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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>22251543

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.22364706
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were five stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Footsteps Across Time: Sengoku Jidai: Tags: SFW, Eventual NSFW, Kiara, Mori, Mumei, Amelia. OC x Kiara. Eventual Enemies to Lovers. Violence. Fluff. Tragedy. Slow Burn. Lots of Shipteasing:>>22287963

HF: Daydream Hr. 3: Tags:Short, dubiously canon vignettes of life between the big adventures, complete with foreshadowing :>>22289112

Chapter 13 of Building Block Doll: Tags: Sora, Suisei, Lamy, Roboco, cute, ageplay, light omaroshi, omutsu, fluff:>>22296839

Footsteps Across Time: Lux et Tenebrae: Tags: SFW, Eventual NSFW, Kiara, Mori, Mumei, Amelia. OC x Kiara. Eventual Enemies to Lovers. Violence. Fluff. Tragedy. Slow Burn. Lots of Shipteasing:>>22322030

Winter Chills: Tags: La+, SFW, mild abuse:>>22358528

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>>22364650
>those thighs
Time to jerk off to Festival of Sensations again...

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Sex with your childhood friend Subaru on the playground you grew up playing on together:>>22252256

Gura sucking on BBC all night long just as she said she wants to:>>22257721

An awkward first time with %chuuba_name%! No one knows anything!:>>22258231

Going back in time to seduce the hags when they were young in order to give them that youthful romance they missed out on:>>22282184

Ollie demands you help bring her back to life through magic. You do, and now that she's completely human again she feels incredibly horny, and there's only one person in the room who can solve it:>>22268506

Your oshi having fun teaching you how to dance:>>22285325

Suisei has gotten possessed and become incredibly sexually forward, leaving you to deflect her advances until the spirit has gotten exorcised:>>22287738

Reine and Kiara in their Maldives vacation, rubbing sunscreen on each others' bodies, with Kiara coming up with the idea of doing it like a massage since Reine is known to have back problems. Both girls uses this moment as a chance to subtly fondle each others' bodies sensually. Then as time goes on, one of them realizes that it wasn't sunscreen they were rubbing on each other:>>22299612

Ayame Ryona like picrel:>>22303373

Shion agrees to be your wing woman with the caveat that you buy her drinks and she'll fuck you if she can't convince a girl to go home with you. Surprise! She's does a terrible job and come last call no woman will even look at you:>>22352805


It's the middle of winter and Laplus demands to share a bed with you so she can leech off your body heat:>>22355497

>> No.22367943

>>22364650
cute

>> No.22369009

>>22365081
God that fucking Festival picture is erotic as fuck.
That slight wetness on the band aid
Well I guess I'm rereading festival of sensation again too.

>> No.22369396

>>22364706
(You) move to a country town (think Stardew Valley) only to find it's populated with a bunch of chuubas. You try to focus on your farmwork but it becomes harder as you become the target of fascination for the locals.

Can be a romance fluffy fic or something else. Maybe (you) get singled out and one of the girls starts trying to woo you by giving you a bunch of random gifts, maybe you're busy fishing and accidentally fish up Gura. Sky's the limit.

>> No.22369760

>>22364664
Say, Can You See? Chapter 5
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRDE3MCjGVdOE1LcgglTDSZVHZAtFvIxoX_froIb91QUwsnqeoC-sINX8uVj9s9u8i4FeR0ablaVk9x/pub

It's another weaker chapter, but I promise next chapter, the gears will start turning. Again, by the nature of the story, it's a more personal story than anything kinetic, so the culmination might not be anything fantastic but it would fit the nature of the story. Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments / criticisms

>> No.22369836

>22364664
Can I just say that Masturi's armpits and perfect breast shape look delicious as fuck? And the perfect flatness of her tummy, god, this makes me want to fuck her more than the bandaid picture does

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>>22365081
>>22369009

I'm glad that you guys enjoy my contribution to Festival lust. Although, in the extremely unlikely chance that she ever reads it, I would probably wish to disappear from this world.

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>>22370097
I just recently read Festival of Sensations and, man... That was incredible. It made me realize I need to work much harder on my dialogue during sex. Personally I don't particularly like all the porn dialogue that ends up being written in sex scenes as a bit of extra material because I would find it very out of character for most of these girls to scream out expletives that way, but in FoS the teasing and possessive talk during sex was fantastic and had the same if not better results than simply throwing lewd sentences for the sake of it. That meant that when Matsuri does cry out "fuck my ass!" and the like the impact is way stronger.

I need to write my girls less like tunas and to be more vocal, even if just whispering sweet nothings as opposed to crassly begging to be wrecked.

>> No.22375186

>>22364706
Fluff story about how hope descends, as Irys comes to (you) at your lowest point help pull you out of despair. Possibly end up with some romance blossoming too.

>> No.22376720

So what are you working on writeanons?
Bonus question: What's the first fic you remember reading from this general?

>> No.22376827

>>22376720
I'm about to have my first job interview

>> No.22377697

>>22376720
Working on a spinoff series' first chapter, it's my fan-spinoff of Cover High that focuses on Matsuri and a new protag, in relation to Cover High it's just got some vague allusions and some jokes relating to it. Other than that, I'm working on Footsteps Across Time, the winged hussars aren't going to arrive by themselves! The first fic I remember reading here was 'Just Matsuri' because I had just discovered this board and wanted to see what the stories were like. I'll admit I was pleasantly surprised, not just by that story but by a lot of the ones that I started reading after (HoloFantasy, Cover High, Menhera Wrangler, etc).

>> No.22378484

>>22376827
good for you?

>> No.22379317

>>22364664
Cover High: Lotus Festival
A new transfer to Cover High finds himself thrown headfirst into the wild chaos, within the first day he's almost molested by a hag pirate, saved by a femboy, and made the target of a strange girl named Matsuri. Resolving to get Matsuri to get her crush to go out with her so he would stop being bothered in class, he finds himself in for more than he bargained for.

Tags: Matsuri, Izuru, Marine, OC. Fluff, drama, romance, eventual friends to lovers. Potential NSFW in future chapters.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTp2qmUKcdyfwW0VPYCHl0nj_XTleqJBU2QPdHsqYW4Wj8sVDZTA6G64q9jglPFtL8FH1GwNr3gB1jb/pub

>> No.22379767

>>22369760
It's hard to describe properly, but this series always feels so genuine where most starring (You) do not. Not that the latter case is a bad thing in outlandish narratives, but it makes yours feel really fresh and engaging.

>> No.22379904 [DELETED] 

>>22378484
I think I did pretty well, but I'm not sure if it will be enough since I didn't know the answer to one of their main questions. Fingers crossed though!

>> No.22381934

>>22376720
Hoping to post the pilot chapter of Holoturismo later today, assuming nothing gets in my way to keep me from writing.
It feels good to get taxes and other responsibilities off my shoulders after five months of back and forth.

First story I read was most likely Luna's Assistant, or maybe Bully Girls. At the time I was already halfway through Sleeping Beauty and didn't even know there was a fanfic general on /vt/ much less AO3 and I was just writing it for my own enjoyment.

>>22378484
Good for you, anon. Good luck.

>> No.22383510

>>22381934
>Good for you, anon. Good luck.
i think you misunderstood. i (>>22378484 ) am not >>22376827 i was wishing him good luck even though his post wasn't related to the post he replied too.

>> No.22384927

>>22383510
One day I'll make a post where I don't quote the wrong post. One day...

>> No.22385424

>>22376720
Not entirely sure what I'm working on right now; just juggling around different draft outlines at the moment.

The first fic I remember reading was Prisuner back when it was still the abuse thread. God that was hot.

>> No.22385545

>>22376720
Taking an extended break for my physical health right now, so nothing. But if I wasn't on break the answer would be probably police work with chuubas

First fic? Eating Fubuki's ass I believe? Followed by some random smut in archive, then HoloFantasy chapter Fubuki rapes anon over a dice game

>> No.22386033

>>22369760
This series' narration is always such a joy to read, and while I do agree that this is a weaker chapter I did enjoy it either way. Hope whatever you have planned for the future works out in regards to how you're writing this.

>> No.22386662

>>22379317
>my first day at Holo High.
>Holo High
Uh...

>> No.22387856

>>22376720
Actual works in progress:
-IRyS cuddling/comfort fic with both of you in hard times/poverty (sfw)
-Holotori egg fic (nsfw)

Storyboarding in my head like a schizo:
-Cuddling with Laplus
-Kiara's happily married life
-Adaptation of Swain's 'The Secret' starring Elira and Selen

>> No.22387920

>>22386662
Oops, I'll get that fixed lmao

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>> No.22389863

>>22389560
You call it "deadmoona" but it really does look more like she's orgasming.

>> No.22390660

>>22389863
Cum so hard you die

>> No.22391562

>>22389560
Look buddy I'm in a schizo procrastination fugue, but other people have posted new submissions in this very thread, nevermind the last. /wg/ keeps producing, it just can't do it fast enough to stay alive without bumps in a board that moves as fast as /pol/ with even less moderation.

>> No.22391612

>>22391562
NOOOOOO YOU CAN'T JUST USE LOGICAL DEDUCTION

>> No.22391722

>>22391562
I wasn't doing anything other than bumping the thread, I'm not a doomposter.

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>>22364706
Convincing Mio that you NEED to drink her Tights Tea to overcome your incredibly mild cold.

>> No.22392403

>>22391754
I saw a comment asking why the water became brown from her stockings and the answer that ensued in gruesome details hasn't left me to this day

>> No.22393299

>>22391754
I volunteer

>> No.22393666

>>22390660
>Fucking Moona till she cums to death
Sounds pretty hot desu.

>> No.22394421

I wish I had a chuuba cosplay gf like pic related, never seen someone pull off Suisei so well, imagine the sex, and that visible chikubi UOOOGHHH lord hold me

>> No.22394530

>>22394421
Pic related?

>> No.22394915

>>22379317
Well this was a treat to read. I don't know much about Matsuri, but you've gotten me rooting for her. And Marine's appearances were really, really good and felt on-point for her. I'm flattered that you liked the Cover High setting enough to want to use it yourself, and I'll be looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Also, at one point the narration refers to Izuru as 'she' (Izuru was following me and she asked) and I can't tell if it was a mistake or intentional, considering how effeminate he's stated to be.

>> No.22395210

>>22379317
Is this fan chapter

>> No.22395364

>>22395210
Yes, it's a fanchapter... Very obvious if you couldn't tell from context.

>> No.22395435

>>22395364
You should say it's fan chapter

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>>22364664
Sorry for the delay but I've been replaying Bloodborne. Still, I think this is a good chapter and it has Botan seggs.

Tags: NSFW, Botan, Biting, Smell/Scent, Paizuri, Nursing Handjob, Amazon Position

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTn-9Xaw6CMnrxXNpYS9WbRo4HM_yH0UQ_S4_ir0oScf3AY_RpbOvIfw8bOphGLJ-yd_unQrZMPexYE/pub

>> No.22396799

>>22395867
That fucking scent play was hot as fuck. Goddamn.
I take it the format break in not having Koyori as the next girl for pregnant sex was due to a spout of inspiration or have I been bamboozled and this is a fan chapter[/spoiler

>> No.22397077

>>22392403
The tights probably use a densely applied dark-brown dye. When diluted in boiling hot water over an extended period, it produces a light brown tea.
In all likelihood, they're meant to be cold-washed only.

>> No.22397164

>>22392403
But it's red.

>> No.22397264

>>22394915

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm happy to hear my character writing is on-point, I'm always half-paranoid about that.
I won't lie it was originally a mistake but when you put it in that light I'm just going to say it was a happy accident and leave it as it is.

>> No.22397588

>>22397164
Anon... That somehow implies something worse.

>> No.22397621

>>22394915
>>22397264
Fun fact: Izuru actually talks a lot on his fanbox about his depression due to the way his fans see him without actually ever implying anything but it's pretty obvious it's the effeminate stuff that bothers him. Which is quite ironic in a very sad way because people go to vtubing to escape identity issues, not get more of them.

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>>22364706
Holotori orgy

>> No.22398114

>>22396799
>spoiler
Nah I put it on the reentry. Also, you're right I was inspired to write Botan out of the blue.

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>>22397900
Is Holotori the best unofficial group?

>> No.22399541

>>22397621
That sucks. One reason I love choobs and vtubing as a concept is because it allows people to live a life free of those kinds of issues. If he's really getting a crisis from the fem jokes (and probably his own crossdressing) it must really make him not wanna stream.

>> No.22400310

>>22399541
>One reason I love choobs and vtubing as a concept is because it allows people to live a life free of those kinds of issues
Only when kayfabe is respected. Otherwise the anime avatar is as thin a veneer as an anime profile pic on your social media, and can't protect you. And kayfabe has been dead and buried for 99% of chuubas for years now.

>> No.22400570

>>22399388
>members from all 3 branches
>can all speak the same language with at least competent proficiency
>good variety of personalities to bounce off one another
>has a hag in the roster
>all extremely fuckable
They’re definitely up there.

>> No.22400928

>>22395867
Amazing work. The part where Botan's mark you with her scent was really erotic. Thank you for your service.

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>>22395867
Goddamn man, nice work.

>> No.22401379

>>22400310
It's less kayfabe and more just the general anonymity. Some of them trample on that (Mori for example) while others are notoriously protective of their privacy. As long as that's there, there's at least some of what I originally liked remaining.

>> No.22401424

>>22379317
Never expected to see my oshi in the tags for any of the stories posted here so I decided to give it a read. I can't say much about the girls since I don't watch them but I think it was a pretty entertaining read, anon.
>>22397621
I'm not part of his roommate's fanbox but I believe he hasn't posted anything there in a very, very long time. Perhaps you meant his roommate Twitter account.

>> No.22401794

>>22401424
Glad you like it! To be honest I never watch Holostars, although it's mostly a language barrier thing. I learned about him through researching who might fit the purposes of the story the best. I hope I did him justice with how I'm portraying his character.

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>>22364664
Kainen sex
https://ehsex dot blogspot.com/2022/04/new-beginnings-pt-4.html

>> No.22403124

>>22398114
We're still getting pregnant coyote sex right?

>> No.22404428

>>22403124
Yeah, I just need to find a word to describe coyote girl breadst milk lol

>> No.22405858

>>22404428
You just said it

>> No.22406202

I'm planning on making a Bae x Roberu fluff fic as a hetero shipfag. I'd like to ask though, is there any interest for this kind of fic? Seeing how most of the genres here are self-insert types and yuri.

>> No.22406234

>>22406202
You've already got my interest with it being a stars fic.

>> No.22406282

>>22406202
Post it anyway, I'm sure someone will care enough.
Also to clarify, most of the yuri shippers aren't here in this thread and are probably on Ao3/only lurk here.

>> No.22406293

>>22406202
Only if Bae gets turned into a living onahole by the end.

>> No.22406389

>>22406202
Generally dislike shipping but follow your heart.

>> No.22406444

>>22406202
There'll be an audience for it, there's an audience for everything here, even if they just lurk this thread. (You)inserts are really the overall most common thing because it allows for a lot more flexibility and allows the reader to latch onto a character. Most people who do that also just don't like to have cross-company shipping because they feel it's offputting shipping two people who actually communicate together is.

>> No.22406775

I'm feeling in the mood for some adventure. I've got a bit of an idea but I'm open to some suggestions. Anything you'd like to see?

I'm thinking of something with fantasy and giant monsters.

>> No.22406807

>>22406775
What's your idea first?

>> No.22406837

>>22406775
One Piece but with Hololive and not as long.

>> No.22406920

>>22406807
So far what I've got is that Roboco takes (you) as a child onto an island far away from the rest of the world, saying that the continent(s?) beyond are inhabited only by monsters and horrors.

Later, as you grow into a young adult, she vanishes mysteriously and you travel to the continent(s?) in search of her.

That's about the extent of things. I am open to any suggestions you'd like to see.

>> No.22407555

>>22369396
This but it's actually a disguise for a horror fic and once you fuck and impregnate one of them you find yourself kidnapped, placed in a giant wicker man about to be burnt to death as a sacrifice for a good harvest.

>> No.22408299

>>22406920
So like HxH?

>> No.22408361

>>22408299
No. I'm not even sure I'll include magic (or something similar to magic).

I was playing Monster Hunter World and got somewhat inspired by that. Won't copy it of course but that's some of where the inspiration has come from.

>> No.22409280

>>22408361
On the condition Anon is a switch axe Chad

>> No.22410197

>>22409280
>switch axe
>chad

Thanks, Anon. I needed to laugh today.

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>>22395867
I want to smell Lamy's stale alcohol breath...

>> No.22410316

>>22409280
>World SA
>Chad
Only alpha males know how to aim and clutch to the monster's head and ZSD it to death while using Rocksteady/Temporal apparently.

>> No.22410733

Has there been a story about sex in a (public) pool? Or the ocean?

>> No.22410822

>>22410289
>smells alcohol
LAMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

>> No.22411303

>>22410733
Not yet.
Do you have any ideas about how it would get to that situation?

>> No.22411313

>>22411303
dolphin rape

>> No.22411506

>>22411313
The kind that sends superchats?

>> No.22411613

>>22411303
NTA, but I can think of a couple ideas.
a) Subaru takes you to the pool to do some laps, and you start feeling her up beneath the water while trying to make sure no-one notices.
b) You're fishing at the beach and keep getting hooks only to reel in fish heads with the bodies missing. After a few times of this you finally discover the culprit: Gura's been stealing your catches and is chowing down on them behind some nearby rocks. Cue rape correction.

>> No.22412939

>>22411303
I've been dwelling on the idea of Gura acting as your swim coach who drags you out behind the rocks for rough ocean sex in her most comfortable environment for weeks at this point.

>> No.22413411

>>22376720
Third chapter of to be 17 again.

I think the first fic I read was hating you, hating me

>> No.22413715

>>22376720
Chapter 7 of HF in an attempt to retain some creativity despite new employment exhaustion meaning that most of my days end as soon as I get off work and go directly to bed. It is not going to be another nearly 250pg disaster of passion though.

I have no idea what the first thing I read here was, but it must've been something to get me going. The thing that comes most to mind is probably that Subaru gaslighting story 'You need to take your meds'.

>> No.22414711

>>22395867
Really fucking great.
The whole scent thing made me hard.

>> No.22415958

>>22364706
A fic about brushing Mio's hair on a cold rainy night.

>> No.22417009

>>22364930
>Winter Chills: Tags: La+, SFW, mild abuse
Anon needs punishment for his action. Possibly getting Caved is in order

>> No.22417342

>>22376720
stalled out on everything. Mind just doesn't want to trigger anything into meaningful concepts long enough to start writing.

Probably one of the BECOME stories... I think

>> No.22417735

>>22417009
>Damn abusive anon! Requires rape correction!

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>>22364706
Convincing Towa to let you take her anal virginity!

>> No.22419600

>>22419490
i like this idea

>> No.22420201

>>22419490
Man somehow read this the other way round, I think it'd be a funny fic though.

>> No.22420261

>>22419490
>despite claiming to be a devil, she has a million excuses once you suggest she do something remotely degenerate
>it's filthy
>you point out that the necessary preparations make it perfectly clean
>it'll hurt
>you point out that with a bit of training and relaxation it won't hurt at all
>it won't feel as good
>you point out that she doesn't know that since she hasn't even tried it yet, and besides that she's still free to stimulate her pussy as much as she likes
>eventually she runs out of excuses and reluctantly agrees to try it just once
>you eat her ass like a full-course meal and prone-bone her until she's a drooling mess
>she ultimately has an anal orgasm, the most intense climax she's ever had without even needing any vaginal stimulation
>she may just have a bit of devil in her after all

>> No.22420571

>>22419490
Getting Tailfucked by Tower!

>> No.22420750

>>22420201
Towa takes her revenge from getting cucked by Kanata by taking both of your virginities... well your anal virginity you've already taken Kanata's awhile back.

>> No.22421123

>>22420571
Tailfucking is always hot. Can always turn it around on her and just shove it up her snatch too while you're railing her ass.

>>22420261
Uoooh, Twappi's tiny, tiny body squirming under your weight while you smother her from behind on the bed.

>> No.22421584

>>22421123
Tail fucking is impossible:

Does Towa's tail have bones? No? Then it's a floppy useless thing.

Does Towa's tail have bones? Yes? Then playing with it would be very painful and uncomfortable for her, and given how thin it is, any amount of pressure would break it and cause her the greatest pain she's ever felt in her entire life, equivalent of breaking her spine times 1000 given the number of segments a thin tail would have.

>> No.22421785

>>22421584
You somehow won the sperm race but still managed to be a total faggot

>> No.22421849

>>22421584
>Implying that Towa's devil tail isn't magic.
Come on stretch your SoD a bit.
Besides... Devil girls having sensitive tails is hot as fuck.

>> No.22422385

>>22421849
Go watch To Love Ru then. The girls suck each other's devil tails and masturbate with them in a 5 season romcom

>> No.22423020

>>22364706
An Anal fic about Ayame call it Absolutely Annihilating Ayame's Anus.

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>>22423020
I'd read it

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>> No.22425302

>>22424994
Why would Fauna Do this?
She requires Anal Correction!

>> No.22425433

>>22423226
>Finally convince Ayame to let you do it up her butt
>After a few days of daily stretching sessions, forcing her to wear a plug during the day and lots of teasing and petting she finally can't take it anymore and wants to be fucked
>Is scared so she wants to be in control, so you sit on the corner of the bed and let her take it at her pace
>She turns around and slowly sits down on your lap
>Your crown finally pops past her sphincter and her legs immediately turn to jello, losing her balance and immediately spearing herself on your cock in one go
>She twitches and cums hard as your shaft pushes up her guts and pokes her womb from behind
>Grab her horns and start guiding her up and down your cock
>She can only drool and grunt and blabber as your pace picks up and you caress her sensitive horns
>Wrap your hands around her tiny, flat waist and hug her tight from behind as you pump your biggest load up her intestines
>Ayame just passes out with her head over your shoulder, but her guts keep massaging you back to full mast
>Use her like an onihole for two or three more orgasms until her belly is distended
>Pass out from exhaustion with your dick inside her
>Wake up next morning to Ayame riding you anally
>Dry orgasm inside her even as it's painful and she's grinding your skin raw
>You've awakened something you shouldn't have

>> No.22425731

>>22421584
>Then it's a floppy useless thing.
It's flexible cartilage and muscle like a shark's. Next.

>> No.22425854

>>22425433
Holy Fuck. That's a really hot greentext you've made there anon.
More?

>> No.22427439

>>22425731
You know that doesn't work right? Muscle on its own isn't enough to do anything for a limb like function.

>> No.22427741

>>22427439
She uses devil magic to make it work

>> No.22427959

>>22427741
I'm arguing with that guy, your magic excuse has already been said. He wants to pretend like he knows biology so I'm seeing his arguments for it

>> No.22427972

>>22427741
Towa's tail gets more prehensile the hornier she gets.

>> No.22428307

I had completely forgotten about incorporating tail grabbing and tail sensitivity in my Towa story. Thank you guys for reminding me.

>> No.22428389

>>22427972
Acts like alien limb syndrome and grabs your wrist during sex, doesn't let go even after it's over and trying to pry it open hurts Towa? Sounds like a nightmare. Just gotta wait for it to let go like a dog knot or something, could be sitting there for hours.

>> No.22428751

>>22428389
Wtf are you gay? That sounds hot as fuck

>> No.22428860

>>22395867
You had me at Botan seggs but then you added Lamy. I have never been harder with a fic quite like this, thank you blessed PDPTanon, you are the true hero this thread needs

>> No.22428993

>>22428751
Every time she gets horny you'll have a fucking tail knocking stuff over and grabbing onto shit involuntarily, I bet Towa would never want to get horny because of it. Imagine you're having sex and then suddenly the thing starts tightening around your balls and squeezing so you go "ow ow ow" and gotta stop the sex to carefully undo the tail while Towa apologizes, and then 5 minutes later the mood is ruined.

>> No.22429102

>>22428993
You will just have to grit your teeth then, it doesn't change the fact you're fucking Towa.

>> No.22429166

>>22429102
Or... you could be fucking Kanata instead, and none of this tail bullshit

>> No.22429320

>>22429166
This guy gets it.

>> No.22429353

>>22428993
Imagine Towa's tail jacking you off while she's having a lewd dream. You'll wake up in the middle of the night, the thing moving up and down your cock while your girlfriend is asleep. Needing to have quiet orgasm because you don't want to wake her up.
Sound's horrible doesn't it.

>> No.22429428

>>22429166
Sad, Genuine Smile has had a profound effect on this thread.

>> No.22429509

>>22429353
Yeah, until you cum and it keeps going, then you cum... and it keeps going... and then it starts to hurt but you don't want to wake up Towa so you try to remove it carefully but it just grips harder, you can't even go soft because of it, and it keeps going... you can't help you, you wake Towa up at 3AM to get her to help you pry the tail off your cock and it's just not letting go. Come morning and your dick is so sore that you can't even get it up.

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>>22429166
>>22429428
Ahem!

*hits LIVE button*

I cannot think or comprehend of anything more cucked than being Towa. Honestly, think about it rationally. You're loving, appreciating, kissing, and pining for Anon for at least a year solely so he can go and have sex with Kanata. All the hard work you put into your handsome Anon - hanging out with him after streams, giving him disappointing blowjobs, failing to please him with your worthless cooking, boring him when you lose against him at video games. All of it has one simple result: Anon's body is more enjoyable for Kanata-chan when he eventually fucks her in every hole.

Found the perfect lover? Great. Who benefits? Kanatan benefits. She gets to have Anon push his unprotected prick into her angel pussy every single night. She gets to be pregnant with Anon's children. She gets to marry Anon while you sit cucked in the bridesmaid's corner. She gets the benefits of his kind and sweet personality that you delude yourself into thinking came from the way you love him. She gets to emotionally abuse Coco into letting Anon make her pregnant too.

As Towa, you are LITERALLY dedicating your life to Anon simply so Kanata can enjoy him while you STILL aren't pregnant with his kids. It is the ULTIMATE AND FINAL cuck. Think about it logically!

>> No.22429771

>>22429509
But Towa came up with a precaution for this. She cast some voodoo devil magic on your dick so you don't get a refractory period anymore.

>> No.22429798

>>22429166
You my friend are the world’s most homosexual man

>> No.22429838

>>22429771
Saying it's magic is the equivalent of running away in a hypothetical

>> No.22429945

>>22429838
You question the magic but not the fact that you're in a relationship with an actual devil? It's not too far-fetched in this situation.

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>>22429509
You are so fucking gay it's not even funny

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>>22425854
>She finally tires herself out and passes out on your chest
>Apologizes profusely the next morning but you give her a kiss on the forehead and say it's ok, that it was hot and if she wants to do it again you're always up for it
>That was a mistake
>Later that day you two go shopping, need to buy vegetables for dinner
>Ayame looks fidgety and distracted, excuses herself to use the restroom
>Don't pay any mind to it. She keeps randomly smiling as you shop, a slight flush on her cheeks as she glances at you
>That's weird
>Finally pay and leave the supermarket, deciding to have lunch at a family diner
>Ayame grabs your hand as you're waiting to be seated
>That's cute
>But then she guides it to her ass, guiding your fingers between her cheeks where you can feel a protrusion through her panties
>Ayame grins, a blush in her cheeks
>You're instantly at full mast
>Get seated, Ayame across from you and you see her squirm and chew on her lips as her weight presses whatever she stuffed up her anus further inside
>Hastily make your orders as she rubs her foot on your leg and run to the bathrooms together
>Lock the door behind you and she jumps on your lap wrapping her legs around your waist and starts to kiss you passionately
>Know you two don't have much time so you drop her to the floor and order her to turn around and bend over the toilet
>She hesitates but is too horny to say no
>Pull her white cotton panties halfway down her legs, a line of grool connecting them to her slobbering pussy but her anus is perfectly closed
>She says it went all the way inside when she sat down
>Order her to push it out
>She hides her face but starts to contract her muscles until her asshole spreads open right in front of your eyes
>Slowly but surely a small cucumber starts to stretch her open until it pops free onto the floor covered in juices, Ayame orgasming when it does and squirting all over the floor, her legs trembling and struggling to keep her up while her chest heaves to catch her breath
>Can't handle it anymore and drop your pants, lining your cock with her slightly agape, winking asshole
>Pull her into you by the hips as she bites her tongue to hold in her moans, her arms losing strength and her body nearly folding in half, only held up by your arms and your cock
>Even though last night was her first time, absolutely pound her asshole with no remorse
>Have to hold her mouth closed so she doesn't scream as she cums again and again
>Eventually feel your own orgasm coming, pick up the pace until your hips and her butt are fused together, spraying your semen inside her guts
>She says it's warm and feels so good despite drooling all over herself
>Finally pull out, your semen starting to drip out of her
>Ayame hastily plugs her anus with two fingers refusing to let your cum seep out
>Have an idea
>Grab the cucumber off the floor and wash it quickly, kneeling behind her and inserting it back inside her once again, Ayame moaning quietly until it disappears inside her hole again
>Now she can keep your semen inside her as long as she wants
>Use a paper towel to clean the drool off her chin and blouse and give her a kiss, leaving the bathroom before her to not arouse suspicion
>A few minutes later she wobbles back to the table and sits down next to you this time, leaning into your chest
>The food arrives and you both eat quietly
>Suddenly she looks up and grins, starting to bounce up and down on the bouncy cushion
>Swallow hard. You really did awaken her to something dangerous..

>> No.22431797

>>22430888
i milked myself to your words, anon
thank you

>> No.22432104

>>22429428
I read it for the first time just so I could understand the context of this thread and I fucking hate it. Don't get me wrong, the writing is good and all, but it made me feel like shit in the end. Kudos to the author, but NTR really isn't for me.

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>>22364706
Waking up with no memory of the previous night but Chammers insisting you "did it" and are dating now.

>> No.22433719

This general careens through and subsists on an ever-flowing river of instant sexual thrill and cheap orgasms. We are the definition of coom-brained.

>> No.22434070

>>22433719
Yeah which is why fluff is so popular its like post sex cuddling

>> No.22434288

>>22364706
Sorasex

>> No.22434816

>>22432857
Good prompt so long as (you) refuse to ever let her cook and instead do all the cooking, despite her insisting she's good at it.

>> No.22435260

>>22432104
Thanks Anon! I'm glad it inspired those feelings in you.

>> No.22435333

>>22433719
I cerebrate that albeit we are indeed horny animals, it's entirely fine to be such way. Being able to let go and give in to your inner-most desires is one of humanity's most coveted things.

>> No.22436043

>>22410733
There was a story about (You) diving in a cage to see the sharks, but encounter Gura who sucks you off.

>> No.22436082

>>22435333
ESL's trying to sound smart are one of the funniest things this board has to offer

>> No.22436124

>>22436082
He's right though

>> No.22437108

>>22436043
I think you're referring to "She's good at it!"
It sort of reminded me of the "Gura SFW romance" in the archive, which I also really enjoyed. This one had no lewds, but I loved the melancholic ending.

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Get up!

>> No.22439728

>>22439647
> I am sorry, Sakamata-san, for I cannot wake up in my entirety at the same time - some parts of me just wake up earlier, as you can now see

>> No.22439843

>>22413411
Very excited for the third chapter anon, this is some good shit

>> No.22441414

>>22436082
How is that ESL

>> No.22442886

>>22370097
Anon it was great. I read it to better my own smut after so many anons praised it, and I was not dissapointed. I ususally let my stories be carried by the dialogue and the plot, my NSFW scenes usually falling short, but this time I want to write something worthy of a wank.

I think I've heard you talking about sources in the past, and if you'd be so kind, I'd like to ask where your references come from.

>> No.22443640

>>22370097
>Festival
>literate
>not even knowing enough English to read fiction, just literate

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>>22364706
Finally sleeping with your first girlfriend Chloe after mustering up the courage only to find that you can't get hard because of her hikki smell and breaking up with her on the spot

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>>22443891
>can't get hard because of her hikki smell
Couldn't even fathom, I'm diamonds just thinking about it

>> No.22444505

>>22444378
I am too, I'm probably a significantly worse slobfag than you. I just want to generate more interest in her

>> No.22444525

>>22443640
> this is what an orgasm scene would read like for Matsuri through DeepL
"Whispering, "If you're iku, I'm ...", she rubs and rubs your nipples, picks them up, and raises her pepepepe. You're in her nasty touch. It's just a promise that it's a fantasy that it's a fantasy that it's a big uplifting feeling. "-This is a promise." "She suddenly lifts her hand from your shirt and backs off, breathing into your ears. Sudden stimulus blockade, you screamed in protest, throbbing in your trousers, erections were found to have not been found to be pressure-resistant, which had been accumulated until then, but it was too frustrating. But too much frustration, anger swelled up, anger swelled up, turned the chair, stared at the festival with his angry face as hard as he could. The teeth were bare, the cheeks were red, and the blue eyes were mischievous. Is shining."

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>>22444525

>> No.22445225

>>22443891
Desperate Shower Sex with Chloe!

>> No.22445751

>>22435333
>Being able to let go and give in to your inner-most desires is one of humanity's most coveted things.
Perhaps humanity enjoys being able to act as no greater than animals at times, but that doesn't make it fine, nor impressive.
The greatest strength of humanity is our ability to utilise our consciousness to rise beyond base desires, and it is this strength that fundamentally sets us apart from animals.
We find ourselves disgusted by "coomers" because they are those amongst us who are unable to control themselves, and are thus little better than animals.

>> No.22445878

>>22445751
Give in to your desires is everything the "return to monke" meme entails. Not caring about society and all those worries that come with it, yadda yadda. I do agree that humanity would be much better off without those feelings though. I embrace my robot overlords with no emotions at all.

>> No.22446487

>>22432857
I want a fluffy haachama romance.

>> No.22446661

>>22443891
Sadly the only ideas I can come up with the orca involve rape correction.

>> No.22446836

>>22432857
Nina de la puta, no te quieros no cabron

>> No.22447034

Which chuuba would be the best equipped to run a narco-state?

>> No.22447195

>>22446661
Well... Share your ideas with the class.

>> No.22447255

>>22447034
Mori

>> No.22447398

>>22447034
Reimu Endou

>> No.22447847

>>22447034
Is Pekoland a Narco-state?

>> No.22447896

>>22443891
Do her tears smell bad too?

>> No.22447963

>>22447255
I'm sorry, I can't see Mori as a drug kingpin.

>> No.22447994

>>22446487
Romance with the unhinged, where you're the only person who can put up with her shit and she grows extremely attached to you for it. Not a bad idea I think

>> No.22448190

>>22447963
But she has the most drug experience in Hololive.

>> No.22448308

>>22448190
Usage experience does not translate to being good at manufacturing or distribution.

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>>22448190
Lean isn't as "fun" a drug as coke, and its use doesn’t coincide with any helpful knowledge of the criminal underworld beyond "they do it too"

>> No.22448347

>>22369396
>>22364664
I'm gonna make a new save and try to write about each day. I don't know if I'll continue it though.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTnOIL07MT1xbr68Dqu338VhLezO4f0SFpqrST3bnOKs1zA50rZBs0uURfqTNRFvvDdC14Pg-2yPuET/pub
Tags: Yagoo, sfw, nsfw in the future

>> No.22448480

>>22448347
I see a lot of potential here, I look forward to seeing how this pans out! If you decide not to continue the story, someone will want to pick up the idea eventually I'm sure.

>> No.22448827

>>22447994
This made me think of Haachama trying to use her ESL English to try and get closer to you. With You somehow understanding her despite the ESLness being a sign that you're getting closer.

>> No.22450168

>>22448827
Now that right there is a great idea. If I wasn't already writing a couple stories I'd add that one to my projects, but I think I'll just put it in the back of my mind until either I can make it or someone else makes it, either works for me.

>> No.22450478

>>22448347
Your descriptions are good but I think you could make your prose just a touch more flowery, add more substance to it. At the moment it feels a little too straightforward and to the point. Not by much though, it’s just a tad fast and still good.

>> No.22452588

>>22447896
Yes, but not because she doesn't bathe but because she's an Orca

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I haven't written nor have I had the slightest desire to write in the last week and a half. I guess I just woke up one day and was done with it.

>> No.22456099

>>22455285
I once went a whole month without writing a single word. It’ll come

>> No.22457254

>>22455285
Maybe you've hit burn out.

>> No.22457499

>>22456099
I went like 9 years before, so it happens.

>> No.22457613

>>22455285
I think it means you've broken the curse and are now free to leave.

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>>22364706
A fic about my aunt molesting this bitch

>> No.22459736

>>22459366
Is Aki unpopular or something? I never see anything with her

>> No.22459871

>>22459366
Who's the orange hair girl?

>> No.22459905

>>22459871
Rushia

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>>22459736
Unfortunate circumstances meant she missed a lot of the big buffs that Vtubers got, and kinda just flies under the radar as result. She's great, just not particularly popular

>> No.22460058

>>22459736
Somewhat, compared to some of the other girls. She's pretty cute, but she definitely suffered from a few things that stalled her popularity early on. She doesn't have a lot of popular dedicated translators either, so most of what EOPs see of her is through collabs or the odd highly clippable moment.

>> No.22460215

>>22459736
On the English/Overseas side? Yeah kinda. She's at least on the incline.
As for why we don't get much in the way of fanfics for her... it's probably due to that lack of popularity overseas leading to a lack of writers that are fans of her.

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How does it make you feel that you'll never get to truly explore and get to know the chuubas you love? I... find it very sad that there's several dozens of thousands of hours of streams out there from Hololive alone that me, as a non JP speaker, will never be able to enjoy. Not to mention not being able to get to know the chuubas better. For example Marine, if it wasn't for Shaggy clips all she would be known for is horny.

I know there's an argument for "yeah and you'll never see what they are like IRL so you'll always be missing something, stop worrying" but still... It fucks me up.

>> No.22460559

>>22460503
who gives a fuck go do something constructive or jerk off

>> No.22460730

>>22460559
I just miss the golden age... dozens of hours of fun to be watched and it just kept coming. I could relive it... if only I knew JP. Early 2020 was unarguably the most active and entertaining time for Vtubing

>> No.22460966

>>22460730
Nigga did you forget how to speak Japanese how the fuck do relive something you didn't live the first time

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>>22460966

>> No.22461328

>>22460503
From a writing perspective, I deal with it by treating them as characters. I'll never understand them perfectly but I can grasp them good enough that I can infer my way to understanding them (After doing my due diligence in researching them first of course).
That... and not actually being that deeply in love in the first place.

>> No.22462034

>>22461328
Same here. Don't get me wrong I do enjoy watching them all, but when I'm writing a fic I divorce their streams from their character. When I write about Kiara, it's never about her the streamer and always about her the character, who is sometimes in her chuuba role. Like, I'm in a relationship with someone and have been for years now, my connection to vtubers doesn't go beyond enjoying their content and writing stories involving them.

When you start becoming waayy too attached to vtubers and lamenting how you'll never actually be with them or know them personally, you're in too deep and become the same kind of person who is waiting for Monika from DDLC to become real.

>> No.22462089

>>22460503
Pussy
I've survived years without Mio from K-on not being real.

>> No.22462515

>>22462034
Look at this loser not dreaming of the girls from anime and light novel becoming real and how you'd treat them if they were with you. If by the time you finished DDLC you didn't wish to be able to interact with at least one of the girls (Natsuki btw) then you're just a homosexual.

>> No.22462862

>>22462515
Oh I did, I didn't mean to talk like I'd never done that. I was absolutely in love with Sayori, and of course, that went about as well as you'd have expected. So I was just a ddlc no-lifer for a very long time, even wrote a really long fanfic on it I still haven't finished (but still work on just for the sake of finishing it and concluding the story).

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>>22462034
>When you start becoming waayy too attached to vtubers and lamenting how you'll never actually be with them or know them personally, you're in too deep

I've known this since before watching vtubers, but there's one difference. I don't care if my oshi never loves me or if she even knows my name. The spark she ignited inside my is real, and that's what makes me happy.

She made me realize out there, there is someone I can fall in love with, even if it's not her.

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>>22462862
Sometimes I can't tell which is more fucked up, broken men that reached this state or "society" for making "us" in the first place. I'm not off the deep end just yet, even though I do often dream of these sorts of things; voluntarily or otherwise, but there are way too many anons here who definitely would trade their lives for a chance to be with the ones they love, even, or despite the fact, I should say, that they aren't real.

>> No.22463637

>>22463159
Good shit. They're out there somewhere, my policy has always been to just live my life and pursue my goals, the rest will come as time goes on.

>>22463251
Oh it's absolutely greater culture and society that created this problem. I basically never blame the person for falling in love with a vtuber or with a fictional character. Humans are social creatures, but more and more these days young men are ostracized and told they're trash by 'normal' people. On top of that, dating culture and everything is so awful that it just makes everyone feel worse by the end of it.

>> No.22463647

>>22463159
For me it's the opposite. Watching these chuubas made me realize that I'll never be able to find love with someone like them, and that I'll eventually just have to settle for a boring regular woman, who sure, I will still be happy with, but much like your first love, it just won't be the same. You may say "oh these chuubas exist so you can find one" but these chuubas don't exist, they are characters, and in reality even if they did exist the chances of you finding them is insurmountably small. It's this crippling dread of a bleak future that gets me.

For now, I just enjoy the streams and try not to think about it too much.

>> No.22463946

>>22462862
Were you writing it for a thread when you started or was it just a personal work you were making?

>> No.22464115

>>22463946
Personal work, I uploaded onto fanfiction and ao3. I was just a lurker on this site up until I joined this thread really.

>> No.22464240

>>22459736
She had basically the same thing happen to her that happened to Sana, a long break soonish after debut except unlike brown woman it was beyond her control. That's proven to be really damning to a chuuba's growth, preventing them from developing a distinct culture and relationship with their peers. I was really worried for her career a couple years back because she was trailing hard, and she's actually rather charismatic and charming compared to other low-view talents, so it doubly hurts. At least the general growth of the agency has put her in a pretty good long-term spot, and I frankly think that live she had recently is the best one any Hololive member has ever produced.

She's also an incredibly sexual hag and I want her to domme me.

>> No.22464308 [DELETED] 

>>22464240
She got run over by a car. Why is everyone tip toeing around this?

>> No.22464943

>>22464308
Why mention an ultimately irrelevant detail

>> No.22465136

Is the Anon writing First Summer Memories still working on it?

>> No.22468815
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>>22364664
Holoturismo: Green Flag

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQMk5IVPgIAS8up2w5uxAg367OQssB__eOYrW1INBz3c5mEyeMW0ekPpPTaIaId6LFxcEzB-SlmOUFN/pub

Tags: Sora, SFW, Action, Drama, Car autismo

Here's an attempt to write something that's not pure smut. I have a few ideas on where to take this story, so I'll be working on it as I'm able to. Hopefully it's a good teaser.

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>>22468815
oh
oh
oh
oh
oh
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SRbhLtjOiRc
oh
oh
oh
oh

>> No.22469678

>>22442886
honestly, it's a mix of a lot of different things. Cheesy porn/doujin scenes, specific images of Matsuri in various positions so I can better grasp her expression, and listening through hours of R-18 ASMR audio dramas to better visualize the reactions a girl that depraved would do. Also, having someone do a preliminary read-through helped in trimming the fat of the story.

>>22460503
I've learnt to be content and simply be entertained by their antics, and maintaining that distance helps me from tumbling into a parasocial relationship.
Speaking of which, I think it's high time to write a fic based on her Valentine's stream. I've grown more fond of her as of late.

>>22463251
Anon, the one true path has always been to look inward and strive for a life which you can live in. Instead of finding others to fall upon, become an individual with the strength to survive and thrive in this world of cliques and "standards". Live by your own rules, and untether yourself from what others expect of you.

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>>22364706
Finana smut
lewds
sex, if you will

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>>22468815
Not much of car autist beyond what I think looks cool, but suffice to say I'm hooked and interested to see some neat vehicles.

Was gonna use a different picture I had with Miko, but it seems she's driving something else.

>> No.22470200

>>22469868
This, but it's her gay best friend fucking her

>> No.22470207

>>22364706
Story where (You) is a fanfic writer and their chuuba accidentally stumbles upon their fics and read them. They mention it on stream, and seem to become hooked. Can go in a few different directions, for one it would be incredibly meta no matter what. For two, could turn into smut or it could be the holo abusing/gaslighting (You) into doing what they want. Pick your poison.

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>>22364664
Made a little something

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRJaBG6bGyvG5ZjOURNf8q7t6s5zA9xfjQg_9XhsHdRC-3AwQdN_5ZY7jJ7HDssBpDa1aDNCjW_MdA4/pub

Tags: Amelia, Kronii, SFW, Short, Tragedy

>> No.22471117

>>22469868
>it used to throw you off just how casually she talks about her sexual preferences, makes lewd jokes, and discusses 'toys' that she's bought recently
>but eventually you just got desensitized to it and accepted that being a coomer with no filter is just a part of who she is
>so when she bluntly asked if you'd like to fuck, you didn't even bat an eye

>> No.22471169

>>22468815
Good shit. Unironically enjoyed it, though I’m wondering if this is a one shot or will there be continuations?

>> No.22472769

>>22471169
If this doesn't turn into an Initial D-sized magnum opus of car autismo and eurobeat playlists I will be terribly disappointed.

>> No.22472900

>>22470207
A chuuba noticing (You) and liking your work is interesting. Mentioning it on stream though is a bit difficult to work around. Like, could you imagine if an EN Holo called out /wg/? It would be the end of the thread.

>> No.22473148

>>22472900
Yes, although it's a hypothetical. I suppose if you wanted it to be less brazen and kind of hard to believe, maybe (You) posts on another site like ao3 or something and that's where their work gets seen , and how the Holo contacts you. Really it's unfortunate that the premise only really works for if (You) is posting to other websites, but alas.

>> No.22473153

>>22472900
I don't know about it being the end of us, but things would certainly get...'interesting' for awhile.

>> No.22473184

>>22473148
I meant kind of LESS hard to believe.

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>>22364706
You remember the fae girl who lived next door when you were growing up. Every morning when you got up to go running, she was there too. And boy was she competitive, always trying to one-up you, run faster than you, run father than you. But every time, you'd come out on top. She hated you for that, and your occasional teasing didn't help. But despite the bullying, and her obvious disdain for your existence, you always did kind of like her.
So when she vanished from your life one day without so much as saying goodbye...it hurt a lot more than you'd like to admit. It's been so long now that you can't even remember her name. But part of you will always miss her.

>> No.22474089

>>22468815
>Autistic racing fic where Sora is the main goal
You have my attention writer.
Anyway I have to say, even as someone who has no goddamn clue how cars work you manage to convey that sense of speed and excitement very well.

>> No.22474740

>>22472900
I really hope Mori has read my anti fics

>> No.22475338

>>22468815
Holy shit this is good. You're descriptions really bring life to this fic and I couldn't help but smile get crazily excited as it went on. Maybe it's time for me to take my driving lessons.

>> No.22476380

>>22470316
While the rest of what happened can be gleamed from context clues I think the inherent emotional distance of the Kronii PoV at the end there makes the 'tragedy' too distant for it to hit emotionally.

>> No.22476944

>>22473516
Unbeknown to you, she travelled away to hone her craft, finally discovering the optimal method with which to transform others into herself. When you awaken one morning, you find yourself feeling weak, and abnormally balanced. Having become Pomu, you now find yourself her lesser, and begin your journey to discover how to return to your former body, before the transformation achieves permanence, leaving you her subordinate until the end of days.

>> No.22477217

Is it "Footsteps across Time" or "Footprints across Time"? The series page contradicts the chapter doc titles.

>> No.22477290

>>22477217
Footsteps. I made a mistake with a chapter once but by the time I fixed it, it was already too late lmao.

>> No.22477433

>>22375186
This but it's a horror fic about being hunted down by a horrifying demon trying to feast on your despair... or at least that what it initially seems, and as IRyS takes away your despair and brings you Hope she starts looking less demonic and more cute, her voice starting to sound more and more human. Until she's finally brought the light of hope into you and she looks beautiful.

>> No.22477516

>>22477433
Fucking poetic anon. I need to see this now.

>> No.22477636

>>22477290
I thought I corrected them all. Give me a few hrs to get home and I'll do a doublecheck.

>> No.22477844

>>22477636
Some of the docs were still fucked up, I fixed them. I didn't even notice, not gonna lie.

>> No.22478198

>>22427439
anon, what do you think a "limb like" function is?
could it be a... muscle function?

>> No.22478213

>>22477433
>IRyS' Ladder

>> No.22478750

Do you have any stories that you like to go back and reread when you need a pick-me-up?

>> No.22478867

>>22478750
Pick me up?

>> No.22478905

>>22470316
This is really a sombre piece, short and to the feels. The setting really speaks to me too, WWI comes with a very tragic atmosphere and it can be felt in this story

>> No.22479216

>>22478867
I think they mean the happy kind of fluff.

>> No.22479461

>>22436082
mother language speaker not knowing their own language is even better

>> No.22479638

>>22478213
Primary one for a 'quick fix' so to speak is 'Just Matsuri' which is short and sweet. If I want a pick me up normally though I'll search for fluff fics in the archive and just read through a bunch. That helps me if I'm feeling down.

>> No.22479831

>>22478213
>When IRyS finally consumes all of your despair and leaves you with Hope she offers her hand
>In that moment she is the most beautiful thing you have ever seen.
>You take her hand
>The gates of Heaven open up, and she leads you along the way.
>The she leaves, saying she needs to bring more hope to the people below.
>You are left alone in paradise.

>> No.22479843

>>22478750
Feeding strays.

>> No.22479864

>>22364650
>subhuman ENshart stops creating early threads
>starts sniping /jp/djt
When does this nigger finally get rangebanned from the site?

>> No.22479902

>>22479831
That movie's ending was a little to on the nose desu

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>>22479864
>implying the SEAniggers hiromoot hired will ever do anything

>> No.22480238

I've been trawling old threads, reading fics as they got posted.
I just read PAINting, if the anon that wrote that is still here. I want to say that that was a really fucking good horror piece that I feel didn't get the attention it should have got when it was posted. Love that tragic ending as well, that hit real good.

>> No.22480409

>>22480238
It happens sometimes. I've seen fics get noticed after being buried for awhile, but generally speaking if it's not brought up in any way people will just sort of forget it was there. A downside to the system I suppose, but ultimately it just means authors need to learn to time their publishing better.

>> No.22480756

>>22480409
Yeah that is arguably a flaw if a fic flys below the radar when it's posted. At least once it's archived they're all equal, and that stories posted last thread thing that's being done at least makes sure that all fics have at least a couple days to get eyes on them.
Still I am having fun finding hidden gems like these.

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>>22477844
Gotcha. Take this sexual Haato since I've got nothing else.
>>22478198
I think, specifically, they're referring to the ability to have complete control over it as though it were an arm or leg.

>> No.22481535

>>22476944
Pomu vs Lamy: War of /BECOME/

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>>22478198
Anon, have you ever taken an anatomy class... ever? Unless you're a snail, an insect or a tongue, without bones you can't control a tail. Muscles on their own can't do shit. You may say that octopuses have the ability to do it, but their muscle structure is not only totally inhuman, but they also have to spend nearly all their brain power to control the complicated anatomy of their tentacles. Towa would be a drooling retard if she had the same muscle anatomy as an octopus. I suggest you look into how muscles work first. If you had muscles but no bones, you'd be limp as a rag with no control over your body at all beyond twitches, and that's what a muscle only tail would be like too. She could contract the muscles to jolt it upwards, but no superior function whatsoever.

>> No.22483527

ZOOMING o'clock
Fucking brace

>> No.22483634

>>22482410
I don't understand this weird hang up on realism when the very concept is unrealistic in the first place.
This is like arguing about the realism of fire breathing dragons, where you are for some reason accepting that the dragon can exist but not budging on the fire breath being possible.

>> No.22483951

>>22483634
Bro there are scientific explanations for dragon breath too. It's much better to actually use your brain and consider ways it could be real rather than say that it's magic and ignore that whole concept entirely. Iirc the explanation for dragon breath is much like the bombarding beetles with their chemical sacs inside them ready to fire out of their ass acidic and hot loads like a cannon.

>> No.22484042

>>22483951
>Coco's breasts are chemical sacs.
I'd believe it.

>> No.22484096

>>22483951
We get it you watched Reign of Fire once but you seem to forget that the movie fuckings sucks regardless and nobody gives a shit that they explained how dragons breathe fire "realistically"

>> No.22484302

>>22484096
I literally have never heard of that and the fact that you take it upon yourself to say "nobody cares how it works" rather than actually trying to think for yourself and see the possibilities it can lead to is just sad.

>> No.22484409

>>22484302
Don't get holier-than-thou with me nigger we're talking about Towa jacking you off with her tail NOBODY CARES

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>>22484409
Fuck this is funny
Based

>> No.22484722

>>22484409
This is why you'll never have a devil girlfriend. You don't care about the little things.

>> No.22484988

>>22484722
Good thing Towa's an angel.

>> No.22485283

>>22484988
Then can she give a wingjob?

>> No.22485292

>>22465136
I'm gonna repeat this from the anon in the back because i want to know too

>Is the Anon writing First Summer Memories still working on it?

>> No.22485782

>>22485283
Whoa whoa whoa bro, sorry but you didn't consider the SCIENTIFC EXPLANATION for wings and that she'd have to have a six and a half metre wingspan to fly so basically um....your fetish fic would be bad

>> No.22485880

>>22485782
But Anon, Angels fly by the grace of God.

>> No.22486760

>>22482410
why cant the tail be a muscle like the tongue? also muscle can be more then enoguh to prevent the shade from collapsing source: your dick when you see pekoanon

>> No.22486848

>>22484042
>sucking on her tits
>why does my mouth burn

>> No.22486939

>>22486848
>head fucking explodes

>> No.22486998

>>22486760
The tongue does not work alone. She'd have control at the base of the tail and no more than that if it worked like a tongue. And dicks aren't muscles.

>> No.22487070

>>22486998
your dick is a muscle, go to school

>> No.22487519

>>22486848
>>22486939
Coco takes her revenge on (You) by seducing you to bed and pressuring you to suckle on her tits.

>> No.22487584

>>22487070
"Even though a penis can get bigger and hard like a muscle, it is not a muscle. Anatomically speaking, the human penis is made up of three key structures: Corpora cavernosa : Two spongy columns of tissue within the penis that engorge with blood to create an erection."

Googling is very hard. You're doing this intentionally now. Nobody can be this dumb while thinking they are right.

>> No.22487629

>>22487519
That's kind of fucking extreme don't you think?

>> No.22487782

>>22487629
Anon. You would do the same if you got cucked as hard as her.

>> No.22488084

>>22487584
none of those are bones tho, so towas tail does not need bones then?

>> No.22488124

>>22488084
I'll just shoot you down with one word from now on.

Gravity.

>> No.22488183

>>22470316
I'm not typically a fan of songfics, but I think I'm coming around after reading this, the Calli one set to "health for the company" and the Kanata miscarriage one

>> No.22488311

>>22488124
But gravity is only law, yes?
Devils are by nature against the law.
Checkmate.

>> No.22488485

>>22488311
Dumb.

>> No.22489079

>>22376827
Good luck, anon.

>> No.22490538

>>22488183
What was that Calli one?

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>>22485782
Kanata can't fly and we've never seen her fly either. Her wings too small, her body too fat. They are just useless little things... for now. One day she'll grow into a proper angel.

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>>22469671
NAITO OF FAIYAH

>>22469921
>>22474089
>>22475338
Thanks fellas, good to know it was entertaining. I spent some time researching this car for the story to have the best idea possible of what it's like to ride in it and stuff. It's a twin-turbo V12 RWD car with over 700lb-ft of torque, and I thought that giving such a monster to Sora would be a cool gap.

For (Your) car, I'll be using something I'm very familiar with so I can be as accurate as possible on the experience.

>>22471169
I have plans to continue, yeah. But I wouldn't expect anything soon since I want to wrap up the stories I have on hiatus. In the meantime I'll work on expanding the world. I already know what Gen 6 will be like, and want each gen to require a certain skill to "best".

>> No.22490807

>be (You), moving into a new apartment
>a cool-looking pink-haired woman is your new neighbor
>"Hey, name's Anon. I just moved in next door. Nice to meet you."
>"Yo, name's Calliope Mori. Nice to meetcha too, dawg!"
>you two hit it off pretty quickly and you greet each other every time you see each other
>after a few days, though, Mori starts flirting with you quite aggressively, leaving you a blushing and stuttering mess
>she actually kabedons you
>you decide one day to turn the tables on her after a few days of this
>when Mori kabedons you again as you come back from work, you pull her in a kiss
>she starts blushing and stuttering the same way you have because of her for the last few days
>"What's the matter, Mori? You lost your nerve?"
>Mori looks at you with a mildly annoyed face
>"That's it. You're coming home with your boy tonight"
>Mori bridal carries you to her apartment
>passionate sex in several positions ensues

>> No.22491360

> no fic about being there to witness the growth of supernatural chuuba's physique and personality
Need. Towa growing into a proper imp that annoys the ever living shit out of everyone around her and feeding on the emotion. Kanata growing into an Archangel, slowly losing touch with human emotions much like Dr. Manhattan. Aloe horn growth into full semen demon. Actually there's not many options huh. Most of the mythical chuubas just outlive humans without much change

>> No.22491569

>>22491360
That Kanata one sounds like a setup to a tragedy. The both of you mutually needing to cut off each other in order for her to fully grow into an Angel,
...Or a corruption fic where those cut off feelings for you are the basis for causing her to become a fallen angel embracing her bond to you.

>> No.22492014

>>22490797
Are other gens showing up as well? Also do you plan to upload this to AO3 or something? Might be easier to track/follow updates

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>>22476380
Yeah, I can see that. I was gonna just have it be Ame singing but felt like that made it too much of like a twist, which I didn't want to have while still trying to have it be short.

>>22478905
I agree in the atmosphere and I'm glad it came across.

>>22488183
Maybe it's due to most song fics having the songs be non-diagetic while those ones do, as well as carrying the overall tone of the story with it? Thanks for the compliment either way!

>>22490538
For We May or Might Never
I wrote that one too

>> No.22492635

>>22468815
LETS GOOOOO
I like it. I think the whole suicide thing dragged on for a little too long but it wasn’t too bad. Looking forward to Anon living his double life as a street racer and regular office worker. Eagerly awaiting chapter 1.

>> No.22492661

Towa's tail can be a manifestation of her demon self, an additional spirit limb that isn't as easily concealed. That might "explain" the supposed sensitivity of the tail - you are touching her directly, not just her disguise.
Same with Kanatan's wings - her true wings might span like 5 metres.

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>>22492661
> Towa's true form

>> No.22493604

>>22488124
>he cant lift his dick against gravity
>he cant lift his tongue up against gravity
>his eyes are always shut because there are no bones in his eyelids

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>>22493604

>> No.22493744

>>22492661
This gives me the amusing image of Towa having a massive orgasm trying to give you a tailjob since her tail is so connected to her soul.

>> No.22493784

>>22493735
>only_pretending.webp

>> No.22493927

>>22493744
Why do you think touching her soul would be pleasurable? Imagine a soul being like your heart. Do you want to be touched there? I reckon not.

>> No.22494105

>>22493927
>implying you wouldn't want to spend long afternoons fingering your bro's soul
ngmi

>> No.22494211

>>22493927
Because she is getting so deeply fucked that the very core of her being is getting fucked by You.

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>>22493927
Unbelievably homosexual thought process

>> No.22494352

>>22494105
>>22494211
I imagine that having your soul being touched would feel like your brain crackling, not hurtful at all unless the person doesn't know what they are doing. (You), being a human, a species that can not see nor understand the soul, wouldn't know how to pleasure someone's soul. But a succubus for example would.

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>>22494334
*lays eggs on you*

>> No.22495017

New thread
>>22494379

>> No.22495054

>>22495017
New thread is shit. Some fag is spamming. Someone make a new one

>> No.22495246

>>22495054
> New thread is shit. Some fag is spamming. Someone make a new one
Or you can just report it and then go yell really loud in global until a jannie notices

>> No.22495574

>>22495246
No, the thread can't be saved.

>> No.22495793

>>22481502
what secrets were missed because of dice in older holofantasys

>> No.22496948

>>22495793
Anon had a child with Pekora

>> No.22497083

>>22492014
Yeah, for sure. I'm thinking of each generation as a stepping stone until (you) can even hope to go toe to toe with Gen 0. I can't promise they'll be the only ones to drive supercars in case it fits other girls' themes, but I'll try to limit them as much as possible.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/38397625

Here's the AO3 link.


>>22492635
>Spoiler
I agree, but I didn't want to half-ass a complete 180, that would just feel cheap to me. Someone who's that far gone needs a little convincing.

>> No.22497852

>>22497083
Sweet, gonna keep an eye on this. It’s been awhile since I’ve been this interested on some fic

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