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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread: >>18471177

>> No.18561614
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Story anchor. Post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.18561662
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Just read that Shion fic posted last thread and I really want some more Shion fluff now. Why is this kusogaki so perfect..

>> No.18564255

>>18563737
I love small titties

>> No.18565179

>>18563737
Her flaws only add to her perfection.
Yes I know that's an oxymoron.

>> No.18565666

>>18565179
an oxymoron is an oxymoron

>> No.18566512
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>>18561614
Ever wanted Matsuri to slowly corrupt your mind and body so much that you only wanted her in your life? Well, here's 10k worth of words and I'm not yet done with her. I want her to go full menhera on me, and once I'm done she'll be the only one who can make me feel any sort of pleasure.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRiwEIv8-KeF_By50Yz1D3GdcUVgwiHU8V22Bb6uEsaRJK8WhWm0Na6WNTwqbJmsCDHYl93gQrN3lEZ/pub?

Tags: Matsuri, NSFW, corruption, menhera

As always, let me know what you think.

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>>18566512
>commissioned fic
>I'm not yet done with her.

>> No.18566957

>>18566512
So you did drop that piece of shit rapefic commissioner after all. Good on you. Great stuff anon, going to save this one for my next wank.

>> No.18567017

>>18566957
>So you did drop that piece of shit rapefic commissioner after all.
Why are you always trying to start shit. Do you have no life?

>> No.18567204

>>18567017
If you're the rapefic commissioner, there's a special level of hell waiting for you and I pray you meet it as soon as possible. Fuck you and die.

>> No.18567231

>>18567204
Again, why are you always trying to start shit. Do you have no life?

>> No.18567301
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>>18567204

>> No.18567681

>>18567204
You are literally lower than shit and I sincerely hope your worthless life ends soon.

>> No.18567773

>>18566512
Can't say I've ever wanted Matsuri in any capacity but the premise is hot as fuck so I'm definitely giving this a read later, thanks anon.

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>>18567773
>He doesn't want to stick his dick inside the menhera

>> No.18567907

>>18567871
She can try to change my mind.

>> No.18568018

>>18567681
Seethe more, trash. You'll get yours one day. God willing, I'll cross paths with you and send you to hell myself. I'll do it slowly, too.

>> No.18568048

>>18568018
Do you have nothing better to do than shit up the thread?

>> No.18568086

Get a room or fuck off, both of you.

>> No.18568189

>>18566889
what is this post attempting to convey

>> No.18568196

>>18568086
You new here? This is how it’s always been in /wg/. Just take a look at the last thread. /wg/ is the most retarded general since they actually respond to bait posts and shitposts instead of ignoring it.

>> No.18568254

>>18568189
It’s just a low-effort greentext response, anon.

>> No.18568347

>>18568189
I'm wondering what the hell that means. When does the guy getting commissioned have any say in the plot? Did he commission himself?

>>18568254
You're a low-effort greentext response.

>> No.18568375

>>18568196
>/wg/ is the most retarded general
>he hasn't been to the Amelia Watson Appreciation thread or /ggg/

>> No.18568406

>>18568375
Pretty sure they admit it. Unlike here.

>> No.18568425

>>18568375
Means he doesn't have abysmal taste. Fuck ENs.

>> No.18568444

>>18568196
Literally every general responds to bait anon, what the fuck. If your general isn't responding to bait it's because it's too slow to even have bait.

>> No.18568446

>>18568196
>Just take a look at the last thread.
The sad part is that it's obvious that two anons are shitting up the last thread, but people kept on responding to them instead of ignoring them.

>> No.18568567

we're like 30 posts in and nobody has given any feedback on the story yet. this is funny though. it's like we ignore the hot dramas the rest of the board cares about in favor of our own

>> No.18568569

>>18568444
This is a weird cope, anon. Most generals tell other anons to not respond to bait.

>> No.18568638

you could be rereading your favorite fic right now
or working on your backlog
or writing that story you've been sitting on
or coming up with prompt ideas
maybe you should try it

>> No.18568646

>>18568569
this one does too but it never works in any general

>> No.18568657

>>18568567
That’s how it’s always been, why are you surprised by it?

>> No.18568671

>>18568569
And so do we. Doesn't stop people from responding to bait or, failing that, the shitposting responding to their own bait until someone else joins in or the other anons start talking about people responding to bait.

>>18568567
Anon I'm at work I don't need a massive boner right now.

>> No.18568716

>>18568671
nigga why are you on 4chan at work, do your job

>> No.18568735

>>18568646
>>18568671
The last thread disprove that claim.

>> No.18568750

>>18568347
Because the person who commissioned me let me have creative control over this fic and we agreed to have it in two parts.

>> No.18568797

>>18568567
I don’t really feel like reading a story written just for money. If any of the previous commissioned fics are to be taken into account, stories that are written because the writer wants to write them are always better.
Also 10k words is a lot to read through, I’m sure some responses will come.

>> No.18568800

>>18568750
Did you actually stop working with the person who commissioned the rape fic, or was that someone else posting on your behalf?

>> No.18568814

>>18568750
He agreed to let you have creative control?

He's paying you to write your own stories????

>> No.18568895

>>18568750
Newfag here, where could I contact you if I wanted to commission? Wouldn't be rape, I'll say that in advance.

>> No.18568941

>>18568895
he's got an email address at the end of his stories

>> No.18569076

>>18568800
No, he said he still plans on taking commissions from him.

>> No.18569114

>>18569076
wonder if he feels dirty like a whore

>> No.18569259

>>18569114
Still shitting up the thread?

>> No.18569309

>>18569259
Still replying to him?

>> No.18569372

>>18569114
I dunno, I’m a little conflicted. The guy says he needs the money so I can respect the hustle, but at the same time he now only writes commissions and has become a bit of a dick at times.

>> No.18569449

>>18569259
hey i'm not the other guy

do you feel dirty writing that? you wrote sexual degeneracy for money, that sounds like a whore to me

>> No.18569491

>>18569449
You need to get a life.

>> No.18569570

>earlyfag didn't get to make the new thread
>it becomes filled with shitposting
Gee, I wonder who could be behind this.

>> No.18569589

>>18569491
okay dude it sounds like you need to step back from the computer for a while and take a few deep breaths

there's a lot of shitposting going on right now but not everyone's trying to jump down your throat, or at least i ain't

>> No.18569635

>>18569570
kek true

if we start getting 50 posts bitching about fubuki we'll know for sure

>> No.18569674

>>18569570
The shitposters from last thread?

>> No.18569710
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>>18569635
I'll cast bait and we'll see.

>> No.18569729

Should commissioned fics just not be archived? They weren't made for the thread, and they cause nothing but shitposting anyway.

>> No.18569748

>>18569729
They’re fics. Stop being retarded.

>> No.18569790

>>18569748
I have only the thread's best interests in mind.

>> No.18569791

>>18569729
Also, it’s just one anon who seethes because he’s a poorfag. He’s been at this multiple threads now.

>> No.18569805

>>18568750
What are your rates?

>> No.18569835

>>18569674
You mean the ones that show up at the end of every thread? To conveniently push us to bump limit just in time for a new thread to be made with a random nobody in the OP?

>> No.18569910

>>18569835
>You mean the ones that show up at the end of every thread?
No, the ones that we know are shitposter and people who post in bad faith but still get multiple replies because you guys can’t help yourself in taking the bait. I’m still at a loss on how people kept on responding to them.

>> No.18569916

>>18569805
I charge $30/1k.

>> No.18569970

>>18569910
>I’m still at a loss on how people kept on responding to them.
gonna be generous and say boredom
i hope

>> No.18570061

>>18569748
He does have a point. The rape fic, the fly fic and now this. And this one isn't even being provocative. Something about money being involved sends people into a shitposting frenzy

>> No.18570101

>>18570061
He doesn’t. It’s literally one poorfag anon seething.

>> No.18570124

>>18570061
>The fly fic
What?

>> No.18570176

>>18570124
read shrunken troubles, kek

>> No.18570254

>>18570124
Something probably commissioned by the bugfag.>>18570176

>> No.18570284

>>18570176
>>18570254
Sure I will check it out, but for now I scrolled to the bottom and it doesn't have the email, is that even a commission?

>> No.18570317

>>18570284
that was done by pekofag iirc. dude look at the story at the top of the thread. you know, the one we're all shitposting about?

>> No.18570389

>>18566512
This has got great buildup with a gradual progression to the sex that was very nice to read through. Absolutely amazing, glad to have jacked it to this. I'll probably come back to if I need it for fap material in the future.
Still I do have some issues with it. Honestly feel like you were overusing "You" here in some of the paragraphs, you could probably get away with using it less. Also while I did find that choking scene hot as fuck, I do find it a bit dissapointing that the narration doesn't change at all to reflect it and have it be as unhinged and wild as the emotions that the Anon was feeling.
Overall though, I fucking loved this. Hope to see more.

>> No.18570408

>>18569910
I only know of three shitposters that anons can't help but respond. The Doomfag, Pekofag, and the Bad faith anon.

>> No.18570415
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>>18561662
Dragging that notoriously out-of-shape pirate to the gym to get those gains

>> No.18570556

>>18570408
pekofag rarely shitposts now anyway, think he's done for

>> No.18570598

>>18570408
>Bad faith anon
I thought they were two of them? Like >>18554299 and >>18556504

>> No.18570615

>>18570556
Nah, he still shitposts at night.

>> No.18570641

>>18570598
that's the same person

>> No.18570710

>>18570615
recently he's just been moping about how he posts half the thread's weekly story count or some such

>> No.18570860

>>18570408
You forgot the poorfag anon who seethes at commission fics. >>18567204

>> No.18570891

>>18570710
The greentext stories? I really wouldn't consider them stories, but I digress.

>> No.18570895

>>18569710
That's a cute fox, anon.

>> No.18570929

>>18570641
My mistake then.

>> No.18570930

>>18570415
>Marine fantasizing that it will be a sexy gym trip that's just constant sex themed around exercise.
>You take her there and actually just workout with her.
>Entire day is her hoping it'll be a 'sexy' gym activity but it's all just moderate exercise.
>By the time the two of you get home she immediately passes out on the bed.
>She didn't see the special sex toys you were planning on using as a reward for her first gym day.

>> No.18571002

>>18570891
true. as we all know, a fic has to be properly formatted and posted in a google docs link in order to be eligible for the prestigious title of "story."

>> No.18571052

>>18570598
>Like >>18554299 and >>18556504
It's always at night, which should tell you where they live, yet people still respond to them.

>> No.18571148

>>18571052
It honestly doesn’t surprise me. A few anons pretty much all but confirm that /wg/ is the only place they get any social interaction at all. Which in of itself, is sad.

>> No.18571160

>>18571052
>it's always at night
ya know that changes based on location right
or do you just assume everyone lives in burgerstan

>> No.18571282

>>18570895
Wolf*, you mean.

>> No.18571300

>>18571160
>bait posts and troll posts are the most active around seanig hours
Sure, anon.

>> No.18571301

>>18570710
Honestly that anon kind of needs to prove it if he's moping about it that much. I can't really think of 8 stories that have had consistent 'style' to it over the last 30 entries unless I'm forgetting about them.

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>>18571052
Specifically at around noon in Asia, yes. Every night, like clockwork.

It's annoying because they do their best to make the thread unusable for NA and EU anons that stay up late, but at least they're easy to spot and ignore. Also, the idea that the pekofag might be a SEAnigger just tickles me pink. Heheh, what a loser.

>> No.18571461

>>18571301
pekofag, did you hear that? this anon's willing to give you some attention
we all know how you crave it

>> No.18571490

>>18570860
>You forgot the poorfag anon who seethes at commission fics
Nah, he's a regular shitter who shits on anything and everything. Don't know why he's even here to begin with.

>> No.18571652

>>18571413
Wouldn’t be bad if people just ignore them, since it’s obvious they’re just baiting but then again, that’s asking too much.

>> No.18571657

I just read "Man's best friend" on a whim. I have no idea what I expected since I didn't read the tags but absolutely not what I got. Very fun read though, I liked the style, bluntness and the humor in it. Thanks for the fun read, whoever wrote that.

>> No.18571783

>>18569729
>Should a fanfic not be archived in a general that writes fanfic.
anon....

>> No.18571824
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>>18570895
The cutest.

>> No.18571915

>>18570930
>the first few times her performance is frankly pathetic
>she can barely lift even the lightest weights available
>it takes her over 10 minutes to run a mile, and that's not counting all the times she has to stop and catch her breath
>and the complaining. good god, the complaining never ends
>but you knew from the start that she was going to suck at first, so you keep bringing her back
>and as time goes on, you start to see a difference
>she runs further. lifts more. whines less
>eventually she even has enough energy left over afterwards to finally get that post-workout sex that she's been waiting for all this time
>and boy is it worth it

>> No.18571958

>>18571652
>>18569970

>> No.18571964

>>18570891
Those weren't his.

>> No.18572068

>>18569910
>I’m still at a loss on how people kept on responding to them.
They reply to themselves until someone else falls for it and start replying to them.

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>>18571824
Now that I think about it, we haven't had a fluffy FBK fic in a while.

>> No.18572800

>>18572781
What kind of new spin could be nice for a fresh foobs fluff fic?

>> No.18572844

>>18571413
>Also, the idea that the pekofag might be a SEAnigger just tickles me pink.
It was all but confirm he was a Seanig.

>> No.18572933

>>18570284
Well, tbf I wasn't really planning on saying it was commisioned but I guess I could do that, now that the cat's out of the box.

>> No.18572959

>>18572800
Getting her pregnant and pampering her during those 9 months. Personally don't mind if old ideas are rehashed, I will gladly enjoy any fluffy friend fics

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>>18571915
>the chub has burned away from her tummy to expose the increasingly-toned abs underneath
>her noodle arms have grown some actual biceps that she's all too happy to flex for you
>there are many things now that she could crush between her thighs
>and she's the happiest and most confident you've ever seen her
>you're increasingly finding yourself pinned to the bed or pushed up against the wall whenever she gets that hungry look in her heterochromatic eyes
>and you're all too happy to give her the sustenance she craves

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>>18567204

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>>18571461
You know, I wasn't going to say anything but if it makes you seethe so much...

>>18571301
Haachama's special ramen
Rushia NTR
Shrunken Troubles
Futa HoloIDrinks
Risu's No Nut November
Ui-mama rape correction
Dumb Onion NTR
Towa at it again

>>18570891
Some of these are indeed short, but from what I heard short is still enjoyable. Right above these there's like 5 more stories of mine but that would be beyond the 30 latest stories limit.

>>18570710
I suppose it technically does count as doomposting I guess. I figured it bothered some folk but I should probably stop venting at 6AM where I can't even keep my eyes straight.

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>>18566512
Good lord, dude. Ever since I Thought You Wanted To Dance, more mind-breaking sex goddess Matsuri was what I've been needing. Stellar as always, MWAnon.

>> No.18576435

I can't believe I actually enjoyed Shrunken Troubles, what the fuck have you faggots done to me

>> No.18576473

>>18576435
Cool blogpost, where do I unsubscribe?

>> No.18576517

>>18572959
My list of fetishes is basically a redirect link to pregchan and to the /d/ and /s/ pregnancy threads, so I fully and steadfastly support any and all fics about knocking chuubas up with my kids.

>> No.18578180

>>18568567
I opened it, expecting that one prompt about Matsuri raping kid (You) then getting thrown in jail while you're unable to cum with any other girl.
Except it turned out it's a commissioned fic and the plot is not that so I closed it and basically I'm disappointed and my night is ruined. I'll go fap to something else.

>> No.18578234

>>18578180
Where do I unsubscribe from your blog?

>> No.18578271

>>18569710
Stop posting pictures of my wife as bait. Appreciate her cuteness, though.

>> No.18578740

>>18572781
True. I really need a new dosage of Fubuki fluff. Haven't had any of that in a while and I miss it.

>>18572800
Doesn't have to be a new spin of it. Same concept done by a different person would still feel somewhat different, at least from what I've seen.

>> No.18578846

>>18578234
You don't. I live inside your walls. I'll keep screaming any and all thoughts I have regarding anything and everything. (You) can't escape.

>> No.18578924

I hate that fact that I read the Haachama Ramen shitpost with her voice in my head. The madman who wrote it perfectly managed to capture her Engrish.

>> No.18578928

>>18578846
What do you gain by shitting up the thread?

>> No.18579129

>>18578928
>comments on a story posted to keep the thread going
>"What do you gain by shitting up the thread?"

Either (You) commissioned it, (You) wrote it or (You)'re just a fag.
In either case, as long as (You)'re seething, the sweet (You)s (You) bless me with is more than enough of a gain.

>> No.18579221

>>18579129
I think you need to take your meds if you think I’m seething.

>> No.18579277

>>18579221
Yet you respond to me. Curious!

>> No.18579331

>>18579277
Yes, and?

>> No.18579370

>>18579331
You're a seething faggot, that's it.

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>>18578180
>I opened it, expecting that one prompt about Matsuri raping kid (You) then getting thrown in jail
I'll do you one better, what about:


>>18561662
>Matsuri, your middle school big sister, molests (You) as a child and takes your shota virginity
>this is the start of a torrid, secret relationship that lasts well until Matsuri is in Hololive and making good money
>You are both well into your 20s now. (You) are now old enough to have long since realized that dumping an unprotected creampie into your older sister is an incredibly fucked up thing to do even once, nevermind at least once a day for well over a decade
>However, Matsuri is all (You) have in this world, and you are unable and unwilling to quit the insane, co-dependent, turbo-menhera relationship of unprotected sex and mutual emotional and physical abuse you have going with her
>Your occasional interactions with other Holos due to Matsuri's work cause her to react ever more explosively...

This could go so many ways. Could be just straight taboo romance. Could be a yandere fic on either side, with Matsuri either ditching her birth control or (You) replacing the pills with fertility drugs. Could be a dominance fic where (You) fuck all the Holos and turn Matsuri into an insane cuckquean. Could be a tragedy/persecution fic where your incest with her is found out and all the Holos shun you, etc...

Fuck me this is hot. I might just write it if nobody else picks it up.

>> No.18579398

>>18579370
I think you need to take your meds if you think I’m seething

>> No.18579639

>>18576435
Which part?

>> No.18580020

>>18579378
THERE we go. Glad there are still people of culture left in this thread. Should you, or anyone else, ever write such a story, I'll read through it with great interest.

>>18579398
I think you need to stop being a turbofaggot.

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18580115

>>18579378
As long as it's incest, I'm on board

>> No.18580160

>>18580020
>I think you need to stop being a turbofaggot
This speaks more about you though.

>> No.18580497

>>18580160
Yeah? What does it say?

>>18580115
Based and redpilled.

>> No.18580552

>>18580497
That you’re a turbofaggot

>> No.18580829

>>18580552
Ah yes, resorting to the good old "no u". Ain't no way this can fail! Gah, I got got by the epic leddit user! Oh no, now my karma will decrease!

Anyways, this doesn't change the fact that you're a flaming turbofaggot and a cuck. Also I'm still inside your walls.

>> No.18580902

Your parents clearly shared way too many chromosomes, no wonder you are an incest subhuman, shitposter. Like clockwork.

>> No.18581169

>>18580829
>he’s a schizophrenic
That would explain it. Shouldn’t be surprised by this revelation.

>> No.18581595

>>18581169
Yes, keep feeding me. Keep shitting up the thread that you were so concerned about. Keep biting. I enjoy it. Oh how I enjoy it.

>> No.18581987

>>18581595
You need to seek help.

>> No.18582531

>>18581987
You need to stop being a faggot.

>> No.18582550

>>18578924
It's nuts, isn't it? Ridiculous how that shit worked out in the end.

>> No.18583661

Hope that Cuckquean Coco stuff from last thread gets picked up, sounded hot as fuck

>> No.18583731

>>18581987
>>18582531
The both of you need to fuck off already.

>> No.18583872

>>18583661
Agreed. I can't write for shit or I'd have gotten on it already.

>> No.18585074
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18585074

Bumping with a question!

What's a fic you've wanted a sequel to?

>> No.18585107

>>18585074
What an asinine question that’s been asked before.

>> No.18585192

>>18585074
That Mori incest fic, but at least that's confirmed happening.

>> No.18585285

Good God, why is it always a shitfight in here?
>>18576435
I am beyond pleased to hear this, though. Tell me in detail what you enjoyed.

>> No.18585364

>>18585285
>Good God, why is it always a shitfight in here?
You should check the last thread to see something worst.

>> No.18585429

>>18585285
>why is it always a shitfight in here?
Nigger you were just here how the fuck are you surprised

>> No.18585640

>>18585429
No, I JWU. First time posting in this thread.

>>18585364
I was hoping that the Matsuri fic wouldn't have shit flung over it, given that there's no dark or grotesque themes to it.

>> No.18585736

>>18585640
You expect too much from this place.

>> No.18585763

>>18585640
>First time posting in this thread.

Then uh...>>18573924

is that not you?

>> No.18585862

>>18585763
That’s pekofag, you retard.

>> No.18585927

>>18585763
That's pekofag, silly billy.

>> No.18585964

>>18585862
>>18585927

I know that, but I figured he was asking cause he was the writer. Though, I guess he could be the commissioner.

>> No.18585968

>>18585763
You can't be serious.

>> No.18585983

>>18585964
>Though, I guess he could be the commissioner.
Bingo.

>> No.18585996

>>18585862
>>18585927
If he's not pekofag, but pekofag wrote shrunken troubles, why is he asking the anon who enjoyed shrunken troubles exactly what he enjoyed if he didn't write it himself?

>> No.18586031

>>18585996
>>18585983

>> No.18586048

>>18585983
You commissioned both that and the Matsuri one? Fucking based rich anon, keep at it.

>> No.18586089

>>18566957
Desperately need more maledom shit, rape or otherwise.

>> No.18586095

>>18585983
Trying to hide here after getting butthurt because of people making fun of you in /fbk/?

>> No.18586132

>>18586095
I've always posted in both.

>> No.18586139

>>18585964
Jesus Christ, how can someone be this slow?

>> No.18586560

>>18585074
Not strictly a sequel, but I'm hoping for someone to give that rrat Ayame abuse fic another try. It started off great but the ending really went sideways toward the wrong direction. I want to see it go to its implied conclusion of healing and reconciliation

>> No.18586798

>>18586560
That’s a remake not a sequel. Try to stay on-topic with the question.

>> No.18586852

>>18586132
It still strikes me as incredibly odd that you'd commission something this bizarre of your oshi, but to each their own, I guess. It's your money.

>> No.18586856

>>18586798
Hall Monitor vibes

>> No.18586862

>>18586560
>healing and reconciliation
Great idea, but I think I've got a better one. How about a continued spiral of doom and the total destruction of her social and professional lives?

>> No.18586883

>>18586852
It's not odd when you think about it. I've got a fetish that drives me crazy, and a woman that drives me crazy. Why not put two and two together?

>> No.18586984

>>18586883
Cause it's fucking gross and you should treat your oshi with a little more respect than that?

>> No.18587018

>>18586984
Fundamental impasse. I think of it very differently.

>> No.18587052

>>18586984
NTA but she'll never see it so I don't care. It's like jerking off to a pic of the girl you like. What's the harm?

>> No.18587077

>>18587052
You ain't me... but I agree.

>> No.18587101

>>18587077
That's... what the NTA is for.

>> No.18587267

>>18587018
You’re a weird freak.

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>>18587267
He probably is. I sure am. Most people here are. What's your point?

>> No.18587387

>>18587329
I'm going to bite this sheep's fluffy thighs.

>> No.18587439

>>18587329
I'm going to lick this sheep's sweaty armpits.

>> No.18587467

>>18570415
>>18570930
This but when you take her to bed the first time, you stuff her full of buttercream cake while fucking her exhausted, plump, hag body to more than replace every calorie she lost

>> No.18587730

>>18586883
>Why not put two and two together?
Because if Fubuki is supposedly your oshi you should give her a bit more respect than that?

>>18587329
NTA but point is that even most people here are turned off by shit like this, because it's fucking gross.

>> No.18587798

>>18587730
That anon just has a gross fetish, it's not that hard to understand, he just does what he likes because he has money. I'm just grateful at least his fetish is sex adjacent and he's not an architectfag or scatfag.

>> No.18587813

>>18587730
Dude I agree but please word your posts differently people are gonna think I'm samefagging

>> No.18587874

>>18587813
This isn't me either

>> No.18588008

>>18585074
Psycho Killer Sequel.
Though that one is basically all but confirmed dead given that the last post I remember from here about such a sequel was the author saying they were having trouble with writing it.

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>>18588008
Yeah I don't want to say it's dead, cause you never know (I didn't think I was gonna write a sequel to Cold Air, Hot Blood but then I did) but it's been a long time since I've even touched it after restarting it.

I do delete WIP's I know I'm never gonna finish, so it's got that going for it I guess.

>> No.18588415

>>18587730
crybaby

>> No.18588420

>>18587813
>word your posts differently
Literally what do you expect me to do? Name myself? Ain't my fault I type like this.

>> No.18588834

>>18588369
Well can't say I am dissapointed given that I was expecting nothing...but honestly I'll still hold out hold hope it can happen one day.

>> No.18588946

>>18588369
Just say you’re not going to write it instead of attentionwhoring.

>> No.18588950

>>18571413
>>18572844
Oh hey, my bad. Seems like I forgot one or two. I'm Brazilian, that's not a secret. I'd like to hear your sources though. The voices in your head perhaps?

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>>18588950
>I'm Brazilian

>> No.18589147

>>18588950
>Brazilian
Unironically worse

>> No.18590316

>>18589080
>>18589147
Laugh while you can, gringos. Anywhere you mention Brazil a couple of Brazilians will come out to say their thoughts. We've already taken over your world.

>> No.18590400

>>18590316
Don’t you got better things to do than shitting up the thread.

>> No.18590481

>>18590400
Well, if he steps outside his house he gets mugged or beaten to death for being a faggot so probably not

>> No.18590625

>>18590400
>>18590481
I'm surprise to know how many shitters are on this general with nothing better to do than shit on it.

>> No.18590756

The ESL is disgusting until I pretend it's just Haachama being Haachama. Then it's just funny and slightly hot.

>> No.18590781

>>18590756
No, not really.

>> No.18590883

>>18590781
I'm pretty sure I said "I" in there.

>> No.18591977

>>18587730
>if Fubuki is supposedly your oshi you should give her a bit more respect than that?
>>18587018
>>18587267
I'll be the first in line to say that, but I also don't care.

>> No.18592041

>>18585074
I would have liked to see that newfoundland story or something continued, that had an interesting premise. There were also some series that I would’ve liked to see take off but the next chapter just never ended up coming. Waterfall of love and blood, for example.

>> No.18592360

>>18587101
I'm an idiot and didn't see that, sorry.

>> No.18593103

>>18590756
No, just plain retarded.

>> No.18593249

>>18592360
You are an idiot. And a disgusting freak at that.

>> No.18593408

>>18593249
Damn right I am.

>> No.18593672

>>18593408
Have some shame for fuck sakes.

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>>18593672
No.

By the way, this back and forth is just shitting up the thread, and it really doesn't need any more. This is the last (You) (You)'ll get from me.

>> No.18594023

>>18593758
he actually got 3 from your post

>> No.18594084

>>18594023
Two of them aren't blue and underlined, so they don't count! Safe, safe!

>> No.18594208

>>18570408
i'm honored to be considered among the likes of pekofag and the doomposter. although i don't find the name "bad faith anon" to be very appropriate considering my original question WAS genuine. but i admit, at some point i did get carried away, so i guess the name's not totally off.
>>18571052
it really should but unfortunately, i just have a terrible sleep schedule. hopefully when i get that fixed you'll see me more in normal na hours. that's also why i'm replying to this so late. oops.

>> No.18594419

>>18594208
>still shitposting.

>> No.18594498

>>18591977
If you choose to die on the same hill as freak fly Anon then that's your own choice.

>> No.18594535

>>18594208
>got carried away
>Shitpost and shat up the thread because no one responded the way you hoped
>Carried away.

>> No.18594536

>>18594498
Anonchama...

>> No.18594614

>>18594535
Sometimes you get carried away and drive a truck through a crowded plaza. These things happen, y'know? Bad day all around.

>> No.18594645

>>18594536
Speak.

>> No.18594764

>>18594614
>Sometimes you get carried away and drive a truck through a crowded plaza
i giggled

>> No.18594838

>>18594535
the way hoped they would respond was by giving a satisfying answer. no one did, because the real answer was not satisfying. so i continued to prod until someone would give an answer that wasn't completely retarded. no one did because the actual answer was completely retarded. carried away is absolutely the right term to use here. not everyone you don't like is a boogyman doing it out of hate for the thread.

>> No.18594972

>>18585074
>>18588008
Psycho Killer definitely needs a sequel

>> No.18595142

>>18594972
You know what ELSE needs a sequel? 'Holy shit, Luna has a gun!'.
This isn't a joke, that thing always gets a laugh and the beginning of an uncomfortable boner.

>> No.18595214

>>18593758
Why did you even reply to him in the first place? It’s plain obvious he’s just baiting

>> No.18595416

>>18595214
You do know where you are right? People here can't help but reply to posts that are obviously bait.

>> No.18595545

>>18594838
Plenty of people answered you by just saying they prefer 2nd person. They gave you their opinions but you rejected them for whatever reason.

>> No.18595741

>>18595545
that's... literally what i just said. they answered my question, i didn't find the answer satisfying so i got carried away and kept asking.

>> No.18595821

>>18595142
>Luna forcing you to cum inside of her womb at gunpoint

>> No.18595826

>>18561662
Taking revenge against HoloX for the assassination of your father, even if it means punching your way up to the top of the secret society by yourself.

>> No.18595871

>>18595214
I actually don't think he is baiting, that's why. Although, in this case I shouldn't have responded anyway.

I have no idea exactly how many people it is, given it's very easy for a minority to overrepresent themselves on a platform like this - 4chan wasn't built for generals - but it seems like there's a lot of genuine discontent over darker content. I'm not just talking about my fetish either - I'll never expect people to accept or enjoy that, and that's okay. But I mean stuff like... traumatic abuse, NTR, genuine rape, any weird fetish under the sun. That sort of stuff.
It frustrates me because it discourages writers from creatively challenging themselves. Like, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it, you know? Don't attack it just for existing - that's no different from book burning.

It's a dilemma with no good answer. I want to respond to these posts and reject them, to say "Hey, writers! Don't feel afraid, there is an audience here. Create whatever the hell you want."
But at the same time, simple posts in opposition so often create an environment of back-and-forth shitposting, which is exactly what happened above. Nobody wins there, and it harms the general posting environment.

I don't have an answer to this, so I just do what follows and pay for the stuff I want to read.

>> No.18595977

>>18595871
Anon, that’s a lot of words to say I fell for the bait.

>> No.18596019

>>18595977
Was a lame attempt at starting discussion to move away from the timeloop arguments.

But yeah, you're right. I fell for bait.

>> No.18596164

>>18595741
>Answer my questions
>But only answer it in the way I like them or else I'll shit up the thread.
And you wonder why people call you bad faith anon?

>> No.18596172

>>18595741
>i didn't find the answer satisfying
That’s on you. If someone has an opinion that’s their opinion.

>> No.18596240

>>18596164
forgive me for not finding "just because" to be a very satisfying answer.

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>>18595871
NTR and weird /d/ fetishes are easy bait and have been for ages. If you're actually into it then you should expect that when you bring it up someone's going to take the opportunity to jump down your throat over it, with bad actors going so far as to splash other people with the effects. The old Matsuri NTR Anon and the insect guy avoided this by just being very cordial about "yes, I know it's weird" and not pressing anything further than that unless asked actual questions about their fetishes, to which they responded. Since then, though, it's become synonymous with low effort monkey's paw le funny bullshit.
>Like, if you don't like it, you don't have to read it, you know? Don't attack it just for existing - that's no different from book burning.
True, but that doesn't stop people from freaking the fuck out about something that doesn't NEED to concern them if they just hide the post and don't click the story - like somehow, this thing's existence means that whatever THEY want wasn't brought into existence, and now they must lose their fucking minds over it. Pic related.
>It's a dilemma with no good answer.
Encouraging authors is good, but the easiest thing to do is to just not fucking respond to people obviously acting in bad faith to discourage someone wanting to do something a little different/fetish shit. It doesn't take fucking Nancy Drew to figure out who's doing it - if the author has questions, talk to them while the retard pees themselves in the back line. That's it.

>> No.18596350

>>18595741
Genuine question at this point.
What kind of answer would have satisfied you? If you refused to accept the actual responses what would have satisfied you.

>> No.18596470

>>18596350
honestly, i don't know what i expected. i shouldn't have asked the question in the first place. second person is worthless but i've got better hills to die on.

>> No.18597017

>>18596336
Yeah, that seems to be the best way to approach the situation. It does mean that rampant shitposting goes unrefuted, which can create the illusion of general consensus. Quoting Joseph Goebbels, "Repeat a lie often enough and it becomes the truth."
With that being said, I suppose it then comes down to individual writer confidence. If easily swayed, maybe it's best they don't poke the nest.
Maybe I'm taking this way too seriously, but it's a good thing we've had going for quite a while now, this thread, and I feel protective of it.

>> No.18597248

>>18596240
You got more than that but keep pretending otherwise.

>> No.18597567

>>18597017
Honestly I think most writers that have gotten to here have had to have gotten thick skin by virtue of passing through like 3 filters of not liking ao3 enough to read and write fics there, not getting filtered by being on this board, and actually starting to post here.

>> No.18598711

https://youtu.be/8Mr9iteEQqE?t=3101
She's so cute, bros. She needs to be mating pressed.

>> No.18598808

>>18597017
>Maybe I'm taking this way too seriously, but it's a good thing we've had going for quite a while now, this thread, and I feel protective of it.
One year anniversary in a month or so, give or take. Been a blast, looking forward to more.

>> No.18599127

>>18598808
>One year anniversary in a month or so
Holy shit time really flies. I still remember finding this thread mid-march last year and feeling like I stumbled upon a gold mine.

>> No.18599235
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>>18598711
bred over and over again until she's knocked up with your kids

>> No.18599349

>>18587730
https://youtu.be/lbeshXaTLkQ?t=74

You have to break her so you can fix her.

>> No.18599393

>>18595826
>At the end of it all you all realize that you've been manipulated into fighting each other.
>Team up and fight the organization that had been manipulating you.
>Finally get all the way to the top of it.
>Your father reveals he was leading that other organization and had faked his death to protect the two of you.
>He reveals that Laplus is your actual biological sister
>Feel mild regret at having sex with Laplus before beating his ass up with the rest of HoloX

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>>18599235
>that bubbly bunny butt

>> No.18599858

>>18599393
So basically Star Wars but with chuubas?

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>>18595871
I was taken aback by how much "chuuba abuses anon" there is, along with none (at first) and then very little (currently) of fics upholding the natural order.

>> No.18599900

>>18596336
>like somehow, this thing's existence means that whatever THEY want wasn't brought into existence, and now they must lose their fucking minds over it.
This. This mindset right here is cancer and it makes up 99% of the shitposting here that isn't just bored baiting.

>> No.18599949

>>18597567
Incidentally what is the deal with ao3 anyway? It feels like every fic there has a gargantuan list of every character in the entire series in the tags, and a fair number of every character in MULTIPLE series in the tags.

It's like a geocities fanfic page from the 90s.

>> No.18600031

>>18599949
The tags help advertise the fics.

>> No.18600061

>>18599894
Simple. People want to be beaten up by their loved ones, but don't want to do the beating.

>>18599949
The tagging system is the biggest reason I avoid that place. It's an eyesore, and the enormous amount of crossover shit weirds me out.

>> No.18600064

>>18599949
I feel like people over there are incredibly ambitious, maybe too ambitious.

>> No.18600081

>>18600064
No such thing as too much ambition, only lack of willpower, baby.

>> No.18600250

>>18599949
By design tag spam is encouraged since it makes the fic literally bigger than any other fic on the same page while letting them show up when tags in there are filtered on.
It makes the site absolute shit for casual browsing but the tag system does mean looking for a specific niche of a fic is actually very easy to find if you know what to tag in.
By userbase, it's because the site had a lot of female fandoms that tag spammed like it was tumblr hashtags at the start that it's metastasized into being site culture to have tag spam.

>> No.18600358

>>18600250
>metastasize
Huh. Another new word I'm going to forget in a day or two. You really do learn something everyday.

>> No.18600398

>>18600061
>but don't want to do the beating.
Speak for yourself. I want nothing more than to beat the shit out of Towa as I fill her with half-demon children.

>> No.18600427

>>18570389
>>18574563
thanks for giving it a read, and as for the overt usage of "You" I suppose that was an error on my end as at the moment I couldn't think of using alternative sentence structures. Will work on that in the second part.

>>18568814
I talked to the commissioner and pitched him a few ideas I had that were in line with what he wanted, we settled on the Matsuri one and discussed what should/shouldn't be in the fic. He let me have most of the creative control other than a few key things, which all in all, was beneficial to both of us. Of course, if a commissioner just wants me to follow their requests to a tee, I'm fine with that as well.

>>18569372
I suppose I do have to apologize for coming off as somewhat stand-offish, and if the subject matter of what I write doesn't suit your taste, then there's nothing much I can do. I will, however, be firm in saying I don't regret writing any of the commissioned fics I've done so far, since the commissioner has been gracious enough in letting me have creative control and so I genuinely put in my efforts and hold it to a standard which I feel is satisfactory. Does it need improvement? Of course it does, and that's why I dabble into other genres to learn and improve.

Besides, as of late, it feels like no matter what I write, as long as it's branded with the commissioned tag, it gets flak from anons. I'm strongly inclined to believe it's just some vocal minorities or shitposters just trying to stir shit up though. I do know some people enjoy what I write, and most importantly, the commissioner does. Although it may seem like all I'm doing is writing commissioned works, but I put in as much creative endeavour into it as I would doing my own personal projects, because that's the standard I want in most, if not all, of my works.

Blogposting aside, I've said this before and I'll say it again. I enjoy writing, I enjoy writing about chuubas, and I enjoy writing here, as misbegotten as it may seem. I'm glad some people like it enough to want to commission me, but at the end of the day, this is something I do for myself and I'm not going to stop just because some people don't like it or have to resort to name calling just to get a rile out of me. So keep writing, and keep reading, anons.

>> No.18600454

>>18600398
Wasn't speaking for myself. Godspeed, anon, and may Satan guide your hips.

>> No.18600528

>>18600427
>>18567301

>> No.18600620

>>18600031
It just makes my eyes glaze over and then I close the window. If every fic lists every character in one or multiple series it's impossible to find stories about the few that I want.

>> No.18600711

>>18600061
Yeah but why? Why not do the beating? Where are all the sickos I was promised by CNN and tumblr?! WHERE ARE ***MY*** PEOPLE?!

.. and yeah, ao3 really reminds me of vintage fanfic pages where every single conceivable franchise was crossed over with Ranma 1/2 for some reason.

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>>18600427
Now that's what I like to hear.

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>>18600427
As long you aren't taking commissions for shit that's straight up by design to piss people off, you do you. Thanks for the work as always.

>> No.18601114

>>18597567
I’m gonna be honest I’ve never been to ao3 before. I just came to /vt/ out of curiosity, found /wg/ and was like “oh hey I liked writing as a kid” then bam. Nearly a year of visiting and writing with this thread.

>> No.18601134

>>18600711
>the Ranma 1/2 crossovers
Stop, do not take me back. Let me forget

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>>18601134
We denied those times. Yet in the hellscape of 2022 they seem so much better.

>> No.18602080

>>18600711
>Glossing over the everything x Kingdom Hearts crossovers
You haven't lived until you saw Jack Skellington consoling Eddy from EEnE.

>> No.18602232

>>18600711
Dumb crossovers have always been common in fanfics. AO3 just has that shit filtered on by default which just adds to making the casual browsing experience there shit.

>> No.18602364

>>18600427
>we settled on the Matsuri one and discussed what should/shouldn't be in the fic. He let me have most of the creative control other than a few key things, which all in all, was beneficial to both of us.
Wow. This commissioner is either a lazy piece of shit or really generous and I don't know which.

Hey rich guy, I want to write something with Suisei, can you give me 50 bucks to do it? It'll be what I want though

>> No.18603745

>>18573924
Huh.
In all honestly you genuinely write such diverse content that pining you as You specifically would honestly be pretty difficult were it not for the fact that this kind of confirms you're the only one that does post straight to thread stories as of recently.
Honestly you do make some really good self-contained short fics, that are pretty creative.

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18604264

I'll happily charge $300 for a Mio hyper-pregnancy fic that's a laundry list of my fetishes.

>input
Nobody gets any, as I am not the kind of fag who gets told what to write. Even then, paying me would still be more dignified than coming into a community about writing fanfic and literally paying money to shit it up with NTR.

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18604573

>>18603745
Whenever I write, it is a very "spur of the moment" thing. That means not only the themes, but also the writing styles will change almost every time. "Some" anons have pinned me down for an overuse of certain words that sell me out, but I try to keep things fresh when possible. I'm not the only one who posts directly to the thread though, that Sora greentext wasn't mine. But whenever it's a very short story, I just post it here instead of bothering with a doc. More work for AA but in my defense I write those at 6AM, I'm too tired to bother. More recently I've been staring at the anchor post, waiting for an idea to come but I've been drawing blanks, which is quite unfortunate, but I just need to find the right image to get me going, and it's all back to normal suddenly. Not the fault of my commissioner of course, but I'm probably drawing blanks because I'm putting all my creative juices into the fic I was asked to do, so my noggin is joggin at full power already.

I'm glad people enjoy them whether long or short. Hopefully my short stories can spark some ideas onto other people's minds like it happened once a while back, but if not, them being hot is already enough for me.

>> No.18605846

>>18604573
>Whenever I write, it is a very "spur of the moment"
Wish I had that kind of spur of the moment writing power. Most I can do when I get that momentary inspiration is writing out a scene of greentext to a prompt/continuing a greentext with another scene.

>> No.18605931
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>>18605846
My advice is to browse for lewds of the HoloMem with your cock out. When you find one that particularly tickles your fancy, think on how you could maybe expand on it, what parts did you find hot about it, what do you wish you could see after it, or maybe leading up to it. It helps to write it whilst jerking off too. Very crude advice, but real.

>> No.18605963

>>18605931
That image. Give it to me.

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>>18605963
>>18553148

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>>18606051
Time to revisit the important NNN audio for this. Thanks.

>> No.18606302

>>18606140
Well, do share with the class.

>> No.18606599

>>18606302
Someone else said that the NNN stuff could be pretty decent JO material if you took the nut stuff in a sexual manner (which her fanbase did anyway). Somewhat shamefully I admit I fell for this and wound up timing a fucking nut (no pun intended) to https://youtu.be/XWZUY5b2fCs of all things, right at the end when she says 'tasty nut''. Made the Risu JOI fic posted way later a lot more impactful.

>> No.18606789

>>18606599
I really wish I could muster up the strength to revisit that fic, there's an anon here who seems to be particularly fond of what it TRIED to be, but what it ended up being was subpar. I fucking wish I could write Risu better. She's the one I studied the most, so Idk why I can't do it. Dumb treerrat, you're too damn complicated. She has so many layers to her behavior, it's unreal. Agh, that fic will certainly plague me for the rest of my stay in this earth.

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>>18604264

>> No.18607471

>>18606789
I think you might be suffering from a curse of perfectionism. I remember that fic and for the most part it stayed pretty consistent to risu's mannerisms and only kind of fell off as it got more sexual.

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>>18561662
Drinking Pekora's piss straight from the tap of her hairy bunny pussy, only it turns out that, much like Suisei pees fresh apple juice, Pekora pees delicious plum wine.

>> No.18608729

>>18608569
God I love plum wine. But, uh...should I keep icecubes in my mouth, or...

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>>18608729
Pekora can modulate the temperature, no problem.

>> No.18609832
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>>18607471
Maybe so. I generally don't mind a story not being perfect, but due to my views on fanfic, a chuuba's personality being wrong is the bane of my existence. I wholly believe with all of my being that if the chuuba doesn't feel like herself, then there's no point to writing a fanfic. This standard gnaws at me every new word that I add onto my stories. It's a good self destructive standard to have, and I don't have any plans on abandoning it. It's why you see me shit on "certain" writers here who put personality aside to make their own OC characters, it simply conflicts with my ideals. Anyway, this is why Risu in my eyes is an enemy to be defeated. I need to get her right eventually to make up for my failings. The sexual part of a JOI is the most important part of a JOI so me failing that is me failing the fic. I only haven't asked AA to take it down because the beginning is ok and that I put a lot of effort into it to at least make it stand out a bit.

>> No.18610617

>>18609832
You could try chuubas that are inherently sexual and thus easier to characterize in the sex part as a way to let out productive urges without having to burst a blood vessel trying to achieve ideal characterization.

>> No.18610637

>>18607471
>only kind of fell off as it got more sexual.
That's every chuuba smut story ever.

>> No.18610837

>>18610637
You tell me. How does one write Pekora who actively avoids any sort of lewd commentary at all on how she reacts to being fucked by idk tentacles or something? You just can't. But you can have an educated guess, and sometimes that educated guess can be good, or bad. The chuubas who never say anything sexual are definitely the more difficult ones to write, and then there's ones people THINK are overtly sexual like Marine who is pretty easy but someone like Choco for example they then get entirely wrong. Choco is lovey dovey succubus sex with naked apron breakfast in the morning...

>>18610617
Someone has to do it.

>> No.18610999

>>18610837
>Choco is lovey dovey succubus sex with naked apron breakfast in the morning
ABE LET ME IN LET ME IN

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>>18610837
>Choco, who spends a good amount of her time resting or just sleeping
>Grumbles and pushes you away when you try to wake her up for a very late breakfast and tell her to prepare for her streams.
>Eventually gets up in a cranky mood, but soon begins to regain her composure as she eats the special breakfast in bed you've prepared for her.
>You don't bother her as she streams, cleaning up the bed and the house in the meantime.
>Once she's done with her ungodly long stream, she comes over and hugs you from the back as you're washing the dishes, promising to make up for all the good things you've done for her everyday.

I WANT CHOCO WIFE NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW

>> No.18611477

>>18609832
>Risu in my eyes is an enemy to be defeated
I mean I can see why. Risu speaks English. Unlike a JP member where you start at interpreting their personality to how they'd speak, with Risu you can start at adapting her mannerisms and other stuff directly... which leads to problems when it starts going into educated guess territory. Am I getting this right or is it something else entirely?

>> No.18611631

>>18611477
It's not the English, no. I can write HoloMyth just fine. It's not perfect, but it's definitely better than my Risu even though I've watched the treerrat more. I think it really just does boil down to Risu being a convoluted person, much like Pekora or Luna in terms of difficulty because they aren't what they seem. Risu is seemingly a funny squirl with low taste of humor for deez nuts, but then you get into her being lazy because she's depressed in reality, the self sabotaging she does that completely fucks with her numbers, the lewd jokes being banned by Indonesian laws so you need to know how to skirt the lines like she does, etc. Her mind is pretty much an enigma to a lot of people. There are many things she does that make no sense even to her die hard fans. How does all this translate into writing about her? Well... idk. But it just does.

>> No.18612350

>>18610837
>But you can have an educated guess, and sometimes that educated guess can be good, or bad
Anon, the Pekora example disprove this. Besides, this goes deeper since not many writers know Japanese and only watch clips.

>> No.18612887

>>18612350
NTA but how?
At some point you have to reconcile that stream personalities are kind of amped up compared to normal due to being in the context of a stream.
You kind of have to think of them into how they'd react in different contexts. Educated guesses need to be done at some point since you have to have them act like how they'd to something you don't know how they'd react to.

>> No.18612904

>>18612350
You'd think people /here/ would just watch streams regardless but I guess not.

>> No.18613044

>>18612904
Streams?

Ain't nobody got time for streams.

>> No.18613074

>>18612904
I don't even watch clips.

>> No.18613492

>>18612904
I get all my information on chuubas from /vt/.

>> No.18613652

>>18612904
I lost my eyes in a tragic accident, alongside my hearing.

>> No.18613711

>>18613492
Al of my information comes from rrats.

>> No.18613996

>>18612904
I do watch streams, but there are only so many hours in a week. Until the day I elevate my consciousness to the 8th dimension and become able to watch all chuubas simultaneously, I'll have to fill in the blanks with secondary sources.

>> No.18614061

>>18612904
I only watch EN, so there's that.

>> No.18614430

>>18613996
>I'll have to fill in the blanks with secondary sources.
So rrats?

>> No.18614555

>>18614430
Those aren't even tertiary.
Unless of course the rrat makes for an interesting story, like those slut-Ayame stories I really like.

>> No.18614644

>>18612904
It's impossible to keep up with everyone so I just keep up with my favorites (Stars and Suisei). I only watch others for research when needed.

>> No.18614743

>>18614644
Same.

>> No.18614815

New thread
>>18614758

>> No.18614996

>>18614815
>Actually fucking used Nina
Well color me surprised

>> No.18615012

>>18614996
probably coincidence

>> No.18615142

>>18615012
Maybe, but it WAS requested, so at the very least if it is a bot they pay attention to the thread and update said bot accordingly

>> No.18615225

>>18614815
That is not the earlyfag's usual file format for the images he uses.
Have we actually entered into an age of competing earlyfags or did you just have those images on hand?

>> No.18615276

>>18615142
I don't think it's the usual guy. They use danbooru filenames, but these ones are actually named.

>> No.18615298

>>18615225
Oh yeah, normally he uses pics lifted straight off Danbooru.

>> No.18615378

>>18615298
Maybe he noticed/was phone posting? Pretty sure someone that was a regular would use a holo.
Or maybe I'm overthinking it.

>> No.18615398

>>18615225
It's been so long now that new threads being made at bump limit has just become part of the zeitgeist. If one of us don't make one, then he will. Might as well be us.

>> No.18615411

>>18615378
Don't really care either way, earlyfag is a fag and always will be regardless of who does it.

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>>18615225
>>18615276
PERCEPTION - [Challenging: Success]
The minute details don't add up. There's something undeniably *off* with this filename structure. It's as subtle as they come, but it doesn't match the same structure as the perpetrator's. Is it a copycat poster? Or is it actually the usual suspect, just with a different pair of shoes to mix up their tracks?

>> No.18615595

>>18610837
>How does one write Pekora who actively avoids any sort of lewd commentary at all on how she reacts to being fucked by idk tentacles or something?
>Expecting autist and schizophrenics to do the bare minimum in any social interaction, let alone a sexual one.
Every fic is out of character to the point they might not even about the chuubas.

>> No.18615670

>>18590316
7-1

>> No.18615724

>>18588950
>PF was canonically brown with a fat ass
Huh...

>> No.18616237

>>18615398
Honestly it's kind of weird how the only way we'd get a normal thread without an earlyfag would be if the board was on fire and we reach page 10 in half an hour.

>> No.18616437

>>18616237
Well he was banned the other day if you recall that.

>> No.18616598

>>18616437
Was he? NTA but I don't recall. Links? I'd like to savour that, if true.

I don't hold out any hope, though, because it is trivially easy to ban-evade.

>> No.18616687

>>18616598
He wasn't (USER WAS BANNED) in thread or anything like that if you're expecting that, sorry to say. But we had two-three threads in a row where he wasn't the OP and there was no active thread - as in, he wasn't there even when they hit bump limit (one of them MINIMUM was spiked as this was in the middle of the Rushia disaster).

>> No.18616726

>>18616687
So, nothing then?

>> No.18616879

>>18616726
Only thing that makes sense is that if it's a bot, the script got completely fucked by not feeding in the numbers right and until he fixed it we didn't have EFthreads, or he was banned. In other words, we CAN have threads without it, but it's a cosmic sort of coalescing of events.

>> No.18616936

>>18616879
I’m not him, but do you have no life that you obsessed over some guy in the internet?

>> No.18617002

>>18616936
>Noticing a change in something is being obsessed
I guess meteorologists are in dire need of institutionalization for their obsession over weather patterns. I don't give a fuck about early threads since there's A: nothing I can do to stop it and B: the threads work just the same as the one we inhabit now, but it was something notable in the usual flow of things.

>> No.18617059

>>18617002
NO ANON STOP IT'S BAIT HE JUST WANTS A RISE OUT OF YOU

DON'T RESPOND TO IT ANON

ANON, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>> No.18617064

>>18617002
>meteorologists
>an expert in or student of meteorology; a weather forecaster.
Anon, you know it's not the same stop being in denial about. Being obsessed about some internet stranger is a whole other level.

>> No.18617107

>>18617064
It's okay, I'm also an expert in your mom's cavernous pussy. Spelunky helped me get prepared for this.
>>18617059
IT'S TOO LATE
CHEEKS MADE OF LEAD, NO HOOKS SHALL PENETRATE
I'LL DRAG THE ANGLER INTO THE DEPTHS WITH ME

>> No.18617304

>>18617107
I like you, in a not homo way.

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