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Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Secret Ingredients: Tags: Risu, NSFW, Femdom (not sure if it count as abusive chuuba or just BDSM):>>23349941

A new chapter of AC: hololive.: Tags: Chloe, Amelia, Mumei, Suisei, Kaela, Flare, Mio, SFW, crime drama, crossover:>>23364471

Astel's Menhara Cure Stick: Tags: Blowjob that's all:>>23390994

Safety Spats: Tags: Fluff, Femboy Suisex

Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Secret Ingredients: Tags: Risu, NSFW, Femdom (not sure if it count as abusive chuuba or just BDSM):>>23349941

A new chapter of AC: hololive.: Tags: Chloe, Amelia, Mumei, Suisei, Kaela, Flare, Mio, SFW, crime drama, crossover:>>23364471

Astel's Menhara Cure Stick: Tags: Blowjob that's all:>>23390994

Safety Spats: Tags: Fluff, Femboy Suisex:>>23393775

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Chammers lazing about in her room and only ordering takeout until she gets a little too heavy to excuse it as "being thicc". Mane-chan thinks it's hot and keeps finding loopholes in upper management's plans to get her to lose weight:>>23336576

Hololive having the talents on stream to determine who was the best thighs in the company, with Matsuri and Marine being the hosts and judges.:>>23345415

(You) bringing a cute boy named Suisei home from the club, only to find out once you've taken off his clothes that he's actually a cute girl:>>23358107

Shion casting a love spell on you with the intent of turning you into another simping gachikoi, only for the spell to be way too strong and you rape her right then and there:>>23358282

Punishing Luca:>>23363305

The gyaru Mio idea from two threads ago:>>23385717

The Good(?): You've got the affections of one of the yandere Holos. Good job!! The Bad(?): She's got a dick that's very, very hard for you that she plans on using to its full extent. What do you do? Try to run? Or accept your fate as your soon-to-be lover's cumdump?:>>23388817

Marine going into a fit of rage because she's jealous her daughter Aqua got a boyfriend while she stays single!:>>23390500

(You) and pic related go on a years-long orgy of revenge against the entire streaming industry, building a massive criminal empire along the way. 100% villainfic:>>23397995


You are hired as a HoloX intern, although in reality you are an undercover agent assigned to infiltrate this secret organization and try to find out what they are up to:>>23420235

>>23425292
>white idol outfit
The artist must have some kind of visual impairment

>>23425358
Looking at this image you can see just how much this general has changed

>>23428894
The only consistent thing has been hag love.

>>23429049
There's like two guys that still preach and one of them does it in a very obnoxious manner. But I'm sure the want is still there.

>>23429049
those cursed hagfags.....

>>23429204
That guy preaches his body hair and stink fetish first, and hags second. It's a shame I share an interest those things because yeah he overdoes it

>>23429552
It's not just him preaching his fetishes, it's also him shitting on the opposite side and blaming it all on "le jews who corrupted porn".

It's Saturday afternoon, where is everyone?

>>23430632
Fuck off I'm busy. I got work and then a Warhammer Fantasy session to go to and then stopping by your oshi's(read: my girlfriend's) place after that.

As long as we're apparently complaining about fetishes..

>Hot glue ntr

Don't think I didn't see that you faggots. How would that even work.

Does your figure run away to be hot glued by another guy, or does some guy barge into your house punch you in the face and bust a nut on your figure while you cry like a little bitch in the corner?

>>23430856
If it was my figure I'd be absolutely livid because they are really expensive but I do love seeing hot gluing figures and cum tributes when it's from others.

>>23430778
>warhammer fantasy
Don't you mean Age of Sigmar?

ascend

>>23430632
The kit I order to do my own alignments came in ahead of time so I'm fiddling with it. Fuck automotive shops man, full of snakes.

We need more yandere Aqua fics

>>23436350
Ain't she like a socially awkward mess? How would that work?

>>23436548
NTA, nor am I Aqua, but as a socially awkward mess, I can say that about the only thing that lets me get over it is anger. If I'm internally fuming, I'll be able to set aside any awkwardness or nervousness. That said, I also frown, and my tone of voice would vary slightly, so it's not quite what you need.
Point it, awkwardness can be bypassed or mitigated when a person's mind is entirely consumed by a strong emotion. If you can find a way to believably get Aqua to that point, it'd be easier to make her believably yandere.
That said, I still think cuck Aqua is more realistic.

>>23430632
I'm here but have no will to write at all since I am at best ambivalent to pretty much all the chuubas in my story now, and my other idea didn't really go anywhere.

I've been thinking of maybe writing something on Royal Road just for kicks but the fact of the matter is it's not the same. I like the community here better since I don't have to care about my content offending any of the internet's myriad control freaks.

>>23437321
Fubuki's really enjoying that bubble tea. I've been staring at it for like a minute straight.

>>23437321
Uhm... do I know you?

>>23430632
I would type something up for the first time but I don't really know where to start. The only thing I've wanted to write involves Ayame being dicked down hard, but I feel like that's already been done.

>>23437897
She can always take more dicks

>>23437804
I can never not see this gif and not remember a moment of severe autism that came over me at work one day, when a work friend showed up to the lunchroom with a bubble tea and I, in all my curiosity, asked her point blank, "Do you ever choke on those balls?"

>>23436548
She'd be the exhausting type of yandere where she'd be dumb enough to misread EVERYTHING but smart enough to know that threatening to kill herself and feigning suicide attempts are good ways to get you to drop everything and focus on her.

> see this
What do?

>>23425358
Reine just finished an insane amount of work that was dumped on her on short notice, and is visibly stressed out and frustrated.
Seeing this, you offer to help her relax as your way to reward her efforts.

>>23437897
I mean an actual Ayame getting fucked hard fic doesn't actually exist yet... Of the three NSFW Ayame fics two are rrat!Ayame, and the last one is a yandere.
So if you want to write Ayame smut there's still a lot good possibility space to make some without crossing concepts someone has already done.

>>23437937
How did she reply?

>>23437321
Subjectionanon?

>>23437897
There hasn't been any like extensive Ayame smut fics. You can change that anon, be the change you want in /wg/

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: Share an idea that has been stuck with you for a while but you haven't done much with.

>>23424541
Yeah I guess. I dunno. I don't like clit dick, I don't like pussy hiding under the balls, etc. But the idea of Matsuri's Baby Carrot 3 has got me idly fantasizing about just flatout cheating on your GF to keep railing Matsuri at work/after work/essentially wherever as you've dick broken her into a submissive slut who's no longer challenging your cock's authority compared to hers, and that's really turning me on.
>Matsuri cums below her clothing and you force her to suck her own cum out of her stockings while assfucking her
>>23420429
>Ultimately if you want a domain name, you can create a CNAME that redirects all traffic to the Google Script/Rentry page (I think) so it's a bit cleaner than what we have today. No need for an extra cost besides the domain name.
This would probably be what I ended up doing, at least at first. That script URL gives me AIDS everytime I look at it. I wanted to try something with firebase I think but it just created a shorter, still fucked up link and made my autism itch bad.

>>23444204
still working on a fic about angry Suisei making (You) drink her piss as a punishment for making her enter the wrong stage in a fest.

>>23444204
Working on the first entry in a series about my oshi but I need to do some research first.

>Bonus
I still kind of want to write that "Making Suisei cry" fic but I'm not sure I can pull it off. The Rushia incident kind of killed my desire to write a suffering fic like that.

>>23445770
Setting research I should specify

Hey where's the guy doing a CYOA thing?
Have you seen this?
https://idmillington.github.io/undum/

>>23425292
Oh sweet, AZKi. Does that mean work continues on Gen 0 Gets Buff? She would look so much nicer with gigantic pecs...

>>23447046
She really wouldn't.

>>23446802
someone is doing a vtuber cyoa?

>>23448202
At least two actively looking into it and some more who have expressed interest

>>23447046
there is a severe lack a muscle fetish on the archive

>>23448310
Giving a woman a cock is less gay than giving her abs.

>>23442927
Yep.

>>23448374
Man I hope this is bait.

>>23437321
I already knew it wouldn't work out when you were planning it to be Berserk with chuubas, then that criticism lived rent free in your head, and instead of taking something easier, you went one step further and decided to do a Bloodborne TTRPG fic for some fucking reason. It was destined to crash from the start and I don't see how you didn't realize that sooner.

>>23448374
the absolute state of /vt/

>>23448374
I mean, why not both?

>>23445051
>no longer challenging your cock's authority compared to hers, and that's really turning me on.
Incredibly based, please do it.

>That script URL gives me AIDS everytime I look at it.
I mean ultimately you could simply set up a short URL with Bit ly - the reason I didn't suggest this though is because it creates a fairly easy way for someone to hijack the thread and post a malicious URL.

So Google Scripts doesn't necessarily take a domain directly but according to this, you can simply use an iFrame to load the page from another domain and it will accept it no problem. So it is doable, just not as cleanly as using the DNS system.
codeproject . com/Tips/1190399/Custom-Domains-on-Google-Apps-Script

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
>Yes.
When was the first instance of this?

>>23446802
Anon, I was already planning on making it in twine with the included chapbook story format so that I didn't have to fuck around with JavaScript and CSS.
Admittedly this does seem more useful if I wanted to make it an actual stat based CYOA but this still looks like I need to export it as an html file.
Thanks for finding it but I'll stick with Twine for now.

CHOP SLASH CUT PIERCE SLICE DRINK THE BLOOD GNAW THE BONES RIP THE HAIRS CHOP SLASH CUT HACK HASH DICE MINCE COOK THE FLESH TEAR HER OPEN CRUSH THE REST

>>23448530
>the story of my life is making a hole and digging it deeper

>>23450184
Start by shaving, trust me bro, it will fix everything

>>23449178
Oh the addition of the 'eh', that came from last year's April fool's where the the thread that was posted on that day added in the eh, and it stuck.
I think the first actual instance of isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction came from the first attempt to break away from abuse and create a vt writing thread (during the abuse era) which stuck around and eventually joined the op when the thread became /wg/.

>>23450802
Good, now write a story about this place's history already

>>23449178
March 17 2021 from what I see in archive

>>23450475
I like my beard, though.

>>23451043
Think lower

>>23450962
I think it came earlier with this thread
>>1201128

>>23451215
It'll be a cold day in hell before I take a razor to my nuts.

>>23451671
You will never be 8 inches if so

>>23451778

>>23444204
AC: Hololive but I may abandon it. Not sure if people are going for it and that's fine. I just don't like writing a story without an audience.

Building Block Doll and I think I have an idea for a side plot however I'm debating whether or not to make it its own story entirely. Basically my idea goes something like this: Fauna is a therapist and prescribes age-regression therapy. I'm not sure if it should be its own story or if it should be the B-plot.

For the Suisei-Sora storyline I am just not feeling it. I know vaguely what I want to do with it but the inspiration just isn't going for me. I think this next arc is going to change things though.

I'm slacking on Let Me Feel Your Pain too. I know what I want to do with it but just... ugh. Motivation.

>>23452043
The AC part was an instant turn off for me. Any crossover fanfiction in general is an immediate no

>>23452310
I personally don't mind crossovers but
>ubisoft AAA game
I hate the Antichrist.

>>23452310
I was afraid of that. I may just take the elements I was working with and make it is own thing.

Ah well. Win some, lose some.

Did Matsuri win against Anon?

>>23452523
Why do you people want spoilers so badly anyway? And why does AA give in to these spoiler requests?

>>23452043
>AC: Hololive
I gave another shot at reading it.
I'm going to be honesty here that fic really doesn't play to your strengths as a writer, the big cast doesn't really distinguish itself, and the plot just does not have enough worldbuilding or exposition to make it have impact. Combine that with your habit of dialogue tagless/ conversations and you have a work that really needs more words in places you're not strong at writing in general in order to work.
>>23451868
I think they're suggesting shaving will make your dick look bigger.

>>23452593
>And why does AA give in to these spoiler requests?
I figure he wants an excuse to talk about HF's tabletop aspect, since from his own mouth the story began as an extended cope for having no RPG group to play with.

Bruh I started so hot and now I have lost the will to write

>>23452630
Fair. I think I will just start from square one with something else then, whenever it is I feel the motivation for it. I do want to practice and make better adventure stories.

For now then it's back to abuse and ageplay.

>>23452670
>as an extended cope for having no RPG group to play with
Damn he's me, but instead of chuuba fic I'm writing about my friend's unfinished campaign headcanon

OvO

>>23453234
Don't feel bad, I've done that too. I still have no idea what the canon ending of Serpent Cove is but goddamn is the final boss in my version cool as fuck.

>>23452630
>I think they're suggesting shaving will make your dick look bigger.
Fortunately I have no need for that.
>>23452737
Join the club. Also all the cool stories I was following never did update. I will fucking die before A Cover Job gets its next chapter, I'm pretty sure Saviorfag anon is fucking dead, and Holotourismo anon already said that's not coming until he gets a bunch of other WIPs out of the way. I guess there's still waiting for Lazy Oni's revamped ending and the next chapter of To Be 17 Again.
>>23453234
I took the text campaign pill and have had a group running something or other every Saturday via virtual tabletop for the past 3 years. Also to me it's way more immersive than doing voice.

>>23444204
I have been trying to write part 3 to Forsaking My Own Flesh and Blood, but I feel like I've come to an impasse and nothing is sticking

>>23453525
Yea i kinda enjoy writing the headcanon of the campaign kek. It also become my piece of work for my college's assignment on creative writing workshop

>>23453608
Agreed, text is better for me too since it's basically just writing a story but a collaborative one. Recently I got myself a West Marches campaign based on Theros 5e, the campaign hasn't started yet but I've done my char creation and backstory check

>>23442500
Thankfully she's bred of the same type of autism and it didn't even faze her, and she basically said she has to be very careful because she did almost choke on 'em before.

But my other coworkers did start laughing, and thankfully we're all a close knit bunch so I avoided an awkward talking to by HR.

>>23448310
>>23425358
A woman(You) being serviced by Belmond, Maimoto and Chaika.

>>23455661
>Chaika having sex with a woman

>>23452670
It was actually just inspired by the rpgs I was already in. Ch. 6 is essentially one big reference to the Castle Drachenfels campaign we were in at the moment with some Castlevania mixed in. If I could figure out how to make a Delta Green/Red Markets chapter, I would.
>>23452593
Probably because I'm slow and discussing the idea of another project while 7 is still a work in progress

>>23456320
How is the Warhammer TTRPG?

>>23456777
If I knew, I'd tell you. We were running a system called ZWEIHANDER (from which I shamelessly stole the status 'Slain!!' that appears at the end of combat rolls) that was essentially already Warhammer Fantasy and we were running a Lustria colonizing campaign. It's a fun system but can be brutal.

>>23437321
You know, I have to ask given that you're the other anon who is (was?) doing a CYOA thing. What program were you using to write the thing out, and how were you planning on publishing it?

>>23453608
>Cover Job
I'm wondering about this too, HCAnon how's it coming along?

>>23456924
>program
I was just writing it out and planning to link the choices to different gdoc links. I was using XMind to plot it out as a mind map.

Ultimately what made me give up on it was that I'd write a scene, then jot down say, three choices, and now not only would I have triple my usual workload when writing, I also did not enjoy this extra work because more often than not I'd scan the list of choices and think 'well narratively choice A just makes more sense, picking anything else is just kind of silly', and that just sort of cascaded down the plot until I realized what I was producing wasn't up to standard because I hated a solid 3/4ths of it by design.

>>23456920
I remember that system! Dude who designed it had a good thing going by making a clone of WFRPG 2 right after 3rd Ed came out and sucked donkey balls, but then he went completely off the deep end and made it his personal crusade to alienate the entire community by trying to get classic WFRPG sites taken down and acting like a total lunatic on Twitter. Last I heard (granted /tg/ rrat), he'd gone even further down the hole and was buying his own book on DriveThru to inflate his numbers.

>>23444204
I'm still thinking about the "(You) get pegged by Pekomama" idea from a couple threads back. Split my time between waiting for someone else to do it and thinking how i could work all the ideas in

>>23458557
>I was just writing it out and planning to link the choices to different gdoc links. I was using XMind to plot it out as a mind map
I hate to sound like I'm shilling but this literally sounds like something twine handles natively. Each choice would just be a hypertext link to another passage marked with double brackets, and the mind map is done by default from connected passages.
Hell even the choice overload could get solved by having those minor choices only lead to some minor changes before merging back but changing some variables that get tracked into changes later in the story. Either that or changing into a different pattern for how you'd design your CYOA but that feels like a high level design choice that using a program won't really change.

>>23444204
I'm trying to finish this thing before I go to bed but I've been at this for over an hour now.

>>23444204
Buck breaking San rn.

I had fic idea about being the unabashed NTR villain to a chuuba and her boyfriend. I threw around the idea of cucking a dude by blackmailing Fauna with their relationship, in part because I wanted to have (You) constantly degrade her in both that sense and demeaning her over humanity's conquering of nature wholesale. Though, that's a little much for what the rest of that fic would be.

>>23456777
If you really want to know...

We went village to village in Hochland searching for signs of Chaos worship on the order of a witch hunter. After documenting a few suspicious people we came to a village with a very suspicious seer claiming to be over a hundred years old. One of the party members is from Hochland so he wasn't really on board with handling things ourselves (i.e. killing people and torching villages) if we didn't have to, so we tried to get him to come clean about how he gains his foresight. He didn't and instead told my character a very upsetting premonition about his family and future. When my character obviously took it poorly and got upset, the seer claimed that he'd be wearing my character's face by the next full moon. The Hochlander decided that was incriminating enough to kill him. The village nearby who protected him got very mad but we left right after.
I had fun.

Should I just post this fic? I just wrote it on a whim rather than taking a look at any of the prompts...

>>23461499
Go ahead. prompts are prompts, you don't have to fill them if you got your own ideas.

>>23461499
Prompts are a suggestion, nothing more. Write and post whatever you like.

>>23444204
Subaru basically wrote an architect wet dream of herself on stream the other day so I'm expanding on it.

Reading this now >>23349941 and it seems to be rather good. I have no clue why it got no attention. Do people hate Risu or something? But I digress, the writing is concise and well descriptive, as well as quite hot too, and while I don't feel like it sounds like Risu or Ayunda, it's a decently hot fic. I think the fic could've done without the countdown, with a hint of ESL in Risu's speech, and without the "Anon-Kun" thing. Try to keep "him" nameless next time, as either way, Risu shouldn't need to care about the name of her ingredient maker. He's a cow, how often do you name calls in the pasture?

I'll be honest, I read half of it but the rest I just looked over because for some really I was sure this was a futa fic so I ended up not nutting because I was saving myself for that moment that never came. I thought Risu would suddenly drink a potion that grows her a dick and walk behind the gagged man and do her thing, but alas there was no such scenario. Unfortunate, but not your fault. Would've been quite hot too. I'm not a fanwork writer but it was tempting to write out this scenerio based off of your already built work, but I've got other things to attend to.

Maybe upload your fics with sex images like pic related to catch attention next time. Hope to see more.

>>23461559
>>23461612
Okay. Be gentle with me, it's my first time writing anything for this general so this probably just turned into word salad at some point.

https://rentry.org/6nk2g Ayame, NSFW, Fluff

>>23461789
>ayame
>fluff
two tags that don't belong together

>>23461789
Short but sweet and lewd. I liked it a lot.
Good to have a new writeanon. Enjoy your stay and don't mind the schizos.

>>23461789
For a first time its not bad. A little too brisk and small to jack it to on it's own, but rough morning sex with Ayame is a nice enough that if I was in the mood I probably could anyway.

The switch from blowjob to the kiss is sudden though, like there's a sentence missing. Threw me off.

>>23458557
>I remember that system! Dude who designed it had a good thing going by making a clone of WFRPG 2 right after 3rd Ed came out and sucked donkey balls, but then he went completely off the deep end and made it his personal crusade to alienate the entire community by trying to get classic WFRPG sites taken down and acting like a total lunatic on Twitter. Last I heard (granted /tg/ rrat), he'd gone even further down the hole and was buying his own book on DriveThru to inflate his numbers.

Yeah, learned about this after the fact, dude sucks dick, but at least the book has a lot of cool stuff/supplementary material and was completely free, so no skin off my nose. It'd be nice if he wasn't a total fucking tool but what can you do.

>>23462063
>>23462193
The feedback's appreciated. I'll try not to rush things too much. I'm very sleepy so I wanted to just get it over with.

>>23461823
normally I'd agree but I want to cuddlefuck her on-screen personality so badly for some reason

>>23462665 (me)
rush things too much next time*
oh yeah, and I'll proofread more thoroughly too, definitely made some grammatical inconsistencies

>>23444204
Incredibly slowly chipping away at Pekora smut. Until I get to the actual fucking, I only write like 500 words every two days, which is needless to say quite bad.
> idea
I've been wanting to do something about molesting one of the Holos in public for a while, especially Marine. Never managed to pull it off though. Also been wanting to sex date fics like pic related, or maybe that one Polka prompt, but never really attempted.

>>23461789
Pretty decent for your first fic, hope you stick around anon.

>>23461691
Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah, I guess I still have the persistent problem of not portraying them accurately when writing characters made by other people (admittedly quite a major one in /wg/ given that all vtubers are characters made by others) and it's not helped by me suppressing my own ESL to the point it's hard to write in ESL for Risu. The countdown is admittedly a personal preference of mine especially when coupled with ruined orgasm. For the Anon-kun part, though, in hindsight I agree it's not really a necessary or even good addition to the story. I think I'll remove that from the text since it doesn't really add anything anyway.
picrel's artist has some good stuff, even if they put boobs on everyone, even the ones who're canonically flat. I'll see if the pics can inspire me to write more.

She really does have a boy's chest.

>>23461789
>>23425315
You should reply to the story anchor when you post a fic
Anyway for your first fic this pretty well written, reads good, and pretty hot to boot.
If you ever write more you should know you have a good foundation to write whatever you want.
>>23469168
I hope that second anon making that femboy suisei fic doesn't lose motivation from that rentry crash

>>23469168
I want. To slurp on those fucking titties.

>>23469168
>>23469834
Remember that smaller tits are scientifically proven to be significantly more sensitive than big ones.

>>23469976
You don't say...

>>23469976
Please God grant me the power to survive long enough to suck cute vtuber tits.

>>23461295
>unabashed NTR villain
Baseed Idea.
Though I'm reasonably certain you'd need to cut loose really fucking hard if you wanted to write that out.

hey now

>>23456240
Chaika is the cameraman.

>>23472683
you're a rockstar

>>23444204
>Bonus Question:
HF conversion for (modded) CoC so people can play out their own stories.

>>23475024
I'd be down for it.
We already have writers, we'd just need someone to code it in. Problem is the best version of CoC is the 8ch/bunker mod. Don't think permission is needed but if it ever updates again and fixes bugs or similar it'd be a hassle to update the HF one to match.
I just want more CoC, I've exhausted every possibility that every modded version has given me.

>>23475024
at first I thought you were talking about Call of Cthulhu, but then I realized you...weren't

>>23475024
How in the fuck would you even do that like I can see HF getting ported into it's own CYOA thing since I was reading through the fucking twine documentation and could totally see implementing the dice based combat alongside some minor choices 'railed' onto the main story with bad endings branching off into it's own ends.; but I can't really see how you'd port that over into CoC without effectively making it a total conversion.

>>23475389
>I just want more CoC, I've exhausted every possibility that every modded version has given me.
Fucking GODDAMN that is so relatable. The bunker mod really sadly is the best fucking one. I tried to play some of the other ones like Xinxia or whatever the fuck it was called, the one that amplifies the weird furry bullshit 20x and adds Chinese mysticism and other shit, but even all the dumb shit that mod allows me to do doesn't scratch the same itch as the end game areas in the mod bunker mod. Longwinded CoC battles are my absolute fucking shit, I love them so much. Some of that love has definitely carried over in writing.
>>23475482
That's why it's an idea I haven't done much with. Because I've no idea how the fuck I'd actually do it. But the text based exploration and story stuff within dungeons isn't that hard to imagine, it's where stats, perks, and open world stuff gets involved that potential problems exist. It'd have to have its own maps and dungeons generated that make sense within the world and account for stats.

>>23475447
I thought he was talking about clash of clans. What is CoC?

>>23476536
Zoomerchama...

>>23476568
I can't change when I was born man...

>>23476536
Corruption of Champions

>>23476757
Never heard of it, thanks.

>>23476819
Word of warning, there's a lot of furry shit in it. Like, a LOT of furry shit.

>>23476757
Good game, that. TiTS too. Despite being enormous, CoC2 isn't anywhere near as engaging as the first.

>>23476934
Is it like Lilith's Throne where you can disable/tone down the furry aspect?

>>23476996
I'm pretty sure most of it is optional side content, so you can just steer clear of it if it's not your thing. AFAIK the main questline is mostly horny goblins and demons.

>>23476996
One day that game will actually finish and come out and it'll be fucking magical. I'm going to coom myself to death when the real story is added.

>>23476986
Does TiTS have an endgame yet? I played it for awhile but stopped around the point where I got to the civil war planet with the insect people.
Also Fisianna is best girl.

>>23477934
I stopped at that part, too. I haven't actually gone back to it in a couple years; I expected it to be unfinished forever.
I don't think I used any of the companions, but I remember thinking the slime girl on your ship was cute. They're my main gripe in CoC2 as well, since combat is balanced around you using them.

>>23478242
She's not a companion, just a romance option. And with all the weird fetish shit in the game, it's nice to have a comparably vanilla girl that you can have a nice, fluffy love story with.

>>23476996
The bunkerchan mod includes the option to tone it down or disable it entirely

>>23425358
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_h1AVLrzP10
I HAVE A BIG NEED FOR YANDERE KANATA

>>23477934
the foxgirl cop gave me a futa fetish

>>23478242
We're of one mind. Companions are cool but I really like solo hero stuff, fucking impossible in CoC2 alongside them really doubling down on most of the shit I fucking hate and the writers huffing their own farts. I just want Monster Girl Dreams to update man

>>23479159
I was thinking the same thing when watching her outfit reveal.

>You get admitted to the hospital for breaking your leg
>You expect it to be an absolute bore but you meet a nurse
>Her name is Kanata
>Instantly hit it off with her
>She brings you all your meals, does most of your checks-ups
>Almost always with her
>The doctor does tell you that you're recovering at a oddly slow pace
>You don't really care because it means you get to hang out with Kanata more
>Time passes, you bond more
>It's a day before your discharge
>A little sad that you have to leave hospital and Kanata but you gotta get back to your life
>Day of discharge
>Wake up with a severe fever, leaving you bedridden
>Discharge postponed as doctor tries to figure what caused the fever
>Kanata continues to care for you

That's all I can be bothered to type.

>>23480040
What the fuck I swear I've seem this greentext concept but with another chuuba.

>>23480183
Probably seen it with Sukoya Kana or someone. It's not the most creative greentext concept.

>>23480299
Yeah, I think you're right. I think it was a Sukoya greentext that was posted here that had that exact same premise of 'evil' nurse keeping you permanently as her patient in a cycle of recovery and decline.

>>23480040
A Farewell to Arms but with Kanata

>>23425358
You've recently been admitted to the hospital after getting into a minor accident. By pure chance, you met up with your childhood friend Kanata who you jokingly referred to as your 'guardian angel' back when the two of you were kids. The story progresses from wholesome reunion between childhood friends and Kanata lovingly taking care of you until the day where you are discharged from the hospital. After getting discharged, Kanata kept on visiting you at home to take care of you but you thought nothing of it. Eventually, she becomes rather obsessive and even moves in with you. Little did you know, she orchestrated the accident as part of her plan to be with you.

>>23482262
...I have no idea why it spoilered the whole prompt

>>23482363
I think you may have accidently selected all of what you wrote before hitting ctrl plus s. Either that or you had a spoiler tag that you didn't close.

>>23462271
That’s a good attitude to have. Personally I try not to dwell too much on RPG devs being retards in their personal life, but this guy in particular I have a grudge against because he kept attacking /tg/‘s pdf archive, spamming the links with copyright notices until they got taken down.

>>23483254
I remember learning he was kind of a dilweed from the DM after the fact but I didn't think he was that bad. Reasonable to hold a grudge at that point.

/wg/ writing and games

>>23425358
The rest of HoloX training (You) to be able to rape Laplus if she ever gets out of control.

>>23425358
Reine desperately offering you exorbitant amounts of money while she's on her knees begging for you to let her fuck your oshi

>>23469297
>I hope that second anon making that femboy suisei fic doesn't lose motivation from that rentry crash
I'm just a bit busy right now but i'm still working on it

>>23486594
But what if SHE'S my Oshi. What will she do then?

>>23487150
Leave in a frustrated huff but after a few days come crawling back and nervously ask if you'd be interested in sleeping with her instead

> went to watch AquaShion Neighbour wars to remember better times
> it's gone
> all of it just gone

>>23489274
do you mean the clips or the original streams?

>>23489274
Be thankful, it could have been much worse.

>>23489274
that sucks bro, but you shouldn't live in the past, man. forget about it. hololive is the best it's ever been right now anyways

>>23491577
>hololive is the best it's ever been right now anyways

>>23491577
How can you say that when there's no Hololive summer?

>>23491727
How could youtube deny me hololive summer right before it was Okayu's turn

>>23492988
I will never forgive Suzan...

>>23492988
we were denied Kiara in a bright orange slingshot bikini..

>>23425292
Was thinking about a some chuubas and how they would react to getting dumped. So far I was thinking about Kiara, Irys, Kronii, Towa, and Mumei.

Kiara would probably blow it out of proportion, and try to gas light you into not dumping her. She might even turn into a stalker if you do successfully dump her. Irys would probably just throw herself at your feet saying that she'll be a better girlfriend. Kronii would try to play it off, but would be seething internally and be plotting some type of revenge to get back at you for leaving her. Towa would be similar to Irys, but with the caveat of the rest of the JPs thinking you're an asshole for doing so in reality Towa was able to manipulate the other JPs into thinking you were an asshole which would force you to stay with her or face social suicide.. Mumei would take it well, but similar to Kronii she's probably going to break into your house and slit your throat while you sleep. Mumei might even make a shrine/altar with your body kind of like how Jason made a shrine to his mom with her head as a centerpiece in 13th part 2.

Anybody else got any ideas?

>>23495689
>break up with mumei
>who are you, where do you live

>>23495689

>>23495689
I see Mumei as the type to break into your house, kidnap you and torture you until you develop stockholm's. Maybe chop off your limbs so you can't run away in the most extreme case. Or, if we were to play into the "i forgor" lore she has, she could "conveniently" forget that you dumped her. This could be tragic if she's genuinely forgetting, as you break her heart over and over but she doesn't remember it, or if it's fake it could be that she's gaslighting you as you think you're hurting her over and over.
For other chuubas, Polka would tearfully admit that she saw it coming and that you deserved better anyway, before commiting suicide. Ame would start tearing into you with all sorts of insults and accusations before breaking and just asking why. Suisei would either laugh in your face, say that good luck finding anyone better than her, and leave, or would start analyzing every one of your preferences and tryhard all of them in an effort to make you stay.

>>23497307
>Mumei
Forgetting idea is actually good, someone get on this

ANYA'S

FUTA

COCK

>>23500059
Why?

>>23500172
maybe the same anon that submits the prompt of HoloID girls sucking Anya's cock alternately

>>23501071
Nah that's a different anon. I just needed something to bump us from page 10

>>23502541
>page 10 in 45 minutes
What's happening now?

>>23502933
It's just the usual dramabaiting catalogue shit creating new threads, plus some new generals starting to sprout up

>>23502541
So that makes 3 of us who want to play with dagger cock

>>23425358
Ratazana de ferro, lo te quiero

>>23425358
Ráton de hierro, lo te quiero

>>23502933
It's because no one is saying shit for the past fucking week so you notice the page much more

>>23505861
i got shit to do now, can't shitpost here as much

>>23504600
I'm also fond of big dick shortstacks.
Especially paired with Anya's resentment to her oversized endowments

>>23504600
I was in the middle of writing something based on that Anya prompt but I see someone already did it...I still might finish it since I like the concept

>Clussy is getting more popular
More Polka soon. Soon...

>>23505462
Go away, this is an english only general.

I feel bad for actually liking those weird kiara fics.

>>23510103
Which?

>>23510169
The working overtime series.

>>23510179
...Why? It's just fiction.

>>23510179
Did a containment breach happen and something bad happened because of it?

>>23510062
That wasn't even proper Spanish so I don't know what he was getting at.

>>23510103
its ok anon, those fics are very entertaining

It's been ten minutes and I already want to write Mori oyakodon

>>23507922
do it, my attempt feels very rushed in retrospective. Also I don't see why having multiple fics based on the same prompt is bad

>>23513585
>I don't see why having multiple fics based on the same prompt is bad
NTA but I tend to get instantly demotivated if I find out somebody already did something I am working on. It just feels like I'm wasting time rehashing a tired idea, even if their fic went in a different direction than mine. It almost feels rude, like I'm stepping on their toes.

>>23511803
Implicando que Espanhol em sí é uma língua própria. Que piada, Espanhol é nada mais do que uma linguagem para palhaços. Só queria falar que acho a rata de ferro uma gostosa.

>>23513552
Could be decent.

>>23513917
I can relate to this. The worst part is feeling insecure about your story being inferior to the other one. That being said, I still try to shake off those insecurities and focus on finishing my take on the prompt if I feel like it's worthwhile

>>23514287
Mori chose one of the best designs offered for her, and she's as cutely autistic as her daughter.

>>23514634
Makes me feel old that I immediately caught the Endora reference. She's definitely got the right chuuni energy.

>>23513552
Do it, faggot.

>>23514567
Speaking of, whatever happened to the Anon who was talking about writing another anniversary fic and making it a competition with the other one?

>>23514027
Nesse contexto "si" não tem acento.

>>23515074
Eu sem brincadeira falo Inglês melhor que português. É autismo.

>>23514027
>>23515074
>>23515157
fuck off WACTOR

>>23497307
>Suisei would either laugh in your face, say that good luck finding anyone better than her, and leave, or would start analyzing every one of your preferences and tryhard all of them in an effort to make you stay.
Then she'd cry when she realizes she's been cucked by Aqua.

I know why fics suck nowadays.

You see, whether you can write like this or not, being able to think up this kind of character, it depends on whether or not you can say to yourself, “Oh, yeah, chuubas behave like this exist in real life.” If you don’t spend time watching streams, you can’t do this, because you’ve never seen them.

Some people spend their lives interested only in themselves. Almost all fan fiction is produced with hardly any basis taken from observing actual streams, you know. It’s produced by humans who can’t stand looking at other humans. And that’s why this community is full of bad fics!

>>23517985
You don't read them anyway loser so you can't even be sure you're right

>>23517985

>>23517985
...Ok? Cool story bro?

>>23517985
A fic being bad or not is debatable tho, since according to postmodernism fuckers there's no bad literature

>>23518116
>>23518770
>>23518867
> don't get the reference
T-...Tough crowd...

>>23519868

>>23519868
Is the reference being you’re an attention seeking whore?

>>23517985
>Almost all fan fiction is produced with hardly any basis taken from observing actual streams, you know.
Yes, we know already, nobody in /wg/ watches streams.

>>23519868
I understood you're referencing that old rant by Miyazaki, but it's a bit of a deep cut

>>23520194
I was trying to meme but I fucked up by changing "community is filled with otakus" with "all your fics are trash"

>>23520194
Just remember that by his own admission he doesn't read anything besides his own writing, so if this is not just a poorly-landed joke he's basically pointing a shotgun at himself and pulling the trigger.

>>23520385
>he's basically pointing a shotgun at himself and pulling the trigger.
if only

>>23520385
That's... a very retarded argument anon. Fics here are copies of the original content (or at least they should be), so by basing my fics of those fics, I'm effectively making a copy of a copy. That can't be good, can it?

>>23520473
>That's a retarded argument
>Makes an even dumber one

>>23520385
That senile old man also thinks that LotR is bad because "there could be good orcs"

>>23520473
Pekofag, the Dunning-Kruger effect is pointing to your ignorance.

>>23521260
I don't see how that applies

>>23521640
Kinda proving his point lmao

>>23521640
Chu

>>23513552
do it do it do it please do it

>>23514990
That would be me, I haven't touched it since march 28, I got 4.8k words in and just passed a fubuki blowjob scene but I kind of lost motivation due to running way too late for the anniversary. I think it's about 3/5th done.
Do you guys still want it?

>>23522190
W-wha...

>>23520385
God, if only that faggot killed himself.

>>23523808
>fubuki blowjob scene
>Do you guys still want it?
Is this actually a genuine question? YES I NEED IT

>>23523808
Finish it

>>23524032
>>23524121
Sure I'll see what I can do to finish this up. Won't try and rush this but I'll try and get this done quick.

I should study up about the female orgasm more, it seems there are plenty of things I could add into my writing with it. Apparently women cannot orgasm from having their ears fondled, I found that very interesting.

>>23425315
first time writing after a few months of lurking and doing reps here, I took an idea from the prompt archive, let me know what you all think
"A friend." (Roboco, fluff, abuse(?), drugs, SFW)
https://rentry.org/dizib
I'm not so sure about the tags specifically abuse and fluff so please also tell me which fits better

>>23526154
Why the fuck you thought they could in the first place, anon?

>>23526154
Ears fondled? Just what are you planning on putting in there?

>>23526249
>>23526306
I always heard ears were incredibly sensitive especially in women, so it was pretty surprising. Apparently women don't feel good from having their breasts fondled either, in fact most say it even hurts. Porn is bad for knowledge.

>>23526154
Where the fuck were you getting your info about the female orgasm before, Elf Porn?

>>23526401
Whoever said the thing about women not liking their boobs touched is lying to you.

>>23526401
>Apparently women don't feel good from having their breasts fondled either
Anon, I...

>>23526401
Nah, not fondled. The majority do like having their tits sucked, although you can't use too much suction or it starts hurting again.

>>23425358
Sex with Nodoka-chan

>>23526401
You know it's more about the nipple than the breast as a whole right?

>>23526170
Try to stick to one tense while writing, because this story keeps switching between present tense and past tense, sometimes in the same sentence. As for the tags, I guess they work even if the story’s a bit light on both aspects.

>>23425315
Another chapter of Let Me Feel Your Pain

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQipJvRwPXdgEWqGwJSU6CVyPHeZqBEuFNqrCxXRF2Tt07H8Z1EmF3mJWvZw8R_EcksBumcYpztE8uX/pub

Tags: ryona, Roboco, (you), tragedy

>>23526154
>>23526401
Why on earth would you think that? Women love having their boobs grabbed are you brain damaged?

>>23527028
The woman I grabbed boobs said it hurt and to not do it too much so I got curious and after some research it turned out most women don't like having their breasts fondled. I don't know what to tell you. You can look it up right now.

>>23527084
I can safely assure you that they do, you just need to be gentle and know how to fondle them right. Maybe the woman you were with was weird or had some problem but I know for certain breasts feel good when they're grabbed in the right way.

>>23514027
>mi cara cuando puedo comprender este mensaje en su totalidad porque el portugués no es más que un inferior dialecto provincial de la ilustre lengua castellana

>>23526660
Make it 3-some with A-chan too, probably A-chan teaching her junior how to do things properly or something

>>23527163
Pega essas então

Estou com saudade de cafuné, apaixonado com minha donazinha, ela é belissima. Agora se me da licença, vou comer uma farofa com pastel e coxinha.

>>23527294
>apaixonado com minha donazinha, ela é belissima

>>23526907
Oh hey you wrote something new, I hadn't seen-

>With glee, you slapped her with the backside of your hand, causing her to flinch and hold her cheek.
>“Listen, robot. I’ve got some rules: you speak only when spoken too. You live for me. Everything you do is for me. You got that?”

>>23527670
> doesn't break hand and teach him some humility
Not my Roboco

>>23527084
I guarantee you just squeezed her tits like a fucking ape and you assumed that was a her problem because you don't understand human beings

>>23528169
She took off her bra and flexed her muscles then let me touch it but said not to do it too much because it hurts. She clearly didn't want to do it at all, she didn't assume it was because I would be rough.

>>23523817
Since when was Pekofag a teamate, unless this is someone else

>>23528280
I snatched it from a cute teammate in a crossdressing thread. I would've gone for the blushing ogey but I have 2K anime girl images on my folder so I just took the quickest one

>>23528330
I forgot you were there as well, that's embarrassing
hope that Teamate is doing well, they were hot

>>23528410
The two teammates found each other again in a very cute reunion recently actually, but they've yet to fully develop their love.
>>/vt/thread/22739503#p22742680

>>23528452
I haven't seen him since

>>23528591
Wait, could it be you're one of the teammates...?

>>23528648
I'm a slut for cute Anons.

>>23528699
Ah, was hoping you were the submissive one, but still hot

>>23528699
>>23528761
Can you faggots just make your own the grad already so you can stop shitting up this one.

>>23528280
Fuck off, you’re obsessed.

Why is this entire board so gay? Faggots are meant to be a small portion of most populations, and yet at times it seems as though you form a majority on this board in particular.

>>23528821
My question is why they’re all drawn to fucking /wg/ and not /trash/.

>>23528821
>>23528831
It's literally just a few mentally sick people who want to be the center of attention.

>>23528849
I think it's people that like having fun but maybe you're right idk

>posting stops
>7 more posts to complain
You show em guys! Imbeciles.

>>23528821
anon, it's possible to like cute feminine boys and also like girls at the same time

>>23528867
>I think it's people that like having fun
That is very, very debatable, but one thing that isn’t debatable is that this isn’t the fucking place for it.

Drug-fuelled reality warping
> (you) take some drugs
> nothing really happens, so you just chalk it up to being scammed
> next thing you know, your oshi comes in and fucks you all night
> next day you tune into your oshi's stream and she says that "she didn't get a wink of sleep", "she saw a really weird dream" and she's flustered as all hell

>>23528989
>Let’s ignore them and let them do their 50+ post ERP here!
Retard, history repeats itself.

>>23529015
For a person who hates faggots, you sure are acting like one.

>>23528821
Porn addicted people tend to gather in this place, and porn addicted people are more likely to have been turned bisexual through porn escalation over the years.

>>23529022
>fucking your oshi in a shared dream
I'd read it

>>23529156
> you both see each other as really fantasy versions of yourself
> you agree to call each other
> she sees you, a chubby NEET with hair leaking grease and a month old beard
> you see her, a pretty, but otherwise just another of a billion Asians
That would make for a pretty good romcom

>>23529022
Any sort of dream sharing would be a cool concept. A while ago I posted a prompt about a guy appearing in chuubas dreams and helping them through their troubles, but this could be modified to be a dream sharing story.

>>23529022
I often dream of ruining the life of my oshi by taking over her body while she is sleeping so I guess that's not too far fetched.

>>23529130
He's right, stop defending them already.

>>23529259
Fuck, I knew I mistyped that. I'm so fucking sleepy I can't see straight. Hopefully jt doesn't affect my writing too much

>>23529130
I don’t hate homosexuals, they’re fine. I just hate gay ERPing in a place that isn’t for gay ERPing.

Who do I tag? I don't know I'm too sleepy. What happened was "Hey it's you" "Yeah hey, you were cute" and it was over but now you've just turned it into a 30 post debate for no reason which really just says you are angry for no reason

>>23529339
Maybe if you stop being a faggot who tries to ERP on this General, none of that would have happened.

>>23529360
Neither of us were ERPing tho

>>23529339
You doing the sleep deprivation larp again really doesn't make you look less like an annoying faggot

>>23529242
That... Is actually a lot better than just fucking in a shared dream. My brain is foggy from being pent-up.

>>23529394
I'm not sleep deprived just tired. I fixed my schedule but now I gotta unfix it to write so it's been real tough lately but right now the worst that's happening is me blanking out and typing the wrong words if I'm not caerefi

>>23529339
>>23529390
>>23529449
Do you have nothing better to do than do this? Are you that pathetic?

>>23529339
In the past, every time two faggots have started calling each other cute the thread has devolved into gay ERP. I’d rather 30 posts of people telling you to go somewhere else than 50 posts of off topic garbage. If you weren’t planning on doing ERP then that’s fine, but that’s not what past threads tell us.

>>23529466
Sure thing

>>23529449
Okay now I know you're larping sleep deprivation.
Motherfucker, that typo is way too convenient.

>>23529482
I have done ERP in this thread twice, and that was both when there was more than one anon explicitly telling me they want to fuck. I have no intention of ERPing, besides, the whole pekora thing has gotten exhausting so it would be offtopic for me to do it here. I only fuck in private now

Sorry to interrupt the gay. Is there a term for a caregiver abusing their 'client?' I guess they would be called. Like I know 'elder abuse' but what if the caregiver is taking care of a normal young adult aged person? Caretaker Abuse sounds more like its the caretaker being abused.

>>23529502
Do you want me to type withou tusing the auto correctoe of my phone? Becuase this is how i usually type w because thus phone is garbage and the touch screen is shit, all that happened was ghat i was ooo (insert word here) to fix it

>>23529522
>I have done ERP in this thread twice
Stopped reading.
>>>/trash/

>>23529449
I know you think you seem quirky or interesting or whatever but really it's just obnoxious

>>23529580
I'll be obnoxious to you no matter if I type right or wrong lol

>>23529523
I mean if you look it up caregiver abuse is the actual term for an abusive caregiver/abuse done by a caregiver.

>>23529523
Do you have any context? I don’t think such a term exists. Like is it prostitution caregiver, babysitter...?

>>23529609
Right, I was more fishing for an easy synonym as opposed to just calling it caregiver abuse or using some overly verbose nonsense replacement words

>>23529645
Kind of like a maid I guess.

>>23529599
Almost as if you have a noted attitude problem and are a constant shit-stirrer. But sure, it's on my end

>>23529806
Anon, just stop. He’s doing this for the attention. He’s got nothing else in his life.

>>23529806
It sounded like you were shit stirring more than me desu

So, where’s that anon who always try to shift the blame on the earlyfag?

>>23526763
thanks for the advice, this is actually something I overlooked when I was originally writing it. I'll keep it in mind.

>>23529868
Dude you've admitted to being on this board for 16 hours a day you can do better than
>no u

>>23529871
Well if it isn't obvious, I'm arguing with the earlyfag quite intentionally so. The thread was already fucked once he started samefagging replies to the same post which would just keep going so I decided to crash this plane with no survivors aka just reply to whatever is said

>>23529943
I don't need to if it's true

>>23526907
I am genuinely interested in where this is going. The dynamic between them of an angry hateful man learning to reconnect and a robot that knows much more than he thinks has gotten me hooked.

>>23529950
The idea that multiple people don't like you here isn't a new thing

>>23530114
Yeah and it's getting old

New thread
>>23529885

>>23530147
You can leave at any time champ, there's like half a dozen EN splits that love metafagging gayposters go stay with over at one of those

>>23529950
There it is, always blaming the earlyfag for everything.

>>23530240
I didn't metapost

>>23530240
Why is so fat?

>>23530259
Much like most things you try you do it when you can get away with and whinge when you can't.

>>23530319
Depression due to an unfulfilling office job it seems. Regardless I would love to squeeze it and rub my penis all over her soft tummy

>>23530507
The only thing this could be referring to is me talking about AA, but if not, do clarify. Sheesh, I'd love to keep om going but im wiped, so feel free to reply and I'll get back to you when I wake up if this thread s still alive. Cant bother to pick a proper jmage either

Okay now that that's done.

>>23526907
I don't know if it's been asked before but is there a specific reason you split so much of your stuff into chapters? I ask cause honestly I find it really affects the pacing and taking the time to just release it as a full complete fic would help that

>>23527670
I hope you're enjoying it!

>>23530032
So glad. This'll be a fun one. I've got the ending figured out, this'll be a real gut puncher (no pun intended). Thank you

>>23530854
I don't usually get the energy to write anymore than two chapters a day so that's how I'll often release them. This will be a bit of a longer fic so I have no idea when it's going to end. May be in 4 chapters, may be in 10.

I like to write in segments so I can get any critiques and incorporate them before it's already done. Can change course way easier if people aren't enjoying something.

>>23526907
I'm not sure what feedback I can offer, but I wanted to say that I greatly enjoy your writing, both in this story, and more generally.
Regarding this in particular, I'm liking the story so far, and the foreshadowing you've set up. Relatable as this is, I sincerely hope Roboco manages to calm Anon enough that her personality will get an opportunity to shine through without threat of harm.

>>23526170
I agree with that other anon that you should work on keeping a consistent tense in order get better foundations to your writing.
As for the fic itself, you have managed to get that almost fluffy feeling out of me with that ending paragraph so if that what you were going for you've succeeded. Still, I feel like that 'building rage' that was supposed to have vanished when he hears Roboco's confession needed more time to build up and boil if you wanted that sudden moment of it vanishing to have more impact.

>>23526154
Some can but it's not very common

>>23529522
Damn AA actually did mating press you into submission

>>23531602
Thanks for the criticism, I fully agree on the building rage part as I felt like I actually cut it shorter than I originally planned it to be. I'll keep these and mind and use them to improve, thanks again!