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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>24501659

>> No.24603809
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.24603848
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24603848

Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread.

Kimagure Mercy: Tags: Kronii, Civia, gaslighting, manipulation, power difference, soft femdom:>>24502819

Bellerophon: Tags: Fubuki, Mio, Ayame, NSFW, bestiality: >>24505912

Helping Friend: Tags: NSFW, Fubuki, Mio, Futa on male: >>24529958

Old Yeller: Tags: NSFW, Mumei, bestiality:>>24566345

>> No.24603951
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

I need some WAFF.:>>24505828

Gay sex with Mikeneko!:>>24520044

A darkly comedic series of vignettes of Kiara’s various deaths.:>>24536220

A comedy fic about ironing out Matsuri's ahoge:>>24553317

Dealing with the fact you can't fully satisfy Korone and the wounds you've received due to this:>>24557068

An obsessive Marine finally tracks down the individual responsible for hypnotizing Chloe during her birthday stream - so she can make them do the same to her:>>24570725

Convincing Polka to put on a little more weight so you can fuck her in the bellybutton:>>24599463

>> No.24604625

Whatever happened to that Yandere Mori fic where she kills your entire family? That never got a sequel?

>> No.24605131

>>24604625
What the fuck would the sequel be? She kills your dog?

>> No.24605366
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>>24604625
Psycho Killer should fine and in the archive, but yeah that sequels probably never coming out.

>> No.24605559

>>24602164
> after a while you begin to have doubts about blackmailing her earlier
> she seemingly forgets about it and just enjoys sex she didn't know she was lacking in her life
> doubts turn to guilt, which grows and becomes unbearable
> you begin distancing yourself from her, thinking she still is disgusted, and it becomes really painful for both of you
> you both sit down for a talk where you decide that the best way to apologize is to give her the keys to your nuclear silo, so to speak
> tell her you are a VTuber as well

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It's showtime

>> No.24606519

>>24606424
Undelete it

>> No.24606527

>>24605559
What a tweest.

>> No.24607472

>>24605559
>Cuck your fans by streaming yourselves having sex
Forgot the ending there anon

>> No.24608086

>>24603848
(You) are a Cover employee which was tasked to handle anything Holotori related, and when the peafowl and phoenix decided to take a vacation to Maldives, they invited you as well to have threesome sex

>> No.24608136

>>24608086 (me)
Alternatives:
They invite you to go with them just to tie you up and force you to watch them having lesbian sex

>> No.24609338

>>24603902
>Helping Friend
Sadly no knotting but eh Friend and Mio futa action.

>> No.24610573

>>24604625
Author dropped it for some inane reason and will never continue it. So don’t bother getting your hopes up.

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>>24609338
I'm going to be real with you. I forgot wolves do that knotting thing. A part of my brain didn't want me to write anything close to alpha omega fics

>> No.24611552

>>24611502
>didn't want me to write anything close to alpha omega fics
But it'd be so funny.

>> No.24611689

>>24611502
OmegaAlph is at your door and needs (YOU) To help motivate Sana to stream more often.

>> No.24611774

>>24611502
It doesn't have to be like that! You can just get nut in the ass and not get ass pregnant, dude!!

>> No.24611874

>>24611552
>>24611774
Sure, I'll do it for the next time I write anything gay af involving animal vtubers who can knot.

Do calico cats knot?

>> No.24611900

>>24611874
What the fuck? No. Cats have barbs, not knots.

>> No.24612016

>>24611874
I mean that sounds like you want to write a gay Korone fic next.
>>24611900
>Getting your ass destroyed by Mikeneko's barbed cock scraping it.
Hot....
Maybe...
Needs the right writer for it.

>> No.24613632

ascend

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>>24613632

>> No.24613811
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>>24613632
Looking at my wife's smile helps.

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>>24613632

>> No.24614239
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24614239

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!

Bonus question: Share something you're stuck on.

>> No.24614383

>>24603798
>Takamori
Okay, where is it?

>> No.24614424

>>24614239
I'd like to say I'm working on 3 different stories but in actuality I'm just procrastinating by watching streams.

>> No.24614462

>>24614383
Ao3 mostly.
This thread really doesn't have any Yuri writers and even if we did they'd probably only write about ships with chemistry.

>> No.24614463

>>24614383
dead

>> No.24614486

>>24614239
i'm stuck in a fucking rut. i frequent pixiv a lot, have a pretty big feed, and every time i see a new r18 matsuri pic there's a 2 in 5 chance i immediately open up FoS and jerk it. i don't know how many times i've used that fic, but definitely more than ten. i don't even watch matsuri, and i used to think of her as just a crazy yab machine to be avoided, but now she's dominating my lust-addled coombrain.

someone send help

>> No.24614635

>>24614239
Bonus: I feel like my prose has been too basic lately, and I’m also constantly running out of ways to describe actions like “her eyes widen.” I know there’s a few alternatives but I’ve used them all up and don’t want to get repetitive.
Also writing natural-feeling romance is bloody hard. I want to make it believable. but then again IRL “romance” is a lot less interesting.
>>24614486
Do you even want to be helped? Sounds like you’re content and having fun.

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>>24614635
Romance are just chemicals in your brain so make the characters have good chemistry

>> No.24615108

>>24614462
So should I do my archive reps then, anon?

>>24614463
You faggot, I'm talking about the archives

>> No.24615204

>>24614818
Thank you Ina!

>> No.24615323

If (You) as in the collective singular Anon that exists in every self insert were to get an Instagram account, what would their username be?

>> No.24615411

>>24615323
'Someone'

>> No.24615449

>>24615323
pomu

>> No.24615460

>>24615323
Those would be some insane photos.

>> No.24615480

>>24614635
>I feel like my prose has been too basic lately, and I’m also constantly running out of ways to describe actions like “her eyes widen.” I know there’s a few alternatives but I’ve used them all up and don’t want to get repetitive.
Honestly this just feels like something you should fix up in editing if you're getting stuck here while writing something. Though if you're not stuck at writing but editing, that 'her eyes widened' problem can probably be fixed by varying up how the emotion expressed is seen/written. i.e focusing the narration on a different part of the body language.
As for the 'basic prose' problem. That sounds like you need a beta reader or some other form of outside viewpoint. You may be thinking it's too basic due to having read it so much whereas an outside viewer might disagree.

>> No.24615685

>>24615323
You probably have enough free reign to make any choice here but my dumbass thinks it would be funny if it was just an @ followed but a string of U+2588 characters

>> No.24615693

>>24615323
Anonymous

>> No.24615718

>>24615480
>fixed by varying up how the emotion expressed is seen/written. i.e focusing the narration on a different part of the body language.
Yeah, good point. Sometimes I really want the focus to be on facial expressions but you’re right, I should mix it up a bit.
>beta reader
That’s what you guys are for, because I’m definitely not about to tell my friends I write vtuber fanfiction.

>> No.24616496

>>24611689
>Take on the job
>Come to Sana to try and teach her how to motivate herself to stream better but-
>Your Alpha Male instincts smell her Omega Pussy.
>Lose your mind and rape her.
>Knot in both of her holes.
>Impregnate both her ass and her pussy.
>Also break her back.
>Get arrested and fired.

>> No.24616789

>>24616496
>Not getting taken to OmegaAlpha's playroom where you're forced to listen to its endless babbling about lore until you wish it just impaled you on a sword or something

>> No.24616999

>>24616789
Jokes on you I want to hear how ebin awesome his oc donut steel is. Omegaalpha? More like omega out of a job.

>> No.24617489

>>24615108
We have like one Takamori fic, I think it came out after the whole 'Kiara declared Takamori was changing/dead' thing from last year.
Pretty sure the docs link died but the fic "Takamori No More" is still up on ao3.

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>>24603809
I posted this over at /pavonashi/ and I figured I'd post here as well for feedback and criticism. This would be the first fic I published to the internet.

PavoNashi Maldives: Of Sunscreen and Skinship

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRo2UFk5_8IuSljgnIPToF0eXNPHcn6ShjjUpbbAWDZFjVKPgYCp99xv7IgMRPR9XFi2kYDKjWjw_r9/pub

tags: Pavolia Reine, Takanashi Kiara, NSFW, Yuri, Beach, Massage, Fingering

>> No.24618085

>>24614239
Mumei gradually fattening Fauna over the course of several months before swallowing her whole and alive

>> No.24618468

>>24617740
Hot damn, you should come write for us instead; your prose is some really high quality stuff. Great descriptions, especially the massage, and although I’m not usually a yuri kinda guy my dick liked this story very much. Only problem I might have with this story is that the writing is a little TOO colourful and frilly, as in there were a lot of unnecessary/overly long sentences that made the pacing and buildup a little slow.
Solid fic, great job.

>> No.24618555

>>24614486
Write matsuri fanfiction then. Seems like that would solve both of your problems of being in lust with matsuri and being in a creative rut.

>> No.24618585

>>24618468 (me)
Also to add onto this I think the ending was a tad abrupt and quick in contrast to the rest of the fic. I think you could have extended that out some more and maybe added some post-orgasm dialogue or cuddling.

>> No.24618802

>>24617740
Yeah I'm thinking based and I don't say that about yuri lightly

>> No.24619253

>>24617740
Yo this shit is written well.

>> No.24619665

>>24618468
>>24618585

The vividly descriptive writing is intentional, as I intended to make 'slowly but surely getting hornier and hornier' the main charm of the fic.

As for the ending... yeah, I figured as much. Didn't really know what the best way to end it would've been, Since I practically nutted enough times as I wrote, proofread and edited the fic that at that point, my brain was suffering from coomrot.

>> No.24620037

>>24603848
Beating your Oshi in a fight so bad that they strip themselves of their clothes and do a naked dogeza to beg for mercy.

>> No.24620541

>>24620037
This, butt.

>> No.24620600

>>24620037
You'd need to beat them until they felt the difference in power down to their very soul.

>> No.24620980

>>24620600
That honestly sounds pretty hot. I like to think they've done nothing to deserve it, too. Like, imagine Fubuki's sweet, smiling face greeting you in the morning with a lover's kiss, and you sock her so hard she flies back a good few meters - and then you just go to town on her. By the end of it, she's just a sobbing heap, her clothes in tatters, and she can do nothing but apologize over and over through a busted jaw and swollen face. She doesn't know what she's apologizing for, she just does it reflexively, fearing for her life.

Then you say, "That's better." And go make yourself a bowl of cereal.

>> No.24621224

>>24620980
>Actually abusing chuubas
Why does that make my pp hard?

>> No.24621519

>>24621224
Because Fubuki would enjoy it.

>> No.24621577

>>24618085
hot, especially the /ag/ part

>> No.24621913

>>24620980
That just makes me feel bad.

>> No.24622604
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>>24614239
Chuuba and Tarkov thingy

Bonus: I feel a little bit iffy when it comes to writing a decent prose, I tend to write myself into detail and I feel as though that makes it lengthy and tiresome to read through. Is there a decent guide on what a flow of a prose should be?

>> No.24622866

>>24615323
@Anony_muz
Bio:
- 2* years old
- **/** :party_popper_emoji:
- 4Chan/vt :earth_emoji:
- On a journey to find myself spiritually :hands_prayer_emoji:

>> No.24623152

>>24622866
>2*
>not 3*

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>>24623152
Ok gramps, let's get you to bed yeah?

>> No.24624355

>>24619665
Don't worry. It happens to the best of us. That is why it's better to hold the coomrot before finishing the story, you need a bit of horny to make a good climax. Literally and metaphorically speaking.

All things considered it's pretty well written, solid 9 out of 10

>> No.24624414

>>24621224
I mean that is how is /wg/ was born

>> No.24624858

>>24614239
May 4th was my last update but I can feel it returning

>> No.24624873

>>24624858
update on what?

>> No.24625074

>>24624873
Google doc

>> No.24625098

>>24625074
ok

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>>24603848
Just anything to do with yandere Kanatan. My desire for it grows everyday

>> No.24625895

>>24621224
Because you're an actual psycho

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>>24603798
/meat/ here
Requesting any cannibalism/guro stories you guys have made. Any chuuba accepted

>> No.24626259

>>24625975
They should all be tagged with 'gore' in the archive

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>>24625975

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>>24626259
>search gore
>48 results

>> No.24626614

>>24626536
there's only been a couple that might meet /meat/ standards, i think, so don't set your expectations too high

>> No.24626923

>>24603848
Ina is too sick to preach to her congregation, so Sana takes over. Cue lots of trippy, stream of consciousness philosophy from the esoteric to the banal, ending with her accidentally destroying the Earth again.

>> No.24626949

>>24626614
I'm kinda scared only a couple out of almost 50 fit the /meat/ standards. The bar is too high

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>>24603809
>>24553317

Matsuri ahoge correction

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSBUgVD5NFejFBuxY04ZRx3MmBJg__MWtWrTMIfmVxwtgsNxGFqbZ8Rikid6KjFgUYRsndhRrGvuFiF/pub

Tags: Matsuri, Fubuki, SFW, Ahoge Correction

>> No.24629627

>>24628771
Surprisingly hot

>> No.24630344

>>24628771
made me chuckle

>> No.24631049
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24631049

>>24628771
Most evil Anon that's been written here

>> No.24632028

>>24614239
Self-indulgent story involving Fubuki in a high school setting. Having a hard time writing it because of Uni and general procrastination.

>> No.24633183

>>24628771
>>24631049
That was an utter blast! Hilarious, yet surprisingly emotional and with well-done narration.

I'm guessing you were inspired by those pics? Didn't think that ahoge abuse would be a fetish big enough to get fanart and stories.

>> No.24633761

>>24614239
Working on what I hope will be the last chapter.
>Something I'm stuck on
Making sure it's actually the last chapter

>> No.24633846

>>24633761
whatcha writing?

>> No.24633877

>>24633846
Say, Can You See?

>> No.24633922

>>24620980
That kind of ridiculous, unfair, disgusting abuse....is ok once in a while. I'm pretty interested in this, gonna anchor it.
>>24603848

>> No.24633968

>>24633877
ahhhh, coming up to the finale. writing a powerful send off for that is gonna be a chore

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>> No.24635987

>>24635857
God I wish I could lick Polka's hairy fat pussy

>> No.24636101

>>24628771
Original requester here, this was everything I wanted out of the concept.
That Fubuki in the ending was a really nice touch as well

>> No.24637399

>>24628771
>>24631049
reminds me of the VOMS having specific death conditions, like Miuneru's screws being removed or Ryugon realizing that he's not actually a garchomp

>> No.24638283

>>24628771
Left the prompt originally, thanks for taking it up. All can I say is, uh
Holy fuck that is weirdly real and it made me really uncomfortable. But that is expected from a glorified rape/mutilation/mindbreak fic, hidden behind a flimsy ahoge metaphor that might not even be there at all. Disbelief, anger, bargaining, powerless directionless sorrow... somehow they hit really hard.
I posted that prompt as a joke, but now I feel like I should have never done that, even as a joke. Like, "haha, let's see %chuuba_name% raped and in tatters, wouldn't that be LIT" but then "oh fuck, what was I thinking when I posted that".
Nevertheless, you did a great job. It's all like I imagined but even more.
Gonna need to atone indirectly doing that to her by posting some fluffy prompts instead.
This "review" might come off as disjointed or schizophrenic but that's because I feel like I was hit by a truck after reading it.

>> No.24638580

>>24636101
>>24638283
so which one of you is lying?

>> No.24638868
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24638868

>>24638580
I posted the picture and the first comment
The other posted the actual prompt

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>>24635987
Polka isn't hairy nor is she fat (anymore)

>> No.24639376

>>24639227
Polka absolutely does not shave. My wife has a bush. The biggest bush

>> No.24639496

>>24639376
Your nobunaga reps...

>> No.24639609

>>24639496
Is this a nobuhime reference or what

>> No.24639775

>>24639376
Polka's chicken skin is so smooth it'd put a baby's bare ass to shame. Snoother than eggs. The striations across the surface of her crotch skin have an indent width visible only with a high power microscope

>> No.24639935

>>24639609
No. I'm telling you to go study Japanese history and learn to be a real man instead of wishing fictional women to be hairy apes on an anonymous seal clubbing forum

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>>24603848
Escorting Matsuri to your home because you don't want her to get sick under rain. Having her warm herself up in a hot bath while you cook her a hot dinner (instant noodles with whatever was in the fridge at the time for extra comfiness). Her coming out of the bath in your mismatched clothes that are clearly too big for her! You both enjoying time together, watching TV under the same blanket!! Sleeping soundly together to warm each other up!!!

>> No.24641490

>>24641204
i was eagerly waiting for the twist and i'm thoroughly disappointed with your prompt. i hope it doesn't get filled and that you find yourself getting raped by a dolphin sometime in the future

>> No.24642370

I actually got around to reading shrunken troubles, after seeing it touted as a shock fic so many times. And I'm really surprised. It's not written like a shock fic at all - I'm ashamed to say it's written really well, choice of content aside, and I managed to get off to it. I think Paradise Lost is definitely intended to shock though. I read that too and it's almost comedic how the setup is as innocuous as possible and then fucking everything happens all at once. Feels like the author focused on packing as much disgust as possible into the first paragraph because it's just a wallop. I got whiplash with how quick that went from 0 to 10. Was very funny.

>> No.24642699

>>24622604
>Is there a decent guide on what a flow of a prose should be?
That’s always the hard part. I suffer from this problem too, but if I had to say, in think the more frilly the writing the better.

>> No.24642839

>>24642370
I mean shrunken troubles is only touted as a shock fic since it is deliberately mistagged. It is sort of shocking if you don't expect it but it is a legitimate fetish fic about insect fucking not a shock fic focused on a gross out.
Paradise Lost isn't suprise recommend for shock since it is properly tagged.

>> No.24642928

>>24624414
I thought we were originally about getting abused not being the abuser

>> No.24643059

>>24638283
>I posted that prompt as a joke, but now I feel like I should have never done that, even as a joke.
Welcome to the internet.

>> No.24643275

>>24642839
Oh yeah, you're right. I didn't even read the tags. That makes much more sense.

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24643637

>>24639775
NOOOO I CAN'T IMAGINE THIS

>> No.24643987

>>24603848
Melware infects/corrupts/reprograms Zen before she can travel back in time.

>> No.24644419
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>>24642370
At the time I was making Shrunken Troubles, I had no intention or expectation of it being for anyone other than my commissioner because I figured the fetish was niche enough that people would just throw a shit fit over it. So I uploaded it with false tags to trick the first clueless fool or two that went in expecting Fubuki x Shion yuri, but it turns out a lot more people enjoyed it than I expected. I suppose if you put enough effort into something, then it's hard for at least some people out there to not enjoy it. AA was into the idea of fake tags though because he uploaded it to the archives as it was posted without me having to ask, so that's why most people will recommend it to tourists passing by. Besides the maggot part, I'm quite proud of Shrunken Troubles for how well it did, especially given the amount of effort I put into it.

>> No.24644624

>>24622604
For flow, a good bit of advice I've read is to read what you've written out loud so that your mind's autocorrect is shaken up and you can get a better idea for how it flows together. If it passes that test then it's probably working at flowing well.

>> No.24645076

>>24644419
I, too, am surprised that it was arousing because of the subject matter. It focuses very heavily on Fubuki's feelings and inner monologue rather than the nitty gritty details of...well, being bred by a fly. I'm not entirely sure that's how flies breed, either, but I suppose it is hotter. I hope your commissioner was pleased with it and thank you for sharing it here.

Are you doing or have done any more like it?
Asking for a friend of course.

>> No.24645407

>>24645076
Yeah Bunny Trap in the series archive, has tentacles and a spider. You can skip the slime part, was a big miss on my side

>> No.24645511

>>24645407
Thanks, I'll check it out later.

>> No.24647506

>>24645076
>It focuses very heavily on Fubuki's feelings and inner monologue rather than the nitty gritty details of...well, being bred by a fly
I am the opposite of an expert, but I recall reading that's how you make good sex scenes.

>> No.24647969

>>24647506
Yeah but I expected it to be very heavily into the fetish content. Descriptions of internal processes or something of the like. Wasn't the case at all.

>> No.24649501
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24649501

>>24638283
I expected some “lighthearted” comedy on the story but got hit pretty hard as well not gonna lie. Fuck me i feel bad for laughing at the prompt initially now

>> No.24650026

>>24614383
sunken

>> No.24651984
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24651984

>>24603848
Intense, passionate beach sex with her
featuring toys maybe?

>> No.24654298

>>24651984
Is that supposed to be Matsuri?

>> No.24656503

>>24638283
Let this be a lesson not to tempt anonymous people on the internet. You never know when you'll end up on the wrong end of weaponized autism. Especially in the pit of 4chan, when it's quite likely someone enjoys seeing pure things suffer. Sorry to hear you regret making the prompt, but not really because I enjoyed the result.

>> No.24656848

>>24654298
Yeah

>> No.24656916

>>24645407
>>24644419
Oh, you're the Bunny Trap guy? Cool. Is a third installment in the works?

And just how do a bunch of anonymous people on 4chan go about paying for story commissions?

>> No.24658678

>>24656916
>And just how do a bunch of anonymous people on 4chan go about paying for story commissions?
NTA, but isn't it just emailing to inquire about commissions, negotiating it through emails then they give you their paypal/payment method?

>> No.24658751

>>24656503
>>24638283
I indirectly led to the creation of Paradise Lost. Be grateful

>> No.24658978

>>24658751
Scatfag?

>> No.24659755

>>24658751
Did you make a joking request about eating fubuki's diarrhea that somehow connected a writer into making Paradise Lost?

>> No.24660420

>>24656916
Yeah, I'm working on Bunny Trap part 3 already, being at 4K words, but it's currently on a small pause for a week or so because I need to focus on some stuff.

As per the commission thing, I just leave my email at the bottom of my fics and whoever wants to commission can do so. Not that I have gotten anyone with this method nor do I expect anyone to do it, it's just more of a... "It's there because why not?" kind of thing.

>> No.24662861
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24662861

>>24613811

>> No.24663155

>>24603848
you were raped as a kid by an unknown woman who was never seen again.
after 10 years of not talking to females, you decide to go to the local club and try to get a gf.
you meet a girl in her late 30's called marine and start drinking with her.
you regain consciousness and find yourself in her bed, marine next to you.
after realizing you woke up she tells you how much how much she missed you

(can change oshi if you want, i just picked marine since she seemed the most fitting to me)

>> No.24663627

>>24663155
Reminds me of that legendary matsuri outline about her ruining you as a kid.

>> No.24664036

>>24658978
>>24659755
I made a joke about /wg/, and then it eventually turned into reality.
>>/vt/thread/S9096701#p9128717

>> No.24665079

>>24656916
You go through paypal. Careful, though - paypal will make sure you're not aonymous for very long. Found that out the hard way.

>> No.24665270

>>24656916
Ask an author for an email if they don't provide it, send them money via Paypal or Cashapp or something, receive story when it's done.

>> No.24665664

One of you faggots had the once in a lifetime opportunity to doxx pekofag and didn't take it. That's such a waste.

>> No.24665830

>>24665664
Yeah, and now she shits up the thread without any consequences.

>> No.24666221
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24666221

>>24665664
I've spent the last 2-3 months completely erasing any trace of my existence out of the internet. I have deleted most of my unnecessary accounts, changed the name from all the other ones and most importantly, finally managed to get that one page that I was worried about shut down. Not only that, but I also managed to find a completely anonymous method of payment which is about as safe as PayPal. I'm a ghost now... only one man holds the knowledge of my existence.

>> No.24666263

>>24666221
What was that Paypal thing?

>> No.24666331

>>24666263
It's this amazing new technology that can't be traced back to anyone. It was pretty hard to find it, but it was definitely worth the effort. It's called... "Bitcoin".

>> No.24666368

>>24665664
I'm not about to abuse his trust. The very thought makes me ill, so... no dice, Jim Rice.

>> No.24666473

>>24666368
And to everyone spreading rumors that we are in a homosexual relationship, it's not true. We did quote on quote "hold hands in the park while eating icecream", we did not. So stop the lies and stop the hate.

>> No.24666512

>>24666368
You realize that could actually be used to stop him shitposting all the time, right? It's not as if it'd be a death sentence.

>> No.24666525

>>24666473
Can you please fuck off?

>> No.24666554

I'm seriously beginning to think that the bugfucker hasn't shown up in a while and it's just PF pretending to be him. Cause I don't remember him speaking like an ESL in the way that he is now

>> No.24666581

>>24666331
Oh please nigga if the cops want to trace you down they can even if you use shitcoins.
Hell the Glowies probably help spread that lie so they can doorkick people who are retarded to try and buy bombs and shit with it.

>> No.24666645

>>24666581
Yeah thankfully I did nothing illegal.

>> No.24666717

>>24666645
Aside from get an adult to send you pictures of his dick. Considering you're at most 16 that's kind of illegal.

>> No.24667007

>>24666717
NTA but pekofag wouldn't be the one getting in trouble in that case, that would be subjection anon.

>> No.24667072

>>24666331
If you're actually serious I hate you

>> No.24667476

>>24667072
Might be giving him too much credit, but to unwittingly embarrass himself three threads in a row? That's some "toddler doesn't remember the stove is hot" stuff. Now, I don't know what's going down there in South America, but a shithole as dangerous as that would instill that principle at the very least.

>> No.24667966

>>24666512
Maybe, but unlikely. Regardless, it's not something I'm willing to do. For what it's worth, I think his... rants... are just as cringe as the rest of you, and I've mentioned as such.

>>24666554
Still here. >>24666473 isn't me. Generally I don't respond to the oil baron, bugfag etc callouts though

>> No.24668049

>>24667476
I will never consider sharing my opinion or starting a civil debate (at least on my part) "embarrassing myself", this is what is fundamentally different about us.

>> No.24668296

Anyways, what are you guys working on?

>> No.24668392

>>24668296
My sleep schedule

>> No.24668445

>>24668296
My life, not >>24668392 this tho, that's cringe

>> No.24668460

>>24668296
My sleep schedule, too. Surprise unemployment a couple weeks ago and suddenly I'm nocturnal.

>> No.24668474

>>24668049
I know you don't see it that way, it's well established that you have a very tenuous grasp on reality, but you're "opinion" is consistently the equivalent of seeing something blue and saying it's red. Then when everybody rightfully calls you an idiot you just go "oh that's a personal attack that's not an argument" and proceed to compare yourself to Stephen Hawking.

>>24668296
Like my fourth whiskey and coke and a bunch of WIPs

>> No.24668527

>>24668474
>Then when everybody rightfully calls you an idiot you just go "oh that's a personal attack that's not an argument" and proceed to compare yourself to Stephen Hawking
I fucking laughed at this summary. Seems comedic in retrospect.

>> No.24668947

>>24668474
People are different and seeing your side of the argument will never not be interesting to me. I'm not purposefully contrarian, which is why I love getting into debates. Besides, I can't stress this enough, but it's very rare for someone to rebut with an argument and not attack, which is why my opinion never changes. The argument becomes more amusing than knowledgeable once they go for a personal insult because at that point I already know I won, so the rest is just to see how the person thinks like, which is often times quite interesting when their answers aren't blatant, low effort shitposting. The fact that you can't even begin to understand my point of view is indeed something I love to see.

However, when someone DOES rebut with an actual argument, there's rarely anything more fun. I think that even if both sides don't change their ideology, it's still added knowledge to my repertoire.

>>24668296
Nothing that I wasn't working on one week ago.

>> No.24669244

>>24668947
Debate? There's nothing to debate. The sum of all your intellect only manages to produce drivel like "nobody gets characters in the archive right but me and ao3!"
Of course nobody's going to take you seriously.

>> No.24669339

>>24669244
I never said I do better than anyone here. People love to get mad about things that were never said, maybe this is why no one can bear to argue around here.

>> No.24669510

>>24669339
Get aids and die, macaco.

>> No.24669542

For fuck's sake shut up already.

>> No.24669631

>>24669542
Suck my dick, choke on it and give my balls a lick

>> No.24669935
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24669935

>>24668947
Did you read my post at all or did you manufacture a different one in your mind so you could post this response? Because this is exactly what I said you do and you touched on nothing I was actually talking about.

>> No.24669960

>>24668049
You say “civil debate” but the moment you get BTFO’d you just stop replying.

>> No.24669980
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24669980

You faggots have his email take it there

>> No.24670005

>>24669631
Take your idiotic argument somewhere else. This is the writing thread.

>> No.24670153

>>24670005
You cannot seriously believe that that is me. I was wondering why people still called me a shitposter when I've only done civil debates for the last 6 months, I was pretty confused. The last time I shat on someone was that one anon who inserted his trauma into stories and threw away chuuba personalities, and that was a long ass fucking time ago. I guess this is the answer of why.

>> No.24670320

>>24670153
Motherfucker TWO THREADS AGO you accused every single writer of not watching streams and every single fic of having bad characterization

>> No.24670347

>>24670153
>>24670320
GET A FUCKING ROOM

>> No.24671531

>>24670347
this is how hatefucking happens

>> No.24671562
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24671562

Why did she do it?

>> No.24671656

>>24671562
Holy shit, unfathomably based chimken. Fuck the green liar.

>> No.24671737

>>24671562
the fuck happened with calli

>> No.24671769
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24671769

>>24671656
Kiara would cry if she saw what you just said

>> No.24671895

>>24671737
IIRC that was the tweet she put out when publicly reacting to Rushia getting fired

>> No.24672060

>>24671895
Ohh. The timestamp thoroughly fooled me, oh well
I want to eat out Calli's mom then engage in wine-fueled oyakodon

>> No.24672100

>>24671562
Based thot slayer.

>> No.24672348

>>24668296
The same thing I was working on when this question was asked in this same thread literally yesterday

>> No.24672871

I still find it fucking baffling that the archive has over 100,000 views, not even counting the separate series archive. Even if there were fifty regulars here, we’d each have to visit the archive two thousand times. The rentry hasn’t even been around for a year either, so we could add the pastebin view count as well. Has every Anon on /vt/ come to visit multiple times or something?

>> No.24672912

>>24672871
I've been here for a year and have read almost every smut fic but I doubt my total view count would ever be above 300 so the views from regulars must not be that high.

>> No.24673148

>>24672871
>Archive has been shared on Twitter and Facebook groups

>> No.24673197

>>24673148
I've seen the archive being posted on r/hololewd a couple of times already

>> No.24673272

>>24673148
>>24673197
truly a terrifying prospect

>> No.24673323

>>24668296
Honestly I assume we have that 90-9-1 rule happening to us and have like 100ish lurkers stalking the archive for new fics. I think we just have a bunch of lurkers who just read fics and never say much.
I think the rentry view counts for some of the series might support this given that they're usually in the few hundred range.

>> No.24673575

>>24673323
All it takes is one good link in the right place for us to get up to 5k views, and given that I've seen the archive outside of /wg/ here and there such as /hlgg/, it's very possible most of our views come from people not inside /wg/

>> No.24673641

>>24673575
I hope they liked something within

>> No.24673695

>>24673641
The last time I saw it getting posted was after that Irys past life video of her roleplaying as a succubus getting fucked, and someone asked for more content on Irys. Don't know if there are any good Irys fics though.

>> No.24673837

>>24673695
Well "What happens in the hot springs..." Is pretty much the best fic involving her.
It's greentext but it's also hot as fuck.

>> No.24674034
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24674034

>>24673837
I'm glad that guy is working on a proper IryS fic as a sequel for that.

>> No.24674052

>>24674034
He is?? Oh God. I can feel it in my body already.

>> No.24674110

>>24673695
God that video is hot, if it wasn't for that Canadian ass "Sorry" I'd believe it was her 100%

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24675393

Seriesfags, update now.
Oneshot fags, get back to work.

>> No.24675608

>>24675393
>>24669631

>> No.24676357

>>24673575
I don't know, this kind of comes into conflict with how fast the view count rises.
I don't think it would grow so steadily without people coming back and looking again.

>> No.24677505

>>24673575
>The right story in the wrong place can make all the difference in the world...

>> No.24677610

>>24603848
A drunken Lamy won't let you go until you've completely covered her huge tits with cum.

>> No.24677697

>>24603848
A drunken Lamy won't let you go because you slid a knife twixt her ribs whilst she was hugging you, then simply held her as she gasped her last. Now rigor mortis has set in, and you really need to take a leak.

>> No.24677789

>>24677697
This but the person who posted this prompt (24677697) was transformed into Lamy and sucked into the story by the real Lamy as punishment for being an unoriginal nigger

>> No.24677808

>>24677697
>Finally manage to get the Lamy off of your body.
>Go to the bathroom to wash off the blood off your skin
>Notice something strange as you wash off blood
>Notice the smoothness of your skin
>Look up at the mirror
>a.png
>You have /become/

>> No.24677928
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24677928

>>24677808
Hot

>> No.24677973

>>24677789
Y'know, not that murder is hot shit, but I find it mildly bemusing that you're calling me an "unoriginal nigger" when your prompt is literally just more chuuba sex. Another prompt to add to the mountain that one cold spring eve last year might have been considered a pile.

>> No.24678037
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24678037

>>24677973
Sex is hot, drunk sex is hot, and murder is only hot conditionally and you failed to fulfill that condition, therefore you're the faggot here. Also, not my prompt, so swing and a miss, once again proving to the court, classroom, and your mother (who I have just came inside of prior to writing this post) that you're a dumbass. Warm my cock in your mouth and ask permission to speak next time, dumb unoriginal nigger.

>> No.24678146

>>24678037
Uh... okay?

>> No.24678156

>>24677928
This one... is new. Where did you find this?

>> No.24678171

>>24675393
I’ve got more important shit to do man... sorry.

>> No.24678203

>>24678156
>inb4 it's boss Lamy hinting at the doujin's progress

>> No.24678226

>>24678037
are you >>24603317? you're not funny dude

>> No.24678248

>>24678203
Hope not, the art is questionable.

>> No.24678253

>>24678037
Well constructed but you just had to ruin it with the racism

>> No.24678311

>>24678156
I last posted it around a year ago. Just something I drew for some reason or another, so no need for >>24678203, or >>24678248 to fret. I just thought it appropriate to the greentext.

>> No.24678399

>>24678311
Oh, if it's amateur artwork then it's actually quite good. Not professional quality but still well done man.

>> No.24678445

>>24678311
You got more? Now I'm curious

>> No.24678620
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24678620

>>24678445
More drawings? /become/-wise, just pic rel.

>> No.24678810
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24678810

>>24603809
Kind of a half-baked idea, forgive me if it's a little messy.

https://docs.google.com/document/u/2/d/e/2PACX-1vSL7_S9gu079e8d2Li54PYTV0HaE0CzTFlWoRvcS7udUkV-Tpq_sxDuXsxwOOMM-ZcE1IEEah1nqVxb/pub

Tags: Risu, Reine, Moona, SFW, Black Ops, mild gore

>> No.24678921

>>24678620
Nah I mean in general.

>> No.24679410

>>24678810
good shit anon, hoping you continue this if you can.

>> No.24679612

>>24678810
This was well written, not messy in the slightest. Was this originally inspired by that prompt of Risu jumping from wall to wall in the darkness as your gunfire shows her getting closer? I’m always a sucker for /k/ military-type shit, but can never do it justice in my stories so I always enjoy reading works that can. If you end up continuing this, and I think it’s begging for a sequel, I would 100% read it. Great job.

>> No.24679933

>>24678810
Hiding the music URL in the linebreak was clever. That said, I liked this. I'd be very interested in seeing more, it's a fairly underexplored concept.

>> No.24680113

>>24678810
It's only half baked in the sense that it feels like it's from a bigger story but for what it is, the fic is a pretty well written story that would probably work were it a part of that bigger story.
Overall, I'd did like what I read. If you're planning on continuing or making an expanded version of this I'd look forward to it.

>> No.24681870

>>24603848
Ina fucks Anon in the ass while jerking him off using nothing but her tentacles.

>> No.24681915

>>24681870
Ina's who's busy painting while she's doing this seemingly not even considering this out of the ordinary.
I mean she's got tentacles, this gotta be like routine or something right?

>> No.24682232

>>24681915
That sounds even better.
Anon panting and moaning as his pounding gets rougher and harder before cumming harder than he ever has in his life and collapsing in his own seed, before being flipped over by tentacles who continue to milk the last vestives of semen from his dick; meanwhile Ina's next to him painting on an easel absent mindedly egging him on and offering dirty talk with no thought behind it whatsoever.

Or it could be a triple bluff, and Ina could be deriving some sadistic pleasure of emotionally stonewalling Anon while he offers his mind and body to her, waiting til he's about to break down and cry then offering just enough affection for him to believe she cares before going back to the cold shoulder.

>> No.24682399

>>24682232
It's actually a quadruple bluff because when Ina isn't looking the the tentacles provide aftercare and affection. Leading Anon to believe that Ina actually care. She doesn't, but The Ancient Ones do

>> No.24682432

>>24682399
God I want an unknowably old cosmic entity to love me

>> No.24682642

>>24603848
You know what's a great feeling? When you position yourself on a chair so that your arse cheeks are like sandwiched together more so than usual, and it's even harder for gas to escape, so when you fart you've gotta push hard to squeeze it out and the pressure causes your cheeks to ripple. The sound it creates is magnified tenfold as it comes out because of that.

Now, imagine Ame sitting on your face and doing that. Imagine huffing her heady farts, feeling her butt ripple across your eyes, gently pushing the tip of your nose into her buttcrack. That would make a great fic, wouldn't it?

>> No.24682722

>>24682642
No, it wouldn't. In fact, I'd far sooner read about scat than I would fart fetishism, and I will NEVER read scat

>> No.24682791

>>24679933
>Hiding the music URL in the linebreak was clever.
Holy shit.

>> No.24683189

>>24682722
Sounds like you've got literal shit taste and just don't want to admit it, paisen.

>> No.24683305

>>24673575
>I've seen the archive outside of /wg/ here and there such as /hlgg/
>/hlgg/
Really? Do you remember when or where? A quick search on warosu didn't yield any results but I want to see their reaction.

>> No.24683446

>>24683189
I am filled with indescribable disgust. All smellfags need to die, preferably of carbon monoxide poisoning

>> No.24684070

>>24683446
Damn, I was only kidding, anon, no need to be so rude. There's nothing wrong with enjoying scat and I'd be interested in a Paradise Lost sequel too.

>> No.24685081

>>24684070
NTA but even if you're jesting I'd love to see that too. There was this Kuro idea posted here a while ago which I laughed at, and I'd really like to see that written. Rather than a fetish fic, I think it's most enjoyable as a comedy that derives its humor from making the scat scene short yet disgusting as possible, so you know it's coming up but it's so much worse than expected.
I genuinely enjoyed Paradise Lost as a fic and would happily read a sequel, unless it leaned hard into the fetish aspect. If it was actually meant to be jerked off to then I'd probably feel really fucking weird about it lol

>> No.24685135

>>24684070
There already is a Paradise Lost sequel unless you meant another scat fic.

>> No.24685341

>>24685081
>Someone remembered that shitty greentext kurokami idea I made. >>23172848
This is kind of flattering.

>> No.24685597

>>24685135
I completely forgot about Fox Day Afternoon. I did mean another scat fic, though, or rather just a shock fic along the same vein in general; this author in particular has a talent for deadpan delivery of shock and it's wonderful to read. Even reading FDA again just now, I literally burst out laughing at the sudden manner in which Anon v2 was made aware of the events of Paradise Lost.
That Nene fic from a while ago too, with the line "I heard she fucks her own daughter and shits in peoples' mouths for a quick" buck or something, I still giggle over that. It comes full-force out of fucking nowhere and I love it.
I guess what I'm trying to say is I like this author's work in general, but particularly his sense of humor.
I do want to see that Kuro paradise lost sequel done though, really badly...

>>24685341
Yes! Exactly that one! It's hard to explain exactly why, but it just tickles my fancy. There's this air of.. cheek, for lack of a better word, about the subject matter, like you know it's fucking disgusting and are playing around it. I do like that greentext.

>> No.24685658

>>24682642
There are a bunch of fics like that in ringo tho, don't know why are you asking this here

>> No.24685807

>>24685658
>why is he asking for writing in the writing general
nigga u high?

>> No.24686088

>>24685807
Why is he asking for incredibly specific fetish content here instead of the incredibly specific fetish content thread

>> No.24686189

>>24685807
because the incredibly specific fetish content thread isn't the incredibly specific fetish content writing thread. this isn't a thread focusing on one incredibly specific fetish, but it is a writing thread and we do have works catering to a wide variety of nonspecific fetishes

>> No.24686232

>>24686189
>>24686088

>> No.24686253

>>24686088
Are /ringo/ and /ag/ the two fetish threads that get writing/fanfiction?
I know /meat/ has some but that archive is barren as fuck and since I have no interest in R18G vtubers but have some slight interest in their fetish I don't really visit that place much

>> No.24686499

>>24650026
Retard-chama...

>> No.24686681

>>24650026
Going on an underseas adventure with Marine to find and plunder the sunken wreck of the Takamori.

>> No.24686702

>>24686253
the other fetish threads are constantly on the verge of getting sent to the shadowrealm, can't really create a culture of writing like that.

>> No.24686785

>>24686702
Suppose that's the reason they crosspost their stuff here to save them rather than maintain a separate archive.

>> No.24686818

>>24686088
i ask for niche fetish content here sometimes instead of in the relevant generals just to see if it grabs anyone's interest. seeing a fresh take on a genre instead of the same 2-3 writers cycling back and forth all the time is always interesting
>>24686702
i maintain the /ag/ archive specifically to ensure we can't die out between janny fits

>> No.24686866

>>24686785
pretty much. The hag and cunny threads aren't exactly something that couldn't be posted here anyway, but for specific stuff like weight gain, gore, and scat it gets a bit more sus to post it here, unless you're doing it for attention

>> No.24686943

>>24686818
based, keep the good work

>> No.24686949
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>>24603848
Bathing (your) girlfrirend Chloe! Masturbating her with the running shower and then fucking her to train her!

>> No.24686952

>>24686866
We'll always have people chimping out over that kind of stuff unfortunately but I for one don't mind it getting saved here at all, or rather fiercely encourage it. IMO as long as it has genuine effort behind it then it should be saved

>> No.24686956

>>24686866
Yeah, but I'm pretty sure some writers do crosspost their stuff here for more eyes, and to get an outsiders critique.
I've seen it happen with that Gura gore fic andd occasionally a clockgen writer crossposts one of their fics here as well.

>> No.24686966

>>24686818
>seeing a fresh take on a genre instead of the same 2-3 writers cycling back and forth all the time is always interesting
That's good reasoning, I rescind my earlier bitching

>> No.24687209

>>24686949
I’ve been meaning to write a Chloe story where you (a random stranger) break into her apartment, clean her room, force Chloe to bathe and wash her back for her, gently brush her teeth and hair and then leave. She expects you to start raping her the entire time but is instead left confused and clean.

>> No.24687254

>>24686966
You don't have to rescind anything. After all, nobody cared in the first place.

>>24687209
That's an amazing idea!

>> No.24687671

>>24683305
No, I do not remember. I've seen it in /koikatsu/ several times too, as well as every other futa thread

>> No.24687756

>>24687209
This but getting cleaned somehow makes Chloe feel more violated than if she had gotten raped.

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>>24686866
There's a reason they have their own containment thread. Them talking about licking diarrhea here is definitely going to push away not only new writers and tourists but also several regulars. It's impossible to get horny with boner killers between every hot prompt

>> No.24687807

>>24687763
I'd tell them to fuck off they were talking about it here, but I don't mind the fics getting posted for archival purposes.

>> No.24687868

>>24687671
/koikatsu/? The horni thread?

>> No.24687960

>>24687868
Maybe they mean that the archive gets posted outside of vt in another board's thread?

>> No.24688007

>>24687868
I think he means one of the devs slipped a link to the archive in a news post for the game.

>> No.24688293

>>24688007
That sounds like it would have caused way more tourists to come here than what that posts implies.
Pretty sure our only containment breaches are our posts getting grabbed by twitter vt screenshot accounts and occasionally getting posted onto reddit.

>> No.24688414

>>24688293
Speaking of, we should totally post advertisements on r/hololive to drum up more attention and attract writers.

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>>24688414
Ew
...
Also don't really think we would get much there in terms of new writers anyway.

>> No.24688676

>>24687868
>>24687960
>>24688007
Yes... it's the "horni" thread

>> No.24688728

>>24688414
You mean r/hololewd right? r/hololive doesn't get R18 content

>> No.24688828

>>24688625
You never know until you try, and even if only a single writer makes the jump, that's still a victory.

Maybe /lit/ would be a better place? But vtubers are like ponies on the rest of 4chan; posts about them get you banned.

>>24688728
Could post it there too. I'm guessing that's a porn sub from the name, so I imagine it'll be mostly crossposters from the official hololive page.

>> No.24688981

>>24688828
Why do you want that part of the fanbase if you know so little about them you didn't even know about the place where 35% of Hololive fans go to jerk off?

>> No.24689046

>>24688828
/lit/ are too up their own asses to write chuuba fanfiction and advertising on reddit would bring in a lot of fags who get butthurt when Mumei is (rightfully) called a whore.

>> No.24689099

Speaking of hololewd, they've been posting a fuck ton of their own made fics recently. Haven't read any of them tho

>> No.24689128

>>24689099
You've got a job now

>> No.24689218

>>24688981
Why would I care about redditards? Get them over here and maybe they'll convert back to actual human beings. The ones that don't will fuck back off to their little containment cell.

>> No.24689227

I'm gonna BREAK CONTAINMEEENT AND THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO TO STOP ME

>> No.24689244

>>24689218
Anon...

We are all Redditors

>> No.24689260

>>24689227
Godspeed, retard.

>> No.24689299

>>24689244
Speak for yourself.

>> No.24689376

this thread hit a new low when shilling on reddit sounds like a nice idea to anyone here

>> No.24689438

>>24689376
We need their help

>> No.24689473

>>24689438
>We
fuck off.

>> No.24689483

>>24689376
This thread will die without reddit.

>> No.24689526

>>24689438
I'd like this place to get more new writers as well but reddit seems like the exact wrong kind of place to shill our kind of fanfiction.

>> No.24689563

>>24689438
Exactly. Reddit is like a pool of tadpoles; we reach in and grab a bucketful of them, let the weak ones die off, and have the mighty grow into full-fledged frogs.

>> No.24689636

>>24689526
Maybe the oil baron could be so kind as to advertise this general exclusively to /vt/ on 4chan's banner ads.

>> No.24689789

>>24689636
are we really resorting to begging now...?

>> No.24689839

>>24689789
No harm in asking, is there? Worst that can happen is they just ignore it.

>> No.24689869

>>24689526
You know, I was joking when I said "we", but you do know that /vt/ is just Reddit refuge right?

>> No.24689954

>>24689869
I think of vt at more like a hell for schizophrenic chuuba fans. It's easy to get in, news and information occasionally leaks, but there is no escape.

>> No.24689977

>>24689869
Again, speak for yourself, fucktard. Some of us don't use that shithole at all.

>> No.24689985

>>24689954
These are not mutually exclusive

>> No.24690254

>>24689869
You should go back

>> No.24690468

>>24689869
>but you do know that /vt/ is just Reddit refuge right?
No wonder the General is dying, because little shots like you believe this shit.

>> No.24690711

>>24689376
It’s just one or two fags, they always do this shit when the thread slows down.

>> No.24690740

Remember, prospective authors: these are the children you're writing for.

Just go do something else instead.

>> No.24690768

>>24690740
So...
Can I make you my cocksleeve instead?

>> No.24690857

>>24690740
Pretty much. It's incredibly imature to hate someone just because they are the same as you but in another site, actual children here

>> No.24691067

>>24690857
Then leave.

>> No.24691175

>>24628771
That was a fun story with a surprising amount of depth inside. The narration was great with my only criticism being that the dialogue felt weak in some places but the descriptions really elevate it to something great.

>>24678810
I really liked this fic despite how incomplete it felt, the writing and prose felt nice to read and the concept is quite unique all things considered. If you decide to continue this then that'd be great and I'd definitely look forward to it

>> No.24691245

>>24603848
The Satanic panic is in full swing. The devil and his minions are real and have begun to insidiously creep their way out from the heart of Middle America. Distant whispers of otherworldly, terrifying beings appearing deep in the woods, people going missing, families being massacred in their rural homes get closer and closer to your little neck of the county. Then? It spreads to you. Only it ain't a flesh demon like the thing they said took ol Clem in the night then vanished leaving a burning circle in the ceiling. It's some kind of devil.

>> No.24691300

>>24690740
>>24690857
You guys can just fuck off.

>> No.24691605

New thread
>>24691315

>> No.24693711

Hello?

>> No.24693909

>>24693711
Hello, this is the official Hololive writing subreddit. Can we help you?

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Nothing to see here, head to the next thread.

>> No.24694025

>>24693971
Do it
I dare you
Cap my fucking head
At least my last visage will be beautiful

>> No.24694665

>>24693909
>subreddit

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