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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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Story recap! There... were four stories posted in the last thread.

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 2: Tags: Botan, SFW, Vanilla:>>25945634

Hot Like a Star: Tags: Hoshikawa Sara, NSFW, Rape(?), Light bondage, Sweaty sex:>>25978606

HoloFantasy Chapter 7, Part ~ Homebound Hero:: Tags: Coco, Marine, Polka, Fubuki, Ina, Fantasy Adventure, SFW/NSFW inside:>>25984496

Tsuya: Tags: Suisei, SFW, Tragedy:>>26007383

A Detective for Every Shark: Tags: Amelia, Gura, SFW:>>26076453

Mio Story: Tags: Mio:>>26112284

Story recap! There... were six stories posted in the last thread.

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 2: Tags: Botan, SFW, Vanilla:>>25945634

Hot Like a Star: Tags: Hoshikawa Sara, NSFW, Rape(?), Light bondage, Sweaty sex:>>25978606

HoloFantasy Chapter 7, Part ~ Homebound Hero:: Tags: Coco, Marine, Polka, Fubuki, Ina, Fantasy Adventure, SFW/NSFW inside:>>25984496

Tsuya: Tags: Suisei, SFW, Tragedy:>>26007383

A Detective for Every Shark: Tags: Amelia, Gura, SFW:>>26076453

Mio Story: Tags: Mio:>>26112284

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Gura covering up the death of Shion after a tragic accident during their off-collab.:>>25958034

I'd like a story about treating Chuuba as a sexy pet and she likes it shown by how enthusiastic she is:>>25959685

HoloX piss off the local organized criminals. They figure it's nothing to worry about - until a fucking dragon drops on their headquarters, screaming about how they'll regret fucking with the Kiryuukai. Cue epic fight for their lives.:>>25959701

I'll summarize again since it hasn't been listed as an official prompt last thread:>>25976044

Kiara taking being an idol to an extreme conclusion, first encouraging kfp to masturbate to her as a show of support, then offering herself for use by kfp:>>25991306

(You) are a feral child who’s been taken in by Silvervale and the other Vshojo girls after accidentally stumbling upon the former’s shrine while looking for food. Hilarity ensues as they are trying their best to raise (You) despite having no idea what the fuck they’re doing.:>>26005606

Impregnating the menhera pink cat to mellow her out and finally make her mentally stable:>>26023104

You are out on a boys trip in good old Vegas when at some point, late into the night, you find yourself alone back at the casino you're staying in.:>>26031079

A oji-san steals the Orca Girl in the local aquarium and rapes her.:>>26033289

Suisei kidnapping Aqua. With you involved.:>>26034675

Aqua and Pekora have died and gone to Hell.:>>26036412

Watame selling gravures of herself after the popularity of hololive has long since fallen.:>>26039080

I'd really like to read something along the lines of Watame, or anyone particularly empathetic, assisting Anon through the process of voluntary euthanasia.:>>26039451

An abuse fic where an abusive chuuba goes too far and accidentally kills (You).:>>26083689

a fic where a chuuba gets raped and doesn't like it:>>26086109

A fic where (you) gets raped by chuubas and doesn't like it:>>26116808

I've finally read through that newest Present Day Present Time chapter and I have mixed feelings regarding it.
The sex was hot but the laconic beige prose it uses really wasn't working for me this chapter. Especially with the lack of dialogue cutting between them. Yes, I understand that the central idea of the series is the mindless smut with pregnancy sex chapters following up the impregnation sex chapters but damn does it feel like it needs more than just the sex to hold the series together.

>>26117302
Watame spends a heartwarming day hanging out with Haachama, eats her cooking, and then dies.

Damn, I love the Holoalt PV.

>>26117233
And just like that, /wg/ is dead.

>>26117233

Foxwife

>>26126743
https://twitter.com/R1883661920/status/1536845736880775168?s=20&t=aELjSU1xLaOEYZeHl_s96g

Fox Anal

>>26125331
That’s what you said six months ago

>>26125331
why are you like this

>>26127415
Thank you for this delicious food.

>>26127415
My dick felt it. Incredibly hot pressure. Fubuki's tight ass...

>>26131292
>>26131370

I immediately opened up my old faithful favourite upon seeing that pic, Mouthful of Fox.

>Dropping more of your weight, you start to feel as Fubuki’s anus easily spreads around your tip. With a heavy sigh out of her, your glans begins to sink inside as she accommodates your girth, putting up a bit of resistance as your flared head reaches her sphincter. You pull out just enough to relieve some pressure, then push onward again and again until Fubuki gasps, eyes going wide as the thickest part of your cock pops past her ring of muscle and settles snugly inside her soft, tight asshole. You grit your teeth and hold back the orgasm once again, breathing heavy as you feel your wife’s impossibly warm insides coil and tighten around you.

This is phenomenal. I wish I could write anal sex like this... or then again, maybe not; it'd no doubt be like giving a mouse an orgasm button...

>>26131849
>Anon dies having wasted away doing nothing but writing 4.6 million words of Fubuki Anal smut

>>26131849
Anal is alright, but why not impregnate her and raise a beautiful daughter only to fuck her too?

>>26134391
the two aren’t mutually exclusive. you don’t have to pick one hole to use for the rest of her life...or your life, if you outlive her and are into some weird shit

>>26134691
>or your life, if you outlive her and are into some weird shit

>>26134391
Sure, that sounds nice and I would like to do that, but what I REALLY want to do is gush ropes and ropes of semen into the tight rear entrance of the woman I love, intently watching her reaction as she squirms first in surprise discomfort as she adapts to the feeling of my unborn children painting her walls, and then in pleasure as the alien feeling fades and she starts to appreciate the warm feeling of being filled, and the natural realignment of her intestines spreading my sperm along her backdoor passage.

I can't write anywhere near as well as the Brazilian Buttfag, but I tried.

>>26135438
The Poopoohole Plunderer...

>>26135482
the South American sodomizer

>>26135739
Haha, nice one.

>>26076453
Nice short Anon. Thank you

>>26136186
Glad you liked it, and thanks to the other anon that commented about it last thread too that I didn't get to

I've been looking at the prompts archive and want to write more holo stuff so I can shake off some of my rust

>>26135739
not to be confused with the south american sodomizee
under any circumstances

>>26136955
heh

>>26136955

>>26117302
A fic about Ayame getting corrupted and becoming rrat!Ayame.

>>26117302
Towa’s superiors are getting sick of her continued failure to do anything evil and decide to pair her up with (You), a newly-damned soul and certified piece of shit, to teach her how to be an asshole in exchange for a reprieve from eternal torture. Fail, and she gets wiped from existence. And more importantly, it’s back to the fire and brimstone for you.

Things may or may not go according to plan.

How do I stop mysel from having a boner when writing NSFW fics, it's hard to concentrate when you're rock hard

>>26138959
Generally speaking it'll always be there, because if you actually go have a toss, you might lose motivation and you'll definitely lose quality

>>26138959
Focus all the energy you want to spend ejaculating into making your story hotter and hotter until you finally need to cum
Then keep going because I got you, you stupid fucking bitch CRUENTO PAASHAEXIMUS

>>26127725
Way more than that. We're actually coming up on our doomposter 1 year anniversary. >>8815841

>>26139196
Ahh, good times. As if there was ever a need for more proof, this is quintessential evidence that doomposters shouldn't be given any headspace whatsoever.

>>8809661
>Korone has to deal with her fear of maggots in the most straightforward way possible, being thrown in a pit full of them, having them run all over her, inside her, raping her in every orifice for many days until her fear is fixed... or she is broken.

I completely forgot about this incredibly hot prompt. Anybody care to take a stab at it? >>26117302

>>26139406
Wasn't that one already done??

>>26139549
Sure was, but I never got to read it as weirdanon pulled it. IIRC he was dissatisfied as it was his first attempt at genuine smut and he wasn't happy with it? Either way, gone for good.

>>26139582
even the seed vault doesn’t have it?

>>26139626
Nope, not there. Fic was called "Dog Maggots", I think.

>>26125358

>>26139062
AAAAAAAAA MY DICK WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>26138959
No, you WANT to have a boner, it helps you gauge the effectiveness of what you're writing. The trick is to put yourself in a location where you can't just quickly whip it out, nut, and lose your motivation. Sit by your living room windows, go to a cafe, write at your local library

>>26139582
>weirdanon
Now I may be misremembering but I thought the original weirdanon pulled all of their fics. If I recall they were the anon that wrote in a 'maximalist' style which unfortunately, really didn't work for the kind of smut they wanted to write.
>>26138959
What this anon said >>26142323 . If you're not even being aroused by what you're writing you're doing something wrong.

>>26142323
>Sit by your living room windows, go to a cafe, write at your local library
How the fuck do you not constantly peek over your shoulder to make sure no-one's watching?

>>26142375
>Now I may be misremembering but I thought the original weirdanon pulled all of their fics
Yeah, boss. That's why I didn't get to read it. I was lazy in pulling it up, naively assuming it'd be there forever - then it got pulled.
The silver lining is that it's losing the opportunity to read that work which caused me to maintain my own personal archive of my favourite works.

>>26142650
>How the fuck do you not constantly peek over your shoulder to make sure no-one's watching?
Do people just glare in your windows all the fucking time? Barring that, go to a corner.

>>26142650
>How the fuck do you not constantly peek over your shoulder to make sure no-one's watching?
What the fuck is on your screen, fifty reference images of Fubuki's anus to keep you motivated or something? No one can tell one arbitrary text document from another at a distance, and no stranger is going to lean over your shoulder to get a better look.

>>26142721
>>26142728
Yeah, 'course no-one'd be watching; and even if somebody did, I'd be angry rather than embarrassed at the invasion of privacy.

But still... it's the FEELING, you know? That perpetual feeling of being observed when you're up to the kind of thing that'd make others cross the road when they see you coming.

>>26142650
>>26142799
Anon... Have you ever actually just peeped over someone typing shit in a computer in a public space and read what the hell they were typing?
Probably not, right? That's because fucking no one does that. Therefore your fear is illogical and you shouldn't be afraid to write smut like an exhibitionist finding places to fuck.

>>26142891
NTA but for the sake of fairness I've seen people do that shit on subways and the like, generally on their phones. Few prominent images of it exist on the usual social sites.

>>26142728
>What the fuck is on your screen, fifty reference images of Fubuki's anus to keep you motivated or something?
Damn I guess writing outside it a no-go for me.

>>26142949
God-tier taste.

>>26142728
NTA, but the fat cheeks are way more important. most of the best ass pics I've shot my hose to are the ones where the anus isn't even visible. but you know it's there, tucked away inside, just waiting for a pounding.
thank you for coming to my TED talk.

>>26142938
Yeah but that's typing on a phone.
If you write from a laptop you're basically indistinguishable from any random writer in a coffee shop.

>>26142891
nta but it's not about whether anyone actually looks, it's about being ashamed of what you're doing

>p10
Sluts to the rescue!

>>26147250
>Hits p10 again because everyone is busy cumming to sluts

>>26147424
Can't blame 'em when sluts like this are floating about. The best part of sluts is that they like that kind of attention, too!

>>26147250
one slut coming right up!
...wait

>>26147866

Speaking of gyarus
>>26117302
This gyaru mio idea from a few months ago onegai.
>>23209572
>>23213802

>>26142323
Having boners in public isn't that comfortable tho, I get what you say but it'd be weird to write NSFW fics when others are around. They wouldn't know what you're writing but it'd just be awkward.
also it's hard to concentrate on cafes

>>26147866
GO BACK GO BACK GO BACK

>>26148944
sorry, sorry. one slut, hold the fluff-
...uh...

>>26148944
Sorry anon, there is no going back anymore.
The only thing you can do is reconnect with her a decade after highschool, and engage in a heartfelt romance all for the single purpose of reminding her of her Gyaru phase.

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: What's an idea you have that you know is way too overambitious and you know you can't write.

>>26152148
What am I working on? I'm working on my shaft right now. Smooth gliding motion, occasionally thumbing the tip. Cupping my balls with my other hand.

>>26154386
thank you for sharing with the class, anon

You are writing right?

>>26155624
I can't. My dog ate my keyboard.

>>26155624
Lesson plans are technically writing, so yes.

>>26155624
World building autism bit me to make and write down a chuuba fantasy setting while I was brainstorming an idea for a smut series if that counts.

>>26156110
There's a teacher here? Teach me a lesson, teach.

>>26156917
If you're going to include a dialogue tag at the end of a quotation, use a comma, not a period. "That's crazy," she said. Not "That's crazy." She said.
Please. I beg of you.

>>26157823
It annoys the shit out of me, too. It completely breaks the flow of your internal monologue when reading such sentences. One of the few grammar mistakes that can completely turn me off a work.

Used any filthy smut as teaching materials yet? I think that the younger generations - indeed, society as a whole - stand to learn a lot from "Winner Winner Chocolate Dinner."

>>26156173
Call me Alucard because I'm interested in this. What are your inspirations? What do you have done so far?

What does Korone act like during sex? Let's say, for sake of example and in reference to earlier conversation, you're having anal sex. It's not your first time, and she's now comfortable with your girth spreading her colon. How actively involved is the girl? Is she a starfish? A power bottom? Does she still take a shy demeanour due to the nature of the act, or does she unabashedly describe in various ways how she wishes you to fuck her ass? Is she tender and loving, or does she focus mainly on her own pleasure? Perhaps most importantly, does she do ass-to-mouth?

>>26159391
W-was this specifically crafted to bait me?

>>26159391
Probably a power bottom, since this is Korone we're talking about. May also remind you exactly which tree she'll bury your severed genitals under if you don't lube up properly.
And she's a dog. She absolutely does ass-to-mouth.

What do you say in response?

>>26163474
No he's already fully grown.

And please don't leer at him like that, he's shy.

>>26164008
Cojiro...

>>26149518
>Not corrupting her back into the gyaru she used to be

>>26157823
>>26158160
Oh thank god, I'm not the only one!

>>26149518
You're more likely to find her like pic related in some porn site a decade later and then spend your nights jerking off to her and regreting not making your move on her back then when she was just a nice girl trying out new things to impress you but ended up going down a bad path after you/she left.

All women should lactate.

Normalize replacing my entire diet with breast milk suckled straight from the tap.

Which chuuba has the creamiest, sweetest breast milk? Hard mode - no Noel, no Mio.

>>26167227
I bet it'd be delicious and a touch alcoholic.

https://twitter.com/gamarenji/status/1534883290750271488

>>26117249

Cold nights of winter, with you.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT9Q_UJimlWCFBquOpQrvy-Qb0PdrOFA5z700nz8uV3BaUzyJ-4BEeiE5xflLUY7yZK6VrYqnCPYHxb/pub

Tags: Mio, NSFW, impregnation

I feel like I need to add more dialogue and that the events feel a bit rushed but I wanted to finish it ASAP so I could concentrate in LWALIEYK? Maybe I make some more NSFW fics between chapters but for now just let me know if I need to make any major changes
t. italianon

>>26167227
Incredibly based.

Watame's breast milk might not be the sweetest due to her diet of potato chips, but it certainly would be the creamiest and the most comforting experience to extract. Can you imagine her giggles as you suckle the first trickles out of her nipple? The short exhales through the nose when the trickle turns into a stream? The sweet whisperings while she pets your head, telling you to take as long as you want and that she's not going anywhere? Even after hours of sucking on her milktanks until her nipples are raw, she wouldn't ask you to stop?

>>26168886
I wish this sexy yet cuddly sheep had better porn.

>>26147866
>>26149117
You're causing me physical pain here, anon. I want a gyaru Okayu so fucking bad that my chest aches

>>26170686
Write a fic about turning her into one, then.

>>26170686
I feel your pain anon. How fucking terrible it is to have a request idea in your head and have it be too obscure a chuuba or fetish, and not be talented enough to write it yourself.

All I want is to see AZKi Black effortlessly flexing up gigantic pecs bigger than universes while singing her heart out as her far smaller but still jacked genmates cheer her on

With some of the things that get written here, is that really so horrible?

>>26171858
Okay, gyarus are definitely not as niche as your muscle building.

>>26157823
I thought this was only for when the sentence they’re saying hasn’t ended.
So commas would be used for: “But anyway,” she continued, “I’m done for tonight.”
And full stops would be used for: “But anyway, I’m done for tonight.” She said.
Or am I wrong?

>>26168886
>>26117302
want to see a story about botan with a massive cock fucking watame while she holds her over an open flame and cooks her while she fucks and eats her while she comes and then watame respawns and sees it and is like bruh

>>26171929
But it's not anywhere near as disgusting as whatever that Korone cockroach shit was. Giga hyper muscle may be obscure, but it's tame

>>26172121
>Giga hyper muscle may be obscure, but it's tame
That's the exact problem. It's not a normal or
a vanila-esque fetish for the common man to be interested in, but it's also not degenerate enough for the common freak to be interested in. It's in a weird limbo postion where it's either too much or not enough.

"I'm writing so much, at this rate I'll be done with this fic in 3 weeks!" Said this guy, 3 weeks ago, who did not keep up the rate.

>>26172502
You're telling me, I said I would have a fic done "soon" over three months ago

>>26168886
There are two kinds of fantasies. One that is so good it gives you pleasure, another so good it makes you grieve and lament it is not reality.

>>26168873
>she clearly had fox ears and a tail
...do you even know who you are writing about?
Besides that, there were a few other issues. Your sentences are too long and your formatting needs more breaks to make it look cleaner.
The plot... is non-existent. All we know is that it's cold wherever (you) are. Nothing else. No why, how and where. Mio has nothing that defines her as Mio - it could've been literally anyone else. No, a few adjectives like nice, sweet and polite are not enough to define a character.
Your smut descriptions were decent enough, but again: Spacing. The sex scene was literally one paragraph.
Also, "weenie" is probably the least arousing term for "penis" I have ever read. Please don't use it again.
Good luck on your journey.

>>26168873
>>26174065
I took a peek at what you wrote, since his short critique piqued my interest.
I would say your sentence length is fine, but you should add more length variation to avoid monotony. You should indeed work on your orthography (what he calls formatting).
This might help you to analyze someone's personality as well as to build a fictional character:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Big_Five_personality_traits
The rest of what he says is on point.

>>26170019
Watamate, you inspired me to give my hand at it even though she isn't my oshi. Arigathanks.

>>26174065
The real plot twist is that it was Fubuki disguised as Mio

>>26175297
Great work, anon! Now complete the ritual with a cum tribute.

>>26174065
I have noticed that people here often point out flaws and defects, but never give suggestions or directions on how to improve. They also often make vague statements that do not really mean anything unless they are made more precise; and the funny thing is, the anon who wrote never asks for clarification. xd
It just reminded me of this quote:

Those who arouse one and urge one to study philosophy, and give one no
teaching or instruction, act like those who snuff a lamp and then pour in no
oil.
―Plutarch, Moralia (798B)

>>26175682
You're new here and it shows

Do not write fics that involve Ayame and suffering.

>>26117302
Ayame's lack of streaming has caused her genmates to worry about her and they decide to message her on discord, scheduling a visit to her house to discuss her issues. Once they arrive however, they are unable to find her and notice her personal belongings all still in place. This leads them to employ the help of watson and subsequently (you), being Watson's apprentice detective in training, to uncover where she has gone.

>>26172862
Omarun is Cute and Funny will turn one in about a month, and chapter two has been stuck at the same place for six. I hate myself.

>>26175682
Did you even read the post? He gave plenty of suggestions on how to improve. As long as it’s not “this is shit.”, any criticism is at least somewhat helpful because the author can know where they’re going wrong.

>>26178859
That is why I said "they" and not "you". My post was meant as encouragement, "you're doing it right". He did not make the mistakes the others made.

>>26155624
Writing very self indulgent Polka femdom because her commanding voice does stuff to me

>>26178844
Now I'm gonna read it and hate you for not finishing it

>>26179399
Polka has the most versatile voice in all of hololive, really. She can put on any persona your heart and dick desire

>>26176379
Why?
She seems a good 'victim', especially if you're running with her normal personality.

>>26179267
Ah, I thought you were accusing the post in question.

>>26181880
Because it genuinely makes me feel like absolute shit and I can't erase them from my head.

>>26172024
Half-right. You do use a comma in your first example, but you also use one in the second example.

>>26185201
Well share them then.
Unless you're actually committed to writing about a painful Ayame fic, sharing it should killt that desire.

>>26185201
That really sucks, dude. Honestly, I feel so bad for you. On a spiritual level, even.

>>26185201
you know you can just not read them, right?

>>26172121
Anon the inherent problem with a giga hyper muscle fic is that the very concept is so absurd that a medium like writing cannot do it 'seriously'/unironically. It'd need to either get played for comedy in a shitpost like Uruka gets buff or played for drama/tragedy in order to try and ground the concept.

>>26188153
Even if I wanted to, I don't think I could stomach writing a painful fic about Ayame or anyother Oshi at all. I'd rather write something positive or heartwarming but I can't write for shit.
As for the fic that makes me feel like shit, its "instincts of tamed beasts". That's the one I wish I could take a giant rubber and erase it from my mind. Or the whole plot is a stage play

>>26189025
Write a fan sequel and make it reality then.

>>26189025
>I'd rather write something positive or heartwarming

>>26185935
What about dialogue tags with actions? Or just actions by themselves? Would this apply to those like:
“No,” you say as you stand up and walk away.
“No,” you stand up and walk away.

>>26159527
You'd fuck a dog?

>>26190402
Yes for the first one, no for the second. The first example ends with a dialogue tag (like 'you say' or 'she shouts' or anything else like that) which does need a comma. In the second example, 'You stand up and walk away' is an entirely new sentence, so using a period at the end of the quotation is correct.

>>26190582
only Koro-san

>>26190883
Ok thanks.

>>26178844
I'm curious.
Why are you stuck on that fic's second chapter? Is it something with the plot?

>>26117302
(You) are the innocent, cheerful, affectionate shota brother of a loving chuuba nee-san who dotes on you. You feel a little concern about her staring at you a lot and breathing funny when you sit on her lap but it’s okay because she says she’s healthy and loves you and that’s what matters.

Then the other half is from the POV of said chuuba internally struggling not to do anything unsisterly and silently UUUOOOOOHHH’ing as you unwittingly tempt her to give in to her urgent need to /ss/.

>>26117302
A spoilt chuuba who has always been granted whatever she desires due to having a rich father falls for you, even though you barely know who she is. Since she’s always been granted whatever she wants by asking her father, she does exactly that. Cue the rich father using his money and power to try and get you to date his daughter.

>>26199462
This reminds me of those prompts where you are Reine's butler, remaining oblivious and professional in the face of her overwhelming desire for you. Too bad we never got a proper fic out of it.

>>26167227
>>26168886
>>26173701
OK so I did the math. A healthy woman lactating heavily will produce on average around a liter (four cups) of breast milk per day. Each cup of breast milk has 171 calories, or around 711 calories per liter. A healthy adult man needs around 2,000 calories just to exist (1,500 if he's a skeleton), and 2,500-3,000 if he's doing any proper physical activity like lifting weights, depending on volume of exercise.

This means one woman is not enough to replace my entire diet with breast milk. I would require at least 4 women at full production to reach 2,800 calories of breast milk, but of course this would imply suckling constantly, so really it should be around 6-8 women, at the bare minimum, in order to minimize the strain on my time and on their bodies. 10 women, preferably, and all constantly lactating (and therefore constantly pregnant).

What a daunting task. What a terribly difficult mission. I don't know how a mortal man could achieve it, let alone sustain it. Even if I were rich enough to keep that many wives, and charismatic enough to convince them, no man can live around that many women at the same time and not end up in an early grave. And yet I truly want nothing else out of life. Truly God's greatest challenge is having given Man more intent than life.

>>26200129
Elira is the most sex Niji and it's not even close

https://streamable.com/ff7byl

>>26199232
I want a fic about this dumb bitch being tied down naked in a con bathroom and pumped full of aphrodisiacs (by Koyori) that only affect the sensitivity of her breasts then watching her mind shatter as she's titfucked, fondled and molested until she ends up loving her fat fucking juicy cock milking milkers
Genuinely if anyone needs any type of correction it's this boring self sabotaging whore, her body is her only redeeming factor and she needs to stop trying anything else and accept the fact that she was designed for oppai BY GOD AND MANAGEMENT BOTH and no amount of crying for a bready reduction or trying to hide them will have her escape from her fate

>>26200973
>living sword
>giant tits
>shortstack
>tsundere
On paper she's such a great character.

>>26178844
And it just sits there on your hard drive and you keep telling yourself, "I'll finish it someday, the inspiration will come," and then the inspiration never comes, and you wake up in the morning telling yourself that today will be the day, but by the time you get off work you're so mentally drained that you just want to turn your brain off and end up getting nothing done, and before you know it half a year has passed.

>>26117302
orientation play fic about luna grooming subaru into becomeing a lesbian.

are you still alive, hololive subjection anon? got really sucked into the worldbuilding in the first few chapters, would love to read more

>>26201345
SQUANDERED

>>26202567
probably doesn't wanna show his face after he got rejected by pekofag for being thirstier than a sponge in the middle of the sahara desert

>>26201345
>bare feet
such a waste

>>26202665
he's still around and very vocally doesn't give a shit about that anymore though, where have you been

>>26202567
IIRC he got burnt out of nijiEN after the hotel room incident.. Then got burnt out of writing his CYOA fic due to poor game design choices before writing out the thing.

>>26200973
nah, fuck the nigger rigger. he deliberately went against the artists wishes forbno reason whatsoever, and yet /vt/ worships him because WOAH! BIG BAZONGAS!

>>26203081
completely by accident, something good came out of a very bad streamer

>>26201345
if there aren’t any moments of affection it isn’t tsundere. it’s just being a dick

zzz

>>26203625
I mean she is a dagger.

>>26203625
I think you mean being a dirk!

>>26206545
...y'know what, I'll let you have that one

>>26203081
I don't like oppai loli, and many people and artists don't like it as well. They either Anya as a loli with budding/non-existent breasts, or as a shorter, more plump and proportional woman, but not what I would classify as loli
I can appreciate the gap moe of her lewd physics-defying body and colder demeanor, though.

>>26207978
Really she's perfect fodder for an 'enemies to friends' story. But every writefag who's tried to write her has thrown in the towel because they can't stand watching her.

>>26179267
well, honesty is the only thing I appreciate on this godforsaken site. I've been in Italianon's shoes before and posted maybe not as optimal fics in other places. You'd most likely get ignored or get a half-assed comment with no substantial critique to improve on. So, I try to be better.

Regarding the debate about dialogue tags, I found this for anyone interested in studying up on it:
https://self-publishingschool.com/how-to-write-dialogue/
It's a bit preachy, but the examples are comprehensive.
For me personally, dialogue tags are by far the least of my concerns when reading. Proper grammar and spelling make or break it. I also understand that the rules differ from language to language, so I'd rather have our ESL writers build proper sentences (and worlds) before micro-managing their commas. Thanks for reading my blog.

>>26208060
Bruh, I remember posting about a remedy to this problem a long time ago
She's the one character that is not going to suffer from being given the amnesiac girl treatment and being written into whatever situations you want. You have lore to compensate.
Putting Suisei through this treatment without pulling out at some point (restoring memories or herself reconstructing her former personality) feels weird. Anya, on the other hand, is more... Expendable? Malleable? Whatever the fuck you want to do with her, do it.

>>26208231
was that a debate? I thought it was just an anon asking for clarification and another anon giving it

>>26208372
Anon despite that jackass pushing the /wg/ doesn't watch streams thing to try and troll the thread, the writers here write for either love/lust for their Oshis or as a creative challenge. Neither of which is conducive to a 'just make her an OC with the name and body' thing you're proposing as it runs counter to the reason people make chuuba fic here in the first place.

Koyori wakipai

I was doing an ER Rando wake up

>>26212068
that coyote is quite versatile. she can be lewd, she can be evil, she can be cute, she can be a smug brat. she fits into basically any genre of story you can think of.

>>26188845
I was wondering about this myself. I vaguely remember one hyper fmg story where one woman phased herself out of existence slightly so she didn't destroy anything as she flexed up galactic sizes.

But most importantly, AZKi is a digital diva who can manipulate and ignore the barriers of time and space with her music. She could easily yeet herself and her genmates once she got big enough into an empty dimension and use technology to give her fans in her home reality the ultimate concert as her pecs grow trand-multiversal.

I ask here, as opposed to an fmg forum, as people here will know how these girls act, what feels you might get. Asking there would just make them empty soulless shells.

>Koyori brain-drain is canon now
you have got to be fucking kidding me

>>26212422
it doesn't matter where you ask, but whom, and what you are looking for is a writer who watches azki and has a muscle fetish or at least finds the idea interesting

if your choice of "fmg forum" (not familiar with the term) has people that watch azki, then i advise you ask there. actually, i advise you ask there anyway, because it makes no sense not to have as many feelers out as possible

i say this because unfortunately here, amongst the usual denizens of the thread, nobody regularly watches azki

>>26212422
>>26117302
In case nobody knows what this is about

a comfy fic with Gen 0 (AZKi, Sora, Roboco, Miko, Suisei). I notice they don't get a lot of love as a group, but from a fiction standpoint if might be interesting to see their personalities bounce off of each other.

This, but it's a bodybuilding contest. All five girls have muscles bigger than the Incredible Hulk, especially gigantic pectorals. They're all hanging out backstage, casually chatting and lifting impossible amounts of weight. But it's all light-hearted and cheerful. Lots of flexing to show off for each other. Then they each take the stage to do their posing routines, all growing with each flex, then the final posedown together on stage.

My personal preference: AZKi wins, she ends up getting bigger than everyone else with even bigger pecs, but she's humble and honored to be on stage flexing with her honored friends.

The core of the story was about AZKi, Suisei, Sora, Miko and Roboco all growing ridiculously gigantic muscles, especially their pectorals, with AZKi being the biggest and most pectacular by far. Tons of flexing and showing off and posing, pressing muscle against muscle, maybe some very light les stuff between AZKi and Sora, and ending with my favorite, AZKi, just outpecflexing everything. And some interaction, dialogue, etc, to show off their peronalities and show they're not just empty YCH. Something that could have been easily done with a simple bodybuilding contest and concert or something.

>>26212422
>>26212640
Anon, please.
You've been trying to get this fic written for months . You already got lucky with Uruka gets buff, and unfortunately the anon that wrote that for you publicly gave up their attempt to write gen 0 gets buff.
At this point either shill out the dosh to get this commissioned or look elsewhere for writers for this since this thread does not have the kind of people interested in writing this for free.

>>26212634
Fmg is female muscle growth

And yes, AZKi never streams. But her music videos are chock full of lore, especially her first ones.

>>26213749
So... How is requesting this or discussing this hurting you?

>>26214003
ignore the autist, if the bugfag and hagfag are welcome to talk incessantly about their fetishes then you are too

>>26214003
Nta but you request it every second thread despite knowing that nobody is going to pick it up. Lay off, at least for a while.

>>26212267
I've never goslinged so hard in my life like I did today. Is this... what it's like to have an oshi? Is she the one for me?

>>26202567
What even did you like about the worldbuilding, anon? I mean I'm glad you enjoyed it but I honest to goodness didn't detail the world much. Do you mean the flashbacks?
>>26202665
...what? I sent him a grand total of two e-mails once while high as a kite on my meds, more than what, two months ago now? To my memory, he said yes, then when I took 'too long to respond' (as in, more than half an hour) he got cold feet and blocked me (thank God). All this happened over e-mail too so I have no idea what the hell is this rrat.
>>26202993
I still watch Pomu. Forgave her once it became clear the whole thing was Finana being a special needs child like always. Never stopped watching Selen (my beloved little nigga), and I still occasionally catch Millie and Enna.

Anyway I'm more so currently burnt out of writing, period. I'll shake myself out of the rut and post something here eventually. If it interests anybody, the next couple Subjection chapters are/were supposed to be about Anon being called on for a retrieval mission after Matsuri kills her slaveowner and escapes the capital.

>>26201790
I don't remember making this post or replying to myself...

>>26199270
Not really, no - the issue is I have commitment issues and get easily distracted. An idea pops into my mind and I think, "I'll just bang this out quickly and get back to the main course", but I overestimate how much I can actually get done in one sitting, and it snowballs out of control with one "quick story" after another growing out of control.

Plot wise it hasn't really changed much from what I first conceptualized, all I did was add details and flavor.

>>26200129
Never thought about it this way. But I'll settle for a single chuuba wife milktank; I'm not geedy.

>>26214003
Because if you're actually unironic and not just doing this as some high effort shitposting you have to realize that this place does not have anyone who'll write this, and you're effectively being that guy in a drawthread that keeps trying to get their request drawn.
It has been literal months. you're not going to find your writer for that here.

>>26200129
Your numbers are based on women who lactate only to feed a child. A child only drinks a litre, so the woman's body adjusts accordingly. I'm fairly certain that if you drained a woman's breasts frequently enough each day, they would produce more milk.

>>26215987
What, like how snakes produce more venom if their venom sacks are milked regularly?

>>26215987 (me)
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2672857/
>Saint and coworkers studied the volume and composition of milk produced by mothers of singletons, twins, and triplets.
>Mothers of twins consistently released twice the volume of milk as mothers of singletons. Mothers of triplets were capable of producing up to a remarkable volume of more than 3litres/day when the infants were aged 2.5months.
Breast milk production is tied to demand, not fixed to ~1L per day. In theory, this would mean that a single, heavily lactating woman could produce the required 2000 calories of milk per day.

>>26216377
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>26216680
stop

>>26216782
Who can stop after being exposed to such vital infomation?

>>26216377
I'm not sure what I should do with this information.

>>26216377
All those calories would have to come from somewhere. She'd probably be hungry almost constantly.

>>26216782
Fuck you Taiga, I will drink Mio's breast milk in front of you.

>>26217192
You would no longer be eating food, so she could just eat your food, and you take the calories from her through the milk. Sure, energy conversion inefficiency would mean you'd need to feed her more than 2k calories to get 2k calories out, but what's a little extra grocery cost when you have the opportunity to live on nothing but your oshi's breast milk? No price is too great for such an opportunity.

>>26218056
Does breast size play into the amount of milk produced? My oshi is flat as board.

>>26158416
Well the idea for the smut series basically came out of a 'playthrough' of the JRPG Traitor CYOA I had.
The idea was (You) and a group of chuubas were a JRPG party and you were the traitor that betrayed them. After the final battle they capture you, and take turns rape correcting you. With the structure for each chapter in the series being fluffy fantasy adventure flashbacks contrasted with yandere rape interrogation where they try to find out why you did it.
The worldbuilding autism came about from me thinking about how I'd write that fantasy adventure in the flashbacks since I didn't want to just use the setting from the CYOA, and to cut a long story short I spent a couple of hours writing up a fantasy setting for a smut series I'm not sure I'm actually going to write.

>>26218159
https://www.milkgenomics.org/?splash=do-larger-breasts-make-more-milk
>The study reported a negative association between maternal BMI (body mass index), and the function of a gene that represents the milk-producing cells.
>the large breasts of overweight or obese mothers contain more fat cells than milk-making cells
>Therefore, breast size does not necessarily translate to more milk-producing cells or higher ability to make milk.
>Interestingly, the change in breast size (breast volume) from pre-pregnancy to lactation can be an indicator of how well the breast performs during lactation
I may be reading it incorrectly, or it may be wrong, but I think that maximum milk potential is based on the growth of milk-producing tissue over the course of pregnancy, not the absolute size of the breasts. So, a flat girl could produce a lot of milk, but only if her breasts grew throughout pregnancy. Interestingly, that study found that women with large breasts prior to pregnancy were less able to produce milk, so your oshi being flat pre-pregnancy may well work in her favour.

>>26218714
Thank you for researching this anon. I will use this infomation wisely.

This fucking breast milk discussion reminded me of this dark Coco idea from a month ago and now I'm cursing you fuckers with it too.>>23694667

>>26218630
That...sounds like a very fucking interesting story. I can't wait to see what comes of it.

>>26218714
>the large breasts of overweight or obese mothers contain more fat cells than milk-making cells
Note that this specifies large tits caused by being fat, not tits that are naturally big. As always, the wisdom that big tits on a fat girl are meaningless still holds.

The absolute best milk-tank would be a girl who had naturally big tits, which then grow even further during pregnancy, so you're adding milk-making cells on top of milk-making cells, ending with a girl whose huge, ripe breasts overflow with rivers of milk.

>>26219580
Anri Okita comes to mind.

God, imagine Watame's tits just swishing around full of milk with that tiny frame of hers.

>>26219580
mmm...dragon milk

>>26219198
hot

>>26215055
So I take it the Gothic chuuba CYOA thing is dead then?

So what fics are you anons looking forward too?

Bumpidiboop

>>26223095
mine, cause I can't fucking finish it

>>26218714
To piggyback off of this, here's a couple articles I found about the efficiency of breast milk production.
https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/1959517/#:~:text=Using%20the%20Gambian%20study's%20percentage,energy%20cost%20of%20human%20lactation.
https://exclusivepumping.com/how-many-extra-calories-breastfeeding-weight-loss/
tl;dr, breast milk contains about 80% of the calories that it takes for the body to produce it, and one ounce of breast milk contains about 20 calories. Meaning to produce enough milk to feed you 2,000 calories a day, your oshi would have to consume about 2,500 extra calories on top of what she already needs for her base daily intake, and would have to produce about 100 ounces of milk per day. Which is just under 3 liters.
Also, I now have 'efficiency of breast milk production' in my search history, so the feds can have a fun time scratching their heads over that one.

>>26223365
...
Is drinking that much milk daily livable?
I know breast milk has the nutrients but can your body really process all of that milk.

>>26223601
My body will just have to get used to it, livable or not. I'd 100% commit to it if given the chance.

All this lactation talk and I don't see any boob milk fics. You all got me fucked up

>>26223601
Oh, absolutely not. There's a reason the majority of the adult population is lactose intolerant. Breast milk is good for newborns, but after a certain point you're expected to stop relying on it and start eating real food.
That said, we ARE talking about 2D anime waifus here, so all this research can go right in the dumpster for all I care.
>>26223987
Milking Your Wolf. Nenecchi's Morning Milk. Milky Sheep. Ko'one Breast Milk. What Does Rat Milk Taste Like? Imagine Marrying Suisei.
You've got options.

>>26223095
I don't really know. I was most looking forward to that Hoshikawa fic, but it ended up kinda lackluster. Hoping against hope the writer does end up tweaking it, but since it's a commissioned fic, that possibility is next to zero. Hope the guy got his money's worth at least.

I guess I'm most interested in seeing where LWALIEYK goes? It feels like watching both a fic and an anon grow.

>>26224132
notice that 5/6 of these have "milk" in the title so clearly that other guy didn't search very hard

>>26224204
>It feels like watching both a fic and an anon grow.
Yeah it's always interesting to see an anon get better at writing in real time as they release new fics/chapters.
Last anon I saw going through this process was the writer for Sad Genuine Smile/To be 17 again. Where they got better at drama and characters literally with each chapter they posted. I really hope that anon comes back. They got really good really fast.

>>26220140
>Anri Okita comes to mind.
Did she ever do lactation videos or pregnancy photos? All the stuff I have of her is vanilla. Asking for a friend. That friend is me.
>>26220347
Shelved. Setting will probably get repurposed for something I might eventually do on Royal Road. I do have a pretty strong idea for a fantasy series here that I got after playing a bunch of Path of Exile but it involves Anya and I'm lowkey scared of the curse. Currently still unsure if I should just write it straight up or do the Holofantasy approach and have the fights decided by dice.

Also it is beyond annoying how many artists are simps who drew her flat chested instead of the proper giant titty version.

>>26224132
Imagine Marrying Suisei is a godly fic.

>>26224560
>Setting will probably get repurposed for something I might eventually do on Royal Road
Oh so you're going to make an original web novel thing with the setting, with anything chuuba specific getting the 'Serial Numbers Filed Off' treatment?

>>26224560
>it's annoying when artists draw her on-model

>>26224132
already read them. I NEED MORE

>>26178014
>A mystery fic about trying to solve the mystery of where Ayame went before she overdoses on drugs and Oji-san cum.
I'd read it.

This is "my girlfriend polka", a sort of re spin/expansion of the "taking polka to prom" greentext by some anon from /ag/.
I hope it's not too cringe or terrible. It's mostly just a story about falling in love with a fat girl because fat girls are justice and i'm a chubby chaser.
rentry/pc467
Concrit much appreciated

>>26226196
Rentry links can still get posted without modification if you use a .org ending rather than a .co .
Also anchoring.
>>26117249

>>26226196
This formatting is kind of a pain in the ass

All this milk talk bout to make me throw up yall are disgusting i thought it was just a meme how can you be attracted by milk

Was there ever a sequel to the Suisei torture write up? Started with the protag waking up vomiting on a bathroom floor and ended with him and Suisei reminiscing of the times they tortured other Hololive girls

>>26227262
The one with Chloe?
As far as I can tell that one was just a one-shot.

>>26227482
Ah yup, that's it. Damn I was really hoping for a sequel or at least something similar.

>>26227218
>talks like a nigger
>doesn't understand why making your wife pregnant might be attractive to people
>doesn't understand why sucking on a woman's tits might be hot
>doesn't understand what breasts are for
>doesn't understand what sex is for
This, surely, must be bait.

>>26224560
>unsure if I should just write it straight up or do the Holofantasy approach and have the fights decided by dice
The latter seems pretty difficult, I think.

bump

>>26117302
Polla taking your first time

>>26232316
I'd let her teach me how to put my penis inside of her vaginas if you know what I'm saying.

>>26232392
I don't know what you're saying. Further explanation is needed.

so uhhh...
should I? should I really indulge into it? should I really write a cringy ESL fanfic themed around this?

>>26234024
yes

>>26234239
but i'm bad at writing!

>>26234412
And the only way to get better is to write so get to it. And if it's bad or not up to your standard? You can try again. You got this anon.

>>26232316
GOD PLEASE SHOW ME WHAT PENISES ARE REALLY FOR POLKA

>>26234493
it's gonna be the cringiest thing I wrote in my whole life, wish me luck man

>>26234710
Embrace the cringe anon, it's the best way to deal with. And of course, good luck.

June 23rd, 1944
Towa lays the machine gun on a waist-high rock, overlooking the city of Cherbourg. The city has been bombarded to shreds, and the girls prepare for their special mission, capturing an SS officer known as "Takanashi Kiara".
Coco stands next to her, looking through her binoculars, searching for special movements and sending more guidance to the artillery.
Kanata and Watame sat next to each other, cleaning their guns, and stared at each other without saying a word. Luna, as usual, is way ahead of everyone, already in the city, ready to prepare the meeting after the entry.
They all know they must catch Kiara, and will never get a better chance. The city is surrounded, shelled, and Kiara has nowhere to go! only the amazing Gen 4 fireteam can deliver some justice to the world and arrest Kiara for her crimes!
here, sneak peak to the autism levels I'm capable of, I'm too tired to continue right now, hope to make more tomorrow.

>>26226196
A tad bit cheesy in some parts but overall I really enjoyed it. The details about Polka's body were a joy to read and the smut really hit the spot. I'm not too much into architecture or fat girls for that matter but this was some good shit. Good job anon.

>>26235545
Looking forward to it.

>>26235545
Have fun anon.

>>26235545
There's a woman named Kiara...

The first thing a person who has been taken captive and faces torture must understand: all hope is gone. The perpetrators may seem deliverers, after days, months or years of torture. The victim of torture must, beyond all other things, keep in their mind that the people responsible will not, ultimately, help them in any way. The victim must discard all religious hope. The victim must discard all hope of rescue. Justice will not open her eyes. The victim must realize hope is fiction. After that, the pain can be dealt with in a number of ways.

Discarding hope renders the procedure pointless. If there is no hope, then escaping the pain no longer matters. The victim must embrace the pain, because pain will be his (or even her) closest friend. Many torture techniques involve prolonged sessions of close, extremely painful, confinement with no human interaction. There will be nobody to talk to, unless the perpetrators want information. The best way to cope is to speak with your pain. Make pain your friend in an environment in which you have no friends. Use the pain to remind you of who you are.

Sleep deprivation poses the most difficult obstacle to overcoming torture. Unless the torturers use hallucinogens with rigged environments (that is discussed later), sleep deprivation potentially breaks down all barriers... in theory, but not in practice. If faced with sleep deprivation, the best course of action is to dive into the disorientation the technique causes. The idea: throw resistance out the window if they won't let you sleep. Become a creature of insanity. You will, by every estimate, spew nonsense at your captors in such an event. The downside is that this resistance technique may leave you insane. The upside is that strong minds will recover readily, and weak, innocent minds will be better off without their reasoning skills. Faced with an insane approach to intelligence gathering, you can become insane temporarily, or permanently... and both are better than what your captors have planned for you. It should be noted that with therapy and caring, even the most innocent victim of torture can once again become semi-whole, provided caring and therapy ever arrives. Again, hope does not exist in these situations, and given that, temporary or permanent insanity provides a shelter.

Suisei hasn't been doing too well with cash lately. Would you rent her? What for?

>>26226196
This was cute. Didn't know that there was a scientific term for having a fat ass but you learn something new everyday. I don't know what's up with the formatting though, it looks weird only taking up one half of the page.

>>26239346
Given the the way this thread went.
I'd buy Suisei to impregnate her and engorge her flat chest with milk.

>>26240760
Women with no tits can't lactate, they may as well be a man.

>>26240343
Thank you. I remember learning the word from Robert Crumb (a fellow fat ass enjoyer) comics.
As for the format, i've become used to 80 columns for a number things now so it feels natural to me. And being the nerd that i am, i wrote the thing in the same text editor i use for programming (neovim). I was a little surprised to see rentry is markdown centric and about 160 columns wide. Had i known earlier i would have used some font weight and size for embellishment in certain parts.
I'm keeping it in mind for my next fic though

>>26239346
>Would you rent her?
Acquire her. Hostile takeover if necessary.
>What for?
Pregnancy and childbirth. I can't marry her if she was a literal whore, that's too much even for me, but she can be my side piece and the mother to my secondary family.

>>26240975
Suisei is a Femboy (Female)!?

She visited you in your dreams again. Always there, far away, always watching. You couldn't seem to ever interact with her, even when you were aware that it was a dream you were having. Whenever you woke up, you forgot all about her. Only this dim sense of forgetfulness was left behind, like you forgot to bring something with you after you hopped in the car for a road trip.

No matter what kinds of dream you had, whether they were adventurous or nonsensical, wet dreams or nightmares. The girl with long black hair only stood far away, watching you with an unrecognizable look, never the center of attention, as quick as you were to acknowledge her; so were you to move on.

Though one day, a day no more important or special than any other; in a completely ordinary day and a completely ordinary dream, she approached you nonchalantly. Her feudal Japanese high heels clacking down on the ground with every step of her thin, light frame.

She stared at you. You stared at her. She had a halo hovering above her head and vestigial, perhaps cosmetical wings around her hips. Though you could tell she was no angel; far from it. You were intrigued by her hair, upon closer inspection they resembled the appendages of a squid, or maybe an octopus? Two of them caught your attention the most, the ones hanging on each side of her face. They were orange and looked quite squishy. You felt like asking her if you could touch them, but somehow, no words came out of you. Impotent as you were in your own dream, you tried reaching out for her. Her equally intrigued look quickly turned to annoyance, and a whap from an unknown source made you wake right up.

This time, you remembered her clearly. Her awfully pale skin; her flat chest; her clearly visible ribs and the half a dozen tentacles that you mistook for hair, wriggling around behind her. An odd dream, you told yourself, and went about your day.

It started with an odd itch. One you could hardly notice, but bothersome all the same. You scratched it here, another one there. It was getting rather annoying. At end of day, you took a long hot shower and took the opportunity to exfoliate yourself with the brush. It wasn't working. The itch grew stronger. You laid there in bed, staring at the ceiling, doing your best not to scratch them. Finally, you managed to catch a wink. The girl was there again. She seemed amused. She leaned into your ear and whispered the words "It's only downhill from here.", and before you knew it, you were awake once more.

>>26243893
Is there a point to this post or something?

>>26239346
HOLY SHIT IS THIS REAL?
I have never thought of hiring a prostitute, but if it is this, I can see myself doing it. I WOULD DO IT.

>>26248340
Gaijin usually not allowed at this kind of joint.
But I'm with you, I don't think I'd resist if I had the chance. I've saved up my virginity quite long, but for an ass and thighs like those I might give it all up.

>>26240343
What term did he use? Macropygian, as in Callipygian?

>>26248534
Yeah, I try visiting and the site blocked me. Then I used a VPN with a Japanese server and it let me in.
It is not so much her body, but her cosplay as well: the opportunity to engage in amorous intercourse with my oshi, Suisei. Attractive women there are many, greedy or deprived women there are many--But Suisei? There is only one. And she looks quite like the one would look. I desire her.

>>26248830
Steatopygic

Disco Elysium is getting a JAPANESE LOCALIZATION.

I hope to GOD one of the girls streams it.

>>26251810
forgot pic

>>26249894
>the opportunity to engage in amorous intercourse with my oshi, Suisei.
You do know that's just a common whore and not Suisei, right?

>>26239346
身長・3サイズ: T155 ・ 86 (E) ・ 58 ・ 90
Almost a perfect 90-60-90. And she is only 20 years old. My goodness...
DRESS UP AND TAKE MY MONEY.

Here are more pictures of her as Suisei:
https://www.cityheaven.net/osaka/A2702/A270203/animate_heroine/girlid-9802368/diary/pd-483628452/

>>26251332
Mm I see. That is notch above macro, indeed.

>>26252651
>And she looks quite like the one would look. I desire her.
It is the illusion.

>>26252651
NTA but it doesn't matter, I'd still give her a go. That cosplay is great, that body is great, and Suisei's aesthetic is ESPECIALLY great.
I wouldn't ask her to act like Suisei, though. In fact, I'd probably go out of my way to ask her NOT to act like Suisei.

>>26117249

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 3
https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vSaz7T3Rl-_FQRaJ43rdFsQNRwN0JIl-66fG1KCwvcUPjm7w3oFlesM-ALgC5FbmXTxCshhE9KGz9QB/pub

Tags: Botan, Vanilla

I tried something different for this chapter due to it's nature but I think I'll stick to my normal style from now on. This chapter has no dialogue whatsoever and it's more or less just a resume of everything that happened on chapters 1 and 2 from Botan's perspective, I think it's a necessary chapter but it's probably worse than the last two so I'll try to make the 4th one as interesting as possible

>>26252920
Why not just get a girlfriend who cosplays, it'll be less pathetic.

>>26253297
>Why not just get a girlfriend who cosplays
I dunno, dude. Why are you shitposting here instead of becoming a successful oil tycoon?

>>26253297
Those are few and far between, aren't they? And asking a non-cosplayer girlfriend to cosplay would be a hassle, since they would not know the least. I myself know nothing of it, I would not know how to make my girlfriend look as good as Yuzuyu there.

>>26253542
>He doesn't know
Buddy, I've bought the archive five times over now.

>>26251332
Damn, Kronii got to rim THAT?

>>26253542
Not really a shitpost, just merely stating a fact.

>>26136955
Kek.

>>26239346
reminds me of that one anon who got a JOI girl to imitate Aqua
except this one I would actually do

>>26225219
Late, but there's an entire series all about breast milk.

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: What's an idea you have that you know is way too overambitious and you know you can't write.

>>26259579
I wrote a 2000 word 9 scene narrative shell for a Koyori anal/intelligence drain fic that I probably won't ever even start. It makes me immensely horny though

>>26259507
Present Day Present Time?
Thought that series was more focused on impregnation and pregnant sex.

>>26117249
This is the sequel to Paradise Lost that some people have wanted. It was a lot of fun to write and it still retains the spirit of the original. Any feedback is appreciated and as always, enjoy!


Tags: NSFW, Kurokami, Scat, Oyakodon


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSVSglaTYaB6KcPqLOXBRS8a48v3CPg97_RwIZiVbbOfi7wKoqberTpa2e6L3uH9ZMvQSr5IPuQDThJ/pub


I wonder how the scatfag will feel about this

>>26260033
There's a good amount of milk drinking.

>>26260420
I just felt the weirdest surge of emotions seeing this. I felt a little bit of horror, a little bit of revulsion, and then equal parts interest, excitement and happiness, then a sense of bewilderment over why the fuck I felt that way, and finally weariness. I've become desensitized to this and I didn't even know it was happening. Eventually someone IRL is gonna make a joke about poo and I'm gonna react with interest instead of shock and laughter, and it's at that point my life will be over.

I'm going to put this aside and read it later because... I just don't feel this is the kind of thing you read in the middle of the day.
So yeah, consider me an IOU (You), in addition to this free one.

>>26260420
Couldn't get past the first paragraph.

>>26261514
Took a look just to see what you were talking about and I burst out laughing, what an intro. That's fucking great.

>>26261592
>That's fucking great.
Scatfags need to be purged from this general.

>>26260420
Hey anon, you might get better feedback or more readers if you indicate whether or not you want this to be seen in a comedic light or as a fetish fic.

>>26261678
I meant it's fucking great as in it was punchy and in-your-face. It was funny, not fetishistic.

>>26261841
>I meant it's fucking great as in it was punchy and in-your-face
It really isn't.

>>26261971
You sound angry, anon.

>>26262116
How am I angry for stating something that's true?

>>26262302
Oh, you're one of the self-righteous types... Well, enjoy your seething, anon.

>>26261841
It appears I forgot to include the comedy tag. Whoops.

>>26262469
Not even being self-righteous, even if we ignore the scat, the opening isn't punchy or in-your-face

>>26260420
This place has ruined my goddamn sense of humor because this was the funniest thing I've read in weeks. I think the anon that asked for this sequel described it right, the fic has a certain cheek to it that makes it funny.
Also
>Oyakodon
Why is that tag there?

>>26262544
The oyakodon tag is there because of the line but it mostly tasted like chicken which smelled like sulfur so you concluded that Kuro must’ve had a delicious oyakodon dish before going to bed. I just thought it'd be funny if someone saw that, got excited, then grossed out when they realized that the tag meant literal oyakodon.

>>26263007
Holy fucking shit, my sides. Alright, dude, you win. I'll read the fucking shitfic because that's twice I've audibly burst out laughing in 30 minutes.

>>26263007
So, it's there for nothing?

>>26263007
Now I need a Fox Family crossover that has Miyuki and Fubuki shitting down your mouth.

>>26260420
Alright... yeah. As a comedy fic, that was excellent, although the descriptive prose was such that I've no doubt someone in /ringo/ could get off to it if you posted it there.

That was genuinely hilarious. I concur with >>26262544, I laughed harder at this than I have at anything in quite a while - and I was legit just watching a vid of Romesh Ranganathan doing stand-up.

It's short, sweet and jam-packed with foul humour. In particular, that reveal after Kuro drinks the laxatives - I cracked up for a good thirty seconds straight. This is genuinely fantastic, and you are one sick fucking puppy.
t. bugfag

Also,
>sign on the wall that read ikiru, warau, aisuru.
You cheeky bugger.

>>26117302
A borderlands fic with Gura, Amelia, and Ina.

>>26263795
>spoiler
I was giggling like a schoolgirl when I put that in.

>>26251810
>>26251892
>Disco Elysium
The game is overhyped.

>>26251810
>>26251892
>Disco Elysium
The game is overhyped. vtubers should go to underail.

>>26264430
I didn't get anywhere near the same sense of enjoyment from Underrail that I did DE. They're both fiercely intellectual, but DE's smaller, more presentable package makes it a better choice for these girls, who are not philosophers or hardcore gamers. And I think Underrail's crushing glum atmosphere is for a certain niche audience; sort of reminds me of C:DDA a bit in that respect.

Also it's way too fucking long so chances are if a vtuber somehow got stuck into it they'd graduate before managing to finish it

>>26264821
Underrail is good because Depot A filters the idiots from those trying to actually build a character.

>>26264821
>more presentable package makes it a better choice for these girls, who are not philosophers or hardcore gamers.
>hardcore gamers
No one watches vtubers for their gameplay, and you know it.

>>26265029
The SSRB might.

>>26265144
Why would the Spreadsheet Standards Review Board watch vtubers?

>>26264888
That's funny, I thought the ridiculously punishing character system was terrible design when I played it.

>>26265029
You missed the point. I don't care about whether the girls do well, I care whether they enjoy it, which increases the likelihood they'll keep playing it. Underrail is HARD, and I think the only girl that'd appreciate this kind of difficulty is Botan. I definitely don't think this'd be up Korone's alley, at any rate.

>>26265301
>I thought the ridiculously punishing character system was terrible design when I played it.
Why would you think that, it what makes the game fun to begin with?

>>26260420
you didn’t masturbate in front of Kuro because that would’ve been weird
the ending was pretty good, but i especially liked this part.
i love a good shitpost

Class, today we learn the importance of proper suspension settings.
https://litter.catbox.moe/ec76wd.mp4

>>26224560
>Did she ever do lactation videos or pregnancy photos?
These are the only ones I've managed to find but they scratch the itch.

https://files.catbox.moe/6lax0n.webm
https://files.catbox.moe/37s6sg.webm
https://files.catbox.moe/2rf86z.webm

>>26131849
Hey anon, thanks for the high praise. I promise to do you proud again, from one assfucker to another.

>>26135739
Lost

>>26265171
>I definitely don't think this'd be up Korone's alley, at any rate.
I doubt she ever played a game with isometric graphics

>>26265517
>>26265301

>>26253273
Shame this never got any attention. It was good, anon. Don't let the lack of attention deter you.

>>26265495
>HCanon fucking dies in a crash
Holy shit.

>>26265896
No, he doesn't, stop spreading lies.

>>26265301
You honestly think they're going to finish Disco Elysium?

>>26260420
Not into scat, but it was okayish for me. I'll probably never read it again.

>>26266082
Probably not. I don't think any of them'll stream that, either. Doesn't seem like a good stream game to me.

New thread
>>26266181

>>26265896
What? Why me?

>>26265785
As long as there's at least one person enjoying the story I won't stop

>>26268232
Good on you, anon. This is the exact same kind of thinking I employ when I'm out raping.

LUNA RAPE

>>26264430
Arcanum of Steamworks and Magick Obscura would be great for one or two streams
I don't know how long it is because I always hit a brick wall in all my playthroughs (half-orc with 20 strength and human guns-only), and spamming Harm and chugging potions until something dies is boring
God save the streamers wanting to go full tech because it involves so much dumpster diving, grinding, being on the verge of poverty, not being able to revive with spells etc.

>>26270356
People stream Arcanum?