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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>22364650

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were seven stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Say, Can You See? Chapter 5: Tags: Shion, Okayu, Aqua SFW:>>22369760

Cover High: Lotus Festival: Tags: Matsuri, Izuru, Marine, OC. Fluff, drama, romance, eventual friends to lovers. Potential NSFW in future chapters>>22379317

PD, PT: Botan: Tags: NSFW, Botan, Biting, Smell/Scent, Paizuri, Nursing Handjob, Amazon Position:>>22395867

New Beginnings pt. 4: Tags:cute Gay Kainen male POV:>>22403034

Holo Valley Prelude: Tags: Yagoo, sfw, nsfw in the future:>>22448347

Holoturismo: Green Flag: Tags: Sora, SFW, Action, Drama, Car autismo: >>22468815

Bay of Suvla: Tags: Amelia, Kronii, SFW, Short, Tragedy :>>22470316

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>>22494459
A terrible storm sinks the ship, leaving Anon as the only human survivor. However, Anon is not alone; a fearsome white leon(Botan) accompanies him in the lifeboat. Days turn into weeks and months, and Anon and the Leon must learn to trust each other in order to survive.
Botan's character should be written like in Lion's Den

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) move to a country town (think Stardew Valley) only to find it's populated with a bunch of chuubas:>>22369396

Fluff story about how hope descends, as Irys comes to (you) at your lowest point help pull you out of despair. Possibly end up with some romance blossoming too:>>22375186

Convincing Mio that you NEED to drink her Tights Tea to overcome your incredibly mild cold:>>22391754

Holotori orgy:>>22397900

A fic about brushing Mio's hair on a cold rainy night:>>22415958

Convincing Towa to let you take her anal virginity!:>>22419490

An Anal fic about Ayame call it Absolutely Annihilating Ayame's Anus:>>22423020

Waking up with no memory of the previous night but Chammers insisting you "did it" and are dating now:>>22432857

Sorasex:>>22434288

Finally sleeping with your first girlfriend Chloe after mustering up the courage only to find that you can't get hard because of her hikki smell and breaking up with her on the spot:>>22443891

A fic about my aunt molesting this bitch:>>22459366

Finana smut:>>22469868

Story where (You) is a fanfic writer and their chuuba accidentally stumbles upon their fics and read them:>>22470207

You remember the fae girl who lived next door when you were growing up. Every morning when you got up to go running, she was there too. And boy was she competitive, always trying to one-up you, run faster than you, run father than you. But every time, you'd come out on top. She hated you for that, and your occasional teasing didn't help. But despite the bullying, and her obvious disdain for your existence, you always did kind of like her. So when she vanished from your life one day without so much as saying goodbye...it hurt a lot more than you'd like to admit. It's been so long now that you can't even remember her name. But part of you will always miss her:>>22473516

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>>22494399
To be 17 again. Ch. 3.

https://rentry.org/yir3b

Tags: Ookami Mio, netori, fluff, NSFW, haglove, defloration

I got done writing this yersterday and waited for the new thread this morning. Added some more touches. After I finished it I decided to take a break, so the next chapter is gonna take some time. I'm looking for some feedback on my smut. I need to reread festival of sensations.
Topics such as hag creampie, hag marriage and so on are to come in the following chapters

>> No.22495895

>>22495595
More hags, great

>> No.22495955

>>22495595
Fuck yeah, more hags!

>> No.22497091

>>22494399
Footsteps Across Time: Siege of Vienna
Updated Tags for story: SFW, NSFW. Kiara, Mori, Ame, Mumei, Coco, Kanata, Laplus. OC x Kiara. Enemies to Lovers. Violence, Fluff, Drama, Shipteasing.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSJ3G94Du30ogkilz2pOiC-E-eVp1IU8auKoy2OxPindIazB4frOXk-yPwVRRATENl3SZDnacfm0OuJ/pub

Rentry link to all chapters:
https://rentry.org/footprintsacrosstime

Some lovemaking in this chapter (Only took over a thousand years) I don't proclaim to be very good at NSFW writing, but luckily it's not the focus of the story or the chapter.

>> No.22497194

>>22497091
Forgot to mention like I usually do. Next Chapter: The American Revolution.

>> No.22498378

First time here, doesn't know how this work but I'll leave this poorly written story here!

https://rentry.org/5wqv9

'Lore' story involving Kronii, Mori, Kiara and (somewhat) Ame. Based in my headcanon for the Kronii religion on /vtwbg/, but can be read without previous knowledge of it.

Hope you enjoy!

>> No.22498540

>>22498378
Welcome, you'll want to anchor that to >>22494399
Next time by replying to it. Providing tags for your story is recommended but not mandatory, I usually do it so the reader knows what they're getting into. Other than that, good luck with your writing endeavors!

>> No.22498829

>>22498540
Thanks, will do it now. Let's try this again -- hopefully I'm doing this right this time.

Anchoring to >>22494399

Title: untitled traditional tale.
Tags: SFW, Kronii, Kiara, Mori, Ame, lore.
Description: a war is about to start between the people of /morig/ and /kfp/, when their goddesses decide their fate in another plane. Things are tense when suddenly Kronii shows up.
https://rentry.org/5wqv9

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PekoAbuse bump

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>>22500288
bratty bunny deserves what she gets

>> No.22500498

>>22494459
"Hag correction" this "Brat Correction" that where's the "(You) get corrected into a perfect boyfriend" fic

>> No.22500580

>>22500498
Harvest Season in the archive

>> No.22500914

Another things I wrote for /vtwbg/ that I think others might like as they aren't really that focused on map and stuff, and is straight fanfiction.

Title: Goddesses' bliss
Tags: NSFW, Kronii, Fauna, Sana, Mumei, Baelz, IRyS, several fetishes, poetry (?), lore.
Description: Kronii decides to bring new gift to the people of /Infinity/ island and she found a 'fun way' to do it with the help of Council and IRyS.
https://rentry.org/e6rrm

Title: Family
Tags: SFW, Kronii, Boros, tale, lore.
Description: how Kronii saved (and created) the kronies and the island of Infinity.
https://rentry.org/7vno5

>> No.22501244

>>22497091
STORM CLOUDS, FIRE AND STEEL

DEATH FROM ABOVE MAKE THE ENEMY KNEEL

>> No.22501302

>>22500914
>>22494399
Anchor your stuff onegai, let the Archive grow

>> No.22501353

>>22501302
I forgot again, sorry. Thanks for the anchoring.

>> No.22501587

>>22501244
WE REMEMBER
IN SEPTEMBER
THAT'S THE NIGHT VIENNA WAS FREED
WE MADE THE ENEMY BLEED!

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>>22495595
Well I’m invested. I mean I already was but this in particular left me really waiting for the next part. I want to see Mio completely implode her awful past life and save herself and (You).

Also
>hag bush
EROTIC UOOOOOH

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>>22495595
Very cute relationship building here, and a nice passionate sex scene, I liked it.

>> No.22501962

>Not even 30 posts
>6 stories already posted

HOLY SHIT /wg/ INCLINE

>> No.22502828

hey guys, any new mori recently?

>> No.22503122

>>22502828
She prominently featured in the newest chapter of Holofantasy, though if you're looking for Mori-centric fic no.

I've got four WIPs about her, if I could just find the time and stop getting distracted

>> No.22503388

>>22502828
Hard for me to want to write Mori in any main capacity due to her personality but I have considered it. If I can find a good enough prompt I might write one eventually just because I like challenging myself.

Until then though hope someone writes a Mori fic for your sake, they're pretty rare.

>> No.22503673

>>22501962
Yeah there's been a bunch of new writers, not to mention some of them are so fast.

>> No.22503853

>>22503122
>>22503388
well what I'm liking now is cute fluff shit about going on dates and whatnot
hard to top the ryona story after all
I understand that it's not a particularly common holo/theme combo

>> No.22504863

>>22502828
I have one WIP about her. I really need to work on it lol

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>>22503853
Well, I'm glad you love Don't Rain on Me so much. Unfortunately none of my fics are particularly fluffy, there's one where the first half is a date with you, Mori, and Kiara except she's your sister and you two have incestuous sex afterwards

Still, if you've got any specific fluff or anything you'd like to see, feel free to post it to the prompt board. I tend to remember most Mori prompts

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>>22494399

Just for you >>22503853 . A short and swet Mori story, a bit more into the emotional side of things than in the romance but I like the way it came out

https://rentry.org/ch5tw

Tags: Fluff, SFW. Mori Calliope

>> No.22508013

>>22495595
The relationship building was great and made me goesling. The Smut was really hot.

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>>22494459
Towa using her devil powers to make illusions to make it seem like you're not banging her brains out on public transportation

>> No.22508501

>>22508327
That pose is technically possible (maybe toned down a bit) but it would be very painful, unnatural and obvious to any onlookers

>> No.22509503

>>22508501
Nobody cares

>> No.22509641

>>22508501
But does Towa's tail have a bone?

>> No.22510462

>>22494399
Cursed Night
Tags: Calliope Mori, OC, angst, fluff.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS0iO5rOuqFdRS1V3Akb9SJb4MXvBlxOtzWU4jiRdFhJHUPv1QrF_KL5n1Oh4x7uWujlItPBtT2r52s/pub

Added to my story catalog on rentry:
https://rentry.org/footstepsandstories
(I keep this purely because I'm an autist who likes to have their stories all in one link. Easier than having multiple rentry links if/when I go back and add more chapters.)

>>22503853
Whipped this up cause I got an interesting idea from your request, hope you enjoy, even if it's not super long.

>> No.22512821

>>22510462
NTA but, I liked it. Sombre but still kind of sweet.

>> No.22513693

>>22510462
What is with Mori fics drifting into depression angst territory? I did mine unintentionally like that but now I wonder if this is a trend

>> No.22514033

>>22513693
Mine was intentional, because it was written based off a very angsty depression song she wrote. However ending it on a hopeful note was also meant to lift spirits.

For the question overall, I think it's because she's the reaper and so the easiest way to write her in would be to have (You) dying or thinking about dying

>> No.22514252

>>22514033
Makes sense. Very good job on the story by the way

>> No.22514473

>>22514252
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I left it open-ended so I might write a follow up chapter based on her more hopeful song (Live Again) but it also ends on a nice note on its own so it might not even really be necessary

>> No.22515230

>>22495595
Hag Love! Hag Romance!
This chapter was really fucking good, the romance made me gosling and the smut, holy shit, you have definitely improved in your smut writing because God damn that was great. I have really high hopes for the next chapter.
Also I really liked that title drop

>> No.22515456

>>22514473
>follow up chapter based on her more hopeful song (Live Again)
kino

>> No.22515675

>>22509641
i'd put a bone in that whale tail, ya get me famalam

>> No.22517500

>>22515675
Waiting for the whale tale to make a fashion comeback.

>> No.22518155

>>22508327
that ass is great but the face puts me off for some reason

>> No.22519454

>>22494399

Ayame Greentext from last thread
>>22423020
>>22425433
>>22430888

>> No.22522887

>>22506874
I like it short and cute like you said. Although you should probably work on your sentence use, you have way too many that start with "I". Consider varying it up a bit next time. Starting too many with sentences 'You' or 'I' is generally something that crops up with stuff made quickly.

>> No.22523906

Fellow writeanons, what are your favourite fics that have been posted here?

>> No.22524135

>>22494459
The OP image of Senchou fills me with a mating impulse.

You are senchou's kouhai, she's a tender bully to you, and despite everything you can't bring yourself to hate her. After many years have passed, you met again with her, now old and fat. She embarrassed to see you, turning out into such a fine man. After forming a friendship, you learn she's still a virgin at her age, and that the overly sexual senchou you saw was her being a pushover to look cool.

Then you fugg her

>> No.22524166

>>22523906
The one where you stop asking the same question.

>> No.22524739

>>22523906
you're gonna have to narrow down the genre quite a bit, or find a deeper discussion topic following from this. they're so numerous at this point i don't think but a handful of people, if that, have read them all, and even then there's probably little meaningful they can offer without knowing what you're looking for

>> No.22525324

>>22523906
The ones that I write.

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>>22494459
Being the terrible example that turned Mumei into the fucking weirdo she is now

>> No.22528563

>>22528181
Marcel?

>> No.22530651

>>22510462
This was a really good mix of fluff and angst. Add that hopeful ending and you got something that really tugs at my heartstrings.

>> No.22530805

>>22495793
Uh...Secret Ame encounter, meeting La+, a lot of overarching plot elements, Polka's dressing room, meeting The Gods, some accessories, some hidden challenges...a bunch of shit. At least the plot elements are being brought up now.

>> No.22530866

>>22530805
>we missed meeting La+
FUCK

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>>22530805
Jeez, the amount of Behind the scenes shit in HF almost scares me

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>>22531903
I took a lot of inspiration from a friend's Zweihander game, wherein whenever the party used a special resource, it made something else down the line way different depending on how much was used. I've been trying to make it clear that time isn't necessarily a bubble and IS advancing - that includes everything that doesn't directly involve (You) seeing it. Though, you'll definitely feel the effects at some point. Also pg. 9 bump.

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>>22494459
I want more sad Suisei fics.

>> No.22535794

Need to have a corner of a magical world all to myself and my imaginary chuuba friend. Like a hidden cave with an ancient city, or a floating invisible castle...
> (you) going out with a chuuba
> she invites you for coffee at her place
> her place is a castle in the middle of nowhere with floating islands and what appears to be wyverns roosting on them
> she is kind of nervous that you would be too scared, but your autism about the fantasy worlds proves her wrong

>> No.22535958

>>22535794
This but (You) are the imaginary friend she's conjured up in order to help her deal with the stress of being in a fantasy world.

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>the CYOA choice tree has gotten so out of hand I had to buy an XMind license to keep track of it
This is going to be so cool.

>> No.22536466

>>22500498
You know what I'll pick this up. I have a decent idea for a fan sequel to that Laplus fic.

>> No.22539087

>>22536017
How big is it now?

>> No.22540434

>>22536466
The one where you lock her outside?

>> No.22540912

>>22494738
Holoturismo was the perfect piece of pure, unadulterated autism. And I loved every last second of it as a car autist.
Hats off to that anon, and honestly, I might start throwing in a story here soon. That one gave me some inspiration.

>> No.22541162

>>22540434
Yes that one I have an idea I'm writing out staring the rest of HoloX correcting your behavior.

>> No.22541307

>>22541162
Is this anon correction?

>> No.22541489

>>22541307
Anon needs correction from holos

>> No.22541656

>>22541307
Anon's had it too good for too long. He escaped from abuse ONCE and now he acts like he's hot shit

>> No.22541892

>>22541656
Omelas Fan Sequel?

>> No.22541931

>>22541892
No no. Every Anon is part of the collective Anon godhead - fractures of a schizo's horribly broken psyche, cast out upon the ethereal sea. It's why crossover/collab fics are so dangerous. If every Anon got together at once, there'd be a huge risk of a remerge, forcing the comatose god awake and deleting the archive.

>> No.22542403

>>22541931
But who are the chuubas?
Are they fragments of his own psyche? The demiurge holding the fragments apart? Puppets of the ancient ones?

>> No.22542458

>>22542403
Memories of The Before Times held onto tightly and brutally warped into different roles to keep the dreamer entertained. End goal and hostility levels unknown.

>> No.22542487

>>22494399
I'm continuing this one I was writing from a previous thread. Still not finished, though.

It Has Been "0" days Since Haruka Karibu Fucked The Timeline

Tags: Haruka Karibu, SFW, Tob, April Fools Snuffy

https://rentry.org/harukafdtimeline

Any incorrect characterizations of prominent vtubers can be blamed on Haruka Karibu fucking the timeline.

>> No.22544256

>>22518155
bitch is part horse

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>>22541307
Damn Abusive Anon!
Requires Holo Correction!

>> No.22548915

>>22522887
It's a bad habit I didn't know I had. Thanks for pointing it out tho, there is this story I've been working on that I can fix right away

>> No.22549480

>>22548915
Yeah it's one of those problems that tend to crop up when writing a lot of actions quickly since the easiest way to write it is "I do the thing" but the issue is that it doesn't read that good when done is succession unless you are deliberately trying to be emotionless.

>> No.22551652

>>22546277
Who's been abused the most lately to really warrant being in an Anon correction story? Coco, Towa, La+...

>> No.22551696

>>22551652
>Coco and Towa take revenge by cucking a tied up Kanata watching the whole scene.
>She gets horny and joins in

>> No.22551805

>>22551696
>Luna kick the door in, assault rifle drawn
>Why wasn't I invited to the gen 4 orgy-nanora?!
>Watame pops her in following her.

>> No.22552237

>>22551805
>In the end Anon fucking dies from sex overdose, leaving 5 women pregnant with triplets behind to continue his bloodline

>> No.22552336

>>22551805
I'd almost consider paying money for an actual version of Holy shit, Luna has a gun! in which she forces you to eat her out then inseminate her pristine princess pussy at gunpoint. Almost.

>> No.22553641

>>22552237
>continue his bloodline
Inb4 obligatory Chrisposting.

>> No.22554957

>>22553641
God yagoo redfield posting was great

>> No.22555009

>>22494459
Anything involving Terumi

>> No.22555067

>>22497091
I feel like this chapter could have used more time in the oven. There wasn't really anything stand out in terms of scenes.
I think the phrase 'lacks impact' would be my overall opinion for this chapter. I feel like it needed something to give it that but even the 'culmination' of the romance in the smut scene or the big battle at the end didn't really have that big of an impact.
Also minor nitpick but I think mamatori calling laplus la-chan in that one scene probably doesn't work linguistics wise even if it's operating under the same reasoning as why Kiara speaks Modern english

>> No.22555556

>>22554957
I want another mioposting story. One on a much grander scale where Yagoo mobilises a full scale army to hunt you down.

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>>22494379
>Upperclassman marine's final year with you

Its like a prompt that writes itself.

>> No.22555999

After nyanners made a video reacting to hypnosis videos I had an idea for a nyanners erotic fanfic where she discovers a YouTube channel with dominance themed catgirl hypnosis. She starts watching it thinking this is funny. Plus she is already a catgirl so surely it wouldn't work on her right? But then she is deeply hypnotized and becomes a total coomer for it.

>> No.22556169

>>22552237
>Anon of course ends up in heaven for such a pure display of love.
>Spends eternity in paradise with Kanata
>Towa stays cucked.

>> No.22556821

> Marine, sophomore year - a well-known school slut, yet she is still alone, somehow
> A group of girls had a falling out with Marine and spread rumours of her, but she embraced the rumours eventually so no one would really approach her
> She says that she has "forgiven them", but you do not - and you are getting revenge for her

>> No.22558117

>>22556821
>Go to fight the group of delinquent chuubas Marine fell out with.
>Get your ass beat so hard you're doing a naked dogeza in order to apologize.
>They beat out the reason why you're doing this.
>An idea comes to the leader's mind.
>Days later Marine hasn't seen even a hint of you ever since you vowed to take revenge for her.
>She receives sketchy link from your phone number
>Gets linked to a video mindbroken, fucking her former friends raw.
>This awakens something in her.

>> No.22558135

>>22556169
Fucking brutal, dude

>> No.22558677

>>22558135
Nothing more cucked than being Towa after all.

>> No.22559034

>>22495595
Just read all the chapters and I gotta say, good shit. Some aspects of your writing are good and I feel like I could learn a thing or two from them. Reading this also made me realise some of the advantages of past tense, although I’ve written in present tense for so long it’s an unbreakable habit.

>> No.22559492

>>22555999
Only as long as it includes hyperpregnancy.

>> No.22559797

Shit, I just realised Towa has piercings on her tail. If it’s sensitive, would that count as clit piercings? Should I make some sort of excuse to make those piercings not exist?

>> No.22559899

>>22559797
Depends on the context, but she could have just taken them off?

>> No.22560362

>>22559797
Maybe the sensitive bits are only in the actual meat of her tail?
Or just run with it, make Towa have piercing all over her body, even her actual clit.

>> No.22560768

>>22558117
> assuming anon will directly engage anyone and not just cyberstalk, gather and air out all the dirty laundry on these girls in public, completely from the comfort of his own home

>> No.22560904

>>22510462
Saw it just now. I thought it was sweet.
If only life was so easy that a pink reaper can just swoop in and save it...

>> No.22561703

>>22560768
>Have an opsec fail.
>Go home one day after a fun day with Marine.
>See her bullies at your home, your mother convinced they're school friends.
>Get cornered after your mom leaves to give some privacy.

>> No.22561884

22561703
You are just nitpicking at that point, tovarishch

>> No.22562803
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>>22561703
Who would her bullies even be? Don't get me wrong this idea is hot, but who would do that?

>> No.22562985

>>22562803
Could be some of the walking yabs like Matsuri or one of the more whorey-joked holos like Ayame.

Hear me out.

Girls are super fucking mean to each other, specially in highschool. My idea for a prompt is that Marine is all talk, but it works for her, everyone thinks she's extremely hot and cool, so this awaken the jealousy of other girls and they start spreading rumors about her. She ignores them and acts all mighty, but is breaking inside, your only true friend left being (you). So, she falls for you, and as a result, her rivals decide to rape you and record yourself enjoying it so they can finally break her completely.

>> No.22563537

>>22562985
I don't think a group of girls held up by contempt for one person is going to organize the sharing of one man. Rather, they will try to one-up Marine and each other by trying to score you for themselves independently

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>>22563537
A fair point, but when each indivial fails to alter the pure feelings of our Anon, their hate for Marine might make them team up for it.

I might write this in the future. Keep giving me these sweet plot points, please.

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>>22563649
>They don't tell you they sent the videos to Marine, making you continue to play along because of blackmail
>Marine is just glad you still try and be her friend
>The bullies keep getting you to do dirtier and more public sex acts with them, teasing you over Marine almost catching you

>> No.22563979

>>22494459
Fauna giving Kronii a slow and sensual oil massage using Fauna's essential oils with aphrodisiac properties.

>> No.22564010

>>22563906
>Until one day the bullies are crossing the street and get run over by a delivery truck
>You and Marine are now free to elope and get married, living happily ever after.

>> No.22564917

>>22564010
>they become ghosts and start fucking you from beyond the grave

>> No.22564984

Some greentexts

>>22533466
>>22534264

>>22563004
>>22564869

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>>22494459
Going on 'practice' dates with Reine only for it to become increasingly obvious she wants them to be actual ones.

>> No.22568052
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>>22568052
'Melier is so cute bros

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>>22568236
We know, bro. Don't worry.

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>>22568435
I don't know what you're trying to imply

>> No.22569090
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>>22568861
You'll know when it goes live.

>> No.22569307

>>22555067
Good critique, that chapter was sort of an intermission chapter as far as important story business was concerned. Its main purpose was to display what happened during the time they spent in Vienna and what eventually would cause them to head to the next place where a major plot point would happen, not to say I didn't have fun writing it. Sometimes a chapter just ends up being less impactful than the others.

The smut scene was, mostly just a show of love on their part. I don't intend to make smut a common occurrence, just that one, so I'm not too worried about that part at least. All in all, I get it, next chapter will take a bit longer to get out because I'm gonna be writing one or two chapters of my other story as a sort of break from writing the same story (don't want to get burnout) but after that it'll be onto America.

>> No.22569589

>>22565939
This is an incredibly sweet prompt idea, has the potential to be very fluffy. I like it!

>> No.22570094

>>22494399

Tags: NSFW, Korone/Anon, femdom, rape, chuuba abuse

Desc: Anon and Korone duke it out in the ring. What will be the punishment for the loser?

Link to story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTOSvJeAtj0ajJ9CwFE682T5LD8OM75F7kH7n0ce2mKHV134Ypllk9xavq_TtVJeXwz7aare3sH0Bb6/pub

Enjoy. Working on a bigger story and will post sometime in the near future.

>> No.22570563

>>22568435
OH NO TEAKEKS!? What is this doxx???

>> No.22573211
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EMERGENCY SEX

>> No.22574114

>>22573211
Literally who?

>> No.22575338 [SPOILER] 
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>>22559034
>I feel like I could learn a thing or two from them
This is the greatest compliment I've ever gotten.

Thanks anon. Have this Mio as a thanks.

>> No.22575439

>>22494399
CH: Lotus Festival: Language of Love
Tags: Matsuri/OC, Izuru, Fubuki, Fluff, Angst, Friends to Lovers, Drama, Comedy.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS-QoWFNuG2ejORAJG5vLSN4-xjwZXbZ4xSd2Gh9Fx7DL3CBaUSwuayWDfWv9kmeGJo33NJgH5xG08H/pub

Rentry catalog with the last chapter and other stories:
https://rentry.org/footstepsandstories

I forgot to specify last time because I at least thought it was incredibly obvious, but this is a spin-off series done by a different author to the original Cover High story.

>> No.22576537

>>22575439
Be passive aggressive about it, I'm sure people will love you more if you're condescending

>> No.22576592

>>22494379
Someone should write a story about Marine going mute

>> No.22576651

>>22575439
You should ALWAYS specify these things. As you can see from >>22576537, we have a lot of autistics for whom linguistic nuance is very difficult.

>> No.22576786

>>22576537
>>22576651
Yes I was a bit sassy, apologies. Yeah I should have specified to begin with, so I apologize. Just sort of wrote that comment without thinking about it.

>> No.22577905

>>22570094
This is a very old-school fic, like this could have been posted like a year ago.

I liked it.

>> No.22577948

>>22494459
You knew Mori in High School, so when you saw her become an idol you were interested to see where it went. However, you decide she's fallen to all the fame and was probably nothing like she used to be. That is, until she shows up at your door, telling you that she's in town for a performance and wanted to visit you.

Could be fluff, could be angsty, could be lewd or could be safe. Could even lead to Mori Correction, if you were so inclined.

>> No.22578920
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>>22494459
Gyaru Wamyfication

>> No.22580459

>>22562803
If you're just going for simple smut I'd go with gen 3 with an implied falling out due to a certain friend's death/leaving town. Either that or crazy green woman is manipulating the rest of gen 3 for reasons that probably don't make sense
Otherwise I'd go with >>22562985 's idea and have them be the 'sexier' holos.

>> No.22580909

>>22578920
She's really going hardcore in the GFE power vacuum.

>> No.22581714

>>22578920
>an entire generation of kids will grow up watching an anime girl who plays Roblox

>> No.22581724

>>22494459
Gyaru Okayu borrows your light novel and becomes your friend, yet over time you begin to suspect she might actually be less interested in the light novel and more interested in you.

Optional Gyaru Korone if you want to spice it up.

>> No.22582346

>>22570094
Well this feels straight out of the abuse threads.
Pretty hot smut writing as well. Though I feel like it needs more detail if you wanted it to have a stronger impact for both the 'action' part and the smut part.
Also this should probably be tagged Abusive chuuba rather than chuuba abuse.

>> No.22582979

>>22577905
>>22582346

Thank you both! Yes Anon 2, I will add more detail as I agree that it's sparse. And I'm sure the anon who is running this will use the right tags (I'm new to writing smut).

>> No.22583591

>>22575439
>>22576537
>>22576651
Okay, I went back and changed Lotus Festival to be clearly demarked as a fan spinoff in both the first chapter and in the summary, since I felt bad about my shitter remark in that post. (I would have done it earlier but I was out doing stuff)

>> No.22584860

>>22583591
It was already tagged as a fanwork at least

>> No.22585202

>>22570094
You're that new anon who recently joined, right? You're writing quite a lot, I hope you keep contributing to the thread.

As for the story, I can't really give any feedback you haven't recieved already, more descriptions and so on, writing takes a lot of reasearch that would put you on a watchlist.

Also Korone giving you her first time in such a despodent manner was pretty hot

>> No.22585393

>>22584860
Yeah but I still felt like I should mark it myself as well, so that anyone who comes across it from one of my posts here wouldn't be confused at all. Also a bit of guilt for being snarky even if it isn't *that* bad in hindsight.

>> No.22585574

>>22585393
It's good to recognize when you're wrong. And yeah, saying it's a fan work is pretty necessary otherwise people might think you're trying to pretend like you're him

>> No.22585788

>>22585574
Yeah I try to not keep my head up my own ass like that. I'm considering reposting it so it doesn't have that remark on there but I also don't want to come off as if I'm trying to advertise my fic twice over lmao.

>> No.22587595

>>22585202

Hi and thanks for the encouragement! However, I think you are talking about someone else as this was my first submission. Sorry!

>> No.22587672

>>22585788
You can't delete old posts so it's probably best not to. Just be more careful in the future!

>> No.22588007

I think I found an old fic from the abuse threads that was never archived.
>>1825352
I've double checked from tags, and this seems like an AZKi fic that was never archived.

>> No.22589207

>>22588007
I'll grab it when I'm off work in a few hrs.
>>22588007
>>22494399

>> No.22589475

>>22589207
We miss you. I miss you.

>> No.22589876

>>22551805
In the Summer of 2022 Anon was raped by four chuubas at gunpoint.
Kek What A Bitch

>> No.22591980

>>22577948
Hmm, I might pick this up as a sequel to the first fic I wrote for here, I've been thinking about doing that for the year anniversary of that being posted anyway.

>> No.22593896

>>22591980
Out of curiosity, what fic?

>> No.22593974
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>>22593896
For We May or Might Never

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>>22575338
No problem Anon. Have my favourite Mio in return.

>> No.22595178

>>22494399
>>22564984

>> No.22595418

>>22494399
>>22527690
>>22530238

>> No.22596168
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>>22494399
Daihime sex. This one's blowjob only.
https://ehsex dot blogspot.com/2022/04/the-illusion-of-choice.html

>> No.22596254

>>22593974
Beautiful, honestly. I'd love to read a sequel to that fic. I'm thinking of writing a Mori highschool romance fic since I think she just lends herself well to that, and your portrayal of everything with Kiara involved in it made it hit all the harder

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>>22596254
Thank you! I hope you get around to that, I'm sucker for that setting in general.

>> No.22597916

>>22494399
>>22587574

>> No.22597981
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>>22494399
This counts?

>> No.22598211
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22598211

I always put so much effort into thinking up creative puns for my titles, but no one has ever even acknowledged them...

>> No.22598309

>>22596168
I got super hyped hearing it was oral-focused, but it's gay... boner deflated.

>> No.22598636

>>22597534
What's your opinion on a college setting? In a Japanese setting I know it's a lot less common but I wonder what people think about it. I think it could work, it just depends on the nation the game is set in since college is the inverse as it is here.

>> No.22598991
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>>22598636
I like that too. Maybe I just want me and my oshi to fall in love back when I had more structure to my life.

>> No.22599418

>>22589475
I never left! I'm just busy at night most of the time.
>>22593974
Please. I'd love to see that.

>> No.22599727

>>22598211
Example?

>> No.22600192

>>22575439
>Nene forces people to join her husband collection in the hopes that one of them goes out with her.
Now I want a spinoff with Nene finally finding true love

>> No.22600803

>>22600192
A really cool idea, I think I'll add it to my list. I have a fuckload of fics I'm working on at any given time but I can't resist at least trying an idea to see how it goes. I think it'd be an interesting concept to have both Lotus Festival and whatever this Nene fic would be going at the same time could lead to maybe some crossover action between the two.

>> No.22601164

>>22598309
It's not gay if you're a girl

>> No.22602210

>>22600192
>a spinoff of a spinoff

>> No.22602881
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>>22599418
Well, I've got 38 days to do it and with my writing speed that'll be cutting it kinda close. I'll see what I can do, though.

>> No.22603972

>>22600192
>a spinoff of a fanfic of a fanfic.

>> No.22605957

>>22597981
This is unironically one of the most based men alive at the moment
>>22603972
Craziness is to be embraced

>> No.22606127

>>22602881
god I love those legs and feet

>> No.22606859

>>22598211
Post an example you bitch

>> No.22607786

>>22495595
UOOOOOOOOOHH HAG LOVE
The part where Mio become a tease-y and motherly is great I love it

>> No.22607956
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>write 1 (one) story
>completely out of motivation to write any more
>write c++ instead for months with no signs of coming back
lol

>> No.22608336

>>22607956
What story was it

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>>22608336
not telling

>> No.22609311

>>22608806
something with shotabuki in it?

>> No.22610704

>>22565939
This but it escalates until you're having practice sex with Reine.

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>>22494459
Ame lost a bet and now has to go out in public on a date with Gura while wearing a wireless vibrator, which Gura controls.

>> No.22614692

>>22613909
Fuck it
This but you notice the vibrator and take advantage of Ame's unique position by making her jerk you off under the table without gura knowing or you'll tell.

>> No.22615356

>>22613909
Why is it making Ame piss?

>> No.22618274

shit's going down thanks to the Apex tourney, so stay alive.

>> No.22618652

>>22618274
Well to ask a question so we're not just bumping against whatever dumb shit happens due to that tourney.
Do you have any ideas or fics from here that are "living in your head rent free"? If you do what is it and why?

>> No.22618874

>>22494459

Suisei start to forget about you ( her husband )
Because she is too focus to chase her dream, so focus she dont event care about you and getting abusive if you try to involved with her job or wasted her time. She getting more popular until she move out from your apartment and rent a new one near hololive.

>> No.22619278

Man I just noticed but there is a shitload of stories linked to the story anchor this thread.

>> No.22619332

>>22619278
Yeah this has gotta be record and we ain't even near the bump limit.

>> No.22619711

>>22619332
Seems like an unusually productive time for people. Hell, I'm working on my first fapfic after getting too horny myself.

>> No.22620012

>>22619332
I mean from a cursory look it's mostly crossthread links and fic reposts from vtwbg... Which does mean if this is a record probably means it's not gonna get surpassed anytime soon.

>> No.22620017

>>22619711
Hey, I'm not gonna complain. Anyone who tries to claim that these threads are dying can get fucked.

>> No.22620335

>>22619711
I just remembered flips have been on holiday since Thursday. That might be why.

>> No.22620351

>>22618652
The fic I'm writing currently has a main character whose mental state is shattered like glass and the holo is going to be trying to fix him. It's in my head because I'm trying to juggle having a broken Protag (at the beginning anyway) and making sure it doesn't get so depressing that you want to stop reading. Not easy.

>> No.22620670

>>22620017
It IS dying.

>> No.22620793

>>22620351
Well that sounds like a concept that needs a steady hand to keep the mood of it balanced enough to have that feel you want without getting too depressing OR up it's own ass with the angst.

>> No.22620848

>>22620335
Easter?

>> No.22620925

>>22620793
Absolutely. The key I've found is to not always have the protag extremely angsty. Even people with the worst cases of depression have moments of brightness, and the holo is helping with that. Having that counterbalance is part of the key, I think.

>> No.22621238

>>22620848
Filipinos get Maundy Thursday and Good Friday as vacation days for the holy week.
t. Flip

>> No.22621258
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>>22494399
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ-lfw2D32SxdICFSGO91z1VbMqL9xcvatpiykdjgRVvJFqxaxgMbrTGQXsKmP6wf273mqEkEYDxsA8/pub

Tusk

Tags: adventure, (you), Kaela, Zeta, Reine, Fubuki, supernatural

There will be more characters in future as well. This is my friend honest attempt at an adventure epic so give me a bit of leeway if you could. It's probably not going to be a masterpiece. I will try to improve on whatever you think is flawed.

>> No.22621324

>>22621258
You could most improve by giving up writing.

>> No.22621340

>>22620017
>we're not getting 50 fics a thread during off hours

NGMI. /wg/ is doomed for a slow death. It's truly over.

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>>22621324

>> No.22621629

>>22621258
I just skimmed it since I'm busy right now but the best advice I can give is advice that I got awhile ago on one of these threads. That is to say, try adding to your conversations. Instead if just having the dialogue, add in some actions or thoughts into it. If a character is talking, what are they doing while they talk? People rarely talk while standing still, and if you imagine them doing something while talking that you didn't write about, I recommend putting it down.

>> No.22621671

Fucking hell there's a lot of stories this thread

>> No.22621925

>>22621671
I was eager to contribute but then I coomed and it went away

>> No.22622047

>>22621258
Interesting start.
Also I agree with that other anon, while there certainly is room for pure back and forth dialogue without tags sometimes, a slow scene like this would absolutely have benefited from actions and thoughts to make the scene feel slower rather than the rapid pace implied by the lack of dialogue tags.
Also I feel like you really need to up your narration game, describe the scene, the people, the sights, the sounds. Right now this thing is really bare. Which combined with the lack of protagonist thoughts make it seem like events are happening without much reason, reaction or impact.

>> No.22622335

>>22621629
Easy enough to fix. I'll make sure to add some more movement and energy to it.

>>22622047
I see what you mean. I'll make sure that's fixed as well. Thank you. At least these are fairly easy things to fix.

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>>22621925
You better fucking get horny again Anon. Write that fucking story.

>> No.22622658

>>22622486
It's early Easter morning, the day Christ the lord came back from the dead. This is no time to get horny.

John 11:25-26: "Jesus said to her, 'I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die.

>> No.22623533

We finally got a crying Suisei from the apex tourney so maybe we can get more crying Suichan stories now.

>> No.22624147

>>22623533
I had imaginings of Suisei crying in rage from the expected choke of this tournament then vows revenge by going under the wing of someone who's actually able to whip a shitter into a decent performer, Astel

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>>22494459
Looks like your constant dodging of Koyori and her seemingly endless need for a 'lab assistant' has finally caught up with you.

>> No.22624740

>>22624522
Ooohohohoo imma need the original source for this Anon.

>> No.22625015

>>22624740
https://files.catbox.moe/tthvyu.jpeg

>> No.22625102 [DELETED] 

STOP TALKING THE BUMP LIMIT!!!

>> No.22625218

>>22625102
If you have a thread going and nobody posting on it because of the bump limit what's the point? There's gonna be another one regardless.

>> No.22626598

>>22494459
Outrapping Calliope to humiliate her at her own show.

>> No.22626702

How about a really silly 2hu-esque type of story, but with chuubas? Imagine the premises of all the Touhou games, the silly reasons why the player's character had to beat the shit out of the most powerful yokai, but translate it to chuuba lore.

>> No.22627344

>>22625015
Damn, nipples are a little big. Thanks anyway

>> No.22627605

>>22627344
They produce an incredibly potent and addictive aphrodisiac.

>> No.22628027

>>22627605
>aphrodisiac.
God I hope someone picks up that Koyori Aphrodisiac Anal lube prompt from a couple of threads ago. That concept was hot as fuck.

>> No.22628303

>>22627344
I've noticed that elevens tend to draw big nipples for some reason.

>> No.22628339

>>22628303
>Elevens
???
Are there fucking Borgs making hentai now?

>> No.22628672

>>22628339
Eleven translates to Nippon

>> No.22628707

>>22628339
Re-watch Code Geass

>> No.22628724

>>22628339
Why does someone missing a code Geass reference make me feel so old.

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>>22628724
Wanna feel really old?

>> No.22629956

>>22629774
now that's fucking ancient history. y'all remember the "this is sparta" remix of that?

>> No.22630319

>>22628707
>>22628724
I never actually watched Code Geass...
>>22629956
Oh God.

>> No.22630864

>>22620012
For what is worth most of those greentexts are mine, I didn't link them here because I didn't feel it's worth anyone's time to archive something so short, or fill the thread with quick fire posts.

Just needed something to kill some time before maintenance window work.

>> No.22631667

>>22494459
>>22494694
Moona incest with her brother (You) seems like such an easy low hanging fruit of a smut fic. That I'm surprised we haven't gotten a fic of it yet.
I mean the setup is already halfway there.
>You find a cute chuuba who ticks all of your boxes.
>Fall in love with her and her mannerisms.
>Save up to send her a donation with an embarassing message attached.
>Days later get confronted by your sister
>She reveals that she's the girl you sent that SC to.
>Get shocked at the reveal but...
>Start seeing your sister in a new light.

>> No.22632097

Turns out Suisei didn't have to piss herself on stage to cry - all she needed to do was lose in Apex LOL

>> No.22632175

>>22632097
I mean, she was humiliated in front of a live audience of 100K people of all places of the world after trying so SO hard for months, even hiring private coaching for after midnight.

The most crushing thing in the world is trying your best and it still not being enough. Then what's the fucking point?

>> No.22632321

>>22631667
The issue with this is you're essentially entering roommate territory unless the author has a very good explanation why (You) didn't recognize your sister, of all people, on screen.

>>22632175
I didn't watch, but I do feel bad for her, Aqua and Towa if they lost that badly.

Nobody wants to tell them this, but women simply cannot compete against men in the majority of sports and that extends to e-sports as well. It was a good effort, but unless it's an all-girls tournament, this was always going to be the result.

>> No.22632355

>>22495595
Mr. Haglover, would you be so kind as to provide me with a series overview/descriptor

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>>22632321
>women simply cannot compete against men in the majority of sports and that extends to e-sports as well.

>> No.22632487

>>22632175
You know what's funny is that, that's literally the same string of logic that connected the Suisei pisses herself on stage and cries/gets humiliated prompt.
Since the idea was fuck up in something publicly that she's prepped before hand and cry due to it.
>>22632321
It could be something like that holoreality image, where Moona still looks like and acts like Moona but it wasn't until you fell in love with her from the streams and she revealed who she was that you really connected the dots.

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>>22632456
I'm open to changing my mind if you can show me all girls' teams in esports that can compete at the highest levels of play versus men. Any game will do.

>> No.22632618

>>22632321
>Nobody wants to tell them this, but women simply cannot compete against men in the majority of sports and that extends to e-sports as well. It was a good effort, but unless it's an all-girls tournament, this was always going to be the result.
Tell me that you only watch hololive without telling me you only watch hololive.

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>>22632321
Tournaments in a game based heavily on RNG are retarded, Apex is such a crapshoot.

>> No.22632709

>>22632618
Hololive is literally the only group worth watching. We let you plebs in, but you're only tolerated, not welcome - if you're going to roll around in your pigsty, at least don't get mud on our carpet.

>> No.22632742

>>22632709
lol
lmao

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Reminder that this is the writing general.
Unless you intend to use your dramahounding for a fic, please leave and go to like, the 10 other drama threads in the catalog.

>> No.22632879

>>22632598
easy, Team Siren

>> No.22632951

>>22632321
This post reads like someone desperately trying to fit in on a website they're too young to be on

>> No.22632984

>>22632787
/wg/ is a chatroom for gossips and fishwives to shit in with like-minded fellows. It has always been that way, newfag. Instead of trying to police something you have neither power over nor any right to, consider instead the rope.

>> No.22633018

>>22632787
Would Reine know how to cook?
Or would she be the type that's rich enough that she's always had servants cook for her/order stuff?

>> No.22633220

>>22633018
> assuming rich kids don't get taught every sort of skill from young age with super expensive courses
What kind of world are you living in? Rich people don't just sit around doing nothing all day. Otherwise they wouldn't be rich

>> No.22633226

>>22633018
The latter, but she would have a few things she really likes and is proud to know how to make them herself.

>> No.22633388

>>22633220
>Rich people don't just sit around doing nothing all day.
Not in the modern world of constant scrutiny, anyway. It was a common trope of old money aristocracy in medieval/renaissance times all across the world, though.

>> No.22633703

>>22633220
They don't sit around and do nothing like you said but generally cooking is one of those ares where getting a servant to do it seems acceptable, especially when she's ojou sama rich.

>> No.22633932

>>22633018
Well she has baked some stuff for HoloID before, so I'd wager she can cook to an extent at the very least.

>> No.22634064

>>22633932
Ah... I want to eat Reine's cooking...

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>>22634064
served on her naked body.

>> No.22634818

>>22633703
Cooking is a super necessary skill unlike horse riding or some shit. Cooking USED to be a servant's job, then a woman's, but now being able to cook a good meal and being a gourmet chef? That's a highly noble skill, for lack of a better word.

>> No.22634875

>>22634818
Just Poverty Things: the post

>> No.22634884

>>22634064
Would it be fucked up or romantic if the eggs she used were "very" locally sourced?

>> No.22634918

>>22634884
I'm leaning towards fucked up, especially if she's eating the same meal.

>> No.22634922

>try to write a femdom abuse story
>i accidentally make it a fluffy romance
help

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>>22634922
You don't need help, anon, you're exactly how you are supposed to be.

>> No.22634954

>>22634922
Who were you writing about?

>> No.22634986

>>22634922
You need mental help. You want to write bad things but you desperately seek the good ones, this means you're too used to trauma and so it's not enough for you.

>> No.22634996

>>22634954
nene, mainly because i thought the concept would be amusing

>> No.22635020

>>22634922
Anon. The key here that I think you're missing is having the girl's dialogue be mean/spiteful. Much harder to accidentally make it fluff if the words coming out of her mouth are laced with venom.

>> No.22635030 [DELETED] 

AT THIS RATE THE THREAD WILL DIE WITH NO NEW STORIES!!!

>> No.22635270

>>22634996
Nene gaslighting you into loving her while she also beats you up for every mistake seems like a Nene thing to do.

>> No.22635504

>>22634918
What if only You were the one eating. So it's closer to You drinking her breast milk.
Still fucked up?

>> No.22635710

>>22635504
I don't know. It's weird to eat something that could've been alive but if it's from an egg so it's not gonna be human which makes it less fucked up, but the fact that it's coming from a bird woman who is mostly human still feels kinda wrong.

>> No.22635726

>>22635504
As long as you haven't had sex recently, the egg should be unfertilized and it should be fine.

Oh my god, I just the idea for a horror twist story where one of Holotori always cooks you breakfast the morning after sex and it's their plan for contraception. That'd probably be Mumei, wouldn't it?

>> No.22635774

>>22635710
>It's weird to eat something that could've been alive
You're acting like you wouldn't drink your oshi's period if she offered. Are you genuinely serious? As long as it's from your oshi, you take what she bestows and ask for more. Anything less and you're not a real fan, and shouldn't be here.

>> No.22635838

>>22635726
Oh that just sounds delightfully fucked up.
Especially if it starts with an extended description of the initial omelette that the two of you eat, specifically to make the reveal a bigger grossout.

>> No.22635910

>>22635774
Blood tastes fucking awful, like eating liquid iron. I'd eat the egg over blood any day.

>> No.22635978

>>22635710
Honestly holotori laying eggs just asks a bigger question of how do the bird people reproduce?

>> No.22636053

>>22635978
With me.

>> No.22636070

>>22635978
Ask Koyori to do experiments on HoloTori to find out.

>> No.22636128

>>22636070
You and Koyori kidnap one of the holotori to solve the mystery of how they give birth.

>> No.22636188

>>22494459
You kidnap Koyori and eat both of her legs with your best mate Hannibal.

>> No.22636241

>>22636070
>Koyori studying the Holotori sextape Lui sent her in order to find out how bird people reproduce.
>The research notes she makes are made via a voice to speech app she's rigged to record while she's watching it.
>Notes slowly lose focus until it's just transcribing her masturbating to the bird sex.

>> No.22636444

>>22635910
Period blood tastes WAY worse than regular blood. It's slimy and clumpy, like blood jelly. It's fucking vile

>> No.22636651

>>22636128
>Kidnap and impregnate Subaru.
>Get confused when she's not laying an egg and is instead like 6 months pregnant.
>Remember she was supposed to be human.
>Prepare to call it off but...
>See Subaru giving birth to a massive egg.
>Even Lui is surprised.

>> No.22636654

>>22636444
True, but period blood from your oshi tastes like rainbows and skittles, guaranteed to put a smile on your face.

>> No.22636977

>>22636188
I want to kidnap Koyori and eat out her asshole.

Not in a cannibal way, but in a sexual way.

>> No.22637526

What the fuck???

>> No.22637886

>>22494459
A story about brutally defeating STARTEND in a 1v3 gunfight and then raping them pregnant!

>> No.22637953

>>22636444
h-how do you know that?

>> No.22638057

>>22637953
Quora

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>>22637953
>he hasn’t earned his red wings

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>>22638275

>> No.22638524

>>22622658
Bro I abstained all through Good Friday, I thought the mourning was over.

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>>22638321
Chill out bro it’s just blood. Not saying I’d ever prefer it, but it’s just blood in the end. And like, it happens to every single woman. Every last one. Even these two. Even your oshi.

>> No.22638979

>>22638652
The only thing I will drink from my oshi is her breast milk and her ringo. Blood is degenerate.

>> No.22639070

>>22638979
What if it was her fetish though? You wouldn't want to leave her unsatisfied.

>> No.22639084

>>22638652
Imagine if they had a similar menstrual calendar and took dips in the red river at the same time.
>Flare and Noel in a 69, faces redder than any blush could ever be, desperately lapping up at the visceral gore pouring from each other's nethers
Fucking hot.

>> No.22639097

>>22639070
Yeah and I like rough facefucking and cumming on food, doesn't mean she has to do it too

>> No.22639107

>>22638979
Fake fan.

>> No.22639493

>>22639107
Hope you enjoy getting STD.

>> No.22639554

>>22622658
Why are you pretending to be Christian here.

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>>22638979
>won’t drink blood
>will drink fucking piss
What is the cure for such disorders?

>> No.22639611

>>22639576
I'm no piss drinker but urine is sterile, blood isn't.

>> No.22639696

>>22639554
Not him but I have a 24/7 ongoing struggle between my strict Catholic upbringing and the visceral, amoral lust I’ve felt for women since I was a child (not joking), which drives me to such things as writing porn, hoarding hentai, banging sluts, and transatlantic sexting English women at 3AM in the US.

>> No.22639816

>>22639696
I feel like a lot kids raised raised in strict religious households turn out like you.

>> No.22639908

Gotta write a story with a chuuba meeting Jesus Christ or Buddha or some shit.

>> No.22639939

>>22639816
It’s a pattern. The bizarre, artificial hang up against heterosexual sexuality also eventually decimated the priesthood and filled the remaining ranks with closeted homosexuals.

>> No.22639945

New thread
>>22639565

>> No.22640171

>>22639576
NTA but there's a difference there. Period blood passes through the vagina, which even discounting STDs is not the cleanest place in the body.
If we were talking >drinking your Oshi's blood because she cut herself and you were trying to make her feel better I wouldn't think twice about it.

>> No.22640178

>>22639945
>Another whore

>> No.22640271

>>22639696
honestly same

>> No.22640927

>>22639696
I, too, once had this struggle. It gnawed so upon my mind that in the young hours of one crisp September morning, I snuck into my patriarch's stables and fornicated with his prize showhorse. It began with sexual deviancy, but blossomed into a reciprocal romance between man and horse. I even obtained a new path in life, and after much struggle, obtained a veterinarian's licence to practise. I suggest you look outside the box for a solution to your struggle, anon - including the confines of normative sexual preferences. Godspeed, anon.

By the way, the animal chuubas are my favourites - Watame in particular.

>> No.22641073

>>22640927
yo what the fuck I want to fuck women not farm animals

>> No.22641118

>>22640927
You're more of a special case anon.

>> No.22641126

>>22641073
so exotic animals are still on the table?

>> No.22641242

>>22640927
Actually now that you mention it... there are no Horse holo/niji girls at all, huh?
You think they don't want to end in a spat with Cygames etc. over flying too close to the prized race horse sun?

>> No.22641318

>>22641126
I don’t fuck black girls either if that’s what you’re asking

>> No.22641510

>>22641318
Anon there's no need to be so based

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Why did she do it?

>> No.22642143

>>22641698
To make it easy to identify who the biggest mental ward patients on this board are.

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