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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>20059607

>> No.20119445
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.20119528
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.20119913

Holy fuck that thread went to shit in the second half

>> No.20119956
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Unprotected pirate hag nun sex...

Incredibly fertile pirate hag nun pregnancy...

>> No.20120060

>>20119956
OP can you not samefag? Or is that asking too much.

>>20119913
Yeah, you got a bunch of insectfags forcing their fetishes to the rest with a few shitheads enabling them.

>> No.20120145

>>20119913
>NOOO DON'T DISCUSS WRITING AND WHAT MAKES THINGS CLICK IN THE WRITING THREAD
Get over yourself. Go play a game or something you crybaby faggot, Christ.

>> No.20120215

>>20120145
>Posting megas of bugfucking game torrents
you get over yourself bugfucker

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>>20120060
Samefagging implies deceit. I am very openly posting nun Marines.

>> No.20120694

>>20120145
Just ignore him. It's not like the loser has any actual say in what gets discussed here lol

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>>20119528
Kidnapping Suisei and forcing her to be the Prophet of the newly established Church of the Comet. She quickly warms up to the worship

>> No.20120982

>>20120694
The single rule in the Archive is to just ignore writing you don't like. I get that's hard sometimes, and that some people go out of their way to be inflammatory, but in this case it was literally just fetish discussion.

>> No.20121105

>>20120944
I want Suisei to purify my sins via blowjob.

>> No.20121145

>>20120982
Yeah faggot and I said I'd be waiting for the next thread and I fucking did. I let you have your fucking conversation, go back and continue it if you actually care.

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>>20121145
I'm not one of the bugfuckers though? You seem upset. Incidentally shitting up this thread complaining when the autosaged one is still up is honestly even worse content than Pekofag going on about bugs.

>> No.20121367

>>20120944
I wish I was an altar boy who gets molested by her before and after sermons....

>> No.20121408
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>>20121145

>> No.20121488

>>20121340
>even worse content than Pekofag going on about bugs.
Ironic considering how often you enable him

>> No.20121981

>>20119528
(You) think you have a haha funny both of you pretend to be assholes relationship with a chuuba but unbeknownst to you she isn't pretending and actually hates you. The only thing is she doesn't know you're pretending.

>> No.20122075

>>20121488
Ignore him, he won’t take responsibility of his action.

>> No.20122135

>>20119528
Cooking food on top of Kiara's sleeping body onegai

>> No.20122259
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>>20121981
Sounds like a heartbreaker. Imagine thinking it’s just bantz and then (You) confess to her and it turns out she really does think you’re a maggot. Damn.

>> No.20122392

>>20122135
>Kiara waking up to finding you cooking her breakfast on her tummy
Could potentially be really cute desu

>>20122259
>Bad end to Hating You, Hating Me
Could potentially be really sad desu

>> No.20122644

>>20122392
>Kiara waking up to finding you cooking her breakfast on her tummy
I first read this as "in her tummy" and imagined a baby with a camping grill frying up bacon and eggs in her womb

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>>20122644
>Kiara asking for you to make her breakfast
>You putting your ear on her swollen tummy, and joking that your daughter is making it for her in there

>> No.20122842

>>20122755
Orange woman marriage.......... Orange woman seggs........ Orange woman impregnation......... Orange woman happy family.........

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>>20122842
KIARA I KNOW YOU ARE /HERE/ PLEASE MARRY ME I LOVE YOU SO MUCH, I'LL COOK ALL YOUR MEALS SO YOU NEVER STOP EATING AND HAVE FAINTING SPELLS AGAIN

>> No.20123154

>>20122959
Nice try Kiara, I know this is just a metapost so you can attempt to get me to back off. Fortunately for you like a bloodhound I've already caught the smell of your cunt and I won't stop until I've pumped twelve children into you in the span of less that 8 years

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>>20123154
Back off the chicken is for me only

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>>20123235
Stand down, gamer.

>> No.20123489

>>20122959
>>20123154
>>20123235
>>20123350
>these guys discussing hypotheticals
>meanwhile Kiara is birthing my daughters as we speak

>> No.20124024

>>20123489
I think you should check who the mother of your daughters are Anon because Kiara is actually giving me the most insane sloppy head as I type this. Seriously it sounds like two deflated wet bouncy balls hitting against each other it's insane.

>> No.20124128

>>20124024
Nope, that's definitely Kiara giving birth to our fourth daughter (out of the six in her belly). You should really double-check who's giving you head.

>> No.20124224

>>20124128
Six daughters? Anon that's gay as hell.

>> No.20124474

>>20124128
Imagine not wanting sons that you mold into little versions of you that treat you as a role model.

>> No.20124596

>>20124474
This. Wanting a strong lineage of sons that you raise to go forth and conquer, spreading your blood through as much of the following generations as possible is the straightest manliest thing a man can want.

>> No.20124691

>>20124474
>Not a harem of daughters so the Oyakodon can be never ending, done because you want the girls to be Phoenix's all and never be watered down to the point where they're mortal and tragically pass
It's like you don't love your family or something

>> No.20124790

>>20124691
>Incest deformities after one generation
Yeah deliverance-esque Pheonix monstrosities would be so cool anon

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>>20124691
>this is what anon's grandkids would look like

>> No.20125002

>>20124790
Either I've got an unending tide of loving daughters, or a horde of unkillable monstrosities made by having loving sex with my immortal wife and daughters that I use to rule the world

Either way massive win for me

>> No.20125073

>>20124928
Kiara's phoenix bloodline prevents the degeneration one might fear from generation after generation of oyakodon.

>> No.20125411

>>20125073
Sounds like cope and trying to escape the consequences of your actions.

>> No.20125631

>>20125073
Yeah until your human genetics come into play retard. Even if the kids are half pheonix they're still half human as well. And if you have oyakodon kids then they'll be 3/4 human. There's literally no escaping the fact that they'll be disgusting incest monstrosities by the time the third generation comes around.

>> No.20125677

>>20124691
>Not wanting to have a legion of daughters to Oyakodon then letting the last egg be a son and molding him into all the best traits that can constitute a human as to create a superhuman powerhouse that will conquer the entire world and retrain humanity as the new patriarch of mankind.

fag

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>>20125411
>noooo you can't just oyakodon your daughters over centuries and rule over an immortal bloodline of fire goddesses that controls the world with an iron fist!!!
>it's not fair!!!

>> No.20125881

>>20125749
Pretty sure phoenixes aren’t immune to the dangers of incest.

>> No.20125904

>>20125881
Uhhhhh.....Source?

>> No.20126023

>>20125749
>over centuries
You're still human tard. You'll die and leave your bloodline to have to deal with your massive incest deformities fuck up for all eternity since they'll be immortal.

>> No.20126270

I have seen dumber arguments than this. I can’t think of any off the top of my head, but I know I have.

>> No.20126309

>>20126270
4chan's all about them dumb arguments.

>> No.20126544

O-oh... I just realized I actually did sort of make a Luna "rape" fic in the past... Shit. Can't meme about it anymore.

>> No.20126554

>>20125904
He has nothing.

I however have spawned from the matter of my brain a firm statement of fact regarding both phoenix resistance to incest, and the immortality-granting properties of phoenix pussy juice. Who would you rather believe?

>> No.20126568

>>20126544
The fuck do you mean?

>> No.20126636

>>20125904
>>20126554
Jesus, finish highschool before talking.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inbreeding

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>>20126636
Thanks for no new information retard

>> No.20126912

>>20126568
Towa technically never got Luna's consent to do the stuff she did or tried to do to her so it's technically rape. The worst kind of rape.

>> No.20127101

>>20126698
Are you just pretending or are you actually this retarded?

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>>20119528
Since Crossick appears to be on thin ice I want a fic of fucking either of them to cuck the other one

>> No.20127187

>>20127132
Why are they on thin ice? I never kept up with them but I thought they were cute as fuck
>vomitnurse
kek

>> No.20127370

>>20127187
>Tomoe seemingly not interested in Kana's return
>Was getting close to another Niji while she was gone
>Kana has that image made for her return stream
All just rrats obviously, but it makes me hard to think about. Doesn't help that they're both pure sex anyway

>> No.20127683

>>20127370
Yeah, just rrat content for now, although I can see why it's suspicious. Would suck to see 'em break up.

WOULD love to fuck Sukoya, though, even with the vomit fetish.

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>>20127132
I have been toying with this coomer prompt
>(You) are Sukoya's new bf/Master who had been dating for a while but can't keep up with her freaky kink with needle and vomit plays are a little too much
>afraid you will dump her, Sukoya sold out her ex-gf Tomoe to you as another slave in the bedroom
>Sukoya arranged a date with Tomoe while the other got her hope up that they would get back together only to get roofied on the date
>she woke up to see Kana getting fucked by (You), got heartbroken and you proceeded to fuck her with Kana's help, awakening her masochistic side as just another sow
>they finally got back together, only not as lovers but sister-slaves united under the dick of one man.
I really want to fuck Crossick (both of them)

>> No.20127846

>>20127742
>awakening her masochistic side as just another sow
Isn't Tomoe heavily a dom?

>> No.20127884

>>20127846
Yes, she is. So it stands to reason she must be made to lose to the cock.

>> No.20127997

>>20127884
I do like the idea of a fighter.

>> No.20128063

>>20125749
>Dude, what if I mix my non-magical human genes with a creature that’s magic in nature.
Do you even think for a second?

>> No.20128095

>>20127846
>>20127884
>a dom
She RP'd as a dom yet all her talk showed that she's really easy to succumb to pressure from her peers or parents. Sukoya could just easily push her into becoming another man's bitch that vomiting-fetish-masochist want

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>>20119445
Ascension

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQgFjla2n2ob_9HEs7Z1OVpgSqUIkhIO3InHn7C1tIs0xTFNHQZJVosG4AH6Jqy0RFFEWjiOeicUFM-/pub

Tags: Rushia, Amelia

>> No.20128247

>>20128185
>Rushia, Amelia
Well you don't see these names together every day.

>> No.20128273

>>20128185
>Rushia
And just like that, I’m not reading it.

>> No.20128336

>>20128273
Anon are you some sort of Cover shill? We're not going to unperson Rushia from fucking fanfiction just because she got fired.

>> No.20128376

>>20128095
I'm pretty interested in Tomoe. The, uhh, vomit fetish kinda turns me off Sukoya. She's hot, but... I dunno, if she suddenly wanted me to eat her upchuck, or barfed during doggystyle...
Down goes the boner.

>> No.20128409

>>20128336
>Anon are you some sort of Cover shill?
Nope, just not going to give that traitorous backstabbing bitch the time of day.

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>>20128409
Fanfic characters are NOT their roommates.

>> No.20128491

>>20128436
NTA but that's cuck cope

>> No.20128548

>>20128185
I like it but kind of weird that Amelia's time travel is real yet Rushia barely showss any of her necromancer power.

>> No.20128564

>>20128491
Say what you will, I still think disgraced!Rushia is kino.

>> No.20128593

>>20128564
You know what’s even more Kino? Forgetting that backstabbing bitch.

>> No.20128599

>>20128376
Her interest isn't in the physical vomit, but the vulnerable state people are in during and just after having vomited

>>20128185
I can't say much other than I really liked this. It was an interesting premise delivered well.

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>>20128593
I fall firmly on the side of things that encourage more writing about Holos, as opposed to bitching about events we no longer have any control of.

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/37554799/chapters/94097530

>> No.20128750

>>20128599
Is that what it was? That's somehow harder to wrap my mind around, but she's suddenly become a lot hotter in my eyes.

>> No.20128782

>>20128638
Based opinion

>> No.20128824

Lutosmutguy, how's that fic coming along? I've been waiting with my dick in hand for quite a while now and I'm starting to get hungry

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>>20128665
You should reply to the anchor for visibility, anon. Do you not want this archived?

>> No.20128866

>>20128185
>Shotgun
>Bullet
Now I'm no /k/ fag but...

>> No.20128906

>>20128638
Sounds like fancuck cope. Rushia is nothing more than a whore who was willing to stab everyone she knew in the back. Toss her ass to the streets and forget about her.

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>>20128866
Double dubs of truth.

>> No.20128915

>>20128866
Is it worth the read despite such a glaring flaw?

>> No.20128940

>>20128915
NTA, but hard to get around that, to be honest.

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>>20128185
>>20128866
IT'S LITERALLY IN THE NAME OF THE GUN ANON, EXPLAIN YOURSELF

>> No.20129110

>>20128953
Doesn't a shotgun fire shells? Or pellets? Is it really in the name?

>> No.20129144

>>20128185
Some finnicky tenses aside, I think the ending is a good hit.

>> No.20129254

>>20128638
>I fall firmly on the side of things that encourage more writing about Holos
A respectable thing to do, however, Rushia isn’t part of Hololive anymore. So how about write about members who are still in Hololive.

>> No.20129258

>>20129110
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shot_(pellet)

A shotgun does not fire shells. Shells are canisters loaded with shot (lead pellets), and sometimes with a slug (a solid chunk of metal). The shell is just the casing and it's expelled after firing.

>> No.20129264

>>20129110
A shotgun fires shells, yes. Know what the shells are filled with?

Shot.

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>>20128750
Yeah, the story as she told it was she went out for drinks with a girl and got drunk because she was nervous. Then while she was dry heaving after drinking so much the girl showed her how to properly force herself to vomit, with Kana realizing when she woke up the next morning that she liked the feeling of being that open to someone

Coomer in me thinks about how that a girl post vomiting isn't that different from a girl post hard face fuck in those terms

>> No.20129404

>>20129311
That's how she got the vomit fetish tag? Sounds like she just really liked the vulnerable emotional connection. What a sweetheart. Needs some good rape correction - with irrumatio, as you suggest.

>> No.20129577

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSnEBxQYo4Wl7qftm-0hwteSqFChTW0Pu-PzX_pWNGWH9I80G1NF08U_elLBDGa3ExTJxp3g3FnX6Z9/pub

>> No.20129630

>>20128185
>Breaking and entering into any house in America
Man Rushia really didn't do her research, did she

>> No.20129674

>>20128845
It doesn't matter because it's already there.
Although I can't reasonably expect somebody else to predict the right tags when I didn't provide any, I am surprised and disappointed that both 'horror' and 'short' are inaccurate. It's neither.

>> No.20129681

>>20129577
That's one hell of a line to start with, anon.

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>>20129404
>being a fellow med student with Kana, who's lonely having to do LDR with Tomoe
>Become friends because she's smart and helps you study and prepare for tests
>One night you blow off steam and get shit-faced at a party, only for Kana to take care of you and help you when you vomit, unintentionally planting the first seed of her interest in you
>She accidentally catches you face-fucking a girl, and becomes instantly enraptured seeing what the girl is like once you finish
>Fingers herself silly on the phone with Tomoe, guiltily thinking of you the entire time
>to celebrate passing your exams, she takes the leap and offers you her primo throat pussy

>> No.20130041

>>20129740
That makes me feel sorry for Tomoe. Fuck cheaters.

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>>20130041
>Fuck cheaters.
Literally what his prompt is about

>> No.20130155

>>20130041
She would be happy once she pledged herself to the same dick that fucked Sukoya

>> No.20130160

>>20130067
Well, I suppose it is, come to think of it. I'd go to town on the bitch's mouth then tell Tomoe afterwards.

>> No.20130568

damn this thread won't even last until tomorrow night

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>>20130568

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>>20130628
He might just be amazed that we have actual activity beyond schizos replying to themselves in a desperate bid to get the thread to autosage.

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>>20130568
Fuck, this reminded of me something. When I came over to my nan for a week I challenged myself to post 3 stories, no matter how big or small. I ended up starting three stories... and not finishing any of em for a total of 5K words just sitting in the bank...

The deadline is in 19 hours, minus my sleep I'm about to have, 7 hours... I can do it... r-right anons?

>> No.20130798

>>20128638
>Mori
Of course you would have such a cuck opinion.

>> No.20130812

>>20130797
No. Give up.

>> No.20130823

>>20129577
Giantic line breaks and absolutely fucking daunting first line aside, this was strangely...cute? Shion's teasing was endearing, and the protagonist was written in a fairly convincing way relative to their position and discussed feelings on life and their country. An interesting story.
Also, >>20119445

>> No.20130945

>>20129674
Do you really not consider that ending to be horrific?

>> No.20130989

>>20128185
Well this short story came out of nowhere. Very well written and compelling to boot.
That fucking ending is really good as well, can't really complain about it other than I feel like it could have stretched that false hope given to her a bit longer to add impact.

>> No.20131326

>>20130797
Don’t force yourself, that’ll only lead to burnout and rushed stories. Take a break and finish them some other time.

>> No.20131437

>>20130797
>When I came over to my nan for a week I challenged myself to post 3 stories
So, instead of spending time with your nan, your own family, you would rather spend it wasting on writing fanfictions?

>> No.20132352

>>20131437
If his nan is anything like mine was, she spends half her time praying loudly and the other half watching TV. Her satisfaction derives from knowing anon is there keeping her company on the other side of the living room, not from having riveting conversations with him.

>> No.20132512

Is there anything /comfy/ to read from lately? I am cleaning my room and it had so much dust it triggered my allergy. The meds are putting me to sleep.

>> No.20132561

>>20132352
Sounds exactly like my nan then. She's just happy I come over just to spend time with her even though I stay in another room by myself most of the time. Really makes me regret not spending more time with her now that she's gone and I spend my time writing chuuba fanfics. God I miss her.

>> No.20132588

>>20132512
Define comfy. Recent hag drops have basically been nothing but lactation and nursing handjobs, which is comfy in a NSFW way.

Fluff has been a bit scarce, though, particularly SFW fluff.

>> No.20133091

>>20129577
Oddly cute and quite compelling, but feels incomplete.
Like the prologue for something bigger but just the prologue and not even the inciting incident.

>> No.20133138

>>20132352
>>20132561
Sounds like you guys don't have a close relationship with your family

>> No.20134472

I find the fact that hololive subjection's entry in the archive is mispelled as hololive subjugation very funny.

>> No.20134537

>>20134472
Is it? Looks fine to me.

>> No.20134687

>>20134472
I find the fact that the human arsehole is colloquially called the brown eye despite it actually being closer to reddish-pink

>> No.20134777

>>20134687
What the fuck are you on about.

>> No.20134828

>>20134777
I'm talking about human arsehole and how the fact that it's colloquially called the brown eye is weird when it's actually closer to reddish-pink

>> No.20135008

>>20134687
>>20134828
Dude, fuck off.

>> No.20135032

>>20135008
You're a human arsehole

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WE NEED THAT HAG ORGY STORY SOON AAAAA

>> No.20137533

>>20137496
He's fucking dead, dude. The Russians killed him. Botan killed him.

>> No.20137707

>>20137496
One day, Anon. One day.

>> No.20138121

>>20137496
The closest replacement we have is Present Day Present Time's story goal of impregnating (most of) the hags.

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>>20137533
>The Russian invasion of Ukraine is an elaborate cover for Botan's Spetnaz unit to take out Hag Orgy Anon before he can publish his story

>> No.20138181

>>20138125
Were her moans really that fucking embarrassing?!

>> No.20138401

>>20138181
Russian Intelligence Agents managed to get an early copy of the next part.
It was so erotic that Botan needed to stage the invasion in order to cover the kidnapping of the author; if the other Hags had known they would have done it first.

>> No.20139823

>>20132588
SFW comfy, maybe with some NSFW mixed in. Like Lazing Catto. But it's fine even without NSFW as long as it's overall warm and fuzzy

>> No.20139912

>>20139823
Shit out of luck then

>> No.20140120

>>20139823
A sheep's warmth will always be one of the best comfiest SFW fluff fics here for me. It always manages to evoke warm feelings in me so maybe you can check it out as well?

>> No.20140623

>>20119528
I so desperately want to lap away at Botan's anus like a child to a lollipop, probing its furled wrinkles with my tongue and dipping for chocolate sauce.

Please, somebody - anybody - describe for me the taste and texture of her plump, vintage pucker.

>> No.20140772
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>>20119445
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTTsuzOapFgiJArNsYp6ZVgyuMBATpUV8sFp3z8nS6fAyR-hDYjrYe2IT_mKpVEMpjcKFzXHoQ7Q2o6/pub

Tags: Ayame, Gore, Action, Cringe?

Here's the MGR inspired fic that I wanted to write. It's my first time writing action scenes ever so it might be pretty bad but I tried. I wanna turn this into a series but mostly into a boss rush.

Using chuubas to represent MGR bosses like Young Watame as Monsoon, Rushia as Sundowner, Ayame already established as the Sam of this series and maybe Pekora or Laplus for Armstrong. It's gonna take a while and its gonna be a cringefest but I really wanna try my hand at something new.

>> No.20140964

>>20140772
>ayame as sam
You know Sam was supposed to be a character the audience has sympathy for, right?

>> No.20141869

>>20140772
I mean right now this is a bit too derivative of the initial setup for MGR. The action scenes work at least. But you are really going to have to lean into adapting the chuubas into MGR bosses if you want to make this series work.
Because the the dialogue is probably the one thing that make or break it.
Is Fubuki going to be Mistral?

>> No.20142297

>>20140772
Action was somewhat decent, but the prose was kind of plain (I'd recommend extending your sentences and switching up their structure while also doing more descriptive 'show not tell') and while most of the story was in past tense it switched to present tense a couple of times.
As for something that can be quickly fixed, the first paragraph had the line
>this bandit infested wastelands
It should be "These bandit infested wastelands" or "This bandit infested wasteland".
With that said, it's not by any means bad overall. If you do decide to continue this I'll give it a read.

>> No.20142734

>>20128548
My thinking is that Rushia began to lose her necromancer abilities after becoming menhera and growing distant from Hololive.
>>20128866
My knowledge on guns is very limited.
>>20129144
>>20128599
>>20130989
Thank you for liking it!

>> No.20143232

>>20130776
Honestly I think the surge in activity that's gotten the thread to one a day recently is twofold, the first is because the earlyfag's been ousted with the method for successfully ousting them being easy to do if they try again, and the fact that with them gone we no longer have that new thread problem where the new thread is just dead for a few hours while people trickle in and it becomes 'de facto' the new thread.

>> No.20143407

>>20143232
>the fact that with them gone we no longer have that new thread problem where the new thread is just dead for a few hours while people trickle in and it becomes 'de facto' the new thread
that was, from the beginning, entirely because the threads were made early

the earlyfag being a schizo asshole was only apparent much later after someone tried to make a thread with a holo and he spammed it while samefagging on his own thread

>> No.20143504

>>20143407
He did it before, too. Did people not realize that until just recently?

>> No.20143661

>>20143504
point is i'm still not moving over to the new thread before the old one's archived

>> No.20144244

>>20143504
I think it's only recently with the ironmouse thread debacle that a lot of the thread users realized they can just use the thread they like rather than having to bow to the wishes of one person.
Helps that the mods stopped giving a shit and stopped deleting second threads too so you're not forced to use their thread rather than the one you like.

>> No.20144279

>>20143661
That's normal at this point. I'd wager that unless something specific is occurring that easily the majority of the thread lingers until the other one 404s, barring prompts and the like. If nothing goes wrong in the future we could always just try to die a peaceful death again before a new thread is made, just to see what happens.

>> No.20144413

>>20144244
For someone who's been terrorizing these threads for months, it's surprising that he gave up so easily. I wouldn't be surprised if he shows up again with some new stupid way of bringing down thread quality.

>> No.20144492

>>20144413
entirely possible he was actually range banned when the doxxfaggot requested moderation in the thread. we haven't had marineschizo or noelschizo show up again either.
i know i got range-banned for posting porn, but i've got a pass.

or maybe their 3-day still isn't over and all hell's gonna break loose again soon.

>> No.20144726

>>20144413
Honestly I thought he just got a three day vacation, we'll see if he comes back in a few days.
Either way his methods are kind of seen through now that he can just be ignored when he starts his threads or starts his shit.
Like seriously the fucking Noel-Marine schizo fight was so fucking obvious it was clear that dumbass was getting tired of having to stay up to try and keep his thread up while shitting up the other one.

>> No.20144755

>>20144492
We'll deal with it. After the events of the past few days, I have faith in /wg/.

>> No.20144775

>>20144492
Suppose we'll see tomorrow or by this thread's end, eh? The stalwart dedication is refreshing, though. On the part against his shit, I mean, not his.

>> No.20145023
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Stay motivated, anons! Grab life by the balls and make it your bitch!

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>>20119528
You are a Japanese policeman and have to arrest a foul-mouthed kusogaki for minor crimes! She refuses to listen to you and needs correction!

>> No.20146777

>>20146719
What kind of correction does she need!?

>> No.20146809

>>20146777
Rape!!

>> No.20147186

>>20146809
whoa jesus christ dude settle the fuck down
i was just gonna suggest a night in a cell at the local cop shop
not lifelong trauma through sexual abuse

>> No.20147777

>>20147186
But what if she ends up liking it?

>> No.20148549

>>20147186
She needs to be broken before she can be fixed. Didn't you know that?

>> No.20148908

>>20146719
>>20147186
Kusogaki makes a big show out of jaywalking and littering in front of local everyman police officer, refuses to stop pestering him until he arrests her despite him not really giving a shit, keeps vocally "dreading" what he'll do to "punish" her in the car ride to the station and "resisting" his "advances"

>> No.20149500

>>20133091
>Like the prologue for something bigger
It could be. I just wanted to spitball something out.

>> No.20149934

>>20138401
This is true, I am currently in an undisclosed location (somewhere in Siberia I assume with how cold it is) with only a laptop, wool blanket and an oil lamp for comfort. It's not all that bad since Botan spends 2-3 hours daily under my desk swallowing my schlong to motivate me to write, mumbling something about being mad the next parts focus on the other hags but so far I've remained strong, but I'm not sure how long I can last bros

>> No.20150173

>>20144492
if you think that earlyfag classic got banned, does this mean you'll believe me when i tell you that i (the person who did most of the bumping on the ironmouse thread) am not the earlyfag. and that the reason i did so is that the other thread was obviously made in bad faith. who am i kidding. if you still think that every single person who says something you dissagree with is the earlyfag then nothing will convince you.

>> No.20150269

>>20148908
I feel like the obvious joke is that Shion just gets put in a holding cell without any sex happening.
I propose a double juke and it ends with her getting raped by the prisoners she's sharing the holding cell with.

>> No.20150544

>>20150173
I'm guessing you're the one that wrote the shitpost story that took place over most of that thread then.
Because genuinely I have no fucking clue why anyone would use that thread over the other one given that fuck all discussion/hornyposting took place in it, and it was literally bumped every hour for no real reason.

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>>20144755
>After the events of the past few days
...gay-raping /horni/?

>> No.20150654

>>20150544
>I'm guessing you're the one that wrote the shitpost story that took place over most of that thread then.
wrong again
>genuinely I have no fucking clue why anyone would use that thread over the other one
i already told you. the other thread was made in bad faith by someone who couldn't fathom using a thread with a picture of ironmouse on it. they didn't care about the earlyfag, they just hated every chuuba that wasn't a holo.

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>>20137533
It really is a funny dose of meme magic that Botan takes a one week break the day the Russian invasion starts

>> No.20152523

>>20140964
Sorry for not using a chuuba that you don't like I guess

>>20141869
I'll try to branch off the actual storyline for MGR and make my own story but it's still going to have some elements of the actual game from it. I'm actually really excited to write about Watamonsoon because I want to have her character progress into the fluffy lovable sheep that we love from her nihilistic self after her encounter with RaidenAnon. Not sure yet what I want to do with the other boss chuubas other than Rushia. I'll try to adapt Fubuki as well!

>>20142297
I'll continue working on improving my prose and expand on the world and do some basic world-building in the next chapter, introducing other chuubas that will help RaidenAnon and the other main character which is Shion. I'll work on my tenses and minimise my mistakes for the next chapter as well!

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...

>> No.20154468

>>20154396
White skin bros... we lost...

>> No.20154675

>>20154396
I guess liking noodles is a red flag...

>> No.20154835

>>20154468
Don’t make this shit into a race issue.

>> No.20154888

>>20150544
That shitpost story was the HoloEN abuse guy

>> No.20154978

>>20154396
??? She prefers rice. Am I missing something here?

>> No.20155090

>>20154978
Look at the list of who prefers what, and you'll see Kiara figured out a litmus test for who's a schizo or not

>> No.20155415
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>save for the couple of stories showing her as menhera, Fubuki is generally written as being motherly and serene in fics here
>she's actually pretty genki in her streams
What gives?

>> No.20155779

>>20155415
Fics of Friend tend to focus on specific aspects of her, usually the yandere stuff she's mentioned, or in your case the reliable and trustworthy senpai that everyone says she is.

>> No.20158233

>>20119528
Ina seduces Sisters Fubuki and Marine to the worship new gods.

>> No.20158588
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>>20158233
Mankind’s tenacity will exterminate you vermin.

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> order crate of fresh goods from sales going on in market
> open it, see this
> what do?

>> No.20158859

>>20158593
Take out my cock, clearly.

>> No.20158946

>>20155415
No one watches her streams. I thought you knew that already.

>> No.20159402

>>20158946
Literally watching her struggling in Sekiro for hours at this point. I love it when she tries so hard.

>> No.20159501

>>20155415
No one watches streams and people just use a basic bitch personality for Fubuki to write their fics.

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>>20159402
>she's still on Genichiro
She's tilted out of her mind. She started out completely dominating the melee section and what was killing her was the arrow DPS, now she's just getting slaughtered at the start of the fight every time.

>> No.20160025

>>20159501
Personally I just exaggerated on what I think she'd behave like from what I gathered from her streams. I'm a filthy ESL so my version of her is definitely OOC, but I don't think it's that far off the way she acts in streams. The same I think could be said for other writers that have written Fubuki fics, with small exceptions.
Naturally no matter how many streams you watch, you'll never perfectly nail her character and behavior. Not to mention that some things would always have to be changed for certain aspects of any story to work. I don't understand why are people still being uppity about this. It's always been a thing.

>>20159650
Either she's getting tired or she's trying new approaches to the fight. In either case, the noises she makes are cute, so I'm willing to look past that. I love her so much it's unreal.

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>>20119528
Unprotected rape of a passed out drunk Mori, who trusted you implicitly as the only person remaining who was willing to tolerate her crippling alcoholism and wretched character flaws.

>> No.20162933

>>20128824
I still need to write part of it out but I should hopefully have it out today. if not im staying up really late to finish it

>> No.20163267

>>20159501
>basic bitch personality for Fubuki
Still wondering why even write Fubuki at all if its nots going to be Fubuki at all.

>> No.20164189

>>20163267
>Still wondering why even write Fubuki at all
Because I love her and she's my oshi. I don't speak JP so I go off clips and whatever little bits of stuff I can translate for myself from her streams. I'll never take pride in writing Fubuki 100% accurately. I'll take pride in that I write about her altogether.

>> No.20164647

>>20164189
>I don't speak JP so I go off clips
Stopped reading here. Don't write her if you don't understand her.

>> No.20165218

>>20164647
I doubt a single prominent writeanon here speaks Japanese, man.

>> No.20165895

>>20165218
Don't bother engaging with the schizo lite, just spray them with the supplied water bottle

>> No.20166070

>>20165895
What he said is true though? Why even write someone you don’t understand.

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>>20165895
I think we might need more permanent measures than just water.

>> No.20166468

>>20164647
I refuse.

I WILL write Fubuki fics.
I WILL self-insert as the Anon who gets loved and pampered by her.

You WILL cope.
You WILL seethe.

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>>20166468
Based.

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>>20166468
Godspeed

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>>20166468
Based sukonbu

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>>20166468
She will never be your wife, she will never be your lover, she won't even be your friend, much less someone who will pamper you. Fubuki is being railed by Oga who is twice your size in both ways, and there's nothing you can do about it.

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>>20167972
And yet, she's said she feels jealous at the thought of viewers watching other girls.

We're winning, just give it time.

>> No.20168507

>>20168352
Mindbreaking friend into having a menhera breakdown on stream where she admits she loves us...

>> No.20168583

>>20168352
She loves an audience when she's getting fucked live by her bf, anon. It's time you wake up. This isn't right. It's not too late for you yet. She doesn't love you, any of you, and she never has. She will never acknowledge your existence, at best she'll scoff at your disgusting pfp going up her chatroom filled with people similar to you. Wake up, anon. Please wake up.

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>>20167972
Been married for her for three years at this point. If your schizo rrats make you feel beeter about yourself, that's all well and good, but at the end of the day, that's all they are.
Now begone, my wife is sleeping and I must join her.

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>>20168706
Let me illustrate this for you

>> No.20169636

>>20169221
Silly anon, Oga is Fubuki's maid.

>> No.20169934

>>20169221
False rrat, but arguing with a schizo is not something I'd want to do at this time of the night.
You're clearly wrong, but if drawing such things makes you sleep better at night, keep coping with those delusional fantasy of yours.

What you draw and what you say will not change the facts, as mentioned in my >>20168706 and >>20166468 posts.

Now back to writing. I've been procrastinating on this for too long.

>> No.20170017

>>20169934
Fine. If you're writing a Fubuki fic, I'll alow you to prove me WITH experience that I'm wrong by making the fic damn well realistic. Then, I'll give you my "fair" criticism.

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>>20170017
who cares about your criticism, lmao, suck my cock

>> No.20170204

>>20170132
Don’t use my wife to shitpost, faggot.

>> No.20170208

>>20170132
hi subjectionanon

>> No.20170264

>>20170132
Still shitposting because people don't agree with you?

>> No.20170278

>>20170208
What's up?

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>>20170132
Well now you gave away who you are so there's no point. I'm outta here.

>> No.20170370

>>20170278
When will you fuck off and leave?

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>>20170278
nothing, just saying hello

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>>20170473
Дoбpый дeнь, тoвapищ !

>> No.20170711

>>20170017
I don't need your criticism. As I said, anything I write is for my own satisfaction and I couldn't care less about what (You) have to say about it.
Whether Fubuki is OOC or not is my gripe and no one else's. If I want her to act overly cute and affectionate, I'll write her overly cute and affectionate. You have a problem with that? Too bad.

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>>20170637
Ele não é teu camarada, parceiro. Se afasta ai antes que tu se machuque.

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>>20170731
Me disculparás pero este es terreno que no puedo abandonar.

>> No.20171002

>>20170731
Pekofag's speaking in their native tongue...like a witch casting a curse...
>>20170711
based

>> No.20171145

>>20170711
You act overtly manly to make up for your own insecurities, I get it. I don't relate, but I get it. Personally I act like a bitch to make up for me being too tough, so I guess we are related opposites in a way.

>> No.20171197

>>20170711
Jokes aside I believe criticism should be paid attention to (not necessarily followed, mind), provided it comes in good faith.

'You shouldn't write JP Holos unless you know Japanese and have done 100 hours of full streams' absolutely isn't a good faith argument, since it holds writers to an absurd standard that was already voided by the fact that we're writing alternate universe fantasy fiction of IRL streamers. It by definition could never be fully accurate.

>> No.20171262

>>20171197
>'You shouldn't write JP Holos unless you know Japanese and have done 100 hours of full streams' absolutely isn't a good faith argument,
It actually is. it's like writing an EN Holo and not watching their streams.

>> No.20171364

>>20171262
I haven't watched Mori streams since mid 2021 and I'm in the middle of writing her getting creampied by her own son.

>> No.20171424

>>20171262
>it's like writing an EN Holo and not watching their streams
bruh an anon here wrote a kronii story before she even debuted and managed to get her character mostly right without knowing shit about her or even what she sounded like
the argument that you have to have watched a chuuba a certain amount of time before writing her is bullshit and only serves to gatekeep writers from writing what they want to write

>> No.20171464

I wonder who could be behind this argument

>> No.20171516

>>20171464
Surprisingly not me, I don't care about watching streams so long as you get them right.

>> No.20171631

>>20171364
Based
When's the new Subjection coming out? Not rushing you, just genuinely curious

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>>20171631
I'm kinda stuck.

The idea is Enna wants to break in (Your) slaves, so she sets them to do different menial tasks. But since the war has turned her into a resentful bitch, she also wants to demean and rape them, so she makes Fubuki go up to your room and tries to talk you into forcing yourself on her.

Fubuki is obviously not too keen on getting raped and Anon isn't a rapist, so Enna goes full menhera, goes 'fuck it I'll do it myself', and starts sucking Anon's dick in front of FBK to own the Holos (it makes sense in her head).

In practice it's been a huge bitch to write, since the setup is hard, then writing dialogue between more than two characters at a time has always been difficult for me, then I'm not sure what I'll do for the aftermath to round off the chapter after the sex scene.

Also I'm wasting a lot of time statting Holos in Shadow of the Demon Lord for that gamebook idea I had the other day.

>> No.20172260

>>20172107
I see, I'm glad to hear you're at least working on it. I'm sorry to say I don't really have anything to offer as an advice on what to do on the chapters. I can only wish you good luck with it and say that I'm hoping to read it soon.
Looking forward to the eventual sex scenes with Fubuki, Suisei and Towa too.

>> No.20172418

>>20172107
>Fuck it I'll do it myself
Kek, holy shit. That sounds incredibly stupid in a fun way, like a hamster leaping out of the wheel and into a completely separate apparatus. Looking forward to it.

>> No.20173558

>>20171262
Anon...
There characters aren't that fucking complex.
Obviously they're more complex than what the clips make them out to be but they also aren't that fucking complex where you need a hundred hours watched in order to understand them.

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>>20173558
I watched 10 hours to get my portrayal right and I don't commit to any line I can't hear in character.

>> No.20174305

>>20165218
I remember HCanon claimed to speak Japanese, but then again I don’t think he’s written any Fubuki

>> No.20175531

>>20165218
>>20174305
I think the Miss Sakura writer also spoke japanese/is from there given that they had strong opinions about honorific translation.

>> No.20178082

>>20175531
Miss Sakura author is HCanon iirc

>> No.20179347

Good morning. What an interesting read the thread was! Personally, I think the only time getting someone's personality "right" matters is if you're actively trying to get it right. If you're writing her OOC and you know it, well, it doesn't matter, does it? Otherwise we wouldn't have those delightful whoreyame fics, for example.

>>20174048
You're on the spectrum and I'm not talking about visible light.

>> No.20179591

>>20179347
>If you're writing her OOC and you know it, well, it doesn't matter, does it?
It does since it might as well be an original character.

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>>20179347
One could argue that whoreyame is just... Ayame. Because we created established said whoreyame, and everyone accepts her as the truth. Now if you were to write a Matsuri with Watame's personality and Gura's accent, that's just not OOC, itit'OC.

>> No.20179856

>>20179697
F. A. S. T.

F - Facial drooping - A section of the face, usually only on one side, that is drooping and hard to move. This can be recognized by a crooked smile.
A - Arm weakness - The inability to raise one's arm fully, or the inability to hold something or squeeze i.e. someone's hand.
S - Speech difficulties - An inability or difficulty to understand or produce speech, slurred speech or having difficulty repeating even a basic sentence such as "The sky is blue".
T - Time - If any of the symptoms above are showing, time is of the essence; call the emergency services and go to the hospital immediately It is also important to check the time so that you'll know when the first symptoms appeared (time is brain)

>> No.20180042

>>20179856
You should kill yourself FAST

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>>20180042

>> No.20180459

>>20179697
>pekofag just fucking died

>> No.20180477

>>20179697
Nah, just slap the AU tag on it and call it a day. Problem solved.

>> No.20180900

>>20180459
The perpetual horniness has finally given his brain a stroke.
Unfortunately he can only come back more retarded from it.

>> No.20181102
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20181102

The Matsuri discussion and previous Sara thread kind of got me in the mood to write a continuation to "Driving the point home" to get back in the groove. Decisions, decisions...

>>20082554
Hey, I'd take that punch like a man. I'm quite proud that one of my stories introduced someone to a new fetish. I'm not sure I'll end up writing part 2 - I still lust after the menhera necromancer's asshole like you wouldn't believe but after all that's happened maybe it's better to leave it as is.

>> No.20181628

>>20180900
>horniness
>stroke
Heh

>> No.20181800 [SPOILER] 
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>>20180477
Here's my AU Fubuki. She acts nothing like Fubuki, and nothing about her resembles the original Fubuki beyond fox ears and tail. That's her selling point. Can I get my free criticism now?

>> No.20181897

>>20181800
Your prose is great I like some of the visual changes, but she feels a little OOC. Maybe work on that.

>> No.20182117

Hey at least this shit poster makes OC, that's a step up

>> No.20183268

>>20181800
That's a penis!

>> No.20184195

>>20181800
donut steel

>> No.20184240

>>20181800
Is she smoking a cigarette?

>> No.20184354
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>>20119528
Happy domestic life with your wife and daughter

with them being blissfully unaware you're a serial killer

>> No.20184616

>>20184240
The proper term is fag

>> No.20186430

>>20184354
This is how I imagine "The Cover Job" will end. It probably won't but it's fun to imagine

>> No.20187069
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>>20181897
I appreciate your criticism, but I think I know what I'm doing. This Fubuki is actually created as a coping mechanism to the trauma I endured in the past (abusive father T-T) so yeah, I use her to live the life I always wanted and was denied by evil "dad" (dad in quotation marks bcuz I don't think of him as my dad) as well as to express the trauma that I endured thorough the characters I put there. For example, Mio is her best friend who only has one eye as well and half her body is turned into that of a cybernetic wolf, pretty cool right? But what most readers don't notice is that she is actually a metaphor for my sister! >.< pretty crazy stuff! I like deep things, and I tend to reflect that in my writing. I've been considering starting a book but... I have no money. That's life I guess x.x

>>20183268
That's actually her cybernetic augmentative hyper stimulation cannon MKIII, she uses it to defeat evil when all else has failed.

>>20184240
>>20184616
Uhm... not exactly! See, there's this planet called Volcarus in which they extract these that are used for building heat resistant shielding, called Solarium. The process for mining Solarium is rather complicated so I won't get into that, but in short, the rocks sometimes end up contaminated with the gases of the mining process, and those contaminated rocks are thrown out. In this dystopian futuristic planet there's a city, and in that city, there's a slum section where Fubuki lives, and there they use everything they can get their hands on, including these discarded rocks, because the gases in them are great for relaxation and combat enhancement, but they are also rather addictive and using too much of it can cause you to slowly turn into a Tartarus, a vulcanic rock golem subspecies only made through this method. So yeah, a common misconception, don't worry about it XD

>> No.20187161

>>20187069
Alright now it's overstaying it's welcome knock it off

>> No.20187414

>>20181800
>>20187069
You really like making huge deals out of trivial matters, don't you?

>> No.20187444

>>20187161
You made your bed. Now cum in it.

>> No.20187509

>>20187069
I kek'd. You put some serious effort into shitposting. Good on you.

>> No.20187921

>>20181102
Even menheras who make extremely poor decisions deserve love, anon.

>> No.20187996

>>20187921
No. They deserve to go to the streets.

>> No.20188359

>>20187069
/wg/ is healing.
Even the shitposters are putting in the effort for comedy.

>> No.20188379

>>20187996
> chuuba kicked out by you
> tries to tough it out and spend one night outside
> almost freezes do death, is already hungry
> homeless man tells her if she sucks his cock she can use his cardboard home
> she comes back to you begging to let her back in, saying she learned her lesson
> treat her like a dog from now and henceforth for her original mistake
> rape corrections every day
H-hot

>> No.20188551

>>20188379
You know what’s even hotter than that? Then dying in the streets and suffering the consequences of their menhera actions.

>> No.20188610

>>20187069
You can tell who's actually been around fanfiction circles by the reaction to this little gold nugget

For real, though, it's got effort in it but is also scarily reminiscent of some real attitudes amongst writers (mostly really young ones)

>> No.20188720

>>20188551
Not before she's mounted by a large dog and knotted multiple times

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>>20184354
>Happy domestic life with your wife and daughter
*Domestic oyakodon

>> No.20188947

>>20188720
Man come on
Its gotta be wolves. Always rape wolves. Haven't you ever played hgames at all?

>> No.20189054

>>20188947
I was gonna save the descriptions to make a bestiality prompt, actually. But I figure there's no point in even trying since insects are so universally hated here, animals are prob the same

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>>20187069
I like you a lot better when you're sucking dick, Pekofag.

>> No.20189330

>>20189054
speaking personally i'd much rather read chuuba vs red rocket (or barbed spear in mio's case) versus chuuba vs a fucking fly

>> No.20189421

>>20188610
Is it bad that the words "coping mechanism for trauma" made me immediately think of the Sakura Summer anon?
Really fucking hope he's in a better place mentally.

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>>20189421
*circumcises you with a box cutter in your path*

>> No.20189495

>>20189421
Pretty sure he was taking shots at him

>> No.20189630

>>20189421
Guy needs legitimate therapy, and if that wasn't enough, further evaluation. I do feel bad for the guy but maybe this wasn't the healthiest outlet? He could always get into directing film and make the most brutally terrible rape flick of all time, but still.

>> No.20189686

>>20189330
I'm probably gonna have to be the one to do it, but I'll just profess my love for it now so maybe a bestiality anon can suddenly commission me in the future instead

>> No.20190016

>>20189686
Probably. Unless horses start laying eggs, I just can't see me being interested.

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>>20190016
I bet this game really makes you horny then

>> No.20190462

>>20190332
A-Anon, please, we're in public...

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>>20190332
Oh my.

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>>20190016
>Unless horses start laying eggs, I just can't see me being interested.
don't know why but this cracked me the fuck up for some reason

>> No.20190756

>>20189686
For curiosities sake.
What animals are you willing to write?

>> No.20190913

>>20190756
Literally any, desu. Dogs, wolves and cats are the obvious choice but there's no real preference other than just me knowing their anatomy more. Or maybe I should probably rephrase that to me being more "familiar"? Nope no good way to put it.

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>>20190756
HE'S GOT A BITE

>> No.20191210

>>20190913
>cats
That just sounds painful for every party involved. You ever see cats fuck? They're awful at it.

>> No.20191240

>>20191210
Very loud, too.

>> No.20191257

>>20190913
Pigs?

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Getting around that time.

>> No.20191353

>>20191210
>>20191240
E-exactly... that's why it's hot. Really prickly painful prick, bites and scratches you, doesn't let you touch it while it does it unless you want claws to tear your hands apart

>>20191257
Pigs are fine. They got a corkscrew cock and when they finish they release a special fluid that solidifies and keeps the semen trapped within. They also cum for like 30 minutes.

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>>20191353
You seem to have a real thing for pain in sex.

>>20191316

>> No.20191443

>>20191316
I refuse. That doesn't even look like Suisei. Use that image of Selen with Lui and Elira

>> No.20191447

>>20191316
Don't make a new thread yet. Let's just see what happens.

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20191489

Btw that Luto Fic is done, I'm just gonna wait till the next thread to post it since it's about to die here

>> No.20191539

>>20191489
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pIDcaoINwMg

>> No.20191545

>>20191489
Fuck, I'm not horny right now. Gonna wait a few hours before reading it.

>> No.20191549

>>20191316
Inui's breastmilk, man... I must have it. I must!

>> No.20191644

>>20191549
She's tragically underrepresented in porn for having such a sex model.

>> No.20191649

>>20190332
Minecraft?

>> No.20191692

>>20191420
I have a thing for rape, and painful sex is the logical next step down the consent line. I would be too scared to hurt someone if they asked me, but if I knew the person would be fine afterwards hell I'd crack their skull while fucking them if they ask me to.

>> No.20191829

>>20191447
I'm not. I foresee fighting in the future over this. I've been thinking of collecting a bunch of pics on pixiv and making a MEGA of them to draw on when we make a new thread, because it's kind of a pain to go looking for new HLx2434 art when we're 10 posts away from the bump limit

>> No.20191892

>>20191829
Fighting how? I more meant I wanted to see if we could actually 404 before a new thread was made, unless you mean something else

>> No.20192049

I'd rather we didn't wait. No reason to give the schizo any excuses, and we can always keep on using this thread until it archives like we've been doing the past couple of days.

>> No.20192100

>>20191892
Nah, I mean fighting over the OP image. Figured it'd be easier to stick with the HLx2434 thing we had going if there was a bank to draw on readily

>> No.20192121

>>20192049
You suck at hiding who you are

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>>20191644
She is absolutely a sleeper hit when it comes to being pure sex. Ever since Lulu's departure, Toko has been my go to Niji wank. It's her smell... Damned lecherous hag with her sweaty Cerberus pussy... Needs immediate mating press correction.

>> No.20192425

>>20191489
Cute anon, can I mating press you?

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>>20191692
>I have a thing for rape, and painful sex is the logical next step down the consent line.

>> No.20192553

>>20192425
Only my oshi is allowed mating press me

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>>20191692
>I have a thing for rape
Based

>> No.20192597

>>20192304
She has three heads?

>> No.20192627

>>20192121
And just like that you come crawling out from under the sink. Making the new thread then:

>>20192456

Picked a different Suisei/Toko picture since the first one posted was kinda meh.

>> No.20192721

>>20192627
???

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>>20192627
Called it.

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>>20192627
You don't make no fucking sense sometimes meng

>> No.20192821

>>20192627
Subjectionfag is the new earlyfag. Wonderful.

>> No.20192938

>>20192627
if the earlyfag was going to make the new thread he would have done it exactly at bump limit, like he did for the past however many threads.

>> No.20192956

>>20192553
Who is your oishii?

>> No.20192987

>>20192938
I thought he was still 3 day vacationed?

>> No.20193058

>>20192725
you Brazilian butt bitch what the fuck are you doing over there

>> No.20193162

>>20193058
Having an over inflated ego, what the fuck else does he do?

>> No.20193254

>>20193058
Laying a hint so maybe you people can see what exactly happened before the thread was made so next time you can see an early thread coming. So far I have no faith in any of you though.

>> No.20193271

>>20193162
make me cum but that's neither here nor there. they're insinuating there's a pattern here that's being missed and i'm interested

>> No.20193445

>>20193162
Suck dick during bump limits while refusing to go to /trash/.

Granted, a mean dick. But still.

>> No.20193623

>>20192987
that vacation is purely speculative. i'd wager he just decided that it wasn't worth it to keep making threads nobody was going to use and left.

>> No.20193682

File names seem inconsistent across several people. Sometimes named, sometimes not, different capitalization schemes on the prompt anchor filename. There's always a discussion about the next OP, but there seems to be some intentional misdirection if what's being implied here is that the person creating the thread is the one who's replying to himself to cause trouble, thus giving him an excuse to make it

>> No.20193988

>>20193623
That's the best-case scenario

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>>20193682
Not bad kid. That's exactly right. He makes a paranoid post and then uses that paranoia as an excuse to make the early thread without seeming like it's him. In truth the earlyfag never went away, he's just playing nice in the crowd! Like he used to do in the past. Luckily, now you know how he types when he is off his alter ego, so you can spot it if you go back in the archives. I'm sure he'll change his writing style from now on after calling him out, but hey, more detective fun for us right?

>> No.20194220

>>20194104
>congratulating his own post

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>>20194104

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>>20194104
If I could catch you before, I feel confident in my skills, but I'm not exactly sure if that's right. Time will tell, I guess.

>> No.20194278

>>20194104
t. earlyfag

>> No.20194409

>>20194104
I mean the old earlyfag was just doing it by rote at this point and was just grabbing the link to the last thread and a file saved from a booru while naming it chuuba name edition. This new one at least seems to have some effort put in it (even if it's just a little bit more) while picking chuubas the thread is amenable to.

>> No.20194426

>>20194257
Three different scenarios can happen to confirm this theory. Come on, list them out.

>> No.20194451

>>20194104
I get this is an anonymous imageboard and all but this a genuinely embarrassing way to post and the fact that you can't see that is probably a sign you shouldn't be on the internet at all

>> No.20194509

>>20194104
i am surprised anyone would give you money when you act like this

>> No.20194835

>>20194509
It's really fucking offputting, I'll give you that, but it's got nothing to do with aptitude for writing.

>> No.20194860

>>20194509
Almost as if he's only been commissioned for works that are deliberately inflammatory or something

>> No.20194902

>>20194426
I had a post but I scrapped out of being unsure. Share your thoughts.

>> No.20195086

>>20192821
Doesn’t surprise me. Guy takes these threads way too seriously.

>> No.20195194

>>20193623
Nah, given that their style is pretty consistently low effort trolling via either spamming regurgitated arguments or the early thread with a 2view, I'm more inclined to think they're banned at least for a bit. Range banned hopefully but I'm not betting on it.

>> No.20195195

>>20195086
>35 IP
The general is dying…

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>>20194902
Fine, fine. See, there are three different scenarios that can happen from now on that would confirm my theory.

1 - the earlyfag stops trying to hide among the crowd and resumes posting at bump limit

2 - the early fag employs, or tries to employs, a new tactic for making an early thread without seeing like it's him. To confirm this, look for trickery right before an early thread is made.

3 - the earlyfag backs off and doesn't make an early thread at all. This doesn't mean surrender, it just means he felt called out and decided to wait it out to make it seem like he was on vacation. In this scenario it is likely that as soon as a reasonable amount of time passes, threads will start happening at 310 again.

>> No.20195266

>>20195194
Considering that the new early fag is subjection or whatever, I doubt he left.

>> No.20195406

>>20195216
Oh, seems like we were on the same page after all and my doubt was unfounded. I was expecting there to be more open aggression/blatant bait past a certain point, ala the Fubuki stuff earlier. Either way, just keep a close eye, I guess

>> No.20195620

>>20195086
>Guy takes these threads way too seriously.
Considering he's done as much to shit up these threads as honestly contribute I don't even know if that's true.

>> No.20195748

>>20195620
I think he might be legit mentally I’ll if his posts are unironically serious. >>20193854

>> No.20195767

>>20195620
The same could be said of Pekofag, though, yeah? Despite everything they've done - continue to do, on some occasions, what with their extracurriculars - they still contribute a lot of nice stories, phoneposted or not.

>> No.20195831

>>20195195
These threads are currently zooming at effectively a thread a day pace.
Earlier this year we were hitting three day threads, I think recent events have made discussions on ideas and stuff with people bouncing ideas back and forth relatively popular again so it'll be a while before it can quiet down again.

>> No.20195900 [SPOILER] 

>>20195831
Nah, sounds like an excuse to cover up the fact that it’s dying.

>> No.20195945

>>20195194
there's no evidence that he's ever done that. you just call anyone you feel like earlyfag to discredit them. i've probably been called earlyfag more times than the actual earlyfag, and look! not rangebanned. he's gone. your precious scapegoat's gone.

>> No.20196002

>>20195767
Hey I may still have an unironic god complex but at least I'm using it for good this time around!

>> No.20196129

>>20196002
Yes yes, pats for Pekofag.
>>20195831
>Three day threads
Feels like an age ago.

>> No.20196227

>>20196002
The only way it could be used "for good" was if you used it on another board and never came back here.

>> No.20196235

>>20196002
It's no less difficult to listen to than last year, though. You have any idea how cringe those posts are?

What am I saying? Of course you don't, else you wouldn't be posting them. You sound like a fucking 13 year old who just discovered shounenshit.

>> No.20196296

>>20196227
Like /trash/! Where we could have fucked up trap sex! You ass!

>> No.20196359

>>20195945
Ignore him, he calls the Marineschizo and Noelshizo earlyfags as well.

>> No.20196575

>>20196296
But he won't, because he's unironically getting funded to shitpost here and you give him enough homoerotic attention still anyway so...

>> No.20196582

>>20196235
It's the way I talk, and have talked, for the past.... eh... 8 years? It started as a way to practice my English, but I soon realized I enjoyed it.

>> No.20196630

>>20196359
You are the earlyfag.

No one here's gonna believe me but I've been watching your posts for a while and you make the exact same reactionary one-line shitposts as ever.

>> No.20196709

>>20196630
Nah, I believe you. I feel like the way he writes is a blatant tell, but since we're all anons here and there's no IDs, it's hard to point it out without coming off as a schizophrenic.

>> No.20196758

>>20196129
>Feels like an age ago.
Yeah, feels like the last time I feel like it was pre Mori yab. I don't actually remember exactly.

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>>20196630
>Claims that the earlyfag is ban
>Tells an anon he’s an earlyfag because he disagrees with you
Take meds. It’s not healthy to be that sick in the head.

>> No.20196821

>>20196582
When you put it like that, it's sort of endearing. Fucking weeb.

>> No.20196836

>>20196709
>since we're all anons here and there's no IDs, it's hard to point it out without coming off as a schizophrenic.
Exactly this.

>> No.20196946

I am just happy there is no longer a schizo controlling the OP

>> No.20197031

>>20196946
But Subjectionfag is the new earlyfag; a schizo is still controlling the OP.

>> No.20197052

>>20196630
i hate you earlyfag-fag. i truly do. please, do this general a favor and kill yourself. or at least stop being such a schizo, calling everyone who isn't raving about earlyfag 24/7 earlyfag.

>> No.20197286

>>20196821
Wdym? You think it's like... cute or something?

>> No.20197369

Not that anon but I think PF can be cute when he's playing up his sissy act and not schizoposting in the middle of a still-active thread, yeah.

>> No.20197488

>>20197286
the fact that it's a left over from practicing English is strangely personally related to me so I guess so
>>20197369
pretty much this

>> No.20197538

>>20197369
You're really horny for me all day long huh? Now I know how girls can get sugar daddies, they literally live rent free in their minds until they cave in

>> No.20197642

I like to surround myself in a really tight blankie while listening to a Fubuki stream and pretend I'm Luna's rape baby inside her womb and Fubuki is convincing Luna to abort me

>> No.20197680

>>20197642
That's great, anon. That's... just great.

>> No.20197693

>>20197538
I'm horny 24/7, sorry.
>>20197642
Everything was based right up to the whole abortion bit. That's cringe.

>> No.20197699

>>20197642
with some minor modification, you could write a fic about this.

>> No.20197713

>>20197693
Cringe opinion, anon.

>> No.20197743

>>20197538
see, when it's past BL, it's hot
>>20197642
I want to imagine the audio is really muffled but you can still hear it through the wet bodily noises

>> No.20197770

>>20197693
it's only cringe if luna actually goes through with it.

>> No.20197791

>>20197770
Exceptionally cringe opinion.

>> No.20197825

>>20197713
I don't know what's even the point of a pregnancy fetish if you're just going to mince the kids, man.

t.pregchan enjoyer

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