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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>25243274

>> No.25345689
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.25345738
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted last thread.

Say, Can You See? Chapter 8: Tags: Shion, Aqua, Okayu, SFW:>>25246767

Death for Death: Tags: Koyori, Calli, Shien, Shion, Action, Comedy, SFW:>>25254585

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

yab ritual fic for Reimu and Vox..:>>25246000

Crossdressing as a chuuba and having said chuuba walk in on you posing cutely.:>>25246454

On your deathbed, you struggle to keep your eyes open. Your breathing slows. Your heartbeat begins to fade....:>>25248263

I want dom Fubuki to push me down, lie on top of me and jerk me off "just because she feels like it", all the while whispering encouragement in my ear and making out with me.:>>25248730

Molesting Risu after the slutty squirrel keeps flashing her armpits at you like she doesn't know you're a wakichad:>>25251212

Watame hugging you and telling you that you don’t have to be strong tonight.:>>25253095

A chuuba brutally knocking me unconscious while her friends look on in horror because we both find it incredibly sexually stimulating.:>>25256440

Korone purposefully giving you bad advice.:>>25269099

a classic scenario, but through whatever circumstances, one of your hands are now cuffed to a chuuba, with the key somehow always evading you until a certain criteria is fulfilled. What wacky adventures await the two of you?:>>25270890

Coco Anal:>>25282430

luna x subaru orientation play fic:>>25295065

Quantumly cucking Matsuri:>>25302854

All the girls prior to Gen 3 engaging in casual racism against Pekora shortly after she debuts for being a filthy Pekolandian:>>25339636

>> No.25346538

>>25345958
>All the girls prior to Gen 3 engaging in casual racism against Pekora


I hope this ends up being funny, if somebody takes it

>> No.25346974

(daily) Update on the "Life with a lion isn't easy y'know?" project. The first chapter is finally done, it is shorter than I anticipated but it has everything it needs. I may change a single part that I didn't end up liking but the chapter should be ready in around a day or less.
I do have to say, I'm rather nervous but overall the chapter looks good enough to me so I hope it turns out well.

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>> No.25347737

>>25346974
Why do you need to make a diary about it?

>> No.25347819

>>25347683
with me

>> No.25348125

>>25347737
eh, why not I guess. It probably won't become a diary and I'll just use it to ask for advice or similar. Just added the "daily" cause

>> No.25349651

>>25345738
Anon tries to write a nice normal fanfiction but shitty female brat Gura keeps fucking it up

>> No.25349935

>>25345738
(You) trying your best to fuck the menhera out of Mikeneko

>> No.25353488

>>25349935
big emphasis on trying

>> No.25354074

>>25349935
You succeeded but Mikeneko manages to fuck the menhera into you.

>> No.25355742
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>>25345689
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSwSIKYZfNBdPaXlIth5w5w9vR0SJXhtccYRI_5TX0gfN9XuuFE6YXaJ4kXXC-Si-BDktuBvbXn_xU4/pub

Brown, Black and Blue Because I Love You

Tags: ryona, Flare, Noel, rape, gaslighting, Stockholm Syndrome, manipulation

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What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: What kind of research have you done in order to write the fic you're writing?

>> No.25356206
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>>25355774
I'm putting the finishing touches on Building Block Doll chapter 18. I think everyone is going to really love this one, it'll be quite the twist.

Still trying to figure out how to continue chapter two of To Slay a Monster. I'm thinking of incorporating Kintsuba somehow.

I've got a WiP as well that is going to be similar to what Nonsense Speaker was but better and more genuine. I felt the first iteration of it was a bit to confected. This'll be a lot smoother.

To gain more inspiration for Lazy Oni and the inspiration that spawned Brown Black and Blue, I've been looking into various accounts of physical abuse. Physical abuse is mostly outside my field of experience so I've been needing more material to draw on. So many suggestions from google to call a shelter haha.

>> No.25357252

>>25355742
I love some good old elf abuse, with extra gaslight for dessert

>> No.25357436

>>25355742
Noel and Flare in an average lesbian relationship.
...
I have mixed feeling for the ryona. The descriptions are honestly very detailed but it's lacking the needed emotional weight behind it in the prose itself to make it have 'flavor' and impact, for me at least.
The story feels like it's "telling" rather than "showing" feelings. I feel like it needs to actually have those feelings of rage and pain in the prose if it actually wants to succeed as a 'ryona fic', since right now it feels like a sex scene with detailed descriptions of the fucking but without the horniness in it... Of course I could be reading this wrong and the intent was that you were supposed to feel like Flare in this but then what's lacking is the feeling of pain and hurt in the narrative. Yes, it has that after scene with Flare recovering but it lacks sufficient emotion behind it to make it work.

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>>25355774
chuubas and aeroplanes
>bonus question
play AC7, pic somewhat related

>> No.25358032

>>25357436
>Noel and Flare in an average lesbian relationship.

I feel guilty for laughing at his

>The story feels like it's "telling" rather than "showing" feelings

Honestly, I felt kinda the same while writing it but couldn't quite figure out how to make it the inverse. However, I think I can do that as the story goes further. I hope I can at least, got a few ideas as to how. Thank you for being honest with me, I was worried but not surprised that's how it came out.

>> No.25358282

>>25346974
what are the tags?

>> No.25358445

>>25355774
Watching a bunch of Mio VODs and reading up on self-defense forces martial arts.

>> No.25359183

>>25355742
hot
hope you dont plan to skip the rape scene next chapter

>> No.25360608

>>25346974
So when are you posting it?

>> No.25361476
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Dinner date with Fubuki before a night of sweaty wild sex

>> No.25362109

>>25362076
A+

>> No.25362134

>>25362109
cheers, big ears
i hate the minimum timer on deleting a post

>> No.25362462

Kind of a nasty question but is there examples of any scenes with rimming that I can use as reference? The scene is like the one below
https://twitter.com/Kagami_Moch/status/1527620720515174401?t=KXJGqpvRnJBFYoAmeuoUwA&s=09

>> No.25362612

>>25362462
Mouthful of Fox

>> No.25362646

>>25355774
Spending a day with Suisei at the beach!

While she spends all day pretending to be a guy while topless, because she forgot to bring her swimsuit.

>> No.25362691

>>25362462
Mouthful of Fox for giving, Stolen Dreams for receiving

>> No.25363047

>>25362462
Others have already mentioned it, but Mouthful of Fox. Repeating it just because I fucking love that fic.

>> No.25363214

>>25362462
Late Night Nut Delivery

>> No.25364803

>>25357675
Salvation...

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There's a fairly well researched bacteria that proliferates on plants that is responsible for most of the world's production of snow, and without it, we would have significantly less rain, snow, and most likely, no more morning dew or frost. Lamy, as a snow elf, says thanks to these bacteria every day, and so should you.

>> No.25364979

>>25364894
what the fuck

>> No.25365099

>deleted
Is that real?

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>>25364894
For some reason I find Lamy's face so fucking funny in that picture. It looks like she's ambushing you during your lunch break telling you to take responsibility and then immediately snapping to look over at Botan after you take longer than like 2 seconds to respond.

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>>25355774
I got no time to write after working, eating, sleeping and vidya. But I'm working on a pretty long action scene, it sure isn't my specialty. I've researched a ton of guns and hardware for my story, but the hardest I went was reading through a WWII-era US navy submarine manual for references and terminology, too bad modern-day manuals are classified, although those WarThunder leaks sounds spicy if I ever write about tanks. Not that you guys can tell how authentic the next chapter on submarine warfare is anyway.
>>25357675
Crsip white sheets...
I actually love Torres so much, I'd put all his dialouge in my story word for word if I could.

>> No.25365341

>>25358282
This one's going to be SFW, Botan, Vanilla
>>25360608
A couple of minutes from now

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>>25364979
>>25365099
Can't go into too much detail because off topic but the bacteria gives plant frostbite with its composition being nearly identical to normally formed ice and it's the most common reason for plant leaves to get brown spots. This bacteria was found present in snow and rain yadda yadda facilitates transition from water to snow. I gotta run now

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>>25365431
forbidden knowledge

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>>25365431
>nuked again
Oh fuck, (((they))) are onto us

>> No.25365658

>>25345689

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T3Qw31vbUtAZrOU3xbVZNQGiqTdIXTweAcKC7zg--UA/edit?usp=drivesdk

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 1

Tags: SFW, Botan, Vanilla

This episode is a basic introduction to the characters as well as the space so it may be a bit boring at the start but I do believe that futire chapter will be more interesting.

>> No.25365704

>>25357675
I'm glad Torres is what people remember from those missions and not "Random Journalist wants you killed because he's a schizo"

>> No.25365707

>>25365658
It's locked.

>> No.25365734

>>25365658
ANON PUBLISH IT BEFORE PEOPLE FIND OUT WHO YOU ARE

>> No.25365745

>>25365658
You gotta Publish it, Anon. File > Share > Publish to Web and copy the URL it gives you.

>> No.25366082

>>25365704
Doesn't he end up liking Three Strikes at the end? And there's also that shitposting AI.

>> No.25366176

>>25366082
At the start he sees Trigger as insignificant and then comes to see him as the 'bad omen in the sky' near the end like everyone else does.

>> No.25366481

>>25365745
I'm on my phone so uh... Help

>> No.25366571

>>25366481
I don't think you can with the Docs app, but you can share the link and change the link settings to people with the link can view it by long pressing the thing and fucking with the 'share' settings, or doing it in story by hitting the three dots at the top right and doing it there.

>> No.25366591

>>25366481
...
Okay you have two options.
If you already have an ao3 account you can publish there.
Otherwise you can copy and paste the story onto rentry dot org WHILE keeping the edit code for later editing.

>> No.25366732

>>25366481
Go on google and open docs there, then set it to desktop site on the three dots at top right. It will be a bit hard to navigate nutvyou can prublish that wat

>> No.25366774

>>25365707
>>25365734
>>25365745
You should be able to open it now, if not I'll update it at night

>> No.25366801

>>25366774
Yep, operable.

>> No.25366866

>>25366801
Thank god, sorry for the trouble I'll update the chapters on my computer from now on

>> No.25367124

>>25366866
You should probably also give the published link of this chapter later.

>> No.25367269

>>25367124
Sure, I'll upload it whenever I get home

>> No.25368804

>>25365658
Well I don't really have much to say here. It's a rather standard opening for the concept you're going with.
Still you do have your foundations in order and have a narrative voice and base to make further chapters on.

>> No.25370361

>>25355774
Stuff. Finally writing more. Still thinking about scrapping the entire section and keeping it as side stuff but y'know.

>> No.25370461

>>25355774
Same as usual
> bonus question
Do flies have cocks?
Microscopic fly penis
Do spiders have a penis
How do spiders reproduce
What are the holes in pitcher plants called
Pitcher plant anatomy
Do rabbits eat moss

>> No.25370526

>>25370461
guessing this is bunny trap. the fuck is going on in this chapter???

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>>25370526
Comparatively way less "worse" than the previous two chapters as far as I'm aware, but I'm yet to add the second creature of the week into the fic besides the plant, so that could be anything Even though it's kind of already been decided.

>> No.25370981

>>25370842
I'm still not quite sure about that one. I have a general feeling of uneasiness about it. I'm not sure something that performs well visually will necessarily do well in text at all. I'm not a particularly good writer, granted, but my admittedly limited imagination is having a great deal of trouble figuring out how I'd describe it were I writing this myself.

>> No.25371110

>>25370981
You mean the plant? Eh, besides struggling to figure out how Pekora gets swallowed up and other ways to describe the traphole, it doesn't seem that bad. Why do you think it's a visual thing?

>> No.25371144

>>25370981
>>25371110
trouble in paradise between you two lovebirds, i take it

>> No.25371205

>>25371110
Nah, the second one.

>> No.25371320

>>25371205
why don't you just fucking describe it here and maybe someone can help instead of beating around the bush and being vague

>> No.25371381

>>25371320
I've thought of that, but it's just easier not to. In case there's, to my surprise, an actual serious discussion about it. Because if I then pull the plug on the idea or make radical changes, it'll be like ignoring the inputs of other anons.

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>>25371205
I see, well, it is still an idea, and by a long shot, since I haven't even hinted at what it would be yet given that I haven't even gotten that far into the plant scene yet.
That means that there's no problem in changing it. Options have been pretty limited after two insects and tentacles have already been used. Humanoids are pretty boring, as I'm sure you agree. If you fail to think up an idea you're satisfied with, it's probably going to be settled as tentacles I would guess. That being said, no matter what gets chosen, so long as there's penetration involved it's impossible for me to underperform.

>> No.25371440

>>25371402 (me)
(We're speaking as if we are in DMs but it's fine, right? It's just small chit chat)

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>>25371440
>Me
What's going on

>> No.25371557

>>25371402
>>25371440
It's dead hours, so I'm chatting about it here in case it piques the interest of anyone else. Else I'd just send an e-mail - which I did a few mins ago. Anyway, you're right, still plenty of time.
There's a bucketload of other stuff that could be slotted in instead.

>> No.25371558

>>25371402
What about a giant bunny? Just a big fat ball of fluff pining Pekora down and awakening her bunny girl instincts.

>> No.25371672

>>25371557
Didn't even get notified. I hate how tardy gmail can be sometimes.

>>25371558
There was actually a talk (more of a thought desu)of that being the final encounter, a giant rabbit god, but I just threw it in like as a joke rather than a serious thought because it's really silly and nonsensical.

>> No.25372057

>>25371672
I mean in fairness that rabbit god is kind of foreshadowed in the first chapter with the sexualized images in the ruin Pekora was exploring.

>> No.25372061

>>25371672
I've kicked around the idea of a joke ending involving Miko being the antagonist, driven mad by her all-consuming desire for runny bunny cunny
Sadly it is not to be

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>>25372061
That's something I'd come up with in a futa series or something, and since this is not that, it is indeed impossible. Silly anon, girls can't rape other girls after all!

>> No.25372293

>>25372182
The solution is simple, then - Miko transforms into her boss form, a giant fly... no, not really

>> No.25372386

>>25372293
I'm hitting the sack, uni class tomorrow. Peace

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>> No.25373128

>>25345738
A story where a Yandere Mikeneko kidnaps an Overseas NekoFami moving into Japan and rapes him but then the story changes into a sad wholesome sex session as the NekoFami comforts his rapist about her mental health problems.

Then the two decided that they should start a family together so the NekoFami cums one last time inside of Mikeneko and impregnates her. A couple years later, Mikeneko is now a happy mother in a happy family with three children and a loving NekoFami as her husband.

Has a story like this been done before? I would be surprised if there hasn't been.

>> No.25373362

>>25373128
But anon... Mike is a boy.

>> No.25373364

>>25373128
>turning rape into consensual sex by guilt-tripping your yandere rapist into a mental breakdown
Could make for a good dark-comedy story if done well

>> No.25373659

>>25373128
I don't think we've had a story like that yet.

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>>25345689
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ_Pa2icQGYR8eH5jZHJeSfSdEW9-bLfBvG5FBGd02QhWi6zUaPkEq1ukmsRQJIuMn3r6foT5jMZ9Xp/pub

Nonsense Speaker (remastered)

Tags: (you), straight shota, Kronii, Moona, Reine, Flare, Noel, Fauna, sexual trauma, taboo

>> No.25373755

>>25365658
A decent set up you got there. I look forward to the next chapter.

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>> No.25374793

>>25373128
I'd like to read a story like this.

>> No.25375911

>>25362646
>spoiler
That sounds INCREDIBLY hot.
>>25355774
>bonus question
I’ve been trying to write a story set in the early 1900s (somewhere between 1910 and 1940) and while it’s partially fantasy, I do want the world to seem actually set during that period, especially the technology. I’ve been doing crazy amounts of research on firearms, electricity, commercial planes and other things from that timeframe.

>> No.25376151

>>25345738
1984 in a Hololive-run military state where Big Brother is Yagoo, from the perspective of a hapless Fandead who struggles with unpersoning Rushia in his mind after she's terminated. Tribalfagging between other major corpos is propagandized in the background

>> No.25376165

>>25373728
It's an interesting spin to starting this concept but I feel like you needed to hold off on releasing it till you had more chapters, like most of your work's initial releases you have good starting concepts but the first chapter generally doesn't have enough to comment on since your writing is pretty foundationally sound enough that you'd have to work to even nitpick it.

>> No.25378554

Mike cute

>> No.25378593

Bump and a Question.
How the fuck do you write smut when your natural writing style is "laconic"?

>> No.25378752

>>25378593
Well that is rather difficult for truly erotic smut, but I think its possible just by describing the events that transpire as is.

>> No.25379075

>>25378593
make sure the few words you use are hot, or at the very least, they inspire the imagination on the reader to fill the blanks

>> No.25379581

>>25379075
So I should focus on maximizing impact
with the words I can write then?

>> No.25379663

>>25379581
yes, try writing and we'll give feedback

>> No.25379862

>>25365658
It’s not bad if I’m assuming that this is your first story, though I have a few criticisms.
The line: “you did know Japanese (for some reason)” felt really lazy to me, I think anything would’ve worked better there than ‘some reason’. Maybe Anon graduated with a minor in Japanese, or you could’ve expanded on his anime addiction and had him watch so much that he picked it up over time.
Try being consistent with your line breaks, sometimes they were
like this, and other times they were

like this. Maybe use large line breaks for when the next scene rolls around and small ones for new paragraphs, or stick to one type.
Everyone styles their dialogue differently, but I think at least a few dialogue tags like ‘Botan says’ or ‘you reply’ would’ve been helpful to the readability of your story.
Lastly, try to stick to present tense if that’s what you’re using, because you slipped into past tense a couple of times.
Overall though, it’s a pretty good start, I’m just being nitpicky. I thought the plane would crash or some shit to start off the journey across the sea, but now I’m curious as to how you’ll get Anon and Botan stranded together in the ocean.
Also why the FUCK did Anon go to get Italian food after stepping into Japan?

>> No.25380853

Give me your autistic crossover ideas.

>> No.25381068

>>25380853
Myth and lazulight go to brazil, finana gets kidnapped by capybaras, nobody tries to rescue her and happily go back home

>> No.25381111

>>25381068
but capybaras don't have a single violent bone in their bodies

>> No.25381483

Futa fics doko?

>> No.25381510

>>25381111
They just wanted to meet her, and take care of Finana. Forever.

>> No.25381587

>>25379862
>spoiler
One of these:
>anon is italian
>anon is retarded
>anon is a retarded italian

>> No.25381885

>>25381510
>hanging out with capybaras for the rest of your life
there are worse fates

>> No.25382121

>>25381483
If you want Futa on Futa/female, yeah we really don't get much of those in this thread barring one popping up once in a blue moon.
If you just want girls with dicks, of what we've gotten semi-recently ... the femboy Suisei fics are basically both flavors of Futa on Male. Outside of that not much.

>> No.25382257

>>25382121
Well I was thinking more about futa on male fics but the femboy suisei fic you mentioned seems nice, is it in the archive?

>> No.25382272

>>25379862
Thanks for the advice, I'll probably try new styles in the next chapter then
Also, Anon likes lasagna, that's all
>>25381587
Fun fact I actually wanted to make Anon British so I could make him say British insults just cause I find them funny but they are talking Japanese after all so the idea didn't fit in

>> No.25382975

>>25373128
No promises since I don't have fanfic writing experience but I may end up trying this one

>> No.25383113

>>25381510
>knotted by capybaras ad nauseum
Someone needs to write this fic NOW

>> No.25383306

>>25381068
this but they actually do try to rescue finanna, who at this point has utterly become the capybaras' slut. and then everyone else also become the capybaras' sluts. and there's an orgy with the sluts and capybaras.

>> No.25384435

>>25382121
Does it count as Futa on female if (You) is a girl? Speaking of that, how many stories like that we have? It's more common to have the self insert for the reader to be male, for obvious reason

>> No.25384465
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>>25345738
Accidentally discovering Towa doesn't wear underwear

>> No.25384865

>>25375911
What country will it be set in?

>> No.25385209

>>25384435
>how many stories like that [do] we have?
i'm pretty sure we have exactly 0

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>> No.25387631
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Do you have a writing playlist? If not, recommend me some songs I want to make one for myself

>> No.25387821

>>25387631
I just use classical musical, gets you into the mood y'know. Alternatively i pop up a karaoke from the vsinger thread

>> No.25387855

>>25387631
I like to listen to the instrumental remixes of hololive songs.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFWw821wozI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XD1t7JHbge0

>> No.25387917

>>25387631
Always Ram Ranch

>> No.25388544
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>>25345689

Numbered Days - 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSGCwuTLBGpeSk0Emp41uRsAqb3a5nWj7oj0UQdFFIA-QBy-miKVJ5AviShWSxBv7iBvDLXtlf-YsAW/pub

Tags: Suisei, Botan, SFW, Tragedy

>> No.25388595

>>25387631
Just a lot of combat tracks from games I may or may not have played.

>> No.25389293
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25389293

>>25388544
I quite like this. The sombre tone you're going for comes across very well.

Is this the first time Hitomi Chris is in a fic?

>> No.25389754

>>25387631
I listen to softcore porn in the background

>> No.25389772

>>25387631
Something by the chubas you're writing might help you get in their hear.

>> No.25391107

>>25389772
Isn't that kind of limiting given that genre variety for original songs isn't exactly the best in this medium?

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>> No.25392665

>>25387631
I don't listen to anything. I cant concentrate if there's any background noise

>> No.25392738

>>25391107
I mean, I said "might" for a reason. Maybe you don't like their stuff, or maybe it's too high energy when you need easy listening to write or any number of other things.

>> No.25393066

>>25388544
I really like the fucking tone you've written for this. Very appropriate for the concept.
Suisei seems like a very interesting girl for an arc like this as well. I like how her approach to death is to throw her effort at her dreams for one last shot even if she knows what's coming next.
Also is this a sequel to something? It feels like the second part for something I vaguely remember.

>> No.25393256

>>25362646
https://files.catbox.moe/nw7d7s.png
Was this part of your inspiration?

>> No.25393426

>>25382257
Yes, the fic is "Otoko ja nai, Suisei desu!" in the archive tagged with Femboy.

>> No.25395303

>>25387631
A lot of video game osts

>> No.25395575

>>25367124
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T3Qw31vbUtAZrOU3xbVZNQGiqTdIXTweAcKC7zg--UA/edit?usp=sharing
this one's the good link

>> No.25395657

>>25395575
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSRvP7ZUHIgBmH4xDj_zn6qihc2i0piJDhfv6F9XitBypozMgQgov3iXAbJAGpojC3d_CmGIu-Gaq2Q/pub
this one*, sorry

>> No.25397294
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>>25387631
This is an utterly pointless question that only serves to clog up the general with off-topic talk, which is why it's necessary for me to participate in it as well!

Here are 5 music genres you may catch me listening to because I'm so quirky and can listen to basically anything:
https://youtu.be/iIpfWORQWhU
https://youtu.be/o_hXGZ8NXAA
https://youtu.be/BgQ8sa0HPtQ
https://youtu.be/DelhLppPSxY
https://youtu.be/NdqbI0_0GsM

But in all honesty, the question is meaningless because ultimately all you're going to be doing is listening to what you like, so a writing playlist doesn't really exist perse. You'd be listening to the same songs to be productive no matter what you were doing.

>> No.25399815

>>25398189
Anon, I think you're gay.

>> No.25399842

>>25399815
How come

>> No.25400960

>>25398189
>You'd be listening to the same songs to be productive no matter what you were doing.
I dunno, don't they have surgeons listen to classical pre-op nowadays? They can't all like it.

>> No.25401035

>>25400960
The head surgeon decides which song will be played while he is operating

>> No.25402091

>>25388544
Oh man, I fucking love this dude. Holy shit. The tone, feeling, themes and concept are all bloody perfect. Amazing work.

>> No.25402866

>>25387631
I've been looping Rose of the Lamp lately. That's gotta be one of the best concerts Hololive has ever done.

>> No.25403212

>>25384435
I think that anon that writes indie fics occasionally does female pov

>> No.25404070

>>25403212
Don't think he comes here anymore, haven't seen him in a while. Dude never got any feedback or recognition, but given most of what he posted was gay content, I can't say it was unexpected.

>> No.25404603

>>25404070
Yeah but in all honesty, I think it may be more that they published via their blog and thus needed to post the broken links to thread. That combined with the fact that it was mostly indie content, and the picture starts making more sense.

>> No.25404707

>>25404603
I checked every time I recognized the person being written about and the fics were kinda mid anyway.

>> No.25405081

>>25345738
You've finally courted Kanata/Towa/Any animal girl and the moment of truth in which you pull those panties down comes. HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH THEIR PUSSY? THAT'S NOT HUMAN AT ALL! OH, GOD, WHAT IS THAT?

>> No.25405141

>>25405081
Anon, it's called a penis.
I assume you also have one of those.

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>>25405081
Koro-san's fortune cookie...

>> No.25406061

>>25388544
God damn this is such a cool concept and your excution of it is superb so far. I really look forward to the next part.

>>25393066
>Also is this a sequel to something? It feels like the second part for something I vaguely remember.
I was reminded of 'The Three Meetings with Mori' but I don't know if it's the same author.

>> No.25406212

>>25393256
Not exactly this picture but a Megumin one I recently saw. But this one is hot, too, so now it will serve as inspiration.

>> No.25406495

>>25406212
https://files.catbox.moe/nykq0b.png
Take this one as well then

>> No.25407172

>>25373659
Well, you can color me surprise then.

>> No.25407237

>>25382975
Good luck writing it then if you do!

>> No.25407809

>>25381483
Wait I did forget about a Futa on Male fic we've gotten recently.
Helping Friend on the archive, which is a Futa on Male fic about Fubuki helping to train your asshole in preparation for Mio's bigger cock.
Honestly I really shouldn't have forgotten about this one given that I requested this here.

>> No.25408665

>>25407172
Nobody cares about new Rushia, and there's gatekeeping around using Rushia in fics

>> No.25408733

>>25408665
We'll see

>> No.25408898

>>25408733
(We won't)

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>>25408665
>Nobody cares about new Rushia
She's talked about pretty often tf you mean

>> No.25408974

>>25408665
Hey, you might think it's a shitpost but I would totally read a fic about having gay sex with Mikeneko.

>> No.25409171

>>25408942
It's a HUGEEE filter that she chose MIKEneko as her name. All people can think of is Myke Tyson when talking about her and there's no way to use her name in a fic without it being weird. Neko just doesn't sound right. Rushia, Ru-tan, etc is much better. Her name is the biggest filter by far.

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>>25408974
I'm sure you would, but I'm positively sure you'd enjoy it just as much if it was Suisei or Pekora or whoever the fuck. MykeTysonneko is the same as Kson, sure, people still love her, but the magic isn't there anymore. Real world problems have gotten in the way, and now it's just... eh

>> No.25409428

>>25409368
>image
Can't think of Gura/Ina yuri without thinking of dolphins

>> No.25409444

>>25409171
also the fact that the dumb bitch is refusing to stream on youtube for some reason, where 99% of her audience is

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>>25409428
I'm pretty sure that image is from the dolphin throatfucking Ina image set, may be a new addition or something. Either way it's still a hot pic. Cumming onto two girls kissing, even if they didn't suck you off, is pretty much every man's dream

>> No.25409576

>>25409444
She isn't streaming on YouTube because she said she is focusing on improving her mental health first before coming back to YouTube.

>> No.25409746

>>25409171
>All people can think of is Myke Tyson when talking about her
I think that's a you issue, dude.

>>25409576
Is she? I thought she was getting mental help, then someone said she stopped, and telling what's true and what's just a rrat is difficult on the best days around here.

>> No.25409796

>>25409576
God I hate women. She broke the NDA and now she's having issues with mental health? She ALWAYS had issues with mental health. The only thing that saves me from actually hating Rushia after all she's done is the fact that that girl is genuinely retarded and does dumb shit all the time as a result. Can't get angry at a dog for pissing on the carpet and all that

>> No.25409911

>>25409368
>Suisei
While I did enjoy both of the femboy Suisei fics. Mike has a way different 'vibe' to her that no other chuuba fulfills with their combination of model and persona.

>> No.25409949

>>25409911
There's nothing femboyish about Myke or Rushia though

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The deafening sound of silence and electricity buzzing through the walls fills the room. It drives me mad.

>> No.25411142

>>25410465
Play some games, have a wank, maybe touch some grass

>> No.25411242

How many pages are too many pages?

>> No.25411373

>>25345738
Taking Ayame out on a compensated[/spoiler date around Tokyo.

>> No.25411398

>>25411242
About 20

>> No.25411437

>>25411242
49. Anything longer than 49 pages actually will include sensitive persoanl information in it's metadata that people can easily use to find your location.

>> No.25411657

>>25411242
For a one shot. It's too long when it gets way past the point of being able to be read in a single sitting. At that point you should really consider making it a short fic with chapters.
For a single chapter, if it's gotten to the point where you yourself think it needs splitting into subchapter, then it definitely needs to have gotten some though put into how to split it a few thousand words ago.

>> No.25412313

>>25411242
Page count isn't a great method for judging a story's length imo, because it'll depend on how much dialogue/how many line breaks you have. Just use the wordcount.

>> No.25412640

>>25412313
NTA but in fairness formatting does play a part in how 'long' something feels to read.
Of course word count has more effect but the right formatting can make a text feel shorter or longer.

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>> No.25414717

>>25345738
>>25414576
Hot Sweaty Beach Sex with Matsuri!

>> No.25415059
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>>25414717

>> No.25415109
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>>25415059
Do you miss...

>> No.25415141
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>>25415109
HoloSummer?

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>>25414576
>>25415059
>>25415109
>>25415141
"Don't stick your dick in crazy" is an extremely poor piece of advice. You should absolutely nut in a menhera hard enough to feel like you're popping a kidney. It's sticking around that's gets you problems

>> No.25415239
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>>25415186
Five years later when you have a wife, bitch comes knocking on your door demanding child support. You tell her to get lost and wake up to your tires popped. Of course that's just the start of it.

>> No.25415416

>>25415239
>Matsuri killing and replacing your wife while gaslighting you about how you've been married for five years.
Hot.

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>>25415239
>He doesn't know how to properly ghosts crazy bitches
I talk a big game but if it was Matsuri I probably wouldn't be able to control myself, and who's crawling back to who at the point?

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>>25415416
No. Bad anon.

>>25415444
A friend of mine was dating a very pretty girl who was an absolute sweetheart, but one day he didn't show up to work and we weren't exactly sure why. We went to his place and found him tied to the bed naked, tape over his mouth and ass. We took it off of his mouth and he just started screaming to get it out of him. Off comes the rest of the tape, and an ungodly-sized dildo just fucking shoots out of him as he lies on the bed in pain. He immediately broke up with her and we never saw her since.

Tl dr; don't stick your dick in crazy, and especially don't stick around with crazy.

>> No.25416058

>>25416024
...
That honestly sounds like a great twist ending for a menhera girl fic.

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>>25345738
Gura being an astute business woman and giving you an offer you'd be a fool to say no to

>> No.25417190

does anybody know how to stop falling in love over the slightest iota of attention being given to you

>> No.25417251

>>25417190
Maybe try killing yourself? Seems to be a solution for most problems. At the very least, I've never heard anyone who has done so complain afterwards.

>> No.25417345

>>25417190
Sounds like your a perfect candidate for becoming a 2view indie chuuba.

>> No.25417362
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>>25417190
There's no real solution. You'll push away the people who showed you attention by falling in love with them and that will make your condition worse. It's a self-fulfiling cycle. What I did to solve this problem was to cut all ties with humanity and distance myself from any relationships. It works but there will be this hollow feeling in your heart where emotions should've been. Dunno, it's up to you to decide if it's worth it.

>> No.25417413

>>25417190
Assume that every act of kindness is just a trick meant to deceive you.

>> No.25417460

>>25417190
Send them a picture of your cock. It didn't work for me, in fact, it backfired horribly, but trust me.

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>>25417190
Try growing up

>>25417362
You too while we're at it

>> No.25417546

>>25417362
>What I did to solve this problem was to cut all ties with humanity and distance myself from any relationships.
This comment was folded over a thousand times and polished on 30,000 grit waterstone.
Got any advice that is useful for people not living inside a shounen anime?

>> No.25417595

>>25417546
No. Conform to society and you'll suffer the problems from it.

>> No.25417605

>>25417542
>Try growing up
didn't work
not that i had any choice in the matter to begin with

>> No.25417660

>>25417595
Kiddo, there are far greater problems that arise from excluding yourself from society.

>> No.25417684

>>25417660
why are you so mean

>> No.25417692

>>25417595
The problem of you being an underage edgy loser has nothing to do with how much I conform to society.

>> No.25417707

>>25417660
Yeah? Pick your poison then.

>> No.25417751

>>25417684
Did your 2view oshi remember your name or something and you immediately thought it was true love?

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>>25409368
That image is one of the grossest images I've seen in a long time

>> No.25417782

>>25417660
can confirm. I live the life of a hermit when I'm not at work and I'm utterly miserable

>> No.25417806

>>25417780
Why are you gay???

>> No.25417825

>>25417806
Why do you have an unhealthy fixation with dolphins?

>> No.25417832

>>25416717
Is she selling the milk or the meat?

>> No.25417860

>>25417832
that depends on how much you're willing to pay

>> No.25417906

>>25417825
There are no dolphins in that image, only two hot girls cum swapping with their tongues while being almost naked. I ask again, why are you gay?

>> No.25417922

>>25417460
being genuine? this unironically sounds like the best available option, ie destroying the relationship with something i can't take back
how did the recipient of your phallic photography react?

>> No.25417971

>>25417922
Was pretty close to going into a relationship with her but one too many dick pics at innapropriate times led to me pushing her away completely. Though tbf when you're a teenager receiving nudes from a girl is always nice, you'd expect women to react the same. They don't, and she didn't. Unfortunate, but you live and learn.

>> No.25417992

>>25417906
>dolphins
What fucking image are you guys talking about? I'm looking up dolphins and hololive and I'm not finding anything.

>> No.25418023

>>25417992
lurk moar

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>>25417992

>> No.25418082

>>25417971
>Though tbf when you're a teenager receiving nudes from a girl is always nice, you'd expect women to react the same.
That's true. If only if it were the case.

>> No.25418227

>>25418082
Life'd be so much easier if we were all gay, and kept women enslaved in communal breeding facilities for the purpose of procreation

>> No.25418356

>>25418227
Look I get it's your fucking month and all, but give it a rest

>> No.25418436

>>25418356
Refute the logic

>> No.25418472

>>25418436
THERE ISN'T ANY

>> No.25418516

>>25418472
I rest my case.

>> No.25418630

>>25418356
>he doesn't want pekofag's balls slapping against his chin
ngmi

>> No.25418670

>>25409171
I'm honestly surprised no one's thought to call her "Miken Eko". Its not like Mike Neko makes anymore sense than that.

>> No.25418705

>>25418670
hot opinion dudette but your boyfriend mike's name ain't changin cuz you wish it were so

>> No.25418706

>>25418670
Because it doesn't work in Japanese or English.
Miken isn't even close to how it's pronounced.

>> No.25419300

>>25417413
I've been doing this for years. It only hurts in the long run.

>> No.25419778

>>25418706
The whole point is that Miken isn't a word in english, so the only choice is to use the japanese pronounciation.
https://www.wordhippo.com/what-is/the-meaning-of/japanese-word-5af6c05b56f3aafae3fdee9117d53dc4998dc9fd.html

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I DID NOTHING TODAY! NOTHING AT ALL!!! I JUST SLEPT, PLAYED GAMED, WATCHED VIDEOS AND JERKED OFF!!! KUSOOOOOOO!!!!

Goddammit, I was overflowing with creativity but I didn't want to start another WIP so I just let that feeling die. I should've just opened docs and let it flow out...

>> No.25420853

>>25420823
Report to the stockades for 'shut the fuck up' posting immediate

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>>25420853
Why are you so angry? Calm down, my man. Nobody's out to get you.

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>>25420823
Sucks for you. I've been researching Tarot.
For reasons.

>> No.25421157

>>25420912
I feel like there things that will actively make you dumber if you do research into them. Stuff like flat earth theory, astrology, conspiracy theories in general, and Tarot falls among that.

>> No.25421271

>>25420912
Tarot's interesting. I only know surface level shit but it seems like a fun hobby.

>> No.25421299

>>25421157
Mio likes it, so my hands are tied.

>> No.25421846

>>25420912
I'd recommend one of those cheap tarot books. That's what I used for my fic.

>> No.25422550

>>25388544
I liked this a lot, and the undertone of "a girl giving it her all" rubs me in all the right ways. Gotta say the inclusion of Botan in this feels like it only serves more of an exposition to the world setting, but I'm just being nitpicky. Looking forward to the next instalment!

>> No.25422587

>>25421846
There's also a good couple of websites that just has info on tarot meanings. Though I guess in this case having an on hand reference would be easier to use than a website if you're making the tarot a central part of the narrative and not just a "every member of the cast represents a major arcana" thing.

>> No.25423041

>>25420823
Always do that, even if you don't intend to release it or finish it.

I've got quite a few unreleased WiPs right now. You never know when you'll find one that's a winner.

I can relate though. I have been trying to finish two chapters of stories I'm working right now and even though I literally know exactly how I want them to go, something just isn't working

>> No.25423450

>>25423041
Get a beta reader, see if they can spot anything wrong that you haven't.

>> No.25423571

>>25423450
nta but you guys are my beta readers. No way in hell am I showing my fanfics to anyone I actually know.

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>>25423450
It's more just that I can't seem to get myself to write the whole thing out. Like I said I know exactly how I want this to go, but then I look at the page and just can't get the words out. This has taken me nearly two days.

>>25423571
This as well. This is basically my testing ground for ideas.

>> No.25424621

>>25424380
Man I need to get around to reading Building Block Doll.
Honestly, if you want my two cents on this situation.
Write out the outline of how you want this to go. I.e the events of the chapters you want to write. Then just leave it for a bit to think it over rather than banging your head against the wall trying to write it when you're creatively blocked like this. At least whatever bit of creativity you have right now can be saved and thought over for later so that when you come back you'll still have an idea of what past you wanted out of this.

>> No.25425083

>>25423450
Does anyone here actually have beta readers? I’m taking the fact that I write vtuber fanfic to my fucking grave, no way am I showing my stories to anyone irl.

>> No.25425257

>>25425083
I have some friends I can trust to view early versions of chapters or discuss things with.

>> No.25425581

>>25425083
Why couldn't you use someone you know online that's also a chuuba fan to be your beta reader.
Pretty sure that's how beta reading gets done in other fandoms like that.

>> No.25426999

>>25425581
>someone you know online that's also a chuuba fan
I don’t know anyone like that, and even most chuuba fans wouldn’t really like fanfic.

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Series Writers doko?

>> No.25429403

>>25429159
around

>> No.25429920

>>25429403
Have you written anything lately?

>> No.25429921

>>25425083
All of my IRL friends have read and know I exclusively write vtuber smutfiction. Although as far as beta testing, only one person usually gets to read the stories before I publish them.

I guess the one benefit of being old and having friends who are all both weebs and vtuber fans is that I just don't really need to worry about what they think.

>> No.25430205

>>25429159
Sorry I'm in a coma

>> No.25430640

>>25429159
Yeah, I'm here. I've officially given up on writing Cover High again. It just doesn't interest me anymore, or at least not as much as being a menhera piece of shit on the internet does.

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>>25429159
Making good progress on the next chapter.

>> No.25431815

>>25430640
I'm not believing this until you post proof.

>> No.25432164

>>25431815
Anon...
That is very clearly bait. Read their whole post.

>> No.25432206

>>25429159
Fucking dead.

>> No.25432973
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Daydreaming for 30 minutes about how life would be like if I went back to when I was 10 years old has definitely been one of the most mentally unhealthy things I have done in my entire life. Holy shit, take me back. The smell of regret so strong it could make one retch.

I wonder if one could pull off a fic with such a concept since the main aspect of it would be that you know it all and the reaction of the people to that fact. That being said, obviously none of us know any chuubas personally so I wonder what kind of plot you'd have to cook up to make it work.

>> No.25433518

>>25431815
Prove I'm not working on Cover High anymore? What, a year wasn't good enough for you? Well, that's no problem. How about one or two more? Or forever?

>> No.25433583

>>25432973
...
Honestly I could see a good time travel plot based around trying to save your childhood friend Suisei (or some other chuuba with good childhood friend energy) from a bad future where they never reached their dreams and gave up to be with you. With the ending being the cliche give her up so she can chase her dreams with a little unseen aid from you ending.

>> No.25433637

>>25433518
Wow, it's really been a year since last CH chapter? Damn, time flies

>> No.25433684

>>25432973
Jokes on you, I've written a chuuba's personality flawlessly before.

>> No.25433735

>>25432973
>Daydreaming for 30 minutes about how life would be like if I went back to when I was 10 years old
I do this every single fucking day. I regret so much.
Maybe you could write a fic about being a dumb teenager and breaking up with a chuuba in high school, only to realise she was your one true love once you're an lonely adult. Then, when all seems lost, you're given the opportunity to rewind time or insert your current memories into your teenage self and correct your mistakes.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK I WISH I COULD DO THIS IRL

>> No.25433842

>>25433583
I really don't get why people think Suisei has good childhood friend energy. She just seems more like a childhood bully more than a childhood friend.

>> No.25433870

>>25433518
I find it genuinely amusing that our authors have dedicated schizos.

>> No.25434015

>>25433870
This. I kind of wish someone would think about ME that much.

>> No.25434134

>>25433842
because people here don't watch streams.

>> No.25434234

>>25433870
At least subjectionanon somewhat deserved it for being...subjectionanon.

>> No.25434378

>>25433842
Personally it's because her "indie roots" gives her a starting point of humanity in comparison with the rest of the people associated with her who 'started in the sky' she had to 'fly and become a comet'. Apologies for the shitty similes.
>Childhood bully Suisei
Okay.
That sounds kind of hot desu.
Especially if it was like an enemies to lovers thing after you reconnect in adulthood.

>> No.25435144

>>25434378
What similes? I only see metaphors.

>> No.25435426

>>25411373
>>25345738
Short stories about chuubas seemingly having wholesome dates with a cute shota-like Anon, who cruelly and coldly manipulates them for money and gifts taking advantage of either personal loneliness or unhealthy obsession with shotas cough cough suisei cough that makes them desperate enough to keep to the pretense of having a supportive, affectionate otouto
Optionally, have it end with them losing it and kidnapping Anon to condition him into actually believing it as well

>> No.25435574

>>25433637
10 months to be exact

>> No.25435657

>>25434234
Honestly if he wrote more he'd probably have the same grudging respect pekofag is building from their frequent writings and lessened shitposting. Right now he's basically mostly talk about his WIPs and his bad behavior.

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25435706

>>25389293
>>25393066
>>25402091
>>25406061
>>25422550
Thanks for the kind words, anons. See you later if the next chapter ever comes out.
and no, it's not a sequel to anything

>> No.25435798

>>25435574
Holy shit when did it become October!?

>> No.25435834

>>25435657
>grudging respect pekofag
He doesn't read anybody else's work. He will never be a part of this community, no matter how much he writes. Not to mention he's only writing because that retard bugfag is paying him. Yet he still feels entitled to shitpost here constantly. Fuck him.

>> No.25436232

>>25435706
I really hope a next chapter does come out, you've really got most of us hooked just from that first chapter.

>> No.25436486

>>25435798
I wasn't counting the christmas special

>> No.25436785

>>25409171
Aut Mi-chan sounds aight
Rushia when written sounds too much like Russia for me, and Botan is the same as a Russian slang word for "nerd", yet you don't see me whining about any of it anywhere

>> No.25436955

>>25417190
Get mental help.

>> No.25437284

>>25433870
I guess this means that the true mark of a successful series is not in how many (You)s you get but if you somehow break someone into being a schizo anti for You.

>> No.25437384

>>25437284
counterpoint: AA has zero schizos and his series is the top dog

>> No.25437617

>>25437384
Almost like this is CHfag himself desperately trying to deflect ordinary criticism away from himself.

>> No.25437993

>>25436785
Honestly I like Neko-chan for a 'serious' nickname for Mikeneko that doesn't run into the Mike problem.
>>25437384
Isn't Pekofag basically AA's schizo?

>> No.25438002

>>25437617
'ordinary criticism'

>> No.25438047

>>25437993
Pekofag is AA's lover.

>> No.25438123

>>25438002
That's right. You're getting all flustered over someone calling you a lazy menhera. You're an embarrassment.

>> No.25438456

Man it is fucking weird how CHanon has somehow gotten a schizo for two of their fics.
This oddly reminds me of that schizo that brought up Miss Sakura entirely to shit on it in unrelated discussions here.

>> No.25438468

>>25432973
What a coincidence, I was thinking of a bittersweet time travel fic where you go back in time, meeting your past self and spilling the beans about all your(soon to be) regrets, especially in trying to court a chuuba who was your childhood friend. But try as you might with your current knowledge, things just don't seem to work out and to make things worse your past self seems to be filled with more stress from the pressure of "fixing" the future. In the end, you secretly have to sabotage your past self's upcoming confession with said chuuba, all for the sake of saving her, and saving yourself.

having to watch yourself have your heartbroken by her once more, and this time you know it's your fault

>> No.25438511

>>25438456
Motivationposting may have been a bad idea in retrospect.

>> No.25438673

>>25438456
>two of their fics.
what's the other one? i thought CHanon only did CH

>> No.25438738

>>25438047
I guess that's why they haven't been so uppity

>> No.25438899

>>25438738
Pretty much, all his cybering is kept confined to AA's inbox
God I don't want to imagine what scrolling down the list of emails would feel like

>> No.25439481

>>25438673
A Sora greentext from awhile back where you're her friend who doesn't know about idols and cause a big yab when pictures emerge of you and her together.

>> No.25439936

>>25438899
Sounds like you know something we don't.

>> No.25440484

Time to kill this thread.

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>>25440484
NOT IF I KILL YOU FIRST!

>> No.25441011

>>25439481
And the whole agency spergs out and gaslights its other viewers into believing you are just a lucky talent that gets couching from Sora
And you now need to keep it up for a year or however long the training arc and the standard contract are

>> No.25441051

>>25440484
Anon...
Bump limit is 310.
You're an idiot

>> No.25441934

>>25441051
>You're an idiot, Anon! Play the record!

>> No.25442076

>>25420912
tarot.fortunetellingfun.com
Late, but I recommend this site. It's fairly in depth in the descriptions, and has a bunch of obscure cards.

>> No.25442507

>>25442076
There's more cards than the Major and Minor Arcana?

>> No.25442602

>>25442076
Thanks

>> No.25442660

>>25442507
Yes, you can easily google it.

>> No.25442675

>>25440484
Bump limit is 310.

>> No.25442763

Luna impregnation.

>> No.25442984

>>25442507
Depends on the deck. The oldest known deck, for example, had Faith and Hope Arcana. There's also the Thoth Arcana swapping out Judgement for Aeon, Strength for Lust, Temperance for Art, etc. That's all just off the top of my head, too. I'm sure there's more.

>> No.25443050

I want to rape the Baby Luna Rape Anon!

>> No.25443057

New thread
>>25442725

>> No.25443524
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>>25443057
I want to pump this adorable baby-voiced retard full of my children, and spend my nights being nursed to sleep on her elite breastmilk.

>> No.25443873

>>25443524
Shame the new thread will die soon.

>> No.25443951
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>>25443524
Based beyond belief

>> No.25443965

>>25443873
pattern recognition tells me that someone will bump it with a picture of AZKi

>> No.25444636

>>25438899
Like Atlas holding the world upon his shoulders, Pekofag's ERP is held back

>> No.25445268

/wg/ is finally dead.

>> No.25445269

>page 11
sex

>> No.25445316

>>25445268
Good.

>> No.25445344

>>25443951
Everything about her body drives me wild man, you have no idea.


Why does Hololive have so many 10/10 designs that cater directly to my dick.

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