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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>20789772

>> No.20918237 [DELETED] 

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.20918317
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.20918813

>>20918317
Resposting this from last thread, following >>20918672 's advice

https://rentry.org/zqkmm

tags: Amelia Watson, NSFW, fluff, rough sex, dirty talk, creampie

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Story recap! There... were six stories posted last thread. A bit more than usual. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Say, Can You See? Chapter 2: Tags: Okayu, SFW, fluff:>>20790257

Love Me, Love Me, Love Me: Tags: Moona, Reine, Kronii, Ollie, M-chan, light NSFW, dark, sad, tragedy:>>20812706

Mio fluff: tags: Ookami Mio, fluff, living together non explicit sex, pregnancy :>>20853787

PD, PT: istry: Tags: NSFW, Fubuki, Koyori, Lactation, Pregnant :>>20898645

All the Eggs: Tags: Finana Ryugu, male POV:>>20903905

Rough times: Tags: Amelia Watson, NSFW, fluff, rough sex, dirty talk, creampie :>>20917893

>> No.20919106

Anon... the prompt recap, onegai...

Are you already working on it, or should I post it?

>> No.20919172
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Sex with prostitute Ayame through a gloryhole:>>20790529
Amelia trying to get to the bottom of the mystery of why (You) disappeared after being introduced to her genmates:>>20795644
Being ambushed by Risu and her nut cylinder. She knows you skipped out on November and has come to collect what she's fucking owed:>>20812177
Sweaty post HoloFes sex with Miko:>>20866875
a fic where (you) fuck kiara and cuck mori at the end:>>20889212
Shion summoning sexual relief.:>>20905464
A SFW story where (You) meet Akirose and fall in love, only to realize she will soon jump to another world:>>20909349
A decidedly NSFW story about Mori sleep rape. She keeps using (Your) apartment as a safe place to crash in, and always ends up passed out on the couch or in your bed. (You) keep cumming inside her defenseless pussy:>>20909349

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>>20919172
Thanks!

>> No.20920561
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>>20918370
(You) are a unscrupulous war surgeon who discovers an unconscious Noel on the battlefield, and when she reawakens has nothing but very faint memories. Seeing an opportunity, you decide to form the impressionable and vulnerable warrior into a violent killer for your own goals.

Yes this is just a fusion of First Summer Memories and Nene Corruption I WANT IT

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A fantastic story to be read to (you)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_1MEL3P4_1E

>> No.20921746

>>20920561
This but only with SEX.

>> No.20922183

>>20920561
>Instead of helping her regain her memories, you help her kill them instead
>Each sankisei member comes to try and get her to remember but only find themselves getting brutally killed in the process.
>Each kill, you reward her with progressively wilder sex.
>Until Flare comes to try and knock sense into her, only to find herself crippled and captured.
>Forced to watch as you give Noel her greatest reward yet
>Fucking Noel in front of Flare, bring her just to the edge of climax but denying it until she does one last thing.
>Noel understands and breaks Flare's neck. Her face locked on the edge of grasping what was going to happen
>The two of you fuck the night away next to the dead half elf. Her corruption into your perfect woman complete.
I fucking love utterly fucked up sexual corruption.

>> No.20924622

>A short fluff series starring (You) and your wife, Selen!

I fucking hate this website so much

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>>20924622
MWAnon will be catching people for a long time with that one

>> No.20925191

>>20920561
This but you torture her for sadistic pleasure, keeping her alive and in agony for as long as possible before she harvesting her organs as she's on the brink and wearing them as a hat

>> No.20925820

Is there already a brothel description of the Holos? Kinda wanna do one as warm up

>> No.20925867

>>20925820
Why worry about if there is one? Do it anyway

>> No.20925883

>>20925820
Do one for Gen 2

>> No.20926197

>>20925820
There was for at least Gen 3, but I can't find it in the archive.

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>read through HoloFantasy in its entirety
>feel mega-jealous of ArchiveAnon's worldbuilding which makes mine pale in comparison
>want to toss my series and start it over with a more believable world
Any writers here who also know this feeling?

>> No.20928447

>>20928125
I want to toss my series and start over, not because I’m jealous of anyone but simply because it’s absolute garbage.

>> No.20928557

>>20928447
True, your series is trash. Mine's better.

>> No.20928619

>>20928125
Well, AA can do a lot of things but even he isn't perfect. I take solace in that, knowing that everyone here specializes in something better than others.

>> No.20928900

>>20928557
I agree

>> No.20928926

>>20928125
AA is also one of the oldest of us, has the most life experience and likely time under his belt in creative endeavors as well, which is only natural.

If you think he's good, can you guess how he got there? By not giving up every time he felt discouraged because he found someone who did something better than he did along the way. Never give up.

>> No.20928946

>>20925820
Depends on what you mean by brothel description.
There was that Holos as prostitutes post from a couple of months back that was a one line ish description for all of them, and a couple of paragraph long for each description of I think it was a few select Holos.
But there hasn't been a paragraph length holoBrothel descriptions outside of that gen 3 one.
>>20926197
Pretty sure that one was thread posted so I think a literal archive search might find it.

>> No.20929124

>>20926197
AA...

>> No.20929319

>>20918183
Shame is still one of the best fics in the archive. Too bad there isn't more.

>> No.20929381

>>20929319
Someone said a while ago that they're working on a fic in a very similar vein, but it's been radio silence on that front since.

>> No.20929415

>>20929381
I'll take a glimmer of false hope over nothing any day!

>> No.20929707

>>20929319
What did you like about it specifically?

>> No.20929711

>>20925820
there are a couple, but don't let that discourage you from writing your own
>>20926197
it's named Hololive Reviewer

>> No.20929815

>>20929707
I liked that it wasn't femdom, for one thing. I liked that Mori was disgusted but went along with it. The fact that she felt shame. I was hoping for a lot more domination and degradation for her.

>> No.20930313

>>20929711
Ahh, thank you. Could have sworn I typed brothel but didn't see naything. Weird.

Though while I was looking through warosu...
>>20929415
I found it, and I think I misinterpreted what happened, because they had responded to the story anchor with the description of it when someone asked what was being being worked on, but it might have been might for the prompt anchor.

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>>20918370
Botan invites an unsuspecting Watame over for dinner only to maul and consume her entire body over the course of a single night. No subversion, just predator/prey dynamic and gorging.

>> No.20931740

>>20930313
Let me guess, you found the full hololive brothel post.

>> No.20931855

>>20914504
Chu

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> New IDs
Anyone excited to write about them? M-maybe Risu too?

>> No.20932115

>>20932010
>M-maybe Risu too?
lolno

>> No.20932305

>>20932010
Far right's body suit turns me the fuck on

>> No.20932395

>>20932010
Eh, I'll wait until at least a couple of weeks for characterization to settle in.

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>>20932010
>left
AND MARIA

Chuubagear all of a sudden seems like a great idea.

>> No.20933039

>>20932010
Kinda dig the Sci-Fi theme going on.

>> No.20933054

>>20932010
IMO they don't feel like ID, but their designs still feel like Hololive so it's fine.

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>>20928125
I'm flattered you feel that way, but don't let any feeling like that hold you back. Use it as impetus if anything. If you like the ideas, think about why you like them and try to formulate your own as a result of pinning down what you think is cool, then expand on them. Hell, poach ideas from real world cultures and throw them in a blender. Alaynia is essentially just Spain and France smashed together via hydraulic press. The only limit is your imagination and determination.

>> No.20933652

>>20933155
I'm going to mix cheese and yogurt. I'll call it chogurt.

>> No.20933724

>>20932010
More worga worga people.

>> No.20933764

>>20933724
Why are you racist?

>> No.20933950

>>20933764
Because the second it's noon in Jakarta you people spam the board until it's a landfill of bait threads.

>> No.20934352

>>20932010
The one in the middle looks cute

>M-maybe Risu too?
If nobody believed you're inane Brazil screed, they weren't gonna buy the treereat one neither.

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>Updating Archive
>Just realized the new PD, PT is named 'Istry' because the last one was named 'Chem'
Clever bastard.

>> No.20934864

>>20918819
>Love Me, Love Me, Love Me Ch 8
Goddamn, that writer knows how to write with impact, like it leaves me with some questions about how the world operates i.e. how does the HoloID thing work there, but it really doesn't matter with how good the chapter lands its hits.

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HoloBrothel is going nicely. It's not gonna get anyone off but it's fun to write. I'm kind of interested (insert better word here) in showing the early batch because I'm putting a fuck ton of work into this and the first 3 just took me almost an hour, but I'll hold off on that for now.

>> No.20937631

>>20937003
I mean if it's descriptions there's not much harm in thread posting it. Though I guess if it's big descriptions then having it be in a doc would be better so it won't get cut off.

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>>20937003
I eagerly await for prostitute Aqua

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>>20934381

>> No.20939873

>>20938383
NTA but I can only imagine her being either, a retard with no skills but a lot of spirit about doing it or deadfish, completely shutting down when it starts but somehow still popular due to her body; but I'm ready to get suprised to see an interesting take on Aqua.

>> No.20940047

>>20937003
Please tell me Roboco's pussy is completely controllable and she takes great pleasure in making her clients completely break down into a drooling mess as she adjusts the tightness and rhythm of her clenching specifically to make them chain orgasm inside of her perfectly designed semen receptacle.

>> No.20941933

>>20931667
define consume, cause i feel you like you are asking for a cannibalism fic

>> No.20941995

>>20941933
Anon that prompt is very clearly about what it's asking about.

>> No.20942163

>>20941933
I'm not sure how much more explicit I could be anon

>> No.20942456

>>20942163
I mean in theory you could just throw out all subtlety about it make it something like
>Botan invites an unsuspecting Watame over for dinner only to maul and kill her before tearing the flesh off her body to eat then breaking her bones to suck out the marrow. No mercy, just a predator killing their prey before gorging on the meat in front of them.

>> No.20942536

got horny again and started thinking of a story where you're Towa's bf, but she's never been intimate with you other than a kiss and cuddle, which you're ok with for the most part bar some frustrations, but one day her genmates come over for an offcollab sleepover, but Kanata slips into the adjacent room where you're sleeping in and after interrogating you over your relationship with Tower, she decides to give you the sexual experience you've been missing out. The days go by as your trysts with Kanata get wilder and wilder, even roping in the other Gen 4 girls all while Twapper is blissfully unaware of what's happening behind her back. She just thinks her genmates have grown friendlier with you.

>> No.20942639

>>20918183
>Check archive
>Irys only has one fic centered around her
>It's from months ago

Damn...

>> No.20942697

>>20942536
Hot

>> No.20942716

>>20942536
This but Towa was the one that set up Kanata to do it in the first place due to some strange guilt she has from her piercings.

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>>20942536
Profoundly based idea

>> No.20943014

>>20942639
Her one fic is the one where You force her to wear a bag on her face to hide it, before you feel guilt about it and reunite with her without the bag on her face?

>> No.20943525

>>20918370
I (viewer) drink kuzuha cum

>> No.20943688

>>20942639
Her whole angel/devil shtick makes her one of the more outlandish chuubas so I feel like it's kind of hard to just write throwaway one-shots for Irys as opposed to other chuubas. Now that alone wouldn't stop people but she's also not very lewd, and she never has yabs, and she's a pretty classical entertainer who doesn't lean on any archetype like hag or gfe or crazy or whatever... so like, there's not a lot of easy material.

>> No.20943995

>>20943688
This guy definitely doesn't watch IRyS

>> No.20944126

>>20943014
That one just made me sad. Her model isn't the best, but she's very sweet.

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>>20943688
> gonna feed this ni- gonna feed this motherfu- ah, oh, ok

>> No.20944300

>>20943688
>she's also not very lewd
I'm guessing you don't watch her streams and not just that you don't even watch her clips.
Because this description is overall so fucking wrong, it can only come from the same dumb assumptions as the coco meme review tierlists that put AZKi as seiso and pure.

>> No.20944346

>>20943014
Yes. It's that one.

>>20943688
Irys lands in the needy gf or overly attached archetype. GTA5 kinda revealed that when she kept calling Michael's wife over and over again. Only to get pissed that her calls were being sent to auto reject. Also there's that one mom simulator stream where she almost yabbed herself.

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>>20933155
It's not so much that I think I can do it, it's more like the worldbuilding in Subjection is basically a reaaally flimsy excuse to have the plot take place, so I look at all the cool work you've done with HoloFan's world and I'm like 'damn, I kinda fucked up on the fundamentals, didn't I'. Like, seeing you take it more seriously and do such a good job of it makes me feel embarrassed for not having taken my own worldbuilding seriously from the beginning, if I'm making any sense.

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>>20933155
It's not so much that I think I can't do it, it's more like the worldbuilding in Subjection is basically a reaaally flimsy excuse to have the plot take place, so I look at all the cool work you've done with HoloFan's world and I'm like 'damn, I kinda fucked up on the fundamentals, didn't I'. Like, seeing you take it more seriously and do such a good job of it makes me feel embarrassed for not having taken my own worldbuilding seriously from the beginning, if I'm making any sense. It's probably too late to add much to that series without it coming off as forced, so I'll take your advice and use it as impetus for another of my WIPs.

>> No.20944623

>>20944300
speaking of "lewd", she's currently singing Britney Spears songs on her unarchived karaoke, and now I'm imagining her as this femme fatale who has you wrapped around her finger while she's also addicted to your attention.

I need to stop fantasizing about menhera chuubas destroying my life.

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>>20944386
>>20944571
How the fuck do you even fuck up this bad

>> No.20944760

>>20944682
I deleted the post to fix a spelling mistake and then decided to add more to it on a whim? ...unless you mean something else I'm not noticing?

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>>20944760
I meant your life

>> No.20944829

>>20944571
It depends a lot on how much you established early on, I think. HF started out very worldbuilding lite (in my opinion) and later chapters allowed it to have more meat attached to it. There's still things you can do with it if you're worried about it - cultural differences, etc.

>> No.20944924

>>20944623
Clearly you need a distraction.
How about fantasizing about destroying a menhera chuuba's life so that the only one they can still trust is you? Perhaps with the implication that you yourself are also a menhera and thus a perfect match.

>> No.20945092

>>20944924
Not that guy but I've always felt there's in general not enough fiction where the guy's defense mechanism against the yandere is to up the ante and out-crazy her. Like, the bitch wants a codependent relationship? I'll show her codependency.

>> No.20945158

>>20944825
Whoa.

>> No.20945486

>>20945092
That just sounds like a speedrun to a wildy unstable and unhealthy relationship.

>> No.20945630

>>20944126
Man that story was so fucking good. <3 IRyS

>> No.20946971

>>20943688
I get where you're coming from. I think all Irys really needs is a good prompt that's not just "SEX with Irys".

>> No.20947802

>>20946971
How about... ANAL sex with IRyS?

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>>20918317
This is pretty much just a WIP of the first 3 gens, but I had a fair bit of fun writing it. If I get some nice ideas for the rest, I'll get back on this eventually but for now I'll be focusing on other stories. This was supposed to be a warm up but I ended up taking 4 hours to do it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR9JMezfnbZFykVfOsIIKAxi7FPXo5TThSxmtzY-jthnsSmQC-qu2JfVYBdOZSkWtJkI9GhIoqs2FYd/pub

Tags: NSFW, several Hololive members, prostitution, WIP

>> No.20948333

>>20947802
>Irys letting you use her backdoor because she wants to remain a "pure" idol
You know you might be onto something.

>> No.20948450

>>20918370
>>20946971
Ok then how about a nice fluffy fic about raising a family with IRyS. Nice mundane family life with them. Until one day you hit your head and wake up from the spell she put you under. Once again seeing the horrid ugly shedemon you mated with and vile spawn that resulted from it. Your first instinct was to kill them, destroy the horrors you've created before slaying the shebeast that spawned them but... you find your memories, your feelings for them preventing your hand from killing your own children and wife.
Seeing no other option, you opt to flee to leave behind the horrors you've created but on the day you plan to leave; IRyS and her daughters surround you to ask what's wrong with you.

IRyS reverse rape mindbreak oyakodon.

>> No.20948631

>>20948450
Just fucken play Saya no uta will ye?

>> No.20948710

>>20948631
Shit game for twats is why

>> No.20948888

>>20948710
Then why the fuck do you want a story around it.

>> No.20948897

>>20947855
While this probably isn't enough to get anyone off (barring them jacking it to the fantasy presented off of one), this is really good and the two paragraph structure is really good for the kind of fic it wants to be, it gives a glimpse of what they are, shows a bit of the fantasy, and gives the reader enough to imagine how a full session with one of them will go.
Absolutely got a boner off of this. Great fucking work.

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>>20948710
Fuck you, Saya doesn't need your love anyway. I'll be "that person" for her.

"You know the dandelion flower? The one that scatters its seeds on the wind?

The wind carries those fluffy seeds far, far from where they were born. What if one of them ends up in a desert where not even a single blade of grass is growing? If you can imagine how that lone seed will feel... then you might be able to understand me.

That seed is still a baby flower. If it does its best, it can turn even a desert into a garden.

Maybe that little seed will decide to thrive. Maybe it will decide to grow and multiply, so that it can turn the whole desert into a field of dandelions.

What do you think can give it the strength to do so?

All it needs... is to be loved by just one person in the whole desert. All it needs is to be told how pretty dandelions are."

>> No.20948923

>>20948888
Nobody asked for a story around Shitter no unko, you twat.

>> No.20949210

Visual novels aren't video games.

>> No.20949276

>>20948888
I wasn't thinking of saya no uta when I was making that prompt I was thinking of the la creatura memes around IRyS looking kind of weird due to redjuice's style, as well as a discussion from a couple of months ago about breeding horrible Halfbreed Nephilim from IRyS's womb.

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20949515

What would you give her to taste and how do you think she would react to it?

Personally I'd jack off and spurt my spunk on her tongue instead of letting her lick my dick, because I think there can be more value in that. I think Fubuki would recoil at feeling the warm ropes of cum hitting her tongue and lips, but she would take a little while to realize what it was, assuming she was live on stream in one of those game shows of Cover where they have to guess what it is, so she wouldn't be expecting it to be cum. Watching Fubuki swirl my cum around in her mouth, going "hmmm... " as she desperately tries to come up with an answer other than "semen" would be very fun to watch and I'd already be preparing the second batch for her.

>> No.20949640

Blackmailing Calli into humiliating, degrading sex acts that she can’t help but start to enjoy.

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>>20949515
>Already horny
>Reading post makes it worse
>Look at image
>It's a fucking banana edit
>Snort, lose boner

>> No.20949662

>>20949515
A fat, thick, juicy black cock.

>> No.20950006

>>20949515
Mio's still-warm eyeballs after I've just butchered her and removed them

>> No.20950047

>>20949644
AA I'll be honest you're probably gay or something. Bananas are the closest thing you have to a dick...

>> No.20950123

>>20949640
What kind of humiliating, and degrading sex acts?

>> No.20950169

>>20950047
If your dick looks like a banana you should get it checked out.

>> No.20950173

>>20950047
I like dick on the side but I can't find the banan edits anything other than hilarious. It's like watching a chick suck off a fucking elephant trunk like they do with censors in shitty ecchi late 2000s/early 2010s ecchi anime. Something about it just makes me laugh due to terminal brain rot, I can't fucking quantify it better than that.

>> No.20950263

>>20947855
Despite Ayame literally being the cheapest whore there, I really want to see a fluff fic continuation of this for her where she falls in love with you. Something about how she just wants to have fun and talking about interesting things during sex just speaks out to the fluff lover in me

>> No.20950595 [SPOILER] 
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20950595

>>20950263
Don't do it anon, you can't fix her...

>> No.20950697
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20950697

>>20950173
Guess I'll have to change tactics if I wish to be inclusive...

>> No.20951307

>>20950263
My intent with this Ayame was to not make her like the rrat at all but I suppose my mind recused and decided to make her a cheap whore anyway, even without directly stating it

>> No.20951323

>>20950595
>Disinterested Ayame sex
Now we're talking.

>> No.20951702

>>20950263
>becoming friends with your favorite prostitute with occasional hints that she might like you as something more
Actually sounds cute in a weird sort of way.

>> No.20951860

>>20950123
Being forced to kiss and ride (cowgirl) someone she hates until she orgasms, for starters.

>> No.20951873

>>20950697
Do whatever you want, the banana edits are just funny. They accomplish what they need to do.
>>20951702
Isn't this sort of something that happens with strippers, or is that just unfounded hearsay? I've read about girls ending up getting somewhat attached to clients beyond a monetary thing, as strange as that sounds. Again, unfounded hearsay, but stranger things and all that.

>> No.20951939

>>20950123
A long forced blowjob where she is forced to maintain eye contact.

>> No.20951953
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20951953

>>20951702
>>20951873
Anons please. Don't fall for the hookers... Especially not one incapable of feeling human emotions or understanding them...

>> No.20952128

>>20951953
>That bit of pubic hair showing
Immensely ero.
>Incapable of feeling human emotions
That's exactly what's hot!! The conflating of human understandings of love and oni understandings of love!

>> No.20952151

>>20951702
>your friends insist she doesn’t like you bro, she likes your money. the lovey-dovey shit is just a tactic to make sure you keep coming back
>you conclude that they’re probably right
>she keeps acting sweet towards you, but you brush it off as just another part of the act
>it isn’t, and she starts consulting her co-workers on how she can show you that she’s being serious
>wacky hijinks ensue as she tries to put their advice into practice
>alternatively, drama ensues as the others try to dissuade her from getting too attached to her clients
>or both

>> No.20952188

>>20952128
Damn, seems like I missed those pubes. This guy makes great art but he loves slapping pubes on so I edit them out.

>> No.20952685

>>20952188
What's wrong with pubes?

>> No.20952701

>>20952685
NTA but they're gross. Take care of yourself, for goodness' sake.

>> No.20952704

>>20952188
Seems like a lot of work, but hey, it's your time investment.

>> No.20952774

>>20952704
It takes more time to name the file than to erase the pubes

>> No.20952784

>>20951953
Thats what makes it so good though. She slowly develops feelings for you through your continuous interactions with her but she has no idea what those feelings are and has to consult her friends would make such a fluffy and compelling story.

>> No.20952796

>>20952188
Based

>> No.20952979

>>20952784
Ya know there's an anime which the plot revolves pretty much entirely around that, right? The ancient Magus bride. It's pretty average, but you can see how things would go and they would not go well when a demon falls in love but doesn't have the slightest clue on how to process or express it, because she doesn't even know what love is.

>> No.20953547

>>20951873
Pretty sure that's something that happens for any job involving human interaction, humans are tribal animals and such bonds can form under the strangest of circumstances.

>> No.20953691
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20953691

>>20952774
Alright then, enjoy yourself.
>>20953547
Possibly. Usually it's someone falling in love with the worker and subsequently getting burned, but I guess that it goes both ways. Still, though, I guess it all hinges on how comfortable you are trying to romance someone out of a brothel.

>> No.20953942

>>20918370
HoloMyth EN playing with toys, I was thinking the girls playing house with dolls. Making it clear It's a fetish thing. I thought maybe someone here would be interested in trying this.

>> No.20953999

>>20953942
...What? Can you try to explain that in a little more detail, please?

>> No.20954014

>>20953999
Barbie dollies. Western vtubers.

>> No.20954073

>>20954014
That doesn't explain anything, though. What do you mean it's a fetish thing? Are they making Ken and Barbie bump plastic groins because of some weird eunuch fascination? What exactly is sexy about them just playing with dolls and a doll house?

>> No.20954328

>>20953691
I never said it was easy to change the filename. See, the app I use to draw crashes whenever I start a new drawing, so I have to open it back again, edit the image, get out of editing mode, get an ad, close the app, open app again, ad gone, name the file, save as JPG and then post on thread. It's quite the chore. I have fun making the banana ones but editing pubes is just annoying

Also I can't believe people here would actually want to date whores that's pretty weird to me. It's not even a past thing like "Suisei rode the cock carousel in college", you're actively dating someone who is coming back home smelling of another man's cum. The fuck is that about?

>> No.20954335

>>20954073
Grown up girls playing with toys is what I enjoy. I was thinking something like what you said, the girls innocently playing with dolls but making them do lewd things as if It wasn't lewd at all. But It doesn't need to involve them doing lewd things!

>> No.20954483

>>20954328
Pekofag...you make things so difficult on yourself, dork that you are.
>Can't believe people here would actually want to date whores
I kinda get wanting to date whores, but only if it's in the past tense. Presumably the fantasy is rooted in you trying to get them to quit and have a monogamous relationship with you and get them away from that lifestyle, so it BECOMES a past thing - you aren't dating them as they're still whores, unless this is some weird borderline NTR thing.
>>20954335
I appreciate your honesty and clarification.

>> No.20954497

>>20954328
>you're actively dating someone who is coming back home smelling of another man's cum. The fuck is that about?
Sounds pretty hot to me, senpai.

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20954659

>>20954497
I mean yeah it is, in the context of it being that way because of the NTR fetish, but if you want to date a whore fic without there being an NTR aspect, then it's... weird, because you're just being a cuck without fetishizing it.

>>20954483
Don't call me a dork. Also, the way they were talking seemed present tense which is why I spoke up. They wanted to convince Ayame to love you by coming to her as a client, then you go away, she gets dicked, you come back, and little by little the relationship builds, over and over again. That's what they had in mind, or at least that's how I interpreted it. Sure at some point she'll quit, but you were already in love with someone literally being fucked in every hole for the price of a pizza.

>> No.20954742

>>20954659
Though I'll be honest that sounds pretty good fic material. I'm not opposed to this stuff, the angry Towa was just me being too lazy to browse 1.5K anime girls reacting images for an appropriate reaction. Just trying to understand them

>> No.20954761

>>20954328
You’re not dating her, she falls in love with you. There’s a difference.

>> No.20954908

>>20954483
I think it's more of the (unhealthy) mentality that you can "fix" this girl, especially if she shows signs that she wants out of the life, as miniscule as the signs may be. I may write that rrat!Ayame hatefuck fic now that she's back to being the talk of the thread.

also God help me I was looking for Ayame stuff to jack off to and it was her fucking footjob vid that did me in.

>> No.20954933
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20954933

>>20954659
>Sure at some point she'll quit, but you were already in love with someone literally being fucked in every hole for the price of a pizza.
Yeah, I know. I'm saying that premise isn't for me. Unless Ayame begins calling in sick or some shit, it still feels like weird cuckold stuff but with a lot of extra steps. Or some bastardized version of the purification fetish. In fact, isn't that just what it is? Turning them from a literal will-fuck-for-money whore into someone you could reasonably marry without feeling sick?
>>20954761
But would you ever reciprocate it, knowing what you know? Or would this be a one-sided thing on her end?
>>20954908
Her what

>> No.20954958

>>20954761
I guess if sex isn't personal or impactful in the slightest for an oni, there's no betrayal of any sort but... you want her to fall in love with you, despite knowing that she's currently being dicked down. It's a question of "why her", then.

>> No.20955082

>>20954933
Ayame in this context doesn't care about the money, she doesn't need the money, she has sex because she was asked to, and to her, it doesn't have the same implications it has to us. Even if you were dating, she wouldn't think having sex with you would be intimate either. Maybe that context changes something?

Also, the idea of explaining to Ayame that sex is intimate and her not really getting it but respecting your opinion sounds pretty... nice... but I already have like 4 fics in the work and I can't afford a fifth

>> No.20955245

>>20954933
>some bastardized version of the purification fetish. In fact, isn't that just what it is? Turning them from a literal will-fuck-for-money whore into someone you could reasonably marry without feeling sick?
Sounds like a hot concept all on its own, turning an absolutely ruined whore back into a woman sounds like an interesting inversion.

>> No.20955313
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20955313

>Finana retweeted my story on her NSFW account

>> No.20955360

>>20955082
I guess? It all depends on how willing (You) are to reconcile the idea that sex actually does mean nothing to her due to cultural stuff. But she still loves you, right? What would be the oni equivalent of sex in terms of intimacy?
>>20955245
Purification stuff is kinda underdone. Everyone wants to ruin a person into a horrible degen whore because it's easy. No one wants to try and fap to the arduous task of trying to make her remember love again.
>>20955313
That NSFW account being announced was fucking nuts. Stupid sexy fish.

>> No.20955672

All this 'fixing rrat!Ayame' discussion is helping fuel my Ayame story. I'm on a goddamn roll.

>> No.20955720

>>20955360
>Purification stuff is kinda underdone. Everyone wants to ruin a person into a horrible degen whore because it's easy. No one wants to try and fap to the arduous task of trying to make her remember love again
I suppose it's underdone because corruption is naturally drawn to smutty stuff but purification is more drawn towards it being lighter fluff and romance. Which conceptually makes it pretty great for contrast ,practically doesn't really work if you were already coming from the 'smut' direction. As such it's not really going to be popular since it's existence comes from, for lack of a better word, 'opposition' to its parent genre.
Though if we're on this track, this does sound like a cool concept for a Towa backstory fic where (You) are responsible for why she's such a good girl now when her design points towards a more 'slutty' past.

>> No.20955826

>>20918813
Pretty cute and sexual, great work. I can imagine Ame being suitable for both the dom and sub roles, she's probably very versatile like that. I'm slightly worried for Anon's backdoor at the end, but he's probably into it anyway

>> No.20955863

>>20955720
>Though if we're on this track, this does sound like a cool concept for a Towa backstory fic where (You) are responsible for why she's such a good girl now when her design points towards a more 'slutty' past.
See, now you're onto something.

>> No.20956168

>>20954958
It's not that you want her to fall in love with you. You're just one of her regulars who she ends up developing feelings for of her own accord. going off of the 'she just wants to have fun' angle some anon mentioned earlier, it could potentially lead to her feeling torn between cleaning up her act and 'going legit' or sticking to what she's comfortable with and passing up the opportunity to have something more.

>> No.20956298

>>20955360
>What would be the oni equivalent of sex in terms of intimacy?
It would clearly be shedding blood under the stars in a hotblooded sword fight. That clearly sounds like it would fit in a fluffy fic about making a casual whore fall in love with you. Especially since it would give the writer an excuse to write that hotblooded sword fight like a sex scene when it comes towards Ayame's PoV, with sexual euphemisms being used for the violence currently taking place. Maybe have it be foreshadowed in story by watching an action movie with her but for some reason Ayame was acting like it's a cute romance flick.

>> No.20956363

>>20955672
I hope you're the Cold Air, Hot Blood writer, I really do

>> No.20956374

>>20956168
Alternatively, she eventually works up the courage to confess to you, and you beat the shit out of her for daring to treat you like her equal. As you strike her repeatedly, you endlessly reinforce to her that she's nothing but a dirty street whore and no real man will ever see her as anything but a meat hole.

>> No.20956414

>>20956363
Unfortunately, I'm not. Sorry to disappoint.

>> No.20956421

>>20956363
God, I hope for that to get continued too, so much.

>> No.20956444

>>20956374
why are you like this

>> No.20956501

>>20956374
You're probably memeing, but I would unironically love to read this. That kind of undeserved sadism is satiating on a spiritual level.

>> No.20956558

>>20956298
That sounds really funny but also like something that wouldn't exactly get the pheromones going for anyone that isn't a weeb.

>> No.20956580

>>20956298
>Show me a good time, Anon!
>I'm going to show you a good time alright
>Oh, you handsome bastard, just stab me already!
A fightsexual Ayame would be simultaneously adorable and hysterical. Even better if (you) end up getting a taste for it and start treating fighting like fucking like her.

>> No.20956599

>>20956363
Why do people say this? If someone said this to me and got it wrong that would fucking tank my motivation.

>> No.20956650

>>20956599
We're all cut from the same cloth, Anon, but some anons are more valuable than others.

>> No.20956754
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>>20956599
I mean I don't particularly mind. My motivation is doing fine.

>> No.20956844

>>20956754
SMALLER

>> No.20956917
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20956917

>>20956844
Ok.

>> No.20956970

>>20956917
Micro Mio...I kneel.

>> No.20957110
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20957110

>>20956917
You have to go smaller.

>> No.20957395

>>20955826
Ah, I had no pegging in mind, but you do you.

>> No.20957459

>>20942536
I'd make some adjustments to make your Anon extra frustrated and getting to have sex all the more great.

I'll give it a shot this weekend.

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>>20957110
完敗だ

>> No.20957559

>>20957395
I'm not into any femdom at all, but it's the direction the ending in implying. What is this something for the occasion you have in mind then?

>> No.20957708

>>20957559
The story was meant to be backwards, meaning that the first scene where Ame is riding you comes after the couch event. Something for the ocassion implied the equipment she used to tie your hands.

>> No.20958171

There's not gonna be an anniversary yab right

>> No.20958221

>>20953942
>>20954335
I still don't understand this even if it's a fetish thing. Like what's the 'fetish' here. Girls acting like kids again? Girls connecting to their childhood? Some weird infantilization/age play thing?

>> No.20958227

>>20956599
I guess it would be disheartening to hear something like this, but what can you do?

>> No.20958260

>>20958171
I have an anniversary story written and ready to go, should I post it now or wait till the anniversary proper? It's a little different from your typical /wg/ fic though.

>> No.20958371

>>20958171
Ah crap I still need to finish that fucking anniversary fic. I can finish it in 48 hours ish right?
>>20958260
I think you should wait for the 26th, I'm not about to get two cakes'd again right? Your fic isn't about fubuki visiting you in her rapedungeon to celebrate a year of being together before weird shit starts to happen right?

>> No.20958413

>>20958371
>spoiler
Nooo, it is a very different concept.

>> No.20958450

>>20958371
>>20958413
Also what do you mean by weird shit? Just kinky sex?

>> No.20958549

>>20958450
Let's just say it's 'a little different from your typical /wg/ fic'.

>> No.20958630

>>20958549
Ooooh, maybe you will get two caked, who knows. Not that that's a bad thing IMO.

>> No.20958698

>>20958171
AA will stream and get a message from an author that's overly familiar

>> No.20958710

>>20957708
I see it now. I think you should definitely put in a line break or something to indicate scene shift from the flash forward. I just thought the disconnect between scenes was either a passage of time going from the bed to the couch or you forgot some lines.
Anyway, glad Anon isn't a massive fag who allows pegging

>> No.20958896

>>20958710
I kept the same scene of the dimly lit living room illuminated only by a TV thinking it would tell the reader both events happen in the same period of time, but I guess that's something only I know since I'm the one who wrote it.

I'll try to come up with something later, or maybe just leave it as it is, I know it's not pegging and that's enough for me.

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20959137

>>20948917
t.

>> No.20959181

Literally just add a horizontal line between "I love you too, Ame." and "You clutched Amelia's pudgy belly" and it should be good.

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>>20959181
Ah, but there was a line, I guess rentry's format just swallowed it.

>> No.20959433 [DELETED] 

If you can look me in the eye and tell me you don't want your oshi to experience the tender lovin' that only a pair of soft, pitch-black hands can give her aching nethers, then I don't know what to tell you. Apart from you not respecting your oshi enough to consider her own happiness before yours.

>> No.20959481

>>20959181
>>20959388
Changed it for a bunch of dots (.)

Hope this helps

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>>20950123
Impregnation.
Marriage.
Childbirth.
Monogamous union.

>> No.20959600

>>20959433
Onii-chan, my knees are kneeling by themselves...

>> No.20959641

>>20958413
>>20958630
Strangely enough knowing I'm almost 'competing' against someone on the same prompt is almost motivating. Like a strange need to prove who has the better cake.
>>20959433
Write your own fucking NTR fanfic if you want one.

>> No.20959691

>>20958549
That's the most concerning fucking thing I've read in awhile.

>> No.20959696

>>20959641
t. doesn't respect his oshi

>> No.20959990
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20959990

At what point should a one shot become a series? Because I've started on what was originally planned to be a single story but it's sitting at pic related even though the fucking introduction is just now coming to an end. Judging by the pace it's going at it may well end up at 30k+ words or something ridiculous.

>> No.20960117

>>20959990
You can split it into chapters if you think you've reached a decent stopping point.

>> No.20960158

>>20959641
Really? I don't see it as a competition at all, mainly because I think more stories is never a bad thing but also because the one I wrote was just on a whim and didn't take it too seriously. If you want to make it a competition though I'm down, although my fic might not even be qualified to be added to the archive.

>> No.20960255

>>20959990
I mean that's about the length of a short story story as is, and if you're going longer at some point it merits chapters in order to have natural stopping points since that's what chapters are for...
I think if you're genuinely getting to that point you merit a fucking series entry. Since a secondary purpose for the series sub-archive was to have series distinguished from the normal one shots.
>>20960158
Eh, we'll see when we both post it on the anniversary. Again, I personally find this motivating.

>> No.20960271

>>20960158
It's about authors here isn't it?

>> No.20960694

>>20960271
Sort of, but not really.
>>20960255
I look forward to it.

>> No.20960935

>>20960694
>Sort of, but not really.
We somehow both independently came to the idea of writing a pseudo meta fic about the anniversary didn't we?

>> No.20961177

>>20960935
It seems that way, yeah...

>> No.20961261

>>20960935
>>20961177
You should both kiss now.

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>>20960117
>>20960255
Yeah, you're probably right. If it gets too long I'll look for a way to split it up, but will probably release all the chapters at once. I really don't want to start another WIP series where I periodically release chapters, doing that seems to slow me down.

>> No.20962085

>>20961921
Devil thighs...

>> No.20962216
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>>20962085
3D Towa is quite special

>> No.20963499

>>20962216
I can't claim to know much about Towa besides now knowing that I want to fuck her. Jesus.

>> No.20963669
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20963669

>>20963499
Just debiru things.

>> No.20963770
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20963770

>>20963499
Yeah she's sex.

>> No.20964235

I didn't realise Holocalypse had a Christmas chapter so I read it just then and fuck me, that was some feel good shit. Perfect combination of comedy and wholesome stuff, even though some parts were a bit rushed. The writing at the beginning was good and I love the mental image of some big, gruff, angry guy wearing a goofy santa hat. Ironically, my favourite part was the Rushia part... The music at the end was a nice touch too, I wish more fics did that. I have to ask though, do the depressing lyrics of 'Snowflakes' mean anything to the story or is the music just there to set the mood?

>> No.20965607

>>20963770
>Pantyshot
Sold.
>Pg.9 after 30m

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>>20918317
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6Cb9QHx4cNHvqxtMKoFlgL_ZiF1LwPQShQfi0j7cydEVDKNC3Ltc4f95kYmpn3fCup9q4mwL4djRI/pub

I went and finished the last two chapters of Love Me, Love Me, Love Me. A happy ending as always. It ends a bit abrupt but honestly I'm just glad to be over with it.

>> No.20966321
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>>20918370
Winning a bet against Yagoo, you get one of the holo's to be your live-in maid for a week. Expecting Aqua, and fully planning to breed the autist, you end up getting Haachama.

>> No.20966421

>>20966321
>you get Haachama instead of Aqua
I want a refund.

>> No.20966525

>>20965868
Goddamn, I'm repeating myself here >>20934864
but your writing has such good fucking impact. Love Me*3 is such a goddamn trip, it's a joy to read and the emotional hits it does are so fucking good. It's great to see you back, you know how to make your fics hit have that realistic emotional impact. Genuinely wonder how much research you put into this? It feels genuine enough from my casual knowledge of toxic dieting.

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20967170

>>20964235
Hey, thanks, I appreciate the compliments. I also agree that it was rushed, absolutely. Iirc I wrote the whole thing in like two days or something to get it done before Christmas.
>do the depressing lyrics of 'Snowflakes' mean anything to the story or is the music just there to set the mood?
To set the mood sure, but also foreshadowing.
>>20963669
I swear to god I am going to incinerate that fat fuck.
>>20965868
Hot damn, I'm envious of how fast you write. I don't think the ending was too abrupt, it wrapped everything up pretty nicely. This whole thing was great at conveying darker, more realistic themes and I'm all for it. Nice job.

>> No.20967272
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20967272

>>20966321
>That visible pudge
>Fat pussy
>Nipples under hearts
>Thick thighs
This is the single most erotic Haachama image I've seen. Holy FUCKING shit

>> No.20967337

>>20967170
>spoiler
Oh no...I don't like this.

>> No.20967613

>>20967337
I should add that I put that music in about a day after publishing the story. While I had planned to add it from the start, in my rush to finish the story it slipped my mind.

>> No.20968748

>>20959553
>Breaking Mori into your woman before raising a family with her.
Need.

>> No.20969764
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>>20966525
I'm so glad you liked it and that you're glad to have my back. Means a lot to me.

All of my research is first hand experience. I did try to keep Moona as in character as possible while also illustrating how it changes you. Turns you into a very mean, ugly person to be around.

I hope I succeeded in that. I know the last few times people said it was too much of my just recounting things and not enough chuuba personality.

>>20967170
I'm so glad you think so. Was worried it ended a bit sudden. I'm so glad.

Thanks a lot. I very much appreciate it.

>> No.20970608

>>20969764
>I hope I succeeded in that. I know the last few times people said it was too much of my just recounting things and not enough chuuba personality.
Honestly a lot of the warped personality complaints were also from the fact that the altered context for the characters, i.e. them being your mother, your sister, your mother's friend kind of warps the characters way too much that they can easily become inserts for your trauma. Meanwhile Love Me * 3 keeps any change "justified" by still being within that strike zone of characterization. I.e Is Kronii a toxic dieter? Probably not. Can I see her being one? Yes.
As for how believable the diet culture presented in the fic is, as a layman in the field, shit absolutely feels real.

>> No.20970872

I feel a bit lost. What anniversary? The thread anniversary? But... how do you make a fic based on that?

>> No.20971104

>>20970872
Find out in two days.

>> No.20971178
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>>20971104
Is this a threat?

>> No.20971217

>>20971104
You keep making it sound scarier!

>> No.20971280

>>20970872
/wg/ became /wg/ on the 26th of march 2021, before that it was just post chuubas being abusive.
As for the anniversary prompt it's this post >>19907800 and from the current thread it looks like the two anons that picked it up both had about the same idea about where to take it.

>> No.20971685
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>>20971280
> Fubuki
Of course it is

>> No.20971755

>>20958221
I don't know how to explain. Grown up girls playing dolls and/or toys make me rock hard.

>> No.20971825

>>20971755
What if the girls turned into small versions of themselves and someone played with them as if they were toys?

>> No.20971836

>>20971685
Sorry Chadkonbu run this fucking thread, cazzie.

>> No.20972020 [SPOILER] 
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>>20971836
Maybe later cuckcorn, she's busy with me right now

>> No.20972032

>>20971825
That sounds really hot too actually. Espesically if we could know their thoughts. I would like to see that...

>> No.20972061

>>20972020
I made this post.

>> No.20972091

>>20972020
>t. Me

>> No.20972223

>>20972020
>>20972061
>>20972091
I made all three of these posts.

>> No.20972375

>>20971685
In fairness the only other chuuba that would feel right as the anniversary girl would be Korone since Mr Koro abusing their viewers is probably what lead to the creation of the abuse threads.

>> No.20972397

>>20971755
>Barging into Selen's room and catching her play house with Sanrio dolls and Bionicles.

>> No.20972410 [SPOILER] 
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>>20972061
>>20972091
>>20972223
Fellas, fellas. Why not just share?

But her raw tight fox pussy is mine

>> No.20972810

>>20972410
Sorry, Friend is already pregnant with sextuplets' worth of my Mexican half-breeds. Get your own chuuba.

>> No.20972854

>>20972410
Keep your sissy dick away from there. Use her armpit or something.

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>>20972810
Ever heard of the sperm competition theory? Those kids might not be yours pal. Not after I was done with her.

>>20972854
Ya know, jacking onto her armpit sounds pretty nice too. Seeing it slowly drip down her sideboob and mix with her sweat, telling her to close it so you can see her reaction of embarrassment and disgust, feeling her slimy pit filled with thick baby batter, her flustered reaction when you tell her to stay the whole day like that, periodically stroking out another load to blow onto her steamy armpit swimming in your genes. Pretty hot

>> No.20973691

https://twitter.com/AnriOkita_real/status/1506679856133984256?t=L5G7xcTFnBMUl1crqTkQEQ&s=09

For anybody that needs confirmation that pregnancy does make women's tits even larger and more succulent. Make sure to include it in your stories!

>> No.20973700

>>20973516
Sorry mudrat, Fubuki’s only for people who can write her well

>> No.20973762

>>20973516
Yknow, I was just messing with you, now I'm horny. Fuck you

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>>20973700
>>>>>>>>>

>> No.20973919

>>20973691
Damn those are big.

>> No.20973971
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>>20967272
Allow me to raise you with this soundpost.

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>>20973762
It's what I do. Must be nice to fuck Fubuki though, I bet she'd be totally down for letting you do her raw and fill her up with a thick creampie, spreading her pussy after the fact as she watches the cum ooze out from her filled up slit and panting, telling you that you cum too much, laughing, then giving you a kiss, before falling down onto the bed and cuddling with you for the night.

>> No.20974288

>>20974042
>slit
Dude you've been told you use overuse it how the fuck have you not noticed yet

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>>20974042
Oh no you don't, hands off my dick. You won't get me this time fucker, I'm going to bed. Your siren call falls on deaf ears. Ignore the tent being pitched.
>>20973971
GOD
DAMNIT SHE'S SO HOT

>> No.20974755

>>20974400
You should listen to Fubuki ASMR as you go to bed. Feel her soft voice whispering in your ears and pretend she's saying dirty words as she strokes your cock. Or maybe just pretend she's talking about her day and riding you passionately, occasionally telling you to stop because it feels too good and she doesn't want to cum just yet, then returning to talking about her day with you.

>> No.20974790

>>20974288
'Vagina' is such a lovely, thoroughly objectifying word too. People should use it more.

>> No.20977949

>>20974755
A good idea to pocket for later

>> No.20978302

>>20972020
>>20972061
>>20972091
>>20972223
All of these posts are me.

>> No.20978424

Hagchads, what did you think of the latest chapter of Present Day, Present Time?

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>>20978424
Well, not speak on behalf of all other Hagchads but...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I WANT EM I NEED I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT 'EM

YAGOO PLEASE! I'VE SENT EMAILS! I'VE SENT LETTERS! I'VE EVEN HAD A SMALL PLANE WRITE A MESSAGE IN THE SKY LET ME IN I'LL KEEP THEM HAPPY AND PREGNANT!

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The Japanese have pulled through for me
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=16273726

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>>20978424
Hag sex… hag pregnancy…

>> No.20980253

>>20971104
>Anon orgy is happening one way or another

>> No.20980297

>>20978424
Needs marriage correction

>> No.20980797

>>20979347
I'm guessing this would be more erotic if I knew how to read moonrunes.

>> No.20981101

>>20980797
It's a cuck fic. Delivered in kind of a script format, so I'm SURE Deepl is just butchering what must otherwise be an absolutely astounding work.

:^)

>> No.20981245

>>20974042
Anon, stop. Getting that kind of boner can't be healthy.

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>>20981101
>deepl
It's not all too eloquently written. Simple enough for me and my limited Nip to beat off to it at least.
Searching Pixiv novels has been a big breakthrough though. I've found hundreds of other stories with a similar premise. Only one other Holo though, a short vignette about Okayu

>> No.20982424

(You) are best friends with %chuuba_name%, who you have a huge crush on but never let her know. She is, apparently, repulsed by sex and is pretty distraught about it, so you, as a good friend, decide to help her.
With the use of a really obscure massage technique you help her finally lose herself in lust and unwind.

>> No.20982554

>>20982424
It turns out the reason she was repulsed by sex was because she didn't like her body, and as a tent pitches between her legs during the massage, you soon find out why. Now she's aroused, and you have no way to escape. "You did this, now be responsible and take care of it"

>> No.20982745

>>20982424
>Sex massage
YES PLEASE

https://files.catbox.moe/g4oxvs.jpg

Not feeling particularly testy with meidos today

>> No.20983130

>>20982745
Is that really the best massage pic you could come up with?

>> No.20983319

>>20983130
The best one I had on hand. Here's the whole thing it came from!

https://exhentai.org/g/2120236/388232ff7c/

>> No.20983516

>>20983319
link doesnt load

>> No.20983631
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20983631

>>20983516
>he doesn't know
You will get no more responses from me, get another 40 posts from elsewhere

>> No.20984233

>>20983516
tiduslaughing.wav

>> No.20984270

>>20983516
You need to take out the "https" beginning part from the link for it to work

>> No.20984374

>>20984270
still not working, am i doing something wrong?

>> No.20984449

>>20984374
Link works for me. Are you sure you took everything out? Remove the whole thing before "exhentai" and try again.

>> No.20984538

>>20984449
nope not working, guess ill give up

>> No.20984809

>>20983130
NTA
Can't get the catbox to work from phone
Basically search "murasaki_shion massage" on Sankaku, there should be only one picture in the result
The image in question, the idea of someone being at the mercy on pleasure, makes me diamonds

>> No.20985956

>>20918370
A story or series in which the HoloMembers exist and are hunted down by the military for their supernatural traits and powers. You are an agent of the government who is against these operations who ends up getting too attached to the girls, and in a one man coup, you decide to free one of the Holos from their prison of constant torture and experiments. From there on, you escape with her, but with the goal in mind to eventually free them all with the help of the chuuba you saved.

>> No.20986116

>>20984538
People here love using obscure sites because it makes them feel part of a secret club. You can find the image on rule34 by just searching what >>20984809 said.

>> No.20986239

>>20986116
thanks, i couldnt find senkoku but rule34 is pretty easy. the picture wasnt worth the effort after all

>> No.20986267

>>20984538
That guy was fucking with you. You actually need to change the /g/ to a /t/

>> No.20986387

>>20986267
Don't actually do it, you'll get a virus

>> No.20987055
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20987055

Why do (You) gatekeep porn anyway? Why can't we all just jerk off together in peace?

>> No.20987172

so fucking annoying holy shit

>> No.20987390

>>20987172
Sir, you need to calm down and take your meds. Nobody here is your enemy, there's no reason to be upset

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>>20987390
Pay the schizo no mind. I don’t like pornspam too much either but I guarantee you if people had been linking stories or greentexting he’d be shitting on them with the same vitriol he uses for off-topic talk.

>> No.20988480

>>20988279
You dislike porn spam as in talking about porn, or as in horny posting with cropped porn?

Just need to know if you're a homosexual or not

>> No.20988612

>>20988279
Didn't want to give the mudrat a (You), had nothing to do with the pornspam

>> No.20990409

>>20918819
>Mio fluff
Thank you so much for writting that. I really liked it

>> No.20990684

>>20988480
I am very much the opposite of homosexual.

I just don't like spam. Hornyposting/greentexting isn't spam since it's writing fiction, which is ultimately the purpose of this entire thread.

>> No.20991473

>>20978424
It was very fucking hot. At this point the formula for how it's going to go on in the future is probably going to be previous + new girl, new girl solo chapter, then new girl + next girl but you know what it's a hot as fuck smut fic with some of the best hag sex I've read.

>> No.20991526

>>20991473
I just want the pregnancies to get bigger.

>> No.20991568

>>20918819
>PD, PT:istry
Thanks anon for writing that. Amazing as always.
Cant wait for the continuation

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Requesting Suisex ideas to close off the thread. In context, you just met her, so no lovers stuff

>> No.20992561

>>20991526
Bigger?

>> No.20992850

>>20992553
Suisei's sexual frustration has reached an all time high, leading to her sexually assault the next person she sees. Could be (You) or another chuuba.

>> No.20993503

>>20971280
No, mine’s not based on that prompt. It’s not even centred around the anniversary, it’s more just a celebration of /wg/ in general.

>> No.20993979

>>20993503
> a recounting of all the events of /wg/, good and bad
Kino, looking forward to it

>> No.20993986

>>20992553
>you just met her
...
But she's met you a thousand times already. This time Suisei's not gonna lose to you! You may not remember her but she does, and she'll make you remember now.

>> No.20994131

>>20992561
More babies per pregnancy. Bigger bellies. More lactation. God I love pregnant women.

>> No.20994135

>>20993986
So like you got amnesia or something?

>> No.20994209

>>20994135
Could be you're a playboy and Suisei is such a pathetic, dead fish fuck you really can't remember her among the dozens of women you go through per month.

Alternatively, timeloop story.

>> No.20994625

>>20994135
Maybe, or maybe she keeps going back in time because she can't seem to win against you no matter what happens, even when she's stacked the deck against you so much to plan it out she can't seem to avoid falling in love.

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>>20992553
despite all the memes, Suisei gets depicted more like an obsessive yandere than a psychopath

just take a page out of American Psycho: Suisei talking up her accomplishments as a vtuber to some escort that has no idea wtf she's talking about, she goes to town on him while eyefucking herself in the mirror, and releases some pent-up frustrations on him

>> No.20995279

>>20992553
>you just met her, so no lovers stuff
She's a whore and you're desperate to get laid. Nothing more and nothing less.

>> No.20995381

>>20993979
Uh... not quite that either. Good idea though, maybe I’ll add a little section for the timeline.

>> No.20995402

>>20994785
I mean in fairness the obsessive yandere thing might not come from memes but from wanting Suisei gf that's also totally into you.
Utter psychopath is a characterization that's not exactly attractive to the, for lack of a better term, 'waifu' oneshots a lot of the fics here are.

>> No.20995465

>>20995279
This. Pick this one.

>> No.20995477

>>20994131
Noted

>> No.20995542

>>20995402
Speak for yourself. I would love to see an american psycho like suisei.

>> No.20995599

>>20995402
Really? The conclusion I've personally reach is that anons don't mind complete headcases so long as the headcase loves (You). Suisei could quite literally rape and behead other girls in her spare time, and as long as she loved (You) there would still be anons ITT who'd enjoy the fic. If the abusefics are anything to go by, she doesn't even have to treat (You) right, so long as she stays with you.

Conversely, any kind of NTR is enough to turn the entire thread against a story.

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>>20995542

>> No.20995791

>>20986116
t. someone who couldn't get through the club doors

>> No.20995829

New thread
>>20995507

>> No.20995870

>>20995687
Now this I like.

>> No.20995896

>>20995599
>Conversely, any kind of NTR is enough to turn the entire thread against a story.
Speak for yourself you lily-livered faggot. Some of us are mature enough not to chimp out over something we don't enjoy.

>> No.20996297

>>20995829
>using a whore
But why?

>> No.20996346

>>20995599
I mean when I say utter psychopath, I mean it in the "doesn't even love (You)" sense. The trait's not attractive in that case since at the very least liking you at least at the start is one of the main things that start the fantasy.

>> No.20996487

>>20995402
Yeah, I get it. Though the guy did say "no lovers stuff".
So I thought it'd be fun. I find something hot about the whole concept of her essentially using a whole person as a masturbatory tool, and you don't really get that from yanderes.

>> No.20997199

>>20996487
I mean it in the name, yandere's do need an affectionate dere dere side in order to be one. Though I guess there is a certain appeal in not being the yandere's "one and only" but somehow still being able to "use" them. Though I guess them "using" you would be more in tune with the fantasy.

>> No.20997605

>>20974790
NTA but there are words in the English language to describe the vagina other than the aforementioned and 'slit'.

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