chapter 1.

>>26736093
That's true. I could have made something more between them. I think I had an opportunity with Suisei and Miko, or maybe Suisei and Pekora. But before you said it, I didn't think of any of this shit

>>26736245
I guess a lot of that potential kind of went nowhere due to the fact that this story was effectively written 'by the seat of your pants' and improvised from a loose idea then?
Too bad. Like I said before I'd love to see what you can write out on something more planned out. Your style is genuinely one of the most compelling when it comes to the moment to moment reading of it that seeing it on something with an actual idea of where it's going sounds like it'd create a great fic.

>>26736525
>I guess a lot of that potential kind of went nowhere due to the fact that this story was effectively written 'by the seat of your pants' and improvised from a loose idea then?
Yup. I did not plan anything. I wasn't even planning on writing a second chapter let alone a series kek. I should probably plan this next sequel better

>>26706948
I've personally never bothered.

So to the anon writing To Be 17 again, how long do you expect that rewrite of chapter 5 to take?

Give us your honest opinion. Do you feel as if the thread has been healthier lately?

>>26740239
Yes, this 'period' is pretty much the kind of stable, comfy vibe that lets fanfics be uncolored by dumb yabs.
Like, there could be more discussion and idea sharing to build up ideas since I love doing that shit but you take what you can get, and this calm is much better than a shitstorm.

>>26692199
Someone who loves (You) back.
Feet and vouyerism + masturbation.

>>26740239
Been here more than a year now, and I'd say it's neither healthy nor unhealthy. It's stable right now. Eventually that will lead to stagnation, but there's booms and troughs in every life cycle.
My advice is to stop thinking about it, because it's not worth thinking about in the first place.

>>26740239
Good but nothing special, aye. Some feedback and interesting talk, a slice of brainstorming, not much stupid arguing.
More important to me are those recent stories. Good mix of long series and short 'n' sweet oneshots. Good oc makes for a good day, i say.

what a thrill...

STUPID FUCKING WOMAN RUSHIA JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP

>>26679816
Fauna accidentally eating a weird mushroom, which causes her to grow a big mushroom futa cock that causes her to have thoughts and urges to fuck and creampie other women. She tries to research a way to remove it while trying to keep the dickshroom a secret as she goes about her usual routine.

>>26746031
Fandeadbro...

How do you guys handle writing a fic about a chuuba you don't particularly watch often?

>>26750019
Research the chuuba by watching them? I don't think there's any special trick around this one anon.

>>26750019
We just give up on writing about the chuuba in question. See: Anya.

>>26740239
I think we could do with more story feedback, but in comparison to some of our other threads in the past I’d say we’re doing brilliantly.

>>26750019
Doing your reps and researching their character, then thinking about how you'd implement them into the fic. The amount of research you need to do depends on how much that chuuba is 'core' to the story. If they're a main character they get the full treatment as it were, but if they're just a side character I'll just rewatch some clips to refresh their character in my mind.

Deluxe premium golden edition bump

>>26750019
Watch before you write, eh? If it don't fit, i might as well take a better fic 'n' replace the names.

>>26750019
Watch some VODs. Or if you're an EOP, some clips.

>>26751670
i'm going to fuck that whore heel'd flatty while amelia watches

>>26752701
I will watch you with Amelia, then.

Man, I fucking love you guys.

>>26754915
(Insert Aqua looking down here)
<3

>>26755292

>>26754915
Gay.

>>26754915
Really, anon? Do you really mean it?

>>26755434
:(

What's a concept for a fic in the archive do you think would be interesting to have another take/fic be written on it? i.e what do you think might be interesting to see another 'cake' of.

>>26755838
Dark HF where the "shit's fucked" meter is maxed out

>>26755838
Hololive Subjection except (You) are the slave.

>>26755980
>Everyone who can die does so, Anon's personality shifts to paranoid cynicism whilst dealing with a litany of trust issues, fears and probably depression after being forced to kill people or barely avoid actual terrifying rape attempts, potentially joins with Ina willfully just to escape the Hell he's in, The Dragon is immediately more vocal and not helping things, Matsuri has her fucking throat slit in an alley

>>26756478
and that's assuming he doesn't just fucking die halfway through the first chapter

>>26756058
So like the scenario turned on it's head ( Suisei, Towa and Fubuki win (You) in the slave gacha after the war), or like just the concept of being a holo's war slave.
>>26756478
Alternatively
>Anon is a failed hero that's been raped in every major fight he's in, and is forced to live with his rapists, he joins with Ina to try and escape the rapes but finds she's just another rapist under another master.

>>26755838
Another post-apocalyptic world would be nice, except you are in an uneasy alliance with the chuubas.

>>26756752
>( Suisei, Towa and Fubuki win (You) in the slave gacha after the war)
Yeah just like that.
>>26756829
So like the start of Shadowlive?

>>26756864
Haven't read it since the cast didn't appeal to me. I was thinking something like HC but for some reason half the chuubas hate you and the others have trust issues with you.

>>26757036
I though HCanon was writing a fic that was basically Holocalypse on nightmare difficulty where Anon starts with nothing and is also weak with 1's in all of his imaginary stats.

>>26755838
being childhood friends with a chuuba like in Out of the Blue. I really liked how that story actually followed (you) and gura as you grew up together rather than just skipping to adulthood and pulling the "we've known each other since we were kids, trust me" card.

>>26756752
>Rushia actually is an evil necromancer who has control of the Castle
>Mio goes insane from loneliness and is a feral beast by the time Anon finds her
>Mel straight up just tries to kill Anon via exsanguination
>Ollie has given into chaos lust and stalks the halls destroying whatever or whoever she can
>Marine splattered on the pavement after trying to rape Anon with her entire fucking crew before Coco toasted the ship
>Polka succeeded but was reigned in and forced to join with Coco
Pure Black World Tendency Holofantasy would just be a bad time.

>>26757195
If he is, then I'll gladly take more cake.

Hopefully no horrific rapes occur.

What was the name of that Aqua anal fic that gets a lot of praise?

>>26757402
Berserk was a bad time, but there was always a glimmer of hope. The story can be dark without being grimderp.

>>26757402
Oh god, imagine a fucking holofantasy mirror universe encounter. Especially if Mirror!Anon's party consisted of the scenarios that never got rolled, i.e Korone&Okayu, and Botan.

>>26757539
Onion Layer?

>>26757665
That's what it is, thanks anon.

>>26757647
Yeah, that's true. Even in the deepest depths, a light still shines...

>>26757647
I mean... thinking about it the initial idea was, 'HF but maxed out shit's fucked' so it could be in the backstory where shit got fucked.
>Monsters are Murderous AND Rapey
>With the Fantasy World feeling more like an apocalypse was still raging through it.
>War and Famine are common, Law and Order less so.
>You are Anon, A knight in training searching for the lost city of Argomery so that your people can survive the ongoing storm.

>>26757665
I hardly ever hear anyone mention Onion Layer, come to think of it.

>>26757995
"It may be a grim, thin hope, an Arthurian sword at sunset, but let us know that we do not live in vain.”
or some shit

>>26758144
I mean I see it get mentioned when talking about MWanon's ability to write commission's or when talking about good aqua smut, but that's pretty much the contexts where you'd expect it to get mentioned.

>>26758127
>Coco is a recurring villainess who keeps crossing Anon and his party(?) and making obscene flirtatious remarks before getting into a fight
>Keeps 'losing' but managing to escape
>Actually just gauging Anon's growth as his adventures continue
>Finally challenges him for real at the very end when he's at the peak of his physical strength. Loss of course means the obvious
Could be a fun thing to keep her relevant in the story. He'd probably be traveling with humans. Shion and Noel make the most sense. Maybe discover and rescue Matsuri from some wreckage.

>>26756864
Is Shadowlive on hiatus or abandoned?

>>26759054
Allegedly the anon writing it is still on it, but if we go by fanfic parlance it's a 'dead fic' in that we don't know if the author is still here writing it and the gap between a new update is really large.

I want to impregnate this menhera

>>26759778
i don't. i'd fuck her but only under 16 layers of rubber

no way i'm getting stuck paying child support for that bipolar nutjob

>>26759778
Anon, why do you hate yourself?

>>26759778
Forgive me Oga, but I would stick my dick in crazy.

>>26759837
Easy solution, you don't have to pay child support if you raise the child with her.

Trust me

>>26761267
MENHERA HANDS TYPED THIS POST IT'S A TRICK DON'T LISTE

>>26761267
Raising a kid with this menhera sounds like a perfect fluff or tragedy fic.
Too bad Funny Uncle never got another update.

>>26762393
A-Anon?

>>26679816
Doggy God Korone trashing your date then raping you on your way home

Anal sex with Korone....

>>26679816
Oh no! You're the resident lion caretaker at the Chuuba Zoo and both Botan and Rurudo have gone into estrus at the same time! You can handle them one at a time usually, but now you're in a pinch!

Can you handle these two sex-crazed kitties pawing and nibbling at your testicles to fuck 50 times a day? Will you let yourself become their plaything or will you employ some non-standard lioness taming techniques? Can you survive the week?!

>>26757195
>>26757497
I've been trying to brainstorm ideas that would maximise suffering and make the story extremely hellish, but coming across some chuubas and only working together to survive sounds like a nice concept to explore. What characters to include is another thing I need to think of, since an entirely new cast would probably be for the best. For now, it's in the ever-growing WIP pile but if I find the inspiration again I'll get back to it.

>>26765251
What would it feel like?
>>26765836
Good luck getting a fic written about non holo chuubas.

>>26765836
100 times a day total sounds like too much. They need toy correction

>>26765866
I vaguely remember discussion about this prompt ages ago. And I mean ages ago, in a much earlier thread. Has it been a WIP for that long?

>>26765866
if Anon's going to be starting out as gutter trash, pairing him up initially with a more competent chuuba who saviorfags him could make for a nice reversal of 4's initial meeting with Aqua

>>26766547
Botan. It can only be Botan.

>>26766592
I was thinking Korone, since she's a certified scrapper and Botan's already in the original HC

>>26766547
How about have Aqua actually be a competent chuuba and have her be like a survivalist genius who's a god tier marksman and her initial job as a maid would make her resourceful as well.

>>26766693
Fair point. I feel like it would be difficult to build trust with her though.

>>26764606
Nevermind, I love raising children with my amazing festival wife.

>>26765936
Rurudo's quickly becoming a honorary holo through Mama status, like Ui or Pochi. Still not ideal, but that and her model's appeal give me hope. Only the pairing with a hag might be difficult

>>26766992
That's not necessarily a bad thing. Hard-earned bonds can be all the more compelling, especially in a grim setting.

>>26758144
because commissioned stories suck by default

>>26767220
Yeah, it would certainly be interesting to read.
Not sure if you'll go this route but korone could have a mediator for her and anon, one who helps you build rapport with korone. And if its especially grim, the mediator isn't okayu since she might have died, etc.

>>26758144
I think it just suffers from a similar problem to the Hoshikawa fic he made more recently where somebody 180's into a cumbrain in a way that's jarring. Which I always thought was weird because FoS and Wolfish Winds don't have that problem

>>26766490
Yeah, I remember that. Someone said they would write something like this >>7617916 but it never came around so I thought I'd give it a shot. Though I couldn't find the posts, I recall people talking about an apocalypse story where you come back home to a chuuba everyday with supplies but refuse to tell her where you got them from or something. I also remember an anon saying the story should start in the showers with a large naked man running towards you.

>>26763464
>Funny Uncle
Fuck, I remember reading that. If the original author isn't here anymore I really hope someone else picks the concept up, it would make for a damn good read.

>>26766547
My thoughts as well. Korone is a good pick, considering I would have liked to add doog to the main series but never had the chance, so this could be a good compromise. As for Botan, it depends on whether I want to make this canon or not. If it is, she can only appear in the beginning and care for you at Albatross until it gets hit and you're assumed dead, because she's busy dealing with pregnancy scares after that. Shit, I don't even know how long I want to make this. Originally it was going to be a quick one shot but if there's enough material and ideas for more, who knows?

>>26766992
That's the best part. Aren't hard earned bonds the most satisfying?

I saw this and now you people have to see it too. I'm sure there's a story that can be written from here right?

>>26767726
Hmm... I think MWAnon truly shines when he can write girls letting their inner desires come to fruition? FoS might be the gold standard for smutfiction here, and Wolfish Winds was hot as well. But Onion Layer at least, even though I want nothing more than to sodomize Aqua into a drooling mess for hours on end, felt a little underwhelming. Maybe it felt a little mechanical, or maybe the situation wasn't the best place to have anal sex for the first time.

Still wanked to it.

>>26768406
Yes, I pull out my Winchester 22 and shoot this traitorous bandit 5 times in the chest, saving Watame and living happily ever after.

>>26768406
Sadism is hot as fuck, particularly unprovoked. I like that image a lot.

>>26768611
He's definitely a massive sub. I think he should steer clear of maledom and focus on the converse, because he's had a few goes at writing women getting domineered and they've not been the best.

>>26768012
>I recall people talking about an apocalypse story where you come back home to a chuuba everyday with supplies but refuse to tell her where you got them from or something
Oh yeah, I remember that one. That was one of mine. The original prompt was basically This War of Mine with chuubas. You're civilians caught in the middle of a warzone and have to do whatever you can to survive.

>>26768884
he just does commissions now, so that won't be happening. dude must be making bank. maybe i should open an ao3 and advertise

>>26768611
>>26768884
I was unironically doing research using hentai games to see if it could help my dialog writing, only to realize in horror that this is where the coomer-tranny pipeline meme comes from. For the terminally online, it might be better if those who don't 'get' how to write certain genres to just never try.

>>26770615
>coomer-tranny pipeline meme
huh?

>>26770750
I think he means the "I'm such a porn-addicted coombrain that nothing gets me off anymore, so I'll start sticking things in my ass and eventually ask for advice on how to suck dicks at the local gloryhole on /gif/ and finally start crossdressing and going to the gay bar to get fucked by dudes." phenomenon that seems unfortunately common these days.

>>26770615

>>26771041
That sounds like something a Baptist dad screams after he catches his son watching hentai

>>26770750
>>26771041
I'm talking about something much lower level than that. Consooming too many female MC porn games where you get narration from the girl fucks up coomers, with femsub/corruption/etc being the biggest culprits. If you don't believe it just go out and play one of those, and then imagine yourself playing twenty of those games.

>>26768012
>If the original author isn't here anymor
Never left, put verification at the top of the fic. desu I kinda forgot about that story until some anon brought up a little while back. I stopped writing it back then because I I felt it was a bit too ambitious for my skill level back then. However, I'm more than confident to tackle it now, might take a while though due to other WiPs. Also any other anon is free to pick it up if they like.

I will leave you with the rough plan I had for it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS3HzK7x6lik-7gEWd8NCSd_kN4Z97REh3Bh2exmQarWZGSQX-KK9bt3wpuTFSbY5dpKmsBlieXye3_/pub

>>26771325
I forgot the piece of shit's name but a few years ago some guy preyed on lonely coomers from r9k and turned them into traps for some weird femboy harem the dude was trying to make which led to a kid who I think was 15 at the time livestreaming his own suicide. So that stuff happens. Also why on r9k stuff about traps are instantly deleted so there isn't a repeat though I refuse to go on that board so I can't verify 100%.

>>26771647
I'm fucking glad you're still here. Hope I can see you write it someday.

>>26768012
>brief interaction with Botan, Okayu and Rushia in the military base
I think that would be good. Something to tie the stories into the same universe.

>>26771706

>>26771706
There's some difference between homosexual pedophilic grooming and "too much porn will turn you into a tranny"

>>26679816
A fic where you cheat on Botan and she spends her time hunting you down to kill you. She may or may not follow through with it.

>>26765251
>>26765936
>What would it feel like?

Hmm, I imagine anal with Korone would be something you'd have to slowly suggest and introduce into your sex life instead of dropping the ask on her straight away. Maybe lightly press your thumb against her folds while eating her out, getting her used to the sensation of pressure against her sphincter even from outside. Slowly prod and back away, triggering all the nerve endings in present in her hole until it becomes part of your daily foreplay. Spread her open and insert your thumb inside while pleasuring her in different ways, just to plant the seed that it can be pleasurable.

Then once it's no longer taboo, let her know you're interested in it. She will blush and whine about it, even threatening to sock you playfully, hiding her face behind the pillow. But at Korone's core she's a girl who genuinely likes to please others; your happiness is her happiness after all. So this is where the fun really begins.

Initially you'll just get her a plug, then use it to stretch her out during sex, occasionally spreading her anus wide open only to shove it back inside. Pop it free each time she orgasms so her brain becomes accustomed to the sensation and links it to feeling good. Sit down on the sofa and have her lay on your lap, spreading her legs while you reach your hand in between to test out how soft her asshole has become while petting her ears, feeling her pussy twitch and drool against your palm though you stop focusing there. She coos and whines, wagging her tail excitedly when you dig her out using two, then three fingers, watching her squirm while your rough skin caresses the inner lining of her rectum.

Eventually the focus will go from pleasing you to pleasing herself... and in an unusual act of boldness she will pounce on you and say she can't wait anymore, and assume a position she's familiar with on all fours, her tail wagging wildly while impatiently calling you over. Then finally, you can line up your crown with her anus and watch as it stretches painlessly around your girth, Korone going awfully quiet while she takes in the sensations of being spread wider and penetrated deeper than ever, your throbs felt around her ring of muscle as inch after inch lodges itself into her guts. You bend over her to kiss her neck and face, giving her plenty of time to get used to it.

Except she doesn't want to wait; she starts to rock her hips back and forth, all on her own as her fingers grip the bedsheets and her knees tremble with pleasure. She's tight, but her virginal anus is so, so soft and warm that even with her small movements it's hard to hold back from cumming for long. You begin to thrust into her slowly but lovingly, making sure to press your chest against her back and keep her close, hugging her waistline and gently petting one of her heavy breasts while your other hand applies pressure against her womb. You feel her tail brush against your chest as she starts to moan with every extraction of your cock until you feel an impossible amount of tightness at the base of your cock and a swarm of fluids explode against your testicles, Korone convulsing from a strong orgasm that sets off your own, depositing every droplet of semen you have to give deep into her intestines. The two of you collapse on the bed together and she can't help but smile, and wonder if you enjoyed it.

She's obviously happy when you say you do, and admits behind a blush that she enjoyed it as well. You roll over, popping free of her hole only to see her crawl and rest her hand on your stomach, nursing your softening cock and cleaning it up without much fuss as your semen begins to spill from her red, slightly agape backdoor.

And that's more or less when the troubles begin. Her initial shyness dispelled, Korone becomes more aggressive. Her athleticism means she now wants to do it in multiple positions though her favorite is riding cowgirl where she can watch your face as her kegel muscles massage and milk your cock whilst buried deep in her ass, not really having to move much in order to coax a load or two out of you, as you watch her abdominal muscles contract each time a shot of semen irrigates her guts, much to her enjoyment. Ultimately she always rolls over on her back and lets you dig out her rectum as you see fit while in a deep embrace, letting you feel how much she's enjoying it from the hairs on her tail brushing against your testicles. The harder you pound her the more excited she gets, her kisses becoming more and more frantic until there's nothing left in those beautiful caramel eyes of her but pure lust and desire... And because she loves you so much, she always ends up leaving you perfectly clean with her mouth afterwards, cuddling up to your chest so you can tell her what a good girl she is for it...

>>26768406
Very hot (if it's with consent)

>>26768884
First I heard someone calling me a massive sub. I said it earlier, but I enjoy seeing women being more assertive and making sexual intercourse a back and forth, instead of a pure domination. In a weird way, I like seeing a woman give in to their own desires and fight back in a sense, instead of it being a one sided thing. FoS was... a strange thing to write to be frank. Perhaps I just understood the incredibly degenerate thoughts and desires, as well as the allure of filthy menhera sex. Physically, you're destroying her, but mentally and emotionally she's got you wrapped around your finger like a helpless puppet. But I will take note of not reducing the MC into a pure coombrain and keep his motivations coherent.

>>26774089

>>26774089

Some discussion to stave off a zooming board.

Give me your favorite line of dialogue from a fic and tell me why you like it.

>>26773025
Tbf porn did make me want to suck cock so it's not too far fetched

In the fic "I thought you wanted to Dance" was Matsuri just fucking with anon so she could get him all to herself?

>>26778407
Sorta? She was clearly making that shit up to try and get him to sleep with her instead of moping over Fubuki, but as much of it seemed to be for the purpose of fucking with Friend

>>26774089
Nah I'll just put it in on night one.

>>26779123
It was really hot. I also had to feel bad for anon in the story because although Matsuri got what she wanted in the end (she's also going to let the other girls borrow him to spite Fubuki further) he got suckered into seeing a photo (taken by Matsuri) and thinking Fubuki was already in a relationship and fucking.
It terrifies me yet it makes me want to see more. How the hell did Matsuri even snap a picture of Fubuki / Oga to begin with? was she stalking them?

Proofreading kills me...

>>26781485
Yeah proofreading is pretty much the most laborious stage of editing, thankfully you can and should put it last since anything you plan on changing further doesn't need that level of editing yet.

>>26777686
Cheating because I wrote it but "Now you can call me Bidet." from Paradise Regained is a line I really like and was the joke that the whole fic was structured around.

>>26679816
(You) caring for your disabled(in a wheelchair, mute and or deaf, diaper-using, your choice) oshi, only to abuse her, either phisically or sexually at the end.

>>26777686
> "he had his affair and she her lovebird"
from "to be 17 again". Nothing special in terms of prose, but it oddly tugged at my heartstrings. The bitter-sweetness of it all... to be a ray of sunshine in Mio's loveless marriage. Ah.
I hope the anon is satisfied with pt. 5 soon.

Also, "I love you" whenever Fubuki says it in every story ever, because pic related.

>>26782245
You telling me you wrote a whole-ass sequel just because of this joke? I will give you credit, it is a funny joke.

>>26783506
More or less yeah. When I go out of my way to write comedy fics I always structure it around one joke and fill in the gaps. For example, in Not That Nene the main joke is the Omelas and Paradise Lost reference and in Juniper Berries the main joke is the moth eating her fetus. As a sidenote, those abortion jokes in Juniper Berries have aged like wine.

>>26767726
Yeah, I remember this issue cropping up in Onion Layer, where for half of the fic it's a nice slow progression but then in the other half it just goes for the smut while skipping some of the steps that if was on the previous pace would have taken a few thousand words more. I get that the fic was commissioned and as such was on both a word limit and thinking time limit, but the way it's done in the fic didn't really give the right 'switch gets turned on' moment to justify the speed up.

>>26776543
Holofantasy good end...

>>26777686
>As a child, you were dropped on your head.
So many good lines from chuuba taker.

>>26759778
don't stick your dick in crazy. It's not worth it.

>>26759778
You know she's going to kill you, right.

>>26793659
Anon, that only makes it hotter.

>>26794078
Maybe if you're suicidal and pathetic.

>>26796435
Did you forget you were on /wg/?

>>26780074
>It terrifies me yet it makes me want to see more.
I had a vague idea for a sequel, where Fubuki keeps trying to set the record straight with you but keep getting blocked by everyone who now don't like her because of the rumors(And Matsuri keeps spamming her with porn of you and all the girls fucking or setting her up to catch you having sex with somebody), leading to where Oga(who's also been ostracized by the homos) and her actually do find solace in one another right when you finally acquiesce and go to speak to Fubuki and catch them kissing. I don't know what would happen after that, cause I definitely don't want it to be a cliffhanger.

I really like reading all of the fics on here, but i don't right my own. Wish I had the mental powers to be able to review or talk about them to help writers.

>>26799878
Just tell them it was good if you liked it, or what they did wrong if you didn’t. That’s all you really need to do to help writers. And if you want to write your own stories, just fantasise a scenario with a chuuba of your choice until inspiration strikes. That’s what I do.

>>26799878
Just do it.

>>26799878
Why are you making it seem more diffucult than it is? Just tell the writers what you liked and what you didn't like. It's really that simple.

>>26798634
>leading to where Oga(who's also been ostracized by the homos) and her actually do find solace in one another right when you finally acquiesce and go to speak to Fubuki and catch them kissing.
That's fucking brutal, holy shit.

>>26800460
Pretty much this.

>>26799878
Dude, most fics barely get any replies, just do simple posts if you care.

>>26799878
While a lot of the authors would like to get constructive critique that points out things even they didn't notice to help themselves improve; they'll appreciate even basic feedback about what you liked from what they wrote. Because if you look, a lot of fics barely get replies so even something simple telling them you liked it goes a long way.

>>26801960
I just wish I had the mental powers to be able to review or talk about them to help writers.

>>26799878
>>26802353
Stop self-pitying and either do it or fuck off.

>>26802353
Bro what the fuck are on about? What mental powers? Just read the story and tell them what you thought. That's all you need to do to help them.

>>26802912
I think he's looking for attention or something.

>>26802912
A review should be more in-depth, not to mention, helpful for future readers.

>>26803247
Perhaps, but if you lack 'mental powers' then you don't need to bother. Even the smallest feedback helps writers by a lot, so like I said that's all you need to do if you wish to help.

>>26803247
By a narrower definition at least, yeah. But giving a few thoughts or just expressing that you enjoyed the reading are also very much appreciated, so there's no need to decide between either writing a thousand words or more or writing nothing.

>>26803247
>A review should be more in-depth, not to mention, helpful for future readers.
Anon, these are fanfics, not actual literature, don't take it so seriously.

>>26804751
Anon, they may be fanfics, but as one of the anons who has written a fic, I would certainly appreciate in-depth criticisms for the purposes of improving.

>>26803948
I feel as if a review should be verbose, not concise. Because simply leaving a one-sentence post won’t suffice, especially if it doesn’t say anything at all.

>>26803247
Anon, no one posts reviews here since the ephemeral nature of the threads mean a long winded review is rather pointless. Instead the kind of response that gets posted here are for the most part directed to the author, in praise, in critique, or in acknowledgement of their work.

>>26805642
>Anon, no one posts reviews here since the ephemeral nature of the threads mean a long winded review is rather pointless
No, that’s what you guys decided, even if it’s more a brief moments, in-depth reviews should still be considered.

>>26805953
That's dodging the point, for the most part the responses (even the longer ones) to the fics posted aren't reviews to convince others in the thread to read the fic but responses to the author with what they, the reader, think of the fic.

>>26805953
Nigga, nobody is going to write a paragraph long review.

>>26805228
>a review shouldn't be concise

>>26806669
Why are you leaving out the part that I clarified and meant one-sentence post?

>>26801446
Yeah, that would have been a zinger for sure. But Fubuki getting stonewalled or catching you in the act I feel could really only be done once or twice before it becomes kinda comedic though

>>26806913
TO be honest, I thought it was bait as well.

>>26807740
I mean setting up a comedic atmosphere isn't too bad. Especially since it makes it so that a sudden turn for the dramatic via a 'gutpunch' scene is unexpected but foreshadowed..

>>26808033
Why would you even think it’s bait

>>26808414
Because people have been telling you what to do, but you seem adamant on crying about having no mental powers or your insistent on long reviews? If you're being honest, that's good, but for other people, it just seems like bait.

>>26808414
I mean it is the end of the thread, abrasive and or inflammatory statements are taken with an extra dose of precaution due to bait being an easy way to get the last 20 or so posts needed to get to bump limit.

>>26808623
I’m just trying to get my point across so I can avoid any confusion.

>>26808623
I don’t think my posts were in anyway inflammatory.

>>26809176
>I’m just trying to get my point across so I can avoid any confusion.
Yes, we know that it's a dumb point, as others have said.

>>26759778
Meh, never understood the appeal of menheras. Just watching YouTube videos about crazy women turn me off about them.

>>26810526
It's usually because the pussy almost makes it seem worth it. Men have literally been killed by bitches that they had multiple warnings about because the sex was just that good.

>>26810526
Maybe its not even about how mental she is but Matsuri is really fucking sexy to me. Her base outfit and her camisole outfit never fails to get me horny.

>>26808033
Same

>>26810798
>>26810894
The both of you never met a crazy woman in real life.

>>26811320
It's nice to admire in a fantasy. Big no-go in real life though.

>>26805228
which do you think provides more encouragement to keep writing? one reply dissecting the story under a microscope, or half a dozen replies of anons saying that they liked it?

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>>26811601
The one reply dissecting the story under a microscope, because it means that someone cared enough to read it and try to understand it

>>26805228
I can see the value in longer reviews, but explaining what could be done better while not doing it yourself seems hollow, regardless of factual correctness. It's easy to catch flak from strangers for talking the talk while not walking the walk.

>>26811674
one person. if it looks like only one person bothered to read your story, you're likely to just decide not to bother. anyone who says writing should be something you do for yourself and nobody else is an idiot. at the end of the day, people post stories here to get the dopamine of having their stories read. and the more replies you get, the more people read it, and the more dopamine you're going to get. I'll take a bunch of low-effort (you)s over one guy acting like a professional literary critic any day.

>>26811674
NTA but I much prefer the people saying they liked it than the constructive criticism long post, if I had to pick. But getting the criticism still does help, it's just not a morale booster like the other option.

>>26812568
Something about this picture is sooo off but I can't pinpoint it.

>>26812568
God...
On topic though, I like reading in depth posts about what people liked in my story, but am just glad people read it at all.

>>26812568
>ywn pick up the tiny princess like this, before promptly raping her
Why even live?

>>26812568
That's nice and all but what's the source?

>>26812926
I want to put a baby in this baby.

>>26813166
Based. LUNA LOVE AND RAPE

Why do these threads die after bump limit these days? The moment bump limit strikes, there's a few stray posts and then silence, whilst the new thread remains barren until this one dies.

>>26814827
Probably just emulating old thread behaviour. There was no early thread at the start.

>>26814827
We're nearing dead hours on top of it. Early morning USA is usually pretty quiet.

>>26814827
I'm jerking off to Hololive JAV

>>26814827
Refuse to use new threads til the old one dies

>>26814182
when was the last time there was a Luna story, anyways?

>>26812568
sauce on img?

>>26815695
Not sure, it seems like it's been a while.

>>26811674
As an actual writer, I disagree. Lots of little (You)s make me feel better than small amounts of long (You)s.

>>26813140
>>26815957
All I could find was this:
https://kisscos.net/ncy-137/