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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>24603798

>> No.24691325
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.24691365
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.24691426
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Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread.

PavoNashi Maldives: Of Sunscreen and Skinship: Tags: Pavolia Reine, Takanashi Kiara, NSFW, Yuri, Beach, Massage, Fingering:>>24617740

Matsuri ahoge correction: Tags: Matsuri, Fubuki, SFW, Ahoge Correction: >>24628771

Positive ID: Tags: Risu, Reine, Moona, SFW, Black Ops, mild gore: >>24678810

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) are a Cover employee which was tasked to handle anything Holotori related, and when the peafowl and phoenix decided to take a vacation to Maldives, they invited you as well to have threesome sex:>>24608086

Beating your Oshi in a fight so bad that they strip themselves of their clothes and do a naked dogeza to beg for mercy.:>>24620037

Just anything to do with yandere Kanatan.:>>24625421

Ina is too sick to preach to her congregation, so Sana takes over.:>>24626923

>>24633922 :>>24633922

Escorting Matsuri to your home because you don't want her to get sick under rain.:>>24641204

Melware infects/corrupts/reprograms Zen before she can travel back in time.:>>24643987

Intense, passionate beach sex with her:>>24651984

you were raped as a kid by an unknown woman who was never seen again.:>>24663155

A drunken Lamy won't let you go until you've completely covered her huge tits with cum.:>>24677610

A drunken Lamy won't let you go because you slid a knife twixt her ribs whilst she was hugging you,:>>24677697

Ina fucks Anon in the ass while jerking him off using nothing but her tentacles.:>>24681870

You know what's a great feeling?>>24682642

Bathing (your) girlfrirend Chloe! Masturbating her with the running shower and then fucking her to train her!:>>24686949

The Satanic panic is in full swing.:>>24691245

>> No.24693255

>>24691365
I need a story that rejects the weakness of the flesh. I don't want to die, oh god I don't want to die. Tear Roboco apart, learn her secrets.

>> No.24693838

>>24693255
No Roboco forcibly upgrades you. The pain will be exquisite

>> No.24694949

>>24693255
>>24693838
If only admech was good on tabletop....

>> No.24694989
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>>24679612
It was mainly inspired by me finding operating innawoods to be really cool and being down bad for Reine. I'm glad that you found that stuff good as I was worried that it'd miss the mark because I didn't want to have that stuff be opaque to people who aren't into it. Good that I found a balance.

>>24679933
I was wondering if somebody would actually notice, thanks for picking up on that.

>>24680113
>>24691175
>>24679410
Thank you!

As for whether or not I'll do more, I'm not planning on it. God knows I have enough things to work on already. Maybe if I get the urge to I'll write something in this again.

>> No.24696821

>>24691426
>There... were four stories posted last thread
>Links 3
>???

>>24693838
>Roboco forcibly upgrades you
Does she also program you to like it and want to upgrade others?

>> No.24697026

Gentlemen I have come to inquire about your opinions on this subject. Marinecuckquean

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>>24697026
RUN THAT SHIT NIGGA

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>>24697026

>> No.24697530

>>24697103
>>24697261
Do know that Marine is the one that gets cucked.

>> No.24697599
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>>24697530
Oh I know.

Who's the girl taking the guy?

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>>24697530
Don't worry, there's more! Consider this a follow up to >>24697261


I had to spend like 6 minutes searching for this in my 2K hentai images folder

>> No.24698026

>>24697599
I haven't decided yet.

Spoiler alert: It's set in highschool, with a girl that hates Marine's guts and that wants to see her break down, so she forcibly sleeps with the guy she likes and starts to blakmail him. Yes I have thought of Matsuri, for now all I have is the premise and the major plot points.

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>>24698026
Ah. Was this from that discussion a while ago about being friends with a fake gal slut Marine?

>> No.24698428

>>24698246
I haven't been on /wg/ for a while but I remember discussing something like that with a few anons sometime ago. Marine is ultra popular but she's all talk, and her only true friend in you.

I'm adding some more context that is gonna make this story sting like a fucking wasp, though.

>> No.24699260

>>24696821
It's a bot.

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>>24698428
Since you already have the plot beats, I assume you already have it planned out and that their also a student.

Cause thinking about this, I had the idea of Choco being faculty and constantly asking for you in the nurses office for "Check Ups" because detention wasn't curbing Marine's annoying behaviour

>> No.24699613

>>24699296
I do have a need of an older, motherly-like figure, but for different reasons that are besides the cucking.

>> No.24700832

>>24699613
Ooh. Well, I'm interesed. Looking forward to this whenever it's ready.

>> No.24701793

>>24698026
What about Rushia being the one that cucks Marine. She's crazy and has that edge of having that old ship with her

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[Synthwave music playing] It's out of my hand....
But I'm still in controool~
It's out of my haaandd~
You can never take away
The power of my sooooulll

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>>24703981
Damn sexy dog...seducing a younger man....breeding correction is needed!!!

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>>24704994
Korone really is so damn sexy

>> No.24707939

If Korone is a female dog, doesn't that make her a bitch?

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>>24707939
Yes. A bitch who should take responsibility for seducing me.

>> No.24708237

Now I want to pull on Korone's tail as I give her steamy anal sex, and feel her asshole clench around my cock everytime I pull on it

>> No.24709478

>>24708237
Animal girl tails are designed for grabbing

>> No.24709574

>>24704994
>>24706528
>>24708237
Did I post the wrong image of what? On my side it's a Korone with champion glasses riding the synth wave, why are people horny??

>> No.24709730

>>24709574
Anon, people have wanted to fuck the horny bitch for ages. You simply gave them an in. Ever since the WIP-Nut curse people have been a little high strung.

>> No.24709812

>>24691563
Remember how Gura had met a time-traveling Ame pre-Hololive?
twitter.com/wllmagic/status/1527718986183389184
Gura has no idea who this girl is, and when the night's over, she'll have even more questions, and a few decades wait before she gets answers.

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>>24709812
>she'll have even more questions
Like why does every time she look away do Ame's tits get bigger?

>> No.24710431

>>24710202
EN Paizuri while Ina and Gura seethe in the background before showing you that naizuri is better...

>> No.24710683

>>24710431
Dumb idea: Ina has boing boings, but they're in higher dimensions.

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>>24710202
breast expansion is under utilized

>> No.24711609

>>24710683
Boob overflow rolled back into flat

>> No.24711659

>>24710202
It's the price of time manipulation.
Before Ame got the watch she was as aflat as a board.

>> No.24711704

Man I hate writing descriptions of how chuuba's look. I feel like it's a waste of time since everyone knows what they look like but I know if don't it'll bother my autism.

>> No.24712838

>>24691365
Haachama is a witness to a crime and has to explain her side of the story to a detective entirely through her ESL English.

>> No.24712968

>>24711704
Would changing the way they looked help then? Like, writing Kiara in her true form, an alternate different-looking Ame, Nyanners shapeshifted to a different form, etc.

>> No.24713387

>>24712968
Normally I do just give them a different outfit, but in the fic I'm working on the way they normally look matters both in-universe and in the technical sense.
It's just one of those things that have to be done but it drives me crazy.

>> No.24714633

>>24713387
>in-universe and in the technical sense.
Ah are you doing a realistic take on the usual /wg/ setting of "present day, Tokyo, they just look like that outside of streams"?

>> No.24715165

>>24714633
Nope. It's a story about becoming a pirate.

>> No.24718781

it's moments like this one where i wish i saved that tumbleweed gif.

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>>24718781

>> No.24719722

>>24709812
This was supposed to respond to >>24691365

>> No.24720751

>>24694989
Are you also the author of girl boss Watson? Probably not since he's writing a Kronii fic but I gotta ask, as you two write similar stuff, /k/ chuuba content is really niche and I love seeing more of it from another author.
It's also funny that both of you picked the five-seven for sidearm, although did you have an assault rifle in mind when writing this story?
Also, I don't really get why Moona is upset, she makes it sound like Anon killed Risu but that isn't the case, so I don't really get it

>> No.24721207

How did i do, lads?
>>24721105

>> No.24721636

>>24721207
Pekofag writes Pekora better.

>> No.24721972

>>24721636
Fuck off

>>24721207
There's a bit of an overuse of the peko suffix sometimes but it's pretty good. I can see why it happens though, Pekora spams "peko" pretty much every sentence. But the thing is that in Japanese adding suffixes to words is quite natural, they just blend in. Not quite as much in English

>> No.24722179

>>24721207
Well, it certainly belongs in the fanfiction thread...
>>24721636
Fuck off

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The thought of Mio catching her daughter masturbating and not caring as if it was normal is pretty hot. Extremely rare fetish to see, casual masturbation.

>> No.24723812

>>24723746
Maybe as an animal girl she understands and does it as well

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>>24723812
Personally I think it's best if Mio doesn't do it, at least not very often, not because either of them would care if she did, but just because she doesn't get horny enough to do it at her age.

>> No.24724211

>>24723945
>Mio used to be a complete nymphomaniac during her highschool days.
Hot

>> No.24724212

>>24723945
I want to eat Luna out so badly

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>>24720751
I am not him, no. I didn't even realize that both have Five-seveNs, I should probably go back and reread that series.You've made me realize that I forgot to specify the rifle, even though I had completely meant to after explaining it.

It's a SCAR. Pic related is the closest example to what it is in the fic, though obviously sans the right colour scheme and although I didn't mention it I imagined it having the SCAR-20's stock.

Moona got mad because Anon's pretty flippant about how things may play out is basically saying "Too bad but I'm probably gonna kill your friends.", and before that on their end all they heard was him ask if he could do that and when told 'no' said nothing, giving the impression he's gonna do it anyway. Which he was even though Reine specifically called him because she thought he take her in alive. I definitely could have written the dialogue in a way to get that across better, cause it was like 6am when I was writing it so it's kind of all over the place. Glad you like it all the same.

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>>24724212
> w-well, what are you waiting for nora?

>> No.24724620

>>24724523
Pristine tummy and thighs.

>> No.24725484

>>24724620
Do you ever think about the fact that you'll never get to lick that? Recently, it's been on my mind a lot.

>> No.24725850

>>24725484
Every waking moment of my life.

>> No.24725882

>>24691365
>>24718409
>>24718430
>>24719247
We need a story like this with one of the more gullible Holos. Nene was almost abducted by the Yakuza because she's naive so maybe use her.

>> No.24725927

>>24725484
Nah, not really. Simping for anime streamers requires a certain level of disbelief suspension, which can also be put to use when I ask my girlfriend to wear the mask...

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>>24725850
This but unironically. It's been hard to get out of bed recently because of it. I may have a problem. Hopefully >>24725927 if I ever manage to get back into a relationship this feeling will stop.

>> No.24726111

>>24725961
>Iofi when she finds out that to find her stalker(me) the police have to TRACE my call

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>>24726111
That's a very funny joke. Here's mine:
>Iofi when she figures out that to find her stalker(me) the police have to ~TRACE~ my call

>> No.24726408

>>24691365
A tale about (you) coming together with the boys to make a VTuber group only to then find out that all of them are a figment of your imagination and you were sockpuppeting for 4 or 5 personas at a time

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>> No.24727569

>>24726408
That would be a story about OCs unless you base the imaginary characters around actual chuubas, so no dice.

>> No.24728165

>>24727569
Yeah, you are right. It would still be about chuubas doing chuuba things, though, although imaginary.
Maybe in the end the schizo is whole again, and the sockpuppet chuuba designs are repurposed for actual people

>> No.24728221

>>24728165
...
And that's the story of how Sora created gen 1 of hololive.

>> No.24728587

>>24727397
Dagger...

>> No.24730157

>>24724233
Your explanation makes sense, I didn't think too hard on the story. Anyway, if you write more /k/, I'm all for it

>> No.24730181

This is a bit of a niche question but does anyone have any advice for CYOA design?
The branching problem that was the main stumbling block pointed out the last time someone asked has kind of been solved by way of me using twine to make it but now I'm faced with the actual hard part of designing the paths.

>> No.24730204

>>24730181
Yeah!

Don't.

>> No.24730491

>>24730181
The best way to go about this, IMO, is that you should keep like a tabulated list of stuff that happens as the paths branch out. like:

A.
Villain escaped
Listened to Chuuba

B.
Villain escaped
Ignored Chuuba

C.
Villain Defeated
Listened to Chuuba

And then its just a matter of writing out what happens as a consequence.

>> No.24731158

>>24730181
Do you have a set plot or goal in mind for each branch? Or are you making each one up as you go? Also I feel like writing this is going to take a fuck ton of time considering each branch is going to branch out into even more storylines, right?

>> No.24731303

>>24731158
Oh I do have a set storyline in mind. The branching problem is sort of solved by the ability to track variables and making it so that each path converges into a single point before diverging again till the end of the fic.
I'm more asking advice on how to make the, for lack of a better word, "gameplay" of making choices and getting dice rolls from the game entertaining to the reader.

>> No.24731714

>>24731303
>I'm more asking advice on how to make the, for lack of a better word, "gameplay" of making choices and getting dice rolls from the game entertaining to the reader.

As in, making the action of choosing a route entertaining?
Well for me it is simply learning how the story plays out after making the choice. And it gets even more interesting when there are numerous layers of choices to make.
Other than /tg/ stuff, the game Until Dawn was a CYOA type game in recent memory I enjoyed.

>> No.24733275

>>24731303
>each path converges into a single point
Really? I might be misunderstanding things but isn't that just the illusion of choice if your choices don't actually affect how the story plays out or where it goes?

>> No.24734275

>>24733275
>the illusion of choice if your choices don't actually affect how the story plays out or where it goes
It's only set in regards to the overall path you follow but the actions and choice made by you will still matter because the 'game' will track variables set by those actions, then sometime later It'll be paid off by the variable getting checked and affecting the choices you can do or make.
i.e If you make the choice that gets your character to know a certain bit of information it opens up a path because it gets check via an if statement.

>> No.24735548

>>24734275
Nice, sounds fun.

>> No.24737040

>>24710202
Everything else is great, but good god does Nabi draw some hideous mouths.

>> No.24737049

>>24734275
Looking forward to it. This makes at least three/four "interactive" things in progress.

>> No.24738633

Movin' kinda fast for a Sunday. Pg. 9 in less than 40.

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>>24738633
Doesn't help that I go out of my way not to bump this thread.

>> No.24739558

>>24739457
Ditto. I like letting it die then reminding everyone how this thread is on life support.

>> No.24739639

>>24691365
Fubuki having sex with San to sate her shotacon desires, but is hesitant to fully commit to it and asks San to use a condom. However, each subsequent fuckings erode Fubuki's reluctance and eventually starts begging for San to fill her up in all three of her holes.

>> No.24739759

>>24739639
This, but San's fallen on rough times and is now a fat black man instead of a lithe tan boy.

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Human Flare

>> No.24740014

>>24739639
>>24739759
San from Undertale? Isn't he a skeleton?

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Rather than ask what everyone's working on, what is in the backlog, writeanons? What stories/prompts have you been meaning to get to work on for a long time but never gotten around to?

>> No.24740099

>>24740014
I assumed he was talking about the april fool's niglet version of Sana. I don't watch EN or pay much attention to them at all, though, so it's just speculation.

Sans is who I first thought of too. Fubuki has the hots for him.

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>>24740099
Yeah, I was referring to Sana's April Fools Genderbend.

>> No.24740494

>>24740213
This design is only good if it's the one being fucked.

>> No.24740584

>>24740066
Dear God Callunape has control over death and candy both

>> No.24740591

>>24740494
Faggot.

>> No.24740654

>>24740066
Was thinking of making a short sequel to PavoNashi Maldives involving the female butler but I'm not sure how to go about writing it.

>> No.24740889

>>24740654
Write it in first person so you can dodge them having a name.

>> No.24741120

>>24740591
You dipshits get a perfectly serviceable hot brown twink onahole and you automatically want to see it fuck your oshi and give it a way bigger dick than you could possibly ever have let alone anyone find enjoyable. YOU are the faggot here, cocksucker.

>> No.24741161

>>24740889
Oh, I have no problems with writing a nameless character in third person.

Its more like the scenario and how it plays out. The prompt I have in my head is that Reine and Kiara unwittingly ordered some kind of secret "customer service". I have not thought about this any further other than that one other anon in /mep/ suggesting the involvement of a horse dildo.

>> No.24741223

>>24740066
A fic about a dogfight in MiG alley. Not ace combat levels of ridiculousness but a fun action fic.

>> No.24741351

>>24741120
This is faggot cope. What's worse is that you've somehow convinced yourself you're not a faggot for wanting to see a little boy get fucked by penises. You're an embarrassment to your parents and the society that raised you, but the one silver lining is that at least nobody has to worry about you ever reproducing.

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>>24691365
after hearing Oga's comments on her debut, the orca makes a devious plan to teach the ogre a lesson

>> No.24741577

>>24741351
There is a non-zero chance that the anon you're replying to is a fujo.

>> No.24741650

>>24730181
I have literally never read a well-done CYOA in my life. It never works

>> No.24741764

>>24741650
Aren't VNs somewhat a kind of CYOA?

>> No.24741868

>>24741577
There's a non-zero chance I'll have a winning lottery ticket, too.

>>24741764
Lotta older ones were. Some very renowned ones are stupidly convoluted. Mostly phased out now.

>> No.24741889

>>24741650
Would using the phrase Interactive Fiction make it sound better to you because it's basically going to have decisions VN style but like without the art; though maybe with some visual and audio elements.

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>>24739639
I feel this needs to involve Sana somehow.

>> No.24742198

>>24741764
>>24741889
Well, a CYOA is one thing, and having two or three fully-fleshed-out endings for an otherwise regular narrative in mind from the start is another. The former term I think usually implies one of those D&D-style shells where the author has to constantly improvise shit on the fly in response to reader interaction, either in the form of one of those perk sheets or one of those sprawling sequences of dozens of short snippets with a couple choices at the end of each

>> No.24742409

>>24741521
I thought Oga was a demon.
>>24741650
The CYOA stuff I've read is just generic fantasy so I think you're right.

>> No.24742431

>>24742198
Think less Forum Quest and more Gamebook.
That's what I'm going with when I was saying CYOA.

>> No.24743305

>>24723746
>File deleted
Don't suppose you have a link to it?

>>24725882
>Nene was almost abducted by the Yakuza because she's naive so maybe use her.
Wat? Sauce?

>>24739639
I hope someone picks this one up for you, anon.

>>24741521
My mind immediately goes to this becoming Looney Toons style nonsense where he casually turns things around on her every time.

>>24742198
>The former term I think usually implies one of those D&D-style shells where the author has to constantly improvise shit on the fly in response to reader interaction
I'd call that a quest. CYOA I'd call a VN without pictures, or with less of them. The key factor for a quest, I feel, is the improvisational elements, whether from dice or write-ins, where the others only have limited branching. That's just me, though, and they all fall under interactive fiction.

>> No.24743541
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24743541

As if there wasn't enough proof that Sana was a terrible addition to HoloEN, her shitty genderbend brought all of the trap trannies out of the woodwork. It's gotten so bad that unironic homosexuals have managed to drive out everyone else from /vtsg/ and you can't ever convince me that a biological woman would ever go there.

>> No.24743630

>>24743541
It's fucking disgusting, isn't it? A hobby about simping for anime girls would reasonably be the last place to expect faggots, but here they are, invading a hobby they shouldn't be in and demanding others cater to them.

>> No.24744075

>>24739639
Fuck I love Josou Seme so damn much.

>> No.24744452

>>24743541
But Council is so quirky and random xD
With the exception of Bae, I don't get the appeal of council.

>> No.24744546

>>24743305
> Nene abducted
> sauce?
Context is in the thread I posted search for Nene

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24744754

>>24740066
Tons. I've got a compilation of short stories which all revolve around the concept of "being within another's arms" but with chuubas, focusing more on warm, fuzzy feelings. I proposed the Kanata cucking (You) from Towa but since Sad, Genuine Smile was already written by a kind writeanon I will probably shelve the idea. I've got a having lovey dovey sex with Lamy after some nursing handjobs/milk drinking on Christmas eve which was ditched. A few more that I didn't get to yet was a rrat!Ayame fic, a more grounded, depressed version of MW, Botan urging you to fuck Lamy(and eventually joining you), as well as rape correction on Shion who secretly wanted it all along. I wanna write some bro adventures with the Holostars boys as well.


And of course working back on HoloRealm which I really really want to develop more on but time and energy has not been on my side. Here's a Foobs for ya.

>> No.24745368

>>24744546
Yeah, I saw. Thanks.

>> No.24745655

>>24691365
Ina and Nyanners meet. Ina is torn between awe at meeting one of the Ancient Ones in the flesh, and terror at what that means; Nyan is annoyed at having to deal with what she sees, correctly or otherwise, as one of Azathoth's bootlickers. Bonus points if Nyan gets into an argument with Ina's book/tablet.

>> No.24745767

>>24744754
FOX EROTIC UUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH

>> No.24745794

>>24745655
Why Nyanners?

>> No.24745866

>>24745794
Look up Nyanners lore

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>> No.24748464

>>24748363
What is this whore doing?

>> No.24748636

>>24745866
No.

>> No.24748679

>>24748464
Dabbing on everyone who just ignored her tracing because she's a cute girl.

>> No.24750114

>>24748679
Nene is the ultimate proof that if you're cute you can get away with anything. To artists tracing is literally equal to murder, and yet she is still there.

>> No.24750915

>>24750114
I mean, you're right but even the artist she traced didn't care that much.

>> No.24751061

>>24750114
Nene causes an international incident that leads to war in most of europe, but she gets away with it cause she is very moe

>> No.24751104

>>24751061
You mean Rushia right?

>> No.24752434

>>24751104
>he doesn't know

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>>24752434
>tfw Botan took a week break the day the Invasion started

>> No.24752961

>>24745794
You know how it's always been a thing Nyanner's isn't actually a catgirl, but an Eldritch Abomination? The lore video from her debut gave details on that, and all but explicitly states her true name. Also, Satan saves the planet with a few whispered words causing someone to rebel, which is hilarious.
youtube.com/watch?v=NOkAS-QAd8A

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24755799

Can't believe they made a Hologra based off of that incident

>> No.24756171

>>24755799
>Sees picture
>Jojo theme intensifies

>> No.24758019

>>24744754
That is a very kissable fox you've posted there.

>> No.24759082

What should Mio's children be called?
One boy, one girl.

>> No.24759311

>>24759082
Tetsuya and Seiko

>> No.24759466

>>24759082
Mistake and Ayame 2

>> No.24760109

>>24759082
Ayame and Subaru. beyond that, gtfo

>> No.24760766

>>24759082
Hmm
If we get full schizo fantasy here, you pick the son's name while she picks the daughter's
With the son, it would be easy to construct one from scratch from Japanese glyphs. Just open up an online kanji dictionary and search by meaning. You are a dirty gaijin, let your fantasy loose
With the daughter you would also have to consider what the mom likes/aspires her offspring to be. She would also probably choose a more traditional name.

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The pot simmered cheerfully over the low heat, the delightful smell of pork broth wafting through the room. On the table, already set, were plates overflowing with fried rice, tempura shrimp, and vegetable fritters.

Kanata leaned over the ramen, blinking away the steam as she stirred the noodles. "Is this done, Neko-chan?" she asked hesitantly. "I think it's done..."

Mikeneko stood from her seat at the table and walked up to the stove, standing close to Kanata as she took a look. The blue-haired girl blushed a faint pink as their shoulders brushed close. "Yep! It's done, Kanata!" Mikeneko's voice still had the same cheerful, high-pitched affectation Kanata once remembered - even after all that happened, and after a whole year of organized crime. "I don't know why you say you're bad at cooking, you followed my instructions to the letter here..."

"Yeah... your instructions," Kanata stressed as Mikeneko turned off the stove.

"Your hands did the work. That counts." Neko replied. She turned to Kanata, her eyes lingering tenderly on the scar on her left cheek - a reminder of the brush with death that had started this whole saga. "I bet Anon's going to love this, even with how much he complains about Japanese food, the jerk."

Kanata felt a knot form in her throat. She stepped forward, clasping Neko's hands with her own, smiling as she blinked away a tear. "I'm glad you're with us, Ru- I mean, Neko-chan."

Mikeneko bit her lower lip, trembling. If Kanata had to fight back some emotion, then all of a sudden it looked like Neko was bending the entirety of her will to avoid bursting into tears. "I'm glad you and Coco could stay with us too, Kanata... hey, we're winning, you now? We're killing everybody who ever wronged us, and we're going to kill the rest too, OK? Then we're going to be rich again, and you and Coco-san can buy that house you wanted, and Anon and I can get our own place too, and we can visit each other every day and-"

The sharp ring of a doorbell cut through Mikeneko's utopic waxing about their future, halting her mid-sentence as the temperature in the room dropped by a couple degrees.

"Anon wouldn't ring the doorbell," Kanata said, letting go of Neko's hands.

"No. Let... let me go check. You're carrying, right? I am too."

Kanata nodded, her expression grim as Mikeneko strode forward and checked through the peephole. Just a year ago merely thinking of the level of danger they were in might have made her sick - now it was routine, no, unimportant after all their triumphs.

"It's... it's Mori," Mikeneko murmured. "What's she doing here?"

"Calliope-san?" Kanata exhaled in relief. "Um, now she's an informant, Coco-chan told her to drop off her files here. She could have just left them in the mailbox though..."

"No, I think it's better this way. Less chance something might go wrong or get lost. Um, coming!" Mikeneko fumbled with the locks for a bit and then slid them back. The door swung open, and Calliope Mori, clearly more than a bit drunk, stumbled into the safehouse, holding a crumpled brown folder full of stained pages. She walked by both Neko and Kanata, ignoring them until she collapsed on top of a chair.

"Yooooo. It's ya boy, Calliope Mori, bitcheeesss... long time no see, Rushia." Her eyes were rather unfocused, darting back and forth across the room, lingering only on the food and drink arrayed on the table. She completely missed the expression of sheer rage that briefly crossed Mikeneko's face. Kanata slipping and calling her that was one thing - she could call her much worse after all she'd done for Neko. But this fat cunt? She struggled to tamp down her emotions.

Kanata on the other hand did notice, and rushed to take the spotlight off of Neko by drawing Mori's attention away from her. "Calliope-san... hello! It's uh, it's been a long time. Did you bring the files?"

Mori blinked in confusion, leering at her for a bit before her eyes widened as she caught on. "Holy shit, Kanata-senpai! I didn't know you'd be here... been a long time... oh shit, oh fuck!" She leaned forward, looking at the scar under Kanata's left eye like she was gazing at a zoo animal. "Oh fuck, you got fucking mutilated!"

All the air left the room. Kanata drew back as though she'd been punched in the face. "It... it's not that bad," she whispered, trembling.

Now behind Mori, Mikeneko's hands balled up into fists, her knuckles clenched chalk white. "Just drop off the files and leave, Mori," she hissed.

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>>24762721
Mori turned to look at her, slapping the stained folder down on a plate of fried rice with a greasy plop. "Whoa hey, Rushia, watch your mouth. Just because I'm giving you valuable information doesn't mean I'm your bitch, dog. Coco promised me I could have Hololive's music rights once she got rid of the other bitches, she didn't say anything about having to suck her crew's dicks. Uh, cunts. So you two better have some respect, or I might just uh, I might just change my mind and rat you guys out, OK?"

"What the fuck did you just say?" Kanata's voice was ice-cold, her trembling uncertainty gone in an instant, her eyes as dead and sharp as when she whacked Suisei.

Mori raised her hands. "Hey, peace. I'm just breaking balls, come on."

"We don't joke around with that shit, Mori," Neko growled. "Just leave the fucking folder on the table and get out."

"Alright, alright, sure bitch, don't get uppity with ya boy, I'm leaving now!" Mori made to stand up, but then stopped. Her expression wavered, her eyes hazy as her better judgment briefly fought and lost one final war against whatever drug she'd taken. Then she gave the other two girls a cruel, drunken grin. "Although... I wonder what they'd give me if I handed in Coco's cunt... or that Anon guy you two are always with... think they'd cut Kanata up a bit more so her right side would mat-"

"YOU FUCKING CUNT!"

Drunk and stupid, Mori had no time to react as Mikeneko grabbed a bowl of fried rice and smashed it on top of her head. Shards of glass flew everywhere, mixed with grains of rice, chopped vegetables and bits of blood and hair. Mori stumbled out of her chair, bleeding from her forehead. Her eyes bulging with adrenaline, she lunged towards the first person she saw, roaring obscenities at Kanata. Neko sprung into action, holding on to Mori from behind, her hands clasping at the taller woman's neck and leaving a bloody trail with her nails.

"KILL HER KANATA! KILL THIS CUNT! GUT HER FAT ASS!"

Mori's backbone disappeared as Neko screamed this and her expression turned to terror as Kanata grabbed the butcher's knife she'd used to chop up the pork for the ramen. "Ack... K-Kanata, no- AUUUGH!"

Maybe in a past life Kanata may have showed Mori mercy, but in this awful present her eyes were wide with demonic fervor, her blood boiling in rage and sorrow at even the thought that Anon, Neko, or Coco could be sold out by this bitch. She held tightly onto the knife and rammed it once, twice, thrice into Mori's fat gut.

"AUUGH! AUUGH!" Each stab of the knife drew from Mori a whooping, almost cartoonish scream of pain. She tried to say something but only blood and spit came out of her mouth. Her arms flailed, and in one last burst of adrenaline she shook Mikeneko off her back, the catgirl landing painfully on her butt.

"Kanata!" Neko screamed past a grimace of pain. "Don't let her get away!"

She didn't. Kanata lunged forward mustering all the strength her tiny body could handle and tackled Mori, driving the huge knife into her gut again. The impact sent Mori reeling, and she fell on her back onto the dinner table with Kanata on top of her, plates of food flying everywhere. Kanata wasted no time as Neko rushed to her feet and pinned Mori's arms to the table. Lifting up the knife, she brought it down on her victim again and again, stabbing into Mori's gut, ribcage, even her fat tits, until her torso looked like a piece of ground meat.

"AUUGH! AUUGH! AUHGHhghghghghghghg..."

"She's... she's dead, Kanata," Neko murmured, letting go of Mori's arms. "You can... you can stop now."

Kanata nodded in agreement, but just in case she stabbed her knife three more times into Mori's left tit, until she was satisfied she wouldn't get a response. "Fuck... fuck... fuck... Neko-chan... sorry for swearing back there... dinner is ruined..."

She looked around, breathing heavily. The room looked like an abattoir, both she and Mikeneko were covered in Mori's blood and gore.

"Dinner..." Neko whispered. "Yeah, yeah she ruined our dinner. The dinner you cooked for us, Kanata-chan... fuck..." She took a step back from Mori's body.

"We killed her," Kanata murmured.

"Yeah, we did..."

"We probably shouldn't have..."

"No, we shouldn't have... Coco-san and Anon are going to lose it when they find out..."

"Worth... worth it." Kanata looked at Mikeneko and grinned. Her bloodstained hands were trembling, but her expression was that of a young girl smiling at her sister after they both got away with a prank. Neko returned the smile, and before long Kanata had dropped the knife and the two were giggling away, pale hands intertwined in a moment of tender bonding as Mori's brutalized body cooled on the table next to them.

>> No.24763920

>>24762721
>>24762838
Oh hey is this the Breaking Bad-esque thing you were talking about making. It's an interesting start to all of this. Hope you can write more.
Neko is probably the best compromise name for casual use for Mikeneko since otherwise it would run into the awkwardness of Mike.
Nice to see you back subjectionanon.

>> No.24765912

>>24762838
Seeing two of my oshis absolutely murder my most hated holo brings a smile to my face. This made my day

>> No.24770013

>>24691365
Mumei being a cuckqueen.

>> No.24772517

Has the petting your fox anon posted anything recently? Haven't been able to keep up with the threads for a while now and I remember their stories always being particularly worth a read

>> No.24773726

>>24772517
Not by name, I think

>> No.24777628

>>24726111
>Iofi when she can't find her way back home because she needs to TRACE her steps.

>> No.24779770

>>24762721
>>24762838
I have no idea what inspired you to write this but this is the most interesting thing I've seen written using these characters so major points for originality. You were even able to capture some of the actual personality of PPT and mknk here, and Coco being the mastermind of it all is hilariously fitting

>> No.24781277

Where is the Flare amnesia story

>> No.24781453

>>24781277
First Summer Memories?
It's still there last I checked.
If you mean when's the next update; the anon making it is apparently still writing it but rl problems are stopping them.

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>>24779770
>I have no idea what inspired you to write this

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>>24781849
you dont even have the makings of a varsity poster

>> No.24782361
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24782361

Blasting music at 100% volume and giving myself permanent brain damage to pump myself up for writing. My head is going to explode but I'm already partly deaf so who fucking cares? Let's fucking write boys

>> No.24782775

>>24782361
BURY THE LIIIIIIGHT DEEP WITHIN

>> No.24783063

>>24782775
unpopular take: i've never liked that song. the music is good but the lyrics are fucking awful with how chuuni they are. if it was an instrumental i could probably really get behind it

>>24782361
whatcha writing, anon?

>> No.24783315 [SPOILER] 
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24783315

>>24783063
Fubuki riding your face then giving you a blowjob

>> No.24783399

>>24783315
Why does the cum look so terribly drawn in?

>> No.24783441

>>24783399
The cum is pretty realistic which may be odd when one is used to the super thick and sticky cream people usually draw

>> No.24783448

>>24783315
holy shit.
please don't let this turn into an eternal WiP.

>>24783399
kujirapasta's not the greatest at drawing semen

>> No.24784861

>>24691315
Okay I'm fucking blind because I just now noticed that the Opening Post looks fucked..

>> No.24784943

>>24784861
oh you're right. i usually don't read it anymore, it's just white noise. there could be a holocaust denial in there and i'd never notice it.

>> No.24784992

>>24784861
Looks fine on my end. What's wrong?

>> No.24785088
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>>24784992
Do you not see the OP repeating itself?

>> No.24785098

>>24784992
It's doubled

>> No.24785138

>>24785088
>>24785098
Oh uh... no, I didn't. It's like seeing two "the" in a row, your brain just ignores it.

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>>24782361
FULL SPEED AHEAD, FAGGOTS !!!

>> No.24785333

>>24785138
Yeah it took me seeing the double link before I realize that the op was doubled.

>> No.24785912
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24785912

>>24691365
Vei sex with (You).

>> No.24785931

>>24785912
Used goods cheating whore

>> No.24785989

>>24783315
Nice, sounds great anon.

>> No.24786153

>>24785931
>he wouldn't cuck Soda
ngmi.

>> No.24786206

>>24786153
S :omegalul: oda? No way dude, I'm not sticking it where that fag went inside of.

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>>24786206
>implying that she actually had sex with that faggot

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>>24786275
> they didn't fuck
> they're just in a relationship openly flirting with each other on stream
> Vei is a huge whore but she hasn't had sex with her boyfriend yet

>> No.24786469

>>24786275
That's like saying Mori hasn't fucked Connor at least once.

>> No.24786539

>>24786469
Cucking IronMouse sounds pretty good

>> No.24786612

>>24786364
>muh cope
Shut the fuck up, you muppet. You're just embarrassing yourself.

>> No.24786640

>>24786612
No, I don't think so

>> No.24786833

>>24786364
I don't think they've met irl yet. I could be wrong because I don't pay attention to any of those people but last I heard they hadn't.

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>>24786833

>> No.24787069

>>24786833
You sound as pathetic as a deadbeat.

>> No.24787237

>>24786833
Maybe it's just my budding schizophrenia talking, but I'm pretty sure their relationship is just one gigantic shitpost and we all fell for it hook line and sinker.

I dunno, something about it feels too...forced. Like they're laying it on way too thick for it to be believable. But again, maybe it's just my burgeoning mental illness talking and I'm just pulling stuff out of my ass here.

>> No.24787308

>>24787069
I don't watch any twitch streamers so I don't care either way, I'm just relaying what I remember hearing

>>24787237
I think they are but are both just overwhelmingly fake people that it seems that way

>> No.24787391

>>24787237
The main reason is that both of them are personas, so it's hard to stick to your persona without going too much into how you usually behave with your SO in private quarters. Like Tyler1 telling his gf to shut the fuck up while he's streaming but then cams off he's snuggling up to her giving her neck kissed and shit

>> No.24787504

>>24787308
>>24787391
Those could both be plausible explanations. Still, I'm not convinced that this is anything but a gigantic meme that we all fell for.

>> No.24787557

>>24787504
Bro if you're not into either of them this is a gigantic cope theory that you really shouldn't feel the need to have

>> No.24787606

>People replying to blatant bait
You faggots get stupider by the day

>> No.24787646

>>24787606
There's like one or two people :aware: of Twitch culture here and they both are tourists, I don't mind replying even if it's bait

>> No.24787679

>>24787606
>metaposting about replying to bait
C'mon bruh, get your room temperature IQ out of here.

>> No.24787778

>>24745655
Nyanners would literally annoy Ina with her overuse of brap jokes.

>> No.24788961

Damn I wish I could post lewds found some hot stuff that deserves to be shared

>> No.24788980

>>24788961
Catbox.moe them

>> No.24788997

>>24788980
No.

>> No.24789131

>>24788961
I use Mega for sharing porn.

>> No.24789132
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24789132

Agh, fuck. My ears are ringing so loud, but hey, 1.5K words. Not bad for just two hours. Hope you were writing too, anon.

You... you were writing, right?

>> No.24789179

>>24789132
I keep forgetting to write.

>> No.24789190

>>24789132
Well, if figuring out and outlining how the fic's plot flows counts as writing, then yeah.

>> No.24789213

>>24789132
Damn, you're writing this quick. Refreshing change of pace?

>> No.24789294

>>24786612
But that would be more interesting than reality, is it not?
When I was still trying to write hatefucking Mikeneko, to write about her still being a virgin. It would be pretty funny to think that she was fired over a boyfriend who never even had sex with her, and that she is now incredibly salty about it
Maybe I should have rephrased her heat-warped motivation as "we hate each other, so if we have sex, whatever partners we find afterwards, it won't be worse than that"

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>>24789213
I mean, the thing is fairly simple after all, but the main difference here is that since the deadline on my project was extended, I could focus the whole night into this fic, where otherwise I usually wouldn't have. I'm sure I'll struggle with some words next time I write as cunnilingus was never something I'm particularly good at, so filling in the length until she gets to orgasm will be a challenge, but even then, it's still easier than the usual.

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The both of you walk away from the restaurant into the cool spring night. You, red-faced and seething, Mikeneko red-faced and happily drunk.

"That was amazing, Anon," she squeals, "Amazing! I felt like such a princess! And the lobster... hah... I thought I'd be stuck eating dog food for the rest of my life but here we are, I'm so happy- whoops!" She stumbles mid-sentence, wobbling a bit on her feet as she narrowly avoids tripping on a pothole - wear and tear have cracked the asphalt there into loose chunks of rock. "Wow!" she frowns as you lunge forward and catch her by the elbow. "Look at that, Anon, what kind of piece of shit restaurant can't afford to clean up their parking lot? I take back what I said, we should-"

"Neko-chan," you cut off her rambling. "Shut the fuck up for a second."

Her eyes widen. "Y-you're mad," she mumbles.

"Of course I'm fucking mad!" you growl. "You need to get a hold of yourself. What was that? Six pounds of wagyu steak? Paying for champagne for the next three tables? That little fucking bit where you smashed the Dom Perignon and screamed about how Uruha Rushia's dead? Do you WANT to draw attention to us? I know you're happy but what use is there that we survived a shootout if the pigs get on our case?"

Mikeneko's lower lip tremble. Her eyes haze over with tears and the color drains from her face. "Y-you're right. I'm useless. A fucking worthless cunt... putting you in danger..."

"Hey, come on, I didn't mean it that way-"

"But I do! I do, you're right! I nearly got you and Coco killed before, and now, and now..." She steps forward, unsteady, her hands clasping the front of your shirt. "I know I'm worse than trash, but... I can make up for it, Anon. I can make you feel good with my body... you'd like that, wouldn't you? You're a sicko who can't keep his hands off of girls even when they say no..." She giggles mischievously.

"You're drunk, Neko."

"I'm hor-"

"Excuse me!" A woman's voice. You look up away from Neko. It's the waitress who served your table. She looks upset, and holds the little black book with the receipt and cash for the bill close to her chest. "Sorry, sir, miss. Um."

"Can I help you?" You wondered what this was about. Japs didn't tip, so why would she complain?

"Yes sir, you can. This was a 130k yen bill and you left only 60 thousand yen."

You blink. "Oh shit, I'm so sorry." You were so pissed you sort of just grabbed whatever was on your wallet and slammed it on the table. Great, now you look like an asshole. "Here, I'll pay the difference..."

Before you so much as reach for your wallet, though, Neko steps forward in front of you. Her face is tomato red - shit, she must be way more drunk than you thought. "You fucking coming onto him, you whore? What do you want 70 grand for, huh? That... that how much you charge for a night, you slut?"

"Excuse me?" The waitress spits out. "What the fuck are you talking about?"

"Neko, what the hell, that's not-"

"No, Anon, no," she murmurs, slurring heavily and swooning as though she might vomit at any moment. "I can... I can tolerate Coco-san coming on to you, she's done so much for us... and I know you're a pervert who likes girls too much... but some... some random bitch, on the street, looking at you with her BITCH eyes? No. No. No. No. Thinks just because she served you some steak she can take you away from me? Huh, that right? You want his cock that bad you whore?"

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>>24789711
"Hey, FUCK you, you cunt! I'm just doing my fucking jo- hrk!"

The waitress never finishes her sentence, as Mikeneko grabs one of the loose rocks on the pavement and throws it at her head with all the strength she can muster. The girl drops to the ground with an ugly thud, her limbs twitching spastically. Foam floods her mouth as a seizure spasms through her body.

"Y-yeah! Not so tough now, bitch!"

"Neko-chan, what the fuck!"

"R-relax, Anon... she'll walk it off... oh."

As if to argue this, the girl begins to seize harder, blood seeping from the crack in her skull where the piece of concrete struck her.

"Goddamn it, Neko, you fucked her up! Look at her!" This was supposed to be a night of relaxation and here you are dealing with an impromptu assault! You never should have brought Neko here, at least not without Coco to wrangle her.

"It's OK, it's OK Anon, please don't get mad at me... I can fix this..."

"How in the world are you possibly going to fix-"

BLAM!

The waitress's skull explodes in a shower of gore and brain matter as Mikeneko pulls her gun out of her purse and shoots her in the head, killing her instantly.

"Fuck, run to the car!" You bark at her, going into business mode immediately. "Go, Neko, go!"

"Wait!" Mikeneko leans forward and grabs the bill book, taking out the cash. "OK! Let's go!"

The two of you sprint through the parking lot, reach the Mercedes, and set off.

No sooner have you finally hit the road than Neko cranks open the window, leans forward, and pukes out the entirety of her dinner into the asphalt in a high-speed projectile of vomit. "Oh... oh... Anon, suddenly I feel a lot better," she says, wiping her mouth with a tissue as she leans back onto the passenger seat.

"I cannot fucking believe you did that. Coco's going to fucking kill us."

"But... but I fixed it, right? She won't talk or say who hit her this way. And what's important is, nobody got hurt."

You spare her a glance. Neko's eyes are focused entirely of you, waiting raptly, obsessively for your approval. In spite of everything, of all the horrible things you've seen these past weeks, you can't help but smile. You just saw her murder another girl in cold blood and you still can't bring yourself to feel anything for Neko besides tenderness and affection.

"Yeah. Yeah, you fixed it, Neko-chan. I'm glad we're together."

>> No.24789883

>>24789775
>>24789711
These bits kind of feel like a disjointed snippet of something in the middle of the story.
I like how they read but I feel like it needs the buildup from being in a story.

>> No.24790044

>>24789524
Yeah, I can't quite remember if you've ever done cunnilingus before. Naturally, giving oral sex focuses entirely on the recipient rather than yourself, so there's no padding out prose with flowery descriptions of just how good something feels. To me, it's probably the most intimate form of sex, as your attention is focused mostly on pleasing your partner; paying attention to how their body reacts to your ministrations, and doubling down on every twitch and spasm you feel, until they finally reach a peak, whereupon you take a deep breath and allow yourself to be face-fucked as they lose control and mash their crotch against your face... shit's damn hot, son.
I'm extremely interested to see how your prose turns out here.

>> No.24790418

>>24789883
>These bits kind of feel like a disjointed snippet of something in the middle of the story.
Anon that's what they are

>> No.24791337

>>24789524
That's a cute Fubuki, is this another commission?

>> No.24791928

>>24790044
Pussy smells and tastes bad, so anything to do with licking it is going to be gross.

>> No.24793518
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24793518

>>24691365
Having frequent sexual encounters with Hoshikawa only for it to have been Haato in disguise

>> No.24793592

>>24793518
... My dick

>> No.24793965

>>24696821
Depends on how good the upgrade works out. Wouldn't want a defective unit to spread the message.

>> No.24794594

>>24793518
This, but it's just not Haato; you've just been having frequent sexual encounters with Hoshikawa.

Just... more Hoshikawa in general. Please.

>> No.24794944

>>24794594
Why would Hoshikawa disguise as herself?

>> No.24795063
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24795063

>>24794594
This, though.

>> No.24795791

I'm bored.
What are some less popular fics in the archive that you'd recommend to read?
>inb4 Shrunken Troubles or Paradise Lost
Yes, I've read the shock fics before. You're very clever recommending them.

>> No.24796296

>>24795791
Plastic Little

>> No.24796537

>>24796296
That was the Aki cuck fic right?
I vaguely remember that one as being made to Netorasefag's tastes for NTR and having really tepid dialogue that didn't really work for the type of fic it was.

>> No.24796605

>>24795791
Dammerung

>> No.24796996

>>24796605
Honestly it's a rather competently written insect rape fic. Could be longer but I assume they were more going for shock value rather than fap value.

>> No.24797326

>>24796537
Hey, I liked it. That sort of teasing, report-style dialogue does more for me than the bitchy maso-bullying you see in most western stuff. Unfortunately hard to come by

>> No.24797518

>>24796996
IIRC it was serious. Okay, you win.
Less popular works I'd recommend...
For smut:
The chocosen series
Just a little crazy
Wolfish Winds
Fuck is this?
Onion Layer
HORN-Y!
Ride
First and Last

Side note: it's kind of difficult to think of "less popular works" because there's a lot that I haven't seen mentioned in a while but enjoyed a lot of popularity when they were released.

Remembering how to love her is amazing.

For SFW:
In Hushed Whispers
Gloves Off
A Sheep's Warmth
Hidden Sea Buried Deep
Salt and Shadow
Apocalypse Meow
See you later, my shooting star
A Fistful of Suffering

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>>24795791
Chilli powder and MSG was a cute one that I really liked.
Time is Ticking was fucking funny and I honestly wish we had more Mioposting stories, or stories in a similar vein.
Victory or Death might be one of my favourites because it's dialogue is so good, although it's a shame there isn't an alt Elira ending.

>> No.24797761

>>24797326
Suppose that's why I didn't like the fic then. I prefer harder hitting dialogue even if I find that the writing for that maso-bullying stuff is really easy to fuck up by playing the trope too hard.
Though I suppose that's kind of explained by most of that kind of writing being made by people in the fetish trying to write rather than writer trying to write the fetish which naturally leads to the fetish stuff getting used too liberally.

>> No.24798340

>>24797761
>the writing for that maso-bullying stuff is really easy to fuck up by playing the trope too hard.
This, this is the big problem most of the time. It's not that I don't enjoy really sadistic content; I think I made that abundantly clear last time I got probed and scared people off with how extreme my limits are. It's just that writing that focuses on the brutal bits generally fails to establish the most critical part of the genre to me, that being a genuine desire on the part of the girl to love and satisfy the cuck.

Too often I see scripts or audios or doujins or whatever where the "girlfriend" or "wife" is just a glorified version of your usual cheating bitch/school bully who's only in a relationship with the guy in name, in service of a more malicious end. That doesn't do much for me, even if the teasing is written well, because it's basically just BDSM. The eroticism for me is in the gap between a gentle exterior-facing relationship and an increasingly brutal intimate one, so I'd rather take a fic that gets that right and only covers tame play to one that doesn't, even if the latter otherwise covers my favorite extreme tropes.

Of course, the ideal narrative would cover the full breadth of introducing a girl to the kink, reluctantly getting her to indulge, and then seeing her gradually get more and more into it over the course of several sessions until you're in a brutal position of willing subservience, with affirmations of affection peppered throughout the sections in-between. RJ299746 is to date the closest thing I've experienced to getting this concept down perfectly.

>> No.24798363

>>24797573
Chili Powder and MSG was adorable

>> No.24798601

>>24797518
Thanks anon I'll go down the list now.

>> No.24798727

>>24795791
Ice cream
Parched at night
Strange examinations

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24800321

>>24795063
It never ceases to amaze me just how SEX she is and yet how cute she can be.

>> No.24803001

>>24796996
I wrote it solely for fap value. I've written plenty of shock fics but that is not one of them.

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24803263

Okay, I'm just blanking out on this.
What do you call that thing Matsuri wears as her top in this alternate outfit of hers? I can't seem to think of the right word

>> No.24803312

>>24803263
Camisole?

>> No.24803316

>>24803263
A camisole?

>> No.24803426

>>24803312
>>24803316
>camisole
Thank you.
I completely forgot that fucking word. The closest word I could think before this was corset.

>> No.24803473

>>24803001
And some extreme fap value it does have.
$30

>> No.24803707

>>24803263
Why is Matsuri holding the Demiurge?

>> No.24803742

>>24783063
>the music is good but the lyrics are fucking awful with how chuuni they are
So, it fits the character.

>> No.24803783

>>24803707
HIs name is Ebifrion

>> No.24803910

>>24803001
And hey, someone (presumably new) gave some actually glowing feedback of Paradise Lost of all fics, dunno if you saw it. >>24685597

>> No.24805139

>>24803910
I did see it but I didn't know how to respond.

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>>24805139
Really? I'd just say thanks. Still, I'm sure you've got your own reasons.
Pic unrelated. Choco's plump posterior is on my mind. I wish it was on my face, too.

>> No.24805982

>>24691365
Towa is tired of you calling her a boy, so she tries to do everything to prove she's a girl. Everything, except for taking off her pants.

>> No.24806619

>>24805982
>Femboy Towa
Hot.
...
Probably, needs the right author to do it though. I don't think the same kind of tropes for the femboy suisei fics would fit.

>> No.24806747

>>24805982
We're you going for the femboy route as >>24806619 interprets, or is it a Towa who is simply too embarrassed to show you her 'special place'?

>> No.24806838
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24806838

>>24691365
Towa is taken in by a sweet talking playboy and has her cherry popped. She's weak to pleasure since she's never experienced it before, leading to increasingly depraved acts and gradual alienation from her peers over the following months. She ultimately ends up a smug, chubby junkie practically radiating sex, whereupon she quits Hololive by vulgarly fucking/dirty-talking a guy on stream while shooting herself up

>> No.24807113

>>24806747
Towa being too embarrassed to show it.

>> No.24807160

>>24807113
to show what?

>> No.24807192

>>24807160
Her cock holder

>> No.24807232

>>24807160
Chuubas are apparently crossdressing faggots now. Jeez.

>> No.24807413

>>24807160
Her Ovipositor.
As we all know. Devils lay eggs. Towa is no exception.

>> No.24807811

>>24807413
I wasn't going to get involved in this conversation, as I'm definitely not the intended audience... but now I'm interested.
Towa undergoing metamorphasis and turning into a wasp!
Towa parasitizing Kanata's womb directly through her torso!

>> No.24807830

>>24807160
Her vagina.

>> No.24807935

>>24807830
Huh? "Vagina"? What's that?

>> No.24808085

>>24807935
Something you're thankfully never going to get to see up close.

>> No.24808174

>>24808085
O-oh...

>> No.24808243

>>24807160
Nothing
Literally nothing.
Turns out Towa doesn't have a penis or a vagina. She's totally smooth down there, she doesn't even have an anus.

>> No.24808285

>>24807160
her gaping, blackened, loose holes

>> No.24808300

>>24808243
But anon, where does the waste go?

>> No.24808412

>>24808243
>Towa was secretly a doll the entire time
At least she has a mouth

>> No.24808647

>>24808300
Anon, if there's only one way in and one way out. Where do you think the waste comes out?

>> No.24808682

why y'all so lively? isn't it dead hours?

>> No.24808710

>>24808682
Just a few anons who have no lives and spend all their time here.

>> No.24808730

>>24808647
The dolls in Rozen Maiden never vomit out their tea so I'm going to assume it just evaporates inside of them.

>> No.24808739

>>24808647
That is... I didn't need that mental image in my head. So long, boner, and thanks for all the memories.

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24808868

>>24808682
My oshi is still doing karaoke.

>> No.24808953

This prompt really turned from a klutz shy towa story to a bizarre demonic doll who eats and shits like the titans on aot

>> No.24809079

>>24808953
And the eggs. Don't forget how she reproduces; with her massive arse stinger.

>> No.24809189

>>24809079
bro stop shilling so hard for this bug fetish thing.

Cause realistically speaking demons probably work more like a hivemind so towa is obviously the queen of the hive and fucks everyone to breed more demons

>> No.24809194

>>24808953
It's what happens when ideas bounce around without a clear guiding direction. Sometimes it shifts and births something new.

>> No.24809307

>>24809189
>realistically speaking
>demons
Come on, anon.

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24809374

>>24809307
>He doesn't know what happened in Lockhart, Texas back in the summer of '72

>> No.24809387

>>24809307
Towa isn't..... real?

>> No.24809443

>>24809307
>he doesnt know

>> No.24809561

>>24809387
I'm so sorry, anon...

>> No.24809574

>>24809189
>Towa takes revenge after getting cucked by raping everyone who cucked her and turning their fetuses into baby insect demons like her.
>Forces you to watch as she rapes and mindbreaks every single bitch that fucked you.
Hot.

>> No.24809696

This was clearly the wrong time to propose Towa slut corruption. I thought it would be a bit much in regular time, but it's looking fuckin' tame compared to what else is going on with her now

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24809781

>>24809574

>> No.24809805

i have in my mind the image of a Towa who has bug wings and the abdomen of a wasp waist-down, except instead of a stinger she's got an enormous cock with 2 ballsacks and reproduces by laying her balls inside her victims. her eyes appear to be painted on and her mouth is akin to one of those ventriloquist dummies, and every time she opens it a torrent of shit and piss bursts forth. she exists as part of a larger group of towas, who all share the same thoughts and coordinate their attacks on young girls in order to grow their number and take over the world

>> No.24809902

>>24809781
>>24809805

>> No.24809989

>>24809696
You can still turn it around anon! Believe in your concept. Entice another anon to write about Towa dying in a ditch a Tatted up Gyaru 7 months pregnant, overdosing on Cocaine after she relapsed despite supposedly trying to turn her life around for her baby.

>> No.24809999

>>24809805
What have we done?

>> No.24810046

I autistically archive search mentions of Towa and this is by far the weirdest thing I've come across with mentions of her name, congrats.

>> No.24810071

>>24809989
Has anyone written Emergence with chuuba stand ins yet?

>> No.24810109

>>24810046
we aren't all like this....

>> No.24810119

>>24810071
No, now fuck off.

>> No.24810126

>>24810046
Hey, that's fanfiction for ya. I wouldn't have it any other way, personally.

>> No.24810140

>>24810046
Oh....
Have you read Sad Genuine Smile?

>> No.24810166

>>24810046
You do realize it's impossible for you to get good results from searching Towa since most people will change her name when posting right? I personally almost always call her Tower or Twappi. Very bad choice of chuuba to search for

>> No.24810201

>>24810166
very bad choice of chuuba in general tbqhwyf

>> No.24810251

>>24810109
>>24810126
You're free to do whatever you want, just very weird to come across.
>>24810140
Yes, well-written, but I am not the target demographic for it, very much so.
>>24810166
Who says I don't? I need help.

>> No.24810250

>>24810071
I was thinking more of that one K-On doujin by Mizuryu Kei, frankly

>> No.24810284

>>24810071
...
I'd totally read a Rushia -> Mikeneko Moral Degeneration fic if anyone would ever write one.

>> No.24810479

>>24810284
She's become a girl of more sound moral character, though.

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>Towa getting sweettalked by a fan after a big live!
>Towa losing her virginity behind the stage despite never having masturbated before!
>Towa thinking the guy is her boyfriend now and seeking him out despite him having thought he'd pumped and dumped her!
>Towa being forcefully taught to give blowies and believing everything she hears about what's "normal for couples to do"!
>Towa awkwardly agreeing to be in gangbangs with the guy's friends and get anally trained over the next few weeks!
>Towa's genmates worrying about how much time she's spending off streaming and wondering

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>>24810594
>Towa's genmates worrying about how much time she's spending off streaming and wondering who those guys she keeps driving off with are!
>Towa letting her "boyfriend" shoot her up with something cause it'll apparently "send her brain to nirvana" when fucking!
>Towa doing it again, and again, and again, staying in his shithole crib for days at a time, fucking while high nearly 24/7!
>Towa gradually losing friendships since she's gaining loads of weight, smells of smoke all the time, and talks more and more vulgarly by the day!
>Towa becoming the neighborhood "freak" after having been dicked down by practically every single man for ten square miles!
>Towa starting to get her kicks from seducing virgin-looking boys near supermarkets with her chubby, sex-smelling assets and newly confident attitude!
>Towa calling her old friends prudes and walking off in disgust while flipping them off when they try to hold an intervention!
>Towa booting up her stream for the first time in weeks to her getting DP'd while near-overdosing and earning thousands in supas before she's banned!
>Towa getting fired and not giving a shit as long as she keeps getting good food, booze, cigs, speed, and cock!

>> No.24810665

>>24810479
Anon, she's gone fucking loopy.

>> No.24810713

>>24810654
Now write about what happens to her in the distant future.

>> No.24810742
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>Towa getting sweettalked by a fan after a big live!
>Towa losing her virginity behind the stage despite never having masturbated before!
>Towa thinking the guy is her boyfriend now and seeking him out despite him having thought he'd pumped and dumped her!
>Towa being forcefully taught to give blowies and believing everything she hears about what's "normal for couples to do"!
>Towa awkwardly agreeing to be in gangbangs with the guy's friends and get anally trained over the next few weeks!
>Towa's genmates worrying about how much time she's spending off streaming and wondering who those guys she keeps driving off with are!
>Towa letting her "boyfriend" shoot her up with something cause it'll apparently "send her brain to nirvana" when fucking!
>Towa doing it again, and again, and again, staying in his shithole crib for days at a time, fucking while high nearly 24/7!
>Towa gradually losing friendships since she's gaining loads of weight, smells of smoke all the time, and talks more and more vulgarly by the day!
>Towa becoming the neighborhood "freak" after having been dicked down by practically every single man for ten square miles!
>Towa starting to get her kicks from seducing virgin-looking boys near supermarkets with her chubby, sex-smelling assets and newly confident attitude!
>Towa calling her old friends prudes and walking off in disgust while flipping them off when they try to hold an intervention!
>Towa booting up her stream for the first time in weeks to her getting DP'd while near-overdosing and earning thousands in supas before she's banned!
>Towa getting fired and not giving a shit as long as she keeps getting good food, booze, cigs, speed, and cock!

Jesus, maybe I'm the one who's going screwy, never fucked up a copypaste so hard in my life

>> No.24810778

>>24810654
That just makes me sad. Drugs are evil, dude. When people who do not the willpower or discipline to use them responsibly take them, their lives are over. Never a fun thing to see.

>> No.24810868

>>24810742
Now give the Towa the Full Emergence Experience and write about her tragic death.

>> No.24811024

>>24810778
It's terrible but that's life.

>> No.24811064

>>24809696
Personally, I'm all for sluttification. The part where "She ultimately ends up a smug, chubby junkie practically radiating sex, whereupon she quits Hololive by vulgarly fucking/dirty-talking a guy on stream while shooting herself up" is a hard pass, though. Also, I find "gradual alienation from her peers over the following months" depressing and missing out on an opportunity; why not have Towa corrupt them, too?

>>24810665
NTA, but I thought she was getting help now?

>> No.24811145

>>24811064
Because Drugs are bad anon.
Anyone that becomes a junkie like her is doomed.

>> No.24811228

>>24811064
It's kind of weird. I wouldn't actually want to fuck her in that state, but the idea itself of someone like her having her personality and body perverted to such a degree is immensely erotic to me

>> No.24811418

>>24811228
I think you might enjoy exploring the moral degeneration tag on a certain site then.

>> No.24811483

>>24811064
Her help isn't working. Mikeneko isn't stark raving mad, but the great yab and losing her career clearly fucked her head up, possibly permanently.

>> No.24811508

>>24811064
It's disgusting both in RL and in fiction and I can't get hard to either. Fuck junkies

>> No.24811958

>>24811064
>t. never met a real junkie before.

>> No.24812012

>>24811483
In fairness that entire fucking episode happening at that time of year had to have utterly fucked her up.
She made her bed with her actions but damn was she not in a good place to make any good ones.

>> No.24812180

>>24812012
Then the stupid bitch shouldn’t have had a boyfriend.

>> No.24812265

>>24812012
She played with fire and got burned. Weird to me people are forgiving her, but hey... audience reflects the oshi, and all that.

>> No.24812543

>>24812265
I remember when they put their thread's subject in japanese and when that didn't work they hid on poal.me. Fun times.

>> No.24812594

New thread
>>24812194

>> No.24812820

>>24812594
Wow, speaking of chuubas with boyfriends...

>> No.24813020

>>24812820
kek

>> No.24815287
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Here's your Astel Express ticket to the next thread, head on over!

We recently fumigated all the cars, so while your trip may smell odd, it'll be bug free!

>> No.24815472

>>24815287
The hell is this cringe? Bring back Luna rape

>> No.24815988
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>>24815472
The Astel Express is a cringe-free trip, sir! Though, if you don't want to get on, then that must mean...

>> No.24816413

>>24815988
Where are the bitches, Astel

I was promised this train would be overflowing with gash

>> No.24816597
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>>24816413
Don't know where you heard that one! Though, if you can't hold out 'till we arrive at the station, Miyabi is in the next car!

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