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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>24873523

>> No.25011442
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.25011465
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>24873541
Story recap! There... were five stories posted last thread.

Building Block Doll: Chapter 15 and 16: Tags: Sora, Suisei, Lamy, Roboco, cute, ageplay, light omaroshi, omutsu, fluff:>>24874374 >>24982680

Drink and Be Merry: Tags: SFW, Mori, Fluff:>>24901376

Towa breast expansion: Tags: Towa, breast expansion, greentext:>>25005242

Chammers Mouth Play: Tags: Haato/Haachama, NSFW, Mouth focused:>>25006852

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

You are in a loving relationship with Kanata, born out of your mutual love of music.:>>24874352

Nurse Kanata's applying CBT to You after you cheat on her. She makes sure you'll never cheat again..:>>24878248

A fic about Laplus dancing and celebrating while Fubuki falls to her knees in anguish, tears streaming down her face after they compare the box office of Morbius and The Batman:>>24892361

A fic about Bae's origin, and how she and Sana meet and become friends, enabling each other's chaotic energy and then annoying the shit out of kronii:>>24892637

You have been a childhood friend of Sora's ever since kindergarten. You two have been attending the same schools ever since then. The both of you are now in High School and are now both seniors. Graduation Day is also only two weeks from now.:>>24900407

Selen visits Petra to ask her about Rosemi's recent disappearance case only to find a secret basement filled with plants that have fleshy malformed growths resembling the rose girl's various body parts, as part of a grafting experiment:>>24909920

Anya and Petra meeting and having hot lesbian sex with each other.:>>24912264

Towa put on a bit of weight so she approaches her local nurse Kanatan to help work it off. Kanata prescribes Towa some "appetite suppressants" (which actually increase her appetite) and chastises her for inevitably blimping up while also tricking her into "depending" on her:>>24912635

Being hypnotized by Gura:>>24954412

Punching Shion's belly while she begs you to keep going harder during rough babymaking sex!:>>24968918

You are a friend of a meek animal chuubas and like to tease about how meek and shy she is. One day she trip above you and pinned you down when she realize just how weak human are she is determined to have her way with you:>>24971707

Having an affair with Aki!:>>24974595

An extremely long-lived chuuba has fallen in love with (You), but due to your relatively short life-span she feels as if it's a curse to love.:>>24976680

(You) try to jerk off in a bathroom stall, unable to calm yourself down before supervising the girls' dance practice.:>>24976987

Ame confesses to you, but then you wake up.:>>24980977

Nyanners does a stream where she uses her true Outer God form rather than the cute pink catgirl.:>>24988327

Last night I had a dream where I went to the coast with a group of chuubas and we stayed at an old beach house.:>>24995154

Suisei Breast Expansion.:>>25001635

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>>25011431
Oi, Get up.

>> No.25017060

>>25011660
Legit feels like the archive will have more prompts than stories with the amount these are posted

>> No.25018171

>>25017060
Anon what do you mean?
Prompts are only archived if the anon takes the effort to forward it to the prompt archive.
Otherwise they're basically forgotten about.

>> No.25018188
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Any updates on Gen 0 Gets Buff, or whatever the new writeanon is calling it, where AZKi becomes the ultimate hyper pecs omnimuscle goddess? I was kind of hyped hearing the new anon was into fmg.

Good luck on Gen 0 Gets Buff, whoever here decides to give it a shot. I know it's been dropped twice. She would look so much nicer with gigantic pecs...

>> No.25018846

From the start of that Towa BE fic
>(Based on the idea that Towa breast size depends on her mood, as said by her mama Rurudo)
Source on that quote but that sounds like her mama's pretty damn based from that

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>>25018188
Sorry mate, this is the closest thing you're going to get to a hololive gets buff anything

>> No.25019392

>>25018188
Anon, I'm going to be honest with you here.
I am 99% confident none of the thread's regular writers are writing that prompt.
There is more of a chance that a netorare prompt gets picked up than your Female Muscle Growth thing

>> No.25022158

>>25011431
I want her to rape me so bad. Too bad she's a bottom.

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>>25022158
But what about when she was young and in heat?

>> No.25023191

>>25018171
oh didn't know

>> No.25024946

>page 10 in 30 minutes
The fuck is happening now?

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>>25011465
Kiara and Reine in the Maldives come across the harem guy they encountered the night before. Harem guy goes full hentai protagonist and aggressively tries to woo the two of them, starting with small talk and treats them to lunch, then escalates to dirty talk accompanied with inappropriate touching, caressing and groping. The guy then slides his hands under their clothes and starts fingering them, which makes Kiara and Reine unwillingly horny to the point that they begin to reluctantly want to get dicked.

>> No.25025517

>>25022158
Most girls are

>> No.25026533 [DELETED] 

Am I free?

>> No.25026587

>>25026533
Free from what?

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>>25026533
Not until you finish your WIPs may you regain your ability to cum.

>> No.25026818

>>25026587
The Bahamas. Seems I am.

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>>25026818
>he doesn't know how to dodge the mandatory vacation

>> No.25027242

>>25026818
Anon, I don't know how to say it gently; but you weren't sent to the bahamas. You were kidnapped, trained and sent to the malvinas to accompany Reine and Kiara during their vacation.

>> No.25027619

>>25025029
and then he prone bones Kiara's asshole while Reine watches, and then he gives her the same treatment

>> No.25027723
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Fox Family Christmas doko?

>> No.25028333

>>25027723
Dunno, would really like to read that. Maybe next Christmas.

Pekofag's done some Fubuki fluff, though, so look forward to that soon. It's not a fucked up fetish this time

>> No.25028664

>>25028333
What did you mean by this?
The question was asking when the Miyuki/Fubuki fic was coming out.

>> No.25029001

>>25028664
Uh, yeah? And I responded to that. I just assumed you were looking forward to more Fubuki, so off-handedly mentioned something else coming up.

>> No.25029186

>>25029001
Oh.
I thought Pekofag hated Fubuki?

>> No.25029224

>>25029186
Loves money though.

>> No.25029443

>>25029224
Ok then.
Assuming you're the bugfag, I'll await that fluffy Fubuki fic involving her romancing an insect.

>> No.25029576

>>25029186
I don't think he does? Never asked, though.

>>25029443
No insects. Or monstrosities of any kind. Normal vanilla sex.

>> No.25029795

>>25029576
Pretty sure Pekofag was the one who hated Fubuki if only due to how popular she was, but that's just a burning memory.

>> No.25029948

>>25029576
>Normal vanilla sex.
Ah, I say sex, but it's just oral.

>> No.25030150

>>25029795
I mean I vaguely remember them making a multi paragraph response talking about their hate for Fubuki and holoEN but that might have been another schizo.

>> No.25030515

>>25029795
A burning memory.... reminds me of that one fic. What was its name again? I... I forgot.

>> No.25030728

>>25030515
Unironically I think it was a Mumei fic that never got archived since the author made it clear it was supposed to be a wip...
A wip that never got finished.

>> No.25030853

>>25029795
I don't hate Fubuki, she is one of the GOATs of Hololive. I'm pretty sure I mentioned, or made it quite clear even, that I hated the worship culture she had garnished in this place, not Fubuki herself, but that's a thing from the distant past. I don't particularly care anymore.

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>>25011442
Also here's the fic as mentioned. Possibly my first non fetish fic ever made? I guess I did write the Sora one way back, but that was a whole year ago. Unless of course you count face riding as a fetish. I'm not particularly good at cunnilingus but the blowjob scene should sate your needs.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSyg0GM21xEyRCxJWmf2ZAgmkfrRt1UfiaSVlUrIQhus6nKjMs6Y2edfVEXc_kpce_Z-beLoEeyksIN/pub

Tags: NSFW, Fubuki, fluff, cunnilingus, blowjob

>> No.25031591

>>25030728
Damn, there's at least two Mumei-dementia fics floating around.

>> No.25031869

>>25031591
No wait I'm retarded.
It did get archived. It just never got finished.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQQVMHZG7PmG0YMQnDDceclofk2HGf-q0RBLz8gQ2TnEM-3hwzao9PiOILg0IDplOq0MWA3DrC8l5kv/pub

>> No.25033800

>>25031869
They forgot the plot...

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>> No.25037001

>>25031255
Goddamn, this was incredibly hot. I've never been much into eating a girl out, but the way you described the actions were so hot. I'm a bit disappointed there was no penetration, but it was still quite enjoyable.
I suck at giving criticism, so I'll just say that I'm glad to see more NORMAL Fubuki fics being posted and that you did a great job, Pekoanon.
Good job!

>> No.25038925

tumbleweed.gif

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>> No.25042188

>>25040295
Fucking slut, flashing her ass at us in the end

>> No.25043589
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>>25042188
Nene's no slut, she's just showing off for her husband. Nothing wrong with that!

>> No.25043649

>>25043589
I'm not her husband and I get a free pass to watching it. I guess this means you're a cuck

>> No.25043942

>>25043649
How am I the cuck when YOU'RE the one watching? I get to spend my nights with Nene, you don't.

>> No.25044074

>>25043942
So you're saying if your wife sends nudes to other men, you're not being cucked because they are only watching her?

>> No.25044377

>>25044074
Bro I ain't a cuck for showing a video of my wife dancing

>> No.25044790

>>25044377
If she's flaunting her ass to the camera, and you want to show it, that's pretty weird man

>> No.25044884

>>25043649
>>25044074
>>25044790
I'm pretty certain the dudes watching are distinctly more cuck-like in this situation than the SO. If anything he's more of a netori type, gets off on flaunting his comparative success to thirsty losers.

>> No.25045635

>>25044884
Not if they aren't watching the girl getting fucked. In this case, someone watching someone else's girlfriend naked is, in theory, more of a homewrecker than a cuck.

>> No.25045787

>>25045635
I see those little manlets stroking their virgin microdicks to the mere sight of my chuuba wife's assets, meanwhile I'm balls deep in her ass every night, it's empowering. You see the merit in letting them have a look?

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>>25045787
I personally think it would be more empowering if only I could see her naked, but you do you I guess

>> No.25045966

being able to have sex with your wife publicly while other guys can only watch is kinda of a chad move, even though i wouldn't like it much personally

>> No.25046609

>>25045966
It's animalistic and barbaric. We have evolved past it. Nothing chad about regression

>> No.25046645

>>25046609
animalist and barbaric sex is the best part of it

>> No.25047868

>>25036122
Botan cute

>> No.25047906

What are you working on writeanons?

>> No.25048399

>>25047906
smut...

>> No.25048647

>>25047906
Give me a number between one and ten and I'll start work that one

>> No.25048674

>>25048647
7

>> No.25048734
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>>25048674
Gen 3 Reverse Isekai, got it

>> No.25049001

>>25048734
who dat in the bottom right

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>>25049001
don't worry about it

>> No.25049227

>>25049094
i miss his beyblade autism

>> No.25049346

>>25048734
What were the other choices?

>> No.25049383

>>25049001
A ghost in a flower.

>> No.25049454

>>25037001
glad you enjoyed it. next time she gets eaten by a group of ants, so look forward to that

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>>25049454
Romantically, right?

>> No.25049890

>>25049454
a couple of ants have a candlelit dinner by her, sure

>> No.25049957

>>25049732
No, voraciously.

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>>25049346
To and Fro's sequel, The Hades-esque "escaping from the Underworld and Mommy Mori" thing, Breeding Lui while Mori watches, Buck Breaking San, Yandere Holomyth grooms a Homostar (You), a highschool Flare Noel threesome, Mumei helping you kill the rest of EN because they introduced magic and its consequences which have been a disaster for the human race, a post apocalyptic HoloX thing, and being part of a small crew on a space station when Sana shows up and everyone starts going insane.

>> No.25050166

>>25049998
> The Hades-esque "escaping from the Underworld and Mommy Mori"
>this is in the back-burner
Sad. Mommy Mori makes me not hate her.

>> No.25050173

>>25049998
...
Man we have a lot of authors with 10+ WIPs huh? Thought you were someone else.

>> No.25050762

>>25047906
About halfway through Building Block Doll's chapter 17 and I'm experimenting with a plot path for Lazy Oni. I'm not sure if it'll work or not just yet.

>> No.25051124

>>25050762
>Lazy Oni
Whatever plot path you pick I hope you pick a tone for it and stick with it. I may have already said this before but the worst part of the pre-rewrite version of Lazy Oni's ending was the 'skipping' of the foreshadowed stuff and the out of tone ending .

>> No.25051176

>>25051124
yeah. This is going to have a lot more between now and the end. I just want to figure out how to do it right. I have a few ideas and I want to write each one out and see how they go. I may even post all of them and see which people like most, if that's something the thread would be interested in

>> No.25051281

>>25049998
>Yandere Holomyth grooms a Homostar (You)
>Mumei helping you kill the rest of EN because they introduced magic and its consequences which have been a disaster for the human race
Absolutely based ideas. Especially the latter, it would be the first story to actually tackle both Mumei's lore and her actual somewhat-psycho personality.

>> No.25052485

>>25051281
At this point based has lost its original meaning, hasn't it?

>> No.25052624

>>25052485
I dunno I still see 'based' get used for patting someone on the back for their unironic opinions. Even if I do also see it more used for ironic purposes.

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>>25052624
True, though now it's used mostly to mean "something I like" kind of how chad now means "person I like" it's a sad state of affairs.

>> No.25053678

>>25053539
every lingo would deviate from its original meaning sooner or later, but yes it is a sad state of affair

>> No.25054885

>>25049998
>The Hades-esque "escaping from the Underworld and Mommy Mori"
>being part of a small crew on a space station when Sana shows up and everyone starts going insane.
These sound potentially interesting.

>>25053539
It's okay, Calli. We all know you're a boomer.

>> No.25055952

Would it be too weird/immersion breaking if a story involving dice rolls had a smut scene and in that smut scene had those dice rolls appear?

>> No.25056061

>>25055952
I pretty much skip anything with more numbers than 2 + 2

>> No.25056082

>>25055952
I think would take me out of it unless it's meant to be comedic

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>>25055952
I think it would be pretty immersion-breaking unless it's comedic like what >>25056082 said or not meant to be sexy like that one chapter of Holofantasy with Fubuki. If it's any of those two then it's fine but if it's meant to be intimate or sexy then I think it would be best if you put the dice rolls at the end for the readers to see

>>25049998
>a highschool Flare Noel threesome
One day we'll get a NoeFure threesome story but that day is not today. Gen 3 reverse isekai sounds fun and interesting at least, is it gonna be similar to Holoreality or is it gonna be something entirely different?

>> No.25056727

>>25056502
So I should just put something like a success or failure tag based on the dice rolls results rather than have them be shown?
t. Twineanon

>> No.25057306

>>25048734
I hope you don't neglect Rushia from the story. Even if she is gone she was still a part of Gen 3

>> No.25057341

https://archiveofourown.org/works/33574702/chapters/98174538
>Chapter 15: Ceres Fauna (Hololive En)- Extreme Viewer Integration: Machine Bondage, Animal Shaped Dildo, Creampie, Mindbreak
woah
can't say much about the characterization though

>> No.25057465

>>25056727
I mean, that depends on what sort of emotion you want the readers to feel. Do you want them to chuckle? Do you want them to feel unease? Horny? Excited? If you want an example then go read chapter 4 of Holofantasy to see an example of what you're trying to go for
https://docs.google.com/document/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vQFanuJ1NrVy3mu2BcdWnoIQDGIyflKzLWhFE3vp2LLuZoohmo1nX6oMTXlatgMAMWoV9WdI_NUyqNs/pub
Also, Twineanon? First time I heard that name, what'd you work on if I may ask?

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>>25056502
It's somewhat similar, as it's from the same idea, but we're going in different directions.

>>25057306
I started it before she was iced and she was gonna be the main girl. Still will, I'm not entirely put off by everything that happened.

>> No.25057730

>>25057465
That's the name someone on the thread has given me and I'm sticking with it since I am actively developing a twine game for the thread.
As for what I've released to the thread as of now it's just Curse and Lui's Lap Pillow.
>>25057568
...
Oh god you were the other anon that released a fic/chapter based on the holoreality prompt.

>> No.25059425

>>25055952
I'd probably put them in a folder that's closed by default during the scene. That, or save them all for the end. Assuming it's not supposed to be comedic or surrealist.

>> No.25059556

>>25057341
>woah
>can't say much about the characterization though
Yeah, this'd fit say, Marine just better.

>> No.25059583

What is the end bit of a devil's tail called?

>> No.25059613

>>25059556
*much better.

>> No.25059660

>>25059583
The tip? The traditional one ends in a spade.

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>>25059660
A spade is just a reverse heart, great indication that she's a whore

>> No.25059754

>>25059660
Yeah that. Thank you.

>> No.25060831

>>25056502
>Flare without her knife ears

Give them back you piece of shit I'll fucking kill you

>> No.25061483

>>25060831
I wish there was an image of taking a knife to Flare or Lamy's ear while they cry and beg for you to stop

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>>25061483
I will kill you. Don't test me on this. I'll go to court and get thrown in jail, I don't care.

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>>25061483
I wish you'd stop breathing

>> No.25062210

>>25061483
Based. Those pointed ears are disgusting. It makes me nauseous every time I see them.

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>>25062210
In a just, fair society, people like you would be hanged in front of an audience as a lesson on what bad morals gets a person.

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>>25062547
Imagine defending that disgusting mongrel creature with disgusting knife ears and a snobby sense of superiority just because she lives longer.

>> No.25062972

>>25062547
>defending elves

>> No.25063248

>>25062913
>>25062972
NTA but you put a hand on my soon-to-be loveslave I will destroy you

>> No.25063307

How would you guys like corruption stories to go? Like what sort of fucked up shit do you like your female characters to go through to turn from innocent naive girls to full on sluts?

>> No.25063386

>>25063307
No drugs, no urinating, no retarded babbling, preferably no smoking but if it's Towa or Ayame it's alright. She needs to get bred by a dog or else there's no point to corrupting her

>> No.25063530

>>25060831
>>25061483
>>25061926
>>25061968
>>25062210
>>25062547
>>25062913
>>25062972
>mfw this is giving me inspiration for a touching saviourfag story

Shame I'm so tired. Hope this inspiration stays in the morning.

Also elf abusers and elf racists get the rope.

>> No.25063926

>>25063530
I'd be down for accepting dwarves or even robotkin, but elves? Fucking bastards, there's not one interpretation of them to be liked. They always act like they are sooo much better than everyone else and rarely do they help the lesser races. Disgusting fucking creatures need to be served as goblin breeding sows

>> No.25064061

>>25063926
Actually scratch that, dwarves and their bearded women are pretty disgusting, but if I never had to see their female counterpart, they are pretty cool

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>>25063530
I hate elves so much that I will genocide a city of elf looking cat people just because I think they're elves.

>> No.25064360

>>25063307
Personally I'd like there to be a point where they 'jump off the slippery slope' and actually willingly become evil.

>> No.25064433

>>25063307
Pretty much "I don't want this but I have to, or else X will happen" and then whilst doing it they keep getting pushed further and further. This doujin is perfect example:
[Chonmage Teikoku (Magekichi)] Nishida-san wa Netorareru

>> No.25065119

>>25063307
Corrupting Nene is still my favorite in that regard, and it isn't even sexual corruption. Just gradually making her do worse and worse things until she's even willing to kill her own friends

>> No.25066421
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25066421

Where is everyone? We are 130 posts in and there's been virtually no activity when compared to last thread. Is the weekend debuff real?

>> No.25066471

>>25066421
I'm trying out the ER Coop mod.

>> No.25066658

>>25066421
My bad, I got exams and shit. Once they're over I'll write some more.

>> No.25066865

>>25066421
Preparing for anime boston, I wager?

>> No.25066933

>>25066421
Sorry i got work and shit while also thinking of different ways I can fuck up my fake virtual daughter.

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25067425

>>25011465
You are Ina's childhood bully, bullying her from kindergarten to highschool. Until one day you lose contact with her after she finds a strange book from the library, and goes to use her new eldritch power for revenge. Only to find that she can't use her powers like this and gets bullied one last time.

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>>25067425
Stupid fucking korean dog, you wanna do revenge, huh? That shit I did to you in high school? I'm gonna make you forget all about it when compared to the shit I'm about to do to you now.

>> No.25067870

>>25066421
I'M AWAKE! Here I am.

>> No.25068323

I wonder if Reine likes any of the stories in the archive

>> No.25068446
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>>25068323
Who do you think AA gets his money from?

>> No.25068734

>>25068323
If its in AO3 as well, she has most likely read them.
Although /mep/ is certain that she doesn't read the abuse fics. Reine did say she is fond of sweet & fluff fics. Most likely yuri fluff.

>> No.25069315

>>25068446
>the archive is secretly funded by the Indonesian broadcasting industry
I guess even good SEAdogs exist

>> No.25069367

>>25069315
>needs to be mental gymnastics for good seaniggers to exist
you love to see it

>> No.25069385

>>25068734
Honestly Reine seems like the type where she'd be the most likely holo to find this place, but also the least likely holo to actually stick around and read stuff here past a few.

>> No.25069435

>>25069385
That's a GOOD thing

>> No.25069567

>>25069385
I think she has the sense to avoid the weirder stuff.

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>>25069567
>avoid the weirder stuff
>avoid

>> No.25070014

>>25069945
You know Reine isn't even in the top 10 for degenerate holos.

>> No.25070086

>>25070014
I know that what she chooses to show you on-stream isn't representative of her full spectrum of interests.

>> No.25070245

>>25070014
>Reine is the one begging for more yuri
>She just keeps getting fucked by men

>> No.25070578

>>25069435
What you don't want your oshi to dogwhistle a line from one of your fics and collectively cause /wg/ to have a breakdown?

>> No.25070759
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I'm about to get banned for 3 days again... before I go... please read my fic... change the world, my final message... goodbye

>> No.25070828

>>25070759
>please read my fic.
which is?

>> No.25071015

>>25070828
Maybe it's PF asking us to read the Fubuki fic?

>> No.25071045

>>25071015
ah, you should, it's very good

>> No.25071424

>>25063307
A great corruption's got three important parts to it IMO. First, whether contrived by a malicious party or coincidental, the event that starts it is ideally mundane, like, she gets comfortable doing something minor that would've seemed vulgar or taboo to her earlier in life. Maybe it's smoking a cig, maybe it's wearing hotpants out on the town, maybe it's killing Count Dooku instead of just beating him. Having it start simply like that instead as a result of, say, blackmail or something, makes the whole thing feel a lot more avoidable in retrospect and thus all the sweeter and more corrupt.

Next, there should a few steps of degeneration going forward from that, and there're loads of different ways they can be executed/paced, but somewhere down the line, there should be a sobering moment where something makes her realize how far she's fallen. Someone calling her out on what she's become, her noticing part of her daily routine isn't how she remembered it, whatever, but she needs to vehemently deny it/justify herself regardless of the facts.

Finally, there's the breaking point: she's given an opportunity to redeem/reform herself, in either a small or big way, seriously considers giving up and going back to her old ways, and then willingly chooses to descend further into corruption, accepting what she's become and reveling in the degeneracy of it.

>> No.25071509

>>25071424
This feels like it's meant for narrative centered corruption rather than mind break style corruption.

>> No.25071647

>>25071509
Mind break is cringe. The hottest type of downfall is the least excusable one

>> No.25072013

>>25070245
Hot.
Imagine Reine reading yuri smut, lying on a backless couch all the while one guy gropes and sucks her tits while another fondles her ass and thighs and simultaneously fucks her womanhood.

>> No.25072048

>>25031255
This was fucking great. Not really a whole lot to say because it was basically just pussy eating and a blowjob, but the lack of variety was made up for with the detail and range of expression put into both. Top shelf product. Refreshing to see something from you that isn't some weird fetish.

>> No.25072139

>>25071045
Nah, he won't read anyone else's so I won't read his.

>> No.25072166

>>25072139
lol that's fair enough

>> No.25072366

>>25063307
I wanna see some more loss-of-control style corruption where the girl slowly loses control of her body and tries to fight and break free but the corruptor makes her do sexual stuff she hates but gradually begins to unwillingly feel good. Eventually she starts to reluctantly give the corruptor more control over her body until she goes full slut and essentially becomes a fuck puppet.

>> No.25073632
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Clean shaven clussy, just the way God intended

>> No.25073669

>>25073632
This guy's legs are always simultaneously appealing and strange to look at from the knee down when they go chicken mode

>> No.25074372

Finally read that latest chapter of Your Time is Gonna Come, and damn I don't really understand their prolapse fetish but that was really fucking hot. Love the fluffy intro at the start as well, the dialogue flowed really well while having a nice personality to it.

>> No.25075753

>>25063386
>>25064360
>>25064433
>>25065119
>>25071424
>>25072366
Thanks for the responses. I've found some material and references on how far I want to corrupt Miyuki.
Right now my current idea for the plot is that after the rejection she finds her manager to seek some comfort from him and the manager takes advantage of her and keeps on pushing her to do more depraved shit which leads to gangbang fan meets, getting fucked live on stream and more. If ya'll got any more ideas I'm still open for them!

>> No.25076050

>>25075753
As long as it still features Miyuki ordering Fubuki to get raped so she can finally fuck her dad I'll fucking read this ride to hell.

>> No.25076291

>>25075753
Try to also add some form of 'reward' proportional to whatever she does, so that she has a reason to be reluctant but willing.

>> No.25076456

>>25011465
Lamy intends to go on a vacation back home to Unylia but she needs someone to fill in for her while she's back home.
Good thing she found You. It won't be that hard just study up and use the voice changer program, Everything's perfectly setup for you to fill in.
No one will ever notice the difference After all Lamy is streaming
Tags: BECOME LAMY

>> No.25076798

>>25075753
if this actually gets finished i'm probably going to end up getting fanart of it done

>> No.25076807

>>25076456
Plot twist: At the end it's revealed the Lamy that made you cover for her wasn't even the original and (You) feel the need to go back to your homeland on a vacation. Thankfully you know someone who can cover for you.

>> No.25077855

>>25076807
The question is: Just how many Lamy have been created streamed for a bit went home and left another Lamy there.
Thankfully Lamy's family back home live in a mansion so all the Lamy there shouldn't be that much of a problem.

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25080803

Hey, You.
Go back to an old thread from last year an repost an interesting prompt or idea.

>> No.25081146

>>25080803
You wriggle up Lamy's ass and wear her like a suit.

>> No.25081226

>>25080803

>>6230179
(You) are a young assistant being groomed by Pochi-mama and was kidnapped by Reine to see if you are truly a man worthy of her mama.
Pochi arrived, knocked out the Black Ops and scold Reine for pulling her assistant away when there is a deadline coming up.
It ends in oyakodon sex

>> No.25081891

>>25081146
Wasn't this one made?

>> No.25082090

>>25081891
So? Wasn't anything in the question about that, and still made me giggle.

>> No.25082263

>>25080803
Got it boss
>With Lamy being so eager to get Noel's milk the snow elf decides getting a bottle of it isn't enough and wants to get it from the tap
Lamy x Noel, F/F, Lactation, Cowgirl(?)
Possible Expansion of idea
>Lamy starts lactating too, and the two end up doing a titty-sucking 69 until they run completely dry, bellies distended and drunk on titty milk.

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>>25080803
>>8953686
>polka sticks a chinese fingertrap on your cock, and laughs as you frantically try to pull it off.
This sounds fucking hilarious.
>>8995357
>Forcing Ayame to eat Hummus for breakfast everyday
I have no clue why this prompt was made, or what connection Ayame has with hummus but it's so fucking random and I like it.

>> No.25083222

>>25082753
I think it's because of the Ayame IBS rrat, and the fact that allegedly eating hummus can cause or make that condition worse.

>> No.25083403

>>25083222
kek

>> No.25083892

>>25083222
I want Ayame to shut down my throat.

>> No.25083962

>>25083892
*shit

>> No.25084162

>>25083892
it was better before you corrected it

>> No.25084331

Would you guys rather read a chuuba's perspective in 2nd or 3rd person? Especially for corruption fics?

>> No.25084639

>>25084331
I'd go with third person. I think making dumb or difficult decisions is easier to empathize with in third person.

>> No.25084814

>>25084331
As a writer, I have a preference for third person due to its versatility in writing, but as a reader, I have no preference.

>> No.25084980

>>25084331
Anon you don't have to disguise that this is the miyuki fic anymore the secret's out of the bag.
My personal opinion is that here the best perspective would be first person to have an inner view to miyuki and her getting in progressively shittier situations as well as getting an internal monologue to her fall and corruption... but given that you're not giving that as an option I take it you're not experienced enough to write that.
So with the option between 2nd or 3rd, I'd go with third person limited miyuki pov so that a similar effect can occur... While also reserving the 2nd person PoV for the last few scenes that go out of her perspective and into (You), her father seeing from the outside just how far she has fallen from grace.

>> No.25085419

>>25084639
>>25084814
>>25084980
Sorry for asking so many questions but I'll go with 3rd person then! I haven't written anything in so long due to work so I just want some advice from the experienced writers here before tackling a big project.

>> No.25086235

>>25085419
It's fine anon, everyone that writes has been in that position before. Anyway, there's nothing wrong with asking questions. Perhaps some other prospective writer might find it useful.

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>> No.25089530

>>25089370
God he's hot

>> No.25089617

>>25011465
Spurred on by a sudden and uncontrollable urge from the Old Ones' influence, Ina finds herself compelled to systematically consume and digest all of her coworkers. At first she finds it horrifying and traumatizing, but eventually grows to find sexual pleasure in the sensations of being filled so fully and snuffing a life out.

>> No.25089716

>>25011465
Ina has normal, consensual sex with her boyfriend (You) aka me

>> No.25090267

>>25089716
Then you wake up to find it was actually a dream, and you were actually getting jacked off in your sleep by her tentacles while she was busy burning the midnight oil drawing a commissioned piece.

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>>25090267
That's fine by me but I prefer her using your cum as ivory paint for the canvas. To be honest I just really want to rub my dick against Ina's deliciously flat chest, is that really that much to ask?

>> No.25090980

>>25090647
Why do you think you were getting jacked off in your sleep?

>> No.25091449

>>25071424
This is me on corruption, too. Well, not necessarily the first bit. Also reflects a lot of my tastes on MC in general.

>>25071509
Mind break is boring, personally. "I orgasmed so hard I'm a slut now?" Yawn. It can be nice as part of a narrative, but on its own? I'll pass.

>>25080803
>Ina likes (You), but is too embarrassed to ask any of her friends for advice. So she turns to the worst possible source for advice, The Ancient Ones.
>Cue Ina mindfucking you into being a willing thrall.

>>25084331
No strong feelings, honestly. Heck, do first person if you want.

>>25085419
It's fine.

>> No.25093038

>>25022945
Man she was busty even as a kid

>> No.25093137

>>25047906
Final chapter of Say Can You See. I hate everything.

>> No.25093188

>>25093137
Wait already? I thought there was gonna be more.

>> No.25093496

submitted some gurgle gut trash into the prompt list in case anyone has the same brain rot that I do

>> No.25093500

>>25093188
There could be, but not for the Japan arc

>> No.25093630

>>25093500
Oh I'm glad. You had me worried there for a second.

>> No.25093763

>>25066421
I'm dividing my attention between learning a second language and writing. It's not an easy thing to accomplish

>> No.25094075

>>25070759
God I wish Anya was more interesting. A fic about finding her blade form in the middle of a Dark Souls style slow apocalypse would be pretty cool. Except, you know, she’s a non-entity.

>> No.25094393
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>>25094075
Fuck the sword

>> No.25095166

>>25094075
I mean, she's pretty snarky. You could lean into that. Maybe pair her up with Fubuki, who she's a huge fangirl of, and have her swap from sarcasm to simping repeatedly?

>>25094393
That sounds like a good way to lose your dick. Remember, everything on her is sharp.

>> No.25095668

>>25095166
What if her being such a snarky brat is just her hiding her sadness from being unable to be touched without harming or killing?
>Be anon, experienced adventurer
>Find an ornamental dagger in a castle after wiping out its (hostile) inhabitants
>Dagger turns out to be cursed to bond with whoever picks it up, and is also a snarky brat
>You're now stuck with a sassy loli who berates you when you wield her dagger form
>Can see through the act, mostly because of the looks she shoots you while she thinks you're not looking
>Becoming the strongest being alive so you can give Anya her first hug that doesn't kill someone

>> No.25096856

>>25095668
I'd read it.

>> No.25097026
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>>25094075
You chubby cheek punk kid wannabe - wannabes can't even begin to comprehend the 4'9 frame, the orange steel frame that drapes behind her back aka the bullet proof sheath, the blank eye stare with 1080p LED 3D sony technology. What does the ID stand for? It stands for intellectual, it stands for dapper, it stands for everything you little fanboys would want to be. Violence, speed, momentum. She's at the tippity top and she's only gonna go up. Welcome to the arena boys, enjoy your stay.

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>>25011442
Wrote something based off that one greentext about Gawr being a brat. She messes with you in line at a grocery store and then you correct her.

https://rentry.org/9wrbs

tags: Gawr, NSFW, ryona, rape

>> No.25099321

>>25031255
Reading this, I was like
Do you have any idea what fox piss smells like, even if its just trace amounts
Fubuki's cute but I wouldn't go down on her
Great blowjob though, was hot as fuck

>> No.25099629

>>25074372
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

>> No.25102804
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Dragon Bump

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>>25099321
I wasn't thinking about piss when I commissioned it, to be honest with you. Thinking back, I saw >>24744754 and exploded with ever-suppressed fox lust; think it was just the straw that broke the camel's back, what with the recent Fubuki dry spell

>> No.25105673

>>25089530
For me, it's Izuru.

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>>25102804
How can an image ever be allowed to be this good? Fucking need

>> No.25107357

>>25102804
Geez, haven't seen this one in ages.

>> No.25110732

>>25102804
I can never forgive the chinese for taking her from us...

>> No.25111002

>>25110732
It was chammer's fault.

>> No.25111414

>>25111002
If it didn't happen then, it would've happened later, and be probably even worse. It's like going back in time to prevent 9/11. Ok, now airport security is back to being superlax, then suddenly, we have 10 9/11s on the same day a couple years later. Things happen the way they happen for a reason.

>> No.25111650

>>25111414
9/11 was an inside job.

>> No.25111762

>>25111650
Well would you rather it had been 10 inside jobs?

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>write a new story
>can't figure out what to title it

fuck why are titles so hard

>> No.25112596
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>>25112436
Just call it, "Untitled $ChuubaName Fic".

>> No.25113093

>>25112436
Just copy the names of classic books depending on the theme of the fic.

>> No.25114766
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>>25011442
To Slay a Monster
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQAFKeBw6CVJpCTGYyKojl-9zkRUrfYUZ9wS8aWVtN4IMH1Ma7pqojhGf2Z4VcrJTyHyjDZBgkExYjo/pub

Tags: (you), Flare, fantasy, saviorfag, fluff

This is a working title so it may change in future. The inspiration from last nights chat of Elves being subhuman stuck so I wrote it. Tell me if you want me to dial up the fantasy or keep it more grounded in realism.

>> No.25114807

>>25097245
Now this is some damn fine ryona. The mix of emotion and action work to make something greater. The anger and the detail of the violence work together so damn well here.

>> No.25115918

>>25112596
COMPLETE
GLOBAL
LUNAFICATION

>> No.25118079

>>25093496
Why is that vore prompt tagged with fluff?

>> No.25119804
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>>25114766
It's...interesting. Like a lot of your stuff, it's a little too early to tell as it hasn't hit it's stride yet, but I'll keep reading.

Though, I do find Anon is kind of inconsistent in his actions. One minute he threatens to not pay if she's hurt, but doesn't blink at her getting shot and even slaps her immediately after, only to threaten someone again when they call her a coffee elf. Also, Flares eyes are red, not yellow. Unless that's part of the gradual darkening thing

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>>25114766
About damned time we get a proper daughter-wife fic in his place. What you wrote so far seems promising but I'll reserve judgement until later though consider me still hooked, just dial back a bit on the white-knighting or at least give us some more insight on why Anon acts the way he does especially with the whole "coffee elf" thing when he's pretty much fine with slapping her around. As for the fantasy elements I'd say go wild with it as long as it doesn't overpower the main story too much. The skull of whatever it was that Anon killed is pretty high up there in terms of fantasy stuff so I'm curious to see where you go with it especially if the title is more literal in meaning.
Also minor nitpick: Flare's eyes aren't yellow, I'd describe them as a reddish-orange or just plain red but definitely not yellow.

>> No.25120985

>>25094075
For the longest time I’ve had a series planned where you met Anya after a few long chapters and she reluctantly becomes your sword.

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>> No.25126600

>>25120985
It almost writes itself. Except, again, nobody watches her so nobody knows anything about her.

>> No.25126715

>>25120985
And by your sword you mean becomes your penis, right?

>> No.25128162

>>25094075
all I ever wanted was an anya footjob story

>> No.25130989

>>25011465
Requesting stories of (You) caring for your special needs oshi. Things like quadraplegic girls, wheelchair-bound, on diapers, non-verbal and the like. It would be fun if It turned into abuse, sexual or not.

>> No.25131389

>>25119804
I'll keep working on it then. I'll also be sure to correct her eye color.

>>25120413
Fair enough. I'll keep that in mind and, of course, fix Flare's eyes. Thank you.

>> No.25132647

I have found out that channeling your tilt and anger from a league game towards writing your fic works wonders for trying to write fucked up shit. Good to know.

>> No.25132785

>>25132647
I've hit my breaking point with League recently, every single game my mental goes boom at the retarded teammates, which means I troll, which means I lose more, which means I rage more. I hate this game but I can't stop. League addiction is unironically worse than even some drugs. Anyway, chuubas eh? There's a chuuba in Holo that plays League I think

>> No.25132896

>>25132785
Ayame

>> No.25133427

>>25132785
I think Aqua used to play and stream League.

>> No.25133951

>>25132647
>>25132785
>>25132896
>>25133427
>ASSFAGGOTS
God I hate zoomers.

>> No.25134657

>>25133951
League is from 2010

>> No.25136172

>>25118079
Because it's otherwise just wholesome nonsense. wasn't sure how else to tag it really

>> No.25137362
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>>25011465
Write a scene about your oshi having to watch you die

>> No.25137531

>>25137362
My oshi doesn't know who I am, doesn't care who I am, and doesn't even speak my language. I'm sure empathy'll ensure she has a negative reaction, but compared to someone she cares about - back to business in a couple days. That hurts to think about, so I'd rather not.

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>>25137531
That's why it's fiction, cause all that shit goes without saying. Stupid asshole!

>> No.25137855

>>25137362
I want to but the problem is it lacks the emotional build up. Death scenes for me only have a nice punch to them after being built up through a narrative. Just writing it out without any preamble or prior story just feels so fake to write.

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>> No.25140516

>>25115918
I thought we had Polka turning all into her as after all we all live in Clown World.

>> No.25140582

Anyone have tips for knowing how to edit their fics good?

>> No.25140784

>>25140582
backspace is your friend

>> No.25140877

>>25140784
Do you mean in a less is more sort of way?
I.e I should try and trim the fat and make it so that a scene can land harder with less words.

>> No.25140955
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25140955

Miko's sex appeal is over the fucking roof with how sexy she is in her new outfit

>> No.25141361

>>25140955
reminds me of Mel's outfit

>> No.25141470

>>25140955
Wonder how tight her fartbox is.

>> No.25141667
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25141667

>>25140955
>over the fucking roof
Isn't it "through the fucking roof", not over it?
Regardless, Miko is cute, but Mel is definitely better.

>> No.25142453

>>25140955
I hate that the first thing I thought of upon seeing that image is that a good recolor would make her look like a corrupted Miko compared to her regular outfit.

>> No.25142923

>>25142453
>Succubus Miko acting like a depraved slut instead of a clumsy cute girl
I'd read about it

>> No.25144624

Man, this particular thread has been really quiet.
Is everyone just busy, or has the final yab finally hit this thread?

>> No.25144720

>>25144624
The thread has just gone back to how it used to be last year. It only seems more dead because the board has picked up a lot of speed over the year.

>> No.25144870

>>25144624
Its also nearing summer for most of the world right?
So I'd wager that some of our writers might be busy due to exams or their workplaces getting ready for vacation conditions.

>> No.25145242

>>25140582
Reading it aloud sometimes helps.

>> No.25145704

>>25145242
I've seen this get recommended all over the internet as a bit of generic self-editing advice but has anyone actually done this? I feel like I'd be way to embarrassed to read smut out aloud.

>> No.25147977

>>25114766
ayo what about the mom? it's hard to believe a 10 year old would be anywhere near comfortable with someone like anon who bought her and separated her from her mother (presumably her only supporting her whole life)

>> No.25148206

>>25145704
Bro I sometimes get out of my chair to act out poses when I’m trying to imagine what characters would look like when they’re talking to each other.

>> No.25149102

>>25148206
...
Honestly I'd probably do the same were I not writing in public.

>> No.25149162

>>25148206
And here I thought I was the only one who did that.

>> No.25151667

>>25102804
Why does she have American flag stickers covering her nipples when she isn't American? What's her obsession with a country that she's not affiliated and seems to have negative opinions of?

>> No.25152288

>>25151667
Because every Foreign Talent needs a gimmick whether they're a face or a heel.

>> No.25152330

>>25152288
Sounds boring and talentless

>> No.25152891
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25152891

After Okayu's latest member asmr I have a deep burning desire for Okayu heavy petting

>> No.25154994
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25154994

>>25152891
Because she's a cat that needs to get pet right?

>> No.25155012

>>25154994
Jesus FUCKING Christ she's spreading

>> No.25156124

>>25144720
I guess so, then again I've noticed this general tends to go through a weird boom and bust cycle where every few weeks we fucking zoom through a thread a day before gradually slowing down to something like now where it takes 3 days to go through one until the cycle starts over again and suddenly we're zooming again.

>> No.25156315

>>25154994
Yes, she needs to get pet with my mouth and hands

>> No.25156349

>>25156124
Like I said, its likely due to what people are doing IRL at the moment. Exams, work, vacations, holidays, etc.

>> No.25156895
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25156895

(You) were a knight in service of Luna (I think it's called a retainer?), when she was still a child. You had good relationship with your master, but it was cut short by her need to study. Luna was transferred to a foreign school for nobles, and (you), a person of common descent, were left behind.
After 15 years, Luna returns back to the palace and is set on being (your) lover.

>> No.25156923

>>25136172
Wholesome works.

>>25151667
You're kidding, right?

>> No.25156976

>>25156923
I have never been more serious. I see it with Europeans too. They hate America so much that they talk about us nonstop. The bitch hates America so much that she made it her entire personality for two entire characters. Its the damndest thing

>> No.25156980

>>25156895
You forgot to anchor it to >>25011465

>> No.25157464

>>25156895
Luna (Reverse-)Rape?

>> No.25157576

>>25156895
YOU KEPT SAYING "LUNA RAPE" SO HERE IT IS! SERVE YOUR PRINCESS

>> No.25157912

>>25156976
Dude she grew up in fucking Atlanta i don't blame her for not liking the U.S

>> No.25157965

>>25157464
Like that one scene in Katawa Shoujo from Shizuka route?

>> No.25160495

>>25157965
I will now play Katawa Shoujo.

>> No.25160685

>>25157965
Wasn't it Shizune?

>> No.25161414

>>25160685
Yes, it was, my bad. First played the game like 6 years ago and replayed like a a year or two ago
Still hits like a fucking truck
Makes me wonder if anything like that can be made again by this godforsaken place

>> No.25162727
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25162727

Lunabump!

>> No.25162941

if i look outside this thread for two seconds i physically turn away in disgust
i haven't done so for months and got curious out of boredom
fucking hell this board is such a shithole

>> No.25163469

>>25162941
>fucking hell this board is such a shithole
I mean, it does have a writing general, so expecting anything but a shithole is your fault.

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>>25162941

>> No.25164383

>>25162941
t. doesn't shitpost

>> No.25166349 [DELETED] 

Been thinking about Ame Zeta fic lately and don't ask why i just thought about hey Ame is a detective and zeta is a spy right? and both of them being gold and silver sounds great to me. And start writing plot about Ame who currently investigating this certain guy and planning to infiltrate their base and she will meet Zeta that day who is also happened to be in undercover trying to get the same dude.
But then again me being an ESL really not helping

>> No.25166519

>>25011465
Been thinking about Ame Zeta fic lately and don't ask why i just thought about hey Ame is a detective and zeta is a spy right? and both of them being gold and silver sounds great to me. And start writing plot about Ame who currently investigating this certain guy and planning to infiltrate their base and she will meet Zeta that day who is also happened to be in undercover trying to get the same dudereally want to add rape tag for when both of them got found out but idk i never wrote rape shits before.
But then again me being an ESL really not helping

>> No.25167487

>>25166519
How would you characterize Zeta?

>> No.25167952

>>25167487
A whore.

>> No.25169294

>>25167952
Oh, you've got her personality down pat then. Go for it.

>> No.25170352

>>25166519
Anon, what exactly are you asking for with this post?
Plot advice? Smut writing advice? Characterization help?

>> No.25170380

>>25167952
kek that's not what i have in mind but it's a pretty fun idea for other fic i planned

>> No.25170570 [SPOILER] 
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25170570

>>25170352
all of them anon, all of them

>> No.25171000

>>25170570
Under the assumption that you're a beggining writer that just has an idea for a fic involving Ame and Zeta; the only piece of advice I can really give is you need to start writing it if you want any sort of feedback. We can't really point to any problems or things that need to get improved on without it being made.

>> No.25172683

>>25114766
Finally got around to reading this.
I agree with that other anon, this is an interesting premise and start. I hope you have something planned to continue this because this has a lot of potential that I'm excited to see what comes next.
As for the fantasy elements, I think the current level is fine where it's fantastical enough to have stuff like elves and monster but not enough to kill the darkness of the realistic elements.

>> No.25173262

>>25157912
But it doesn't explain why all of her characters personalities revolve around being American.

>> No.25173430

>>25173262
Because she's boring without being American? Have you seen her streams? I know /wg/ doesn't watch streams, but seriously, try to keep up.

>> No.25173635

>>25173430
I will never watch a dogshit kson stream. She can go fuck herself.

>> No.25173977

>>25173635
>I will never watch a stream
there, I fix that for you.

>> No.25174020

>>25161414
>Makes me wonder if anything like that can be made again by this godforsaken place
/wg/ cooperating and making a story together sounds fucking impossible without something central to "herd all the cats".
Even if it sounds like it would be rather fun.

>> No.25174197

>>25174020
There's been one collab story and some retards threw a hissy fit when it was posted.

>> No.25174224

>>25174197
And that was a good thing since the story was shit.

>> No.25174268

Do you ever wonder what it would like to hold Luna down, plant your lips on her buttpussy and suck a fat, steaming log directly out of it? Would it taste like digested candy? What about the aroma? And finally, what kind of texture would it have sliding down your throat?

These are the questions that keep me up at night.

>> No.25174322

wow the earlyfag has moved from low effort flamebait to literal shitposting, a new low

>> No.25174367

>>25025029
This but with a black man

>> No.25174476

>>25174322
>Pekofag is earlyfag
>Subjectionanon is earlyfag
>Anyone who disagrees with me is earlyfag
Who isn’t earlyfag for you?

>> No.25174511

>>25174197
The holofantasy/holocalypse one right?
Personally I don't think writers collabing is inherently cursed to fall apart but anything other than spur of the moment greentext chains being made in thread by bored anons is going to need the kind of collaboration that can't be done anonymously.

>> No.25174582

im thinking about starting a long series about how life would be if Botan was your gf. It would have some SFW chapters and some NSFW ones and im already thinking about the story but i wanna know if anyone would actually read it. The title would be something like "Life with a lion isn't easy y'know?" and i want to make it as vanilla as possible. Anyone interested?

>> No.25174676

>>25174322
this isn't the same earlyfag. he's been traumatized into only making holo threads and he also always redirects people in the previous thread to the new one.

>> No.25174717

>>25174582
I'm extremely interested in that, particularly the NSFW scenes after the SFW chapters spice them up with much-needed context. Please tell me your use of grammar and punctuation is better when writing, though. If you write like an ESL too then just leave.

>> No.25174921

New thread
>>25174525

>> No.25174950

>>25174921
>Not Hololive
Someone make a proper thread. No need to use some no-view whore.

>> No.25174958

>>25174582
Honestly even if you type like an ESL I'd read it. You'd be surprised at how fast active reading and writing work at making you literally write better sentences.

>> No.25175399

>>25174717
well, although im not a native speaker i do think that my grammar and vocabulary are rather good but you'll be able to judge by yourself in around 2 weeks when my keyboard arrives, i'll start working then and in the meantime i'll just think about the plot
>>25174958
still, i'll try my best not to sound like an ESL

>> No.25175743

>>25174921
Are we seriously going to use the thread? It has no one from Hololive.

>> No.25176632

>>25175743
Anon the reason the earlyfag before this one got ousted was because they were being such a dick about it that the general was willing to be called tribalfags just to spite the bastard because they shat up threads they didn't like.

>> No.25177107

>>25174950
How about the biggest VTuber on YouTube, CookieSwirlC?

>> No.25177963

>>25176632
wow, that's completely wrong.
the current earlyfag (not the one who made the kson thread) is the same one that you claim got ousted. the reason he started exclusively making holo threads is because some tribalfags finally got fed up with non holo threads and just made their own for a while until he started making holo threads to apease them. it's very obviously the same person.

>> No.25178010
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Luna RAPE

>> No.25178898

>>25177963
Anon, by your logic. The old earlyfag got so buckbroken they started to make only holo threads while also doing the bitch work of posting the last thread roundup.
That sounds way too unrealistic. More likely applying occam's razor it's someone else that took the 'job' and forced holo threads.

>> No.25179128

>>25178898
It’s subjectionanon. Guy hated non-holos and even said he shat up the threads in the past.

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