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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>23529885

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Say, Can You See? Chapter 6: Tags: Suisei, Pekora, sfw:>>23583754

Finding a job, in this economy? pt. 2: Tags: femboy, Gay, Kyou, male POV:>>23538905

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Pippa Pipkin has to move in with an older guy/manager/whatever for any dumb contrived reason. He is a perfect gentleman, making her madder and madder that he won't groom her properly. Eventually ends in yandere reverse rape:>>23531007

Roberu getting kidnapped by AniMare and being turned into their boytoy.:>>23535288

An emotionally painful NTR fic of Aqua trying to ignore her phone and sleep (unsuccessfully) every night as she's sent pics by Roberu of him fucking Mea in various ways. Alternatively, instead of pain, Aqua could give in and masturbate to those images.:>>23535738

Reine grooming an innocent fanfic writer into making her depraved fanfic real.:>>23545322

Watching Suisei dance at a rehearsal knowing you dumped loads into her mid-practice and almost got caught doing so by the other girls:>>23553996

Kidnapping your oshi after you find out she plans to graduate while you're stalking her, then forcing her to stream until Stockholm Syndrome sets in and she loves both you and her job again.:>>23579820

Denying your wife sex because it would taint her body but then tell her you want to have kids, absolutely fuck her brains out day and night in, then as soon as she's pregnant, completely stop and go back as to how it was before. This way she'll want to be impregnated as much as possible because it's the only time you'll be giving her a thorough fucking.:>>23583830

Your childhood friend Aqua isn't a retard anymore, but she is really depressed and prone to philosophizing and going off on weird tangents:>>23605087

Getting to meet and getting close to a chuuba only to realize they're a clingy menhara that has developed a co-dependant relationship you:>>23607397

Arriving from the year 2075, your mission is clear; Kill the man known as "YAGOO" before his virtual youtubers and their success lead to the founding of HoloNet, an AI, created for the sake of bringing viewer interaction to a whole new level, that was instead responsible for the near total eradication of the human race. Time is not on your side as the clock ticks down - and worse, a hunter killer android has been dispatched to take you out at any cost:>>23609819

>> No.23630604 [DELETED] 

>Aqua being the thread subject instead of Aqua or Kanata especially since they were talked about a ton last thread.

You disappoint me.

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>>23630604
>Aqua being the thread subject instead of Aqua

>> No.23631802

>>23630958
He probably meant Matsuri Anon. I agree with his point nonetheless

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>Retard deleted his post and is now pretending to be a different anon to defend it
You love to see it.

>> No.23632193

>>23631982
>check ip number
very sus indeed

>> No.23633693

>>23633242
Stop trying to get weird rape stories written about you, Luna

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>>23629838
Another new (and longer) chapter of Let Me Feel Your Pain

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQipJvRwPXdgEWqGwJSU6CVyPHeZqBEuFNqrCxXRF2Tt07H8Z1EmF3mJWvZw8R_EcksBumcYpztE8uX/pub

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>> No.23636420

>>23634498
That ending scene for ch 4 seems like it needs to get its PoV more consistent, since I feel like this fucking line would absolutely hit harder if it was only from one PoV.
>"Why are you crying?"
I.e if it was after(You) having a breakdown before you could hit her; or if it was entirely from Roboco's closed eye perspective.

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>> No.23638189

>>23635679
>>23637900
Why do you guys keep doing these contentless bumps?

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It's night shift, kids. Hunker down.

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>>23629894
Kanata innocently informing Coco that she got a nosebleed hanging out with (You), only for her to misunderstand and try to kill you.

>> No.23638383

>>23638189
Because if we don’t, then the General will die. It’s been dying for some time now.

>> No.23638667

>>23638383
Then why do it with the same goddamn image every damn time?
It's pretty much like posting that tumbleweed gif but not being self aware enough to realize it's not spurring anything.
>>23638374
This made me think of Kanata falling victim to the excuses (i.e fell down the stairs. fell down the bed, etc) used to hide abuse and getting wounds that would make people suspicious such abuse is occuring. With the twist at the end being that they were all self inflicted to guilt you and lock you with her.

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>>23638667
Hey, don't hate on the tumbleweed.

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>>23634498
What the fuck did Anon's mom and sister do to make him turn out like that?

>> No.23639046

>>23638374
This, only you effortlessly overpower Reddit Dragon, leaving her with a new kink for being dominated, so she tries to get (You) to sleep with her and cuck Kanata, but fails because Kanata is un-cuckable.

>> No.23639570

>>23639046
>Kanata is un-cuckable.
I fucking love how 'Sad Genuine Smile' Omelas'd the KanaCoco ship for /wg/; like I realize I'll get tired of this joke eventually, but I still find it very funny.

>> No.23641090

>>23639570
The right story in the right place and right time can make all the difference in the world.

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>>23634498
Damn kindhearted robot! Unconditionally loving her master! She needs marriage correction!

>> No.23643412

>>23629838
The Suisex one might not count as story but the others do

>>23633228

>>23552971
>>23565486
>>23609944
The image should probably be saved separate from the two descriptions

>> No.23643497

>>23633693
No. How about you stop trying to resist Luna's sexual charm and simply detail your desire to rape her?
And if not, why not? What are you, gay?

>> No.23643747
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>Reine is doing Ring Fit
Please....I have so much to work on...don't make me indulge myself and write about sweaty peafowl pits

>> No.23643768

>>23643747
Remember, son. You can't cum until you finish ALL the WIPs.

>> No.23644017

>>23643747
I'll never forgive Risu for being fit and not getting worked up during Ring Fit. I'm already tired of Luna and Moona moans, Marine is too forced... I wanted to hear Risu moan, the bitch had the audacity to say "I'm fit so if you came expecting for strange noises you're not getting them" while laughing. Grr...

>> No.23644169

>>23644017
Damn squirrel, denying me my moans...

>> No.23644686

>>23633693
What else is there to do with Luna, Fluffy romance with a woman acting like a child.

>> No.23644726 [DELETED] 

>>23644169
I want Risu to punch me in the gut and her sheer strength causes me to crumple to the ground and pass out for approximately one hour...

>> No.23644783

>>23644726
Yknow, Pekofag, I didn't think you'd be one for ryona, but who am I to judge. Personally, I like girls who can kick my ass but only do so out of love, you know? Haha.

>> No.23644871

>>23644783
He's not me, and I'm not into ryona as you did expect. I don't think I could will myself to punch Risu. No way. Even if she asked me. The thought is rather sickening to be honest. As for Risu hitting me? I am quite self preserving so I shy away from pain and danger when I can.

>> No.23645196

>>23644871
What are you working on anyway? BT3 or something else?

>> No.23645694
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>>23645196
Pretty much just BT3. After I finished BT2 I decided to fix my sleeping schedule but it turns out I'm not a morning person because a week into waking up early, suddenly I didn't manage to anymore and it was a waste of time to sleep early to wake up late and-, ahem, anyways, I've been too tired to work on anything else. BT3 is coming along very slowly, I was struggling with the plot section before the smut but I just fixed that by putting the smut sooner in the story and it even improved my writing because I got to erase some really bad environment description which I really didn't like. Still got to see this with commissioner since it was something I came up with just now, but yeah. But if you're wondering what I was working on before this whole ordeal, these are titles and why I dropped them:

Stray cat - sex with teenage runaway Okayu (didn't manage to write a plausible scenario for picking Okayu up and her accepting to being your partner in bed)

Upholding the law - police story with chuubas (didn't know what I wanted from the plot)

Wild West(undecided title) - Gura cowboy smut (halted and possibly abandoned after I fucked up her personality too much, treating her like Niji slut feesh)

Idol management - catching Suisei masturbating as your first time meeting her as her new manager, things escalate from there (didn't know if I wanted to make this plot or smut and that ate me up from inside)

HoloBrothelJP - not dropped just don't wanna do it now

Afloat with a lion - sex with Botan on stranded boat (too much plot, too serious plot, wasted too much time and lost motivation, should've gone with cheap quick smut from start)

The nuts all around us - mystery story around Risu futa (too much plot, 8K words of it, lost motivation once I realized this would fit better as a regular story but without the futa it's just bland and boring)

This is something I haven't touched in a year but I'll include anyway

Marine visits Brazil - what the fuck was I thinking? Was my attempt at writing Marine being molested in public but the way I went about it was really dumb

>> No.23645714

>>23644871
>I don't think I could will myself to punch Risu. No way. Even if she asked me.
Why not? It's at worst an opportunity to take out your frustrations on her for being a lazy streamer physically incompatible with you. At best, it's an opportunity to use abuse to re-mould her into your ideal image. Like clay, but you use your fists, feet, and various sharp ornaments and chemicals to do the shaping. You could remake her into the perfect woman.

Her feelings on the topic are irrelevant, because your benefit is the only thing that matters.

>> No.23645824

>>23629894
Matsuri's failed attempt at a murder suicide after she gets cucked.

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>>23645694
Seems like you really struggle with plots huh? Also
>Marine Brazil was you
Not sure why I'm surprised. Either way good luck with BT.

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>>23645714
I don't want to punch her into doing those things. As much as it does upset me for her to self sabotage so much, I know she has a lot of reasons, mainly of which are discussed in membership which I don't pay for. I know she's depressed or overburdened and that's why she's so lazy, but I don't know why, so I can't be mad at her. I'd go on a tangent on how I'd treat her if this was an actual scenario I was part of but frankly I'm too tired to do so. In short, lots of love, not violence.

Also lately for some reason I've been thinking it's very weird to describe in detail how you want to have sex with a chuuba and/or how much you love them or how you're imagining them or whatever. Like... I stop to think about what I'm writing and it's kind of cringy "oh yeah I want to suck my cock through my jorts real good" or "I'd tell her that she can do it if she tries and cuddle with her in bed", but this is just another case of my crippling mind reading problem.

>> No.23645905

>>23645694
>Idol management - catching Suisei masturbating as your first time meeting her as her new manager, things escalate from there (didn't know if I wanted to make this plot or smut and that ate me up from inside)
You mind if I try my hand at this?

>> No.23645959

>>23645885
Kinda weird to see Pekofag so obviously a victim of a parasocial relationship, but I guess I shouldn't be surprised. This hobby attracts the worst.

>> No.23645967

>>23645694
>Idol management - catching Suisei masturbating as your first time meeting her as her new manager, things escalate from there (didn't know if I wanted to make this plot or smut and that ate me up from inside)
I mean just from that setup blurb it sounds like the plot is going to be "sex centered" either way and the question more becomes whether you want the escalation more or the smut, because you would not have the space for both in a one-shot.

>> No.23645982

>>23645694
>Still got to see this with commissioner since it was something I came up with just now
given the way he offered to pay for something you say he doesn't like, it sounds like you could shit on his plate and he'd gobble it up

>> No.23646121

>>23645905
Eh, why not?

>>23645959
I'm not parasocial. I don't actually love her all that much. At most I'd be a bit saddened that she went away much like Coco, slightly empty remembering better times, that's about it. I WANT to love her, I call her my oshi because I want her to be my oshi, but my love for her clearly doesn't compare to having an actual oshi like other people here seem to have. I don't think it's unreasonable to say that I worry for her given that she's someone I respect and... fuck, too many words, too little meaning. I'm too fucking tired to get my thoughts across.

>>23645967
Yeah the thing is I didn't want it to be smut, I wanted it to be plot, but I didn't know what plot that would be, so I HAD to make it smut, right? But this and but that. That's why it ate me from the inside.

>>23645982
He likes tentacles, he just prefers insects and egg laying.

>> No.23646225

>>23646121
If you think she's your oshi, then she's your oshi. Some freaks get into a special needs olympics about how fanatical you can be before you get to call somebody your oshi, and start flinging shit over who's the biggest simp, but their opinions are ultimately garbage, nothing more than white noise added to the cacophony of tone-deaf screeching that is /vt/.

>> No.23646259

>>23646121
>He likes tentacles, he just prefers insects and egg laying.
Also, other way around. I actually prefer tentacles over insects.

>> No.23646279

>>23645982
Nah, I offered because I was interested in it. I don't dislike pain; I just didn't want it in BT.

>> No.23646387

>have an idea i really like
>spend the next few days writing it
>finish fic
>read through it for editing
>finish reading/editing
>i hate it
Why every time?

>> No.23646407

>>23646387
What's it about?

>> No.23646435

>>23646387
>Why every time?
That'll never change. Release it and let the (You)s flow in telling you it's good. Then you might feel more amicable towards it.

>> No.23646442

>>23646121
>Yeah the thing is I didn't want it to be smut, I wanted it to be plot, but I didn't know what plot that would be, so I HAD to make it smut, right?
I probably should have worded what I meant more clearly; plot or smut focused the story is going to be centered around sex, so (and this is just judging from the plot blurb you gave out so pardon me if I didn't guess what you were planning correctly) the fic will either be "plot" about Suisei degenerating and doing lewder and lewder shit (presumably egged on by (You)) with each short scene highlighting the progression of it, or it'll be a "smut" that focuses on one scene made specifically to get the viewer to jack it to presumably after some setup.
I'm guessing your conflict here is the fact that by nature of it it will have to involve sex scenes due to the setup of it but having it just be that single smut scene would in some ways be a 'cheap' way to handle the concept that doesn't do it justice, but not having a sex scene would be untenable to the whole concept you were building up.

>> No.23646503

>>23646442
Here I'll just throw you what I had written since I'm probably done with it... but after reading at where I left it off it may be possible I turn it into smut if I ever get back into the idea

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vROZFQxXFRvE5KcxcXAKylx9zj-i9CHMwWij6rNTNmBK593qKSdzDUkamGRdMhRFu4_3Je3Lmb9kHfh/pub

>> No.23646648

>>23646407
Ame thinks Rushia's complete and immediate disappearance is pretty fishy and starts digging around. She finds out Rushia didn't actually graduate, it was a murder and the termination notice was just a cover up. (You) weren't directly involved with the murder but you know who did it and they paid you a hefty sum of money to keep quiet. Amelia eventually figures out that you know and when you refuse to talk she shows you her more "advanced" questioning techniques. Easy set up for sex, right? Why the fuck did I spend 12k+ words on the mystery part?

>> No.23646680

>>23646648
No it sounds more like you had a good plot but decided to throw in sex for no reason desu

>> No.23646700

>>23646648
Why don't you post it here and see what sort of feedback it'll generate? The plot sounds interesting enough.

>> No.23646742

>>23646648
>>23646387
>12k words
....
Anon if you fucking hate it but spent that much time on it, then I think you should give it one last flow/grammar sweep through before releasing it and seeing if your own hate for your work is justified or just your own dissatisfaction at your past work.

>> No.23646783

>>23646648
Sounds pretty interesting. I agree >>23646435 though. You only have your opinion on it and people are usually more critical of their own work, sometimes too critical to their detriment. If people like it then your feelings about it mostly unfounded. If not? There's always a next time.

>> No.23646828

>>23646680
dude, porn with plot is the best, and should be done more often.

>> No.23646848

>>23646680
>>23646700
There wasn't even supposed to be a real plot in the first place. The sex was the entire idea from the start. I don't know why I just kept writing and writing instead of getting to the point. An Ame sex fic doesn't need a subplot about corruption in the Oozora Police department.

>>23646742
I never hate it when I start or when I'm still writing. It's only when it's a finished product that I just start thinking it actually wasn't good at all and it would just be a waste of time for anyone to read.

>> No.23646930

>>23646848
>it actually wasn't good at all and it would just be a waste of time for anyone to read.
You don't actually know that though, you're just assuming things. Let us actually be the judge of that.

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>>23646848
>An Ame sex fic doesn't need a subplot about corruption in the Oozora Police department.
Yes it does, what the fuck? Then you can fuck corrupt cop Subaru! This has potential dude!

>> No.23647038

>>23646946
>sex fic lacking in the actual sex part
>fix it by adding more sex
It seems so obvious now that you say it.

>> No.23647055

He's not going to release it because he's lying about writing it in the first place. He's pretending to have this awesome story all written up so that he can get attention from people begging him to release it.

>> No.23647128

>>23647055
The story itself wasn't even the point of my post, I just got asked what it was about. I just wanted to know why I change from liking what I write to hating it every time and if other people experience this too and how they deal with it.

>> No.23647152

>>23647128
Release chapter every 10K or 5K depending on how long you want it to be. Chapters are better for big releases you're uncertain of, especially if they have plot

>> No.23647301

>>23646503
I mean reading through it, this kind of feels like it's still at that crossroads of smut and plot you were feeling about, with it mildly leaning towards smut if only for the setup.

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>>23647301
I'm pretty sure I stopped there exactly for that reason. I couldn't decide on which way I wanted to go and left it there.

I was about to ask why no one said anything about it. Fucking mind reading man. I hate that my brain works this way.

>> No.23647580

>>23647370
What do you mean when you say mind reading exactly, anyway?

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>>23647370
I mean this feels like something that can be solved via actually doing some planning ahead about where you'd want to take the story. Since then at least you'd have a more solid idea about what each idea would have entailed you writing.

>> No.23647929

>>23647580
It's when I say something and the person takes too long to reply in my eyes so I start conjuring up reasons as to why that might be. Say I flirted with someone and they don't respond I already immediately assume the worst and start backtracking, or in this case, "no one commented on the thing I posted literally 5 minutes ago? It must be because they hated it, it was too short, it was unimportant. But I was proud of it... Why did they hate it? Maybe they didn't hate it but the other talk seems more interesting. But I thought my fic was interesting... Wasn't it?" those thoughts go through my head. That's called mind reading. I conjure up in my head what the other person may be thinking when in reality it's completely different.

>> No.23647990

>>23647929
...Honey, that's called fucking anxiety. You have anxiety.

>> No.23647997

>>23647929
Oh so you're just feeling really self-conscious

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>>23647587
I write my stories entirely based off of moments I wanted to have done. Say I think up "what if Suisei gave me a gloved handjob?" and the rest comes later. In short I build my stories entirely for the sole purpose of including the scenes I originally had in mind, and that's why my plot always sucks.

>> No.23648021

>>23647929
Rumination is a hallmark sign of self-confidence issues. Again, which I'm not surprised to hear you have.

>> No.23648033

>>23647929
>no one commented on the thing I posted literally 5 minutes ago? It must be because they hated it
I feel it too.

>> No.23648149

>>23647990
There's actually a distinction. I'm not an anxious person. You can look up mind reading, it will say it's similar to anxiety but it's not the same.

>>23647997
>>23648021
You'll see it often when I try to make jokes but delete them almost immediately after. I post it.... silence, I already assume it's because it was not funny and start thinking "yeah I guess it wasn't so funny, it was better in my head' as I delete it.

>> No.23648510

has anyone ever "rewrote" or revise one of their stories /here/? I'm talking making a new link even though the old one is already on the archive. I've been thinking of redoing one of mine since I want to make it a proper start off to a series and I've had just the idea how but I'm not sure

>> No.23648542

>>23648510
revised*
sorry, I'm phoneposting.

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>>23648149
>Mind-reading is an automatic negative thought that is very common in social anxiety. Anxiety pretends it has the power to read other people's thoughts. In the case of social anxiety, we automatically conclude that people are judging us negatively.
>>23648510
Yeah, that's been done. Generally considered to be 'frowned upon' because people think that you only get one chance, but it's your fucking story, do whatever dude.

>> No.23648584

>>23648510
I generally work on a pretty strict "don't touch released works" basis. That is of course rewriting them is a no go. If it sucked I just move on with the newfound knowledge to do better.

>> No.23648635

>>23648510
The anon that wrote 'Footprints Across Time' did a rewrite. They released their first chapter and decided to redo it, further expanding on the fic.

>> No.23648653
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>>23648560
Y-You weren't supposed to actually google it...

>> No.23648722

>>23648510
I have a fic I released incomplete called 'Curse' that I'm on and off rewriting.
It's only discouraged by thread culture due to earlier anons preferring not to do it rather than a hard rule.

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>>23648653
Well, too late.
>>23648722
Oh Jesus fucking Christ I remember this. People were talking about how the horn breaking would most likely fucking kill her.

>> No.23649008

>>23648927
Anon, I think you might be thinking of something else Curse is the Ayame getting unbirthed by Mio fic.

>> No.23649049

>>23649008
>You approach the girl, even through the magic you could feel the heat. As you lay your hand on her horns it was like putting your hands straight into a fire. You grasp them firmly; strength flooding into your limbs.
>You pull.
>The horns break.
>The girl screams.
>The heat stops.
>The girl falls down, detached from her horns.

>> No.23649226

>>23649049
I remember being disappointed because I thought horn-breaking was something of a similar euphemism to buck-breaking, and that it'd be about raping Ayame.

Fucking hell, do I want to rape Ayame...

>> No.23649528

>>23629894
That Portal 2 collab has gotten me craving some Kiara/Kobo oyakodon

>> No.23649563

>>23649528
Write it yourself?

>> No.23649597

>>23649563
If I was going to write it myself I wouldn't be submitting it to the prompt board, genius.

>> No.23649606

>>23648560
>>23648722
>>23648635
I see, that's good to know,
>>23648584
>If it sucked I just move on with the newfound knowledge to do better
Maybe I should do this as well. It'll highlight my improvements on writing more as times goes by. It's a great mindset.

>> No.23649683

>>23648560
when did you get art done for holofantasy

>> No.23649738

>>23649597
So you just want someone else to write it for you. You're a leech.

>> No.23650253

>>23649683
What did he mean by this?

>> No.23650280

>>23649738
That's what prompts are for, yes.

>> No.23650330

>>23650253
I think it's a joke about an off-hand joke in Chapter 6 that implied Anon needs a haircut so bad he's starting to look like Deltarune protagonist

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I think it's been long enough since this question got asked so what are you working on anons?
Bonus Question: Do you have any advice to give in regards to the editing process?

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>>23651613
I've been looking for this image like fucking crazy thank you
Nothing. Absolutely goddamn nothing. I typed three sentences of Holofantasy today then spent the rest of the day fucking around Elden Ring after a "friend" got in contact with me and took up a few hours. Now the weekend's over. I'll hammer out Matsuri's Baby Carrot 3 at some point before then.
>Bonus
Even if you think it's perfect and that you've spent enough time on it, go over everything you wrote again slowly. Scan the fucking words for anything. A double space, a remnant of an old line. Don't just let your eyes glide over the words you've seen dozens of times for any major fuck ups.

>> No.23652461

>>23636420
I genuinely don't understand what you mean. Like have the entire chapter just from Roboco's perspective? I'm very confused.

>> No.23652859

>>23652461
>Roboco trailed behind you knowing what was about to happen. She braced herself mentally. Would it be even worse than last time? Yet, even now, she wanted to get through to you. She could see behind those angry eyes to the sad, broken boy beneath.
>As soon as the door to your home shut behind you, your fists clenched and Roboco closed her eyes tightly. Here it comes. She waited. And waited. No fist came down upon her. No words of hatred forced their way deep into her ears. No boot wedged itself into her stomach. She opened her eyes only to see you with your head down, shaking uncontrollably.

These last two paragraphs are in roboco's pov when the rest of the scene is in 2nd person. My point is pretty much either have that last section entirely in 2nd person, with (Your) breakdown included so that Roboco line has the most impact as a 'wham line' ending the chapter, or have the entire part be in Roboco's pov so that it seems to be building up to another scene of abuse... but then anticlimaxes with Roboco seeing You head down, head shaking, Roboco says her line, chapter ends on it like right now but with the line given sufficient build up to make the line impactful.

>> No.23652939

>>23652859
Note by ending part I more mean the ending scene not the mechanic scene, not the chapter.

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https://files.catbox.moe/esc4j6.jpg
(Second page)

So uh I'm back and still haven't caught up on all the previous threads I've written down at all and uh any tips to try and catch up?

yes I know my handwriting is shit

>> No.23653246

>>23653137
you have a problem

>> No.23653268

>>23653137
The numbers Mason! What do they mean?

>> No.23653900
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>>23645694
>Another Okayu-based fic abandoned
alas

>> No.23654126

>>23653268
I think they're the post numbers for /wg/ threads
...
No clue why he's doing this when having subject writing on wakarimansen effectively gets you all the threads, but I can't read minds.

>> No.23654610

>>23652301
>friend in quotes
>took up a few hours

>> No.23654700
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>>23652301
>that pic
What the heck? Why is there so much absolutely sex Festival art? Why does every picture I see of this crazy woman make me so horny? When will we finally get to read the fantastic adventures of Anon and goddess-powered Matsuri furiously battling one another, spurred by excessive sexual tension and lust-addled thoughts?
Also, higher res version of that photo, if you wanted it. Strangely smaller file size, though.

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>>23654700
Even Kanata who I thought didn't look the least bit sexually appealing to me during her debut is getting much more sexier with her alt costumes.

>> No.23654891

>>23651613
I'm working on a sequel to A Friend, I had a lot of fun writing it and after hearing what I could do for improvement I'm motivated to write more, as I already have a plan for what I want to happen next.
>Bonus
The way I do it is I switch from writer mode to reader mode. Put on a mental state as if I wasn't the one to write this, and I'm a reader. It helps you relive your piece, seeing if all the parts come and go as you planned or wanted, while seeing some grammar mistakes along the way.

>> No.23654907

>>23654126
It's not about only reading the stories it's about reading the other replies in the thread

The reactions, criticisms, and all the lost prompts no one ever picked up

>> No.23655004

>>23654907
But why paper? Why not just write up a Python script to append lines to a csv/jsonl file?
Heck, even a plain text file works. A physical piece of paper seems unnecessary, and harder to manage.

>> No.23655087

>>23654700
>Why
God wills that Matsuri's body be teased to the breaking point before dick is introduced AT ALL.
>When
If I knew I'd tell you. I'm still working on the stuff WITH Matsuri leading up to her combat and it feels kinda meh at the moment to me. I'm trying to lay off forcing myself to write at gunpoint.
>>23654788
The REAL question is "when are you going to FUCK Kanata?!??!". And I don't know.
We're also a blue board, so: https://files.catbox.moe/epk5dn.jpeg

>> No.23655102

>>23654907
Anon, I've been doing this too and the fucking archiving sites let me easily see every /wg/ thread by searching for subject writing.
Why write them on paper?

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>>23654788
God her outfits are so sex but the new nurse one has really knocked it out the park

>> No.23656747 [SPOILER] 
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>>23653900
Well we all know the solution to this.

>> No.23657639
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>>23655004
>>23655102
Idk
Autism?

>> No.23659139

>>23654610
Slut.

>> No.23660305

Does anyone remember the discussion about (your) oshi visiting your city?

>> No.23660452

>>23657639
Attention*

>> No.23660533

>>23660305
Yeah. Pretty sure that's where Pekofag's "Marine gets molested in Brazil" story stemmed from.

I think my oshi would love some of the things I could show her... But boy would she be disgusted of the third world.

>> No.23660622

>>23660305
The city I live in or the city I actually come from? Because there's no way in hell I want to take my oshi to my motherland.

>> No.23660915

>>23660305
I think haachama would quickly get bored of being in the Philippines, again, but this time in a worse city.
The only thing she wouldn't get bored of taking over as the Chosen One for she has drunkk of the water of life Dirty Phillipine Water and found herself stronger, thus her prophesized return shall bring about the end times.

>> No.23660935

>>23660622
Where ya from?

>> No.23661011

I don't like where this thread is going

>> No.23661074

>>23660935
South Asia (Not India)

>> No.23661205

>>23660915
It's not even Philippine water. I went to a first world country's capital and the tap water got me sick as hell. I think human body not able to fight off foreign tap water bacteria

>> No.23661269

Los negros del sudeste de Asia......

>> No.23661292

>>23661205
It's actually a normal thing. Your gut flora gets used to some stuff and different areas usually aren't up to spec. Moving from my old state to here really fucked me up for a bit until I normalized.

>> No.23661435

>>23661292
No I almost die and it gave me permanent scar

>> No.23661491

>>23661205
Anon... Tap water in the phillipines isn't drinkable.

>> No.23661697

>>23661491
Anon the country drink chart for tap water say only first world country drinkable but that's only for first world pussy stomach we drink water straight from tap all the time

>> No.23661967

>>23638985
It do be like that

>> No.23662156
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>You go to philipines with Millie Parfait
>You drink the tap water despite her warnings about it
>It's been 3 weeks since then
>Maybe
>Time seems to have stopped mattering
>It's always either heavy rain or hell heat
>Am I even alive anymore?
>Millie finds you in the street naked talking with a monkey
>"I told you, don't drink the fucking water"
>It's too late for me Millie
>I have become one of them
>A filipino

>> No.23662361

> have a discussion about having (your) oshi visit your city
> make a response about war breaking out while she's here
> fast forward to February 2022
I want to get off Mr. Bones' Wild Ride

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relevant image

>> No.23663217

>>23662156
Horrific Transformations?
It's more fun in the phillipines!

>> No.23663378

>>23663217
/become/ macaque...

>> No.23664374

>>23661697
Maybe that's why all flips are so retarded?

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>>23629894
Suisei prostate exam that evolves into her pegging you with a strap on.

>> No.23666852

>>23638740

>> No.23667170

>>23664591
You had me in the first half, but lost me in the second...

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>>23629894
Being Marine's rival on the high seas where she thinks it some romantic tsundere thing except you are genuinely trying to sink her ship and kill her.

>> No.23668222

>>23667413
>except you are genuinely trying to sink her ship and kill her
After seeing that fat ass of hers ? No fucking way I'm trying to kill her.

>> No.23669276

>>23651613
>Do you have any advice to give in regards to the editing
Ideally you would have a second person read it. Reading it yourself leaves you prone to missing mistakes like accidentally leaving a word out or grammatical errors since you already know what it's supposed to say so your brain just sort of autocorrects for you. A second person has no preconceptions and therefor won't be able to look over these things so easily. I can understand though that you might be more embarrassed to present something you wrote in real life as opposed to anonymously online, so if you really need to edit it by yourself just go slowly. Read each paragraph a couple times before you move on to the next one. Even if you didn't detect anything just read it one more time, you might still be missing something. Also don't always trust google docs editing suggestions, sometimes they are just wrong.

>> No.23669352

>>23667413
>kill her
Plunge my sword deep into her treasure chest

>> No.23669442

>>23629894
%chuubaname% taking (You) in after a natural disaster in exchange for housekeeping and cooking her needlessly large house.
Maybe it's Reine who is on the run from her family and their army of servants, but she doesn't have any earthly idea how to live without said army of servants
Maybe it's Coco who lets you stay in the Holohouse under the added condition of no contact with the rest of the girls
Maybe chuuba also lost their house and you are the only one she's remotely comfortable living with as roommates. IIRC it was Subaru who had her house burn down

>> No.23670201

>>23634498
>tfw I'm literally anon

>> No.23670391

>>23667170
Then ignore the second half

>> No.23671618

>>23669442
This except you're a black Muslim refugee and Kiara takes you in to the HoloMyth house without getting the others approval first

>> No.23671656

>>23671618
>austrian offers asylum to a refugee
I don't like where this is going.

>> No.23672091

>>23664591
Same but with pekomama. Ara aras and general mommy vibe included at the author's discresion

>> No.23672652

>>23672091
>Pekora sucks you off while Pekomama rims and tickles your prostate

Hell yeah I'm down.

>> No.23672928 [DELETED] 

>>23671618
>>23671656
Good grief, /pol/tards can't even keep their dicks out of this thread?

>> No.23673075

>>23672928
NTA but I think it's a fantastic prompt.

>> No.23673227

>>23629894
Anon is terminally ill. He's known very a very long time, long since accepted that he'll be dying and his death. After a particularly bad time in the hospital his time is up. Late at night Calli comes to take is soul and send him over to the afterlife. Some reassurance from her, some awkward moments, you know how she is, but she does eventually send him on his way. Just some light comfort, something sweet and cozy. At first I thought lewds would be good for it, but, that's entirely optional. That's all I've got, thanks for hearing my request.

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>>23672928
We got a problem, cuh?

>> No.23675939 [SPOILER] 
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Do you join them or just watch?

>> No.23676094

>>23675939
I would roleplay as their butler

>> No.23676165

>>23675939
Tell Towa and Aqua to vacate the premises, then pump every individual sperm cell swimming around in my shrivelled nutsack directly into Sui-chan's womb.

>> No.23676217
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Fuck/Marry/Kill with a twist:

>Sucking your cock
>Licking your ass (Or balls if you're not into that)
>For (You) to eat out

>> No.23676249

>>23676217
No, it has to be licking or rimming your ass to represent the "kill" option.

>> No.23676304

>>23676217
Huh? All three for all three. What a silly question. Although I'd prefer my asshole remain un-licked. More than happy to lick theirs, though.

>> No.23676432

>>23676217
To represent the bad option further, it should be:

> sucking or riding your cock
> riding your face
> fucking your ass with a strap on

Otherwise there's no fun to the hypothetical because all options are good options.

>> No.23676701

>>23676432
>>23676304
>>23676249
W-well maybe I should have said "at the same time" because that's what I was going for.

Who takes what position. Being ESL is hard sometimes

>> No.23676791

>>23676701
Towa Blowjob, Suisei Rimming, eating out Aqua.

>> No.23676877

>>23676701
I know I could never satisfy Towa or Suisei so I would fuck Aqua, let Towa do her thing (she'd be the most gentle) and Suisei blowjob

>> No.23676916

>>23676877
Whoops I meant eat out Suisei, she's gonna be disappointed by my tongue game but either other option would be worse

>> No.23676987

>>23676701
Suisei'd be a great cocksucker, as she's a tryhard. Towa probably has decent hygiene and has just the right amount of squish on her thighs that she'd be great to eat out.
Aqua can tongue my ass, because I expect nothing from her and don't want to put my tongue anywhere near her stinky gamer minge.

>> No.23677740

>>23676432
These are still all good options.
Having said that:
Sucked and fucked by aqua
Face ridden by all 3
Pegged by towa

>> No.23677999

>>23677740
A strap on in your ass will be a strap on no matter who's using it, but I'd rather not someone like Suisei who probably would enjoy watching you squirm being the one wearing it, or Aqua who's too dumb and would be careless which might lead to injuries.

>> No.23678836

>>23677999
A strap on in your ass will be a strap on in your ass, but who's using it can make or break the experience. The wrong person will just j-jam it in, while the right person will hit the right spot.
I chose towa mostly for those reasons

>> No.23678893

>>23678836
I think Suisei would know how to hit your g-spot but would be very rough for her own pleasure, Towa wouldn't know how to hit your g-spot but she would be very gentle making sure you're okay, and Aqua... well... yeah.

>> No.23679295

>>23676432
Expand this to all of hololive and you have to pick only one girl for each role.
>best possible blowjob
Has to be Koyori. She is overflowing with barely hidden lust to suck the soul out of her overseas viewers
>best girl to eat out
Fubuki would probably be the best experience. I imagine she probably very hygienic and also her ragged breathing would be the best to listen to
>pegging
Choco. She wouldn't be selfish and would know how to make the whole thing as enjoyable as possible for you. She would be gentle and ease you into it with teasing whispers.

>> No.23679352

>>23679295
I think we are all assuming they would use the same size strap on, but what if that was a factor too? What if each girl could decide the size and shape + abnormalities of the strap on?

>> No.23680874

>>23679295
Hag pleasures... what a feast

>> No.23680947

>>23676432
>Pegged by Suisei
>Eat out Aqua
>Blowjob by Towa
And if were talking everyone
>Pegged by Suisei
>Eat out Lui
>Blowjob by Aki

>> No.23683070

>>23676432
>Riding me
Aqua, because I want to see her tits bouncing up and down as she hops on and off my lap.
>Riding my face
Suisei, just to hear her groans and high pitches moans
>Getting pegged
TMT would be too concerned for my well being to go too rough, so I'm sure she'd be loving and gentle.

>> No.23683528
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>>23672928
I like dicks though

>> No.23684289

I think we need more futa stories. A lot more futa stories.

>> No.23684751
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23684751

:) fucking end me

>> No.23684970

>>23683528
Finally, the perfect teamate.

>> No.23685255

>>23684970
I'm down to have some fun~

>> No.23685354

>>23684751
You have 364 days where futa isn't discussed let this be the one day that it can be

>> No.23685403

>>23685255
Tempting but not the place.

>> No.23685452

>>23684970
>>23685255
>>23685403
If you're gonna fuck please do it in public so I can jerk off to it but don't do it here

>> No.23685472

>>23685354
Futa is discussed at least every third thread.

>> No.23685697

>>23685472
Fubuki is discussed every thread and so are hags. Futa is THE most popular weeb fetish out there, you really think people wouldn't talk about it? There's just not more discussion around it because blue board so you can't post cocks which totally kills futa

>> No.23685813

Is this the part of the thread where everyone gets really gay?

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>>23684751
suisei's got some big dick energy though

>> No.23685884

>>23685813
>>23675424

>> No.23686165

>>23685884
Are kronies really that gay? They always struck me as parasocial co-dependants with mommy issues, not faggots

>> No.23686183

>>23685697
There's a whole thread dedicated to futa in /vt/

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>>23685863
She sure does

>>23686183
It's dead and boring and lacks content

>> No.23686290

>>23686165
Kronies are the gayest fanbase. They actually usurped teamates. Now, you're still more likely to find a down to fuck teamate in the wild since the actual ame threads don't like to associate with their stereotypes, but Kronies are actively sucking eachother's dicks in the thread and their fucking discord

>> No.23686565

>>23686290
Yikes. Just one more reason to stay away from that general I guess.

>> No.23687929
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23687929

Speaking of Kroniies I wonder if that Kronii writeanon is still here. He came to us for feedback but all his stories were usually niche fetishes of the futa genre with niche chuubas so I don't remember him getting much. Though it may be possible he's the one responsible for that futa HoloMyth tricking Ina so he's probably around but that was a while ago.

>> No.23688040

>>23687929
You're really on a cockhunger kick right now huh

>> No.23688101

>>23688040
That's my secret. I always am.

>> No.23688170

https://twitter.com/vt_kek/status/1521979230707322880
WHICH ONE OF YOU NIGGERS

>> No.23688264

>>23688170
Disgusting. Those freaks actually actively browse this thread...

>> No.23688348

>>23688170
Wait, how the fuck did you know about that tweet? Do you follow it?

>> No.23688474

>>23688348
I follow Vtuber related stuff, another account like this one got retweeted, it immediately recommended me this account and I remembered this was the one that posted /wg/ shit before

>> No.23688481

I like the one kronie that wrote about Fauna being a big dicked alpha kirin that can't stop herself from violating anon's hole.

>> No.23688714

>>23688170
>>23688264
>>23688348
>>23688474
It's the fucking Lamy I'm telling you

>> No.23688840

>>23688714
They're behind everything you know. Despite being a mere 13% of the vt population, Lamys make up nearly 50% of all twitter and reddit crossposts.

>> No.23689126

>>23688840
I want to fuck Lamy anon desu

>> No.23689169

>>23689126
You aren't missing much

>> No.23689198

Raping Coco

>> No.23689547

>>23689169
How so?

>> No.23689642

>>23689547
In my experience they push the scene forward too quick and things end before they actually get going. Teamates are better if you want a fuckpuppet, Kronies as well but good luck breaking through the waiting queue, currently with a Haaton which is surprisingly great, would look into those

>> No.23689653

>>23689198
Coco is at least as tall as you or taller depending on where you live and she's definitely much stronger, plus her tail... anon, I don't think it's possible.

>> No.23689737

Coco sitting on your face

>> No.23689771

>>23689642
H-how do you know all this? Are you taking notes on the best and worst fanbases to have gay sex with?

>> No.23689789

Jesus Christ, not this shit again.

>> No.23689850

>>23689653
How tall is she? I'll find a way

>> No.23689873

>>23689771
I'm a whore, probably a bigger one than you

>> No.23689949

>>23689642
I've definitely noticed that teammates are the best ones and also the most present. There's a cute Ioforia in /pagi/ but I doubt he could service a man, or even wants to. Saplings seem interesting but I haven't seen any ERP on their part.

>> No.23690008

>>23684289
I'm working on it...

>> No.23690725

>>23689653
We're not all sub 6' manlets like you, anon. That said, she's probably stronger.

>> No.23691057
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23691057

>>23690725
her fucking tits are stronger than you

>> No.23691123

>>23691057
I bet she gives paizuri like a champ

>> No.23691405 [SPOILER]  [DELETED] 
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23691405

>>23691123
Yes

>> No.23692835

>>23689653
You would need Kanata's aid to even have a chance of success.

>> No.23693315
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23693315

>>23689198
You'll get her sloppy seconds

>> No.23693340
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23693340

>>23691057
>>23691123
>she bets you a boobjob that you can't even beat her with her arms tied behind her back
>try to immediately tackle her but she casually thrusts her chest out, causing you to bounce off her tits and land on your back
>before you can even collect your bearings, she hops and lands her ass hard on your crotch
>presses her immense breasts right up to your face, threatening to suffocate you if can't even push them away
> the only option left is to go for the nipples

>> No.23693449
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23693449

>>23693340
Dragon Milk! As good for growing Baby Dragons as it is fully grown Human Men!

>> No.23694431
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23694431

>>23643768
If I actually were to listen to you I'm sure I'd actually lapse into a coomer mania and write the Noel/Flare Hypnosis threesome or Subaru Netori ideas I haven't begun to put to paper yet and we'd be right back where we started.

>> No.23694636

>>23692835
Kanata will have her cute dragon babies to raise and spoil even if she has to help you cheat to win your fight with Coco.
If she happens to get knocked with a little winged half-angel as well, she's fine with that too.

>> No.23694667

>>23693449
Capturing Coco and milking her dragon breasts to sell it to China for fertility snake oil! Keeping her on a pump 24/7! It's painful but she can't even beg for you to take it off due to the dildo muzzle in her throat feeding her with the sperm of your men as well as various animals so she can produce more milk! Doing the same thing to her baby dragons right in front of her eyes! Feeding the male baby dragons as a meat slurry to her while she's helpless to resist!

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23694751

>>23694667
...

>> No.23694818

>>23694667
OH YEAH
Oh baby let's go
Alright I'm down
Uhh wait where is this going
Anon what the fuck

You're supposed to keep the best parts out of Asanagi doujins, not all of it.

>> No.23694941

>>23694667
hot

>> No.23694980

>>23694431
Okay.
You're only allowed to edge until you finish all of your WIPs.

>> No.23695600

>>23694667
Starting a side business of selling dragon tears! Dating and Seducing Kanata! Slowly worming your way into her heart till she confesses! Becoming lovers and marry Kanata! Making Kanata forget all about Coco through copius amounts of sex! Raising a loving family supported by your illegal business! Making Coco cry every time you send her your progress with Kanata! Finally breaking Coco when you send her some dirty talk that has Kanata admit she loves you more!

>> No.23695764

>>23695600
Betraying Kanata! Slipping a roofie in her drink strong enough to make a gorilla fall asleep! Have her wake up from the pain of you plucking her angel feathers one by one while she's completely restrained! Once she's out of feathers, take her halo and sell her off to sex slave trafficking as she's not useful to you anymore!

>> No.23696134

>>23689949
Saplings huh? Got it. Loading my rifle and setting a net.

>> No.23696650

>>23688714
not me

>> No.23697114

>>23675939
what is this from?

>> No.23697321

>>23697114
Recent FC2 stream

>> No.23698040

>>23685697
>Futa is THE most popular weeb fetish out there, you really think people wouldn't talk about it?
No, just you can't shut up about it.

>> No.23698230

>>23697321
Ah, would explain it. Didn’t watch it.

>> No.23698556

>>23698040
This. It’s the same with the bush fag who won’t shut up.

>> No.23698590

>>23675939
Join if invited, vacate the premises otherwise
Being a fourth wheel here outweighs being able to watch.

>> No.23698665

>>23698590
What do you mean?

>> No.23700421

>>23698590
Elaborate

>> No.23700504

>>23696650
I can't believe it's Pekofag after all

>> No.23700548

>>23700504
It's AA recruiting new writers

>> No.23701124

>>23700548
They're the same person?

>> No.23701149

>>23701124
Ahh, shit, I wasn't supposed to tell anyone that

>> No.23701565

>>23701124
We're all the same person. Aspects of the same godhead eternally tortured by chuubas.

>> No.23701896

>>23701565
You are AA.
I am AA.
We are all AA.

>> No.23701912

>>23701896
I'm AAA

>> No.23702160
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23702160

>>23701912
And I, am AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


Jokes aside, which chuuba would be a good fit for a fic about investment shenanigans?

>> No.23702255

>>23702160
The dumb ones that could fall for pyramid scams. Aqua, Subaru, Nene, Rushia

>> No.23702372

>>23702160
If by shenanigans you mean loses all her money by being stupid then Nene. If you mean like wolf of wallstreet business men type stuff then Reine.

>> No.23702377

>>23698665
>>23700421
Like, just standing around watching them cuddle is weird, right? And it will make the uncomfortable as well
I just don't want to intrude

>> No.23702424

>>23702377
> watching them cuddle
Anon, I...

>> No.23702954

>>23702377
I was picturing more like jerking off onto their kissing mouths and covering their face with thick hot cum but I guess if it's uncomfortable for you then you can leave too

>> No.23702982

>>23702424
Oh, I think I get it.
I am sorry for causing a misunderstanding as my mind doesn't immediately jump to sex.

>> No.23703064

>>23702982
You see three girls in bed, touching each other very intimately. The question is to join them, in which sex talk ensued on who'd take which position; or watch them, and you assumed it was to watch them cuddle in bed.

>> No.23703953

>>23702160
Gura for being dumb but also lucky.
Would need to get contrasted by someone else though, presumably someone acting as the more 'knowledgeable' about the stock market so as to be the one giving exposition.

>> No.23704186

>>23703953
> implying she will manage to make good profit from investments
That's a dangerous train of thought there anon

>> No.23704319

>>23704186
No but dumb luck running out at a key dramatic moment does sound like an interesting way to make it a short fic about gambling on stocks.

>> No.23704380

Title drops.

Based or cringe?

>> No.23704425

>>23704319
Combined with somebody that is more calculative like Kiara but ends up getting bogged anyway, makes for an amusing plot.

Bonus if someone like Reine or Lamy was fucking with the market behind the scenes.
ReinePavogdanoff.jpeg

>> No.23704450

>>23704380
I do it sometimes. I also use pun titles.

>> No.23704556

>>23704380
Based so long as it's executed well.

>> No.23704565

>>23704380
cringe in all but the most perfect of scenarios

>> No.23704611

>>23704380
They need to be 'earned', and need a steady hand to execute it well. Do it well and you have a meaningful addition, do it poorly and you just have 'he said the thing' moment.

>> No.23704630

>>23704380
'The prophecies foretold. Anon you were the Holofantasy all along!'

>> No.23704819

>>23704630
...
Then again there is something to be said about deliberately shitty title drops for comedic purposes.

>> No.23705124

>>23704630
Hearty kek

>> No.23705154

>>23704630
Perhaps the real Holofantasy was the friends we made along the way

>> No.23705302

>>23705154
>Super Sealing Slash whose effects are influenced by Anon's dearest bonds
Kino.

>> No.23705313

>>23705302
Cringe, actually.

>> No.23705341

>>23705313
Its a fanfic that has roots in an absurdist horror porn game, let your shoulders relax

>> No.23705401

>>23705341
Cringe is cringe regardless of derivative.

>> No.23705432

>>23705341
Man it's weird thinking about how all of these chapters could have turned into /ss/ rape where presumably Coco would have bailed Anon out.

>> No.23705706

>>23629894
Raping Fauna

>> No.23705976

>>23704380
"I am the Menhera Wrangler."

>> No.23706001

>>23629894
Having a staring contest with Luna's winking arsehole!

>> No.23706456

>>23704380
"Guess Peko-chan found herself in a... Bunny Trap"

>> No.23706592

>>23706456
They're getting worse and worse... Please, have mercy...

>> No.23706716

>>23706456
She didn't say that.

>> No.23706830

>>23706716
I think he's being facetious, anon.

>> No.23706890

>>23706830
It's a joke.

>> No.23706963

>>23706890
What? Where's the joke?

>> No.23707029
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23707029

>>23706963
Well more of reference really.

>> No.23707095

>>23706592
"Anon, don't mess with them. Those girls are the Bully Girls!"
"I think Flare has finally recovered her First Summer Memories."
"I guess we do live in a Holoreality"
"God, Kiara you are such a Saviourfag"
"Do you really think you can disrupt this Holorealm?!"

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>>23707095

>> No.23707220

>>23707095
i have no words for this travesty.

>> No.23707297

>>23707029
>Mori, it's you!! You're the Psycho Killer?!!"
>>23707113
Don't worry I've blown my load of poory thought out title drops

>> No.23707394

>>23694667
I blame this post for giving me one of the worst dreams I've ever experienced.

>> No.23707607

>>23707113
Thank you for this image Anon, I've been looking for it for a long time

>> No.23707656

>>23707394
Someone's never read a fucked up erodoujin. Seriously, some artists go hard as fuck to making their scenarios.

>> No.23707662

>>23707607
For what purpose? Are you, too, considering the rope?

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23707753

>>23688170
Oh look it's the funny greentext i posted yesterday. The sad part is that this is the most exposure any of my stories will ever reach.

>> No.23707758

>>23707662
I saw it once a while ago and never saved it. Now I think about it every so often and try to find it to no success.

>> No.23707880

>>23707753
That sucks to hear, Anon... have you considered being less shit at writing?

>> No.23708021
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23708021

>>23707880
R-rude....

>> No.23709213

Is the writer for shadowlive still here?
I want to know if it's still being written or if the fic has been abandoned.

>> No.23709262

>>23709213
IIRC they needed to work out a bunch of kinks in the story.

>> No.23709425

>>23709262
I know, it's why I'm asking. Last I remember them giving an update was the writer basically saying they're going to keep going forward with it and see if they can 'correct their path' as it were for the story.
I was wondering if the difficulties in that has made them abandon it or if they're still working on it.

>> No.23709524

>>23709425
Well, they're around for most part, so you'll get a response at some point.

>> No.23710748

>>23703064
Oh.
I just can't imagine waltzing in and joining them like "don't mind if I do"

>> No.23710958

>>23710748
>Anon was arrested for aggravated rape.

>> No.23711097

>>23710958
Isn't all rape aggravated?

>> No.23711126

>>23710748
You pull out a bunch of AkaSupas as you waltz in..

>> No.23711242

>>23711097
I don't know but the phrase 'Aggravated rape' always made me laugh because I'm 11.

>> No.23711522

>>23710748
Then again the alternative for the join them in sex option would just be, stand there and watch them fuck.
What are you gonna do, whip out your dick and say 'don't mind me' while jacking it?

>> No.23711558

>>23711242
You’re too young to be here.

>> No.23711579

>>23711558
Mentally 11. Mentally, Anon...I'm probably older than you...

>> No.23711979

New thread
>>23711636

>> No.23712892

Hey so whoever said they liked the Fallen Knight set I got a gift for you

https://drive.google.com/file/d/151PUqghq3QLClns3O7nVmpWep_FqSha6/view

I'm spiteful enough to pay enough money to steal this shit, just use Modmanager or UXM for Elden Ring, it'll replace the Confessor Set and some weapons, which you can cross-reference here. https://github.com/MaxTheMiracle/Dark-Souls-3-Parts-Files/blob/master/Elden%20Ring

>> No.23713364

>>23712892
Looks like AA is going to be a happy man tonight.

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>>23713364

>> No.23713513

>>23712892
The piss pants armor

>> No.23713762

>>23713513
if even a fraction of the shit in Dark Souls was real you'd be having pee pants too

>> No.23713896

>>23713762
Nuh uh, I'd be super cool and super strong and beat everyone up. You're probably right.

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